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exhale
07-01-2008, 05:07 PM
negor, i only like the n.
lasika? uhh maybe do more block letters?

some quick freestyles. my friend was supposed to write nors but he kept his old name.
Sorry bout the penis thing.
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/DSC00754.jpg
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/DSC00755.jpg
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/DSC00756_1.jpg

blue.steel
07-02-2008, 01:57 AM
penfreestyle
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/5894/58231877cz5.png (http://imageshack.us)
mass throw a cloud behind all ur peaces or try 3d looks real fresh
donald try a lowercase e

dark2
07-02-2008, 02:33 AM
star-try using bars
negor- it has potential but the o killed it 4 me
now 4 my horrable attempt lol fuked up the k


2616

apoplectic
07-02-2008, 10:34 AM
http://a982.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/101/l_35c7cf02f8c1409e8c73b43c419814ad.jpg

Started about a week and a half ago, this is the only one i felt worth posting here. Any suggestions?

FlipOneSon
07-02-2008, 10:36 AM
Use bars

apoplectic
07-02-2008, 10:39 AM
What are bars?

seywhat
07-02-2008, 10:41 AM
go read the new to graff thread, it will explain everything

Dewster_OnE
07-02-2008, 04:03 PM
jewel simp
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/160116.jpg

Dewster_OnE
07-02-2008, 04:25 PM
kinda light but its a deka sketch im workin on
crits plz
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/162435.jpg

Shiva.
07-02-2008, 05:05 PM
Use bars

it kinda looks like he used bars to me...
so, please explain me what bars are, i read the new 2 graff thread 2 times

btw: GIVE CRITS TO GET CRITS

osnapizzel
07-02-2008, 05:06 PM
yeah level used bars dont be silly

Shiva.
07-02-2008, 05:10 PM
thank god..
does this make seywhat and FlipOneSon toys? =D
for not knowing what bars are... ??

blue.steel
07-02-2008, 05:17 PM
moor pen free styles
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/9250/13611765fn4.png (http://imageshack.us)
level make your bars strighter the mirror efx is ill looking on it
dewster your shit is dope, the first one u posted makes me want to tell u to try a 3d style peace

Shiva.
07-02-2008, 05:26 PM
if you used the N from the 2nd one in the first one, that would look cool.

HRbN
07-02-2008, 05:58 PM
This was for the Pencil only PENIS sketch battle lol but they posted it before the said due date so mine didnt get entered so i figured id through it up here. Lemme know what you think, its a quick bar simple. The other entries are in the Old Battle forum if you want to compare.

Oh and i spilled some blue ink im workin on on it so.. my bad lol

http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/5708/penisdo4.jpg

NoCanControl
07-02-2008, 06:41 PM
herben penis is looking good. lawl, but your e is alittle fucked, also get rid of the drips. , i hate that phase where you stuck inbetween basics and more advandcedddddddd styel, sorry for the spelling, i'm not feeling all here.


blue steel, your flow is fucked, no diss, but also... your n is funny, and k is funny on the first one, and your a looks like an o, and you shhould work on mor basic letters, so you can learn letter clarifacation.

dewster one, your letters are alright, just keep progressing in that style. but i don't like the colors.

rasik, take it easy on the wild style. go to a less wild style.

level, you should keep on doing what your doing, you'll progreesss in your own style in your own way, if thats the style you like.

negro, your e flow is fucked.

-GEKS-
07-02-2008, 06:44 PM
yeah level used bars dont be silly

nah there are spots where u can tell he didnt used bars
if he did then bars without paralell lines which defeats the purpose basically

seywhat
07-02-2008, 06:44 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage120.jpg
destil exchange
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage118.jpg
and i never got any crits on this one

herbn- i dont like how the letters connect, they look pretty decent though
tunk- there pretty good, try to clean up that first style some and work on the k
dewster- the jewel is nice, work on your e's though
shiva- i was just tellin level to go read that shit cuz he asked what bars were, i was at school when i posted that and pics are blocked so i couldnt see anything
level- try throwin some 3d on it, shits pretty clean
wage- dope shit, hit me up if your down to exchange sometime

HRbN
07-02-2008, 06:46 PM
My E is alittle fucked, and i only did those jizzy drips cause the word was penis hah thanks for the crit tho homie

klic
07-02-2008, 07:24 PM
yeah level used bars dont be silly

just cuz his letters arre made up of straight lines doesnt mean he used bars

Mass Appeal
07-02-2008, 07:32 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/b4921198.jpg

Lol.

Hater-AiD~>
07-02-2008, 08:48 PM
aher..nice handy..haha
sey what - id fix that E
herbn - id fix your E aswell..otherwise..haha
blue steel - listen to shiva
dewster - your simple doesnt look so simple
Level - id work on your E the same..use some bars in it

my simple..i shoulda made the top of the J proportioned
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/piecin/DSC01410.jpg

Dewster_OnE
07-02-2008, 08:50 PM
seywhat- i like the d and e but the rest need some work in my opinion, i also like the s and e in the second one, i think i see where u were trying to go with the y but it seems unfinished to me

blue steel- i like that bottom a for some reason idk y lol the u is str8 i think u needa be a little more consistent with the flow with ur t,n and k work on those more i think

Dewster_OnE
07-02-2008, 08:53 PM
watcha mean my simple isnt simple?? ITS SiMPLE!! theres barely any extensions or crazy colors or arrows or none of that ish, just letters.

Shiva.
07-02-2008, 08:55 PM
letters with wierd bends in it

luster
07-02-2008, 09:09 PM
drunk wack sketches...i know the 3d is totaly fucked up..
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P1010934.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P1010939.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P1010941.jpg
dont really know wat i was doing here..
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P1010938.jpg

Mass Appeal
07-02-2008, 09:17 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/b4921198.jpg

Lol.

Bumping cos its a whole pager..

Wow Lust you really went down hill..what happend ? hahaah

luster
07-02-2008, 09:19 PM
more alcohol ;)
i should stop drinking after throwing up once or twice

Karlaps
07-02-2008, 10:15 PM
http://i322.photobucket.com/albums/nn432/mattbluett/klapspiece.jpg
crits?

~Star~
07-02-2008, 10:20 PM
i still dont get "bars" i read that crap like 500 times... someone explain in words not some picture thing...

I GOT CLOUT
07-02-2008, 10:21 PM
Newness.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16150.jpg

KLAPS - Use bars my friend. And dont worry about coloring yet. Just draw your letters out and experiment with 3-d effects.
TUNKA - You're definately improving from what Ive seen when you first started out. Just keep at it.

