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exitus
09-02-2008, 07:35 AM
did u use pencils? use markers dood
your highlighting is realy nice so is your color but you do need to work on your letters

REKD_ONE
09-02-2008, 07:53 AM
new to this site figured id get some feedback from here.
heres my latest, crits and advice would be great
yea my handstyle sucks lol
safe

DonaldFour
09-02-2008, 08:01 AM
those are markers. the highlights are in white prisma colored pencil

and can i ask how i needa work on my letters bad? it's a simple, -.-' just sayin lol

major"LEAG"
09-02-2008, 12:49 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=124&pictureid=681

Hit me with the crits...

ErrorOner...
09-02-2008, 12:55 PM
Throw up your crits... tell it like it is

sex without condoms
09-02-2008, 01:09 PM
bumpeasy


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/173106.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/173122.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/173135.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/173330.jpg
i really like this e

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/173353.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/173444.jpg
fucked that up.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/173528.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/173558.jpg

hump da bump

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/135857.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/135912.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/135931.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/135958.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140021.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140122.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140331.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140401.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140427.jpg

Sadistic.Child
09-02-2008, 01:10 PM
Weak crew name ^

weak sketchwa of mine to sum it up :)

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3010/2820181222_c3907133db.jpg?v=0
marker freestyle ^

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3002/2812631294_270ce063bc.jpg?v=0
bored ^

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3075/2807177809_cc6a2a678d.jpg?v=0
plain piece of shit ^

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3233/2785423115_b3429943d2.jpg?v=0
old ^

.

sex without condoms
09-02-2008, 01:12 PM
Why even post in here bash all your work is pure fire no one can give you legitimate critique here with an exception of a few writers. You're just showing off.

no beef.

Sadistic.Child
09-02-2008, 01:15 PM
okay :'(
:(

cerex89
09-02-2008, 04:01 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/IMG_0004.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/IMG_0003.jpg

Nem
09-02-2008, 04:09 PM
Cerex, that K is lookin kinda off.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/noname-2.jpg

i know the B doesnt flow.

exitus
09-02-2008, 04:10 PM
seriously that name is weak
and how do you guys decorate your blackbooks, i got one today and its to bland

cerex89
09-02-2008, 04:14 PM
NEM- the bottom of the S docent really fit the letter and lose the little dots on the letters
DONALDFOUR- bend the N a little so it flows more with the sketch

exitus
09-02-2008, 04:28 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/7263/0902081721hb6.jpg

Apoc
09-02-2008, 04:31 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=124&pictureid=681

Hit me with the crits...

...................... :p

personally i think your backdrop is ugly... not wack... but ugly. try something more abstract to fit with the piece.

Sadistic.Child
09-02-2008, 04:55 PM
you seriously dont know what your talking about do you?
all he needs to do is practice with straight letters, drop all the technicle stuff

testr
09-02-2008, 05:22 PM
cerex- fix up that k
bash-those are sick man i dont know why you post in here
nem-maybe try squaring off the b a little bit to match the rest
donaldfour-fix up that g
and bump for crits...
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/8008/viceexchangelp1.jpg

sex without condoms
09-02-2008, 05:43 PM
prolly gonna get the bottom of this page or something but w.e

not finished.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/183938.jpg

some paint shit
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/blla-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/Untitled.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/raoeeeeeeeeeeeeee.jpg

Sadistic.Child
09-02-2008, 05:46 PM
hahah get the top of the page instead

exitus
09-02-2008, 05:48 PM
on the top one are the triangles cut away or stripes
i dont really like it except for the colors
the bottom 3 are sick for ms paint wich is hard as hell

Fube
09-02-2008, 05:50 PM
bump for crits


http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture095.jpg


happy last day of summer... -_-


Weak crew name ^

weak sketchwa of mine to sum it up :)

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3010/2820181222_c3907133db.jpg?v=0
marker freestyle ^

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3002/2812631294_270ce063bc.jpg?v=0
bored ^

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3075/2807177809_cc6a2a678d.jpg?v=0
plain piece of shit ^

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3233/2785423115_b3429943d2.jpg?v=0
old ^

donald, dont change shit. looks good to me, better then a lot of the shit i see in here.

love it bash, btw u can post your shit where ever u want. i dont think your lookin for crits. u just like to post. its all good.

testr
09-02-2008, 05:51 PM
how the fuck did i end up with the bottom page twice?
just one more time...
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/8008/viceexchangelp1.jpg
please someone

exitus
09-02-2008, 06:07 PM
looks good, i like the letters, finish it

este_oner
09-02-2008, 06:50 PM
did u use pencils? use markers dood
your highlighting is realy nice so is your color but you do need to work on your letters

not true.
everything i do is with colored pencils.
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s98/dustinthewind00/complete.jpg
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s98/dustinthewind00/IMG_0001-1.jpg
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s98/dustinthewind00/estor.jpg
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s98/dustinthewind00/IMG.jpg
just making a point.

and Bash, get your ass in big boy forum.
<3

WolfBurrns
09-02-2008, 06:58 PM
seriously that name is weak
and how do you guys decorate your blackbooks, i got one today and its to bland

those really no "decorating" involved.. It kinda just happens from being handed around. Being bored. I've tested a couple white markers on mine. Jumo and i exchanged and he wrote on it. Stickers.. blah blah

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/blackbook.jpg


edit: real good shit este.. I personally hate colored pencil. But you pull it off.

Sadistic.Child
09-02-2008, 07:40 PM
Exchange with my new lover RAE

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3220/2823488448_e196e4bf1b.jpg?v=0

i really dont like the outcome, it was a marker freestyle

exitus
09-02-2008, 07:45 PM
not true.
everything i do is with colored pencils.
<3

awww shit sorry, those are nice dood
i just think that markers are more like the real thing

exitus
09-02-2008, 07:47 PM
those really no "decorating" involved.. It kinda just happens from being handed around. Being bored. I've tested a couple white markers on mine. Jumo and i exchanged and he wrote on it. Stickers.. blah blah

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/blackbook.jpg


edit: real good shit este.. I personally hate colored pencil. But you pull it off.



yea cool, where do you get your stickers? and ive seen some relay cool blackbooks, like gesus's. that shit was so cool

Sadistic.Child
09-02-2008, 08:51 PM
love it bash, btw u can post your shit where ever u want. i dont think your lookin for crits. u just like to post. its all good.

how did you know:p

Sarto
09-02-2008, 09:16 PM
just quick sketchs , i know the o is not round enough ,
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/004-4.jpg
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/005-4.jpg
soild page ,
testr - pretty dop see, lets e some colour ,
just not feeling the first letter as much .

whahappen?
09-02-2008, 09:34 PM
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1954/bssu8.jpg

Fube
09-02-2008, 09:37 PM
For talkin, a bump on this... Tweaked a lil bit.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16205.jpg


nice shit raby...
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/9130/tasqmt6.jpg


http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h-1.jpg




http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo353.jpg


http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/torn.jpg





http://a263.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/58/l_f84e7c4204dc14602d1f07cee51e94d6.jpg


six - sick sketches. yet again I wish I had an S

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/sketches_Vagrant.jpg



some ill shit here
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/66/copyoftim071bt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/4231/tim066dm6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1527/tim055oa8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/2910/tim050mg6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/2755/whoza8.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/7672/tim070jt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3159/2795878478_a69898104c.jpg

bumpin from the back!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture046.jpg
sketch i lost intrest in.

sex without condoms
09-02-2008, 09:39 PM
Fube i love all your work
weed+arrows

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223216.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223239.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223313.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223404.jpg
Finished
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/neww.jpg

fonone
09-02-2008, 11:08 PM
sexual condoms dude, you should give me a throwup :) i honestly cannot do them..the bottom one reminds me of a tiger by the way haha...

