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DRiPTooL
08-03-2008, 04:27 PM
where do you think you get it from you gotta sstart some where bro so w.e

(SoS)Viruz
08-03-2008, 04:30 PM
A Fromthegave leave the Kid alone. He's right. You start out with Bars then Move up to better more complexes styles. Soo if you didnt know that GTFO. And dont try to make him look bad, because if you didnt know Simps are a type of Style. ppl do Simps Different than other ppl. (That why he posted in the "TOY THREAD")

I got you Drip. Just do you man.

the end
08-03-2008, 04:32 PM
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/7373/001bk5.jpg

fromthegrave
08-03-2008, 04:34 PM
ha, shit thats dope.


i will post pics.

South-Pole
08-03-2008, 04:56 PM
^almost there,
this time try making your letters look like this and use bars

http://www.identifont.com/samples/monotype-imaging/ArialBlack.gif

fromthegrave
08-03-2008, 05:04 PM
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture049.jpg
dont really like it..
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture048.jpg
getting betta
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture047.jpg
hellz ya.

(SoS) Flu
08-03-2008, 05:07 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/flucharacter.jpg


http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/IMG_4393.jpg


http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/IMG_4386.jpg

fromthegrave
08-03-2008, 05:08 PM
top character is the shit khed

(SoS) Flu
08-03-2008, 05:10 PM
put this out now... hes a bite from a character from fezat but that form of him is a little different from the last one i posted up....

HëRbN
08-03-2008, 05:12 PM
Bumpage, Theres a larger pic on the previous page or a few back....
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/3827/phazeronestah5.jpg


Rsakens- diggin it as always, dope fills
Devil - that takes excessive to an excessive level
Lucifer- Do what fable said and youll have a decent start
Villin- (Below me) Fix thats N to be the same width as the other letters


Bumpo yet again for crits, quit bitchin at each other guys and post flicks. Dont diss on people just to diss on em. Be constructive. Flu you should do a series of characs like that top one, its pretty tight.

The end- thats a pretty tight style, clean it up a bit and youll have something

(SoS) Flu
08-03-2008, 05:18 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/IMG_4382.jpg

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/IMG_4383.jpg

just some sketched in global studies :P

(SoS)Viruz
08-03-2008, 05:20 PM
Yo Herbn. Long time man... Ummm With the Exstentions like you said. I dont like the rectangular ones. Takes those off, and thicken the Z a lil, then take that Bar going threw the letters. Other than that its nice man.

HëRbN
08-03-2008, 05:24 PM
Rectangular ones being the boxes? cause theyll have handstyles, the crew, and a date in em. I dont like the one between the a and the Z though and a few other random ones, but its a step in the right direction i think. a small step hah.

BadUncing69
08-03-2008, 05:31 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/IMG_4382.jpg

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/IMG_4383.jpg

just some sketched in global studies :P
i like the way these characters look. they look so mysterious

(SoS) Flu
08-03-2008, 05:34 PM
i love your sig man its soo great. but thnks man im workin on some now soo ill see if i can post some up tongith..

thebaconator
08-03-2008, 06:14 PM
herban - im liking the backround...dont like the blocks tho
sos - the little spraycap head was killa


crits
http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r13/onedayafter3/DSC02839.jpg

(SoS) Flu
08-03-2008, 06:18 PM
change the "M's" there too plain and work on a steadier hand. shakey hand fucks even the best drawings....

Sarto
08-03-2008, 06:26 PM
yeah , and i like that e bacon

La Coka Nostra
08-03-2008, 07:07 PM
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture047.jpg
hellz ya.




LOLOLOL ZHENKA?!?

ewwwwwwwwwwwww.
made in new hampshire mother fuckers.
5 dollar 5th, 10 dollar handle
wussup naaaaaoooooo?

DRiPTooL
08-03-2008, 07:23 PM
Yea thanks viruz, lol I will bend them and shit when people say its good looking

(SoS)Viruz
08-03-2008, 07:35 PM
Baconator.- That way better than that other dumb style you were workin on bro. Just Work on you M ight.

Herb.- The boxes do I didnt notice that. Are we talkin about the same boxes.? But yea it a good step


I got you man. People use to say shit like that to me. So I dont let others say that to other people just cause there dicks! But any question just ask me Ight Bro.

New Pics up in like 5min!!!!!

thebaconator
08-03-2008, 07:36 PM
http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r13/onedayafter3/DSC02840.jpg

DRiPTooL
08-03-2008, 07:42 PM
IIght cool

numberonestunna
08-03-2008, 07:44 PM
baconator - take the hook off the top of the second M. the A also seems a lil fatter than the other letters.

fromthegrave
08-03-2008, 07:51 PM
LOLOLOL ZHENKA?!?

ewwwwwwwwwwwww.
made in new hampshire mother fuckers.
5 dollar 5th, 10 dollar handle
wussup naaaaaoooooo?

haha, looking to get drunk and still put gas in the car ya know????
5oclock behind it, ha

DRiPTooL
08-03-2008, 07:55 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc4/DontWasteLIfe916/DSC01991.jpg

it looks dope dood buy your A try and find a way to but a bar in the middle you know, you might know what it is but other may not..:)

sketchthescene
08-03-2008, 08:20 PM
Okay so , I get the lettering, I am pretty good at putting that down, but this 3d was not how I pictured it. I think it takes away form the sketch, any suggestions or improvements, I have trouble with 3d and fill.

DRiPTooL
08-03-2008, 08:42 PM
well it looks pretty dope to me i wouldnt worry about fill and stuff just yet keep practicing,

sketchthescene
08-03-2008, 09:12 PM
tot

Furious-StyleZ
08-03-2008, 09:36 PM
word....


http://i34.tinypic.com/33lp79h.jpg

the end
08-03-2008, 09:37 PM
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/6081/002xm6.jpg
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/7373/001bk5.jpg

Furious-StyleZ
08-03-2008, 09:47 PM
word...

http://i37.tinypic.com/2ld9fdu.jpg

http://i34.tinypic.com/opwk7d.jpg

http://i37.tinypic.com/8yxt1k.jpg

http://i37.tinypic.com/2d0dpy0.jpg

http://i38.tinypic.com/2rxjmab.jpg

Thrice
08-03-2008, 09:58 PM
Furious-2 things, first is resize pics and 2nd is go SIMPLE! Also don't do a direct bite on cope's throwie, not coool man.
End-good looking stuff, some of the letters needed to be cleaned up a bit.
CRITS?
http://i36.tinypic.com/14vit83.jpg

Furious-StyleZ
08-03-2008, 10:14 PM
ye i didnt realize pics were gna b ultra big..and wid d cope throwie where u talkin about the E? ye i changed dat..i wasnt tryin to bite but i guess d E was super close to copes E's...ye i know i need sumwork..

"Riot"
08-03-2008, 11:18 PM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/WebCam_20080803_2204.jpg

SAEK exchange.

crits?

