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Mass Appeal
06-09-2008, 06:12 AM
Why is everyone bitching on MASO ?..Everyone starts somewhere..Esepcially you NoCanControl..you participate shit to this thread..iv onlt ever seen one pic from you out of the whole 200 posts youv got.

What im tryna say is there is no need what so ever for every one to .. say " gang " up on him like that...what will people think who browse this particular part of this website who arnt signed up...and are new to graffiti..and read how people treat one another when it comes to starting out.

Aint fair.

jupsick
06-09-2008, 06:20 AM
All need colour, and re doing.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v95/joeparry/DSC00289.jpg

im diggin this chars dam i like those....
try making ur graff better learn better letter structure...

Mass Appeal
06-09-2008, 06:21 AM
Those chars are bitten...i dont know where from but i always remeber seeing a black guy with an afro in that Chinese gay style of drawing..i thought it was extremely ironic.

Shiva.
06-09-2008, 06:56 AM
some guy that writes ohsnap used them too..

Jo32o3
06-09-2008, 07:21 AM
Those chars are bitten...i dont know where from but i always remeber seeing a black guy with an afro in that Chinese gay style of drawing..i thought it was extremely ironic.

One on the left is Riley freeman, Guy on the right is Huey freeman.
From the series boondocks.

Bets369R
06-09-2008, 07:26 AM
yeah theyre from boondocks cartoon

BUT...

They are directly bitten. not origional facial expressions.

http://www.fresnobeehive.com/archives/upload/2007/08/boondocksHuey500.jpg
http://media.canada.com/8c8b3290-2b08-4dc6-8e3e-2cc645fdfe05/121907_boondocks.jpg

nero112
06-09-2008, 07:37 AM
leave him alon its hard to hold paper to a laptop screen man

smooth_nuts
06-09-2008, 07:43 AM
jo3203-new to graffiti thread broham
shone-based it on your handstyle? if so nice start better i could connect your letters all together,and bars would make your structure look alot better....maybe give the new to graffiti thread a read ;)
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture494.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture501.jpg
a pen freestyle from a few mornings ago...the pencil one is a doodle from school(few months old) i found on my desk and thought i'd flick,personaly i hate it haha
edit*god i need a scanner,fucking webcam flicks look like garbage haha

Jo32o3
06-09-2008, 07:45 AM
Butchers.

jupsick
06-09-2008, 07:47 AM
jo3203-new to graffiti thread broham
shone-based it on your handstyle? if so nice start better i could connect your letters all together,and bars would make your structure look alot better....maybe give the new to graffiti thread a read ;)
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture494.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture501.jpg
a pen freestyle from a few mornings ago...the pencil one is a doole from school i found on my desk and thought i'd flick,personaly i hate it haha
edit*god i need a scanner,fucking webcam flicks look like garbage haha

dude awsome job XD i really like the first one...
the second one is..umm....not ur best work...
keep it up....
and about the chars....well those chars still look good XDDDD

smooth_nuts
06-09-2008, 08:26 AM
thanks man
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture507.jpg
another pen freestyle i did while waiting for breakfast haha.....

Mass Appeal
06-09-2008, 09:41 AM
Why would you copy someone elses characters ?...come up with yah own.

Chump
06-09-2008, 09:43 AM
when i was i kid i use to draw scooby doo...got to learn somewhere...

Jo32o3
06-09-2008, 09:57 AM
I have my own characters.
Just thought id hit a tribute up.
Shut your dick lips.

squidone
06-09-2008, 11:27 AM
Mass was just asking and giving his opinion so dont get butthurt go back to drawing cuz no one wants beef

Jo32o3
06-09-2008, 11:30 AM
Riding dick like a rodeo horse.

smooth_nuts
06-09-2008, 11:41 AM
blah blah blah you people bitch over stupid shit its not as if he went out and painted it some where so shut the fuck up about it already.....

i'll post some flicks in a minute

smooth_nuts
06-09-2008, 11:46 AM
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture509.jpg

klic
06-09-2008, 11:55 AM
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG000093.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=IMG000093.jpg)

just somethin quick i did using some help from the new to graffiti thread

ive only been writing for a couple weeks so i suck

smooth_nuts
06-09-2008, 12:10 PM
loose every single arrow and do simples like the font off your keyboard for a while ;)

Bossman-
06-09-2008, 12:17 PM
5 months? you draw every day? cut the arrows. And make those bars thick like paint. way tooo thin on the h and e.

I like smooth. what did you scan with though? brutal flick, nice letters though.

sketch3
06-09-2008, 12:21 PM
edit man im stond, just replyed to a post 4 pages back

klic
06-09-2008, 12:30 PM
5 months? you draw every day? cut the arrows. And make those bars thick like paint. way tooo thin on the h and e.

I like smooth. what did you scan with though? brutal flick, nice letters though.

i just draw at school and shit whenever im bored. yah it was with my webcam thats why the quality sucks

smooth_nuts
06-09-2008, 12:45 PM
5 months? you draw every day? cut the arrows. And make those bars thick like paint. way tooo thin on the h and e.

I like smooth. what did you scan with though? brutal flick, nice letters though.

that my friends is a webcam pic haha,i wish my broke ass had a scanner :(

Bossman-
06-09-2008, 12:50 PM
Bah, i gotta get some flicks up. i talk like i know. but i am just a small time learner. i got it pretty good in theory, i just need to execute. and execute properly. need to buy me some markers that colour nicely. crayola sucks.

Mo152
06-09-2008, 12:55 PM
markers don't make poor letter structure look better, just a thought. i say buy some pencils. :rolleyes:

NoCanControl
06-09-2008, 12:56 PM
Why is everyone bitching on MASO ?..Everyone starts somewhere..Esepcially you NoCanControl..you participate shit to this thread..iv onlt ever seen one pic from you out of the whole 200 posts youv got.

What im tryna say is there is no need what so ever for every one to .. say " gang " up on him like that...what will people think who browse this particular part of this website who arnt signed up...and are new to graffiti..and read how people treat one another when it comes to starting out.

Aint fair.

first of all, if you take the time to look a ways back in recent post, i posted quiet a bit of black books, you just didn't realize my posts until i got that chick with a gun sig. i did my work.

AND, i didn't know everyone is baggin on him. i had a late post.... by the time i posted it everyone did before me. so.... fuck me? no beef but your pretty much wrong on this shit.

sorry if i'm a little bitcheh teh gf's left meh, for now atleast....

sketch3
06-09-2008, 01:06 PM
Originally Posted by Mass Appeal http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?p=1121855#post1121855)
Why is everyone bitching on MASO ?..Everyone starts somewhere..Esepcially you NoCanControl..you participate shit to this thread..iv onlt ever seen one pic from you out of the whole 200 posts youv got.

