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Roolete
06-22-2008, 01:18 AM
hahaha, oaklander is my hero.

haha i love oaklander

sacwacko
06-22-2008, 01:29 AM
haha, yea, how old is that fool?
and roolete, wanna exchange?

dark2
06-22-2008, 01:40 AM
sacwacko i like the last one

crits?
2566

sacwacko
06-22-2008, 01:43 AM
thats more like a throw. if ur goin for a piece or bomb, go block letters. or letters with a box like structure. build them with bars. but otherwise, it looks like an ok throw. try to keep the letters the same size. dont hide thet a so much. try capital A's as well. good to see some new posts tho.

fonone
06-22-2008, 05:25 AM
wake up bombing science! its so shit being on the other side of the world to everyone else because nothing happens on bombing science all during my days and then ill go to bed, wake up and everything will have happened overnight.
hate the way this turned out, the extensions coming off the underlining extensions arent legs of the K and R but once i coloured it i saw how they could look like it.
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/3136/jun22182dc9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/3136/jun22182dc9.8ca610b011.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=131&i=jun22182dc9.jpg)

some throwy shit i did on a dirty page rather that throwing it out

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4685/jun22183nq6.jpg

some wierd fill simple, that turned out pretty bad

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/1314/jun22184rn2.jpg

Mass Appeal
06-22-2008, 05:29 AM
Proportions are all out of wack. The detail is very well done, but everything is just off. His arms look 8 feet long. And I know P90s are small, but they arent that small.

Thanks for the crit.
I know the arms are long but ill do better next time.
And yes...P90's are that small.

smooth_nuts
06-22-2008, 09:25 AM
ass backwards...
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture715.jpg
throw for mr.i got clout...i kow second e's too small :p
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture709.jpg
sorry i forgot to resize :[
irekn-your simples fresh but the right leg of the n should be longer....feeling the throw though :D
oaklander-do those on stickers...theyd be fresh as hell

garbage down tha way
06-22-2008, 09:36 AM
if you keep posting the same DO people are going to begin hating you. you should add color, or extentions, or two more letters. nice tossy also.

smooth_nuts
06-22-2008, 09:47 AM
each is different in its little ways.....but what ever :-/

MarOne...
06-22-2008, 10:57 AM
I'll never hate my smoothie ;)


http://i28.tinypic.com/9hjblw.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/30asu2b.jpg
anyways, oaklander... I would at least like to see maybe more proportionate letters from you.

Even though you have some likers of your work, We ALL know this isn't taking any/barely any skill to produce this type of work.

EDIT- A euroish type of steeze I was fumbling with, reads "CA" haha-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/caeuroish.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
06-22-2008, 11:05 AM
iREKN - I dunno, but I dig the fill on that third one. It almost looks like you airbrushed it on. And thats my favorite one. I would just tweak the E a lil bit.

MASS - At least in comparison to his body, the P90 looks small. But what do I know?

DOAP - I know each has their own little attributes, but at least with that camera we cant see those details, so they all look pretty much the same to us. Fresh of course, but similar. Thats all im saying.

And thanks for the throw! :D

Edit* KABRE - That shits mad clean. Im just not diggin the A. :( The C is tight though.

smooth_nuts
06-22-2008, 11:18 AM
yeah webcams suck balls...wish i had a scanner,or the money to buy one haha...
caberz-i strogly dislike it...do what you were before babes ;)
like the simple you showed me...member,you member
edit*
half a cloud? haha

JETPACK!!
06-22-2008, 11:56 AM
yo kabre, way to keep the yellow inside the lines. that A is hella wack, looks like its got a scorpion tail or some shit.

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4780/rasek28jm8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Maste
06-22-2008, 12:03 PM
haha oaklander i noticed my name appeared in your pic... i just hope its not me you want to die....

I GOT CLOUT
06-22-2008, 12:04 PM
Thats fucking ILL fool. The only thing I might tweak is the top bar of the E. Just bring it back a lil so its not overlapping so much of K. Iunno. Just kinda throws the flow off a lil bit in my opinion. Maybe im just too picky.

Drakula
06-22-2008, 12:09 PM
Yeah that style is ugly kabre. And I wouldn't say it was euroish at all. Maybe the fill but that's it.

I GOT CLOUT
06-22-2008, 01:22 PM
Ehh, I always notice everything wrong with it after I upload it...

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16142.jpg

The paper was dirty, so dont mind the splotches in the letters.

smooth_nuts
06-22-2008, 01:46 PM
dude try making your s round for once...other then that itslook descent man

Eack
06-22-2008, 03:07 PM
Ease : try to make ur S more round i dont really like it
Rasek : dope clean simple style... keep it.. i have to paint a bilboard with u soon

tryin to develop caracs
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/120/snailerasecaracvc5.jpg

piece in a new style im doin (less american more euro style)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4780/ersrwithcaracgr6.jpg

drop one.
06-22-2008, 03:10 PM
yo erase looks dope

rsakens
06-22-2008, 03:23 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00270.jpg?t=1214169253
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00267.jpg?t=1214169616

Epoc
06-22-2008, 03:24 PM
repost

-I want a t-shirt filled with that.

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-22-2008, 03:25 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/302qi6v.jpg

rsakens
06-22-2008, 03:25 PM
sek nice simple letters the s is dope
the bar coming out of the top of the s looks nice to its just overdone
3times in a 3 letter sketch =/

Eack
06-22-2008, 03:39 PM
yo rsakens wat type of marker u used

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-22-2008, 03:54 PM
ya thanks i only did those 2 extension bars on the E because i couldnt think of anythin to keep the peice flowing and when i didnt add the bottom extension it looked wack

La Coka Nostra
06-22-2008, 03:58 PM
vandal, i'm glad you are finally getting the hang of simples.

NoCanControl
06-22-2008, 04:04 PM
SEK, kill the extentions
ERASE, use pencil first for the characters. so the lines don't look like spider legs. and your piece isn't very good. go simple. and don't do three deee unless you can keep those lines parrrellel
RSAKEN, I really like the photo, it went good with the flow of the photo. i might have to try... heh.
RASEK, make your s the same size as your a and e, and you'll be good...
CA, that style is wierd... don't do it.... you should um..... go simpler.


i tried really hard not to make the k look like a s
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture076.jpg

bear with me, on the s..... heh.
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture075.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-22-2008, 04:17 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/148jl09.jpg
exchange with keane just got some new markers to color the puppy in;)

Eack
06-22-2008, 04:19 PM
no can control... thx for the advice...

i really like ur first sketch.. its true that the K looks avit like an S but its not that bad...

Fize
06-22-2008, 04:24 PM
Here is some of my book work

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00094.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00095.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00096.jpg

And an attempt at a character and my tag, came out retarded, but its my first and I'm getting better.

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00098.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-22-2008, 04:25 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/148jl09.jpg
exchange with keane just got some new markers to color the puppy in;)

bottom bump

atlok7
06-22-2008, 04:25 PM
fize try looking in the new to graff thread, itll help u out alot

Fize
06-22-2008, 04:34 PM
Yea I did. I was reading the thread yesterday heh. Anything in particular? I'm trying to soak in as much advice and help as I go. Those sketches were on my second day of ever doing graffiti.

-ShAmEE-
06-22-2008, 04:48 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image201.jpg
this is fuckin sick as, u got a bigger flick?
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/a0a78e87.jpg

ur proportions are fucked up a lil. ur legs are the same height as the top half of ur body, alsothe shoulds should be 2 heads wide.

