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DRiPTooL
07-11-2008, 11:07 AM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7292.jpg
Tool idk just trying words out
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7293.jpg
Juice thoguht it looked cool
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7294.jpg
Drip think this is gunna be my name not sure yet
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7295.jpg
and another

Look@it2x
07-11-2008, 11:10 AM
drip tool u gotta work on it dont even put in colors yet just sketch straight letters

DRiPTooL
07-11-2008, 11:11 AM
ok

CreetchaFeetcha22
07-11-2008, 11:53 AM
http://http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/408/img019mc6.jpg


http://http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/408/img019mc6.jpg



quick messy not content with both E's but work in progress.

garbage down tha way
07-11-2008, 12:53 PM
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1945/07112008022918ammp5.png
Im not really sure what to do with the tops of the G and S.


YOU ARE BUGGIN! the G on the far left you crossed out is dope son, use it.

letsgobombin
07-11-2008, 01:35 PM
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/c9f4bb0d.jpg
i think the y looks out of place because of the curves
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/a3bdf78b.jpg
can everyone see this? because last time i just got skipped over

gasm- i agree with garbage, thats a nice g. the one on the bottom doesn't really look like a g, i think its because of that thin extension. you could try the top of the s with just like a straight horizontal line and see how that works.
peer- go simpler for now, i can see you're using bars but your letters are in consistent, keep all the bars the same width. the e's are ok just keep them consistent and round the other letters a bit more because they are the only rounded letters

TaskOne
07-11-2008, 05:10 PM
quickie in a friends book
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/lol003.jpg
crits?
Letsgobombin - your R is a little awkward. fix the bottom bar to curve out maybe instead of in.

NoCanControl
07-11-2008, 06:22 PM
exchange anyone?!

bored ass hell here. and bought a new black book.

TaskOne
07-11-2008, 06:23 PM
im down, what u write? throwys?

NoCanControl
07-11-2008, 06:25 PM
im down, what u write? throwys?

kans, And throws are good. will have yours done in five or something.

smooth_nuts
07-11-2008, 06:46 PM
speak-simples bars new to graff thread....
t
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3117/2657248495_fa66c99f9f.jpg
k
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3193/2657248651_9a6c7a1141.jpg
o,a(which im redoing cause that one looks like uter shit!),r
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3055/2657248337_a207251512.jpg
r
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3091/2657247881_4d9f247e87.jpg
ima try doing every letter...

bump for crits...i never get crits any more :(

silentchaos14
07-11-2008, 06:48 PM
doap- the T is good but the heart thing on the bottom of the K doesnt look right, neither does the A

...Syerf
07-11-2008, 07:00 PM
smoothz
glad to see your using the bar method! if there is one thing that can help any "new to graff" advance, its the bar method:D
the R is my favorite of yours because its the simplest.(if thats a word)
and the O
as for the k and the t, the heart things arent quite working, and i htink thats because they are a little random and disporportionate...but idk
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p387/SyerfOne/004-Copy-1.jpg
i know this is the bbook thread, but i hope this helps...just some simples that i did, thats where the bar method got me so far anyways...
sorry, some of the letters kinda got a throwie look to some of them, but its what i got for now. ignore the GCSK throw in the backround, CLOSER is the main word of the flick

smooth_nuts
07-11-2008, 07:36 PM
ummm i've used bars since i started writing fool,i've only not used it a couple times out of bordem....and pratice what you preach man,and yeah i think the SPADE on the k doesnt work cause i made it to fat but ya know im just dicking with different letters

i'll bust out some more tonight since im not going any thanks to this fucking sun burn!
haha

hammer_time
07-11-2008, 07:41 PM
the spade/heart is the new played out arrow

Animal
07-11-2008, 07:48 PM
I thought it was played a while ago.

smooth_nuts
07-11-2008, 07:48 PM
pfft the spade is the shit....and so are arrows if theyre used right =/

Animal
07-11-2008, 07:51 PM
that is true. I personally don't use either. because i don't know how to use them correctly. lol

smooth_nuts
07-11-2008, 08:06 PM
haha word...i cant use arrows worth a shit and i can barely use the spade...just trying something new ya know cant get any better if dont try somethign different every so often

seywhat
07-11-2008, 08:23 PM
smooth- lookin good for sure, throw a peice together usin those. down to exchange peices sometime?
syerf- im just not feelin it, use some bars or make it a throw lol
task- letters are lookin good, im not feelin the teo big extensions comin off of the t, but i see why you did them
letsgobombing- try to make the letters look different from the handy, i cant really think of anything else to say
gasm- feelin your style alot, the g and s you put in your last post are dope. i like the top of the g how it is and try what letsgobombing said for the s

smooth_nuts
07-11-2008, 08:25 PM
yeah man im down,sey right?

seywhat
07-11-2008, 08:31 PM
seyar, doap?
imma end up puttin on here either tonight or tomorrow for sure, prolly just gonna be a pen freezy so no worries on colors or anything

smooth_nuts
07-11-2008, 08:39 PM
thats what they call me
edit*
same thing i was gonna do man,i almot never use colors haha...

speak-simples bars new to graff thread....
t
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3117/2657248495_fa66c99f9f.jpg
k
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3193/2657248651_9a6c7a1141.jpg
o,a(which im redoing cause that one looks like uter shit!),r
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3055/2657248337_a207251512.jpg
r
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3091/2657247881_4d9f247e87.jpg
ima try doing every letter...
bump for a new page

blue.steel
07-11-2008, 09:32 PM
tweekin shit
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/1268/99224192kk4.png (http://imageshack.us)
smooth its looking good

Gager2.9
07-11-2008, 10:27 PM
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p400/Gageman_2008/DSCF1593.jpg

Hey, I tried making my stuff simple
any help is greatly appreciated!
Ima toy :P

FLSteele16
07-11-2008, 10:44 PM
Dude make sure your letters are equaly spaced.

smooth_nuts
07-11-2008, 10:48 PM
bars and straight letters gager...

Animal
07-11-2008, 11:58 PM
Tried some of the stuff you guys suggested. It's a little crooked but oh well.
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/5369/07112008084428pmix1.png

squidone
07-12-2008, 12:06 AM
gasm looking good but your M shouldnt curl back into itself

Edward"Sezer"Hands
07-12-2008, 12:16 AM
Tried some of the stuff you guys suggested. It's a little crooked but oh well.
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/5369/07112008084428pmix1.png
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/07112008084428pmix1.png

GIzUrD
07-12-2008, 01:35 AM
heres one i did today...
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/1989/orangisforapplespe2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

like it ?

MedTwo
07-12-2008, 01:56 AM
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6752/picture10bs2.png (http://imageshack.us)
Fucked that face, god damn...

