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JETPACK!!
07-20-2008, 11:32 PM
your so creative:)

I GOT CLOUT
07-20-2008, 11:37 PM
I could put Rasek's stomache is full of Easer's unborn babies, but that would be kind of a tight squeeze. :)

GIzUrD
07-21-2008, 12:00 AM
its old paper, waste not

hettinger- fresh but i cant read it :(

i hear that... i like your sig can we be best friends?

ill prob post some pics tuuuuuuesday, since i got a new job i havent had much time to do anything.

COLOR192
07-21-2008, 12:06 AM
Sarto: hatin u're firts S. not feelin the As nor u're first O. and lose those two extentions on the top of the first R

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/8596/img0559yq6.jpg

colored with Photoshop:
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/5307/img0586copykd3.jpg
crits please
bump

n_noodles
07-21-2008, 12:07 AM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/Bosnyr.jpg

you toys should learn

intaout
07-21-2008, 12:23 AM
to not use fake drips

Narotik
07-21-2008, 01:00 AM
Yo clout, for a simple, that looks pretty tight, you gonna hit it up clean? haha take your time with that shit, and get a flick man, I wanna see.

satesbc2
07-21-2008, 01:05 AM
thans for the advicegazm13 and calculating infinity, ill post new thread for more advice on my throwie

Reason To-Shine
07-21-2008, 02:09 AM
Ease - fix the 'a'... but you know that already

...thats all I really got on crits...

I was bored... I know...
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/010-1.jpg

the rest are not about christams...
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/009-1.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/013.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/011-1.jpg

calculating infinity
07-21-2008, 02:19 AM
reason to shine - the Es in the second to last are alright, kinda remind me of easy from delaware and the third to last aint that bad either but the rest needs to be scrapped. use bars and shit.
also, the coloring on the last one is deplorable.
more from tonights fun:
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3900/0721080215wd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
this A makes me cringe, i should have given it toes or something:
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/5800/0720082254tk1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
unfinished:
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/4528/0721080320tn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

satesbc2
07-21-2008, 02:24 AM
geze"s black and pink piece is best one tht he did

satesbc2
07-21-2008, 02:26 AM
yea i like it

Reason To-Shine
07-21-2008, 02:30 AM
the coloring on the last one is deplorable.

its supposed to be... and i had to go on dictionary.com to find out exactly what that meant haha...

calculating infinity
07-21-2008, 02:33 AM
you never know in this thread

Mr yarbles
07-21-2008, 03:36 AM
http://i36.tinypic.com/2q8ocur.jpg
Dropped the z put an s
Any crits?
Still unsure about the k

jares just work ona regular throw like the one in the middle.

geze that pink an black is tight

WoeInfinite
07-21-2008, 04:09 AM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/072108_05031.jpg
just did this, was just drawin, and decided to make some style outta it..
tear it apart and tell me to stick to simple bars though..i know how it is...
=.="
Yarbles, i like the E..

Mass Appeal
07-21-2008, 08:24 AM
GEEZ ... you HAVE to stop what your doing ... all you concentrating on is colour and not letters...you need to use bars and do simples simple as.

nero112
07-21-2008, 09:09 AM
your 3d =shit , dont use it for now stick to straight letters learn bars look at key board those letters do em end of.

osnapizzel
07-21-2008, 10:00 AM
skuz that shitsss dooopeee

woe keep sketching

mar, enjoy your orange line king days cause that shits about to come to an end +)


oh snap! ahers back

Reason To-Shine
07-21-2008, 10:47 AM
listen... i've done bars- I dont know why everyone keeps telling me that- and just because I said Once that something needed yellow doesnt mean I only think about colour... for aher ill put the 'u'...

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/015.jpg

these are all the colours I have...

and I know my 3d sucks i'll give you that... been working on that...
whatever... I'm not trying to sound like a whinny kid even though it probably looks that way... ima look at the new to graff thread in a little bit... like I already have...

Hater-AiD~>
07-21-2008, 10:55 AM
you might think that youre using bars but they arent used correctly..a lot of them are inconsistent, which is ok sometimes..but not when you are a new comer..you need to get your straight letters down to a T before you think abotu experimenting and devloping your own style. Once you get your bars down you can start bending and adding..but for now i suggest you sketch straight letters and stop coloring..your just wasting the ink..i dont mean to sound harsh but its the truth

Seek740
07-21-2008, 01:53 PM
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/justin740/SKON_1.jpg

Haven't been doing this for more than a couple weeks so go easy on me. Think i should cut the S ?

calculating infinity
07-21-2008, 02:01 PM
what the fuck is that extension?
new to graffiti thread is your friend.
your 3d is almost on point though.

respERATION
07-21-2008, 02:01 PM
i like the S....the rest nbeeds alot of work
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/crim0045.jpg

calculating infinity
07-21-2008, 02:14 PM
that shit is way too dark, here you go
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5773/clipboard01lp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

respERATION
07-21-2008, 02:20 PM
thanks....crits??

Mass Appeal
07-21-2008, 02:51 PM
[QUOTE=calculating infinity;1157777]
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/3985/26481554797c67d30bd6hd6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
/QUOTE]

This is crazy

Mr yarbles
07-21-2008, 02:54 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/2q8ocur.jpg
Dropped the z put an s
Any crits?
Still unsure about the k

jares just work ona regular throw like the one in the middle.

geze that pink an black is tight

Bump this
anymore crits?

Bossman-
07-21-2008, 03:08 PM
listen... i've done bars- I dont know why everyone keeps telling me that- and just because I said Once that something needed yellow doesnt mean I only think about colour... for aher ill put the 'u'...

...

if you say you know what your doing and think your using bars mad good and your shits the bomb then go ahead and write it.

EXPECT TO GET WRITTEN OVER AND DISSED!

if i were you id cut off my writing hand and pray the other one is better. but seriously DO NOT tell those here that your shits dope when they know it aint. They have been in the game for a lifetime longer than you.

pics of my stuff commin. and its probably as bad as the lower half here. i wish i could do this shit.

nero112
07-21-2008, 03:13 PM
i wnna stab you with a spoon , you havnt done bars, bars are straight letters such as F,U,C,K,Y,O,U see cop those :)

iVIBE
07-21-2008, 03:14 PM
wow some kids should be beaten regularly because they are so fucking stubborn, god damn when some tells you to use bars don't say I know how then come back with some whack shit that looks like you had a seizure in the middle of writing. Open your fucking eyes! and except what people are telling you and learn from it. [/RANT]

Bazer
07-21-2008, 03:18 PM
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/justin740/SKON_1.jpg

Haven't been doing this for more than a couple weeks so go easy on me. Think i should cut the S ?

tight. make the O and N as tall as the rest of your letters next time.