JETPACK!!
06-22-2008, 04:56 PM
yo kabre, way to keep the yellow inside the lines. that A is hella wack, looks like its got a scorpion tail or some shit.

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4780/rasek28jm8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump, yo vandal man. good job on those simples. finally your shit is lookin nice.

fizz, the best advice would to keep sketching. itll get better with every sketch

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-22-2008, 05:04 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/ms0t9l.jpg
TA DA!

South-Pole
06-22-2008, 05:05 PM
jet-nice,but try making your letters all the same height
vandal-not feeling the add-on on the E,and the fill's too dark

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-22-2008, 05:09 PM
ya im not very good at making e's i always have a tough time

rasek thats pretty dope but not really feelin the a and e
you should jus make a new a and keep that e just make it bigger then it will be ill

South-Pole
06-22-2008, 05:10 PM
lolz,i was talking to jet ,but you posted right after him while i was typing so i had to edit

HRbN
06-22-2008, 05:39 PM
rasek- i really like that one, i wouldnt make the A or the E any bigger. Its obvious that it was done on purpose, i think its tight.

Vandal- the E was fine before you colored it, its a pretty tight simp tho!

Eack
06-22-2008, 05:59 PM
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4780/ersrwithcaracgr6.jpg


bump for crits plz

Fize: do simple block letters like on ur Keyboard
Vandal: focus more on the letters and not as much on the colors/fill drop the little add-ons for now

La Coka Nostra
06-22-2008, 06:00 PM
vandal, on that keane sketch, you shouldve made the first E the same as the second one.

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-22-2008, 06:10 PM
eack i think thats nasty as hell good shit

osnapizzel
06-22-2008, 07:08 PM
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/8269/picture228st8.jpg

not my name, just messing around with letters and styles, so no bitchin about how your boy writes svor

osnapizzel
06-22-2008, 07:35 PM
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/8269/picture228st8.jpg

not my name, just messing around with letters and styles, so no bitchin about how your boy writes svor

JETPACK!!
06-22-2008, 07:37 PM
why would you double post the same shit?

i dont like it as much as i do your other stuff. but practicing other letters is always a good idea

I GOT CLOUT
06-22-2008, 07:47 PM
VANDAL!!! Im proud of you. Your simps are gettin pretty good.
ERASE - Looking good homie. I just dont like how the Karak is holdin the letter A. I just think it would look better with the A incorporated to the piece like the rest of the letters.
SNAP - Not really feelin the S. But I dig that fill for sure. Simple, but effective.

osnapizzel
06-22-2008, 07:51 PM
i dont know why i keep double posting i really dont mean to bs is fucked up on my comp for some reason, like posts take mad long to load up.

I GOT CLOUT
06-22-2008, 07:53 PM
Its not just your comp. homie.

bilal_tariq
06-22-2008, 07:59 PM
Here is some of my book work

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00094.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00095.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00096.jpg

And an attempt at a character and my tag, came out retarded, but its my first and I'm getting better.

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00098.jpg
Welcome to Bombing Science. We're going to love you and you better love us back. :)

fize try looking in the new to graff thread, itll help u out alot
Well said. Listen to him, he ain't lying.

Yea I did. I was reading the thread yesterday heh. Anything in particular? I'm trying to soak in as much advice and help as I go. Those sketches were on my second day of ever doing graffiti.
Good boy. Going in the right direction.


fizz, the best advice would to keep sketching. itll get better with every sketch
Well said again. Practice makes perfect. But on a second note - Nobody is perfect, so why bother practicing. No I'm just kidding, just keep doing your thing and keep getting better at it. It's good to see you never went into trying some fucked up extensions and letter structures because most new cats try doing that and it looks ugly as hell. Yeah so keep it simple when you're starting off. Rasek's shit looks mad clean and simple you know. Keep at it.

osnapizzel
06-22-2008, 08:29 PM
Its not just your comp. homie.


you having problems too?

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-22-2008, 08:36 PM
ya it happends to me to just dont click post reply more then once if your comp freezes

osnapizzel
06-22-2008, 08:41 PM
random battle word freestyle

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/6397/picture230ds9.jpg

osnapizzel
06-22-2008, 08:43 PM
fuck this is so bullshit!

JETPACK!!
06-22-2008, 09:01 PM
no inky, got lazy on the K's. couldnt think of much to do.

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/407/rasek29kg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

atlok7
06-22-2008, 09:05 PM
nice rasek 3d experimenting i see? full speed ahead

JETPACK!!
06-22-2008, 09:11 PM
i was fuckin with it before. but i got on the drop shadow tip for a minute. gettin back into the 3D cuz its easier for heat spots imo.

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-22-2008, 09:13 PM
rasek i like the top one more just cuz all the letters are the same size but you should just switch the k from the bottom one with the top one

osnapizzel
06-22-2008, 09:22 PM
damn you rasek your simps stole my thunder lol

sheltr
06-22-2008, 09:22 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3111/2602396041_679dd6ab0f.jpg?v=0
well, i must say i pretty much everything on this page
and i feel like being critisized so gimme crits
overall i liked how this turned out aside from the E so yeah, crits like i said

GIzUrD
06-22-2008, 09:23 PM
heres three for ya

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/5504/redat8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/3485/watercolorjr2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/7990/guy3ze1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Tonberry
06-22-2008, 09:30 PM
Sheltr, lose all of the extensions and bars going through the letters and shit.

Gizurd, those are pretty sick; but I like the second one more. It's a way better colour combination.

JETPACK!!
06-22-2008, 09:35 PM
hahahhahaha what the fuck is that last thing? you can surely think of a better character.
and i cant even read your pieces.. whats it say? cil? gil?

ohsnap, my bad bro, im not feelin the way you do the top of your letters try rounding off the tops for a sketch. im not feelin your E either, make the middle bar.. a bar, and fully connect the top and lower bars to the spine.. keep it up though b.

osnapizzel
06-22-2008, 10:00 PM
eh im not sure how i feel about this one but i gotta give you props on the critts man, thanks for helping out

http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/8843/picture231am4.jpg

atlok7
06-22-2008, 10:15 PM
[QUOTE=GIzUrD;1133034]heres three for ya

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/3485/watercolorjr2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

killaaaaaaaa bs we on a swarmmmmm

NoCanControl
06-22-2008, 10:36 PM
SEK, kill the extentions
ERASE, use pencil first for the characters. so the lines don't look like spider legs. and your piece isn't very good. go simple. and don't do three deee unless you can keep those lines parrrellel
RSAKEN, I really like the photo, it went good with the flow of the photo. i might have to try... heh.
RASEK, make your s the same size as your a and e, and you'll be good...
CA, that style is wierd... don't do it.... you should um..... go simpler.


i tried really hard not to make the k look like a s
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture076.jpg

bear with me, on the s..... heh.
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture075.jpg

crits.

osnapizzel
06-22-2008, 10:38 PM
no can control i like the first one, man i keep having this feeling like ive met you somewhere before loooollll

osnapizzel
06-22-2008, 10:45 PM
just so no one bitches about the double post heres a sketch i did some time in the beginning of this year i think, not sure if i ever posted it herehttp://img515.imageshack.us/img515/2163/picture233du7.jpg

IlikePie
06-22-2008, 10:48 PM
I'm gonna have to try that style out later this week NoCanControl, just to let you know :)

GIzUrD
06-22-2008, 10:53 PM
hahahhahaha what the fuck is that last thing? you can surely think of a better character.
and i cant even read your pieces.. whats it say? cil? gil?

sorry i made him on ms paint... then filtered on photoshop to smooth out the edges... i really like childish simple characters, and otc's.

and its GI by the way, just too lazy to come up with a decent z, so i just didnt.

calculating infinity
06-22-2008, 11:05 PM
-osnap, on your pink and white roke: to me your e doesnt seem to flow enough with the rest of it, i feel the middle bar should be fatter and not a little circle. it just seems to end too open if you get what im saying. the sharp edges arent really working either.
on the white and green one: your o's o should be more center and it looks like the long bar on your r is too fat. also, your vanishing point is off.

