Blackbooks

[*cept*]

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0003-5.jpg
and just to comment on the cope debate. his shit is so fucking clean its ridiculous. i was at 33rd in LA on suday and he had a piece up and it was ridiculous. so nice, and all the colors POP (prolly cause the belton) but still, homie is ill. i have pics but they're on my girlfriends cam.

[JETPACK!!]

word atlok, wanna make it due for monday? cyz i got sunday offa work. gettin more paint either tomorrow or dfriday'


ahahha fetus, watch your bars. theverticle bar on your T is different in sizes

[*cept*]

word atlok, wanna make it due for monday? cyz i got sunday offa work. gettin more paint either tomorrow or dfriday'


ahahha fetus, watch your bars. theverticle bar on your T is different in sizes word. the e is jacked too. oh well its an exchange with fetus.
here's what he sent me in return
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/5332/morkfv3.jpg

[atlok7]

yo jetpack- i cant get paint untill the 18th so itll have to b after that

[*cept*]

yo jetpack- i cant get paint untill the 18th so itll have to b after that
yo at, you still down for that exchange? you want me writin caiser or atlok?

[JETPACK!!]

aight bro, tell me whenever you get paint. ill jsut have more time to scout a nice spot. im thinkin of hittin a 30 foot biullboard for thge battle. but i may do bit before the battle

[atlok7]

yeah write cais

[seywhat]

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/TempImage73.jpg
not finished
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/TempImage74.jpg
exchange

bump, only got 1 crit

cept- that fetus aint too bad, i like that s, just try to keep that bottoms more even
riot- lose the arrows, and it kind of looks like dfb
cais- i like that new i, the s should have the thin middle bar though, everything else is fat

[GimmieGotShot]

Riot; I like it except the 2 extensions on the left of the O make it look like D's to me.
Atlok; ...yeah i see utters. I wouldn't kick it with that arrow that shot the S either.
Cept; Thats solid. The top of the E being a hook kinda throws me off. Maybe it's because i'm high who knows.
Seyar; orgasmatron.

Quick like 5 minutes while eating bar-b-q :D
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/mh.jpg

[Atomik]

gimmiegotshot maybe work on that H, the m looks alright.
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/05-05-08_2159.jpg

[*cept*]

bump, only got 1 crit

cept- that fetus aint too bad, i like that s, just try to keep that bottoms more even
riot- lose the arrows, and it kind of looks like dfb
cais- i like that new i, the s should have the thin middle bar though, everything else is fat
id like to see that top one painted

[Jakeboy]

Roosters gone wild :)
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=2&pictureid=5
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=2&pictureid=4
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=2&pictureid=3

Atomik That your E looks dope..

[GimmieGotShot]

bottom of page
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/mh.jpg

Atomik; ill shit brother
Jakeboy; not a big fan of that steez but diggin the turtle

[*cept*]

Roosters gone wild :)
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=2&pictureid=5
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=2&pictureid=4
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=2&pictureid=3

Atomik That your E looks dope..
love those characs but your letters need work

[Atomik]

that S is pretty dope work on structure some more and flow. loving the characters.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/P5070655.jpg
I need more USPS, these were just the left overs from last shipment

[MarOne...]

HAHAH

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/3781/caishalfgreenhalfyellowqa1.jpg

im missing the pimple in this sketch

cais, your lower-case I looks much, much better. Keep it up bro.

[I GOT CLOUT]

Atomik - fresh shit.
Jakeboy, im diggin it, letters and all. At least on Komp.
Fluffy - I like that throw.
And Cais - that I does look a lot better.

[joshthesk8ter5]

http://i29.tinypic.com/10p1qg6.jpg

[kroc_oner]

the p and fill is ill

[rayseone]

kils - steeze simpls

cais, not bad , the s sucks tho, well the top of it atleast

some quick pen fresstle
http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/7661/dsc00477qk3.jpg

[Gyse]

which one looks the least shitty, first or second?

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/7672/gysevh2.th.png (http://img366.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gysevh2.png)
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/9486/05062008081503pmnv3.th.png (http://img229.imageshack.us/my.php?image=05062008081503pmnv3.png)

[MarOne...]

seyar, that looks nice, other than that A. Fix that, and it'll look way better.

[atlok7]

kils - steeze simpls

cais, not bad , the s sucks tho, well the top of it atleast

some quick pen fresstle
http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/7661/dsc00477qk3.jpg

the a and the r dont flow at all, make the right leg of the r as thick as the rest. and that A is not an a

[sketch3]

kils - steeze simpls

cais, not bad , the s sucks tho, well the top of it atleast

some quick pen fresstle
http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/7661/dsc00477qk3.jpg

stop trying to be serius,
not sayin gur biting

[NoCanControl]

kils you should of used prismas or something, not wasteing good paint markers. still look tight thou

[I GOT CLOUT]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf067.jpg

Shitty simp.

And no can control, whats it to you? He probably racked that shit anyway. No beef.

[NoCanControl]

And no can control, whats it to you? He probably racked that shit anyway. No beef.

True, but just trying to help someone out... and idk how to crit yo stuff.... i dont' know how to do that kinda stuff. besides the three deee, pretty alrigt.

[Capo Izi]

Being toy..

http://a841.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/94/l_7d23a275d3c7a8c956f65cc6394fe0d0.jpg

Trying some simpler stuff...

http://a115.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/81/l_79b02304655bdb135f85c6d7519f29b2.jpg

[Soboe!]

capo. work on your simples more kido

[*cept*]

second one isnt terrible cap, and you're definitely progressing. But stick to dem straights

exchange with erem
the M is pretty haggard as far as structure goes. took me like an hour to figure out something that was decent
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0003-6.jpg

[blah mcblah]

i think it looks original

[JETPACK!!]

capo, thats prolly the best ive seen from you. straight bars though, its lookin better, keep sketchin

cept, the fucks up with that M? haha. im not feelin that steeze at all homie, try again, i know you can do better.

some shit i doodled tonight, should i try an work with this shit?
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/5650/reign18qq5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[*cept*]

cept, the fucks up with that M? haha. im not feelin that steeze at all homie, try again, i know you can do better.

some shit i doodled tonight, should i try an work with this shit?
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/5650/reign18qq5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
haha dunno man. i like that style, somethin youd see on freights, keep workin it.

