Tot Black Books

[AMAZ tbscrew]

work on the first one

2nd one is dope

4th one fix ur 3d.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Mar 8 2006, 05:17 PM
got bored in class.

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture037.jpg
bump my shit cuz the little bitchs had 2 start beef over nuttin

[>skea<]

fukin cool charac and the 4th is my boy trus hes still stating

and i mostly want crits on the face cuz im still starting with karacs

[Detroit]

Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze+Mar 8 2006, 06:40 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bill Cheese of Wheeze @ Mar 8 2006, 06:40 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Detroit@Mar 8 2006, 06:32 PM
YOUR QUITE WELCOME AND I KNOW YOUR TRYING TO IGNORE ME AND NOT LET ME KNOW YOUR PISSED. TAKIN THAT ADVICE FORM YOUR MOMMA. SHE GAVE ME THAT SAME ADVICE WHEN I WAS FUCKING THE SHIT OUT OF HER.
yeah, youre right. im pissed like crazy. i mean, if you could see me right now, dude, i got piss coming out my ears im so mad.

fucking my momma? bro thats low, i mean, , if youre that desperate, you know, all the more power to you, but dude.....you should be happy youre still alive.


and just so i know, you are the one that drew this huh?

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7438/koukla14ep.jpg

Cause thats pretty much the shittiest thing ive ever seen [/b][/quote]
I DID NOT DRAW THAT, I JUST QUOTED IT AND DISSED THE DUDE THAT DREW IT. I DONT USE IMAGESHACK, I USE PHOTOBUCKET WHICH YOU COULD TELL IF YOU QUOTE 1 OF MY POSTS W/ A PIC IN IT. IM NOT THAT GOOD AT CHARACTERS, CAUSE PERSONALLY I THINK THEY ARE KINDOF LAME. NEXT TIME I GO TO MY GRANDMAS HOUSE I WILL TAKE A PICTURE OF A SKETCH I DID BEFORE I WAS OLD ENOUGH TO GO TO SCHOOL, AND I WILL PM THEM TO YOU. NOW IF YOU WANT TO SEE MY CHARACHTERS YOU CAN. IM NOT SAYING IT WILL BE HOT SHIT BUT THE LINES WILL BE STRAIGHT.

[molotow_15]

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/old.jpg
this is shit and old but it go's with the day so why not

[Detroit]

Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze+Mar 8 2006, 06:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bill Cheese of Wheeze @ Mar 8 2006, 06:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AMAZ tbscrew@Mar 8 2006, 06:42 PM
OMFG take it 2 the battle fourm holy shit
bro, im not tryin to battle! i dont even know what im doing, i just want advice on my post, this guys got some serious problems.... [/b][/quote]
I DONT HAVE PROBLEMS, I GAVE YOU TIPS JUST LIKE EVERY OTHER TOY I HELPED TODAY, AND YOU GOT PISSED AT ME BECAUSE YOU CANT KEEP YOUR FUCKIN HAND STRAIGHT.

[molotow_15]

i wont get involved in this lol

[Detroit]

Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze+Mar 8 2006, 06:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bill Cheese of Wheeze @ Mar 8 2006, 06:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AMAZ tbscrew@Mar 8 2006, 06:42 PM
OMFG take it 2 the battle fourm holy shit
bro, im not tryin to battle! i dont even know what im doing, i just want advice on my post, this guys got some serious problems.... [/b][/quote]
I KNOW YOUR NOT TRYIN TO, BATTLE I KNOW THAT YOU DONT KNOW WHAT YOUR DOING BECAUSE YOUR SKILLS SHOW THAT. IM JUST TRYIN TO HLP YOU OUT AND YOU GET PISSED BECAUSE YOU DREW CROOKED ASS LINES?

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Originally posted by Detroit+Mar 8 2006, 06:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Detroit @ Mar 8 2006, 06:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze@Mar 8 2006, 06:40 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Detroit@Mar 8 2006, 06:32 PM
YOUR QUITE WELCOME AND I KNOW YOUR TRYING TO IGNORE ME AND NOT LET ME KNOW YOUR PISSED. TAKIN THAT ADVICE FORM YOUR MOMMA. SHE GAVE ME THAT SAME ADVICE WHEN I WAS FUCKING THE SHIT OUT OF HER.
yeah, youre right. im pissed like crazy. i mean, if you could see me right now, dude, i got piss coming out my ears im so mad.

fucking my momma? bro thats low, i mean, , if youre that desperate, you know, all the more power to you, but dude.....you should be happy youre still alive.


and just so i know, you are the one that drew this huh?

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7438/koukla14ep.jpg

Cause thats pretty much the shittiest thing ive ever seen
I DID NOT DRAW THAT, I JUST QUOTED IT AND DISSED THE DUDE THAT DREW IT. I DONT USE IMAGESHACK, I USE PHOTOBUCKET WHICH YOU COULD TELL IF YOU QUOTE 1 OF MY POSTS W/ A PIC IN IT. IM NOT THAT GOOD AT CHARACTERS, CAUSE PERSONALLY I THINK THEY ARE KINDOF LAME. NEXT TIME I GO TO MY GRANDMAS HOUSE I WILL TAKE A PICTURE OF A SKETCH I DID BEFORE I WAS OLD ENOUGH TO GO TO SCHOOL, AND I WILL PM THEM TO YOU. NOW IF YOU WANT TO SEE MY CHARACHTERS YOU CAN. IM NOT SAYING IT WILL BE HOT SHIT BUT THE LINES WILL BE STRAIGHT. [/b][/quote]
OO haha shit, sorry bro, thats what i was kallin kindergarden shit.

I got nothin against your stuff. i dont think ive ever even seen any of it, cept that thing on your bathroom wall, if that one was you.

take a picture of your chars, id like to see em.