-no can control, i see what youre getting at but it looks like it can be refined, maybe
fix the part where the bottom of the k randomly comes in on the r with no cut in or anything. the r to k extension doesnt really flow to me either but man, that E is fucking ace.

super unfinished first version thing for "jare":
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/9360/0622081209ho8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

boring:
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/7/0622082317ot5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/3299/0610081350ot3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/868/0622082112lh5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

osnapizzel
06-22-2008, 11:07 PM
yeah the green one was a quickie, im calling it a night and trying again tomorrow when im not so freaking tiered

esco93
06-22-2008, 11:34 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/shdyfifty510/SKETCHIESKETCH-2.jpg

didnt get any crits sum1 jus told me i suck

calculating infamy: not felin the throw u should add a lil more detail

calculating infinity
06-22-2008, 11:49 PM
youre trying too hard to make your letters complicated. go simpler and work on your 3d. the new to graffiti thread is really helpful when you find yourself making mistakes like that.

fonone
06-22-2008, 11:54 PM
yo calc that first piece is mad creative, i love the fingers

esco93
06-22-2008, 11:58 PM
yeah calc the piece is pretty dope i wana see it colord..
aite check this out http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/shdyfifty510/l_fa8d9490e17192fe4850ba79ee1c707c.jpg

calculating infinity
06-23-2008, 12:08 AM
thanks, i have to go racking before i can redo it to fix the flaws and color it.

that one is more simple but its still too complicated. make your "o" more O shaped and toss the whole "S". the bottom half of your 'E' doesnt need to be brought back up or have that mini extension on the bottom either. when doing 3d or drop shadows just try doing it as a solid fill because your lines inside dont point in the right direction. they should be more or less going the same way. try using a drop shadow and imagining theres a light bulb casting a shadow at one point in the page and draw in where it would actually be hitting if that makes sense. try drawing simple letters like veranda font because even though its boring it really helps a lot. do the same for your handstyles though i think i do see that enem influence in them.

esco93
06-23-2008, 12:16 AM
aite thanks alot

hal.cyon
06-23-2008, 12:17 AM
some doodles of late. i inked a few, doubt i'll color any. haven't had much time for drawing lately and its showing. i hate all my t's.

http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/9030/002rh2.jpg

pen freestyle

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/199/001ma4.jpg

some weak throw-ups.

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/1083/005xa0.jpg

for the hense battle, again pretty weaksauce.

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/9058/006lr2.jpg

for some reason the s was an afterthought. not really all there when i drew it.

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2100/008wp9.jpg
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2100/008wp9

for the shake battle, don't really remember drawing this much.

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/7360/009wt0.jpg

had fun inking this one. i kinda like it outside the t.

http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/6470/014xa7.jpg



esco - start with simples, that is really bad. new to graff thread will prolly help.

jares - like the top one, and you beat me at throw ups.

oh snap - thats pretty hot. i like it a lot man.

nocancontrol - i like the first, the second just seems too flat or something.

calculating infinity
06-23-2008, 12:27 AM
i like the first and last ones the most. your throws and handies (going from the one in the bottom of the second flick) could use a little work though. maybe if you made your throws more round on the bottom itd be easier to work with.

beyondyereyes
06-23-2008, 01:18 AM
esco stick with bars mang. Meaning just have straight lines for now. Blockbusters even then twist them up eventually. Keep things proportional to one another also.

http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/uglykid.jpg

Mo152
06-23-2008, 01:59 AM
just so no one bitches about the double post heres a sketch i did some time in the beginning of this year i think, not sure if i ever posted it herehttp://img515.imageshack.us/img515/2163/picture233du7.jpg

this shit reminds me of the FireFox logo lol

Hal. all thoes are so fresh.. i mean damn. i like the hense one the best.

rsakens
06-23-2008, 06:15 AM
http://i27.tinypic.com/ms0t9l.jpg
TA DA!

thankx man you write sek right?

bump

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00270.jpg?t=1214169253


and a new one
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00271.jpg?t=1214224409

drop one.
06-23-2008, 09:34 AM
just so no one bitches about the double post heres a sketch i did some time in the beginning of this year i think, not sure if i ever posted it herehttp://img515.imageshack.us/img515/2163/picture233du7.jpg


like McDonalds
Bara Ba Ba Ba im lovin it lol

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-23-2008, 09:50 AM
keane lol that second is ill love how you did it good shit

Mass Appeal
06-23-2008, 09:53 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3111/2602396041_679dd6ab0f.jpg?v=0
well, i must say i pretty much everything on this page
and i feel like being critisized so gimme crits
overall i liked how this turned out aside from the E so yeah, crits like i said

Stop biting BAWK you cock.

(SoS)Viruz
06-23-2008, 10:06 AM
Hal.cyon- Diggin the pen freestyle bro. Nice.

Mass Appeal
06-23-2008, 11:06 AM
I'll never hate my smoothie ;)


anyways, oaklander... I would at least like to see maybe more proportionate letters from you.

Even though you have some likers of your work, We ALL know this isn't taking any/barely any skill to produce this type of work.

EDIT- A euroish type of steeze I was fumbling with, reads "CA" haha-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/caeuroish.jpg

See this is stereo typical euro...crazy fill wierd letters..its more than that..id expect you to know cabre :(

atlok7
06-23-2008, 11:14 AM
who cares its the dopest ive seen from him by far

JETPACK!!
06-23-2008, 11:21 AM
dopest as in, wackest. then i'd agree, the C is good. fuck the A.

bump, ctrl V that ho.
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/407/rasek29kg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sketch3
06-23-2008, 11:25 AM
that aint just wack,
its ugly enuff to make me wanna punch a pregnant chick

redo it keep thhe c an make the like it

atlok7
06-23-2008, 11:29 AM
whoa i see a bunch of new heads in this thread ive never seen before, havnt posted in here in a while so i thought i would branch out. http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/6543/caisyellowbrightlr2.jpg
my latest
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/940/satireexchangevl8.jpg
exchange with satire

beyondyereyes
06-23-2008, 11:38 AM
come on you cock faces... bump

atlok, your shit is fresh. you put any of that on walls? how are you with cans?


esco stick with bars mang. Meaning just have straight lines for now. Blockbusters even then twist them up eventually. Keep things proportional to one another also.

http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/uglykid.jpg

smooth_nuts
06-23-2008, 11:57 AM
got inspired after looking through eyegasm
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture723.jpg
dont you all just hate it :p

JETPACK!!
06-23-2008, 11:59 AM
your P looks like an E. i was feelin your other steeze a lot more

smooth_nuts
06-23-2008, 12:00 PM
word...
it was just somethign i was fuckign around with never really planned on going anyfuther with it then that one sketch haha

Mass Appeal
06-23-2008, 01:12 PM
This is a new one iv just finished..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/faa7c02b.jpg

The enemy getting sniped.

beyondyereyes
06-23-2008, 01:22 PM
Where is the other arm?