sarto - go simpler dude, i thought the top one said jarto to start with and the R is hella ugly.

testr - thats a fairly decent simple just lose the star ontop of the I and i'd make the top bar of the left part of the D come straight back to the spine, or atleast not on such an angle.

some old shittttt, and some really old shittttttt. i was going to post some newer stuff but imagshack is being gay now, so another time.



http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/9672/aug14212hb5.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/9104/aug14211tu7.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3554/aug20216rx6.jpg
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/3971/aug27220xg1.jpg
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/5153/aug27219eh1.jpg
http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/2008/jul18199zt8.jpg
http://img141.imageshack.us/my.php?image=jul18198lx6.jpg
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/3337/jul30208ul2.jpg
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/474/apr03132ft0.jpg
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/7207/apr19147tw4.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7540/apr19144th9.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7540/apr19144th9.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9930/apr19145mw9.jpg
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/8227/apr19146yp8.jpg
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/1584/ireknasbm1.jpg
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/9898/may17161pw1.jpg
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/1682/may17164ye4.jpg
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/2848/may27169dp6.jpg
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/6812/may27171lu8.jpg
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/2295/reknaf1.jpg
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/9743/jun19180ne5.jpg
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/7033/jun05179tj5.jpg

NoCanControl
09-02-2008, 11:44 PM
ireckn' your shit has always been legit to me. but it seems that alot of people bite your style in some way. like i see alot peeps letters that remind me of yours.

WolfBurrns
09-03-2008, 01:28 AM
Bottom page steezeeee
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/noozedrip.jpg

the grinch *****
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/grinch.jpg

and my slutty ex girlfriend..
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/erica.jpg

Aint it strange how you dont find out your girl is a slut until AFTER you start dating her? Shiit... Imma just smoke my marlboro lights maan

SiC_one
09-03-2008, 01:55 AM
Ireckn- pretty sweet simples, I would start working on your fill now, that you have the letters down.

http://a853.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/62/l_82b400e6976fe396bd2aab882cffa26c.jpg

Thrice
09-03-2008, 02:02 AM
Void-getting alot better, and clean keep it up.
wofl- ya that always happens man. Go figure

SiC_one
09-03-2008, 02:14 AM
I cant believe somebody else is actually on at three in the morning.

Thrice
09-03-2008, 02:17 AM
I haven't started school yet and everyone has and is gone so i've been bored as shit.
Sketch in progress for talk.
http://i35.tinypic.com/1zvyfza.jpg

WolfBurrns
09-03-2008, 03:06 AM
True true. I got a new girl though that cooks and wants to pay for everything. ha. looks good too. Hm. Never get any crits.

Bored. Bad quality. Whateva
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/charr.jpg

Ahem- Looks good man. Good structure. Flows.. Got that lip thing goin in each letter. I dig it.

SiC_one
09-03-2008, 10:55 AM
Ireckn- pretty sweet simples, I would start working on your fill now, that you have the letters down.

http://a853.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/62/l_82b400e6976fe396bd2aab882cffa26c.jpg

Bump since I the shitty bottom of the page.

exitus
09-03-2008, 11:19 AM
http://i35.tinypic.com/2vbafxl.jpg

crits please
didnt use color because i gues color sucks
nice on the girlfriend but im not a big character guy

Scream Out
09-03-2008, 11:21 AM
couple freestyles from this morning
pictures do the colour and overall look no justice, i need to get a real camera
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo376.jpg
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo377.jpg

exitus
09-03-2008, 11:23 AM
nice, i love the letters but your right the colors arent very good (the brown mostly)
but it looks real good

Scream Out
09-03-2008, 11:31 AM
excitus, - do simples dude. copy the letters off your keyboard for a while, read the new to graff thread. you have no structure, no flow, no feel for the letters

ahem - i dont like any of your bends personally, i think it would look a lot better with straight bars, but it seems like your starting to get a better feel for your letters. on another note all of your middle bars seem to be smaller than the main bars especially on the M, try to keep all your bars the same width even if they arent a major part of the letter for now. it also miight help if all the horizontal bars were in line with each other, because right now the A bar is lower than the H bar but the H bar is fairly even with the middle E bar.

void - good job on the simple, i cant tell if you used bars or not but regardless thats a solid start



TO ANY TOYS WHO HAVE NOT YET READ THE NEW TO GRAFF THREAD: READ THE NEW TO GRAFF THREAD

Scream Out
09-03-2008, 11:37 AM
nice, i love the letters but your right the colors arent very good (the brown mostly)
but it looks real good

not all graff is meant to look beautiful, the choice of colours was intentional and turned out as i had wanted it to, the quality of the picture is the problem.

exitus
09-03-2008, 11:37 AM
ok, i finished the last one though

http://i35.tinypic.com/sxi4iw.jpg


Ill do simples now

exitus
09-03-2008, 11:50 AM
http://i35.tinypic.com/14938l3.jpg

what now lol

Scream Out
09-03-2008, 11:58 AM
use some damn bars. and do that about 100000000000 more times untill you can do it clean, keep all your bars the same width, your S is lacking, if you have to, use straight bars (like a backwards Z)

sketch pages of simples, its the only way you will ever improve, dont post anymore sketches untill you have a nice solid simple you can be proud of. once you get that down then you can begin to start bending bars and developing some kind of a style. this is not going to happen in a day, nor a week, it will take months to years of dedication to get anywhere. if your not in it for the long run, get out now.

exitus
09-03-2008, 12:15 PM
dont shadow or like overlap or anything

sex without condoms
09-03-2008, 12:28 PM
Fube i love all your work
weed+arrows

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223216.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223239.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223313.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223404.jpg
Finished
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/neww.jpg

you already know the deal.

InkDrips907
09-03-2008, 12:45 PM
I wish i could throw up like you mayne...-.-
Exitus, what screamo said. just keep it simple for a while. that last ones a start. just keep workin on them and youll slowly progresss. thats how i did.

sex without condoms
09-03-2008, 01:09 PM
who wants tosses done im bored.

milfhunter
09-03-2008, 01:12 PM
ireckn' your shit has always been legit to me. but it seems that alot of people bite your style in some way. like i see alot peeps letters that remind me of yours.

hey so wats with the 666 writers pm u for?

South-Pole
09-03-2008, 01:34 PM
exitus-make your letters the same size
rae-that last piece is fire
hang-second sketch looks better
void-nice simple

seywhat
09-03-2008, 01:54 PM
who wants tosses done im bored.

im down, you want one in return?

letsgobombin
09-03-2008, 02:34 PM
who wants tosses done im bored.
im in, do pocs, i'll get yours up asap but it'll prob be 2 days cus tomorrows my birthday and day after is school

Stussy
09-03-2008, 03:01 PM
who wants tosses done im bored.

im down... you want one back? i write rayz

Evasion Of Invasion
09-03-2008, 05:24 PM
who wants tosses done im bored.

ill take u up on that

Cans - theres too much space between ur letters try bringin em closer and lose the extensions

some of my whack sketches
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0182.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0179.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0178.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0077.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0076.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0080.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0084-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0083.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0085-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0087-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0088-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0086.jpg
cover of my new blackbook
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0180.jpg

Sadistic.Child
09-03-2008, 06:30 PM
who wants tosses done im bored.

you still owe me something dickhead <3
:D

whahappen?
09-03-2008, 06:55 PM
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1954/bssu8.jpg
ya'll

FABLE IR CRU
09-03-2008, 07:01 PM
who wants tosses done im bored.