[*cept*]

i think it looks original

meh, the styles pretty bitten but thanks though:D

[Capo Izi]

Being toy..

http://a841.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/94/l_7d23a275d3c7a8c956f65cc6394fe0d0.jpg

Trying some simpler stuff...

http://a115.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/81/l_79b02304655bdb135f85c6d7519f29b2.jpg

bump, damn last page....

[blah mcblah]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a150/robosaurus/GRRsketchofpiece1.jpg

[MarOne...]

capo-that second one reminds me of sickone's steez.

[blah mcblah]

any advice

am i biting anything or anyone?

[ESKiMO2]

I can barely see the letters.

[sketch3]

outline it

[Fazed]

capo, thats prolly the best ive seen from you. straight bars though, its lookin better, keep sketchin

cept, the fucks up with that M? haha. im not feelin that steeze at all homie, try again, i know you can do better.

some shit i doodled tonight, should i try an work with this shit?
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/5650/reign18qq5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


I like it, you should make your e a little bigger though.

[Mass Appeal]

kils - steeze simpls

cais, not bad , the s sucks tho, well the top of it atleast

some quick pen fresstle
http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/7661/dsc00477qk3.jpg

oh yea thats what im talkin about !!!

[atlok7]

how the hell do you say my letters suck and like that

[sketch3]

because your lettters suck

[Mass Appeal]

shut up Atlok....he has style...you dont...your shit letters look like Play - Dough...all moulded in wierd shapes....do you actually use bars ? ! ... your like i once was....i thought i used to be the buisness...the illest cos i had people telling me my shit was " dope " , " ill " , " amazing " ... then i got a reality check when i see dudes saying it was " whack " , " trash " , " do simples "....when i looked at the dudes work who said my shit was ill i knew i was going in the wrong direction...cos hell most of em didnt even have any letter strucutre at all....THEN ... i looked at the dudes who said my shit was whack...dddaammn...they has ILL shit...Tricks , Nemz , Sky , Caer the lot...i never took notice of them saying " go simple " , " tone it down " , " fucking stop colouring and get on with simples you ignorant fuck " quote Nemz ahah the good times.....but when i finally did....i saw myself getting better....and your doin the exact same thing...all these good writers in here like ROTS and the other dudes over in the big boys tell you your stuff isnt great...but you take NO notice on asking them " hey how can i improve it "....theyll tell you to " tone it down " but will you .... no ... because you aint interested on getting better at all...your probably quite happy to carry on getting these comments from people who are quite frankly in my opinion...shite at graffiti....but again if they take note on the comments they recive...ofcourse theyll get better...jus like you will.

dont sit on those comments from shit writers....you wanna be takin note on those better writers than yourself on what they think....then you can go places.

shit this speech is huge

ps. this is all based on my opinion...and if you dont agree with me..please dont bother expressing yourself.

[Capo Izi]

capo-that second one reminds me of sickone's steez.


got any pics of his stuff?

I just did tipped bars, sorry if there is an accidental bite....I don't even know what his stuff looks like.

[GimmieGotShot]

Reigh; I like that. It reminds me of gummy worms :D
Seyar; Cant really see your E but the rest is illgasmic
Blah; blah.
Capo; I'd say work with the bottom one.

Mork, excuse the whackness of the R.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/mork.jpg

[blah mcblah]

thanks for the previous criticism
it was constructive and helpful

here's a throw up

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a150/robosaurus/GRRthrowiesketch1.jpg

[Shoook]

thee grr throwie is tight bit of work on the g and out line hte r's but looks good
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f305/esfootwear20/DSCF4509-1.jpg

[blah mcblah]

thanks shook
good advice
here's another try
at a different throw
again i hope this isn't biting
it looks familiar but i can't think of what or who it looks like

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a150/robosaurus/GRRthrowiesketch2.jpg

[Shoook]

it looks better but the r's look like b's now its lookin better thoogh

[GimmieGotShot]

Give crits to receive them you poison ivy but wipes.

[letsgobombin]

exchange with baze
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1186.jpg
blah- your last one looks like cbb seperate the r's and make the g look like a g
shuk- go simple, that k on the last one made my eyes bleed
gimmie- it looks like mosk apart from that its fine except maybe lose the bit off the botom of the k
reign- i like that style, maybe put a hole in the r
capo- keep experimenting, it you want to try and find a new style though tone down the top one

[atlok7]

exchange with esto
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/7568/estoexchangesp4.jpg

[blah mcblah]

shook i'm digging the sketch on the bottom of your paper

i've been wanting to do a throw up in scrabble letters

has that been done before?
it's not technical or anything but i like the idea of it

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a150/robosaurus/GRRscrabblethrowiesketch.jpg

[ESKiMO2]

Atlok. That shit is hot. Crit the sketches in my album.

[Shoook]

nicely done atlok thats sick man
and i dont know if it has been done before but im diggin it lol scrabble pieces

[Mass Appeal]

shut up Atlok....he has style...you dont...your shit letters look like Play - Dough...all moulded in wierd shapes....do you actually use bars ? ! ... your like i once was....i thought i used to be the buisness...the illest cos i had people telling me my shit was " dope " , " ill " , " amazing " ... then i got a reality check when i see dudes saying it was " whack " , " trash " , " do simples "....when i looked at the dudes work who said my shit was ill i knew i was going in the wrong direction...cos hell most of em didnt even have any letter strucutre at all....THEN ... i looked at the dudes who said my shit was whack...dddaammn...they has ILL shit...Tricks , Nemz , Sky , Caer the lot...i never took notice of them saying " go simple " , " tone it down " , " fucking stop colouring and get on with simples you ignorant fuck " quote Nemz ahah the good times.....but when i finally did....i saw myself getting better....and your doin the exact same thing...all these good writers in here like ROTS and the other dudes over in the big boys tell you your stuff isnt great...but you take NO notice on asking them " hey how can i improve it "....theyll tell you to " tone it down " but will you .... no ... because you aint interested on getting better at all...your probably quite happy to carry on getting these comments from people who are quite frankly in my opinion...shite at graffiti....but again if they take note on the comments they recive...ofcourse theyll get better...jus like you will.

dont sit on those comments from shit writers....you wanna be takin note on those better writers than yourself on what they think....then you can go places.

shit this speech is huge

ps. this is all based on my opinion...and if you dont agree with me..please dont bother expressing yourself.