I'm glad you're trying more dynamic stuff though. usually i see cats just having static characters and so forth. I say the ruffles and creases in the shirt need work along with the arm and hand. Definitely a clean start though.

http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/hydeyourdaughters.jpg

Can someone crit the 'Ghoul' picture I put up?

JETPACK!!
06-23-2008, 01:27 PM
ill mass, but it looks like he's flying.. an yeah, he's missin an arm. at least draw a bloody stub.

that hyde aint so bad, the D is a bit ugly. but its a pretty solid simple. one of the few sketches ive seen where the middle bar of the E is longer than the top/bottom and it isnt ugly

http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/1518/rasek30mn9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

South-Pole
06-23-2008, 01:38 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/caeuroish.jpgSee this is stereo typical euro...crazy fill wierd letters..its more than that..id expect you to know cabre :(
just to set this down,sorry this isn't euro for me at all,
the fill on the A maybe,and i'm not feeling that A at all
but i don't see anyting spontaneous or original,
cause where i'm from we would call euro funky style,
so yeah for a first try it's ok,anyways down to crits

hyde-the character,seems ok to me,the letterings fine,try fixing the D though,not feeling the background so much

Mass-very nice,i can't realy say anything on anatomy i guess,

smoth-DOpe,i almost your P was an E,be careful

goul-go for some str8 lettering

cais-you've improved,some random stuff could be removed,like the rectangles like on the bottom left of the S,nice anyways

beyondyereyes
06-23-2008, 01:46 PM
Jetpack. I say you know how to handle yourself with simples. It's definitely dope but maybe work on the extension on the bottom of the "S" a little? It's not a big deal and I'm just nitpicking over small shit. Otherwise it's fresh.

Smooth... is that supposed to say 'Dore'? or Dorp? or Doap? The shapes of the letters got me a little confused.

http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/stugly.jpg
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/poverty.jpg

And thanks for the crit South...

How's this for a simple? The 'H' definitely needs to flow more. I'm having a problem with it.
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/simpleenough.jpg

LAN3YFS
06-23-2008, 01:48 PM
thankx man you write sek right?

bump


and a new one
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00271.jpg?t=1214224409

where the FUCK do you find this shit?

South-Pole
06-23-2008, 01:55 PM
^Germany,?

idk,

ghoul-liking the debt piece

smooth_nuts
06-23-2008, 01:57 PM
doap...it says doap.

Mass Appeal
06-23-2008, 02:23 PM
ill mass, but it looks like he's flying.. an yeah, he's missin an arm. at least draw a bloody stub.


Ha yeah..i was wondering forever where to place it..i had one placement coming from the back of his body..and another up high...but i decided to just place it where it isnt viewable...if someone could draw where itd look good i can edit it in..as for the stub..i kind did one at the top of the RPG if you can just see..

As for the flying part...wouldnt you if youv just been hit by a Barrett 50.Cal'ler ? hahahaha

JETPACK!!
06-23-2008, 02:29 PM
yeah, you'd fly backwards. he looks like he's verticly flying

P.S. the positioning of his elbow kinna makes his bicep appear backwards. and the lines seperating the fingers are brought down a little too much imo. the palm of your hand should be roughly the length of your fingers

Mass Appeal
06-23-2008, 02:31 PM
Ugh...My bad then i guess !

50 posts away from 1,000
Im gonna post whore.

JETPACK!!
06-23-2008, 02:34 PM
its a good sketch. im just pickin out the shit that kinna makes you go "there's something wrong, but i cant quite put my finger on it"

i edited it late too

Mass Appeal
06-23-2008, 02:41 PM
Yeah i see what you mean now thanks mate.
Next will be a USMC with a Deagle..

Hater-AiD~>
06-23-2008, 02:48 PM
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/piecin/2a4d1bcb.jpg

I think it has potential..just started messing around with it today. What do you guys think? Maybe once I get all the proportions right and find something to do with the A itll be pretty decent

smooth_nuts
06-23-2008, 02:51 PM
^simples Simples Simples!

Hater-AiD~>
06-23-2008, 02:55 PM
ive been doin simples for god damnin almost 4 years..it doesnt make sense..i dont know where else to go

I GOT CLOUT
06-23-2008, 02:56 PM
MASS - That looks tons better, and Jet all ready said everything that could be. Although, when I first looked at it I thought it was an underwater scene for some reason. I mean, I can obviously tell its not just because of whats goin down in the pic, but yeah. Just putting it out there.

JETPACK!!
06-23-2008, 03:13 PM
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4054/arabbb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


i could point out more, but ill save it for the next sketch. you listen to that, your next sketch is gonna be a lot better

i missed his shoulder too. dont make it so round. look at your shoulder then sketch one

sketch3
06-23-2008, 03:18 PM
is it just me or dose the blood look like it should be spurting ouut the other side,
cuss his position looks like he got sniped from behind

JETPACK!!
06-23-2008, 03:42 PM
i was gonna say that too. but i didn't wanna get too nitpicky

Mass Appeal
06-23-2008, 03:46 PM
Haha yeah...iv not learnt much as to cloth movements...im taking all this on board folks..thanks Jet Pack...but can i say..that " pregnant bludge " is soooo nitpicky ! Jajajajajajajajajaja

sketch3
06-23-2008, 04:06 PM
but still huge improvement

white
06-23-2008, 09:19 PM
hater aide - the g and the a connect kinda wierd
as for the cartoon .... i thought this was a black book thread, not character but anyway ya i think his head should go the other way otherwise it looks really good
jetpack - everytime you post i think u get better keep it up man ur shit is fly as hell
atlok - sick shit keep it up man like the xchange wit satire
sketch 3 - your sig is bothering the hell out of me lol

CRITS??? POR FAVOR Superman Style inspired piece
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0346.jpg

Thrice
06-23-2008, 09:28 PM
Let me guess you're pushing the marker? Pull it, makes the lines alot cleaner.

white
06-23-2008, 09:31 PM
ya i was laying on the floor i know i know i know

Thrice
06-23-2008, 10:24 PM
Sketch
http://i26.tinypic.com/23h4vx0.jpg

NoCanControl
06-23-2008, 10:31 PM
ive been doin simples for god damnin almost 4 years..it doesnt make sense..i dont know where else to go

when you stop seeing them as simples, and into bars that flow together that make a letter then.. you'll poop.

white
06-23-2008, 10:42 PM
thrice - squeeze ur letters together a little more and make the first hump on the m the same height as the second

crits? same as earlier, second attempt at 3D and believe me when i say this, my blend of red and with looks 10x better in person

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0349.jpg

squidone
06-23-2008, 10:50 PM
nukes the way you overlapped your E ruins any flow that would have been there

garbage down tha way
06-23-2008, 11:47 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/clab-1.jpg

hai guys.


nukes- dont try to cradle your letters into each other. just make them normal and over lap them slightly.

trice- your a looks too much like a handstyle A, i guess it doesn't look too bad tho, and your h and E is too skinny, m too wide. other than that good start.

amkeezy- i wanna see the redone one, its got potential.


