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smooth_nuts
08-13-2008, 09:16 PM
bigel's the first ones sextastic...eddy's simples are fresh too
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3249/2761201690_196c0025a1.jpg
ignore the song quotes haha...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3140/2761119608_58112fa0b6.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3166/2761126978_8564c221ab.jpg
fuck trying to draw on the greyhound bus :/

bumper cars for more crits

GaZm13
08-13-2008, 09:33 PM
I like the second one the best. It's gotta be tough putting that I and X next to each other. Keep at it. It will come together.

mekosbc
08-13-2008, 09:35 PM
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0966.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0972.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0971.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0968.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0970.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0974.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0969.jpg
hahaha i hit up woein the book i timed my self i did it in 5mins and 12 seconds...
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0973.jpg

Sarto
08-13-2008, 09:40 PM
noe- looking very good my friend , i really like the first 2

mekosbc
08-13-2008, 09:43 PM
thnkz i think my e on the 1st one looks like a g tho... i fucked up... haha oh well

smooth_nuts
08-13-2008, 09:44 PM
I like the second one the best. It's gotta be tough putting that I and X next to each other. Keep at it. It will come together.
fuck yeah it is...and thanks for the good words broham :D

noe-really feeling the second and third ones

GaZm13
08-13-2008, 09:58 PM
Damn NOE! All I have to say is the name change has done wonders man. Your stuff is looking really nice my friend. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to seeing a lot more from you.

timeless progress
08-13-2008, 10:37 PM
Six- my only gripe is that the x in the 1st one looks like a K
Noe-lookin nice 3ds a litle sketchy in the 2nd one

here is a new character Im working on and a pen freestyle

http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1218610026.jpg
^^Ignore the fuse
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1218610005.jpg
^^sketchy but you get the drift

bump for crits

WoeInfinite
08-13-2008, 10:55 PM
hahaha i hit up woein the book i timed my self i did it in 5mins and 12 seconds...
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0973.jpg

hahahaha thank you sir.
when i get a new book ill get you in it.
that looks fresh, all your stuff is lookin tight man..
reallly feelin the first two, and that orange and teal Meko..

GIzUrD
08-13-2008, 11:08 PM
the NOE throws are PH fat

-sense-
08-13-2008, 11:21 PM
phazer- that green backround is sick.
noe- the slime drips make it pop.
geya-the structure looks good, but the fish looks stressed out.
http://i34.tinypic.com/29w8wb5.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/25sc20n.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/22grb4.jpg
anyone?
mmm,
sticky green buds.

-sense-
08-13-2008, 11:22 PM
my bad about the second pic

WoeInfinite
08-13-2008, 11:53 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/081408_00451.jpg
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/081408_00441.jpg
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/081408_00481.jpg
fuckin booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooored.
isuck:)

-sense-
08-14-2008, 12:06 AM
woe whats up the triangles and hearts and shit?

WoeInfinite
08-14-2008, 12:11 AM
hahaha, idk, just something i put on everything i do now...
[shrugs] no reason behind it really.

ColdBlooded
08-14-2008, 12:31 AM
just a qucik sketch but thinkin about paintin this..
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/peacesketch.jpg

Yo shuk, tell your boy atech to stomp lining zoner a vibes, just remember you we're in BCA before Dedicated Stoner Crew..No dis-respect, but dont expect to throw down bca and ask to be in my crew when your boy lines it, Atech is "dope" to, make up your mind...The night we asked you to write BCA you pointed out a "dope" tag and told us to cross it out because its the most toy thing you've ever seen....I'll start crossing DSC back if he does it again...uhhm, and you could start writing "bca" because you know, your in it right? or atleast tell us your not down anymore

emel
08-14-2008, 12:44 AM
Lol.

fonone
08-14-2008, 01:12 AM
turf wars

WoeInfinite
08-14-2008, 01:24 AM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/081408_02211.jpg
headacheeeeeeeee.

WoeInfinite
08-14-2008, 01:24 AM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/081408_02211.jpg
headacheeeeeeeee.

timeless progress
08-14-2008, 01:29 AM
geya-the structure looks good, but the fish looks stressed out.


Fish??? hes more of a blob, and he is stressed out. Anyone who has watched the wall and actually payed attention will know were my inspiration for the char came from

piggy.bank.prostitute
08-14-2008, 01:34 AM
http://i517.photobucket.com/albums/u335/peted93/rcto.jpg

I<3Trendz
08-14-2008, 01:36 AM
lookin good

Furious-StyleZ
08-14-2008, 01:46 AM
http://i38.tinypic.com/2cmvew4.jpg

http://i35.tinypic.com/2mwfjac.jpg

http://i36.tinypic.com/mru8hv.jpg

http://i38.tinypic.com/105qp9s.jpg

letsgobombin
08-14-2008, 06:05 AM
back to skool blues because misspelling school is so cool
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/a8692f4b.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/28a059d6.jpg
huae(how do you say that?)- hit the simples
rect- its good you're going simple but use bars and dont worry about adding drips and stuff, just get a pencil and start writing RECT like that
woe- lose the hearts before someone thinks you're a 14 year old emo girl, i would say that you need to keep experimenting, it looks like you're using bars but you fill every little piece you do it seems, i think the best thing to do in this situation is do like 20 sketches and if you want to fill then fill the best one and show us that

LiMe..S.B.C
08-14-2008, 09:17 AM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0954.jpg

fonone
08-14-2008, 09:35 AM
RAVENOUS SHARKS, WELCOME TO THE BUSINESS...

lime - so you have apparently been writing 12 years or some shit and your letters are still whack? right...
rect - thats not a bad simple but hit up the new to graf thread and use bars, it will help you get better letter structure and lose the circle at the bottom of the T... also lose the slime.. like i said though not bad at all keep it up.

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/4286/screenhunter1zp2.jpg
http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/3869/aug14211fv9.jpg
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/6052/aug14210kj5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/6052/aug14210kj5.44ef80393c.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=229&i=aug14210kj5.jpg)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/8865/aug14212we7.jpg

sex without condoms
08-14-2008, 10:03 AM
last irek sketch is fire

Hater-AiD~>
08-14-2008, 10:07 AM
irek you are gettin dope as fuck!

sex without condoms
08-14-2008, 11:08 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/120030.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/135210.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115036.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115053.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115207.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115239.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115605.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115750.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115818.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115840.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115851.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115901.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115924.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115947.jpg

LiMe..S.B.C
08-14-2008, 11:12 AM
so what if my lettes style is whack, its my style. im not hatin on nobodys style, yeah i been writing for mad long but i learned the way most writers did in the old skool, by experimenting with new designs and themes... so hate if ya want, its cool i aint taking it to heart ..why should i ya aint nobody but internet talk.....

fonone
08-14-2008, 11:23 AM
whatever man i just havent seen you progress much at all and ive seen people telling you to do simples since you started posting... like you said though theyre your letters. and i wouldnt really call ten years ago the "old school"....

emel
08-14-2008, 11:28 AM
IREK-simples bro...

LiMe..S.B.C
08-14-2008, 11:32 AM
to clear it up i aint call ten years ago old skool , i learned to draw graff from learning the style of the 80's....which i call the best era for graffiti... when every writer had a different style...

Baron
08-14-2008, 11:37 AM
Its hard to find somebody with their own individual style now.

And emel, you better be sarcastic.

Evasion Of Invasion
08-14-2008, 11:53 AM
that looks rly fuckin hot man i like the 2D on the arms i dont know what i can say to help improve it honestly lol
Kasper - the letters are TOO small if u did em a bit begger it would look ALOT better
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture409.jpg
exchange for rasek that we were supposed to do a while ago
BUMP!!! i got no crits
Irek try to swing out the bottom of the E longer to give it more flow
sex - the E on the iron man one is pure gold man that e is SOOO fuckin sexy, the handstyles are killer too
lime i wont hate just do yo thing ive seen dope stuff come out of ppl who just do graff by just experimenting

Furious-StyleZ
08-14-2008, 12:32 PM
lets go bombin - its pronounced like hawaii..

Hater-AiD~>
08-14-2008, 12:36 PM
IREK-simples bro...

are you completely serial?