But must you write in all caps? its kindof annoying....

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Originally posted by Detroit+Mar 8 2006, 06:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Detroit @ Mar 8 2006, 06:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze@Mar 8 2006, 06:44 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-AMAZ tbscrew@Mar 8 2006, 06:42 PM
OMFG take it 2 the battle fourm holy shit
bro, im not tryin to battle! i dont even know what im doing, i just want advice on my post, this guys got some serious problems....
I KNOW YOUR NOT TRYIN TO, BATTLE I KNOW THAT YOU DONT KNOW WHAT YOUR DOING BECAUSE YOUR SKILLS SHOW THAT. IM JUST TRYIN TO HLP YOU OUT AND YOU GET PISSED BECAUSE YOU DREW CROOKED ASS LINES? [/b][/quote]
GAHH!! and shut up about the crooked lines!! i knoo!! i did that on purpose mann, to go with the style i was drawing. its how i do that shit.

[molotow_15]

why cant writers get on in hormony

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

haha i wish....if it were only that simple...

[Detroit]

no i just didnt feel like taking caps off but if it bothers you that much fine, plus its giving me a headache. look back a couple pages those dub sketches and those sir sketches are mine. that piece o shit on the bathroom wall was not mine as i explained, i kno better than uing sharpies, and drawing a throwie instead of a tag and i know how to make sure the letters match. the guy that did that is named KOUKLA. I personally have nothing against you but it pisses me off when dudes get pissed when you give them advice, im sorry for bringin your moms into this.

[molotow_15]

o fuk me pen just popped in me pocket darnnn

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Originally posted by Detroit@Mar 8 2006, 06:59 PM
no i just didnt feel like taking caps off but if it bothers you that much fine, plus its giving me a headache. look back a couple pages those dub sketches and those sir sketches are mine. that piece o shit on the bathroom wall was not mine as i explained, i kno better than uing sharpies, and drawing a throwie instead of a tag and i know how to make sure the letters match. the guy that did that is named KOUKLA. I personally have nothing against you but it pisses me off when dudes get pissed when you give them advice, im sorry for bringin your moms into this.
haha my moms.....slick...

Cool, sorry for bombin on you, didnt mean to get all offensive and all, just thought you were trying to defend those pieces of shit....

lol

Sorry bout that.

[Detroit]

those pieces of shit weren't mine that was koukla's thats his username too.

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

i just went back and looked at some of yours. i liked the 2nd one the best. itd probly look good with some 3-D

So now that your not wanting to fuck my moms, you think you could give me some advice on the ones i just posted?

[AMAZ tbscrew]

wow..u guys r sad...get eachothers screen names or p/m eachother and talk it out..stop frontin on the fourms

[molotow_15]

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/old.jpg
but wha bout mine :D laughs lol

[Detroit]

just try to go simpler, did you see my ace, and laces throwies. try to keep it simple like that for a little. On the top 1 I see what your trying to do but you need to try to keep the letters the same shape. make the "s" kinda squared off like the other letters. then slowly add on connections and add ons. Just try going a little simpler and building it up as you go on homie. thanks for the comments on mine.

[molotow_15]

u gotta grief mine now

[dcite]

yeah try making some lines more parallel to eachother, that usually an easy strategy to good looking letters. the character is pretty funy for some reason, haha.

[Detroit]

Originally posted by molotow_15@Mar 8 2006, 07:16 PM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/old.jpg
but wha bout mine :D laughs lol
make the top of the b bigger and work on the a, the character is straight

[molotow_15]

i'll post me new charick up tomoz thats when i woz toy ages ago

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

may i say that you have quite an....interesting..signature lol. and as for the pic, i like the B, but the third letter kinda reminds me of a dick....

i like the guy. he makes me laugh.

[Volume_one_]

Originally posted by Volume_one_@Mar 8 2006, 04:46 PM
My lastest work
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2074.jpg
<span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>what yall think?</span>
Bumpty bump for crits

[Ment_one]

[img=http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/6494/science4bn.th.jpg] (http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=science4bn.jpg)
using pen........didnt have white out...spelt it wrong then went over..haha...crappy n anyway

[img=http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/9140/mentunfinished7pl.th.jpg] (http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mentunfinished7pl.jpg)
unfinished......

[img=http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/9457/mentthrowie9sg.th.jpg] (http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mentthrowie9sg.jpg)
beginning steps of my throwie

[Ment_one]

o and on the science i forgot to make a hole in the E...last letter

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by snapcase@Mar 7 2006, 07:20 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a392/comeonbabygivemebutterflys/blackandwhite.jpg

decided to post here...i never get any feed from the blackbook section...whatcha all think?
thats amazing i like it alot...

[Ment_one]

Originally posted by Ment_one@Mar 8 2006, 07:46 PM
[img=http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/6494/science4bn.th.jpg] (http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=science4bn.jpg)
using pen........didnt have white out...spelt it wrong then went over..haha...crappy n anyway

[img=http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/9140/mentunfinished7pl.th.jpg] (http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mentunfinished7pl.jpg)
unfinished......

[img=http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/9457/mentthrowie9sg.th.jpg] (http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mentthrowie9sg.jpg)
beginning steps of my throwie
Bump bitch

[UKCsire]

don't bump your own stuff...if it was good enough to get comments, it would.

[Ment_one]

fuck you....better than some of the other stuff that gos on here and gets comments.....and how bad does it have to be to not get a comment ona TOY forum.....dumbass

[MF Feed Letter]

well i agree that you should get critz but i dont agree that its better than some of the stuff on here...because its shit work on simple structure...cock

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

haha so im not the only one that gets in bitch fights over nothing. Like mol said, why cant we all just get along?