What im tryna say is there is no need what so ever for every one to .. say " gang " up on him like that...what will people think who browse this particular part of this website who arnt signed up...and are new to graffiti..and read how people treat one another when it comes to starting out.

Aint fair.



TOP PUSSY

smooth_nuts
06-09-2008, 01:13 PM
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture515.jpg

NoCanControl
06-09-2008, 01:24 PM
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture515.jpg

seen the same do a million times. ummmmm, its nice but you should try a longer word? or something... idk, new style.

smooth_nuts
06-09-2008, 01:50 PM
nope,i like my structure so no need for a "new stye" :P
edit*dont think im not greatful for the sugestion though....

Kruxos
06-09-2008, 02:00 PM
seen the same do a million times. ummmmm, its nice but you should try a longer word? or something... idk, new style.

its a two letter haha.

garbage down tha way
06-09-2008, 02:34 PM
sorry about my wack E.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hor2.jpg
for a freight, maybe.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hor3.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hor.jpg

DOPE MAN- nice two letters. paint them somewhere very heated.

squidone
06-09-2008, 02:37 PM
man hoer your stuff is lookin dope

Jo32o3
06-09-2008, 02:38 PM
Yo garbage,
what you use to ink that piece?
Cool texture. Nice colours reckon it looks sharp

shun
06-09-2008, 02:39 PM
smooth- i think your style is clean as hell. very nice. i think what nocan was trying to say is that you are good at that, so you should try and take it further and progress, make it better.

garbage down tha way
06-09-2008, 02:40 PM
the orange and pink is crayola and the maroon on the bottom is a black marker that i put a red nib in so it looks cool. hahaha my markers suck.

La Coka Nostra
06-09-2008, 03:29 PM
hoer, im jealous of your abilities to make your simple letters look dope with extensions and add ons.
i can never seem to make good looking extensions.

garbage down tha way
06-09-2008, 03:49 PM
haha thanks man but its actually my weakness. i cant seem to make more complicated letters, i can only add extentions. but as long as it looks ok, it dont bother me too much.

squidone
06-09-2008, 04:04 PM
i think the coolest pieces are simple with mad extensions so i really like those that youve done

Hater-AiD~>
06-09-2008, 04:17 PM
sorry about my wack E.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hor2.jpg
for a freight, maybe.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hor3.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hor.jpg

DOPE MAN- nice two letters. paint them somewhere very heated.
veddy nice...veddy nice indeed

shie-ster
06-09-2008, 04:59 PM
seen the same do a million times. ummmmm, its nice but you should try a longer word? or something... idk, new style.

he writes doap, do is just short for it. not dissing you or anything, just informing. and i think its sick for a simple, its uber clean, symetrical and looks freshtastic. props on that one.

I GOT CLOUT
06-09-2008, 05:04 PM
Hoer - I lurve you.

Mo152
06-09-2008, 05:15 PM
hater aid, looks pretty good except for the top of the E on the second flick.
Smooth, looks good. i think its time you move to colors or some effects, like bigger drop shadows, 3D, color.. idk but you just post the smae thing over and over.

new
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/1073/img00115ez3.jpg

and BUMP this one cuz i got no crits.
http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/4371/img00113jc1.jpg

garbage down tha way
06-09-2008, 05:18 PM
ay nigguh that was my E holla bak!

Mo152
06-09-2008, 05:23 PM
which e are you talkin about... can i see a pic

smooth_nuts
06-09-2008, 05:26 PM
haha i dont post the same thing all you fools is care about is colors and shit and you just look pass the letters....but its what ever,personaly i hate inking my sketchs cause i always feel that i fuck em up,BUT im start fuckign with extentions and shit here and there so its what ever....
i really fucking feel the h in the first one garbage your simples are always hot,l think you have to many extention ont he h on the last oen though idk maybe its cause it looks like there arent as many on the r :(,but its all fresh

garbage down tha way
06-09-2008, 05:36 PM
which e are you talkin about... can i see a pic


no, you thought that hater aid did that sketch cuz he bumped it. i was saying it was me.

Mo152
06-09-2008, 05:43 PM
ohhh haha oops :rolleyes: my fault

and smooth, your first post you did like 3 pags back was good and full of style, but i think you should start coloring, not because thats all "we" care about, but because to me it seems you should be able to color... thats kindergarden shit. there simple style and call for simple colors.. im just sayin :cool: you should try to broaden your horizon instead of being content where you are

JETPACK!!
06-09-2008, 05:49 PM
i can never seem to make good looking extensions.

me neither, i guess were the type who are meant to slay fills on simples haha.

garbage down tha way
06-09-2008, 05:50 PM
its all good brother.

La Coka Nostra
06-09-2008, 05:59 PM
me neither, i guess were the type who are meant to slay fills on simples haha.


honestly. that would be dope too. clean simples pulled off well look insanely dope, cause you can read them easy, and you can still make em look dope.
my imagination escapes me when i try to do crazy fills. i just need to get inspired. i'm still rockin like 2-3 color throws.

JETPACK!!
06-09-2008, 05:59 PM
sorry about my wack E.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hor2.jpg
for a freight, maybe.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hor3.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hor.jpg

DOPE MAN- nice two letters. paint them somewhere very heated.

bumpin this dope shit for my homie and my hoer. keep it up bro, the best ive seen from you

word recon, ive been tryin to fuck with some crazier fills, i freestyle them while im doing them, its actually really hard... the amount of paint im gonna use before my fills get nice...

Mo152
06-09-2008, 06:18 PM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/7169/1000762ie4.jpg

jupsick
06-09-2008, 06:42 PM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/7169/1000762ie4.jpg

dude try benndin ur bars more smooder...and ur structure not the best...practise more XD
here some of mine....
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/7689/1006080024oz7.jpg
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/5102/0806082243rr7.jpg
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/810/0806082203xh6.jpg
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/350/0806082036lu5.jpg
any crits?

drop one.
06-09-2008, 06:44 PM
resize

smooth_nuts
06-09-2008, 06:46 PM
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture523.jpg
a little pen quick freestyle...i hate the a so much :(

edit*dude resize those fuckers then post em

Bets369R
06-09-2008, 06:46 PM
your keyboard is GRIMY

sex without condoms
06-09-2008, 07:02 PM
Doap is ill
Hoers is ill
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/201621-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/201654.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/201729.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/190230-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/185442.jpg

Shiva.
06-09-2008, 07:15 PM
you should spend less time on the computer and go draw some more

taking over 603
06-09-2008, 07:16 PM
Doap-Shits dope just square up the bottom of that A and bring the A and P up alittle higher.
Rae-Keep workin on it bro, make you letter simple cuz your shit is all over the place.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c89/Djskilz/atthebeach053.jpg

Anybody feelin this?