Stussy
08-14-2008, 01:06 PM
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/7253/photo541ml6.jpg
couldnt do anything with a Z so just left it off
Rect- Keep workin on those simples...
Irek- like the style, keep working on that throw...

South-Pole
08-14-2008, 01:18 PM
eoi-looks hot imo,not feeling the s though
irek-last pic is fire,no need for simps you already got your style down
piggy-use bars,not feeling the black drips
woe-looks like you used bars,ok the o needs work,either take off that heart or replace the o with it,E and W seems fine to me
furious-simples
lime-sorry,simples
sex-sorry man,but the pics wont show up for me

blocks blocks blocks

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42915.jpg

Mass Appeal
08-14-2008, 01:26 PM
Karim Benzema looking good ... autograph ? hahaha

South-Pole
08-14-2008, 01:32 PM
^hahaha
http://www.manunitedpies.tv/0303benzema.jpg
sure why not next time i see i'll give you an autograph you hardcore graffiti writer
who could only show half of his face to anyone :P j/k

TaskOne
08-14-2008, 01:44 PM
Toy Book thread isn't looking to good latley...well when is it ever:)? Irek im liking your work its improvin everytime i logg in and Sex those throwyss are nice go paint them. Been grounded from the comp but doin alot of sketch, ill be sure to upload when i get back on.

emel
08-14-2008, 01:55 PM
ireks structure is too weak, theres just a bunch of badly placed cuts and extensions that visually please you who ponder BS all day and dont know any better....

Hater-AiD~>
08-14-2008, 02:41 PM
south pole..nice structure...
i gets bored..so i draw E's

http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/piecin/IMG00147.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/piecin/IMG00149.jpg

mekosbc
08-14-2008, 02:46 PM
agree with emel

Skin1016
08-14-2008, 03:01 PM
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a211/adm123456789/0812082309b.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
08-14-2008, 03:13 PM
theres no structure

WoeInfinite
08-14-2008, 04:00 PM
haha let em think im 14, emo and a girl, then theyll NEVER expect it to be me..
:)

Edward"Sezer"Hands
08-14-2008, 04:18 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/untitled-23.jpg

SAID
08-14-2008, 04:34 PM
nice R, lovin' it.

SAID
08-14-2008, 04:38 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/120030.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/135210.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115036.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115053.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115207.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115239.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115605.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115750.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115818.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115840.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115851.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115901.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115924.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115947.jpg

sick throws!

Lucky1313
08-14-2008, 05:09 PM
hey im new but i sketched this the other day and i had to take the pic w/ a shitty camara so ya =(

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee324/LKY1313/LUCKY.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
08-14-2008, 05:25 PM
Dont Color... But you are on the the Right track with the Simples

-Sup Guys havent posted in a while.

letsgobombin
08-14-2008, 05:32 PM
back to skool blues because misspelling school is so cool
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/a8692f4b.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/28a059d6.jpg

bumpity bump
lucky- good starting simples, have a look at the new to graff thread and dont worry about filling for now
tezer- i like all the letters and i think it looks good but the r is pretty smooth and the other letters are sharper, just something to consider
amek- start simple with your throw, basic bubble letters
hater- take off all those little bits off the e's and you got a pretty solid letter
post more crits later

Hater-AiD~>
08-14-2008, 06:32 PM
sexy simples

Shoook
08-14-2008, 08:06 PM
Yo shuk, tell your boy atech to stomp lining zoner a vibes, just remember you we're in BCA before Dedicated Stoner Crew..No dis-respect, but dont expect to throw down bca and ask to be in my crew when your boy lines it, Atech is "dope" to, make up your mind...The night we asked you to write BCA you pointed out a "dope" tag and told us to cross it out because its the most toy thing you've ever seen....I'll start crossing DSC back if he does it again...uhhm, and you could start writing "bca" because you know, your in it right? or atleast tell us your not down anymore

ok let me say some thing here a yeah my boy atech does suck and yeah hes is toy as shit and b yeah i am in bca just ive had some shit going down and c i can GARENTY (if thats how you spell it) that atech isnt the one crossin out zoner and vibes because if you dont remember zoner is my boy too and soo is vibes and you know that and i would have beef on atech for if it was him sooo

Mass Appeal
08-14-2008, 08:06 PM
Looking good RAOOOAAAOOE

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/e5199fc0.jpg

So this is the final part of the comic strip scene for the team battle ... still have scene 2 to do .. all will become clear soon.

mekosbc
08-14-2008, 08:24 PM
hot shit but damn lol resize bro kinda kills the page

Mass Appeal
08-14-2008, 08:39 PM
f i resize it it looks all blurred and you cannot see the details as much

TaskOne
08-14-2008, 09:29 PM
ireks structure is too weak, theres just a bunch of badly placed cuts and extensions that visually please you who ponder BS all day and dont know any better....

Completley untrue, sure the structure may been not at its fullest but the extensions aren't poorly placed or anything, its just fooling around with his bars bending them and shit, the structure is clearly visable and not bad, pretty baisic.

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/aug14211fv9.jpg

Fube
08-14-2008, 09:34 PM
ok let me say some thing here a yeah my boy atech does suck and yeah hes is toy as shit and b yeah i am in bca just ive had some shit going down and c i can GARENTY (if thats how you spell it) that atech isnt the one crossin out zoner and vibes because if you dont remember zoner is my boy too and soo is vibes and you know that and i would have beef on atech for if it was him sooo

bombingscience is a good place. we let u guys express your opnions all the fuckin time. but im getting real fuckin drunk right now and i just might forever ban the next shithead to beef in this thread. if u idiots didnt notice the name of the forum thread your in is specifically for your blackbook pages. there is also a thread just for beef. so u have 3 choices

1, pull your fucking head out of your asses and post some fuckin pages.
2, put your beef to a pm, or in the acutal beef thread
or
3, get fuckin banned by me right now.

u decide.

your friendly mod.
drunk ass fube.

(SoS)Viruz
08-14-2008, 09:44 PM
Really like I read the last 4 page of this Thread and laughed cause kid are beefin and not postin pics......

Irek- You have a Nice Style but I dont like the lil letters that you put down their. I dont like it when ppl do that...

HRbN
08-14-2008, 09:49 PM
Been awhile So here ya go kiddies Some are finished some are just real quick sketches some concepts...
OLD
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/8168/dscf5757mh7.jpg
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/7859/dscf5758yj1.jpg
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/917/dscf5759ee3.jpg
Ignore the yellow scribble lol
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/487/dscf5760dk8.jpg
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/1959/dscf5762eg4.jpg
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/8108/dscf5763qb8.jpg
Cover Doodles
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/7247/dscf5765mw3.jpg
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6919/dscf5766hd1.jpg


Bump over beef for crits.

And quit beefin guys, just eat it.. its whats for dinner.
Let em know whats up fuber

Shits lookin good Mass, is it gunna have color or stay like that?
And for the record i dig IREK's shit

emel
08-14-2008, 10:00 PM
Lol at taskones stupidity...

Mr yarbles
08-14-2008, 10:09 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/14dzexl.jpg
Crits?

phazer I don't like your z's the middle bar is too skinny

Irek good stuff

NoCanControl
08-14-2008, 10:31 PM
Really like I read the last 4 page of this Thread and laughed cause kid are beefin and not postin pics......

Irek- You have a Nice Style but I dont like the lil letters that you put down their. I dont like it when ppl do that...

play me in halo3.

i need to find good pepople. for team slayer. cuz i keep getting teamed up with dumb fucks.

(SoS)Viruz
08-14-2008, 10:41 PM
play me in halo3.

i need to find good pepople. for team slayer. cuz i keep getting teamed up with dumb fucks.

