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braxtons a g
09-14-2008, 01:16 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/2vd4110.jpg
Sketch in progress
Dunno if I'm gonna finish I kidna fucked up the e

Braxton simples man simples
You think that using bars to sketch out a simple f once means you can start bending your bars to shit, and that adding a bunch of arrows is going to make it dope
Stick to simples
i cant stand arrows but thanks.. am i on the right track with the kave one though? cause he wanted me to do one for him so i rushed it.. it took like a minute so i didnt care for letter structure or anything

Speedy
09-14-2008, 02:47 PM
Lyfe lose the body on the second character and just use that head. I'm diggin it.
Here's a birthday card envelope I just did for my girlfriend's little brother.
http://i36.tinypic.com/2llhs02.jpg

smooth_nuts
09-14-2008, 03:03 PM
smile-the toss on the rigth is the best BUT your m is to small and doesnt flow to well...just keep at it man
ancy-feeling your simples bro
myself-3d's off....s is wack...and DO a x next time fool
braxton-new to graff thread...NOW!!

just going through my flickr
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3288/2807272024_a2aca6e23b.jpg
sicse,not sice....scanner doesnt doesnt pick up pencil to well :/
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3022/2807249452_6f88a88a2a.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3053/2806414103_157e62f864.jpg
cant function krew!
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3167/2851199231_05128f395a.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3132/2843772915_a81a3e9b74.jpg
that cfk and do are pretty old :/
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3215/2806433465_a1f9d39f99.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3037/2809054671_3c0b3c3325.jpg
thats all the sketch whoring im do for tonight...


bump...

devil at sea level
09-14-2008, 03:21 PM
lyfe-take away the negative space for your throw,fix the bottoms of the y's in the bar sketch
zaro-fix the shadow so its for the whole letter not just the top part, maybe make the letters taller so theyre not so awkward looking, i think itd help..
aeks-dont make the bars of the a and e paralell or its makes the rest of the letters not fit well
noah- if your bending the bars bend all of them not just the a, otherwisse its good, good dropshadow
siks-the k and second s are way to small, and fatten their bars up... dont do the purposely sloppy look witht he overlapping lines for pieces, thats more of a throw thing..

Speedy
09-14-2008, 03:23 PM
Thanks devil but it's for a 13 year old. I'm sure he won't notice. lol

devil at sea level
09-14-2008, 03:27 PM
wordd getting the little bro to like you is always a great way to get to the older sister, props

braxtons a g
09-14-2008, 03:31 PM
queezy- your tag looks super gang related?

braxtons a g
09-14-2008, 03:44 PM
okay took some advice.. name change and back to simples.. ill finish if you guys say its good

Rooftop Resident
09-14-2008, 04:03 PM
okay took some advice.. name change and back to simples.. ill finish if you guys say its good

Use bars! Listen! You're not even using bars! you are drawing basically icons that represent letters, not actually making them. Look at your E. It's like a really bad throw up. Use PLAIN STRAIGHT BARS.

Speedy
09-14-2008, 04:25 PM
wordd getting the little bro to like you is always a great way to get to the older sister, props

We've been dating for like 7 months. So I'm kind of past that point. lol He's just one of the few children that I like.

braxtons a g
09-14-2008, 04:35 PM
what about this

osnapizzel
09-14-2008, 04:35 PM
smooth nuts i like that shit, good throw nice character and really diggin the first sketch

unsuccsessfull
09-14-2008, 04:52 PM
some simps
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_1755.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_1748.jpg
and a lil somthing on a thing of printer paper lol
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/P1040527.jpg

Panda Jerk
09-14-2008, 04:57 PM
bottom page bump,and i did crit you cummy gym sock...just on your flickr :p

thanks bud:D

empw
09-14-2008, 05:29 PM
http://photos-b.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-snc1/v321/102/80/1223790226/n1223790226_30688441_1919.jpg

http://photos-f.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-snc1/v321/102/80/1223790226/n1223790226_30689101_8263.jpg

smooth_nuts
09-14-2008, 06:33 PM
some old doap shit on muh flickzer
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3198/2843787981_bb64f252eb.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3276/2843799967_76cc1fcc79.jpg

Panda Jerk
09-14-2008, 07:08 PM
http://www.flickr.com/photos/30431840@N06/2854322867/
crits

bumperrrrz

7nationarmy
09-14-2008, 07:12 PM
bumperrrrz

buzumpadumpbump

braxtons a g
09-14-2008, 08:39 PM
speedbump.
smooth.. why are you not regulatin shit with that second throw?!

Fube
09-14-2008, 09:53 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture048.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture047.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture035.jpg

osnapizzel
09-14-2008, 10:54 PM
fube thaaa shiitt!

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/3558/picture374jo9.jpg

something ive been trying out today, what do you guys think should i stick with it?

ATE
09-14-2008, 11:19 PM
Hey guys,
@smoothnuts- that shits illin'
@fube- Fucking ballin man....
My work in progress, haven a hard time makin a good E to go with this.....anyone wanna help/crits?
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk54/zomada/untitled-1.jpg

ATE
09-14-2008, 11:20 PM
Sorry dbl post...

osnapizzel
09-14-2008, 11:27 PM
ditch that 3d look and work on your letter structure

ATE
09-14-2008, 11:32 PM
ditch that 3d look and work on your letter structure
kay, ill work more on my structure. any idea's for an E though?

Thread-Locks
09-14-2008, 11:40 PM
ohsnap, the whole nap part is kindof giving me the yawns. work on structure homeboy

braxtons a g
09-14-2008, 11:54 PM
ohsnap, the whole nap part is kindof giving me the yawns. work on structure homeboy

you said nap and yawns in the same sentence :D it took me a second to realize you was talking about his name.. but yea work on your letters and ask these assholes on here if its good enough to fillin :D
on the other hand is the xtra! simp i did on the right track or is it new to graff thread again?-btw im talkin about the silver w/ blue outline one a couple posts up

osnapizzel
09-15-2008, 12:26 AM
it wasnt finished cause i was just fucking around with it, whats wrong with my letter structure can you be a little more particular

braxtons a g
09-15-2008, 12:47 AM
idk its something about the P and N that weird me out.. but if you make a change only make a small one.. it has a lot of potential so dont give up on it.. maybe its because its not finished man idk..

osnapizzel
09-15-2008, 12:54 AM
btw are you serious with your sig? like really man?

braxtons a g
09-15-2008, 01:01 AM
what part?

Rooftop Resident
09-15-2008, 01:06 AM
Ohsnap.. bland, not much going on... Block block block block. The A? Heavy on the right, and damn ugly. S should be funkier too.. Just yeah, you could try using curves?

~~>ANTIK<~~
09-15-2008, 01:07 AM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/graff037.jpg

did it in a frends book

Rooftop Resident
09-15-2008, 01:11 AM
what part?

all of it, and the piece your requesting crits on, my advice got deleted, because you won't listen and you need to stop posting and think about graffiti for awhile. Like, I told you do simple like phunks shit, and you go and try and make like a metal plate style piece that is exactly the same structurewise as all the other shit you posted. bluh.

braxtons a g
09-15-2008, 01:13 AM
antik- illa:]
rooftop- im going like as simple as it gets.. i dont understand man..

osnapizzel
09-15-2008, 01:17 AM
anoy i like my straights with blocks and sharp edges thats just me, i have curves where i think i need them

braxtons a g
09-15-2008, 01:19 AM
snap- what part of my sig?

osnapizzel
09-15-2008, 01:30 AM
the part where you state your name where you write and show 2 examples of your ups, your either a cop or completely stupid

braxtons a g
09-15-2008, 06:24 AM
lmfao yea ima cop.. im getting up for school right now. i didnt know they hired onto the force at such a young age. here ill fix it. just for you.