Hater-AiD~>
07-21-2008, 03:18 PM
wow some kids should be beaten regularly because they are so fucking stubborn, god damn when some tells you to use bars don't say I know how then come back with some whack shit that looks like you had a seizure in the middle of writing. Open your fucking eyes! and except what people are telling you and learn from it. [/RANT]

:D..i giggled a bit

bomber420
07-21-2008, 03:21 PM
hey guys i started about 3 weeks ago and i know im a toy but i just wanted to throw up some of my blackbook shit and get some critisism and help with my stuff. enjoy

Hater-AiD~>
07-21-2008, 03:26 PM
youre damn good for starting 3 weeks ago

bomber420
07-21-2008, 03:51 PM
thanks hater-aid

Sarto
07-21-2008, 04:02 PM
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/001-5.jpg
krispy- both tight , but i like the first one better,
bomber420- sick stuff , a simple would be dope.

GaZm13
07-21-2008, 04:05 PM
^^That's what I was thinking. Shits pretty good on a few of them. Some people have a natural ability manipulating letters. I sure don't. Keep it up Bomber420.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
07-21-2008, 04:14 PM
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8858/2647868551448bca88b9as6.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3900/0721080215wd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/Bosnyr.jpg
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/bobbby_fisher/IMG_2700.jpg
BUMP

osnapizzel
07-21-2008, 04:21 PM
sarto nice except your S looks like a J

sezer i dig the bottom one

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/563/picture288xl9.jpg

Each
07-21-2008, 04:25 PM
heres some of my newer shit
http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj212/BlaekOne/0703082325.jpg
http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj212/BlaekOne/0629080013a.jpg
http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj212/BlaekOne/0629080014.jpg

osnapizzel
07-21-2008, 04:30 PM
hey guys i started about 3 weeks ago and i know im a toy but i just wanted to throw up some of my blackbook shit and get some critisism and help with my stuff. enjoy

you want coffee and donuts with that critt?

calculating infinity
07-21-2008, 04:36 PM
bomber420-your letter structure needs a shit ton of work id say

libra25
07-21-2008, 04:53 PM
"hey guys i started about 3 weeks ago and i know im a toy but i just wanted to throw up some of my blackbook shit"
man dope shit baconbomber420.....

bomber420
07-21-2008, 04:55 PM
bomber420-your letter structure needs a shit ton of work id say

whats so wrong with my letter structure?

freka
07-21-2008, 05:02 PM
whos gunna explain it all i cant be bothered tonite

fOrSaQeN
07-21-2008, 05:06 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/xq9smg.jpg

hammer_time
07-21-2008, 05:43 PM
hey guys i started about 3 weeks ago and i know im a toy but i just wanted to throw up some of my blackbook shit and get some critisism and help with my stuff. enjoy

i smell bullshit...
your pretty good for only writing three weeks, ever thought of writing the same thing twice or useing similar styles?
at least steal all your shit from the same person
also they are dated from 07, whats up?
.....i smell cop

Reason To-Shine
07-21-2008, 05:56 PM
fuck my life

freka
07-21-2008, 06:05 PM
i smell bullshit...
your pretty good for only writing three weeks, ever thought of writing the same thing twice or useing similar styles?
at least steal all your shit from the same person
also they are dated from 07, whats up?
.....i smell cop

now youve said that im thinkin the same

CakeWalk99
07-21-2008, 06:37 PM
Edward: Ill dude. Very ill.
Ohsnap: Thoes letters are cool! Great colors.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0093.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0091.jpg

satesbc2
07-21-2008, 06:47 PM
damn my camera messin up, ima upload some new shit later
forsaqen, dope shit

Hater-AiD~>
07-21-2008, 06:49 PM
oh snap..tight fills..good simples
each..id stick to your simples for now
forsaqen..that throwie has potential..keep workin with that and your handstyle
elm..i wouldnt start bending your bars yet

anywho..hers my shit..did it last week..havent had time to post
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/piecin/DSC01526.jpg

CakeWalk99
07-21-2008, 07:06 PM
So what do I do with my bars then?

Hater-AiD~>
07-21-2008, 07:23 PM
keep practicing drawing them until you get some consistency

CakeWalk99
07-21-2008, 07:51 PM
Dude, I have drawn elm so many damn times, and I can never find the consistency. It almost seems impossible. That is the best I can do.

FLIP FLOP
07-21-2008, 07:57 PM
elm, try makeing the bars thicker. i dont know why but it usualy helps me get them the right width.

CakeWalk99
07-21-2008, 08:05 PM
I have tried making them thicker. I hate to sound like a negative Nancy, but I have tried everything.

Hater-AiD~>
07-21-2008, 08:10 PM
trust me..thats not the best you can do..how long have you been writing?

CakeWalk99
07-21-2008, 08:18 PM
I have been taking it serious for about a month now. I have always kinda drawn on my homework and stuff like that, but it has been 100% serious for about a month. The bars don't like the elm :/

GaZm13
07-21-2008, 08:24 PM
E, L and M are nothing but bars.

CakeWalk99
07-21-2008, 08:29 PM
I know! which is why I am a failure and can't figure it out!

Hater-AiD~>
07-21-2008, 08:44 PM
just keep working at it..ive been writing for years and im still trying to get it down..some are quicker than others..but youve been writing for a very short time..just keep practicing...persevere

on another note..i did this for my girl..with a bullshit fill
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/piecin/DSC01528.jpg

bomber420
07-21-2008, 09:06 PM
i smell bullshit...
your pretty good for only writing three weeks, ever thought of writing the same thing twice or useing similar styles?
at least steal all your shit from the same person
also they are dated from 07, whats up?
.....i smell cop
oh sorry about that, i don't have my own digital camera and had to use my sisters and being the retard that she is she didnt know how to PROPERLY set the date so when i took those pics today it said 07 instead of 08 and since i just started i've been fucking around with styles and names i generally try to write something that starts with a K, or an S, like Kry ,or Senas so i will repost some of them to prove to you so that im not lying.

bomber420
07-21-2008, 09:22 PM
my sis does not now how to fucking set the date on this goddamn camera. well i finally fixed the damn camera. i think my sis should go back a grade because she's so fucking stupid. here's the pics again and look at the date.

CakeWalk99
07-21-2008, 09:25 PM
Hater-Aid: I actually like that fill dude.


As far as my bars go, this is the best I can come up with for ELM.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/Quick.jpg

bomber420
07-21-2008, 09:26 PM
it's really hard to stick to a name i either get frustrated or bored with the letters it's a bad habit but ill try to stick to a name with a k because my real name is Kirby

Hater-AiD~>
07-21-2008, 09:29 PM
ok elm..keep working with those bars in the middle..the straight bars..until you can draw them perfectly...after that..you can start bending them then adding your own style to them

bomber420
07-21-2008, 09:33 PM
i agree hater-aid

JETPACK!!
07-21-2008, 09:39 PM
hey guys i started about 3 weeks ago and i know im a toy but i just wanted to throw up some of my blackbook shit and get some critisism and help with my stuff. enjoy

hahah i love how these are all dated from over a year back. either youve been at it for over a year. or it aint your shit

i guess i should read the rest of the pages first..

bomber420
07-21-2008, 09:53 PM
you should read the rest of them

GaZm13
07-21-2008, 10:24 PM
it's really hard to stick to a name i either get frustrated or bored with the letters it's a bad habit but ill try to stick to a name with a k because my real name is Kirby

How about KURB. Starts with a K holmes.