Whats you highest Skill Level??? Cause I can get you me and two other ppl.

emel
08-14-2008, 11:10 PM
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/9859/kasrsketch8ny1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

quickk sketch nooobss

yarbles- try to make the legs on the right of the K one bar that bends in the middle, pretty much just do simples.. like on the keyboard.. basic text shit

fonone
08-14-2008, 11:13 PM
and im the one with weak structure and randomly placed extensions... whatever

Furious-StyleZ
08-15-2008, 12:11 AM
http://i35.tinypic.com/alszs9.jpg

http://i33.tinypic.com/2rcaico.jpg

osnapizzel
08-15-2008, 12:46 AM
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/2073/picture323qy8.jpg

Nem
08-15-2008, 03:49 AM
not much to say for crits,
snaps lookin pretty sweet. i would say take the cut in the right bar of the A out. just make it a full letter. i mean, dont make it extend through itself. yet.

huae, weird name. and the E on your throw is kind of illegible and crazy. C? G? R? maybe even a cracked out P.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_0088.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_0089.jpg

i feel like i dont know what im doing really with extensions. just experimental.....

letsgobombin
08-15-2008, 05:08 AM
back to skool blues because misspelling school is so cool
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/a8692f4b.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/28a059d6.jpg

anyone got any decent crits?
scab- the first one is better, stick to simple without all the little extensions and keep experimenting
snap- i prefered your older stuff but thats my preference, i dont like how it goes really thin on the left of the s and that tiny little bump on the bottom of the a, i prefer the bottom one to the top
huae- use bars and dont fill em for now, just do loads and loads of barred simples
kasr- looks good,i like how the letters are slightly leaning to compliment the 3d, im guessing thats on purpose
aeks- simple, simple, simple, dont try moving on until you got the simples down AEKZ/S look especially at k's because you seem to struggle with them
phazer- you got your bars down but i think you should go simple than some of the pieces there, you're skipping a step and going from straight bars to trying to develop a style, try to bend some bars a bit
mass- the kinda blood thing doesnt look too realistic at the moment but it might look better when its coloured, the fingers look too long and the arms look too straight and the bloke kneeling down is holding his gun weird

South-Pole
08-15-2008, 05:59 AM
eoi-looks hot imo,not feeling the s though
irek-last pic is fire,no need for simps you already got your style down
piggy-use bars,not feeling the black drips
woe-looks like you used bars,ok the o needs work,either take off that heart or replace the o with it,E and W seems fine to me
furious-simples
lime-sorry,simples
sex-sorry man,but the pics wont show up for me

blocks blocks blocks

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42915.jpg

PUMB

Mass-anatomy looks fine,just for the head blast,doesn't look too realistic,his head shouldn't be sliced in 2 parts,for the blood splatter it doesn't go far enough,there should be more drips,and it should be straighter,finer and longer
nem-second sketch looks better
snap-dopy dope
furious-i prefer the blocks that the throwie
emel-funny how you tell people on how they use useless extensions and mess too much with letter forms,anyways sketch looks aight,just want to see it coloured
phazer-6th page is the best

fromthegrave
08-15-2008, 07:58 AM
stop bumping that, it doesnt look good.
do something else.

sex without condoms
08-15-2008, 10:34 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113516.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113543.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113558.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113618.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113647.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113717.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112051.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112130.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112140.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112153.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114348.jpg

Mass Appeal
08-15-2008, 11:05 AM
stop bumping that, it doesnt look good.
do something else.

Better than what you can do.
ah shit new page so ill bump this ... i have nothing else..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/302d09ac.jpg

Before..

After...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ea8ed6da.jpg

sex without condoms
08-15-2008, 12:06 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113516.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113543.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113558.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113618.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113647.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113717.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112051.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112130.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112140.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112153.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114348.jpg

bottom page bump

seywhat
08-15-2008, 12:34 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage128.jpg
i aint been sketchin much latley, but heres one from yesterday

rae- always ill bombs, you should just go destroy the streets with those
chronic- letters are alright, just keep sketchin.
mass- fresh, but im not really feelin that a

-sense-
08-15-2008, 01:45 PM
mass-whats tht between te b and a?
sex- i think the whole overall appearance would look better if the fills wernt halfassed or done real quick.
say- i dig that
been fuckin around with this style lately
http://i37.tinypic.com/30msg7m.jpg
wasnt sure if i should put the depth on the inside tops of the letters
its still got some work.

Mass Appeal
08-15-2008, 01:46 PM
wasnt sure if i should put the depth on the inside of the letters
its still got some work.

The only thing you need to work on are simples ... get a ruler pencil and paper and learn bars.

fOrSaQeN
08-15-2008, 01:53 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/2djt2kj.jpg

fOrSaQeN
08-15-2008, 01:54 PM
^^ done by a friend wants to post for crits

Thrice
08-15-2008, 02:19 PM
forsaq-pretty good, loving the handstyles.
sex-YOU"RE ALIVE! that stuff is pretty sexy, as said above spend time on the fills.
mass-fan fucking tastic.
Crits por vavor.
http://i33.tinypic.com/2mmhcfs.jpg

SAID
08-15-2008, 04:05 PM
aher, groupie for your style TEACH ME!
sex, loving your throws homes
sey, not really feeling it work on simples, like really simple and im sure it could lookg ood with a chrome fillin
sense, like it better sketched out than on computer, seems like theres more flowthrice, put the letters together and throw a drop shadow ro 3d, should look good
snap, looks abit stiff, like there just standing there with no flow sleek em out abit

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/4316/aher003ge3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
new style im trying out
(the tag with the circle letters)

South-Pole
08-15-2008, 05:25 PM
stop bumping that, it doesnt look good.
do something else.
its the first time i bumped it,and how can't it look good,they're damn block letters ffs,do something else?do what?

mass-ty for that.i don't if you like that sketch in black and white,but srsly
go back and colour it!!!
sex-sexy,everything
said-^^same as sex
ahem-looks on point,keep the same distance between letters
seyar-cmon i know you can do better(looks nice though)
forsaquen-simples
sense-don't know what to say,can't read it
lucky-you don't belong here,big boy thread nao

no j/k,do block letters

ilikekicks
08-15-2008, 05:52 PM
said - nice throw, the G can be mistaken for and S tho
snap, the bottom of the S in the first one seems a little off

http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_2217.jpg?t=1218840267

WoeInfinite
08-15-2008, 06:10 PM
OoooOooOo
i really like that...
like...alot.
if you can color...definitely do it..thatll look tight

WoeInfinite
08-15-2008, 06:11 PM
OoooOooOo
i really like that...
like...alot.
if you can color...definitely do it..thatll look tight

SAID
08-15-2008, 06:12 PM
i agree, mad potential, id just loose the drips man its gonan look hella clean

NoCanControl
08-15-2008, 06:23 PM
Whats you highest Skill Level??? Cause I can get you me and two other ppl.

42, but i play like about a 44 45?


i

South-Pole
08-15-2008, 06:23 PM
^same,but there a few things here and there that could make it better
don't know if its me or i think Smug when i look at this sketch
the a is the best letter,for the K top bar,try tilting it on the right or make it str8er
for the S make the bottom bar thicker
make the O more round
nice sketch though

Mass Appeal
08-15-2008, 06:45 PM
The AKSO lettering is tight but all that swirly shit around it ruins it.

Thrice
08-15-2008, 07:01 PM
My outline is a bit thinner than i thought, but added some color and 3D. Messed up my lighting on it, but oh well.
http://i34.tinypic.com/14csnd5.jpg

MrDobalina
08-15-2008, 11:43 PM
snap cool fill but wack letters make that shit flow better

and ahem it ok for a straight letter maybe tilt a few letters so each one touches each other. go paint that shit

and why do people say "oh do bars, do bars" bars are fuckin gay u dont get anywhere doin bars but generic ass letters like everybody else. id say DONT do bars and do u own shit. might take a bit longer to get somethin u like but once u get it it'll be ur own style and ur own shit. not some cookie cutter bs

Scream Out
08-15-2008, 11:47 PM
fuckn haven't had time to sketch, been playing with an old name again, i REALLLY NEED TO WORK ON MY R's AND K's lol so don't tell me that, i already know

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo338.jpg

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo339.jpg

devil at sea level
08-16-2008, 12:05 AM
ahem-make your horrizontal bars on the "H" wider so its consistent with the width of the "M's bars, and if your gonna stak the letters under one another, do all of them not just the "a" and "h"
ilikekicks-nice, maybe just fix the O on the end so it has an opening like the rest of the letters, not just the swirl.
lucky-make the width of the letters the same and lose the extension on the k(makes it look like an r)
said-fix the shadowing and make the top of your letters round or squared, not both

just my opinions


criteeeeeks?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e338/spikes10392/throw003.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e338/spikes10392/throw004.jpg

