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cans905
08-07-2008, 07:38 AM
soank- good flow just make the bars on the s a bit thicker to match the rest

k, so i wanted to take a break from simples cuz that all ive really been doing so this is wut i came up with
im fairly happy with it since its my first try with this style but i know there could be improvements so.... crits plz

NoCanControl
08-07-2008, 10:07 AM
worms, i can barely decifier any letters
teezer, your letters are tight, your shoes are tighter.
close put your your letters closer together and work on your flow.
pie, do more then two lettors
czar, its pretty alright. find better color skemes.

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture080.jpg

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture081.jpg

the k on the kans is fucked. sorry...

:/

crits besides that?

bottum bumps faggots, and for crits also.

squidone
08-07-2008, 10:11 AM
yeah i know all about him i guess ill just have to keep looking for another one that fits

emel
08-07-2008, 10:34 AM
no can control-i can barely decipher any of your letters

NoCanControl
08-07-2008, 10:53 AM
no can control-i can barely decipher any of your letters

hmmm.. really? not even the bottom one?

squidone
08-07-2008, 11:19 AM
i dont know why he cant its pretty obvious to me
i think your second one has a little to much un-used space

emel
08-07-2008, 11:34 AM
lol, in other words, your letter structure sucks, define them more before trying to do any sort of style on your own

numberonestunna
08-07-2008, 12:06 PM
the last two pages of my book
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/oshnap.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/pipes.jpg
says pyre within the pipes..
crits please...

forsaqen - its a good resemblance. her boobs are funky tho..
squidone - i like the teeth in the S. i dont know whats in the N..
driptool - try makin the letters more even..
glyce - tight piece but the S doesnt really fit in with the other letters.

squidone
08-07-2008, 12:14 PM
the thing in the N was supposed to be an eye came out kinda shitty though

(SoS)Viruz
08-07-2008, 12:16 PM
... Man to tell the truth Pyre the Frist one at the top is way better than the Pie one. Im really not feelin the pie on bro. Looks like you did to much. BUT! I like the Concept.

foureyes
08-07-2008, 12:21 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d48/CRX91w/105_1245.jpg

DRiPTooL
08-07-2008, 12:56 PM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii33/blaze9909/DSCF7352.jpg
The V might look funky, The I has a venus fly trap on it(my drawing skills aint all that guud)didnt kno what to do with tyhe E or L but CRITS??

foureyes
08-07-2008, 01:02 PM
^ spend more time on it add 3D's and other stuff and maybe have the fly trap growing on top and not wrappping around it.

DRiPTooL
08-07-2008, 01:06 PM
ok, so try 3d first?

foureyes
08-07-2008, 01:10 PM
make the V look like the rest of the letters then do the 3D but make sure it all goes the same way.
i used to have troube with that lol.

DRiPTooL
08-07-2008, 01:11 PM
lol ok gotcha so when i get down 3d twist it?

(SoS)Viruz
08-07-2008, 01:13 PM
NAw Drip Once you get the 3d down Keep doing it to it look nice and Clean, then after that, You can begin to add lil exstra Bars to your letters. Just take your time man.

DRiPTooL
08-07-2008, 01:16 PM
ok i was just getting bored drawing bars you know lol..ok ill get one down and post it up later got football peace

Mass Appeal
08-07-2008, 01:27 PM
That ZOMBIE is so perfect.

I<3Trendz
08-07-2008, 02:22 PM
make the V look like the rest of the letters then do the 3D but make sure it all goes the same way.
i used to have troube with that lol.

get letters down before you move to 3d

NoCanControl
08-07-2008, 02:24 PM
i dont know why he cant its pretty obvious to me
i think your second one has a little to much un-used space


lol, in other words, your letter structure sucks, define them more before trying to do any sort of style on your own

huh?!?!?

it feels to me that my letters have enough structure, but i could see what your saying, if you were talking about the k. but the a/t/s are all good to me in my eyes, i usually take crits very well, but this doesn't seem right... idk. but you might be right tho.

DRiPTooL
08-07-2008, 02:26 PM
get letters down before you move to 3d

I have my letter structure down i was testing out my letter twisting and what not, but i made the V crazy and the rest of the letters were different...I have my letters down just waitng to move on to 3d now..:D:D

Worms
08-07-2008, 02:30 PM
came across some good luck today while sketching this on the bus some guy came up to me and says he owns a place where street kids can hang out and get some food and he wants me to paint this on his building hes offered me 150 bucks to do it
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers13.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers12.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers14.jpg
sry for the shit everythings rough

drip no dont have ur letters down at all all u have a sticks stuck together u still gota learn the basic leters cus ur basic letters there look shit still and have no flow or feeling yet keep simples
chronic meh im not really feelin it i think the colours r makin up for the lack of letter structure
zombies i like it but fix ur tail on the z and ur i is a lil hidden and ur e could use work

Mass Appeal
08-07-2008, 03:11 PM
I have my letter structure down i was testing out I have my letters down

No , No you dont.

respERATION
08-07-2008, 03:39 PM
LOL^^^^
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/exchanges.jpg
exchange with seyar:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/exchanges1.jpg

rsakens
08-07-2008, 03:42 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture001-3.jpg?t=1218141725
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture-9.jpg?t=1218141743

rsakens
08-07-2008, 03:49 PM
bumpsy
emma- sorry, take off all those random hooks on the end of the bars like on the top of the e and the a and the middle bars as well, also if youre doing this for someone, make the final design before you colour it because ive seen you post the same kinda thing a few times with different changes, you dont need to ink it until its completely done
czar- im not really feelin any of them my favourite is the blue one that looks like an n, if its a z i dont like it but it would make a nice n, it looks alot better if you tilt youre head to the right a bit
dzee- just get your simps down before you start inking stuff, you got alot of work to do
keane- you actually gonna put those stickers up? if you do make sure you put then somewhere out of reach, you dont want all that hard work going to waste. i like them but the only e i like out of the slaps is the second e on the first stick, nice exchanges as well

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture-8.jpg?t=1217950293
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture001-2.jpg?t=1217950312
some tile i am working on at the moment
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture002-1.jpg?t=1217950344
no worrys man does arent stickers its printed =]
bump

Stussy
08-07-2008, 04:33 PM
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9135/photo527tg5.jpg
rsakens- style seems to be coming along
RESP- looks good, keep workin on your letter structure

Rozwell
08-07-2008, 05:33 PM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/pruplepeicesquares.jpg

critz


rsaken- love your shit. your fills are nice and your letters looks sweet, a couple things id change(justa couple letters here and there i think ned to be tweaked) but over all i dig


rays/stussy- work on structure and flow.. the top of the R is the ugliest part i think the A and Y look ok tho. and ur 3-d is almost perfect, i cant see a problem. re-do it and try a fill


-R

South-Pole
08-07-2008, 06:06 PM
rozwell-not feeling it man,do keyboard letters
stussy-seems ok,make the letters the same size,change the R

