Blackbooks

[Scare2]

This one looks real nice.. juss take out that lil twirl on the bottom left side of the tree and it'll be perfect.

hell no dude, imo that one twirl makes the entire piece, im not sure why but its my favorite part of the whole thing.

[Shiva.]

a bigger twirl would look nice i think

[TaskOne]

scare, keep working on your simples. the first one is the best. the rest are kinna mehh.

ugghhhhh, it was looking good till i finished it.
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7889/rasek25id3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

The S could use some work, maybe try a thicker bar.

[crowned]

a bigger twirl would look nice i thinkkeep that little one and add a bigger twirl.. help to balance it

real dope keep it up

[Chump]

http://i28.tinypic.com/2urlbt2.jpg
just messin around... I'm to lazy to find the tot character thread :\

[eMJayBee]

coloring on the soldier came out nice, the squid needs color;), sketch ,,before an after.

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Paintings040.jpg

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/004.jpg

[RFI. SPit]

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/6232/photo45tj2.jpg

Was coming up with so much better shit a month or so ago -___-


looking good emjaybee

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/dddd.jpg?t=1213745568

[(SoS) Flu]

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/6232/photo45tj2.jpg

Was coming up with so much better shit a month or so ago -___-


looking good emjaybee

well you should have the E flow better like have the bottom like a swirl like the first letter.

cake: shit is nice tilt the K just a little to the leftt and move it a bit to the right.
and it would be on point.

Bee: In the B and the E the add on it makes it seem like theres 3 E's in total but im not sure if thats just me.

Chump: You should try some color schemes because that shit is hott. stay up.

[drop one.]

idk havent posted .sum shyt u might think looks stupid but idk y i like that style




http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/287/dsc02946lr5.jpg

idk dont ask VVV

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/7572/dsc02947la0.jpg

idk y but i love this sketch and if i can get a painting permit at 5 points imma paint it wen i go VVV

http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h40/chris_22_/DSC02841.jpg

i love the Z VVV

http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/7426/dsc02950tu4.jpg

[drop one.]

idk my lines suck kuz my marker nibes suck!

[Mo152]

mmmm your right about the lines, but you forgot to say your letters, proportions are all off

[JETPACK!!]

...a painting permit? just grab a can of spraypaint an hit a wall.. that is the point of graffiti.

[(SoS)Viruz]

A hit a quick thowie on that where ever your pat.

A Jet while your at look at my Thorwie.

[JETPACK!!]

holy shit, get off my tip.

[drop one.]

i wanna piece that at 5 points kuz 5 points mad diff. writers are gonna see it n that way ill get my best piece seen by mad ppl n i need a permit to paint there n i know a lot about graffiti n proportions sum of u needa not only look at the toy thread look at the big boy threds kuz there stuf doesnt have proportions they stuff has self style nigaa graff isnt a bout simple its about expression n thats one thing u needa learn to get a step further to becomin a better writer

[IlikePie]

Its hard to express your brooding soul when you suck though...

[Maste]

maybe mr poze is supremly better at painting than black books...maybe haha id like to see some of his painted stuff (before he goes to 5 points...) but lookin at the black book stuff id say dont waste your time...if you do get a ahcance to paint it...by chance. it wont last long. you are right graff isnt all about simps and a lot of it is style but you dont exaclty have a great style goin yet and you know this cause your posting in the toy forums...thats the end of my 2 cents haha

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Rasek - ur E looks to much like a T loose the massive curl on it and c wut happens
Emjaybe - Y u posting here? ur shits killer like to c more of a background on that one tho
Chump - its nasty hurl it either go mor real or catoony look through a cartoon book they can help
Zof - ur a good guy and all but i personally think ur graffs headed in the wrong direction this aint beef its constructive crits i say lose a shit load of extensions and work hard on ur E and F i think theyve been dragging u down lately ill c if i can draw u up somethin rough man ;)
Edward - ive seen way better from u im kinda diggin the fill
Drop - dont u dare paint that shit infront of a bunch of ppl unless u wanna be a walkin joke keep that shit hidin then when u good burst onto the scene like a rapist in a all girls private school
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0025.jpg
crits? trade with a homie of mine dont know wut else to do with it

[Mass Appeal]

i wanna piece that at 5 points kuz 5 points mad diff. writers are gonna see it n that way ill get my best piece seen by mad ppl n i need a permit to paint there n i know a lot about graffiti n proportions sum of u needa not only look at the toy thread look at the big boy threds kuz there stuf doesnt have proportions they stuff has self style nigaa graff isnt a bout simple its about expression n thats one thing u needa learn to get a step further to becomin a better writer

HAHAHAHAHAH 5 Pointz..my god...get a reality check you idiot.

Lol these are what my wall plans end up looking like..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/12d1f6db.jpg

[Mo152]

i wanna piece that at 5 points kuz 5 points
mad diff. writers are gonna see it n that way ill get my best piece seen
by mad ppl n i need a permit to paint there n i know a lot about graffiti
n proportions sum of u needa not only look at the toy thread look at
the big boy threds kuz there stuf doesnt have proportions they stuff
has self style nigaa graff isnt a bout simple its about expression n thats
one thing u needa learn to get a step further to becomin a better
writer

well if your such a bad ass why do you post your shit in the toy
section, where people come to get their pieces Critiqued, if you love
to express yourself so much and they mean so much to you, put it on
a canvas and hang it over your bed, but don't come the the Board
MADE FOR TOY'S, on a Thread Title "TOY BLACK BOOKS" and strut
your, expressive arrogant bullshit. fuck..

and learn how to fuckin speak English get off that Ebonics bullshit,
express yourself like you are an educated person.


Its hard to express your brooding soul when
you suck though...

agreed!

[MarOne...]

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0025.jpg
crits? trade with a homie of mine dont know wut else to do with it


Wow, good job...

You did 2 out of 4 letters. -_-'

lose the arrows. Both of them.

[chektwo]

I think this'll make everyones day in a superbad-toy way.

I've just started getting into graffiti over the past two weeks, and I started a blackbook about two days ago, the first few pages are mostly tags & letters.
But I did these last night... and I know they suck, but I was just wondering how to move on from "lame bubble style" to "better bubble style", and I thought this would be the place to ask.

I dont think these are cool or that they rock in any way, I'm just after lots of crit.


... *gulp*

http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/9355/06170822153700jg7.jpg


I think the W needs more work... and the rest of it.

[edapt_gc]

chektwo: just look around at some throwies that are successful. you will notice that all the lines look effortless. You won't see any awkward curves or kinks, just smooth flowing lines. I would try sketching it really quick, to get the smooth motion down. and then once you got that, work on structure a bit more. some of your letters are hard to make out.

here's some of my sketches, crits appreciated:

http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/jmiket/bluedapt.jpg

http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/jmiket/swirldapt.jpg

[amberTrichome]

Seriously drop ur like 10x worse than me and I wouldn't dare pick up a can yet... I can usually keep my bars n outlines even lol at least if im not lazy... evasion dont really like those letters w/k but the background is sick n the flower is trippy

[South-Pole]

^both of you,,new to graff thread,trust me theres no better shit to read to get you started

[(SoS) Flu]

chektwo: just look around at some throwies that are successful. you will notice that all the lines look effortless. You won't see any awkward curves or kinks, just smooth flowing lines. I would try sketching it really quick, to get the smooth motion down. and then once you got that, work on structure a bit more. some of your letters are hard to make out.

here's some of my sketches, crits appreciated:

http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/jmiket/bluedapt.jpg

http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/jmiket/swirldapt.jpg

your squishing your letters together tooo much it makes it seem like and illusion and if your going to squish it up dont make sooo many extention ya dig.

on the first piece none of the letters really flow with the E.
like it has inward bends and you should have one or two other letters have a similar bend so it would make it balanced.


your stroke game in inking is pretty weak and the extention from the P shouldnt exist its just there to confuse the hell out of us.

but seems like your getting a better feel for graffiti and you know where to put stuff just sometimes you seem to over do it. another thing some people might tell you take of the arrow on the second burner but keep it. its the middle letter and it can be slightly different from the other letter because since its in the middle it wont throw anything off and the P and T look wierd that close.