Shiva.
06-09-2008, 07:24 PM
make the n as one letter, not 2 bars, and you could try to make the bottom of the first s a bit longer and bend it down a little bit more. i'm not sure if it will lokk nice, but you can try.
and concentrate a bit more on your 3d/shadows

smooth_nuts
06-09-2008, 07:30 PM
im pretty sure he was jsut to lazy to earase the line haha,sins i like it actualy now go paitn it,black fill crome outline :D,DO IT! haha
i like that first jiel keep doign that
sex im feeling the throw and the first sketch but nothign else :-/

Mo152
06-09-2008, 07:32 PM
[QUOTE=jupsick;1122337]dude try benndin ur bars more smooder...and ur structure not the best...practise more XD
here some of mine..../QUOTE]

i have a heavy, unsteady hand :(

taking over 603
06-09-2008, 07:35 PM
Yeah that was just my A.D.D. kickin in. Im gonna go do it!! Nah, just playin. Thanks for the crits fellas........

smooth_nuts
06-09-2008, 07:46 PM
you should paint it :( .....

taking over 603
06-09-2008, 07:48 PM
Oh no doubt I will, got the spot picked out and everything bro. Im just gonna finish the sketch first.

MarOne...
06-09-2008, 08:03 PM
you should spend less time on the computer and go draw some more

Shut up. Sex is sexy.

Just a K-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/kabrenewk.jpg

TaskOne
06-09-2008, 08:04 PM
For today's daily TaskOne Simple!
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Moneyyy002.jpg
Crits?
Sins lookin sexy! Get some colour on dat bitch.
Sex- Love that E in your second sketch! Ever rock Black Books and do peices?
Doap - Not bad, fix that A and you should be set.
Jiel- get rid of that character please haha, not bad homie keep sketchin.

TaskOne
06-09-2008, 08:05 PM
Sorry for double posting, Mar thats lookin hot, you should rock some arrows and see how that works.

squidone
06-09-2008, 08:13 PM
your 1 looks much better Task cant wait to see your next painted piece

Kruxos
06-09-2008, 08:15 PM
that looks pretty good man, my only crit would be that the t looks kind of like a lower case r.

TaskOne
06-09-2008, 08:17 PM
[QUOTE=TaskOne;1122423]For today's daily TaskOne Simple!
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Moneyyy002.jpg
QUOTE]
Bottom bump!

Bets369R
06-09-2008, 08:19 PM
Task your K is off. both bars connect to the left bar. it shouldnt be that way

Kabre dope K, it could also be turned into an R

Sex, ive said it before. thats the same stuff you were rocking like a year ago change it up some

hoer is dope and doap is dope and soap on a rope i hope i hope.

Dr sues steez ftw.

Sins, your getting there keep it up

TaskOne
06-09-2008, 08:25 PM
Yea I reilized that! Fuckk

white
06-09-2008, 08:26 PM
For today's daily TaskOne Simple!
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Moneyyy002.jpg
Crits?
Sins lookin sexy! Get some colour on dat bitch.
Sex- Love that E in your second sketch! Ever rock Black Books and do peices?
Doap - Not bad, fix that A and you should be set.
Jiel- get rid of that character please haha, not bad homie keep sketchin.

think it looks the same as b4 just different colors and the s is different

but still looks really good paint it

squidone
06-09-2008, 08:30 PM
whats wrong with the K i dont see anything

(SoS)Viruz
06-09-2008, 08:31 PM
Yo Squid. Chage my Name to TeK. What do you thimk

Bets369R
06-09-2008, 08:35 PM
new book work, im not too happy about any of it. crits?

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/003-3.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/002-5.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/001-6.jpg

TaskOne
06-09-2008, 08:39 PM
lookin good till that last whack sketch, well really just the B, fix er up.

squidone
06-09-2008, 08:42 PM
bets i pretty much like all your throws you got any pics of painted ones?

Nem
06-09-2008, 08:57 PM
bets, Blue piece in the top picture is sick. looks rushed. probably could come out better. the one liner needs some work.

task, i personally say change the dot on the a to a bar across.


http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/bars.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/body.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/ascwdscscaab.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/7y6.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/stickyicky.jpg

Bets369R
06-09-2008, 09:02 PM
bets i pretty much like all your throws you got any pics of painted ones?

nope i dont take pics of anything painted anymore cause i got raided once and they found all that shit. if they wouldnt have found anything i would have got off free. but i do have this one of my first ever throwie in like 2003 lol
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/firstthrow.jpg

-ShAmEE-
06-09-2008, 09:03 PM
u look about 40.

Bets369R
06-09-2008, 09:08 PM
im 21. i was like 16 there.

looks like i have a reseeding hair line cause i had surgery and have a scar going across the top of my head that fucks up my hair line

JETPACK!!
06-09-2008, 09:42 PM
bets, im feelin that last sketch, shit's got a nice feel to it.

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/2610/rasek20ur6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

TaskOne
06-09-2008, 09:43 PM
Beautiful Rasek!!

taking over 603
06-09-2008, 09:54 PM
Task-That k is the only thing but that shit still looks dope.
Bets- That last one is sick bro, should be on a wall somewhere brotha
Scab-Your gettin the bar thing done but Im not feelin any flow to it, looks really stiff to me
Rasek-Fire, you puttin that by your work or what? No fallin off kid! haha

emel
06-09-2008, 10:40 PM
Toys shouldn't give other toys crits because its fuc king meaningless...

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-09-2008, 10:56 PM
the hoer pics posted a few pages back are fuckin nasty
marone that K is pretty nasty i like all the cut ins and extensions

Dewster_OnE
06-09-2008, 10:58 PM
chhheeaaa!! bets that last simp is dope, good shyt my doode

Dewster_OnE
06-09-2008, 11:04 PM
lets just all pretend the last e and l arent there.. they just illusionz..
critz on what i was gonna xchange with jewel but gonna do over

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/230227.jpg

MrDobalina
06-09-2008, 11:07 PM
POWWW. i ant been on here in a looooooongggg time. this is my 2nd sketch in about 4 months, this explains why i havent progressed at all. PC4PC??//LOL

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN7180.jpg

over, the e r on the top one needs sortin and the o+v is nicey.
bottom sketch is nice.