Klaz
07-21-2008, 10:42 PM
you should read the rest of them


ban.

P-love
07-21-2008, 10:58 PM
http://media.newschoolers.com/uploads/cache/images/1216698711-612751-600x450-1216698606P1010048.JPG

for this one girl. its her favorite car, and she currently owns it. her name is jade as you probably guessed so i made it her favorite colors too. outside of the colors what do you guys think? structure?

Scratch
07-21-2008, 11:01 PM
elm- just take a look at other peoples letters and try and picture how they used their bars. it'll give you a better perspective on what the letters consist of.

and personally, i dont think ANYONE whos as good as bomber420s pictures make him out to be would dub themself "bomber420" hahaha

Crits pleaase. This is the new shit. I was so pissed when I realized how much higher I made the E than all the other letters X[ whatever.

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/0721082337.jpg

JETPACK!!
07-21-2008, 11:11 PM
decent set of simples, good color choice, keep sketchin. perhaps loose the extension on the bottom left leg of the A.
not feelin the sharp edges at all scratch, your bars are a bit off too. im not feelin the size of teh hole in the A either.

another day, another couple sketches. gonna work with this one in particular
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/4893/rasek46un4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

numberonestunna
07-21-2008, 11:23 PM
idk what it is but your stuff has so much style man.. nice.

CakeWalk99
07-21-2008, 11:24 PM
Rasek: Phat.

Scratch: Keep up the good work! I will be working on some new drawings all day tomorrow. The bars hate me.

numberonestunna
07-21-2008, 11:45 PM
heres a new one fresh out the oven...

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/pyrechill.jpg

GaZm13
07-21-2008, 11:50 PM
It's still piping hot.

Scratch
07-21-2008, 11:58 PM
elm- just take a look at other peoples letters and try and picture how they used their bars. it'll give you a better perspective on what the letters consist of.

and personally, i dont think ANYONE whos as good as bomber420s pictures make him out to be would dub themself "bomber420" hahaha

Crits pleaase. This is the new shit. I was so pissed when I realized how much higher I made the E than all the other letters X[ whatever.

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/0721082337.jpg

bottom of page b-b-b-b-bump

Mr yarbles
07-21-2008, 11:58 PM
Rasek that's fresh can't wait to see it painted

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-22-2008, 12:04 AM
ok.. im not really good at these but i wanted to try anyways just for the hell of it... i know its bad .. but its my first..
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/Oenepiece.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-22-2008, 12:05 AM
woops double post :(

osnapizzel
07-22-2008, 12:07 AM
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/563/picture288xl9.jpg


bumppp for critts


if i was a cop... i would totally make a stereotypical sounding profile like bomber420 and swear a lot while usuing proper grammar and talking shit about my sister....if youve been in graff for 3 weeks your shit would look something like this....
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/9596/picture289jv3.jpg

its ok though, keep on keeping on officer, because with out you graffiti wouldnt be so exciting....

sc zombie
07-22-2008, 12:11 AM
@thatguy: I am not one to be giving advice about anything, but keep the 3D parts consistent, like make sure the shading is all coming from one direction or else it looks like it's coming from 5 different light sources. If a light is on the right, all the shadows will fall to the left, I hope you know what I'm talking about. Also the border color, the orange, try to make it less choppy. I'm not gonna critique on the letters because I'm simply not good enough to recommend anything better. If you want to start with something a little easier, look up alphabet throwie on youtube and get some ideas from there maybe, just for starters.

fonone
07-22-2008, 12:18 AM
ohsnap - take the H and the N from the top one and put it with the rest of the letters from the bottom one and it would look alot better i think.

rasek - i dont know what it is but i love your painted shit but i dont feel your sketches at all haha...

Desipher
07-22-2008, 12:22 AM
.

sc zombie
07-22-2008, 12:26 AM
Dude I dig those colors! That's so sick!

BIGel
07-22-2008, 12:29 AM
3 weeks? i dont know if i believe that, its pretty damn good for three weeks if thats tru/

http://a367.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/88/l_19ff706deb9e6caa0f2d379c8c59c396.jpg

CreetchaFeetcha22
07-22-2008, 12:33 AM
if i was a cop... i would totally make a stereotypical sounding profile like bomber420 and swear a lot while usuing proper grammar and talking shit about my sister....if youve been in graff for 3 weeks your shit would look something like this....

its ok though, keep on keeping on officer, because with out you graffiti wouldnt be so exciting....[/QUOTE]



Ya and if you didnt think we wouldnt be good enough to catch that every pic he posted was a diff name and mostly completely diff style. Nice try but we are hungry here and we smell bacon quick

Bossman-
07-22-2008, 01:01 AM
AHH this ones for cake. ELM. nice short word, i like it. your set of bars there? i didnt like so much lol. now lets really bring this into easyness. instead of trying to make up your own styles go and practice turning your letters into styles by other writers. keep this in your sketch book, if you want post up your progress here. this will help you learn to manipulate letters. i personally like to take a few more steps when i screw up my bars. i do verticles then horizontals. make sure that at NO TIME does the width of the bar change. even in the curves. its like drawing with a pencil and two fixed tips. always in unison. also think of which bar is in front of the other and draw it infront. Also make sure you have really made just bars that are straight. with ELM thts easy but letters like R and B can be difficult. look at other styles and try to see where which bars are located. look at raseks style, very basic but very welldone and looks good. you can see what the drawer sees as far as bars. stay away from extentions for abit. make the middle of the M is 2 bars and not just a V shaped single bar. Also tboth sides of the M dont have to mirror each other in the end.

jersOneTIC
07-22-2008, 01:16 AM
scratch - looks good
oene - practice bars
desipher - diggin the colors
bigel - fresh as always
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/6001/ske39uy5.jpg
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/7343/rewqih1.jpg
2 new sketches...crits???

Narotik
07-22-2008, 01:31 AM
BIGel- Ill

jersOneTIC- first ones tight.

CreetchaFeetcha22- Funny shit

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k439/narotik/IMAG0001-1.jpg

CRIT...

Narotik
07-22-2008, 01:32 AM
BIGel- Ill

jersOneTIC- first ones tight.

CreetchaFeetcha22- Funny shit

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k439/narotik/IMAG0001-1.jpg

CRIT...

crevette
07-22-2008, 01:34 AM
http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/scan0001-2.jpg

bump
crits, thanks.

