Blackbooks

[g3zt]

Hmm.. Ive been juss peeking thru these threads.. and I've pretty much seen the same shit with different names.. (excluding some of u guys)


Try dropping some new styles.. stop trying to do hip-hop all the time and drop some hot different shit...

[drop one.]

the way i see it i'm atoy right i think this is the only time to bite people style and learn and then develop my own style. i know all of you have bited some ones letters one time or another. or took somethink from a peice or somethink and incorparated it into something that your doing in your blackbook or on a wall a freight etc.

ye a lot of ppl do that but wat u did was copy nd mak tez's letters look like shyt and bro insted of written dif. names just write alphabets or just stik 2 1 name and im not gonna say i wasnt as bad as u cuz i was evry1 is one time or anotha








+lyfe2 u still suk atleast this kids fukin up on styles ur fukin up on bars:eek:+

[Tokenkaligreens]

why dont you two just battle ? @lyfe2 and drop one rather then just talking shit, your both toys, lose the egos

[drop one.]

w.e ill rock em n no fukin graff creator shyt
we write our names

[squidone]

if you guys do its just going to be a slaughter...

[JETPACK!!]

i want in the battle. paint battle.

due this sunday. word.

[GimmieGotShot]

edit @gimme
nonono its not about being cool its about maintaining the coolness XD
haha we do it using irony and sarcasm to show the kid that it is not good and he should take another aproach to his graffiti...its like constructive critisism except funny

amen brother, amen.

[Bets369R]

RASEK by Bets.

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/002-3.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/001-3.jpg

The Charak isnt mine. i found it in a video game mag and pasted it in my book cause i think its dopee.

im not happy with the fill, my hand got sloppy at the end but oh well

Edit: i just noticed i spelled rasek wrong in the handstyle lol oops

bump this for more crits


rasek i never really rated ur stuff, it just that ur letters lack in something, i just think ur letters are dog shit, i think u should go bck to simples. and know ur stucture of ur letters. cuz i can tell u never did simples.

i write bets, but im sure you were talking to me so...what exactly dont you like about my letter structure? i have a good understanding of how letters work, and ive done many many simples..soo..can you point out exactly what you dont like about my letters? or do you just not like the style i was working with? cause the letters are structurally correct, you might just not like the style which is understandable. to each his own

[JETPACK!!]

betsy, ill have your sketch up tonight. im at work now.

[Bets369R]

betsy, ill have your sketch up tonight. im at work now.

for sure, i wish i had a job haha

[Dewster_OnE]

yo bets did u get my pm?

[Bets369R]

yo bets did u get my pm?

nope ill look right now

[drop one.]

no just me n life nd a sketch battle

[JETPACK!!]

pussy ass blackbook whore

[Crieg ya ya DIG]

<a href="http://s298.photobucket.com/albums/mm263/hellowmotto12/?action=view&current=cais.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm263/hellowmotto12/cais.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

[Crieg ya ya DIG]

http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm263/hellowmotto12/cais.jpg

[drop one.]

nah id do the paint battle but i got no time kuz of grad. n shyt

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

http://i27.tinypic.com/2ibymc7.jpg
had no idea how to fill in this one

[NoCanControl]

crits:
bets, your character is a little sketchy..... but just clean up lines and it should be good.
i always crit even when i don't have a flick... so yea that makes up for the no crits. AND there is only one black book that i can see on this page cuz i used the quick reply. RAWR.



http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture071.jpg

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture070.jpg

r is fucked on the three dee of course, it was a freestyle with no pencils..... so thats my excussseeeeeeeeeee. cits tho...

[JETPACK!!]

word, your M has a piercing...

you just got jacked homie.
nah, i kid.

but yo, nice idea. that steeze is better than your battle piece.

[squidone]

really good mars the only thing that bugs me is on the first one where your M overlaps itself but really good

[rsakens]

keane is back :)

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00155.jpg?t=1212440748
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00201.jpg?t=1212440789
sloppy coloring =/ ^^
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00196.jpg?t=1212440827
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00149.jpg?t=1212440884
some tag
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00180.jpg?t=1212440904

bump and a new one

[rsakens]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00214.jpg?t=1212524993

[Chump]

the S on the Ropes...doesnt even look like a letter...

[Bets369R]

Mars- The charak isnt mine, i seen it in a magazine and thought it was dope so i cut it out and glued it in my book kinda just for inspiration later on.

I like your M on the first one, im not feeling the S though..it just has no style compared to the rest of the letters. second one, lose all the little add ons behind the A

kean, i like your letters, put a force field around your piece and i think itll tie together better

[Bets369R]

the S on the Ropes...doesnt even look like a letter...

looks like an S to me...it also could make a dope Y

[Chump]

maybe ... i just cant see it lol

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

keane i nutted love the very last one

[raveone]

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/weeds-1.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/haze.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/jane.jpg

[drop one.]

raveone those shyts are ill

[g3zt]

You can just walk in and take as many as u want. they are free. but if u order them thro usps.com u can get a 500 pack

I suggest getting DHL stickers instead, they are bigger and all white, no crap like the USPS ones

heres a pic to show the difference.
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n35/specialsteve101/DHLsticker.jpg

top is dhl, bottom is USPS


What are these stickers called??!?! My order juss came in today.. and i got a bunch of whack shit...