LOL wtf is this? chill out ^^^^
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/6097/13smallxy1.png
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/5294/12cg7.jpg

Dewster_OnE
06-09-2008, 11:08 PM
yo0o0... dope.. get outa the toy forum lol

atlok7
06-09-2008, 11:18 PM
YO MrDobalina - have you heard the new del cd? its dope

I GOT CLOUT
06-09-2008, 11:19 PM
Dude all Del is sick. Well...most.

JETPACK!!
06-09-2008, 11:25 PM
bets, im feelin that last sketch, shit's got a nice feel to it.

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/2610/rasek20ur6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits before i sketch it again? gonna straighten the A and make the S flow more..

that first painted pear shit is pretty nice

AMRO1
06-09-2008, 11:56 PM
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm180/AMRO1/MAX1.jpg

There is one i made on my caps in my class..

will try to do more sketches and put them up!

NoCanControl
06-10-2008, 12:03 AM
jet, kill the bend on the right leg of the a.

garbage down tha way
06-10-2008, 12:18 AM
hahaha whyd you bump that pear from like a year ago. over crits lolllllllz.

glyce
06-10-2008, 01:22 AM
didnt bother filling this in cause im trying to get down letter structer and shit. crits?
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank018-1.jpg
amro1- that A looks pritty decent but that M's kind of fucked and the X could use a little work
rasek- that looks real nice and clean man

Mo152
06-10-2008, 01:29 AM
like the R jetpack.
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/7572/1000763qh4.jpg

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/3079/1000764pe7.jpg

jupsick
06-10-2008, 03:24 AM
task sil work...and i see u made ur 1 better good choise ...but i really dont like that t u make it like and r dunno why try making somethin new maybe?
rasek dope shit im really fillin this man but the k is umm...dunnow somehow not connected to the style or somethin -_- or its just me
gupe...nice improvin alot more better it flows alot better....but dude ur e isnt so good...make the bars bigger...
glyce... im really likkin this man...keep sketchin more on structure...

Bossman-
06-10-2008, 11:58 AM
Dewster, nice stuff, i like the whole capitol e on the second one thing, SWITCHIN IT UP!

And yea doblina, why are you posting that in the toy blackbooks? Move on up to the big boy paint section. cause that stuff is dope!

and who tagged this "toys with pencils"? way to go bud you sumed us right up. really you did.

letsgobombin
06-10-2008, 01:06 PM
which one is better? and is their anything i can put into the other to get an all round better piece? i prefer the s in the first one, so i'll try to incorporate it next time in the second
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1223.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1227.jpg
gupe- i only like your g, dont seperate the top of your p, do a normal lower case u ( without bends) and just think of a new e, that one is really quite bad
soank- round the top of the s, it looks like a 5, take off the extension on the bottom of the s and make that bar taper and take that bit on the top of the o off it makes it look like a 6
amro- bars, bars, bars
rasek- take the bit off the bottom of the a and even the r out by putting that thing on the bottom of the r onto the bottom of the k aswell
pear- i'm lovin that first sketch

squidone
06-10-2008, 01:09 PM
i would thikin up the bars to try and get rid of some of the dead space

letsgobombin
06-10-2008, 01:30 PM
on which one?

Mass Appeal
06-10-2008, 01:36 PM
Wow..i so thought Pear was legit...asiff.

Mass Appeal
06-10-2008, 01:37 PM
bets, im feelin that last sketch, shit's got a nice feel to it.

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/2610/rasek20ur6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

imrpoving so much..sort the bottom of the A out though..shouldnt be a tab there.

squidone
06-10-2008, 01:51 PM
on the top one cuz i like the second one you should add some 3d to it

letsgobombin
06-10-2008, 02:07 PM
which one is better? and is their anything i can but into the other to get an all round better piece?
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1223.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1227.jpg

bump

kroc_oner
06-10-2008, 02:55 PM
second one looks better imo just use the first s

South-Pole
06-10-2008, 03:01 PM
i'd go for the second one

experimenting new styles,even if its not my best,just to change a bit

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42432.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42433.jpg

IlikePie
06-10-2008, 03:37 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1213081722.jpg

New style I'm working on.

Mass Appeal
06-10-2008, 03:45 PM
^^ Yeah no shit ^^
Over tha last few months that style has began to plague BS...Shit..i used to do it........

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/x-1.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/x.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rg.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/g-1.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/uyu6.jpg

Lol fuck yahhh
it has to be the most boring style to do ... period.

sorry for teh shittynessism

we are trash
06-10-2008, 04:51 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3108/2568355092_9fda24310e.jpg?v=0

jupsick
06-10-2008, 05:08 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3108/2568355092_9fda24310e.jpg?v=0

this is dopeeeee really like the flow
but dude the e is buggin..the lowest bar of it its to long not so good i think...

Mass Appeal
06-10-2008, 05:13 PM
that Beast is nice but there isnt any need to bump it on the same page yet alone underneath it.

(SoS)Viruz
06-10-2008, 05:45 PM
Lovin that Shit Mass it Nice.
Pie- That letter your workin on reminds me of a Elefant a lil. It looks dupe tho.

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/TekBB2.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/TekBB.jpg
Crits? This is my New name. Tried a New style.

calculating infinity
06-10-2008, 06:18 PM
boredom induced
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/5914/0608080358rh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/2269/0610081807al9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mass Appeal
06-10-2008, 06:27 PM
that bottom throw is dope

-Wings-
06-10-2008, 06:27 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/1337.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF27052008_00000.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08062008_00001.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08062008_00000.jpg

Crits? I just started like 2 weeks or so ago. Ive painted once but it came out bad..

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-10-2008, 06:29 PM
i like both of those i think the top one is a really cool idea

we are trash
06-10-2008, 06:30 PM
id lose the extention on that last n it looks alot like an "m"

-Wings-
06-10-2008, 06:35 PM
id lose the extention on that last n it looks alot like an "m"

I painted that one and I got rid of it and made a better looking N. Only problem, It dripped like a bitch. But it was sort of because of the tips that came on them new krylon cans. Any tips to aviod drips though, or get better can control?

calculating infinity
06-10-2008, 06:39 PM
I painted that one and I got rid of it and made a better looking N. Only problem, It dripped like a bitch. But it was sort of because of the tips that came on them new krylon cans. Any tips to aviod drips though, or get better can control?
practice

Mo152
06-10-2008, 07:37 PM
To much chat

wings- your s and K is bad in just about all of 'em. loose all your extensions and do-hickeys.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3179/2568350183_666d3376a0.jpg?v=0

GIzUrD
06-10-2008, 08:00 PM
heres a few

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/2443/blacklavvh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/2535/rbogkl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/6757/redoutlinerv5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mass Appeal
06-10-2008, 08:10 PM
that black GI is great
but wtf is that in your sig.

taking over 603
06-10-2008, 08:15 PM
Skin- that last ones dope but your N does look like an M.
Gupe-Lookin good bro but you need to bring your E out further to the right the P is covering the whole shit
Gizurd-That last one looks aight but it kinda looks like it says GIOOD.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c89/Djskilz/atthebeachandmeeting.jpg

Any crits before I continue with this bitch?

dim
06-10-2008, 08:46 PM
give me chance lol.