ColdBlooded
08-07-2008, 08:58 PM
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/ezem.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/sunnn.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/xamin.jpg

Just messing around with more wild sketches on the side...

http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/wtf.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/gdgdf.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/werd.jpg

sky_one
08-07-2008, 09:26 PM
coldblooded-nice style like taht ideia wih the yelow paint and loved tha last one
rozweel-dope
stussy-dont like taht r and make that letters the same size
som shit what do you people think???
http://spa.fotologs.net/photo/58/55/61/made_one13/1218155364490_f.jpg

cans905
08-07-2008, 10:02 PM
k, so i wanted to take a break from simples cuz that all ive really been doing so this is wut i came up with
im fairly happy with it since its my first try with this style but i know there could be improvements so.... crits plz


rayz- the y is iight, the a is ok just lose extension on the back of it, but work on r and z a lot
rozwell- i think it looks good... i ddunno why that guy sid to go to keyboard letters

I Hold The Throne
08-07-2008, 10:48 PM
Hey my can someone help do my friends name Rate?

The Chronic
08-07-2008, 10:49 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/sc3wpj.jpg

numberonestunna
08-07-2008, 10:55 PM
stussy - the Y and Z dont look good to me. idk if they dont match the other letters or because they're too big..
rozwell - keep all the letters on the same angle. towards the end they start to get crazy tilted.
exam - really like the 4th piece. just make the X bigger..
skyone - seperate the M and A more. the E is a bit skinny also. love the colors!

mosezone
08-08-2008, 12:16 AM
rayz-on the right track, maybe mess with the R and Z though
rozwell-get your bars a little more solid, like they're really thin in some areas
exam-the real wildstyle-type one is kinda weird, but i'm reallllllly digging the simples
skyone-maybe separate your letters a little more
zen-first, definately lose the arrows

sketch i did a little bit ago, turned out so fucking wack. crits, i guess?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02011.jpg

EDIT: i know the fill's weak, i was just feeling super lazy

Rozwell
08-08-2008, 12:23 AM
^^fill is kinda weak...try half n half first then just highlight sections of the letter or something

as far as letter structure...i dunno just fuck around with it i guess

my suggestions

(oh and work on the 3d a bit)

-R

IlikePie
08-08-2008, 02:26 AM
The M is your only strong letter moes...

Bazer
08-08-2008, 02:38 AM
adk from cali to texas.
http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c374/GRABZ/moeski.jpg

IlikePie
08-08-2008, 02:59 AM
Homeboy flies with fishies!

Worms
08-08-2008, 03:02 AM
heres a little somn somn to take yall back to the oldschool days
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers15.jpg

Rozwell
08-08-2008, 03:05 AM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/GetAttachment.jpg

dig the ol' school

-r

rsakens
08-08-2008, 08:16 AM
nice i am feeling the E & M
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/wtf.jpg

moe is looking fresh not felling the S the bottom part make it look weird

00-made-00
08-08-2008, 11:27 AM
roz- keep at it, it will sort it self out.
wers- looks good. keep it coming.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimrgrime3.jpg
this was i sketch but i coloured it in photoshop,i have the proper sketch around here somewere. crits please homeboys

Mass Appeal
08-08-2008, 01:36 PM
AIMR ... Hhahahahahahahahahhahahaha you gay boyyyyyyy (k) (k) (k)
Wers ... youv got so much potential...concentrate on letters and not characters..

JETPACK!!
08-08-2008, 01:54 PM
found this at work, forgot about it. doubt ill finish it.


http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/2875/rasek50ip2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Attican
08-08-2008, 02:00 PM
You really should finish that, cause it's sick as shit.

I wanna see what you do with the K.

JETPACK!!
08-08-2008, 02:05 PM
found this at work, forgot about it. doubt ill finish it.


http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/2875/rasek50ip2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i knew that was gonna be the last post.. thanks attican, i may once the buzz sets in

Spraycan Stories
08-08-2008, 02:16 PM
I'm feeling that unfinished sketch rasek.

Rozwell
08-08-2008, 02:30 PM
rasek, im digging it bro
your style has always been appealing to me

IlikePie
08-08-2008, 03:19 PM
Not really feeling it Rasek. Don't try and push it too hard man.

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1218225936.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1218225941.jpg

For that Emel cat, saying that I don't use bars
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1218226480.jpg
And just a little doodle I did, didn't feel like doing my name after the R...

Bon3s
08-08-2008, 03:24 PM
my favorite show
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/1324/blackbooks002cc3.jpg
some other small bullshit im working on.
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/3261/blackbooks003gb1.jpg
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/4192/blackbooks004mt6.jpg
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/1944/blackbooks005xl6.jpg
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/9753/blackbooks006ad7.jpg
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/3989/blackbooks010ka2.jpg
just a clip of some shit im still workin on as well.
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/3103/blackbooks008ui2.jpg
just a hollow. Crits are welcome. Bottom shit is the most recent. Top burners and whatnot are just old shit on my computer.


bumpity bumpt

crits anybody??

Easer: That simple is dope man. Colors are hott together man.

Jetpack: That shit is fire. Try putting the extension on the bottom of the r, and incorporate it onto that k's left back leg at the bottom. Shit would set off that k or add some flair to it man.

Wers: That e is so hot, but i feel like the s needs to be spaced out.

Mose: It looks like its got some real potential with that m, but the s isnt the same width the whole way down, and it kinda makes it stick out right next to that e.

Worms
08-08-2008, 03:58 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers16.jpg
gettn bored of these new york oldschool styles + my characs r shit and i realize i made my s to small i fixed it

heir i think ur tryin or u tryed to progress to fast so ur letters rnt that great
pie i like ur style im biting it :D
and rasek how about instead of tryna add shit to the end of ur letters u just vary the placement and size of the bars

WoeInfinite
08-08-2008, 04:07 PM
stinkmeaner made my day

The Chronic
08-08-2008, 04:35 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/2wfoge9.jpg
Critzzz...

La Coka Nostra
08-08-2008, 05:02 PM
don't do drop shadow on your character.

The Chronic
08-08-2008, 05:16 PM
yeah i dont kno y i did it, in the moment shit

Bon3s
08-08-2008, 05:55 PM
still looks fire chronic. hahaha. sorry sou7nds funny sayin fire chronic. sounds like sum of the kids round here tryin to name weed lololol. hot karak though.

IlikePie
08-08-2008, 06:09 PM
No, it looks like shit, why would you encourage that?

JETPACK!!
08-08-2008, 06:34 PM
because he dosent know better and colors trick dumb people into thinking something is better than it actually is

The Chronic
08-08-2008, 06:38 PM
lol dey still hatin, move on son

FABLE IR CRU
08-08-2008, 07:07 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/2wfoge9.jpg
Critzzz...

use bars man 4 real cuz this shit is wack.Go to the new to graff page & study it

Stussy
08-08-2008, 07:15 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/2vd43d3.jpg

session-one
08-08-2008, 07:48 PM
go back to bars
state up keyboard letter
kill those whack exstensions
and dont try any fills until you god an at least somewhat solid style down
get ur bars down and then add extra crap...maybe...

