Blackbooks

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

Deco that last one is pretty sick
spark ur throwie looks like it would take a while to put up if u plan on fillin it in

[AMRO1]

Vandal, if i send u a simple.. can u tell me what can i do to make it better?

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

ya lol PM me

[Ity]

heres something i did last night
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n35/specialsteve101/blackbook.jpg
crits?

[blue.steel]

people are gonna say seperate ur letters.
and the top of the r is more skinny then the rest
but wow thats a super dope s

[AMRO1]

Not bad.. but is it RISK or RUSK? and i like the green things on it! it cool

[MarOne...]

It looks okay, but you need to distinguish your letters.

I like that original dripping sludge too, hahahaha

[atlok7]

for the fubester
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/3745/seeonerastrorumorthrownm9.jpg

[Ity]

people are gonna say seperate ur letters.
and the top of the r is more skinny then the rest
but wow thats a super dope s

i was trying to copy my tag.


Not bad.. but is it RISK or RUSK? and i like the green things on it! it cool

its RUSK.

[Spark391]

[QUOTE=Spark391;1106208]
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/8840/picture628pe2.jpg
QUOTE]
bump

Rusk - add shadow or some shit. Looks fine, the k extation looks wierd. That green stuff is cool.
Cais - feeling that throw style, work on your handstyle

[atlok7]

i like my handstyle

[AMRO1]

there is some other from me..

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm180/AMRO1/27.jpg

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm180/AMRO1/26.jpg

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm180/AMRO1/25.jpg

CRITS ARE WELCOME!

[IlikePie]

Second picture, you spelled Throw wrong. "Trow up".

[AMRO1]

Sorry my bad..

[Bah Humbug]

yo amro make ur letters closer 2gether
spark good piece

[AMRO1]

Should i give up graffiti or still practice to get better? That's the questions..

[AMRO1]

nice.. i would like to be good like u man

[I GOT CLOUT]

Amro - I think you have your answer
Krispy - Im diggin it man. Just on the second one the Y could flow a little better.

[squidone]

Amro you still need to keep your bars the same size
Krispy i really like them but try and make the Y on the first one more like a Y instead of a 4 and add a drop shadow on the second

[wafflecakee]

evasion, i think it would be nice if you would lose some of the doodles in the e
clout, thats really nice, very clean.

meh, i rushed this once i finished the initial outline.
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i53/wafflecakee/Photo39.jpg

bump for crits

[*cept*]

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4034/picture648wk7.jpg
My shitty throw.

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/6629/picture651xp1.jpg

Think maybe this S is better. Hmm.. still looks like shit. I'm embarrased about my throws.
Anybody have any advice about throws? Every time I try them they suck, or look like someones else ones.

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/8448/picture642pu7.jpg
Hand I be working on.

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/8840/picture628pe2.jpg
Pen freestyle I made at school.

Jetpack - Too big S don't like the k leg. E should be a bit wider maybe. But good and simple.
Fube - nice and original
Soboe - Not feeling your S and R, but otherwise it's realy dope.
Deco one - Don't like the super long bars. But it's fine, just make the bars not that long.
Arsn - on first one make the letters more apart from eachother. Maybe it's only me but I can't realy read some letters beacause they are too together. Second one is realy as raped. Go do some straight letters don't even color that.
Kans - nice oneliner, N and S need work on that piece a bit. But it's dope!
Lasic - make L,A,S more separet. Use warmer colors for fill.
Desipher - that's rocking!
Shuk - take your time. the K bar is too big on the first one.
diggin all those man, specially the last one, id just say lose the drips. paint 'em up!
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0002-5.jpg
crits appreciated

[Spark391]

Should i give up graffiti or still practice to get better? That's the questions..

Don't give up. Practice more. You're on the right track! Eventualy you'll get better. Keep it up!
And thanks cept and all the other guys for crits! Hopefully I'll get something painted in few days, few school things ahead that need to be donne.

Mork - nice simple, those colors look good together.
wafflecake - go do some realy simple letters, check new to graff thread
Krispy - quite feeling that style. that "i" is dope with them eyes n shied.

[La Coka Nostra]

Should i give up graffiti or still practice to get better? That's the questions..



if you are asking that question, then you don't belong here.
find another hobby.


...oh and rusk.
how are you just gonna bite ROKE's green slime shit like that?

[AMRO1]

Im asking this.. because.. I kill my days.. my time with my familly to sketches and try to get better! But it work but not alot! :(

But .. I love graffiti.. I love to write.. I love all this!

[JETPACK!!]

then practice a lot more, no ones gonna get better overnight.

[AMRO1]

Yeh jetpack.. U're right.. I will practice .. practice and practice all the time to get better and better! Thanks for giving me back my confience.. Could u give me some tips?

[*cept*]

diggin all those man, specially the last one, id just say lose the drips. paint 'em up!
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0002-5.jpg
crits appreciated

shameless bump over amro's whining

[AMRO1]

Mork, nice colours and letterr! Keep it up buddy! :)

[*cept*]

Mork, nice colours and letterr! Keep it up buddy! :)
gracias

[AMRO1]

I've just seen that with simple letters.. ( Like mork one ) you can do awesome things! I just need to get the insperation and i'll do one like this :P

[neza]

MorK

you need to wrok on your lines most of them are shakey

the colour choice is not all that but im not a huge fan of brown it looks mucky if you know what i mean

dope colour combos = green + blue, purple + yellow/orange, red + turquiose

dont bother with things like characterising your letters with stuff like teeth and eyes its not worth the effort spend more time working on your lines

and making tiny adjustments to your letters

try and make all the letters have the same feel

-neza

[*cept*]

MorK

you need to wrok on your lines most of them are shakey

the colour choice is not all that but im not a huge fan of brown it looks mucky if you know what i mean

dope colour combos = green + blue, purple + yellow/orange, red + turquiose

dont bother with things like characterising your letters with stuff like teeth and eyes its not worth the effort spend more time working on your lines

and making tiny adjustments to your letters

try and make all the letters have the same feel

-neza
word, i need to invest in a color chart BADLY

[neza]

AmrO

you need to work and plain letters made from bars that are the same width so if the side of your A is thick make the cross bar the same forget 3D for now work on making all your letters the same size and proportion

youll get there

long way to go though

[neza]

word, i need to invest in a color chart BADLY

forget that man just look at some of the pro's colour choices and you will see what i mean im not saying bite fills or nothing but borrow the colours

[neza]

bump for crits

simples for you my friend the whole thing looks awkward try keeping your letters on the same line and the same dimensions for now i know its boring but it seems you need to work on your structure more trust me the more simples you sketch the better you will gradually realise how far you can push a letter the N is barely recognisable and the join on the o is tottally out of place

simples simples simples

[*cept*]

forget that man just look at some of the pro's colour choices and you will see what i mean im not saying bite fills or nothing but borrow the colours
a color chart shows you what colors compliment eachother better though.