[What Happened to the Letters?]

ment shut the fuck up kid, you dont have skill yet so your not gunna get respect hre you ogtta learn that now, and also if you dont get any critiquing dont repost the same pictures post new ones and maybe someone will liek them also links are worse than posting the flicks themselves because peopel are lazy and would rather go to the next page then open a new link for a guy in a toy forum which they know wont b anyhtign spectaculor...so im just saying dont try and act hard when you have yet to get respect from this thread and you have no skill to back up your mouth

having that said hte only ogod one is the first one the other too stay mroe simple and the third ones handstyle was decent needs improvement but not bad for now

[What Happened to the Letters?]

you guys all need to chill the fuck out, theeres so much beef between toys unless your huge if you get in beef liek this on the street with other writers you wont liv too damn long

[What Happened to the Letters?]

sanpcase man, i cnat help but think ou bit that casue if you had those skills for real you would never even think of psoting it in the toy thread

[AMAZ tbscrew]

wow so much fuckin shit yo..i fuckin posted my shit like 4 pages bak and bumped it after a hole page of beef and still no one had shit 2 say

where the fuck is ever one....cezr,tricks,ume, where the fuck did nfk go?
where the hell is everyone 2nite lol

[alive]

im here with u man
gonna put some shit up later after i take some pics

[AMAZ tbscrew]

thank god some on i actuly no lol...wheres cess man i miss him lol
ima bump my shit after all this beef is over wit everyone

[TricksForKids]

its past your bedtime kids, stop bitching, it gets broken down like this.

you kids spend too much time talking, not enough sketching, not all, bust most.

secondly, when you do talk, its not funny, unless your sluts.

third, snapcase isnt good, enlarge those pics, and then tell me he deserves to be outta this thread

i dont want beef, so, case closed, stop talking shit, and start sketching, amaz, bump that shit so i can see it, i dont feel like scrolling through beef

[UKCsire]

Haha ment_one get off my back, don't try and act all hard cause I stated the fact that you'd get comments if your shit was hot. Unfortunately your shit ain't hot so you're not gonna get comments. I just said if peoples liked it, they'd say it. Don't force your toy sketches down everyones throats man. Yes, this is the toy forum, but we don't wanna see your "bumped" sketches over and over again man. Calm down...shit. Don't fuckin blame me because you didn't get any comments.

On a sidenote - a piece I did for the mortal battle.

http://geocities.com/brittanyfraboni/mortal.jpg

[AMAZ tbscrew]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+Mar 8 2006, 06:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ Mar 8 2006, 06:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AMAZ tbscrew@Mar 8 2006, 05:17 PM
got bored in class.

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture037.jpg
bump my shit cuz the little bitchs had 2 start beef over nuttin [/b][/quote]
bumped last time for tricks.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

Uk i like how ur shits white in the middle it looks clean ass fuck

[UKCsire]

thanks amaz...I was actually feelin this sketch...I gotta try workin outa new style though...I wanna get more into wildstyles...

[brownkidd]

http://static.flickr.com/35/109960223_73c3310c27.jpg
http://static.flickr.com/45/109960222_3f5a433713.jpg
http://static.flickr.com/51/109960219_a7720eda72.jpg

...meh <_<

[Volume_one_]

i like how you got the power button for the o
but thats about it

you gotta clean it up a bit
i mean your work is very sketchy and your letters are a lil wild

[nena]

http://i2.tinypic.com/r0eals.jpg
http://i2.tinypic.com/r0ec0o.jpg

i dont kno bout these ones but critizm por favor

[Karma]

No beef BK, but your shit makes me wanna take some pills to chill the fuck down. I think you still needa find your hand style.

[+HyBriD+]

nice nena!

[nena]

sum of a lot of my shit is off tho i think so. jus gotta keep it goin

[Volume_one_]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2091.jpg
feed back?

[+HyBriD+]

nice

[pitodamfmp]

ok well i got no feedback before so i thought i'd try a little harder this time.
only my 2nd piece ever, ive been writing for like a week and a half now.
this is my first "character" i guess, if this counts.

any good?

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/7489/97by.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and here it is colored in photoshop, it's also my first time coloring with a computer, so i know it's not fantastic, but i dont have any markers/pencils at my place right now.

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/7324/esccolored5cl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Z FUSE]

i like ur karak! :wub:
the letters are good, nice 3d, clean and simple.

[Volume_one_]

^^NiCe lol
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2093.jpg
my character likes it to

[deka]

Originally posted by ceroX24X@Mar 7 2006, 02:03 AM
yep new here. been reading these boards for a while though. starting simple like everyone says. i know the red is shitty and my tag sucks im working on it, but can ni get some feedback on this? it is greatly appreciated.

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teena...und/picture.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/picture.jpg)
bump

[pitodamfmp]

deka i'd say exaggerate the movement of your letters more. it looks like a font as-is, it's kind of boring. the curves in the C E and R could be way more dramatic, that'd give it a little more style

[+HyBriD+]

that charictor is koo

[pitodamfmp]

the little green guy? or my upskirt girl?

[Volume_one_]

i was just thinking the same thing

[Enemy]

ok heres my sketches from the past couple of weeks tell me what ya think!!
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/9711/ske48er.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/5700/ske21tv.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/7595/ske30jg.png (http://imageshack.us)


1st attemt at wildstyle :rolleyes:
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5364/ske50dp.png (http://imageshack.us)


2nd attemt... luvin the highlighters lol the only half decent colours i can get hold of
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/1034/sket19us.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[cord]

nice stuff i like your wildstyle attempt and the highlighter one.

volume one yours is very nice as well

[westsida]

enemy,nice shit,keep it up

[Volume_one_]

thx i cant wait for my stickers to come in

[merm 1]

what do you think.....
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/872/hpim1035small1ip.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[wHy4]

http://img15.imgspot.com/u/06/67/15/astro1141934577.JPG
One of my boys ... whatcha think??