Bumppp bottom-ish a few pages back.

dark2
07-12-2008, 03:14 AM
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/005222.jpg
my most recent critz?

medtwo- im feeling it n i stole ur idea 4 a backround kinda i know sry lol
gizurd -looking good

DonaldFour
07-12-2008, 03:23 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/throwie.jpg

my n is wackness

MedTwo
07-12-2008, 03:26 AM
I like your N, that's a sweet ass throw up.

MarOne...
07-12-2008, 03:33 AM
CAB how do you make your letters look so glossy????

Elmers "Painters" paint pen.

MarOne...
07-12-2008, 03:35 AM
Tried some of the stuff you guys suggested. It's a little crooked but oh well.
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/5369/07112008084428pmix1.png

Nice shizz dood. but yeah, take tezer's advice on that M. Looking foine.

IlikePie
07-12-2008, 06:06 AM
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6752/picture10bs2.png (http://imageshack.us)
Fucked that face, god damn...

Reminds me of Raby's shit...

MedTwo
07-12-2008, 06:26 AM
Haven't really seen it.. Reminds me of what we call 'public style' here, and the people who help me out..

smooth_nuts
07-12-2008, 06:32 AM
yeha it does...
donald-your n's fine but the r needs some tweaking
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2265/2660083137_560d7b6c25.jpg
atempt numero uno at a seyar sketch i hate everythign after the e so ima probaly do another one man
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3195/2660911034_d205c886b0.jpg
my p is garbage...and the e and p are two small :(...and the drip son the o dont look right atleast not the top ones...why am i even posting this haha

MedTwo
07-12-2008, 06:39 AM
Show me Raby's shit.. and tell me why. Because it's simple?

smooth_nuts
07-12-2008, 06:50 AM
its the use of the lower case r and the thicker bars...and your fills are sort of liek the ones he rocks

not a bad thing though


yeha it does...
donald-your n's fine but the r needs some tweaking
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2265/2660083137_560d7b6c25.jpg
atempt numero uno at a seyar sketch i hate everythign after the e so ima probaly do another one man
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3195/2660911034_d205c886b0.jpg
my p is garbage...and the e and p are two small :(...and the drip son the o dont look right atleast not the top ones...why am i even posting this haha
bottom page bumper cars babies

rsakens
07-12-2008, 06:54 AM
Tried some of the stuff you guys suggested. It's a little crooked but oh well.
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/5369/07112008084428pmix1.png

is that last letter a m if then make the right leg longer the rest off the letter are dope
especial the G & S

GIzUrD
07-12-2008, 09:36 AM
Keep The Seyar Its Foxy!!!

smooth_nuts
07-12-2008, 02:23 PM
ehh theres alot of shit i dont like...the swirl on the y,the direction i arched the base of the a...the r in general

steyr
07-12-2008, 02:49 PM
http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn72/airsol/air.jpg
just a simple air with my new prismacolor markers

this is where it belongs

Gager2.9
07-12-2008, 03:10 PM
I couldnt fit in the "A"... had room for a cat though!
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p400/Gageman_2008/DSCF1602.jpg

Ekes
07-12-2008, 03:47 PM
New piece.
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc158/Numk/2008-07-12-71009.jpg
Piranha , digging the colours , just try to space the letters out a lil' bit more

Gager2.9
07-12-2008, 04:13 PM
thanks a bunch ekes!
I like your letters and the yellow outline a lot!
Something seems wierd about the "s" though.. too far out maybe?

Sarto
07-12-2008, 04:27 PM
and gager watch that 3d man , try using a vanishing point.

Gager2.9
07-12-2008, 04:44 PM
k, sarto
yeah I usually use a point but I guess I got to comfortable with it.
thnx alot everyone!

nero112
07-12-2008, 04:50 PM
parana way simpler dude... way way simpler

unreal180
07-12-2008, 05:01 PM
pirana dont bother coloring in just work on ur letters more
and if u bomb wid that name ur gonner get pissed off wid how long it
5 letter min is useualy best

Airsol
07-12-2008, 05:29 PM
http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn72/airsol/airsol3.jpg
im liking this one a lot
tell me waht you think

Tokenkaligreens
07-12-2008, 05:36 PM
new 2 graff thread do simple bar letters dont worry about fills or backgrounds right now.

GIzUrD
07-12-2008, 08:09 PM
I couldnt fit in the "A"... had room for a cat though!
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p400/Gageman_2008/DSCF1602.jpg

damn, that cat is pretty hilarious... stuck on there with scotch tape, you are a god sir.

maybe on the SEYAR piece if the y curl was more like the s curl, it would work out better

silentchaos14
07-12-2008, 09:11 PM
airsol- what token said
gager- read the new to graff thread and use bars.

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneStick.jpg

new sticker. first thing in awhile, kinda happy with the way it turned out.

crits?

DRiPTooL
07-12-2008, 09:36 PM
Dude that sticker is sick i made one but i already stuck it to a stop sign before i could take a pic....maybe ill take my camera down.....I like the arrow in your O and the disconnected ends on the M and E it loks awesome

T-jay
07-12-2008, 09:41 PM
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa291/tim44pix/0513082057.jpg

T-jay
07-12-2008, 09:44 PM
a couple of pages from my book looking 4 some tips and advice
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa291/tim44pix/PHTO0014.jpg
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa291/tim44pix/PHTO0015.jpg
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa291/tim44pix/PHTO0016.jpg
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa291/tim44pix/PHTO0017.jpg
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa291/tim44pix/PHTO0018.jpg

DRiPTooL
07-12-2008, 09:53 PM
yo you have some sick stuff

DRiPTooL
07-12-2008, 09:55 PM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7296.jpg
Well this another one i colored in(before everyone told me not to use color lol
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7297.jpg
Trying out my old school color plain black and white..and a new letter style..
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7298.jpg
This is supposed to say Krunk messed up the last K but yea another letter style:p:p

CRITS???

Evasion Of Invasion
07-12-2008, 09:56 PM
simples

DRiPTooL
07-12-2008, 10:00 PM
i was just saying that it looked sick ...lol sorry

Evasion Of Invasion
07-12-2008, 10:03 PM
i am to thought ur comment was directed at T-jay but yeah... mornes shit aint sick yet but u are improving my young friend

DRiPTooL
07-12-2008, 10:05 PM
thanks.. im gunna try to get my sticker up here its pretty sick though i colored it in and yea i hope it doesnt rain cause i ran out of permanent markers and had to resort to WASHABLE....lmao oops!

silentchaos14
07-12-2008, 10:22 PM
permanent markers arent permanent

DRiPTooL
07-12-2008, 10:26 PM
haha yea you are right...but it will beat washable...

nero112
07-12-2008, 10:27 PM
have you got epilepsy ? all need work whole page needs go to simples

DRiPTooL
07-12-2008, 10:30 PM
ok so use whole pages

silentchaos14
07-12-2008, 10:32 PM
gtfo now

nero112
07-12-2008, 10:44 PM
i meant this whooooooole page needs to go back to simples your not 'the shit' you are shit your letters are shit so lisin up go back to simples straight letters with bars how many fuckin times do we need to say this