[NoCanControl]

but yo, nice idea. that steeze is better than your battle piece.

hahah, can't you read the name. lol.

but the peirceing is because thats my chicks nick name. its for her year book and she has pierceings on her FACE just like in the pic.

[drop one.]

sum1 set up the battle kuz i got no clue how n tell me the dedline ill pm lyfe2

[Tokenkaligreens]

dude its your guys battle you 2 set it up and make deadlines. Once you get the entries post it and a mod will approve it. Its not rocket science.

[Liquid Soul]

rsakens, your style reminds me of a writer I knew who wrote Swer :)

[MarOne...]

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture071.jpg



your stuff kinda reminds me of my old MAR sketches...

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/mar7.jpg

not a bite. just reminded me of the good ol' days.

[NoCanControl]

you mean......



you were once a ..... hUMaN?!?!?!?!

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

http://i27.tinypic.com/2ibymc7.jpg
had no idea how to fill in this one

bump no crits last time:(
CRITS PLEASE

[maddox]

iyt been on the forums for a while never posted up shit so am gunna start... i write tank i know theres writer in the world somewhere that write tank buh i live in the uk nd there not a big writer named tankso here my stuff crits plz ??
keane-likin ur stuff maybe work on the n abit buh shits gd
raveone-looks gd

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3391/img0030ef1.jpg

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/6152/img0031nn9.jpg

http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/6343/img0035cx2.jpg

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/9809/img0032sp0.jpg

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6167/img0038mk3.jpg

this peace was for a mate he writes akap

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/4937/img0038oo5.jpg

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7527/img0039lu5.jpg

[NoCanControl]

bump no crits last time:(
CRITS PLEASE

your s and e are legit, k is goofy, drop the arrows for now... and..... work on your k for the most part.

tane, take away the tight fills for a secound and just concentrate on your letters, the colors, three d and other stuff is being too much of a destraction to you.

golden rule of graffiti...
letters cum first, then you can have your orgasim.

[MarOne...]

you mean......



you were once a ..... hUMaN?!?!?!?!

WHAT? I have never been human LOL

sub-human is where its at.

[raveone]

raveone those shyts are ill

thanks man

[GimmieGotShot]

Mars; Nice.
Maddox; Drop arrows. Do Simples.
Sek; we've already talked.

5 minute sketch with a colored pencil initial outline. i dont like it too much. says gore.
http://a431.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/1/l_f442959aaf42ad82f1657e1584b4c3a6.jpg

[Ity]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n35/specialsteve101/pic001.jpg
crits?

[raveone]

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/weeds-1.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/haze.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/jane.jpg

[NoCanControl]

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/weeds-1.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/haze.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/jane.jpg

what do they say????

weed
haze
jane?

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Tank - im diggin thos first 2 pieces they got some good steez the others i aint feelin any tho i think theyre lacking flow but it looks like ur improving
ITY! - if u wanna put bends in em try makin em sharp or not there at all the slow curves aint workin for u
NoCanControl - ur sketch is pretty hot man
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01478.jpg
pen sketch in class blazed, crits?

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/190230-1.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/185442.jpg

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

dont put your fuckin face in your pictures
new outline
CRITS PLEASE
http://i27.tinypic.com/1zggdud.jpg
dont know if i wanna even take the time for the fill in fucked up the outline with my marker

[AcNt!]

crits?

also taking ideas on fill color....

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g201/brentc23/SCAN0005-1.jpg

[GimmieGotShot]

Mars; Nice.
Maddox; Drop arrows. Do Simples.
Sek; we've already talked.

5 minute sketch with a colored pencil initial outline. i dont like it too much. says gore.
http://a431.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/1/l_f442959aaf42ad82f1657e1584b4c3a6.jpg

got no crits :(

[Tokenkaligreens]

ACNTtry and make your final outline less shaky, and your A messes with the simple letter flow. If your gonna do crooked letters do it with all of them not just one.

gore I like it just fix up the letters abit the G seems a lil odd, the top part to me and make the O somewhat bigger. ( i used to write gore also)

[AcNt!]

more crits...

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g201/brentc23/SCAN0007.jpg

[raveone]

yeah man WEED
HAZE

And JANE

[TaskOne]

Havent posted in a while, heres a two pager. :) TASK SORT make it rain bitches
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/001-3.jpg

[La Coka Nostra]

dont put your fuckin face in your pictures
new outline
CRITS PLEASE
http://i27.tinypic.com/1zggdud.jpg
dont know if i wanna even take the time for the fill in fucked up the outline with my marker


everyone already knows what sex looks like so who gives a fuck.
and why bother posting shit if you don't take anybody's advice?
all of you toys who don't GO SIMPLE when people tell you to.
and then come back like CRITS?!?!? OMG!!!
take some fucking advice or don't ask for it.

[TaskOne]

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/003-2.jpg

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

http://i30.tinypic.com/35bhug2.jpg

ok the kid from NH
first of all i dont need to do simples
second of all you shouldnt be doing simples if you plan on being a wildstyle writer
third of all i got other writers helping me with my style and keeping me on track
fourth ill battle you just to shut you up and prove to you simples aint shitttt

[griz]

Havent posted in a while, heres a two pager. :) TASK SORT make it rain bitches
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/001-3.jpg

that's beast.

[griz]

i especially like the 'make it rain' handstyle :D

[(SoS)Viruz]

The best part is the Drips in the make it rain. Style. Drips are sexy

[AcNt!]

ik thats fuckin dope!