Hater-AiD~>
07-02-2008, 10:34 PM
aher..nice handy..haha
sey what - id fix that E
herbn - id fix your E aswell..otherwise..haha
blue steel - listen to shiva
dewster - your simple doesnt look so simple
Level - id work on your E the same..use some bars in it

my simple..i shoulda made the top of the J proportioned
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/piecin/DSC01410.jpg
bump for crits

BIGel
07-02-2008, 10:34 PM
some nice steeze floating thru deez forums lately.

http://a764.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/115/l_b401448e5b18ed2298724a07bb2b053b.jpg

http://a727.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/77/l_0348e32b32a452e4bf25e4db0614be46.jpg

BIGel
07-02-2008, 10:34 PM
some nice steeze floating thru deez forums lately.

http://a764.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/115/l_b401448e5b18ed2298724a07bb2b053b.jpg

http://a727.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/77/l_0348e32b32a452e4bf25e4db0614be46.jpg

hazetheone
07-03-2008, 01:15 AM
el-legit
joga-make the cracks all at the same level if they are like that its making it look tilted
no one crits anymore ....tear
ive been down in the graffiti dumps for a long time now i just forced this one out and ehh w/e
http://i27.tinypic.com/68stab.jpg

Dewster_OnE
07-03-2008, 01:20 AM
feeling the R big time idk bout the thing on the bottom of it but the R itself is dope fresh simp.. pen freestyle?

hazetheone
07-03-2008, 01:25 AM
yes?

Dewster_OnE
07-03-2008, 01:27 AM
sounds like a maybe?? lol

Dewster_OnE
07-03-2008, 01:42 AM
boredome at work
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/013931.jpg

hazetheone
07-03-2008, 01:47 AM
http://i29.tinypic.com/2n9gy68.jpg
boredom at home

blastblast
07-03-2008, 02:01 AM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/IMG00025.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/IMG00028.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/IMG00029.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/IMG00031.jpg

blastblast
07-03-2008, 02:02 AM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/IMG00025.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/IMG00028.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/IMG00029.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/IMG00031.jpg

hazetheone
07-03-2008, 02:33 AM
new to graff thread now
read the whole thing i dont want to hear a thing about it

Hater-AiD~>
07-03-2008, 07:55 AM
bigel that shit is fresh!

dim
07-03-2008, 08:40 AM
http://i29.tinypic.com/2n9gy68.jpg
boredom at home
these are fuckin balllin

Bah Humbug
07-03-2008, 09:53 AM
el-legit

http://i27.tinypic.com/68stab.jpg

this is dope!!!:D:D

Bah Humbug
07-03-2008, 11:44 AM
some new sketches
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/SKETCHES/DSC00288.jpg
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/SKETCHES/DSC00290.jpg
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/SKETCHES/DSC00291.jpg
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/SKETCHES/DSC00287.jpg
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/SKETCHES/DSC00285.jpg
some of them are kinda wack but w/e

Dewster_OnE
07-03-2008, 11:51 AM
work on ya structure homie, try not to add on so many extensions and keep everythiing proportioned

antere07
07-03-2008, 11:55 AM
1st time posting here man
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n82/antere07/DSC03740.jpg
crits on this please

Dewster_OnE
07-03-2008, 11:58 AM
fresh. nice style man i like the idea of the cap and E but i would like to see u do a full name suttin weird about the vertical leg on the k.. its shaped weird but most def feeling it good ish

antere07
07-03-2008, 12:02 PM
what u mean full name?

Dewster_OnE
07-03-2008, 12:18 PM
i mean draw the E lol

antere07
07-03-2008, 12:27 PM
ohhh ok lol
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n82/antere07/DSC03688.jpg
or
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n82/antere07/DSC03724.jpg
i prefer the top 1 man

squidone
07-03-2008, 12:34 PM
i like the second one better the colors seem to go better together but the extension on the bottom of your B looks weird and there is a little too much negative space between the E and K the first one has some really good letter structure though

Dewster_OnE
07-03-2008, 12:37 PM
dope i think its the k's tho.. i like all the other letters just seems like the k's arent keeping up with the others

antere07
07-03-2008, 12:40 PM
yeah i think what it is, is because i used 2 write abets but then i didnt like the fact there was so much space between the E and the T so i changed to abeks

Dewster_OnE
07-03-2008, 12:46 PM
dont get me wrong its not that ur k's are horrible just that compared to the others they arent as strong maybe fokus a lil more on ya k's cuz it seems like the rest come ez.. ima post suttin in a min. heated cuz i got sloppy as fuck with it

Dewster_OnE
07-03-2008, 12:48 PM
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/124716.jpg

antere07
07-03-2008, 12:48 PM
kk cheers ima just do Ks or sumat lol

garbage down tha way
07-03-2008, 01:16 PM
your ks actually aren't that bad, well, except for the first sketch. If anything, I'd say work on your As. theyd look better if you put a bar coming out on the top left of them like you did in the last sketch, only make it regular size. also, always put the horizontal middle bar where the two verticle bars bend.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/tutorialz.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
07-03-2008, 01:19 PM
Newness.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16150.jpg

KLAPS - Use bars my friend. And dont worry about coloring yet. Just draw your letters out and experiment with 3-d effects.
TUNKA - You're definately improving from what Ive seen when you first started out. Just keep at it.

Bump for some fucking crits...

CAER - That A in the "ABK" sketch is hot homie.
ABEK - Structure looks pretty clean man. Keep it up.

Mass Appeal
07-03-2008, 01:21 PM
ABEK you know i love you !

Hater-AiD~>
07-03-2008, 01:28 PM
orah..on the second one. the bar in the middle of your H seems a little too low..id work on your O aswell..make it as tall as your A

drapes1125
07-03-2008, 01:55 PM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/062.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/063.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/064.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/072.jpg

drapes1125
07-03-2008, 01:56 PM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/073.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/077.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/078.jpg
Any crits would be appreciated.

antere07
07-03-2008, 02:07 PM
lol cheers "garbage down tha way", and tah mass apeal duno what its for but still lol =\

Leadpoisining
07-03-2008, 02:23 PM
abek where u write?

antere07
07-03-2008, 02:49 PM
uk man
west midlands

SAID
07-03-2008, 02:51 PM
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/6771/picture81sr9.jpg
nevermind the drips.
should i put lower case e's?

Chump
07-03-2008, 02:56 PM
lower case one or make them 2 different E's

SAID
07-03-2008, 03:03 PM
worddd, i never tried that.
thanks man.