Mass Appeal
09-15-2008, 06:45 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture048.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture047.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture035.jpg

Buhhhmp


Braxtons .. Jesus shut the fuck up .. seriously .. and edit your sig its herrendous.
Its like MSN in here.

ATE
09-15-2008, 09:01 AM
Buhhhmp


Braxtons .. Jesus shut the fuck up .. seriously .. and edit your sig its herrendous.
Its like MSN in here.
Fuck you wanker, he's new...as far as i know....dont be fuckin hatin man...he's proud of his shit and i respect that....if you think its toy, you can fuck off becuase if he likes it...thats all that matters...were writers, not art critics....it be differant if he was doing that shit over burners....

sex without condoms
09-15-2008, 09:22 AM
^ just shut the fuck up!

you and lyfe should both change your signatures because they are ugly and big and annoying and take up too much space on the page.


one

osnapizzel
09-15-2008, 09:27 AM
fube thaaa shiitt!

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/3558/picture374jo9.jpg

it?

uggghhh bump

COLOR192
09-15-2008, 09:31 AM
fube- sick! luv u're style!
ohsnap - lose the mouths and eyes. other than that, it's rlly cool!
some shit i did yesterday... i coloured it but i'm too lazy to take a pic now...
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4928/img1353in1.jpg

braxtons a g
09-15-2008, 10:54 AM
wow.. ppl on here anymore.. i remember back in the day when i first joined ppl was happy to help you with shit.. now its a bunch of lazy ass dudes that only know the words "simpler, new to graff, and letter structure". where ever gesus krist went.. he needs to come back. shit was in line when he was on here. cant wait till i move to chicago so i can get away from these forums cause they dont help for shit anymore. and if i remember?.. most burners i talked to on here said they progressed more WHEN THEY TOOK A BREAK from these forums..

nero112
09-15-2008, 11:11 AM
because thats all you need to know for the minute bwoi n if yo ass dont learn you die. nah but on the real listen and learn ok .. your shit suuuks ass no style and no flow.

go back play around with words , letters and flow .

read the new to graff thread to it will help .

sketch3
09-15-2008, 11:22 AM
1 you dont need to move to chicago to leave bs

2 shut the fuck up

3 people arnt lazy, u really do need to do bars....for a long time

4 shut the fuck up

4 everyone is still helpfull, ur just not listening

Mass Appeal
09-15-2008, 11:25 AM
Hahahah word ^

00-made-00
09-15-2008, 12:07 PM
Simple letters are the best letters in graffiti.

guz
09-15-2008, 12:13 PM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/graff037.jpg

did it in a frends book


Antik- nice style man! great colour choice. keep it up BRo!
I'll have another piece for ya to crit in a bit

milfhunter
09-15-2008, 12:36 PM
antik work on ur letters a bit

nero112
09-15-2008, 12:47 PM
wow.. ppl on here anymore.. i remember back in the day when i first joined ppl was happy to help you with shit.. now its a bunch of lazy ass dudes that only know the words "simpler, new to graff, and letter structure". where ever gesus krist went.. he needs to come back. shit was in line when he was on here. cant wait till i move to chicago so i can get away from these forums cause they dont help for shit anymore. and if i remember?.. most burners i talked to on here said they progressed more WHEN THEY TOOK A BREAK from these forums..


the mods hardly come here anymore because 99.999999 % of you dont listen to anyones advice.. your all too quick to lap it up and listen when some other lil kid is kissin your ass but as soon as you get a reall bit of critisism you start bitchin n moanin n then we all get on the beef train to the death of graff....

sketch3
09-15-2008, 12:49 PM
i get on the sexy train to vagina vally

Mass Appeal
09-15-2008, 01:35 PM
the mods hardly come here anymore because 99.999999 % of you dont listen to anyones advice.. your all too quick to lap it up and listen when some other lil kid is kissin your ass but as soon as you get a reall bit of critisism you start bitchin n moanin n then we all get on the beef train to the death of graff....

Word again.
Well done Braxton ! :mad: :p

Bazer
09-15-2008, 01:49 PM
the mods hardly come here anymore because 99.999999 % of you dont listen to anyones advice.. your all too quick to lap it up and listen when some other lil kid is kissin your ass but as soon as you get a reall bit of critisism you start bitchin n moanin n then we all get on the beef train to the death of graff....

you dont know what youre talkin about... we're all here. always. 90% of the time mods are either invisible or not signed in.
the toy section mods just clean up the place. i really dont have much advice for people who are just startin out. just for the ones that are startin to get a little good because i can really see and tell them where they need to improve.

jupsick
09-15-2008, 02:04 PM
well fube...dope as walways...
umm color....use bars...and use them simple cuz what you should is uhmm...well wheck
well here are some of my "work"
http://xs231.xs.to/xs231/08381/15-09-08_1259419.jpg
http://xs231.xs.to/xs231/08381/15-09-08_1257386.jpg
some crits?

whosthisguy
09-15-2008, 02:24 PM
i like the RESU.

the DIU however doesn't match, you have the IU facing down, and the D facing UP. see what i mean?

sketch3
09-15-2008, 02:34 PM
ur e nad s arnt chunky enuff

edit, i just noticed i said ''ur e-nads arnt chunky''

jupsick
09-15-2008, 02:45 PM
i like the RESU.

the DIU however doesn't match, you have the IU facing down, and the D facing UP. see what i mean?

thats the point you know 0/0
its like wanna be toy 3D STYLE XDDD
and sketch yea i need to work on my structure

braxtons a g
09-15-2008, 02:45 PM
Word again.
Well done Braxton ! :mad: :p
right.. maybe if you would stop being an asshole and be more SPECIFIC.. all you guys keep saying is use bars.. k. 5 minutes. and when you tell me how much it sucks then wtf do i do.. obviously you should realize im dedicated.. were all fuckin writers. 1 looks bad, we all look bad. were like our own race.. maybe you should actually start helping. instead of telling me somethin stupid that i already know.. and as far as the using bars part. everytime i do. ppl STILL say "ew wtf omg wtf is that horrendous terrible art stick to pper omgzz im sucha burner lolz you are so toy kid".. then i think oh im sorry im not as perfect as you. like i said.. give me 5 minutes.. just chill out and tell me what needs worked on.. not that i need to go back and relearn everything.. i know the new to graff thread by heart.. just tell me whats wrong not what i need to learn.. people learn by mistakes.

sketch3
09-15-2008, 02:54 PM
did u not read points 2 and 4.

A. using bars dosnt mean do a weeks sketching of rectangles then busting a wldestyle
B.stop bitching a practice ur bars, ALOT
c. i mean alot, ur going to be wack for a loong time so dont get mad at us for saying it
D. get the fuck of the internet, sketch alot, sketch more, then sketch again
E.repeat D.
F. repeat again
G after many many many pages of wackness post up the few best sketches and ask for advice
H. STOP READING THIS AND COMPLETE D.THROUGH G. see u in a few months

nero112
09-15-2008, 02:54 PM
ok so heres some nice crits your stuff sucks pk deal with it . what you can do to fix it read through the getting started thread. read it till you have learned from it it will take you a while to get even simple and ledgable simples down . keep on practicing them until you like the way they look(and i mean realllly like em )((like you know you wnna take this simple 'E' to dinner buy it some roses then make sweet passionate love to it while listning to barry white))(((but no marriage yet you know , youv just met 'E' and dont want to rush it although maby moving in is ok ))) ok so keep it up with simples after you get someone like aher or whoever to aknowledge it and say good job improvment or whatever n just keep practising..

and baze what you said is what i meant the mods are invisible n only clean shit up but they hardly ever come in here to give crits as its not theyr job to give crits but to mod the place and keep shit out ....

braxtons a g
09-15-2008, 03:06 PM
thanks nero

sketch3
09-15-2008, 03:08 PM
whut his was just relationship advice on e....follow my steps
get of the net

nero112
09-15-2008, 03:09 PM
well if he gets off the net he wont he wont be able to set up a nice life with 'E'

braxtons a g
09-15-2008, 03:18 PM
yea but he wasnt an asshole about it like you was.. you said it with a cocky tone.. no beef just help guys for real. im tryin to learn this shit n get it down

-ShAmEE-
09-15-2008, 03:25 PM
not many flicks on this page....