Bazer
08-04-2008, 01:38 AM
dzee you never gave me your black book.

devil at sea level
08-04-2008, 07:35 AM
edit

respERATION
08-04-2008, 07:49 AM
work on consistency of bars,like make them more solid and less curvy for name and keep the all the same thickness.
cirts on this what colours should i use for the fill.....what else should i do to it??:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/seshwithbrik5.jpg

JETPACK!!
08-04-2008, 07:57 AM
^^all i see is black.

ahem, keep sketchin man. good simple. make the top of your A in the middle, its sloping to the left a bit. and i'd try to make the H and the E the same width as the A and the M.

sarz, get more familar with bars. youve got a decent style of letters going, just crispen them up, make the lines smoother, not choppy.

Mr yarbles
08-04-2008, 08:28 AM
http://i36.tinypic.com/ayrdrq.jpg
Made it bighter for you

osnapizzel
08-04-2008, 10:14 AM
furious style you should pick a new name because the boston DZ burns you. and yeah he writes DZEE too sometimes

Thrice
08-04-2008, 10:54 AM
Thanks jetpack, I tried to do slump it to balance with the M, but ya going to fix that.

Furious-StyleZ
08-04-2008, 12:13 PM
wait wait rly? ders a dz from boston? damn man das whack..im tired of getting new names..dat sux...i dont want d same name as sum1 das alrdy up..

(SoS)Viruz
08-04-2008, 12:25 PM
New Style I have been workin on. I call it Str8 Bars. I dont like the A It fell of tho. Crits?
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0002-1.jpg

My Orginal Style, The A fell of when i tried to Overlap it with the G. But this was a Exchange with Joga.
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0015.jpg

"Ant" Thing Im doing with Ante. This is tha same style as the Frist one. But Crits?
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0001-2.jpg

Roit- look nice But I would take that thing off the K at the end cause it donse flow.

Thrice- Squeez that "M" A lil together. Cause once you do that it look like the M is equaly space like the onther letters.

chronic=straightseedless
08-04-2008, 12:34 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/2yyyq7p.jpg
None of you kno what its like to actually get up in a hood with gangs, cuz if they see you...your either gettin jumped from all their boys or dumped in the back alleys. I got jumped 2days ago and boy did they make sure i knew who they were.

Furious-StyleZ
08-04-2008, 12:42 PM
ive never heard of or seen ne "DZEE" tags..ever..

Bazer
08-04-2008, 12:53 PM
beat that ***** down dzee. haha

http://www.puregraffiti.com/graffiti-gallery/watermark.php?file=16729

Bazer
08-04-2008, 12:55 PM
None of you kno what its like to actually get up in a hood with gangs, cuz if they see you...your either gettin jumped from all their boys or dumped in the back alleys. I got jumped 2days ago and boy did they make sure i knew who they were.

ive been chased and beaten down by gangs a few times before. dont act like you know any of these writers. they all have amazing storys. you probably dont even paint. and if you do its prolly toy spots.

Furious-StyleZ
08-04-2008, 01:00 PM
daaaaaaaaamn..i got ya baze.

Bazer
08-04-2008, 01:03 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2058/2455389955_823df0d2b1.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2232/2272265429_b7d71e0670.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2099/2265275593_b8269a54c1.jpg

chronic=straightseedless
08-04-2008, 01:03 PM
where u from buddy, cuz i guarantee its nothing compared to detroit, n to start with amazing stories son, ive been shot and stabbed so get off by sayin that uve been "chased" by gangs, wow!!! who the fuck hasn't, i promise to you, no joke, ive been threw more shit in my 19 years of life then you ever will

Bazer
08-04-2008, 01:05 PM
im from houston. its twice the size of detroit. some of these kids are from the baddest hoods in California... no one cares actually... you suck anyways so you might as well get better better on paper before you get shot for doin some wack stuff..

Furious-StyleZ
08-04-2008, 01:06 PM
damn man come down yo dis aint no contest about who lives in d hood...chiiiilll..

(SoS)Viruz
08-04-2008, 01:08 PM
A what about me..... Damn....
I try ro stay away from the Gangs and shit, But the hood I live In their aren't that many Gangs but.... They do come up here to tag and shit.

chronic=straightseedless
08-04-2008, 01:13 PM
lol Houston, i really think you need to learn more about life itself...n dont talk on a touchy subject such as gettin shot. You dont what its like nor will you ever, so please just do me that favor and dont talk about it cuz aside from the reason you got shot, you got fuckin shot ni.gga...

respERATION
08-04-2008, 01:15 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/ayrdrq.jpg
Made it bighter for you

thanks......and bottom of the page bump....

i'm likeing that bars style but maybe the right leg of the r should come from the underneath the hole?

Furious-StyleZ
08-04-2008, 01:17 PM
look man u aint d only one whos ever bin shot at..and got jumped n shit..ive gone thru dat but im not here to fuckin showoff or complain about it yo...so just let d damn subject go..it aint no contest.

chronic=straightseedless
08-04-2008, 01:19 PM
im aint tryin to brag son, im statin the facts, n dont say uve been jumped n shit cuz u havent lil homie

Bazer
08-04-2008, 01:24 PM
lol Houston, i really think you need to learn more about life itself...n dont talk on a touchy subject such as gettin shot. You dont what its like nor will you ever, so please just do me that favor and dont talk about it cuz aside from the reason you got shot, you got fuckin shot ni.gga...

Why do you keep talkin like you even know about my life? Shut the fuck up dude. you have no idea who i am and what my surroundings are like. Your not the only one on here who's goteN shot at.
These are my last thoughts on the subject: =P

the end.

acereborn
08-04-2008, 01:24 PM
Go die.

@the gay kid who writes anything involving weed

chronic=straightseedless
08-04-2008, 01:28 PM
Why do you keep talkin like you even know about my life? Shut the fuck up dude. you have no idea who i am and what my surroundings are like. Your not the only one on here who's shot at.
These are my last thoughts on the subject: =P

the end.

O.K. these are also my last thoughts, i know this much about you, you havent been shot or stabbed, you obviously dont live in a bad hood cuz you havent been shot or stabbed lol, your a little white boy who lives in the burbs and thinks hes bad cuz he does a little graffiti :)
END OF STORY, END OF SUBJECT

Furious-StyleZ
08-04-2008, 01:31 PM
u know wat man im not even gona argue..i know my life..i know wat ive gone thru and all d shits ive faced..it aint even worth getting hyped up for niga dis is retarted..im out of dis dumbass convo..

Furious-StyleZ
08-04-2008, 01:32 PM
man u know wat niga? i aint even gna get all worked up n shit over dis..i know wat i do and have faced in life..dis argument over..so go get shot or sumtin..peace

Bazer
08-04-2008, 01:34 PM
oh my god dzee are you readin this too??????? hahahahahaha you really dont know shit about me. I'm the most mexican motherfucker youll ever meet, i'm the kid that stopp gangbangin cuz he's more into graff, im poor as fuck, i live in one of the worst places in houston, ive sold drugs to get out of rough times before just like you. whats the point in braggin about this shit though? nobody cares. this is a graff forum not "im the baddest mother fucker in the message board forum."

