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sketch3
05-19-2008, 05:22 PM
would you sluts simmer down

ATE
05-19-2008, 05:22 PM
.....
ENPHASIZING. Bitch.
Yea sketch im done :D

hazetheone
05-19-2008, 05:25 PM
sigh
i can only hope you are making fun of retarded people by imitating them
otherwise you might want to go check out some social aid programs or anything that might help you get over this very sad and severe case of mental retardation

ATE
05-19-2008, 05:27 PM
sigh
i can only hope you are making fun of retarded people by imitating them
otherwise you might want to go check out some social aid programs or anything that might help you get over this very sad and severe case of mental retardation

What the fuck are you going on about fool?

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-19-2008, 05:27 PM
haze ill battle u

MarOne...
05-19-2008, 05:34 PM
Just shut the fuck up.

Haze, I really like that bro.

Scream Out
05-19-2008, 05:40 PM
some simples, the p is a little off
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo267.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-19-2008, 05:57 PM
MarOne fight me you fuckin skank :p

StAtiK1
05-19-2008, 05:58 PM
i really like that scream. sometimes theres nothin better than a nice simple i find...

Cin123
05-19-2008, 05:59 PM
scream out- i like the simps, and the charter is dope
ate- work on them simp a lil more but u got potentional
i got cloud- i like
haze- i dont like how all the leaders are connected
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/007-2.jpg
crits?

kog_throwie
05-19-2008, 06:17 PM
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh48/pkpkkiller/DSC00360.jpg

crits!!!!!!

cin im not feeling that very much if you have that pointy part on your E the beggining of everyletter has to be pointy remove that square part off the I and squish the N together more

ATE
05-19-2008, 06:18 PM
Cin- Thanks and try and bring the "N" a bit closer in. i dont know if you get what i mean but just make the cross line a little shorter. :D
Kog- round up the "e" a bit, and make the "!" a little straiter :D other than that nice

*cept*
05-19-2008, 06:18 PM
this was like a week back. id say its pretty simple

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/9994/caisorangegreydoublepagos4.jpg


this was two sketches ago. note, baze, and a couple other people in the big black book thread said it was getting good

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/4729/caisrocklobsterwp9.jpg
first one is sick, probably the best sketch i seen outta you, paint that shit. the C on the second one bugs me but in the last couple weeks you've made such a huge improvement. nice job mang. /dickride

*cept*
05-19-2008, 06:20 PM
some simples, the p is a little off
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo267.jpg

its nice man

Epoc
05-19-2008, 06:42 PM
ahah scream nice simp, char, a punchline.

NoCanControl
05-19-2008, 07:56 PM
scream, the character is not good, good letters though.

MessTonic
05-19-2008, 08:36 PM
i actually like the character

JETPACK!!
05-19-2008, 08:43 PM
ive already been told it sucks haha. some shit at work. im really feelin that impale. big ups

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/6366/rasek3wl4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

nalko
05-19-2008, 08:46 PM
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/007-2.jpg
crits?

Should do more simple letter structure, bars need to be same width, etc.

atlok7
05-19-2008, 08:49 PM
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/2043/caisgreybluesqn6.jpg
cin- keep your bars straight
screamz- dope simples
and lil ol' jet sack- your styles improving, just connect the bars in the R and that e is goofed. i would stick to the upper case one

MessTonic
05-19-2008, 08:54 PM
cais your shits always really good, even thought the A doesnt really flow that well i still like it..

Scream Out
05-19-2008, 08:59 PM
the character is not the focus lol, besides, half of it isnt even in the picure. thanks for all your feedback though.

cin - work on your letter structure a lot, use straight bars and once you get that down add some of your own style to it lol because right now its lookn real sloppy. also, you shadow is lookn really off, i find it easyer when the shadow comes down from a diagonal and not off one of the sides, hope that helps a bit.

kog_throwie - your letters seem to be decent for a throw style but you shadow is off, its coming from too many directions. if we can see your shadow at the bottom of your letters the shadows towards the side should not be as high as the letters themselves. hopefully this makes enough sense to help you fix it up a little.

NoCanControl - the char is definitely not my best, but next time you want to say something is just straight up not good please elaborate a little, this is a thread for improvements.

Haz-E
05-19-2008, 10:01 PM
Cin its ur man elect dude thats the worst thing from u stick to ur str8's for now n next time we chill will help u out get tezm's advice to

Jetpack fucking ill simple dude i rember wen u started on here good job

and atlock always loving ur shit style is ill

sum shit i did at my boy dimr's house

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/9739/00005921if5.jpg

garbage down tha way
05-19-2008, 10:23 PM
elect that would be so dope if the first E wasnt so different from the rest of the letters.

fonone
05-19-2008, 10:24 PM
jetpack - i like it but i dont you know? i think what i mean is that it definatley has potential, its got a nice style to it. i think fix up the upright bar of the K, make it straight not bending backwards, and take off the line that goes into the main part of the A from the circle bit you know? hard to explain, the bit just above the hole, idk try that and see how it looks, also connect the bars of the R like someone else said.

elect - that looks nice, id say just do something with the T it looks boring compared to the other letters, but nice job.

heres an ack throwie im working on... havent been doing any proper sketches recently but yeah what do you think of the throw

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/5100/may20167oi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/5100/may20167oi6.b50fef2b7a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=261&i=may20167oi6.jpg)

atlok7
05-19-2008, 10:47 PM
thats a dope k

fonone
05-19-2008, 11:30 PM
jetpack - i like it but i dont you know? i think what i mean is that it definatley has potential, its got a nice style to it. i think fix up the upright bar of the K, make it straight not bending backwards, and take off the line that goes into the main part of the A from the circle bit you know? hard to explain, the bit just above the hole, idk try that and see how it looks, also connect the bars of the R like someone else said.

elect - that looks nice, id say just do something with the T it looks boring compared to the other letters, but nice job.

heres an ack throwie im working on... havent been doing any proper sketches recently but yeah what do you think of the throw

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/5100/may20167oi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/5100/may20167oi6.b50fef2b7a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=261&i=may20167oi6.jpg)

bump, thanks atlok

NoCanControl
05-20-2008, 12:21 AM
NoCanControl - the char is definitely not my best, but next time you want to say something is just straight up not good please elaborate a little, this is a thread for improvements.

right on, my bad. the eyes throw it all off, its almost too cartoonish to be with the rest of it and the whole unequal nostrals, the ears, the forehead, the cheek bone.... idk, its just almost a 8th grader drawing. idk how to elaberate, i can say the anatomey is off, and what not, just wierd, idk, HAHAHAH, this is why i can't elaberate, cept for lettors.

elect- the e looks crammed, even though you drew it first, it almost looks as if you drew the last letter first.....

jetpak,- i like the simps, the flow of the top two halfs of the k is effed, or maybe just the whole k idk, i really dk but i just know something is wrong with it. the e is dope, the right leg of the r is too big, or the left leg is too small.


haha, i drew a dope e but the color kills the piece so i'm never gonna post it, just draw the e again...

