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Sanc_one
10-04-2008, 08:32 AM
Heey that's not fair!!! Double post :D :D :D!!! New sketch!
http://shrani.si/f/3e/nv/1O3RergR/graff68.jpg

kroc_oner
10-04-2008, 09:58 AM
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/scan0011.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/scan0010.jpg
kaer tht looks good just work on the r
anoy ill simple
mass your getting better but idk work on the hair and put less facial expression i think tht would work better
samp i like tht its nice i like the fill alot to
saboe clean it up
sketch goods simples and i like tht blue fill
CRITS PLEASE!!!

and to clear things up i write keione but i have a legaly name sumwht kez7 dont tag or get up with it
bump
tape i dont like the a and put a hole in the p
no 1 simpler
number one stunna 3rd one dow n it ill imo
and major leag its ok i like the 1st and second

numberonestunna
10-04-2008, 09:59 AM
heres some new stuff
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/blocksimps.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/funkyyyy.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/colabo.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/blocksuck.jpg

Panda Jerk
10-04-2008, 10:19 AM
pyre that first ans last one are siiiick!
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan-1.jpg
theres really light grey shading in the whight part of teh 3d that may scanner didnt pick up
























































and my index finger is right there in the corner!!!:)




btw critssss

Spraycan Stories
10-04-2008, 10:29 AM
First sketch posted on this sight.
http://i388.photobucket.com/albums/oo324/TaekBets/Image040.jpg
Crits? I know i missed 3d on the bottom right

Panda Jerk
10-04-2008, 10:33 AM
i like the e except for the little arrow thing coming offa it at the bottom

Spraycan Stories
10-04-2008, 10:39 AM
Wasn't really aiming for an arrow but whatever and ill have your exchange soon something came up

respERATION
10-04-2008, 10:47 AM
spray can stories:i can't really see it....ink it?
panda jerk:i'm loving that top one....exchange?
numberonestunna:frreeessshhhhhhhhhh
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/15-10-27_1036.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/15-10-27_1044.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/15-10-27_1043.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/15-10-27_1041.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/15-10-27_1045.jpg

Panda Jerk
10-04-2008, 11:03 AM
y mas
crits
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0005-1.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0001-1.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0002.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0003-1.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0004-2.jpg

kroc_oner
10-04-2008, 11:05 AM
lol i like those simples easter crits on mine ??

Panda Jerk
10-04-2008, 11:07 AM
forgive me but i didnt see yurs =/

sketch3
10-04-2008, 11:09 AM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/blocksimps.jpg

dope dope dope,
would sick ona wall

Panda Jerk
10-04-2008, 11:10 AM
double post

kroc_oner
10-04-2008, 11:10 AM
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/scan0011.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/scan0010.jpg
kaer tht looks good just work on the r
anoy ill simple
mass your getting better but idk work on the hair and put less facial expression i think tht would work better
samp i like tht its nice i like the fill alot to
saboe clean it up
sketch goods simples and i like tht blue fill

rebump

Panda Jerk
10-04-2008, 11:11 AM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan-1.jpg


http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0005-1.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0001-1.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0002.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0003-1.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0004-2.jpg
bottom bump

and kroc i found em i like the second one only... try throwins some 3d on it

Epoc
10-04-2008, 11:38 AM
wholly balls panda, why not kill it a little more? I like the first the best, a step up from your usual ish. The others are dope too, a couple slop letters, but im not one to crit that.
Where do you get such a pin-doggn sketch book? Or how did u get such a massive hand, your mutant freak.

Panda Jerk
10-04-2008, 11:44 AM
lol thanks

i got teh little sketchy book at aaron bros

SAID
10-04-2008, 12:31 PM
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/1386/aher005nf2.jpg
says Cedric.
i know the little whack extension is outta place shoulda made a thick one.
and panda, first and last one are the illest, cant wait to see the first one colored in.
that pyre is fire too.

Baron
10-04-2008, 01:03 PM
heres the finished result
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/123erosoutline-1.jpg

I laughed really hard about what you wrote under your piece. Probably harder than I should have.

FIN one
10-04-2008, 01:25 PM
^ no i think you laughed just enough haha. it got a chuckle out of me.

havent sketched in a few months so here's my first one in a while. please be gentle lol.
says smec

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/8682/n10383184341612445126nn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

respERATION
10-04-2008, 02:02 PM
spray can stories:i can't really see it....ink it?
panda jerk:i'm loving that top one....exchange?
numberonestunna:frreeessshhhhhhhhhh
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/15-10-27_1036.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/15-10-27_1044.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/15-10-27_1043.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/15-10-27_1041.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/15-10-27_1045.jpg

bump


everyone on this page is killing it so far....

fromthegrave
10-04-2008, 03:14 PM
Eastr- I like that style, fix ur R's
resp- ur on the right track, lose those characters.
kroc- try letters.

