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Tokenkaligreens
06-03-2008, 01:54 PM
why dont you two just battle ? @lyfe2 and drop one rather then just talking shit, your both toys, lose the egos

drop one.
06-03-2008, 02:00 PM
w.e ill rock em n no fukin graff creator shyt
we write our names

squidone
06-03-2008, 02:26 PM
if you guys do its just going to be a slaughter...

JETPACK!!
06-03-2008, 02:29 PM
i want in the battle. paint battle.

due this sunday. word.

GimmieGotShot
06-03-2008, 02:33 PM
edit @gimme
nonono its not about being cool its about maintaining the coolness XD
haha we do it using irony and sarcasm to show the kid that it is not good and he should take another aproach to his graffiti...its like constructive critisism except funny

amen brother, amen.

Bets369R
06-03-2008, 02:43 PM
RASEK by Bets.

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/002-3.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/001-3.jpg

The Charak isnt mine. i found it in a video game mag and pasted it in my book cause i think its dopee.

im not happy with the fill, my hand got sloppy at the end but oh well

Edit: i just noticed i spelled rasek wrong in the handstyle lol oops

bump this for more crits


rasek i never really rated ur stuff, it just that ur letters lack in something, i just think ur letters are dog shit, i think u should go bck to simples. and know ur stucture of ur letters. cuz i can tell u never did simples.

i write bets, but im sure you were talking to me so...what exactly dont you like about my letter structure? i have a good understanding of how letters work, and ive done many many simples..soo..can you point out exactly what you dont like about my letters? or do you just not like the style i was working with? cause the letters are structurally correct, you might just not like the style which is understandable. to each his own

JETPACK!!
06-03-2008, 02:47 PM
betsy, ill have your sketch up tonight. im at work now.

Bets369R
06-03-2008, 02:55 PM
betsy, ill have your sketch up tonight. im at work now.

for sure, i wish i had a job haha

Dewster_OnE
06-03-2008, 02:57 PM
yo bets did u get my pm?

Bets369R
06-03-2008, 03:02 PM
yo bets did u get my pm?

nope ill look right now

drop one.
06-03-2008, 03:11 PM
no just me n life nd a sketch battle

JETPACK!!
06-03-2008, 03:14 PM
pussy ass blackbook whore

Crieg ya ya DIG
06-03-2008, 03:19 PM
<a href="http://s298.photobucket.com/albums/mm263/hellowmotto12/?action=view&current=cais.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm263/hellowmotto12/cais.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

Crieg ya ya DIG
06-03-2008, 03:20 PM
http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm263/hellowmotto12/cais.jpg

drop one.
06-03-2008, 03:23 PM
nah id do the paint battle but i got no time kuz of grad. n shyt

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-03-2008, 03:25 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/2ibymc7.jpg
had no idea how to fill in this one

NoCanControl
06-03-2008, 03:37 PM
crits:
bets, your character is a little sketchy..... but just clean up lines and it should be good.
i always crit even when i don't have a flick... so yea that makes up for the no crits. AND there is only one black book that i can see on this page cuz i used the quick reply. RAWR.



http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture071.jpg

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture070.jpg

r is fucked on the three dee of course, it was a freestyle with no pencils..... so thats my excussseeeeeeeeeee. cits tho...

JETPACK!!
06-03-2008, 03:48 PM
word, your M has a piercing...

you just got jacked homie.
nah, i kid.

but yo, nice idea. that steeze is better than your battle piece.

squidone
06-03-2008, 03:51 PM
really good mars the only thing that bugs me is on the first one where your M overlaps itself but really good

rsakens
06-03-2008, 03:56 PM
keane is back :)

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00155.jpg?t=1212440748
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00201.jpg?t=1212440789
sloppy coloring =/ ^^
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00196.jpg?t=1212440827
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00149.jpg?t=1212440884
some tag
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00180.jpg?t=1212440904

bump and a new one

rsakens
06-03-2008, 03:57 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00214.jpg?t=1212524993

Chump
06-03-2008, 03:59 PM
the S on the Ropes...doesnt even look like a letter...

Bets369R
06-03-2008, 04:04 PM
Mars- The charak isnt mine, i seen it in a magazine and thought it was dope so i cut it out and glued it in my book kinda just for inspiration later on.

I like your M on the first one, im not feeling the S though..it just has no style compared to the rest of the letters. second one, lose all the little add ons behind the A

kean, i like your letters, put a force field around your piece and i think itll tie together better

Bets369R
06-03-2008, 04:05 PM
the S on the Ropes...doesnt even look like a letter...

looks like an S to me...it also could make a dope Y

Chump
06-03-2008, 04:07 PM
maybe ... i just cant see it lol

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-03-2008, 04:08 PM
keane i nutted love the very last one

raveone
06-03-2008, 04:10 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/weeds-1.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/haze.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/jane.jpg

drop one.
06-03-2008, 04:12 PM
raveone those shyts are ill

g3zt
06-03-2008, 04:16 PM
You can just walk in and take as many as u want. they are free. but if u order them thro usps.com u can get a 500 pack

I suggest getting DHL stickers instead, they are bigger and all white, no crap like the USPS ones

heres a pic to show the difference.
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n35/specialsteve101/DHLsticker.jpg

top is dhl, bottom is USPS


What are these stickers called??!?! My order juss came in today.. and i got a bunch of whack shit...

NoCanControl
06-03-2008, 04:28 PM
but yo, nice idea. that steeze is better than your battle piece.

hahah, can't you read the name. lol.

but the peirceing is because thats my chicks nick name. its for her year book and she has pierceings on her FACE just like in the pic.

drop one.
06-03-2008, 04:36 PM
sum1 set up the battle kuz i got no clue how n tell me the dedline ill pm lyfe2

Tokenkaligreens
06-03-2008, 04:39 PM
dude its your guys battle you 2 set it up and make deadlines. Once you get the entries post it and a mod will approve it. Its not rocket science.

Liquid Soul
06-03-2008, 04:43 PM
rsakens, your style reminds me of a writer I knew who wrote Swer :)

MarOne...
06-03-2008, 04:43 PM
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture071.jpg



your stuff kinda reminds me of my old MAR sketches...

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/mar7.jpg

not a bite. just reminded me of the good ol' days.