UPDATE ON THE COLLAB

I WANT ALL ENTRYS IN BY THE 25th OF JUNE.
IF YOU DONT SEND ME YOUR ENRTY YOU AINT IN.

YOU NEED A GREEN FORCEFIELD FOR THOSE WHO HAVENT DONE IT YET.

PEOPLE IM WAITING ON...

MUNE
AIMR
LIBRE
KASR
BAZER
KASPER
SEYAR
HOER
KABRE
CAER
DDDDDIM
IMPALE
SKETCH
RABY
OSHNAP
NERO
AKEL
SHOE 2
HAVOK
SORT
DAWS

..

HURRY THE FUCK UP.
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_1138.jpg
there bitch lol <3

JETPACK!!
06-10-2008, 08:48 PM
i love you dim. but thats far from the best ive seen from you. not feelin it bro. tight fill though.

im gonna have my work sketch up when i get home, fucked around a bit too much on it haha

smooth_nuts
06-10-2008, 08:58 PM
jares-second throws doep,so is the hand
gizerd-the first two are dope not feeling the las ton though :(
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture535.jpg
just a shitty D!

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-10-2008, 09:02 PM
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/2610/rasek20ur6.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hor.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/shake001.jpg
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/bobbby_fisher/DSCI0305.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Forum%20Stuff/60f15a70.jpg
this is stuff i like personally.

Cin123
06-10-2008, 09:09 PM
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/001-12.jpg
i like that personally
the rasek is so clean
nice dim, i like the fill 2 and ur D's are always fresh
abd smooth thats a dope D

Roolete
06-10-2008, 09:09 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_1138.jpg
there bitch lol <3

bump im likin this a lot. lots of potential

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-10-2008, 09:19 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_1138.jpg
there bitch lol <3

that is fuckin sick nice fill in holy shit

seywhat
06-10-2008, 09:22 PM
dim- im feelin the d and r, i dont like the heart on the i and the m seems too small. like roolete said lots of potential. keep playin with it

JETPACK!!
06-10-2008, 09:43 PM
work shit, fuckin with some fill ideas.

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/5041/rasek21yh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-10-2008, 09:47 PM
o that shit is ill
i love ur sek u wanna exchange?

CT08
06-10-2008, 09:47 PM
Nice fill in man

La Coka Nostra
06-10-2008, 09:52 PM
rasek, like your new k and r nugga.
shits tight.
makes me wish i had a fuckin scanner.
i been drawin alot.

Nem
06-10-2008, 10:05 PM
DIMR, your blending work is pretty sick. letter structure is also pretty sick. i would try aligning the letters more vertically rather then tilted to the left so far. your sketch though.

cin, you probably hate to hear it. but bars. do them. forever. and sorry to say, but that clever little heart handstyle thing is wack.

sticker and char.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/stickyicky.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/body.jpg

TaskOne
06-10-2008, 10:19 PM
Rasek thats an ugly fill man. Try out full colour letters. Thanks Edward! :)

La Coka Nostra
06-10-2008, 10:20 PM
cin, you probably hate to hear it. but bars. do them. forever. and sorry to say, but that clever little heart handstyle thing is wack.
^ he did use bars, you can tell.
still not good though. hm...i'm trying to think of any advice i could give you CIN, but i'm drawing a blank.
first of all, stop with that fill. do solid colors for now. experiment a little bit, but don't go crazy.
try and make your C more boxy maybe and not rounded.
add a top to your I.

hm...idk...just work on it...lol

kroc_oner
06-10-2008, 10:34 PM
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0020.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0021.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0022.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0024.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0025.jpg

desokidd
06-10-2008, 10:49 PM
http://i302.photobucket.com/albums/nn96/desokidd1/pic061008_3.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
06-10-2008, 11:48 PM
Yo bro that D looks so Fimilar. Just sayin. But I like the colors, reminds me of a dino theme.

desokidd
06-10-2008, 11:49 PM
thanks man

squidone
06-10-2008, 11:55 PM
deso try and keep your letters the same hight and keep workin with your bars
kroc i like some of your stuff but some of your fill choses are wack
dim i really like your blending

some freestyle stuff i did at a family reunion
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/671/freestyleax0.jpg

GIzUrD
06-11-2008, 12:06 AM
thats my vocal chords in my sig APHER...

desokidd
06-11-2008, 12:07 AM
thanks for the pointers

Mo152
06-11-2008, 12:11 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3009/2568969363_576f9b20d3.jpg?v=0

white
06-11-2008, 12:16 AM
mo152 - nice flow and shadow looks good

shitty pics i know

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0316.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0315-1.jpg

squidone
06-11-2008, 12:24 AM
deso try and keep your letters the same hight and keep workin with your bars
kroc i like some of your stuff but some of your fill choses are wack
dim i really like your blending

some freestyle stuff i did at a family reunion
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/671/freestyleax0.jpg

Bottom bump

Epoc
06-11-2008, 12:28 AM
nukes -your improving meng, keep it up. Just keep working on those blocks and keeping size uniform. + Remove arrow from tag?
gupe - i dont like the tapered end of the G
raze- meh bottom R looks like H, bars kinda uneven.

smooth_nuts
06-11-2008, 12:33 AM
nukes-simples ar elooking descent but you hand style is fucking heariting man,kill the arrows and stop crunching everythign together just keep it simple man ;)

NoCanControl
06-11-2008, 12:53 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3009/2568969363_576f9b20d3.jpg?v=0

work on your flow.. .if you don't know what that is... go to simps.

Evasion Of Invasion
06-11-2008, 12:55 AM
Mo152 - That G is mad hot but looks more evolved then the rest of ur letters try lettin the others keep up
Raze - aint feelin the curls and is way to sloppy
Nukes - try keepin em all the same height
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01539.jpg
the sinn piece i had originally done the fill a year ago and left it at a friends found it tonight so fixed it and made it the best i could with it
crits?

