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JETPACK!!
06-05-2008, 12:06 PM
jetpack, your getting good, you should fuck around with wildstyle, or bend the shit and add little extentions out of your letter.

nahhh son, wildstyles are wack imo. i like havin my shit readable. im gonna start coming up with some crazy straight fills though. if the fills crazy, simple letters can be hard enough to read.

im talkin like, 10 color fills.

NoCanControl
06-05-2008, 12:08 PM
right on.

Tokenkaligreens
06-05-2008, 12:08 PM
ya a crazy fill can give a simp a whole new feel imo, but its gotta be done right.

fonone
06-05-2008, 12:20 PM
crazy - more nuts than a cashew
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/4553/ireknasyx0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/4553/ireknasyx0.f5fd8c165a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=363&i=ireknasyx0.jpg)
irekkkknn.

I GOT CLOUT
06-05-2008, 12:53 PM
Thats so tight dude.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16096.jpg

Tried 3-d instead of a drop cause it looked too busy, and tried a different A on the second.

letsgobombin
06-05-2008, 01:39 PM
my old simple with a charac instead of an o like toke suggested, i reckon it looks pretty good
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1221.jpg
and the individual inked charac
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1222.jpg
ease- i preferd the holes in your bottom one instead of the current lines and the a on the top could easily be confused for a z
irekn- i love your simples but i think that you should put the swirl thats inside the n on to the extension on the right of it

Mass Appeal
06-05-2008, 01:50 PM
ya a crazy fill can give a simp a whole new feel imo, but its gotta be done right.

no...simples are what they are....simple...you dont need a good fill to make a simple look good...you need good letters.

mexico
06-05-2008, 01:56 PM
fonone_ ill
igotclout_ I like the bottom one, good colors/letters
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc242/ibenpwnzed/DSC01061.jpg
not sure what to say about this

I GOT CLOUT
06-05-2008, 02:00 PM
LetsGoBombin - What holes in my second one? In the 3-d?

Tokenkaligreens
06-05-2008, 02:09 PM
no...simples are what they are....simple...you dont need a good fill to make a simple look good...you need good letters.

This I know, but if your letters are already established, a crazy fill can make them look even better. That what I meant.

letsgobombin
06-05-2008, 02:15 PM
ease- i mean you used to have just normal letters but the line you put inside is worse

Mo152
06-05-2008, 02:36 PM
My new G will post up other letter once i structure them.. crits about the letter itself?

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/6462/img00107cw8.jpg

NoCanControl
06-05-2008, 02:40 PM
i like it.

Dewster_OnE
06-05-2008, 02:42 PM
inked up
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/154157.jpg

knightsafe
06-05-2008, 02:58 PM
sketch in progress

http://photos-g.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v253/194/52/307000039/n307000039_6950_7773.jpg

GaZm13
06-05-2008, 03:10 PM
My new G will post up other letter once i structure them.. crits about the letter itself?

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/6462/img00107cw8.jpg

I like the G. It can be a difficult letter. I definitely have trouble with that letter.

NoCanControl
06-05-2008, 03:19 PM
new to graffiti thread for knightsafe.

knightsafe
06-05-2008, 03:55 PM
watup control

Mo152
06-05-2008, 04:00 PM
I like the G. It can be a difficult letter. I definitely have trouble with that letter.

For some reason out of all the letters i do G seems to be the only one that ever looks good lol, and my U sometimes

-ShAmEE-
06-05-2008, 04:02 PM
I like the G. It can be a difficult letter. I definitely have trouble with that letter.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/12-1.jpg
theres mine bitch!

CT08
06-05-2008, 04:31 PM
Ease that second one is dope

Shiva.
06-05-2008, 05:25 PM
watup control

he says you should go to the new to graff thread, i't somewhere in the toy section

Evasion Of Invasion
06-05-2008, 05:57 PM
Shamee - i like that G i wanna c how u balance it out in a piece i think the arrow on the left should be a lil more defined tho
Jek - i like the top one, i say u make the outline of all the letters a thicker black
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture140-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture142-1.jpg
crits?

Bets369R
06-05-2008, 06:01 PM
evade i like the A, the D is ok but needs some work on the loop. the other letters are too skinny, andf the handstyle on your arm is wack. too many add ons, and the only skin ink should touch is girl boobs.

Eack
06-05-2008, 06:47 PM
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/9729/eraseyellowfadewa8.th.jpg (http://img520.imageshack.us/my.php?image=eraseyellowfadewa8.jpg)

JETPACK!!
06-05-2008, 06:50 PM
eack, im not a big fan of your steeze. but do what you do man.

try an keep the widths of your bars more even, your horizontal bars are too thin compared to your other bars.

i'd try an keep your E's the same, two different E's are kinna mehh

Eack
06-05-2008, 07:01 PM
word! thx for the advice.... ill keep that in mind..

i totaly agree handsteezes are my weakest part of graff... i dont seem to b good at it..

i have to practice more

Chump
06-05-2008, 07:04 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/t53exg.jpg
throw...crits?
evade- not feeling the E.. maybe alil to thin

Bets369R
06-05-2008, 07:07 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/t53exg.jpg
throw...crits?
evade- not feeling the E.. maybe alil to thin

its a little to neat for me..if you get what im saying. make it more wild and flared out and itll look dope. but keep the same letter structure

Chump
06-05-2008, 07:10 PM
word... im going to, i just finally found a K and E that im content with...

sex without condoms
06-05-2008, 07:23 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/190230-1.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/185442.jpg

got nothing.

and from today
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/201654.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/201729.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/201621.jpg

Bets369R
06-05-2008, 08:02 PM
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/001-4.jpg

crits on what ot change before i finish it up?

Sex- thats the same style ive been seeing from you for like a year. give it some variation

Dying to live
06-05-2008, 08:33 PM
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/sdffff.gif

meh got bored and photoshopped it =D

Dewster_OnE
06-05-2008, 08:33 PM
bumped for crits
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/154157.jpg

OfesOfor
06-05-2008, 08:33 PM
Rasek i like your stuff man

but your comment about BS whores and your graffiti "carreer"
are you seriously making money doing this right now?



loving it as usual sex. :x :x :x shoes and bitchs on lok<33333333

atlok7
06-05-2008, 08:41 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture142-1.jpg
crits?

wow. you drew a handstyle on your arm with what it looks like to be a permanent marker? if your gonna draw on skin, make it some chicks breasts and make it a piece with paint pens.

Haze..
06-05-2008, 09:01 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/vimf77.jpg
crit?

Haze..
06-05-2008, 09:01 PM
was bored and tried to make a throwie for the weekly battle but didnt work out too well.