NoCanControl
06-03-2008, 04:49 PM
you mean......



you were once a ..... hUMaN?!?!?!?!

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-03-2008, 04:51 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/2ibymc7.jpg
had no idea how to fill in this one

bump no crits last time:(
CRITS PLEASE

maddox
06-03-2008, 04:51 PM
iyt been on the forums for a while never posted up shit so am gunna start... i write tank i know theres writer in the world somewhere that write tank buh i live in the uk nd there not a big writer named tankso here my stuff crits plz ??
keane-likin ur stuff maybe work on the n abit buh shits gd
raveone-looks gd

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3391/img0030ef1.jpg

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/6152/img0031nn9.jpg

http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/6343/img0035cx2.jpg

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/9809/img0032sp0.jpg

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6167/img0038mk3.jpg

this peace was for a mate he writes akap

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/4937/img0038oo5.jpg

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7527/img0039lu5.jpg

NoCanControl
06-03-2008, 05:02 PM
bump no crits last time:(
CRITS PLEASE

your s and e are legit, k is goofy, drop the arrows for now... and..... work on your k for the most part.

tane, take away the tight fills for a secound and just concentrate on your letters, the colors, three d and other stuff is being too much of a destraction to you.

golden rule of graffiti...
letters cum first, then you can have your orgasim.

MarOne...
06-03-2008, 05:06 PM
you mean......



you were once a ..... hUMaN?!?!?!?!

WHAT? I have never been human LOL

sub-human is where its at.

raveone
06-03-2008, 05:19 PM
raveone those shyts are ill

thanks man

GimmieGotShot
06-03-2008, 05:24 PM
Mars; Nice.
Maddox; Drop arrows. Do Simples.
Sek; we've already talked.

5 minute sketch with a colored pencil initial outline. i dont like it too much. says gore.
http://a431.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/1/l_f442959aaf42ad82f1657e1584b4c3a6.jpg

Ity
06-03-2008, 05:31 PM
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n35/specialsteve101/pic001.jpg
crits?

raveone
06-03-2008, 05:33 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/weeds-1.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/haze.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/jane.jpg

NoCanControl
06-03-2008, 06:01 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/weeds-1.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/haze.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/jane.jpg

what do they say????

weed
haze
jane?

Evasion Of Invasion
06-03-2008, 06:25 PM
Tank - im diggin thos first 2 pieces they got some good steez the others i aint feelin any tho i think theyre lacking flow but it looks like ur improving
ITY! - if u wanna put bends in em try makin em sharp or not there at all the slow curves aint workin for u
NoCanControl - ur sketch is pretty hot man
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01478.jpg
pen sketch in class blazed, crits?

sex without condoms
06-03-2008, 06:33 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/190230-1.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/185442.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-03-2008, 07:18 PM
dont put your fuckin face in your pictures
new outline
CRITS PLEASE
http://i27.tinypic.com/1zggdud.jpg
dont know if i wanna even take the time for the fill in fucked up the outline with my marker

AcNt!
06-03-2008, 07:49 PM
crits?

also taking ideas on fill color....

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g201/brentc23/SCAN0005-1.jpg

GimmieGotShot
06-03-2008, 07:53 PM
Mars; Nice.
Maddox; Drop arrows. Do Simples.
Sek; we've already talked.

5 minute sketch with a colored pencil initial outline. i dont like it too much. says gore.
http://a431.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/1/l_f442959aaf42ad82f1657e1584b4c3a6.jpg

got no crits :(

Tokenkaligreens
06-03-2008, 07:55 PM
ACNTtry and make your final outline less shaky, and your A messes with the simple letter flow. If your gonna do crooked letters do it with all of them not just one.

gore I like it just fix up the letters abit the G seems a lil odd, the top part to me and make the O somewhat bigger. ( i used to write gore also)

AcNt!
06-03-2008, 08:35 PM
more crits...

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g201/brentc23/SCAN0007.jpg

raveone
06-03-2008, 08:49 PM
yeah man WEED
HAZE

And JANE

TaskOne
06-03-2008, 09:07 PM
Havent posted in a while, heres a two pager. :) TASK SORT make it rain bitches
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/001-3.jpg

La Coka Nostra
06-03-2008, 09:13 PM
dont put your fuckin face in your pictures
new outline
CRITS PLEASE
http://i27.tinypic.com/1zggdud.jpg
dont know if i wanna even take the time for the fill in fucked up the outline with my marker


everyone already knows what sex looks like so who gives a fuck.
and why bother posting shit if you don't take anybody's advice?
all of you toys who don't GO SIMPLE when people tell you to.
and then come back like CRITS?!?!? OMG!!!
take some fucking advice or don't ask for it.

TaskOne
06-03-2008, 09:17 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/003-2.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-03-2008, 09:22 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/35bhug2.jpg

ok the kid from NH
first of all i dont need to do simples
second of all you shouldnt be doing simples if you plan on being a wildstyle writer
third of all i got other writers helping me with my style and keeping me on track
fourth ill battle you just to shut you up and prove to you simples aint shitttt

griz
06-03-2008, 09:23 PM
Havent posted in a while, heres a two pager. :) TASK SORT make it rain bitches
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/001-3.jpg

that's beast.

griz
06-03-2008, 09:28 PM
i especially like the 'make it rain' handstyle :D

(SoS)Viruz
06-03-2008, 09:30 PM
The best part is the Drips in the make it rain. Style. Drips are sexy

AcNt!
06-03-2008, 09:31 PM
ik thats fuckin dope!

JETPACK!!
06-03-2008, 09:35 PM
task dawg, im not feelin it that much. too many arrows guy, like, youve got so many arrows, that it's not hip hop.

the extensions are just wack really.

some shit at work, im gonna start working on that bets piece once i get back from my head.
the K's kick is starting to shape up the way i'd like it, the highlighter died..

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4403/rasek13fu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

La Coka Nostra
06-03-2008, 09:37 PM
Vandal...i would battle circles around you if my scanner wasnt broken.
you don't get to wildstyle without doing simple letters first.
it all comes with time. you get the letters, then you get the add ons and extensions.
stop getting butthurt because someone tries to give you criticism.
isn't that what you ask for when you say CRITS?!?!?!?!?!?

(SoS)Viruz
06-03-2008, 09:39 PM
A Jet I u told that was dope. And that K is nice hit me up if you want to do an exchange

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-03-2008, 09:41 PM
rasek i love your shit illlllll
you wanna do an exchange??