(SoS)Viruz
07-12-2008, 10:48 PM
Drips- You got the Simple part in mind but you have to workin on makin your letters flow and the Spacin bettewn your letters
Like the last pic the U is not good. Just work on it, look on how others space thier letters. You'll get it just keep practicing.

ahboi
07-12-2008, 10:57 PM
niceee

DRiPTooL
07-12-2008, 11:05 PM
OK CHILL OUT god and ok simples i get it and thanks ill look at the other peoples.....

nero112
07-12-2008, 11:21 PM
sos stop giving crits he hasnt got the simples down fuck man just look at your key board copy basic letters waite 6 to 8 months if no improvment stab self with rust hook

(SoS)Viruz
07-12-2008, 11:23 PM
Nero lets be nice lol. I was tryin to say he's "Tryin to do simps." Not that he Has them down. Lol. But He's Right drips. BARS BROTHA!

BIGel
07-12-2008, 11:30 PM
http://a657.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/78/l_076dbf500dba874910168daf0edebe00.jpg

Gager2.9
07-13-2008, 12:49 AM
BIGel that looks nice!
the tip of the gun looks a bit odd
but the rest is awesome!

squidone
07-13-2008, 12:54 AM
you guys should go read the new to graff thread and then go draw for a long time and then post up some stuff stick to simples use bars and once you have all the basic letters down then try doing dope fills and crazy arrows if you want
i know a lot of you are just beginning but thats really the best thing to do

DonaldFour
07-13-2008, 03:26 AM
...

DRiPTooL
07-13-2008, 03:49 AM
YO NERO Chill the FUCk out you half a fag im just askin for crits and help but u a punk ass bitch cursing and acting like the little bitch that you are I guess u fell outta ur mama's smelly vagina able to scribble all kinds of stuff. Take ur little lilly white faggoty ass outta ur bedroom in the suburbs and go back to pumpin the neighbors cat. Oh by the way ima stick the rusty hook up ur ass dickboy. Make sure to tell your mommy hi from me cause she licks my anus

I catch you on here saying anything wrong to me angain and I will destroy you in here got it ball licker now go report this post like a good bitch would:D

Mo152
07-13-2008, 04:22 AM
Change your name drip. there is a good 1o or 2o drips in every city, i mean if you wanna stick with it cool but your gonna be labeled a toy pretty much forever unless you become godly good, but you are a long way away form that as i can judge from your tag, bottom line, change the name

DRiPTooL
07-13-2008, 04:35 AM
yea havent seen one in this city so...i think im gunna keep it

nero112
07-13-2008, 06:08 AM
YO NERO Chill the FUCk out you half a fag im just askin for crits and help but u a punk ass bitch cursing and acting like the little bitch that you are I guess u fell outta ur mama's smelly vagina able to scribble all kinds of stuff. Take ur little lilly white faggoty ass outta ur bedroom in the suburbs and go back to pumpin the neighbors cat. Oh by the way ima stick the rusty hook up ur ass dickboy. Make sure to tell your mommy hi from me cause she licks my anus

I catch you on here saying anything wrong to me angain and I will destroy you in here got it ball licker now go report this post like a good bitch would:D

oh shit you really think you know anything about me haha oh my god dude seriously ?
damn well fuck it im trying to help you new guys out but none of you listen me n 50 plus members have been saying 'stick to bars keep simple blah blah blah' no one fuckin listens you aint the shit n by the way i aint ogt a clue where my rents are so shut the fuck up you lil wanna niguh saying i start internet shit dude im tryina help your the lil 17 year old fag with the spiked hair n fake tan comin on here thinkin his a graff king , n what the fuck catch me on here fuck you bitch who the fuck do you think you are? you aint big you aint a thug your a piece of shit ego maniac toy who cant do a straight letter to save his life let alone paint that shit so eh you know what fuck you.

you dont want crits fuck off ,cos your gnna stay a toy for the next few weeks you decide to do graff so you can impress your sister hoping she'll fuck you ya inbred piece of shit cos you aint in this thing you aint got the respect to lisen to people who know about the simples n letter form i aint hating on toys im hating on you but anyway most of the guys in here need the straight letters down only a few have learn from them they will progress you how ever if you continue thinkin you know it all will fail and then end up quiting in a month.

letsgobombin
07-13-2008, 06:25 AM
is it just me or in the last week have we got like 50 new toys, i got to say though its like the blind leading the blind (i love that phrase) with all these toys saying to equally crap toys that their shite ,no bars letters are 'sick'. i think the first thing toys should learn is what is good and what is not because if this continues their will just be pages of stuff without bars or with weird extensions. so quit with the beef if people dont wanna listen to the at least semi-decent people about bars and simple, then let them keep listenin to the toys until their ego gets so big they explode.
any, for talking: i did this for a battle with mean but then he buggered off
i thought a lower case e looked better
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1242.jpg
all toys- bars and simples
bigel- your work does look very tattoey (?) but i agree with gager, the end of the gun looks very 2d
people need to stop talking and start critting, i went advanced and only saw one pic to crit

Animal
07-13-2008, 06:27 AM
Toys need a good yellin' at before they start using bars. It takes a while for those simple words to sink in. And then when they realize that they are the only ones in the world who think their shitty, crooked, "Wyld Stylez Burner" is "The Shit" they might start using bars, and doing simples.

Amen- Only thing I can think of is make your M thinner, and make the right leg of the N longer.

nero112
07-13-2008, 06:28 AM
yeah bigel does the tattoo flashes i actually want a tat by him lol

WoeInfinite
07-13-2008, 12:18 PM
SOME (not even 1/4) of what i messed with today in the wee hours of the sunrise
haha
fuck i need sleep...
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/071308_03111.jpg
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/071308_12061.jpg
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/071308_00141.jpg
kiiinda "borrowed" Gros's O...=.="
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/071308_12041-1.jpg
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/071308_00201.jpg
tryin to get this style down..
help?
ill get my own O..promise
:]

http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/070708_07561.jpg
^ yo quierooooo

(SoS)Viruz
07-13-2008, 12:23 PM
I like it. It nice man. but on the second one just fix the "e" Looks a lil skinny.

nero112
07-13-2008, 12:24 PM
the girls:p:p:p but yeah ima say it heavily gesusfied maby go a bit simpler but keep to the flow you got keep workin on it

(SoS)Viruz
07-13-2008, 12:29 PM
the girls:p:p:p but yeah ima say it heavily gesusfied maby go a bit simpler but keep to the flow you got keep workin on it

BTW Nero... You pwned that guy.;) Drip. Lol.:p

WoeInfinite
07-13-2008, 12:29 PM
^ oh completely gesified.
ha, but whatever, just checkin the style out.
and yeah that e ended up pretty skinny didnt it...