I wanna get down on this ill do 1 for u as well,I rite Fabe

sex without condoms
09-03-2008, 07:11 PM
i cant do Fs :/
sorry bro

Shoook
09-03-2008, 08:11 PM
ill take u up on that

Cans - theres too much space between ur letters try bringin em closer and lose the extensions

some of my whack sketches
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0182.jpg


yo you live in the 250 area by any chance?
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/scan0002-1.jpg
new sketch for new name

Evasion Of Invasion
09-03-2008, 08:18 PM
nope i live in the 204 (winnipeg) y?

Shoook
09-03-2008, 08:24 PM
just that pice in your book with the flag and it says eva looks the exact same as a guy out here no flix but yeha j.w

Teez-EmM!!!
09-03-2008, 08:54 PM
who wants tosses done im bored.

sex you down for a throwy exchange?

synps
09-03-2008, 08:57 PM
cans- the style is all right trying fattening the bars and bring the letters closer in
Evade- I like the first and the last pieces. I like the neil one too You really know how to use colors good.
Fenck- is that in gel pen? anyways looks good i think you just need to make the one taller and a bar on the top left to show its not just an upside down t

heres a new one, not sure if I like it myself tell me what you think:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/seenapsmall.jpg

JETPACK!!
09-03-2008, 09:50 PM
hey so wats with the 666 writers pm u for?

i've always wondered that myself. it's yo numba one groupie, greed.


http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0085-1.jpg

do more shit like this, i hate your style. i like this.

WoeInfinite
09-03-2008, 09:53 PM
evade is dope.
sex wanna throw me?
:F

osnapizzel
09-03-2008, 10:02 PM
evasion, whahapen?,synpus some nasty shit

i donno im high...

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/2811/gggggxm6.png

garbage down tha way
09-03-2008, 10:44 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h-4.jpg
Sex i want a throw too, even though youve done me one before but this time ill return tha flavor.

ohsnap- its so messy! i know you can do better than that.

evade- i 100% agree with jetpack. that n is off the chain. i dont understand why you dont just stick with that style, you can pull it off.

SiC_one
09-03-2008, 10:54 PM
cans- move your letters closer together
evasion- some of those sketchz are pretty sweet, the billboard sketchez are sweet, cool ass color combos

trying out something a little different, dont think I like it. D came out whack.
http://a72.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/57/l_8ed5dcda512519e31083adfc8979eb6f.jpg

sex without condoms
09-03-2008, 11:10 PM
EVERYTHING FOR EVERYONE

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234702.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234719.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234756.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234922.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234952.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235157.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235500.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235549.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235612.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235822.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235842.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235906.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223216.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/000044.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/000134.jpg

osnapizzel
09-03-2008, 11:15 PM
what about me??

sex without condoms
09-03-2008, 11:36 PM
i didnt know you asked but im done for tonight ill get a onap and hoer up tomorrow

osnapizzel
09-03-2008, 11:57 PM
OHSNAP and thanks

SiC_one
09-04-2008, 12:05 AM
another sketch i just finished trying some new stuff out.
http://a474.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/53/l_27198b2606b88f20cb33cce1adfe4859.jpg

osnapizzel
09-04-2008, 01:24 AM
make the o same as the d on the inside


cleaned up and tweaked, its kind of a new style still so its a lil rough

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/9302/picture351uh9.jpg

WolfBurrns
09-04-2008, 01:29 AM
Wow. Really feelin that man. The top one especially. Could go without the bubble though.. But overall, its real fresh.

REKD_ONE
09-04-2008, 07:06 AM
can i get some crits on these, new to this site so advice would be smart
safe
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=3255&d=1220359941
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=3256&d=1220359984
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=3254&d=1220359931

Infoe
09-04-2008, 08:14 AM
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/5278/picture1ro9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
hmmm

exitus
09-04-2008, 09:11 AM
wow info and rekd, both are realy good. info i think the top one looks better.
rekd i dont like the drip one but all the others are realy cool

sex without condoms
09-04-2008, 11:53 AM
EVERYTHING FOR EVERYONE

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234702.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234719.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234756.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234922.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234952.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235157.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235500.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235549.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235612.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235822.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235842.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235906.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223216.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/000044.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/000134.jpg
hump da bump

garbage down tha way
09-04-2008, 01:45 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h-4.jpg


slump

sank.
09-04-2008, 02:07 PM
super fresh mang, best thing i've seen in here in a while. i'd just thicken some of the bars, especially the leg of the r. and i think it'd look better with a drop shadow with some highlights in it.

wanna exchange????

on a side note i don't get why people put the 3 dots when they have no affiliation with s13 or whatever gang it is.

garbage down tha way
09-04-2008, 02:12 PM
yeah im down, you write sanek?

i dunno about the three dots, i just to them to be cool.

La Coka Nostra
09-04-2008, 02:25 PM
it's MS13, and who gives a fuck.
graffiti has nothing to do with gangs.
they're just dots.

sank.
09-04-2008, 02:33 PM
its in my sig, but you don't have to do the seņor part :p

as to graffiti having nothing to do with gangs, i find that untrue. but i think putting the 3 dots and things like inverted crosses are used by too many people, played out. i'm not hating, just stating my opinion.

JETPACK!!
09-04-2008, 02:38 PM
theres a difference between gang graffiti an true graffiti. if you dont know the difference, find a nice bridge to jump off.

sex without condoms
09-04-2008, 02:45 PM
fuck this 3 dots talk.
hoer is too dope
oh snap i dont like your pieces but all of your simples are pure fire like those little straight letters you do...so dope
whatup coka nostra !!

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235523.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/154006.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/154018.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/154037.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/154052.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/154106.jpg

WolfBurrns
09-04-2008, 03:20 PM
Hows that for ya Sex?! I got some throws too niggy

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/throw-1.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/throw2-1.jpg

fr3gna
09-04-2008, 03:26 PM
nooze- I love it, clean throwies

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u105/dansartwork/fegnapen.jpg

workin on a little style

La Coka Nostra
09-04-2008, 03:37 PM
whatup coka nostra !!


hey baby.
come hang out in good afternoon some time.
;]

sex without condoms
09-04-2008, 05:00 PM
WORD MAN!! we'll smoke mad blunts

:]

La Coka Nostra
09-04-2008, 05:03 PM
*high five*

E-BLUNTS!

fr3gna
09-04-2008, 05:07 PM
nooze- I love it, clean throwies

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u105/dansartwork/fegnapen.jpg

workin on a little style


bump

exitus
09-04-2008, 05:24 PM
looks relay good
the e and g holes are realy wide while the f, r and a holes are realy small

synps
09-04-2008, 07:27 PM
Nooze- nice throwies
fregna- not bad not bad I think you need to extend the top bar of the f more
rooftop - trying doing a more simpler fill so you can work on your letters try doing simpler stuff then progressing
freedom- damn thems is nice sick style



heres a new one, not sure if I like it myself tell me what you think:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/seenapsmall.jpg

"Bi2aR"
09-04-2008, 07:28 PM
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/4555/bbooksm4yb3.jpg

this one is yummy, the others pretty much suck, which i bet is the reason why you're post was deleted.

osnapizzel
09-04-2008, 07:32 PM
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/9302/picture351uh9.jpg

bumps for critts

InkDrips907
09-04-2008, 08:02 PM
Pizzel - Love the style, shit looks fresh. specially like your color choices
T - its wack but cool. i havent seen to many styles like that.

Heres one i did in MS paint earlier. I dunno if im aloud to post this kinda stuff in this thread but if not, tell me please. this is all i got, i wont be gettin my real shit up here for about a week so... 8Bit Bitch Crits?