La Coka Nostra
08-08-2008, 07:54 PM
lol dey still hatin, move on son



lol. i hope you get beat up and robbed.
i stays hatin.

FABLE IR CRU
08-08-2008, 08:57 PM
lol. i hope you get beat up and robbed.
i stays hatin.

Hahaha..sigged

JETPACK!!
08-08-2008, 09:00 PM
:(

we gotta clarify that were siggin someone?

numberonestunna
08-08-2008, 09:27 PM
IlikePie - cant really read it. not diggin the style either..
Bon3s - i like the character a lot. the 4th piece is nice. like how you went through the color spectrum..
worms - forget the characters and handstyles. piecing is your strength. keep em comin!
chronic - pick a new name. work on the style. a lot.
stussy - the letters dont really have the same style. make them 'match' eachother.

IlikePie
08-08-2008, 11:58 PM
Not really feeling it Rasek. Don't try and push it too hard man.

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1218225936.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1218225941.jpg

For that Emel cat, saying that I don't use bars
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1218226480.jpg
And just a little doodle I did, didn't feel like doing my name after the R...

I'm an attention whore.

How can you not read any of it? I think it's pretty simple....

AnteUp
08-09-2008, 12:55 AM
haters haters pie. let em hate.
it must be hard to develop that style though :(

showing terrible coloring. shakey hand...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Entertainment.jpg

my woe.
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0012-1.jpg

P-love
08-09-2008, 01:08 AM
ilikepie- your style is sick, but i havent seen you change it up at all in the last like 2 months. the only thing ive seen change in your sketches are the color schemes. same with rasek, except he's starting to add some extensions, but how come you guys dont mess around with new styles or whatever?

DonaldFour
08-09-2008, 05:06 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture091.jpg

Crits?

klipa
08-09-2008, 06:09 AM
its been a very long time.

http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/5817/img2075jh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/5817/img2075jh0.99e5932a1f.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=378&i=img2075jh0.jpg)

IlikePie
08-09-2008, 08:31 AM
ilikepie- your style is sick, but i havent seen you change it up at all in the last like 2 months. the only thing ive seen change in your sketches are the color schemes. same with rasek, except he's starting to add some extensions, but how come you guys dont mess around with new styles or whatever?

Its a tough style to keep moving in a constant motion. But in the last while it has definitely progressed, you can trust me there.

sex without condoms
08-09-2008, 10:19 AM
klipa's back!

The Chronic
08-09-2008, 10:59 AM
lol. i hope you get beat up and robbed.
i stays hatin.

u suck homie stop freestylin bout shit u dont kno, only one white rapper n thats eminem- straight from tha D

The Chronic
08-09-2008, 11:02 AM
http://i34.tinypic.com/104mbma.jpg
Crit

numberonestunna
08-09-2008, 11:11 AM
the theme is cool but the letters need work..

I GOT CLOUT
08-09-2008, 12:25 PM
u suck homie stop freestylin bout shit u dont kno, only one white rapper n thats eminem- straight from tha D

Eminem is the ONLY white rapper? Man...who knew?

Chronic - Stop bumping that. New to graff thread. The R is the letter that needs the most work.
Pie - I see the progression, the new one is pretty ill.
Donald - Not the best I've seen from you.
Klipa - Thats definately clean.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16195.jpg

freshair
08-09-2008, 12:32 PM
that clippa dude's shit is ugly...not ugly but doesnt use the style right......

i like pie's shit....

emel
08-09-2008, 12:58 PM
Lol.

Mass Appeal
08-09-2008, 02:36 PM
Chronic ... ahah what the fuck ... drop the paint pens ... grab the pencil .. and swipe the rubber ... reach for the 100 pages of lined paper ...proceed to sketch 200 simples on each side of the lined paper you so reached for.



ILIKPIE...no offence but your stuff .. its like .. ALL the same .. its decent yeah .. but its so repetive ... i know im not one fo saying that because recently my stuff has been pretty repetive .. but i switched it up .. why dont you ?

freshair
08-09-2008, 03:11 PM
just a thought.

once u have ur style down.
u keep to that style and dont change. y? because its UR style.
and if u keep switchin ur style up its cuz u havent found urs yet.


with something to think about.this is freshair sayin.make it a great day or not. the choice is urs.

ahh classic school phrase every morning^

fromthegrave
08-09-2008, 03:20 PM
ante- like'n that
Donald- like that style, think u shoulda done a different fill.
chronic- work on simples.

Outlines and other shit i'v done recently.
working on the simple stuff, but that gets boring so i like to throw a few other styles and complete bullshit in to the mix.

want crits...tear my shit up kids.
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture075.jpg
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture079.jpg
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture083.jpg

CakeWalk99
08-09-2008, 03:48 PM
Clout: Lookin good man. Great colors.

Grave: I like em all!.......that yellow outline looks good!

I have been working alot lately so I havent had much time to draw. I will be posting some new stuff tonight if I am home/have time.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-09-2008, 03:49 PM
u suck homie stop freestylin bout shit u dont kno, only one white rapper n thats eminem- straight from tha D
your a fuckin' retard.;)

The Chronic
08-09-2008, 05:06 PM
Eminem is the greatest rapper regardless of being white and he is the only "real" white rapper with talent.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-09-2008, 05:12 PM
hahah stfu.

Mass Appeal
08-09-2008, 05:13 PM
Chronic ... shut up you bore.

I have the illest sketch ever coming up ... well i think its one of the bestest letter wise iv done ... theyre pretty wierd whacky and different ... i doubt anyone on here will like them with the exception of the people who are into such forms.

fromthegrave
08-09-2008, 05:18 PM
Mass- i wanna see what u got instore.

oh and as for eminem, he's good.. but u have no idea what ur talking about. He's the best White rapper that the media follows..... underground is where its at, unedited beats. no rules to follow, only what they want to say.

Croat
08-09-2008, 05:32 PM
want crits...;)
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/1781/ez4tc8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/1781/ez4tc8.f5adb2e3e0.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=297&i=ez4tc8.jpg)
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8978/ez435xp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8978/ez435xp8.41604ac184.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=165&i=ez435xp8.jpg)
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/2228/ez4sketchrc8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/2228/ez4sketchrc8.fc43ef0851.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=522&i=ez4sketchrc8.jpg)
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/6408/croatus6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/6408/croatus6.c65d6b6f05.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=165&i=croatus6.jpg)

Spark391
08-09-2008, 05:54 PM
want crits...;)

Give crits to get them..
Check new to graff thread, use bars and do simpleletters.