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-04-2008, 01:34 PM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture017.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture019.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture020.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture021.jpg

chronic=straightseedless
08-04-2008, 01:35 PM
ey furious, im done too but whatever hood your from, do me a favor and go to the closest "nigg.a" and call em a ni.gga n c what happens, so stop sayin it lil homie

chronic=straightseedless
08-04-2008, 01:40 PM
oh my god dzee are you readin this too??????? hahahahahaha you really dont know shit about me. I'm the most mexican motherfucker youll ever meet, i'm the kid that stopp gangbangin cuz he's more into graff, im poor as fuck, i live in one of the worst places in houston, ive sold drugs to get out of rough times before just like you. whats the point in braggin about this shit though? nobody cares. this is a graff forum not "im the baddest mother fucker in the message board forum."

Im done with this convo but sellin weed aint doin shit-u aint sellin drugs, try pushin sum white...n for the record ni.gga "im the baddest mother fucker in the message board forum."

Furious-StyleZ
08-04-2008, 01:42 PM
hahahaha damn man imnot even white yo and im not rich..im not in d burbs...and i say ***** weneva..nobody cares here cuz everyone says it here..its alief son we in d hood..but dats it..final words fo real..and ye haha baze im readin it too..its ridiculous wat dis kid is sayin..

Bazer
08-04-2008, 01:44 PM
chronic have i shown you my hamster?


my hamster... have i showed you him? =[

chronic=straightseedless
08-04-2008, 01:44 PM
Chronic and Stylez.... GTFO now... You dont know Baze or anyone on this Forum matter Fact. You Graff is whack you both think you two lil Black Hood huh. No you not. Your 2 kid posting on a Graff. Fourm so shut the fuck up. And Deitoit dosen't have more Muders than Cleveland. So just shut up up that. Who gives two shit if you got shot. Not me or Baze or Tezer. So shut up.

please just stop son, your life aint nothin but a lie, so shut up hahahahahahahaha

Narotik
08-04-2008, 01:45 PM
@ Baze

Let it go man...theres no stopping them, your to good for that shit...

@ Chronic

real hard ass selling dust man... go back to school, get an education. Your into a text based art form and you can't spell...and by the way your attempting to spell I assume you find it hard to speak in full complete sentences as well...oh why wouldn't they see at a young age you were border line retarded. Yeah...you can be the baddest of the bad on this forum man...cause in the end, your bragging about being a hard ass toy...that shit don't get you anywhere but verbally bitch slapped here. Go peddle your shit on myspace. PEACE

Furious-StyleZ
08-04-2008, 01:45 PM
and yes i do know baze as a matter of fact..and im not tryin to act black..im str8 filipino..ye those foos dat b eatin those duck eggs hahaha..and i dont care i know i suck haha i just started so i know i need work wid my graff..

Furious-StyleZ
08-04-2008, 01:48 PM
hahaha narotik...two thumbs up yo

chronic=straightseedless
08-04-2008, 01:49 PM
hahahaha damn man imnot even white yo and im not rich..im not in d burbs...and i say ***** weneva..nobody cares here cuz everyone says it here..its alief son we in d hood..but dats it..final words fo real..and ye haha baze im readin it too..its ridiculous wat dis kid is sayin..

dont call me a kid cuz ima grown man and like ive said before, ive seen more shit in my 19 years of life then anyyyyyyyy of yall ni.ggas will everrrr see...ima end with this, have you ever seen your bestfriend, grew up on the same street together always had each others back, then one day get shot right in front of youuuuu, right in front of me cuz, all because of a girl- R.I.P Rayshawn Terrell Williams 6-19-08 never forget you dawg

Furious-StyleZ
08-04-2008, 01:54 PM
***** u aint no grown man u 19...and if u a grown ass man den go do sumtin beter dan argue wid a bunch of so called kids in a forum..like get a career or sumtin..stop tryin to sound like a tupac song cuz no ones believing it

Bazer
08-04-2008, 01:55 PM
http://www.myspacecomedy.com/images/funny/ban-hamster.jpg

Narotik
08-04-2008, 01:56 PM
Rayshawn Terrell is a 2007 graduate of T.C. Williams who plans on attending a local community college in the fall. Over the last few years Rayshawn has won 5 student of the year awards and 4 student of the quarter awards. Rayshawn has acquired 3,840 hours of volunteer service at the Alexandria Olympic Boys and Girls Club just over the past year.



Real bad ass gangster types man...

I cant stand that shit..thanks Baze

(SoS)Viruz
08-04-2008, 01:57 PM
New Style I have been workin on. I call it Str8 Bars. I dont like the A It fell of tho. Crits?
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0002-1.jpg

My Orginal Style, The A fell of when i tried to Overlap it with the G. But this was a Exchange with Joga.
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0015.jpg

"Ant" Thing Im doing with Ante. This is tha same style as the Frist one. But Crits?
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0001-2.jpg

Roit- look nice But I would take that thing off the K at the end cause it donse flow.

Thrice- Squeez that "M" A lil together. Cause once you do that it look like the M is equaly space like the onther letters.
Didnt get any Crits due to the Arguing int he Fourm:rolleyes: So Once a Again. BUMP FOR CRITS.

*Whats that Sound.....*
Aww Shit Baze released the Ban Hamster.... :p

Furious-StyleZ
08-04-2008, 01:58 PM
hahahahahah word...nice hamster..

Narotik
08-04-2008, 02:02 PM
Viruz

The first one feels to rigid to me man, it doesn't seem like theres any flow. I like the style on the 2nd one if you work with it a bit more. Top of the G's a little riggid, the way the A folds back onto the G , sort of throws it off but Its still pretty dope.

The 3rd one I got to say is best just cause the letters are structured and clean.

hammer_time
08-04-2008, 02:22 PM
Rayshawn Terrell is a 2007 graduate of T.C. Williams who plans on attending a local community college in the fall. Over the last few years Rayshawn has won 5 student of the year awards and 4 student of the quarter awards. Rayshawn has acquired 3,840 hours of volunteer service at the Alexandria Olympic Boys and Girls Club just over the past year.



Real bad ass gangster types man...

I cant stand that shit..thanks Baze

BWAHAHAHAHA

why is it, everyone who desperately wants to be "gangsta" says something about witnessing your "bff" get shot in the face, in front of you?

also thanks from me as well baze

hazetheone
08-04-2008, 02:51 PM
nigg.a fuck fuck i from the baddest hooooood u can think of nigg.a
nigg.as in myne run bitches over wit dae station waggons nigg.a
so dont say you been ran ova yet cuz u havent bitch ass nigg.a

you guys are straight gangster......

thebaconator
08-04-2008, 02:53 PM
viruz- i'm feelin the broken lines where the letters overlap in the last one
tezer- those are all pretty good



this is on a big piece of cardboard with oil pastels.....wanted to see how it would look...crits?
http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r13/onedayafter3/DSC02841.jpg

South-Pole
08-04-2008, 03:01 PM
back on topic

viruz-feeling the ant sketch,work more on handies
chronic-do keyboard letters and bars,
and quit arguing on who lives in a tougher place

Scratch
08-04-2008, 03:05 PM
bacon- the sketch you had a couple posts back that was simpler was better. Keep doing straight letters until you have a good understanding of everything. dont bother coloring them in, just do a million straight letters.

virus- i like your style you did for the joga piece. ill shit.