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-03-2008, 09:45 PM
Vandal...i would battle circles around you if my scanner wasnt broken.
you don't get to wildstyle without doing simple letters first.
it all comes with time. you get the letters, then you get the add ons and extensions.
stop getting butthurt because someone tries to give you criticism.
isn't that what you ask for when you say CRITS?!?!?!?!?!?

ok theres a diffrence between giving crits and being a asshole and tryin to diss people
and especially when your callin us toys what forum is this?????
ok then

Dewster_OnE
06-03-2008, 09:49 PM
those are fightin words haha

La Coka Nostra
06-03-2008, 09:50 PM
vandal check your pms.

TheMuffinMan
06-03-2008, 09:51 PM
dont put your fuckin face in your pictures
new outline
CRITS PLEASE
http://i27.tinypic.com/1zggdud.jpg
dont know if i wanna even take the time for the fill in fucked up the outline with my marker

what does it even say?

(SoS)Viruz
06-03-2008, 09:51 PM
Getem Vandal. Lol. Who ever was talkin about he got that ass. :D

JETPACK!!
06-03-2008, 09:56 PM
all you need to shut the fuck up. for once in my life. i dont wanna see beef.

actin like bitches an hoes when ya should be practicing your flows

Bets369R
06-03-2008, 10:00 PM
beef is for gangbangers and bitches

neither are welcome on this forum

(SoS)Viruz
06-03-2008, 10:00 PM
Jet that rymed, but a when you work on simp or Blockbusters, when would it be okay to chage up a little bit, by that I mean twisting a tweating your lines, cause I got this sick simp I just finshed but I dont know if i shoud add stuff to it for the sake of its flow.

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-03-2008, 10:01 PM
haha ya that "BEEF" is done with
jetpack i like the lil rhyming you put into that last quote

Bets369R
06-03-2008, 10:05 PM
Jet that rymed, but a when you work on simp or Blockbusters, when would it be okay to chage up a little bit, by that I mean twisting a tweating your lines, cause I got this sick simp I just finshed but I dont know if i shoud add stuff to it for the sake of its flow.

dont add anything else to it. its called a simple for a reason. post it

Dewster_OnE
06-03-2008, 10:09 PM
yo bets ya name is giving me trouble lol i feel retarded i made it go off the page and come behind it and i drew to much of the last letter lmao and noticed it after i filled lol

Bets369R
06-03-2008, 10:25 PM
lol who cares post it anyway. or start over if you want

drop one.
06-03-2008, 10:27 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/003-2.jpgbump i like the first one wanna do a throwie exchange? i write poze. like the first one

Dewster_OnE
06-03-2008, 10:28 PM
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/231455.jpg

i'll prolly add more lata but this is it for today

Dewster_OnE
06-03-2008, 10:29 PM
dont mind the prismas by the way lol

drop one.
06-03-2008, 10:29 PM
why is that like that?^^?

Dewster_OnE
06-03-2008, 10:31 PM
why is what like what?

drop one.
06-03-2008, 10:50 PM
why is part of the ts on the beginin?

Dewster_OnE
06-03-2008, 10:53 PM
because it goes off the page.... and around the other side.... lol

GimmieGotShot
06-03-2008, 11:25 PM
lmao
A for originality

fonone
06-03-2008, 11:31 PM
can you post up a sketch or something "drop one", so i can actually see how good you are,

wait no nevermind i just found one, please dont post one my eyes are hurt enough for now.

GimmieGotShot
06-03-2008, 11:41 PM
im with fonone
:\
Drop, you fail.

JETPACK!!
06-03-2008, 11:43 PM
exchange for bets, i shoulda put the T rightside up.
i fail. here you go.

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/8119/betswq5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

fonone
06-03-2008, 11:43 PM
the only thing your going to get out of the lyfe battle is humiliation

GimmieGotShot
06-03-2008, 11:45 PM
Who Fon?

MarOne...
06-03-2008, 11:46 PM
Havent posted in a while, heres a two pager. :) TASK SORT make it rain bitches
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/001-3.jpg

WHA..... Why did SORT let you write in his book? ._.'

or vice versa.

Dying to live
06-03-2008, 11:51 PM
http://a362.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/111/l_2f3fefaf8797da28b732ac60edc30409.gif
from today in english..

MarOne...
06-03-2008, 11:53 PM
AKEL!!! Loving all of those letters 'cept for the A. Keep it up man, its good to see you around.





haha ya that "BEEF" is done with

jetpack i like the lil rhyming you put into that last quote

Wow, its like you and that virus cat ride Jetpack's dick to no end.

Both of you shut up and work on SIMPLES. :)

GimmieGotShot
06-03-2008, 11:57 PM
L could be more proportioned
but bsides that its dope

Bets369R
06-04-2008, 12:23 AM
Dewster exchange
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/003-1.jpg

the s didnt come out how i wanted

GimmieGotShot
06-04-2008, 12:29 AM
dope stuff man

NOTYOU
06-04-2008, 03:43 AM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/1665/sketch1ha5.jpg
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/8062/sketch2au8.jpg

SWIV3Ltwo
06-04-2008, 04:10 AM
what does the top one say?

omssll?

NOTYOU
06-04-2008, 04:12 AM
Misyl
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8569/lookstructureyoucuntssw9.jpg

jawsy
06-04-2008, 04:36 AM
task your k is weeeaaak

TaskOne
06-04-2008, 07:05 AM
WHA..... Why did SORT let you write in his book? ._.'

or vice versa.

Me and SORT are homies.

Evasion Of Invasion
06-04-2008, 08:15 AM
Tank - im diggin thos first 2 pieces they got some good steez the others i aint feelin any tho i think theyre lacking flow but it looks like ur improving
ITY! - if u wanna put bends in em try makin em sharp or not there at all the slow curves aint workin for u
NoCanControl - ur sketch is pretty hot man
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01478.jpg
pen sketch in class blazed, crits?

bump

Shiva.
06-04-2008, 08:19 AM
you could do the lowest bar of your E underneath the V, just like in the tag, and the A is in a different style than the V

pureemoti0n
06-04-2008, 09:59 AM
evasion +misyl dope stuff
some simples
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/8126/scan10006nc9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Drakula
06-04-2008, 11:29 AM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/22683a2a.png

T-REX for a battle.