H3TT1NG3R
07-13-2008, 12:33 PM
^yo your gunna have to change up taht e, its such a gesus bite.

DRiPTooL
07-13-2008, 12:34 PM
oh shit you really think you know anything about me haha oh my god dude seriously ?
damn well fuck it im trying to help you new guys out but none of you listen me n 50 plus members have been saying 'stick to bars keep simple blah blah blah' no one fuckin listens you aint the shit n by the way i aint ogt a clue where my rents are so shut the fuck up you lil wanna niguh saying i start internet shit dude im tryina help your the lil 17 year old fag with the spiked hair n fake tan comin on here thinkin his a graff king , n what the fuck catch me on here fuck you bitch who the fuck do you think you are? you aint big you aint a thug your a piece of shit ego maniac toy who cant do a straight letter to save his life let alone paint that shit so eh you know what fuck you.

you dont want crits fuck off ,cos your gnna stay a toy for the next few weeks you decide to do graff so you can impress your sister hoping she'll fuck you ya inbred piece of shit cos you aint in this thing you aint got the respect to lisen to people who know about the simples n letter form i aint hating on toys im hating on you but anyway most of the guys in here need the straight letters down only a few have learn from them they will progress you how ever if you continue thinkin you know it all will fail and then end up quiting in a month.

so...your ma is still a whore...

H3TT1NG3R
07-13-2008, 12:36 PM
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/9670/etd3.jpg
^gesus's e
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/071308_00201.jpg
^your e....see teh similarities?

LOPe_GCI
07-13-2008, 12:43 PM
the E looks alot more like a gros bite. even the dots above it... come on

nero112
07-13-2008, 12:43 PM
so...your ma is still a whore...

shut the fuck up you dont know shit fag how about your mom lemme guess drinks too much n fucked har brother aka your dad anyway fuck you at the end of they day atleast i know im no graff expert but im sure as hell better than you n if you wnna back up all your shit talk paint battle fag.

n hetinnger no point trying to call a bite when he himself said he was just chekin out the style .

WoeInfinite
07-13-2008, 12:45 PM
yeah i know, im just baffled by their stuff, haha i was lookin at it last night like, OH DANG, and then tried to do it.
atleast i didnt do the teefs.
haa
i know but i was just checkin it out, ill change it up no doubt.

GaZm13
07-13-2008, 12:55 PM
DRIP the Tool is going to end up getting banned before he can even graduate to a Pre-School style tag if he doesn't start taking a little constructive criticism. Tear him a new one NERO. Kids probably 12 or something.

Ekes
07-13-2008, 12:56 PM
im painting a piece with a friend tomorrow and i need some help on witch one to decide on .
the first simple is from 2 months ago.
witch one : ?


http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc158/Numk/2008-07-13-61125.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc158/Numk/2008-07-12-71009.jpg

nero112
07-13-2008, 12:57 PM
nah dudes like 17 i bet n pissed he cant do graffiti stylorz.. fuck him bitch should now his place n if he dont stop bitchin ill stab him with a shit dipped prison shank

remos
07-13-2008, 01:17 PM
Nero :1
Drips:0

and woe that g in the pink is sick

JETPACK!!
07-13-2008, 01:24 PM
paint battle fag.

can i get in?

Ekes
07-13-2008, 01:37 PM
im painting a piece with a friend tomorrow and i need some help on witch one to decide on .
the first simple is from 2 months ago.
witch one : ?


http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc158/Numk/2008-07-13-61125.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc158/Numk/2008-07-12-71009.jpg

anyone help me?

nero112
07-13-2008, 01:39 PM
yeah sure jetpack

JETPACK!!
07-13-2008, 01:44 PM
yay! PM me the details an all that shizzzz. ill have a new sketch up soon

WoeInfinite
07-13-2008, 01:48 PM
anyone help me?

id rather see the second one in paint, but make the letters a lil fatter so theres less black and empty space
ya know?

noxi
07-13-2008, 01:49 PM
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m9/kimchispwr/sketch.jpg

fucked up on the 3d.

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m9/kimchispwr/noname-1-1.jpg
fucked up on shadow.

I need help on everything lol. Crits please..

noxi
07-13-2008, 01:50 PM
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m9/kimchispwr/sketch.jpg

fucked up on the 3d.

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m9/kimchispwr/noname-1-1.jpg
fucked up on shadow.

I need help on everything lol. Crits please..

Ekes
07-13-2008, 01:52 PM
alright cool thanks woe. ur stuff is looking good also .

WoeInfinite
07-13-2008, 02:01 PM
thanks.
uhh septa..idk, bring your T out more?
idk, i hate T's..they suck to work with.
your letters just kinda cover eachother alot.

noxi
07-13-2008, 02:13 PM
Aiite, i just dont like the huge space under the "T" thats why i put it so close. thanks though

WoeInfinite
07-13-2008, 02:18 PM
yeha no i know what you mean, thats why i picked a name without a T
haha

Scream Out
07-13-2008, 03:06 PM
ekes- i like the first one more because its a simpler style and it looks cleaner than your other sketch

septa - in all your sketches your T looks like a lower case R, try not to cover it up so much

woe - its good to try different styles but its better to just develop your own, i really like that e but thats probly just because gesus has a great style haha, your W needs a lot of work wich leaves be to believe you should still be working on simples for now

havent sketched in a while heres a pen freestyle from this morning
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo294.jpg

JETPACK!!
07-13-2008, 03:39 PM
swolen, that steeze is fresh. i like it a lot, the way your L runs into your E kinna hides the letter. nice orb too

havent sketched in a while

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/8259/rasek40ew6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

(SoS)Viruz
07-13-2008, 03:48 PM
Nice Rasek See you been workin with that new style.

Desipher
07-13-2008, 03:49 PM
.

WoeInfinite
07-13-2008, 04:08 PM
ekes- i like the first one more because its a simpler style and it looks cleaner than your other sketch

septa - in all your sketches your T looks like a lower case R, try not to cover it up so much

woe - its good to try different styles but its better to just develop your own, i really like that e but thats probly just because gesus has a great style haha, your W needs a lot of work wich leaves be to believe you should still be working on simples for now

havent sketched in a while heres a pen freestyle from this morning
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo294.jpg
dopeeee your O is hypnotizing me

Airsol
07-13-2008, 04:32 PM
http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn72/airsol/NewCamera010.jpg
first bar method...tell me what i could improove

WoeInfinite
07-13-2008, 04:35 PM
change the R, the bar across the A, and make the L smaller and the O bigger and more over and you should be good to go
:)

Airsol
07-13-2008, 04:39 PM
thanks a lot

hal.cyon
07-13-2008, 05:44 PM
http://http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/705/012il0.jpgbeen doin a lot of pen freestyles lately. some ok, some eh.
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/705/012il0.jpg

my homie wanted his daughters name, im still working it out.
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/7444/015qg6.jpg

and for the ranks battle, altho ima get murdered by the big boys.