_zen_
05-20-2008, 12:45 AM
dope K...........................
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f289/Blood_runner/scan0005.jpg


second "bar" piece.nawt. shoulda took more time on the last 2 letters rushed it a little.
critz....

smooth_nuts
05-20-2008, 02:12 AM
zen-simples and bars.....
fonone-im liking the throw sep for the c and the bottom hand style ispretty dope
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture140.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture135.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture124.jpg
sharpie bordem at 3am WOOT WOOT!

rsakens
05-20-2008, 04:24 AM
was busy this morning
:D
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00071-5.jpg?t=1211273305
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00088-3.jpg?t=1211273346
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00075-4.jpg?t=1211273372
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00080-5.jpg?t=1211273393
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00073-4.jpg?t=1211273414

rsakens
05-20-2008, 04:30 AM
i didnt really feel like coloring



http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/7136/caisonegreenwhitevl4.jpg

you should come down abit with does extensions thought
wow this is alot better :)
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/4729/caisrocklobsterwp9.jpg

Chump
05-20-2008, 09:52 AM
http://www.tinypic.ws/files/ljy7q9kyqqqcqgkw0bbn.jpg
workin on a 2 letter...
Doap- Love your simples...not a bad throw either...
Keane- stuff looks good... but try mixing it up abit... all your stuff looks the same...

ATE
05-20-2008, 10:40 AM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk54/zomada/ate3.jpg
this better? or should it be more simp :D
EDIT: kinda messed up on the "T"

DECO ONE
05-20-2008, 10:42 AM
Simple Straight letter..I messed up the proportions....oh well...

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IMG000121.jpg

ATE
05-20-2008, 10:46 AM
Resin im lovin that, but make the "R" a little straiter. Also, make the "S" a little more domanent...if thats the look your going for :D

shiva - the destroyer
05-20-2008, 11:08 AM
ate, work on your shadows and don't forget to use bars (on the right side of your A)
and yes, go simple

resin, i don't like the bend in your R the rest is pretty ok

DECO ONE
05-20-2008, 11:22 AM
ate, work on your shadows and don't forget to use bars (on the right side of your A)
and yes, go simple

resin, i don't like the bend in your R the rest is pretty ok

haha, yeah, i know what you mean, im working on it right now, i wanna change the N to...

tempest
05-20-2008, 12:06 PM
sigh
i can only hope you are making fun of retarded people by imitating them
otherwise you might want to go check out some social aid programs or anything that might help you get over this very sad and severe case of mental retardation

omfg. if u thot of that, props. if not...fuck it. funny as hell

Mass Appeal
05-20-2008, 12:19 PM
ROKE

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ddd.jpg

-ShAmEE-
05-20-2008, 12:53 PM
dope.

u tried ur shit with 3D yet?

ATE
05-20-2008, 01:37 PM
ROKE

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ddd.jpg

Man, you make them trains? or what. if not hook me up with a link :D
Also, Thats a dope "R" and try not attaching letters :D

smooth_nuts
05-20-2008, 01:42 PM
ate-simples and bars....
chump-i wouldnt write sh its a pretty played out name plus theres already an acomplished frieght writer that goes by sh,aside from that its looking fresh haha
amka-thats too dope man
rsakens-im really feeling that bottom painted one as for setches the crom eone and the on under it look the best
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture148-1.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture154.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture161.jpg
second atampt at an apher throw ignore the wack ass !

Chump
05-20-2008, 01:53 PM
well crap... im trying to come up with a good 2 letter with me name...SOKEH..maybe SO?

NoCanControl
05-20-2008, 01:57 PM
well crap... im trying to come up with a good 2 letter with me name...SOKEH..maybe SO?

so-k
would be the tightest.

shiva - the destroyer
05-20-2008, 02:20 PM
and if 3 is too long, SK wil be nice it hink

Chump
05-20-2008, 02:22 PM
thanks guys...i like SK.... bummer though bc i liked that H lol

shiva - the destroyer
05-20-2008, 02:34 PM
the H is a weak letter

South-Pole
05-20-2008, 02:39 PM
Sk sounds like a crew name to me,,and no H isn't a weak letter,i find it easy to mess with

Chump
05-20-2008, 02:41 PM
i like H just took me a bit to figure it out...SK not a bad 2letter...ill sktech somthing up right now...

NoCanControl
05-20-2008, 02:46 PM
resin, work on your r and s, make sure your s is more defined.
ate, go simple, no extentions.
smooth nuts, nice throws, i wish i could em like you.
zen, your letters are too wild and undefined, do SIMPZ!

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Photo-0058.jpg

yes i know drop shadow... i'm tried of doing them, i'm in for the structure now....

shiva - the destroyer
05-20-2008, 02:49 PM
Sk sounds like a crew name to me,,and no H isn't a weak letter,i find it easy to mess with

i don't mean in the way he looks, but in a word, when you write SH, no one will think someting near sokeh.

taking over 603
05-20-2008, 03:59 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c89/Djskilz/Crash.jpg

Any crits?

shiva - the destroyer
05-20-2008, 04:06 PM
i don't like the right side of the N, the top
i don't know what you should do with it, but at least shorten it

atlok7
05-20-2008, 04:16 PM
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/9792/keaneexchangead0.jpg
exchange wif keane

taking over- your 3d is goofy. make sure all the lines are paralell

mexico
05-20-2008, 04:19 PM
AtLok_ That is sick.
Nocancontrol_ I dig it, good clean lines.
Sins_ uhhhh, OK but I dont really like the tops of the S's
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc242/ibenpwnzed/DSC00999.jpg
I ran out of room for the D on the paper.

taking over 603
05-20-2008, 04:30 PM
Atlok7- Thats f*ckin dope.

garbage down tha way
05-20-2008, 04:48 PM
yeah cais that shit is fucking ridiculous, now if all your sketches looked like that people wouldnt keep complaining.

atlok7
05-20-2008, 04:56 PM
thanks yo. haha yeah ik

Reson.
05-20-2008, 04:58 PM
Did this during class today sorry for the bad pic took it during class lol

-ShAmEE-
05-20-2008, 05:13 PM
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/9792/keaneexchangead0.jpg
exchange wif keane

taking over- your 3d is goofy. make sure all the lines are paralell


this is some nice shit,

just need to sort that A out, u should of kept it basic like the other letters.