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/3299/8bitbitchqv2.png

Rooftop Resident
09-04-2008, 08:07 PM
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/4555/bbooksm4yb3.jpg

this one is yummy, the others pretty much suck, which i bet is the reason why you're post was deleted.

Damn.. well, at least you're keeping it real with me, thanks.

osnapizzel
09-04-2008, 08:16 PM
fregna, that style has potential i like the fact that your using the bars properly but you need to go more simple on them

AEN.
09-04-2008, 09:13 PM
Hey I'm new here and I've been doing graff for about 6 months now, and this is my two recent stuff, crit please :D I want to improve.
i'm expirementing with coloring so yah
http://i35.tinypic.com/dpy749.jpg

unfinished atm
http://i35.tinypic.com/308k5s4.jpg

hazetheone
09-04-2008, 09:23 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/k147ya.jpg
im back

osnapizzel
09-04-2008, 09:26 PM
word, shouldve done it with markers though, would have looked sick

hazetheone
09-04-2008, 09:34 PM
every last one of my markers are bone dry
:/

osnapizzel
09-04-2008, 09:42 PM
survival mode it five finger discount straight up

sex without condoms
09-04-2008, 09:46 PM
Caer i always think the topmost bar of your R is too thick and then the rick leg is too small. If you made the top bard thinner the right leg would be longer and it would definitely look better

atlok7
09-04-2008, 09:57 PM
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/4555/bbooksm4yb3.jpg

Maybe it's cause the one handstyle I put in there is kind of shitty? I don't know, any feedback is much appreciated...


QUASIMOTO! hell ya kiddo

seywhat
09-04-2008, 10:55 PM
flyin through your neighborhood at hyper speed, astro travelin off that hydro weed.
that shits fresh, but work on your letters in the other peices. keep that simple style

fonone
09-04-2008, 11:31 PM
not true.
everything i do is with colored pencils.
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s98/dustinthewind00/complete.jpg
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s98/dustinthewind00/IMG_0001-1.jpg
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s98/dustinthewind00/estor.jpg
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s98/dustinthewind00/IMG.jpg
just making a point.

and Bash, get your ass in big boy forum.
<3


Fube i love all your work
weed+arrows

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223216.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223239.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223313.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/223404.jpg
Finished
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/neww.jpg


couple freestyles from this morning
pictures do the colour and overall look no justice, i need to get a real camera
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo376.jpg
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo377.jpg


http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h-4.jpg
Sex i want a throw too, even though youve done me one before but this time ill return tha flavor.

ohsnap- its so messy! i know you can do better than that.

evade- i 100% agree with jetpack. that n is off the chain. i dont understand why you dont just stick with that style, you can pull it off.


http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/5278/picture1ro9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
hmmm


sexual condoms dude, you should give me a throwup :) i honestly cannot do them..the bottom one reminds me of a tiger by the way haha...

sarto - go simpler dude, i thought the top one said jarto to start with and the R is hella ugly.

testr - thats a fairly decent simple just lose the star ontop of the I and i'd make the top bar of the left part of the D come straight back to the spine, or atleast not on such an angle.

some old shittttt, and some really old shittttttt. i was going to post some newer stuff but imagshack is being gay now, so another time.



http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/9672/aug14212hb5.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/9104/aug14211tu7.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3554/aug20216rx6.jpg
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/3971/aug27220xg1.jpg
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/5153/aug27219eh1.jpg
http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/2008/jul18199zt8.jpg
http://img141.imageshack.us/my.php?image=jul18198lx6.jpg
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/3337/jul30208ul2.jpg
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/474/apr03132ft0.jpg
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/7207/apr19147tw4.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7540/apr19144th9.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7540/apr19144th9.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9930/apr19145mw9.jpg
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/8227/apr19146yp8.jpg
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/1584/ireknasbm1.jpg
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/9898/may17161pw1.jpg
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/1682/may17164ye4.jpg
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/2848/may27169dp6.jpg
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/6812/may27171lu8.jpg
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/2295/reknaf1.jpg
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/9743/jun19180ne5.jpg
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/7033/jun05179tj5.jpg

bump aen, caer, bitch and a few others off this page too.

http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/8097/sep05227fw1.jpg
http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/449/sep05226ga6.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6282/sep03225of1.jpg
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/2029/sep03224vk0.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/8350/sep03223xh5.jpg
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/2107/sep03222fm2.jpg
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/729/sep03221cu6.jpg
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3245/sep05228op4.jpg
goin back to my roots.

Nirvous2000
09-05-2008, 12:14 AM
some shitty throws, and soome simps, haha, just trying the new back to school supply haha.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p111/AscheZuAsche_album/peptothrowsblackbook.jpg

snappizzle- fuckn dopeeee shitttttt.

aen-not feeling the colouring man, the colours dont look goood togethor, and the multi colour thing our doing just isnt flowing, i dunno. the letters arent too bad though. keepin it pretty simple

Scream Out
09-05-2008, 12:49 AM
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo373-1.jpg

fonone
09-05-2008, 12:57 AM
bump aen, caer, bitch and a few others off this page too.

http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/8097/sep05227fw1.jpg
http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/449/sep05226ga6.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6282/sep03225of1.jpg
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/2029/sep03224vk0.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/8350/sep03223xh5.jpg
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/2107/sep03222fm2.jpg
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/729/sep03221cu6.jpg
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3245/sep05228op4.jpg
goin back to my roots.

Nirvous2000
09-05-2008, 01:17 AM
some shitty throws, and soome simps, haha, just trying the new back to school supply haha.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p111/AscheZuAsche_album/peptothrowsblackbook.jpg

snappizzle- fuckn dopeeee shitttttt.

aen-not feeling the colouring man, the colours dont look goood togethor, and the multi colour thing our doing just isnt flowing, i dunno. the letters arent too bad though. keepin it pretty simple

Bump, of course i got the bottom of the page hahahaha

crits crits

disclaim
09-05-2008, 01:37 AM
dope throwie and ur simples r nice n clean too

disclaim
09-05-2008, 01:38 AM
new shit
http://i347.photobucket.com/albums/p457/101duck45/jaefr.jpg

rsakens
09-05-2008, 03:30 PM
Weak crew name ^

weak sketchwa of mine to sum it up :)

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3010/2820181222_c3907133db.jpg?v=0
marker freestyle ^

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3002/2812631294_270ce063bc.jpg?v=0
bored ^

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3075/2807177809_cc6a2a678d.jpg?v=0
plain piece of shit ^

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3233/2785423115_b3429943d2.jpg?v=0
old ^
dope shit exchange ?

new outline
pg keane mean submaschine
fucking spelled it wrong again damm i need some dictionary
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture-13.jpg?t=1220640420

sex without condoms
09-05-2008, 04:38 PM
keane is too dope
that's fire

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/173415.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/173440.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/173502.jpg

DECO ONE
09-05-2008, 07:39 PM
REWL ONE i did today...

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/rewl1.jpg

Critz??

Bash, that first one is sick! i love the B

Evasion Of Invasion
09-05-2008, 08:47 PM
lower the sides on the W looks like an a with wings
Irekn - throw in some bends in itlooks way better with em in it
jeaf thickin the outline and clean it up looks rly shakey
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0012.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0016.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0014.jpg

Czar One
09-05-2008, 08:50 PM
Some wack ish from the books. My Z is fucked.
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/PaperTransit.jpg

Nirvous2000
09-05-2008, 08:55 PM
That train is tight, haha the letters are aight, that R doesnt seem to follow the same style it looks more soft or something i dunno.

seywhat
09-05-2008, 09:55 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage132.jpg
old name, new freestyle

czar- letters are lookin good, throw some 3d on it
evade- straight, but not my cup of tea
rewl- pretty much just listen to evade, the other letters are pretty ill

MontanaPainter
09-06-2008, 12:33 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1010613.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1010615.jpg
yay or nay

Bazer
09-06-2008, 01:06 AM
dang bash, all of your shit looks like mine but wac version of it.