Mass Appeal
07-03-2008, 03:19 PM
some new sketches
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/SKETCHES/DSC00288.jpg
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/SKETCHES/DSC00290.jpg
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/SKETCHES/DSC00291.jpg
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/SKETCHES/DSC00287.jpg
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/SKETCHES/DSC00285.jpg
some of them are kinda wack but w/e

SORT , NEAM

Only watered down.

SAID
07-03-2008, 03:28 PM
new to graff thread.
it'll help;
..allot.

Mass Appeal
07-03-2008, 03:31 PM
WH00 M3 ?

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/8410a340.jpg

seywhat
07-03-2008, 03:38 PM
why is barely anyone giving crits in this forum anymore?

Mass Appeal
07-03-2008, 03:50 PM
Iv done 2 years of critting..i deserve a break !

antere07
07-03-2008, 04:26 PM
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n82/antere07/DSC03743.jpg
sketch
ne fink 2 change b4 i outline it and that

??

Mass Appeal
07-03-2008, 04:48 PM
Thats dope ABEK..ink that

WoeInfinite
07-03-2008, 05:20 PM
Abek = HOT FIYAHHHH!
like dylan, dylan, dylan, dylan, and DYYYLANN.
the only thing id change is the hole in the O in ONE, i think it looked better centered..but thats just me...fresh dude.

00-made-00
07-03-2008, 05:46 PM
Abek- nice manndem, i like the E ALOT.
ahermyoneandonlylove-Ilike it flows well.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/Aimaaaa.jpg
Painting this saturday.

squidone
07-03-2008, 05:47 PM
yeah it looks much better with all the negative space gone between the E K cant wait to see it colored

letsgobombin
07-03-2008, 06:12 PM
battle with krone
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/ad77a79f.jpg
anyone know what atlok got banned for?
aima- the i is a bit too far behind the a and with a simp like that you might as well do a real m, other than that just curve the spine of the second a a bit mor so its more like the first one
abek- that looks good but giv crits to get crits
aher- you got a unique style, although eventually i think loads of people will start doin that style and it wont be so origianl but until then keep it up
said- round your e's and give crits
jewel- simples and give crits

WoeInfinite
07-03-2008, 06:19 PM
atlok got banned?
wtf whys everyone gettin banned?

Mass Appeal
07-03-2008, 06:32 PM
He had it coming and im quite glad if im honest...hell go no where in graffiti unless he changes his attitude

Scream Out
07-03-2008, 06:32 PM
jewel - im not feeling any of that, stay simple for now and use bars

said - i see a lot of potential in that throw, try making the first E lower case i think it would look dope

abek - thats ill man, only think i would change is that extension off the K and i would bend the left bar of the A a little more to make it more symmetrical with the K

aima - i dont really like that style much but thats just my opinion, i think it would look a lot better if the A didnt over lap the I so much. also i think there should be some of the stuff behind the piece on the left side on the right side aswell

heres a sketch from today, i think i need to open my S up more or close my N off more because its ruining a bit of the flow
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo289.jpg

seywhat
07-03-2008, 06:51 PM
swolen- im diggin that alot man, just not the l maybe open it up if u know what im sayin
bombin- i think it would look better if the letters were straight
aima- letters are pretty decent, maybe draw that m and it would look better
abek- i dont like the little bars going through the letters, but its hot man
mass- id like to see that handy painted with some flares on the a and r, and you def get a break from the critting. i just see alot of newer cats on here that dont
i aint sketched nothing new today so just crittin, anyone down to exchange peices?

Scream Out
07-03-2008, 06:56 PM
haha i like my L, i dont think ill be changing it up too much any time soon but thanks for the crit

Mass Appeal
07-03-2008, 07:09 PM
Itd look decent on a freight Scream
Seyar..ill do it with flare ill get a flick too

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/0ecb51ae.jpg

For my ***** Note

antere07
07-03-2008, 07:16 PM
scream- looks sick man
letsgobombin- dats nice still simple
00-made-00- i aint 2 keen on it but still lol

inked that sketch
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n82/antere07/DSC03744.jpg

WoeInfinite
07-03-2008, 07:17 PM
damn dude...that looks sharp..
really feelin it.
good color choice..
ahh just maybe add more breakoffs and bars to the orange in the K?

00-made-00
07-03-2008, 07:18 PM
abek- freshh man, i think work on your K more
aher- i like it man
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aim.jpg
i think i might stick with ths style

...Syerf
07-03-2008, 07:18 PM
screamout- id definately like to see that on a frieght, diggin;)

antere07
07-03-2008, 07:24 PM
cheers and yeah i 4got about em on that lol

seywhat
07-03-2008, 07:47 PM
abek- good letters, really feelin the fill. do you paint?

antere07
07-03-2008, 07:52 PM
yeah but ive only painted like 3 times man
1 i didnt think i was good enuff before
and
2 i didnt have the money

Mass Appeal
07-03-2008, 09:13 PM
Aima baby whered you go .. i miss your face !!!

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/3ebb73e9.jpg

Dewster_OnE
07-03-2008, 10:03 PM
crits plz
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/220203.jpg

Scream Out
07-03-2008, 10:12 PM
mass im really feeling that, i just wish i could see it better haha

acereborn
07-03-2008, 10:13 PM
Give 'em to get 'em.

Dewster_OnE
07-03-2008, 10:14 PM
i give crits barely getm back so i dont bother but i been these last couple days

acereborn
07-03-2008, 10:16 PM
Alright, lol.

Finish the 3d on the c.
Erase the extra lines that arent a part of the sketch.
Ink it.

It looks pretty good man, stick with it.

Dewster_OnE
07-03-2008, 10:37 PM
haha i inked it neway cuz i thought no1 was gonna crit
-thinking bout adding yellow clouds or drips or suttin behind the green but not to sure how to go bout it.. suggestions/crits?

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm306/Dewsta_OnE/223520.jpg

Scream Out
07-03-2008, 10:57 PM
your 3d is way off dude, its going in different directions and its all different sizes.
your letters arent completely horrble but they arent good either
stick to simpler styles for now

blue.steel
07-03-2008, 11:15 PM
penfreestyle
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/1993/14864536po8.png (http://imageshack.us)
everything on this page is pretty ill

(SoS)Viruz
07-03-2008, 11:39 PM
Blue- Clean it up a bit, and Try to keep you bars the Same, keep workin on it. =D

blue.steel
07-04-2008, 12:04 AM
yeah its not very clean or proportional but thats cuz its a freestyle
ill do a cleaner peace when i can get a pencil

mekosbc
07-04-2008, 12:33 AM
1)
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0585.jpg

2)
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0587.jpg

which style should i run with?

(SoS)Viruz
07-04-2008, 12:49 AM
This is a style im Workin on any Crits? IM NOT DONE I dont know what to do with the "A" And Ideas?