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture013.jpg
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture014.jpg
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture015.jpg
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture016.jpg

respERATION
10-04-2008, 03:46 PM
hahaha but i like them??
flicks for talking
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/15-10-27_1042.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/15-10-27_1031.jpg

CakeWalk99
10-04-2008, 04:27 PM
Grave- I always respect your work man. The third one down is my favorite.

Vagrant
10-04-2008, 04:42 PM
Some sketches

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/FlySketchesBook.jpg

some are hard to see

sank.
10-04-2008, 05:11 PM
those flies are so fresh, but your letters are kinda hurting in my opinion. I like the v and especially the g on the left one, but the rest dons't really flow and they all get progressively smaller. the r is wack, sorry to say. but i think it'd look alot better if you played around with an upper case T. you have more motivtion then me , i never finish or even color my sketches :(

Vagrant
10-04-2008, 05:20 PM
yeah that piece on the left page was off the top of my head. i didn't really put any effort into the letter structure apart from the V. I just wanted to put something there.
My usual fly karaks are all the same but I'm going to start mixing it up and make more unique and different versions. That was the purpose of these pages mainly.

Epoc
10-04-2008, 05:36 PM
resperation- i really like your letters. karaks arnt the best. maybe one to many pagan crosses.
grave- meh, decent letters..fills are too colorful for me. id say use less extensions. keep it up.
second resp post - i like em. only thing ew is the swirls+tentacles+crosses splash. unique handy.
vagrant- nice flies as usual, first page has cruddy bars. perfect the second page bars, they are much better.

should i bother using this in a toy battle?

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/8341/dsc00940rn7.jpg
i hate the O (ya...that's wat that little turd with scribbles is suppose to be), and dont like the K
hopefully getting better :)

kroc_oner
10-04-2008, 06:21 PM
Eastr- I like that style, fix ur R's
resp- ur on the right track, lose those characters.
kroc- try letters.

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture013.jpg
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture014.jpg
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture015.jpg
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture016.jpg

whts try letters mean

Scream Out
10-04-2008, 06:45 PM
I haven't posted anything in a bit and haven't sketched anything in months, so heres a pen freestyle for my woman; turned out decent so I decided to colour it.
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k301/Inhumation/Photo389.jpg
The A is a bit fucked and the cracks are overdone but hey, its a freestyle its not like I could erase the fuck-ups.

GIzUrD
10-04-2008, 08:18 PM
SCREAM- didnt you use to write swol? the k seems somewhat out of place

VAGRANT- wow its great, the letters not being perfect is a good thing in my opinion, goes with the background and all comes together.

Mr yarbles
10-04-2008, 08:33 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/28mi8b5.jpg
Crits?

Vagrant that shit is dope

Scream
I agree the k does seem kinda out of place.

Resp looks good to me

sketch3
10-04-2008, 08:43 PM
really reminds me of my throw
http://i37.tinypic.com/e9dj10.jpg

Mr yarbles
10-04-2008, 08:54 PM
... Seriously?

Thread-Locks
10-04-2008, 08:58 PM
Seriously

Mr yarbles
10-04-2008, 09:00 PM
Shucks :(

sketch3
10-04-2008, 09:41 PM
not calling a bite, but iv seen it a few times and the other ones looked even more similer

Epoc
10-04-2008, 09:57 PM
haha?

LeaksOne
10-04-2008, 10:11 PM
yarbles thats a hot throw but the letters are different sizes. i duno if its intentional or not but jus pointin that out

Nervous?
10-05-2008, 12:42 AM
Not much but its original imo.

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/3919/picture002zv9.jpg

respERATION
10-05-2008, 04:49 AM
resperation- i really like your letters. karaks arnt the best. maybe one to many pagan crosses.
second resp post - i like em. only thing ew is the swirls+tentacles+crosses

hahaha ight i'll drop all that crap, it's just it looks so blank when it's just a piece :/
any more crits? ...

Nervous?
10-05-2008, 08:37 AM
Your karak's need work, And you kinda posted the same piece 3 times lol. Your Tag is kinda sketchy, but thats just my opinion. It might look better fatter. Your letters on your pieces seem pretty good though, dont forget to outline!.