Gnar
09-15-2008, 03:38 PM
yea but he wasnt an asshole about it like you was.. you said it with a cocky tone.. no beef just help guys for real. im tryin to learn this shit n get it down

i just wanted to say that atleast he has wat he needs to start off with down wich is more then i can say for a lot of ppl thatdont even get their basics down first and just go straight into a wildstyle that no one can read

sketch3
09-15-2008, 03:41 PM
ag its the internet dont be such a bitch, and it wasnt being cocky u mearly said shut up and sketch....infact u complaing about crits is cocky my shit got overlooked 3 times

Rooftop Resident
09-15-2008, 03:50 PM
thanks nero

There you go, that is simple, that is using bars. Now, practice that over and over because that shit needs work, if you are dedicated, keep at it but you don't need to post everytime you sketch out four letters and expect people to have better advice for you at that point than they did the day before. You're going to suck for awhile, it's a harsh realization, but just deal with it and use it to fuel your determination to get better.

koma_1
09-15-2008, 03:51 PM
bit blurry, but what you think?
http://i37.tinypic.com/5xk391.jpg

Rooftop Resident
09-15-2008, 03:55 PM
anoy i like my straights with blocks and sharp edges thats just me, i have curves where i think i need them

True, just speaking my mind, your shit is still legit, just a little plain to me.

sketch3
09-15-2008, 04:03 PM
koma ur using bars but not going simple, the whole point of bars/simple is to learn how to construct the basic letters

koma_1
09-15-2008, 04:05 PM
well i made more komplex stuff before, so thats not the kind of critisism i was hoping for.

+Hoodwigga
09-15-2008, 04:20 PM
maybe not but its the kind you should listen to

kroc_oner
09-15-2008, 04:21 PM
yea but he wasnt an asshole about it like you was.. you said it with a cocky tone.. no beef just help guys for real. im tryin to learn this shit n get it down
if u dont want to do simples dont just work on your structure do add ons then dont it takes time if u dont wanna wait bite letters switch them and work on other shit dont paint inlss u wanna do a tag or bomb but make them simple develop your own from other styles but dnt make it to bitten look at others people work for inspiration thts difffernt from bitting mssg me and ill help u with your stuff

empw
09-15-2008, 05:29 PM
anyone got any comments on my shit?

Zire
09-15-2008, 05:34 PM
well i made more komplex stuff before, so thats not the kind of critisism i was hoping for.


Doubt it looked decent...

kroc_oner
09-15-2008, 06:25 PM
empw do simples or read wht i posted for the other guy

braxtons a g
09-15-2008, 06:42 PM
k. thanks everybody.. thats the kinda help i was lookin for

kroc_oner
09-15-2008, 06:53 PM
np just practice

Fube
09-15-2008, 07:18 PM
almost 4 pages of complete shit. shut the hell up ALL of u. the new page better be full of flix or im about to go on a deletion spree. if u guy want to bitch about the crits your getting then u dont need them in the first place. and if u have to ask for crits then just realize that u need to do something to GET crits. im sick of hearing all the retarded bitching about trivial shit.

no more.

fube.

<J-one>
09-15-2008, 07:30 PM
i'm sick of kids gettin into graffiti like its a trend and taking anything that states there not the best writer you've ever seen as beef. everybody calm the fuck down and just draw graffiti. if someone gives you a tip...take it and use it you dumb shit.

fube your stuff hyyype

most recent drawing of mine. yes i had to use pencil crayons to colour it in...
says gasr
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h45/stove_top/Picture.jpg
GKK FAMILY

<J-one>
09-15-2008, 07:32 PM
crits please?

sketch3
09-15-2008, 08:41 PM
hipster

Mr yarbles
09-15-2008, 09:02 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/21bm1l2.jpg
I know it's off in some places, but still any crits?

j I like it but that style is getting kinda played out idk how to explain it just feels like I've seen it before

koma simples

Speedy
09-15-2008, 09:33 PM
J I like that but it's too much to look at at once. Yarbs the first top bar on the K is too far to the right. Any chance you're interested in a slap trade?
I did this one earlier. Took a stab at some new letter structures than what I usually do. Tell me what you think.
http://i38.tinypic.com/2am7v6.jpg

mosezone
09-15-2008, 09:33 PM
j, i'm feeling the GA, but the S and R don't really fit in my opinion, kinda hard to explain
aesk, not really feeling the K, but keep at it. also, maybe i'm wrong, but it looks like that would be hard to paint fast, like it would take a while.
jask, i'm really feeling it. the only thing that looks kinda weird is the S, don't really know why.
i'm still tryin' to find a throw i like, any crits on this one?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02047.jpg

JETPACK!!
09-15-2008, 09:40 PM
college doodles. drawing is gay unless its graffiti.

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/5606/doodle1og9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/2722/doodle2uf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/7493/doodlehr5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/281/doodle3dy8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/8470/doodle4jl1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

jask, dope simples. add some 3D or a drop shadow. it'd look better.
aesk, not feelin the A, but its a nice throwie.

i love fube <3

Mr yarbles
09-15-2008, 09:42 PM
Actually it's not
It usually takes me around a minute or two

It's kinda hard to see but the a looks like it needs some work

jask the a is wierd but it's pretty good keep at it
I would do a slap trade but I can't really send anything through the mail :/

<J-one>
09-15-2008, 09:43 PM
thanks guys. i get what you mean about the G and the A mose.

i really still haven't quite found my style. i'm workin on it though.
more pics comin soon

jask those simples are lookin pretty locked down... the S just doesn't seem to flow like mose said there's just somethin about it.
and mose that throw looks good. i like the M and the E, that D i'm not much of a fan of though

mosezone
09-15-2008, 09:50 PM
and mose that throw looks good. i like the M and the E, that D i'm not much of a fan of though


actually it's an O, it reads MAOE

Speedy
09-15-2008, 09:56 PM
Thanks Jetpack. I usually do drop shadows. I just didn't want to waste time doing any on this one until I found out whether or not the letters were decent. I felt like trying new structures than what I normally do. Thanks everyone else too. I have so many ideas for S's it's hard to figure out which one is best. I'll post more stuff this week. I need you guys to tell me which S to stick with.
Rasek I'm diggin the structure. The a nd e are just too small on the first one. And I love the R but it stands out a lot. It looks like "R ASEK" not "RASEK"
Mosez that O does remind me of a D. And that E makes no sense to me at all. looks kinda like a backwards lower case a. Try to think of something besides that little circle for the middle bar. Everything else is decent though.

Why can't you mail yarbs?

JETPACK!!
09-15-2008, 09:59 PM
yee, im gonna have to rock a capital A, i cant get the lower case A close enough without severely crowding it. the kick on the R is just too much for it.

Fube
09-15-2008, 10:01 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture049-1.jpg

fixed it and actually spelled it right this time ugh.

maoe, i feel that e's pain from here, the rest is ok for a toss but u need to get that e to match the rest of your style in my opinion.

rasek, i dont like how u overlap your letters soooo much. maybe alternate make one large and one small all the way across i think the letters work well with it. but lookin good homie.

speedy, nice simp, keep going and style will come on its own. bend and flex till u see something u want to roll with. lookin good.

yarbles, i think the inner line work in your throw are to cramped up. give em some space. find a new k cus that shit is played. k is a hard letter so give it time. dont put out the same old toss letters.

j one, almost there, keep fuckin with it. u go addon crazy just like me. its a curse, try to keep it a tad more simple, my fav thing about the sketch is the simple green stuff but i love simples so.