[drop one.]

ive picked up a can imma beast at throwups and n tags i just kinda suk at piecin but lines aint suppost to be straight all the tim fuk hed god do ur graff hw then talk bout my shyt n post up if ur better than me

[Tokenkaligreens]

graff hw? kid your a joke a beast at throw ups and tags lmfao. STFU take the crits and work your letters, cuz they are horrible. otherwise just gtfo.

[edapt_gc]

i appreciate the crits, flu. I'll work up a sketch sometime tonight and keep that shit in mind.

I agree about that E in the first sketch... it doesn't seem to fit. your also right about the letters being too squished. i gotta work on that shit. I think i'm doing it to try and force the letters to flow better, I just haven't quite figured it out yet.

thanks

[fromthegrave]

check2- dont draw in a Black book yet, ur gunna regret using it up early. have other kids u know do stuff in it if anything.
good start tho.
edapt- drop the extensions, separate ur letters and do some simples with some style. i like the e in ur first one, evolve that a little and get some letters to flow with it.


kinda like this sketch.
any suggestions before i ruin it with color?
http://i30.tinypic.com/28m2zuu.jpg

[TaskOne]

Looks sick fromthegrave! I suggest making the S flow more with the rest of the letters, and the bars seem alittle smaller than the rest of the letters aswell! Keep sketching.

[(SoS) Flu]

i appreciate the crits, flu. I'll work up a sketch sometime tonight and keep that shit in mind.

I agree about that E in the first sketch... it doesn't seem to fit. your also right about the letters being too squished. i gotta work on that shit. I think i'm doing it to try and force the letters to flow better, I just haven't quite figured it out yet.

thanks

yeah man just keep working at it. you have potential im sure if you put your mind to it you can make those corrections.


Grave: you should maybe drop one or two arrows from the S unless you want the S to dominate the whole piece because its mad dope and it makes your other letters look plain which there not but i like the A. or you can just take out one arrow and add more in different spots like around A and R and maybe even near the E.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/GraffitiRilon.jpg

[fromthegrave]

gotcha, thnx kids.

ur coloring is dope

[(SoS) Flu]

my bad check i forgot to help you out.
check2: look at other peoples throwups and bite them because your at the stage that you have to bite throw ups and a style here and there then when you like a style you turn it in to your own and make the best of it. i learned that from a really cool guy name mass appeal you should check some of his shit out he has a european style you cant find much styles like that where im from and its pretty original and when doing a throw up have all the same base structure and movement seems that your trying to hard to make it look perfect it looks better when you do fast easy strokes.

[letsgobombin]

ive picked up a can imma beast at throwups and n tags i just kinda suk at piecin but lines aint suppost to be straight all the tim fuk hed god do ur graff hw then talk bout my shyt n post up if ur better than me
poze, i've seen your throwies and tags and at their best their only passable and have you noticed even the people that are good don't go around being big headed, but your miles away from that anyway

[(SoS) Flu]

you can get good on your own its hard i tried for a while but i couldnt do it and im a great artist but this was out of my nature but im telling you personality is the key to a graffiti artist as well. graffiti is a community of people with similar interest and if you dont want to be accepted be my guest. you should just accept what people say to you and try and prove them wrong so you can gain your respect man. im crushing all the beef i have with you man just try and take this advice that im writing to you.

[fromthegrave]

added stuff..
http://i26.tinypic.com/29h7qq.jpg

[*cept*]

check2- dont draw in a Black book yet, ur gunna regret using it up early. have other kids u know do stuff in it if anything.
good start tho.
edapt- drop the extensions, separate ur letters and do some simples with some style. i like the e in ur first one, evolve that a little and get some letters to flow with it.


kinda like this sketch.
any suggestions before i ruin it with color?
http://i30.tinypic.com/28m2zuu.jpg

i like it but it looks like the bars thin out from left to right, like the ones on the A are much thicker than the ones on the s. i understand how you thinned out the corners, but the A is just the same size all around. Even 'em out and color that bitch.

[*cept*]

added stuff..
http://i26.tinypic.com/29h7qq.jpg

DAt sHiT iZZ So hIph0pppppp!!

[AcosOne]

haha you just fucked it up :p just keep it simpler... and try to use bigger paper or making a smaller piece

[(SoS) Flu]

yeah grave you went over board.
but just take out the arrows it was unbalanced but now no one can notice the piece you got to find a perfect balance that it makes the piece look nice and balanced out.

[fromthegrave]

uhh yea i know i over did it, ha but i like it, ill color it in and post it, then make a simple one. no skool gives me hella time to do this stuff.

[Thrice]

Grave-when you fill it i suggest doing a force field, don't think 3D will work out great with the position and negative space left.
Flu-looking nice dude, i'd add on to fill up the large space between the letters, shadow or forcefield maybe.
Just a quick freestyle, 123 klan style. Quick handstyle with copic sketch, sucks i know.
http://i30.tinypic.com/2cfp4is.jpg

[(SoS) Flu]

yeah i know i love not going to school :D
umm thanks thrice its actually pretty good i like it its pretty simple and nice and clean soo props to you.

[drop one.]

IIGHT I SEE WAT U MEEN BUT I DONT WANNA DO I DONT LIKE THEM IM DOIN THIS SKETCH HOW DOES IT LOOK I LIKE THE P NOT SO MUCH THE O i want some critz i wanna get better so im only gonna talk criticism no shhyt talkin unless u shit tlk to me
(pic quality sucks)
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/4016/dsc02954fh6.jpg

[drop one.]

ahem its iight no the best color scheme tho maybe if u gonna do bars make em look like straighter like idk how to say it like looks outaplace thin bar thick bars

[(SoS) Flu]

IIGHT I SEE WAT U MEEN BUT I DONT WANNA DO I DONT LIKE THEM IM DOIN THIS SKETCH HOW DOES IT LOOK I LIKE THE P NOT SO MUCH THE O i want some critz i wanna get better so im only gonna talk criticism no shhyt talkin unless u shit tlk to me
(pic quality sucks)
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/4016/dsc02954fh6.jpg

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/apherstyle.jpg


umm i think you should lose the arrows then ink it then put it back up here.

[drop one.]

flu that shit look good just put them closer together

[(SoS) Flu]

yeah i know i didnt noticce how far away they were from eachother til i finished coloring them lol.

[AcosOne]

i really like the contrast between the fat outlines and the tiny spirals inside, flu... and very nice coloring as well... you should do some work on your handstyle though

[Riss]

Why the fuck do I see people posting in both sections? I saw cais and now apher...
wtf!?
Stick to one section.. What's tbe point of posting in both? If you think you are a toy, stay the fuck here.. Or do you think you ain't but just wanna get you e-fame all around the forum or some shit? wtf?

I don't get it...

[(SoS) Flu]

yeah i know i was screwing around here.