Atomik
08-16-2008, 12:17 AM
nice shit scream out love the steez
devil try doing more simple bars

new shit havnt schetched in a while
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/newshit.jpg

Bazer
08-16-2008, 12:59 AM
ilikekicks that looks nothing like all your other shit. it looks like my shit but a wack version of it.

osnapizzel
08-16-2008, 01:13 AM
snap cool fill but wack letters make that shit flow better

and ahem it ok for a straight letter maybe tilt a few letters so each one touches each other. go paint that shit

and why do people say "oh do bars, do bars" bars are fuckin gay u dont get anywhere doin bars but generic ass letters like everybody else. id say DONT do bars and do u own shit. might take a bit longer to get somethin u like but once u get it it'll be ur own style and ur own shit. not some cookie cutter bs


correct use of bars separates the writers from the toys, style doesent mean much if you dont back it up with proper letter structure, unless your name is APEX

freka
08-16-2008, 07:20 AM
devil at sea level: good to see you keepin it nice and simple for now although the 3d needs abit of work but practie makes perfect dude

atomic: realy feelin it man the stars on the bottom one make it look cool aswell keep it up



outline for a piece im doin tomorow so isnt all shaded because its just to use for painitng

crits would be apreciated:

http://i327.photobucket.com/albums/k469/sneronelo/ImportedPhotos00164.jpg


new stlye ive been workin on not ready to be painted yet needs work:

http://i327.photobucket.com/albums/k469/sneronelo/ImportedPhotos00169.jpg

SAID
08-16-2008, 07:22 AM
lines look abit shaky, which makes the whole compilation look stiff, & the piece looks abit squished, dont be shy to stretch it out

Mass Appeal
08-16-2008, 08:29 AM
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo338.jpg

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo339.jpg

you have so much potential but the letters just look so unproportional .. like the kicker legs on the R n K ... theyre so small compared to the rest of the letters ... everything just looks abit top heavy thats all. keep it up.

Thrice
08-16-2008, 09:59 AM
Atomik - very nice man, very nice. In the bubble things, i Recommend trying to keep all of those lines straight.
Freka- on the 2nd one the right end needs to be cleaned up.
CRITS?? 123klan clouds =]

http://i36.tinypic.com/2ytw51x.jpg

Kriede
08-16-2008, 12:06 PM
from awhile back i just don't think i ever posted it
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3283/2768569854_1551d86647_o.jpg

rsakens
08-16-2008, 12:30 PM
magazin rape :)

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/magazine3.jpg?t=1218905329
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/magazine2.jpg?t=1218905432
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/magazine4.jpg?t=1218905444
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/magazine1.jpg?t=1218905459

exchanges

recked
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/recked.jpg?t=1218905892

lieon
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/lieonexchange.jpg?t=1218905851
sketch
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/keane2farben.jpg?t=1218905485
quick rest paint bomb forgot to take a pic of the 2nd half =/ its peaty big bomb =]
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture015.jpg?t=1218905541

erase2
08-16-2008, 01:25 PM
good shit keane

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3208/2768778366_131b287fb6.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3065/2768778564_82b1c5d518.jpg?v=0

Mass Appeal
08-16-2008, 02:03 PM
and why do people say "oh do bars, do bars" bars are fuckin gay u dont get anywhere doin bars but generic ass letters like everybody else. id say DONT do bars and do u own shit. might take a bit longer to get somethin u like but once u get it it'll be ur own style and ur own shit. not some cookie cutter bs

What the fuck are you talking about ? ... This is the biggest load of bullshit i think iv ever read on my 2 / 3 years on this Forum.

Utter bullshit...you obviously know nothing about graffiti so before you make false statements like this on something so important as bars learn some shit .

How do we expect new people on here to get better at writing when idiots are posting bullshit like that ^.

Every fucking writer in the world who people consider dope use bars. Everyone.
Its like saying Revok , Rime , Can Two , Askew , Aroe , Norm etc. etc. didnt get anywhere using bars .... LOL .

numberonestunna
08-16-2008, 02:27 PM
freka - first one's cool. the lines are a little sloppy though. on the second, make the "tabs" on the ends line up on the same horizontal level.
mass appeal - i really like the second one how its totally symmetrical.
thrice - get rid of your cloud on top and really pay attention to what colors.
kriede - sick style but the bridge on the H is messed up and the L looks like a lower case H. keep the letters the same size- towards the end they get too small. very nice tho!!
rsakens - great style. youve got a really tight coloring technique too. stay up.
erase2 - GOOD COLORS on the second one, im really feelin it. seperate your letters a bit tho, its kinda tangled up.

Mr_Amaziing
08-16-2008, 03:16 PM
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/9526/dsc00812cx8.jpg

Critz please! I'm stuck, and I usually fuck it all up when i do mah fills...

"Bi2aR"
08-16-2008, 03:25 PM
really, you think you fuck up during the fills?

Mr_Amaziing
08-16-2008, 03:30 PM
...ouch man

kroc_oner
08-16-2008, 04:05 PM
mr amazing lose the cros thing part of the c well the right chip at least i dunno practice colors

Mr yarbles
08-16-2008, 04:09 PM
He's rigt you need to not connect your letters learn to use bars properly and lose the extensions
DOn't worry about fills yet.

erase diggin that style

Ahem make the legs on your a more inward it looks too big
Move the m closer in withthe other letters.

Didn't have enough room for an s
http://i37.tinypic.com/28cin2h.jpg

Sarto
08-16-2008, 04:19 PM
The r is a bit blury from the pic.
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/002-8.jpg
Mr y- make the bars on the a the same as the ones on the e and k , im not digging the k but the e is fine ,
Mr. A- loose all the extensions and go simpler,

mekosbc
08-16-2008, 09:46 PM
some quick 5 min shitz mad bored today....
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY1076.jpg

6rave
08-16-2008, 10:08 PM
Shits sick

Scream Out
08-16-2008, 10:16 PM
gel pen n marker freestyle oh yeahhh
my R's still look fucked, the K too but less
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo342-1.jpg

JETPACK!!
08-16-2008, 10:50 PM
thats tight

erase2
08-16-2008, 11:53 PM
scream - looks nice
yarbles - nice simple
sarto - i like the colors, but i think you should of carried on with the 3-d inside the letters, if you get what im saying
meko - good color choice and leters are nice

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3012/2770132058_54da234b40.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3250/2770132224_dc62c5713a.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3201/2770132382_a6657c8b5d.jpg?v=0

bad color choice on my second one, new name so i was trying out a handie on the third

aintnoway
08-17-2008, 12:19 AM
.

CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K
08-17-2008, 01:39 AM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/7326/forcesxi4.jpg

Snew
08-17-2008, 02:26 AM
Yarbles- nice simple.. maybe make your bars the same width.. it looks alright tho..
Sarto- I really dig the letters and thie fill, just make the 3d the same distance everywhere, kinda like in your O it goes top to bottom.
Noe- Sick throw, i really like the letters and fills on the bottom one. keep it up.
Erase- awesome steeze.. those colors work fine together dude.. just space them out a bit more, awesome flow to your pieces tho.

i think i got a bit carried away with the extensions. I dunno tho.. i like my fill at least.. haa

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo37.jpg

Crits please..

DECO ONE
08-17-2008, 07:30 AM
Crits?

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/BURE.jpg

simple zen
08-17-2008, 09:06 AM
finally got a hold of a cam, finna post some shit within the hour... got some simples i came by and i'm gonna post them.

numberonestunna
08-17-2008, 10:20 AM
erase2 - lookin good, just make your C more apparent. and on the second one with the extension the first O looks like a D to me..
aintnoway - idk man im not really feelin the style.. color choice is alright though.
forces - real nice simple, fix up the S a little tho, its kinda weak.
snew - get rid of the connections in the letters, add white highlights.
deco one - thats a tight piece, i cant touch that 3d style your doin. nice work.

Fube
08-17-2008, 11:38 AM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/7326/forcesxi4.jpg

yes yes yes, more of these.

South-Pole
08-17-2008, 12:50 PM
Crits?