JETPACK!!
06-05-2008, 09:13 PM
Rasek i like your stuff man

but your comment about BS whores and your graffiti "carreer"
are you seriously making money doing this right now?

you misinterpreted what i said. when i say "graffiti career" i meant however long im writing. not an actual career.

you gotta eat, shit and breathe graff man. ive prolly put more hours into sketches an pieces than any job ive had..

Bets369R
06-05-2008, 09:57 PM
id put that in the canvas thread

BigBlueViolence
06-05-2008, 10:09 PM
thanks bro

TaskOne
06-05-2008, 10:13 PM
Working on simples, crits?http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Simple001.jpg

Zombie work on simples,
Dewster, by the look of it your going to complex, I could be wrong tho.
Dying to Live that looks hot! S is to wide though homie.\
Bets, those are gunna be some nice letters!
Sex, im always a fan ;)

La Coka Nostra
06-05-2008, 10:19 PM
NWP?
*****s with puppets?

TaskOne
06-05-2008, 10:22 PM
Yea, or Neatly Wasting Paint baby.

TaskOne
06-05-2008, 10:23 PM
Working on simples, crits?http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Simple001.jpg

Zombie work on simples,
Dewster, by the look of it your going to complex, I could be wrong tho.
Dying to Live that looks hot! S is to wide though homie.\
Bets, those are gunna be some nice letters!
Sex, im always a fan ;)
Bottom Bump

Bets369R
06-05-2008, 10:31 PM
lose the fill..or just the green with money signs. not feelin the rasta colors its too played out

letters are dope

king sandstorm (KOGC)
06-05-2008, 10:37 PM
see task...toy forums you get better crits anyway...i acctually kinda like it btw

Dewster_OnE
06-05-2008, 10:39 PM
can i plz get some critz..?? i even asked nicely jeez

king sandstorm (KOGC)
06-05-2008, 10:47 PM
^ looks really clean..dont really have any crits though...
see how it looks with some color?

Dewster_OnE
06-05-2008, 10:49 PM
haha no1 gave me crits so i started fillin it all uglly lol
not good at color schemes neways

TaskOne
06-05-2008, 11:09 PM
see task...toy forums you get better crits anyway...i acctually kinda like it btw

Shut the fuck up kid, you dont get crits in the Black Book section. And bombing science is full of assholes do you think I care what some kid online says about my graff?

king sandstorm (KOGC)
06-05-2008, 11:11 PM
;)i donno..im just sayin i liked it

TaskOne
06-05-2008, 11:12 PM
Your Dp Is Runescape Like What The Fuck!!!!

fonone
06-05-2008, 11:15 PM
crazy - more nuts than a cashew
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/4553/ireknasyx0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/4553/ireknasyx0.f5fd8c165a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=363&i=ireknasyx0.jpg)
irekkkknn.

bump

hazetheone
06-05-2008, 11:21 PM
lets do an exchange fon

Bets369R
06-05-2008, 11:22 PM
Shut the fuck up kid, you dont get crits in the Black Book section. And bombing science is full of assholes do you think I care what some kid online says about my graff?

why post if you dont want peoples opinion. you must care enough to post them online.

Dewster_OnE
06-05-2008, 11:39 PM
so i colored it..
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/003436.jpg

hazetheone
06-05-2008, 11:41 PM
and it looks even worse
connect all of the bars
that just looks dumb

MarOne...
06-05-2008, 11:53 PM
Shut the fuck up kid, you dont get crits in the Black Book section. And bombing science is full of assholes do you think I care what some kid online says about my graff?

hey, don't be posting in the bb section when your shit is just as bad as the next toy.



and IREKN- I like that. Take out the curl in the N

Thrice
06-05-2008, 11:55 PM
Looking good Dew, nice 3D and color choice.
Comic book style! POW!
http://i31.tinypic.com/2qtia9u.jpg

calculating infinity
06-06-2008, 01:43 AM
you need to work on your letters all being the same size as well as flowing with each other and if youre doing a comic book style thing try copying the letters straight from the comic book for awhile till they look nice and flow with each other. theyre not unique enough to be considered biting anyways.

Mo152
06-06-2008, 03:29 AM
bombing science is full of assholes do you think I care what some kid online says about my graff?

then why are you posting it? dose it give you the adrenaline rush like bombing. or is it that sense of pride, like when your father pats you on you back and says, "good job son" your a fuckin joke.

if you honestly don't care what people think on here then leave, trust me, i think we could handle the loss, in-fact 97% of the people on here would never notice

so shut the fuck up take crits like a big boy, practice, don't talk shit, give good crits, or get the fuck out. its quite simple

Chump
06-06-2008, 08:32 AM
http://i28.tinypic.com/t53exg.jpg
throw...crits?
evade- not feeling the E.. maybe alil to thin

bump
task- im a fan...

Thrice
06-06-2008, 08:57 AM
ya ya i know, i was kind of messing around. As for biting......not so much.

Bossman-
06-06-2008, 11:55 AM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Simple001.jpg
Drop the money signs, they dont loook good at all. The S is odd some how, work on it abit, make it match!
;)


http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture140-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture142-1.jpg
kepp working on the first stuff, i really like that. all has flow, even away from eachother. im a fan of most of your stuff. but get that handstyle on a bus or something lol not your arm man. But yea thicken that E up a little bit.


http://i28.tinypic.com/t53exg.jpg
I like it good stuff, but the S and O do not match, not so round on the s, kinda match your H.



http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk35/ILOVEWEED_album/Picture933681092.jpg
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk35/ILOVEWEED_album/Picture933681091.jpg
the first one is kinda dope. But erase the block lines, the N and K look like you got lazy though, the first block of the N is way out there, on its own, not good. The second pic needs a lot of work. everything is too thin, the holes in the letters i dont like.



http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/003436.jpg
Likin the colours, keep workin bud

Crits under the flicks.

maddox
06-06-2008, 12:10 PM
tdone change ur name or put something at the end of ya name coz i write tank.here some old peaces nd some new stuff.sorry for the pics being fuzzy.
task-that simple is lookin ill
Dewster_OnE-likin the orange peace

old stuff here

http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/9384/picture018sm5.jpg

http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/8938/picture019ye2.jpg

here some new ish

http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/7705/picture020mi4.jpg

http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/6522/picture021kd1.jpg

http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/3024/picture022oy4.jpg

http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/7531/picture024yk1.jpg

TaskOne
06-06-2008, 12:23 PM
New simple, crits?
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Blues003.jpg

Chump
06-06-2008, 12:26 PM
maddox hate to tell ya... but your not the only person who writes tank

TaskOne
06-06-2008, 12:27 PM
then why are you posting it? dose it give you the adrenaline rush like bombing. or is it that sense of pride, like when your father pats you on you back and says, "good job son" your a fuckin joke.

if you honestly don't care what people think on here then leave, trust me, i think we could handle the loss, in-fact 97% of the people on here would never notice

so shut the fuck up take crits like a big boy, practice, don't talk shit, give good crits, or get the fuck out. its quite simple

I post it because I can, its the internet! And I really love reading these creative responses "when your father pats you on the back" LMAO!! Dude post some of your shit please.