*NY<VT*
09-15-2008, 10:02 PM
http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l273/gnustreetfool/Photo62.jpg

http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l273/gnustreetfool/Photo63.jpg

been board in college so started to sketch keeps me occupied

lawlcat
09-15-2008, 10:04 PM
new throw ive been working on, what do you guys think?
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/asdgfddh.jpg

Speedy
09-15-2008, 10:09 PM
yee, im gonna have to rock a capital A, i cant get the lower case A close enough without severely crowding it. the kick on the R is just too much for it.
I JUST started using capital A's. I used to like lower case ones a lot better. But it's just time for change. If you want I can send you some lower case ones tomorrow or Wednesday if it'll help you out at all.

JETPACK!!
09-15-2008, 10:20 PM
nah, thanks though.

atlok7
09-15-2008, 10:36 PM
i'm sick of kids gettin into graffiti like its a trend and taking anything that states there not the best writer you've ever seen as beef. everybody calm the fuck down and just draw graffiti. if someone gives you a tip...take it and use it you dumb shit.

fube your stuff hyyype

most recent drawing of mine. yes i had to use pencil crayons to colour it in...
says gasr
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h45/stove_top/Picture.jpg
GKK FAMILY

i wouldnt call this hipster. but yo dude try to go simple individual letter with only a couple arrows and no add ons. trust me bro. every one naggd at me and now im alot better and cleaner cause i do simples as my main style.

JETPACK!!
09-15-2008, 10:45 PM
your like a spokesperson for simples now.

"do you have wack extensions? is everyone you know buggin out over your poorly placed letters? do you want dope simples?

with the cais 3 step program, you can achieve that!

first, we break down your self esteem untill you'll listen to us.

then we'll make fun of you a lot, until we see some sort of progress.

and finally, if you choose to go back to your old style. we'll talk shit until you break.


ask cais himself, and he'll gaurentee you with his name"

jupsick
09-15-2008, 10:55 PM
well fube...dope as walways...
umm color....use bars...and use them simple cuz what you should is uhmm...well wheck
well here are some of my "work"
http://xs231.xs.to/xs231/08381/15-09-08_1259419.jpg
http://xs231.xs.to/xs231/08381/15-09-08_1257386.jpg
some crits?

rasek...dude i kinda didnt like that shit...dosent flow to me ...
fube...like always i m in love with your style...dope shit
ny<vt...work more simple...use bars and learn structure
crits anyone?

sketch3
09-15-2008, 10:58 PM
cute closed eye? check

letters having teeth? check

pointless shapes? check

chunky arrows? check

the only way it could be more hipster is if it had 3 dots and the fuckin pointles rightangles on the ends of bars in the middle of a letter

-sense-
09-15-2008, 11:21 PM
fube-i aint feeling the x's and o shit. it takes away from the depth and makes feel flat.
ny- your in college now, step that shit up and make some straight lines.
gasr- it aint that bad overall, but you gotta climb the ranks round here.
jupstick- not too shabby

Mr yarbles
09-15-2008, 11:43 PM
Why can't you mail yarbs?

I'm too lazy haha I don't wanna tell someone I'm gonna give them something cus I almost never follow through
and my parents are on me hardcore about stuff and would wonder why I'm mailing someone

Fube that stuff's nice but on your e and f the bars that come out look too skinny and short try and fatten them up a bit

testr
09-16-2008, 12:07 PM
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/8329/testcrtsmj9.jpg

nobodys pictures show up on my comp so i cant crit right now i will when the pics come up.
crits?

viseversa101
09-16-2008, 12:14 PM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/ah.jpg

Mass Appeal
09-16-2008, 12:53 PM
your like a spokesperson for simples now.

"do you have wack extensions? is everyone you know buggin out over your poorly placed letters? do you want dope simples?

with the cais 3 step program, you can achieve that!

first, we break down your self esteem untill you'll listen to us.

then we'll make fun of you a lot, until we see some sort of progress.

and finally, if you choose to go back to your old style. we'll talk shit until you break.


ask cais himself, and he'll gaurentee you with his name"

AAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH this is the funniest thing ever read on here

jupsick
09-16-2008, 02:42 PM
testr...work on more simples...learn more structure..
the ah dude...umm what can i say keep working...scatch all day long XD
http://xs131.xs.to/xs131/08382/16-09-08_1123200.jpg
http://xs131.xs.to/xs131/08382/16-09-08_1122189.jpg
crits?0/0
and yes its highlights-_-

Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-16-2008, 02:57 PM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture001-1.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture003-3.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture002-1.jpg

GIG
09-16-2008, 02:59 PM
http://lh6.ggpht.com/deliopera/SM_rbS3Z0pI/AAAAAAAABRQ/HrUP0QJ9sgM/s720/0916080136.jpg

Working on getting my 'G' simple and good

seywhat
09-16-2008, 03:07 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage134.jpg
fuckin around shit
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage135.jpg
exchange for kroc_oner
i'll have karo's and cais' up real soon, my bad on the wait fellas

tezer- dope of course, mad clean shit. down to exchange?
gig- dont use so many bars, keep it to as few as possible.
jupsick- good simps, just keep fuckin with your letters. keep tryin different shit every sketch
test- do simpler shit, try not havin so much dead space

Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-16-2008, 03:18 PM
i got you seyar

-Wings-
09-16-2008, 03:26 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF16092008_00003.jpg

:)

Mass Appeal
09-16-2008, 03:34 PM
Fucking crazy Tezer ... the T in your hand is uber fresh

ESKiMO2
09-16-2008, 03:51 PM
My posts keep getting deleted from the Black Book thread so I guess I'll post it here. The jack-off who deleted it didn't say anything.
http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs37/f/2008/260/a/1/Chaos__by_Rhino_fish.jpg
Chaos.

kroc_oner
09-16-2008, 04:08 PM
its cause your letters arent tht good

kroc_oner
09-16-2008, 04:12 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage134.jpg
fuckin around shit
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage135.jpg
exchange for kroc_oner
i'll have karo's and cais' up real soon, my bad on the wait fellas

tezer- dope of course, mad clean shit. down to exchange?
gig- dont use so many bars, keep it to as few as possible.
jupsick- good simps, just keep fuckin with your letters. keep tryin different shit every sketch
test- do simpler shit, try not havin so much dead space
thnks ill get to work on yorus now i forgot bout it

ESKiMO2
09-16-2008, 04:17 PM
its cause your letters arent tht good

What about them? They have proper structure. People hate my style because it isn't exactly like theirs. Fuck em.

Rooftop Resident
09-16-2008, 04:25 PM
Get down!

Mass Appeal
09-16-2008, 04:26 PM
No offence but im glad its not like yours.
There is no existance of structure there what so ever.

beyondyereyes
09-16-2008, 04:29 PM
eskimo, you've got letters but I would lose all the extensions. Plus you might want to change "Chaos" it's been done to death.

Seyar, I think you've got to many cracks on the first one. Don't put so many the next time around.

Anoy, I dig the colors and the structure. It's all clean. Although the bottom bar of the "Y" would look better if straight. That's just me though. And, why do you want to change your name?

http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/untitled-4.jpg
The 'T' doesn't match the other letters I know.

Rooftop Resident
09-16-2008, 04:30 PM
What about them? They have proper structure. People hate my style because it isn't exactly like theirs. Fuck em.