Pureemotion the min and up simples look good!work on the B and on the K lower the top kicker bar.

rsakens
06-04-2008, 11:30 AM
very sick invasion
the finished one
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00214.jpg?t=1212524993

....
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture-4.jpg?t=1212585911

king sandstorm (KOGC)
06-04-2008, 12:39 PM
for my battle with drophttp://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5152/l018py0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5152/l018py0.554992743a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=294&i=l018py0.jpg)

Tokenkaligreens
06-04-2008, 12:43 PM
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q158/toker_014/img007-1.jpg


lol i thought it was a handy battle, mine.

I GOT CLOUT
06-04-2008, 12:43 PM
Slaughter?

osnapizzel
06-04-2008, 12:46 PM
king new to graff it up, and if you already have....do it again. bars bars bars, no random soft arrows and clean up your lines

rsakens, uni paints are the balls did you use the yellow one on the E and A? they look more orange

letsgobombin
06-04-2008, 12:49 PM
i've been trying the more rounded style, ive got some more but they dont show up in pencil so i'll ink them then post 'em
fucked the o
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1213.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1215.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1214.jpg

keane- the second one is nice, but on the first one i don't think the e goes and i think the extension on the last e should be like the one on the k to balance it
raby- i always love your stuff, but im not too keen on this one, don't know why, the x is round and everything else is blockier is the only thing i can think of
pure- keep plugging with those simples, don't make the b go inside it self and make sure the bars line up on it, also, keep experimenting with the k
evasion- is the top of the v supposed to be twisted? If not the 3d is off, apart from that i think it looks really good, i especially like the effect you got from wiping the pen while it was wet
misyl- i like you flowy style, your i seems a bit plain compared to your other letters, connect the middle bar of your s, the left of your y makes it look like an s and your l could be confused for a t because of how it crosses itself, your throwie seems good just square the top of your e so that it flows
bets- your d is too slanted, it looks alot like an a, if it is going to be that slanted try to make it less like an a, the top right of your s seems a bit too thin aswell
king?:D- hit the new to graff thread because clearly you are new to graff, poze isn't really that good but he will kill you toke will win though even though his isnt a piece:D
toke- toke for the win, you're gonna win a piece battle with a handy

drop one.
06-04-2008, 01:13 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h40/chris_22_/0604081407a.jpg
pic quality sux but just a simp for tha battle so who won lol?

*cept*
06-04-2008, 01:25 PM
i've been trying the more rounded style, ive got some more but they dont show up in pencil so i'll ink them then post 'em
fucked the o
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1213.jpg
word. i know that exact style your goin for, cept its hard for me cause i got an M, i would say just make the whole in the O less ovalish. but it definitely looks good

GimmieGotShot
06-04-2008, 01:28 PM
Pocs; nice shit. keep goin with it.
Notyou; i already told you you failed.
Ces; decent. make the c a bit skinnier.
Sandstorm; x.x. Eyesore. get some structure.

4 minute sketch in summer school
http://a150.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/56/l_24ccfb66a0eb1b16b1a1845067445a95.jpg

Tokenkaligreens
06-04-2008, 01:29 PM
that O as is, is begging to be made into a face. lol

edit: gore I like that one better then the 1st one you posted just needs to be cleaned up abit.

letsgobombin
06-04-2008, 01:31 PM
^^
you talkin to me

Tokenkaligreens
06-04-2008, 01:35 PM
ya it your pocs lol

AdRe*
06-04-2008, 01:35 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h40/chris_22_/0604081407a.jpg
pic quality sux but just a simp for tha battle so who won lol?

for my battle with drophttp://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5152/l018py0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5152/l018py0.554992743a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=294&i=l018py0.jpg)

Wanted to contribute to this battle and I was bored ha
this felt more like a bubble letter type shit idk I was really bored
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/06-04-08_1330.jpg
THIS IS FOR THE BATTLE. I DONT ACTUALLY WRITE THIS

GimmieGotShot
06-04-2008, 01:37 PM
that O as is, is begging to be made into a face. lol

edit: gore I like that one better then the 1st one you posted just needs to be cleaned up abit.

yea :\. shaky hands + very detailed printer = shitter flick.

JETPACK!!
06-04-2008, 01:38 PM
i really hope thats not gonna be an actual battle.

Tokenkaligreens
06-04-2008, 01:39 PM
LOL ya that'll do it and andre you forgot my entry lmfao.

letsgobombin
06-04-2008, 01:39 PM
i'm not too good with faces but ill try and get some inspiration tonight, you genuinely should enter the battle though it'll be funny lookin through a piece battle then seeing a tag and then everyone would vote for it

Dewster_OnE
06-04-2008, 01:44 PM
why does it seem like no1 takes there time with their shyt?? i mean damn i knoe i dont have the straightest lines n shyt but some ppl are just waaaayyy off.

Dewster_OnE
06-04-2008, 01:46 PM
o0o and whoever posted the handie won the battle

letsgobombin
06-04-2008, 01:47 PM
what do you think of these 2
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1214.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1215.jpg
adre- keep the bars the same width
gore- its messy but balanced, take out the underline and bring the r down more, also try it with a full size o

hazetheone
06-04-2008, 01:49 PM
this is pitifull

Tokenkaligreens
06-04-2008, 01:57 PM
lol i posted the handy and im still bored so here sa shitty simple ftw. :)

http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q158/toker_014/img008-1.jpg

b SQUARED 08
06-04-2008, 01:59 PM
Pocs: You're going in the right direction with that first sketch on the last page. I'd stick with that style because you know you can pull it off. Your other ones were alright, but not as good as that one.
Drop One.: Try at keeping your letters the same size overall as well as "barwise". I guess consistency is what I'm getting at. Work on your letter size consistency.
GimmeGotShot: The S is pretty wack, but I think you're going in the right direction overall. If I were you, I'd lay off the bars and keep it a bit more simple. It seems like you may be bitin' off a little more that you can chew for now.
Adre: Lol, if I were to pick a winner, it'd be you, but that's not saying much at all because, quite frankly, all three are awful.

Here's one I finished up last night for a friend of mine. First sketch I've done in awhile. Oh, and ignore the handies- I know they're awful.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_6018.jpg

And here's a real quick sketch I did for another friend of mine.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_5679.jpg

Tokenkaligreens
06-04-2008, 02:01 PM
like the globe on the I cool idea.