ARRGHHH this is what i mean...how the fuck is that " sick " .... i seriously dont know....everything init is unproportional...even the fuckin teeth in the S .. oh and top marks for originality there...

on the other hand im really feeling that GRR...its so different and simple..yet effective.

if you have anything to say Atlok please go ahead by all means..

[JETPACK!!]

mass, everything you said is nothin but the truth. dont bother tellin him that though. his ego is too thick to even try and comprehend what truth and reality is.

Cais, your E looks exactly like your C would. only exception being that wack lookin dollar sign.

[MarOne...]

I kinda agree with mass here, I think you need to focus more on structure than your color, atlok.

They aren't horrible, but there is no way you can progress by doing the stuff you are doing.

Still, <3 mr.cais. Keep it up bro.

[Backalley Abortion Doctor]

I heard my name

[Drakula]

Yeah why does everyone not see how wack cais is.I think it's his colourful fills that throw people off.The guy does not know how bars connect properly and what extensions/details go where.For example he puts lines inside the piece in completely the wrong places.I suggest simples fro you atlok.But don't go ultra simple just enough so that the letters have a bit of funk(if you even know what that is), because your colour schemes wouldn't look too bad on a good simple piece.

Your characters are good though.

[blah mcblah]

thanks, mass appeal

[Mass Appeal]

yeah Atlok..look at the work of the people who are agreeing with me...maybe youll realise.
then look at the work of people who think your " sick "

[JETPACK!!]

capo, thats prolly the best ive seen from you. straight bars though, its lookin better, keep sketchin

cept, the fucks up with that M? haha. im not feelin that steeze at all homie, try again, i know you can do better.

some shit i doodled tonight, should i try an work with this shit?
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/5650/reign18qq5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

shamelessly bump my shit for crits. im gonna make the E bigger next time.. thats really the only crit i got

mass, my shit isnt good. i just dont like atloks steeze or overinflated ego

[IlikePie]

Or.... We all can stop bitching about him and just worry about yourselves. And you of anyone Ras would understand that ;) Give him some time.

[Shoook]

lol some one has to keep the peace around here

[atlok7]

what ? mass talking about structure? yeah i know my structure needs alot of improvement but dude cmon, you do fucking euro style. no hate on europeans but dude, the shits gay. and yeah rots always said my shit was wack, but dude you havnt been here in like a month. i pmd rots my atom battle entree and he said " yeah i actually like that". what the fuck dude? "ignorant"? i have been talking peoples advice all the time, why the fuck do you think my letters transformed from the stacked bars to more simple visible letters? dude you are so narcissistic. all you do is rip on my structure, and tell me to go "get better" and your only fucking advice is "do simples". what the fuck dude? "its all out of proportion" yeah coming from the one who drew this FINE peice constructed with PERFECTLY even bars...
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fff-1.jpg

but dude seriously stop beefing at me and give me advice other than your usual....

[Mass Appeal]

Reign..nice .... nice. ... its funky...
again that GRR is ill imo

atlok..maybe because " going simple " is the way to get better...
and for the record...my stuff isnt Euro....its " New School " :D

look im e - done with you man....ill drop the so called " beef " .. how it was beef in the first place i dont know...just dont expect crits from me whilst your producing the same ol' same ol' aight

just so people know...in the near future...when you tell someone on how to improve in a 500 essay paragraph...its BEEF !

[*cept*]

exchange with esto
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/7568/estoexchangesp4.jpg thicken up the C a bit. dig it though.
that fuckin fool would kill to have the fill skills you got. fuck him. there's a reason you made in to advanced this last battle.

[Backalley Abortion Doctor]

Also try making sure people don't confuse your E with a C....

[JETPACK!!]

thats supposed to be an E... which makes my crit right on the tee

[joshthesk8ter5]

Holla at it?
http://i29.tinypic.com/li36d.jpg

[atlok7]

Reign..nice .... nice. ... its funky...
again that GRR is ill imo

atlok..maybe because " going simple " is the way to get better...
and for the record...my stuff isnt Euro....its " New School " :D

look im e - done with you man....ill drop the so called " beef " .. how it was beef in the first place i dont know...just dont expect crits from me whilst your producing the same ol' same ol' aight

just so people know...in the near future...when you tell someone on how to improve in a 500 essay paragraph...its BEEF !

yo did u not just read what i said right before you edited this post? i have gone simpler, and how the fuck isnt it starting beef? you just talk alot of shit. thats beef dude.

[IlikePie]

shook i'm digging the sketch on the bottom of your paper

i've been wanting to do a throw up in scrabble letters

has that been done before?
it's not technical or anything but i like the idea of it

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a150/robosaurus/GRRscrabblethrowiesketch.jpg


exchange with esto
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/7568/estoexchangesp4.jpg


exchange with baze
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1186.jpg
blah- your last one looks like cbb seperate the r's and make the g look like a g
shuk- go simple, that k on the last one made my eyes bleed
gimmie- it looks like mosk apart from that its fine except maybe lose the bit off the botom of the k
reign- i like that style, maybe put a hole in the r
capo- keep experimenting, it you want to try and find a new style though tone down the top one

Bump the flicks over the stupid shit talk.

[Tokenkaligreens]

. word. lol

[Mass Appeal]

that fuckin fool would kill to have the fill skills you got. fuck him. there's a reason you made in to advanced this last battle.

hmm...fill skills....

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/111113.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/t34w4124.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/utfrur.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rfdse.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gftncgc.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/uiyuik.jpg

i think i have my fair share of " fill skills " .. anyone can fill..
aight Atlok regardless of what you and i both think of eachother lets just forget it.

and yeah old flicks over the crits i gave that lead to e - debating aight

peace guys take care.