DonaldFour
08-09-2008, 06:08 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture091.jpg

Crits?
Bump for crits.. Easer that last simple you posted is hella clean. diggin it.

maddox
08-09-2008, 06:19 PM
negor=i like the n ... the g seems to be too coverd by the 'e' and the left bar on the 'r' semms to be too big but overall decent sketch

ermm here some of my stuff tell me wat ya think .. were do i need to improve tha kinda shit
they both read tank.....
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/236/picture027er2.jpg

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4553/picture030zb2.jpg

Mass Appeal
08-09-2008, 06:32 PM
Here it is ..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ea8ed6da.jpg

BAKER.

HRbN
08-09-2008, 06:38 PM
Eminem is the greatest rapper regardless of being white and he is the only "real" white rapper with talent.

This is the MOST ridiculous comment i have ever heard

Croat
08-09-2008, 06:46 PM
Give crits to get them..
Check new to graff thread, use bars and do simpleletters.
Thanks. i'v checked it out... and i will do simpleletter:)

HRbN
08-09-2008, 06:48 PM
^I like this guy already. No fuck you man i know my shit attitude just "ok done"

SAID
08-09-2008, 06:52 PM
mass appeal, looking good man.
i woulda done a k though, would of pulled the peice together imo. Feeling that ALLOT more than your other ish, everythings together, before everything seemed really spaced out and on it's own. Likin' where your going !

Mass Appeal
08-09-2008, 06:54 PM
thanks for the crit .. far to much bullshit in this thread.

SAID
08-09-2008, 06:56 PM
people dont see how hard it is to develop a style like yours.
i know, i've tried.
O_o

maddox
08-09-2008, 07:07 PM
mass- dope sketch the one thing on it is i think u might ov extend the r abit to far i dunno tho buh tis really gd

Mass Appeal
08-09-2008, 07:11 PM
people dont see how hard it is to develop a style like yours.
i know, i've tried.
O_o

Ahaha awwwww thats means tons mate
Maddox...finally someone on here with a decent taste in football .. good lad

HIS ARMBAND PROVED HE WAS A RED TORRES TORRES , YOULL NEVER WALK ALONE IT SAID TORRES TORRES , WE BOUGHT THE LAD FROM SUNNY SPAIN HE GETS THE BALL HE SCORES AGAIN FERNANDO TORRES LIVERPOOLS NUMBER 9

I rember getting banned once for talking about football in here..
Sorry mods hehehehe

CanThink
08-09-2008, 07:18 PM
baker too fresh


very fast baked sketch
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=3056&stc=1&d=1218327529


z is wack help?


...whole thing is wack

maddox
08-09-2008, 07:18 PM
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/6306/picturejc5.jpg
lol mass i got my season ticket a couple of days ago u live in or near to liverpool ???

yeno wat we shud do.. make a footy thread in generall disscusion to talk about the up and coming season ???

Rozwell
08-09-2008, 07:22 PM
tank-love it. redo it with some colors n shit

can- honestly i think you should start over from scratch

hes my shit
critz would be nice

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/tryn.jpg

CUBANO
08-09-2008, 07:28 PM
Eminem is the greatest rapper regardless of being white and he is the only "real" white rapper with talent.

I agree....100%....

white rappers who aint got shit on Em
Paul Wall
gay ass Vanilla Ice
old Kid Rock
Lil Wyte

Once'
08-09-2008, 08:13 PM
check out aesop rock and some more underground white rappers b4 u call him out as the best...

but ya based on how em actually recognizes all those who came b4 him (public enemy, run dmc, etc.) that basically broke the barrier so he could actually be mainstream gets at least some respect from me



mass- thats damn good, very clean cut too... reminds a lot of some graphic stuff i see nowadays but it definately has your own personal flare to it

bowchicabowow
08-09-2008, 08:15 PM
I agree....100%....

white rappers who aint got shit on Em
Paul Wall
gay ass Vanilla Ice
old Kid Rock
Lil Wyte
Are you fucking braindead? Or sarcastic?

Maybe you haven't been into graff long enough to recognize real hip hop. Em used to make some real hip hop shit but he's doing the same bullshit all the other mainstream rappers are doing now.

Have you ever heard of Atmosphere? Sage Francis? Brother Ali, hes albino technicaly but wtv? Heiruspecs is a group with whites in it. Aesop Rock? Some of his lyrics are a little nonsensical, but most are geniusly abstract.

Most of those are just from Minneapolis, so there must be a TON more to be found by me.

ETCH 07
08-09-2008, 08:20 PM
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/1281/graff1064oo6.jpg

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/8026/graff1052sv7.jpg

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/3436/graff1050gn4.jpg

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/1456/graff1051xv6.jpg

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/605/graff1048vq1.jpg

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/8501/graff1056hj3.jpg

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/2575/graff1061sw8.jpg

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/9660/graff1063vk7.jpg

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/1490/graff1065lo5.jpg

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/2333/graff1053un0.jpg

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/2518/graff1055fs8.jpg

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/8383/graff1054ro5.jpg

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/9759/graff1059iq0.jpg

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/3137/graff1060qb5.jpg

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/5190/graff1066fg6.jpg

SAID
08-09-2008, 09:15 PM
FREESTYLES.
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/6971/aher005yv4.jpg
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/7812/aher004of5.jpg

etch, new to graff thread, itll help loads.
stick to simplesss!

bowchicabowow
08-09-2008, 09:24 PM
SAID: I cant see shit, but seems to be nice.

ERASE: Simples, the karaks arn't looking great, but I don't know how to help.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-09-2008, 10:54 PM
Here it is ..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ea8ed6da.jpg

BAKER.
work on your hands , get a notebook and fill it up.
that a is wierd make the top of the r smaller that e is fiyyya.
keep it up.
said i like it.

ETCH 07
08-09-2008, 10:55 PM
SAID: I cant see shit, but seems to be nice.

ERASE: Simples, the karaks arn't looking great, but I don't know how to help.

no doubt , the only help im gonna get is from time and practice .... i create for me anyways ... if others like it ... thats whats up ... if not ... thats whats up ... lol . i appreciate u replying .. thank u ..

IlikePie
08-09-2008, 11:35 PM
just a thought.

once u have ur style down.
u keep to that style and dont change. y? because its UR style.
and if u keep switchin ur style up its cuz u havent found urs yet.



I don't have MY style yet :( Mass is right, but yeah, I'm just getting back into sketching after many a breaks. I'll twie hawduhhh

fromthegrave
08-09-2008, 11:56 PM
mass- sooo fresh sooo clean, i used to rag on ur shit but ur doing different shit from everyone else, and making it look nice. mad respect.

-sense-
08-10-2008, 12:20 AM
dope
http://i35.tinypic.com/2hoxws4.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/2yuaq2r.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/15i7m21.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/15exmrn.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/hsubdl.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/fb97iw.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/2w23afs.jpg

ColdBlooded
08-10-2008, 12:44 AM
Eminem is the ONLY white rapper? Man...who knew?