EDIT: lol 420 post and im super blazed.

osnapizzel
06-23-2008, 11:47 PM
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/1545/picture234in5.jpg

nukes work on making all your letters consistent in hight and make the lines cleaner

thrice bring them closer to each other

hater make it more simple and clean it up

osnapizzel
06-23-2008, 11:48 PM
fuck tits

garbage down tha way
06-23-2008, 11:55 PM
oh hai it must be funky fill day. i like your funky fill but not the letters. that funky fill would look better on one of those nice simples i know you got.

IlikePie
06-23-2008, 11:55 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/clab-1.jpg

hai guys.


nukes- dont try to cradle your letters into each other. just make them normal and over lap them slightly.

trice- your a looks too much like a handstyle A, i guess it doesn't look too bad tho, and your h and E is too skinny, m too wide. other than that good start.

amkeezy- i wanna see the redone one, its got potential.


EDIT: lol 420 post and im super blazed.

Bump to next page, pure sex dude :)

garbage down tha way
06-23-2008, 11:57 PM
oh why thank you :)

osnapizzel
06-24-2008, 12:00 AM
funky fill day all day garbage lol ill see what i can do

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/1545/picture234in5.jpg

next page bump

osnapizzel
06-24-2008, 12:01 AM
i swear i only pressed once!

fonone
06-24-2008, 12:45 AM
ohsnap i think your old simples were wayyyyyy better than your newer stuff

hazetheone
06-24-2008, 01:10 AM
it looks like it says ejsinao

BaddaBING
06-24-2008, 02:17 AM
hey all. been a while. been busy at work. sketching, getting up, scoping out the local genius' work....doing what we do. finally got a throwup, but i won't embarass myself with that. anyhow, check it out....
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w18/ralphwader/uno.jpg
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w18/ralphwader/dos.jpg
(nobody ever notices the eye of rah till i point it out, but fuck em)
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w18/ralphwader/tres.jpg
i really hate that giant red splotch in between the k and e. but fuckit, live and learn.

lemme know what you think, i'll return the favor. except osnapizzel, that fill is looking like a fine piece of ass, lettering is hard to read, but i love fills like that. peace out.

direone
06-24-2008, 02:27 AM
do simples like the letters on your key board or do simple bubble letters. Either way get used to using bars they help u alot and try not to have sharp points or arrows good luck

fonone
06-24-2008, 02:48 AM
first one's looking good wake, keep up with that.

edit: watch the 3d/shadow on it though, like try and make sure its all going in the same angle if its going off like that.

JETPACK!!
06-24-2008, 06:11 AM
Sketch
http://i26.tinypic.com/23h4vx0.jpg

kid, your talkin shit about me. when your shit is lookin like that. hahaha, keep runnin your mouth b.

keep your shit straight, make your bars more consistant. make the middle bar of your H just as thick as the other bars. the middle of your M should come down like a V, the way your bars connect arn't right.

dont bother workin on your "accesories" until youve got simple keyboard letters down.

nice to see you attempting "pussy pieces"

P.S. you've got a weak flow.

Mass Appeal
06-24-2008, 06:36 AM
Pwned

VaNdAL xBA!x
06-24-2008, 07:29 AM
ohsnappppp that looks ill i like the colors and they letters aint bad either dope

wake your shit looks trippy not feelin it to much tho work more on your letters

and ahem just why would you talk down on rasek with shit like that?!?haha tooool

NoCanControl
06-24-2008, 07:43 AM
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/1545/picture234in5.jpg

nukes work on making all your letters consistent in hight and make the lines cleaner

thrice bring them closer to each other

hater make it more simple and clean it up

reminds me of this, i think you posted it in the other group....


http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/8137/apexsfb2005bos6.jpg

fromthegrave
06-24-2008, 08:11 AM
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture076.jpg
This is sick.
not many people are doing the small and big letter thing anymore.

rsakens
06-24-2008, 08:33 AM
where the FUCK do you find this shit?

some times its worth it to search alsoin woman magazines

Mass Appeal
06-24-2008, 09:18 AM
I agree that thing is pretty sick..i love the K and E

This is an Italian Comsubin Member treading carefully...Haha.......

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/eca362d5.jpg

Damn these two pager things take FOREVER to get lined up correct.
And i know the hand supporting the gun is fucked...i just couldnt pull it off right

Does anyone have any ideas on how to draw Camo ?...like without colouring it in.......hmmm

Thrice
06-24-2008, 09:41 AM
Jetpack you're a fucking poser. All pieces, no tags, no throwies. Just a little bitch, no illegals, just nothing. Using your daddy's billboard don't mean shit, get some real heavens bitch. I tear shit up where Im at, in a cop infested place where Im the only writer in 10miles, fucking already made the paper.

MUSEone
06-24-2008, 09:46 AM
Why do i doubt that?

Thrice
06-24-2008, 09:50 AM
If you lived where I am you'd understand, not going to say too much since cops are on here tho.

JETPACK!!
06-24-2008, 09:52 AM
mass, good job fuck. thats a lot better than the last one, with the clothes an whatnot. i was waitin for you to post it. the angle of his hips is a bit off, and work on his hands. but other than that. its good

starting to run outta paper.

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6198/rasek31de0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Spark391
06-24-2008, 11:33 AM
Sketch
http://i26.tinypic.com/23h4vx0.jpg

You have that many skills and you go around and talk about shit about other peoples stuff. Give some crits that will help, there isn't absolutely no point on insulting someone. This is a goddamn toy forum, everybody who post here are toys so they don't have to have super skills. They come to here to get crits not beeing insulted. And if people are toy then there is no reason to do illegal shit, would you like to see some random toyshit on every corner? I don't think so. Choose another place to give your instructions how do be real hardcore g and how to keep it real. It seems like lot of people in here have got some big ego problems in here.

Moderators, please delete that shit in here.

Rasek - like the top on the best, I would make the A and E as big as other letters though.
HohEnvy - dope character, but your letters need lot of work. do some simple block letters.
osnapizzel - there is no point of buming a piece it is on the same page.

smooth_nuts
06-24-2008, 11:36 AM
thrice shut the hell up your a fucking retard jetpack gets billboards and tunnles with his fresh little simples and that makes him a poser?
some one seems butthurt to me...
and everyone else ragging etpack log off and sketch.
jetpack-use the e and s from the top sketch with some 3d and the smaller a :D
envy-stop what your doing,rock some simples,use bars and read the new to graffiti thread ;)
just some repost so im not flickless
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/IMG_0162.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/IMG_0167.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture696.jpg

Fize
06-24-2008, 11:38 AM
A throwup attempt...note the word attempt :).

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00101.jpg

HoH Envy
06-24-2008, 11:38 AM
ok thank you spark for the critiques il start practicing those blocks

smooth_nuts
06-24-2008, 11:41 AM
fize-make the f lowercase,add a drop shadow and try over lapping your letters

Rogue
06-24-2008, 11:51 AM
Also try making your letters all the same size.

And Doap that second one is one of the freshest things I've seen from you. :)

smooth_nuts
06-24-2008, 12:05 PM
thanks roguebert :D
you should post up homie i wanna see some new rogue sketches ;)
NOW!

HoH Envy
06-24-2008, 12:17 PM
i forgot to thank you to smooth_nuts

Fize
06-24-2008, 12:20 PM
Here is another attempt. I can't seem to get a normal looking lowercase f without it looking semi-retarded =/. I realized the e was smaller then the z a little.