[westsida]

its nice...3d could do with a little readjustement,post anotha pic after its coloured

[c0ld]

i havent been on in a while bein busy with my so-called life and having a sucky comp....but after around a month of black-booking, heres what I got.
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/5436/thisisjoshsmiths6kb.th.jpg

the pic was takin with my cam phone so xcuse the quality.

crits.

[EatRichPeople]

Dope shit enemy. I bet that one with the character would looks so dope on a wall....like a giant head comin out to eat ya.

[Karma]

Originally posted by Volume_one_@Mar 9 2006, 12:46 AM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2091.jpg
feed back?
I dont know why V One, but that looks ill. Nice job.

[Karma]

Originally posted by wHy4@Mar 9 2006, 02:06 PM
http://img15.imgspot.com/u/06/67/15/astro1141934577.JPG
One of my boys ... whatcha think??
Word! Im realy feelin the angle of it, nice fat letters, its just tight.

[beefgerky]

yea i like that one too^ give it some color why.

and volume....structure.

[nena]

enemy thats hot
tambien merm

[BOSS]

yo enemy u got some real dope shit up. is that really your first wildstyle. keep it up

[seno2]

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5558/image2914mh.jpg

bored = school = peice ^^ <_<

[UKCsire]

fuuuuuuuuucking hoooooooooot why in the toy forum?

[Ment_one]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Mar 8 2006, 09:37 PM
well i agree that you should get critz but i dont agree that its better than some of the stuff on here...because its shit work on simple structure...cock
no look...i ment it was better than some of the stuff that gets crits on the toy forum...i know i suck.ok.damn...here ill give example

[Ment_one]

Originally posted by molotow_15@Mar 8 2006, 07:16 PM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/old.jpg
but wha bout mine :D laughs lol
see.this got crits....no offense to you...

[UKCsire]

dude just let it go...if you want some comments drop another piece...if it's hot you'll get some comments...

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

http://img349.imageshack.us/img349/2789/picture0581ds.jpg

http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/7820/picture0597ps.jpg

Still tryin out the new style.

Simpled em down.

Tell me what you think, all crits appresiated.

....also, the outline on the second one is a bit wavy, i tried to edit out another pic that was overlapping it, so dont mind that =)

[BOSS]

seno2 thats fuckin awesome

[AMAZ tbscrew]

wow..i found my first SIZ piece...this is when i first started writing.as u can see its folded in half..i hide it after i got arrested the first time idk why...and i just found it under my computer desk....this was my first name when i got serious about graff.

:)

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture038.jpg

[BOSS]

AMAZ did you paint that or just leave it in your black book cuz thats 2 good to just leave sittin around

[BOSS]

http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/89/ghost67zt.th.jpg

CRITS

[BOSS]

http://img351.imageshack.us/img351/7834/ghost74ab.jpg

[nena]

Originally posted by BOSS@Mar 9 2006, 06:52 PM
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/89/ghost67zt.th.jpg

CRITS
work on tha s and t i just donts ee why it needs to dramaticly change from simple to a worm lookin s to a fat ass T con a small bottom
and not rly feelin tha red to blue

[BOSS]

http://img480.imageshack.us/img480/8633/sin1lb.jpg

[BOSS]

http://img480.imageshack.us/img480/9469/yard3xn.jpg

[BOSS]

http://img480.imageshack.us/img480/8388/yard38rl.jpg

[BOSS]

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3483/yard46je.jpg

[nena]

i dont kno my colors in inglesh but im just saying tha one that is purple is an example im talkin about make ur letters mas a like unlike ur other 1s because your other wons are too change from different sizes it is too ugly not to be mean pero you also need to post ur sketches up at one time not one after one like u do right now please take mi advice

and u will do better at it

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^ur so spanish.

[Volume_one_]

Originally posted by beefgerky@Mar 9 2006, 03:49 PM
yea i like that one too^ give it some color why.

and volume....structure.
what do you mean?

[nena]

i would post more fotos pero it feels like a lot of my sketches are too much same i will think a different style but i guess ill post some of wat i have

http://i2.tinypic.com/r1inn8.jpg
http://i2.tinypic.com/r1inte.jpg
http://i2.tinypic.com/r1inwy.jpg
http://i2.tinypic.com/r1io2x.jpg

give me mas critism pleas because ive been only doin this for a little time so umm gime some ok

[.bomer.is.boh.]

ahhhh im putting this in the to thread cuz i fucked up my M with the outline(pen) it took like 10 mins to do and like 2 mins too fill. check it out.



http://blogpost.imageshack.us/blogpost/pos...icture235ar.jpg (http://blogpost.imageshack.us/blogpost/postblog.php?id=img530/4655/picture235ar.jpg)

[Volume_one_]

^^^^i like the handstyle more than anything on that page

[.bomer.is.boh.]

what does that mean
? lol

[TricksForKids]

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/9611/kaytenpen1zk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


see now, there needs to be like a half toy thread, cuz kay ten and the knc fam is commin at ya with fiyuhhhhh


Peac

[nena]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Mar 9 2006, 08:19 PM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/9611/kaytenpen1zk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


see now, there needs to be like a half toy thread, cuz kay ten and the knc fam is commin at ya with fiyuhhhhh


Peac
thats tight

[Volume_one_]

Originally posted by .bomer.is.boh.@Mar 9 2006, 08:06 PM
what does that mean
? lol
wow

i'm saying that your handstyle is nicer than your drawling

[.bomer.is.boh.]

im gonna be posting more stuff http://blogpost.imageshack.us/blogpost/pos...icture235ar.jpg just a bump for it i want peoples oppineons.