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/yaaaaaa.jpg

crits?

(SoS)Viruz
08-04-2008, 03:15 PM
Lol. I feel good.Like 4 months ago about, I was getin My shit dogged all the time lol.

Bacon- You need to go similar bro. Like Start with the letter Dirctly from the keyboard.

Scratch- If that is a E and a K at the End I would detach them. That way they can stand out better.

BOMB 631
08-04-2008, 03:18 PM
3000

Furious-StyleZ
08-04-2008, 03:28 PM
scratch- dope dope

Detroit Killa
08-04-2008, 04:03 PM
if your from detroit you better have gotten shot hahaha...DETROIT STAY UP

hazetheone
08-04-2008, 04:16 PM
god damnit he made another account

osnapizzel
08-04-2008, 04:23 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2058/2455389955_823df0d2b1.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2232/2272265429_b7d71e0670.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2099/2265275593_b8269a54c1.jpg

bump bazee knowing his shiit

Drakula
08-04-2008, 04:31 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Picture3-7.png


I can't understand any of the chat going on in the last couple of pages.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-04-2008, 04:33 PM
lets exchange

Detroit Killa
08-04-2008, 05:51 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/n6ca4z.jpg
crit

IlikePie
08-04-2008, 05:59 PM
Gansnsivts? Is that a word?

Detroit Killa
08-04-2008, 06:03 PM
Gansnsivts? Is that a word?

my bad, it says gans n sluts lol

IlikePie
08-04-2008, 06:05 PM
It's no good. Give up all hope.

Detroit Killa
08-04-2008, 06:06 PM
It's no good. Give up all hope.

Really? whats the matter with it

IlikePie
08-04-2008, 06:07 PM
The part where it doesn't say Rab3 in my style, done by me. Mostly because I'm about to go and play more Rock Band, finish this my sketch later.

LUCIFER_RISING
08-04-2008, 06:11 PM
haha^^
something quick i did to teach my sis how to spell her name
and and exchange
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc4/DontWasteLIfe916/DSC01995.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc4/DontWasteLIfe916/DSC01997.jpg

LUCIFER_RISING
08-04-2008, 06:13 PM
shit another post
random pic
i took in frisco
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc4/DontWasteLIfe916/DSC01676.jpg

LUCIFER_RISING
08-04-2008, 06:15 PM
my bad
double post
40 ounce bounce battle
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc4/DontWasteLIfe916/DSC01830.jpg

South-Pole
08-04-2008, 06:20 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/n6ca4z.jpg
crit


you forgot a G

ybar-thats fucking dope from the handstyles to the piece

lucifer-triple poster
the brenda sketch looks nice not feeling the other cause the black fill killed it and its hard to read cause of the black fill
bounce looks legit enough for me,just keep going with those simples

LUCIFER_RISING
08-04-2008, 06:29 PM
yup
yeah i didnt feel like filling it in all the way
bounce on is the oldest one out of the 3

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-04-2008, 07:17 PM
any yal lwanna battle or exchange.?

AnteUp
08-04-2008, 07:21 PM
any yal lwanna battle or exchange.?
YES. NOW!! haha.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-04-2008, 07:28 PM
what you writin nowadays ante?

AnteUp
08-04-2008, 07:37 PM
same thing senor.

whats2 or just what2.

apparently your still writing tezer4. i'll up it when i can. i have a one way exchange. but i'll do yours first.

Scratch
08-04-2008, 08:26 PM
bacon- the sketch you had a couple posts back that was simpler was better. Keep doing straight letters until you have a good understanding of everything. dont bother coloring them in, just do a million straight letters.

virus- i like your style you did for the joga piece. ill shit.

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/yaaaaaa.jpg

crits?

bizzump.

turkey train
08-04-2008, 11:19 PM
First piece, crits would be appreciated.
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/Photo-0121.jpg

IlikePie
08-04-2008, 11:27 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1217910150.jpg
First sketch in a while. Not even really happy with it, looks like everything else I've done the past few weeks...

Maso, straight lines man.
Yaek, I think it says Yaek at least, don't connect your letters like you're doing. Kill the arrows and all the extra crap, your letters aren't as strong as you think they are.
Lucifer Rising, your letters are alright, when you're outlining though, move your marker faster, so it doesn't bleed all over. And erase your pencil lines.

AnteUp
08-04-2008, 11:31 PM
jesus dude. i love your fuckin style

Scratch
08-04-2008, 11:38 PM
wait, what arrows? haha

i dont have a single arrow in there.

whatevs. i do like your s by the way.

maso- as always, start with straight letters before you try anything crazy. your o does look pretty sweet though, i'll give you that.

IlikePie
08-04-2008, 11:45 PM
Bottom of the K, and it's an A >_>
Fank yoo Auntie

thebaconator
08-05-2008, 12:02 AM
maso- i'm not sure where your from but in my city there is a meso up i used to see on the bus everyday....his tag looks alot like urs its actually the same just his has a big circle around the whole thing... fyi

Scratch
08-05-2008, 12:09 AM
oh shit that "arrow" wasnt even intentional haha.. damn i wish i had caught that before i inked it.

turkey train
08-05-2008, 12:18 AM
thanks for the crits, and i'm from Australia so i haven't seen that meso bloke haha

osnapizzel
08-05-2008, 12:24 AM
pie you should do sketch battles

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 12:26 AM
I'm awfully lazy, I get like 2 letters and and think I'll go back for it later, and never do.

thebaconator
08-05-2008, 12:29 AM
lol australians are cool :p

Worms
08-05-2008, 01:04 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers3.jpg

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers4.jpg

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers5.jpg

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers2.jpg

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers1.jpg

all half assed

PureSole
08-05-2008, 01:12 AM
nah, they're pretty good. really feeling the second one on the second page, and the third page
work on the handstyle though

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 01:27 AM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1217910150.jpg
First sketch in a while. Not even really happy with it, looks like everything else I've done the past few weeks...

Maso, straight lines man.
Yaek, I think it says Yaek at least, don't connect your letters like you're doing. Kill the arrows and all the extra crap, your letters aren't as strong as you think they are.
Lucifer Rising, your letters are alright, when you're outlining though, move your marker faster, so it doesn't bleed all over. And erase your pencil lines.

Bump, too much chit chat...
Wers, I'm feelin' those first 2 a lot.

C3ZR ONE
08-05-2008, 01:38 AM
Wers- Puresole hit it on the head. Dope shit. Work HEAVILY on the handy.