BIGel
07-22-2008, 01:37 AM
no cop would hang around a toy blackbook thread. the few that are on here stay on the local flix threads.

Bossman-
07-22-2008, 01:39 AM
Ya and if you didnt think we wouldnt be good enough to catch that every pic he posted was a diff name and mostly completely diff style. Nice try but we are hungry here and we smell bacon quick

i love my pigglywiggly fried up with pancakes. thats good shit. but seriously. he didnt even try hard enough to throw in the occasional "dope" or "ill". thats the reason hlaf of us have never actually been "caught" too dumb to think things through.

GaZm13
07-22-2008, 01:40 AM
Heres a SOUP for you crevette.

Spraycan Stories
07-22-2008, 01:58 AM
Really like the throw

GaZm13
07-22-2008, 02:10 AM
Not mine. Just a pic I had to show that guy with the SOUP name.

P-love
07-22-2008, 02:30 AM
jers- liking it man. good work with the extensions on the first one. not feeling the J on the second though.

scratch- sick

naro-loving the fills, but not so much the O. just my opinion.

but for crits...
http://media.newschoolers.com/uploads/cache/images/1216698711-612751-600x450-1216698606P1010048.JPG

remos
07-22-2008, 02:35 AM
personally id lose the extension on the top of the A
really nice J tho
mabye try to fix the e i guess....i dunno

HRbN
07-22-2008, 02:52 AM
ide loose that busted ass car too hah

calculating infinity
07-22-2008, 03:06 AM
shrimp boy, thats decent for what youre doing, try using bars though, its harder but helps in the long run.
jers i like that
naro your As and Os are too small for the rest. the bottom R isnt good and you should focus more on letter structure, not coloring it in. those extensions are weird and seem forced.
i came up with this in my head on the way home tonight but it didnt really turn out how i wanted...
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/8887/0722080359wj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
in b4 people attacking my letters and constructive crits again.

sheltr
07-22-2008, 03:49 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3051/2692340512_200d3f92e8.jpg
too much small random lettering going on in this but shit happens

respERATION
07-22-2008, 05:16 AM
that shit is way too dark, here you go
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5773/clipboard01lp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump for crits

there alot of good throws and bar work on the last few pages

Klaz
07-22-2008, 06:37 AM
to the three dudes above me, all i can say is tone it down.
try not to put too many little add ons and wildstyle into your pieces just keep thinking about letterforms, get them as solid as poss.


im liking it all tho, good potential definitly.

wider
07-22-2008, 07:09 AM
http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll254/zerkey/wider.jpg
cuz i live a boss' life.

wider
07-22-2008, 07:09 AM
http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll254/zerkey/wider.jpg
cuz i live a boss' life.

Desipher
07-22-2008, 07:11 AM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture067-1.jpg
bump

Klaz
07-22-2008, 07:12 AM
WIDER:
colours are ill.

your 3d and Design are dope.

just the try and make your outlines a bit stronger and more legible.



good stuff.

what markers are those?

Hater-AiD~>
07-22-2008, 07:27 AM
just keep working at it..ive been writing for years and im still trying to get it down..some are quicker than others..but youve been writing for a very short time..just keep practicing...persevere

on another note..i did this for my girl..with a bullshit fill
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/piecin/DSC01528.jpg
bump for crits because everybody is so god damn concerned with bomber 420

cans905
07-22-2008, 07:33 AM
jade- work on the a a lot and lose the ghetto car
infinity- hopefuly thats not wut u wanted it to look like, lol, i say get rid of the character things in ur sketches
hater- make the ena at the end line up with the rest and maybe change up the first a for a little variety

DRiPTooL
07-22-2008, 09:10 AM
yo havent been on here in a while was on vacation in Michigan

Desipher
07-22-2008, 09:25 AM
WIDER:
colours are ill.

your 3d and Design are dope.

just the try and make your outlines a bit stronger and more legible.



good stuff.

what markers are those?
they were gell pens

JETPACK!!
07-22-2008, 11:57 AM
joga, fix up the A's a bit, not feelin the tops at all.

http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/7545/rasek47fh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

garbage down tha way
07-22-2008, 12:12 PM
rasekism that S is just so sexy.

sorry this is fucking huge, its a rough t shirt design for a friends band but im redoing the whole thing with better letters and shit you know.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/rough.jpg

JETPACK!!
07-22-2008, 12:14 PM
put warning on the same line, took me a second to read it. or put a hypen in between the lines. either way, thats tight man. good letters

garbage down tha way
07-22-2008, 12:23 PM
word i was thinkin the same thing bruv.

I GOT CLOUT
07-22-2008, 12:30 PM
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/4893/rasek46un4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Niceness, bumpin this for you. On the new one you just posted, that S..mmmmmmmmmm.

and Hoer - Same thing Rasek said, especially since you made Warning all steezy and Shot all straight simples.

NoCanControl
07-22-2008, 12:39 PM
did it for the wildstyle battle, but obviously that shit isn't being done or something

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Photo-0089-1.jpg

reminds me of his... i wasn't going to post until the battle happened, but what ever.

Scream Out
07-22-2008, 12:53 PM
did it for the wildstyle battle, but obviously that shit isn't being done or something

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Photo-0089-1.jpg

reminds me of his... i wasn't going to post until the battle happened, but what ever.

haha that shit did happen dude, i definitely remember voting for your piece yesterday

and on a side note i dont like how much your letters are overlaping and going into each other
would look better with colour but you have some nice structure in that in my opinion
theres a couple useless bars that it could do with out too but whatever haha

I GOT CLOUT
07-22-2008, 12:56 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16180.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/DSC00129.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/DSC00131.jpg

Little progression thing. I dont really even like coloring in the books...just seems pointless seeing as how its nothing like painting. But anyway, First time really trying any sort of background, excuse that, and the shitty camera phone flicks.

Keke
07-22-2008, 01:23 PM
did in summer school today
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n265/Rs2sigs/nana.png

Spark391
07-22-2008, 01:45 PM
Rasek - I think that you have got the simples down, you should start developing it now.
Garbage - all good
Ease - nice simple letters, nicely faded fill, only thing I don't like is the green background. If you are going for that "splashy" effect for the backgroun, make it more realistic, make the paint drops diffrent sized n stuff
Keke - nice simple letter, but extantions look whack. Next time try to do it less sloppier.