[dim]

Pwnd

[joshthesk8ter5]

k guys can i get some ideas how to get away from simpes?
http://i29.tinypic.com/li36d.jpg

[Mass Appeal]

if you took away those arrows then youd be left with some pretty solid letters mate...keep it up....try curving them next time too to add some funk.

[IlikePie]

Sketching more helps a lot.

[MarOne...]

yo did u not just read what i said right before you edited this post? i have gone simpler, and how the fuck isnt it starting beef? you just talk alot of shit. thats beef dude.

I really dont think Mass was starting beef, man. EDIT- Mass may be doing a more Euro-ish style now, but way back before this, he had major structure in his letters. But lets just all drop it.

Here's a new flick for my talk-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/roke1337.jpg

and dim... Quit post-whoring.

[dim]

roke that looks sick man but i when ever i see ur stuff for some reason i think of neam i dont think ur biting ne thing but im just voiceing or in this case typing my thoughts lol. but yeah man ur stuff is coming out nice. the r is my favorite

[Drakula]

Yeah ROKE you're letters are getting better with every piece.It looks dope.Just not a fan of your fills though.

[joshthesk8ter5]

ya rokwe i like ur shit too but needs some 3d

[Mass Appeal]

Yur Roke i like the waves its like a Hedgehog ehhehehehe

[MarOne...]

Yeah ROKE you're letters are getting better with every piece.It looks dope.Just not a fan of your fills though.

Word man. That was a quickie at school today. I'll have a nicer piece up soon.


Yur Roke i like the waves its like a Hedgehog ehhehehehe

Yeah, thanks Mass. Lmao

EDIT- Thanks for the compiments fellas. :D

[b0gus]

josh- looking good
roke- keep that up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q220/scum11/bogus017.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q220/scum11/bogus014.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q220/scum11/bogus015.jpg

[sketch3]

bogus i wanna see a new one just a bit thicker, outlined in a black marker with black 3d
and losse the pointles bumps
...keep it up tho

[kroc_oner]

mass your old shits mad nice and dopist fills ive seen do u use someonline program to make it all shinny and anime like cause thts to clean for paper

[-ShAmEE-]

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/7568/estoexchangesp4.jpg

this reminds me of ras's old stuff.

[Backalley Abortion Doctor]

Yeah Mass, listen to the man. You don't use paper. You use anime programs.

[kroc_oner]

the sites called vector magic .com its pretty cool

[rayseone]

honestly atlok if you take all the color out of your letters and all the lil details, your letters would look, wack, and thats not cutting you down man, becuz mine do, so do alot of writers, anybody can make a peice look nice with fancy fills and shit, but graffiti, waht is it man, its letters, and a way to get solid letters is dont color your shit, lock your prismas or watever away, i know i havent filled a peice in in a looong time, nor has amk i dont thikn, baze locked his colors aeway for like a year, when it looks good with no colors, thats when oyu got ill letters. i know exactly what he means by this looks like amks old stuff, all crazy filled and so muhc random shit, yeah maybe it looks ok, but people who know shit look through it and se the letters, thats why amk got so muhc shit, thats why now he has solid letters, and you dont like his stuff becuz its like something youve never seen before, but i assure you, before this style he ewas on some reall ill stuff, with solid letters, take my advice or leave it i dont really care, realise im not beefin with you, im trying to help you,

on the other hand roke thats looking alloooot nicer, keep that shit up mine, not too fond of the one extension on the o, but your getting better homie


and to the guy thats asking how to move on from simples, if your asking that question you shouldnt be movin on, it will come naturally dont force it

[*cept*]

hmm...fill skills....

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/111113.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/t34w4124.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/utfrur.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rfdse.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gftncgc.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/uiyuik.jpg

i think i have my fair share of " fill skills " .. anyone can fill..
aight Atlok regardless of what you and i both think of eachother lets just forget it.

and yeah old flicks over the crits i gave that lead to e - debating aight

peace guys take care.
im going to go sit in a corner now:(

[JETPACK!!]

atlok, dont fill your next sketch. just outline it with black.

[seywhat]

i would like to see a cais peice in just pencil or pen, no colors at all.

[atlok7]

rayse one- thanks man. thats prolly the best advice any one has given me in a long time. ha but to bad i already did a very light fill on this sketch. and yeah i dont like mass' stuff period. ive seen weird euro styles before, just not for me.
but yeah tried to make stronger structure on this one

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/6962/caisgrey3dnc8.jpg

[Capo Izi]

Being toy..

http://a841.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/94/l_7d23a275d3c7a8c956f65cc6394fe0d0.jpg

Trying some simpler stuff...

http://a115.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/81/l_79b02304655bdb135f85c6d7519f29b2.jpg

Bumping, cause I'm wondering what you guys think of the top one, I know it's toy, just curious, and any crits on the bottom one is welcome.

Mass-I love your style, and the guns are steeze as hell. And the mtn looks so real, and yet dope at the same time.

Mar-Your style is really coming together, I say just add more 3D stuff, and maybe bend it up now.

Josh-I don't know what it is, but all your stuff is so clean cut, it looks like stone(in a a good way). Your stuff looks like freight stuff, do you hit 'em up?

[sketch3]

cais could yoy do a sketch were the lerters barely touch,
your widths are a bit off but getting better

[JETPACK!!]

there you go atlok. thats getting better, that has decent structure.

although you wont admit it. if it wasnt for us haters. you wouldnt be improving at all.

[atlok7]

no i would b improving, just in the wrong direction

[JETPACK!!]

how can you improve in the wrong direction? that wouldn't be improvement.
you just cant agree with me, can you?

try an make the horizontal bar on your S as thick as the rest of your bars, it would look a lot better.

[atlok7]

no not really, haha

[IlikePie]

*grouphug*

[dark2]

2206

[rsakens]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00031-7.jpg?t=1210329353

[atlok7]

yo keane- i love how you fill the whole paper with marker. the shitss DOPE! you wanna hook up and get an exchange goin?? i write cais. we can each do the white with the gray shadows. if your down hollaaa

[rsakens]

sure man i am up for an exchange
so a black withe Grey color theme

[Mass Appeal]

dope Keane..did you ever put me on your page ?
and Cais....its actually pretty nice....just lose the gay " inlines " or whatever they are...or atleast rethink your placing of em cos i thinky theyre sometime in the wrong places...but it defintlaley looks better than that last sketch you did...the lettering is decent and solid...and thats the best I iv seen you do.

and for the program thing...what the hell..i use Touch Twins...i carnt even work Photshop or that type of shit..

