Tot Black Books

[rek]

my 1st try at 3d

[ceroX24X]

Originally posted by ceroX24X@Mar 10 2006, 10:31 AM
something new simpler than the last one with drips. can i get crits?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teena...nd/100_0301.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0301.jpg)
bump for crits

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by rek@Mar 10 2006, 07:11 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3762/10909710sh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/7505/11010116rz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my 1st try at 3d

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/9072/11010121pl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
BUMP! all the way to the big boys thread, get outta here man

[AMAZ tbscrew]

i dont get it he did the abstract 3d shit...but then it was his first time doing simple 3d....wtf? lol

[hynt]

well, i started writing just a little while ago, and i hope i'm not too terrible.
http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/1416/bigczar4ad.jpg
this is a sticker 3 USPS stickers long, and the quarter is there to show size comparison.

[dropsom3]

nice job for starting a little while ago

[writers-R-us]

i think thats pretty sick

[dxtreme]

Well writer you think its sick cuz YOUR A TOY!!!
BUT YOU KNOW WHAT IM A TOY TOO SO ITS ALL GOOD?

[AMAZ tbscrew]

i dont like how some 3d is on right and some is on the left....u shoulda just pulled the 3d back

[writers-R-us]

haha aight

[.bomer.is.boh.]

http://blogpost.imageshack.us/blogpost/pos...icture316kr.jpg (http://blogpost.imageshack.us/blogpost/postblog.php?id=img126/9457/picture316kr.jpg)

10 minz skech crits?

[rek]

that

[dxtreme]

Originally posted by rek@Mar 10 2006, 10:31 PM
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6646/11010013uo.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/5055/11010037ry.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/5600/10707099xb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

that bitch, shouda known

http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/3219/10909824mw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Yo man just get the hell out of here. Your putting everybody to shame. :(

[InvisableAzn]

lol nice work

[Volume_one_]

Originally posted by rek@Mar 10 2006, 10:31 PM
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6646/11010013uo.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/5055/11010037ry.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/5600/10707099xb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

that bitch, shouda known

http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/3219/10909824mw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
that shit is ill what type of markers did you use??

on number 3

[c0ld]

Originally posted by rek@Mar 10 2006, 10:31 PM
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6646/11010013uo.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/5055/11010037ry.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/5600/10707099xb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

that bitch, shouda known

http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/3219/10909824mw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i love you.

[+HyBriD+]

i like teh top one cold

[*~ANZIO~*]

meh.

[ceroX24X]

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0301.jpg
crits? dont mind the date i just got the camera ive been writing for a about a month and a half

[+HyBriD+]

i like it sept 4 the R

[ceroX24X]

what should i do to improve it?

[+HyBriD+]

practice thats all u can do / work on teh top of it so its the same size as the rest of the letters

[ceroX24X]

alright cool thanks man. anybody else got criticism?

[Z FUSE]

yea, the fill with the lil block things, don't make some of them so big, ans space them out evenly, i think don't just have them at the bottom of the letters, but, i'm toy, don't trust me if u want.

[rek]

peace

[Karma]

Word^^ Top one has the colors hella lon lock. Where did you get the prismas?

Keep it up chef.

[UKCsire]

somethin still in progress...exchange...

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/regs.jpg

[beefgerky]

dope shit sire!

i wan see regs version orf your name tho.

[TricksForKids]

ahahahha shitttt, mines nowhere near that good, faaaaaack, oh well, im much more of a toy than sire, so just, go easy on me :(

here it is

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/418/sirebyregs5xs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[westsida]

^^thats nice
like the karak

[acek]

new style



http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/1899/acekgreen3wa.png

comments or crits ???

[westsida]

do u write asek or acek

[TricksForKids]

argh^ how many times have i told you to fix that damn E!

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by UKCsire@Mar 11 2006, 04:22 AM
somethin still in progress...exchange...

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/regs.jpg
Regs by Sire

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Mar 11 2006, 09:51 AM
ahahahha shitttt, mines nowhere near that good, faaaaaack, oh well, im much more of a toy than sire, so just, go easy on me :(

here it is

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/418/sirebyregs5xs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Sire By Regs

[westsida]

new piece/karak for the never endin karak battle. i know its toy but an y suggestions in makin him more...."unique"

http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/7506/digitalcamerapics0609iv.jpg

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/9529/digitalcamerapics0611nz.jpg
Karak close up

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/224/digitalcamerapics0621pf.jpg
Piece close up

critz/commentz

[JETc17]

you musta pushed down real hard to still see those lines through the marker



sketch softer next time

[westsida]

thanx.ii didnt use permanent marker,just felt tip,but yeah thanx for the tip

[kill]

Originally posted by TricksForKids+Mar 11 2006, 10:12 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids &#064; Mar 11 2006, 10:12 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Mar 11 2006, 09:51 AM
ahahahha shitttt, mines nowhere near that good, faaaaaack, oh well, im much more of a toy than sire, so just, go easy on me :(

here it is

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/418/sirebyregs5xs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Sire By Regs [/b][/quote]
nice karak buh the e is ugly

[Silvar]

critz please... im not really happy with this myself... <_< :(

http://www.freewebs.com/resfms/resnu1.jpg

[KaSe01]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Mar 9 2006, 08:19 PM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/9611/kaytenpen1zk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


see now, there needs to be like a half toy thread, cuz kay ten and the knc fam is commin at ya with fiyuhhhhh


Peac
BUMPP

[KaSe01]

yo silvar, thats not bad at all its just a lil too hectic for my eyes, like a too many add-ons and such, i think you should simple it down a little and it would be dope

[djsupreeme]

Originally posted by westsida@Mar 11 2006, 10:36 AM
new piece/karak for the never endin karak battle. i know its toy but an y suggestions in makin him more...."unique"

http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/7506/digitalcamerapics0609iv.jpg

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/9529/digitalcamerapics0611nz.jpg
Karak close up

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/224/digitalcamerapics0621pf.jpg
Piece close up

critz/commentz
Erase the pencil. Might look a little bit better. and putting killing and shit with graffiti just gives it a worse name.