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/9393/016jq8.jpg

desipher, looks ill, i wanna see the color.
rasek - nice simps as always.

RFI. SPit
07-13-2008, 08:11 PM
Not bad pen sketches man



Eeesh... messed my N up big time haha. Pretty rusty with this style, but trying to get it going
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/636/photo84id0.jpg

eMJayBee
07-13-2008, 09:07 PM
hal- pen freestylin is the steezz haha nice stuff
zof- nice style the z is dopeness

this is what I did for the mass production, but I read the thread and saw that he was gone, soooo
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/002.jpg
and work in progress
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/004-1.jpg

GaZm13
07-13-2008, 09:24 PM
Damn ZOF that Z and F I'm digging a lot man. MJB your style is good man. You should be in the big boy thread. I really like that top fill.

iVIBE
07-13-2008, 09:31 PM
zof- def feelin the z in that one, pretty nice
mjb- first question. what the hell are you doing here?, get out of here and go to the big boy thread :). Im feelin both of them for you love the fill on the 1st one and second one is fresh man keep it up!

FLSteele16
07-13-2008, 10:34 PM
Hal those are tight
Zof its looking really good
Mjb i agree with the other dudes you should be in the other thread

seywhat
07-13-2008, 11:10 PM
mjb- dope as fuck, i think you could post in the big boy thread but this one is for crits and i imagine thats why you post here. i give you props for sure for havin a fuckin triple letter and bein able to pull it off so well
zof- the n's covered up just a bit too much, but dope
hal- that serenity is ill, thats a pretty fresh name too

Airsol
07-13-2008, 11:46 PM
http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn72/airsol/airsol.jpg
bar method #2
how do you like it?

Rodderz
07-13-2008, 11:46 PM
Hello. I just started writing so all of this is new to me. I haven't made my own handstyle yet, getting around to it soon. The characters I've drawn I saw off of the internet first.

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1805/0707082049ri2.th.jpg (http://img225.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0707082049ri2.jpg)
My first time spray painting ^

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2656/0709082316ps9.th.jpg (http://img291.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0709082316ps9.jpg)

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/5272/0713080001xa4.th.jpg (http://img91.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0713080001xa4.jpg)
For my sister ^

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/3056/0713081157pf9.th.jpg (http://img91.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0713081157pf9.jpg)

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/7056/0713081158ark5.th.jpg (http://img133.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0713081158ark5.jpg)

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/2171/0713081158bfg7.th.jpg (http://img133.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0713081158bfg7.jpg)
Slightly different version of the spray can on TrainWriters

http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/1411/0713081158cga2.th.jpg (http://img390.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0713081158cga2.jpg)
Color looks much better in real life.

Criticism & Comments welcome!

DRiPTooL
07-14-2008, 12:00 AM
ok im back im ready to learn as long as every has cooled down???and nero yo lets be chill iight? Im gunna do what you said work on bar letters and i will listen....ok? and bar letters look the same as on the keyboard?

P-love
07-14-2008, 12:08 AM
http://media.newschoolers.com/uploads/cache/images/1216008323-610462-600x450-1216008274P1010033.JPG

here is a try at just sticking to bars and simple stuff. what do you gusy think compared to my other stuff? getting better?...

and to DRIP and RODDERZ, go check out the "new to graff" thread. it will help you guys a bunch.

*Spectone*
07-14-2008, 12:08 AM
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/356/0714080004bi8.jpg

P-love
07-14-2008, 12:09 AM
oh and ignore the ns.com thing and the lil handsteeze. its for a battle on another website.

Airsol
07-14-2008, 12:18 AM
any one gonna comment on mine?
^
|

DRiPTooL
07-14-2008, 12:22 AM
ok now i see what block letters are :P k cool imm def practice that

GIzUrD
07-14-2008, 12:29 AM
AIRSOL your sol looks like its not with the air, too spaced out. skinnier s and o should help.

squidone
07-14-2008, 12:35 AM
ok for the new guys
airsol your air is really scrunched together compared to the sol so try and keep them the same keep your bars consistent dont worry about fills just stick to pencil and save your markers for later
Rodderz go read the new to graff thread it helps a lot follow what it tells you and youll be on your way
Seak your colors look wack so lose them and simplify your letters even more unless your just tryin stuff thats all good but keep working on your structure
Speak its lookin better but you need to space your letters out more and keep your bars the same size and try and keep your letters the same size too

and to all you new guys the #1 rule in here is give crits to get um so even though your new give your two cents but be careful to give respect were its been earned

Darkeist
07-14-2008, 12:38 AM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/sero.jpg

iVIBE
07-14-2008, 01:05 AM
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/356/0714080004bi8.jpg
yo thats petty good, i would just make the mid bar on your E thicker, then it will look good

hal.cyon
07-14-2008, 01:54 AM
hal- pen freestylin is the steezz haha nice stuff
zof- nice style the z is dopeness

this is what I did for the mass production, but I read the thread and saw that he was gone, soooo
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/002.jpg
and work in progress
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/004-1.jpg

dude i gotta admit, your pen freestylin got me in the science to get on mine. and i seen the second in the big boy thread where it should be. but let me just be the first to say the fill on the first is outstanding, and the lines is clean too.

Rodderz
07-14-2008, 07:12 AM
ok for the new guys
airsol your air is really scrunched together compared to the sol so try and keep them the same keep your bars consistent dont worry about fills just stick to pencil and save your markers for later
Rodderz go read the new to graff thread it helps a lot follow what it tells you and youll be on your way
Seak your colors look wack so lose them and simplify your letters even more unless your just tryin stuff thats all good but keep working on your structure
Speak its lookin better but you need to space your letters out more and keep your bars the same size and try and keep your letters the same size too

and to all you new guys the #1 rule in here is give crits to get um so even though your new give your two cents but be careful to give respect were its been earned
Ok cool, thanks.

Tonberry
07-14-2008, 09:58 AM
EmJay, Holy FUCK! You're pretty sick, man. Take that to a wall ;) .