Chump
06-06-2008, 12:27 PM
then crits mine lol

TaskOne
06-06-2008, 12:31 PM
Chump I was really diggin your old CHUMP throws.

Chump
06-06-2008, 12:44 PM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/6113/chumppv1.png
OLD
i just ran out of ideas... and i started to hate the letters

TaskOne
06-06-2008, 12:45 PM
Dude there is definatly room to improve (especially the U), stick widit.

Chump
06-06-2008, 12:47 PM
nah i changed my name about 3 months ago... but i still mess around with it every once and a while... but i was super amped about the C when i did it

TaskOne
06-06-2008, 12:49 PM
Yea its my favorite letter outa all of them haha.

GaZm13
06-06-2008, 12:55 PM
I think it all works pretty well CHUMP.

Chump
06-06-2008, 12:59 PM
yea... i might try some new stuff with chump... my style has changed alot...always liked the name

Drakula
06-06-2008, 01:46 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/60f15a70.jpg

Photobucket fucks quality up badly.

Keep that shit up TASK! Simples are real nice.

knightsafe
06-06-2008, 02:31 PM
http://photos-h.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v253/194/52/307000039/n307000039_6951_7778.jpg

squidone
06-06-2008, 02:35 PM
dont add balls to the end of your bars it looks weird

TaskOne
06-06-2008, 02:37 PM
Keep that shit up TASK! Simples are real nice.

Thanks bro! Lovin that structure on your YBAR

six oh 3 graff
06-06-2008, 03:48 PM
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/8402/0605081013pp5.jpg

Kinda fucked it up with the marker, crits?

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-06-2008, 04:25 PM
chump that is good idk why you stopped diggin the letters i think there good

zeta i better not see that shit around do simples

Bets369R
06-06-2008, 04:39 PM
New simple, crits?
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Blues003.jpg

dope simples. take the bombing science handstyle off your shit. that just shows that your doing these sketches for bombing science..and that is the complete wrong reason to be writing.

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-06-2008, 04:41 PM
that task is a bite!:eek:

letsgobombin
06-06-2008, 04:42 PM
put up or shut up

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-06-2008, 04:43 PM
are yuo talking to me?hah

letsgobombin
06-06-2008, 04:46 PM
yup

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-06-2008, 04:48 PM
i think i put up more

Bets369R
06-06-2008, 04:50 PM
new shit

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/001-5.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/002-4.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/003-2.jpg

crits?...

letsgobombin
06-06-2008, 04:51 PM
i meant put up a pic showing where he bit from or dont say anything

Bets369R
06-06-2008, 04:51 PM
i think i put up more

he means show the picture he bit from or dont call him out.

AZTEKA
06-06-2008, 05:05 PM
zeta- work on not making your letters overlap each other alot, other than that it look alright.
task- that simple looks dope, keep up the work.
bets- dope styles, and that brown one liner looks cool too.

Bossman-
06-06-2008, 05:09 PM
BETS THAT BOOK IS BALLIN! no matter how hard i try, i can never make my book look decent. thats why it doesnt get posted, i have crap in between everything good and it looks garbage...

Please lets start shit with TASK unless we got mad proofs. Dont go beef startin and what not cause im tired of that stuff.

BTW IM LOVIN THE TASK OF WHICH WE SPEAK! ILL! i might go buy more blue paint now... lol. no i already have enough..

brunorod
06-06-2008, 05:14 PM
- six oh 3 graff- Try to get a better letter structure, try to keep it simple.

- Task One- Very nice simple, try to stick your letters closer together and look try some different styles.

- Bets- Very clean shit man, I'd try sticking your letters closer together though. That fish is dope xD
-------------------------------

Here's my sketch, it looks a bit weird where the letters join because I haven't erased some lines. Could I get some crits?

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e38/brunorod/DSC00006.jpg

Mass Appeal
06-06-2008, 05:21 PM
I post it because I can, its the internet! And I really love reading these creative responses "when your father pats you on the back" LMAO!! Dude post some of your shit please.

Seriously...
every time i see you post a picture and someone negativly crits you you begin to whine....look....your doing simples...simple need to be straight...equal bar sizes ( widths , length ) ... and definatly no fills...simples are about rocking straight dope letters...without adding stupid fills...and im sorry to say...but you aint got any of them on lock.....read the " New 2 Graff " thread...learn to use bars properly...and please...draw a whole 15 pages of S's...cos yours " suck "....or in my words...wank

and please for the sake of this thread...dont reply to every negative comment...cos to be honest..nobody gives a fuck.

Bets..nawt bad...liking teh brown bottom one...the char is nice too

Drakulaaaa my Raby Baby..you know i love you babe. :p

Bossman-
06-06-2008, 05:26 PM
Here's my sketch, it looks a bit weird where the letters join because I haven't erased some lines. Could I get some crits?

You already said it erase the lines. but also try to make it all 3d. its 3d or its not, a mix doesnt work. or maybe its just not eresed yet, some work on the s, but other than that, just continue to practice. remember practice practice practice practice practice. oh! and not just practice, perfect practice. Perfect Practice makes Perfection, nothing else does.

JETPACK!!
06-06-2008, 05:33 PM
- six oh 3 graff- Try to get a better letter structure, try to keep it simple.

take your own advice, homie. simpler, keep your bar widths either the same or similar


zeta i better not see that shit around do simples

and you, just need the shut the fuck up.

you even know what simples are? or you just regurgitating what others say.
those are simples, they just arn't the best.

it's still a lot better than your wack shit.

faggot.


zeta dont push your letters so close, space them out a lil bit. im talkin the T and A in particular. i do the same shit on my A's, you'll get it. just keep sketchin to get your lines crisper.

raby, how you pronounce your name? ray-be or rha-be?

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-06-2008, 05:39 PM
jetpack your a lil faggot blow me i dont understand how you feel cool by talkin over the computer u must tell all your cool friends

and my shit i paint is simple i just dont post painted shit cuz im smarter then that hoe

Mass Appeal
06-06-2008, 05:40 PM
Vandal needs banning

JETPACK!!
06-06-2008, 05:43 PM
dont get all butt hurt, its the truth kid.

your shits wack, your too cocky.

i dont feel cool by speakin real talk, it needed to be said. if you were standing in front of my face, i'd tell you straight, and laugh as i say it. but the only interaction i can get with you.. is over the computer.

get a grip on yourself, fuck

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-06-2008, 05:45 PM
lol ok i need banning cuz this kid talks shit
and youve never seen anything ive painted nd you say my shits wack nice i got writers who are 10 times better then you helping me with my shit so what do u think u sayin that to me mean?!?! nathinnnnnn

Bets369R
06-06-2008, 05:46 PM
- six oh 3 graff- Try to get a better letter structure, try to keep it simple.