[Mse]

http://img433.imageshack.us/img433/6735/banovic6kq.jpg
http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/9932/peniss9ow.jpg
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/8467/psykho4ym.jpg
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/4093/nbaha4np.jpg

[nena]

Originally posted by Mse@Mar 9 2006, 08:32 PM
http://img433.imageshack.us/img433/6735/banovic6kq.jpg
http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/9932/peniss9ow.jpg
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/8467/psykho4ym.jpg
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/4093/nbaha4np.jpg
i like ur style a lot man

[TricksForKids]

mse throw some colour in their kid! and nice karaks, and howbout people COMMENT ON KAY TEN'S SHIT, KIDS GUNNA BRING THE RUCKUS IF YOU DONT.

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Man cmon, i finally get something colored that i think looks kinda cool, and no crtis.

Just say somethin......lol

Its on 506.

Anything'd be nice.

[flclnaruto1213]

newest sketch, i should start more often.im getting rusty.

i think the letters need work, and i fucked the 3d
oh well
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/4922/sketcher5fp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

[.bomer.is.boh.]

its alrighty check this i need crits... i fucked up the M but o well

http://blogpost.imageshack.us/blogpost/pos...icture255vm.jpg (http://blogpost.imageshack.us/blogpost/postblog.php?id=img455/2954/picture255vm.jpg) please check it and anycrits?

[flclnaruto1213]

dont go right after mine ....>:[

i need crits more.

[Sluts_r_us]

you know what really pisses me off?.....when toys like volume post their wack "pieces" up and other toys are like DOPE!!!!11!.........no beef tho...


and regs.....that kay shit is hot...post another one of urs plz :)

[Mse]

is sluts talking about me

and thanks nena for the complimentes

[Sluts_r_us]

if you could fucking read you wouldnt have asked that retarded question...

[+HyBriD+]

some nice ones

[nena]

Originally posted by +HyBriD+@Mar 9 2006, 09:33 PM
some nice ones
you postin som tonight?

[flclnaruto1213]

cover of my blackbook

did this freely with paint markers right when i got it so..yeh

http://img307.imageshack.us/img307/249/sketcher0137gx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[.bomer.is.boh.]

NICE MAN NICE.

[nena]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Mar 9 2006, 10:40 PM
cover of my blackbook

did this freely with paint markers right when i got it so..yeh

http://img307.imageshack.us/img307/249/sketcher0137gx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thats tight. me gusta.

[flclnaruto1213]

thanks

[Sluts_r_us]

wut brand markers u use?

[+HyBriD+]

yea nena i might get sutmhing up 2 night probly just a charechter by soemthing simple

[Volume_one_]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Mar 9 2006, 09:20 PM
you know what really pisses me off?.....when toys like volume post their wack "pieces" up and other toys are like DOPE!!!!11!.........no beef tho...


and regs.....that kay shit is hot...post another one of urs plz :)
man whats your problem ??

i've never talked shit to you
i've even gave you some props on your shit now your talking shit about me?

[Volume_one_]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Mar 9 2006, 08:51 PM
newest sketch, i should start more often.im getting rusty.

i think the letters need work, and i fucked the 3d
oh well
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/4922/sketcher5fp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
i like it

just make your lines a lil more precise and fix up the 3d and you got it

but you dont really need my advice i think your better than me



hey on the cover of your black book did you use the ort paint marker set from
the bombing science shop?

[dropsom3]

http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/6295/picture4450yc.th.jpg (http://img319.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture4450yc.jpg)
back cover
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/3203/picture4465je.th.jpg (http://img238.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture4465je.jpg)
old name eatin
http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/7214/picture4471hi.th.jpg (http://img319.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture4471hi.jpg)
old
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/1952/picture4482rx.th.jpg (http://img238.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture4482rx.jpg)
old
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/3034/picture4490ii.th.jpg (http://img339.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture4490ii.jpg)
new, new name acid2
http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/7807/picture4392gc.th.jpg (http://img319.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture4392gc.jpg)
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6892/picture4449le.th.jpg (http://img339.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture4449le.jpg)
i like this, everyone here is talkin shit about it
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/8841/picture9ro.th.jpg (http://img409.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture9ro.jpg)
blackbook cover
im not unhappy wiht my shit i know its not the best and i think my style is sort of differnt needs work i hav been writting for alittle while now maybe about 11 months and shit so likes/ dislikes, thanks everyone and nice work from everyone else

[kill]

Originally posted by merm 1@Mar 9 2006, 01:10 PM
what do you think.....
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/872/hpim1035small1ip.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
cant read the second letter
ur m in the tag looks sort of like mine

[Volume_one_]

hmm dropsom you got a good idea of coloring but your style is weak

you really need to work on your letters

[Volume_one_]

i like your letters kill and also that metal look that it has

[dropsom3]

thanks for the crits, like i said tho my style is my own but my letter do need more structure.

[+HyBriD+]

dropsom3 jus keep practicing..hopefully in a couple months well c sum bad ass stuff from u

[dropsom3]

thanks hybrid, glad u can see somethin in my work.ill try my best to show some great stuff in the months to come.

[nena]

Originally posted by +HyBriD+@Mar 9 2006, 11:06 PM
yea nena i might get sutmhing up 2 night probly just a charechter by soemthing simple
i already posted sum a few paginas back but i might get up a few more idk

[Volume_one_]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2105.jpg
heres a sketch i'm working on
i'm bout to color it
what do yall think?

[+HyBriD+]

http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/481/gir6aq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Z FUSE]

nice karakter! the L doesn't look like an L. u wrote vold right?

[Ironik]

Void its ok but i would put a circle or a star 4 the top of the I and the GIR carac is ok.

[+HyBriD+]

yeah was thinking that about the i but jus gave up lol

[nena]

http://i2.tinypic.com/r1zs5s.jpg
http://i2.tinypic.com/r1zs7p.jpg

i like ur kar void. nice

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by +HyBriD+@Mar 10 2006, 12:33 AM
http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/481/gir6aq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Z fuse ur on crack this is not a nice karak this karak sucks, its a bite of some stupid invader zim shit, which takes no skill to draw. come up with something original

[+HyBriD+]

duh its a bit dumbass! ididnt try to make it out 2 be my own.