Chronic - Stop bumping that. New to graff thread. The R is the letter that needs the most work.
Pie - I see the progression, the new one is pretty ill.
Donald - Not the best I've seen from you.
Klipa - Thats definately clean.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16195.jpg

Clout is easer:confused:

Fube
08-10-2008, 02:30 AM
sense, if your gunna post flicks make sure they are in focus dude. mostly everyone on the page needs to stop worrying about fills, kracks, backgrounds, all that shit and put in work on simples. all simples.

not blackbook but this shit is on vinyl. but if u look close its all simples with just extra shit added for flair.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture032.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture033.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture034.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture024.jpg

letsgobombin
08-10-2008, 05:09 AM
little simp
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/d310299a.jpg
fube- i love how your squiggly style is hard to read at first and then when you know it seems obvious, i prefer the spastic and spastic vinyl one and i cant see anything wrong with them, i dont like the runor but i think its something to do with the r's but i cant but my finger on it
sense- get smaller focused pics and do letters because i cant see any but that first drawing is nice
said- nice simp, i would just say to make the right leg of the h wider
etch- simples and bars

SAID
08-10-2008, 09:17 AM
really appreciate all the crits guys!!
fube- i love your straight letters much more than your squiggly ones, much cleaner imo. But it's your style and everyones gotta be unique, so keep doing your thing.
sense- resize your images from what i can see work on SIMPLES. Check out the new to graff thread man it should help you out.
letsgobombin- id make your letters abit thicker, it would look more bold and solid. Looking good!

Shoook
08-10-2008, 12:16 PM
Clout is easer:confused:

yo exam its not easer from van lol and i would post flicks for talkin but i gots none

LiMe..S.B.C
08-10-2008, 12:24 PM
FUBE nice simps..... the last one is fire...

CakeWalk99
08-10-2008, 01:14 PM
New style I am working on. Please bash away. I have done my keyboard 3230023030-230-230-23 times and have killed many erasers on pencils within the last couple of weeks. The L's hate me :(

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/67.jpg

WoeInfinite
08-10-2008, 02:32 PM
yeah i was just gonna say fix up the L, i really like the M

fromthegrave
08-10-2008, 02:32 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/903ig8.jpg
exchange with Ease

HRbN
08-10-2008, 02:36 PM
Sense- RESIZE son its not that difficult i cant even tell what goin on there

Fube - diggin it man keep it up

CakeWalk99
08-10-2008, 03:08 PM
Anyone else have any advice for the elmness?

numberonestunna
08-10-2008, 04:01 PM
elm - lookin good but imo it would look better if all the letters were the same height.. and maybe take the upward nob off the middle bar in the E

hazetheone
08-10-2008, 06:04 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/rh0aau.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/212vpmg.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/2uo3vw1.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/4js1at.jpg
i fucking hate you chronic

CakeWalk99
08-10-2008, 06:08 PM
HAZE THOES ARE AWESOME! This is proof that bars pay off!

00-made-00
08-10-2008, 06:29 PM
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimrstufff.jpg
haze-fresh shit man
fube-dope
pocs- dope
aesop rock is great, cage another great white rapper.

Desipher
08-10-2008, 06:34 PM
quick entry for my friends fuck around battle still not done im gonna color it to dont mind the handy style didnt relize it was in the picture says wiki
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture084.jpg

hazetheone
08-10-2008, 06:45 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/2earlfc.jpg
aimr-that is a solid simp

Scream Out
08-10-2008, 06:49 PM
pocs - nice progress, might look better with fatter bars

caer - your progressing nicely, only thing that realy bothers me is your C's, they all seem too cramped up in my opinion which is making them kinda resemble a G, try making your C a little wider (EDIT: except for that last sketch you did, fuckn ill)

airm - nice simps

i haven't sketched any shit in weeks now and its starting to show haha
pawg
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo332-1.jpg

hazetheone
08-10-2008, 07:04 PM
show me how you would do a c
ive hadproblems with thm for a while

Mr yarbles
08-10-2008, 07:19 PM
caer it looks dope
But maybe connect the top bar of the c and lose the circle in the middle

Scream Out
08-10-2008, 07:34 PM
caer -the last one is dope, i wouldn't connect the top bar, but i would lower the extra bar on the bottom of the C so that it isn't sticking up at all, or at least as much, thats whats making it look like a G in most sketches, and it automatically looks a lot better when its wider like in your last sketch. I have nothing with a C in it for reference haha but you prety much got that shit down.

and because im bored heres a PA! oneline throw haha
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo335.jpg

La Coka Nostra
08-10-2008, 07:47 PM
i fucking hate you chronic



watch out!
he might PM you for a week straight!
-_- still going at it with me via PM's.

Mass Appeal
08-10-2008, 08:18 PM
My latest Millitary drawing .. im gonna start giving my drawings a more graphical comic look ... this is part 1 of a 3 part comic strip im beginning...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/af524152.jpg

BIGel
08-10-2008, 08:21 PM
the torso seems just a bit to large for the head, but still...you know i love you mass.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-10-2008, 08:35 PM
dope page for the toy forums.

hazetheone
08-10-2008, 08:58 PM
does anyone want to exchange

Desipher
08-10-2008, 09:01 PM
ya i will

hazetheone
08-10-2008, 09:03 PM
for desipher
http://i35.tinypic.com/qq1hf4.jpg

the end
08-10-2008, 10:23 PM
lookin good haze! best shit iev seen from you

heres some bullshit colouring job :)
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/6390/001zc0.jpg

and a tag..
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3416/002ko0.jpg

AnteUp
08-10-2008, 10:43 PM
haters haters pie. let em hate.
it must be hard to develop that style though :(

showing terrible coloring. shakey hand...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Entertainment.jpg

my woe.
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0012-1.jpg
CRITS PLEASE.

The end- simples now. like what i'm doing :( but it looks like that migh be an interesting fill if done by the right person.

haze- you got some tight shit bro. i really like it. :)

mass- your karak's faces never look realistic. i think it's because you don't put wrinkles and shading.

scream- the pawg peace is nice. it's kinda an overused w though "don't have pics" but w's are hard to work with after a while...

aimr- make the loop on the r bigger. other than that... nice.

chronic- your a total idiot. white rappers? eminem is the only good real white rapper? ahhaha typical mainstream listener. what about...
aesop rock, el-p, cage, slug(half), yak ballz.. etc etc.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-10-2008, 11:05 PM
lookin good haze! best shit iev seen from you

heres some bullshit colouring job :)
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/6390/001zc0.jpg

and a tag..
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3416/002ko0.jpg
i like your style
you remind me of the homie uhhhh that use to be on here.

Darkeist
08-10-2008, 11:29 PM
the end - i cant even read the first flick, go simple, same for the handy.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/betterorworse.jpg

Avi
08-10-2008, 11:30 PM
my first sketch ever as I got into this whole thing tagging thing yesterday:

http://i34.tinypic.com/wtymfq.jpg

my bad. I forgot to flip the image when i scanned.

and Darkeist, it's pretty good, but the letters are a bit too skinny.