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0002.jpg

Meko- Lovin Color Schemes.

squidone
07-04-2008, 01:08 AM
virus thats looking a whole lot better than anything ive seen from you keep working at it

meko i cant really see it its to blury try some simples and get some better picks

Bossman-
07-04-2008, 01:09 AM
try goin straight up with the left bar on the a, and then slanted off to the right a nondominant right bar. keep your curves on the right.

squidone
07-04-2008, 01:14 AM
didnt mean to double post

RFI. SPit
07-04-2008, 01:26 AM
That's not too bad viruz.. keep working on it
Screamout, I always like your stuff man

something different, in pen, so it's a little sloppy since i couldn't erase
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/6407/photo63tz4.jpg

Scream Out
07-04-2008, 01:40 AM
tunka - the k and a dont seem to flow with the rest, the style of the "tun" part looks really aggressive where as the K and A just look squeezed in there because thats where there supposed to be lol. i duno if that makes any sence to you but hopefully you can pull something usefull out of this crit

mekosbc - bad picture quality but id be willing to but that under all that fuzz and colour is some poor letter structure, i could be wrong but id like to see some simps from you

sosviruz - that looks like a solid style your developing, keep working with it, ill crit more on it when its lookn closer to finished

zof - looking ill dude, looks a lot cleaner than some of the other stuff ive seen from you. but maybe thats just because i havent been here in a little while

Baron
07-04-2008, 01:50 AM
penfreestyle
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/1993/14864536po8.png (http://imageshack.us)
everything on this page is pretty ill

Try bringing out the horizontal on the K and do something new with your A, other than that it is looking very fresh there.

Edit: on a second look, SOS that is looking VERY clean, Keep it going

MarOne...
07-04-2008, 01:55 AM
just a little simple

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/mcab.jpg

reads M'cab, like "macab"

SkuzSCT
07-04-2008, 02:01 AM
Thats pretty sick dude. So is Cabre pronounced like 'Cob' then? As in Macabre?

MarOne...
07-04-2008, 02:03 AM
thanks and yeah, COB or CAB. and yeah like Macabre.

I'm sooo sick of people calling me KAYBER or KAHBRAY -_-


oh, good shit Zof.

RFI. SPit
07-04-2008, 02:17 AM
That simple is haawt

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/9096/photo63up7.jpg
filled this

SkuzSCT
07-04-2008, 02:22 AM
I'm really feeling the bottom tag, I like the piece too other then where the F and N overlap.
In my opinion they're just a little too hidden.

Samp1e
07-04-2008, 02:52 AM
Itd look decent on a freight Scream
Seyar..ill do it with flare ill get a flick too

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/0ecb51ae.jpg

For my ***** Note

MORE

why haven't i seen this shit!? so much potential. (not saying your current isn't hot, this is just more of what im geared to. personal pref.)

SkuzSCT
07-04-2008, 03:43 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/ske.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/ske2.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/oily.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/2page.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/dsk.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/2page2.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/seedz.jpg
Last one is for a homie...

SkuzSCT
07-04-2008, 06:20 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/brown.jpg
Crits are welcome...

Mass Appeal
07-04-2008, 08:19 AM
MORE

why haven't i seen this shit!? so much potential. (not saying your current isn't hot, this is just more of what im geared to. personal pref.)


Hahah wow..this shits getting mixed reactions :( some call it lazy style others say its unfinished

Its just an outline in a different colour thats all , im bored of doing thick black outlines they take forever :(
and HOT DAMNNNN SKUZ THATS TEH REAL SHIT NAGGI

Bah Humbug
07-04-2008, 09:48 AM
SORT , NEAM

Only watered down.
i wasn't tryna bite

the end
07-04-2008, 11:53 AM
this is a few months old but my girl just sent me the pic, im on the left, shes Muter.
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/1830/dsc01414vh1.jpg

Maste
07-04-2008, 01:35 PM
^ thats sick you got a girl that writes and shes not horrible too haha
skus your fillin up some pages huh haha good work man i like the blue and silver one the best but theres a lot of other clean fills and i like the thgrowie you did for seedz
zof i like your style its different than all the steroetyplical bullshit haha
you too aher haha i like yours too and although the note looks like you did it in two seconds its still nice
mar nice simp i like the middle of the a a lot and i think i missed something what happened to cais?

amd my toy entry for the new battle haha...theres no way id come close to winning but more people will see it and i like it:
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/3115/masteup3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Nem
07-04-2008, 03:07 PM
ranks, keep those bars a constant thickness. like the middle bar of your N just seems really thin in context. likin the S though.

muter, sick, i would flip those ends on top of the T down instead of up.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_0077.jpg

first time really trying extensions full on. if these are considered extensions.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_0078.jpg

blue.steel
07-04-2008, 03:39 PM
tryed a new k yes or no?
http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/9350/34078104qo4.png (http://imageshack.us)
scab firstone looks like it say sczr
panks make ur bars more stright
the end i like ur letters but not ur style

Samp1e
07-04-2008, 03:57 PM
Hahah wow..this shits getting mixed reactions :( some call it lazy style others say its unfinished

Its just an outline in a different colour thats all , im bored of doing thick black outlines they take forever :(
and HOT DAMNNNN SKUZ THATS TEH REAL SHIT NAGGI

ii'm talkin about the letter style kinda. i know its rough, but i know that there's a lot that you could do with it is what i'm saying.

MarOne...
07-04-2008, 03:57 PM
I like it tunka, maybe clean up your lines, and try to make the flow make more sense, right now its kind of everywhere.

Exchange with proper (helm)-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/helmxchange.jpg

seywhat
07-04-2008, 04:48 PM
thats lookin nice cabre, you down to exchange sometime?
tunka- try to keep everything basically on the same level, i usually draw a line where i want the tops and bottoms of my letters
scab- the first one seems too busy, chill it out some. on the second, bring the c out and fix the middle bar on the a
ranks- basically just do what scab said
tester- hot, ive always felt your style. on ur girls, letters arent bad but 3ds off in a few places

SAID
07-04-2008, 05:31 PM
Cabre, i woulda maybe put the M abit wider like more stretched out cause it looks kinda crunched up with your L. I dont like the mini extension in your e a simple woulda looked hot there. Looks good man.

MarOne...
07-04-2008, 06:03 PM
yeah the reason it is crunched is because I ran out of room, if you look closely the forcefield is cut off by the end of the M.