[AoAssis]

dont bite shit no one wants to see shit like that come up with original shit

no need to get defencive just cuz ur not original

[nena]

maybe is just his version of tha charactor cuz i seen sum1 have a char up of stewy from family guy.

jus cuz they have a caractor of a cartoon doesnt mean is there for real charactor to use

[dropsom3]

wow you guys say my shit needs work?! umm i love the crits and support but u guys dont hav much rooom to talk..sorry, keep sketchin everyday and get better.

[nena]

Originally posted by dropsom3@Mar 10 2006, 01:00 AM
wow you guys say my shit needs work?! umm i love the crits and support but u guys dont hav much rooom to talk..sorry, keep sketchin everyday and get better.
atleast ur gettin critz i want some

[dropsom3]

nena like the secound pic. u need way better lighting tho we can barly see it.

[+HyBriD+]

Originally posted by dropsom3@Mar 10 2006, 01:00 AM
wow you guys say my shit needs work?! umm i love the crits and support but u guys dont hav much rooom to talk..sorry, keep sketchin everyday and get better.
lmao bud shutthe fuk up my little 5 yr old nephew can do better shit then u shut the fuk up that was a 2 min sketch & a char froma cartoon shutup

[nena]

Originally posted by dropsom3@Mar 10 2006, 01:02 AM
nena like the secound pic. u need way better lighting tho we can barly see it.
yea pero we dont have none light bulbs in my house i used tha barely light from computor

[+HyBriD+]

^^ no light bulbs???

[nena]

no everyone burned out now only use outside light ok

but i kno u can atleast see tha pic a lil bit to atleast crit it everything but tha lighting

[dropsom3]

hybrid thought u where nice but fuck u got wack style and ur charcter from invader zim which is a great show, sucks, stop talkin trash about how ur 5 year old nephew does better than me lets just fuckin post are shit.

[dropsom3]

fuck i say we battle.

[+HyBriD+]

then post sumhthing decent, wack style u got no style its everywere looks like u puked on a paper & said heres my sketchs

[nena]

Originally posted by dropsom3@Mar 10 2006, 01:10 AM
hybrid thought u where nice but fuck u got wack style and ur charcter from invader zim which is a great show, sucks, stop talkin trash about how ur 5 year old nephew does better than me lets just fuckin post are shit.
you are the won that think that is better. why dont u post up a character if your think your so good and better than

[Volume_one_]

man this sucks
i'm trying to color this new sketch with color pencils and its taking forever

[+HyBriD+]

^ yeah colord pencils sux, but sumtiems its all i have 2 cuz prismas r expensive lol

[nena]

i dont know if i should not color mine ?

[+HyBriD+]

^ personal prefrence

[dropsom3]

so battling or not?

[+HyBriD+]

if uwant bitch

[nena]

pues, ill do it to morow i am very tired post more tomorow night ok

[dropsom3]

kool w/ me we doin a charcter or a peice or what ill let u choose.

[+HyBriD+]

well do a skecth um have like nena or sumbody choose a word ,im 2 lazy 2 think

[dropsom3]

how about the word who?

[nena]

how about.... . .


comorra

[dropsom3]

nah 2 "r"'s in a row wouldnt look to great for either of us

[nena]

maybe just not for you

[escape14]

Whats up, I'm pretty new to graff, i sketched this today during my history class. Do you think this is worth painting, or will it just embarras me if/when I get better?

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/4378/escape9vs.jpg

[+HyBriD+]

yea^ do sumthing with like 5 letters or less

edit :ment for nena

[dropsom3]

5 letters or less agreed

how about mucho? or morda

[InvisableAzn]

hybird. dropsome doode.

word should be " chaos"

[dropsom3]

chaos
sounds good

[nena]

fiera

[dropsom3]

alright im about to bounce lets just do chaos hav it do by sunday? sound good?

[+HyBriD+]

i guess, jus colored no char, and due sumtime next week like around tue

[+HyBriD+]

sun is badi wont even have that day to do it (nenas word is BADASS)!!!

[InvisableAzn]

suday is too long........ saterdae nite.

[dropsom3]

alright tuesday, hav fun with it, and good luck peace out .

[InvisableAzn]

nvm

[ceroX24X]

heres a simple one i did i started writing like a month ago can i get some criticism?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teena...und/picture.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/picture.jpg)

[+HyBriD+]

^ not bad

[Z FUSE]

why do the drips off the bubbles go side ways and all edgy and sharp. water, or slime or w/e doesn't drip in sharp turns, and edges.

[InvisableAzn]

SO TRUE ^^

[Volume_one_]

Originally posted by escape14@Mar 10 2006, 01:29 AM
Whats up, I'm pretty new to graff, i sketched this today during my history class. Do you think this is worth painting, or will it just embarras me if/when I get better?

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/4378/escape9vs.jpg
i like it just need to fix it up a bit then color it

[escape14]

thanks, how should I fix it up, I feel like my C and the second E are kinda weak.

[flclnaruto1213]

to answer the question on markers.

for sketching i use prismas.

for the blackbook cover. i used a prisma metallic paint marker for silver outine, blue deco paint marker for fill, gold sharpie paint marker for fill, and green deco paint marker for outline.

[Karma]

http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/8950/eley1uw.jpg


hhmm crits on the karak would be tight.


Yes that is a respirator it has on.