Darkeist
08-10-2008, 11:34 PM
To get crits, give crits first

Avi
08-10-2008, 11:41 PM
My bad, I edited my post.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-10-2008, 11:43 PM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture022.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture028.jpg

sex without condoms
08-10-2008, 11:59 PM
dope as hell my ***** tezeeeee

AdRe*
08-11-2008, 02:01 AM
some bullshit and some good stuff
crits?
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/08-11-08_0149-1.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/08-11-08_0148.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/08-11-08_0150.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/08-11-08_0151.jpg

fromthegrave
08-11-2008, 02:09 AM
NO^
do simples.. like block letters or bubbly letters... annd!
u stole my sentence. hoe.

Dying to live
08-11-2008, 02:23 AM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture022.jpg

like this one ;)

South-Pole
08-11-2008, 05:11 AM
tezer-so tight
avi-not realing feeling it,try using bars maybe
the end-i love your style
adre-no,no no,do keyboard letters and simples


exchange with zazki

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42894.jpg

cans905
08-11-2008, 06:35 AM
avi- not bad for just begininng, but goto new to graff thread and then start simples
tezer- fresh just not feeling the random splashs on the last one
adre- new to graff thread...
south- really good just not feelin the extension at the end that comes around the i

im trying a new style, and playing around with different names
btw, mta is the crew name, not my name lol

rsakens
08-11-2008, 07:30 AM
exchanges
color and 3d will come later
misto limit mynd syhe spyke
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture001-4.jpg?t=1218448383

FABLE IR CRU
08-11-2008, 03:32 PM
KEANE-Really solid stuff
S.Pole-Nice Fill & the letters seem solid
Tezer-Idont like the extension on your T but you have REALLY solid peices..The second one is my fav tho
AVI-Clean it up.It mite be solid but i cant really tell cuz its Kinda scribbly
Exchanges....
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/rab1.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/caer.jpg

BIGel
08-11-2008, 04:18 PM
sick rsaken!

http://pic20.picturetrail.com:80/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/329814983.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com:80/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/329814802.jpg

Darkeist
08-11-2008, 04:47 PM
Bigel - I'm feeling the second one yo.
Fable - I really like that style, theyre both dope.
Tezer - Dope shit im feelin it.

hazetheone
08-11-2008, 05:46 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/1zcfoeo.jpg

Darkeist
08-11-2008, 06:15 PM
Nice bars, haze. Looks real good.

I GOT CLOUT
08-11-2008, 07:13 PM
Exchangeee

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16199.jpg

Tezer - Illness.
SouthPole - Shits on point man, dig it.
Bigel - Both are tight.
Caer - Always fresh, That C is coming along nicely man.

CakeWalk99
08-11-2008, 07:16 PM
Clout: Good stuff man. Your work is always pretty cool!

Haze: Ill!

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0022.jpg

I really like the M's, but not the L. I know my E needs work too. I like this style alot.

Darkeist
08-11-2008, 07:38 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/newthrowyabitbetterpossiblymaybe.jpg
clout - im really feeling both sketches, nice, clean and simple.
cakewalk - make all your letter bars the same size.

fromthegrave
08-11-2008, 08:00 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/903ig8.jpg
yo thnks clout looks nice, heres urs, i posted it a while ago, didnt know if u saw it.

I GOT CLOUT
08-11-2008, 08:24 PM
Yeah man, thanks.

DonaldFour
08-11-2008, 09:28 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture093.jpg
Quick simple out of boredom.. too lazy to finish the rest of my letters ahaha

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-11-2008, 09:29 PM
theres already a decent sero in dallas.
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg285/hazelninja420/100_3731.jpg
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg285/hazelninja420/100_3733.jpg
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg285/hazelninja420/100_3729.jpg
http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h130/GIZZLe_09/ashlyn009.jpg

hazetheone
08-11-2008, 11:36 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/6yzdjl.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/1e30aw.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/11m5npk.jpg
first day od school was fucking boring

RFI. SPit
08-11-2008, 11:56 PM
from a week or two ago

trashy 5 minute pen sketch
http://i37.tinypic.com/25q4os9.jpg


and the nicer version of it
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3007/2718504403_9d33f03d05_o.jpg

timeless progress
08-12-2008, 12:10 AM
donald keep with the simples the progress shows with time

here are 2 more recent ones from me
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1217720702.jpg
^^it looked much better befor I colored it with decos, and ignore the handy was a failed attempt at a diffrent style
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1217720296.jpg
messed up the Y and the A could be improved, what do youall think

timeless progress
08-12-2008, 12:11 AM
accidental double post, mods please delete

Mr yarbles
08-12-2008, 12:19 AM
Fucked up on the s big tim
Been working on the k
http://i38.tinypic.com/2ustqqf.jpg

timeless resize it.

zof that looks dope

caer good stuff
Diggin the c now

Vagrant
08-12-2008, 12:21 AM
Nice simples Haze. Good construction.

GEYA? Random letters or does it mean something? Try working on your letter construction a little more before adding 3D and color.

A pen sketch idea:
http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/VagrantPieceSketch.jpg
I doubt it DOESNT need work, just wanted to post to get some ideas of what to fix.
If I can polish this it will probably end up being a nice sized piece with a lot of time spent on it.
EDIT: I know the T is fucked. I have a different idea for it.

-sense-
08-12-2008, 12:40 AM
haze- the c on the first one could pass for a d.
RFI- thats pretty sick.
vagrant-nice letter, remins me of hyrogliflphics or something

resized a few of some oldies
http://i34.tinypic.com/sncm8m.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/2wc4951.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/f5ad7q.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/25r18oh.jpg

-sense-
08-12-2008, 12:44 AM
http://i38.tinypic.com/a27sig.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/4q2o5.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/2le52zr.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/epf7g4.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/15guk53.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/how.jpg

emel
08-12-2008, 01:29 AM
vagrant-SIMPLES!!!!!!! AHH!!!SIMPLES MAN!!!!

BIGel
08-12-2008, 03:16 AM
wrong thread my friend.

http://a840.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/108/l_3581f50ea1d643c1d4e14aeed398b67f.jpg

South-Pole
08-12-2008, 04:16 AM
tezer-so tight
avi-not realing feeling it,try using bars maybe
the end-i love your style
adre-no,no no,do keyboard letters and simples


exchange with zazki

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42894.jpg

Bump,thanks for the crits

big el-fucking dope,could be a sick ass tattoo
sense-simples
timeless-simples
grave-simples
vagrant-simples
haze-nice usage of bars,realy loving the style,same for the characters
clout-those simples seem to be coming along
elm-nice simple,just make it cleaner,and make your bars the same size
donald-same as elm,cept its clean
zof-you've got doper
yarbles-not feeling it man,make the bars of your k straigther,and same for the rest make them all straigther for every letter
darkeist-not a throwie specialist,but it looks aight

slap madness

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42903.jpg
don't know wtf i was trying to do on this one^^

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42898.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42901.jpg

GIzUrD
08-12-2008, 11:02 AM
ZOF - your E reminds me of a disgruntled night goblin thats grinning because he finally got his check from F.E.M.A.

mistikk
08-12-2008, 12:12 PM
http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll60/dkae16/Picture002.jpg

HitemUp
08-12-2008, 12:27 PM
south- u seriously cant be telling people to do simples when ur stuff looks like shit.
YOU work on simples, drop the extensions and crap fill

rsakens
08-12-2008, 12:44 PM
exchanges
color and 3d will come later
misto limit mynd syhe spyke
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture001-4.jpg?t=1218448383

bump

Vagrant
08-12-2008, 01:01 PM
vagrant-SIMPLES!!!!!!! AHH!!!SIMPLES MAN!!!!