[Silvar]

yeah a few heads have said that man. first time properly bustin out the add ons. wasnt a proper piece anyways, its like a preliminary sketch 2 c how everythin fits (hence y there is no fill and its not tidy at all)

[+HyBriD+]

nice UKC

[westsida]

Originally posted by djsupreeme+Mar 11 2006, 12:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (djsupreeme @ Mar 11 2006, 12:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-westsida@Mar 11 2006, 10:36 AM
new piece/karak for the never endin karak battle. i know its toy but an y suggestions in makin him more...."unique"

http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/7506/digitalcamerapics0609iv.jpg

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/9529/digitalcamerapics0611nz.jpg
Karak close up

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/224/digitalcamerapics0621pf.jpg
Piece close up

critz/commentz
Erase the pencil. Might look a little bit better. and putting killing and shit with graffiti just gives it a worse name. [/b][/quote]
it just cuz it was a battle where u had to kill the utha persons character

[Ment_one]

Originally posted by UKCsire@Mar 9 2006, 05:39 PM
dude just let it go...if you want some comments drop another piece...if it&#39;s hot you&#39;ll get some comments...
ok..i thought you were like bein a mega ass...........my bad

[djsupreeme]

oh. k
btw-work on letetrs sazr

[Karma]

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/2617/arrowfoot9mm.jpg

hhmm went in a differnt direction with these one..


Crits?

[CL3ver1]

hmmm...not so much.

[Akshun]

trying a few new styles tell me what you think

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/1316/dsci00321sv.jpg
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/9788/dsci00349yo.jpg
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/8311/dsci00392kn.jpg

[CL3ver1]

somethin new.-
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00011/02/54/11554520_l.jpg
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00011/34/54/11554543_l.jpg

[Huge-mofo]

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/1764/science3mt.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

greetz,commentz pleaze

[UKCsire]

hey akshun did you miss the "h" in the first one or what?

[CL3ver1]

hahaha

[Rend]

Imma post my whole bbook. Never posted in here before so tell me if u see a change as i progress. Any comments, critz etc..

[Rend]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/10.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/11.jpg

For a Battle:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/9.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/12.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/13.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/14.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/15.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/16.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/17.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/18.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/19.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/20.jpg

[Rend]

For a Battle:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/21.jpg

For an Exchange:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/22.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/23.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/24.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/25.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/26.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/27.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/28.jpg

For a Battle:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/29.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/30.jpg

[CL3ver1]

dope.

[Rend]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/31.jpg

For a Battle:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/32.jpg

For an Exchange:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/33.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/34.jpg

For an Exchange:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/35.jpg

For an Exchange:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/36.jpg

For a Battle:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/37.jpg

For an Exchange:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/38.jpg

For an Exchange:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/39.jpg

For an Exchange:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/40.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/41.jpg

[Rend]

for school extra credit:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01253.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01250.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01249.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01252.jpg

And put the soldier stencil in my book:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01251.jpg

[Akshun]

Originally posted by UKCsire@Mar 11 2006, 03:13 PM
hey akshun did you miss the "h" in the first one or what?
naw its there its connected between the u and the s..i shoulda made it more dominant but o well

[Ironik]

HUGE MOFO i lik the carac u letter style make it simpler.
And REND try to progres ur style more try diffrent styles.

[UKCsire]

oh yeah I see it now...kinda a bad idea since none of the other letters are connected like that, you don&#39;t really see the H, maybe make it more defined next time...

[CL3ver1]

Originally posted by CL3ver1@Mar 11 2006, 02:43 PM
somethin new.-
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00011/02/54/11554520_l.jpg
http://c.myspace.com/Groups/00011/34/54/11554543_l.jpg
bump

[westsida]

rend,those stencils are hot,u shud get them up

[acek]

http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/1899/acekgreen3wa.png

bump for crits

[Akshun]

acek..id say work on your lettering and try to keep your hand steady it looks really shaky..o and i like your handstyle

[Jay1888]

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/2131/img01661jd.jpg

Tried to make it look like stone, fucked it up with all the cracks though, anyway, forgetting the cracks and shit, crits?

[CL3ver1]

it looks like harry nuts.

[Jay1888]

i guess thats one way to describe it....

[CL3ver1]

sorry to put it so harshly..but yeh.look at cacks in real life..they arent that thick.when you make them try to use the tip of your pen.and dont use to many.

[MF Feed Letter]

jay your name "hawt" reminds me of a 10 year old girl talking on msn

and i wouldnt worry about fills right now you should do letter structure make your letters the same widths an what not it looks really sloppy...and use a sharpie or some shit dont use some shitty overused markers

[Jay1888]

ok, thanks. ill just keep practising then.

[escape14]

Alright guys, I need some advice, so far I&#39;ve got this:

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/5405/escape7ce.jpg

I was thinking of adding some stuff in the fill with these colors:

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/1556/colros4ds.jpg

I was thinking of trying to make them sorta like the stuff cantwo did in this pic:

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/5731/06nz01web2ov.jpg

Do you think I can do that and make it look good?