[cyber one]

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f31/emericanidol777/pooo002.jpg
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f31/emericanidol777/pooo003.jpg
version #2
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f31/emericanidol777/pooo004.jpg
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f31/emericanidol777/pooo005.jpg
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f31/emericanidol777/pooo001.jpg
bump for crits

[neza]

have you ever heard of a simple? do you know what one is? have you ever tried one?

if the answer to any of these is a no then try sketching a simple by that i mean boring letters like the ones on your keyboard

the do that some more

when you have finished that ... do it again......and again

...

-neza

[neza]

actually even if the answer is yes

do it anyway!

then do it some more

and post some of those

[La Coka Nostra]

^ dude shut up.
you have no idea what your talking about.

cyber, some of that shit is dope.
keep doin your thing.

[neza]

^ dude shut up.
you have no idea what your talking about.

cyber, some of that shit is dope.
keep doin your thing.

yeah ok man....

looking at those sketches i can see all kindsa crap in all of them none are "dope" and more than half the real writers here will agree

and if you think they are that say a whole lot about you

the guy aint gonna imporve unless you tell him where he's going wrong this is a case of trying to run before you can walk

i aint beefing but thats the truth

[IlikePie]

Not really, his shit is pretty good.

[Soboe!]

bunk piece
(by me)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lDHVJtOK4h4

[neza]

ima leave you guys to it
but one last thing try and spot 1 clean sketch amongst those pencil lines and all sorts
the second from last one could be good but still needs work

-neza

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Syer - only one im feelin is the last one, i aint a big fan of the top of the S and where the Y goes into it the rest of it looks good tho
Mork - not rly feelin it, try to put in some colours u can blend
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01397.jpg
crits?

[squidone]

here is some characters
which ones look better

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/5619/dsc00330zh8.jpg

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/8274/dsc00332vj5.jpg

i posted this in the character thread but it looks like no one goes there

[MarOne...]

yeah ok man....

looking at those sketches i can see all kindsa crap in all of them none are "dope" and more than half the real writers here will agree

and if you think they are that say a whole lot about you

the guy aint gonna imporve unless you tell him where he's going wrong this is a case of trying to run before you can walk

i aint beefing but thats the truth

Um, you are a fucking retard if you can't see that Syer's shit is on point.

[neza]

ok i must be blind my bad...

[Mass Appeal]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-19.jpg

CASIO

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-20.jpg

SORT
why arnt i on the list of Admiaration ?

[IlikePie]

You don't talk to us cool kids enough. Hang out in the Good Afternoon thread for a while and you might elevate to their level :p

[Soboe!]

bunk piece
(by me)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lDHVJtOK4h4

bottom page bump of this neza bullshit..
neza, keep your fuckin mouth shut or battle the kid its that simple!

[AMRO1]

squid, the first is the nicer! It look like chubaka with a gun! :O lol nicely done ! I wish that i had this imaginations

[Mass Appeal]

You don't talk to us cool kids enough. Hang out in the Good Afternoon thread for a while and you might elevate to their level :p

rather not.
just put me on to make the list pretty ! :mad: :p

[IlikePie]

Do me a Rab then :)

[Mass Appeal]

ill have ago at being cool in the Noon thread first

[smooth_nuts]

nothing special,but when is anythign i post special haha
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture399.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture406.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture407.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture415.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture148-1.jpg
squid-first ones the best
amka-*sigh*dope as awlways
evasion-arrow coming out of no where on the s is bleh,so is the extention on the bottom right of the s,and i cant tell if the second letters an i or a b haha im guessing it's an i though cause of the dot.....

[Soboe!]

TO MUCH FUCKIN TALKING!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lDHVJtOK4h4

[nalko]

doin this little piece for a friend's birthday. the lines are pretty thin so its kinda hard to see but other than that just have to color it, which i have no idea how to get at that.

http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/7686/dsc04684jg4.jpg

good so far?

[Soboe!]

give Crits To Get Crits

[Bets369R]

have you ever heard of a simple? do you know what one is? have you ever tried one?

if the answer to any of these is a no then try sketching a simple by that i mean boring letters like the ones on your keyboard

the do that some more

when you have finished that ... do it again......and again

...

-neza

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6968/random163ey9.jpg

yeah. your shit is MAD TOY compared to syers shit.

[kroc_oner]

http://youtube.com/watch?v=J4YvCgVO8Ag
my vid i think tht neza peice is dope and i like seyrs stuff to
deo thts nice i like your throws
evasion thts hella dope nice stuff i like your letters

[La Coka Nostra]

why am i always on the bottom of the page?
shitty freestyle.

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/1574/rekonbluegreenaj8.jpg

p.s. my favorite word to write is fuck.
if you didn't figure that out by now.

[WolfBurrns]

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/coty.jpg

wocka wocka wocka

[Crieg ya ya DIG]

bets nice shit

[La Coka Nostra]

why am i always on the bottom of the page?
shitty freestyle.

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/1574/rekonbluegreenaj8.jpg

p.s. my favorite word to write is fuck.
if you didn't figure that out by now.


bumbaclaat.

[Crieg ya ya DIG]

damnit rasek ur shit is clean

[squidone]

here is some characters
which ones look better

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/5619/dsc00330zh8.jpg

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/8274/dsc00332vj5.jpg

i posted this in the character thread but it looks like no one goes there

bumpin for some crits

rekon i really like that one but the whole in the R is weird, maybe its just me
Sobe the finished pic is so DOPE!