- Task One- Very nice simple, try to stick your letters closer together and look try some different styles.

- Bets- Very clean shit man, I'd try sticking your letters closer together though. That fish is dope xD
-------------------------------

Here's my sketch, it looks a bit weird where the letters join because I haven't erased some lines. Could I get some crits?

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e38/brunorod/DSC00006.jpg


Seriously...
every time i see you post a picture and someone negativly crits you you begin to whine....look....your doing simples...simple need to be straight...equal bar sizes ( widths , length ) ... and definatly no fills...simples are about rocking straight dope letters...without adding stupid fills...and im sorry to say...but you aint got any of them on lock.....read the " New 2 Graff " thread...learn to use bars properly...and please...draw a whole 15 pages of S's...cos yours " suck "....or in my words...wank

and please for the sake of this thread...dont reply to every negative comment...cos to be honest..nobody gives a fuck.

Bets..nawt bad...liking teh brown bottom one...the char is nice too

Drakulaaaa my Raby Baby..you know i love you babe. :p


i cant take credit for the charak. its cut from a magazine. i put alot of cool looking mag clippings and shit in my book for inspiration later on

(SoS)Viruz
06-06-2008, 05:52 PM
Damn.... NVM, just clam down. Vandal. I going to tell you what mass told me...... YOUR TOY!!! GET OVER IT. Accept the fact that these pplz. Give Hard Crits. DAmn, which is a good thing by the way cause it helps you improve. Like they said just use Bars. Start simple. Thats all.

Mass see my booboo thorwie lol.

JETPACK!!
06-06-2008, 05:55 PM
lol ok i need banning cuz this kid talks shit
and youve never seen anything ive painted nd you say my shits wack nice i got writers who are 10 times better then you helping me with my shit so what do u think u sayin that to me mean?!?! nathinnnnnn

they may be 10 times better than me. but your 100 times worse than i am. get off my tip.

i may not have seen your painted shit, but ive seen your sketches. if your sketches are wack, you think your painted shits gonna look any better??

if you got that butthurt an took it personally, settle it with a paint battle. otherwise, shut the fuck up.

kthnxbye, no more beef tonight.

letsgobombin
06-06-2008, 06:18 PM
what do you think?
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1221.jpg
sha?- do it with a single outline then re-post it

SWIV3Ltwo
06-06-2008, 06:58 PM
pocs- looking good....mabe make the bottom of the c a little wider

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_18.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_19.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_20.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_21.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_22.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_23.jpg

all quickies ill make one soon that i take my time on because these suck

Mass Appeal
06-06-2008, 07:00 PM
People whom are in the the production....check my latest post in the PRODUCTION THREAD...thanks

SWIV3Ltwo
06-06-2008, 07:04 PM
is my last one with the dolla sign good enough (when done)?

Drakula
06-06-2008, 07:09 PM
raby, how you pronounce your name? ray-be or rha-be?

It can be both really.Also Rabbi like a Jewish preacher.

(SoS)Viruz
06-06-2008, 07:26 PM
KliC- Just space it out more, Try to make alll you letter even. Nd use Bars. Look at the new to Graff. Thread. But Yea Cuase you K really look a lil funny to me. and Space the I cause it looks like I[

SCIEnce802
06-06-2008, 07:51 PM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/6113/chumppv1.png

i really like this throwie...
i dont see how any one wouldnt.

SOAR into outer SPACE
06-06-2008, 09:31 PM
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/1738/blackbook002wc7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/4536/blackbook001lc3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7749/blackbook003hq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/9466/blackbook004eg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/9955/blackbook005iu1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/3989/blackbook006ru0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/5682/blackbook007lp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/9783/blackbook009cm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/9783/blackbook009cm4.ddea68c96f.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=372&i=blackbook009cm4.jpg)

EDIT: fixed the thumbnails

SWIV3Ltwo
06-06-2008, 09:39 PM
you have to uncheck the thumbnail button

I<3Trendz
06-06-2008, 09:52 PM
what do you think?
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1221.jpg
sha?- do it with a single outline then re-post it

sickest thing on this page

Shoook
06-06-2008, 10:00 PM
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/production.jpg

Chump
06-06-2008, 10:29 PM
i really like this throwie...
i dont see how any one wouldnt.
seriously?... people are liking my old crap style rather then my new style... kinda depressing lol

(SoS)Viruz
06-06-2008, 10:37 PM
Shook- The K dosent flow.

Bossman-
06-06-2008, 10:43 PM
Shook- The K dosent flow.

Neither does the colour scheme, too transparent and something just doesnt pop. Keep workin at it though. (Some good to go with the bad. not everyone here is extreme hard crits. but honestly vandal shut up, you been in the game for what? 8 months i think i read one of your posts. maybe you should take a break if it makes you this angry. its supposed to make you feel good not bad. you need a new game. try monopoly)

(SoS)Viruz
06-06-2008, 10:47 PM
Neither does the colour scheme, too transparent and something just doesnt pop. Keep workin at it though. (Some good to go with the bad. not everyone here is extreme hard crits. but honestly vandal shut up, you been in the game for what? 8 months i think i read one of your posts. maybe you should take a break if it makes you this angry. its supposed to make you feel good not bad. you need a new game. try monopoly)

:D You Said try monopoly!!! ROFL. Hell Naw. Yea I just didnt feel like getting in to detail so I just put the first thing I saw. Lol. But Ture. Make the outlines pop Chage the lil thing under the k materfact just change the K.

Bossman-
06-06-2008, 10:53 PM
hellz yea monopoly. that makes me happy. then i realise i may have all my friends money but we are all still broke. damn.

Yea that K definatly needs the boot. try another one, and get some really BAM! colours.

NEW PAGE!

(SoS)Viruz
06-06-2008, 10:57 PM
Boss you funny dude. " I get all my freinds money. But in realty Im still broke. DAMN" LOL that shit is Funny.

Also You Try the Bas, to get you letter to flow. "THE BLOCKBUSTERS"

Techkanuck
06-07-2008, 02:35 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture380.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture382.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture381.jpg

Mo152
06-07-2008, 02:52 AM
jetpack- thanks for saying what I was thinking, saved me a lot of time. same for mass appeal.

letsgobombin- you P is huge, the bottom of the C is small, and the middle of the S is small. fix that.

Techkanuck-that first one is decent, but still plenty of room for improvement, dont worry about giving your V that little swoosh thing off the top left bar, and other "flair" like that. and you really honestly do not need to worry about 3D, coloring or any of that bullshit work on your letters waist 1000's of pieces of paper before you waist your time trying to make something look better, cuz on here, most people know letters come first. that goes for everyone in general who has poor/no/some letter structure.