Riss like seriously its not that serious man you should just chill out.

[westsida]

ARES-sick but im sure the name ares is taken by someone big. its a sick piece tohuh, but the E looks mad squashed, make it a bit wider,make the S bars a bit thicker, and calm it down with the addons, it takes away from the letters. Fuck colour haha, i jst colour the odd sketch, letters are the most important! wait til u have a good sketch before you colour it man.

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/1449/dsc00066vh8.th.jpg (http://img237.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00066vh8.jpg)


http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/7276/dsc00065ht4.th.jpg (http://img513.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00065ht4.jpg)

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/6514/dsc00063oe6.th.jpg (http://img237.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00063oe6.jpg)

http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/867/dsc00062lc3.th.jpg (http://img393.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00062lc3.jpg)

[shun]

westsida: the first one is more or less illegible. the second one is cool, the lines on the N could be straightened up/the whole thing could be cleaned up. the third one is my fav. the handstyle could use some work, maybe lose those extra scribble things. also, i feel obligated to tell you that your name is dangerously close to ANUS.

[LAN3YFS]

check2- dont draw in a Black book yet, ur gunna regret using it up early. have other kids u know do stuff in it if anything.
good start tho.
edapt- drop the extensions, separate ur letters and do some simples with some style. i like the e in ur first one, evolve that a little and get some letters to flow with it.


kinda like this sketch.
any suggestions before i ruin it with color?
http://i30.tinypic.com/28m2zuu.jpg

shoulda left et the way it was..

[(SoS)Viruz]

Flu bro.... Dope. You should have put all the shout outs on the bottom tho. Cause Like I dont know if they see it but the Kiloz is looks like scribles. But it sope nether the less.

[Riss]

yeah i know i was screwing around here.

Riss like seriously its not that serious man you should just chill out.

Yeah I know.. It seemed as I was pissed off in that post when I read it again lol..
I'm calm.. I just think it's lame... As I wrote.. It's like they wanna get the e-fame up or some shit.. Or posting in the toy section cause they wanna recieve props from the toys..

[(SoS) Flu]

i dont really care about the recognition of the lower i want to get recognized by the higher like gesus and atlok and people like them. i post my shit everywhere also so i can improve maybe that what they want to do. I'm not sure tho.

[drop one.]

im not gonna post the rest of the flick from b4 looks like ass

[chektwo]

Thanks for the crit everyone, I expected more hatred, so thanks for sparing me.

fromthegrave, its a hard-backed black school book, I stole a load when I left, about 20-something, although sticking to paper does actually seem like a decent idea for the time being.

ty everyone.

[jupsick]

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/5003/1806082306lc9.jpg
crits?

[Thrice]

Give crits to get crits....golden rule of BS

[I GOT CLOUT]

Ares - Shoulda left it alone. But that E was fuckin nice man.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16135.jpg

[traP905]

Clout-3rd one down is mad ill

[garbage down tha way]

easer e- S on the 3rd one down is definitely yer best one, but no other letters on the whole paper fit with it. Work on the e and a for the piece, you got em down for the top simples but not the more complicated shit.

[fromthegrave]

ease that 3rd one down FRESH shit kid.

ill do a similar sketch to the first one i did before. not sweatin it to much.
im gunna finish coloring my other one soon and get to work on a simpler one. ill post it by tomorrow.

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/44293103.jpg
Just finally colored it... I hate it.

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/5c914d44.jpg
Literal 2 minute job last night, took a few months back and did this style again :)

[Shiva.]

i think you wrote 2 upside down then

[IlikePie]

Haha, probably. It was fast, whatever, and done by iPod light.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

new shit i been workin on did this in school
http://i25.tinypic.com/2zzozf7.jpg
bad pic prolly cant see it but in some spots theres a lighter blue i blended almost looks grey
what yall think?

[fromthegrave]

last post i did had a little to much info about me on it.. ha..
to sum up wut i said...
Ease def paint that 3rd one, maybe tweak the 3d.

Finished coloring...
What hand style is the best?
http://i30.tinypic.com/2iktnoi.jpg

[-ShAmEE-]

ur letter stucture is weak, and u have hidden it by the random ass extensions and fills kno ur stucture!

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/1-2.jpg

yeah i'm fixin the U okay!

[fromthegrave]

last post i did had a little to much info about me on it.. ha..
to sum up wut i said...
Ease def paint that 3rd one, maybe tweak the 3d.

Finished coloring...
What hand style is the best?
http://i30.tinypic.com/2iktnoi.jpg

bottom page bump

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

new shit i been workin on did this in school
http://i25.tinypic.com/2zzozf7.jpg
bad pic prolly cant see it but in some spots theres a lighter blue i blended almost looks grey
what yall think?

bump bump bump bump it up

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/44293103.jpg
Just finally colored it... I hate it.

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/5c914d44.jpg
Literal 2 minute job last night, took a few months back and did this style again :)

Bump 'cuz I never post flicks.

Shamee, I've never seen a finished piece from you, like all colored and prettied up.... :(
Ares, what Shamee said, it's just extension upon extension covering weak letters.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

yaa well if you really look at alot of wildstyle type of shit the letters are always pretty simple jus outline ur letters more ares and fuck around wit extensions should end up lookin right

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

crits for me????

http://i25.tinypic.com/2zzozf7.jpg

[seywhat]

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage105-1.jpg
new style, 3d is fucked a bit. imma be workin on the colab peice tomorrow. its due the 25th right?

ra- im diggin the bottom one more, maybe make the hole in the top r a little bigger. there both fresh though
sek- dont connect ur e and k, if ur usin bars keep them all the same width
ares- ur a and s arent too bad, work on ur structure with all ur letters though. sketch up some simps. dope colorin though
ease- im feelin the top one, maybe make the bottom of ur e's more like ur s if u know what i mean

[smooth_nuts]

sek,god damn thats the third time you've bumped that :-/
your letters are wack do simples,and work on your drop shadow its off in alot of places
and stop worring about coloring and worry more about your structure ;)
some pen shit
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture659.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture662.jpg
^i hate that onethe extenion on te end of it is wack and my 3d's off :( ah well
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture667.jpg
jump bitch,jump bitch jump bitch!
proof-jump bitch <3
edit*pie-im loving the r in the first one but not the a atol :-/
sey-make the y,a and r more round like you did with the s and e

[klic]

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk29/wilmacmillan94/VEXRColored.jpg

a colored in version of what i did for a battle against tgc

[klic]

Something else I found that I did a week or two ago. Its pretty crappy because Ive only really been into graff for a couple months now.
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk29/wilmacmillan94/KLIC.jpg
I know, lose the arrows

[emel]

yo this might be the internet, but shits still real. it dont even matter how old u are. i mean u come on here tryin to get crits, u get em and u dont listen. im done with all this fuckin talkin, if u dont like bombingscience dont come on here u feel me?


and i still aint got no crits on my shit
shut the fuck up you fucking tool

you only know graffiti by what bombing science has shown you, which is internet shit... in real life.....when people have beef they fuckin dis eachotehres pieces and fuckin fight and POSSIBLY battle if the graff scene in the area is that organized but mostly just dis eachoterhs shit until they see eachotehr somewhere and fucking scrap, they dont log onto a website forum, post up some blackbook joints and "E-Battle"..... seriously, shit isnt even serious on here.. kids like you need to get the fuck off this website and do something productive with your graff....

and shut the fuck up with the whole give crits to get em... why would you influence a bunch of toys to give crits to other toys.... its like the blind leading the blind....