[La Coka Nostra]

the hole in the R is a spiral.
the green doesnt come out well over the navy blue.

[garbage down tha way]

Yo rekon, that shits ill as what, when are you gonna paint it?!

[white]

rekon you always got some fly as shit. great ideas flowin through your head man keep up the good work

[Fube]

for the fubester
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/3745/seeonerastrorumorthrownm9.jpg

thanks brotha!

heres some shit.
Rasek exchange
and cais,caiser throw exchange.
some other shit i like.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/05-26-08_0128.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/05-26-08_0127.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/IMG-3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Radius.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/04-21-08_1716.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/04-14-08_1646.jpg

[AZTEKA]

i havent posted up in a minute, most recent sketch, and props to bets and sole, nice stuff, and squid that one robot lookin character looks dope, and rekon that r and o look better than the rest of the letters.
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/8042/05240dx8.jpg

[my.favorite.addiction]

dam,been gettin lazy about postin the steez...
pigs got my sketch book atm,
POLICIA-"dam,can I borrow this an masturbate furiously to the beutiful letters!?!?!?"
NoMas-"I want no mecos on it!"
Fube-its lookin hot!styles unique,keep at it.
Neza-nice clip-bored
Nalko-not bad,wanna see it in color,at least with pen,
keep at it every1

not sure if I already posted this one.
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0011-1.jpg
for a friend.
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0018-2.jpg

simp?
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0007-1.jpg

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0016-1.jpg

[La Coka Nostra]

Yo rekon, that shits ill as what, when are you gonna paint it?!


i paint every now and again.
i dont gotta camera though, just a scanner.
so no pics of paint for now :(
thanks everyone.

fube, your shit is crazy original and dope. love the style.

[maso1]

Piece i'm working on, character from the cartoon Salad Fingers.
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewAlbums&friendID=89673408

[maso1]

Crits?
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/Piece.jpg

[maso1]

Shaggy from scooby doo plus writters from crew
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/Shaggy.jpg

[Ease_84]

crits please?
safeee

[Nine9]

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6968/random163ey9.jpg

yeah. your shit is MAD TOY compared to syers shit.

That's tight.

Syers is a bunch of crap.

[Spark391]

give Crits To Get Crits

So do it. It's totaly pointless to post the same video 3 times without giving any and wondering why anyone aint responding.

[Mass Appeal]

oh snap
told.

[Ease_84]

fresh sketch
straight off the books
:)

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

all you cats on cyers back...wtf...this is the TOY forum is it not?...i didn't step through some migic wormhole to a dimention where toy means really really good did i...wtf are half of you cats doing in here anyway...posting shit that make the rest of us look like shit...that clipbord..the cais shit...why does that need to be here...TOY black book...TOY! i come here to look at cats who are learning and give em advice and to learn some shit myself

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/39a811ff.jpg

Shaddap folks. I'm not critting 'cuz I'm cool like that. For Proper, 'cuz he said he's leaving and we don't know why :(

[Spark391]

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/1966/picture660dy6.jpg
Started doing maths, but ended up with that. My A bar looks wierd and my R leg is bit too small I think.

Rekon - feeling that, make n bit smaller I think.
squidone - like the last character the best, but feeling all of those
azteka - K and A are perfect. The P is too small compared to other letters, make it wider.
myfacadiction - new to graff thread, go to simple block letters
maso1 - O bars are too small compared to other letters,
ease - lose those arrows and all that shit, go do some simple block letters
Neza - quite dope, like that red there a lot. I had used some other colors for fill I think, but fuck it still looks dope
Ilikepie - that character looks good, would be sick on stickers.

[kinglerxst]

CRITS? THESE ARE ALL NEW TODAY, PICS FROM MY BBOOK
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00728.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00727.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00726.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00730.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00732.jpg

[atlok7]

[QUOTE=Fube;1106820]thanks brotha!


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/05-26-08_0127.jpg


holy shit this is ill! thanks cuzin.

mass_ do you even paint? i wanna c some flix of your work

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

http://i27.tinypic.com/v5fx4m.jpg
MARKERS ALL STARTED DYING THATS WHY THE BACKGROUND IS SO FUCKED UP

[I GOT CLOUT]

fresh sketch
straight off the books
:)

I know i've already posted it, not looking for crits.
Just gotta protect my ish.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16045.jpg

Battle Ease 84?

[c.n.k]

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/neurological.jpg

[Spark391]

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/1966/picture660dy6.jpg
bump, got nothing.

i got glout - fresh
Neuro - dope piece, keep it up.
zerg - check new to graff thread and start doing simpler stuff
PHO - nice simple, but cracks don't look very realistic.

[neza]

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/coty.jpg

wocka wocka wocka

this i dig it would look mad on a freight

[Mass Appeal]

dope SPARK

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-19.jpg

i never get comments anymore

and Atlok..check your PM's on whether i " paint or not " hah.

[-ShAmEE-]

dope SPARK

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-19.jpg

i never get comments anymore

and Atlok..check your PM's on whether i " paint or not " hah.


look i dont think this is workin so do simples.

hahaa

[NoCanControl]

dope SPARK

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-19.jpg

i never get comments anymore

and Atlok..check your PM's on whether i " paint or not " hah.

rawr probably because all your stuff looks like the rest of your stuff just with new guns. no diss, and i can barely see the letters at times., wait... thats a crit right there... my bad.

[kinglerxst]

what do you think of this?Cunstructive crits? (the one on top)
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00734.jpg

[Nine9]

what are bars!!!

The lines of a letter, make them into bars/rectangles or whatever.

T = 2 bars. The line at the top and the line from it going downwards.

Look.

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/9594/dsc00628wy1.jpg

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

**CRITS**
http://i32.tinypic.com/24deg4w.jpg

[Nine9]

**CRITS**
http://i32.tinypic.com/24deg4w.jpg

The curve/bubble part on the P is too big, it's out of proportion compared with the rest of the letters.

[*cept*]

dope SPARK

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-19.jpg

i never get comments anymore

and Atlok..check your PM's on whether i " paint or not " hah.its a shame you waste all that talent on that fag ass style.

spark-diggin your stuff man.