Oaklander
07-04-2008, 06:46 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/a425qa.jpg

antere07
07-04-2008, 06:52 PM
blue steel- thats nice man do a fill on it

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n82/antere07/DSC00161.jpg
crits

Shiva.
07-04-2008, 07:09 PM
i think the extensions on the right of the K look a little wierd, maybe make the 'bend' a little less pointy, so it's just as wide as the extension-bars. the ones on the E look nice.
but that's only detail, the rest looks nice.

SkuzSCT
07-04-2008, 07:10 PM
Yo Mar, It looks sick and all but that big extension coming off the top of the M throws of the balance.

Oaklander, you rock the most random shit ever, keep doin your thing.

Abek, that E is ill. Some of the add ons aren't quite working.

NoCanControl
07-04-2008, 07:13 PM
cais dead?

South-Pole
07-04-2008, 07:27 PM
oaklander-very weird,dunno what to say

abek-gorgeous,,but i find the add-ons on the e and on the k a bit useless,not feeling the arrow on the k,but im liking the ones on the E and the A(even if i have the same ones my a's)

antere07
07-04-2008, 07:31 PM
cheers and i duno neva seen ur shit lol

South-Pole
07-04-2008, 07:34 PM
lol i said that,cause im doing an alphabet and i had the same idea on the A,

antere07
07-04-2008, 07:35 PM
lol fair enuff lol

I GOT CLOUT
07-04-2008, 08:28 PM
Ode to RASEKs "R" Just lookin for crits on the cracks and all that good stuff.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16151.jpg

This needs a lot of work...just posting it so it doesnt seem like im just biting. Although I wish I could cause my R is faggish.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16152.jpg

MAR - Diggin the purppp one. Nice and cleannn.
ABEK - <3 I just think the K kinda throws the flow off. Maybe make the Bottom right bar kick in like the left bar of the A. Nah mean?

HRbN
07-04-2008, 08:39 PM
It is rasek ish but so are alot of R's anywho the overall sketch is good though, i like the cuts in the 3D looks good!

(SoS)Viruz
07-04-2008, 08:42 PM
Clout- Its Fresh with the cracks just make them stad out a little bit more and clean it up and it look Doppy Fresh :p Nice tho.

I GOT CLOUT
07-04-2008, 09:15 PM
Inked. The sharpie kept spreadin so the cracks arent as sharp as I would have liked...but oh well.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16154.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
07-04-2008, 09:24 PM
You should get Prismas Fine liners that is pretty good for stuff like that. It looks DOPE tho.

smooth_nuts
07-04-2008, 09:26 PM
ehh i think theyre are tomany cracks and thye look mad unrealistic which ruins it :-/
but the 3-ds looking krisp

the end
07-04-2008, 09:35 PM
shitty webcam flicks

Micro
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/5822/192450bg2.jpg

tester
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/9660/203703fq7.jpg

the elephant,piece, and beam shit is mine.
chickens is my bro and aliens are my girl

Oaklander
07-04-2008, 10:33 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/14t7lsm.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/oa96ad.jpg

remos
07-04-2008, 10:55 PM
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/pic1.jpg
crits are welcome

JETPACK!!
07-04-2008, 11:20 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16151.jpg

the R is nice man, rock it. you do a good job of it, i like the angle. loose half the cracks an it'll be dope.

once you get a letter down, the rest of the letters will flow with it. rock that shit son!!! i wanna see your letters flow more


http://i30.tinypic.com/14t7lsm.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/oa96ad.jpg

the fuck do you smoke man? you've got 100 thoughts and ideas on the same page, you should run with one idea a sketch, it'll be easier to follow. you spelt several words wrong as well.

anyways, heres a new steeze im tryin to work on. my bad oak, just noticed its two pages scanned together. makes a bit more sense now.
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/1993/rasek34cz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

acereborn
07-05-2008, 12:11 AM
Damn, thats a fresh piece, I'm lovin' that. But work on that hanstyle, it's too closed up imo.

And the top of the S should go farther to the E

(SoS)Viruz
07-05-2008, 12:13 AM
WTF Okalander. Lol.
Nice Bars Rasek.

klic
07-05-2008, 12:18 AM
oaklander...

BIGel
07-05-2008, 12:34 AM
http://a105.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/34/l_6bd20f14ef0de6dfd84584a0437b63b8.jpg

maso1
07-05-2008, 04:11 AM
Big Gel piece looks dope

smooth_nuts
07-05-2008, 04:24 AM
big gel?
nukkuh you stupid!
haha
rasek-thats fresh paint it

osnapizzel
07-05-2008, 11:10 AM
rasek, i like everything but the k, dont ask why i really dont know lol

bigel, get that shit out of the toy forum, seriously...shitting on all of us

osnapizzel
07-05-2008, 11:11 AM
wtfff

unknown...
07-05-2008, 11:37 AM
bigel stays killin it.

South-Pole
07-05-2008, 12:28 PM
the R is nice man, rock it. you do a good job of it, i like the angle. loose half the cracks an it'll be dope.

once you get a letter down, the rest of the letters will flow with it. rock that shit son!!! i wanna see your letters flow more



the fuck do you smoke man? you've got 100 thoughts and ideas on the same page, you should run with one idea a sketch, it'll be easier to follow. you spelt several words wrong as well.

anyways, heres a new steeze im tryin to work on. my bad oak, just noticed its two pages scanned together. makes a bit more sense now.
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/1993/rasek34cz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

very good,your starting to get some style,i like the R,A and the K contrary to other guys in this thread
but uhh,i couldn't hold my self when i saw the S and the E

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/rasek34cz1.jpg

edit:

Inked. The sharpie kept spreadin so the cracks arent as sharp as I would have liked...but oh well.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16154.jpg


sorry guys,but i can't hold myself,got clout,for your cracks,they look more like veins than cracks.The lines shouldn't be so thick,they should fine,not too fine though,and the lines should be str8,
heres a pic that explains it all

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/5-16154.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image202.jpg

^^not asking for crits,just showing an example

I GOT CLOUT
07-05-2008, 01:17 PM
Thanks everybody, and TORN like I explained, the lines are only so thick cause the shaprie I was using kept spreading. And I know I went overboard on the "cracks" hah. Theres always next sketch.

MICRO - I think I like that piece. Crazy fuckin color scheme.
BIGEL - Always on point. Nice.
RASEK - I dont even have to tell you to paint it, but....DO ITTT.