[(SoS)Viruz]

A Damn. Emel you called Him A Tool..... Damn that never get old.

Let just cut all the shit call off and post some Images.

[fonone]

who says images.

ill post one image now and probs 2 more images when i get home. just some simple shit mainly to work on blending, i only really like it on the I and R. but ofcoarse my scanner makes it look like shit anyway, ohhh was done with like those 20 for 5 dollars connecter pens.. i know its no excuse but theyre pretty horrid.

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/333/jun19180sl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/333/jun19180sl8.6c15771369.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=255&i=jun19180sl8.jpg)

klic - new to graffiti thread,
seyar - like that other person said switch it up a bit

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

^ i like that cept the E looks a lil messed up but still straight

[ESKiMO2]

The toys around here are pretty angry these days. When I was posting in here people were actually looking to get help.

Crits...
Irekn- K and the N are kind of lopsided. Otherwise nice simples.
Klic- Get those bars down. If you want to do something like that just for fun don't work on it too much. Just do your simples.

[emel]

Eskimo... are you talking about me?

[ESKiMO2]

I'm talking about everyone here who's complaining every time someone gives them crits.

[COLOR192]

klic: go simple
irekn: change the E and the K and it'll be cooler

some quick stuff I did:

http://a462.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/50/l_afefd92ffd0bcf9391ea12dfe99b72fd.jpg
(maybe i'll go w/ black fill in and white outlines in this one)

http://a217.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/50/l_2ee8b5d6e972195fc189b5e069082700.jpg

http://a990.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/13/l_ce02787a0c7c558d66e3865af0364295.jpg
(yes, it's the same sketch than before, only w/ a diff color scheme)

http://a984.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/16/l_efb03d9ddd51108f191d9e39bb08eb9f.jpg


fuckin camera sucks... --'

[(SoS) Flu]

who says images.

ill post one image now and probs 2 more images when i get home. just some simple shit mainly to work on blending, i only really like it on the I and R. but ofcoarse my scanner makes it look like shit anyway, ohhh was done with like those 20 for 5 dollars connecter pens.. i know its no excuse but theyre pretty horrid.

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/333/jun19180sl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/333/jun19180sl8.6c15771369.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=255&i=jun19180sl8.jpg)

klic - new to graffiti thread,
seyar - like that other person said switch it up a bit


i actually like the E. you just need to put a curve or two on the other letters that dont. (k and n)

Zero : someone already has that name but you straight with that throw up. everything else you pretty much is wack tho. seems kinda like you bit it but im not trying to hate you know if you didnt good shit tho.

[osnapizzel]

zero i like that first throw

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/1401/picture225pz4.jpg

[osnapizzel]

zero i like that first throw

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/1401/picture225pz4.jpg

[COLOR192]

hahaha! u're not the first guy to say that I bit that one. but no, I didn't bit anybody ;)
and i don't care that somebody already uses ZERO. i'm tired of changing what I write. :\ thanks for sayin it, though

[(SoS) Flu]

zero i like that first throw

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/1401/picture225pz4.jpg

you should make the letters stand out more by putting more black lines so it would look more significant.

[(SoS) Flu]

hahaha! u're not the first guy to say that I bit that one. but no, I didn't bit anybody ;)
and i don't care that somebody already uses ZERO. i'm tired of changing what I write. :\ thanks for sayin it, though

lol yeah man its what ever as long there isnt a zero near you. but its hott you should stay with a similar style your other shit is mad wack tho. but you can always build on to wack shit so im not saying giving it up.

[osnapizzel]

i missed aportion of the outline lol i just noticed that...gotta quit smoking...

[ESKiMO2]

Snap, you missed the whole outline.

[jupsick]

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/5003/1806082306lc9.jpg
crits?

bump for crits.....
irekn....i love ur shit...simple and good lookin...btw nice blend...
smooth....the middle D dosent flow good i think...get that hook up out...
oh snap...i like that...but make lines in the letters to...
zero..awsome first throw...but work on ur simples..

[smooth_nuts]

sek,god damn thats the third time you've bumped that :-/
your letters are wack do simples,and work on your drop shadow its off in alot of places
and stop worring about coloring and worry more about your structure ;)
some pen shit
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture659.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture662.jpg
^i hate that onethe extenion on te end of it is wack and my 3d's off :( ah well
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture667.jpg
jump bitch,jump bitch jump bitch!
proof-jump bitch <3
edit*pie-im loving the r in the first one but not the a atol :-/
sey-make the y,a and r more round like you did with the s and e
bottom page bumper cars!
irekn looking dope k should be a bit bigger though

[Thrice]

I love the throwies zero, as for the other, not feeling it so much. Keep working at it tho.
Smooth nuts-Nice D's, now put em to work
Crits please
http://i30.tinypic.com/2cfp4is.jpg

[Thrice]

I love the throwies zero, as for the other, not feeling it so much. Keep working at it tho.
Smooth nuts-Nice D's, now put em to work
Crits please
http://i30.tinypic.com/2cfp4is.jpg

[smooth_nuts]

thrice-work on your structure more before trying to bend your barsand shit just stick with keyboard font type simples with a nice drop shadow or simple 3d....and try overlapping your letters abit

[Thrice]

Thanks man, i'll def try to do that. I just skipped a bunch of steps to do a 123klan style. Is curving bars alright? How about doing thin and thick bars, or should i keep them the same width?

[smooth_nuts]

i''d say for now keep your bars the same width and only bend em when you must....

[osnapizzel]

how about this

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/4854/picture226vw1.jpg

[smooth_nuts]

oh snap i absolutly hate it....you did some simple shit a few weeks back that i really liked go backed to that shit

just another quick pen d i really need to sit down and actualy fucking sketch something haha
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture674.jpg
and i must ask wtf is this 123 klan shit

[atlok7]

ahem- keep them bars even thickness son! but keep it up. and dont use lined paper. thats uber toy to still b doing that
ohsnap- u know i like your ish but i have mixed feeling about that
and smooth nuts= we know you can draw Ds already. do a full letter piece

[osnapizzel]

yo cais what dont you like about it?

smooth nuts, its a work in progress lol

[Thrice]

Ya not sure why I didn't do it in my sketchbook.

[(SoS) Flu]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/flucharacter.jpg

my character in a restraint the bend on the curve you should tone it down a bit.

[jupsick]

smooth....i really like that one...really flows..
oh snap...try a diff letter style...
flu that char is so dopeeeee
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/5003/1806082306lc9.jpg
bump for crits?

[COLOR192]

Flu: that char is so siiiiick!!
EP3: make the 3 taller, closer to the P and make the midle bars a bit thiner.

soz to keep bothering w/ this, but what exactly u guys think I need to change on my simples?

[jupsick]

Flu: that char is so siiiiick!!
EP3: make the 3 taller, closer to the P and make the midle bars a bit thiner.

soz to keep bothering w/ this, but what exactly u guys think I need to change on my simples?

ok tnx dude ill try it later...
heres some new shit...
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/5317/1906081526ji4.jpg
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2315/1906081525rp5.jpg
crits?