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-04-2008, 02:06 PM
wow like these people in here are truely some of the worst writers ive seen
its just one of those things where you look at it and you think to yourself how can you try and be so bad

Mass Appeal
06-04-2008, 02:07 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-21.jpg

im gonna redo the S

hazetheone
06-04-2008, 02:08 PM
xvandalxgaayx dude you fucking suck too
and on that red piece turn that cross upside down

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-04-2008, 02:09 PM
that looks pretty ill the S is my favortite letter jus the top is fucked up


haze i havent seen you post one picture
and ive been writing for 8 months nd ive progressed pretty fast

so post some pics or just battle me

Mass Appeal
06-04-2008, 02:10 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/35bhug2.jpg


wow your truely the worst writer ive seen
its just one of those things where you look at it and you think to yourself how can you try and be so bad

Dewster_OnE
06-04-2008, 02:11 PM
top of exchange with Aten1
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/150459.jpg
bottom of page
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/150512.jpg

seywhat
06-04-2008, 02:13 PM
wow like these people in here are truely some of the worst writers ive seen
its just one of those things where you look at it and you think to yourself how can you try and be so bad

bro ur one of the last people that should be sayin shit like this. i really wish mods could ban kids on here just based on stupidity.

mass- thats hot fire man, if the last letter an h or an r?

Dewster_OnE
06-04-2008, 02:14 PM
mass apeal- that style is soo funky i like that ish tho idk what it says i see an s and e but idk da rest

sketch3
06-04-2008, 02:16 PM
dwester top sketch is a huge improvement

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-04-2008, 02:17 PM
ok mass like i said BATTLE MEEE YOU FUCKKKK
nd ur like fuckin 25 nd been writin for bout 15 years right?
i been writin for 8 months and i bet you anything i could paint better then you so do your self a favor get out of mommys basement go find a job nd not talk shit on the internet cunt

sketch3
06-04-2008, 02:22 PM
hes younger than me and im 17,
just acept that your shitty,
battling over the internet wont prove anything,
your shitty,
go simple,
loose the ego,
your shite,

Dewster_OnE
06-04-2008, 02:22 PM
thx.. and I DONT USE BARS!!!!! mooohahahahahaha
im on some anti-bar shyt.. theres something about drawing free-hand that i like
so sketch when are u posting something?? i wana see ur work

Tokenkaligreens
06-04-2008, 02:23 PM
wow vandal your a tool kid. Your extensions are not very good and random, have you heard of flow. You can color but so can my 5 year old cousin. You have been writing for 8 months that explains why you shit looks like shit. How about you post up a simple and show us how you have progressed. also in most your post your also talking shit on line hypocritical much

b SQUARED 08
06-04-2008, 02:25 PM
BUMP OVER THE BULLSHIT! (Shut the fuck up Vandal)

Here's one I finished up last night for a friend of mine. First sketch I've done in awhile. Oh, and ignore the handies- I know they're awful.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_6018.jpg

And here's a real quick sketch I did for another friend of mine.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_5679.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-04-2008, 02:25 PM
wicked well i dont care i was just sayin the battle that was goin was all shit so get off my dickkkkk

Tokenkaligreens
06-04-2008, 02:27 PM
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q158/toker_014/img008-1.jpg

JETPACK!!
06-04-2008, 02:35 PM
vandal, battle me. loser never opens his mouth again.

drop one.
06-04-2008, 02:36 PM
i think token cali greens won

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-04-2008, 02:37 PM
alright if you want its kinda obvious that all the people that i was just aruing with are not going to vote for me but im leaving right now ill PM you by tonight with my pic

Tokenkaligreens
06-04-2008, 02:39 PM
do the battle nameless. But I m sure we will be able to tell :)

Bah Humbug
06-04-2008, 02:42 PM
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/DCP02066.jpg
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/DCP02050.jpg
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/SKETCHES/DCP02117.jpg
tell me what u guys think

emel
06-04-2008, 03:18 PM
all i have to say is to make the widths bigger and work on your structure a bit more, that last one looks better than the others..

and everybody here who is better than vandal...and tried to be kool on the internet by insulting him just stop.... because your fuc king gay and are only getting mad toys on your nuts which wont do you any good......its between amk and him not everybody so just shut the fuc k up

Thrice
06-04-2008, 03:18 PM
token if I were you I wouldn't write ces.

MarOne...
06-04-2008, 03:21 PM
Me and SORT are homies.

Lucky.

MarOne...
06-04-2008, 03:24 PM
ok mass like i said BATTLE MEEE YOU FUCKKKK
nd ur like fuckin 25 nd been writin for bout 15 years right?
i been writin for 8 months and i bet you anything i could paint better then you so do your self a favor get out of mommys basement go find a job nd not talk shit on the internet cunt

dude, just calm down. Beef is so fucking retarded. We should all be done with this shit.

Can you just start with simples, and work your way into more complex styles like MOST of us are doing? It has helped me tons, bro.

Tokenkaligreens
06-04-2008, 03:25 PM
dude i dont write ces it was for some lame ass battle.

b SQUARED 08
06-04-2008, 03:34 PM
Haven't gotten a single crit between all this beef bullshit...


Here's one I finished up last night for a friend of mine. First sketch I've done in awhile. Oh, and ignore the handies- I know they're awful.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_6018.jpg

And here's a real quick sketch I did for another friend of mine.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_5679.jpg

hazetheone
06-04-2008, 03:38 PM
i gave the second one a crit

make that cross upside down

GimmieGotShot
06-04-2008, 03:38 PM
maybe you havent gotten a crit because you havent given one smartie pants

drop one.
06-04-2008, 03:42 PM
ur hand looks like a booty zooyork symbol

g3zt
06-04-2008, 03:44 PM
toys take this too personal.. O.o

NoCanControl
06-04-2008, 03:45 PM
b squareddddddddddddd.........go simple, colors a are a distraction from your letters. your rick is alright, shadow is consistant. get rid of those swirly things.



and...... vandal kid needs to gtfo. SRSLY, I'm not dick hugging on mass, he's cool but not worth dick hugging. Vandal can't talk shit on kids that are worse then you, thats gay. theres tons of guys on BS that smoke even the best in the toy thread dood. and your not even kinging the toy thread, not even close either...

b SQUARED 08
06-04-2008, 03:45 PM
maybe you havent gotten a crit because you havent given one smartie pants

Maybe you should look before you open your mouth. I even critted yours dumbass.