Techkanuck
05-20-2008, 05:28 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture330.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture331.jpg
some quick sketches but I think I'm going to just go pencil and ink for a while, having issues

Atlok- shit's always clean and different, I agree the A should be shanged up and the star in the E could be smaller but it's an exchange and it's hot

Chump
05-20-2008, 05:31 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/2m31qmd.jpg
2 letter...
Atlok- that red is poppin
Vois- i like the second one, work on the S though
Mexico- Keep workin on it...

Panda Jerk
05-20-2008, 05:56 PM
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/9792/keaneexchangead0.jpg
exchange wif keane

taking over- your 3d is goofy. make sure all the lines are paralell

so so freshhhhhhh i love the colours

Techkanuck
05-20-2008, 06:40 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture332.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture333.jpg

might go in the direction of the second one


Chump- I like it but I'd make the stright part of the K the same on top as the bottom bulb, and maybe a little bigger S to space out the parts

*cept*
05-20-2008, 06:44 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture332.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture333.jpg

might go in the direction of the second one


Chump- I like it but I'd make the stright part of the K the same on top as the bottom bulb, and maybe a little bigger S to space out the parts
stop making one side of the v longer than the other

Techkanuck
05-20-2008, 07:12 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture335.jpg

MarOne...
05-20-2008, 07:32 PM
ROKE

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ddd.jpg

Yeah, thats what I'm talking about. Haha nice.

*cept*
05-20-2008, 07:43 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture335.jpg

better

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-20-2008, 07:50 PM
no can control- i cant even tell those are letters go back to simples, keyboard letters get those down before you start bending your letters, make your letters thicker.
taking over 603- chill out with the extensions, i can see your letters coming along but the extensions and arrows show degression rather than progression bust out some more simple people will tell you when it's time to add extensions.
atlok- love the colors but they make your piece and graffiti is not about colors its about the letters. think about it. your k is pretty simple and is coming correct work on the middle bar of the k a little more raise it. lose the long bar coming out of the e i would make your first e like your second e. stop tryin to make your a so rounded play around with that letter individually its tricky. your n i nice but hidden too much by the a. the last e is nice except for the random bar on top of it lose all those the make your pieces look cluttered the stars too. work on some of your letters individually and go a little simpler your coming along nicely.
vois- go simpler keyboard letters, use a pencil not markers.
chump- the throwie is pretty decent, lose the bump on top of the s and work on the top right of the k.
Amk- you have alot of good line work in your pieces and the colors are nice too, but work on that o and switch up the letters some. practice your handstyles homie. get a notebook and fill that up with handstyles than get another one and do the same thing.
Attention TOYS.
Personally some of the best pieces i have seen are black and white and have no extensions at all they are well developed simples, extensions and colors dont make a piece, the letters do.
EXAMPLE OF SIMPLES.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/samy3.jpg

seywhat
05-20-2008, 08:08 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage85.jpg
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage86.jpg
school shit

vois- dont overlap your letters and put them at angles, just straight across with simple letters
atlok- really feelin that keane exchange, dopeness

RHODE
05-20-2008, 08:50 PM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6379/rhode4ma9.jpg

rhode. 401 + REJ

JETPACK!!
05-20-2008, 09:27 PM
toy tags.
vois, keep at it man, your simples are gettin pretty solid

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5558/rasek4uf5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ive been disapointed in every sketch i do lately...

Scream Out
05-20-2008, 09:35 PM
rasek thats looking pretty nice but i think the s is throwing it off
i would try making the s with straight bars instead of the curved ones, so more like a backwards Z instead of S, i think it would help the flow of it a lot

JETPACK!!
05-20-2008, 09:39 PM
ok, next sketch.

can i have a tootsie pop?

RFI. SPit
05-20-2008, 09:42 PM
Sketch from today.. can you even see it? Somebody send me some markers :'(

http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/8720/photo13qy5.jpg

RezOner..
05-20-2008, 09:42 PM
http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll277/STEGOREAL/HPIM0197.jpg
http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll277/STEGOREAL/HPIM0202.jpg
fucked up on the 3d

taking over 603
05-20-2008, 09:45 PM
Vios- That last one you did is lookin right, show alittle more of the I though.
Sezer- Bump for the crits bro, its good to have some I can use.
Rasek- I dont know what your talkin bout bro, that shit looks good but the K needs alittle help though.

I finished it anyway..... Only colors I had.......


http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c89/Djskilz/Crash014.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-20-2008, 09:53 PM
sins i like ur shit paintin from the area code baby! rep that 603! but rasek ur shit is dope dont kno whats off bout it :confused:

RezOner..
05-20-2008, 10:57 PM
jet thats clean man. i like it.
sin- nice. just wouldve worked better with the matching colors.

Techkanuck
05-20-2008, 11:28 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture339.jpg

wish I could go to a nice locale and try this out roller style

Jet- your shit has been nice lately the painted stuff is clean as hell, almost better than your drawings

La Coka Nostra
05-21-2008, 01:21 AM
it all sucks.
vandal the only reason you like sins shit is cause you suck too.
you are the reason why manchester is so wack.
GTFO!

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-21-2008, 01:40 AM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/f3f8ee0bb284-1.jpg

Bets369R
05-21-2008, 02:33 AM
some older stuff cause i havnt posted here for a while, but i have no way to get new pics to my laptop at the time
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/blackbookpage.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/Picture25.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/betsthrows.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/IMG_1164.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/Picture24.jpg
exchange i did with someone on here
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/kasperexchange.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/IMG_1146.jpg


any crits welcome

pureemoti0n
05-21-2008, 07:25 AM
i tried simpler using bars
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/7841/scanthousse4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mass Appeal
05-21-2008, 07:27 AM
that top one is great .. more of that MINES

atlok7
05-21-2008, 08:01 AM
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/9792/keaneexchangead0.jpg
exchange wif keane

taking over- your 3d is goofy. make sure all the lines are paralell

bumperooz

Mass Appeal
05-21-2008, 08:10 AM
fuck stop bumping your own shit

HuntingLOLs
05-21-2008, 08:11 AM
yo atlok, the a doesnt flow there, its too bendy and spacey if you catch my drift.
KE doesnt work together (K too small if you ask me) but rest looks good

Soboe!
05-21-2008, 08:12 AM
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/IMG_1146.jpg


kid uses my "E" :(
its not fair! ive been doing that forever...
oh well shit happens. btw its the last letter in the "Bombing SciencE" hand steez.

atlok its fresh we know even the big boy forums liked it alot

atlok7
05-21-2008, 08:12 AM
sorry yo i just had the URGEEE

Soboe!
05-21-2008, 08:14 AM
sorry yo i just had the URGEEE

thats called hormones o.O :D

South-Pole
05-21-2008, 10:21 AM
atlok-overally it looks nice,.but still,the stars aren't drawn properly,the bar on top of the last E has to go.,other than that everything seems ok

trying a new style,its developped from one of my hand styles(look at the handie on the bottom of the page).i know some add-ons/arrows etc,,may not flow i was just messing around to see what it gives.i used a calligraphy pen btw.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/tryout.jpg

JETPACK!!
05-21-2008, 10:26 AM
needs more arrows. throw more wiggles in your bars too. there too straight. put a bigger space in between your T and R there too close.