[cast LI]

tryin new things

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc205/pooptart666/IMG_1537.jpg

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc205/pooptart666/IMG_1538.jpg

ignore the disgusting handsteez in these
http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc205/pooptart666/IMG_1539.jpg

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc205/pooptart666/IMG_1540.jpg

[fromthegrave]

you only know graffiti by what bombing science has shown you, which is internet shit... in real life.....when people have beef they fuckin dis eachotehres pieces and fuckin fight and POSSIBLY battle if the graff scene in the area is that organized but mostly just dis eachoterhs shit until they see eachotehr somewhere and fucking scrap, they dont log onto a website forum, post up some blackbook joints and "E-Battle"..... seriously, shit isnt even serious on here.. kids like you need to get the fuck off this website and do something productive with your graff....


HAHAH YES!!!!!!!!
Finally someone else to actually knows graf!
learn from this kid.

[sex without condoms]

http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/4632/153322pw3.jpg

[South-Pole]

^good to see you back,
loving the style,not much the fill but still looks nice non the less,even if i'v seen better from you lol

[jupsick]

tryin new things

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc205/pooptart666/IMG_1537.jpg

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc205/pooptart666/IMG_1538.jpg

ignore the disgusting handsteez in these
http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc205/pooptart666/IMG_1539.jpg

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc205/pooptart666/IMG_1540.jpg

dude i like ur s some much XD really fresh...
but try workin on ur control...
sex....i dont like ur shit...looks really sllopy and dosent flow...
change ur style...

[cast LI]

thanks man

i think you should work on your letter structure more jsut do straight bars instead of gettin all curvy and funky.and try making all the letters lean in the same direction. your pieces look like you did the letters seperatly and just slapped em together.


and do simple 3d and shadow before you put wierd backgrounds

[jupsick]

thanks man

i think you should work on your letter structure more jsut do straight bars instead of gettin all curvy and funky.and try making all the letters lean in the same direction. your pieces look like you did the letters seperatly and just slapped em together.


and do simple 3d and shadow before you put wierd backgrounds

tnx about the crits..ill work on some abit later...
heres some new ones...tried diff things...
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/9922/1906081732nq9.jpg
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/5594/1906081731sq2.jpg
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/6659/1906081730sw0.jpg
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3614/1906081729tj3.jpg
crits???

[Mass Appeal]

Sniper in a Ghillie Suit...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/07a912b4.jpg

[sketch3]

you play to much call of duty

[(SoS) Flu]

mass you should do a pose when hes about to knife some one :P

[Mass Appeal]

I probably will..im planning on doing a whole bunch of em...from the US Army, Marines , SEALS , Spec Ops to the British Army , SAS , SBS , Royal Marines .. ( Im applying to join one day , wanna work on intel gethering in the Arctic..i love cold ) ... aswell as HALO Jumpers and Helicopter Gunners.

:D :D :D

[sketch3]

you cant pick were you go,


long time no sketch makes sketch's sketches sketychy
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3668/babylonwl4.jpg

[Mass Appeal]

I never said you could...i said i want too..asin id like too.

[hazetheone]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/apherstyle.jpg


umm i think you should lose the arrows then ink it then put it back up here.

wha?
this a bite of epic proportions
why would you bite aher
fucking joke

[Slushi]

Work on your fills :)

[(SoS) Flu]

wha?
this a bite of epic proportions
why would you bite aher
fucking joke

dude chill out i was basically testing it out so shut the fuck up damn.
i obviously stated before that i asked him to dedicated to him and
im not even doing the style i just liked it okay so get the fuck off you cunt.
damn why cant i just use a fuckin im not clamming it to be my own.
and his name is apher not aher dumbass. ive only been doing graff for only a couple months what you want me to be fuckin picaso asshole.

[sketch3]

i dont want you to be piacso.
asking thats out of the question, but i would like you to be less of a bitch

yea i know muh fill skills are as shitty an cheap as my markers

[hazetheone]

dude chill out 1.i was basically testing it out so shut the fuck up damn.
i obviously stated before that i asked him to dedicated to him and
im not even doing the style i just liked it okay so 2.get the fuck off you cunt.
3.damn why cant i just use a fuckin im not clamming it to be my own.
4.and his name is apher not aher dumbass. 5.ive only been doing Graff for only a couple months what you want me to be fuckin picaso asshole.

okay the numbers in your post coincide with my response
1.why would you test someone else's style out
2.get off of what?
3.what?
4.look in his sig a few posts up
5.you used only twice in this sentence
so when you are calling someone a dumb ass and cunt and asshole
try to sound a little intelligent so shit like this doesn't happen

[(SoS) Flu]

man you would be mighty pissed if you just came in the game in graff and you wanted to try some peoples styles then eventually find your own seeing what suits you best but on the way there people are giving you soo much shit.

[sketch3]

dont use somones style, keep shit simple till your good enuff to make your own,

why should apher work hard for u to cum an atake it,
by all means get influence but dont just use somones shit

[00-made-00]

Sketch- some of the bars look out of proportion.
Mass- looks good.
Flu- probley not the best to post that pic, people will jump to conclusions.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimingfortheheart-1.gif
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aima-2.jpg
Some sketchs, crits would be good.

[(SoS) Flu]

okay the numbers in your post coincide with my response
1.why would you test someone else's style out
2.get off of what?
3.what?
4.look in his sig a few posts up
5.you used only twice in this sentence
so when you are calling someone a dumb ass and cunt and asshole
try to sound a little intelligent so shit like this doesn't happen

man i dont even want to bother im going to lose.
ok maybe you got me on 4 but man but im not trying to start beef but can you just stop being a dick like dude i know its apher's style i feel for me that i get better by trying new stuff. I tried his style so i can get better.

and sketch im not using his style i did one piece doesnt mean im claiming its mine. i dont like how i did it so i just said it got me better
to a certain extent but im not going to use his style.

[hazetheone]

maybe i was too harsh but everyone knows thats just how i roll
don't be a pussie im not going to beat you up

[sketch3]

made the top one would look dope if u curved all ur bars in he same direction, and had round ends on the bars,
ont he second one make sure if all the extensions are in one direction dont have one killing the flow

[hazetheone]

maybe i was too harsh but everyone knows thats just how i roll
don't be a pussie im not going to beat you up

[(SoS) Flu]

lol umm its just i was fixing some stuff about this other character and then people were attacking me then i thought it was dropped then it got brought back up then i just flipped out.

[sketch3]

touching now will you kids shut up and post sketches/crit people

[00-made-00]

wtf is this group therapy.
Cheers for the cirts sketch.

[Mass Appeal]

Sketch- some of the bars look out of proportion.
Mass- looks good.
Flu- probley not the best to post that pic, people will jump to conclusions.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimingfortheheart-1.gif
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aima-2.jpg
Some sketchs, crits would be good.

Bump over the shit
AIMA baby you know im deeply madly crazy in love with you. :o:o:o:o:o:o

[pureemoti0n]

some randoms i done ..coloring is poor. says welco and col
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4085/welcodd3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/3258/colisiole5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
nice detail on the gun mass, il find some of my gun drawings and post them

[sketch3]

puree i love the consistencey of of ur style on the top one,
you made every letter fitexcept the w it would look better if u shortened the midle and right bar to the same height as everything else

[rsakens]

i been goon for a vile =/
there for i have lots of new stuff to show now =]
check it out guys
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00214.jpg?t=1213904072
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00257.jpg?t=1213893616
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture003.jpg?t=1213893466
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00124-1.jpg?t=1213904279
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00196.jpg?t=1213904315

[rsakens]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00253.jpg?t=1213904352
i post more later :)

[rsakens]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00253.jpg?t=1213904352
i post more later :)

[NoCanControl]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture003.jpg?t=1213893466


i like how tinwine thay are. so good.