This site is on some silly popularity bullshit anyways, Your structure isn't bad, the H isn't too great, the rest is alright, but I would cut some of the angles out, just me. I think you're more on point then most "writers" here.

Edit: Didn't see those chunks that are not even part of the letters, cut that shit out definitely, but there is structure, you can't say there is none, you just need to clean all that chunky shit up if you want my opinion.

ESKiMO2
09-16-2008, 04:37 PM
No offence but im glad its not like yours.
There is no existance of structure there what so ever.

http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/298/chaosstructureas1.jpg

And I don't write Chaos. I enjoy writing random words. New letters=fun.

beyondyereyes
09-16-2008, 04:43 PM
it's supposed to be murked but I'll work on it. I haven't been working on my handstyle in days. thanks though.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-16-2008, 04:51 PM
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/9467/anoysketchezsmpu8.jpg
Handstyle sucks, I know. I don't want to get into it.
Possible new aliases:
NEAK, NDER, MPAK, BEAK.

Sey, too many cracks, don't go crazy with em, generally I've found cracks are better when they are more simple.

Tezer, nice. That T in the handstyle I don't like, and I absolutely can't feel the 3 dot shit. That shit will probably just get you in more shit with police, and gangs as well, and I just don't understand it..
haha its a dallas thing homie.
:. just for you.

Sarto
09-16-2008, 04:53 PM
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/003-10.jpg
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/005-5.jpg
tower - dope , but i dont like the r as much as i like the other letters ,
and dope handy like rr said.
Anoy - sick fill for sure

ESKiMO2
09-16-2008, 05:06 PM
Thanks for the suggestions. I mean it.
(unless you were just insulting me)

synps
09-16-2008, 05:26 PM
anoy- letters aren't bad but i think the fill is to much. You have hilight on both sides of the letter and that doesn't really make sense
tower- I don't really like the t and the o the rest is pretty ill
sarto, I think you should make your 3d a bit thicker, the letters are good, I don't like the fill in the second one

Heres one i did in 30 minutes for mysft's speed battle
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/graff004.jpg
crits?

ESKiMO2
09-16-2008, 05:43 PM
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/8056/dsc00680rj1.jpg

Okay, I cleaned up my style. How does it compare?

testr
09-16-2008, 05:48 PM
im feelin that one alot.

that c is dope
i dont know about the last 2 letters tho

ESKiMO2
09-16-2008, 05:50 PM
Thanks, it's at an angle. I'll fix it.

Rooftop Resident
09-16-2008, 05:59 PM
anoy- letters aren't bad but i think the fill is to much. You have hilight on both sides of the letter and that doesn't really make sense
tower- I don't really like the t and the o the rest is pretty ill
sarto, I think you should make your 3d a bit thicker, the letters are good, I don't like the fill in the second one

Heres one i did in 30 minutes for mysft's speed battle
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/graff004.jpg
crits?

I shouldn't get annoyed(punny!)... But dude, what are you even talking about?
Let me tell you something about light, if the light source is coming from above (as it is in this piece) the light is going to be caught on all the tops of the bars. Yes there are highlights on both sides of the O, and yes it really does make sense. Get your mind right before you crit on some shit you don't know about.
Your highlights make me chuckle, and upside down crosses and backwards 4's are tight. Dude, you should totally win that battle. Ill shit, mad props.

testr
09-16-2008, 06:03 PM
haha i think thats a u and a p. lokdup?

kroc_oner
09-16-2008, 06:23 PM
What about them? They have proper structure. People hate my style because it isn't exactly like theirs. Fuck em.
there not wack but there not good enough to go in the big boy black book thread like one letters bigger then the other but its true u should have your own style

-Wings-
09-16-2008, 06:33 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF16092008_00003.jpg

:)

Comments please :)?

kroc_oner
09-16-2008, 06:37 PM
fills ok but letters arent do sum simples or use bars

Rooftop Resident
09-16-2008, 07:04 PM
haha i think thats a u and a p. lokdup?

Naw man, you're looking at it all wrong, it's obviously some gang shit.

klic
09-16-2008, 07:05 PM
wings - focus more on the letters and less on the colouring

Rooftop Resident
09-16-2008, 07:09 PM
Comments please :)?

Srin? Sorry man, that shit blows, go back to the basics, is that pink/red shit your depth? If so you probably shouldn't be trying to add depth yet. Ummm yeah don't know what to say... By the way, those fills are not okay. New to graff thread.

ESKiMO2
09-16-2008, 07:15 PM
This new style is going to be hard to get used to.

http://fc45.deviantart.com/fs37/i/2008/260/e/4/Card_two__by_Rhino_fish.jpg

Just finished it... Opinions?

kroc_oner
09-16-2008, 07:16 PM
alot better just keep working with tht and progress

ESKiMO2
09-16-2008, 07:20 PM
I feel like as it advances it's just going to go back to what I had. I've already gone through this phase.

blunttokes
09-16-2008, 07:36 PM
jus random word i picked outta the abc
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/6510/dscf00821uf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits

Zire
09-16-2008, 07:40 PM
Naw man, you're looking at it all wrong, it's obviously some gang shit.

No. Your looking at it wrong. It says lokdup, hes entered it in the battle.

blunttokes
09-16-2008, 07:45 PM
Naw man, you're looking at it all wrong, it's obviously some gang shit.


well your the bombingscience moron of the day in the toysection



read what he said after he posted it.....a speed battle for mysft

n clearly says LOKDUP

seywhat
09-16-2008, 08:12 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage134.jpg

bump for crits on letters

blunttokes- keep all your bars even, keep doin your thing though
eskimo- try makin the letters taller, theyre not bad i just think you be able to play with em more like that
skin- work on structure and use bars. do straight simples

jupsick
09-16-2008, 08:16 PM
seywhat-i just love how you build your letters XD keep it up....maybe make it more intresting...more umm..complicated
bluntoks-work on your structure...use bars when u make letters...
eskimo2-i kinda liked that...work that shit out...


testr...work on more simples...learn more structure..
the ah dude...umm what can i say keep working...scatch all day long XD
http://xs131.xs.to/xs131/08382/16-09-08_1123200.jpg
http://xs131.xs.to/xs131/08382/16-09-08_1122189.jpg
crits?0/0
and yes its highlights-_-
crits?

blunttokes
09-16-2008, 08:18 PM
thnx... i was hammered as fuck when i did it but thats no excuse...

thanks for the crits..

seywhat im thinkin take that top part on ur R and then its perfect

jupstick turn ur flicks around

synps
09-16-2008, 08:53 PM
I shouldn't get annoyed(punny!)... But dude, what are you even talking about?
Let me tell you something about light, if the light source is coming from above (as it is in this piece) the light is going to be caught on all the tops of the bars. Yes there are highlights on both sides of the O, and yes it really does make sense. Get your mind right before you crit on some shit you don't know about.
Your highlights make me chuckle, and upside down crosses and backwards 4's are tight. Dude, you should totally win that battle. Ill shit, mad props.
Fuck dude, I wasn't trying to start any beef. I know about light sources, I take art classes. I just don't think the light source looks right and I think you over did it with the fill. thats all okay. I wasn't trying to be mean and I dig the letter structure completely. I know I suck at graff. That's why I'm posting in the toy section and thats why I'm asking for crits.