"Louis XIV"
06-11-2008, 01:05 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3100/2569075059_fb70ae29c5.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3109/2569900750_33d84a5f96.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3192/2569074859_8037343d2d.jpg?v=0

crits?

clockmodel
06-11-2008, 01:07 AM
critiques are welcome:

http://postthatpic.com/files/2855/clockflop.JPG
http://postthatpic.com/files/2855/P3100020.JPG
http://postthatpic.com/files/2855/P3100019.JPG

Evasion Of Invasion
06-11-2008, 01:08 AM
heres a crit.

GIVE EM TO GET EM BITCH!!

garbage down tha way
06-11-2008, 01:08 AM
fuck with the second one and holla back

"Louis XIV"
06-11-2008, 01:09 AM
diggin the style of the first one clock

Mo152
06-11-2008, 01:12 AM
ill work on the flow and thanks for all the crits, first time i got more the 1 or 2.

louie, dont be a bitter, your bottom two are better then your first for sure but thats not saying much, you def need to work on more simple shit with the curvs not like the bottom 2 simples.

evasion it looks fresh i feel like its in space lol.

squid more simple.

clockmodel
06-11-2008, 01:13 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3109/2569900750_33d84a5f96.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3192/2569074859_8037343d2d.jpg?v=0
crits?

your vermont "influence" is very clear.. you know what im talking about.

JETPACK!!
06-11-2008, 01:15 AM
clock, your shit's dope man, im really feelin it. your C in your first sketch kinna looks like a 2 or a Z, depends on how you look at it.

wanted to add some colors. no markers, just spraycans.

http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/5433/rasek22nx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

smooth_nuts
06-11-2008, 01:16 AM
clock-for the first one stop with all that random shit coming out of no where that makes me want some koolaid...i say keep doing what you did in the last one
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture544.jpg
blocks for the crew.....idk why my dum ass made the letter so damn close but what ever :(

IlikePie
06-11-2008, 01:18 AM
That R is hawt Jetty

clockmodel
06-11-2008, 01:38 AM
thanks to all who responded. that was fast!
jetpack - very clean.. If i had to say anything it would be that the R and S vary in thickness more than the other letters. exchange?
smoothnuts - haha kool-aid... Like your stuff. reminds me of my favorite.. Dondi. exchange?

smooth_nuts
06-11-2008, 01:47 AM
hmmmm i guess i be dow for an exchange....
but i must ask hows that remind you of dond,unless your talking about some of my other shit from pages back then i guess i could see that haha

JETPACK!!
06-11-2008, 01:48 AM
clock, your shit's dope man, im really feelin it. your C in your first sketch kinna looks like a 2 or a Z, depends on how you look at it.

wanted to add some colors. no markers, just spraycans.

http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/5433/rasek22nx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

nutty, that shit is just too blocky for me. not feelin the K at all either.

smooth_nuts
06-11-2008, 02:01 AM
yeah i dont like that shit much either ah well i was just dicking around any way....
jetty,the a looks like it should be a bit taller,the extentions on the leg of the r and k ar wack you hsould just square off the end of the leg like you did with the left bar of the k...if that makes sence haha

JETPACK!!
06-11-2008, 02:06 AM
to be honest, thats what i think looks better. but everyones sayin the leg shits look good.

smooth_nuts
06-11-2008, 02:15 AM
naaaah you should most deff just suare off the edges....

Mo152
06-11-2008, 02:27 AM
Jet, im with nutty, i aslo think you should square off the edges. i like the color.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3279/2569207373_f98468c908.jpg?v=0

osnapizzel
06-11-2008, 02:48 AM
mo i like that style dude keep it up

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/480/picture222rx8.jpg

smooth_nuts
06-11-2008, 03:08 AM
mo,dont be afraid to overlap your letters and bend your bars more ;)

garbage down tha way
06-11-2008, 04:49 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hor4.jpg

ohsnap- i like your more curey simples. my favorite letters on that one are the o and h.

gupe- your name is awkward, but the simples arent looking too bad, connect the loop on your p to the main bar. also try overlapping your letters.

rasek- im lovin that R, and the rest but mainly the R.

Mass Appeal
06-11-2008, 08:31 AM
Is that for the proddy ?......
You need a new scanner bbe
I like it anywhoo.

taking over 603
06-11-2008, 09:07 AM
Gupe- Shit looks good bro, i would close the p alittle more though.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c89/Djskilz/atthebeachandmeeting047.jpg

Any crits?

South-Pole
06-11-2008, 11:25 AM
i'd go for the second one

experimenting new styles,even if its not my best,just to change a bit

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42432.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42433.jpg

thanks for criting



BUMP,got no crits

edit:garbage thats fucking hot
rasek-your simps got better

mass,whats up with the collab thing,what is it?

Mass Appeal
06-11-2008, 11:34 AM
You send me your fresh sexy peice ... it has to have a green forcefield...check the Prod. thread..ill add you in my French Ribery lover...has to be to me by 25th June

garbage down tha way
06-11-2008, 11:35 AM
Is that for the proddy ?......
You need a new scanner bbe
I like it anywhoo.

ehhhh it was going to be but then i realized how small my e was. im gonna do one more right quick.

Mass Appeal
06-11-2008, 12:23 PM
RASEK...whens the next Paint Battle...cos ill enter...im borrowing a camera for it.

JETPACK!!
06-11-2008, 12:24 PM
this sunday night bro.

Mass Appeal
06-11-2008, 12:53 PM
oooooh...i MIGHT be able to make that deadline....hopefully...iff not ill enter the next one....my name ?...props to Proper ?...you ?

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ff.jpg

AHER...( Ah-er )

I GOT CLOUT
06-11-2008, 01:57 PM
Mass, those are seriously my favorite letters ive seen you do.

Some people may think the A and H look a little too similar, but I def. like it man.

South-Pole
06-11-2008, 02:00 PM
^exactly what i thought,the a and h do look alike a bit,but still im feeling this alot

Mass Appeal
06-11-2008, 02:07 PM
Youll be glad to see a pic of it painted then..
Considering the high demand of the viewing of my painted stuff...im going to borrow a camera for that peice.

I GOT CLOUT
06-11-2008, 02:13 PM
Well I dont know how glad im gonna be to lose the paint battle, but i do want to see that shit painted.

Mo152
06-11-2008, 02:55 PM
mass, i think you need to define the A a lil bit more... love the colors, as always.