Hater-AiD~>
07-05-2008, 01:19 PM
clout - nice shit..id take south poles advice..the cracks are a little thick
the end - nice fills and style
primative - i dunno what exactly youre tryin to do
big el - dope
heres some gay shit..i need crits to improve
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/piecin/Picture141.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/piecin/Picture145.jpg

fredom-writer
07-05-2008, 01:38 PM
joca-first one is on the right track
That 'r' the cracks look like seaweed or some shit
Oaklander..thats not graffiti go to make a garage sale sign
Big L you have somekinda album???
this is some quick shit(pen outline)
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/bobbby_fisher/IMG_2691.jpg

remos
07-05-2008, 01:38 PM
id say the g looks too much like a c

Hater-AiD~>
07-05-2008, 01:41 PM
well thats what im tryin to find out..i dunno what to do with it..i want it to look similar to the J with an extension to make it look like a g

"Louis XIV"
07-05-2008, 01:52 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3162/2640109550_429c080631_m.jpg

osnapizzel
07-05-2008, 01:56 PM
krispy dig the piece not the colors

remos
07-05-2008, 02:14 PM
mabye like leave it but at the end bring it up a little and bring it back in or something, so it keeps the general shape but still has the basic form of a g
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/joca1.jpg

WoeInfinite
07-05-2008, 02:18 PM
i like the G, i would make the A look more like an A and less like a Y
maybe take out the extension on the bottom?

blue.steel
07-05-2008, 02:55 PM
first finished simp in a long time
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/3108/89328642el4.png (http://imageshack.us)

i dont know i think my other style was way better
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/9209/10039092qi6.png (http://imageshack.us)

WoeInfinite
07-05-2008, 03:00 PM
really love the fills.

SkuzSCT
07-05-2008, 03:56 PM
Joca, stick to the first simple

Louis, nice clean lines, but you need to stay simple and develop structure.

Tunka, the newer simples are way hotter, but you've got cool fills for both of em.

sallybsk
07-05-2008, 03:58 PM
Krispy... I'd say the the 'R' looks too much like a 'B' with the extension back and it flowing to next letter. But I could tell... just saying.
And I Couldn't tell it was a 'Y' really with it divided. you knowwwww?

SkuzSCT
07-05-2008, 03:59 PM
Krisp, dope letter structure, but I'd definitely like to see some solid looking fills and detail in the 3d too.

Peace out all

sallybsk
07-05-2008, 04:02 PM
oh yea and tunka, I'd have to disagree with you :P
This new Simple is way betterrr.
No offense but I don't like the old one, at all. And I think it's better, you're improving, aye?

SkuzSCT
07-05-2008, 04:07 PM
Krispy... I'd say the the 'R' looks too much like a 'B' with the extension back and it flowing to next letter. But I could tell... just saying.
And I Couldn't tell it was a 'Y' really with it divided. you knowwwww?

Yah I just noticed that too actually. Krisp, if the bars don't overlap and divide in every letter, than ppl will be able to tell that's an 'R' not a 'B', nah mean?

fredom-writer
07-05-2008, 04:15 PM
i no what you mean about the r looking like a b. i cant make it a straight leg cuz it wont match the K. by overlapping you mean the bottom of the Rback goes overlapps the R leg? what do you mean by divide tho?

sallybsk
07-05-2008, 04:30 PM
The part that is circled. you know how the 'Y' has two extensions. one looks like it's a bar just over it.

blue.steel
07-05-2008, 04:41 PM
thx for the feedback every one
heres some fresh ones of both styles
http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/3466/33873894fu2.png (http://imageshack.us)
louis xiv i dont know wut the secount letter is
fix that

(SoS)Viruz
07-05-2008, 04:42 PM
Lovin the Second one, Theose bars in the first one seemed to helped out alot.

sallybsk
07-05-2008, 04:58 PM
Yea i agree with blue on that louis.
Still think the first tunka is way hottter :P


But it's your throwies so whatever you like best i guess. :D

mekosbc
07-05-2008, 05:17 PM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0605.jpg

blue.steel
07-05-2008, 05:25 PM
bottom of page so bump

thx for the feedback every one
heres some fresh ones of both styles
http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/3466/33873894fu2.png (http://imageshack.us)
louis xiv i dont know wut the secount letter is
fix that
esoe
i relly like that but make the vertical bar of ur first e thicker

smooth_nuts
07-05-2008, 05:58 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3132/2640704506_a2aec287fd.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3070/2639875977_ee931a18b7.jpg
new shit im fucking with...i didnt use bars atall i kinda just let the pencil go where it wanted and formed it into a letter haha

squidone
07-05-2008, 06:15 PM
nuts i think the first one is a lot better than the other one it looks too spiky

seywhat
07-05-2008, 06:29 PM
ya that first ones fresh, do a whole peice with that style

Fube
07-05-2008, 06:51 PM
rasek, i like everything but the k, dont ask why i really dont know lol

bigel, get that shit out of the toy forum, seriously...shitting on all of us

u guys cry to get some heads in here, one comes and u tell him to gtfo? lol. silly silly boys.

Hater-AiD~>
07-05-2008, 07:08 PM
u guys cry to get some heads in here, one comes and u tell him to gtfo? lol. silly silly boys.
dont say you guys..im not cryin..

i am very...very offended sir

Mass Appeal
07-05-2008, 07:18 PM
u guys cry to get some heads in here, one comes and u tell him to gtfo? lol. silly silly boys.

Why im thinking of leaving BS.
Shit hasnt been the same in this thread since Tricks , Alive , Nemz , MSE , Sky , Bastardo , DG , Roolete , Rayesone and Guest ( Man i miss that guy so much ) stopped posting here..

Meh ill be back when im earning money.

Good luck people hope yall are dope when i come back ;)



Peace.

(SoS)Viruz
07-05-2008, 07:31 PM
Peace Aher you'll see this will be poppin with stuff from me!!!!! :p lol.

seywhat
07-05-2008, 07:59 PM
aiight mass peace out, and i definately agree with you on how this thread had changed. ive seen it in just how long ive been lookin around on bombing science.

acereborn
07-05-2008, 08:20 PM
:(

i always liked looking at pics in the bbook threads, and everyones right. were slowly loosing all the good stuff. im not really one for sketching, im toy as fuck, but whatever. this page needs more flicks.

http://i311.photobucket.com/albums/kk452/mb-08/p1.jpg

just fuckin around, im not really feeling the last half

http://i311.photobucket.com/albums/kk452/mb-08/p2.jpg

tryin a simple

http://i311.photobucket.com/albums/kk452/mb-08/p3.jpg

trying some really basic stuff

http://i311.photobucket.com/albums/kk452/mb-08/p4i.jpg

messin with inverted

(SoS)Viruz
07-05-2008, 08:26 PM
Yo thats 3rd is nice.

osnapizzel
07-05-2008, 08:59 PM
u guys cry to get some heads in here, one comes and u tell him to gtfo? lol. silly silly boys.