[Detroit]

Originally posted by escape14@Mar 11 2006, 07:41 PM
Alright guys, I need some advice, so far I&#39;ve got this:

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/5405/escape7ce.jpg

I was thinking of adding some stuff in the fill with these colors:

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/1556/colros4ds.jpg

I was thinking of trying to make them sorta like the stuff cantwo did in this pic:

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/5731/06nz01web2ov.jpg

Do you think I can do that and make it look good?
no you cant it didnt look good to begin with. I aint trying to hoe you. Look at the letters work on your structure first. The two e&#39;s are diffrent just start simple w/ blocks you dont even need fills right now, just get your style down than add fills

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by Ume@Mar 10 2006, 05:01 PM
bored in math today..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005706.jpg
Not bad dude i like it pensare allways fun to draw with

[artist]

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7658/10001487uh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

black book sideways piece

[Jing-D-Tae]

Supposed too say Jing



http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/3362/picture0284ks.jpg


Whats wrong with it?

[AMAZ tbscrew]

no.

[flclnaruto1213]

im dissapointed with how the colors came out.
colors are my main probem...
the fill is horrible


http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/6981/sketcher0147nb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits anyway...?

[Sluts_r_us]

ur hand looks kind of unsteady...as is mine....i don really have any crits or anything just thought id say it .....

[flclnaruto1213]

yep...

[dropsom3]

n looks wack

[dropsom3]

or is that an r?

[flclnaruto1213]

its an n.

[c0ld]

im not gonna make a new thred just for this, but.....

I went out n bought some krylon tonight in the next town (closest place to buy) and then went bombin&#39; and did a few throw-ups around town.

I LOVE Krylon
Ill nevah EVAH go back to Walmart paint

end

[Sluts_r_us]

shut the fuck up, you shouldnt be painting at all

[c0ld]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Mar 12 2006, 12:51 AM
shut the fuck up, you shouldnt be painting at all
stfu

ill paint when I want to.
I did a couple throw-ups.
ones people said were good.

what r u gonna do?
type at me?
ohhhhhh im scared

get a life.

[Sluts_r_us]

i have a life, but your right, i cant stop you but what i am trying to do is try to save the graff community by helping a toy know that he/she has to sketch for a long time before they go out and paint simply because NOBODY wants to see your toys shit on a wall.

[dropsom3]

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7570/picture4506mt.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture4506mt.jpg)
charcter i did in pecil so u cant see it that great but anyways

[dropsom3]

hwo do i make my pics bigger so u guys dont hav to click on it 2 see it

[Detroit]

get photobucket

[dropsom3]

thats what i use..oh never mind i dont

[flclnaruto1213]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Mar 12 2006, 01:08 AM
i have a life, but your right, i cant stop you but what i am trying to do is try to save the graff community by helping a toy know that he/she has to sketch for a long time before they go out and paint simply because NOBODY wants to see your toys shit on a wall.
sluts no offense, but seriously.
you arent amazing. your shit isnt good.
most if not all people would consider YOU a toy.
your not "saving the graff comunity" by telling some kids not to paint.
real writers wouldnt look at your shit as anything more than his.
your always telling kids how much of toys they are, acting like your so
good.

[(ace)]

just starting

http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/6157/sa4000625es.th.jpg (http://img63.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sa4000625es.jpg)

wont try someting more complicated before a loooooong time

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/4369/sa4000637ey.th.jpg (http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sa4000637ey.jpg)

.

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/3442/sa4000508yw.th.jpg (http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sa4000508yw.jpg)

[dropsom3]

that 2nd thing is just a punch of squigles it doesnt look like it says anything, last one looks like it is going somewhere, start simple

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213+Mar 12 2006, 02:20 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (flclnaruto1213 @ Mar 12 2006, 02:20 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sluts_r_us@Mar 12 2006, 01:08 AM
i have a life, but your right, i cant stop you but what i am trying to do is try to save the graff community by helping a toy know that he/she has to sketch for a long time before they go out and paint simply because NOBODY wants to see your toys shit on a wall.
sluts no offense, but seriously.
you arent amazing. your shit isnt good.
most if not all people would consider YOU a toy.
your not "saving the graff comunity" by telling some kids not to paint.
real writers wouldnt look at your shit as anything more than his.
your always telling kids how much of toys they are, acting like your so
good. [/b][/quote]
not once in any of my posts do i state that im not toy....i know im toy, thats why i stick to paper instead of paint for now

[dropsom3]

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/1407/picture4519pu.th.jpg (http://img116.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture4519pu.jpg)
for a battle against hybrid...its due tuesday but i finsihed 2day. ill post again on tuesday but what do u guys think? click on it 2 get a good look.thanks

[505 artist]

some any critcs

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e275/ramos505/P1010175.jpg

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e275/ramos505/eam1.jpg

[CL3ver1]

damn 505 i came here just to see what new amazing thing you posted up.but im sadly dissapointed this time around..i kinda like the yellow one tho..

[dropsom3]

yelllow and green lookin not 2 bad

[writer45]

elder-mtb

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/9430/eldrpeece5rd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Logikalone]

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/Blackbook1cover.jpg

In progress blackbook cover.
Let me know what you think.