South-Pole
05-21-2008, 10:48 AM
needs more arrows. throw more wiggles in your bars too. there too straight. put a bigger space in between your T and R there too close.weird,but i thought doing all those things,i thought there was already enough arrows and adding some more would kill the piece.At the begining when i started sketching there was a gap between the t and r,and i thought it would be better if the bars weren't so straight thanks for the crit though

JETPACK!!
05-21-2008, 10:49 AM
hahahah do the opposite of what i said.

*cept*
05-21-2008, 10:52 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture339.jpg

wish I could go to a nice locale and try this out roller style

Jet- your shit has been nice lately the painted stuff is clean as hell, almost better than your drawings
best one i seen outta ya

La Coka Nostra
05-21-2008, 11:11 AM
weird,but i thought doing all those things,i thought there was already enough arrows and adding some more would kill the piece.At the begining when i started sketching there was a gap between the t and r,and i thought it would be better if the bars weren't so straight thanks for the crit though



LAWLAWLAWLAWLAWLAWL

rsakens
05-21-2008, 11:21 AM
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/9792/keaneexchangead0.jpg
damm cais thats just sick ^

thankx man
and i will have to work on something better now after you dit something proper for me =D

Backalley Abortion Doctor
05-21-2008, 11:37 AM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/Picture011.jpg?t=1211387804

Lol I just found this, It's reeeeally old.

*cept*
05-21-2008, 11:42 AM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/Picture011.jpg?t=1211387804

Lol I just found this, It's reeeeally old.
nvm, that shits just ugly

RFI. SPit
05-21-2008, 11:58 AM
nvm, that shits just ugly

Fuck you

*cept*
05-21-2008, 12:02 PM
Fuck you
http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c369/martineurotic/fuck-off-smokers.jpg
suck it n1ggaaaaa

ATE
05-21-2008, 12:09 PM
RFI whats your sig gif from :D:D:D ITs fucking AWSOME.

RFI. SPit
05-21-2008, 12:26 PM
Don't know, some movie.

Inked this sucker-
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/6641/photo14vl4.jpg

*cept*
05-21-2008, 01:08 PM
Don't know, some movie.

Inked this sucker-
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/6641/photo14vl4.jpg
http://www.menscience.com/blog/uploaded_images/Young-smiling-asian-man-745813.jpg
ME RIKEY!

atlok7
05-21-2008, 01:41 PM
damn that guys got a fresh stache

South-Pole
05-21-2008, 01:54 PM
atlok-overally it looks nice,.but still,the stars aren't drawn properly,the bar on top of the last E has to go.,other than that everything seems ok

trying a new style,its developped from one of my hand styles(look at the handie on the bottom of the page).i know some add-ons/arrows etc,,may not flow i was just messing around to see what it gives.i used a calligraphy pen btw.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/tryout.jpg

LOLz bump

cept-my stache looks like his
rots-im l0vin it
rfi-im in l0ve with it,your style got better

Backalley Abortion Doctor
05-21-2008, 01:54 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/Picture012.jpg?t=1211396040

Scribbling, I'm too lazy today

Chump
05-21-2008, 01:59 PM
rots you wanna do a throw exchange?

Backalley Abortion Doctor
05-21-2008, 02:00 PM
Ok. What do you write.

Chump
05-21-2008, 02:03 PM
Sokeh

Techkanuck
05-21-2008, 02:04 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture341.jpg

messing with a sticker i messed up before

Rots- I really like the upper left deeter and the characters have a cool feel to them

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-21-2008, 03:18 PM
it all sucks.
vandal the only reason you like sins shit is cause you suck too.
you are the reason why manchester is so wack.
GTFO!

your sucha cool tough kid!holy fuck! seriously i wish i was hard enough to go on this website nd talk shit to kids;) wow can you teach me?!?
kk tough guy fuckin get a life dont talk OVER A COMPUTER nd you dont kno me at all so fuckk youuuuu hoeeee

Cin123
05-21-2008, 03:45 PM
kid uses my "E" :(
its not fair! ive been doing that forever...
oh well shit happens. btw its the last letter in the "Bombing SciencE" hand steez.

atlok its fresh we know even the big boy forums liked it alot

agreed ur dope atlok

**MATEO**
05-21-2008, 04:01 PM
i know pie.
you can just be cool and draw on album covers.
im starting a trend.
check it out.


aesoppppppp. LMAO. cartoon rendition done by me.
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/7201/aesoprj6.jpg

and SKSK. i listen to gay music i know.
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/339/sksksr3.jpg
Nice and simple.

Soboe!
05-21-2008, 04:46 PM
i listen to sksk too, haha i am right now...
fuck were fags hahaha...
sorry i havent had sketches up lovers... i hope too today

RezOner..
05-21-2008, 04:49 PM
:D soboe loves me? yay!:D

NoCanControl
05-21-2008, 05:06 PM
anyone want to do an exchange, i hate my name, AND FUCKING DRAW IT BACK, cuz uhhhh, that last fucker didn't. he just pobably post my drawing in some other forum.
any ways, exchange?

DonaldFour
05-21-2008, 05:09 PM
Hi im new to BS, i write negor at the moment but heres some older ish stuff..Gets older as you scroll down :P :
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture064-1.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/nusorN.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/num0szdjdfl.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture026.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture004.jpg


I change my name a lot.

Bets369R
05-21-2008, 05:11 PM
kid uses my "E" :(
its not fair! ive been doing that forever...
oh well shit happens. btw its the last letter in the "Bombing SciencE" hand steez.

atlok its fresh we know even the big boy forums liked it alot

haha ive been using that E for a while now. got it from my homie Batle663 (he has a gallery on 50mmLA if you care) i havnt done it in a while tho so you can have it. i wont do it anymore :) all iz Happiieeeee

Bets369R
05-21-2008, 05:15 PM
anyone want to do an exchange, i hate my name, AND FUCKING DRAW IT BACK, cuz uhhhh, that last fucker didn't. he just pobably post my drawing in some other forum.
any ways, exchange?

what do you write? and what type of exchange? im down

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-21-2008, 05:18 PM
http://www.tmobilepictures.com/photo/photo05/8c/c2/0dfd5d38a3ce.jpg?tw=305&th=228&_rh=4z7izqose8itjkf3wjlsrv3wo
http://www.tmobilepictures.com/photo/photo08/29/0b/ade88581a2c1.jpg?tw=305&th=228&_rh=789uatkgvlmsmcmeufbf722e1

La Coka Nostra
05-21-2008, 05:22 PM
your sucha cool tough kid!holy fuck! seriously i wish i was hard enough to go on this website nd talk shit to kids;) wow can you teach me?!?
kk tough guy fuckin get a life dont talk OVER A COMPUTER nd you dont kno me at all so fuckk youuuuu hoeeee


no i don't know you, but i've seen your graff, and it's bad.
i'm not a tough guy. and if i wasn't on the computer i would have no other way to tell you you suck.

and thanks mateo.
:)
and soboe
who says we have to be fags cause we listen to fag music.
:(

Cin123
05-21-2008, 05:34 PM
backalley- i like the pig
tech-personally i dont like how the drop shadow is that big
donald- i like the mapl one the best..its dope and simp
edd- drop the aroww on the E its a lil out of place
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/002-2.jpg
crits??