Pie- You were one of my favorites in toy forum, but you aren't progressing anymore. Take a break from this shithole if you need to and focus on what you came here for in the first place. You got the potential. Use it.:(

PureSole
08-05-2008, 01:54 AM
Pie- You were one of my favorites in toy forum, but you aren't progressing anymore. Take a break from this shithole if you need to and focus on what you came here for in the first place. You got the potential. Use it.:(

i think i need to do that as well, not just from BS, because i just got on here again, but i been so busy with everything else, that i need to focus on one of the few things that takes me away from the crap we call life

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 01:57 AM
Not worried about life, just my letters, poor guys :(

PureSole
08-05-2008, 02:00 AM
btw pie, i never really seen your stuff before. Id raep your stuff anyday
it nice

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 02:09 AM
Yeah man, I do graff from time to time, and I used to be a lot better :( I would post flicks of my old shit, but my Itouch can do everything but copy and paste...

Worms
08-05-2008, 03:32 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers6.jpg

trying to progress to a new weird kinda style dun like how it turned out

thebaconator
08-05-2008, 04:11 AM
wers- the last one the new wierd style, im digin it just i dont like how far the left side of the w sticks out, try making it go up like the e and r


http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r13/onedayafter3/DSC02845.jpg

Worms
08-05-2008, 05:14 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers7.jpg

NO SLEEP :::: PEELSE ON :::: NO SLEEP :::: PEELSE ON

sketch3
08-05-2008, 07:04 AM
i like ur ish.....



sex at ur place or mine?

things2
08-05-2008, 07:28 AM
tell me wat u think

South-Pole
08-05-2008, 09:10 AM
whoa,go simpler way simpler way way simpler..

-ShAmEE-
08-05-2008, 09:12 AM
bck. ello toys!
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/untitled-4.jpg

letsgobombin
08-05-2008, 10:18 AM
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/cf1dee28.jpg
s
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/f75d9a4b.jpg
shamee- looks like it could end up nice but cant see it too well , partly because its quite big partly because theirs alot of lines
things- check out the new to graff thread if you havent already
wers- that is really nice, keep going, only thing i would say is maybe have the right bar of the w connect straight to the middle bar rather than running along it then connecting
pie- i love that a but alot of your stuff does seem very similar, try branching out a lil and adopting a few new styles
wers again- pretty nice, too many sketches to crit all at once but i dont think the r on the first one on the first page matches the rest of it

rsakens
08-05-2008, 10:23 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture-8.jpg?t=1217950293
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture001-2.jpg?t=1217950312
some tile i am working on at the moment
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture002-1.jpg?t=1217950344

Mass Appeal
08-05-2008, 11:09 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers3.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers4.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers5.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers2.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers1.jpg


This stuff is so Swedish.

Furious-StyleZ
08-05-2008, 11:22 AM
eh just wanted to show sumtin i messed around wid..philppine flag.

http://i34.tinypic.com/289ivkx.jpg

Czar One
08-05-2008, 12:11 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers7.jpg

Dope man, I like your style, I think the R would look better with a little tweaking, but it's lookin good. Keep going.

On a bad note, here's a wack late night freestyle
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/sloppysketch-1.jpg

thebaconator
08-05-2008, 12:18 PM
bump for crits

http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r13/onedayafter3/DSC02845.jpg

osnapizzel
08-05-2008, 12:35 PM
go a little simpler and theres no need for the middle e bar and the a bar to have a horn at the end i think it would look better without it

letsgobombin
08-05-2008, 12:36 PM
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/cf1dee28.jpg
s
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/f75d9a4b.jpg

bumpsy
emma- sorry, take off all those random hooks on the end of the bars like on the top of the e and the a and the middle bars as well, also if youre doing this for someone, make the final design before you colour it because ive seen you post the same kinda thing a few times with different changes, you dont need to ink it until its completely done
czar- im not really feelin any of them my favourite is the blue one that looks like an n, if its a z i dont like it but it would make a nice n, it looks alot better if you tilt youre head to the right a bit
dzee- just get your simps down before you start inking stuff, you got alot of work to do
keane- you actually gonna put those stickers up? if you do make sure you put then somewhere out of reach, you dont want all that hard work going to waste. i like them but the only e i like out of the slaps is the second e on the first stick, nice exchanges as well

thebaconator
08-05-2008, 12:54 PM
bumpsy
emma- give crits to get crits


crit in original post

BombingSciences Bitch
08-05-2008, 12:58 PM
bump for crits

http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r13/onedayafter3/DSC02845.jpg

I give up on you kid. Three times I've told you to go simpler, back to the basics and you didn't listen. Oh well, if in a couple of months time you're wondering why everyone else on here's getting better and you're staying the same, it's your own fault.

letsgobombing - Don't really like that first style, but I'm definatley feeling that S.
Czar - That's pretty tight bro, just fix the loop of the R

hammer_time
08-05-2008, 12:59 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers6.jpg

trying to progress to a new weird kinda style dun like how it turned out

that bottom joint is super fly, no crits here

thirdworldarmyAP3
08-05-2008, 01:33 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/LegionOfDarkness/Picture004.jpg
I did this one about a year ago, then kinda stopped for a while. Now I started to write again, and I think that I'm doing a lot better than I did, I'll posted a few more up later when I get pictures of them. Criticism is welcome I know I'm not good I just want advice on how I could do better.

Worms
08-05-2008, 03:44 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers8.jpg

another shits sketch crits

3rd wrld army dont use a black outline n then ablack fill idiot u cant read it lol
baconator do simples like the letters on your keyboards once u can pimp those then start twistin shit
same with u lets go bombing simples

South-Pole
08-05-2008, 04:06 PM
wers-i see some mad potential there,maybe
try taking off the swirl on the bottom part of the E,get your s up a bit,and try changing that R leg.
letsgo-looks fine to me
third world-the only way to get better is by sketching,so if you stop and take back months after its useless,ok do keyboard letters,and use bars
baconator-read the new 2 graff thread

devil at sea level
08-05-2008, 04:17 PM
.....

mekosbc
08-05-2008, 04:21 PM
lookz sloppy

mekosbc
08-05-2008, 04:22 PM
i hit up tera in the book... srry for the bad flik quality my batteries died in my camera so i had to use my phone.... ill get a better flik of it up later...
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0010.jpg

session-one
08-05-2008, 04:33 PM
devil at sea level: try going a little simpler with out the exstensions and connect all your bars, dont seperate em with lines

tera: looks dope just wish the E was a little less covered up

(SoS)Viruz
08-05-2008, 04:36 PM
Meko: Dope. I'll have your's up later tonight Meko. That shit is Ill son makes my name look fresh and you did it in the BB I got you man.