[rsakens]

nah man still planing too
haven't update it in a vile i am getting to lazy does days

[atlok7]

yeah rsakens that sounds good. what do u write? keane?

[letsgobombin]

exchange with baze
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1186.jpg
blah- your last one looks like cbb seperate the r's and make the g look like a g
shuk- go simple, that k on the last one made my eyes bleed
gimmie- it looks like mosk apart from that its fine except maybe lose the bit off the botom of the k
reign- i like that style, maybe put a hole in the r
capo- keep experimenting, it you want to try and find a new style though tone down the top one
bottom page bump

[just graffiti]

i need to invest my money in a scanner and some good markers.

[NoCanControl]

I really like yo styleeeeeeeeeeee roke... reall legibel and still wild , its weird....

[Fluffy Bunnies]

kils you should of used prismas or something, not wasteing good paint markers. still look tight thou


They are STICKERS!!!!
if i used prismas on them they would fade in like 2 days, and prismas are not opaque!!
therefore, not ideal for making sticks

[letsgobombin]

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1186.jpg
bottom bump again

[Backalley Abortion Doctor]

It's sort of blocky, bend your corners out

[Felon]

straight.

[Felon]

i need to invest my money in a scanner and some good markers.

Oh shit i like this alot specially the inner tag characters.

[rsakens]

yeah rsakens that sounds good. what do u write? keane?

jep keane will do

[t.done]

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk35/ILOVEWEED_album/Picture933681049.jpg

tookabout 2 hours. crits?

[Backalley Abortion Doctor]

Awwwwe.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

I don't like it. do black n white sketches or you won't evolve... just like pokemon, they need experience before they can evolve, on my pokemon silver, i used that one rock thingy so my pokemon won't evolve, he's at 99 EXP YEA YEA BAWLIN

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture261.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture295.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture272.jpg

Some shaky stuff I messed with here and ther, finals really killed my time and a lot of creativity, but I think I'm going to take a while in the sun on a sketch here in a bit

Done- I like the color ideas but the letters are all over the place making it kinda rough

Bazer- I agree bend the corners out a bit or maybe add a different feel to the ends

[Mass Appeal]

wow 2 hours...fuck me.
Vois...nice shit as usual..keep rockin that simple lettering

[kroc_oner]

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PC030238.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PC030241.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PC030242.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PC030243.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PC030244.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PC030245.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PC030247.jpg
comments crits
atlok tht hollow looks nice
vois looks ok
rsakens u have dope fills to i also like your letters
done it looks cool
and lets go bombing i like your letters u have good structure

[jersOneTIC]

techkanuck-keep workin on it
croc - chill on the style...get better structure.
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/2483/dsc00275tt1.jpg
color pencils suck...

[Backalley Abortion Doctor]

Don't make the loop of your R overlap it's right leg like that..

[Mass Appeal]

For Serius

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/44.jpg

No way near finished.

[AnteUp]

For Serius

http://dirt.la/blog/wp-content/uploads/2007/09/zoolander.jpg

[IlikePie]

For cereal you guys!

[Mister Dylan]

Ok, so I'm new to the forum. I read the rules, and did my best to figure out where the hell to start out and this seems like the best place. So I picked out two that I think are pretty cool and wanted to know what people think. I want to see what it would take to move on up!

So, little background, I'm mostly a paper artist. however when I get my peices onto the computer I usually end up fucking around with the color schemes and what not. For years I went by Simple. but latley have changed to Mister. I am posting one of each.

I have no idea what people will think, or what will happen but I guess I'll soon find out.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/simplistykstudios/2274844208/in/set-72157603932657942/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/simplistykstudios/2117736423/in/set-72157603932657942/

[Mister Dylan]

daamn, I tried to load those pics from my Flickr page by putting the link in this quick reply add image box thing... but it doesn't seem to work. I'm going to be an ass and ask for help?

[Bazer]

get an account on photobucket. it makes everything easier cz you can resize images on there and alot more. plus you can always go back to them if you ever need to.
also check this thread out.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=37

[Gyse]

that serius is awesome
vers, you make me jealous. but I actually like the top part of the R going down over the other part.

[RFI. SPit]

Jers - I like that
AMK - I'm actually feelin that one too

Little bit of dicking around
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2384/2478812369_c15638e1b0_o.jpg
F is weak

[b SQUARED 08]

kroc: Not really feelin' any of the letter structure you've got goin' on. Keep at it and stay simple if possible.

jers: I like it other than the overlaps. Colors are sick.

Mass: I always love your shit, this one looks like it'll be good too.

Here's some stuff I did lately. Nothing special. Avoid all of the writing on them, it all sucks bad.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_5382.jpg

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_5381.jpg

[Capo Izi]

New experimental shit...

http://a905.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/7/l_825cfe1cbfe123da4285b6aec6bb3440.jpg

[atlok7]

capo- you getting better, but still dude stick to straight letters without extensions

[Panda Jerk]

ya for shuuurre^^^^^^

[Panda Jerk]

http://dirt.la/blog/wp-content/uploads/2007/09/zoolander.jpg

hahahhaahahaa^^^^ i loled

[Capo Izi]

yeah sorry sorry, I just get bored and throw a wilder thing out there, I'm working on simples just as much, I just usually don't post them, cause they would bore you all.

[atlok7]

ha thats good. but yeah when you draw something post it you know? youll get more advice

[Capo Izi]

k, I'll put my other stuff tommarow, along with more of my wild, just to see my progression in both. I need structure so I do simples, but I get bored and do wilds, its like a give n take thing.