[Mass Appeal]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture003.jpg?t=1213893466


This is absolutly fucking amazing.
Best thing youv ever done imo

[jupsick]

i been goon for a vile =/
there for i have lots of new stuff to show now =]
check it out guys
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00214.jpg?t=1213904072
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00257.jpg?t=1213893616
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture003.jpg?t=1213893466
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00124-1.jpg?t=1213904279
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00196.jpg?t=1213904315

awsome shit man...jsut awsome..
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/7900/1906082329dq4.jpg
any crits.????

[Bazer]

try not being so blocky anymore. try being a little more free with the space you have to. on a regular sheet of paer i can bearly fit 3 letters...

[sketch3]

you cant pick were you go,


long time no sketch makes sketch's sketches sketychy
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3668/babylonwl4.jpg


bump cuss i never post

[seywhat]

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage106.jpg
tryin new shit
sketch- solid simp, i dont like how the letters bob though. characs not too bad either
ep3- listen to baze, and dont worry about coloring shit just yet. work on ur letters more
keane- terrific posts, always diggin ur shit. the one posted by its self is my fav, woulda been dope with four diff styles of e's one the end, like the k's
aima- fresh ass fills,

[I GOT CLOUT]

There ya go Seyar! I just dont like the S too much. Diggin the Y for sure though.

And Keane that NAPSE? piece is fuckin dope. Like Mass said, thats the best thing i've seen from you.

[Agro5567]

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/5082/agro1et2.jpg

ok so i just started to write again and this is my first post. i know i messed this one up alot so I just would like some criticism. I messed up on the g because i didnt do the lines inside of it. I used sharpies and on the red one i split the nib as i learned you could do today.. Other than that please tell me what I can do to improve. I also used bars and tried simples.

[I GOT CLOUT]

First off...Chill on the flick size man. Secondly I thought it was AERO when I first looked at it. Keep your bars proportionate to the piece as a whole. And that checkerboard 3D... im just not feelin it dude. Keep sketching man.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

agro man thats prolly one of the worst things ive ever seen.....i mean u said u used bars but i dont see how u call that bars...just start all over and look at the keyboard and copy lol

[(SoS)Viruz]

You Argo you Bars are way of. Try Block butsers. Or go to the New to Graffiti Thread. that should help you understand bars it helped me.

[klic]

AGRO put less work into your checkered 3d stuff and put more work into your letters

[Agro5567]

Ok thank you very much for the advice I will go look into the bars. While I was waiting for the responses I whipped out another piece of shit. Please tell me things about this one. Also sorry about that last picture size.

http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/9562/agro2hb0.jpg

[Maste]

agro: its...a start. everyone has to start somewhere but for real check out the new to graff thread and read the few tuts in here itll help and just draw a ton post every 10th drawing or something and if there is progression good we will try to help make it move more and if not we will try to help you get back on track...at least thats they i think this should be
sey: thats pretty dope i dont really like the middle of the e i can see why youd want it to be like that but for some reason it seems off also i know you prolly get this a lot but just in case...theres been a ton of seys before
skecth: i like the char and you used bars yay haha get back into sketchin its good for you haha
keane: thats nice man i like it a lot i wanna see more from you haha you posted half this poics already last time and said you hadnt posted in forever ewith those

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/5276/mastelistcq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)im tryin something new i think it could work i think there still needss to be something in there but i see potential...and for all the kids who like to say use bars when they dont know what they are talking about (you know who you are ;)) i did use bars i can show a sketch with them still in place if need be im just tryin to bend em a bit so dont watse your time tellin me to do bars...i understand

[jupsick]

agro: its...a start. everyone has to start somewhere but for real check out the new to graff thread and read the few tuts in here itll help and just draw a ton post every 10th drawing or something and if there is progression good we will try to help make it move more and if not we will try to help you get back on track...at least thats they i think this should be
sey: thats pretty dope i dont really like the middle of the e i can see why youd want it to be like that but for some reason it seems off also i know you prolly get this a lot but just in case...theres been a ton of seys before
skecth: i like the char and you used bars yay haha get back into sketchin its good for you haha
keane: thats nice man i like it a lot i wanna see more from you haha you posted half this poics already last time and said you hadnt posted in forever ewith those

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/5276/mastelistcq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)im tryin something new i think it could work i think there still needss to be something in there but i see potential...and for all the kids who like to say use bars when they dont know what they are talking about (you know who you are ;)) i did use bars i can show a sketch with them still in place if need be im just tryin to bend em a bit so dont watse your time tellin me to do bars...i understand

dude all ur sketches are all about the same thing....be more original...try new things...

[*cept*]

agro: its...a start. everyone has to start somewhere but for real check out the new to graff thread and read the few tuts in here itll help and just draw a ton post every 10th drawing or something and if there is progression good we will try to help make it move more and if not we will try to help you get back on track...at least thats they i think this should be
sey: thats pretty dope i dont really like the middle of the e i can see why youd want it to be like that but for some reason it seems off also i know you prolly get this a lot but just in case...theres been a ton of seys before
skecth: i like the char and you used bars yay haha get back into sketchin its good for you haha
keane: thats nice man i like it a lot i wanna see more from you haha you posted half this poics already last time and said you hadnt posted in forever ewith those

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/5276/mastelistcq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)im tryin something new i think it could work i think there still needss to be something in there but i see potential...and for all the kids who like to say use bars when they dont know what they are talking about (you know who you are ;)) i did use bars i can show a sketch with them still in place if need be im just tryin to bend em a bit so dont watse your time tellin me to do bars...i understand

do bars. straight ones, all the same size.

[glyce]

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/pics022.jpg
maste- that second one is pritty good but im not into that extention on the m

[cast LI]

bump cause it was the bottom of the page.


tryin new things

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc205/pooptart666/IMG_1537.jpg

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc205/pooptart666/IMG_1538.jpg

ignore the disgusting handsteez in these
http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc205/pooptart666/IMG_1539.jpg

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc205/pooptart666/IMG_1540.jpg

[Evasion Of Invasion]

Caser - the second pic the blue and purple one is a good steez to keep goin with it the best letters are the E R and C the others are shit try not so sharp bends
Maste - ur progressing the wrong way ur gettin worse from what i c. i like ur E's tho. I need a new set of letters for a change. u down for an exchange? i think a change in letters might help u to
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0054.jpg
yeah its shit i know its old eat me

[fonone]

your A's horrid.... rest arent to bad but that A...

[Mass Appeal]

Why do people in here bump so much ?!
I mean...is there any need what so ever to bump somthing thats right underneath it ?...no...then to continue to bump it again on the same page...so we have 3 sets of 5 flicks .. 15 flicks all taking up one page...get real guys there isnt any need.

[Mass Appeal]

Why do people in here bump so much ?!
I mean...is there any need what so ever to bump somthing thats right underneath it ?...no...then to continue to bump it again on the same page...so we have 3 sets of 5 flicks .. 15 of the same flicks all taking up one page...get real guys there isnt any need.

[AcosOne]

fonone is right evade... your a is terrible.. try not to go over the top with the curly stuff... id also suggest putting the first E a bit closer to the V

[fonone]

ok posting this for the purpouse of flicks as we havent had many new ones on this page. Thinking of changing my word to IREK, rather than IREKN, seeing as i can rarely fit the N on the page. Anyway yeah its incompleted but whateverrrr. Back in the day when my city's scene was fresh we did have a sort of style, my take on it is that extensions would underline/border the words, im trying to incorporate that into my sketches now, reprasent ya know.
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/9612/jun20181wb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/9612/jun20181wb7.87bee02808.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=504&i=jun20181wb7.jpg)

caser - stick with the style on the middle page third one down, watch the bar widths (top of the S) and keep at it,

evade - i already critted you, but like the other guy said make sure the distance between your letters is consistent

soank - not feeling the whole thin to thick bar thing... but maybe its just me, and i guess it has potential.

maste -maybe you were using bars but not correctly, widths are all fucked!