MontanaPainter
09-06-2008, 01:33 AM
hahaha

(SoS)Viruz
09-06-2008, 01:46 AM
My New Steez. Im working on. It looks Daul cause I have added any Value or Color what soo ever. But this is my Frist Pic in a While so yea.... CRITS?

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan.jpg

Disclaim- You doing bars but work on keeping them Str8er like Str8 edge.
Evasion- Dope Character, and Peices. I like that style you got going on.
Czar- Work on that "Z" I say you go back to regular letters or your older style cause I say it and it was dope.
Irek- Those were all nice Peices but not feeling the Frist one.

JETPACK!!
09-06-2008, 01:48 AM
its me! first thing other than graff ive sketched in many years

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/8408/mebe3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bazer
09-06-2008, 01:54 AM
tear nevermind what i said on your myspace. that kinda looks like fezat current letters he's been rockin.

(SoS)Viruz
09-06-2008, 02:03 AM
My myspace???? O i just saw it.

Someone said that earlier to me, but I thought they were talkin shit. But naw man, If it dose look like what Fezat letters I'll change it up a bit. But to tell you the Truth Baze I have been workin on that for a while like a would do 1 letter at a Time. Untill I liked it. I say since last week. But I'll change it up. but once I do. It going to be 100x Doper!! :) Cause I just did the "T" Now Im going to bed lol. PEACE

Bazer
09-06-2008, 02:05 AM
gnight. i love you.

MontanaPainter
09-06-2008, 02:37 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1010626.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1010623.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1010622.jpg

SNAP!
09-06-2008, 02:42 AM
Just some freestyles... throws, and a hand i did for someone, mad iffy on that steelo...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3112/2831898989_896652575e_d.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3170/2831903375_d544d4eeaa_d.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3214/2831899079_c4dd47c60e_m_d.jpghttp://farm4.static.flickr.com/3169/2831899097_fabca2e261_m_d.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3022/2831899143_e2786277cc_m_d.jpg

rsakens
09-06-2008, 04:02 AM
dope shit exchange ?

new outline
pg keane mean submaschine
fucking spelled it wrong again damm i need some dictionary
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture-13.jpg?t=1220640420

bump





snap bwaahha you suck what are you doing on here
to much beef on pg ?
dam you havent improved 0 in months :confused:

rsakens
09-06-2008, 04:55 AM
oh yeah and there is a snap already
this is an simple you shit bricks if yah see his wild shit
http://www.graffitiart.de/photobook/images/0809/graffiti-cgasuj.jpg

osnapizzel
09-06-2008, 07:19 AM
lollllll

Mass Appeal
09-06-2008, 07:28 AM
Hey guys im back..
Bulgarias scene was abysmyl...the only graff there was from the Poles who must of come and smashed shit haha..

Anyways much improving ? ...

That SNAP is sick .

Mass Appeal
09-06-2008, 07:29 AM
Hey guys im back..
Bulgarias scene was abysmyl...the only graff there was from the Poles who must of come and smashed shit haha..

Anyways much improving ? ...

That SNAP is sick .

SNAP!
09-06-2008, 09:07 AM
It's good to see despite switching threads, the internet still makes you think you're a king kens.

Im still rocking simple straight letters, oh nose!

rsakens
09-06-2008, 10:44 AM
It's good to see despite switching threads, the internet still makes you think you're a king kens.

Im still rocking simple straight letters, oh nose!

haha call me king kong toy fag ass motherfucker

your still rocking simple :D bwahahaha i can see that
back the fuck of or smash you again punk :eek:


what up mass were is the new shit always dig your style :)

fOrSaQeN
09-06-2008, 11:36 AM
http://i36.tinypic.com/sgoln4.jpg

fOrSaQeN
09-06-2008, 11:40 AM
lol @ deleted posts....

b SQUARED 08
09-06-2008, 12:08 PM
Snap- I like all of those, but especially those two throws.

Keane- Lookin' good as usual other than the spelling error lol.

Suphr- I'd go a bit simpler. Some of your letters (particularly the H and R on the last sketch) really throw off the flow, or lack thereof. Also, the sizes of the letters aren't consistent either. Keep at it.

Armen- I'm feelin' your M and E, but the other letters don't exactly fit with them if you know what I mean...

And since I've been extra busy with school and work lately, I haven't had the chance to hit the books, but here's my latest...
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/VideoSnapshot.jpg

seywhat
09-06-2008, 12:10 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage132.jpg
old name, new freestyle



bump. can this negro get any crits?

jest- try makin the tops of the j and t symetrical like the letters are. make the top of the s fit with the e more also
armen- nice throw, thers something im not feelin about the e, but i cant put my finger on it
snap- basically just keep doin what your doin
suphr- pretty fresh style, but especially in the bottom one work on your r

(SoS)Viruz
09-06-2008, 12:17 PM
My New Steez. Im working on. It looks Daul cause I have added any Value or Color what soo ever. But this is my Frist Pic in a While so yea.... CRITS?

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan.jpg

Disclaim- You doing bars but work on keeping them Str8er like Str8 edge.
Evasion- Dope Character, and Peices. I like that style you got going on.
Czar- Work on that "Z" I say you go back to regular letters or your older style cause I say it and it was dope.
Irek- Those were all nice Peices but not feeling the Frist one.

Bumb for Crits. I didnt get any on the last page.:(

seywhat
09-06-2008, 12:33 PM
i would say turn the t around so its opposite of the r, then make the tops of the e and a the same. letters are decent though for sure

NoCanControl
09-06-2008, 01:04 PM
hey so wats with the 666 writers pm u for?

a parady to 206 writers hit me up.

just to make fun of people who do that stuff.

but soon after i posted that. i remembered camp six six six.

://

and plus my area code is

6 6 6 _ _

haha, so its whatever man.

Speedy
09-06-2008, 01:07 PM
Suphr I like all your stuff. Just try to make the H and R a little bit smaller. It looks off with them so much bigger than all the other letters. Tear that's pretty sick for being so simple. I like the structure. Just add a little more to it. maybe some 3D and a forcefield or little bits inside the letters.

I'm between names right now. So bear with me if this sucks.
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/5057/blackbookdoveik4.jpg

rsakens
09-06-2008, 01:53 PM
(SoS)Viruz
it looks alright
the t is covered up a bit to much by the e
realy feling that flow in the keep it that way
just would have done small changes with the middle bar the check it out
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/untitled-37.jpg?t=1220727177
the a R is sick my friend :)

seywhat its dope whould be nice do
see some shit from you with a lil effort mate

fOrSaQeN
your throw says armen right ?
looks sweet the a isnt working man looks weird the other letters have alot more style work on that

osnapizzel
09-06-2008, 02:04 PM
hey snap if your ever hungry dont be afraid to ask for a bite

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/4791/picture362xh4.jpg

http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/5715/hhhhhnh3.png

Speedy
09-06-2008, 02:21 PM
Ohsnap your name pretty much describes your pieces. Unbelievable. 10/10 for the toy forum. I forgot to crit Jest. I'm really diggin the fat bottoms. It looks real clean too. The only thing I would say is change the S somehow. It looks too much like the J to me.

fOrSaQeN
09-06-2008, 02:26 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage132.jpg

bridge the top gap of the e.s.o.. flare out the L a bit to the right to cover that dead space and that last E dips down longer then the rest of the letters just doesnt look even



thanks for the crits gents...ill try on working with similar flows

Speedy
09-06-2008, 03:00 PM
Forsaqen it seems like there's too much going on in the middle of the E. Otherwise it's dope. I especially like the tag below it. I've never seen marker flares. haha

fOrSaQeN
09-06-2008, 03:12 PM
;)

Speedy
09-06-2008, 03:16 PM
Suphr I like all your stuff. Just try to make the H and R a little bit smaller. It looks off with them so much bigger than all the other letters. Tear that's pretty sick for being so simple. I like the structure. Just add a little more to it. maybe some 3D and a forcefield or little bits inside the letters.