[JETPACK!!]

task dawg, im not feelin it that much. too many arrows guy, like, youve got so many arrows, that it's not hip hop.

the extensions are just wack really.

some shit at work, im gonna start working on that bets piece once i get back from my head.
the K's kick is starting to shape up the way i'd like it, the highlighter died..

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4403/rasek13fu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[La Coka Nostra]

Vandal...i would battle circles around you if my scanner wasnt broken.
you don't get to wildstyle without doing simple letters first.
it all comes with time. you get the letters, then you get the add ons and extensions.
stop getting butthurt because someone tries to give you criticism.
isn't that what you ask for when you say CRITS?!?!?!?!?!?

[(SoS)Viruz]

A Jet I u told that was dope. And that K is nice hit me up if you want to do an exchange

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

rasek i love your shit illlllll
you wanna do an exchange??

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

Vandal...i would battle circles around you if my scanner wasnt broken.
you don't get to wildstyle without doing simple letters first.
it all comes with time. you get the letters, then you get the add ons and extensions.
stop getting butthurt because someone tries to give you criticism.
isn't that what you ask for when you say CRITS?!?!?!?!?!?

ok theres a diffrence between giving crits and being a asshole and tryin to diss people
and especially when your callin us toys what forum is this?????
ok then

[Dewster_OnE]

those are fightin words haha

[La Coka Nostra]

vandal check your pms.

[TheMuffinMan]

dont put your fuckin face in your pictures
new outline
CRITS PLEASE
http://i27.tinypic.com/1zggdud.jpg
dont know if i wanna even take the time for the fill in fucked up the outline with my marker

what does it even say?

[(SoS)Viruz]

Getem Vandal. Lol. Who ever was talkin about he got that ass. :D

[JETPACK!!]

all you need to shut the fuck up. for once in my life. i dont wanna see beef.

actin like bitches an hoes when ya should be practicing your flows

[Bets369R]

beef is for gangbangers and bitches

neither are welcome on this forum

[(SoS)Viruz]

Jet that rymed, but a when you work on simp or Blockbusters, when would it be okay to chage up a little bit, by that I mean twisting a tweating your lines, cause I got this sick simp I just finshed but I dont know if i shoud add stuff to it for the sake of its flow.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

haha ya that "BEEF" is done with
jetpack i like the lil rhyming you put into that last quote

[Bets369R]

Jet that rymed, but a when you work on simp or Blockbusters, when would it be okay to chage up a little bit, by that I mean twisting a tweating your lines, cause I got this sick simp I just finshed but I dont know if i shoud add stuff to it for the sake of its flow.

dont add anything else to it. its called a simple for a reason. post it

[Dewster_OnE]

yo bets ya name is giving me trouble lol i feel retarded i made it go off the page and come behind it and i drew to much of the last letter lmao and noticed it after i filled lol

[Bets369R]

lol who cares post it anyway. or start over if you want

[drop one.]

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/003-2.jpgbump i like the first one wanna do a throwie exchange? i write poze. like the first one

[Dewster_OnE]

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/231455.jpg

i'll prolly add more lata but this is it for today

[Dewster_OnE]

dont mind the prismas by the way lol

[drop one.]

why is that like that?^^?

[Dewster_OnE]

why is what like what?

[drop one.]

why is part of the ts on the beginin?

[Dewster_OnE]

because it goes off the page.... and around the other side.... lol

[GimmieGotShot]

lmao
A for originality

[fonone]

can you post up a sketch or something "drop one", so i can actually see how good you are,

wait no nevermind i just found one, please dont post one my eyes are hurt enough for now.

[GimmieGotShot]

im with fonone
:\
Drop, you fail.

[JETPACK!!]

exchange for bets, i shoulda put the T rightside up.
i fail. here you go.

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/8119/betswq5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[fonone]

the only thing your going to get out of the lyfe battle is humiliation

[GimmieGotShot]

Who Fon?

[MarOne...]

Havent posted in a while, heres a two pager. :) TASK SORT make it rain bitches
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/001-3.jpg

WHA..... Why did SORT let you write in his book? ._.'

or vice versa.

[Dying to live]

http://a362.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/111/l_2f3fefaf8797da28b732ac60edc30409.gif
from today in english..

[MarOne...]

AKEL!!! Loving all of those letters 'cept for the A. Keep it up man, its good to see you around.





haha ya that "BEEF" is done with

jetpack i like the lil rhyming you put into that last quote

Wow, its like you and that virus cat ride Jetpack's dick to no end.

Both of you shut up and work on SIMPLES. :)

[GimmieGotShot]

L could be more proportioned
but bsides that its dope

[Bets369R]

Dewster exchange
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/003-1.jpg

the s didnt come out how i wanted

[GimmieGotShot]

dope stuff man

[NOTYOU]

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/1665/sketch1ha5.jpg
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/8062/sketch2au8.jpg

[SWIV3Ltwo]

what does the top one say?

omssll?

[NOTYOU]

Misyl
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8569/lookstructureyoucuntssw9.jpg

[jawsy]

task your k is weeeaaak

[TaskOne]

WHA..... Why did SORT let you write in his book? ._.'

or vice versa.

Me and SORT are homies.