Shook- new to graff thread.
SOAR into outer SPACE- new to graff thread
SWIV3Ltwo- new to graff thread.

and all you fairy fucks who keep saying put your letters closer together to people who have no srtucture, just stop, its repetitive, and when people cant even draw there own letters properly, they def do not need to be worried about how to space them. stop giving shitty crits, so you can get some back.

Bets369R
06-07-2008, 03:00 AM
no bets in that huge crit post :(

letsgobombin
06-07-2008, 03:07 AM
mo- the width is supposed to taper

Mo152
06-07-2008, 03:09 AM
my apologies bets. i like the green bets on the first flick, and the yellow "steb" in the second one. most of the letter have really good structure, there is room for improvement on the huge brown one. i think your proportions on the letter widths are off. other then that, keep spittin' em out

i know the e is fucked up, but thats cuz i was goin fast before work and totaly went retarded for a second.
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/8061/img00110sa9.jpg

Mo152
06-07-2008, 03:13 AM
mo- the width is supposed to taper

then taper all your letters in the same spot, be consistent.

sorry for the double post. :/

EDIT: i deleted the useless talk on my part

letsgobombin
06-07-2008, 03:17 AM
i was going to but when i did it on the end of the s it looked really weird
edit: mo, i'll join you

Mass Appeal
06-07-2008, 05:07 AM
wow...Pm each other that shit...i aint gonna even bother reading it...way to waste a page
vois .. nice

taking over 603
06-07-2008, 12:28 PM
Im not gettin into the middle of that bull *hit...
In progress, crits?

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c89/Djskilz/atthebeach047.jpg

La Coka Nostra
06-07-2008, 12:39 PM
don't connect your letters.

I GOT CLOUT
06-07-2008, 02:11 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16111.jpg

Eh...just some quick shit

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16108.jpg

And I dont know if I like this or not yet...

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16110.jpg

JETPACK!!
06-07-2008, 02:12 PM
ease, your painting for this weekend?:D:D

I GOT CLOUT
06-07-2008, 02:15 PM
Got it done last night, well...sorta. I have to go back and finish it up, cause we had to bail. Nosy fuckers with dogs...

letsgobombin
06-07-2008, 02:18 PM
new style that i quite like
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1223.jpg
ease-i dont like the last one, the one above, if your going to use a lower case r try to make it suit more the kink throws it off, i like the top one except the bottom of the s, try to flatten it out more and the side of the a just seem to peel away so the bar underneath looks strange
sins- dont worry about 3d for now and don't connect your letters, do the full outline of the letters
gupe- i'm not a big fan of this one, your u looks like a h your p looks a bit like an a and you should put a bit on the bottom of the e going up, also use normal bars not random blocks
vois- the first one is ok just take off the swishy things and keep the bars on the s the same width, its a bit wavey in some places, the second one is hard to look at in detail because of the colours if you have to use colours for now just keep it single, light fill, dark outline and shadow and the forcefield is just preference although try to stay away from colours close to the outline, the third one is my favourite, just bring the o out more, take the bit off the v, fix the indent of the i( it goes in too far where it meets the o)and if your going to make your s taper make all of the letters match, other than keeping all your widths the same its coming on
done!:rolleyes:
anyone down for an exchange? i wanna try some new letters with my new style. half decent people please

six oh 3 graff
06-07-2008, 04:33 PM
chump that is good idk why you stopped diggin the letters i think there good

zeta i better not see that shit around do simples

That is a simple
and thanks for the advice guys

I GOT CLOUT
06-07-2008, 04:38 PM
Don't listen to him.

Mass Appeal
06-07-2008, 05:24 PM
Pocs...the letters to me look bland...they all follow the same form...switch it up ... nice bar work though

SWIV3Ltwo
06-07-2008, 05:29 PM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_23.jpg
bump for crits

jupsick
06-07-2008, 05:32 PM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_23.jpg
bump for crits

i really didnt like that S -_- at least u coult erase those lines...it would look better...
every thing els is ok...keep working

taking over 603
06-07-2008, 05:46 PM
Krispy- That bottom ones dope, I would just make both side of the Y the same hieght.

Mass Appeal
06-07-2008, 06:01 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fee.jpg

For the collab
APHR

Bets369R
06-07-2008, 06:04 PM
didnt you say no handstyles? and some sort of background (bubbles, splats, etc...)?

your P looks wimpy compared to the rest but other than that i like it

JETPACK!!
06-07-2008, 06:05 PM
nice ap, the drop shadow is sharp, your letters support it well.

(SoS)Viruz
06-07-2008, 06:08 PM
Ummm Mass not tryin to be funny what dose it say. Looks nice tho

atlok7
06-07-2008, 06:52 PM
Ummm Mass not tryin to be funny what dose it say. Looks nice tho

... wow ... im not trying to be a dick but... your retarded.... it says it right underneith the perfectly visable letters....

Mass Appeal
06-07-2008, 06:53 PM
Leave the kid alone..i edited what it said after he asked.

white
06-07-2008, 07:07 PM
quick simple with BARS! crits please - and i know (memorize the new to graff thread yes i know but please more info) with details
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0283.jpg

MarOne...
06-07-2008, 07:15 PM
... wow ... im not trying to be a dick but... your retarded.... it says it right underneith the perfectly visable letters....

what the hell man, how are you 'not trying to be a dick' by calling someone a retard?

Just keep your mouth shut man, he couldn't read it at first.

Don't result to calling people names because they can't read someones stuff.

Mass Appeal
06-07-2008, 07:19 PM
White...you didnt use bars on that at all.

white
06-07-2008, 07:24 PM
well thats not helping at all - ok i didnt use bar BARS but i didnt curve anything wierd or fuck it up at all its clean and has good color......is there anything good bout it?

white
06-07-2008, 07:30 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fee.jpg

For the collab
APHR

the way you fill in your letters is killer

JETPACK!!
06-07-2008, 07:44 PM
fucked the R up, but i wanted to see how my letters look without a shadow.

white, seperate your letters, dont connect them all, keep the width of your bars the same. dont fill it, just work on your letters for now. keep sketching, you can only get better.

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4605/rasek17mh4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Shoook
06-07-2008, 07:47 PM
rasek i love oyu style man its dope looks good with and without the shadow man
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/sketchbattle.jpg

Mass Appeal
06-07-2008, 07:50 PM
White...then why lie ?...lieing to get approval and people off your back only makes things worse....use bars or continue to stay shit forever

and fuck Rasek..thats the bets thing you have ever done

CUBANO
06-07-2008, 08:30 PM
Jetpack^^^ your sig is fucking hilarious....someone link me to the new to graff thread....i wanna see what he is talking about by bars............

SWIV3Ltwo
06-07-2008, 08:40 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fee.jpg

For the collab
APHR

looks like hpur

white
06-07-2008, 09:01 PM
fucked the R up, but i wanted to see how my letters look without a shadow.

white, seperate your letters, dont connect them all, keep the width of your bars the same. dont fill it, just work on your letters for now. keep sketching, you can only get better.