[kinglerxst]

is this simple enough?
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00738.jpg

[kinglerxst]

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00740.jpg
AND
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00739.jpg
dont they lok to simple

[fonone]

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/3139/may27169jn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/3139/may27169jn4.16a7e3c3db.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=58&i=may27169jn4.jpg)
right on

[JETPACK!!]

word irekn, post some flicks for these cats to shut up. some shit im working on now. once you learn simples, they wont leave you.

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/3407/rasek7ty2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ima bunn a head, you got any crits about my shit. post em before i get the E and K done, cuz then its gettin inked.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

that shit is pretty dope rasek

[JETPACK!!]

to be entirely honest, i dont like how its turning out. but thats the same with all my work.

irekn, your shits hot man, if your down, we should do a change sometime

[fonone]

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/3139/may27169jn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/3139/may27169jn4.16a7e3c3db.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=58&i=may27169jn4.jpg)
right on

bumpskies,

yo jetpack, not feeling the extension on the R that goes inwards, on the spine, nor the top right part of the S, or the S as a whole really but its probs just me really. Or the connection between the A and S but like i said its probs just me, other than that its lookin pretty good imo,

new throw, i think the E needs fixing up.
http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/2715/may27170mu3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/2715/may27170mu3.19a9f1314d.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=371&i=may27170mu3.jpg)
heres the old one, is it improved or should i switch back?
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/2362/may17163mx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/2362/may17163mx6.48844986bf.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=210&i=may17163mx6.jpg)

yeah, id be down for an exchange jetpack, maybe not right now though, been real busy with work and shit, those sketches are really the only ones ive been able to do in the last week. id probs be able to get it done next week, but yeah pm me

[Fube]

been to much talk. i just deleted about 60 post, out of that 60 post i saw about 10 flicks. disgusting. lets go people.

[sex without condoms]

rawr probably because all your stuff looks like the rest of your stuff just with new guns. no diss, and i can barely see the letters at times., wait... thats a crit right there... my bad.

if you cant see hs letters then you're fucking dumb. rCOK ON RAS!!


sorry im totally drunk right now

[NoCanControl]

if you cant see hs letters then you're fucking dumb. rCOK ON RAS!!


sorry im totally drunk right now

its okay beautiful. i don't get affended too easy. unless your drunk and stupid.


IRACKN, i think you should either go all out for drips or none. :), the o part of your r is lumpeh. and thats about it i like it.
JETPACk, your extentions on the r is unessicary, and throws it off balance.
ZERG, make your letters have a flow of them selfs, i hate it when people make a rectangle then put the letters in the rectangle, its not interesting at all, unless its HUGE and has rock cracks in it and stuff, aka rollers.
CNS, your n doesn't look like an n, the only reason i know its an n is because thats how i use to do my n's. and your o has a clashing flow with the piece.

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture069.jpg
crits please.

[Soboe!]

its a shame you waste all that talent on that fag ass style.

spark-diggin your stuff man.

keep your fuckin mouth shut if you cant do better kid,
and its not a fag style. its just not your little bitch ass dream of LA style.

[garbage down tha way]

JETPACKIE dont listen to no can contrizzle, if you take that extension off the R ill never talk to you again!

[JETPACK!!]

what extension? i changed it around. the arrows still there, but the other shit got the boot. im too high to be drawing fuck

[atlok7]

for serk

http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/6062/serkexchangeht7.jpg

[garbage down tha way]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/slap-1.jpg
first slap ever. seriously.


Cais, very nice.

[atlok7]

hoer i love every one of your posts. mainly because of your signature, but partially because of your dope simps

[Capo Izi]

It's been a LONG time since I've been on here and posted, so anyway here's my stuff, new tags, throws, pieces, and simples, and a cool little monster thing too....


http://a546.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/32/l_86590ceed936d1287b39c24429d87869.jpg

http://a41.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/113/l_a12558d94be2e90cd9f90bf5745cc6b0.jpg

http://a125.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/120/l_2863a041f95c12230428a736fd5ee634.jpg

http://a994.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/122/l_c060669dc18c4e92b65e8d1b39d4c109.jpg

http://a394.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/117/l_5ebac9bebadf0e4d06cebf3b6a883031.jpg

http://a825.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/88/l_fe1b6ddd2ed3a2051d4ef4fb1a7f44b8.jpg

http://a190.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/40/l_d4f75387a898a71e6a8d972e878f4285.jpg

http://a958.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/8/l_ababadf8c08397cdf17887c7c432c475.jpg

http://a100.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/44/l_6ed9b2f295ce377058ebb836110f787b.jpg

http://a294.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/108/l_33e60bf883a5cf9882987bd4639218f5.jpg

[NoCanControl]

my fucking comp is lagged the fuck up , the pics take forever to load... SHIT. and so does the page.

but anyways, new to graffiti thread for capo, don't do wild style.

nice serk piece ciaser. i can't say anything really bad about it......

[JETPACK!!]

here's the finished shit.
capo, keep practicing your simples, your shits slowly getting better

ill ink it either tomorrow.. or after my next dutchie

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/2719/rasek7re4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[squidone]

Capo very nice you improved TREMENDOUSLY since you last posted ... im actually inspired, wheres my pencil

[La Coka Nostra]

dude, if you did some of the other gaps in your letters like the bottom of the E, with those 2 little bars connecting it.
for example, the loops in your S, that would look dope.
not sure about the arrow, or atleast if you are gonna do that, put something coming off the K to balance it out.

[Capo Izi]

Thanks man, but when did you switch to Rasek? Jeeze I've been gone too long, either way that shit is NICE, with some ink and color it will be dope dude.

[cyber one]

first off, irekn is one of the sickest names ive heard in a while.
secondly, thank you to all who've are in my defense and/or complimented my sketches. i havent posted on this site in some time, and its sick to here people like it and that im progressing. but to the few of you who just had a whole lot to say and very little to show for it (neza), granted, most of my stuff is sloppy, especially because a lot my markers are dying and i cant color for crap anyways. but for you to come in talking about going simples and how crappy my work is, i must say i was pretty suprised to see yours in and how poor it was in comparison. if you have that big a problem with my stuff, and dont think i can do simples, then step up and battle me. if you choose not to do that, then leave my stuff alone, because aside from the background on the clipboard your letters, and style, are a joke.

ps. sorry i had to talk so much. i hate to be "that guy" that takes up the whole page with talking trash.