[writer45]

cool

[writer45]

my new bomb........ tips

http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/1791/elderbomb7vi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[cess!]

just even everything up and stuff man, make em the same size and stuff..


http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh004.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh003.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh002.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh001.jpg

[505 artist]

Originally posted by CL3ver1@Mar 12 2006, 09:31 PM
damn 505 i came here just to see what new amazing thing you posted up.but im sadly dissapointed this time around..i kinda like the yellow one tho..
LOL
YEP
NAW
WELL IM LISTNEING TO SLUT AND IM KEEPING LETTER STRRUCURE AND SIMPLE NESS
TOMORRW ILL DO SOME WILD SHIT 4 U MAN :D

[505 artist]

OH CLEVER MAN THE EAM ONE WAS A QUICK ONE LIKE A THROWIE BUT I CANT DO THROWIES SO FUK IT
LOL
AND THE YELLOW ONE IS SIMPLE ONLY 2 ARROWS INT EH WHOLE THING :o

[Sluts_r_us]

throw i just thought of....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/pesktro.jpg

[flclnaruto1213]

bump cause it was deleted.
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/8246/sketcher0158xi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

and also. this is my first attempt at wildstlye, or something close to it. and i usually fuck stuff up with the colors. so does anyone have tips on a color scheme?

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/7052/sketcher0169hg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and yeah i know its not great,..

[+HyBriD+]

^ not felling teh f on ur wildstyle but 4 teh most it looks good

[dropsom3]

likin it fund, hybrid how is ur chaos peice coming
i finshed mine posted it about a page back

[+HyBriD+]

its going ok i still need 2 color it & shit ima do that 2marrow night thoguh & have it in by 2marrwo night

[dropsom3]

alright sick, cant wait 2 see what u came up with, what u think about mine. talk trash or give praise i dont mind

[+HyBriD+]

urs is actually better then it hoguht it was going 2 b

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Mar 12 2006, 10:31 PM
throw i just thought of....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/pesktro.jpg
bump for crits plz

[Volume_one_]

Originally posted by cess&#33;@Mar 12 2006, 10:16 PM
just even everything up and stuff man, make em the same size and stuff..


http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh004.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh003.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh002.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh001.jpg
lol Cess I&#39;ve been wondering how old are you?
your characters look like things out of kids book that smoked a fat sack of grass lol
and your style is sick lol i love it
it always looks kinda sketchy but define i dont know how you do it
but keep up the good work man

i was also wondering what type of markers do you use?

[mr.T]

:E just began drawing graff, so whats wrong with my "piece"? :X

http://home.no.net/ramsesk/Atvaizd012.jpg

[cord]

the &#39;&#39;r&#39;&#39; is ugly and the letters are too far apart man...

[MicoDOK]

505 shadows, or 3d man&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[TricksForKids]

i keep telling myself ill sit down and do a nice sketch and take time and shit, but fuck, heres another marker freestyle

Peace
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/6849/word6ju.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[obseen]

not really feelin the peice but i think it could develop into some thing really nice
btw nice handstyles

[Akshun]

Originally posted by Akshun@Mar 11 2006, 02:32 PM
trying a few new styles tell me what you think

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/1316/dsci00321sv.jpg
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/9788/dsci00349yo.jpg
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/8311/dsci00392kn.jpg
more feed??

[Logikalone]

Originally posted by Logikalone@Mar 12 2006, 09:55 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/Blackbook1cover.jpg

In progress blackbook cover.
Let me know what you think.
Bump for me

[AlmoSt]

flclnaruto1213


Cool, but make all the letters the same color scheme, different schemes in a word is weird poop...and ugly 2

[mr.T]

:E as always shit, but trying to get better &#33; :x

http://home.no.net/ramsesk/final.jpg

[SEROKID]

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/8599/smallvillle3fl.jpgmessin aroun

[.bomer.is.boh.]

LIKE

[SEROKID]

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/3205/bigseroer16zu.jpg

[trec.1]

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/120/newstyleeee6ci.gif
beter version of next 1 minus the grey http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/4219/jhzgfsjh3gq.gif

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/5929/spifyrudel9ok.th.jpg (http://img468.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spifyrudel9ok.jpg)

just something im working on, its not finished but what do u guys think?

[Mse]

no beef^ but its bad go simpler
dont use add-ons yet

and i was bored so i deceided to color something
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/2039/sect4op.jpg

[trec.1]

Originally posted by Mse@Mar 13 2006, 02:25 PM
no beef^ but its bad go simpler
dont use add-ons yet

and i was bored so i deceided to color something
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/2039/sect4op.jpg
me????????

[Mse]

no cyto
but you also need to keep it simple
remember simple is nice

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

but its "ok" ive only been writing for 6 months..

and it wasnt my best i just attempted to put it out there cause i just got a brand new scanner

[Fate]

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/8530/p10104106ld.jpg
its still rough, any constructive ideas?

[cess!]

Originally posted by Volume_one_+Mar 13 2006, 03:48 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Volume_one_ @ Mar 13 2006, 03:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-cess&#33;@Mar 12 2006, 10:16 PM
just even everything up and stuff man, make em the same size and stuff..


http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh004.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh003.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh002.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh001.jpg
lol Cess I&#39;ve been wondering how old are you?
your characters look like things out of kids book that smoked a fat sack of grass lol
and your style is sick lol i love it
it always looks kinda sketchy but define i dont know how you do it
but keep up the good work man

i was also wondering what type of markers do you use? [/b][/quote]
Aw thanks thats cool man
i turn 16 in 13 days, i use just prismas, the three crayolas i have, and 2 or 3 sharpies

and fate it does look rough, like its the first fo its kind, you shud go with it more and see what it turns in to...