thebaconator
08-05-2008, 04:55 PM
devil at sea level- dont run the lines of the 3-d into eachother like that they should come out of the corner and all the 3-d should be going in the same direction
wers - your W looks like an M and im not digin the R the one you had before was better

this is from 2 weeks ago ish
http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r13/onedayafter3/DSC02837.jpg

devil at sea level
08-05-2008, 04:58 PM
yea word meko i did this mad quick, its sloppy, just wantted to see crits on the idea bc someone said use "bars" when i posted something like this so i put them in i guess you just connect them though, not "on top of each other"...but how do i go simpler? i thought this was as simple as it gets without doing just basic keyboard letters, im not really seeing where the extensions are either, just the basic letters...

devil at sea level
08-05-2008, 05:04 PM
sorry for double post, butyea bacon i had trouble with that, but fixed it, good looks

BombingSciences Bitch
08-05-2008, 05:28 PM
Jeez, do we have to do everything for you?
Use some common sense kid!
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb75/la-la-luigi/page2.jpg
Courtesy of Sky5

Mass Appeal
08-05-2008, 05:30 PM
Lol yeah Revolt .. I remeber the days when us kids had to do shit ourselfs ... well ... i basically got abused * Nemz , Tricks , Alive * to death on how to start ... haha

session-one
08-05-2008, 05:33 PM
i rarely got advice
i just got my shit torn into and had to learn from that
ppl seem to be lightening up on toys
(myself included)

BombingSciences Bitch
08-05-2008, 05:48 PM
Lol yeah Revolt .. I remeber the days when us kids had to do shit ourselfs ... well ... i basically got abused * Nemz , Tricks , Alive * to death on how to start ... haha

Aha, those were the days.
People aren't lightening up, it's just of the people that used to help either aren't on here much anymore, or have given up.

Aha, Ras. I remember you just got abused for all the characs in your pieces. Out of the four of us younger generation of UK'ers, aren't you the only one that still does it for real? Shame really..

Anyway, sorry about the rant hah!

thebaconator
08-05-2008, 06:05 PM
meko - sickness, digin the color scheme

here i tried some simpler stuff...didnt ink it yet....crit pls what should i do to it before ink
http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r13/onedayafter3/DSC02846.jpg

BombingSciences Bitch
08-05-2008, 06:09 PM
Jeez, do we have to do everything for you?
Use some common sense kid!
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb75/la-la-luigi/page2.jpg
Courtesy of Sky5

Are you blind?
Did you not see this?
THIS is what you SHOULD be doing, instead of being a fucking douche and not listening to anyone. Jeez..
Don't ink it, it'd be a waste.

thebaconator
08-05-2008, 06:14 PM
i have done all that shit man i dont show you guys everything im not that much of an ignorant prick iv done all this shit you have told me to man

(SoS)Viruz
08-05-2008, 06:16 PM
Well do it again and again and again... Cause man that up their is week but I can see you doing the Bars... Just make the M simpalar. My Bad bacacon :P.

mekosbc
08-05-2008, 06:18 PM
you bs bitch cut him some slack it isnt that bad it could be better but it could be a lot worse...he is trying to use bars you can clearly see that... itz a toy forum give advice not lectures..... lmao toy forum beef gotta love it

Mass Appeal
08-05-2008, 06:24 PM
cut him some slack

No. If you pussy foot around people saying " this is dope " " nice colours " " sick style " all the fucking time noone gets nowhere ... " cutting slack " is the last of what people in here should be doing !

im gonna have a brand new style up soon keep peeled.

sketch3
08-05-2008, 06:24 PM
Lol yeah Revolt .. I remeber the days when us kids had to do shit ourselfs ... well ... i basically got abused * Nemz , Tricks , Alive * to death on how to start ... haha
i was allways abusive, i guese u cant remember cuss it never stopped

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 06:29 PM
It's just the norm, Sketch.


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1217974777.jpg
From last night, maybe a little bit of progression, maybe not.

thebaconator
08-05-2008, 06:30 PM
telling ppl tehre all good when there not isnt good no but just goin it sucks do it differently and leave it at that it doesnt fuckin help either......this forum is just an excuss for people who are more experienced to act like the fuckin shit goin on a personal power trip no one has even told me whats wrong with anything iv done all anyoine said is do it like this

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 06:33 PM
Your problem is that you're still doing graffiti. Shut up already.


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/c3d21ed6.jpg
Something old to make up for chat.

mekosbc
08-05-2008, 06:35 PM
there is a way to help some one and there is talkin shit on them thats what im tryin to get at by sayin cut him slack...i beleive in tuff critism but itz a toy forum advice over shit talkin.... i would understand if he posted it in the lookie lookie black book thread then yeah go ahead ripp him a new ass hole and talk shit but he didnt he posted it in the TOY FOURM.... im not trying to argue over a internet thread itz pointless.... but i get ur points on sayin no one will get ne where with pussyfootin round shit... oh well just let this shit go...BACON JUST GET UR LETTERS AND SHIT DOWN BEFOR YOU POST UP AGAIN...IGHT?

BombingSciences Bitch
08-05-2008, 06:43 PM
you bs bitch cut him some slack it isnt that bad it could be better but it could be a lot worse...he is trying to use bars you can clearly see that... itz a toy forum give advice not lectures..... lmao toy forum beef gotta love it

No, I'm trying to help him here, it's his fault if he choses not to listen. He's been doing bars for what, about a week or two?
Ima use Ras (mass appeal) as a prime example, get ready for a massive ego trip!

This, is Ras 2006? Bare in mind he was worse before this but I couldn't find a flick.
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb75/la-la-luigi/ras3.jpg


He used bars to build up his letters..
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb75/la-la-luigi/1.jpg

It's taken 2 years, and now he's at this stage..
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb75/la-la-luigi/ras2.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb75/la-la-luigi/ras1.jpg

And you're telling me you've done that stage?
You haven't until people here say you have..

I'm telling you this so you get better, take it or leave it. I don't care.

Pie - That's fire yo'

Peace.

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 06:44 PM
Or learn graffiti on your own, without the use of the internet....

Worms
08-05-2008, 06:47 PM
ahaha toys bitchin about using bars and wanten to pull of mad wildstyles without the basics i bet you half the people on this forum drop out after a couple months lol

acereborn
08-05-2008, 06:51 PM
3903 pages later, he understands.

sketch3
08-05-2008, 06:53 PM
Edit




























boobs
mamories
jugs
sweater meat
fondle funbags
tits
mellons
ti ol bittys

that is all

sketch3
08-05-2008, 06:54 PM
Basicly stop being a slag

Mass Appeal
08-05-2008, 07:41 PM
Working on evolving my current style..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/39d7fc29.jpg

Trying to prove wrong the people who said " I dont think your style can be imrpoved or evolved on at all now "

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 08:02 PM
That R is pretty fresh, the rest of it, ehh, not so much.

session-one
08-05-2008, 08:08 PM
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii172/Me4life26/DSC00887.jpg
crits plz

"Bi2aR"
08-05-2008, 08:42 PM
im not feeling it, don't like the add-ons or the p, and the bars that connects the two sides of the a are pretty wack, keep the bars roughly the same size(if not the same)

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 09:01 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1217988042.jpg

Give crits to get them.

session-one
08-05-2008, 09:09 PM
pg 3902
follow the thread before you make assumptions