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/BURE.jpg

looks alot like mare139

forces-yes moar moar,i see some potential there

Thrice
08-17-2008, 01:32 PM
What about mare 139?!?! Straight dirty deco.

devil at sea level
08-17-2008, 02:03 PM
scream- i think the r's better than the k but whatevs...angle the top rght of the k on a 45 degree angle not horrizontal
octone-dope
aint no-lose the brown bits and extensions on the top-make your letters have the same bar width
forces-word. nice simple
snew-those extentsions are pointless, and yea i love simple fills i had one like that a couple pages back...

critthisplease..

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e338/spikes10392/throw006.jpg

Mr yarbles
08-17-2008, 03:16 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/kbrc7r.jpg
Before I add an s or a z
Any crits?
Oh and I fixed the curve on the right side of the a

sabs go simpler, use bars.

forces that's dope it's got alot of potential

snew spread your letters out more and lose those extensions that are inside the letters.

rsakens
08-17-2008, 04:11 PM
daaaaa was busy again =]
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture014.jpg?t=1219006126
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture021.jpg?t=1219006453

WoeInfinite
08-17-2008, 04:32 PM
Keane that shit is tiiiiight.

W i wanna work with, but i cant get an O to look good next to it...
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/081708_17281.jpg

edit;
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/081708_17371.jpg
ehh?

Mr yarbles
08-17-2008, 04:47 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/rsh10x.jpg
finished

WoeInfinite
08-17-2008, 04:52 PM
yarbles i like that.
go out and make it into a huuuge roller.
:)

(SoS)Viruz
08-17-2008, 05:46 PM
Woeski- Yo man the "W" to me is a lil too spaced out. Close it a lil.
AKES- Nice but I would make the Bar on the "S" Bend a lil bit more know what I mean?

Lucky1313
08-17-2008, 05:48 PM
yup i drew this like 5 mins ago and felt like putting it on so here it is
:)
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee324/LKY1313/0817081839_0001.jpg

sky_one
08-17-2008, 06:22 PM
erase- dope man! the 1st piece whas my favorite
lucky-put the leters at the same distance
rsakens-the 1st one is cool that ideia the second loved the colors
aeks-nice and simple i like it
i hope you ppl give me some crits
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/2550/aaoe2.jpg
didnt like just modifaing my style a bit

VoyR
08-17-2008, 06:36 PM
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/david_voyer123/voyr2.jpg

Critz, suggestions? Its missing something, and I cant figure out what it is.

Mass Appeal
08-17-2008, 06:52 PM
VoyR .... Its missing 1 . Correct letter construction ,that i mean BARS , 2 . a decent 3d .. fuck 3d you dont need 3d at the stage your at now ... you need to focus only on LETTERS and lastly the cracks arnt beleivable .. they look mega weak .. look at the pavement outside your house.

sky_one
08-17-2008, 06:56 PM
erase- dope man! the 1st piece whas my favorite
lucky-put the leters at the same distance
rsakens-the 1st one is cool that ideia the second loved the colors
aeks-nice and simple i like it
i hope you ppl give me some crits
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/2550/aaoe2.jpg
didnt like just modifaing my style a bit

crits please

Mass Appeal
08-17-2008, 06:59 PM
Mane...you have some decent idea of lettering ... but at the moments all the extensions are out of proportion , place and the letters arnt alinged correctly ... the 3d is also wrong ... the New 2 Graff thread has some top notch guides on doing 3d ... and maybe save your colours for when you get better and begin painting... redo those letters on a straight line with little but no extensions ... then youll have a decent little peice.

Atleast your using bars aswell .. thats a good sign .. you got potential my little hubba.

Lucky1313
08-17-2008, 07:12 PM
i fixed it and made it all even
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee324/LKY1313/0817082006_0001.jpg

sky_one
08-17-2008, 07:16 PM
fix the Y and its perfect ;) (i think lol)

Lucky1313
08-17-2008, 07:21 PM
thx im gonna fix it cuase ur right there is something wrong w/ it
lol

sky_one
08-17-2008, 08:07 PM
heres something i did now training mi D i realy liked the M on the botom
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/6339/aaep7.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)
crits please

(SoS)Viruz
08-17-2008, 08:12 PM
Sky-Yo how long have you been Writing Sky???? I can see you are using bars which is good. Stick to the D that is next to the one with the Arrow. Work with that. But they all look good. for the most part.

GIzUrD
08-17-2008, 08:20 PM
still havent found a good R yet...

http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/4432/newrhf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

theres alot of MEGA toys in here lately... but oh well, as for crits:

LUCKY none of your other letters overlapped so neither should your Y

SKY the bottom M would look ok without the arrow and the... basically simplify it just a little bit

AEKS would probably look better if everything was spaced out evenly

nemzone
08-17-2008, 08:23 PM
ok so its me ur residential stranger. ive been in iraq for past 3 months. got home on tues, and been on a bender since. but im hungover now so im gona chil for a few days.. i see ive been missed here.. duno why lol:P unfortunately i dont have flicks.. cuz got NO time to do shit in iraq. but yeh im always buzzin around, and will always return wen i got time.. also its a lil dodgy typing in this address on a government computer in iraq lol. so yeah, i painted once in the past yr and a half and it was only a throwie!!! not gona waste my time even posting it. just wanted u all (or whoever still knows me) to know that im still on it, and will get sum flicks for yas before i fly back to iraq next sunday... yeh sorry for postn in here with no flicks, but this was my old home, so figured i would post here.. check me out givin ma life story lol.. neway if u want, pm me, il get back sometime, but now im gona go look at the flicks thread for inspiration again..

inspiration has been as poor as a big bag of poor things lately lol



peace NEMZ

the end
08-17-2008, 08:29 PM
SHROOM IT
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/1187/070nr3.jpg

LOVIN that shti KEANERone!

sick style GIZR ive been meaning to develop something with that feel

Thrice
08-17-2008, 08:42 PM
A toy is a toy man, but giz you're shit is hot as hell. I recommend beefing out that R to balance with the G.
Sky-the one letter that is most off style with the others is your E, fix it up and it should be looking good.

Crit for my A plz.
http://i34.tinypic.com/sosm6b.jpg

nemzone
08-17-2008, 08:45 PM
dont add things before u got structure and flow. props for goin simple. but ya need to understand how to make it look good before u add things..

Mass Appeal
08-17-2008, 08:54 PM
Props Nemz ... much respect man.

erase2
08-17-2008, 09:23 PM
forces - looks sick
deco - finish it
sarz - lines are a bit shaky, but nice handstyle
keane - nice style and colors
made - really feeling the one above your colored piece
voyr - the o and y seem off balance
gizurd - looks ill

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3059/2773262482_2eb2a5c7d2.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3274/2772412695_8b2ee1ba5c.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3229/2772412979_25c7c3ef60.jpg?v=0

i know the e is a little off on the last one

fredom-writer
08-17-2008, 10:13 PM
i think that shroom olny looks good cuz the color.
can i go on a little rant tho. Ive been feeling that some people get lucky with style, like some people start sketching and luckily jump on a style that everyone likes... i sketch soo much and i still suck!
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/bobbby_fisher/CCI00001.jpg

osnapizzel
08-17-2008, 10:17 PM
freedom i like that good bars nigg

the end
08-17-2008, 10:17 PM
Krispy- stfu, your top one is gettin pretty good. and look at the fuckin letters the color made no difference

...but i agree with what you say abotu people's style

mekosbc
08-17-2008, 10:30 PM
Yo giz make the top of ur r more rounded and beefy like this dude said it would make it more ill and the balance would be right..

WoeInfinite
08-17-2008, 10:31 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/081708_17511.jpg
crits pleasee.
yeah viruz, now that i look at it, the W is pretty spaced out compared to the other letters..
eh oh well.

Gizrd- that looks dope.
and that Mushroom thing is wicked coloring.
and Krispy, i like it allll except the top of the S

(SoS)Viruz
08-17-2008, 10:34 PM
Nice E tho Bro.. But the O and the W could have been better. The O seems a lil too Plain but its look good.

JETPACK!!
08-17-2008, 10:37 PM
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/2058/rasek51rr1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tried painting it, fucked the letters up. gotta sketch it 20 more times.