wow ppl are so quick to scream beef on here its fucking ridiculous. just to clear some shit up for ppl that obviously didnt pick up on the sarcasm, no i didnt actually want him to "gtfo" and no im not a silly boy cause i wouldnt start beef with someone whos obviously 3143534 times better than me.

osnapizzel
07-05-2008, 09:01 PM
http://a105.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/34/l_6bd20f14ef0de6dfd84584a0437b63b8.jpg

BUMP BITCHES

unsuccsessfull
07-05-2008, 09:28 PM
i was gonna send it in to the sketch battle but i thought i would save the embarrasment and just post it here
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/HPIM2145-1-1.jpg

its whack so haters go nuts

ColdBlooded
07-05-2008, 10:09 PM
I like it fost, it looks like ur black tree looking splatter backround is cracking and the yellow is ceaping through, looks dope.

blue.steel
07-05-2008, 10:11 PM
got board and started to color

http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/4583/34768784cb8.png (http://imageshack.us)
ranks u gots to keep ur bars the same size

FunkyEr
07-05-2008, 10:41 PM
sick fill/perspective..

WoeInfinite
07-05-2008, 10:42 PM
blue.steel i am FEELIN your style...

JETPACK!!
07-05-2008, 10:43 PM
i was gonna send it in to the sketch battle but i thought i would save the embarrasment and just post it here
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/HPIM2145-1-1.jpg

its whack so haters go nuts

its not a sketch.

work on your bars, be consistant with your 3D. the S is nice, but it dosent really flow with it.

remos
07-05-2008, 11:42 PM
i was gonna send it in to the sketch battle but i thought i would save the embarrasment and just post it here
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/HPIM2145-1-1.jpg

its whack so haters go nuts

the s is nice gotta fix the r tho

JETPACK!!
07-06-2008, 12:05 AM
im not feelin the kickback of the K either, should get rid of that and make the right bar of the N taller. thicken the bars on your R

work sketches
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/9198/rasek35mb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

WoeInfinite
07-06-2008, 12:14 AM
im feelin them styles dude.
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/070508_20122.jpg
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/070508_20121.jpg
^Shnitzel..
gonna use him for my character i think...

Hater-AiD~>
07-06-2008, 12:17 AM
is that that character from chowder?

WoeInfinite
07-06-2008, 12:18 AM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/070508_23061.jpg
i know the W doesnt match, but whatever, first try.
just liked the fill idea...should i leave the white, or color the whole thing in with the light green?

EDIT:
HELL YEAH HE IS
haha
my bro was watchin it and i just had the urge...i needed to draw that dude like Jack had to draw Rose from the Titanic..

mekosbc
07-06-2008, 12:25 AM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/Photo-0005.jpg

im tryin to get the simple shit down but i dunno lol i cant seem to get the simple concepted down bu im keep tryin toget it.... any crit iz respected...

Bazer
07-06-2008, 12:28 AM
dude... you dont have straight letters down? cuz that look tight ass fuck dude! well to me it does...

squidone
07-06-2008, 12:43 AM
yeah it is looking pretty good but i find some of the extensions confusing ... still looking good

mekosbc
07-06-2008, 12:45 AM
i can get normal stright letters but every time i post a peice ppl tell me to go simpler lol so im tryin to get my simple shit down..... like i always make my peices mad crazy and complex..... but i need too get a lil simpler..............

blue.steel
07-06-2008, 01:04 AM
i did raseks name
i drew on the back side of this paper 2 and my scanner picked it up so i tryed to clean it up in ms
http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/9110/70918667ko0.png (http://imageshack.us)

letsgobombin
07-06-2008, 03:58 AM
esoe- the e's look good but you s is knda hard to make out and your o is too thin, try to make your other letters match your e's
blue- is it just me that really doesnt like you old style, you new one is better just make the top right bit of the k come out of the spine of the k
woe- you need to work on your simp's a bit more, try doing them with straight edges instead of rounded and make sure you keep those bars consistent, your throwies are much better, the characs are good though
rasek- im not really feelin any of them, but the middle one is my favourite, try making the e less sharp because all the other letters are more round

BUCKNASTY!
07-06-2008, 04:19 AM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h27/thearchaicdefense/july08250032.jpg

00-made-00
07-06-2008, 04:35 AM
http://i30.tinypic.com/14t7lsm.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/oa96ad.jpg
I think this is so fresh, hit the nail on the head with this sketch.

TaskOne
07-06-2008, 03:01 PM
Art Exam
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/n506837467_943241_9117.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/asasa005.jpg
Random Peice, Crits?
Buck- Clean it up and fix that E, flowin tho.
Meko - Not bad!
Woe - That E seems to small compaired to the Large W.
Raskek - Really fealing the middle one, fix up the E tho.

antere07
07-06-2008, 03:41 PM
thats nice^^
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n82/antere07/DSC03770.jpg
i couldnt think of a fill so yeah
crits on this please

MUSEone
07-06-2008, 03:46 PM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/Photo-0005.jpg

im tryin to get the simple shit down but i dunno lol i cant seem to get the simple concepted down bu im keep tryin toget it.... any crit iz respected...

U joking?

Shit looks good to me mane.

Feelin tha handy to.

mosezone
07-06-2008, 03:55 PM
rasek-that middle one is tiiiiiight, really feeling that flow
woe-i'd leave the white
esoe-E's are pretty tight, the O has potential, but the S is kinda fucked. and lose the arrows. it's got potential though
bluesteel- i'm feeling it, but you're obviously gonna want to do a diff word next time.
shoe-middle part of the H needs work, but dope
oaklander-as far as graff goes, nothing special at all. but i think it's really tight in it's own way.
task-the Y looks a litttttle lacking, but fresh as hell otherwise, crazy funky fill.

first sketch i've done in a longgg time, ran out of room in my smaller book. S kinda sucks, but crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00459.jpg

squidone
07-06-2008, 03:57 PM
Abek i really like that how long you been writing? your EK look a little detached though maybe make your Ea little taller and lean it back a little
but still crazy ill

antere07
07-06-2008, 04:07 PM
well i been sketching since about may/june 07 not long started painting

(SoS)Viruz
07-06-2008, 05:03 PM
ABek-Dope! Like it.
Meko- Forget that Simp Stuff man by the look of that you got yo on style and it workin!
Task-Always like yo stuff, Like the Bottom one nice SImple color scheme.

(Unfinshed)
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0002.jpg
(Finshed)
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0003-1.jpg

Crits, I dont really like the "A" But what do you guys think.

IlikePie
07-06-2008, 05:49 PM
Capital R would be better.