Thrice
08-05-2008, 09:12 PM
Session-fix the Z
Pie-proportion it a bit better, other than that it's great. Add more letters

Fixed up the A a bit, crits?
http://i33.tinypic.com/wiof20.jpg

session-one
08-05-2008, 09:15 PM
im not really feelin those hooks on your horizontal bars
but in terms of simple pretty clean

acereborn
08-05-2008, 09:24 PM
Thrice, make the M the same width as the other letters.

seywhat
08-05-2008, 09:25 PM
Working on evolving my current style..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/39d7fc29.jpg



bumping for freshness. maybe try throwin some 3d on that shit, props though

squidone
08-05-2008, 09:36 PM
one ive been working on

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/3102/dsc01120tz5.jpg

Mass i think the new change is really cool but the left leg of the A bugs me just a little

emel
08-05-2008, 09:46 PM
im diggin your new shit mass i just think you should make it a TAD bit more defined-legible, whatever. but yeah definetly taken it further,haha i would like to exchange witcha if you down.pm meh brah

ilikepie- you are in no position to be saying those things like"the problem is your still doing grafiti" get over yourself please,,,,those small extensions on the bottom of your letters arent helping, and you are NOT using bars on the top right part of the R and B, not using bars on those parts and doing a small dot, x,upside down cross, or any other cliche jjoint is something you are not ready for, obviously,becuase it doesnt flow with your piece(in other words your not using them in an appropriate manner)

theres some crits for ya, i might have some sketches scanned later if im not to lazy

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 09:50 PM
^You take the internet very seriously, huh?

*btw, what B?

Bazer
08-05-2008, 09:54 PM
i like pie your style is bad ass dude, why dont you ever piece?

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 09:57 PM
Lazy, probation, broke, what money I do have is spent on drugs/alcohol. You being sarcastic? 'Cuz I can e thug all night long baby!

Czar One
08-05-2008, 09:58 PM
He's usually too busy getting high or out with the ladies,
haha, but Pie, it's about time to see some more painted stuff from you.
Hook a twin up homie.

AnteUp
08-05-2008, 09:58 PM
emel- i'll show you the variation in pie's bars...
both legs in the r
both legs in the a
the bar across the a
the bar atop the a

Slushi
08-05-2008, 10:01 PM
im diggin your new shit mass i just think you should make it a TAD bit more defined-legible, whatever. but yeah definetly taken it further,haha i would like to exchange witcha if you down.pm meh brah

ilikepie- you are in no position to be saying those things like"the problem is your still doing grafiti" get over yourself please,,,,those small extensions on the bottom of your letters arent helping, and you are NOT using bars on the top right part of the R and B, not using bars on those parts and doing a small dot, x,upside down cross, or any other cliche jjoint is something you are not ready for, obviously,becuase it doesnt flow with your piece(in other words your not using them in an appropriate manner)

theres some crits for ya, i might have some sketches scanned later if im not to lazy
Pie's a little bit past using bars, you silly goose.

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 10:03 PM
emel- i'll show you the variation in pie's bars...
both legs in the r
both legs in the a
the bar across the a
the bar atop the a

Damn, you actually nailed them all.

DRiPTooL
08-05-2008, 10:20 PM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7348.jpg
sorry if my posts become annoying *EDIT* Crtis??

AnteUp
08-05-2008, 10:26 PM
Damn, you actually nailed them all.
hahaha. i'm in your head :p

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 10:28 PM
Nah, just ridin' it ;)

Czar One
08-05-2008, 10:35 PM
Watch out, Pie has herpes.

*Edit*
flicks for talk
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/czarsketch.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/100_0546.jpg

hal.cyon
08-05-2008, 10:44 PM
work. pens. bullshit. second one i was just trying something new.

http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/8807/001bg9.jpg
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/4/003kc3.jpg

czar - thats a kool little wispy style. sawright man.
villin- do that like 4000 more times. then switch it up.
squid - i don't like that at all.
ahem - your m's too wide, other than that its kosher.
pie - always fresh.

IlikePie
08-05-2008, 10:51 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1217988042.jpg

Give crits to get them.


It's just the norm, Sketch.


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1217974777.jpg
From last night, maybe a little bit of progression, maybe not.


Your problem is that you're still doing graffiti. Shut up already.


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/c3d21ed6.jpg
Something old to make up for chat.


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1217910150.jpg
First sketch in a while. Not even really happy with it, looks like everything else I've done the past few weeks...



Last few flicks I've posted, all of it gets drowned out.

Worms
08-05-2008, 11:30 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers9.jpg

BaddaBING
08-05-2008, 11:37 PM
villlin - keep them letters the same height.
czar - i like your lettering man...except for the extension on the bottom of the a, looks silly to me...but good work.
halcyon. looks good too, don't really have any constructive input..
ilikepie - i don't really like that style, but i can appreciate it for what it is and i can see you have skill.
worms it looks cool but i can't read it...w,n...?

heres a sketch i did yesterday...curves are fucking hard...
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w18/ralphwader/case.jpg


and i wasn't gonna put this one up but fuckit....i know i fucked up the top of the e and the shadowing on the bottom bar. oops!http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w18/ralphwader/piss.jpg

IlikePie
08-06-2008, 12:00 AM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1217998295.jpg
Not really black book, more like, desk work, but it's been there for a while, and yeah, might as well post it, since I got nothing better to do.

Halcyon, not really feeling the E's but the rest of it is pretty good.
Czar, you're my ***** :P Good work, just work on your R's
Worms, much better than yesterday, good work, nice progression in such a short period of time.
BaddaBing, don't connect your letters like that.

mekosbc
08-06-2008, 12:45 AM
yo worms i lovin the style... hit me up wit a pm if you wanna do an exchange

osnapizzel
08-06-2008, 01:25 AM
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/5339/picture313ct5.jpg

mekosbc
08-06-2008, 01:32 AM
and oh snap you got respect for that one love the fill you got a old skool feel to ur letterz like me and lime

RINS
08-06-2008, 04:29 AM
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/2877/sketch1ek4.jpg

then colored... except I only had really shitty markers.
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/696/sketch1colorut8.jpg

:rolleyes:

respERATION
08-06-2008, 05:18 AM
czar-do what i told you with the R
pie-your stufffffff is almost as sexy as you :P

ergh.....been working on twisting my style a bit....flick when i cba

respERATION
08-06-2008, 06:09 AM
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0020-3.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0019-1.jpg

Worms
08-06-2008, 06:58 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers11.jpg
i actually coloured one in for once

IlikePie
08-06-2008, 07:01 AM
No crits???? :(

Worms
08-06-2008, 07:04 AM
i dun want critz so i dun need to give em i just wana show lol :D

RINS
08-06-2008, 07:07 AM
@ snap, pie & worms - tight.

http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/2636/onetv8.jpg

IlikePie
08-06-2008, 07:11 AM
i dun want critz so i dun need to give em i just wana show lol :D

Neither do I, I just enjoy the pole jockin' :)

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-06-2008, 07:53 AM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/01-1.jpg

respERATION
08-06-2008, 08:00 AM
czar-do what i told you with the R
pie-your stufffffff is almost as sexy as you :P

ergh.....been working on twisting my style a bit....flick when i cba
theres a crit pie :)....well a comment at least


http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0020-3.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0019-1.jpg
bbbuummmpppp

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers11.jpg
i actually coloured one in for once
i think you should erase the line seperating the shapes cause ,i know you can tell what letters they are.....but it kinda looses some effect

NoCanControl
08-06-2008, 08:20 AM
worms, i can barely decifier any letters
teezer, your letters are tight, your shoes are tighter.
close put your your letters closer together and work on your flow.
pie, do more then two lettors
czar, its pretty alright. find better color skemes.