Hater-AiD~>
07-22-2008, 02:17 PM
i agree with spark on your forcefield easer..i think its a lil too much

T-jay
07-22-2008, 02:28 PM
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa291/tim44pix/PHTO0025.jpg

Keke
07-22-2008, 02:39 PM
sorry i did not crit before oopsie

Nice Char, mr
i see your trying to do simples but those simple will not evolve , because they are not made with bars fully man,

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/2078/mrtwn6.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/2078/mrtwn6.ff3d5d56f7.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=142&i=mrtwn6.png)

rpscrew
07-22-2008, 03:19 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=81&pictureid=297http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=81&pictureid=296

yup:)

rpscrew
07-22-2008, 03:21 PM
^^oops hahahttp://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=81&pictureid=297

Keke
07-22-2008, 03:42 PM
your work is really sloppy, take long nice strokes for throwups and USE BARS for that kros thing, im sorry but its revolting

Mass Appeal
07-22-2008, 03:43 PM
I decided to try and use Photoshop to render one of my newest drawings...i want a cartoony like look with sharp textures...check it out..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/50390e97.jpg


Obviously far from finished

This is my first time ever colouring something with Photoshop and i quite like it up to now ... i havent got a clue as to what im doing in regards to " layers " etc. but i know abit on the Brushes and such.

respERATION
07-22-2008, 03:55 PM
that karak is illlllll....i know its not really my place to crit but the shadow for the jaw bone looks a bit off

ergh.....i cant get this piece to look right....and ideas as to how to make it symetrical??
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/reapAMK.jpg

La Coka Nostra
07-22-2008, 04:23 PM
i think it looks good.
throw some 3d on that bitch.

respERATION
07-22-2008, 04:33 PM
i think it looks good.
throw some 3d on that bitch.
igghhtttt and should i just whack one colour on it??

La Coka Nostra
07-22-2008, 04:34 PM
experiment.
if it turns out you don't like it...just draw another one.
makes for good practice, so you can get that one style down without even trying.

I GOT CLOUT
07-22-2008, 04:35 PM
[QUOTE=I GOT CLOUT;1159436]http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16180.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/DSC00129.jpg

Bump.

calculating infinity
07-22-2008, 04:36 PM
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/9962/0721080422ri5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bottom hump

respERATION
07-22-2008, 05:09 PM
your letters are sorta hard to understand...like the R with the foot could be a C but i know it says jares.....and i cant work out the A

put 3d on that biznitch....lining and colours can wait till tommorrow
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/3d.jpg

La Coka Nostra
07-22-2008, 05:10 PM
looks good.
your flicks are dark as fuck though.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
07-22-2008, 07:43 PM
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/7545/rasek47fh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/50390e97.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/rough.jpg
BUMP BUMP BUMPOOOO

Rozwell
07-22-2008, 07:53 PM
new shiz


http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/eroz3d.jpg

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/level1.jpg
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/unfinishedpeice.jpg
^^not done

critz pl0x


-R

Bazer
07-22-2008, 08:09 PM
first one to say go simple or new to graffiti thread gets banned.

Rozwell
07-22-2008, 08:14 PM
what?

I GOT CLOUT
07-22-2008, 08:19 PM
So, what are we supposed to tell him Baze? Besides, to lose those fucking arrows.

Bazer
07-22-2008, 08:39 PM
hahaha i was kiddin

mekosbc
07-22-2008, 08:52 PM
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0021.jpg

satesbc2
07-22-2008, 08:55 PM
i dropped the arrow like yall said is this one better then my 1st?
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0023.jpg

satesbc2
07-22-2008, 08:57 PM
rozwell, dope tag

DRiPTooL
07-22-2008, 09:38 PM
if i was a cop... i would totally make a stereotypical sounding profile like bomber420 and swear a lot while usuing proper grammar and talking shit about my sister....if youve been in graff for 3 weeks your shit would look something like this....

its ok though, keep on keeping on officer, because with out you graffiti wouldnt be so exciting....



Ya and if you didnt think we wouldnt be good enough to catch that every pic he posted was a diff name and mostly completely diff style. Nice try but we are hungry here and we smell bacon quick[/QUOTE]

lol ur right i read that damn guys posts and what a bullshit story your sister for real tho?

Rozwell
07-22-2008, 09:48 PM
So, what are we supposed to tell him Baze? Besides, to lose those fucking arrows.

other than the arrws we ok?

Seek740
07-22-2008, 10:40 PM
meko- both of em look tight, the sketch below the 2 looks like it's coming along. would be cool to see a pic
sate- awesome, esp. the fill


Tryin out some new words or combinations of letters i guess. How's it comin?
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/justin740/ROSK1.jpg

ilikekicks
07-22-2008, 10:56 PM
seek - keep your letters the same size
rozwell - the last one needs to lose most of the extensions, it makes it look messy

http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_1884.jpg?t=1216784894

hazetheone
07-23-2008, 12:22 AM
http://i34.tinypic.com/2gt9ogm.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/2zrj501.jpg

osnapizzel
07-23-2008, 01:04 AM
caer that dope i wonna see that painted

Narotik
07-23-2008, 01:36 AM
Edward"Sezer"Hands-Can't wait to see that char done.
Rozwell- Straighten out your letters, don't use the extensions, and work on letter form before you get into color.


A char of my own (As In my illustration...)
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k439/narotik/vneom-1.jpg
Crits? Venom

I GOT CLOUT
07-23-2008, 01:42 AM
Well one crit would be, dont say its a character of your own...when it is most obviously not.

Narotik
07-23-2008, 01:43 AM
A char of my own as in a char I drew, everyone knows who venom is, I wasn't attempting to take ownership, don't be smart, seriously though, a real crit would be nice.

Scream Out
07-23-2008, 01:50 AM
narkotic, i think your the one who should stop trying to sound smart. a character of your own is a character OF YOUR FUCKING OWN, not sombody elses. end of story

anyways

i wasnt going to colour this or post it but im just that bored right now
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo305.jpg
the S is right fucked
im not looking for crit im just bored

Narotik
07-23-2008, 01:55 AM
what the fuck...its two in the fucking morning, I slip up on line of type and you have to act like big fucking men over the internet and rip into me about it...if it isn't fucking obvious to you I wasn't trying to take credit for the creation of a character thats been around since before half of us were born then your a fucking idiot. As for trying to sound smart, I'm looking for a crit..on a sketch...you want to give me lip about a fucking type impediment make a thread I'm sure someone will approve it.

For future reference...I write Narotik, not narkotic,...and your fucking with me for fucking up what I type.

H1TBYNUMB3RS
07-23-2008, 02:06 AM
wow,
you seem chill so i will give you critiques.
the fade at the bottom could be cool, the head itslef has no structure.
The eyes dont really stand out enough and the head kind of has a blob shape.
the hand-style isnt very good so keep working on it.
overall kind of weak actually, put some time in

Narotik
07-23-2008, 02:13 AM
H1TBYNUMB3RS- Thank you for the crit, its helpful and I will take it all into consideration on my next character.

Scream Out- your use of caps and profanity language did nothing for my being worked up. Two in the morning is late for me, I've been working triple shifts working with the gallery to get my paintings up and any time I'm not passed out has been put to sketching and trying to get better...so sorry, I think... the double post was actually, me rewording it the first time and for some reason just put a 2nd post. Its been taken care of.

hazetheone
07-23-2008, 02:18 AM
you couldn't put shit like that venom thing in a gallery ;)

Narotik
07-23-2008, 02:20 AM
I know, I paint, Totally dif world.