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Tank - im diggin thos first 2 pieces they got some good steez the others i aint feelin any tho i think theyre lacking flow but it looks like ur improving
ITY! - if u wanna put bends in em try makin em sharp or not there at all the slow curves aint workin for u
NoCanControl - ur sketch is pretty hot man
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01478.jpg
pen sketch in class blazed, crits?

bump

[Shiva.]

you could do the lowest bar of your E underneath the V, just like in the tag, and the A is in a different style than the V

[pureemoti0n]

evasion +misyl dope stuff
some simples
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/8126/scan10006nc9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Drakula]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/22683a2a.png

T-REX for a battle.

Pureemotion the min and up simples look good!work on the B and on the K lower the top kicker bar.

[rsakens]

very sick invasion
the finished one
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00214.jpg?t=1212524993

....
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture-4.jpg?t=1212585911

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

for my battle with drophttp://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5152/l018py0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5152/l018py0.554992743a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=294&i=l018py0.jpg)

[Tokenkaligreens]

http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q158/toker_014/img007-1.jpg


lol i thought it was a handy battle, mine.

[I GOT CLOUT]

Slaughter?

[osnapizzel]

king new to graff it up, and if you already have....do it again. bars bars bars, no random soft arrows and clean up your lines

rsakens, uni paints are the balls did you use the yellow one on the E and A? they look more orange

[letsgobombin]

i've been trying the more rounded style, ive got some more but they dont show up in pencil so i'll ink them then post 'em
fucked the o
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1213.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1215.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1214.jpg

keane- the second one is nice, but on the first one i don't think the e goes and i think the extension on the last e should be like the one on the k to balance it
raby- i always love your stuff, but im not too keen on this one, don't know why, the x is round and everything else is blockier is the only thing i can think of
pure- keep plugging with those simples, don't make the b go inside it self and make sure the bars line up on it, also, keep experimenting with the k
evasion- is the top of the v supposed to be twisted? If not the 3d is off, apart from that i think it looks really good, i especially like the effect you got from wiping the pen while it was wet
misyl- i like you flowy style, your i seems a bit plain compared to your other letters, connect the middle bar of your s, the left of your y makes it look like an s and your l could be confused for a t because of how it crosses itself, your throwie seems good just square the top of your e so that it flows
bets- your d is too slanted, it looks alot like an a, if it is going to be that slanted try to make it less like an a, the top right of your s seems a bit too thin aswell
king?:D- hit the new to graff thread because clearly you are new to graff, poze isn't really that good but he will kill you toke will win though even though his isnt a piece:D
toke- toke for the win, you're gonna win a piece battle with a handy

[drop one.]

http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h40/chris_22_/0604081407a.jpg
pic quality sux but just a simp for tha battle so who won lol?

[*cept*]

i've been trying the more rounded style, ive got some more but they dont show up in pencil so i'll ink them then post 'em
fucked the o
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1213.jpg
word. i know that exact style your goin for, cept its hard for me cause i got an M, i would say just make the whole in the O less ovalish. but it definitely looks good

[GimmieGotShot]

Pocs; nice shit. keep goin with it.
Notyou; i already told you you failed.
Ces; decent. make the c a bit skinnier.
Sandstorm; x.x. Eyesore. get some structure.

4 minute sketch in summer school
http://a150.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/56/l_24ccfb66a0eb1b16b1a1845067445a95.jpg

[Tokenkaligreens]

that O as is, is begging to be made into a face. lol

edit: gore I like that one better then the 1st one you posted just needs to be cleaned up abit.

[letsgobombin]

^^
you talkin to me

[Tokenkaligreens]

ya it your pocs lol

[AdRe*]

http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h40/chris_22_/0604081407a.jpg
pic quality sux but just a simp for tha battle so who won lol?

for my battle with drophttp://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5152/l018py0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5152/l018py0.554992743a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=294&i=l018py0.jpg)

Wanted to contribute to this battle and I was bored ha
this felt more like a bubble letter type shit idk I was really bored
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/06-04-08_1330.jpg
THIS IS FOR THE BATTLE. I DONT ACTUALLY WRITE THIS

[GimmieGotShot]

that O as is, is begging to be made into a face. lol

edit: gore I like that one better then the 1st one you posted just needs to be cleaned up abit.

yea :\. shaky hands + very detailed printer = shitter flick.

[JETPACK!!]

i really hope thats not gonna be an actual battle.

[Tokenkaligreens]

LOL ya that'll do it and andre you forgot my entry lmfao.

[letsgobombin]

i'm not too good with faces but ill try and get some inspiration tonight, you genuinely should enter the battle though it'll be funny lookin through a piece battle then seeing a tag and then everyone would vote for it

[Dewster_OnE]

why does it seem like no1 takes there time with their shyt?? i mean damn i knoe i dont have the straightest lines n shyt but some ppl are just waaaayyy off.

[Dewster_OnE]

o0o and whoever posted the handie won the battle

[letsgobombin]

what do you think of these 2
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1214.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1215.jpg
adre- keep the bars the same width
gore- its messy but balanced, take out the underline and bring the r down more, also try it with a full size o

[hazetheone]

this is pitifull

[Tokenkaligreens]

lol i posted the handy and im still bored so here sa shitty simple ftw. :)

http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q158/toker_014/img008-1.jpg

[b SQUARED 08]

Pocs: You're going in the right direction with that first sketch on the last page. I'd stick with that style because you know you can pull it off. Your other ones were alright, but not as good as that one.
Drop One.: Try at keeping your letters the same size overall as well as "barwise". I guess consistency is what I'm getting at. Work on your letter size consistency.
GimmeGotShot: The S is pretty wack, but I think you're going in the right direction overall. If I were you, I'd lay off the bars and keep it a bit more simple. It seems like you may be bitin' off a little more that you can chew for now.
Adre: Lol, if I were to pick a winner, it'd be you, but that's not saying much at all because, quite frankly, all three are awful.