Bets369R
05-21-2008, 05:35 PM
Edit:

Sezer- i like it alot but for some reason, the leg on the P bugs me
Cin- shorten the top bar of the C, lose the huge dot on the I an d replace it with something else, and bring the N a little closer. it looks long and lanky compared to the rest of the letters. and clean it up a little. the lines are real shakey and sloppy.


something i did last night
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/369r001-1.jpg

i might paint it. any crits?

squidone
05-21-2008, 05:39 PM
Bets i really like it other than the bottom of the t keep it straight and the random lines next to the B but other wise its really simple

Soboe!
05-21-2008, 05:42 PM
Edit:

Sezer- i like it alot but for some reason, the leg on the P bugs me
Cin- shorten the top bar of the C, lose the huge dot on the I an d replace it with something else, and bring the N a little closer. it looks long and lanky compared to the rest of the letters. and clean it up a little. the lines are real shakey and sloppy.


something i did last night
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/369r001-1.jpg

i might paint it. any crits?
very nice betsy.
make the loop on the bottom of the T face the other way so fags dont confuse it with a J.
and yea those quotation marks on the left of the B are shit lol


but yea those are tricky letters and you can pull em off nice, keep that ish up

Drakula
05-21-2008, 05:43 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/Picture5-1.png

Random name I did.SIMPLE.

Duppy
05-21-2008, 05:47 PM
Bets - I like everything but the T and them quotations could use a bit of adjusting, other than that it's all sick.

Drakula - Nice, simple but nice. I think you could do better with them 2's though. Something about them... It might just be me.

sketch3
05-21-2008, 05:48 PM
Drakula Thats Fucking Dope,

U Make Me Proud And Depressed At The Same Time,
I Remember When You Started Posting And You Sucked, Few Months Of Advie Later And You Blow My Shit Away

Bets369R
05-21-2008, 05:49 PM
Bets i really like it other than the bottom of the t keep it straight and the random lines next to the B but other wise its really simple

Thanks, i know the T is shit. gotta fix that


very nice betsy.
make the loop on the bottom of the T face the other way so fags dont confuse it with a J.
and yea those quotation marks on the left of the B are shit lol


but yea those are tricky letters and you can pull em off nice, keep that ish up

haha thanks, ill sketch it up again with the T flipped around. now that you mention it, i think itll make it look better and less crammed. thanks


http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/Picture5-1.png

Random name I did.SIMPLE.
that would make a nice roller

Soboe!
05-21-2008, 05:50 PM
damn drakster,
fresh fresh fresh.
the H looks alittle off, just BARELY so dont worry about that.
id just say the background is a dull green. you need a more aggressive green (i sound like im on crack haha)
and that silver makes that pop, is that a chrome paint prisma??
P.S the colour shouldn't matter, its about the letturssss so dont dry to go crazy with colours yet

Drakula
05-21-2008, 05:52 PM
Drakula Thats Fucking Dope,

U Make Me Proud And Depressed At The Same Time,
I Remember When You Started Posting And You Sucked, Few Months Of Advie Later And You Blow My Shit Away

Cheers.Just shows that listening a bit goes a long way.

To Duppy yeah the 2's are a bit out proportion.I ave never written numbers before though so maybe I should start doing more number work...

NoCanControl
05-21-2008, 05:55 PM
what do you write? and what type of exchange? im down

piece, and uhh, Kans, or Kansas.

which ever one.

Bets369R
05-21-2008, 05:56 PM
piece, and uhh, Kans, or Kansas.

which ever one.

for sure. ill work on it

Soboe!
05-21-2008, 07:04 PM
i havent sketched forever...
piece doesnt flow... wack as fuck...
but hell i needed to post something

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080521_1.jpg


i found out some dude writes Eros so i gotta change my name cause hes madddddd dope... i might change it to Saroe.

La Coka Nostra
05-21-2008, 07:26 PM
the detail is pretty dope.

taking over 603
05-21-2008, 07:39 PM
Bets- Im feelin that shit, the S is dope.
Kach- Nice bro, simple, clean lines, I like it.
Soboe- The R is just bigger than everything else, other than that its good.
Adware- Dope, I would just level out all the letters.

Soboe!
05-21-2008, 07:44 PM
yea the OS is more me... i was tryin to get a grimey steez... didnt work hahaha
ill stick with more of that OS steez

Roolete
05-21-2008, 07:45 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/Picture5-1.png

Random name I did.SIMPLE.

dope dope dope.

catch22 was a bad book though

seywhat
05-21-2008, 09:14 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage92.jpg
todays sketch

drak- dope for sure, like all ur shit
adware- its not bad, pretty clean. im just not feelin it though, idk why
soboe- like u said, stick with that os steez
bets- ill, but the t does kind of look like a j

HuntingLOLs
05-21-2008, 09:58 PM
drak, do it ye? the only reason the 2s are off is coz of drop shadow (almost :p)

HuntingLOLs
05-21-2008, 10:02 PM
and RFIs sig is from Event Horizon
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0119081/

Evasion Of Invasion
05-21-2008, 10:24 PM
adware - the fact theres no 3d at the top of the W kinda beaks up the flow once u use add-ons try puttin some at the top to help the flow
Soboe - I like the R actually i think it was the 3D that fucked u up insead of those addons at the top and bottom just re do it and put a drop shadow
Bets - pute sex but turn that curve onto the other side so it reads better
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01384.jpg
sketch for art class, crits?

squidone
05-21-2008, 10:34 PM
evade thats pretty sweet but you should definitely add more detail

redoing some earlier stuff
http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/6364/dsc00325hj1.jpg
crits please

La Coka Nostra
05-21-2008, 10:43 PM
evade, that kinda looks like an acroe bite to me...