Thanks for offering tips. [/sarcasm]

:rolleyes: I always do simples...
I'm getting simpled out
I'm not kidding.
It's about time I get into something a little more complex, besides, its a pen sketch and its not that bad.

sky_one
08-12-2008, 01:04 PM
rsakens-is cool i like very much the nolimit and the mist but at the syhe you S doesnt look very muck like one
hers something i did crits please
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/2990/92864410jb5.png

FormulaQ
08-12-2008, 02:20 PM
Gues whos back.

Bazer
08-12-2008, 02:35 PM
i dont know, who?

silentchaos14
08-12-2008, 02:57 PM
sky the D in that throw has potential, try working with that. the best letter in that piece is the M, the rest looks ugly.

crevette
08-12-2008, 04:00 PM
sky - simple. no add-ons. that background stuff looks ugly, so make it go away. Use bars. And the e would look okay when you take away all the extra.
rsakens - looks cool. Outline all the letters though. I don't like the letters that sink though.

http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/scan0001-4.jpg

CRITS THANKS.

Furious-StyleZ
08-12-2008, 04:03 PM
is tupac back? lol

00-made-00
08-12-2008, 04:17 PM
silent- Shut up you giner prick,nice crew name to.
Made-the M and thr E are nice try and sort out the A and D, it looks like it has potential.
South- i like that style, i think get rid of a few arrows but still keep some they suit that style.
Keane- nice stuff.
mistix- looks aigghtt.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimrsketchizzle.jpg

crevette
08-12-2008, 04:17 PM
I wish...

FormulaQ
08-12-2008, 04:31 PM
tell me atleast one of you cats has been here long enough to remember flclnaruto1213

FABLE IR CRU
08-12-2008, 04:32 PM
KEANE-Really solid stuff
S.Pole-Nice Fill & the letters seem solid
Tezer-Idont like the extension on your T but you have REALLY solid peices..The second one is my fav tho
AVI-Clean it up.It mite be solid but i cant really tell cuz its Kinda scribbly
Exchanges....
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/rab1.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/caer.jpg
Bump
Spa-bring your letters closer together
Aimr-nice simp..i like that style
made-thicken your bars up & make them preportional

flclnaruto1213
08-12-2008, 04:36 PM
HERE'S A LITTLE REFRESHER!! ITS me my new acc. is formulaq. Any love for a old time homie

Musick8
08-12-2008, 04:38 PM
fable- i like the way you yweaked the size of those bars
made- stewie feels out of place but great color...it rawks imo(dont know how much its worth)

i know i need work but am i usin bars right?critz plz
http://img369.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan008001cl1.jpg

i was about throw it away but i decided to see what you guys think
http://img390.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan005001bs4.jpg

and this...the first day of schol was boooring

South-Pole
08-12-2008, 05:46 PM
south- u seriously cant be telling people to do simples when ur stuff looks like shit.
YOU work on simples, drop the extensions and crap fill
ok,you sir must be kidding me,i'v been doing 1 year and a half of simples
and yes,if im telling people to do simples its because they realy need to do simples
and please me work on simples?

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/AaZ.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42288.jpg


ok,sure lolz you can say my stuff looks like shit,i won't post up my whole album,since this is already enough
anyways,fuck it im gonna keep those extensions

aimr-looks pretty dope imo

fable-loose the cross's,and fix that R bar on the second sketch,just not liking how it goes down all along

crevette-lawl,funny name,looks nice

sky-don't know what to say,can't read it well

BIGel
08-12-2008, 05:50 PM
^get your basic basic letters on lock before you tweak them like that last sketch. cuz when you take away your extensions on that piece you still have a very shaky letter structure under it.

kezia
http://a650.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/95/l_af29d1f12238805ad6d6d3e2022c19e9.jpg

emel
08-12-2008, 05:51 PM
southpole-thats the attitude that will keep you doing shitty simples for ANOTHER year and a half....

South-Pole
08-12-2008, 05:59 PM
fuck,:( loosing the extensions aint bad,but why go back to simples when i've already been there and already got simps down



http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/samy3.jpg
????
cmon

Musick8
08-12-2008, 07:11 PM
whos sky?? crit^plz

Mr yarbles
08-12-2008, 08:07 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/x5a4vs.jpg
Been trying simpler everything.
S is still wierd though and I dunno why everything leans.
Any crits?

South you've got alot of extensions and arrows that just don't belong and all your line look really jagged
Extesions and shit can't cover up bad structure.

Fable I don't likeyour stubby bars bring them down to normal

Fixion
08-12-2008, 08:15 PM
donald keep with the simples the progress shows with time

here are 2 more recent ones from me
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1217720702.jpg
^^it looked much better befor I colored it with decos, and ignore the handy was a failed attempt at a diffrent style
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1217720296.jpg
messed up the Y and the A could be improved, what do youall think
I'm afraid you have to do simples.

Musick8
08-12-2008, 08:37 PM
fable- i like the way you yweaked the size of those bars
made- stewie feels out of place but great color...it rawks imo(dont know how much its worth)

i know i need work but am i usin bars right?critz plz
http://img369.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan008001cl1.jpg

i was about throw it away but i decided to see what you guys think
http://img390.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan005001bs4.jpg

and this...the first day of schol was boooring
crit plz

NEZ89
08-12-2008, 09:10 PM
anyone wanna battle??

squidone
08-12-2008, 09:14 PM
sure whats the word and deadline?

NEZ89
08-12-2008, 09:15 PM
u pick the word, deadline this time friday

squidone
08-12-2008, 09:21 PM
LIVE will be the word

NEZ89
08-12-2008, 09:29 PM
lol damn i hate I's, alright

squidone
08-12-2008, 09:31 PM
lol i do too but i need the practice

AZTEKA
08-12-2008, 09:32 PM
yo aint posted in a minute, some pen freestyle, aint sketched in a while either, so crits would be cool.
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/2530/08120vi1.jpg

HRbN
08-12-2008, 09:53 PM
Thats tight man, your handies are ill. Is that a little E though i see there? if so i dont like that part lol. Other than that its tight!