Here's one I finished up last night for a friend of mine. First sketch I've done in awhile. Oh, and ignore the handies- I know they're awful.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_6018.jpg

And here's a real quick sketch I did for another friend of mine.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_5679.jpg

[Tokenkaligreens]

like the globe on the I cool idea.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

wow like these people in here are truely some of the worst writers ive seen
its just one of those things where you look at it and you think to yourself how can you try and be so bad

[Mass Appeal]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-21.jpg

im gonna redo the S

[hazetheone]

xvandalxgaayx dude you fucking suck too
and on that red piece turn that cross upside down

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

that looks pretty ill the S is my favortite letter jus the top is fucked up


haze i havent seen you post one picture
and ive been writing for 8 months nd ive progressed pretty fast

so post some pics or just battle me

[Mass Appeal]

http://i30.tinypic.com/35bhug2.jpg


wow your truely the worst writer ive seen
its just one of those things where you look at it and you think to yourself how can you try and be so bad

[Dewster_OnE]

top of exchange with Aten1
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/150459.jpg
bottom of page
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/150512.jpg

[seywhat]

wow like these people in here are truely some of the worst writers ive seen
its just one of those things where you look at it and you think to yourself how can you try and be so bad

bro ur one of the last people that should be sayin shit like this. i really wish mods could ban kids on here just based on stupidity.

mass- thats hot fire man, if the last letter an h or an r?

[Dewster_OnE]

mass apeal- that style is soo funky i like that ish tho idk what it says i see an s and e but idk da rest

[sketch3]

dwester top sketch is a huge improvement

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

ok mass like i said BATTLE MEEE YOU FUCKKKK
nd ur like fuckin 25 nd been writin for bout 15 years right?
i been writin for 8 months and i bet you anything i could paint better then you so do your self a favor get out of mommys basement go find a job nd not talk shit on the internet cunt

[sketch3]

hes younger than me and im 17,
just acept that your shitty,
battling over the internet wont prove anything,
your shitty,
go simple,
loose the ego,
your shite,

[Dewster_OnE]

thx.. and I DONT USE BARS!!!!! mooohahahahahaha
im on some anti-bar shyt.. theres something about drawing free-hand that i like
so sketch when are u posting something?? i wana see ur work

[Tokenkaligreens]

wow vandal your a tool kid. Your extensions are not very good and random, have you heard of flow. You can color but so can my 5 year old cousin. You have been writing for 8 months that explains why you shit looks like shit. How about you post up a simple and show us how you have progressed. also in most your post your also talking shit on line hypocritical much

[b SQUARED 08]

BUMP OVER THE BULLSHIT! (Shut the fuck up Vandal)

Here's one I finished up last night for a friend of mine. First sketch I've done in awhile. Oh, and ignore the handies- I know they're awful.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_6018.jpg

And here's a real quick sketch I did for another friend of mine.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_5679.jpg

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

wicked well i dont care i was just sayin the battle that was goin was all shit so get off my dickkkkk

[Tokenkaligreens]

http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q158/toker_014/img008-1.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

vandal, battle me. loser never opens his mouth again.

[drop one.]

i think token cali greens won

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

alright if you want its kinda obvious that all the people that i was just aruing with are not going to vote for me but im leaving right now ill PM you by tonight with my pic

[Tokenkaligreens]

do the battle nameless. But I m sure we will be able to tell :)

[Bah Humbug]

http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/DCP02066.jpg
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/DCP02050.jpg
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/SKETCHES/DCP02117.jpg
tell me what u guys think

[emel]

all i have to say is to make the widths bigger and work on your structure a bit more, that last one looks better than the others..

and everybody here who is better than vandal...and tried to be kool on the internet by insulting him just stop.... because your fuc king gay and are only getting mad toys on your nuts which wont do you any good......its between amk and him not everybody so just shut the fuc k up

[Thrice]

token if I were you I wouldn't write ces.

[MarOne...]

Me and SORT are homies.

Lucky.

[MarOne...]

ok mass like i said BATTLE MEEE YOU FUCKKKK
nd ur like fuckin 25 nd been writin for bout 15 years right?
i been writin for 8 months and i bet you anything i could paint better then you so do your self a favor get out of mommys basement go find a job nd not talk shit on the internet cunt

dude, just calm down. Beef is so fucking retarded. We should all be done with this shit.

Can you just start with simples, and work your way into more complex styles like MOST of us are doing? It has helped me tons, bro.

[Tokenkaligreens]

dude i dont write ces it was for some lame ass battle.

[b SQUARED 08]

Haven't gotten a single crit between all this beef bullshit...