Skewir
07-14-2008, 11:01 AM
Any critiques? improvements? http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=2717&d=1216047602

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=2716&d=1216047559

rsakens
07-14-2008, 11:05 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSCF3626.jpg?t=1215985686
painted
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSCF3633.jpg?t=1215985569

MarOne...
07-14-2008, 11:27 AM
Keane, your stuff seems to be getting mashed, and keep your letters straight and don't turn them so much.

hmm, idk-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/cabrfrate.jpg

rsakens
07-14-2008, 11:55 AM
allright i try
nice fill thought letters are nice to i like the A

JETPACK!!
07-14-2008, 11:58 AM
cabr, that shit is tight. keep doing it. work on your R

T-jay
07-14-2008, 12:35 PM
everything thing i do to try and make my pieces look more wild and different it doesnt worked then i realized that my letters r just too boring anybody got some advice on how i can improve them
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa291/tim44pix/PHTO0020-1.jpg

Tokenkaligreens
07-14-2008, 01:02 PM
right now dont worry about that just worry about making your boring letters as clean as possible, work on your bars sizes some are thicker in places then others. Its not horrible but its not great. Keep at it.

everyone else on this page nice work.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
07-14-2008, 02:02 PM
Keane, your stuff seems to be getting mashed, and keep your letters straight and don't turn them so much.

hmm, idk-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/cabrfrate.jpg
legit.
make the c more rounded like the rest of the letters.

MarOne...
07-14-2008, 02:14 PM
thanks for the positive crits fellers.

New one-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/cabrsimp2.jpg

iVIBE
07-14-2008, 02:19 PM
thats pretty fresh, but at first glance i thought your B was an S lol, but besides that its pretty good

seywhat
07-14-2008, 02:21 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/seyar.jpg
for the ranks battle

cabr- fresh, feelin the letters and fills in both of em
tjay- dont worry about makin letters "wild", get some simps down even if they seem boring
keane- i agree with cabr, keep the letters straight and try makin both e's the same
doap exchange up soon, anyone else down to exchange peices?

Hater-AiD~>
07-14-2008, 02:25 PM
thanks for the positive crits fellers.

New one-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/cabrsimp2.jpg
sexy fill

I GOT CLOUT
07-14-2008, 03:08 PM
Cab - ill. Paint that shit.

Gager2.9
07-14-2008, 03:23 PM
Any critiques? improvements? http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=2717&d=1216047602

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=2716&d=1216047559
On the green,purple, and yellow one you should ditch the red lines that come down IMO. The rest looks nice, and I really like the little bit of orange you dropped in their!
The other one looks really cool and the fill in colors are also good.
I do think you should have changed the background color though

but yeah really looking nice!

Rodderz
07-14-2008, 03:51 PM
thanks for the positive crits fellers.

New one-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/cabrsimp2.jpg
I really like this. Love how it looks shinny.

Mass Appeal
07-14-2008, 04:05 PM
MARONE...the B would make a sick dope S .. nice fill too .. it just feels bland .. like if you take away the colour all you really have is fattend up lines ... in my opinion

RANKS

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/926d3287.jpg

knightsafe
07-14-2008, 04:42 PM
sketch inspired by SKILL crits welcome
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs31/i/2008/196/c/b/piece_by_fastnloud.jpg

knightsafe
07-14-2008, 04:43 PM
sketch inspired by SKILL crits welcome
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs31/i/2008/196/c/b/piece_by_fastnloud.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-14-2008, 04:54 PM
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/8445/dscn0524ok3.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-14-2008, 05:12 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/2zqe7o3.jpg

Dewster_OnE
07-14-2008, 05:16 PM
safe- feeling the concept of the s and the a tho i think u could clean them up and structure them a bit more.. the f and e need some more work as well.. keep it going tho

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-14-2008, 05:19 PM
kres, the s got fucked up

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-14-2008, 05:38 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/14347wo.jpg

nero112
07-14-2008, 05:46 PM
look out kids his armed with shitty bars n uneven letters you might get aids :o:

Drakula
07-14-2008, 05:49 PM
sketch inspired by SKILL crits welcome
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs31/i/2008/196/c/b/piece_by_fastnloud.jpg

I think this is dope! Has a nice old school fell to it. The S and E are particularly sick. I would just say remove a few of those small little boxes and circles coming off the letters and clean up the 3D a bit. It's really nice though.

Mass Appeal
07-14-2008, 05:49 PM
Not being funny or anything Nero but how do you expect this forum to grow with new writers when they read replys like that ?.. its kinda degrading and probably makes people just browsing this forum think fuck this shit i dont want help from these pricks i own these streets...then your going to be getting TRANE SFC everywhere...ahah...whatevs

nero112
07-14-2008, 05:54 PM
quiete bitch n back to the kitchen.
nah i get ya mass cyto more or less you need to keep doing what your doing with thekres sketch expet fix up the 's' a lil bit other than that nice bars oh and also fix the 'R' the last bars is kinda shit

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-14-2008, 05:56 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/2qtxvo3.jpg

Darkeist
07-14-2008, 06:08 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/sero.jpg

bump

I GOT CLOUT
07-14-2008, 06:22 PM
Eh the O and the R are fucked...still tryin to fix a few things...just seein if theres anythin yall can see thats overly horrible with my letters I need to fix.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16171.jpg

CYTO - That last one has the most potential out of everything you posted. Just work on the bar widths and clean up your lines.
SERO - I dunno...the letters look bland. No character to them. you know?

anemptyswishersweet
07-14-2008, 09:47 PM
some quickies and the bud that inspired me
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/1305/dsc00085yk9.jpg
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4379/dsc00084ct1.jpg
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/4302/dsc00086ym8.jpg
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/1553/dsc00082kp9.jpg

anemptyswishersweet
07-14-2008, 09:47 PM
dfgdfgdff

AnteUp
07-14-2008, 10:50 PM
you don't have to post a picture of bud.

Tokenkaligreens
07-14-2008, 11:02 PM
but it doesnt hurt....lol

anemptyswishersweet
07-14-2008, 11:03 PM
did it get deleted?

WoeInfinite
07-14-2008, 11:05 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/071408_22281.jpg
tharr she blows.
fuck the C, and i totally fucked the K...again.
=.="
virus wheres yours?

(SoS)Viruz
07-14-2008, 11:09 PM
My Collab. with WOE
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0009.jpg
My Bad Woe It took me soo long to post it I had to do somethin. Lol.

JETPACK!!
07-14-2008, 11:11 PM
the bud must have given him the shakes, cuz his lines aint straight. bud looks good though

orah.. you'll always be ease to me:( anyways, im not really feelin the flow much, and the hooks on your A should be pulled out a bit more.

work sketches
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/9699/rasek42cs4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/7676/rasek43fx3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

WoeInfinite
07-14-2008, 11:15 PM
rasek..your styles gettin nuts.
cant wait to see this stuff onna wall.
when you paintin next?

DRiPTooL
07-15-2008, 12:06 AM
ok so what do you do when you get your bar letters down jus munipulate them to get them into a cool looking style

anemptyswishersweet
07-15-2008, 12:12 AM
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/4236/dsc00078ge5.jpg
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/5738/dsc00079gz4.jpg

WoeInfinite
07-15-2008, 12:49 AM
the I looks like a F in the top one.

anemptyswishersweet
07-15-2008, 12:54 AM
yeah i know its supposed to be that the rest of the i is hidden behind the m

DRiPTooL
07-15-2008, 01:03 AM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7299.jpg

so i decided i was gunna listen and here is my first attempt at making a word with bar letters

JETPACK!!
07-15-2008, 01:07 AM
there you go. your on the right track now. do that 1000 more times till there really good. then you can make something all loopy an shit

#speak#
07-15-2008, 01:09 AM
some 1 battle me in the toy battle forum

P-love
07-15-2008, 01:17 AM
yo RASEK, i and many others im sure would love to see something new out of you. youve got this style down clean as hell but change it up and try something new for a change.