Haze, I suppose I appreciate that excuse for a crit... And thanks NoCanControl for an actual crit.

Bets369R
06-04-2008, 04:00 PM
Dewster exchange
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/003-1.jpg

the s didnt come out how i wanted

Bump over pages of garbage and shit talking.

Apher i would keep the s. it was my favorite letter in your sketch

Mass Appeal
06-04-2008, 04:03 PM
ok mass like i said BATTLE MEEE YOU FUCKKKK
nd ur like fuckin 25 nd been writin for bout 15 years right?
i been writin for 8 months and i bet you anything i could paint better then you so do your self a favor get out of mommys basement go find a job nd not talk shit on the internet cunt

Hahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahaha
25 .. hahahahahhahahahahah
where do you get that from...

say Banana slowley and it sounds like Gullable

bump

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-21.jpg

This says APSEH

b SQUARED 08
06-04-2008, 04:09 PM
I agree with Bets, I like the S the best out of all of your letters, Mass.

(SoS)Viruz
06-04-2008, 04:13 PM
Vandal- Mass is good dude, just accept your toy, thats what i did. That why you post here. So dont get pissed when someone tell you it shitty, cause it most likely is... Just swallow it.

A Mass I thought I was the worst writer you ever seen....... Damn LOL.

fOrSaQeN
06-04-2008, 04:28 PM
bro ur one of the last people that should be sayin shit like this. i really wish mods could ban kids on here just based on stupidity.


http://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/edition2/teevee.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/edition2/teevee.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/edition2/teevee.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/edition2/teevee.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/edition2/teevee.gif

GimmieGotShot
06-04-2008, 04:29 PM
Maybe you should look before your mouth. I even critted yours dumbass.

Haze, I suppose I appreciate that excuse for a crit... And thanks NoCanControl for an actual crit.

maybe im a lazy bastard and only read whats quoted in the post that wants crits. huh? oh yeah. didnt think about that did you

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-04-2008, 04:34 PM
Ya I don't like the fact that 15 people hop on the train and talk shit when I didn't even talk to em but w/e its all good don't care no more really
Mass no beef no more don't care bout it jus post pics from now on
Rasek I doubt ill have a pic for battle tonight I aint gunna be home til late def have one ready tomorrow

NoCanControl
06-04-2008, 04:39 PM
maybe im a lazy bastard and only read whats quoted in the post that wants crits. huh? oh yeah. didnt think about that did you

just face it, your his bitch now....

bets.these don't look as good as your other ones... the middle one needs more positive space in some places.... and the bottom one needs to go a little more simplier......... its really hard for me to comprehend that you can't go wild, cuz your simples and throws are REALLLY good. better then i.... how long you been drawing letters?

GimmieGotShot
06-04-2008, 04:47 PM
so your disowning me nocancontrol???
i told you i could get more KY jelly :(

mind.or.matter
06-04-2008, 04:52 PM
lol ive been off for a while, the toys forum is really fucked up eh?

lol

JETPACK!!
06-04-2008, 04:53 PM
alright if you want its kinda obvious that all the people that i was just aruing with are not going to vote for me but im leaving right now ill PM you by tonight with my pic

guy, i battle with cans. iunno if ive ever battled with a sketch. and if i have, it was a one timer.

holy shit, im eating the most delicious apple i have ever sank my teeth into.

Mass Appeal
06-04-2008, 05:00 PM
why waste your paint on a BS battle ?...lmfao
NoCanControl...do you even write ?

SCIEnce802
06-04-2008, 05:00 PM
wow... i missed a lot of arguing.
kinda bumed i missed out.
Vandal ill battle u
pic a word
and i dont know how to post battles or wut ev so im gunna send my pic to u if u really want to battle someone.

edit: and mass.. i actually like tha last thing u posted ...... add 3d or shadow or wut ev.. finish it up it will prob look dope.

Bets369R
06-04-2008, 05:04 PM
just face it, your his bitch now....

bets.these don't look as good as your other ones... the middle one needs more positive space in some places.... and the bottom one needs to go a little more simplier......... its really hard for me to comprehend that you can't go wild, cuz your simples and throws are REALLLY good. better then i.... how long you been drawing letters?

every time i try doing something more complex i just fuck it all up. i started writing in 03, then stopped for like 3 years while i got my shit back together, then started again in late 06. so basically i started back from scratch in late 06. i get too frustrated with shit so i just stick to simples

SWIV3Ltwo
06-04-2008, 05:40 PM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_16-1-1.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_10.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_11.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_12.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_13.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_14.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_15.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_16.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_5.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_6.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_7.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_8.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_9.jpg

theres a couple things about these pics that i should explain......but im too lazy


so..... CRITZ??


some is old some is new

SWIV3Ltwo
06-04-2008, 05:43 PM
bsquare-simples
mass-nice but im not really feelin that p
bet-nice but work on your colors

Teez-EmM!!!
06-04-2008, 05:50 PM
ive been told im still a toy
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM1300.jpg

eMJayBee
06-04-2008, 05:52 PM
hmmmm, swivel- need to start with simples\\
teez em/ to me the 'm' is too wide, maybe if you squish it together a bit, also loose the random arrows. looks good so far

diff style Im playing with, all 'e's need crits
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture-1.jpg

SCIEnce802
06-04-2008, 06:12 PM
dopppppe

(SoS)Viruz
06-04-2008, 06:17 PM
Nice I cant do that shit. It dope bro.

SCIEnce802
06-04-2008, 06:22 PM
everyone can make 1 dope letter alone... just free hand it, but making the rest of the letters flow is what is whats hard

g3zt
06-04-2008, 06:24 PM
everyone can make 1 dope letter alone... just free hand it, but making the rest of the letters flow is what is whats hard


WELL.. not EVERYONE :o

Mass Appeal
06-04-2008, 06:33 PM
APSEH
For a collab

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gghg.jpg

atlok7
06-04-2008, 06:36 PM
mass that S is fresh

-ShAmEE-
06-04-2008, 06:46 PM
APSEH
For a collab

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gghg.jpg

that gonna be a bitch to lasso! ur fuckin lines! what did i say ermm no taGGs! do u think ur special ras, DO YA!