Here's one I finished up last night for a friend of mine. First sketch I've done in awhile. Oh, and ignore the handies- I know they're awful.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_6018.jpg

And here's a real quick sketch I did for another friend of mine.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_5679.jpg

[hazetheone]

i gave the second one a crit

make that cross upside down

[GimmieGotShot]

maybe you havent gotten a crit because you havent given one smartie pants

[drop one.]

ur hand looks like a booty zooyork symbol

[g3zt]

toys take this too personal.. O.o

[NoCanControl]

b squareddddddddddddd.........go simple, colors a are a distraction from your letters. your rick is alright, shadow is consistant. get rid of those swirly things.



and...... vandal kid needs to gtfo. SRSLY, I'm not dick hugging on mass, he's cool but not worth dick hugging. Vandal can't talk shit on kids that are worse then you, thats gay. theres tons of guys on BS that smoke even the best in the toy thread dood. and your not even kinging the toy thread, not even close either...

[b SQUARED 08]

maybe you havent gotten a crit because you havent given one smartie pants

Maybe you should look before you open your mouth. I even critted yours dumbass.

Haze, I suppose I appreciate that excuse for a crit... And thanks NoCanControl for an actual crit.

[Bets369R]

Dewster exchange
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/003-1.jpg

the s didnt come out how i wanted

Bump over pages of garbage and shit talking.

Apher i would keep the s. it was my favorite letter in your sketch

[Mass Appeal]

ok mass like i said BATTLE MEEE YOU FUCKKKK
nd ur like fuckin 25 nd been writin for bout 15 years right?
i been writin for 8 months and i bet you anything i could paint better then you so do your self a favor get out of mommys basement go find a job nd not talk shit on the internet cunt

Hahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahaha
25 .. hahahahahhahahahahah
where do you get that from...

say Banana slowley and it sounds like Gullable

bump

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-21.jpg

This says APSEH

[b SQUARED 08]

I agree with Bets, I like the S the best out of all of your letters, Mass.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Vandal- Mass is good dude, just accept your toy, thats what i did. That why you post here. So dont get pissed when someone tell you it shitty, cause it most likely is... Just swallow it.

A Mass I thought I was the worst writer you ever seen....... Damn LOL.

[fOrSaQeN]

bro ur one of the last people that should be sayin shit like this. i really wish mods could ban kids on here just based on stupidity.


http://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/edition2/teevee.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/edition2/teevee.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/edition2/teevee.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/edition2/teevee.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/edition2/teevee.gif

[GimmieGotShot]

Maybe you should look before your mouth. I even critted yours dumbass.

Haze, I suppose I appreciate that excuse for a crit... And thanks NoCanControl for an actual crit.

maybe im a lazy bastard and only read whats quoted in the post that wants crits. huh? oh yeah. didnt think about that did you

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

Ya I don't like the fact that 15 people hop on the train and talk shit when I didn't even talk to em but w/e its all good don't care no more really
Mass no beef no more don't care bout it jus post pics from now on
Rasek I doubt ill have a pic for battle tonight I aint gunna be home til late def have one ready tomorrow

[NoCanControl]

maybe im a lazy bastard and only read whats quoted in the post that wants crits. huh? oh yeah. didnt think about that did you

just face it, your his bitch now....

bets.these don't look as good as your other ones... the middle one needs more positive space in some places.... and the bottom one needs to go a little more simplier......... its really hard for me to comprehend that you can't go wild, cuz your simples and throws are REALLLY good. better then i.... how long you been drawing letters?

[GimmieGotShot]

so your disowning me nocancontrol???
i told you i could get more KY jelly :(

[mind.or.matter]

lol ive been off for a while, the toys forum is really fucked up eh?

lol

[JETPACK!!]

alright if you want its kinda obvious that all the people that i was just aruing with are not going to vote for me but im leaving right now ill PM you by tonight with my pic

guy, i battle with cans. iunno if ive ever battled with a sketch. and if i have, it was a one timer.

holy shit, im eating the most delicious apple i have ever sank my teeth into.

[Mass Appeal]

why waste your paint on a BS battle ?...lmfao
NoCanControl...do you even write ?

[SCIEnce802]

wow... i missed a lot of arguing.
kinda bumed i missed out.
Vandal ill battle u
pic a word
and i dont know how to post battles or wut ev so im gunna send my pic to u if u really want to battle someone.

edit: and mass.. i actually like tha last thing u posted ...... add 3d or shadow or wut ev.. finish it up it will prob look dope.

[Bets369R]

just face it, your his bitch now....

bets.these don't look as good as your other ones... the middle one needs more positive space in some places.... and the bottom one needs to go a little more simplier......... its really hard for me to comprehend that you can't go wild, cuz your simples and throws are REALLLY good. better then i.... how long you been drawing letters?

every time i try doing something more complex i just fuck it all up. i started writing in 03, then stopped for like 3 years while i got my shit back together, then started again in late 06. so basically i started back from scratch in late 06. i get too frustrated with shit so i just stick to simples

[SWIV3Ltwo]

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_16-1-1.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_10.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_11.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_12.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_13.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_14.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_15.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_16.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_5.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_6.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_7.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_8.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_9.jpg

theres a couple things about these pics that i should explain......but im too lazy


so..... CRITZ??


some is old some is new

[SWIV3Ltwo]

bsquare-simples
mass-nice but im not really feelin that p
bet-nice but work on your colors

[Teez-EmM!!!]

ive been told im still a toy
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM1300.jpg

[eMJayBee]

hmmmm, swivel- need to start with simples\\
teez em/ to me the 'm' is too wide, maybe if you squish it together a bit, also loose the random arrows. looks good so far

diff style Im playing with, all 'e's need crits
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture-1.jpg

[SCIEnce802]

dopppppe

[(SoS)Viruz]

Nice I cant do that shit. It dope bro.