[Volume_one_]

Originally posted by cess&#33;+Mar 13 2006, 03:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cess&#33; @ Mar 13 2006, 03:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Volume_one_@Mar 13 2006, 03:48 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-cess&#33;@Mar 12 2006, 10:16 PM
just even everything up and stuff man, make em the same size and stuff..


http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh004.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh003.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh002.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/stuffgkh001.jpg
lol Cess I&#39;ve been wondering how old are you?
your characters look like things out of kids book that smoked a fat sack of grass lol
and your style is sick lol i love it
it always looks kinda sketchy but define i dont know how you do it
but keep up the good work man

i was also wondering what type of markers do you use?
Aw thanks thats cool man
i turn 16 in 13 days, i use just prismas, the three crayolas i have, and 2 or 3 sharpies

and fate it does look rough, like its the first fo its kind, you shud go with it more and see what it turns in to... [/b][/quote]
lol wow i was expecting you to be a lil older but anyway
ya i have been just doodling stuff and finishing them and i&#39;ve been getting some strange things out of it

check the characters section to see what i mean

[505 artist]

Originally posted by MicoDOK@Mar 13 2006, 10:29 AM
505 shadows, or 3d man&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
what do u mean??????
the yellow one has a lil ass 3d cus i did not feel like making the 3d all bod ans shit

[UKCsire]

playin around with some tags last night...still rough

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/tags.gif

and worked a bit on some throws and oneliners...

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/throw.gif

[Kev Graff]

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e105/Kev_Graff/Kevsmall.jpg

Any critisizm will be appreciated...

[UKCsire]

you&#39;re missing letter structure man...you can color and everything but you&#39;re just missing some structure...mainly on the S though, but it&#39;s a good start...at least your 3d/drop shadow isn&#39;t too shabby

[T R E O]

kev:go simpler.

sire:dope.those oneliners need work but its gettin there.

[BOSS]

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/3649/ghostthrowups1ad.th.jpg

need some more crits&#33;

[Fosale!]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010245.jpg
^bored, i did this for my bio teacher, took like idk 5minutes...It was supposed to say Nah Son, but when i took the pic the top of the h got cut off =[

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010248.jpg
^I wrote Kane like 2.5 months ago so this is a KN throw i did, really fast im just gonna use it and add an H for my crew throw...yeah lalala

Critz or w.e idk but shit(im implying on crits for all u jokesters who would say here i shit on ur work) on the 3d would be helpful

[T R E O]

boss:those are wack.fix em though.

fosale:those are lookin pretty good.those stars are weird though.

[BOSS]

T R E O thanks for the advise but how can i make it better?

[BOSS]

got some more shit ya know

http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/1338/ghost77au.jpg

[Kev Graff]

thank T R E O and UKCsire for the crits i have to get more pics up those might be better :D

[MrQuote]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/BlackBook.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/Piece1.jpg
First One I&#39;ve ever done. Feel free to trash it or give some crit

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/StickerOnPage.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/StickerUpClose.jpg



Any advice at all is appreciated.

[UKCsire]

BOSS it seems like you&#39;re just trying to do as many drawings as you can, but it doesn&#39;t really seem like you&#39;re spending alot of time on them...your 3d structure is right, but maybe you might wanna change it up a bit you know...alot of your pics look the same with the same blocky structure. That&#39;s a good way to start but you should try out some new kinds of basic styles...get a variety...it&#39;s nice to see you starting simple though...

TREO, thanks for the comment man, that was just the first oneliner I&#39;ve tried, so I&#39;m still workin on it...just messin around...

[CL3ver1]

why does everyone think names like shadow and ghost are so cool when your first start....cause they arent.

[artist]

any feedback, hows it look?

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/4035/10001558pv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[UKCsire]

uhm...maybe take a picture at an angle that we can see it. Don&#39;t have so many little addons just for a handstyle...it makes it look too cluttered...

[BOSS]

thanks UKCsire
hows this

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/5015/ghost96tr.th.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

dude change your name

[BOSS]

y :huh:

[AoAssis]

theres a guy up like hell, i belive in NYC and his name is Ghost so change your name

[UKCsire]

nah dude it&#39;s okay for right now...you just gotta get into a good style and then maybe come up with a different name later on. Your new pic...lose the exclamation mark...Try to keep everything about the same width...vertical lines should be the same width as the rest of the vertical lines...the horizontal lines should be the same height as the rest of the horizontal lines. Your G seems to be in a different style as the rest of the letters because the O, S and T seem to be pretty plain. You might wanna keep all the letters following the same...general...mmm...guidelines...like if one side of your letters goes over the next letter, make all your letters do that, don&#39;t mix it up because your S is overtop of the O and the T...keep on practicing...

[near]

ya heres a quicktime sketch

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/ADW.jpg

[BOSS]

alright so i aint even close to NYC so u can fuck the guy whos getting up over there so im keepin the name. i got a couple others that i put up ghost is just my main.

UKCsire i see wat u mean bout the G bein different. im gonna try to change that. better than last time though...right?

[UKCsire]

yeah man it&#39;s an improvement...

[cess!]

near thats funky

[Rend]

someone pm this:
stop skeching every day your getting worse and worse not beter your loosing alll you ideas just let it sit for a while and think of something actully good man

no beef, Just advice

[flclnaruto1213]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Mar 13 2006, 12:11 AM
bump cause it was deleted.
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/8246/sketcher0158xi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

and also. this is my first attempt at wildstlye, or something close to it. and i usually fuck stuff up with the colors. so does anyone have tips on a color scheme?

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/7052/sketcher0169hg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and yeah i know its not great,..
bump

[MrQuote]

Originally posted by MrQuote@Mar 13 2006, 05:19 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/BlackBook.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/Piece1.jpg
First One I&#39;ve ever done. Feel free to trash it or give some crit

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/StickerOnPage.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/StickerUpClose.jpg



Any advice at all is appreciated.
Bumps in my ride

[flclnaruto1213]

fuck man im never gonna get crits.
everybody.go to page 528 and look at the last post.
i need crist :(

[RollTRS]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Mar 13 2006, 08:16 PM
i need crist :(
Lol, you said you need Christ.