MarOne...
06-04-2008, 06:50 PM
OH SHITTT

I'm gonna work on mine. o_O'

IlikePie
06-04-2008, 07:58 PM
Not feeling the P at all...

SWIV3Ltwo
06-04-2008, 08:00 PM
thats what i said

CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K
06-04-2008, 08:04 PM
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/4932/hpim0537hu8.jpg

a lil throwie

JETPACK!!
06-04-2008, 08:27 PM
why waste your paint on a BS battle ?...lmfao

A) because im still painting, its not like im e-painting.
B) i paint every chance i get, e-battles are a little more interesting than just posting your shit.
C)its still good practice for can control.

D) unlike the majority of BS, i dont feel like being a BB whore for the rest of my career as a writer.

IlikePie
06-04-2008, 08:28 PM
D) unlike the majority of BS, i dont feel like being a BB whore for the rest of my career as a writer.

Lame.

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-04-2008, 08:45 PM
jetpack since when are you sucha hot shot lol
id love to paint battle you

JETPACK!!
06-04-2008, 08:50 PM
im not a hot shot. i'd just rather paint than sketch. and since i dont know any writers, i resort to BS.

theres another paint battle thats being polled sunday.

should hype that up so i get more pieces this time.

WEEKLY PAINT BATTLE, DUE SUNDAY MORNING. POLLED SUNDAY NIGHT.

squidone
06-04-2008, 08:53 PM
here is a simple i did for an exchange

http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/9363/dsc00389dj1.jpg

i think i messed up the M
Swivel i think you should keep up the simples i really like the red pen one with the faces but one thing i really didnt like were the 2's as Z's

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-04-2008, 09:24 PM
alright jetpack ill try my best im doin a pretty hot spot so ive jus been kinda lookin to see when security comes nd goes
i deff want in tho

MarOne...
06-04-2008, 09:25 PM
nah son, don't paint. Not yet.

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-04-2008, 09:31 PM
nahh i aint not the wild style i do i have a few simps i jus put up i dont have that much can control yet but my simps come out clean so im happy wit em

ND I MIGHT BE GETTIN TO MEET BDUBB THIS WEEKEND FOR THE KID FROM NH

(SoS)Viruz
06-04-2008, 09:36 PM
Yo Squid It nice. Mabey you should have added the Outline? But its a good simp. O yea I got you exchange finsh, but cpmputer is bein a ho and dont was to read my Camrea. Lol.

Maste
06-04-2008, 09:50 PM
jetpack ill paint something if i can for sunday... and yes i actually paint... ive been puttin in work i just dont post every little thing i do on BS for all the kids who will have something to say about it

I GOT CLOUT
06-04-2008, 09:57 PM
Just do your thing man. Dont worry about e-haters.

And JET you know im in. How many kiddies we got signed up?

JETPACK!!
06-04-2008, 10:04 PM
not a clue, not ones told me.. im just hoping people send me pieces.

I GOT CLOUT
06-04-2008, 10:05 PM
Yeah thats what I was gonna say. For every 3 people that say yes, only 1 might drop something.

Ity
06-04-2008, 10:08 PM
me and acnt are gonna try getting something done this weekend.

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-04-2008, 10:13 PM
and also kabre i keep the paintin on backyard boards nd undergroud writers spots not in public yet

Dewster_OnE
06-04-2008, 10:43 PM
x-change i did for aten1

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/233941.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
06-04-2008, 11:16 PM
Just some quick shit.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16092.jpg

JETPACK!!
06-04-2008, 11:16 PM
dewster, not feelin the colors, but structure-wise its good. a capitol A would probably make the bottom sketch stick out more. not feelin the bomb A and E are wack.
word ease, im feelin the bottom. paint that shit guy.

some doodles from throughout the day.

http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/8682/rasek14og4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8718/rasek15yj9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/885/rasek16ph6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
fuckin around with fills, i like the SEK^^^

I GOT CLOUT
06-04-2008, 11:23 PM
Props for actually taking advice Rasek. Shits coming together real nice.

JETPACK!!
06-04-2008, 11:25 PM
whose advice did i take? and where does it show?

Dewster_OnE
06-04-2008, 11:26 PM
fuck u jetpack haha j/p i happen to like them but hey its not my name.. i dont have a writers name mooohahahahaha..
wait wats wrong with my colors? =[

I GOT CLOUT
06-04-2008, 11:26 PM
Haha, well I thought you took mine but nevermind.

JETPACK!!
06-04-2008, 11:29 PM
i probably did, but im blimp bloaw, so my memory is patchy.

let's just say i took your advice, were both happy.


dewster, not feelin the colors, but structure-wise its good. a capitol A would probably make the bottom sketch stick out more. not feelin the bomb A and E are wack.
word ease, im feelin the bottom. paint that shit guy.

some doodles from throughout the day.

http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/8682/rasek14og4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8718/rasek15yj9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/885/rasek16ph6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
fuckin around with fills, i like the SEK^^^

bottom bump

NoCanControl
06-04-2008, 11:31 PM
why waste your paint on a BS battle ?...lmfao
NoCanControl...do you even write ?

nope. why you ask?

wesos
06-04-2008, 11:43 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j308/wefesofos/basontag.jpg
was bored at work, BASON on paper towel

drapes1125
06-04-2008, 11:54 PM
Wesos-The letters are not that bad but put them closer together

Mo152
06-05-2008, 12:38 AM
putting letters closer together does not in turn make the letters look better.

work on your 3d it looks kinda whack.
and rasek i like your K in the bottom one but the R is fucked up lol

I GOT CLOUT
06-05-2008, 01:10 AM
Haha, but anyway it shows in the RAS, you leaned the R back a little to the left and switched up the A to flow better with the rest of it.

SWIV3Ltwo
06-05-2008, 01:15 AM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_16-1-1.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_10.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_11.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_12.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_13.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_14.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_15.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_16.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_5.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_6.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_7.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_8.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_9.jpg

theres a couple things about these pics that i should explain......but im too lazy


so..... CRITZ??


some is old some is new

bump

rowdysk4nker
06-05-2008, 01:21 AM
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d175/randomhero6979/DSC01610.jpg
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d175/randomhero6979/DSC01609.jpg

Dying to live
06-05-2008, 01:42 AM
bottem one looks like a bite

rowdysk4nker
06-05-2008, 02:03 AM
the purple one?