Eskimo- I like the style, fills nice, that dropshadow is sick
Bluntokes- I like the letters. the fill needs some work especially on the k the rest looks goood.
Jupsick- flip them next time please? but yeah I really dig the style. I like how you do the spirals on the o's in the second piece

WoeInfinite
09-16-2008, 09:11 PM
theres alotta good shit in here.

hard hat i tryed to give an oldschool 80's feel too for a guy i worked with.
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/091408_13181-1.jpg

kroc_oner
09-16-2008, 09:13 PM
he just gave u props chill theres no beef tht i see and in graff u should be ready for beef

klic
09-16-2008, 09:16 PM
just some stuff from school
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELonepiece.jpg
just random letters
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SAKEPiece.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELPenPiece.jpg
crits please

i know its not great but atleast im progressing, this is something i did two months ago haha:
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/AMENBattle.jpg

jupsick - that resby piece look nice except i dont like your R and try to make the letters more in line with each other if you know what i mean

seyar - get rid of the extension on the bottom of your S (just my opinion)

blunt - make your K smaller and i dont like your Z, not sure why

Czar One
09-16-2008, 09:24 PM
jupsick, it's looking good from what I can see. But work on the E in the first one some, and next time flip the image.

some wackness from a few nights ago.
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/cztothear.jpg

klic
09-16-2008, 09:27 PM
just some stuff from school
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELonepiece.jpg
just random letters
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SAKEPiece.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELPenPiece.jpg
crits please

i know its not great but atleast im progressing, this is something i did two months ago haha:
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/AMENBattle.jpg

jupsick - that resby piece look nice except i dont like your R and try to make the letters more in line with each other if you know what i mean

seyar - get rid of the extension on the bottom of your S (just my opinion)

blunt - make your K smaller and i dont like your Z, not sure why

bottom page bump

JETPACK!!
09-16-2008, 09:35 PM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture001-1.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture003-3.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture002-1.jpg

mad fresh, deserves a bump and a third.

ESKiMO2
09-16-2008, 09:58 PM
http://tn3-2.deviantart.com/fs37/300W/i/2008/260/4/5/Fat_Cap_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

This one was quick. Semi simple.

major"LEAG"
09-16-2008, 10:33 PM
"TEZER" & "ESKIMO2", I'm feeling your shit....

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=124&pictureid=733
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=124&pictureid=731
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=124&pictureid=734
Some more shit that i did...

Rooftop Resident
09-16-2008, 10:40 PM
well your the bombingscience moron of the day in the toysection



read what he said after he posted it.....a speed battle for mysft

n clearly says LOKDUP

Oh, I can't read. :( Somehow I can type and spell better than all the fucking retards on this site. I wasn't trying to make fun of his graffiti by suggesting it was gang related, noooooo. It's not like there was any sarcasm when I told him his shit was dope, nooooooooope. You guys sure are good for a laugh though.

I'll just sigh. I'm tired of being nice. :o

Rooftop Resident
09-16-2008, 10:55 PM
Fuck dude, I wasn't trying to start any beef. I know about light sources, I take art classes. I just don't think the light source looks right and I think you over did it with the fill. thats all okay. I wasn't trying to be mean and I dig the letter structure completely. I know I suck at graff. That's why I'm posting in the toy section and thats why I'm asking for crits.

Eskimo- I like the style, fills nice, that dropshadow is sick
Bluntokes- I like the letters. the fill needs some work especially on the k the rest looks goood.
Jupsick- flip them next time please? but yeah I really dig the style. I like how you do the spirals on the o's in the second piece

Your the highlights on your piece are way fucked up homeboy. My highlights are where they should be... fuck graffiti.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-16-2008, 11:08 PM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture007.jpg
LEAG keep that shit up.
haa thanks amk and rasekkk

ColdBlooded
09-16-2008, 11:34 PM
That canvas is sick...What did you do for those drips?

whahappen?
09-16-2008, 11:36 PM
That canvas is sick...What did you do for those drips?
:rolleyes:im gonna have to say paint or some other marginally viscous liquid but what the fuck do i know

Rooftop Resident
09-17-2008, 12:03 AM
:rolleyes:im gonna have to say paint or some other marginally viscous liquid but what the fuck do i know

It's obviously unicorn blood guys.

fredom-writer
09-17-2008, 12:12 AM
wow this page is pretty good i had to go up and check if it was the toys thread:p
i come to you all for help
which style
old
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/bobbby_fisher/CCI00004.jpg
new
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/bobbby_fisher/CCI00003.jpg
*judging by structure only

Juicee
09-17-2008, 12:26 AM
fredom: your old structure was whack, but your new one is fireee. good work man
tezer: good shit bro im diggin it
leag: love the 3D, good shit

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/asdfaslfjlasd.png

Bored when my power went out during hurricane ike.

-sense-
09-17-2008, 12:28 AM
i like the second one but can tell for sure what you write

kyrptonite????

*how much fun can you have sober..ehh not that much

Rooftop Resident
09-17-2008, 12:39 AM
wow this page is pretty good i had to go up and check if it was the toys thread:p
i come to you all for help
which style
old
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/bobbby_fisher/CCI00004.jpg
new
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/bobbby_fisher/CCI00003.jpg
*judging by structure only

krispy or kriepy. I like Kriepy better, but that shit is nice.

WhiskeyRichard
09-17-2008, 01:14 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v474/BloodHawk13/Graffiti/LokiII.jpg

smooth_nuts
09-17-2008, 01:16 AM
fredom-liek the first one best
juicee-straight letters...
eddie-im crazy feeling the second one bro
went back to writing doap but ima still be sketching six simples and shit just cause i liek the letters haha...but jeah,
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3089/2864816790_429e743552.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3087/2863984581_4a20cf6ba2.jpg
word!

librelikespie
09-17-2008, 01:35 AM
some poo from me to you, i need to work on my R
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf273.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf269.jpg

Scream Out
09-17-2008, 01:49 AM
a oneliner over a bunch of dif coloured oneliners haha
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo379.jpg
man... i never post anymore lol

fonone
09-17-2008, 10:54 AM
http://tn3-2.deviantart.com/fs37/300W/i/2008/260/4/5/Fat_Cap_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

This one was quick. Semi simple.

wow from the way you always talk shit i thought you'd be a bit better

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2681/67jj2.jpg
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/2163/irekforbsgd9.jpg

fucked up the first R when i outline it but ehhh

mekosbc
09-17-2008, 11:58 AM
krispy or kriepy. I like Kriepy better, but that shit is nice.
these are fuckin beasty

GIG
09-17-2008, 01:58 PM
http://lh4.ggpht.com/deliopera/SNFDqKv6beI/AAAAAAAABSQ/RCY-1SLF128/0917081348.jpg

Trying the whole bars thing, dunno how well it's working.

@ Jetpack / Tezer, your stuff is really good. Go paint it! Haha

ESKiMO2
09-17-2008, 02:59 PM
wow from the way you always talk shit i thought you'd be a bit better

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2681/67jj2.jpg
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/2163/irekforbsgd9.jpg

fucked up the first R when i outline it but ehhh

When do I talk shit? I don't recall.
And keep your mouth shut if you don't even have basic letter structure.

And that is my semi simple style.
Read the fucking letters under the picture you pretentious cocksucker!

GIG
09-17-2008, 03:05 PM
When do I talk shit? I don't recall.

Look at any post you've made... like that last one.

synps
09-17-2008, 03:12 PM
fuck beef.
Monster- I like the style and the fill and all I think you need to clean up your lines unless you were trying to make it look messy
Screamout- that looks so sick
Irek- I like both but I like the second one more. get some markers man!


Simple exchange with sphel, didn't do a pencil sketch, watcha think?
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/graff007.jpg

respERATION
09-17-2008, 03:16 PM
the letters are different sizes...make them the same...and try and make them the same width aswell

ESKiMO2
09-17-2008, 03:23 PM
Look at any post you've made... like that last one.

I defend myself but I don't start random shit like a fucking angry 7 year old.
That doesn't even reflect my skill. I barely even talk here anymore and I never start random beef.

smooth_nuts
09-17-2008, 04:31 PM
^haha word
more throwups
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3048/2865552675_724edbf97b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3112/2866383058_c28d0cba6e.jpg

ESKiMO2
09-17-2008, 05:34 PM
Lif sketch... just the beginning.