WoeInfinite
08-17-2008, 10:37 PM
yeha i wanted to make it pointier, but if i pointed out the bottom, i wouldda made it look like an A..
so
idk...ill try n work with this...
idk if iw anna color it
i always fuck it up..

edit:
i like that rasek,.
the E looks a little weird on the bottom bar, but
im feelin it.

GIzUrD
08-17-2008, 11:06 PM
thanks for the feedback everyone, ill definately keep working on my R.

the mushroom peice is... just.... great. someone said about the letter structure, but i dig it

OCTONE your c and e got overlapped too much

KRISPY is phat

WOE your w is far too wide, and stab something through the center of the O if you feel the need to add a little something extra

WoeInfinite
08-17-2008, 11:08 PM
hmm, i already outlined it in sharpie, but ill keep that in mind for next time.
i dont even think your R is bad
i really like the G and I though
keep it up dude.

AnteUp
08-17-2008, 11:26 PM
pack-the e looks weird to me. other than that. noice.

ok there's nothing on this page. lol

so... MEGAlead (it's a pencil i used)
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Megalead.jpg
CRITS PLEASE (don't worry doods, that's not my usual handy)

Snew
08-17-2008, 11:28 PM
woe- that is is fresh dude.. if all the letters were the same width that would be dope as hell.. add a background i wanna see more..
Freedom- keep up the good work with the bars and im sre you'll find something that you like.. i think its an awesome style, just needs a bit of tweaking.
Octone- fresh style like last time, just keep working on spacing your letters out a bit more.
Rasek- shit is fresh as always.. i think you have to have one of the best most consistant styles on these threads dude.. keep it up..

anyways.. i got carried away with stupid extensions and shit last night so i re worked a peice a bit, similar fill tho...

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo35.jpg

critz

framin-It
08-17-2008, 11:59 PM
Edit

Snew
08-18-2008, 12:06 AM
sick ass throwie on the top left dude..

WoeInfinite
08-18-2008, 12:07 AM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/081808_00531.jpg
three cheers for FUCKING up a background.
ughh...
snew i like the letters.
and framin-it, that looks really nice dude

edit:
the background is silver, purple and blue,...hard to see..

Scream Out
08-18-2008, 12:49 AM
Woe.... those letters make the background look ill.... thats not a good thing, you have some seriously poor structure and from what i've seen of your work i would have to assume you have no real understanding of structure for the letters you use

your O looks more like a U because of the break in the top of the letter, your E looks similar to a P, you could easily pass it off as an E or a P because there is little to nothing defining the letter, it looks like you used maybe 4 bars in your entire sketch and they are all in that poorly constructed E. dont worry about random extensions connections add ons or any of the other crap youve slapped onto your letters. in my opinion you have not progressed at all with the name Woe, the new to graff thread could help you a lot if you arent to ignorant to accept this advice. dont get ahead of your self, this goes for everyone in the toy forum

no beef to Woe

p.s. i dont often crit here anymore due to the fact that nobody will fucking listen, if you are willing to accept some honest crit feel free to p.m. me. i have never claimed to be any kind of king but ive been around a second and i may be abel to help some of you fuckers out if i have the free time.

fonone
08-18-2008, 01:03 AM
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/2058/rasek51rr1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tried painting it, fucked the letters up. gotta sketch it 20 more times.

RASEK, THAT'S HOT EVERY LETTER EXCEPT THE E IS GOOD. I FIXED THE E UP HOW I THOUGHT IT WOULD LOOK GOOD. BRING OUT THE MIDDLE BIT FURTHER AND THE ANGLE OF THE BOTTOM BAR IS UGLY. ANYWAY JUST WHAT I'D DO WITH IT. GOING OUT NOW CATCHYER.

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/6688/rasekfixjy2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/6688/rasekfixjy2.8b84c48bed.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=120&i=rasekfixjy2.jpg)

Scream Out
08-18-2008, 03:17 AM
still playing with names, this ones working out a lot better than the last, fuck R's and K's hahaha
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo343.jpg

"Riot"
08-18-2008, 03:58 AM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/WebCam_20080818_0256.jpg

Sone10
08-18-2008, 04:56 AM
OK now this is not that good but its like my second one, spent around 30mins on it all just sketch

http://i514.photobucket.com/albums/t347/sone10_2008/WebCam_20080818_19411.jpg

WoeInfinite
08-18-2008, 07:28 AM
thanks scream, yeah that was actually, all freestyled.
no bars at all really...
i just fucked around. but i know what you mean, ive been blank forever, i just hate a W.
but dont wanna change the name..
idk.
thanks though.
Argoe? that looks dope.

Mass Appeal
08-18-2008, 08:14 AM
p.s. i dont often crit here anymore due to the fact that nobody will fucking listen, if you are willing to accept some honest crit feel free to p.m. me. i have never claimed to be any kind of king but ive been around a second and i may be abel to help some of you fuckers out if i have the free time.

Hahah so true.

Production update .. im posting it here because its pretty important and i dont think many people visit the thread daily ..

We have a problem ... i recently sent ALL entrys to SORT because i thought he would be doing the Photoshopping ... and i was fed up with the 1000000 graff pictures on my Comp .. so i deleted the whole folder forgetting all the peices was init ...

So yeah .. i need everyone to either resend me their peice or do a new one.

MUNE
AIMR
LIBRE
KASR
BAZER
KASPER
SEYAR
HOER
KABRE
CAER
DDDDDIM
IMPALE
SKETCH
RABY
OSHNAP
NERO
AKEL
SHOE 2
DAWS
TORN

AnteUp
08-18-2008, 10:32 AM
i'm so fuckin tired of my shit getting skipped...

rsakens
08-18-2008, 10:38 AM
daaaaa was busy again =]
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture014.jpg?t=1219006126
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture021.jpg?t=1219006453

bump ====]

still havent found a good R yet...

http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/4432/newrhf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

theres alot of MEGA toys in here lately... but oh well, as for crits:

LUCKY none of your other letters overlapped so neither should your Y

SKY the bottom M would look ok without the arrow and the... basically simplify it just a little bit

AEKS would probably look better if everything was spaced out evenly

this is hot too props for that man felling the G tumor style =] nice concept man


rasek your painted skills are sick !!!
your sketches arent that good then i thought
try to but some more efort in the book and clean up your lines man :)

Thrice
08-18-2008, 10:54 AM
I love it ante, although if anything the first bar on the M (left side) needs to be a bit thinner.
Do I need to loose that extension?
http://i37.tinypic.com/20fdq1e.jpg

rsakens
08-18-2008, 10:59 AM
yes you will be better of without it looks peaty useless
you can get a striate A down so now look at it and think were you can bend it
no extensions =]

rsakens
08-18-2008, 11:00 AM
yes you will be better of without it looks peaty useless
you can get a striate A down so now look at it and think were you can bend it
no extensions =]

AnteUp
08-18-2008, 11:16 AM
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Megalead.jpg

snew- it looks like you know your supposed to do simples. those are simples, but the choppy parts of the letters are unneeded, and the separation of the v bar in the W is unnecessary for you to do at this point and time. your S is pretty simple, but dont over lap the middle part of the s with the tail ends.
framin- i like both of the throws, but not very much the peice in the middle. it looks like you tried to hard to make it balanced. the flow is what your looking for. don't make the letter on the front and the letter on the back just backwards difference from eachother.
woe- your steppin into a style you aren't ready for yet bro. i would reccomend changing that w cause i've tried it before and found that its hard to find something to go with it and still have the letters close without it looking bad.
scream- wow, i really like that. the g tickles me. and the r is nice too. just make your letters coloring a little lighter so i can better see the structure.
riot- the only letters that have a little flow in them is the R and the A. and they aren't looking very good with the random add ons. stick to the bars that your doing. save the add ons for later.
keane- your letters are way to bent for my liking. although they look like they have some sort of spinal disease, you manage to make them look good. the coloring amazes me because you take some colors that shouldn't ever be together and make them work. keep up the good work
gizurd- by far, my favorite thing on this page. very very nice. i've always loved G's and that g is really attractive. i actually like the simplicity of the i, it makes ever thing around it look so much better. and the Z and the R both are very nice. i'm surprised you can find a way to make those letters flow with the g. very nice.