[SCIEnce802]

everyone can make 1 dope letter alone... just free hand it, but making the rest of the letters flow is what is whats hard

[g3zt]

everyone can make 1 dope letter alone... just free hand it, but making the rest of the letters flow is what is whats hard


WELL.. not EVERYONE :o

[Mass Appeal]

APSEH
For a collab

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gghg.jpg

[atlok7]

mass that S is fresh

[-ShAmEE-]

APSEH
For a collab

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gghg.jpg

that gonna be a bitch to lasso! ur fuckin lines! what did i say ermm no taGGs! do u think ur special ras, DO YA!

[MarOne...]

OH SHITTT

I'm gonna work on mine. o_O'

[IlikePie]

Not feeling the P at all...

[SWIV3Ltwo]

thats what i said

[CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K]

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/4932/hpim0537hu8.jpg

a lil throwie

[JETPACK!!]

why waste your paint on a BS battle ?...lmfao

A) because im still painting, its not like im e-painting.
B) i paint every chance i get, e-battles are a little more interesting than just posting your shit.
C)its still good practice for can control.

D) unlike the majority of BS, i dont feel like being a BB whore for the rest of my career as a writer.

[IlikePie]

D) unlike the majority of BS, i dont feel like being a BB whore for the rest of my career as a writer.

Lame.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

jetpack since when are you sucha hot shot lol
id love to paint battle you

[JETPACK!!]

im not a hot shot. i'd just rather paint than sketch. and since i dont know any writers, i resort to BS.

theres another paint battle thats being polled sunday.

should hype that up so i get more pieces this time.

WEEKLY PAINT BATTLE, DUE SUNDAY MORNING. POLLED SUNDAY NIGHT.

[squidone]

here is a simple i did for an exchange

http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/9363/dsc00389dj1.jpg

i think i messed up the M
Swivel i think you should keep up the simples i really like the red pen one with the faces but one thing i really didnt like were the 2's as Z's

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

alright jetpack ill try my best im doin a pretty hot spot so ive jus been kinda lookin to see when security comes nd goes
i deff want in tho

[MarOne...]

nah son, don't paint. Not yet.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

nahh i aint not the wild style i do i have a few simps i jus put up i dont have that much can control yet but my simps come out clean so im happy wit em

ND I MIGHT BE GETTIN TO MEET BDUBB THIS WEEKEND FOR THE KID FROM NH

[(SoS)Viruz]

Yo Squid It nice. Mabey you should have added the Outline? But its a good simp. O yea I got you exchange finsh, but cpmputer is bein a ho and dont was to read my Camrea. Lol.

[Maste]

jetpack ill paint something if i can for sunday... and yes i actually paint... ive been puttin in work i just dont post every little thing i do on BS for all the kids who will have something to say about it

[I GOT CLOUT]

Just do your thing man. Dont worry about e-haters.

And JET you know im in. How many kiddies we got signed up?

[JETPACK!!]

not a clue, not ones told me.. im just hoping people send me pieces.

[I GOT CLOUT]

Yeah thats what I was gonna say. For every 3 people that say yes, only 1 might drop something.

[Ity]

me and acnt are gonna try getting something done this weekend.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

and also kabre i keep the paintin on backyard boards nd undergroud writers spots not in public yet

[Dewster_OnE]

x-change i did for aten1

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/233941.jpg

[I GOT CLOUT]

Just some quick shit.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16092.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

dewster, not feelin the colors, but structure-wise its good. a capitol A would probably make the bottom sketch stick out more. not feelin the bomb A and E are wack.
word ease, im feelin the bottom. paint that shit guy.

some doodles from throughout the day.

http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/8682/rasek14og4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8718/rasek15yj9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/885/rasek16ph6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
fuckin around with fills, i like the SEK^^^

[I GOT CLOUT]

Props for actually taking advice Rasek. Shits coming together real nice.

[JETPACK!!]

whose advice did i take? and where does it show?

[Dewster_OnE]

fuck u jetpack haha j/p i happen to like them but hey its not my name.. i dont have a writers name mooohahahahaha..
wait wats wrong with my colors? =[

[I GOT CLOUT]

Haha, well I thought you took mine but nevermind.

[JETPACK!!]

i probably did, but im blimp bloaw, so my memory is patchy.

let's just say i took your advice, were both happy.


dewster, not feelin the colors, but structure-wise its good. a capitol A would probably make the bottom sketch stick out more. not feelin the bomb A and E are wack.
word ease, im feelin the bottom. paint that shit guy.

some doodles from throughout the day.

http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/8682/rasek14og4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8718/rasek15yj9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/885/rasek16ph6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
fuckin around with fills, i like the SEK^^^

bottom bump

[NoCanControl]

why waste your paint on a BS battle ?...lmfao
NoCanControl...do you even write ?

nope. why you ask?

[wesos]

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j308/wefesofos/basontag.jpg
was bored at work, BASON on paper towel

[drapes1125]

Wesos-The letters are not that bad but put them closer together

[Mo152]

putting letters closer together does not in turn make the letters look better.

work on your 3d it looks kinda whack.
and rasek i like your K in the bottom one but the R is fucked up lol

[I GOT CLOUT]

Haha, but anyway it shows in the RAS, you leaned the R back a little to the left and switched up the A to flow better with the rest of it.