[Ity]

for serk

http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/6062/serkexchangeht7.jpg

IMO the r is to small, but other than that, its pretty dope.

[Bets369R]

atlok i hope you didnt forget the R and added it in after the sketch was done, that would make me a sad bets :( lol

[Scream Out]

thats nice atlok, only think im not really feeling is the little r and the arrow on the left, it just looks really awkward at that angle.

something from today, a pen sketch i decided to paint with water colours lol

ignore the M, i know i fucked it up
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo272.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

cais, im not feelin it man. shoulda made the R the same size.
impale, the bars on your M are a little thin, but those are nice simples man

inked the outline. thats all im gonna do with it.
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/2002/rasek7eu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Scream Out]

rasek thats clean man, only thing im not really feeling is the little extra bits on your "R" and that arrow
other than that you have some dope simples dude

[Mass Appeal]

new throw, i think the E needs fixing up.
http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/2715/may27170mu3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/2715/may27170mu3.19a9f1314d.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=371&i=may27170mu3.jpg)
heres the old one, is it improved or should i switch back?
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/2362/may17163mx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/2362/may17163mx6.48844986bf.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=210&i=may17163mx6.jpg)



http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/slap-1.jpg




http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/2719/rasek7re4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump.

[Duppy]

Fonone and Jetpack - Me likey. Garbage that shit needs some work, well the last two letters at least...

[Capo Izi]

It's been a LONG time since I've been on here and posted, so anyway here's my stuff, new tags, throws, pieces, and simples, and a cool little monster thing too....


http://a546.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/32/l_86590ceed936d1287b39c24429d87869.jpg

http://a41.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/113/l_a12558d94be2e90cd9f90bf5745cc6b0.jpg

http://a125.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/120/l_2863a041f95c12230428a736fd5ee634.jpg

http://a994.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/122/l_c060669dc18c4e92b65e8d1b39d4c109.jpg

http://a394.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/117/l_5ebac9bebadf0e4d06cebf3b6a883031.jpg

http://a825.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/88/l_fe1b6ddd2ed3a2051d4ef4fb1a7f44b8.jpg

http://a190.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/40/l_d4f75387a898a71e6a8d972e878f4285.jpg

http://a958.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/8/l_ababadf8c08397cdf17887c7c432c475.jpg

http://a100.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/44/l_6ed9b2f295ce377058ebb836110f787b.jpg

http://a294.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/108/l_33e60bf883a5cf9882987bd4639218f5.jpg

Bump

[rsakens]

my markers
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00119.jpg?t=1211880983
last weekends party =D
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00134.jpg?t=1211881115
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00132-1.jpg?t=1211881288

& my new sketches
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00124-1.jpg?t=1211880857
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00129-1.jpg?t=1211880827

[rsakens]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00135.jpg?t=1211893482

[*cept*]

hahaha send some of that absinthe this way

[Capo Izi]

mmmmm smirnofff........

[rsakens]

hahaha send some of that absinthe this way

ha ha trust me you don't wont it =D
its scary stuff me and my mates just had a few shoots and were fucked up strate away :(

[Drakula]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/39b57b02.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/b77329eb.png

Trying some different letters again.The GOON thing is for a battle on another forum.

Keane that stuff is nice.That painted piece stuck in your book looks good too.

[rsakens]

thankx man ^
that first one says raby right ?
i like the R and the fill the spate on the Y looks fresh too
lass one says good ? or goos with an lowercase s ?
if its an d it looks dope
don't relay like the cracks mhm might because its an quickly sketch ..
mhm this thread is very quiet today
mhm post some stuff soboe cais pie .. :)

[I GOT CLOUT]

Impale - Just not feelin the i. Everything else flows good though.
Jet - Always stezzy. Where you at? We should go bomb.
iRekn - Ill throwie.
Hoer - You know I like it.

Just tryin a new simp. I fucking hate the S though.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16067.jpg

[garbage down tha way]

Fonone and Jetpack - Me likey. Garbage that shit needs some work, well the last two letters at least...

The last two letters are the best two letters. im sorry but i dont think you know what your talking about.

[Mass Appeal]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/39b57b02.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/b77329eb.png


same page bump cos you fucking OWN mate

couldnt agree more HOERRR babe

[garbage down tha way]

thanks mass =]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/slap3.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/slapp.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/slap2.jpg

Raby- i love all your material, one of my favorites on the site.

ease- nice simps, just connect the top of the A and dont let the bar keep going down past the horizontal bar in the bottom right corner of the S

keans- feelin the E's and N in the top sketch alot.

[I GOT CLOUT]

Word Hoer, I was thinkin the same shit.

That third stick is tight as hell son.

[MarOne...]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/39b57b02.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/b77329eb.png

Trying some different letters again.The GOON thing is for a battle on another forum.

Keane that stuff is nice.That painted piece stuck in your book looks good too.

Hot damn, these are dope.

[sketch3]

ok stop bumping its only 8 posts up,

rab i like the goon ut im not feeling that top one at all,
but ugly shit is a part of progresion.

please dont do that lil hart thing on the y ever again...
keep it up

[NoCanControl]

its okay beautiful. i don't get affended too easy. unless your drunk and stupid.


IRACKN, i think you should either go all out for drips or none. :), the o part of your r is lumpeh. and thats about it i like it.
JETPACk, your extentions on the r is unessicary, and throws it off balance.
ZERG, make your letters have a flow of them selfs, i hate it when people make a rectangle then put the letters in the rectangle, its not interesting at all, unless its HUGE and has rock cracks in it and stuff, aka rollers.
CNS, your n doesn't look like an n, the only reason i know its an n is because thats how i use to do my n's. and your o has a clashing flow with the piece.

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture069.jpg
crits please.

crits.

[fromthegrave]

Hot damn, these are dope.
the first one is gross, so is the fill. the second one is worth doing.
jetpack-good stuff
rsakens- ur stuff is getting worse.
garbage-nice stickers?
capo- try something new... like, climbing trees.