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture080.jpg

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture081.jpg

the k on the kans is fucked. sorry...

:/

crits besides that?

osnapizzel
08-06-2008, 11:52 AM
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/5339/picture313ct5.jpg

bumpin on them critts

respERATION
08-06-2008, 12:00 PM
try and make the letters less sharp at the corners....and your letters are really rigid...try and make them more flowing...
tweaed a few things....crits??
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0002-20.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/crim0001-26.jpg

JETPACK!!
08-06-2008, 01:18 PM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/01-1.jpg

your simples are tight man, i wanna see some paint

kans, thats ill, youve gotten so much better since that paint battle man

GaZm13
08-06-2008, 01:30 PM
SNAP looks good to me.
Resp- can't tell what it says. Blah!

respERATION
08-06-2008, 01:36 PM
top one says resp bottom one says czar

South-Pole
08-06-2008, 01:46 PM
resp-looks aight
snap-looks aight
tezer-looks tight

exchange with sbombs

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/sb.jpg

done this a few weeks ago-

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/yarrharrr.jpg

devil at sea level
08-06-2008, 02:38 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e338/spikes10392/throw001.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e338/spikes10392/throw002.jpg

HëRbN
08-06-2008, 03:31 PM
devil your lines look all wibbly wobbly likeyour trying to hard. you have a decent idea what what you need to go for but it looks like you cant hold your hand still or that you draw very slowly

mekosbc
08-06-2008, 04:43 PM
heres a sketch i did for sarto sorry for the shitty flick quality my camera is dead so i had to use my phone....
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0014K.jpg

session-one
08-06-2008, 04:52 PM
the karak is decent
but the leters could use some work
ditch those exstensions on the horizontal bar on the T and make the T more obvious
it looks like a backwards y

mekosbc
08-06-2008, 04:54 PM
i agree wit you... t'z own me i cant do a t to save my D*** lol

kramxr
08-06-2008, 05:09 PM
hey so i made this one for a friend
comments please but no haters. Positive vibes, yo!
and crayola pencil crayons are win ahaha

http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/9527/p00010ci8.jpg
By mrawck (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/mrawck), shot with RUMOUR (http://profile.imageshack.us/camerabuy.php?model=RUMOUR&make=LG+Electronics) at 2008-08-05

kofferbak
08-06-2008, 05:20 PM
what does it say? cjonia?

LUCIFER_RISING
08-06-2008, 06:00 PM
Working on evolving my current style..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/39d7fc29.jpg

Trying to prove wrong the people who said " I dont think your style can be imrpoved or evolved on at all now "

sounds like ur talking about pokemon

kramxr
08-06-2008, 06:29 PM
it's supposed to say gloria
but i beginnered it up on the G pretty hard
and the L

South-Pole
08-06-2008, 06:53 PM
kamxr click here vv
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

mass-don't what to say maybe you forced yourself too much?looks dope lol

Bon3s
08-06-2008, 07:25 PM
my favorite show
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/1324/blackbooks002cc3.jpg
some other small bullshit im working on.
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/3261/blackbooks003gb1.jpg
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/4192/blackbooks004mt6.jpg
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/1944/blackbooks005xl6.jpg
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/9753/blackbooks006ad7.jpg
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/3989/blackbooks010ka2.jpg
JUST A CLIP OF SOME SHIT IM STILL WORKIN ON AS WELL.
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/3103/blackbooks008ui2.jpg
JUST A HOLLOW. crits are welcome. bottom shit is the most recent. top burners and whatnot are just old shit on my computer.

I GOT CLOUT
08-06-2008, 10:21 PM
Colored.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16195.jpg

Bones - It looks like you have a good grasp on drawing and coloring. I just think you need to work some more on your letters.

SweetRevenge
08-06-2008, 10:30 PM
pretty illl

DRiPTooL
08-06-2008, 10:32 PM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7349.jpg
yea twisting my letters first try

DRiPTooL
08-06-2008, 10:48 PM
Damn easer that shit is dope dood...

fOrSaQeN
08-06-2008, 11:16 PM
http://a147.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/79/l_a0814d028e9d9afe38165af171e9ee72.jpg




THIS IS NOT MY CHARACTER


i just re-created a poster i seen.... heres the original poster..

http://i35.tinypic.com/21b2hoj.jpg

just tryin to up my drawing/coloring-matching skills

squidone
08-06-2008, 11:17 PM
bump from a few pages back

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/3102/dsc01120tz5.jpg

got bored today and did this one

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5585/dsc01124ig8.jpg

oh snap i like how youve started writing the OH smaller than the rest keep it up
resperation i really like your style i just wish it was a little cleaner so i could see it better
meko i dont know why but im just not feeling it but that may just be me
kram i think you should check out the new to graff thread and focus on simples
easer i love your simples i really want to see you try some newer stuff though

DRiPTooL
08-06-2008, 11:21 PM
Sane- im digging the sencond one it looks sweet

fromthegrave
08-06-2008, 11:27 PM
YOOO
Easer- like ur stuff .. down for an exchange? post it in this thread tomorrow?

*well really today but wut ever...

DRiPTooL
08-06-2008, 11:43 PM
ok new name Vile
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7351.jpg

fonone
08-07-2008, 12:05 AM
bump from a few pages back

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/3102/dsc01120tz5.jpg

got bored today and did this one

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5585/dsc01124ig8.jpg

oh snap i like how youve started writing the OH smaller than the rest keep it up
resperation i really like your style i just wish it was a little cleaner so i could see it better
meko i dont know why but im just not feeling it but that may just be me
kram i think you should check out the new to graff thread and focus on simples
easer i love your simples i really want to see you try some newer stuff though

MAN I THOUGHT YOU FELL OFF A BRIDGE

, props easer..that simple is so hot.

squidone
08-07-2008, 12:12 AM
yeah i know the name is taken but its the name that flows easily for me

glyce
08-07-2008, 12:12 AM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank021.jpg

sane- i think you should have the a and the n over lapping on that top one but the bottom one looks dope

twezed
08-07-2008, 01:54 AM
yeah i know the name is taken but its the name that flows easily for me

yeah its taken by a guy around my area he's pretty sick unless its taken by someone else

your stuff nice though also