Oaklander
07-06-2008, 07:30 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/2mlp1j.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/29bbqfp.jpg

Roolete
07-06-2008, 07:38 PM
your handstyle/handwriting is pretttttttty :)

Shiva.
07-06-2008, 07:44 PM
you've got to work on your S
when you have that down you can start adding style.

and watch your bars (in the F from youth oF today) the top half of your vertical bar is smaller than the bottom half. (with the horizontal bar in between, is you know what i mean)

(SoS)Viruz
07-06-2008, 07:49 PM
ABek-Dope! Like it.
Meko- Forget that Simp Stuff man by the look of that you got yo on style and it workin!
Task-Always like yo stuff, Like the Bottom one nice SImple color scheme.

(Unfinshed)
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0002.jpg
(Finshed)
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0003-1.jpg

Crits, I dont really like the "A" But what do you guys think.

BUMB FOR CRITS BITCHES!!!! are SNITHCES :p

IlikePie
07-06-2008, 07:52 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/c75365ad.jpg

I already said, a Capitol R would work better than lowercase, Tera.
Oaklander, it's always so happy :)

(SoS)Viruz
07-06-2008, 07:56 PM
Pie you shit is sweet.

The one In the bottom look like a Elephant a lil its ill.

Shiva.
07-06-2008, 07:56 PM
i think it looks kinda boring with all letters the same (except the A)
and with the A different it kinda sucks.

maybe you should try using an e instead of an E (i don't know how you call that, undarcast or something.... nu kapital)
and an a (see how the letters dissapear from "and" to "a"? (H) )
just keer trying, you'll get it

i was talking to tera obviously.. and those double posts suck man..

JETPACK!!
07-06-2008, 08:03 PM
pie, switch your shit up. try something new:) always fresh though. love the top RA.
Tera, if that is your name. get a capital R and make your T look less like a C.
oak, your shit looks so much better with 3D on it!

sketches from this morning.
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/7237/rasek36lh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

IlikePie
07-06-2008, 08:10 PM
pie, switch your shit up. try something new:) always fresh though. love the top RA.


I've been trying for so long, this is like the first time I've actually done something halfway complete on actual paper. But thanks, I think I'm gonna stick with that kind of stuff for a while (the top RA).
And Virus, I dunno who Elephant is, I was rocking that style like 7-8 months ago, and it's been getting shittier every time I try it.

Czar One
07-06-2008, 08:12 PM
exchange with Namer
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/Nameexchange.jpg

IlikePie
07-06-2008, 08:14 PM
Pie you shit is sweet.

The one In the bottom look like a Elephant a lil its ill.

This is back when I was actually good at that style

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00584.jpg
Rab

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00583.jpg
Bik

Czar One
07-06-2008, 08:20 PM
I heard pie has a cancer baby that feasts on the flesh of ugly virgins.

Also, throw some 3-D on the rest of that BIK sketch, even if it is dated.

smooth_nuts
07-06-2008, 08:38 PM
pie-im loving the ra with the faces you should paint it ;)
oaklander-your shits always werd as hell...in a ood way haha

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3152/2644393338_a22e52d02d.jpg
quick pen simple i was gonna paint but there was nothign but tankers in the yard :(...my a and b looks like shit
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3156/2644392950_dc0108166a.jpg
bleh...im getting a scanner soon so expect better/more flicks from me :D

mekosbc
07-06-2008, 09:44 PM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/Photo-0005e.jpg


another simple with out the damn arrows! haha happy?

JETPACK!!
07-06-2008, 09:48 PM
very, that's tight. sketch a couple more simples. thats a lot of improvement over your last one imo.

kinna gave up on this one. may pick it up later. S's are starting to irritate me..
http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/3613/rasek37zh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sex without condoms
07-06-2008, 11:44 PM
pie, switch your shit up. try something new:) always fresh though. love the top RA.
Tera, if that is your name. get a capital R and make your T look less like a C.
oak, your shit looks so much better with 3D on it!

sketches from this morning.
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/7237/rasek36lh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


i've been gone way too long
this is soso dope

osnapizzel
07-07-2008, 01:06 AM
rasek im feeling the first two man keep it up

i like pie thats fucking dope

IlikePie
07-07-2008, 01:13 AM
rasek im feeling the first two man keep it up

i like pie thats fucking dope

Hurray! I guess I don't suck as much as I remember I did :)

Mister wang, post that in the Toy Tags thread.

modeswang77
07-07-2008, 01:14 AM
will do pie

remos
07-07-2008, 01:14 AM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/c75365ad.jpg

I already said, a Capitol R would work better than lowercase, Tera.
Oaklander, it's always so happy :)

those faces are the shit!

and ilikepie too :p

IlikePie
07-07-2008, 01:15 AM
very, that's tight. sketch a couple more simples. thats a lot of improvement over your last one imo.

kinna gave up on this one. may pick it up later. S's are starting to irritate me..
http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/3613/rasek37zh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/Photo-0005e.jpg


another simple with out the damn arrows! haha happy?


pie-im loving the ra with the faces you should paint it ;)
oaklander-your shits always werd as hell...in a ood way haha

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3152/2644393338_a22e52d02d.jpg
quick pen simple i was gonna paint but there was nothign but tankers in the yard :(...my a and b looks like shit
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3156/2644392950_dc0108166a.jpg
bleh...im getting a scanner soon so expect better/more flicks from me :D


This is back when I was actually good at that style

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00584.jpg
Rab

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00583.jpg
Bik


exchange with Namer
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/Nameexchange.jpg


pie, switch your shit up. try something new:) always fresh though. love the top RA.
Tera, if that is your name. get a capital R and make your T look less like a C.
oak, your shit looks so much better with 3D on it!

sketches from this morning.
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/7237/rasek36lh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/c75365ad.jpg

I already said, a Capitol R would work better than lowercase, Tera.
Oaklander, it's always so happy :)


http://i30.tinypic.com/2mlp1j.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/29bbqfp.jpg

Krump

smooth_nuts
07-07-2008, 01:53 AM
OH SHITS I GOT KRUMPED! :O

but still not a crit....

IlikePie
07-07-2008, 02:07 AM
You got krumped all over ;)
Not feenin' the first sketch, liked your simpler stuff more. And at first the second sketch looked like Pubic Wearing :) Which would be cool to see on a freight.

smooth_nuts
07-07-2008, 02:40 AM
haha word.
i wanna paint a few with weird messages like i pulled out,u got a perty mouf,ect.

garbage down tha way
07-07-2008, 03:03 AM
i like that alot you should stick to that style.

HRbN
07-07-2008, 03:35 AM
not such a giant picture would be nice, thanks