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00103.jpg

Thrice
06-24-2008, 12:54 PM
New sketch in progress. Thinking about fattening up all letters.
http://i32.tinypic.com/mccd9s.jpg

Mass Appeal
06-24-2008, 01:02 PM
I agree that thing is pretty sick..i love the K and E

This is an Italian Comsubin Member treading carefully...Haha.......

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/eca362d5.jpg

Damn these two pager things take FOREVER to get lined up correct.
And i know the hand supporting the gun is fucked...i just couldnt pull it off right

Does anyone have any ideas on how to draw Camo ?...like without colouring it in.......hmmm

im bumping this over the utter complete fuckign bullshit that took up all the last page..if i was a mod id ban you all...exept Hoes (L) (L) (L)

CT08
06-24-2008, 01:16 PM
Ahem- your getting there. you have the right idea

Zkatz
06-24-2008, 01:17 PM
This is my first post on this forum and im going to say that i just started to sketch today so this is my one of my 2 sketches.

removed

its sloply filled because i had to use sharpie fine points for it all >:(

Thrice
06-24-2008, 01:17 PM
Should I fatten up my letters? I feel like they're too thin.

drop one.
06-24-2008, 01:24 PM
mass it looks good just the hed look like a conehed

Mass Appeal
06-24-2008, 01:36 PM
Drop..havent you got the message yet ?...read the tags...gtfo.
I dont know if ill be colouring them..they take up far too much ink.

Fize
06-24-2008, 01:57 PM
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00104.jpg

iGraffix
06-24-2008, 01:59 PM
i just started writing a little less than a month ago
i have a few pics of some stuff in my book but was wondering if u guys had any tips. remember im new, so take it ez

Mass Appeal
06-24-2008, 02:12 PM
the middle one is a good start
two 20 pages of those , no colour.

Fize
06-24-2008, 02:42 PM
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00104.jpg

Bump for crits

Zkatz: I say do more simples
Mass Appeal: Liking the new soldier a lot, except the supporting hand like you said. It looks like its just hanging, and not really firm on the pistol.

unsuccsessfull
06-24-2008, 03:40 PM
Gates sketch!!
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk31/hokeswun/GATES.jpg

Samp1e
06-24-2008, 03:44 PM
i just had a seizure looking at that

not the good kind

Thrice
06-24-2008, 03:49 PM
New sketch in progress. Thinking about fattening up all letters.
http://i32.tinypic.com/mccd9s.jpg

Bump for crits. Fize, just keep practicing the simples and progress will come, do some complete bubble letters if you have to , by that i mean leave some negative space between strokes.
Unsuccessful-I got a headache trying to read that.

smooth_nuts
06-24-2008, 03:59 PM
thrice-add a simple 3d or drop shadow,loose the weird extentions on the e and h and simple up you hand i mena real simple cause what your doing now is wack man
unsuccblahblah-simples i cant read that shit...makes my head hurt :-/
igraffx-the simple in the middle is nice add an ! and do it over and over and over and over
fize-i already gave you help :D
haha

Fize
06-24-2008, 04:07 PM
Thanks for the help Smooth :)

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00105.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00106.jpg

smooth_nuts
06-24-2008, 04:13 PM
word...dont be afraid to let your lines touch man...i have no idea where your getting that neggitive space from but it wasnt there :-/
just keep at it man

Fize
06-24-2008, 04:31 PM
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00107.jpg

Here is one that I think came out the best so far :
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00108.jpg

smooth_nuts
06-24-2008, 04:40 PM
loss the ! and keep working on it man ;)

NEZ89
06-24-2008, 06:07 PM
while in the hospital
ignore the buildins, tried doin em while the took the iv out my arm lol
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/8757/picture025du9.jpg

smooth_nuts
06-24-2008, 06:11 PM
nice getting up bite....

GIzUrD
06-24-2008, 06:29 PM
Gates sketch!!
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk31/hokeswun/GATES.jpg

you should line it with black so we can see it better.

JETPACK!!
06-24-2008, 08:12 PM
mass, good job fuck. thats a lot better than the last one, with the clothes an whatnot. i was waitin for you to post it. the angle of his hips is a bit off, and work on his hands. but other than that. its good

starting to run outta paper.

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6198/rasek31de0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

late on the bump, why does everyone gotta be a dumbass whose frontin like he's hard. he mearly said you shit's unreadable. which it is. accept it and shut up, or just shut up.

stoke, that piece is nice, im feelin it a lot. the buildings are wack. but under your situations its permitted haha.

P.S. if you dont graduate from grade 5, how you gonna be able to pass grade 6? without basic simples, your shits just gonna be unreadable.

GIzUrD
06-24-2008, 08:18 PM
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/9903/p6240227rs7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i know its sloppy

JETPACK!!
06-24-2008, 08:23 PM
ooooooooooh, i like the fill. very nice.

i dont like how the G runs into itself in the middle. i think it would look better if you spaced it a little bit apart

GimmieGotShot
06-24-2008, 08:40 PM
Jetpack; dopeness.
Gizurd; i like it. it makes me need to get my glasses cuz of the fill tho x.x
Zen; I like the simple in the middle. Keep doing those

10 min bus ride home from summerschool broken pencil so i had to use a pen sketch.
http://a54.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/91/l_59dd544495e664403d34be1cc2b7bd95.jpg
( i kinda gave up after the G cuz i thought i messed up the character )

seywhat
06-24-2008, 08:43 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage107.jpg collab peice
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage108.jpg quick pen sketch for kasr

gore?- pretty dope, maybe lose some of the extensions, but not too bad
zen- keep workin with the simps, just use bars and make letters
gizurd- deff fresh fill, do u just write gi, if not id like to see a full peice from u. dope style
rasek- im feelin the e in the top peice alot more than the bottom, but ur gettin ur letters down good man, keep it up
unsuccessful- dont be tryin to act hard, its the internet fool. work on actually makin letters, if u wanna try wildstyle u gotta get simps on lock
stake- letters are nice, you shoulda just done an a instead of the skull

calculating infinity
06-24-2008, 08:51 PM
unsuccessful, your stuff lacks structure from what i can make out, stop trying to be tough and either outline it and so everyone can see the structure or do something more simple. no one here is intimidated by you and the more angry you get over fair criticism the less people respect/like you.

gizurd, that fill is really cool, i wish i had the patience for coloring stuff in.


zen, its good that youre keeping it simple, the middle one is the best so far. zen was the first name i ever wrote semi-seriously and i found that adding an S at the end helped a lot with the overall flow.

i didnt even bother coloring this in since i fucked up
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/2448/0624082249ik5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

unsuccsessfull
06-24-2008, 08:55 PM
it sort of looks like my key board jetpack!!

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk31/hokeswun/P1010006.jpg
This H is a little bit more readable to, do you take it back now?
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk31/hokeswun/P1010004.jpg

JETPACK!!
06-24-2008, 09:00 PM
no, i dont. because your name dosen't look like your keyboard at all.

the FUCK is better than your actual piece.

i dont even see an H.

GimmieGotShot
06-24-2008, 09:01 PM
the only thing halfway good to anything is that E
thats not your keyboard
GATES <------------------draw letter that look like that

JETPACK!!
06-24-2008, 09:09 PM
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/1341/billboard2ol1.jpg

i didnt feel like posting an old flick, but if it gets you to shut up..

liquid swords
06-24-2008, 09:50 PM
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/9983/img0360fb0.jpg
part of the cais liquid and bek collab

kroc_oner
06-24-2008, 09:56 PM
unsuccsessfull i like the painted A

"Riot"
06-24-2008, 10:08 PM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/WebCam_20080624_2151.jpg

its been a couple months.
i know its whack but crits?