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/2280/dsc00695tn8.jpg

RezOner..
09-17-2008, 05:45 PM
wow from the way you always talk shit i thought you'd be a bit better



To qoute sir.one, 'It's okay, real *****hs know.'

Downy
09-17-2008, 06:02 PM
just trying to do a simples. any suggestions on coloring?
i was thinking blue fill and red for like 3d.
http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l245/Downymx263/0917081454.jpg

Evasion Of Invasion
09-17-2008, 06:16 PM
Downy - Are u a downy? simples ***** simples
Eskimo - I personally find ur letters too chunky but if u likin it keep at it
Smooth - I dont even gotta say anythin u already know ur the shit
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0022-1.jpg
reads Eva when ur high enough
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0026.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0025-1.jpg
crits

Downy
09-17-2008, 06:25 PM
Downy - Are u a downy? simples ***** simples

yeah if you meen by my last name.
well i am still a toy only ben writen for about 5 months. i just am starting to get into evolving from tagging and throwups to some simples and i am hoping to get some style and flow to form my style of wildstyle.

Evasion Of Invasion
09-17-2008, 06:29 PM
yeah if you meen by my last name.
well i am still a toy only ben writen for about 5 months. i just am starting to get into evolving from tagging and throwups to some simples and i am hoping to get some style and flow to form my style of wildstyle.

actually i ment if u had an extra 21st chromosone downy but close enough *Hands Downy a cookie*

JK downy don't kill yourself

ESKiMO2
09-17-2008, 06:32 PM
Smooth, I'm liking that shit. Those faces rock.
Evade- I'm liking all of them but the last one could use some cleaning.

Mr. Lif... Mo' Mega
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9780/mrliffu5.jpg

Based on this album...
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/154/385187579_2b4dad852a.jpg

Downy
09-17-2008, 06:34 PM
actually i ment if u had an extra 21st chromosone downy but close enough *Hands Downy a cookie*

JK downy don't kill yourself
exchange? pm me

-Wings-
09-17-2008, 06:39 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF16092008_00000-1.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF16092008_00003.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF16092008_00004.jpg

First character above. Some comments for once would be nice..

GIG
09-17-2008, 06:40 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3193/2866686046_d378deb2fd.jpg?v=0

@ Smooth, your throws are sweet.

ErrorOner...
09-17-2008, 06:41 PM
Posted this a while ago before I had photobucket.. Crits mofucka's Crits!
heheh
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/Picture17.jpg

Evasion Of Invasion
09-17-2008, 06:43 PM
give crits to get em fuck meats!!!

ESKiMO2
09-17-2008, 06:49 PM
Smooth, I'm liking that shit. Those faces rock.
Evade- I'm liking all of them but the last one could use some cleaning.

Mr. Lif... Mo' Mega
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9780/mrliffu5.jpg

Based on this album...
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/154/385187579_2b4dad852a.jpg

(edit)
thanks evade hahaha

Evasion Of Invasion
09-17-2008, 06:52 PM
Downy - Are u a downy? simples ***** simples
Eskimo - I personally find ur letters too chunky but if u likin it keep at it
Smooth - I dont even gotta say anythin u already know ur the shit
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0022-1.jpg
reads Eva when ur high enough
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0026.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0025-1.jpg
crits
BUMP
eskimo - Your style is fat yet strangely loveable... like me....

klic
09-17-2008, 06:54 PM
just some stuff from school
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELonepiece.jpg
just random letters
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SAKEPiece.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELPenPiece.jpg
crits please

i know its not great but atleast im progressing, this is something i did two months ago haha:
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/AMENBattle.jpg

jupsick - that resby piece look nice except i dont like your R and try to make the letters more in line with each other if you know what i mean

seyar - get rid of the extension on the bottom of your S (just my opinion)

blunt - make your K smaller and i dont like your Z, not sure why

still havnt gotten any crits

Evasion Of Invasion
09-17-2008, 06:55 PM
Klic - try to dull your letters its a mistake alot of toys make dont make it so sharp
Downy - Dont ask me y i put an E in i just did....
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0030.jpg

klic
09-17-2008, 06:56 PM
alright thanks, will do

smooth_nuts
09-17-2008, 07:45 PM
Smooth - I dont even gotta say anythin u already know ur the shit

thats SOOOOOOOO getting sigged haha

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3048/2865552675_724edbf97b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3112/2866383058_c28d0cba6e.jpg
bumpers

klic-the sake simp is looking the best...work on your hands,less curves and shit just keep it simple
evasion-im feeling that weird ass gorey arms for letters type shit....
gig-straight letters...same size,no weird dominating extentions haha

cerex89
09-17-2008, 07:51 PM
cant wait to get some paint and some rusto fats
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0917081542.jpg

mexico
09-17-2008, 08:10 PM
Smooth_ ill letters
cerex_ cool but keep working on it
Klic_ that shpel would look rad on a wall
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc242/ibenpwnzed/DSC01653.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-17-2008, 08:36 PM
some blown shit
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture008-2.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture009-2.jpg

ESKiMO2
09-17-2008, 08:37 PM
Here, I rotated it for you...



http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/7275/2866383058c28d0cba6egd9.jpg
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/7581/2865552675724edbf97bmx5.jpg


Just so everyone can see em better.
Great shit by the way.

smooth_nuts
09-17-2008, 08:50 PM
thanks eskimo,im feeling your shit too
hold-your h and l look the same,as do your d and o...FIX IT!

some quick bombs for muh little brother
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3172/2866860822_fe04b83cbd.jpg

lawlcat
09-17-2008, 08:56 PM
eskimo im liking your style
downy stick to simples
evasion feeling all your stuff
wings im liking the first one, has potential with good color
gig simples and work on structure as well as your shadows

some throws ive been working on
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/fdhgfhf.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/hhgkdhc.jpg

klic
09-17-2008, 08:57 PM
ekes, id unattach your letters for now and just work on simple letters

Ekes
09-17-2008, 09:00 PM
2 new sketches.
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc158/Numk/2008-09-01-59408.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc158/Numk/2008-09-01-59363.jpg
crits?


+++Bump.

Nagger
09-17-2008, 09:02 PM
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/007.jpg
No markers...

ErrorOner...
09-17-2008, 09:11 PM
Klic - very nice simps! Sake is king in montreal fyi..
Smooth- god damn you rock them shits till you die!
Jens - try and make them all the same size otherewise thats some wicked shit.
Ekes- im not feeling it at all.
lawlcat- im definitely feeling them pointy shits on the tops of your letters

Bump for Critsssss

Posted this a while ago before I had photobucket.. Crits mofucka's Crits!
heheh
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/Picture17.jpg

Evasion Of Invasion
09-17-2008, 09:12 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0036.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0037.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0035.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0039.jpg
whole page took 5 minutes. Who wants to exchange? ill do it euro cuz im that cool

klic
09-17-2008, 09:17 PM
Klic - very nice simps! Sake is king in montreal fyi..


i dont wrrite sake, i was just playing around with different letters during school and thanks for the crit

-Wings-
09-17-2008, 09:45 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF16092008_00000-1.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF16092008_00003.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF16092008_00004.jpg

First character above. Some comments for once would be nice..

:confused:Gimmie something I can work with and Ill stop bumping this... (comments please)

I GOT CLOUT
09-17-2008, 09:53 PM
Bump Tezer and Doap.