[SWIV3Ltwo]

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_16-1-1.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_10.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_11.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_12.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_13.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_14.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_15.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_16.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_5.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_6.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_7.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_8.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_9.jpg

theres a couple things about these pics that i should explain......but im too lazy


so..... CRITZ??


some is old some is new

bump

[rowdysk4nker]

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d175/randomhero6979/DSC01610.jpg
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d175/randomhero6979/DSC01609.jpg

[Dying to live]

bottem one looks like a bite

[rowdysk4nker]

the purple one?

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

APSEH
For a collab

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gghg.jpg
this shit is wack.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

jetpack - love the progress

heres some old shit, I haven't done a peice in awhile

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9365/dscn0479it9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9365/dscn0479it9.12688853b7.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=515&i=dscn0479it9.jpg)
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/378/dscn0480sy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/378/dscn0480sy1.88b338ac15.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=515&i=dscn0480sy1.jpg)
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4262/dscn0486xm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4262/dscn0486xm4.e6070e4a53.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=389&i=dscn0486xm4.jpg)

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture379.jpg
something i sketched quick tonight, might go with this angle for a while

Jetpack- Your stuff is getting nicer and nicer, I'd try to make the K flow with the R more and they'd start to look tight

BASON- I'd overlap the top of the B if you're going to on the other letters to make it more defined and flow better imo

[I GOT CLOUT]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16093.jpg

[Mass Appeal]

nope. why you ask?

hm...i just dont recall seeing your work thats all. ;)
And Teze...thanks :rolleyes:...are you allowing the production thread or what ?

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

ease the bottom one is nasty good shit

rasek i dont like the bottom one very much but the middle one i like it just seems that its flows together nicer because the K is the same size as everything else

[TaskOne]

dewster, not feelin the colors, but structure-wise its good. a capitol A would probably make the bottom sketch stick out more. not feelin the bomb A and E are wack.
word ease, im feelin the bottom. paint that shit guy.

some doodles from throughout the day.

http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/8682/rasek14og4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8718/rasek15yj9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/885/rasek16ph6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
fuckin around with fills, i like the SEK^^^

Feelin the simples bro they are comming along! Improve the R a lil bit tho

[drop one.]

jetpack - love the progress

heres some old shit, I haven't done a peice in awhile

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http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9365/dscn0479it9.12688853b7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[URL="http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=515&i=dscn0480sy1.jpg"]http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/378/dscn0480sy1.88b338ac15.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4262/dscn0486xm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4262/dscn0486xm4.e6070e4a53.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=389&i=dscn0486xm4.jpg)u write sock?

[fonone]

ok mass like i said BATTLE MEEE YOU FUCKKKK
nd ur like fuckin 25 nd been writin for bout 15 years right?
i been writin for 8 months and i bet you anything i could paint better then you so do your self a favor get out of mommys basement go find a job nd not talk shit on the internet cunt


mass appeal man dont battle this guy BRO, dont want to humiliate your self, this guys been writing mad long and has near pefected his wildstyle, FUCK THE HATERS,

EAZE UP YOH.

[drapes1125]

I got clout-You have some good flow.Im loving it.

[fonone]

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8715/jun05179af4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8715/jun05179af4.f7f940081c.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=210&i=jun05179af4.jpg)

we had a sock here, apparently he moved to melbourne because they were building a case on him or something, who knows.

vois getting better, in that one id just like to see the O a bit further away from the V,

ease - bottom one is nice, maybe change up the A though, it doesnt flow with the other letters imo.

[Dewster_OnE]

the n kinda looks like a k but still fresh

[Shiva.]

isn't it a K ?
your K kinda looks line an N

[fonone]

it is a K :D, i usually write irekn but i didnt have room for the N so i left it off

[Shiva.]

i knew it :D

[Dewster_OnE]

geez haha i was like thats a nice k... but then i thought thats not what he writes lol so its an N... i feel sloe =[

[Dewster_OnE]

quick sketch

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/094845.jpg
crits porfavor.

[injury]

dew- i can't really see the lines that well (vision=not what it used to be) but from what i can see, i like it. hit that with a ballpoint or something and c'mon back

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

Irek that is nasty I love your style I used to always try nd do shit like that then it wasn't working to good but neways dope shit

[Dewster_OnE]

thats what i was gonna do.. but just looking for somw crits before i clean and ink it up

[Liquid Soul]

I messed up the black outlines, really need a better pen, its too thick:

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/5392/dscf2355ky7.jpg

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

Smez that aint bad jus the outline is really thick and the m is a lil fucked up you should more on the fill in add a second color

[Liquid Soul]

Smez that aint bad jus the outline is really thick and the m is a lil fucked up you should more on the fill in add a second color


Thanks man, I definitely agree with everything you've said, cheers for the comment :)

[fonone]

smez new to graffiti thread please... im not trying to start shit but youll get better quicker if you use bars and do simples...

[squidone]

dew i agree with injury i cant really see it that well but what i do see looks good ink and then re post

[Liquid Soul]

smez new to graffiti thread please... im not trying to start shit but youll get better quicker if you use bars and do simples...

I did start off with simples/bars and it grew into that piece, disheartening to say the least. Nevermind...