I GAVE A LARGE ASS AMOUNT OF CRITS. RETURN THE FAVOR.

rsakens
08-18-2008, 11:29 AM
ha ha
i call it the keane spinal disease, style from now on
thankx for the crit mate
felling the a on the sketch above e g is sexy too
what hapent to the m because e you but does bars trough on top it looks a bit like i v i
are you color it ?

AnteUp
08-18-2008, 11:35 AM
haha keane spinal disease. lmao.

yea, i started with the m but built into a different looking style with the last letters... hahaha. i might change the m to make the top part bar off like the E G and A. and yea... i'll probably color it... but i'm shit for coloring... i have to much of a shakey hand to outline.

thanks for the crit bro.

-ShAmEE-
08-18-2008, 12:01 PM
still playing with names, this ones working out a lot better than the last, fuck R's and K's hahaha
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo343.jpg
dope. props on this shit. peace.
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/3242144141.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
08-18-2008, 12:15 PM
My New Steez with my New name. Crits?
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan.jpg

Ante- Nice Bars bro. I think it about time you begging to try to color some shit in! :p

Shame- Not feelin that E at the End bro. I think the Horizontal Bar is Too Skinny and is to sperate from the rest of the Pecice.

Mass Appeal
08-18-2008, 12:17 PM
dope. props on this shit. peace.
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/3242144141.jpg

Seperate the E from the N mannnn .. and how can you draw so messilly ? ... i must use atleast 3 peices of paper for every clean sketch.

This says RAHER ... get it ? .. Aher with a R ... Raher ? ... yeah.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/574b0687.jpg

Yeah really.
It isnt finished ... and i dont know whether TO finish it ?.

Should i ? . Shouldnt i ?
If i finish it i MIGHT even KULAR it rlyy Eur00.

pathos
08-18-2008, 12:23 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v510/eyeboulderlots/keziabattle002.jpg

Evasion Of Invasion
08-18-2008, 12:28 PM
(sos) viruz - u should try cleanin it up and work on ur coloring skills also try to spend more time doing the outline ur lines are pretty shakey
Shamee - cant read it dude sry. unless it says mae... then i guess thats a pretty funky style
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/mint.jpg
crits?

mekosbc
08-18-2008, 01:13 PM
virus the e's midde bar lookz mad shaky...

Stim
08-18-2008, 01:16 PM
bored, drunk

http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/5608/ehcc9.png

seywhat
08-18-2008, 02:49 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage130.jpg
first day back to school sketch, gonna start fuckin with this style a lil more. crits on letters would be appreciated

mint- the m looks too round imo, like the rest of the letters are more blocky
tear- work on your lines and if you use the bar going in front of the e and a, make it go in front of the r too
ante- throw a drop shadow on that ish, the letters are niiice

Scream Out
08-18-2008, 02:54 PM
Seperate the E from the N mannnn .. and how can you draw so messilly ? ... i must use atleast 3 peices of paper for every clean sketch.

This says RAHER ... get it ? .. Aher with a R ... Raher ? ... yeah.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/574b0687.jpg

Yeah really.
It isnt finished ... and i dont know whether TO finish it ?.

Should i ? . Shouldnt i ?
If i finish it i MIGHT even KULAR it rlyy Eur00.

dude that is such a dope concept, i just dont like all the negative space behind the H, i think it would look dope if you had a little something around it like all that splatter kinda stuff you usually have around or behind your pieces. if you know what i mean haha, i fail at explaining + describing

Mass Appeal
08-18-2008, 03:07 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/860c92a4.jpg

Trash said the same thing ! ... next time ill do the cloud thing.

Scream Out
08-18-2008, 03:11 PM
looks badass, i really dig your style dude
allways been a fan of the euroish shit

South-Pole
08-18-2008, 03:12 PM
mass-nice idea,(not the name,the H),finish it?what are you waiting for,go and finish it,edit:problem solved lol
shamee-dope,what does it say?
pathos-simples simples simples
stim-i feel sick now
ante-feeling the bars
viruz-e looks too shakey

seyar-nice freestyle,work on the hands thoough

claz
08-18-2008, 03:44 PM
Fuckin scanner really likes to highlight my fuck ups. Anyway i know its rough i gotta re-work it but figured i might as well put it up n get some crits.

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d57/XXXylophone/claz1.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
08-18-2008, 04:03 PM
Yea Thank Guys I see what you mean. With the "E" Like that was my Frist Pic in while so my hand was sooo un steady.. But Its a new steez so Hey Im going to work on it after I finish doing something with Meko and I'll post it up.

nemzone
08-18-2008, 05:17 PM
lol had somethin happen tonite that made a lot of shit hit home!! neway ppl think way too much bout owt others think, they care more bout 'crits' than how they work looks.. do ya own shit, graff is bout being uniqe!!! if ur shit, practice. but yeh im not gona be in contact with el family frm now on so probs wont be online, back to iraq on sunday anyway.. i hope to get flicks on somehow though.. take care, to the few who know me...
SEYER hot as fuck, lovin use of bars, aswell. proof it works...

MASS il be honest, iv alway looked at ur shit different... and ONLY JUST NOW realise thats a good thing...mate ur shit is different, and that means some ppl wont like it but u know what?? thats what ur trying for!!1 means ppl will notice u mate. and u seem to be in it for the long term. keep at it pal...

Mass Appeal
08-18-2008, 06:22 PM
Nemz ... you do know its Ras right ? ... you was always good help cheers .. im looking to join the forces one day .. maybe one day well meet up in the middle of World War 4 and say fuck this lets go BOMBING .. hahah get it ? yeah.

nemzone
08-18-2008, 06:50 PM
i do indeed pal.. i remember i used to rip u bout ur shit, but hell uv improved... just wanted t say wat i thought lol. u should mate. best decision i ever made was joinin the army... except u wont have much time for writing.... lol. take it easy bruv

Mr yarbles
08-18-2008, 07:23 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/25qpsah.jpg
Messed it up
:/

framin-It
08-18-2008, 07:44 PM
edit

"Bi2aR"
08-18-2008, 08:42 PM
word check out ma new mascot
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0002-11.jpg
"Spitin hot fire like a dragon" Dragon

this is my old one
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0009-1-1.jpgthe "report hamster abuse" Hamster

framin it-not feeling it, what does it say?
Yarbles-also not feeling it, the e doesn't seem to fit in with the other letters

Thrice
08-18-2008, 09:05 PM
yarbles - The A is way off, fix the proportions
bizar - That's fucking awesome, the right foot looks a little off.
Crits on my A?
http://i33.tinypic.com/2885z7b.jpg

seywhat
08-18-2008, 09:48 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage130.jpg

bump for some crits on the letters

thrice- that a looks pretty good, the middle bar needs to be thickend up just a bit
bizar- fresh, just work on the wings

there seems to be alot of negros in here not crittin for some reason. just remember the rules, give crits to get crits

Mr yarbles
08-18-2008, 10:36 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/oggwp2.jpg
Drew this before any of you guys critted me
Fucked up the s :/
Working out my proportions and everything
I think what makes the e look wierd is the notches so I'll tkae those out.

Sayer looks good I like it

Thrice push in the legs of you a more it's too wide

Bizar lovin that dragon :)

Spraycan Stories
08-18-2008, 10:45 PM
Yarbles-Theres this dope writer meks in my area im not sure if your near by or anything but that name is pretty close and make the bars on A and S thinner to fit in with the rest of the letters

Mr yarbles
08-18-2008, 10:48 PM
I usually rock a z and not an s
So yeah.
That and I'm no where near any dope writers
:/
Suburbs suck balls.

skeetz
08-18-2008, 11:05 PM
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/rake1.jpg

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/rake2.jpg

these are two sketches i did and wanted to get some crits on so i could chamge them before i started with markers

sayer-stuff looks dope

and i love the dragon work on the wings though

Bazer
08-18-2008, 11:12 PM
>:|

(SoS)Viruz
08-18-2008, 11:36 PM
Skeetz- Simps.....