I'm between names right now. So bear with me if this sucks.
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/5057/blackbookdoveik4.jpg

Bump for crits

skeetz
09-06-2008, 03:28 PM
speedy-nice bar proportions
forsaqen- the L is way too small

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/rakeagain.jpg
crits?

Mass Appeal
09-06-2008, 04:41 PM
i was planning on doing a little sketch tonight but i dont have access to a scanner ... so heres my last sketch repost.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/860c92a4.jpg

Batman_Onest
09-06-2008, 04:45 PM
wack

go back to ur old style, this wannabe euro aint crackin ya deeeg

Mass Appeal
09-06-2008, 04:53 PM
Nah .. no way.
Im staying with what i have ..

if your talking about a wanabee European like style then i have to disagree...iv never once gone for a European style or claimed to rock one since i stopped doing the " wanabee LA Revok style "...if your looking for a wanabee European style then look at that Mar One prick.

" wanabee euro " ... how could i be a wanabee European ?
Hahah but still cheers for your feedback.

Zire
09-06-2008, 06:56 PM
speedy- nice work, good proportions and simple letter. i personally think the name "dove"(if it aint already taken) would be a better name than dovs.
skeetz- nice and simple and actually..quite good

white
09-06-2008, 07:32 PM
irekn - great color use
Bash - i like the one with the blue 3D, the one with the big pink thing inbetween ur letters needs to go
ohsnap - your piece with the blue to yellow and red and back to yellow and blue is amazing
mass - im gonna have to agree, like your old style more

here are some i have done in the last couple weeks CRITS???
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0451.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0452.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0453.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0454.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0459.jpg

Batman_Onest
09-06-2008, 08:01 PM
Nah .. no way.
Im staying with what i have ..

if your talking about a wanabee European like style then i have to disagree...iv never once gone for a European style or claimed to rock one since i stopped doing the " wanabee LA Revok style "...if your looking for a wanabee European style then look at that Mar One prick.

" wanabee euro " ... how could i be a wanabee European ?
Hahah but still cheers for your feedback.
dont be pedantic, just because ur from europe dosnt mean u cant be on euro writers nuts.

fOrSaQeN
09-06-2008, 08:03 PM
why dont you guys practice on improving your own styles instead of winning the internet

JETPACK!!
09-06-2008, 08:19 PM
man your shit is wack as hell, dont talk. improve on your own steeze before tellin others too.

-sense-
09-06-2008, 08:26 PM
nukes last seconds ones bomb, just clean the 'e' up.

http://i36.tinypic.com/noybeh.jpg

http://i37.tinypic.com/fut3ya.jpg

you be illin

fOrSaQeN
09-06-2008, 08:38 PM
man your shit is wack as hell, dont talk. improve on your own steeze before tellin others too.

ohh snap son you win the internet..you want a cookie? tools like you is why i lurk a lot here....check my sig...wasnt the first wont be the last...dont feel like lookin up your older post and make you look stupid..cause you idiot trolls are all the same...buncha smack with no skill to back it..gtfo

I Hold The Throne
09-06-2008, 08:39 PM
http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/5715/hhhhhnh3.png[/QUOTE]

Ohsnap i am lovin this one. But id like to ask what did u use? paint markers or wat?

JETPACK!!
09-06-2008, 08:43 PM
ohh snap son you win the internet..you want a cookie? tools like you is why i lurk a lot here....check my sig...wasnt the first wont be the last...dont feel like lookin up your older post and make you look stupid..cause you idiot trolls are all the same...buncha smack with no skill to back it..gtfo

man, look at your shit before you even open your mouth about mine. i aint frontin like my shit's hot, but it's a lot better than your's. prove me wrong.

go paint something or some shit..

Batman_Onest
09-06-2008, 08:46 PM
why dont you guys practice on improving your own styles instead of winning the internet
because greaffiti is a crime citizen

fOrSaQeN
09-06-2008, 08:49 PM
man, look at your shit before you even open your mouth about mine. i aint frontin like my shit's hot, but it's a lot better than your's. prove me wrong.

go paint something or some shit..
ill paint once ive got some styles down i dont wanna blow some shit on the wall and have it look like shit......im just tryin to get better man thats all..

because greaffiti is a crime citizen

so is bad spelling....:p

JackJill
09-06-2008, 09:03 PM
its me! first thing other than graff ive sketched in many years

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/8408/mebe3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

That's pretty good considering that's the only thing other than graff that you've sketched in years.

-sense-
09-06-2008, 09:06 PM
haha nice pants

-sense-
09-06-2008, 09:09 PM
nukes last seconds ones bomb, just clean the 'e' up.

http://i36.tinypic.com/noybeh.jpg

http://i37.tinypic.com/fut3ya.jpg

you be illin

bumb

GIzUrD
09-06-2008, 10:21 PM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/1893/drunkentt4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i wasnt really straight when i did this.

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3220/pinkgreenqg5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
simples

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5011/notsogoodwt4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
a couple different things

http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/3398/college2ms2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
not sure if i posted this last time

Batman_Onest
09-06-2008, 10:26 PM
so is bad spelling....:p

no it isnt

JETPACK!!
09-06-2008, 10:40 PM
batman, why is forsaqen not on the super lame list?

Speedy
09-06-2008, 11:17 PM
speedy- nice work, good proportions and simple letter. i personally think the name "dove"(if it aint already taken) would be a better name than dovs.
skeetz- nice and simple and actually..quite good

I like dove too. But then I tried Doves. And I like Dove better because it's shorter. However, I have a lot more fun with S's than E's. So I'm trying Dovs out. That way it's still technically Doves but without the E that I suck at. Thanks for the crits. Anyone else?


ohh snap son you win the internet..you want a cookie? tools like you is why i lurk a lot here....check my sig...wasnt the first wont be the last...dont feel like lookin up your older post and make you look stupid..cause you idiot trolls are all the same...buncha smack with no skill to back it..gtfo
http://www.morgantownchick-fil-a.com/content_images/BeefPartyPooper.gif

white
09-07-2008, 12:15 AM
bump for crits since everybody is talking shit on the page before................
irekn - great color use
Bash - i like the one with the blue 3D, the one with the big pink thing inbetween ur letters needs to go
ohsnap - your piece with the blue to yellow and red and back to yellow and blue is amazing
mass - im gonna have to agree, like your old style more

here are some i have done in the last couple weeks CRITS???
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0451.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0452.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0453.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0454.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0459.jpg

fonone
09-07-2008, 12:22 AM
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/9500/sep07229li7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/9500/sep07229li7.aa54d1c9e8.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=113&i=sep07229li7.jpg)

nukes- the top ones best i just dont like how you bend the legs of the K.. and try and keep your bars the same width for now. work on your hand aswell.