*cept*
05-21-2008, 10:48 PM
evade, that KINDA looks like an acroe bite to me...
thats an understatement

mosezone
05-21-2008, 10:51 PM
yea word, and also i wouldn't write your name on it if you're turning it in for school. it's tight, but it just might be a big bite. and RAZE, first one's got potential: maybe make the letters all even like in the 2nd one and just keep messing around with it.

some sketch from after i was done with finals. crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00425.jpg

Soboe!
05-21-2008, 10:51 PM
you all gotta chill with these biting crits...
its been going on for fuckin 100 pages, just if you see a bite keep it to yourselves and shut up and draw!

Scream Out
05-21-2008, 10:56 PM
evade- im not even sure how to crit you on that, im going to assume your going for realism... and failing at it.. look at some more pictures of fetuses or something? mainly the picture is just lacking in detail, and you definitely went overkill with the tubes.

raze - keep at it dude, i think it would help if you drew your bars all the same size until you have a better feel fore the letters and then start playing with the proportions


new sketch, fucked up the drop shadow like the dead hooker in my basem.. i mean...

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo266.jpg

Soboe!
05-21-2008, 11:02 PM
impale whe should paint sometime. pm me

Aspyr510
05-21-2008, 11:03 PM
Really messy. Clean it up some, but it could be really good.

Bets369R
05-21-2008, 11:05 PM
Evade: i wouldnt put what you write on your school work..but thats just me...i like it otherwise

Raze: you need to work on your letter consistency. your bar thickness is way inconsistent

Mose: lose the extensions, and your M looks weird to me. it doesnt flow with the rest

Impale: Everything is technically right on it as far as letter structure and stuff..but i just dont like it very much for some reason..cnt really explain why though

Heilex
05-21-2008, 11:24 PM
Ummm hi... I'm new to these forums, so hi.

http://photos-h.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v232/76/17/549035862/n549035862_828311_4363.jpg

Panda Jerk
05-21-2008, 11:36 PM
ugly
just work on your letter structure and gooo wayyy simpler

Evasion Of Invasion
05-21-2008, 11:42 PM
Ummm hi... I'm new to these forums, so hi.

http://photos-h.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v232/76/17/549035862/n549035862_828311_4363.jpg

not enough arrows, aint hip-hop without atleast 60 arrows

Bets369R
05-21-2008, 11:44 PM
true that. needs moar arrows!!

Panda Jerk
05-21-2008, 11:45 PM
like 89 mor at least that will make it true hip hop steeez

Soboe!
05-22-2008, 12:10 AM
yea double up on the arrows kid,

sir.one
05-22-2008, 12:13 AM
your all tools.

IlikePie
05-22-2008, 12:16 AM
ugly
just work on your letter structure and gooo wayyy simpler

The fuck are you talking about?

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-22-2008, 12:32 AM
your all tools.
thank you sir.
when ya'll were new i sure in the hell didn't piss on your parade point the kid in the right direction the new 2 graff thread or tell him to work on simple keyboard letters.
toy section use to be alot of help, now it's toys with inflated egos trying to advance too fast.:rolleyes:

IlikePie
05-22-2008, 12:34 AM
I just wanted to be in on the "in" crowd :(

AOTPs
05-22-2008, 06:52 AM
thank you sir.
when ya'll were new i sure in the hell didn't piss on your parade point the kid in the right direction the new 2 graff thread or tell him to work on simple keyboard letters.
toy section use to be alot of help, now it's toys with inflated egos trying to advance too fast.


its the truth

SAID
05-22-2008, 07:13 AM
evade- im not even sure how to crit you on that, im going to assume your going for realism... and failing at it.. look at some more pictures of fetuses or something? mainly the picture is just lacking in detail, and you definitely went overkill with the tubes.

raze - keep at it dude, i think it would help if you drew your bars all the same size until you have a better feel fore the letters and then start playing with the proportions


new sketch, fucked up the drop shadow like the dead hooker in my basem.. i mean...

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo266.jpg

shits got maddd potential !

Heilex
05-22-2008, 08:45 AM
You guys serious about the arrows? I thought I exaggerated on that one...

I remember a site that had like a dragon as background, it helped me lots on letter structure, anyone know which one it was?

Soboe!
05-22-2008, 08:48 AM
You guys serious about the arrows? I thought I exaggerated on that one...

I remember a site that had like a dragon as background, it helped me lots on letter structure, anyone know which one it was?

are you on crack? you have no letter structure. take a glance at the new to graff thread to see how to do it then copy your keyboard letters
-----
EDIT: edit that outta your post(last bottom part) and ask it in the toy questions thread. this isnt the right thread for that son

Panda Jerk
05-22-2008, 09:15 AM
yeah mos def do yur keyboard letters and stay simple with no color and no extentions no 3D its boring but thats the only way to get better
-----
EDIT: use bars

p.s. i <3 saroe

Techkanuck
05-22-2008, 11:29 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture343-1.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture344.jpg
no excuse of course but the cam is shitty and never does the shit justice

starting to like the Impale shit, maybe the P could be a little bigger and have the same feel as the A for a lil different feel.

-ShAmEE-
05-22-2008, 11:53 AM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/Picture5-1.pnghttp://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture341.jpghttp://www.tmobilepictures.com/photo/photo08/29/0b/ade88581a2c1.jpg?tw=305&th=228&_rh=789uatkgvlmsmcmeufbf722e1http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/9792/keaneexchangead0.jpg


ohh so dope! YEAH. SIMPLES ARE DOPE!

Mass Appeal
05-22-2008, 12:03 PM
Raby has to be one of the best writers in this toy forum if not the best.

Techkanuck
05-22-2008, 12:11 PM
can't believe I see my shitsticker in there, should fix the shadow on it to make it better

Soboe!
05-22-2008, 12:11 PM
very true, but there shouldnt be "the best" or the "well known" writer in the toy forum we should just all do are thing cause most of us will get outta this forum this year

-ShAmEE-
05-22-2008, 12:14 PM
na it is sick, dont u just love that S.