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-05-2008, 02:39 AM
APSEH
For a collab

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gghg.jpg
this shit is wack.

Cyto Aka Son1c
06-05-2008, 02:42 AM
jetpack - love the progress

heres some old shit, I haven't done a peice in awhile

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9365/dscn0479it9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9365/dscn0479it9.12688853b7.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=515&i=dscn0479it9.jpg)
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/378/dscn0480sy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/378/dscn0480sy1.88b338ac15.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=515&i=dscn0480sy1.jpg)
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4262/dscn0486xm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4262/dscn0486xm4.e6070e4a53.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=389&i=dscn0486xm4.jpg)

Techkanuck
06-05-2008, 03:01 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture379.jpg
something i sketched quick tonight, might go with this angle for a while

Jetpack- Your stuff is getting nicer and nicer, I'd try to make the K flow with the R more and they'd start to look tight

BASON- I'd overlap the top of the B if you're going to on the other letters to make it more defined and flow better imo

I GOT CLOUT
06-05-2008, 04:07 AM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16093.jpg

Mass Appeal
06-05-2008, 04:44 AM
nope. why you ask?

hm...i just dont recall seeing your work thats all. ;)
And Teze...thanks :rolleyes:...are you allowing the production thread or what ?

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-05-2008, 06:25 AM
ease the bottom one is nasty good shit

rasek i dont like the bottom one very much but the middle one i like it just seems that its flows together nicer because the K is the same size as everything else

TaskOne
06-05-2008, 06:42 AM
dewster, not feelin the colors, but structure-wise its good. a capitol A would probably make the bottom sketch stick out more. not feelin the bomb A and E are wack.
word ease, im feelin the bottom. paint that shit guy.

some doodles from throughout the day.

http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/8682/rasek14og4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8718/rasek15yj9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/885/rasek16ph6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
fuckin around with fills, i like the SEK^^^

Feelin the simples bro they are comming along! Improve the R a lil bit tho

drop one.
06-05-2008, 06:47 AM
jetpack - love the progress

heres some old shit, I haven't done a peice in awhile

[/URL]
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9365/dscn0479it9.12688853b7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[URL="http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=515&i=dscn0480sy1.jpg"]http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/378/dscn0480sy1.88b338ac15.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4262/dscn0486xm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4262/dscn0486xm4.e6070e4a53.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=389&i=dscn0486xm4.jpg)u write sock?

fonone
06-05-2008, 07:21 AM
ok mass like i said BATTLE MEEE YOU FUCKKKK
nd ur like fuckin 25 nd been writin for bout 15 years right?
i been writin for 8 months and i bet you anything i could paint better then you so do your self a favor get out of mommys basement go find a job nd not talk shit on the internet cunt


mass appeal man dont battle this guy BRO, dont want to humiliate your self, this guys been writing mad long and has near pefected his wildstyle, FUCK THE HATERS,

EAZE UP YOH.

drapes1125
06-05-2008, 08:04 AM
I got clout-You have some good flow.Im loving it.

fonone
06-05-2008, 08:07 AM
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8715/jun05179af4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8715/jun05179af4.f7f940081c.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=210&i=jun05179af4.jpg)

we had a sock here, apparently he moved to melbourne because they were building a case on him or something, who knows.

vois getting better, in that one id just like to see the O a bit further away from the V,

ease - bottom one is nice, maybe change up the A though, it doesnt flow with the other letters imo.

Dewster_OnE
06-05-2008, 08:08 AM
the n kinda looks like a k but still fresh

Shiva.
06-05-2008, 08:12 AM
isn't it a K ?
your K kinda looks line an N

fonone
06-05-2008, 08:16 AM
it is a K :D, i usually write irekn but i didnt have room for the N so i left it off

Shiva.
06-05-2008, 08:20 AM
i knew it :D

Dewster_OnE
06-05-2008, 08:24 AM
geez haha i was like thats a nice k... but then i thought thats not what he writes lol so its an N... i feel sloe =[

Dewster_OnE
06-05-2008, 08:51 AM
quick sketch

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/094845.jpg
crits porfavor.

injury
06-05-2008, 09:03 AM
dew- i can't really see the lines that well (vision=not what it used to be) but from what i can see, i like it. hit that with a ballpoint or something and c'mon back

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-05-2008, 09:13 AM
Irek that is nasty I love your style I used to always try nd do shit like that then it wasn't working to good but neways dope shit

Dewster_OnE
06-05-2008, 09:14 AM
thats what i was gonna do.. but just looking for somw crits before i clean and ink it up

Liquid Soul
06-05-2008, 09:23 AM
I messed up the black outlines, really need a better pen, its too thick:

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/5392/dscf2355ky7.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-05-2008, 09:43 AM
Smez that aint bad jus the outline is really thick and the m is a lil fucked up you should more on the fill in add a second color

Liquid Soul
06-05-2008, 09:52 AM
Smez that aint bad jus the outline is really thick and the m is a lil fucked up you should more on the fill in add a second color


Thanks man, I definitely agree with everything you've said, cheers for the comment :)

fonone
06-05-2008, 10:30 AM
smez new to graffiti thread please... im not trying to start shit but youll get better quicker if you use bars and do simples...

squidone
06-05-2008, 10:36 AM
dew i agree with injury i cant really see it that well but what i do see looks good ink and then re post

Liquid Soul
06-05-2008, 11:19 AM
smez new to graffiti thread please... im not trying to start shit but youll get better quicker if you use bars and do simples...

I did start off with simples/bars and it grew into that piece, disheartening to say the least. Nevermind...

NoCanControl
06-05-2008, 11:33 AM
smez, hahahahah, thats a really ugly name. but anyways. new to graff thread.

irekn, i think your I should be the most dominate letter, more then the k and the e. hopefully you get what i mean.

sock, watch the parellel lines in your bars make sure they stay parellel.

jetpack, your getting good, you should fuck around with wildstyle, or bend the shit and add little extentions out of your letter.

dewster, make your bars skinnier, you don't leave any room to bend them. and you don't leave enough negitive space.

fonone
06-05-2008, 11:36 AM
it doesnt look like your using bars