AZTEKA
08-12-2008, 09:58 PM
yea thats an e, kind of rushed on the e, should of made it match with the a more.

ilikekicks
08-12-2008, 10:26 PM
thats grimey Bigel

ran outta paper on this :(

http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_2215.jpg?t=1218597634

iVIBE
08-12-2008, 10:43 PM
thats grimey Bigel

ran outta paper on this :(

http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_2215.jpg?t=1218597634


thats not bad but I would work on your 3d its a little messed up

FABLE IR CRU
08-12-2008, 11:00 PM
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/x5.jpg
ilikekicks-Nice solid letters.But i think the 3D kinda takes away from them
hitemup-Resize & Do simples i think??
Azteka-I like the letters but id like to see it colored
Bigel-Nice colors..Your a beast man just keep doing what yer doing

ilikekicks
08-12-2008, 11:27 PM
ya, i had a shakey hand when doing that sketch cus of painting earlier.

rowdysk4nker
08-13-2008, 12:19 AM
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d175/randomhero6979/DSC01736.jpg
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d175/randomhero6979/DSC01737.jpg
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d175/randomhero6979/DSC01738.jpg
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d175/randomhero6979/DSC01740.jpg
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d175/randomhero6979/DSC01741.jpg
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d175/randomhero6979/DSC01743.jpg

okurrr!
08-13-2008, 12:31 AM
how do you post pics

Vagrant
08-13-2008, 01:53 AM
address of image here

you need to have the picture uploaded to an image hosting site.
I use Photobucket.

timeless progress
08-13-2008, 02:01 AM
here is a new character Im working on and a pen freestyle

http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1218610026.jpg
^^Ignore the fuse
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1218610005.jpg
^^sketchy but you get the drift

-sense-
08-13-2008, 02:04 AM
azteka- diggin the depth
hitemup- im diggin that stylee


http://i35.tinypic.com/wgycmt.jpg
sticks
http://i34.tinypic.com/fuon4j.jpg
eh, the e could use some work on this one.

rsakens
08-13-2008, 06:28 AM
yo aint posted in a minute, some pen freestyle, aint sketched in a while either, so crits would be cool.
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/2530/08120vi1.jpg

thats sick man i am feeling th s and the arrow coming out in the middle of the s nice style thought

Mass Appeal
08-13-2008, 11:56 AM
tell me atleast one of you cats has been here long enough to remember flclnaruto1213

Yeah .. he was a weird emo kid .. i battled him .. the word was Puke .. we was cool after that. he wrote FUNE.

*Blake One*
08-13-2008, 12:07 PM
This is some stuff I did for me and my Crew(Get loot click aka Green Lanturn Crew aka Gritty looks Crew)

Mass Appeal
08-13-2008, 12:10 PM
Blake One ... your shits so tight man can i join your crew too ? .. im pure gritty , i love money and i like listening to Hip Hop...you guys are so graffiti and so am i ! ... please ?

Bazer
08-13-2008, 12:13 PM
yeah those sketches are kind of corny, but you know who else used to use lots of color and characters?

Mass Appeal
08-13-2008, 12:14 PM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm .... i wonder who Baze .......

Bazer
08-13-2008, 12:17 PM
umm you??????? lol

BIGel
08-13-2008, 02:34 PM
the mystery deepens!

this is actually a kitchen tile.

http://a731.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/110/l_400f75234cdb42257e78eaa340b8d742.jpg

Mass Appeal
08-13-2008, 02:56 PM
Hahahah that is so good he looks so cute too .. hes like a baby dinosaur hypo..
How good is this .. the last 6 posts all by th good old toy book heads ... aww those where the days .

BIGel
08-13-2008, 03:16 PM
i remember the good ol days. *bangs cane on desk loudly*. good times.

http://a231.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/90/l_92cd5d30c630866803090d11fbd8fe36.jpg

Evasion Of Invasion
08-13-2008, 03:25 PM
that looks rly fuckin hot man i like the 2D on the arms i dont know what i can say to help improve it honestly lol
Kasper - the letters are TOO small if u did em a bit begger it would look ALOT better
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture409.jpg
exchange for rasek that we were supposed to do a while ago

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-13-2008, 05:09 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/untitled-22.jpg

smooth_nuts
08-13-2008, 05:13 PM
bigel's the first ones sextastic...eddy's simples are fresh too
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3249/2761201690_196c0025a1.jpg
ignore the song quotes haha...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3140/2761119608_58112fa0b6.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3166/2761126978_8564c221ab.jpg
fuck trying to draw on the greyhound bus :/

WoeInfinite
08-13-2008, 05:24 PM
i like the middle one

Mass Appeal
08-13-2008, 05:57 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ff36de1d.jpg

This is a part of the Team Prod ... i wont explain to you indepth what its all about cos soon enough you will see..

besically its a Taliban cunt getting his head blown off by a Barrett m82 50.calibre round .. but more too come ..

COLLATERAL DAMAGE BABY

edit. i know the legs look fucked.

WoeInfinite
08-13-2008, 06:13 PM
dope.
the legs look fine..

and now woe's here to mess the streak of good shit up...
:)
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/081308_18551.jpg

smooth_nuts
08-13-2008, 06:31 PM
woe-S-I-M-P-L-E-S,SIMPLES!

GaZm13
08-13-2008, 07:21 PM
Sorry WOE but that is pretty awful. Just work on simple letter structure for a while.

Mr yarbles
08-13-2008, 07:44 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/x5a4vs.jpg
Been trying simpler everything.
S is still wierd though and I dunno why everything leans.
Any crits?

South you've got alot of extensions and arrows that just don't belong and all your line look really jagged
Extesions and shit can't cover up bad structure.

Fable I don't likeyour stubby bars bring them down to normal

bump this back up since I didn't get any crits.
Anything to work on?

woe
Work on simpler letters.

mass at first I tought it was a dude with moose horns or something haha
Good shit though can't wait to see it finsished

smooth_nuts
08-13-2008, 08:25 PM
oh just skip right over me akes :(

straighten up the bars on your a and k,and lose the little kick off on your e...

Mr yarbles
08-13-2008, 08:33 PM
Sorry smooth :(
I like your throw but losethe extension on the right of the i
and the middle sketch is nice :)

HRbN
08-13-2008, 08:42 PM
Been awhile So here ya go kiddies Some are finished some are just real quick sketches some concepts...
OLD
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/8168/dscf5757mh7.jpg
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/7859/dscf5758yj1.jpg
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/917/dscf5759ee3.jpg
Ignore the yellow scribble lol
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/487/dscf5760dk8.jpg
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/1959/dscf5762eg4.jpg
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/8108/dscf5763qb8.jpg
Cover Doodles
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/7247/dscf5765mw3.jpg
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6919/dscf5766hd1.jpg

WoeInfinite
08-13-2008, 09:07 PM
O.O
dayummm mthose are tiiight Herbn
i like em alll