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4605/rasek17mh4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

looks good with and without the shadow. thanks for the crit

squidone
06-07-2008, 09:18 PM
here is the New To Graff thread link

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

JETPACK!!
06-07-2008, 09:22 PM
fucked the R up, but i wanted to see how my letters look without a shadow.

white, seperate your letters, dont connect them all, keep the width of your bars the same. dont fill it, just work on your letters for now. keep sketching, you can only get better.

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4605/rasek17mh4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump, people start sending me pieces for this weekends paint battle.

shuk, keep at it. keep your letters the same height

Dewster_OnE
06-07-2008, 11:26 PM
quick sketch
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/kjblkbjkl.jpg

drapes1125
06-08-2008, 01:42 AM
Are you aware that that is like almost invisible???

drapes1125
06-08-2008, 01:45 AM
white just use bars it makes it look alot better.Alright???

Mass Appeal
06-08-2008, 05:46 AM
looks like hpur

How the fuck does it look like HPUR ? Seriously....all these posts you make in every thread must be messing up your eye sight or something.

00-made-00
06-08-2008, 09:31 AM
Rasek- im starting to digg your stuff its fresh, wanna exchange?
I mite use this for the prod, im nor sure.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aima-proddy.jpg

Melting Young Minds
06-08-2008, 09:31 AM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/fee.jpg

For the collab
APHR

this is fresh, but it does look like Hpur.

Shiva.
06-08-2008, 09:42 AM
How the fuck does it look like HPUR ? Seriously....all these posts you make in every thread must be messing up your eye sight or something.

how can that first letter possibly be an A ???
oh, it looks like HPHR

00-made-00
06-08-2008, 10:00 AM
Just fucking drop it, and start critting peoples work for fucksake,why get involved it has nothing to do with you.

sketch3
06-08-2008, 10:00 AM
you need to define the hole in the a more

Melting Young Minds
06-08-2008, 10:06 AM
that sounded dirty. =o

sketch3
06-08-2008, 10:20 AM
lol he needs to open his a hole

Dewster_OnE
06-08-2008, 10:24 AM
lmao

Mass Appeal
06-08-2008, 11:26 AM
edit.
Not even worth it lmfao.

Nice AMIR..use that

TaskOne
06-08-2008, 11:55 AM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/shake001.jpg
For the Shake Sketch battle, Crits?

(SoS)Viruz
06-08-2008, 12:04 PM
This is a new style that im playin with. I know its booboo. But I didnt use bars, and it took me like 10min. Lol. Crits what I should change up for the final copy.


http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/KobraSketch.jpg

white
06-08-2008, 12:12 PM
This is a new style that im playin with. I know its booboo. But I didnt use bars, and it took me like 10min. Lol. Crits what I should change up for the final copy.


http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/KobraSketch.jpg

i personally would squeeze the R in a little more - alot of dead space

sketch3
06-08-2008, 12:18 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/shake001.jpg
For the Shake Sketch battle, Crits?
nice but ur shit a ''1''s so dont do them,
the main bar of the k looks a bit to long an skinny, needs to be shorter an stubby like the a

white
06-08-2008, 12:29 PM
nice but ur shit a ''1''s so dont do them,
the main bar of the looks a bit to long an skinny, needs to be shorter an stubby like the a

i would have to agree on losing the "1"

00-made-00
06-08-2008, 12:40 PM
kobra- give crits to get them.

NoCanControl
06-08-2008, 01:23 PM
kobra, you should get a new name, cuz thats a gooffy, name.
shake, your 1 looks like an L, your k's spine is too long on the bottom. and.... yea.
asphr, your a lookes like your h.
aima, your aim part looks fuck on the flow, your i shouldn't be so lenient on towards the right, i would have made the i more like this>>> I, rather then this>>> l
rasek, why do you alwas run out of teh paper. letters look good, i like the right leg of the 'A' alot

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Photo-0073.jpg

crits, KANS, but the n is really fuckerd beyond repair. and it was freestyle with marker, no pencil FAGGGITS. hajk.

Oaklander
06-08-2008, 01:28 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/zlyozr.jpg
(http://i26.tinypic.com/zlyozr.jpg)

TaskOne
06-08-2008, 01:29 PM
NoCanControll that looks ill homie, nice freestlye.

MarOne...
06-08-2008, 01:31 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/shake001.jpg
For the Shake Sketch battle, Crits?

Yeah, I have a crit: Quit posting this shit in the Blackbooks thread. I mean, come on man, its a simple. And not a great one either.

jd1
06-08-2008, 01:32 PM
rasek i love oyu style man its dope looks good with and without the shadow man
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/sketchbattle.jpg

I'm really feelin this one, good shit

Oaklander
06-08-2008, 01:34 PM
Looks good task, do your thing. Honestly, I don't know what the fuck "MarOne" is talking about.

TaskOne
06-08-2008, 01:34 PM
Haha MarOne, you tell me to post in the toy thread, then when I do, you hate on it. Thanks Oak I appreciate the positive feedback!

MarOne...
06-08-2008, 01:38 PM
you post in both threads. Keep it out of the BB thread. Stay here.

Sounds like your ego is a little inflated too. Just calm it down a little.

La Coka Nostra
06-08-2008, 02:23 PM
nocancontrol, that's dope.
task, i like it except for the K is a little fucked up. do a drop shadow on the next one.
shuk, your u looks kinda like an L.

Cin123
06-08-2008, 02:42 PM
nocan- its nice but im not feelin that style
oak- needs more flavor shake its pritty ddope i like it
shook0 go a lil more simp
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/095.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/093.jpg
the second one has better struccccter

TaskOne
06-08-2008, 02:48 PM
Fuckin around with the same colour scheme haha. Crits? Ignore the throw.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/meh001.jpg

Shuk- K and H aren't flowin. Make the letters the same size? And possibly change the U because it looks like an L. Decent S though!

squidone
06-08-2008, 02:54 PM
the T and K in your throwie look weird to me

NoCanControl
06-08-2008, 03:00 PM
the T and K in your throwie look weird to me

T the vertical part is to much over to the left, and the k is fine, your one still looks like a L. and your bar doesn't match.

TaskOne
06-08-2008, 03:00 PM
Thats why I said ignore the throwie:P

Cin123
06-08-2008, 03:04 PM
dont i get any crits?

I GOT CLOUT
06-08-2008, 03:05 PM
Cin, your second simp is showing progression, which is good, because honestly I havent seen much from you. But keep it up man, you're definately going in the right direction.

squidone
06-08-2008, 03:05 PM
bring your N together more so there isnt so much dead space and maybe try a capital I

shun
06-08-2008, 03:08 PM
TASK, i like the simple style a lot, good shit. the 1 could use some work, it looks a little awkward. the S could use some work too.
good direction though, looks great.