DRIP, good first bars, but keep all your letters on the same plane. the D is way lower than the others.

MINCE, liking the face. work on steadying your hand a little bit so the lines get cleaner. like the style though.

here is something i did today. went way back to simps because apparently i got off on the wrong foot.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u34/thefilmerguy/P1010038.jpg

how does it compare to other stuff? tips?

krosswithrampagepaint
07-15-2008, 02:01 AM
nice.
http://C:\Users\Joni\Desktop\SANY0876.JPG

krosswithrampagepaint
07-15-2008, 02:08 AM
http://SANYO876

DRiPTooL
07-15-2008, 02:15 AM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7303.jpg
another attempt just this time i kept them at the same level and fixed the leg on the r my other one was too skinny

P-love
07-15-2008, 02:28 AM
word dude, now take those bars and bend em.

DRiPTooL
07-15-2008, 02:29 AM
ok uhm im lost when it comes to that...lol is there any speacial way to do it or just experiment

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-15-2008, 02:41 AM
http://i36.tinypic.com/2wci594.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/8wxocm.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/2liy90m.jpg

WoeInfinite
07-15-2008, 02:42 AM
^ lookin dope dude

DRiPTooL
07-15-2008, 02:45 AM
i like the top one but i think you should move the A nd R closer or something

rsakens
07-15-2008, 06:09 AM
M
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSCF3656.jpg?t=1216113890

Skewir
07-15-2008, 10:35 AM
i like the fill on the M.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=2717&d=1216047602
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=2716&d=1216047559

Any improvements?

JETPACK!!
07-15-2008, 10:50 AM
dont color your stuff, your wasting your markers. just sketch with a pencil till you get simples down. straight bars. the first is better. and resize your pictures.

rsakens, that M is tight as hell. fix the crack at the top, the angle kinna takes away from it

letsgobombin
07-15-2008, 11:23 AM
rsakens- thats a nice m, it looks very realistic. am i right in thinking that you did some shading on the edges to make it seem like the m is a free standing structure? like, the letter has a shadow but not a drop shadow
skewer- everything jetpack said

rsakens
07-15-2008, 11:30 AM
your right ^^ :)

chers for the tip jetpack

rsakens
07-15-2008, 11:38 AM
your right ^^ :)

chers for the tip jetpack

seywhat
07-15-2008, 11:59 AM
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/7676/rasek43fx3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

im feelin this alot man, just not the bottom right of the a. maybe make it more like the r and k without the part comin out of the bottom, but keep this shit up for sure

skewer- jetpack hit the nail on the head
keane- dope as always, i really dont know what to say that hasnt already been said
tare- keep workin with the top one, make the hole of the r round and have the leg comin out of it, no indent
drip- keep goin with that shit, experiment with taller and wider letters, basically just do what you feel and keep sketchin

Skewir
07-15-2008, 12:09 PM
Here are some efforts at bar letters.

http://i349.photobucket.com/albums/q370/SkewerVeed/IMG_0002.jpg



sorry they're still kinda big.

P-love
07-15-2008, 12:11 PM
yo RASEK, i and many others im sure would love to see something new out of you. youve got this style down clean as hell but change it up and try something new for a change.

DRIP, good first bars, but keep all your letters on the same plane. the D is way lower than the others.

MINCE, liking the face. work on steadying your hand a little bit so the lines get cleaner. like the style though.

here is something i did today. went way back to simps because apparently i got off on the wrong foot.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u34/thefilmerguy/P1010038.jpg

how does it compare to other stuff? tips?

bump for crits

letsgobombin
07-15-2008, 12:12 PM
skewer- bars aren't just simple letters, go to the new to graff thread and have a look at drips newest stuff. that is bars
saek- nice simp, but dont have that bit coming out of the side of the a. work on your handy as well

DRiPTooL
07-15-2008, 12:24 PM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7303.jpg
another attempt just this time i kept them at the same level and fixed the leg on the r my other one was too skinny

Ok so crits if want to its not much i am bumping it to show that other guy my bar letters AND if i do bend the bars how do i do it?

Tokenkaligreens
07-15-2008, 12:48 PM
Get your bars down drip, there are not bad just a lil sketchy and the lines are a lil shakey, (but your on the right track dont turn back now lol). LOOk at someone like jetback(rasek) dude rocked the same simple probelly 100 times before he worried about bending letters and look where hes at now. (This goes for skewer,also check out the new to graff thread too man your not quite grasping the concept of bars.) Saek looking good man keep at it. but on the cross bar on the A loose the part that goes into the S looks way outta place. Sick M keane. Looking good rasek.

meh havn't done anything I like in awhile, I'll space it out better and fix the O and 3d when I paint it.
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q158/toker_014/2008082-1.jpg

Skewir
07-15-2008, 01:11 PM
ok, yes. those weren't bar letters at all. So here's another try after looking at the other stuff.

http://i349.photobucket.com/albums/q370/SkewerVeed/IMG_0001_2-1.jpg

I know the four letters don't really go together; i was just sketching them individually.

DRiPTooL
07-15-2008, 01:15 PM
nice but try to work on your W on the solid one i have the smae problem with mine when i do them otehr than that its cool
and work on getting some of your lines not as shaky

P-love
07-15-2008, 01:19 PM
DOBES- real sick man, cool style. what marker are you using for the highlights? looks great. fix up the 3d on the O and maybe throw in a different color forcefield like orange or something to make it POP a little. other than that, tight.

SKEW- your first two steps were good, but when you got to the bending you messed up. keep all the bars the same width when bending, and overlap everything while you bend to get a better sense of where the bars line up. screw extensions for now, like on the K and W. just looks crappy, no offense, but try to take another look into the how to start or whatever thread.

Skewir
07-15-2008, 01:29 PM
allright thanks both of you.

hammer_time
07-15-2008, 01:36 PM
im not one to point this out alot, but there is a skew in sf who is pretty fuckin up

MarOne...
07-15-2008, 01:38 PM
work sketches

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/7676/rasek43fx3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

This is looking real good rasek, keep it up.