[JETPACK!!]

cais, im not feelin it man. shoulda made the R the same size.
impale, the bars on your M are a little thin, but those are nice simples man

inked the outline. thats all im gonna do with it.
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/2002/rasek7eu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bumpin, gonna drop the arrows next time.

kans, thicken your bars a little bit, it would take up more room. prolly make it look better.

raby im not feelin it, but keep it up, like sketch said, ugly shit is a part of improvment

[Ity]

Impale - Just not feelin the i. Everything else flows good though.
Jet - Always stezzy. Where you at? We should go bomb.
iRekn - Ill throwie.
Hoer - You know I like it.

Just tryin a new simp. I fucking hate the S though.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16067.jpg

the A looks like an H, and the S looks like a Z, other than that looks nice

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture353.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture351.jpg
some conceptual ones to figure out where to go because people are on my case about not prgressing or doing anything new.

gonna go back a few pages and crit anything i have an opinion on or just like, just don't have time yet

[I GOT CLOUT]

Yeah...I tried to fix it.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16.jpg

[THE FRESH KID]

just a couple of things ive been triyn dont rip them to shreds im quite new, CONSTRUCTIVE critisim apreciated

[Maste]

hint dont use attachemnts noone really looks at em haha use a file hosting site
ease you got the right idea with the bars they just needa be tweaked a bit cause it looks off
rasek i liek it man nice simp with a little bit of hiphop (arrow haah) in there
vois...keep sketchin ;) itll come eventually

[THE FRESH KID]

all my pics are on that site
http://olliehazell.pinkbike.com/album/graff/

[Mass Appeal]

WHAT THE FUCK

anyone who says that that Raby top peice is " gross " or whatever seriously carnt write graffiti or have any knowledge of how graffiti letters should look like

get a grip on yourselfs.

[dim]

Dope Shit Raby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[g3zt]

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m13/rurournik/g3zt1.jpg




Tried using the playdo thing.. >->



no camera :'[


Drakula.. those pieces are dope.

[squidone]

yeah i really like Raby's stuff but not sure about the colors in the first one

[Alien invasion]

http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc73/kickXtheXbaby/201425.jpg
http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc73/kickXtheXbaby/203826.jpg


it got colored.
crits please

[osnapizzel]

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/143/picture208qc4.jpg

[atlok7]

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9720/casioro5.jpg

[Amore]

lol you write ohsnap..i like it.

[JETPACK!!]

guy, atlok. the lines in your 3D suck. there all over the place. fix that. better than that serk sketch

[La Coka Nostra]

casio, i feel that I
i dont dig the random extension coming out of the middle of the O
and the arrow on the C is way too zig zaggy.

[atlok7]

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9720/casioro5.jpg
almost bottom bump

[I GOT CLOUT]

Haha, you got lucky on that battle eh Cais?

[Maste]

haha i know right i saw his peice before i knew it was for a battle and i was like shit man i think he spelled it wrong XD

[Rambooboo]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2038/2325631662_936caff87f_b.jpg
likin the bubbles in the darker yellow or orange whatever it is

["Bi2aR"]

:eek:

[I GOT CLOUT]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16075.jpg

[Trestoner707]

any suggestions

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/nofear.jpg
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/shhytt.jpg
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/newt.jpg
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/newerre.jpg

[MarOne...]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16075.jpg

YES! You are developing and progressing at an alarming rate, man. Please, keep this shit up!

[Samp1e]

scribblry n dickery!

R would be nice if it were neater and not so generic

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/1483/73300673tb7.png

[Trestoner707]

newwer
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/fffppf.jpg

from a few months ago
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/jess.jpg
semi old
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/Ifame.jpg

[osnapizzel]

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/143/picture208qc4.jpg

bottom of the page was not bumpin

[BIGel]

hey to all my toy forum homies! sorry ive been neglecting these threads lately, i just bought a new scanner so expect a lot of new shit!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3244/2529871335_a13bf54cb1.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3029/2530700680_1a65064879.jpg?v=0

[rsakens]

shit you mate it once again nice color theme cais

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9720/casioro5.jpg

here is my new one
gold gave up so i could not finish
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00141-1.jpg?t=1211964571

[fonone]

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m13/rurournik/g3zt1.jpg




Tried using the playdo thing.. >->



no camera :'[


Drakula.. those pieces are dope.

wish i thought of painting up some after birth in graffiti playdo

[-ShAmEE-]

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9720/casioro5.jpg
this was all going sick until u got to the i and o.

[Mass Appeal]

scribblry n dickery!

R would be nice if it were neater and not so generic

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/1483/73300673tb7.png

double post who cares
my mate SAMPLE coming throughhhhhh

[sacwacko]

ohsnap - hella clean, what you use?
all the other stuff looks good.


new b.book.
kinda shitty.

some experimental shit.
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/1.jpg



the inside of the cover....
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/2.jpg

a throw.
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/3.jpg

bomb/piece.
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/4.jpg

the tag....
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/5.jpg

a 2 letter. (as) the fat nib fucked it up.
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/6.jpg

another experimental.
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/7.jpg


crits?

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

peice i did a while back
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/P5150269.jpg

[I GOT CLOUT]

Aspek - That throw is nice, just work on keepin your lines cleaner, less shakey.

Haha, nice edit Mar.

What is like everyone on this thread 16?

Edit - Rasek, isn't painting what this whole game is about? You dont need to pound it, it should be a given.

[00-made-00]

Aspek- some of its quite nice, i think you should work on your k more.
Zea- Try and make it less like a two headed snake and more like this ZEU
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aima.jpg
crits please.

[Mass Appeal]

i love rainbows and pixies aswell as fairys.

a character im working on

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/char2.jpg

first time EVER using Adobe Photoshop CS3...everything was done in pencil but then iv obviously scanned it in and began to render using CS3 with a mouse...i wont start the facial work untill my Tablet comes.

hope yah like.

[rsakens]

here is my new one
gold gave up so i could not finish
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00141-1.jpg?t=1211964571

bump

[*cept*]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16075.jpg

shit yeahhhh!