[glyce]

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank008-1.jpg

capo- thats looking sick but i dont really like the a or the extention on the o

[Panda Jerk]

lose the cracks or put em in like the middle of the letter

[Panda Jerk]

like going through the whole word

[ilikekicks]

glyce - push the O out more away from the S

http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_1483.jpg?t=1210405565

[IlikePie]

Soank, you should change your name to Snak, your O is kinda lame.

[Shoook]

man you cant just tell someone to change there name.....

[Mass Appeal]

oh Capo..you was doing so well with those simples....whats happend !?

[Apel-MH]

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank008-1.jpg

capo- thats looking sick but i dont really like the a or the extention on the o

i like this simple shit.

[Apel-MH]

kroc: Not really feelin' any of the letter structure you've got goin' on. Keep at it and stay simple if possible.

jers: I like it other than the overlaps. Colors are sick.

Mass: I always love your shit, this one looks like it'll be good too.

Here's some stuff I did lately. Nothing special. Avoid all of the writing on them, it all sucks bad.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_5382.jpg

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_5381.jpg
you first one is wack, to many linesand not enoughf stucture.

im feeling that second one tho.

[hypergraphia]

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/5610/picture157bg7.jpg

[Apel-MH]

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/5610/picture157bg7.jpg

thats a dope colour scheme... It would look fucked wit cans but that looks fucken sick on paper.

[Mister Dylan]

I think this may actually work, we'll soon find out.


Simple:

http://www4.mediafire.com/imgbnc.php/de4b27f6616991c5591474bfd58ae88d5g.jpg


Mister:

http://www2.mediafire.com/imgbnc.php/84955d3e155a5ebd9c18d5c862f745e05g.jpg

[squidone]

Here are a few of my pics

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/9910/dsc00094ns8.jpg
http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/8131/dsc00093sk0.jpg
http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/7228/dsc00092ru7.jpg
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/6007/dsc00090zf5.jpg

i need crits

[RFI. SPit]

Jers - I like that
AMK - I'm actually feelin that one too

Little bit of dicking around
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2384/2478812369_c15638e1b0_o.jpg
F is weak

Bumper? :(

[Soboe!]

zofty, we know your good you dont need crits :)

[Maste]

eh newer shit
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/3681/sivbluesta3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
zof i like it...i kinda wanna see your stuff painted cause i think it would look way cooler way bigger
squid you will get his thousands of times but what you wanna do is use bars and do simples... go into the new te graff thread and theres a few good tuts in there telling you what i mean
nice char dylan...the letters on the other hand ...eh i guess its hard for me to read with them bent like that
mr.1970s nice color scheme bad connections...itd look more cool without em

[RFI. SPit]

:P thanks doods

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/5241/photo396fz5.jpg

[sank.]

zof you've really progressed alot. i like the organic style that your going for, well maybe you aren't, but whateva. i think you should experiment with add ons that come further off your letters, kinda like the ones that big el does. just my opinion, but keep at it

[tassajara17272]

so ive been writing for about a week now
my friend says im pretty good for that short amount of time
you be the judge...
http://i29.tinypic.com/1q486s.jpg3

[Soboe!]

start with simples, if you dont know what i mean go to the new to graff thread

[SCIEnce802]

squid- the first one is good. keep it simple.
maste- ur simple letters are good.
mister- i like the character


http://i32.tinypic.com/2zqr22c.jpg
http://i32.tinypic.com/2wfr5v8.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/2ut0llg.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/nzgjtc.jpg

[sanrtizer]

hypergraphia- thats a dope fill im feelin that peice
squid- start usin bars and dont waste ur markers yet
zof- nice u've improved alot
ares- chill on the addons for now the 3rd ones alright
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/4875/img0210rq6.jpg
baked sketch (not an excuse) critsss

[glyce]

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank010-1.jpg

maste- that looks good but that one pink letter is kind of an eye sore with the rest being blue

[Mass Appeal]

really nice shit Glyce

[MarOne...]

hypergraphia- thats a dope fill im feelin that peice
squid- start usin bars and dont waste ur markers yet
zof- nice u've improved alot
ares- chill on the addons for now the 3rd ones alright
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/4875/img0210rq6.jpg
baked sketch (not an excuse) critsss

SANR! Exchange me. :)

[sanrtizer]

alright dude ill hav it up tomoro morning latest it depends what i do tonight

[MarOne...]

alright, nasr, right?

[IlikePie]

man you cant just tell someone to change there name.....

I was just suggesting it... And Snak is a lot cooler anyways ;p

[DRIPS!]

i dunno what to do with the s
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh103/liquidfoot/HPIM4452.jpg

[La Coka Nostra]

get rid of it.
along with all the other letters.

don't make your bars curve in on the sides.
the bottom of your P is fucked up too.
the leg should be the same size the whole way up from the top to the bottom.

[Mass Appeal]

D00odz Srlsy ChEk Mi GrAAF

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-6.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/t.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/r.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/e.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/w.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/q.jpg

But on a serious note...shits from atleast 1 year ago hehe...
some will remeber
some wont

nooooow....this is my newest shit

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ee.jpg

SERIUS

[Mister Dylan]

Glyce- I dig that simple lettering... also the breaks, it makes it feel like the letters are actual carved peices of stone... nice.

I'm loading up some of my favorite characters I have drawn up. Thoughts?

http://www2.mediafire.com/imgbnc.php/7c138376b25bd6d07d91d36a0a38710d5g.jpg

http://www2.mediafire.com/imgbnc.php/5883a8ac4c2b07f0054d72ecc90d4aed5g.jpg

http://www1.mediafire.com/imgbnc.php/4ed9a05b1d9a0188713a80a8c3cbdf265g.jpg

[Mister Dylan]

Mass Appeal- I'm new, but hot damn that's some good shit. I love the "fuck the sleigh" one!