Shoook
06-08-2008, 03:09 PM
thanks for the crits guys but just one question i dont know how the u looks like a "L"

NoCanControl
06-08-2008, 03:12 PM
oops, i thought he ment the piece sorry dooooooooooooooooooooooooid

jupsick
06-08-2008, 03:25 PM
Fuckin around with the same colour scheme haha. Crits? Ignore the throw.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/meh001.jpg

Shuk- K and H aren't flowin. Make the letters the same size? And possibly change the U because it looks like an L. Decent S though!

dude i love ur shit but really stop putting that 1 every where...or at least make it better...it dosent look so good -_-

NoCanControl
06-08-2008, 04:23 PM
anyone down for an exchange, thats decent or better. bored as hell, and exchange is the only motovation.

TaskOne
06-08-2008, 04:27 PM
Haha will do jupstick.

(SoS)Viruz
06-08-2008, 05:16 PM
I actualy like the name Kobra.
My olfd Name was Tekz, then Viruz, I didnt like either of them so i went to Kobra. Which to me is Orgianal beacuse when i get better It will look ill.

Task- Likin it man. Nice Throwie

ESKiMO2
06-08-2008, 05:19 PM
(I know my letters are too close together. Thanks)

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/9382/dsc00024zf2.jpg

Exchange with this kid I know...
Tried to do Carlos but ran out of room.

TaskOne
06-08-2008, 05:39 PM
Make it bigger so i can see it man!

Bets369R
06-08-2008, 06:06 PM
task im glad you finally got rid of that other S. this one looks much better. the 1 does look like an L..but TASKL is a dope name imo lol.

Cin your getting better, just make sure to keep all the letters the same thickness.

Eskimo your R looks like an E

MUSEone
06-08-2008, 06:32 PM
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/9506/002rv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bleh, i rarely ever come in here, crits?

Task-Dont make tha right leg on th 1 kick up like that, just let it flatten out like tha other side.

Cin-Nice progression, but like its been said before, keep bar width tha same.

Eskimo-I aggree w. bets, but i can tell thats just because u ran outta room.

Oaklander
06-08-2008, 06:45 PM
Go simpler, like block letter simple. Plus your filling could be cleaner; it looks like you filled in really fast.

One last thing, I don't think having what your write in your signature is a good idea. That goes for everyone.

Peace

-ShAmEE-
06-08-2008, 07:35 PM
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/9506/002rv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bleh, i rarely ever come in here, crits?

Task-Dont make tha right leg on th 1 kick up like that, just let it flatten out like tha other side.

Cin-Nice progression, but like its been said before, keep bar width tha same.

Eskimo-I aggree w. bets, but i can tell thats just because u ran outta room.

hahaaa, jokes , just goes to show that ur post count dont make u improve ur graffiti!

MUSEone
06-08-2008, 07:46 PM
hahaaa, jokes , just goes to show that ur post count dont make u improve ur graffiti!

Who said it did? I never said i was good at piecing.

NoCanControl
06-08-2008, 08:10 PM
hahaaa, jokes , just goes to show that ur post count dont make u improve ur graffiti!

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/lilalliegirl227/cad84662.jpg

look at my post number. heheh.

emel
06-08-2008, 08:20 PM
Who said it did? I never said i was good at piecing.



your obviously not good at anything graffiti related

MUSEone
06-08-2008, 08:24 PM
Cause ur opinion matters and all.....

:rolleyes:

emel
06-08-2008, 08:48 PM
You>>Fail.

TaskOne
06-08-2008, 09:10 PM
task im glad you finally got rid of that other S. this one looks much better. the 1 does look like an L..but TASKL is a dope name imo lol.

TASKL HAHA!:p Thanks dude. Maso work on bars..and bars only.

Mo152
06-08-2008, 09:12 PM
Muse. grwat band, not so great drawing. new to graf thread, bars bars bars
task. your s is better than before, but now its just a backwards 2 imo. keep trying new S's.

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/1101/img00111gm5.jpg
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/3889/img00112mh9.jpg

MUSEone
06-08-2008, 09:33 PM
I dont see why everyone is telling me to use bars, i did.

And Gupe practice wat u preach dude, telling ME to go to the new to graff thread and to use bars, im not new to graff, i just dont piece.

TaskOne
06-08-2008, 09:36 PM
Make your letters almost like the letters on a keyboard, once you can do that, then start adding minor fluctuations to the bars themselves, increase in size at one side. bends and curves, but only after you have mastered the keyboard font young padawon.

squidone
06-08-2008, 09:38 PM
well then you should just keep practicing bars and youll keep getting better and youll start to develop your own style so just practice your bars and simples

MUSEone
06-08-2008, 09:40 PM
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/9784/002cu1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Theres ur keyboard letters....

except for tha s but u get tha idea...

plus it looks so fucked up cause it was w. a half dead ballpoint and i couldnt of cared less at tha time but since everyone wants shit SQUEAKY FUCKING CLEAN haha ill do it again.

*cept*
06-08-2008, 09:43 PM
I dont see why everyone is telling me to use bars, i did.

And Gupe practice wat u preach dude, telling ME to go to the new to graff thread and to use bars, im not new to graff, i just dont piece.

my girlfriend just saw that shit and said her poops are more proportional than that shit.
theres no fuckin bars on that shiit. if there were your "a wouldnt be all tiny at the bottom and your "s" would look normal. im not even gopnna get into the o. and it aint no fuckin piece. its a bomb at best.

The only reason you get this much shit is because you've been runnin your mouth since you got on here.

Quit with the excuses, if its not your best/ cleanest shit, and you dont want it ripped apart then dont post it up.

Just take your crits, stop getting defensive, shut your mouth, and hit the book like everyone else in here.

MUSEone
06-08-2008, 09:47 PM
hahahahahahahahaha coming from u thats saying ALOT!

............

Practice wat u preach kid.

JETPACK!!
06-08-2008, 09:54 PM
everyone with the same reguritated advice. muse, keep the width of your bars even throughout the piece. word with different angles of your bars to kill the most deadspace you can. take it slow, dont rush it. and rather than trying to draw one 4 inch line. sketch a bunch of 1 inch lines in a row. it's A LOT easier to make a 1 inch line straight than a 4 inch line.

gupe, keep it up man. im not feelin that last one, but the small one on top in the second flick and the first flick are hot. im feelin the idea on the first one. you gotta work on smoothening out your curves.

fuck beef, just spark a dutch, and worry about yourself.

http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/8889/rasek18yo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mo152
06-08-2008, 09:58 PM
muse- your quite the arrogant, feisty little bastard. if you dont want your shit to be "SQUEAKY FUCKING CLEAN" then why fuckin bother? do you half ass everything you do?

let me break down what you thought you did. (using bars) you see you kinda did on the M, congrats!

but then you fell in the shitter, with the bars concept. please take a look at figure 1

FIGURE 1
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/782/yourdumbdw1.png

NoCanControl
06-08-2008, 10:06 PM
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/9784/002cu1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Theres ur keyboard letters....

except for tha s but u get tha idea...

plus it looks so fucked up cause it was w. a half dead ballpoint and i couldnt of cared less at tha time but since everyone wants shit SQUEAKY FUCKING CLEAN haha ill do it again.