[Mass Appeal]

for a battle

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/erre.jpg

[GIzUrD]

nevermind

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

damn mass that shit is nastyyyy kidd lovin itt

[LiMe..S.B.C]

my version of casio..
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/smalllime.jpg

and my girls version..
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0330.jpg

[squidone]

i have to say im not liking the backwards C or the fill calm it down so we can see your letters.
and your girls...maybe you can help her out

[LiMe..S.B.C]

cool squid thanks for the feedback.. my girls has only been writing for 6 months she gettin better..

[HëRbN]

simpler

[squidone]

yeah if shes serious about it have her check out the new to graff thread

[session-one]

mass appeal why are you even in the toy forums?
anyways im not realy feelin the backwards c but wutev

sum new stuffs crits please?
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii172/Me4life26/DSCN1399.jpg
and
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii172/Me4life26/DSCN1400.jpg
personally i like the 2nd one more but yeah crits away

[squidone]

like the B R and K but im not feelin the E A

[MarOne...]

my version of casio..
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/smalllime.jpg

and my girls version..
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0330.jpg

Please tell me your girl doesn't write Haze...

[LiMe..S.B.C]

Please tell me your girl doesn't write Haze...

yeah she writes haze..

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

http://i29.tinypic.com/2w4eibc.jpg

[Samp1e]

so tell me why my last three crit posts got deleted. do you read what you're deleting mods?

vandal -- your E's lower isn't lined up. more importantly your extensions look like balls, learn to balance your letters too.

lime -- please tell me she doesn't get up... haha

for real though, both of you need to hit the new to graff thread

session -- make your letters solid outlines. don't cut off/separate the bars like in your B and K. don't bother with that notch shit on your E either. do straight up outlines. don't bother even going to the stuff in your 2nd or 3rd pieces, just stop doin it cause ya ain't ready for it.

ras -- nice, selectively bold some of the leftmost part of your a, it looks a little out of place being so thing on the C.

rsakens -- Es are awkward and too thin. stretch em and make em a little less stiff. otherwise looks ok

made -- keep at it, solid simples.


more marker freeze. the A is bad.
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8073/37879623qv2.png

[squidone]

you overlapped your A too much

[I GOT CLOUT]

Deco's piss me off sometimes.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16085.jpg

Session - That second one has mad potential. Just fix up the A to flow a little better, and maybe try a Capital E.

[seywhat]

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage98.jpg
for a homeboy at school
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage99.jpg
unfinished shit

easer- shits nice, i just dont like the bottom bar on the s. maybe make it round off like the e's
sample- besides what squid said, its pretty dope. i really like that s
vandal- give crits to get crits
lime- tell ur girl not to write haze, for ur peice lose the extensions, if ur not usin bars use em
session- ur letters arent bad, do what sample said and just keep sketchin
amk- im diggin that more than ur usual stuff

[SAID]

those bars came out clean.
except for the purple.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

easer i fuckin love your letters
nd ya the colors are pretty dope too good shit

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

saywhat i really like the top one the second one is alright why not finish the fill in tho?

[seywhat]

thanks, im gonna finish it prolly tomorrow at school

[Gear Grime111]

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm31/graffthrowups/gear.jpg

i dont like the G but im trying

[AZTEKA]

yo sayer props on your stuff man, and to gear, whats that say, get a better flick the sketch actually looks dope man, most recent sketch.
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/4245/05207ve3.jpg

[I GOT CLOUT]

Deco's piss me off sometimes.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16085.jpg

Session - That second one has mad potential. Just fix up the A to flow a little better, and maybe try a Capital E.

Bottom bumppp

[SCIEnce802]

Easer- SIck simples
rsaken- like that one, sucks that the gold shit itself.


http://i30.tinypic.com/21dlmqg.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/kf12fb.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/34zztz7.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/2ij2fbl.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/oir1v.jpg

[LiMe..S.B.C]

well for one im, not new to graff, i've been writing in my own way for a long time.. and my girl she will be gettin up when she is ready... everyone has their own style toy or advanced.... i respect all writers who love graff not the ones who do it to be a-holes and ruin it for everybody... mods if i said anything that was out of place..my bad just delete what i posted..

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

http://i29.tinypic.com/2w4eibc.jpg

BUMP GOT NO CRITS
CRITS PLEASE

[Samp1e]

lime i tell you to go to that thread not cause you're new, but because there is content in it that you can apply to your letters, cause they're hurtin right now. it's difficult relearning core stuff but it can really, really make an improvement.

and vandal, learn to read. i gave feedback.

science -- you need to simplify. you don't know how to use thick/thin bars "properly" or rather, to a letters advantage. the way you use them it just looks flimsy. got crappy adds/extensions and letters aren't balanced well

[SCIEnce802]

take out the extentions.. and straighten ur letters out a bit.

[MarOne...]

yeah she writes haze..

Why don't you do a little google search on "haze graffiti" for me. ;)

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

science im pretty sure all those are pretty sick nice job

[I GOT CLOUT]

vandal -- your E's lower isn't lined up. more importantly your extensions look like balls, learn to balance your letters too.


You got crits Vandal.

But anyway. my crit would be make the picture bigger, cause my blind ass cant see that shit.

[LiMe..S.B.C]

well i understand sample.. its just that the stuff thats out today everyone puts a standard too.. graff is all so different nowadays.. shit i used to like it when there wasn't any learning tools to help you learn graff....it was all learned wlth the imagination... but i will take that into account...

[drop one.]

Deco's piss me off sometimes.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16085.jpg

Session - That second one has mad potential. Just fix up the A to flow a little better, and maybe try a Capital E.

bumpidi bump bump this shyt is hot i like the colors

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

You got crits Vandal.

But anyway. my crit would be make the picture bigger, cause my blind ass cant see that shit.

yaa i dont kno how to make it bigger :confused:
i use tinypic but the pictures come outt the same size everytime

[Fame.]

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g10/mike__2006/Picture.jpg

i need color ideas!!

[Samp1e]

dont bother with color, get your letters straight first.

[Fame.]

dont bother with color, get your letters straight first.

wtf u meannnn get my letters straight first .. its a simple sketch && im askin for color ideas smh

[JETPACK!!]

fame, if thats simple.. then what's complex?

read the new to graff thread. it'll help.

some shit from tonight. meh on the whole sketch.