Speedy
09-07-2008, 12:32 AM
fon you have way too much. i can't make it out at all. It looks good art wise. But what's the use if it's illegible. IREK maybe? oh well. Make it a bit simpler and clean up all the crossing lines and stuff. I want to see what it looks like when it's not in blueprint form.

fonone
09-07-2008, 12:34 AM
lol? its only my first pencil outline...

Speedy
09-07-2008, 12:40 AM
Clearly. I'm just saying I want to see the finished product.

seywhat
09-07-2008, 12:46 AM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage132.jpg
old name, new freestyle


one last bump

irek- ill, maybe bring the top bar of the i up just a bit so its not all covered up, exchange?
nukes- just use straight bars for now, get them down. then add bends and shit
gizurd- theyre all fresh as fuck, nice style
sense- try workin on peices, those seem like outlined handys. unless thats what theyre supposed to be, then good job

fonone
09-07-2008, 12:49 AM
yeah true, ill do that thanks. ill be down for an exchange ill get to it once im done with this.

Speedy
09-07-2008, 12:59 AM
Sey I like your letter structure but you do need to work on your gaps.

letsg0skate
09-07-2008, 01:05 AM
hey heres a quick tip for everyone in here, I can't count how many times I have seen a decent simple here only to be apalled by the handstyle claiming the piece. I suggest working on your handstyles before anything, because that is the thing most people are gonna see and it gives a first impression of how skilled you are! I am just looking out so good luck and hopefully some of you take this advice, because it may not seem important now but don't taint your name by starting with a whack hand ;]

GIzUrD
09-07-2008, 01:10 AM
NUKES-you need to add a little funk.

Infoe
09-07-2008, 01:22 AM
Not blackbook, but a little throwie on my skateboard grip
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/5320/image01519jz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

fonone
09-07-2008, 01:26 AM
info the N and F need work, id say make the bottom lip(?) of the F bigger, and have it coming out further.. and make the lines that go into the N spread further apart.. which state you in btw?

Infoe
09-07-2008, 01:40 AM
Yeah it usually is better, but it's hard to write on sandpaper.. Haha, cheers though.
NSW bro, my thing says Sydney.. Lol

Speedy
09-07-2008, 01:46 AM
Infoe that's not too bad but it's a pretty dumb idea if you actually write info.

Infoe
09-07-2008, 01:48 AM
And why is that..

Some old shiz;
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/Picture-7.jpg

-sense-
09-07-2008, 11:03 AM
some uglys for ya
http://i36.tinypic.com/33pc006.jpg

ErrorOner...
09-07-2008, 12:16 PM
how the fuck do I post pictures the same way everyone else is without making some gay attachment??? HELP MEEE

Bazer
09-07-2008, 12:17 PM
i wonder who's gonna clean this big mess.................. >:|

SLY 303
09-07-2008, 12:36 PM
Im new what do you guys think?

Shoook
09-07-2008, 12:55 PM
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/scan0003.jpg
new shit give me some crits haters are welcome

sly dont go to learngraffiti to do your griffiti youll just get shit on by every writer here man tihnk of your own shiet

sex without condoms
09-07-2008, 01:12 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140903.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140925.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140948.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140959.jpg

-sense-
09-07-2008, 01:14 PM
shook im diggin it

bumin over bullshit


some ugly bettys for ya
http://i36.tinypic.com/33pc006.jpg
some sigs
http://i36.tinypic.com/noybeh.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/fut3ya.jpg

Speedy
09-07-2008, 01:18 PM
http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/5243/1fenekkc2.png

My suggestions...

Evasion Of Invasion
09-07-2008, 02:29 PM
lower the sides on the W looks like an a with wings
Irekn - throw in some bends in itlooks way better with em in it
jeaf thickin the outline and clean it up looks rly shakey
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0012.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0016.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0014.jpg

Sex - hot as usual (btw love the throw u did for me im tryin to make one for u lol)
Sense i wont say simples but more keepin ur letters the same width in ur case and im diggin the cursive stuff

rsakens
09-07-2008, 02:40 PM
sick shit mr paranoid cat =]

skeetz
09-07-2008, 05:53 PM
evade- i like it. stuffs nice
sense- i like the sigs but you gotta work on making the other stuff cleaner

another sketch i did. didnt have an eraser on me so its kinda sloppy
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/anotherrakesimp.jpg

white
09-07-2008, 06:08 PM
info - like it but i think the bend in you N is a little overdone
sense - your shadow needs work hardcore
sly - agreed dont use "graffiti creator" websites, like i told you earlier, just use bars and write you name over and over again and style will come with time
evade - sick drawings
rake - i would say work on your 3D a little more, change up your handy

CakeWalk99
09-07-2008, 07:02 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0017.jpg

disclaim
09-07-2008, 07:35 PM
i reckon u shld go simple n lose those extensions

b SQUARED 08
09-07-2008, 07:35 PM
Cake- go much simpler. Your bars don't have a consistent thickness, and as a whole, there is no flow whatsoever.

Rake- maybe bend your K and E a bit more so that they match the bending of the R and A. The K could use a bit of tweaking also. Make the tops of the letters have a consistent angle, if that makes sense to you. The handy could use some work also. You're def headed in the right direction...

Evade- Pretty hot stuff there. I'm really feelin' the shading on those.

Shook- See Speedy's post. I second this motion

Sex- Lookin' good as usual. No offense, but do you ever make anything other than throws? Just curious.

Sense- Your 3d is WAY off. Also, try to make it look cleaner next time. Your letters aren't horrible, but making it look that sketchy really doesn't help...

Info- Lookin' good. I'm really feelin' the I. Very nice.

Rooftop Resident
09-07-2008, 08:38 PM
Alright, so here's an older sketch and some more simple shit since I was told to go more simple...
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/6808/dsc00554wp7.jpg
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/8780/dsc00557vs3.jpg

And here are a few throw ups...
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/1455/dsc00559eo1.jpg
http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/4168/dsc00558vw5.jpg
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/8606/dsc00544bx2.jpg

sex without condoms
09-07-2008, 08:40 PM
the bottom of the Y looks a little fat but thats dope

+Hoodwigga
09-07-2008, 08:44 PM
yeah it looks a lil wack on paper but thats dope painted
fix the hand tho it really doesnt fit with your throw

GIzUrD
09-07-2008, 09:15 PM
anoy is pretty good

drugsfromthebrain
09-07-2008, 09:38 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/tagwitelmo/Sketches/MigueErix.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/tagwitelmo/Sketches/Eryxcolor.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/tagwitelmo/Sketches/EryxQuagmire.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/tagwitelmo/Sketches/EryxPennywise.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/tagwitelmo/PurpCanvasZoom1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/tagwitelmo/Sketches/EryxPoyo2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/tagwitelmo/Sketches/eryxbook.jpg

sex without condoms
09-07-2008, 09:55 PM
that 2nd of with that prisma is too dope, go to the bigboy thread man

sanrtizer
09-07-2008, 10:28 PM
aint been on here for a bit
yo sex u owe me an exchange meng i write karo now
http://http://img61.imageshack.us/my.php?image=232027qn4.jpg
dont feel like crittin rite now

JETPACK!!
09-07-2008, 10:55 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/tagwitelmo/Sketches/Eryxcolor.jpg

dope letters, i like how you cover up just about all the deadspace.

the symmetry is ill too.

sex without condoms
09-07-2008, 11:48 PM
possible name change idk.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003248.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003709.jpg

other shit
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003306.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003325.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003344.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003357.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003420.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003432.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003449.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003503.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003517.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003531.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003543.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003601.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003615.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003650.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003751.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140903.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140925.jpg