Havent been here in a minute. Not much free time these days.
Just a sketch...was late for the battle, so just postin it.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16210.jpg

+Hoodwigga
09-17-2008, 10:00 PM
nice simple. this is what more of you need to do

mosezone
09-17-2008, 10:02 PM
for real. thing off the S is kinda questionable, but it's definately a solid simple.

just some thing from class, probably shouldn't even bother posting it
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02051.jpg

kroc_oner
09-17-2008, 10:06 PM
wack cell phone picks
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/pic091708_3.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/pic091708_6.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/pic091708_8.jpg
nice simple clout and nice char muze commeny my stuff ill comment u back

+Hoodwigga
09-17-2008, 10:08 PM
theres way to much space between the top of your k and the e. the z looks a lil wierd too on how it dips down so much

smooth_nuts
09-17-2008, 10:08 PM
BLAST MASTA KRS WUN!
looking good bro but round your s r and o some man
mosezone-eyebals teath?!haha nah im just being a douch..that'd make a dope paste or sticker with like some speach bubbles saying some weird ass shit
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3246/2859635975_a0a6bac554.jpg
little pill carac i ddi during class...

kroc_oner
09-17-2008, 10:12 PM
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0120-1.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0122-1.jpg
nyone think i should go back to this and ill char smooth

hazetheone
09-17-2008, 10:12 PM
wack cell phone picks
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/pic091708_3.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/pic091708_6.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/pic091708_8.jpg
nice simple clout and nice char muze commeny my stuff ill comment u back

stop biting kezia from the blackbook thread
looser

kroc_oner
09-17-2008, 10:16 PM
stop biting kezia from the blackbook thread
looser
wow your genius my stuff definatly looks like this edit i was tryna do the fill if thts wht u were talking bout

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/4008/dsc02809cm3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/4728/dsc02810cz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/8295/dsc02812qe6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/7066/dsc02811vs4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

hazetheone
09-17-2008, 10:19 PM
your right
you just arent good enough to copy something and make it look right

kroc_oner
09-17-2008, 10:20 PM
lol i ddnt even try to copy his stuff thts my style so stfu

hazetheone
09-17-2008, 10:21 PM
just quit biting

kroc_oner
09-17-2008, 10:24 PM
just quit talking shit

smooth_nuts
09-17-2008, 10:25 PM
edit:ima just stay out of it

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3296/2867088136_764a32ca35.jpg
doap...wif the e!

Evasion Of Invasion
09-17-2008, 10:39 PM
Its like a daddy just hit mommy moment at the dinner table...

kroc_oner
09-17-2008, 10:49 PM
lol and ya u are right before u edited it smooth

Downy
09-17-2008, 11:43 PM
wow your genius my stuff definatly looks like this edit i was tryna do the fill if thts wht u were talking bout

the most sickest peices i have seen. that would be something to be on a wall or a freight.

Thanks!
09-17-2008, 11:46 PM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/851/1001347bi5.th.jpg (http://img209.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1001347bi5.jpg)
i hope im doing this right
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3346/1001381wc9.th.jpg (http://img239.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1001381wc9.jpg)
ADIOS MUCHACHOS!!!!!ADELADELA!!!REBAREBA!
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/8763/1001380fa5.th.jpg (http://img411.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1001380fa5.jpg)
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/6339/1001367ki4.th.jpg (http://img502.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1001367ki4.jpg)
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/3922/1001351hw0.th.jpg (http://img170.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1001351hw0.jpg)
err, i have to go on a bike ride now.

empw
09-18-2008, 12:03 AM
if u dont want to do simples dont just work on your structure do add ons then dont it takes time if u dont wanna wait bite letters switch them and work on other shit dont paint inlss u wanna do a tag or bomb but make them simple develop your own from other styles but dnt make it to bitten look at others people work for inspiration thts difffernt from bitting mssg me and ill help u with your stuffdefine.... simple.... :confused: :D:rolleyes: whattttt

kroc_oner
09-18-2008, 12:06 AM
letters withough add ons or hookups

smooth_nuts
09-18-2008, 12:22 AM
BLAST MASTA KRS WUN!
looking good bro but round your s r and o some man
mosezone-eyebals teath?!haha nah im just being a douch..that'd make a dope paste or sticker with like some speach bubbles saying some weird ass shit
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3246/2859635975_a0a6bac554.jpg
little pill carac i ddi during class...


edit:ima just stay out of it

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3296/2867088136_764a32ca35.jpg
doap...wif the e!

bump

G - Wahl
09-18-2008, 12:25 AM
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture002-4.jpg

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture-3.jpg

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture003-4.jpg

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture010-5.jpg

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture006-4.jpg

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture007-5.jpg

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture012-5.jpg

just shit outta my blackbook.
kezia thats some cool shit you got goin on

lawlcat
09-18-2008, 12:41 AM
trying new letters. nice and simple.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/dj.jpg

respERATION
09-18-2008, 05:08 AM
do block letters...and your 3-d is all over the place....fix it

ESKiMO2
09-18-2008, 07:03 AM
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture006-4.jpg

just shit outta my blackbook.
kezia thats some cool shit you got goin on

I'm feeling this one. Pretty nice coloring.

SAID
09-18-2008, 08:04 AM
edit:ima just stay out of it

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3296/2867088136_764a32ca35.jpg
doap...wif the e!

you've improved so much man.
clean your e up and make your exclamation mark proportional with your other letters and go bomb everything immediately.

-Wings-
09-18-2008, 08:09 AM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF18092008_00001.jpg

Its a bit extreme, but I was bored and in a bad mood when drawing this. I love the way I did the 3d though :)!

Zire
09-18-2008, 11:41 AM
Nice, its looks like two different people have drawn thats shitty one you posted a while back and this one. G-wah your stuff is nice to look at.

Mass Appeal
09-18-2008, 12:05 PM
edit:ima just stay out of it

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3296/2867088136_764a32ca35.jpg
doap...wif the e!

Wow ... immence.

-Zeal-
09-18-2008, 12:08 PM
that dope throwie is fresh
and piece like 2 up is fresh too
keep it up
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr235/sumwhriblong5678/CIMG1803.jpg

Nagger
09-18-2008, 12:26 PM
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/dg007.jpg

jupsick
09-18-2008, 01:59 PM
that dope is so ....umm...DOPE XD
soup..awsome shit i really like it...
zeal...work on your structure...its dosent flow at all and its bad structure...
g-wahl i really liked the green one...
all others are kinda throwies right?
http://xs231.xs.to/xs231/08384/18-09-08_2052934.jpg
lol took the idea from keane (sry if i mispelled the tag)
http://xs231.xs.to/xs231/08384/18-09-08_2051979.jpg
back to my old tag
Mebi XD
if there is someone named mebi tell me pls...cu i didnt found any...
crits?

smooth_nuts
09-18-2008, 04:15 PM
Wow ... immence.

ummmmmmmm...ok?

sketch3
09-18-2008, 04:59 PM
just a sketch about my thaughts on mainstream hip hop
i fucked it up

http://i34.tinypic.com/5wdy6x.jpg

nero112
09-18-2008, 05:03 PM
haha classic sketch

LeaksOne
09-18-2008, 05:04 PM
i figure i should post in and in the throwies forum since i guess my notebook is my black book until i start usin my real ones plus theres more crits in here.
Mebi - i like your sketches man. keep it up
Nagger - im feelin that sketch.
Zeal - that piece is alright. jus keep sketchin.

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff019.jpg
crits?? if you wana see my progress take a gander at the throwie section.

jupsick
09-18-2008, 05:15 PM
sketch3...i like the black dudes they have money XD lol now serious i like that its cool....
leaks...work on your lines dude....make them smooth
http://xs231.xs.to/xs231/08384/19-09-08_0012290.jpg
new shit 0/0
mebir 0/0
crits?

LeaksOne
09-18-2008, 05:19 PM
that fill is unique MEBIR an its a nice sketch. i noticed my jagged lines right when they happened but i couldnt do anything to fix em without makin it look funny.