[InvisableAzn]

lol.. karma
lookes like a deformed penis

lol.... buh u should cut off the blue part on ur stickers.
itz a federal offense
plus it will ook nicer wit out the blue strip

[Mse]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Mar 9 2006, 09:20 PM
you know what really pisses me off?.....when toys like volume post their wack "pieces" up and other toys are like DOPE!!!!11!.........no beef tho...


and regs.....that kay shit is hot...post another one of urs plz :)
actually you were compariing and yyou used a plural so that means more than one toy.

but i do know what you mean
4 pages of shit talking and maybee 3 flicks
fuck

[Logikalone]

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/antehbomb.jpg
Some advice please.

[ceroX24X]

something new simpler than the last one with drips. can i get crits?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teena...nd/100_0301.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0301.jpg)

[.bomer.is.boh.]

something fast. its not a peice or a bomb really ahah that s wat i like to call it.
http://blogpost.imageshack.us/blogpost/pos...icture271vs.jpg


any.....commments thanks.

[.bomer.is.boh.]

what does that say logikalone? yeah man my advice is put some 3D on it its gonna look alot better maan

[molotow_15]

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/snake.jpg
my new charecter

[.bomer.is.boh.]

*bump* by the way that charicter looks like a 4 year old drawing doesnt really look original looks like a 50's charicter.

[molotow_15]

do better then you can beef

[wHy4]

not too sure anyone likes that one molotow ...

back to the drawing board ... like i said before ... BOWL ART

hehe

[molotow_15]

not too sure anyone likes you either
im sure banksy would be pissed if he knew you was using his picture

[wHy4]

well why dont you go let banksy know then.

i just think its comical, and so is your karak .... in a different sort of way that is

[molotow_15]

why dont you paint your own comical piece

[FTAG]

y dnt u2 be quiet

[Jay1888]

Dont see anything with bitting shit when your a toy, helps you undersatnd different styles and stuff.

Edit: Didnt realises this was like 6 pages ago, ignore this post.

[molotow_15]

yeah but thats not bit, i aint toy

[Logikalone]

It says ANTEH, pronounced antea

[pitodamfmp]

holy shit molotow, you came in here asking for crits, and got them, and now you're freaking out?

your character is lame, no sense of anatomy at all. he's right, it looks like a 4 year old drew it.

[obseen]

i cant beleive molotow just said hes not toy :lol:

[pitodamfmp]

lol i know.


also: escape, you're new, and so am i, but i tag "escape" or "ESC" most of the time.

i dont care if you change or not, cause i almost always use the abbreviation, but thought i'd let you know.

[molotow_15]

yup
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/mist.jpg
mist

[escape14]

alrigt, if you dont mind I'm gonna stick with escape, I like it. Where do you write, I'm from boston. Also, i'd love to see some pictures of your stuff.

[Jay1888]

This thread seems more active than the Tot Characters one, so:
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/5838/img0159copy3mg.jpg

Crits would be appriciated, getting some pens tomorow so ill post a coloured version up soon.

[molotow_15]

i dont like the head on it though

[c0ld]

Originally posted by c0ld@Mar 9 2006, 02:25 PM
i havent been on in a while bein busy with my so-called life and having a sucky comp....but after around a month of black-booking, heres what I got.
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/5436/thisisjoshsmiths6kb.th.jpg

the pic was takin with my cam phone so xcuse the quality.

crits.
BUMP.

critz.
now.
plz.
i need them.......
BLARGALARGALARGA!!!1!


sorry, Im on drugs. :blink:

[Hurs]

its getting better man i like the letter structure it all maches man keep it up

[Jrow17]

well.. id keep sketchin. Im not even sure what the thing all the way on the right is. Ive never looked but im sure lots of people have the name cold too, not that it matters that much though. Umm, i guess its not too bad I just dont like that style at all..

[c0ld]

the thing all the way on the right is a grim-reaper esq karak.....

maybe ill post a better pic later.
thnx for the crits.

[gimp]

any tips
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e2/gimp27/LastScan.jpg

[obseen]

id make the letters more thicker..meh.. just my opinion

[gimp]

sorry how do resize pics?

[Jrow17]

first off drop the little karaks, not quite ready for that yet. Im not a big fan of the blocky letters, but if thats your style then i guess its cool. Make the ltters thicker add a bit more style to them.. all the are is stretched out letters, pretty plain looking. So bascially, shrink them down, make em fatter.. drop the karaks and add a bit more style to em.. Use a decent eraser too..

[wHy4]

you can open em up in paint and ckick the image tab then hit "sketch/skew" type in some figures till you get it the right size. to scale down just type in 50 and 50 for the values.

and get rid of that gay dog ... just my opinion though.

[Jrow17]

get rid of that sig too.. its annoying..

[gimp]

thanks for te addvice

[What Happened to the Letters?]

Originally posted by gimp@Mar 10 2006, 01:23 PM
any tips

...heres oine, dont suck! no but on he subject of not being an asshole, dont try and make curves adn flair and characters cause frankly it looks liek a 4th graders birtthday card lettering...so just copy the letters you see in arial and timesnewroman fonts on your ocmputer

[What Happened to the Letters?]

Originally posted by Hurs@Mar 10 2006, 01:10 PM
its getting better man i like the letter structure it all maches man keep it up
dont use the words "letter structure" so loosely, you clearly dont know what it is because that cold sketch does not have it...it does rougly work together but it has no real structure, you really just ahve to understand structure or be taught it in person because its not somethign you cna learn from a message board

[UKCsire]

hey I'm bored sooooo someone should just pick me a word to sketch out here...

[c0ld]

hey I got a few more i did
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f292/imcold843/0ef49efd.jpg

crits

[UKCsire]

top bomb looks alright...not a fan of the rest of them...you should work more on your handstyle and lose that arrow

[SiLeNt-BoB]

make the L and D mor like the C and O..and fix ytour handy..and thats b nice

[T R E O]

all of em need work.