[sanrtizer]

hypergraphia- thats a dope fill im feelin that peice
squid- start usin bars and dont waste ur markers yet
zof- nice u've improved alot
ares- chill on the addons for now the 3rd ones alright
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/4875/img0210rq6.jpg
baked sketch (not an excuse) critsss

bumpin for some crits
amk- that serius exchange turns me on...nice progression
drips- keep skethcin try an upper case i

[rsakens]

Mass Appeal dope shit you poste up there like characters & most off the letters

check the new shit XD
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00026-3.jpg?t=1210453545
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00027-4.jpg?t=1210453098
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00004-8.jpg?t=1210453572
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00031-7.jpg?t=1210453588
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00080-4.jpg?t=1210453618

[Mass Appeal]

Mass Appeal- I'm new, but hot damn that's some good shit. I love the "fuck the sleigh" one!

this is why BS toys dont get anywhere.
we need NEMZ , TRICKS , ALIVE , SKY back.

[rsakens]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00090-5.jpg?t=1210453647

[Soboe!]

what didnt think you got enough crits the last time you posted it?

[smooth_nuts]

amk,i remember all those haha,newer shits really fresh you should hooks me up with an exchange ;) haha
rsakens-you really need to work on your hand man its weak,the keans under the rsa crew piece is fresh i dont like any of the others though
drips-simples simples simples
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture017-1.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture008.jpg
both are about a week or so old,i've been on a block lately,i'll try to get soem thing new on tonight...hopefuly :(

[atlok7]

this is why BS toys dont get anywhere.
we need NEMZ , TRICKS , ALIVE , SKY back.

haha... i dont like your old sketches...

[RFI. SPit]

zof you've really progressed alot. i like the organic style that your going for, well maybe you aren't, but whateva. i think you should experiment with add ons that come further off your letters, kinda like the ones that big el does. just my opinion, but keep at it

Haha.. okay I kinda gave it a try... This is my favourite sketch in a while!
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9884/photo398bx0.jpg
Somebody send me some markers :(
I have nothing to colour this with

[J-CHICKEN!]

Crits?

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Keane- not feelin any flow in ur letters try throwing in more curves
Smooth nuts - love those throws they dope
Mister dylan - that first character is wicked
Zof - i think the E is to big to the other letters drags ur eyes to the end of the name first

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01240.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01242.jpg
crits?

[ESKiMO2]

Rsakens- 3/4th one is awesome. Keep that up.

[osnapizzel]

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8830/picture197gw4.jpg

newer throwie i tried something simple

ughh selfbump

[Mister Dylan]

this is why BS toys dont get anywhere.
we need NEMZ , TRICKS , ALIVE , SKY back.

BS toys don't get anywhere becuase artists with their cock stuck in the door to the past post pictures that are years old and don't like when people pay compliments to it? That's an odd rationale I would say.

I'm just trying to feel out the forum, little unexpected unreasonable hostility. That said I still fucking dig that SERIUS peice, the shading and the depth with no clearly defined third dimension is really nicely done. However I'll probably be called a homosexual moron for another compliment.

Evasion- That second peice is so smooth, I love the letters and the way it's shadowed to jump off the page.


Anyway, I snapped a few photos out of my sketch book that is a couple months old. I wanted to see what people think of building letters as individual 3-D peices.

http://www3.mediafire.com/imgbnc.php/9c9e5309ffdc5d04e872d1d598aac30e5g.jpg
http://www3.mediafire.com/imgbnc.php/cb6c89713d3f497a72faef47c035c4975g.jpg

[IlikePie]

He's saying, if you guys see something with pretty colors and crazy add-ons, then you instantly love it. Stop just saying something is dope because you suck worse than that piece does....

[JETPACK!!]

evasion, you got a fairly fresh steeze. but when you gonna actually finish your sketches fuck. i think ive seen one completely one from you.. an it was a battle

it started nice, then got wacker as i went along
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/851/reign19jb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Panda Jerk]

i dunno what to do with the s



i dunno what to do with yor face!!!11 ...owned

[JETPACK!!]

evasion, you got a fairly fresh steeze. but when you gonna actually finish your sketches fuck. i think ive seen one completely one from you.. an it was a battle

it started nice, then got wacker as i went along
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/851/reign19jb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump bottoms. drips, smoothen your sketch up a bit. its too sharp on the edges imo

[Panda Jerk]

im actually feeeling this one its got a certain umf to it

[NastyCrew]

<a target='_blank' href='http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dammmsonci1.jpg'><img src='http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/5052/dammmsonci1.th.jpg' border='0'/></a>

[NastyCrew]

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/5052/dammmsonci1.th.jpg (http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dammmsonci1.jpg) yeahsssoneeee

[NastyCrew]

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/6745/yeabombog9.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=yeabombog9.jpg)

[Panda Jerk]

<a target='_blank' href='http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dammmsonci1.jpg'><img src='http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/5052/dammmsonci1.th.jpg' border='0'/></a>

whoa son thats sooo tight

[IlikePie]

<3 Jetpack.

[JETPACK!!]

yo why cant kids edit their posts. or put more than one picture in one post.

<3 pie

[Panda Jerk]

obviously so he can have mor posts because they wanna be a real sick guy

<3pie<3jet<3me????

[JETPACK!!]

<3 jerk panda

[atlok7]

ahh reign your arrows finally belong somewhere! but yeah that n is out of wack with the flow of the other letters

[Panda Jerk]

<3 jerk panda

yessssss!!!!!

[...AMOK...]

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/Miley.jpg

eh just fuckin around i don't like it but thought i'd post cuz i'm bored

[Panda Jerk]

i uglied up the k and the e and the s
quickie like 8 min and 23 sec
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSCN0500.jpg
crits

[kaze!]

Amok- do simples man, that piece is shittyyyy
Jetpack- I'm feeling that, those arrows actually belong. Sick stuff, you progressed so fast.

[RFI. SPit]

i uglied up the k and the e and the s
quickie like 8 min and 23 sec
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSCN0500.jpg
crits

Reminds me a lot of Kewtr....
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/Paper/blewpensketch.jpg
Cut down on those bumpy addon things

[Panda Jerk]

yeah the e was an unintentual bite sorry kewt

and im not going to do the w in the next one

[Mister Dylan]

He's saying, if you guys see something with pretty colors and crazy add-ons, then you instantly love it. Stop just saying something is dope because you suck worse than that piece does....

Noted.