Liquid-that shits wayy to fuckin hot.

Bazer
06-24-2008, 10:09 PM
stop talkin so much! fuck. i just deleted 60 posts of bullshit.

GIzUrD
06-24-2008, 10:21 PM
..... well anyways ill just throw some of these out there

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/640/drweirdqi1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/2469/goldng4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

forget about that on the bottom left....

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/4572/pgna1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

fonone
06-24-2008, 10:32 PM
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/9983/img0360fb0.jpg
part of the cais liquid and bek collab


as wonderful as the colouring makes it lok i think you need to work on your letters....

JETPACK!!
06-24-2008, 10:33 PM
kinna looks like a goldfish

jersOneTIC
06-25-2008, 01:12 AM
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/3118/browfq1.jpg
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/2565/yett7.jpg
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/356/jerseap0.jpg

some shit i've been doin...

seywhat
06-25-2008, 05:27 AM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage107.jpg collab peice
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage108.jpg quick pen sketch for kasr


bump, got looked over i guess

im at school, so i cant see no flicks. i'll crit when i get home

GIzUrD
06-25-2008, 05:59 AM
the shadow on the s of the kasr isn right, besides that its good.

jerse, some of your extensions on the last one could have been done better.

letsgobombin
06-25-2008, 11:23 AM
i only really like the e but what do you think? i missed a bit of 3d on the e, it says test
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1247.jpg
ill post crits later, i just wrote all the crits then acidentally pressed back
edit:
sey- i like the flow of your second one but try it without the bars inside the letters, also try making the head of the r smaller.the first one is good but the bit on the y kills it
jers- fresh as always, if thats an e on the end of the last one try to make it more similar to the first one or vice versa
giz- i love your style, my favourite is the blue one on the third page. is that first one supposed to be an action figure? cause the joints look like the hips of an action figure
riot- does that say sck? make all the letters the same size and simplify it
liquid- your letters are pretty bad, stay simple but your fill skills are good, dont fall back on that though

Seeoner
06-25-2008, 12:43 PM
just some old work like 4 week old work
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r64/rei026/l_c7bf469d75abad0f38b116e9715eaeb7.jpg
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r64/rei026/l_c6487cba711f235b28f4f8cc54fa07b9.jpg
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r64/rei026/taggs003.jpg
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r64/rei026/taggs008.jpg
an exchange i did 4 elite from the uk 2 weeks or 3 weeks old
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r64/rei026/l_a8fa72848f8313a320457f3a973d8e18.jpg

Jersoner nice work

I GOT CLOUT
06-25-2008, 12:43 PM
JERS! whats good homie. Shits lookin pretty fine.

THRICE - Thats from like 3 or 4 months ago, howd you even find that?

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-25-2008, 01:09 PM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/dddd-2.jpg?t=1214417436
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/untitled-3-1.jpg?t=1214417452

SANEKONE
06-25-2008, 01:27 PM
mehhh..
sloppy and all that..

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/100_3628.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/100_3632.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/100_3631.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/100_3634.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/100_3636.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/100_3637.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
06-25-2008, 01:36 PM
SANEK - I like the first one the most. Good flow, letter and color wise. Except for maybe the K.

Ehhhh, im tryin to come up with some throws...anything worth workin with?

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16144.jpg

letsgobombin
06-25-2008, 01:37 PM
i only really like the e but what do you think? i missed a bit of 3d on the e, it says test
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1247.jpg
bumpo
sanek- the first one is good but your fill is really weird, the simple on the top of the third page is nice, just dont point the bottom of the s, take that bit off the k and forget about the fake drips then you'll have a solid simple
ease- its ok, keep workin on new styles though

Hyperactiveness?
06-25-2008, 01:41 PM
Did a little somethin' for my boo. It all needs work.
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/4906/dsc070902ch2.png

edit: And I just noticed I totally missed the dot on the J. Lol.

"Riot"
06-25-2008, 02:15 PM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/WebCam_20080625_1310.jpg

still not finished.
fresh?no?
crits!?

seeoner-bars.now.
letsgobombin-good job usin bars and shit but flip the crossbar on the t. looks like YESY
Jers-holy fuck those are fresh.

letsgobombin
06-25-2008, 02:20 PM
cheers riot i thought their was something about the y and didnt know why it didnt look like a t

Zkatz
06-25-2008, 03:05 PM
http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk222/Zkatz/Zkatz1.jpg

Not very clean lines and sorry for largeness :/

rsakens
06-25-2008, 04:26 PM
today was a bad day =/
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00282.jpg?t=1214414318
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00284.jpg?t=1214414348
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00279.jpg?t=1214414377
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00283.jpg?t=1214414400
not clean could not get my hand still today =/

"Riot"
06-25-2008, 04:28 PM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/WebCam_20080625_1525.jpg
for the BLACK battle.
crits?

gotta outline and add 3d.

rsakens
06-25-2008, 04:29 PM
the l is looks ok ^
goo simpler with the rest !
block letters are the best way to practice & to
letter structure hommy


I agree that thing is pretty sick..i love the K and E

This is an Italian Comsubin Member treading carefully...Haha.......

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/eca362d5.jpg

Damn these two pager things take FOREVER to get lined up correct.
And i know the hand supporting the gun is fucked...i just couldnt pull it off right

Does anyone have any ideas on how to draw Camo ?...like without colouring it in.......hmmm
shit thats a dope character !

beyondyereyes
06-25-2008, 04:29 PM
First and foremost, zkatz, make a special effort to keep everything the same proportion, as in make every bar as straight as possible. Make sure the letters are the same size as well. Do not try to warp and bend the letters either. Keep it simple.

Riot, I'm definitely not feeling that 'A' to me it looks like an 'H' with a weird extension. I think you should tilt the bar on the right so it's slanted more, that'll make it look more like an 'A'. Lose the arrow on the K. Also I think you should lose the stars.

For my work, be nit picky people, I want you to tear my shit apart.

http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/block.jpg
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/colorado.jpg
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/simpleenough.jpg

"Riot"
06-25-2008, 04:38 PM
alright. ill fix the K and A.

it didnt really take my time and it definately showed.

smooth_nuts
06-25-2008, 04:38 PM
clout-avoerlap our letters more and rework the letters....i swear i did a toss for you,work off that sht
rsakens-im really feeling the last one man and the green and yellow train none of the others though :-/
zkatz-use bars do simples and a dropshadow and read the new to graffiti thread...NOW!
sanek-the sanek and sen simples with the drips...dkeep doing em...and do em bigger....and kill the drips...haha

Zkatz
06-25-2008, 05:00 PM
beyond- thanks for advice i will definatly try to
smooth- i will go read the thread now :p

smooth_nuts
06-25-2008, 05:09 PM
waoh first person ever whp wnated todo shit on their own...i got ya man ;)
ghoul-i like the last ghoul sep the o you should make it like an oval not an oval with a dent in it haha
straight letters looking good too

sacwacko
06-25-2008, 05:13 PM
today was a bad day =/
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00282.jpg?t=1214414318
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00284.jpg?t=1214414348
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00279.jpg?t=1214414377
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00283.jpg?t=1214414400
not clean could not get my hand still today =/


all these are lookin dope....were u get the printouts of the trains?
the only ones i have seen had two each page.

remos
06-25-2008, 05:33 PM
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/4906/dsc070902ch2.png
looks sick
yours too keane

Delvoid
06-25-2008, 05:41 PM
my first cartoon pic, what u guys fink =)?