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/7618/rasek8jj9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[emel]

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2862/kasrsketch2wm1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

rough joint should be pieced in a few days...

[Fame.]

fame, if thats simple.. then what's complex?

read the new to graff thread. it'll help.

when i said its a simple sketch i meant its juss like a rough piece thaa i coulda made better if i took tha time, cuz samp1e thinks i needa "get my letters straight" ... i dont mean simple as in tha WHOLE piece in general

anyways.. thaa rasek piece flows mad smooth

[Samp1e]

wtf u meannnn get my letters straight first .. its a simple sketch && im askin for color ideas smh

ok i'll be a dick so i can come across more clearly

i'm not gonna give you color ideas cause its a waste of good ink on such shitty letters.

in other words: get your letters straight, do simples.

EDIT: if you can make something better, then take the time to make it better cause nobody wants to see your rough work.

emel -- looks pretty good, almost heat ! main issue is the lower half of your S, it just kinda dies off. don't have the A kick out so far so you can give the S a nice, solid and heavy lower.
nitpick but might look better to have the upper right bar of the R insert on the lower right leg's origin. (yeah i am using anatomy terms!)

[emel]

jetpack- take your own advice and read the new to graff thread....
fame- use bars to make simples for now.. and keep them the same width throughout the piece
Science802- go simpler
Kasper- i like that handstylle!! but the ltters need work..but dont try to add any small doodads and just work on a whole peice and try to keep a flow, you sorta did this but in all the wrong places?dno how to explain it just keep but go a little simpler

[Mass Appeal]

word Sample
Rasek...to me your shits getting more and more like NAME .

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

jetpack i love your style really sick paint that shit somewhere!
emel thats lookin like its gunna be pretty nasty ink that shit

[seywhat]

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage98.jpg
for a homeboy at school
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage99.jpg
unfinished shit



bump

emel- besides coverin the s too much thats dope. diggin the handy as well
rasek- move the A out from the R a little, im not feelin the extension on the r either

[squider]

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2704/lef1fc319248f5ea6bfe466tq1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2704/lef1fc319248f5ea6bfe466tq1.a43ba99fad.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=103&i=lef1fc319248f5ea6bfe466tq1.jpg)

elidelph, crits please

seywhat- the r on the second piece, the leg of it looks like it comes to far out, i'de either bring it in a bit or bring out the bottom part of the s to get it to be more symetrical

emel- the squigley part that connects the s to r doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the letters, but without something there at all theres kinda a gap between the two, looks like a dope style though

jetpack- the way the leg of your R overlaps the the A looks funny, and theres a word for i just can't think of it, where two lines run across the same path, and your k's crooked, i don't like the leg coming off it to much either, just keep tweaking your letters and shit will come together more

[00-made-00]

Squider - It starts off good the first two letters are ok, andafterthatitgoes downhill, you should losethe little addons aswell they drag theletters down.
Seyar-Fresh simples.
Rasek- I like it, i dontlike the bend on the First leg of the R tho if you got rid of that it would be fire.
kasr- looks alright, i wanna see it inked tho.

[fonone]

Jetpark - dont like the extension on the left of the R, and i dont like how the holes in between the letters and in the A etc arent shadow, looks like a radiator or something.

squider - the first E is the only letter i like really, rest look goofy.

seyar - fresh simps as always

emel - the S is covered up too much by the A

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/6135/may29172zr9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/6135/may29172zr9.fa74ddcf22.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=520&i=may29172zr9.jpg)

getting my I on. thought id post up a pic now and one when its finished.

[rsakens]

ropes battle
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00146-1.jpg?t=1212072159
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00149.jpg?t=1212073811

[Soboe!]

you always do that fuckin E. change that shit up next time

[rsakens]

why ? its my best letter so far
and by the way who dit this and the one from cais ?
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/saroeonersof9.jpg

[Soboe!]

cais did them :)

my hand style dont look like that.

they look like this :)
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/SaroeFSdigihandsteez.jpg

see different :)


and for your letter, you cant always use the same structure. just like bend the bars and what not lol experiment

[00-made-00]

rsakens- you need to work on flow and shape, alot your basic letters are ok but yopu shape is poor.

[rsakens]

experiment
mhm i will give it a try
by the way dit we ever exchange ?
if not let me know if your interested

[Soboe!]

blah im bunk
:)

[JETPACK!!]

keane, your S kinna looks like an R, i can see it. but the angle and extension disguise it. and your R dosent flow with the rest of the piece.

hopefully this is better than the last sketch.
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/1476/rasek9kl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[atlok7]

why ? its my best letter so far
and by the way who dit this and the one from cais ?
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/saroeonersof9.jpg

it was I

[rsakens]

rsakens- you need to work on flow and shape, alot your basic letters are ok but yopu shape is poor.

alright man i will try


blah im bunk
what is bunk :(

and rasek i find that sketch alot creative for a simple letter black & withe sketch
only that extension on the right bar of the R looks weird the rest of the letters are dope

[Scream Out]

rasek thats looking dope man, only thing i would change is the the little bit on the right leg of your R because it covers too much of your A

heres a sketch i did yesterday, ive been playing around with some different styles the past day or so

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/newsketch.jpg
the M needs some working and i need some new markers haha

[-ShAmEE-]

yeah she writes haze..

yeah but is she even fitt?

[SEAK010]

I would like to hear some crits for my latest 1, also my first posted piece on this forum =) I didn't have any markers to fill it in, any1 knows a good brand of markers that don't leak thru my paper?
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/9827/c002editiy5.jpg

[I GOT CLOUT]

keane, your S kinna looks like an R, i can see it. but the angle and extension disguise it. and your R dosent flow with the rest of the piece.

hopefully this is better than the last sketch.
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/1476/rasek9kl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Dude, this would make me wet had it not been for that kick out on the R. All your simps are dope, just work on those R's mainnn.
Edit : And I see how your trying to bring the top of the R into the A to get rid of the deadspace, but I think the R would flow better had it been kicked back like the S...ya know? Yeah...ya know.

Hah, Impale. Yeah sharpies suck for porous blackbooks eh? Looks fresh btw.

And Seak - Don't hide your E in the A. Looks clean though.