[jupsick]

ok posting this for the purpouse of flicks as we havent had many new ones on this page. Thinking of changing my word to IREK, rather than IREKN, seeing as i can rarely fit the N on the page. Anyway yeah its incompleted but whateverrrr. Back in the day when my city's scene was fresh we did have a sort of style, my take on it is that extensions would underline/border the words, im trying to incorporate that into my sketches now, reprasent ya know.
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/9612/jun20181wb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/9612/jun20181wb7.87bee02808.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=504&i=jun20181wb7.jpg)

caser - stick with the style on the middle page third one down, watch the bar widths (top of the S) and keep at it,

evade - i already critted you, but like the other guy said make sure the distance between your letters is consistent

soank - not feeling the whole thin to thick bar thing... but maybe its just me, and i guess it has potential.

maste -maybe you were using bars but not correctly, widths are all fucked!

not feelin ur R and K dunno the bars look really not connected...the R looks like a P...
and the n kick it out of there XDDD
but i really fell ur E and I
awsome thing...i like ur style..

[fonone]

cheers. hopefully it will come together when i outline it with black,

edit: i dislike that K too..:P

[Mass Appeal]

Jupsick...ARE YOU FUCKING BLIND , THERE ISNT ANY NEED TO BUMP A PICTURE THATS ON THE SAME PAGE AS THE PICUTRE YOUR BUMPING.

[jupsick]

mass im just quoting...so he knows i talk to him -_-

[jupsick]

anyways heres some new things...
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/1749/2006081747xn8.jpg
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/3209/2006081746ln3.jpg
any crits?

[Mass Appeal]

JUPSICK..... What the fuck....so you have to quote him to show your talking to him ?...retard do what everyone else does...like im doing to you now.

[jupsick]

ok dude just dont kill me -_-
whats ur fucking problem-_-

[fonone]

JUPSICK..... What the fuck....so you have to quote him to show your talking to him ?...retard do what everyone else does...like im doing to you now.


her*

[cast LI]

mass chill the fuck out guy is it that hard to scroll down more?


jupsick that second flick is pretty good. the TR transition is ugly. but honestly thats teh first piece i've seen from you that i didn't wanna puke on


evade the color scheme and spacing in your piece is good but the A is crap.and fix that handsteez



fonone looks DOPE

[-ShAmEE-]

na i can understand my mass is pisse off, cuz i go on this thread, i think yeah, 5 new pages lets see what people are up to, then when u find out there is mad ass bumping and only 5 flicks, then u find out that this thread is mostly peopel bumpin there own shit and general chit chat.

so can we go bck to the rules which i think that most people arent rembering which is

CRIT OTHERS ABOVE YOU SO YOU ARE CRITED!

STANDARD!

happy posting....nearly finished my colab sketch!

[NoCanControl]

her*

wha.. the...


:confused:

my head is going to explode.

[jupsick]

fonone... ur a chick? 0.0 ok...
well some new thing...
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/3710/2006081931eb5.jpg
crits.??

[+VONE+]

http://i32.tinypic.com/dlpyqg.jpg
rough sketch for a 4th of july block party

[rsakens]

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/pics022.jpg
maste- that second one is pritty good but im not into that extention on the m

the n & k is fresh man^
i want to exchange with you keane - sonak allready 3 same letters pm me if you want

wow that was a shit load of good feedback :)
shit i think i fall in love with the name napse
unfortenetly i can write that signs it was a exchange for napse on pg

i bump that shit up if ya dont mind :)

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture003.jpg?t=1213893466

[I GOT CLOUT]

wha.. the...


:confused:

my head is going to explode.


Haha, I felt the same way. I respect HER even more now.

But for the crits...Fonone, You should still be able to write both of those names, no need to cut one out totally. Both are ill names. And I want to see that sketch inked, and then on a wall.

And Keane, just try that NAPSE style with your name. and you know I lurve it :)

[garbage down tha way]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/ugly-1.jpg
i think im going to use this for the callab even tho my E is fucking WACK as SHIT.

keane- cool.

vone- look at other throws to get the hang of them.

[rsakens]

i actly meant glyce with the exchange :)
but we can go for one too just pm me when your done

[real_destroyer]

old shit..
http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs30/i/2008/172/3/b/2_by_RealOneUms.jpg
http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs25/i/2008/172/1/3/1_by_RealOneUms.jpg
http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs25/i/2008/172/5/f/3_by_RealOneUms.jpg
http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/172/c/6/4_by_RealOneUms.jpg

keane - cool
garbage - i don't like those $ and ! signs

[I GOT CLOUT]

Keane, who are you talking to?

HOER - That E isnt shit at all in my opinion. Your E and R's are your strongest letters.

REAL - that shits a lot better than most of the new shit in here. Keep at it.

[seywhat]

[QUOTE=seywhat;1130626]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage106.jpg
tryin new shit
QUOTE]

real- keep workin with that bomb. it has potential. with everything else use bars if ur not, it doesnt look like it
hoer- mad fresh, idk what else to say about it
jupsick- im gonna try to help u out just a lil bit, dont worry about crittin shit until u post ur flicks. then crit, and u will get crits back. thats just the easiest way. the last one u posted aint too bad, does it say gp treg?
irekn- real fresh, that e is fire

[AZTEKA]

i'd say everybody is doing alright except, real work on your throws man and them pieces, and jupsick your on to somethin, the style looks alright. Somethin i just finished.
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/7690/06200hx4.jpg

[UnConscious]

new style im workin with
should i revise more or start adding color?
A
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/6766/13295824eh6.png (http://imageshack.us)

[garbage down tha way]

once you got some letters, add some color.

[cast LI]

azteca is looks really hot but your letter structures a little bit off. focus more on structure and less on extensions.

but that could just be the style, i'm generally not into west coast style pieces

[rsakens]

keane who you talking too ?
And Keane, just try that NAPSE style with your name. and you know I lurve it :)

never mind i got this part wrong
:confused:

now its all cool after i read it again

[smooth_nuts]

sey-thats fresh but dont connect the e and y
hoer-fresh as usual
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture699.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture701.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture696.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

new style im workin with
should i revise more or start adding color?
A
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/6766/13295824eh6.png (http://imageshack.us)

how the fuck is this an A? the little one underneath, sure. but what is that shit sittin ontop of your A?

[*Spectone*]

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/6751/0620081540bf4.jpg

[*Spectone*]

Could I Get Suggestions Or Critisism Ne Thing..just Lemme Noe Wats Wrong With It

[Bazer]

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/6751/0620081540bf4.jpg

hey speak, try making the width of your letters a consistent thickness dude. jus look at how different your a looks from your e. its because of the different in thickness.
one step at a time. oh and also keep then and just about the same height. ;)

[*Spectone*]

thanks for the advice..ne thing else is much appreciated

[UnConscious]

better?
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/1854/94760311pj3.png (http://imageshack.us)

[I GOT CLOUT]

Well, for the fact I still have no clue what it is...No.

[Bazer]

>.<
wow

[RezOner..]

thats the exact same thing..