I GOT CLOUT
07-23-2008, 02:20 AM
Shaddup.

I wanna see those paintings you're talking about that you've done. :)

hazetheone
07-23-2008, 02:22 AM
I know, I paint, Totally dif world.

comeon man
you arent fooling anyone
post a painting

Scream Out
07-23-2008, 02:24 AM
id like to see as well

Narotik
07-23-2008, 02:26 AM
I can respect that.

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k439/narotik/redpyramidoct17-1.jpg

Narotik
07-23-2008, 02:27 AM
older piece, will try to get a new one up tomorrow, have them on the laptop

I GOT CLOUT
07-23-2008, 02:33 AM
Ehh..Ive seen that same type of shit on youtube. Usin newspapers and what not. Am I wrong?

Scream Out
07-23-2008, 02:34 AM
props, wasnt expecting that
though that is played out now

Mr yarbles
07-23-2008, 02:36 AM
K and z are fucked up, but I'm working on a new s so whatever
http://i38.tinypic.com/mmvqf8.jpg
Post up one with the s later

Scream realy nice but lose that long bar going down on the z

caer your bottom one is ill

Narotik
07-23-2008, 02:37 AM
Clout
Scream

Naw, your 100% right. Thats how I got into using spraypaint, helped me learn layering which was great for the basics of graphic design (what I'm majoring in) brought in a ton of cash and I got sick of the same old simple designs (Like that one) so the newer stuff utilizes the techniques but in much more depth. I wish I had one on here but to the best of my knowledge there in the camera chip in my laptop and I'm not going downstairs for it tonight. Anyway, you tell a gallery owner your 19, make that with spray paint and they offer you a showing...and they sell...on top of that its actually fairly hard to get it done well (people say they can all do that shit but to make it look good...that takes a while) and its fun as hell. Its like graff...the same old styles over and over , its all the same, so you evolve and change it and come up with new shit...thats what I'm at least trying to do, What I just posted, yeah that basic style it played out, I fully agree, but with enough experimentation I know there is no limit to what can be done with it...half the reason I started taking it to walls.

hazetheone
07-23-2008, 02:39 AM
it is appealing to the eye but ive heard how easy that shit is to do man
layers and different random objects

edit:
to late clout and scream beat me to it

Scream Out
07-23-2008, 02:41 AM
Mr yarbles - keep all your letters the same hight and use same width bars, your on the right track

btw i there is no Z in my piece and i wasnt looking for crit lol
thanks for trying to crit though

Narotik
07-23-2008, 02:45 AM
hazetheone- You heard how easy it is?...you do it, make it look that crisp, and get back to me, then I'll show you one of the new ones and see if you can get to that. I heard from people who had no idea what they were talking about Graffiti was easy too...obviously, they were mis-informed. I'm not challenging you, I'm just saying...It looks easy, but I don't know many people who can do it really clean. Anyone can do a throwie, but if you can't keep it clean then its shit.

I GOT CLOUT
07-23-2008, 02:48 AM
Well, I wish I could sell my shit like that.

AEKz - You need to make your bars a consistent width throughout. Try fillin a full sheet of paper with just those 4 letters.

hazetheone
07-23-2008, 02:51 AM
chill i said i heard it was easy
i may have been ill informed but ive seen peopledo that in my area and they use newspaper cardboard corcles bottoms of cans and shit like that
i was watching this happen last year at mardi gras

Narotik
07-23-2008, 02:53 AM
You can man...seriously. A local artist around here got picked up for shit around town, made the newspapers, made this huge thing out of it to scare off other artists. He gets out, and like 20 galleries are asking for canvas work...Graff is very marketable, and as long as your stuff if clean it can sell, the question is, would you sell it? like with graffiti, I don't know if I'd sell it, I feel off about it, its not what the art form was created with in mind. The stuff I do, it was a way to bring spray paint into a gallery you know...its all personal choice though, if someone wanted to get into a gallery with there stuff I'd be down for it completely, just not my thing..not at this point yet, but my graffiti is shit now anyway lol.

calculating infinity
07-23-2008, 02:57 AM
aekz your bars arent even and your letters are out of proportion

i found a big ass sketchbook in my garage today so i decided to break it in
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/2010/0723080349mb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

in b4 overplayed

Narotik
07-23-2008, 02:57 AM
hazetheone- Naw, its actually really hard..there are a lot of subtle things that you don't see, thats why artists can afford to do it in front of a live audience...but hey man you want to keep talking about space painting? give me a PM so we don't flood out the black book thread. I'm down with talking about it, just not respectful here.

Clout- same if you want to talk about selling your stuff, PM me. I might not know much more than your average kid about graff but I've been in the business of selling my work for a long while, I might be able to point you in the right direction.

hazetheone
07-23-2008, 03:04 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=snVfzaEaXQI
that link was supposed to be in my last post sorry
wath this guy
he goes down town and does this shit on at tuesday during mardi gras

King Skeem
07-23-2008, 03:08 AM
i need a camera so i can post my shit on here

calculating infinity
07-23-2008, 03:11 AM
fax me your email and ill scan one over

DonaldFour
07-23-2008, 03:56 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/negorsketch.jpg
i feel like my R doesnt fit and that it looks like a happy elephant :D

KrSr
07-23-2008, 04:10 AM
http://a214.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/56/l_a1f24cc588a66d657b8d9c2a1171097d.jpg

Please be harsh as possible with the crits. I'm expecting some.

Negor i like the E and it does look like an elephant haha

JARE its kinda weird to me idk y it just does tho lolz

DonaldFour
07-23-2008, 04:33 AM
I think it's a little cheesy, i wouldn't wear the backpack honestly. And i think you should be focusing on busting simples rather than the stuff that youre attempting >.> You lack letter structure. Keep workin though man

bleh.bleh.bleh
07-23-2008, 07:06 AM
what he said^ Plus this is just my personal opinion, but i think it would look better with just one simple instead of three and then maybe another break dancer.

pureemoti0n
07-23-2008, 07:36 AM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/8733/scanchewfg1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
says chewing not feeling my g tho
negor nice work looks like chalk

Mass Appeal
07-23-2008, 07:56 AM
first one to say go simple or new to graffiti thread gets banned.

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Update on my " character "...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/5a3a01f5.jpg

So im a complete Photoshop noob yeah ..

I have these 2 fucking bright blue lines going across my page from one side to the other .. i dont know how they got there and what they do ! .. i want them gone ... ill do a peice for who ever tells me how to get rid of them !

DonaldFour
07-23-2008, 08:45 AM
^ umm dead pixels i suppose, that takes a new monitor haha.