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by molotow_15@Mar 10 2006, 10:43 AM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/snake.jpg
my new charecter
whooah. hes dark lol

[Jay1888]

Originally posted by Jay1888@Mar 10 2006, 12:55 PM
This thread seems more active than the Tot Characters one, so:
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/5838/img0159copy3mg.jpg

Crits would be appriciated, getting some pens tomorow so ill post a coloured version up soon.
Bumpage

[soba06]

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

[Ume]

bored in math today..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005706.jpg

[dxtreme]

I know I know it kinda sucks, but I AM a toy.
I would greatly appreciate feeback and C&C.
http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/1369/scan1gh.png

[UKCsire]

uhm...yeah you should just start again on that one...I...can't read it at all and it looks pretty sloppy...oh...does it say zion? I don't see any...n...at all...

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by nena+Mar 9 2006, 08:28 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nena @ Mar 9 2006, 08:28 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Mar 9 2006, 08:19 PM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/9611/kaytenpen1zk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


see now, there needs to be like a half toy thread, cuz kay ten and the knc fam is commin at ya with fiyuhhhhh


Peac
thats tight [/b][/quote]
HOW BOUT SOME COMMENTS YOU NON CRITIQUING FUCKS!


and ume, nice colours, but i dunno, the 3D's a little to fat, the S's have some potential though

Peace

[UKCsire]

okay people dont' seem to understand...if you don't get a comment it's not the end of the god-damn world...just accept the fact that perhaps it's not the hottest pic and therefore it didn't get any crits...

tricksforkids...it's on lined paper...it's in blue pen...there's a start on making it better...lose the arrows going through the whole thing...it kinda looks like you messed up a couple times annnnd since you were probably drawing in pen you couldn't fix it...want my suggestion? Don't post up sketches that aren't completed...unless that's completed...in which...sorry.

SIDENOTE...I'm bored someone pick a word for me to sketch out...my other post got ignored...

[dxtreme]

Thanks for the comments. I felt the same way you did when I was done with it. Also yeah I do write Zion. I messed up the letter placement with the I and the O.

[TricksForKids]

ukc, thats not my sketch, its kaytens, so thats for starters, secondly, down for an exchange? ( plus i think the arrows are fresh, and a pen freestyle by him is better than 95 percent of this thread ) i write regs....you write?

[UKCsire]

sorry dude my bad didn't realise that wasn't your sketch...I'm really not feelin those arrows but perhaps that's just me...yeah I'm definately down for an exchange...I write sire [who would have guessed haha] - I'ma start on this right now

[TricksForKids]

lol alright sounds good, nice letters, imma start now too

dont expect anything much though, think you're quite a bit better than me

[CL3ver1]

http://myspace-141.vo.llnwd.net/00558/14/13/558233141_l.jpg
http://myspace-542.vo.llnwd.net/00558/24/53/558233542_l.jpg
http://myspace-691.vo.llnwd.net/00558/19/61/558241691_l.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

heres what cess sent me in the mail :P

noles:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/noles.jpg

pesk:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/nolespesk.jpg

awesome charac:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/noleskarak.jpg

eeyore on the envelope:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/noleseeyore2.jpg

full page:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/nolespage.jpg

[dxtreme]

Originally posted by CL3ver1@Mar 10 2006, 05:43 PM
http://myspace-141.vo.llnwd.net/00558/14/13/558233141_l.jpg
http://myspace-542.vo.llnwd.net/00558/24/53/558233542_l.jpg
http://myspace-691.vo.llnwd.net/00558/19/61/558241691_l.jpg
Yo man your style is fresh as hell!
Mind droppin some knowledge?
If you don't my question is that how did you get those random blue dots?
Lastly how did you get those cracks and what markers are you using?
Oh and for C&C I like the overall look but on the first one at the bottom the right hand side there are two arrows, the one thats pointing N. looks wierd and out of place.

[Mse]

that pesk by cess is dope as fuck

[CL3ver1]

hah thanks.but yeh i just used paint for the dotys.and i use ball point pens for the outlines.and sharpies for the colors.and yeh im not reaaly feelin the first one myself.but yeh the piece is actually a page long.thats just half of it.

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Originally posted by CL3ver1@Mar 10 2006, 05:43 PM
http://myspace-141.vo.llnwd.net/00558/14/13/558233141_l.jpg
http://myspace-542.vo.llnwd.net/00558/24/53/558233542_l.jpg
http://myspace-691.vo.llnwd.net/00558/19/61/558241691_l.jpg
Holy fucking H on wheels, I love the last one lol the character mostly, buyt it looks awesome. i like the flow of the second, and the machinery of the first. Im sure someone else could tell you something wrong with it, but i personally love it all lol.

Love the style, keep it up.

[KaSe01]

wut style...? ;)





























C'MON TOYS GIVE KAY SOME MUTHAFUCKIN CRITSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!FUCK! :angry: :angry:

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Mar 10 2006, 05:48 PM
heres what cess sent me in the mail :P

noles:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/noles.jpg

pesk:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/nolespesk.jpg

awesome charac:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/noleskarak.jpg

eeyore on the envelope:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/noleseeyore2.jpg

full page:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/nolespage.jpg
bubbbbbump

[TricksForKids]

lol sluts you silly silly cat, its on the same page...lol, but cess, i dont know, if your a fan of cartoonish, then im a fan of your style, however im not a fan of cartoonish, but whatver, its still lookin good, Sire im done my sketch bodiqua fam

[TricksForKids]

sire by regs, the donald duck is bitten, but w.e i changed it up a bit and made it smaller, not like i traced shit, im not that happy with it, but w.e it was a quickie

Peace

http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/7604/sirebyregs7zo.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[UKCsire]

hey man my piece might not be up for a bit I gotta run and do some errands so if you wanted to tweak with it or something go right ahead...

[CL3ver1]

crits on what kase?