DRiPTooL
07-15-2008, 02:48 PM
can some one post a pick of how to do a Q in bars i cant get it...

esco93
07-15-2008, 03:10 PM
escohttp://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/shdyfifty510/0714082008.jpg

DRiPTooL
07-15-2008, 03:18 PM
your S and C look bad i cant tell that your c is a c looks like a backwards b or its not even legible and your s you cant read it eitehr work on those two and it should look great

I GOT CLOUT
07-15-2008, 04:27 PM
RASEK - the one Cab just bumped...ill. Run with that shit homie.

crevette
07-15-2008, 04:28 PM
Esco, i don't like the faces or the drawings, if that c was an e it would be okay.
Make simple. Work off of a simple wire skeleton, if you know what I mean. kinda confusing? of well
http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/scan0001.jpg
its soup
crits thanks.

Skewir
07-15-2008, 04:41 PM
Soup-make the letters have more even widths.

Gager2.9
07-15-2008, 04:47 PM
hey Ive been doing simple stuff as stated in the comments
Ive got about 4 pages of rana written over and over again haha
I tried some new stuff with this :\ not the best but here it is
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p400/Gageman_2008/DSCF1624.jpg

Rozwell
07-15-2008, 05:09 PM
these are from my first bbook, id consider them pretty toy,

what do you guys think?

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/eroz.jpg

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/grass.jpg

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/herbole.jpg


http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/outtatheground.jpg

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/potleaf.jpg

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/purplepeice.jpg


http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/redswirl.jpg


http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/under3d.jpg

Gager2.9
07-15-2008, 05:12 PM
wow
rozwell those are nice!
The colors really POP!

Narotik
07-15-2008, 05:26 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k439/narotik/IMG_0001-1.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k439/narotik/IMG_0007-1.jpg
First time posting, didn't know if it was good enough for the other threads so I'll start here.

bottom pics are stickers, I know its not a sticker thread but they're in my bbook.

Shiva.
07-15-2008, 05:53 PM
rozwell, for the first: new2graff thread
for the second: woooow
i don't know if it's ment to say something, but it's cool
you don't need crits, you can solve your own problems.


and rana/gager, did you read the new 2 graff thread?
you should watch your bars better and work on the 3d, i'll show what i mean (with ms paint) i'll post it in a couple of minutes..

narotik, i like your stickers, but don't do the whole blue thing at the top piece

Shiva.
07-15-2008, 06:03 PM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/4343/dscf1624vk8.jpg

damn, my tablet doesn't work anymore
anyway, i hope you understand what i mean, compare this with the original photo

sheltr
07-15-2008, 06:14 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2049/2660398086_cb7be605a9.jpg
a bit messy, but lemme know what ur thinking

Scratch
07-15-2008, 06:25 PM
sheltr- your S is ill son. I dont know about underlining the whole thing though. besides that, i like it.

rozwell- some of your shits mad artistic, but i still say the whole arrow thing is way played out. that second one though, the green one, is awesome.


Shiva & Shiva: Keep doing simples. Shiva, fix your R's up. But its good that you guys are staying simple for the time being.

Here's some of my shit. Just christened my new blackbook. Crits would be great.

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/sketch1.jpg

Shoook
07-15-2008, 07:00 PM
just a qucik sketch but thinkin about paintin this..
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/peacesketch.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-15-2008, 07:08 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/293zj7q.jpg

seywhat
07-15-2008, 07:45 PM
sheltr- im feelin that shit alot
yaek- pretty dope, not really feelin the a or the e though
shoook- keep bars the same width
tare- try makin the top part of the r come out at more of an angle like the t

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-15-2008, 08:09 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/15cn6n5.jpg

CakeWalk99
07-15-2008, 08:32 PM
I am completely new to this.......but heres a few......I have tried and tried.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0071.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0069.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0068.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0067.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0066.jpg

P-love
07-15-2008, 08:52 PM
ELM- the last few pics were getting to be pretty good. just keep up what you are doing and work on letter structure some more and pen control and your lines will start looking better and smoother.

TARE- simples looking good man. keep it up, and start bending those bars a little bit. i like the upper case A better than the lower a for the record

here is one i did today. better? worse? crits...
http://media.newschoolers.com/uploads/cache/images/1216169297-611029-600x450-1216169257P1010041.JPG

CakeWalk99
07-15-2008, 08:56 PM
Thanks man. If I asked someone else in the name exchange part to write out elm, Id probably get yelled at.

I like yours! Keep it up.

CakeWalk99
07-15-2008, 08:59 PM
Thanks man. If I asked someone else in the name exchange part to write out elm, Id probably get yelled at.

I like yours! Keep it up.

South-Pole
07-15-2008, 09:00 PM
edit*

Rozwell
07-15-2008, 09:18 PM
to scratch yea i know the arrow thing is way over done but i like shit like that, i wanna revitalize it with my style ya dig?
and thanks, i guess it is kinda artsy...and it says Rozwell


shiva thanks for the acknowledgment


-R

fredom-writer
07-15-2008, 09:19 PM
i dont like any of the last 2 but tare is alrights
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/bobbby_fisher/DSCI0013.jpg
ive been working on this throw all week... think i might give up on it...
any opinions

seywhat
07-15-2008, 09:27 PM
i dig that shit krispy, it fits the name lol

GIzUrD
07-15-2008, 10:17 PM
well KRISPY i thiiiiiink... you should choose either all squared, or all round corners

Airsol
07-15-2008, 10:22 PM
http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn72/airsol/bar.jpg
new bar method..tell me what i could improove:)

Airsol
07-15-2008, 10:23 PM
im not really likin the R or the L...

fredom-writer
07-15-2008, 10:37 PM
well KRISPY i thiiiiiink... you should choose either all squared, or all round corners

u talking about the square on the R leg, or the K and S being squared?

iVIBE
07-15-2008, 10:48 PM
krispy, i dont really like your p but the rest is good

airsol- I would work on your R and L so the flow better, and then work on your O so it doesnt so much like a lower case A

JETPACK!!
07-15-2008, 10:51 PM
i dont like any of the last 2 but tare is alrights
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/bobbby_fisher/DSCI0013.jpg
ive been working on this throw all week... think i might give up on it...
any opinions

yo that shit's ill. straighten the bar of your P a bit, its laying down too much. ya feel me? and with the loop on your P, make it more like the one on your R, symmetry an it kills a bit of dead space.

airsol, keep sketching, its not bad at all. bring the right leg of the A down some more, perhaps lose the dot on the I and make it capital, it may look better. kill the bar in the middle of the R, bring the bar on the top portion of your S out more. lose the bar on your O, make it more cicular. and your L is good

Narotik
07-15-2008, 11:13 PM
Shiva-I thought the blue made it pop from the background, but I'm feelin' you. Any suggestions as to what colors be good?


rozwell, for the first: new2graff thread
for the second: woooow
i don't know if it's ment to say something, but it's cool
you don't need crits, you can solve your own problems.


and rana/gager, did you read the new 2 graff thread?
you should watch your bars better and work on the 3d, i'll show what i mean (with ms paint) i'll post it in a couple of minutes..

narotik, i like your stickers, but don't do the whole blue thing at the top piece