[smooth_nuts]

sey-thats fresh but dont connect the e and y
hoer-fresh as usual
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture699.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture701.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture696.jpg
bottom page bump....i hate the bottom of the page haha
UnConscious-see the little a your doing at the bottom...the simple.....do shit like that not ugly unreadable squiggles

[(SoS)Viruz]

Unc. Start Simpler dude. One one can read it I see the Letter A in it..... And what I think to be a B. But still Stay simple.

[atlok7]

i'd say everybody is doing alright except, real work on your throws man and them pieces, and jupsick your on to somethin, the style looks alright. Somethin i just finished.
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/7690/06200hx4.jpg

at first look its like sheit that ill. but when u stare at it its just a bunch of random extensions

[UnConscious]

its my attempt at a wild style A
can you read it now?
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/5268/51678957lc1.png (http://imageshack.us)

[(SoS)Viruz]

UnC LMFAO. No Stop. I going to be real with you it look like shit the best part of that is the lil A at the Bottom. The So called a looks like jibberish.... It soo many add-on or exstechions.... SIMPS Bro.

[UnConscious]

lol k
thanks

[Bazer]

thats hardly wildstyle unc. its really bloby. look at some of my shit and try to tell me that im stearing you wrong when i say this:
start with simple letters. i swear, if wildstyles that dont look like blobs is where you want to go, then simples is the beginning of the road to getting there.

and im also telling you this from experience. if you want to paint these wildstyles one day, you better step up from sketching your pencil across the pad and go bombin to get some can control.
;)

[UnConscious]

yes sir
thanks again

[fonone]

Haha, I felt the same way. I respect HER even more now.

But for the crits...Fonone, You should still be able to write both of those names, no need to cut one out totally. Both are ill names. And I want to see that sketch inked, and then on a wall.

And Keane, just try that NAPSE style with your name. and you know I lurve it :)

haha, im not actually a HER just wanted to see the reaction:D, but anyway, that sketch come out mad ugly when i coloured it, bad colour choice and new "markers" so its all streaky and shit, i think ill keep up with the style though i think it has potential.

and speak, listen to baze, simples is where its at.

[glyce]

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank020.jpg
unconscious- work more with that little a you have at the bottum. its a nice simple

[Mass Appeal]

at first look its like sheit that ill. but when u stare at it its just a bunch of random extensions

Coming from you ?

I can see the letters perfectly..the K is backwards..the letters look ill...esp. the E.

Each to their own.

[I GOT CLOUT]

Haha, I knew I was gonna end up lookin like an idiot...good play sir. Good play.

[MarOne...]

Coming from you ?

I can see the letters perfectly..the K is backwards..the letters look ill...esp. the E.

Each to their own.

If you are referring to cais's shit, it is WAYYY better/ easier to read than that piece of trash kasper did.

Kasper, lose extensions. Turn your letters around. Do simplistic letters.

[*cept*]

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank020.jpg
unconscious- work more with that little a you have at the bottum. its a nice simple

the s needs work. i dig the overall style of it though

[seywhat]

if the bars on the s connected it would be dope

[jupsick]

smooth make ur bars more umm fat...
soank...ile kinda like the o and a...work on ur s alot...
azteka....i like that alot XD
and heres one for an exchange battle with a freind..other forum..
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/5603/2106082205pd1.jpg
and a simp..
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/174/2106082206za8.jpg
crits??

[Mass Appeal]

You need to start using bars and doing straight up simples.

[South-Pole]

^agreed


anyways,here's something that turned my day into a happy one
"Let's Go Bombin",didn't have enough space for a G,sorry for the pic quality,i couldn't find my camera,,sigh :( had to use my cellphone instead(not an excuse i swear it looks way better irl).
enjoy

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image201.jpg

edit:

[Mo152]

jup, your left bar on the R is way bigger then the rest and you 2 in 2D seems to be way smaller then your D

pretty good letters south, i like

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/1466/img00150kg6.jpg

[smooth_nuts]

sey-thats fresh but dont connect the e and y
hoer-fresh as usual
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture699.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture701.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture696.jpg

bump...again...not even one crit :-/
south-your t looks like an f....and i dislike the b other then that its nice just cut back on soem of the arrows
mo152-it reminds me of salty......i think your brought the u out tofar and im not feeling the p...at all

[South-Pole]

^haha,didn't even notice that,no irl the T looks normal,its just an arrow that makes it look like an F on the pic,and for arrows,i know its kinda hard to see from the pic but irl they look better

[*Spectone*]

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/9710/0621081933vz5.jpg

let me noe wats wrong and what i can improve on

[smooth_nuts]

yeah it also looks like a f because the top bar of the t gos out way to far so you can have a pointless little extentions and i dont dout it does look better in person,i just diss like arrows....which sadly has not stopped me from using them haha
edit*
speak-stop....do straight letters,use bars,add a drop shadow and give the new to graffiti thread a read through ;)

[Delvoid]

hey ppl, this is my first sketch n throw up. only bin doing it about 2 months, so leave us some comments on what u think

[GIzUrD]

dlevoid... the first one is cool! but mainly because im tripping right now... but the second one is poop

[Mass Appeal]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/a0a78e87.jpg

A character type exchange with Kabre...something a lil different to spice this thread up..

[smooth_nuts]

i like your cartoony shit way better man...

[I GOT CLOUT]

Proportions are all out of wack. The detail is very well done, but everything is just off. His arms look 8 feet long. And I know P90s are small, but they arent that small.

[HëRbN]

Proportions are all out of wack. The detail is very well done, but everything is just off. His arms look 8 feet long. And I know P90s are small, but they arent that small.

Word. Your a good artist but those proportions are way off. And whats his hand doin?


Skeptone- Work more with bars, you have the right idea but your structure is off. Make sure for now you keep them all the same width too, the bars that is.

Gupe- I like it

Glyce - it all looks pretty good except for that S


Smooth- i like em all, that throwie is pretty nice! Not real sure whats up with that house lookin thing in the middle one though....

[smooth_nuts]

its supposed to be an arrow haha...i was bored

[I GOT CLOUT]

Im sure this is gonna be on the bottom, like always...but whatever.

Drunk coloring doesnt work out too well. And no, its not an excuse.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16139.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16141.jpg

Just tryin to perfect this style...I still cant get the A yet though. :/

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16140.jpg

DOAP - That style you did the CFK in, im diggin a lot. I mean it. And your throw is pretty tight. I suck balls at throws.

[smooth_nuts]

clout,thanks man :D...i'll hook you up with a throw,later maybe haha
i like where your going with the first simple not feelign the others though...

[Shoook]

http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/scan0016.jpg
not really graff but somthin i thought of

[Oaklander]

http://i28.tinypic.com/9hjblw.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/30asu2b.jpg

[osnapizzel]

smooth nuts. dope
gupe. dope
ease. dope
oak. wtf?

[osnapizzel]

double post my bad

[Oaklander]

http://i28.tinypic.com/9hjblw.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/30asu2b.jpg
repost

[fonone]

hahaha, oaklander is my hero.

[Bets369R]

no.

[IlikePie]

Yes. If you could get a whole wall like that, like all kiddy and cute, background and all, I would love you forever, and jiggle your balls whenever needed.

[GIzUrD]

i love it oaklander

[emel]

oaklander i have one question for you


do you plan on ever doing a piece?

or maybe progressing in some way with graffiti?

[fonone]

he doesnt need to progress.. his shits already more than loveable. real cats know what up hey pie!