& thanks pureemotion, & now that you mention it, it does kinda look like chalk huh? hahah

Keke
07-23-2008, 09:25 AM
mass, try Ctrn+R , if that doesnt work , try the move tool to get them off the screen . but try control r first

JETPACK!!
07-23-2008, 09:51 AM
I can respect that.

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k439/narotik/redpyramidoct17-1.jpg

this is tiiiiighhttt, great color choice. the sky is very well done

pureemotion, your letters are crowding each other, dont overlap them as much as you are

aher, pixels wouldnt die in a line, they would spontaneously die throughout the moniter, unless you took piano wire or some shit to it. restart your computer, unplug and replug your moniter.. if that dosent work, either get used to it or get a new one

Keke
07-23-2008, 10:01 AM
^^ dude, he means in photoshop
to solve it he needs to press Ctrl R =)

JETPACK!!
07-23-2008, 10:11 AM
i've never photoshopped.. can ya tell?

Keke
07-23-2008, 10:14 AM
heh, yeah i'm pretty sure his problem is that he has the ruler tool open (mabey even hidden) and the blue lines are from thats what always used to happen to me til i figured it out, and yeah dead pixels dont come in lines lol

Haz-E
07-23-2008, 10:22 AM
Negor thats pretty dope everything looks good except dat "R"

pureemotion i think ur over lapping ur letters a little to much homie

did an exchange with my boy dimer the other day with an MOB roller at the bottem

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1294/10010691ic9.jpg

Mass Appeal
07-23-2008, 10:28 AM
I did the CTRL + R but they didnt go..these are what they look like..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ac661499.jpg

Sorry about the size theyre bright and theyre had to see at a smaller size..
Thanks !

Hater-AiD~>
07-23-2008, 10:32 AM
aher your chracs are really coming along..im impressed

seywhat
07-23-2008, 10:34 AM
that dimer is one of the nicest things ive seen on here lately, props. if your down to exchange sometime hit me up

pureemotion- youre letters dont look too bad, just dont overlap them so much
negor- the only thing i see wrong with the r is that i dont have a thin bar like the other letters

Keke
07-23-2008, 10:35 AM
hmm im puzzled give me a while mass ill figure it out for you

Haz-E
07-23-2008, 10:37 AM
seywhat linx me up over messeging if u wanna exchange bro im down

thanks for the compliment bruh

wider
07-23-2008, 10:45 AM
WIDER:
colours are ill.

your 3d and Design are dope.

just the try and make your outlines a bit stronger and more legible.



good stuff.

what markers are those?

lol crappy sharpies

Keke
07-23-2008, 11:03 AM
got it
Go

View(in that top menu bar) > Clear Guides

Mass Appeal
07-23-2008, 11:46 AM
ahahahhahaha thanks a bunch KEKE...what chu write ill get it done as soon as i can ... thanks matey.

sky_one
07-23-2008, 11:50 AM
Haz-E-thats dope cool colors
Mass apeal- how you do nthat? please explain me i cant do nathing of good on the photoshop
heres some shit e bieng doing crits please?? i need
http://spa.fotologs.net/photo/58/55/61/made_one13/1216397963785_f.jpg
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/3/11jk4.png

Keke
07-23-2008, 11:56 AM
i dont write this but mass, if you wanna do the word "persue" that be cool, just a quick sketch is cool dont want you to waste your time, glad i could help.
made-
first one is bad, 3d is off and flow is lacking
2nd one is fresh though

cans905
07-23-2008, 12:02 PM
made- lose the arrows completely, get rid of the extension on the bottom left of the n and make the e and d flow better
but i like the tip of the e

heres a quick one i did last night

Mass Appeal
07-23-2008, 12:33 PM
Mass apeal- how you do nthat? please explain me i cant do nathing of good on the photoshop


I carnt explain how im doing it because to be honest i dont know.
And alright Keke

notAvandal
07-23-2008, 12:36 PM
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/1062/1006902copyem2.jpg

notAvandal
07-23-2008, 12:38 PM
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/1062/1006902copyem2.jpg
that chick was deffinatly wasted when she wrote that shit..

SANEKONE
07-23-2008, 12:40 PM
I did the CTRL + R but they didnt go..these are what they look like..
[IMG]
Sorry about the size theyre bright and theyre had to see at a smaller size..
Thanks !

have you tried looking at the different layers you have?
just looks like line tools to me.
but i havent screwed with photoshop in years


p.s.- i will be posting the stuff ive been working with tonight.
some stuff i did on the way and at cornerstone and ive done a bit of style developing too
XD

Mass Appeal
07-23-2008, 01:01 PM
no because i dont know how too ^

SANEKONE
07-23-2008, 01:05 PM
^^ idk you have a different version than i had.
mine had a box at the lower right corner with all them.
try where it says layer comps to the right of that screenshot.
if thats not it then idk.
but if you find where your layers are just delety anything you didnt want to put there.

Mass Appeal
07-23-2008, 01:27 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ea990fdd.jpg

Another WIP shot ... Hahah this shit takes forever ... last one untill the Legs i promise !

squidone
07-23-2008, 01:33 PM
well i have to say even for not knowing what your doing Mass that looks awesome!

I GOT CLOUT
07-23-2008, 01:34 PM
Dude, if people want to buy it, and he gets offered a gallery showing for it, then I would say its worthy.

Mass Appeal
07-23-2008, 01:36 PM
well i have to say even for not knowing what your doing Mass that looks awesome!

Ha honestly...the only tools i know how to use properly are the lasso tool , brush tool , line tool and the opacity tool.

cans905
07-23-2008, 01:41 PM
mass appeal- no offence but this is a black book thread
dont post pics of computer generated soldiers, and even if u do, post em when they r done
dont post a pic every 5 min of colouring
try giving crits and posting some graff

fonone
07-23-2008, 02:14 PM
and you are........?

keep us updated mas!

Keke
07-23-2008, 02:30 PM
yeah mass is one of my favorate artists on here not to kiss ass

Hater-AiD~>
07-23-2008, 02:34 PM
mass appeal- no offence but this is a black book thread
dont post pics of computer generated soldiers, and even if u do, post em when they r done
dont post a pic every 5 min of colouring
try giving crits and posting some graff

who died and left you king of the black book thread?
he had a problem with his photoshop which was resolved over here...and as far as I can see that is an original drawing from a black book. I smell some hateration

acereborn
07-23-2008, 02:46 PM
Word, keep it up mass. It's looking dope.