MedTwo
06-25-2008, 05:53 PM
Simple oldschool funk.
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/5118/picture3df5.png (http://imageshack.us)

Shoook
06-25-2008, 06:15 PM
looks good med work on the char a bit
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/bca1.jpg

beyondyereyes
06-25-2008, 07:24 PM
Med, don't have the M and the E connected. Also don't use those bubbles for a fill next time and try to get some markers man.

Scream Out
06-25-2008, 09:18 PM
Delvoid - nice char, especially if that really is a first for you, im not feeling the skateboard at all though, dont get me wrong, it is well done it just reminds me of something you would see on a t-shirt at walmart or something haha

MedTwo - clean start dude, dont connect your letters and i think it would look better if they werent overlapping as much, keep it up

Shoook - nice concept, its not really working though, your C looks fucked and your A looks nothing like an A, im going to say stick to simples for now, once you got your bars down maybe try some calligraphy-ish bars because thats what your shit now reminds me of, just suggestions

i havent been arount in a while, been fuckn with some different names lately, im feeling this one though "Unspire"
i know this sketch needs some work, its the first one with this name
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo284.jpg

Bazer
06-25-2008, 09:24 PM
that looks nice man. wanna exchange?

Scream Out
06-25-2008, 09:31 PM
sure im down for an exchange, i have no colours for markers though, there all fuckn dead hah

atlok7
06-25-2008, 09:50 PM
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo284.jpg
try posting in the big book thread

Scream Out
06-25-2008, 09:57 PM
i probly will once i have something cleaner

MEH2
06-25-2008, 09:58 PM
ahh.. i lost or threw all my old pieces out.
but they were all like basic beginner stuff haha.

JETPACK!!
06-25-2008, 10:03 PM
work sketch, feelin all hip hoppity. me likely your sketchy screamy.

and yes, i know i fucked up the vinyls. lollerpop

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/263/rasek32uf2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Scream Out
06-25-2008, 10:10 PM
hahaha arrowless hip-hop
i lol'd

nice letters btw rasek, i would just change the 3d a little, like having it on less of an angle, its making it look a little goofy in my opinion, kinda like you messed up or something even though it all seems to be placed correctly. oh well, shits nice regardless

COLOR192
06-25-2008, 10:45 PM
RASEK: I like u're style but it seems like u keep doing the same stuff over and over again. :P try changing u're letters a bit more

I have no idea of how i pulled this off...
http://a394.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/13/l_4d546d5702a2945184af43e18101ba19.jpg
first Wildstyle gone well. no bitting or what so ever. just 5 FUCKING HOURS! an i've been trying to paint it on photoshop for 3 hours now

Thrice
06-25-2008, 10:51 PM
I like your O, but for everything else is a bit weak and not much flow. You did a great job on it nonetheless. My problem is i spend 5mins making the sketch on the letters and rush things, too used to doing quick tags and throwies.

JETPACK!!
06-25-2008, 10:54 PM
consistancy gets solid letters. i only show you a portion of the sketches i actually do. i usually do 2-3 on a workday.. the letters slowly come to me whenever they want. when i try to force them. they look like asshole.

your sketch is pretty decent, the extensions arn't hideous. get a better grasp of your letters and try it again.

Bossman-
06-25-2008, 11:19 PM
that rasek is sick. i love it. none of that twirly shit i get lost in. the extra stuff is sweet. like candy.

And its that good cause he practiced that style mad hard for the last how long? dont tell him to switch it up. when hes good and ready and thinks that one is killed he will. but it gets better and better each time.

DLove
06-25-2008, 11:20 PM
new things tryin a new style.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/mike030.jpg

KASE2
06-25-2008, 11:50 PM
COLOR - work on ur letters more bruh

DLOVE - that looks dope, feelin tha easter status

garbage down tha way
06-25-2008, 11:59 PM
the extentions are placed correctly for the most part, but get the letters down a little more. as in dont let the V get skinny then fat, and dont disconnect the bottom circle of the D from its main bar.

MedTwo
06-26-2008, 01:28 AM
Cheers for the crits.. I don't need markers though, coloured pencils do me fine, and I've got no money anyway. They're all just quick sketches from my little book, I'll scan in some good ones later.
Some more quickies:
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/roten187/Image0127.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/roten187/Image0113.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/roten187/Image0062.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/roten187/Image013.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/roten187/Image0112.jpg

sacwacko
06-26-2008, 01:46 AM
just made this in photoshop. been looking for a decent printout for a while so i just made my own off some pic off the internet. heres a small version.

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/Printout.jpg

heres the link to the full pager. HERE (http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/Printout-1.jpg)

just thought i'd share.

MedTwo
06-26-2008, 01:51 AM
I have ones the exact same that I printed off a while ago.
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/9237/image0114uj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Delvoid
06-26-2008, 02:21 AM
heres a few fings ive done recently, leave us some crits please =) or pm me

Mo152
06-26-2008, 03:03 AM
give them to get them kid. ^

med, i think if you took more time on your sketches, they would def look better, work on your throw as it is super generic,a dn not even that good for that matter.

love the colors Dlove

rasek, dope letters as usual, cant wait to see more advanced shit when the letters come to you ;) lol

scream, that's fresh, the handy as well man, dope!

MedTwo
06-26-2008, 03:18 AM
I did say they were quick ones didn't I?
And that's not my throwup, just a simple bubble letter piece..
Forgot to add these!
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/5821/image00520gn2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

New idea for a canvas.. Still needs work, just the idea..
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/9742/image0115sk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mo152
06-26-2008, 05:28 AM
I did say they were quick ones didn't I?

why yes you did, just like i said if you took more time they might be better. wtf is your point?

i don't understand why people half ass this shit. your considered a toy, now to me, i would think you should be trying hard to not be one... but i guess thats why you have the label.

MedTwo
06-26-2008, 05:46 AM
"quick sketches from my little book, I'll scan in some good ones later."
That's my point..
I have a book at school for doodling in class, always sketching so when I take my time I know what I'm doing.
I'd say you're toy from what I've seen. Maybe you wanna battle?
I don't care mate, don't get touchy about shit.. You do graffiti for yourself so don't worry If I sketch something quickly.
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7093/picture4ng7.png (http://imageshack.us)

Mass Appeal
06-26-2008, 07:10 AM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/263/rasek32uf2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Your letters are getting good but i think its now time to start thinking about progressing..like all the sketches youve posted in the last few weeks have all been along the same line as this..try starting to modify the forms..like the E...you E's are always the same yeah..IMO E's have to be the bestest letter EVER to morph...cause no matter what it looks like aslong as it has the 3 vertical bars itll look like an E.. and twiddle around with extensions...not many but just some...like add wee tabs to the sides and incuts etc etc. strart filling in your peices aswll becasue you paint...it helps so much to fill all your stuff in the stages your in yeah..Just make these letter generally more appealing...becasue at the moment they just look like good simples...but could be so much more....what style are you actually looking for aswell ?

Would you be up for an exchange ?
Iv got TONS of time on my hands..