Any crits for this before I add color?

http://imageserver4.textamerica.com/user.images.x/51/IMG_422651/_0313/T52006031317142026.jpg

[flclnaruto1213]

lol cool mr. wiggles bite


your not even good at biting though.
you fail.

[Sluts_r_us]

naruto.....i like it all axcept the f...just seems a bit wierd but overall i like it....

rolltrs......my suggestion is to not color it....your letter structure is horrific....my advice would be to start over, do simple letter with no add ons....it will look much better....


no beef intended just crits

[RollTRS]

Thanks, and to naruto, yeah I know it&#39;s a bite (and my first bite at that), but I wasn&#39;t doing a direct copy, I just needed something solid to go off of because my more complicated stuff was starting to look wack as hell, and I wanted to get back to a solid footing. I also can&#39;t do a "K" for shit outside handstyles.

[flclnaruto1213]

yeah...you shouldnt bite.

[Sluts_r_us]

hahaha wow mr.wiggles bite.........whats the point of posting something you bit...either way dont bite

[RollTRS]

I know. I&#39;ve never bitten before, and I was mostly looking for ideas for color when I posted it. I&#39;ll try to throw up some of my original shit later. I got some other work to finish now.

[cess!]

dont start with wildstyle, biting or not
do simple letters and take time with all of em, dont just do a letter in one flick of the pencil

[Logikalone]

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/AntehBomb1.jpg
Advice please
The light part on the 3d is silver ink, I was going to outline the whole thing that way but I stopped and scanned it first.

[MrQuote]

Someone please give me some crits? I know it&#39;s not much, but any little bit helps.

[brownkidd]

http://static.flickr.com/52/112229186_379af8b740.jpg
http://static.flickr.com/54/112229187_0b4110b843.jpg

...and this is something my dad drew up in my book in like 10 seconds when I visited him in jersey last week. He writes WAR.
http://static.flickr.com/40/112229189_703b5b3b93.jpg

[nevermind]

Any crits for this before I add color?

the centered dropshade is good, but focus on developing your style with more paralell lines before you get into rigid angles...

[Slushi]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213+Mar 13 2006, 07:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (flclnaruto1213 @ Mar 13 2006, 07:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-flclnaruto1213@Mar 13 2006, 12:11 AM
bump cause it was deleted.
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/8246/sketcher0158xi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

and also. this is my first attempt at wildstlye, or something close to it. and i usually fuck stuff up with the colors. so does anyone have tips on a color scheme?

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/7052/sketcher0169hg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and yeah i know its not great,..
bump [/b][/quote]
Nice letters on the second one.

[TricksForKids]

browkid that first one has potential? crits on my quick?

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/5934/regsbrown6es.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Logikalone]

Originally posted by Logikalone@Mar 13 2006, 09:24 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/AntehBomb1.jpg
Advice please
The light part on the 3d is silver ink, I was going to outline the whole thing that way but I stopped and scanned it first.
Crits please

[TricksForKids]

what in gods name is that second letter^ man, how can you look at that, and think its good? like im usually nice, but you HAVE to take the time, dont just post something for the SAKE of posting, come on&#33;

[flclnaruto1213]

remember how i said i tend to kill things with color.
well i wasnt lieing.
lol

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/4347/sketcher0179ak.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


...crits.?

[TricksForKids]

itd be nice if i got some citssss but lose that arrow from th D im feeling the structure of the U N and D, but the middle part of the F is hideous, that little loop i just aint feelin, and the colours well...go simpler, ninja turtle barf bash aint my fave choice, nice structure though, minus the middle of the F

Peace

[flclnaruto1213]

ok well thanks..idk to take what you just said as criticism or a compliment but thanks anyway lol.

ill give you some crits.

the brown lines look a bit shakey. try to make them more straight. also the red 3d doesnt go very good at all with the rest of the colors.
drips on the tag is a bit over done, but the outline looks good

[joker00]

Originally posted by brownkidd@Mar 13 2006, 09:44 PM
http://static.flickr.com/52/112229186_379af8b740.jpg
http://static.flickr.com/54/112229187_0b4110b843.jpg

...and this is something my dad drew up in my book in like 10 seconds when I visited him in jersey last week. He writes WAR.
http://static.flickr.com/40/112229189_703b5b3b93.jpg
love ya style BUMP~

btw wut type of marker edid u use 4 the black outline? looks fresh

[flclnaruto1213]

yo brown kid , if your dad supposedly writes , and writes war. then why does it say 2004 in the corner? wasnt this done recently?

[TricksForKids]

naruto, it was a compliment...just, take my advice and try it out, RIGHT NOW&#33;

[flclnaruto1213]

lol try what out?

[kief]

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/896/00000135gu.th.jpg (http://img105.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00000135gu.jpg)

quick shit I did in school, crits would be nice

I know the &#39;drips&#39; are ugly as fuck

[brownkidd]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Mar 13 2006, 11:02 PM
yo brown kid , if your dad supposedly writes , and writes war. then why does it say 2004 in the corner? wasnt this done recently?
Yeah i figured someone would spot that. Idunno, my dad&#39;s all about 2004 and always has been. Idunno why. He&#39;s all about war2004 and thewarman2004 and wardog2004...even before 2004, but i have no clue what it means. He hasn&#39;t written anything in like 2 years because he has multiple sclurosis and is confined to a wheelchair...so he cant get around like he used to.