Oh snap-dope simple man, really fresh.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3085/2570397329_ecfc63e297.jpg?v=0

(SoS)Viruz
06-11-2008, 03:00 PM
Mass- I like yo shit bro. I like you Tag too it fresh. I going to be like that. In like 20 years lol. XD

NoCanControl
06-11-2008, 03:01 PM
Youll be glad to see a pic of it painted then..
Considering the high demand of the viewing of my painted stuff...im going to borrow a camera for that peice.

curse you apher.

JETPACK!!
06-11-2008, 03:02 PM
oooooh...i MIGHT be able to make that deadline....hopefully...iff not ill enter the next one....my name ?...props to Proper ?...you ?

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ff.jpg

AHER...( Ah-er )

yeah, do your name man. you dont need shout outs, i just did cuz it was his Bday.

gimmie a shout anyways, ill give you one. word

define your A more, put a hole in it. but the shit's tight

sketch3
06-11-2008, 03:09 PM
define your A more, put a hole in it. but the shit's tight

lol your a-holes to tight

Mass Appeal
06-11-2008, 03:42 PM
curse you apher.

?..

JETPACK!!
06-11-2008, 03:58 PM
he's gonna be painting too, he r no he lostz0rz

Shoook
06-11-2008, 04:07 PM
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/scan0013-1.jpg
ignore that weird ass diamond ting on the right top side

NoCanControl
06-11-2008, 04:17 PM
shook, keep you letters not so generic, i would go back to basics
ashper, your h a , samething, already heard it a million times
Mo, you have no flow, work on it. and your letters are goofy looking.
south pole, your letters look like a sex with no condoms bite, i think thats who it is....?
sins, watch out for those unessssisary extentions. take em out.

will post here shortly.



and thanks for being suttle about it jetpack.....

quip
06-11-2008, 04:30 PM
Tell me what you think...
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q87/GunnerReptiles/green.jpg
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q87/GunnerReptiles/pinkstripes.jpg

white
06-11-2008, 04:36 PM
mass - your shit is crazy i love the way you fill your letters
mo - smashed
quip - simples,new to graff thread, not good AT ALL
shuk - letters look wierd to me idk

crits? new style with some wierd flow in it....
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0319.jpg

Bah Humbug
06-11-2008, 04:41 PM
nuke-keep em the same size

quip
06-11-2008, 04:45 PM
yeah i know i suck, i'm still figuring out my style i guess you could say. i've got all these ideas of what i think would work, then when i try to draw it, it is nothing like i planned... i'm practicing though...

white
06-11-2008, 04:51 PM
nuke-keep em the same size

ya i kinda have a problem doing that wtf lol
quip just keep practicing read the new to graff thread, read all the links, watch all of the videos, memorize memorize memorize, i sucked asshole (some people think i still do) like 4 or 5 months ago and i kept practicing and writin and postn and takn crits, i got better and will keep getn better

South-Pole
06-11-2008, 05:00 PM
south pole, your letters look like a sex with no condoms bite, i think thats who it is....?


at all,not even influenced.I don't even see what in common with sex,i didn't bite anyone actually.i never bited anyone and never will.

edit: okay,i admit,the only influence i have is from the guy in my sig(ogre)
and this guy http://orphe-prod.skyrock.com/ (horfe)

Mass Appeal
06-11-2008, 05:01 PM
Yeah..dont listen to him Torn

quip
06-11-2008, 05:12 PM
how bout this?
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q87/GunnerReptiles/scan0003copy.jpg

South-Pole
06-11-2008, 05:15 PM
use bars,make them strainght and make letters the same size

mass-you said it haha

Mass Appeal
06-11-2008, 05:17 PM
ashper, your h a , samething, already heard it a million times


And what the fuck is this shit about ?.

Graffiti is about what YOU wanna do. Transforming letters how YOU want to. Just because i draw an A whos to say i HAVE to add an hole ?...Iv done my months of simples and i know fine well that in ALL my sketches my letters look like the letters theyre supposed to be. In the last sketch no way does the A look like a H...you can CLEARLY see my H and how different it is to the A.

There isnt any boundries in graffiti. If there as id add an hole to my A. Ill do what the fuck i want with my own lettering and form they how i want.

Bossman-
06-11-2008, 05:28 PM
^^^finally someone said it, good rant i feel that. Just cause something or style is "in" the rest of the graff world shouldnt change to look good, they should work harder with what they like to make it look good. but toys like me and the majority of you reading should shut up and stick to the basics. remember! bars bars bars.

But those who really have a hold on things, dont let idiots who think that their style is "the" style or what everyone else does bother your style or what you do. except toys again. shut up and go back to basics. listen to what we tell you until your good enough to find a style, we will tell you when that is.

Mass Appeal
06-11-2008, 05:31 PM
Dont worry..its been told plenty of times...just gotta tell the new generation of members on here whom are so scared to see letters that arnt in the usual form.

whahappen?
06-11-2008, 05:37 PM
oooooh...i MIGHT be able to make that deadline....hopefully...iff not ill enter the next one....my name ?...props to Proper ?...you ?

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ff.jpg

AHER...( Ah-er )
nice E on the top right hand
does bawk or uhh or caer or knews ever post anymore

-CAIN-
06-11-2008, 05:44 PM
Not done yet, but...:
http://i269.photobucket.com/albums/jj59/_DKS_/CO.jpg

Mass Appeal
06-11-2008, 05:47 PM
WAPPPENNN BABY WHERE THE FUCK OU BEEEENNNN
Tricks comes on like...once every 3 months...Alive has been banned or something....Uuuuuh came on like..2 months ago..his first post in months....hasnt posted since..and Knews comes on now and then.

Sup man ?

NoCanControl
06-11-2008, 05:49 PM
And what the fuck is this shit about ?.

Graffiti is about what YOU wanna do. Transforming letters how YOU want to. Just because i draw an A whos to say i HAVE to add an hole ?...Iv done my months of simples and i know fine well that in ALL my sketches my letters look like the letters theyre supposed to be. In the last sketch no way does the A look like a H...you can CLEARLY see my H and how different it is to the A.

There isnt any boundries in graffiti. If there as id add an hole to my A. Ill do what the fuck i want with my own lettering and form they how i want.

damn dood, just a crit. maybe you should post in the big boy thread where they aren't allowed to give crits.

whahappen?
06-11-2008, 05:55 PM
WAPPPENNN BABY WHERE THE FUCK OU BEEEENNNN
Tricks comes on like...once every 3 months...Alive has been banned or something....Uuuuuh came on like..2 months ago..his first post in months....hasnt posted since..and Knews comes on now and then.