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/halp-1.jpg


verdict says...................

NO BARS. or very poor bars.

JETPACK!!
06-08-2008, 10:10 PM
get off the "maso can't use bars" tip. it's dead. drop it.

maso, your a tight guy, but you did sound like you got butthurt outta it.

it just occured to me that i havent seen rank in a fucking minute. where'd he go? left BS to get his bombing underway?

MUSEone
06-08-2008, 10:20 PM
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/2504/0608082310aqg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Guess ill never live up to random ass kids standards...

Jetpack, thnx for tha influence in this one, butt hurt maybe, but wouldnt u be if somone called u out on ur stuff being shitty when theirs is 10X worse?

O well, this is tha biggest fame game thread on this site.

EDIT: O SHIT! I just noticed my M isnt fucking PERFECT like king cept wants...

Evasion Of Invasion
06-08-2008, 10:24 PM
Jetpack wanna exchange?

JETPACK!!
06-08-2008, 10:38 PM
yeah, ill get around to it. so dont expect it tonight. you can get mine in whenever.

and yeah maso, ive been butthurt before because of what these kids say. but now i write to keep me happy, so i could care less if my shits liked or not by kids on this site.

TaskOne
06-08-2008, 10:39 PM
Chill out Maso, if you think about it we are only trying to help you!

Bets369R
06-08-2008, 10:40 PM
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/2504/0608082310aqg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Guess ill never live up to random ass kids standards...

Jetpack, thnx for tha influence in this one, butt hurt maybe, but wouldnt u be if somone called u out on ur stuff being shitty when theirs is 10X worse?

O well, this is tha biggest fame game thread on this site.

EDIT: O SHIT! I just noticed my M isnt fucking PERFECT like king cept wants...

thats actually a huge improvement from that dog shit you posted erlier. your missing 3d on your A and M though

Ity
06-08-2008, 10:43 PM
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n35/specialsteve101/bbsketch002.jpg
new name im thinking of doing
crits?

smooth_nuts
06-08-2008, 10:45 PM
jetpack-looking get sup for the quote type things at the end of the k....ya know
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture466.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture474.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture479.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture483.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture485.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture453.jpg
.....nothing impressive

taking over 603
06-08-2008, 10:51 PM
Do- I like the 3rd one down bro, the O needs something though. Good *hit.....

Mo152
06-09-2008, 12:04 AM
Jetpack, love everything except for the S, now idk if it would look better but i think the top and bottom of the letter should look the same if you see what i mean.

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/363/img00113pz2.jpg

JETPACK!!
06-09-2008, 12:24 AM
wish i could paint this clean. fucked the A up, but whatever.

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/6550/rasek19rb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

*cept*
06-09-2008, 12:34 AM
hahahahahahahahaha coming from u thats saying ALOT!

............

Practice wat u preach kid.

since your cam works now lets battle it out. you name the word. paint only.

*cept*
06-09-2008, 12:35 AM
wish i could paint this clean. fucked the A up, but whatever.

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/6550/rasek19rb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

the hole in that R is kind weird. maybe make the bar on the right side of it stick out a little farther so you can have a larger hole thats proportionate to the one in the A

MarOne...
06-09-2008, 12:43 AM
jetpack-looking get sup for the quote type things at the end of the k....ya know
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture466.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture474.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture479.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture483.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture485.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture453.jpg
.....nothing impressive

you are producing some mad ill work nowadays, mr. nuts.

PS. I need your address again. Feel free to send me a bomb for not remembering. :(

I GOT CLOUT
06-09-2008, 12:57 AM
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/8889/rasek18yo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Dope. And Smoothie...I'm diggin it.

ShOne.GUK
06-09-2008, 01:31 AM
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g10/mike__2006/rsz_Summer200820009.jpg

not tooo complex..

agreed?

Bets369R
06-09-2008, 02:14 AM
sone i dont like how you connect all your letters together. looks weird and the little line thingy on the bottom needs to go

ShOne.GUK
06-09-2008, 02:35 AM
sone i dont like how you connect all your letters together. looks weird and the little line thingy on the bottom needs to go

shone**** && idk personally i like how it flows when they connect.. otherwise it looks mad boring.. && yea tru i got rid of tha underline lol

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g10/mike__2006/rsz_Summer200820011.jpg

Bets369R
06-09-2008, 02:43 AM
yeah typo on the name my bad.

Looks better without the line. im not feelin the S..maybe instead of the loop going up, just swoosh it down...

Edit: MS Paint status.

something like this
http://i31.tinypic.com/2a5ky6c.jpg

GaZm13
06-09-2008, 02:48 AM
Dope. And Smoothie...I'm diggin it.

Nice and simple. Keep it real. Lets see some nice colors on the fill it will be HOT!

I GOT CLOUT
06-09-2008, 03:16 AM
Nice and simple. Keep it real. Lets see some nice colors on the fill it will be HOT!

Its not mine, its JETPACK!'s

fonone
06-09-2008, 03:23 AM
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/9784/002cu1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Theres ur keyboard letters....

except for tha s but u get tha idea...

plus it looks so fucked up cause it was w. a half dead ballpoint and i couldnt of cared less at tha time but since everyone wants shit SQUEAKY FUCKING CLEAN haha ill do it again.


dont mess with this guy king of the toy tags thread...

jupsick
06-09-2008, 04:33 AM
everyone with the same reguritated advice. muse, keep the width of your bars even throughout the piece. word with different angles of your bars to kill the most deadspace you can. take it slow, dont rush it. and rather than trying to draw one 4 inch line. sketch a bunch of 1 inch lines in a row. it's A LOT easier to make a 1 inch line straight than a 4 inch line.

gupe, keep it up man. im not feelin that last one, but the small one on top in the second flick and the first flick are hot. im feelin the idea on the first one. you gotta work on smoothening out your curves.

fuck beef, just spark a dutch, and worry about yourself.

http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/8889/rasek18yo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
dude this is just sickkkkk
and ur other sketch...the a isnt good the uper bar not in its place...and the r is kinda weird dunno just weird XDD

Jo32o3
06-09-2008, 04:50 AM
All need colour, and re doing.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v95/joeparry/DSC00286.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v95/joeparry/DSC00287.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v95/joeparry/DSC00288.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v95/joeparry/DSC00289.jpg