South-Pole
05-22-2008, 12:30 PM
aby-dope simple,fun how not a long time ago you weren't this dope.
vois-you got your simples down,why don't try messing around a bit?
impale-i see some potential there

before

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/tryout.jpg
r
and after :( :

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/gaaaaaaaah.jpg

at first i used a calligraphy pen,it turned out good.but then i changed my mind and outlined with a black paint marker,it messed it up a bit =(
so i got mad with the fill and force field

pureemoti0n
05-22-2008, 01:02 PM
^ i think it looks better after. top impale is fresh
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/2013/scan10006ys8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

blue.steel
05-22-2008, 01:45 PM
ill ^^^^^
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5161/87362092xu5.png (http://imageshack.us)
TUNKA
my scanner makes everything look all dull and boring

NoCanControl
05-22-2008, 02:04 PM
impale, nice simp, i like the e alot.
cais, tight colors as always, and rawr, must do an exchange one day, but not now cuz i need to get into the perfessional attitude.
catch22, is dope, i really like the colors i never really seen that color skeme too often.
pure emotion, emmm, your minez's ez look too goofy, ummm, idk, ez are hard combonation, i used to write a name with those letters togeter, its a bitch to make em flow.
blue steel, the style is soooo tight, but the a looks sqooshed, and idk what it says, tunka?



anyways, bets exchangeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.


http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/bets-1-1.jpg

Haz-E
05-22-2008, 04:30 PM
VOis respect thats the best shit ive seen from you nice n clean

just sum shit in class

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/843/000b06601zp6.jpg

Bets369R
05-22-2008, 04:44 PM
piece, and uhh, Kans, or Kansas.

which ever one.

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/001-1.jpg

"Bi2aR"
05-22-2008, 04:47 PM
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0002-9.jpg

haz-e=thats dope
nocancontrol=i say thicken up tose bars they're too thin

taking over 603
05-22-2008, 04:57 PM
That Kans is dope but I would level the letters out and try to open the K alittle.

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-22-2008, 04:58 PM
got bored as hell
says mr.e
http://i28.tinypic.com/28mfpqf.jpg

joshthesk8ter5
05-22-2008, 04:58 PM
did this quickie in math class
http://i31.tinypic.com/69i0qp.jpg

Bets369R
05-22-2008, 05:00 PM
That Kans is dope but I would level the letters out and try to open the K alittle.

the letters are level..the paper was just crooked to the picture

taking over 603
05-22-2008, 05:03 PM
No doubt, cameras are good for that....

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-22-2008, 05:08 PM
got bored as hell
says mr.e
http://i28.tinypic.com/28mfpqf.jpg

BUMP
**CRITS**

Bets369R
05-22-2008, 05:12 PM
Mr E- lose all the arrows and make the E the same size as the rest

AMRO1
05-22-2008, 05:15 PM
WOahh... everyone is better than me.. but.. i just started tagging.
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm180/AMRO1/ARMO.jpg

-ShAmEE-
05-22-2008, 05:20 PM
new to graff thread please, the amount of post i have used on saying that,

taking over 603
05-22-2008, 05:20 PM
Amro work on your letter structure, dont worry about all the s*it in the backround. Looks good for just starting out though, keep it up....

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-22-2008, 05:24 PM
**CRITS**
http://i28.tinypic.com/mtbdx4.jpg

taking over 603
05-22-2008, 05:26 PM
Vandal im feelin the bottom one, cant really see the top one though.

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-22-2008, 05:26 PM
amro do simple shit lol jus copy the letter from the keyboard nd widen all the lines and begin from there

seywhat
05-22-2008, 05:28 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage92.jpg
todays sketch


bump, didnt even get one crit

adware- bottom one is dope, overlap ur letters and throw a drop shadow on that shit
josh- i dont like the arrow on the o or how the letters connect, pretty dope though
bizar- level everything out and dont curve ur letters so much, keep em pretty straight
bets- im feelin that kans peice, down to exchange?
haz-e- i dont like the indent thing in the first e, bute the rest is fresh

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-22-2008, 05:28 PM
ya my cameras shit ill edit the pic nd repost it

taking over 603
05-22-2008, 05:30 PM
Adware that bottom one is dope, i would run with that one.

AMRO1
05-22-2008, 05:31 PM
Thanks everyone for tips :P but.. what you mean by do it simple?? It not ok what i am doing?

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-22-2008, 05:35 PM
best i could get
http://i25.tinypic.com/205pauq.jpg

Musick8
05-22-2008, 05:36 PM
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/7276/possiblequ4.jpg
its in chalk and its one of my worst all i had on my comp

crit plz

squidone
05-22-2008, 05:37 PM
go to the new 2 graffiti thread and it'll tell you what we mean

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-22-2008, 05:38 PM
amor jus look at the letters on your keybord nd write them big nd make the letter thick/wide so there fat nd thats alright but yor never gunna get anywhere wit that unless u never wanna try paintin nd only draw then go for it

AMRO1
05-22-2008, 05:38 PM
Vandal.. I don't understand what u saying.. You want me to just put the same letter from my keybord to a paper but bigger?? But if i do that.. i get no style?



Some one can crits my tag

[ I've been doing tag for only 2-3 weeks ]

Techkanuck
05-22-2008, 05:42 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture344.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture339.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture330.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture341.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture343-1.jpg
BUMPAGE

adware- I'm feelin the last one the letter structure is nice and open, you could pull off some nice ass scene fills with letters that open.

esole- nice take on the L and the fill for the S and L make it have some different character to the whole thing, I like it.

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-22-2008, 05:42 PM
saywhat i really like that put that shit up on a wall kiddd!

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-22-2008, 05:44 PM
Jus Do It!no ?'s Lol You Dont Need Style At First Jus Get Ur Letter Structure Down Then Worry Bout Puttin Some Style Into It!

Musick8
05-22-2008, 05:45 PM
plz crit

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-22-2008, 05:46 PM
vois im really feelin the top one there nd i like the simples done on the wood keep it up

Scream Out
05-22-2008, 05:47 PM
joshthesk8ter5 - its nice, clean, but i see little to no letter structure, id have to say work on some simples for a while before you jump into the crazy shit

VaNdAL xBA!x - use bars, go back to simples for a while, thats all that can really be said at this point

ctso - that bottom one is pretty fresh, try adding a drop shadow next. as for the top two your pars are all out of shape, try to keep them nice and straight more like your bottom sketch

seywhat - sorry dude musta looked over your sketch on the other page or something. structure is good, bars are nice, 3d is good, only think im having a problem with is that 2nd last letter, it doesent flow with the other letters well and its hard to tell what it is but i think its a Z?

heres a new sketch, i was feeling rather steezy today
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo268.jpg

AMRO1
05-22-2008, 05:47 PM
THanks vandal! But can you tell me what you mean by letter structure?? :O Im kinda lost :S

NoCanControl
05-22-2008, 06:02 PM
impale, nice simp, i like the e alot.
cais, tight colors as always, and rawr, must do an exchange one day, but not now cuz i need to get into the perfessional attitude.
catch22, is dope, i really like the colors i never really seen that color skeme too often.
pure emotion, emmm, your minez's ez look too goofy, ummm, idk, ez are hard combonation, i used to write a name with those letters togeter, its a bitch to make em flow.
blue steel, the style is soooo tight, but the a looks sqooshed, and idk what it says, tunka?



anyways, bets exchangeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.


http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/bets-1-1.jpg

bump over talk and for crits.

taking over 603
05-22-2008, 06:04 PM
Got bored yesterday. Let the hating begin!

taking over 603
05-22-2008, 06:05 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c89/Djskilz/Crash020.jpg

Bets369R
05-22-2008, 06:05 PM
kans - I would lose the arrow on the bottom of the s and change the circle in the a


http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb228/chemicalarrest/adware3.jpg
crits appreciated.