[TricksForKids]

fixing that DAMN f and sticking to colours that dont make me wanna throwup

[brownkidd]

Originally posted by joker00+Mar 13 2006, 11:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (joker00 @ Mar 13 2006, 11:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-brownkidd@Mar 13 2006, 09:44 PM
http://static.flickr.com/52/112229186_379af8b740.jpg
http://static.flickr.com/54/112229187_0b4110b843.jpg

...and this is something my dad drew up in my book in like 10 seconds when I visited him in jersey last week. He writes WAR.
http://static.flickr.com/40/112229189_703b5b3b93.jpg
love ya style BUMP~

btw wut type of marker edid u use 4 the black outline? looks fresh [/b][/quote]
Microns. Sweet as shit for outlines.

[505 artist]

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e275/ramos505/EAM3.jpg

some other shti im not dont all collored piese cus they suk i dont kno how to color

but this one cool thou

this one for clever is this good enough?

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/6106/untitled6om.jpg

Just messin around. Charac.

Tell me what you think.

[TricksForKids]

lol@ dangle, dope

[Fate]

Originally posted by Fate@Mar 13 2006, 03:01 PM
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/8530/p10104106ld.jpg
its still rough, any constructive ideas?
bump

[Sluts_r_us]

505........i like that...cant really tell though, get a pic without a glare...

naruto...i guess u didnt lie about the colors lol, but i can talk because i can&#39;t do much better...

tricks...i swear if you dont sit down one day and take your fucking time on a sketch i will probaby do nothing but bitch and moan


kthnxbai

[RollTRS]

I dig that throw fate.

If anybody saw my thread, I&#39;m trying to work on my throw right now, so I just took a couple seconds and drew one in my old blackbook. I&#39;m trying to improve/redesign it. Any crits?

edit: I write klox

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/8454/03130622431vp.jpg

[kief]

Originally posted by kief@Mar 13 2006, 11:11 PM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/896/00000135gu.th.jpg (http://img105.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00000135gu.jpg)

quick shit I did in school, crits would be nice

I know the &#39;drips&#39; are ugly as fuck
eh... bump I guess

[505 artist]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Mar 13 2006, 11:31 PM
505........i like that...cant really tell though, get a pic without a glare...

naruto...i guess u didnt lie about the colors lol, but i can talk because i can&#39;t do much better...

tricks...i swear if you dont sit down one day and take your fucking time on a sketch i will probaby do nothing but bitch and moan


kthnxbai
U REALLY MEAN THAT WOW THANKS :D

OH THEY IS WITH FUKEN GLITER GELL PENNS AND I DID ABOUT 4 LAYERS THAT WHY IT SOE GALRE AND SO BIRHGT LOL
:rolleyes:

[mplskid]

feed back pleasehttp://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d180/fitrider07/yellow.jpg

[505 artist]

THAT ONE NOT BAD AT ALL IT NEED A BETTER 3D THOUGH

[+HyBriD+]

dont like teh D

[rek]

uuuu

[+HyBriD+]

NICE REK&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.....

[VoodooChild420]

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b307/voodoochild420/Picture1.jpg Critz?... I racked a 24 of prismas yesterday and i found they bleed a ton. also i cant think of shit to do with my F

[beefgerky]

Originally posted by Fate+Mar 13 2006, 11:30 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fate @ Mar 13 2006, 11:30 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fate@Mar 13 2006, 03:01 PM
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/8530/p10104106ld.jpg
its still rough, any constructive ideas?
bump [/b][/quote]
you changin names?

[kill]

i dont like the u in the haul throw

[SuprTnr2]

Yeah, make the tops of the U&#39;s level because it looks a bit like your L

[rek]

fail, i would continue the top horizontal line then you can bring it down like i did or cut it off there to fit your style. also i would probaly do somethin with the bottom of the f, sumthin simple

[rek]

also if i was doin an f, i would make the lower horizontal line a lil smaller then the top horizontal

[Fate]

Originally posted by beefgerky+Mar 14 2006, 01:31 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beefgerky @ Mar 14 2006, 01:31 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Fate@Mar 13 2006, 11:30 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Fate@Mar 13 2006, 03:01 PM
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/8530/p10104106ld.jpg
its still rough, any constructive ideas?
bump
you changin names? [/b][/quote]
no, i just sometimes paint other names.

[RollTRS]

Originally posted by RollTRS@Mar 13 2006, 11:49 PM
I dig that throw fate.

If anybody saw my thread, I&#39;m trying to work on my throw right now, so I just took a couple seconds and drew one in my old blackbook. I&#39;m trying to improve/redesign it. Any crits?

edit: I write klox

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/8454/03130622431vp.jpg
Bump

[505 artist]

Originally posted by rek@Mar 14 2006, 12:15 AM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8289/11010357ku.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/664/11010361ff.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/977/11010383if.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
B) damn that not work of a toy man
that shit so cpmpicated with them attachments and sht B)

[Logikalone]

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/AntehPiecestart.jpg

I actually sat my ass down and tryed on this one. Can&#39;t think of shit to do with that damn H and E though. Any Crit/Advice would help out a lot.

[mr.T]

im just begginer, so can u tell me whats wrong with it and what should i do or smthn?

http://home.no.net/ramsesk/final.jpg

[cord]

not bad for a begginner&#33;&#33;

pretty nice&#33;

hows about this?? comments and crits please

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/100_1328.jpg

[obseen]

you look like you have musashis style

its nice

[trec.1]

Originally posted by trec.1@Mar 13 2006, 02:07 PM
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/120/newstyleeee6ci.gif
beter version of next 1 minus the grey http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/4219/jhzgfsjh3gq.gif
coments plz

[Logikalone]

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/Antehpiecefinished.jpg

Figured out what to do with those two letters, advice and crits would be nice.