GIzUrD
08-19-2008, 12:11 AM
[QUOTE=rsakens;1183747]bump ====]


this is hot too props for that man felling the G tumor style =] nice concept man QUOTE]


i was thinking more of an amniotic sac... like the preggers women have, but yea, tumor works also.

sheltr
08-19-2008, 12:29 AM
yo gizurd, wanna exchange?

whahappen?
08-19-2008, 12:47 AM
remember me?
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/2871/getattachmentaspxmv5.jpg
it's wack, but fuck it
havent drawn in awhile

Snew
08-19-2008, 12:59 AM
Yarbles- I dig the simp.. just try to keep all the letters proportionate, expecially the A and the S or make the others bigger..
Framin- Fresh two page spread.. similar to yesterday, but im diggin the fill better today.
Bizare- I dig the first karac, the second one needs some work.. its probly best you put it to rest with the new one.
Skeetz- definately stick to simps dude.. the style will come later..
whahappen- its an alright throwie.. i mean it seems to flow well except the S throws it all off..

this is from an exchange a while back.. dont mind my handstyles.. i have NO skills...

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo33.jpg

Bazer
08-19-2008, 01:17 AM
remember me?

it's wack, but fuck it
havent drawn in awhile


hell yeah! whats up guy! where you been? you gonna post some more shit? i wanna see how much you progressed!

Sone10
08-19-2008, 01:50 AM
OK now this is not that good but its like my second one, spent around 30mins on it all just sketch

http://i514.photobucket.com/albums/t347/sone10_2008/WebCam_20080818_19411.jpg

can someone just give me a few ideas on wat to fix up, i think i stuffed up my S

whahappen?
08-19-2008, 01:51 AM
hell yeah! whats up guy! where you been? you gonna post some more shit? i wanna see how much you progressed!
i got caught like middle of last school year and havent been sketching much at all since then so i havent really progressed at all haha
probably gotten worse
i think i might just start sketching a little, posting my throws and whatever, checking out the toy thread
and by the way, your pieces are crazy
especially that ballpoint pen one against some dude, i cant remember

smikoer
08-19-2008, 03:11 AM
Yarbles; im gonna go against the grain.. make the rest more top heavy like the A.. but as you already know.. proportions.
Snew: nice simp, i would have fixed that M up to fill the whitespace up a bit more. seems unbalanced?

First time posting anything more than a tag on teh internets:
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/4602/koerpointcm7.jpg
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8383/zedddqc6.jpg
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/3874/pornnc8.jpg

fonone
08-19-2008, 06:26 AM
eh koer make the middle bar of your E longer, it will look better. not really liking the R either but overall it's different which is good. sick of seeing the same old shit. reminds me of some of the old school perth shit

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/3718/aug19214tk7.jpg

00-made-00
08-19-2008, 08:34 AM
Irek- i like that style, i dont think the curl on the I flows tho.
Koer- i dont think you should connec all the bars together.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimrcolouredalright.jpg
Ive been colouring in photoshop because its easier.

Thrice
08-19-2008, 09:06 AM
It may be easier to color in photoshop, by the way it looks cool as hell, but I recommend practicing with markers, it may ruin it but gotta get better at it someway.

fonone
08-19-2008, 09:08 AM
so he can be the ultimate king of sketching?

00-made-00
08-19-2008, 09:12 AM
Exactly a sketch means nothing, ive never painted with a full colour sketch theres no point its only gonna get covered in dirt and paint, i used to colour sketch but its a waste of time, its easier to fill with paint than it is with markers.

blastblast
08-19-2008, 10:14 AM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/Photo606.jpg
ignore the purple shit
other than that the shading look ok?

Thrice
08-19-2008, 10:20 AM
You need to go very SIMPLE, and the shading is bad, the 3D is messed up. Those lines to need to stay parallel to each other.

Edit: clean your hands, they're dirty.

00-made-00
08-19-2008, 10:20 AM
give crits to recieve young padowan.

blastblast
08-19-2008, 10:56 AM
thanks and i'll wash behind my ears also!

erase2
08-19-2008, 11:00 AM
koer - what kind of paper is that, lol
irek - yeah, no curl on the I and make the E and the K more simpler to better fit the other letters
aimr - nice letters
blast - def do simples
sone - the S throws off the flow i think you should make it more vertical
snew - nice simple, i think an uppercase E would have worked better though
whahappen - nice throw
skeetz - nice style, i lise the first better than the second
yarbles - very sick, yeah the S is a little fatter than the rest
seyar - i think if you incorporated the style that you did for the E and A into the other letters it would have come out better
bizar - sick character
romo - nice coloring, im not a big fan of the symmetry though

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3090/2777860629_6b43065d60.jpg?v=0

EDIT: better picture

Thrice
08-19-2008, 11:37 AM
erase-that is so sick man, only crit I can give ya is fill the negative space in between the letters, maybe thicken that forcefield, can't see it to well.

Crits so far?
http://i36.tinypic.com/ejefk6.jpg

The Chronic
08-19-2008, 12:59 PM
good shit erase

Spraycan Stories
08-19-2008, 01:45 PM
Thrice- Why is the H so straight make it flow with the A

Thrice
08-19-2008, 01:55 PM
Can I make it flow, without curving the right bar exactly the same?? I really don't want to make every letter the same setup, with right bended bars.

Drakula
08-19-2008, 02:13 PM
Sloppythrowups for some people on this forum:

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/c88e413a.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/f1aeabe8.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/a6352db8.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/6b8db2ea.png

rsakens
08-19-2008, 02:24 PM
rane exchange
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture0071.jpg?t=1219172958
remember spelled it wrong
rember two thousand and eight keanerone
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture010.jpg?t=1219172998

bump
seywhat

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage130.jpg
shit is fresh man dope freestyle letters are all sick
just that layer on the e could have been a bit longer =]

smikoer
08-19-2008, 02:45 PM
cheers for the crits.
erase2: SHIT recycled lookin' paper
rsakens: SO DOPE.. ah

rsakens
08-19-2008, 03:36 PM
thankx for the crit but if you look at the quality in
the experience section my stuff isnt worth it posing down there jet
give me a few more months dude :D

skeetz
08-19-2008, 03:39 PM
alright. but seriously rsakens except for the E after the N on the bottom piece (which looks like another n to me) its dope all the way through

South-Pole
08-19-2008, 04:19 PM
Sloppythrowups for some people on this forum:

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/c88e413a.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/f1aeabe8.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/a6352db8.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/6b8db2ea.png
haha,nice so te see my name up there,thanks rabe(i think i owe you something now lol)

some realy nice stuff on this page
kean-dig your style

rake-yes,you did and you used bars,and did very good,just on the k make the bottom kick straigther,and the top one go higher,and make the letters the same size(ok not the same size,but somewhat almost)

Aimr-gtfo,and grab some markers like everyone else,naw j/k :p
feeling it

kroc_oner
08-19-2008, 05:02 PM
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0087-1.jpg
nice bombs dracula
a new style im working on

simple zen
08-19-2008, 05:44 PM
i see u fixed the E

whahappen?
08-19-2008, 05:56 PM
Sloppythrowups for some people on this forum:

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/c88e413a.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/f1aeabe8.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/a6352db8.png

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/6b8db2ea.png
daaaamn these are nice, i used to fucking hate your old shit to be honest

Drakula
08-19-2008, 05:59 PM
daaaamn these are nice, i used to fucking hate your old shit to be honest

i don't blame you man, my old stuff was toy as fuck. What do you write again? You used have those crazy philly handstyles or whatever there called and I couldn't read em lol.

whahappen?
08-19-2008, 06:10 PM
i don't blame you man, my old stuff was toy as fuck. What do you write again? You used have those crazy philly handstyles or whatever there called and I couldn't read em lol.
haha, i used to write amar
now i dont really have a set name, kinda just fuck with different letters a lot

VoyR
08-19-2008, 06:10 PM
I Didn't do this, a friend did. Thought I'd post it anyway. :p
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/david_voyer123/Nems1voyer.jpg

whahappen?
08-19-2008, 06:29 PM
chill with the background shit^
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/4734/getattachmentaspxfg4.jpg

Drakula
08-19-2008, 08:06 PM
That two thousand and eight is dope! Your stuff's always so clean.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/0825834d.png

I always end up freestyling my stuff now. I'm too lazy to put work into my sketches haha.

(SoS)Viruz
08-19-2008, 08:22 PM
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0087-1.jpg
nice bombs dracula
a new style im working on

Man go A lil similar. None of the letters Flow. Take off all the add-ons