Mass Appeal
07-23-2008, 03:55 PM
cans905...i know what thread this is iv posted init like ... 4,000 times haha
Ahahah and telling me to " post graff " ... Hahahahhahahaha oh god ... Like FONONE said ... who are YOU ! ?

letsgobombin
07-23-2008, 04:01 PM
theirs been alot of talking in this thread, if you wanna talk post some pics. if some people sketched as much as they chatted they'd be much better by now
pen freestyle i did for a battle with mean but then he buggered off, im not happy with the e but i think it looks better than an uppercase e
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1242.jpg

narotik- that stuff looks nice, thats for sure. i won't know how easy it is until i try it, i think everyone else whos saying its easy should try it and see if its easy, if it is then you can argue, if its difficult then you can say its actually hard and skilled
mass- that looks like some good photoshopping even for your first time, the charac is looking alot better as well, alot more proportional. i wanna see that finished
notavandal- what you talking about? didn't you post that?
made- go simpler, and make sure all your bars are consistent, in some places it looks like your not even using bars
and remember toys, give crits to get crits

Hater-AiD~>
07-23-2008, 04:08 PM
^looks good. I think the N is a little crowded up and the drop shadow is a little off but I dont know what it is about pens that make pieces look so damn good...
nice simples in general

bleh.bleh.bleh
07-23-2008, 04:18 PM
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w302/shevy_2007/beh.jpg
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w302/shevy_2007/bear.jpg
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w302/shevy_2007/bleh.jpg
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w302/shevy_2007/tkc.jpg
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w302/shevy_2007/trill.jpg
Last one i was quite happy with after i had re-done it in photoshop, im pretty much a first time photoshopper..even though that dosn't compare to mass's lol...crits?

Hater-AiD~>
07-23-2008, 04:27 PM
only thing im really feelin is the throwie and the charac

Mass Appeal
07-23-2008, 04:29 PM
The top ones have so much potential ... but the other shit is whack imo .. id stick with the top 2 theyre pretty flyyyyy

RFI. SPit
07-23-2008, 04:53 PM
Not too bad Amen, keep practicing on that
Some of those are pretty decent bleh, keep practicing, you'll keep progressing


i wish i had some longer paper.. i always make my first few letters too big and have to squish up or make my last letters different so they'll fit :( makes it look a little crappy

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/4449/photo104zr6.jpg



http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/8770/photo105ys6.jpg

bleh.bleh.bleh
07-23-2008, 05:03 PM
thanks for the crits...I'm still trying to prgress..i jus never really have the time to sit for a couple of hours cus of family problems and stuff and i cant really see where to go next with the top two:/:confused:

GaZm13
07-23-2008, 05:50 PM
Looking good ZOF! Really digging your Z and F man.

Scream Out
07-23-2008, 06:12 PM
amen - i think you should straighten out your bars, the wavey ones dont seem to be working for you imo

bleh - second one is dope id keep working with styles like that if i were you, love the throws too especialy that E

zof - only thing i can see wrong is the 3d at the bottom of your F is a little off

heres a sketch i just did cus i got new markers!!!
fucked up my L but oh well it will have to do for now, and my piece isnt slanted upwards thats just how it looks because i took the pic with a web cam
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo308-1.jpg

Drakula
07-23-2008, 07:18 PM
Sloppy freestyles:

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/306778b7.png

Bleh the characs and the throwies are definately keepers!

Hater-AiD~>
07-23-2008, 07:26 PM
spit..feelin the first one
scream..dope\
raby...dope


im gettin so frustrated with my style..i cant design an O for shit..i need some guidance..and some help on my letters
crits?
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/piecin/DSC01541.jpg

WoeInfinite
07-23-2008, 07:31 PM
just make the O taller like the rest of the letters, and have something stick out the top..like on your A

Hater-AiD~>
07-23-2008, 07:34 PM
spit..feelin the first one
scream..dope\
raby...dope


im gettin so frustrated with my style..i cant design an O for shit..i need some guidance..and some help on my letters
crits?
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/piecin/DSC01541.jpg
bottom page bump

and woe...i try doing that but shit always gets fucked up..i cant make it uniform to the other letters..so i just threw the ying yang in there to say fuck it

Scream Out
07-23-2008, 07:46 PM
joga - just use the same O that you would use in a handstyle just thicken it up

raby - those are sick, im really feeling the red one with all the cracks through it

coloured sketch
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo310-1.jpg
thats such a pad quality picture, does it no justice
im actually kinda proud of this sketch for the time being

squidone
07-23-2008, 07:48 PM
Bleh - i think those throws are sexy

I GOT CLOUT
07-23-2008, 08:32 PM
Swolen, honestly that may be one of your better L's. Fits well with the angle of the E.

SANEKONE
07-23-2008, 09:46 PM
some sketches i did on my way to and at cornerstone a few weeks back.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/100_3755.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/100_3757.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/100_3758.jpg

aaaand some stuff ive been working with the past few days.
trying to step out of simples.
they are in chronological order so you can see the progression.
crits pleaaaase!
XD

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/100_3760.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/100_3761.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/100_3762.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/100_3763.jpg

GimmieGotShot
07-23-2008, 10:04 PM
Joma; Use a regular O
Swolen; illy shit.
Sanek; nice style

Urkel simple in drawn in the dark :\
http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk190/gimmiegotshot/jwhite.jpg

cans905
07-23-2008, 10:09 PM
mass appeal- im not saying im better than u and im probably not, cuz im fairly new at this
but u dont need to post a pic after u colour every little part
post every time uve completed a fair chunk
sanek- im not fond of the n on the first one, but they did progress and the last ones look good, but get rid of the weird extension on the top right of the k cuz it looks like l e

mekosbc
07-23-2008, 10:20 PM
just some ideas that rolled off the dome....
im thinking bout changing my tag from meko to noe cuz i write noe better then meko....ive been thinkin bout it for a while....
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0770.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0771.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0773.jpg


which one iz better? critz respected

cans905
07-23-2008, 10:25 PM
meko/noe- i dunno right now im saying meko but thats cuz ur noes are too simple to compare witht the other, so post some better noes and well c

Scream Out
07-23-2008, 10:27 PM
meko - i think you need to stick to arrowless simples for a while, that first Noe sketch is one of the better things you have done for sure

nice to see people doing simples on this page

mekosbc
07-23-2008, 10:35 PM
ight ill post up a more complicated noe........ and can i ask why ppl dont like arrowz?haha... arrows are old skool and look sick in my opinion... i dunno i guesss i just like the old skool stylez... but yeah ill post up a noe peice in a bit...

GIzUrD
07-23-2008, 10:44 PM
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/9610/penzg6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

damn swolen and sanek for being so good... anyways i did this on my half hour break from work

Scream Out
07-23-2008, 10:45 PM
ight ill post up a more complicated noe........ and can i ask why ppl dont like arrowz?haha... arrows are old skool and look sick in my opinion... i dunno i guesss i just like the old skool stylez... but yeah ill post up a noe peice in a bit...

arrows look sick if you can do them.... you cant do them

dont post a more complicated Noe please, this may be the toy forum but you are not progressing at all with people telling you to do more complicated shit when you can barely pull off a straight letter

work on equal width bars and simple letter styles, once you get that down get a real feel for the letters you have to work with, progress from there, your are trying to get too far ahead. this applys to a lot of people in the toy forum not just you meko