[c0ld]

heres a few I did today
I decided to change my name cuz I got tired or writing Cold and didnt like the way it looked. Ive been studying Japanese for a while and so I decided to change it to "Hikari" which means light. The style in the pic is the hiragana for hikari. the original hiragana is in the top right corner. Below that is a tag/handstyle/wutev.
and then top left is the simpler version while the one below that is a wilder version.


http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/5967/j10314xb.jpg
critz?

[cord]

its a bit sketchy, but i like the way you&#39;re trying to use japanese lettering- i do it myself sometimes

[Sluts_r_us]

ew

[Jay1888]

Originally posted by Logikalone@Mar 14 2006, 01:25 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/Antehpiecefinished.jpg

Figured out what to do with those two letters, advice and crits would be nice.
Just keep all the letters the same size really.

[mozr]

http://img476.imageshack.us/img476/3016/img08747os.th.jpg (http://img476.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img08747os.jpg)

[c0ld]

Originally posted by c0ld@Mar 14 2006, 01:46 PM
heres a few I did today
I decided to change my name cuz I got tired or writing Cold and didnt like the way it looked. Ive been studying Japanese for a while and so I decided to change it to "Hikari" which means light. The style in the pic is the hiragana for hikari. the original hiragana is in the top right corner. Below that is a tag/handstyle/wutev.
and then top left is the simpler version while the one below that is a wilder version.


http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/5967/j10314xb.jpg
critz?
anyone else?

[obseen]

concentrate on some more bubbly letters

[mozr]

Originally posted by c0ld+Mar 14 2006, 02:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (c0ld @ Mar 14 2006, 02:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-c0ld@Mar 14 2006, 01:46 PM
heres a few I did today
I decided to change my name cuz I got tired or writing Cold and didnt like the way it looked. Ive been studying Japanese for a while and so I decided to change it to "Hikari" which means light. The style in the pic is the hiragana for hikari. the original hiragana is in the top right corner. Below that is a tag/handstyle/wutev.
and then top left is the simpler version while the one below that is a wilder version.


http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/5967/j10314xb.jpg
critz?
anyone else? [/b][/quote]
it&#39;s quite bad. It has no flow and the letters are everywhere... Try to be more uniform, drop the coplexity, stick to the toy business.

[rek]

ttt

[obseen]

http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/4315/pepsi9qb.png

[flclnaruto1213]

now that i see the other contestants i think i maybe should have entered my pepsi piece

meh oh ell, mine sucked too

[505 artist]

Originally posted by rek@Mar 14 2006, 02:32 PM
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/4780/11010447cq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/1196/11010455qf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
B) cahnge the colors man u got some bad ass letters there man u should color and do better sckemes

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^wut he said

[AMAZ tbscrew]

ummm i did these in skool...and noticed my mistakes now that im guna post them but idc....there nothing serious just shit im messin around wit... iv done way better shit lol

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture042.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture041.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture040.jpg

[gnarlatron3030]

I actually like the colors

ignore the two above me

EDIT

when I started typing my message, AMAZ hadn&#39;t posted yet...
well he had
but not the 2nd one

oh fuck it
you know what I mean

[obseen]

luvin your handstyle

[Kev Graff]

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e105/Kev_Graff/Kevsmaller.jpg

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e105/Kev_Graff/Kev003smaller.jpg

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e105/Kev_Graff/Kev001smaller.jpg

Critz will be apreciatted thx :D

[MF Feed Letter]

AMAZ i really liek that middle ones style...you should throw some crazy colors on that or some shit....not feelin the other two though i think they need more structure straighter lines

[gnarlatron3030]

try making your letters relatively the same size

The top one&#39;s aight, but lose the snake bit

make the "c" bigger on the 2nd one

and make the &#39;s" smaller on the bottom

[AMAZ tbscrew]

yea they wer just simple letters wit some style and 3d....the one in the middle i did in like 2 min...it jus poped into my head lol

syco is a played out name...i like the trowie tho.

[joker00]

Originally posted by mplskid@Mar 13 2006, 11:57 PM
feed back pleasehttp://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d180/fitrider07/yellow.jpg
try a loose some of thos add on&#39;s and go a little simple but no bad

[Kev Graff]

i guess i never heard of it around here so...whatever but yea thanks :D

[T R E O]

Originally posted by joker00+Mar 14 2006, 03:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (joker00 @ Mar 14 2006, 03:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-mplskid@Mar 13 2006, 11:57 PM
feed back pleasehttp://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d180/fitrider07/yellow.jpg
try a loose some of thos add on&#39;s and go a little simple but no bad [/b][/quote]
go simpler.but its a good first try at a wildstyle type.loose the arrows also.

[acek]

yo kev graff in your throw up.. your s its bite of sake

[c0ld]

thnx for the critz everyone

i had actually already done some bubble-letters. just forgot to post.

heres one of bubble letter ones i did.
http://img427.imageshack.us/img427/3817/j10342bh.th.jpg



and heres an attempt at a handstyle or tag or sumthin. i dont really kno how to do em.......
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/1424/j10354ir.th.jpg

feed?

[cord]

your throw bubble letter thing isn&#39;t bad, but the tag/ handstyle is horrible, it just looks like a signature on a cheque or something.

lose the massive swirl and try using a chisel pen

[HasteCOR]

just got a six set of prismas. never used them before. let me get some feedback on these.
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/2263/dsc001170hk.th.jpg (http://img299.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc001170hk.jpg)
i did this for my buddies. (mote&moore)
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/5193/dsc001205mb.th.jpg (http://img209.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc001205mb.jpg)
and you cant tell me to go more simple than this.