MarOne...
09-08-2008, 12:22 AM
You have those throws down to a fine art, sex. :)

La Coka Nostra
09-08-2008, 12:26 AM
fo sho.
those throws are tight.
and eryx, the pieces are ill, but the characters and handstyles could use some work.

osnapizzel
09-08-2008, 01:15 AM
fre fre ehe eh freeesh

osnapizzel
09-08-2008, 01:22 AM
http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/5715/hhhhhnh3.png

Ohsnap i am lovin this one. But id like to ask what did u use? paint markers or wat?[/QUOTE]

nah kid 100% rusto

Mo152
09-08-2008, 01:35 AM
those throws, especially the orange one... are fuckin boss..

drugs... so fresh and so clean clean

rooftop, i would say, stay away from the extensions.

skeetz- your right, it is sloppy all the letters are all different sizes, and its almost like they all have a dif style.

i like te characters evasion.

after a brief hiatus
drew this in class, didn't have time to do the E before class ended,, and when i picked it up again i spaced the style and fucked up the E.
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/3874/img0126zy1.jpg

jupsick
09-08-2008, 01:47 PM
drugs- nice shit i really liked that...i think you should go to the bigboys forum dont think no one can help you here anymore
but i dont really like your char XD their wierd
sex-umm nice throws...but i dont like the "simples" you do
tho the throws rock!
mo-DUDE you did SO much proggres from the last time i saw your shit good job...
well as you said the E is well not in style...and by the way the arrows....they dont really flow...
well something new from school XD math got bored XDD
http://img142.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0809081234su3.jpg
http://img142.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0809081234su3.jpg

sex without condoms
09-08-2008, 02:36 PM
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/2827/0809081234su3.jpg

yo jupsick this is dope man

Thrice
09-08-2008, 03:07 PM
Drugs-way tooo fresh to be in this thread.
sex-same sick stuff, love to see them in paint
Mo-real clean stuff, so sick, the E seems to throw it off balance, try to incorporate the style of the other letters with it.

Should I keep the 3D look i got going or change the darker shade to black???
http://i36.tinypic.com/3321pgp.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/jl2gs2.jpg

skeetz
09-08-2008, 03:11 PM
thrice-try to finish something and then ask for crits. i mean suggestions now and then are rly helpful but youve been on that one piece for like 2 weeks now. at this stage you just need to do more to rly improve. just my opinion.
jupstick-O kinda doesnt fit but the rest is good.
sex- stuffs great. but on the name change... i already write rake... so yea idk. i was looking to change to a new name soon since too many ppl in my school know what i write so i need something new to change it up a little. but i still like the name.

heres some stuff i did in school today tried fixing up the last one and did anx attempt at a blockier style. rly dont like how the R turned out. suggestions?
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/rakesimplefixed-ish.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/rakeblock.jpg
dunno what happened to it going from black to grey i think the scanner is broken

sex without condoms
09-08-2008, 03:11 PM
maybe change your name.
try switching the E and the M or maybe just replace the E
idk, experiment d00d!

Edit
@ Rake if i wanted to change to rake i could because...
1. im better than you
2. i dont know you
3. i dont care.

Batman_Onest
09-08-2008, 03:20 PM
4 hes the sex

Mass Appeal
09-08-2008, 03:21 PM
5. Noone writes what my Nagger FoSale ! writes Yawhh Hurrrggghhhdddd

sex without condoms
09-08-2008, 03:31 PM
Damn Ras
fosale is my old shit!
shhhh.
:0)

and Batman is my favorite superhero:]

sank.
09-08-2008, 03:40 PM
mo - the 3d is solid and the letters are perty good, but some of those arrows seemed forced. like the first two don't flow with the letter structure, but that p is amazing!!

haven't really posted or sketched anything in a while... gonna paint it on thursday. does anyone else go through stages where you have no motivation to sketch and you literally have to force yourself to. maybe its just me :mad:

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_1152.jpg

and i haven't forgotten about you hoer! i'm just really lazy, but i'll get it done eventually :P

sex without condoms
09-08-2008, 03:42 PM
my *****h sank!
whatup man

and he's still dopeeee

LeaksOne
09-08-2008, 03:46 PM
Drugs- SUPER RAW!!! why are you even in the toy forum???
sex- your throw is pretty much perfected an its pretty hot
MO152-that sketch it nice. im feelin it
Skeetz-that first one is nice but the second one is kinda boring to me. still like it tho

whahappen?
09-08-2008, 03:47 PM
yeah it looks a lil wack on paper but thats dope painted
fix the hand tho it really doesnt fit with your throw
hands dont have to fit with your throws retard

whahappen?
09-08-2008, 03:50 PM
possible name change idk.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003248.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003709.jpg

other shit
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003306.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003325.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003344.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003357.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003420.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003432.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003449.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003503.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003517.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003531.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003543.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003601.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003615.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003650.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/003751.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140903.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140925.jpg
you wanna have a throw battle, only outlines, not even drop shadow
if you want to then PM me and we'll talk about due date and word

Drakula
09-08-2008, 06:20 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/11c72dac.png

Quick freestyle simple with running out fine liners.:)

NoCanControl
09-08-2008, 06:26 PM
exchange anyone before i have to get off the comp for my queer cousin.

wafflecakee
09-08-2008, 06:27 PM
nice and clean drakula, keep it up

sanrtizer
09-08-2008, 08:20 PM
mo- id tone it down for a little n work on structue dawg
ahem- ur on the right track...keepin it simpl
rake- that first ones aight
sex- those tosses are fresh man
raby- dope simps
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7957/232027kk5.jpg
crits if u can see the pic

sanrtizer
09-08-2008, 08:21 PM
dbl post shieeet

WoeInfinite
09-08-2008, 08:32 PM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3220/pinkgreenqg5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
simples

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5011/notsogoodwt4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
a couple different things

http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/3398/college2ms2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
not sure if i posted this last time

just went back, n saw this, had to bump.
Gizrd, this is siick dude, especially that green outline one.
lovin it.

Sadistic.Child
09-08-2008, 08:34 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/11c72dac.png

Quick freestyle simple with running out fine liners.:)

paint this shit :mad:

b SQUARED 08
09-08-2008, 09:28 PM
drakula- dope simps as usual.

sanrtizer- I can't even tell what that is. Work on your structure and worry less about coloring and designs. Lose the arrows and work on using bars.

Some bs I started sketching out of boredom in class today...
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/VideoSnapshot-1.jpg

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/VideoSnapshot-2.jpg

Sadistic.Child
09-08-2008, 09:38 PM
brelt or breh w.e that bullshit is... you need to work on your structure more then him dumbass.
that bottom one is hidious(i cant spell)
his says "K" FUCKING "A" its not that hard to read..

LAN3RTWO
09-08-2008, 09:38 PM
finnaly stuck with a style.
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii191/LAN3R/IMG_0371.jpg
For goer, not too happy with it now that i look.
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii191/LAN3R/IMG_0367.jpg
Over due, for big el
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii191/LAN3R/IMG_0369.jpg
dude im going to start posting over here its all fresh.. i fuuuucking loooove that gizu straight. we should trade.

b SQUARED 08
09-08-2008, 09:47 PM
brelt or breh w.e that bullshit is... you need to work on your structure more then him dumbass.
that bottom one is hidious(i cant spell)
his says "K" FUCKING "A" its not that hard to read..

Wow, you need to chill out. I wasn't talking shit; just giving the guy some crits. Mine says Brett, btw.

...Why so hostile?

sanrtizer
09-08-2008, 09:48 PM
brett- suck my bawlz