The top 2 i dont like so much, they look too skinny and sloppy. the 3rd one is dope. finish it and post the result

haha, just to clear it up, im not Kans, i did that for an exchange. The bottom of the S isnt supposed to be an arrow, but now that i look at it..it does look like one.


bump, didnt even get one crit

adware- bottom one is dope, overlap ur letters and throw a drop shadow on that shit
josh- i dont like the arrow on the o or how the letters connect, pretty dope though
bizar- level everything out and dont curve ur letters so much, keep em pretty straight
bets- im feelin that kans peice, down to exchange?
haz-e- i dont like the indent thing in the first e, bute the rest is fresh

Im down.

for yours, i like it alot, i dont know what you write exactly, but the 4th letter looks like an L..but in your handstyle it looks like an E..so im not sure...its a really dope L if it is one though lol

NoCanControl
05-22-2008, 06:05 PM
vois, try to expand with different styles, and don't do the same letters everytime with your name, i seen that one voice millions of time different colors, no disss. but yea.

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-22-2008, 06:08 PM
yaa thanks impale im tryin to find suttin that i could go paint for ym first peice plus i jus started writin this name bout last week but i really liek you IMPALE u did shit nasty dude

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-22-2008, 06:10 PM
sins goos shit the first S is a lil fucked that the top but other wise i like

Bets369R
05-22-2008, 06:11 PM
bump over talk and for crits.

Shits dopeee. your style reminds me alot of my homie batle

seywhat
05-22-2008, 06:21 PM
bets and impale- the second to last letter is an L, i write esole.
i'll get on that exchange now bets, anyone else down?

CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K
05-22-2008, 06:27 PM
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/5559/hpim0505ee9.jpg
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/1818/hpim0506ar6.jpg

Scream Out
05-22-2008, 06:32 PM
that lifer throw is ill

squidone
05-22-2008, 06:33 PM
Adware - really like the last two especially the last overlap the letters a little
Impale - the alternating colors are awesome just use another color other than blue it doesnt go with the brown so well
vois - like the first one but bring out the I a little and try and change it up some

Scream Out
05-22-2008, 06:35 PM
Impale - the alternating colors are awesome just use another color other than some

thats actually 2 shades of green, my cam fucked up the colours haha

squidone
05-22-2008, 06:37 PM
oh i see but yeah i really like your letter structure

Scream Out
05-22-2008, 06:37 PM
heres a new sketch, i was feeling rather steezy today
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo268.jpg

bump for a new page

thanks for the feedback

mexico
05-22-2008, 06:42 PM
CROSSEMOUT_ I really, really dig that second one, finish it dude.
BETS_ I like all of those, nice n clean
TAKEOVER_ good clean piece but I still think you could do something about those S's
SCREAMOUT_ good but not sure how I feel about the bottom of the M

Scream Out
05-22-2008, 06:46 PM
SCREAMOUT_ good but not sure how I feel about the bottom of the M

feel good about it, i do

Drakula
05-22-2008, 06:55 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/b8e5bcb2.png

Simple freestyle in byro.

IlikePie
05-22-2008, 06:56 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1211500378.jpg

Barely take time for a sketch, this is just a boredom one, says Lum, not really looking for crits, just haven't posted a picture in a while, so this is what I've been up to :p
*Notice*
This is like 2 minutes work, don't get on my ass about it, 'kay?

Scream Out
05-22-2008, 07:06 PM
raby that shit is dope haha

and ilikepie i really like that m.... theres just somethin about it

Crieg ya ya DIG
05-22-2008, 07:08 PM
scream nice shit

Crieg ya ya DIG
05-22-2008, 07:09 PM
i like pie it cool like it

blue.steel
05-22-2008, 07:13 PM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5161/87362092xu5.png (http://imageshack.us)
TUNKA

bump for crits
nocanctrl, dont overlap ur t so much
sins, get rid of the arrows and try makeing ur bars thicker
lyfe fix your L, and ill throwie
impale i like the bottom of your A but it dosent relly work for the M
Raby if yor r was a person i would rape the shit out of um
pie i dont like your L but ur m is ill

Musick8
05-22-2008, 07:13 PM
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/495/scan001001pl7.jpg
messed up outline
did it on paint
first sketch plz crit

Backalley Abortion Doctor
05-22-2008, 07:14 PM
I hate you.

Musick8
05-22-2008, 07:19 PM
huh...
aww

mexico
05-22-2008, 07:20 PM
drakula_ nice, old school, I like it
ilikepie_ dope
blue.steel_ sweet, but maybe a little too much going on
Good answer scream

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc242/ibenpwnzed/DSC01000.jpg
done just now. I dont have any eraser so the pencil lines had to stay.

taking over 603
05-22-2008, 07:20 PM
That Raby is dope! Thanks for the feed back fellas.........

Crieg ya ya DIG
05-22-2008, 07:22 PM
i like the bars how u used them mexico

Crieg ya ya DIG
05-22-2008, 07:24 PM
my cam is fucked up dude i got to get some up here though ill try to get some up

Scream Out
05-22-2008, 07:29 PM
impale - looks great I'm not feeling the l/E flow though.. I would make the l uppercase although LE might be awkward to write
r

it is uppercase, the "_" part of my L is just really small because it would cover too much of my E otherwise, but thanks for the crit

squidone
05-22-2008, 07:30 PM
yeah adware you should keep the 3d shorter and move your letters still a little closer i think it will still look good

and mexico i like what you did with the bars but i think you should make the bent bars smoother not so angular

musick go to the new 2 graff thread im not hatin' just saying it will help a lot

Musick8
05-22-2008, 07:34 PM
thx for the crit but the squiggly lines and the out line are after the fact
should i change my m

Scream Out
05-22-2008, 07:37 PM
Oi! Evade, i did a better sketch for that old exchange we did, i said id do a better one when i had time so here it is

still just a rough kinda sketch but my supplies are limited
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo269.jpg

squidone
05-22-2008, 07:37 PM
yeah dont add the huge thing at the beginning of it

sir.one
05-22-2008, 07:41 PM
you should be painting impale.

Backalley Abortion Doctor
05-22-2008, 07:41 PM
Impale.

I enjoy.

Scream Out
05-22-2008, 07:44 PM
thanks haha but i need paint to be painting, i cant even buy new markers for sketching

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-22-2008, 07:46 PM
very quick put together of my throwie
**CRITS**
http://i29.tinypic.com/2lc37cw.jpg