[osnapizzel]

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8830/picture197gw4.jpg

newer throwie i tried something simple



ughh selfbump

[IlikePie]

yeah the e was an unintentual bite sorry kewt

and im not going to do the w in the next one

:/ The whole thing was pretty much a bite </3

[Panda Jerk]

not really if it is im sorry and it was on accident please dont unheart me:(

[Panda Jerk]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSCN0503.jpg

new sketch new name no bites

[IlikePie]

Reminds me a lot of Kewtr....
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd108/MickeyPhiver/Paper/blewpensketch.jpg
Cut down on those bumpy addon things

The way the kick comes out looks like Kewtr's K or R... Damnit man, <//3

[glyce]

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank010-1.jpg

maste- that looks good but that one pink letter is kind of an eye sore with the rest being blue

bump

[JETPACK!!]

soank try an find a smoother way of putting the rectangle on your O and S. your S is mad bunk, dont make it look like a 5. the cracks are pretty good though
okae. lower the A and E, i find there too high.

another sketch
http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/1949/reign20uf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[acereborn]

jet- i think you need to thicken up the i, and lose the star. i just dont really like the star. other than that, the arrows are looking better and the piece is good.

glyce- give crits to get 'em. but fuck it. make the 3d decent, its pissing me off. its on the left, right, bottom, and then it isnt on any in certain spots. fix it next time.

[Soboe!]

jetty, go with a upper case I and work on the E and N

[JETPACK!!]

my upper case I's look like asshole... combined with corny shithole. and a bit of bread to scoop it all up. put it in your mouth.

and thats the taste of my uppercase I's.

[Soboe!]

taste like proper :)

[acereborn]

lol, theyre like the easiest letter. just a bar. just a consistent bar.

lol

[JETPACK!!]

well no shit there easy to do.. but its difficult to make em steezy. they look mad generic an there's always too much deadspace inbetween the horizontal bars of the I.

[acereborn]

make it like a lowercase L. like

__
| |
| |
| |
---

ish


and pretty much everything looks generic when its simples. but they still look good.

[Capo Izi]

ha, don't worry mass appeal!

simple stuffffffffffffffff

http://a230.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/14/l_921f8ad40b2cdb0d28846f1b33a3db95.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

take the back bar off the P and make them all the same height.

[Panda Jerk]

The way the kick comes out looks like Kewtr's K or R... Damnit man, <//3

wow honestly it was on accident and if it wer a bite it wood look way mor like his and way less like mine and tha way the bar comes off of his r or k is not his invention other writers are allowd to do that too

[atlok7]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSCN0503.jpg

new sketch new name no bites

eh that k kinda looks like a mar bite

[Panda Jerk]

not really his ks have all thes different bars coming off of his

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Keane- not feelin any flow in ur letters try throwing in more curves
Smooth nuts - love those throws they dope
Mister dylan - that first character is wicked
Zof - i think the E is to big to the other letters drags ur eyes to the end of the name first

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01240.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01242.jpg
crits?
BUMP!!!

capo - lose the extensions round it all
Panda jerk - cant read it sry dude gonna have to say a tiny bit simpler
REIGN - I FUCKIN LOVE IT!!

[Proper]

taste like proper :)

You douchebag, you guys probably talk ish all day long on me in this stupid subsection and get away with it because I hardly come in here!

[Evasion Of Invasion]

yup we talk about u 24/7, no doubt, o however could we have been so foolish to think ud never catxh on

[Mass Appeal]

He's saying, if you guys see something with pretty colors and crazy add-ons, then you instantly love it. Stop just saying something is dope because you suck worse than that piece does....

bump my Mexican lover
i love you

n Proper...how the fuck do you do those sigs...theyre all computery and shit....same with you Soboe...i really need a sig

[MarOne...]

I made those, Mass. Want one?

Anything for my european lover. ;)

[-ShAmEE-]

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/15.jpg
old times.

[rsakens]

what didnt think you got enough crits the last time you posted it?

dit i posted it allready ?
lol dont rember anyways the top one was brant new so i coulnd have posted it before not sure about the rest

[Mr Fantastic]

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m284/nat_r_b/morf-1.jpg

[Mass Appeal]

Mr.Fantastic...im REALLY feeling that M...also the addon to the left is well placed too...its just the rest of the peice...the ORF....lose the connection the M to the O...lose the arrow..just basically lose all connections n arrows you currently have apart from the one on the M i noted up there ^....even out the peice so its well balanced too...then you have one nice simple

or you can completley ignore my help :)...either way i dont really care.

[ESKiMO2]

Mar, you changed your name again? Where the fuck have I been?

[MissUtopiaa]

I´m trying to load some pictures, but i can´t do it with blogger links, Now am loading them to imageshack... when i get do it fine am editing this post once again with the pics...

http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/6283/geleswq1.jpg
http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/9162/trozoev9.jpg

[Mr Fantastic]

safe, mass appeal. i went out n used tht sketch n i did it without the arrows the other day didn't get a photo but next time im out where i did it i get a flick n cheers for the feed back wern't too sure wether i would get any or not cos im british n stumbled accross this site :)

[Evasion Of Invasion]

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01240.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01242.jpg
capo - lose the extensions round it all
Panda jerk - cant read it sry dude gonna have to say a tiny bit simpler
REIGN - I FUCKIN LOVE IT!
[QUOTE]

[Panda Jerk]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSCN0503.jpg

new sketch new name no bites

bummp sorry for size

[MissUtopiaa]

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/1376/cumplegelesot7.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

omg a woman! (e-sex)

but forreal im feelin that gelps. except i dont like the P, (or lower case e, but if thats the case make it the same as your first E) take the hook off the bottom


soank try an find a smoother way of putting the rectangle on your O and S. your S is mad bunk, dont make it look like a 5. the cracks are pretty good though
okae. lower the A and E, i find there too high.

another sketch
http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/1949/reign20uf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bomp to the bottom

[MissUtopiaa]

No JETPACK, it isnt a P its a E, I think u r right, maybe i had to keep the style of the first one.. (sorry aout my english, am from spain...).

A few comments above that there are 2 pics more...

[JETPACK!!]

i didnt feel like giving crits to those ones though.

keep your E's the same. and give crits if you expect to receive them. im just being nice cuz your new...