Sup man ?
damn, i was hoping alive still came on i wanna see whatever happened to him/his style

i havent been doing shit, i got caught a few months ago and i decided to quit for awhile, maybe forever but i dont know
life without graffiti is boring as hell though, half the time i dont know what the fuck to do with myself haha

Mass Appeal
06-11-2008, 06:28 PM
NoCanControl...i understand that but it was a worthless crit...there are other things up with that peice..like the fill...sloppyness..bleh whatever

Whappen...show me your throws and stuff...you know i loved em when others didnt.

NoCanControl
06-11-2008, 06:37 PM
NoCanControl...i understand that but it was a worthless crit...there are other things up with that peice..like the fill...sloppyness..bleh whatever

Whappen...show me your throws and stuff...you know i loved em when others didnt.

meh, whatever, all i know is yo ass is grass in the paint battle. heh. :p

Mass Appeal
06-11-2008, 06:39 PM
Dont go gettin your hopes up...my supplier is a bitch for getting etimated times of arrivals wrong.

white
06-11-2008, 06:45 PM
the simple i did this morning with 3D and color....

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0321.jpg

Evasion Of Invasion
06-11-2008, 06:54 PM
Mo152 - That G is mad hot but looks more evolved then the rest of ur letters try lettin the others keep up
Raze - aint feelin the curls and is way to sloppy
Nukes - try keepin em all the same height
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01539.jpg
the sinn piece i had originally done the fill a year ago and left it at a friends found it tonight so fixed it and made it the best i could with it
crits?

bump

Mass Appeal
06-11-2008, 07:04 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/frrrf.jpg

NoCanControl
06-11-2008, 07:10 PM
Dont go gettin your hopes up...my supplier is a bitch for getting etimated times of arrivals wrong.

aka art is primo





dot the com


???

kroc_oner
06-11-2008, 09:17 PM
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0020.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0021.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0022.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0024.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0025.jpg
COMMENTS OR CRITS PLEASE

ahper or aher i cant read it its originall like your style i think the style u did a week ago was better though and thts a nice fill
evasion if thts a simple its nice if its a new stlye stay with the old one its sick
nukes keep practicing

IlikePie
06-11-2008, 09:38 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1213233680.jpg

Took way too long to sketch, and I still gotta do an Ara....

Hater-AiD~>
06-11-2008, 09:42 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1213233680.jpg

Took way too long to sketch, and I still gotta do an Ara....
that r looks good..you could copy that and make your a too..removin that extension at the top left kinda makes it look like an A

Epoc
06-11-2008, 09:43 PM
sinn- i like it but personally i wouldnt create the extensions on the N's or atleast make them so long.
kroc- i likey...a bit unconsistant and choppy in some areas but overall good. bottom one is my fave.
quip- simps by hand
aher- crazy and dope as par with ur style. enjoyed not seeing guns or faces on these ones, just a bit of a change.

IlikePie
06-11-2008, 09:45 PM
It's a K >_<

Hater-AiD~>
06-11-2008, 09:46 PM
It's a K >_<

oh damn..my bad..should have looked at it a lil longer..
well you got me fooled

IlikePie
06-11-2008, 09:49 PM
Well, an R is just like a K without the closed top...

Bets369R
06-11-2008, 09:50 PM
looks like a K to me lol

Hater-AiD~>
06-11-2008, 09:52 PM
looks like a K to me lol
im not saying it didnt look like a k..i just didnt take that good of a look at it to catch that open end at the top

IlikePie
06-11-2008, 09:55 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/frrrf.jpg


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1213233680.jpg

Took way too long to sketch, and I still gotta do an Ara....

Bump.

dim
06-11-2008, 10:11 PM
i like pie
on the k try thin up some of the bars and extend the bottom right leg

Hater-AiD~>
06-11-2008, 10:19 PM
some bullshit
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/Picture070.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
06-11-2008, 10:19 PM
This looks like shit, but havent posted in a minute...

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16117.jpg

And Pie, that shits clean. Me like.

6head slug
06-11-2008, 10:26 PM
amuse, i like the 3d. would like to see it with some colour.
mass apeal, thats a hot piece. really like the simplicity and chunkyness.
crits?
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9689/kosebbym6.jpg

HANGO
06-11-2008, 10:36 PM
my shit [[/B]

6head slug
06-11-2008, 10:41 PM
hango, it seems as though the letters lack body. they look a little flimsy. some extensions look unnatural, llike the lower extension on the green a. id work on the letter structure a little more before adding that kind of 3d. just my 2 cents though.

JETPACK!!
06-11-2008, 10:49 PM
both of you need to work on your letter structure before throwin in extensions. do simples for half a year, or until there clean as fuck.. then you can add extensions. dont color your shit either, coloring sketches is useless. all it does is distract people from your letter structure. when your letters look good black and white, your set for colors

HANGO
06-11-2008, 10:50 PM
my shit [[/B]

HANGO
06-11-2008, 10:52 PM
my shit [[/B]88

6head slug
06-11-2008, 10:53 PM
thanks for the advice jetpack

Maste
06-11-2008, 11:30 PM
i agree with jetpack
hango if your tryin to post pics it aint working
igotclout (i did too its awsome haha) also that looks cool it may just be the way you colored it haah but i like it
hateraid if you think its bs dont post it...why would you...make better one and do it
pie i like the k except for the top connection on the bottom of the right leg XD it seems a bit too fat.long
kroc your stuff looks "melty" i think maybe taking out soem of the bumbs not nessacarily all of them though would make it look better and more clean

mine:
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8829/mastenew001vectorizedfrot5.png (http://imageshack.us)
ctits please

Hater-AiD~>
06-11-2008, 11:46 PM
i agree with jetpack
hango if your tryin to post pics it aint working
igotclout (i did too its awsome haha) also that looks cool it may just be the way you colored it haah but i like it
hateraid if you think its bs dont post it...why would you...make better one and do it
pie i like the k except for the top connection on the bottom of the right leg XD it seems a bit too fat.long
kroc your stuff looks "melty" i think maybe taking out soem of the bumbs not nessacarily all of them though would make it look better and more clean

mine:
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8829/mastenew001vectorizedfrot5.png (http://imageshack.us)
ctits please

gotta get crits somehow..if you dont post..then it doesnt happen

Maste
06-12-2008, 12:07 AM
haha thats true i geuss i dunno though ussually people give crits to get em back ;)

kroc_oner
06-12-2008, 12:13 AM
mastei like the e keep at it it has a certain flow to it i like it overall just keep practicing

osnapizzel
06-12-2008, 12:16 AM
slug way too many random extensions and bits, go more simple

osnapizzel
06-12-2008, 12:18 AM
freestyle simp at workhttp://img149.imageshack.us/img149/2776/picture223ld5.jpg