FIN one
10-05-2008, 11:48 AM
Nervous-i think you should use bars for now and try to keep them the same width throughout the piece. try not to let the letters overlap themselves. imo, that only looks good when properly done. the fill is kinda cool tho. also, i would recomend not tryin to make letters into things (donuts) until you better your letter structure. not hatin, just givin u some crits. keep sketchin

-Wings-
10-05-2008, 12:33 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF05102008_00000.jpg

Meh, I dont like drawing this type S's.
Comments?

kroc_oner
10-05-2008, 12:36 PM
i like tht except the i your really good for 2 months

-Wings-
10-05-2008, 12:42 PM
Thanks :)! I write each day, and before I started I looked into it alot so I could start get better faster, seems to be working. :P More flicks up later.

Scream Out
10-05-2008, 12:48 PM
thats not a K in my sketch lol, try a lowercase N

GIzUrD
10-05-2008, 12:52 PM
thats not a K in my sketch lol, try a lowercase N

hahaha... ahhhh good times.

-Wings-
10-05-2008, 12:57 PM
Huuuuuuuuuuuuuuh? :P I dont follow.

IlikePie
10-05-2008, 12:59 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC01304.jpg

Never got around to uploading this one...

emel
10-05-2008, 01:35 PM
maybe you should try to paint that

if ya can

IlikePie
10-05-2008, 01:42 PM
^Such a negative nancy, eh?

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 01:45 PM
you even got any pics of your paint

emel
10-05-2008, 01:47 PM
no

IlikePie
10-05-2008, 01:50 PM
Who the fuck is this Epic kid?
And I don't post painted shit, just not my thing. I've posted my face on here already. Smoke too much meth, I'm paranoid.

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 01:54 PM
im a graff artest yo

and im smart and dont put my face on here

but anyway im just say'n if his black blooks that good

he should put some paint up

IlikePie
10-05-2008, 01:58 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC01305.jpg
Current outline I'm working on.
Stop talking.

-Wings-
10-05-2008, 01:59 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF05102008_00001.jpg

Rawr!!! Not my best. I just wanted to fill something (I never color because I cant).

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 02:03 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF05102008_00001.jpg

Rawr!!! Not my best. I just wanted to fill something (I never color because I cant).

outlines tight

but you right about your coloring
but its a little different with paint (my oppion)
i cant color on paper ether but i can with paint

emel
10-05-2008, 02:06 PM
LOL @ pie's dominance over all toys...

all hail ye who cannot piece his own sketches.. hear yeee

IlikePie
10-05-2008, 02:09 PM
You've just been bitter since I showed you I do use bars. Why don't you just let me be lame in peace? Gotta be all pissy for no reason.

emel
10-05-2008, 02:10 PM
harh harh harh harrrrr

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 02:13 PM
haha wow you guys are gay!

-Wings-
10-05-2008, 02:16 PM
Agreed, any more comments on my stuff up there?

writersblock
10-05-2008, 02:17 PM
emel you should post flicks or fucking shut up.

you're in the toy forum too... clown.

IlikePie
10-05-2008, 02:20 PM
Nah, Emel is good, he's just a bitch.
Wings, you should give your letters some breathing room. Like kick out your K more, make your N wider. You know?

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 02:34 PM
i still think the letters are fine he just needs to learn to use color

-Wings-
10-05-2008, 02:36 PM
Its not that I cant color, its just the fact what im using is to hard to actually color and make it look good.

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 02:38 PM
o ic ic
so you can color with paint?

-Wings-
10-05-2008, 02:45 PM
Yes, I got good can control and fills. I just do a sloppy blueprint fill :P (aka on paper).

IlikePie
10-05-2008, 02:49 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC01304.jpg

Never got around to uploading this one...


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC01305.jpg
Current outline I'm working on.
Stop talking.

Sooooo muchhhh talk...

bombde03
10-05-2008, 02:49 PM
http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq66/delawarekid302/tramp5.jpg

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 02:50 PM
ic makes sense

i do the same what paint you use?

-Wings-
10-05-2008, 02:52 PM
Montana Hardcore, and Krylon when I need paint right away. And I do have tips or whatever. I prefer using Montana tho.

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 02:53 PM
ic makes sense

i do the same what paint you use?

Shiva.
10-05-2008, 02:56 PM
i think it would be a nice start if you looked in the new to graff thread..

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 02:59 PM
me or Wing?

Drakula
10-05-2008, 03:17 PM
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq35/pedobear_01/c713164d.png

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 03:21 PM
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq35/pedobear_01/c713164d.png

the first ones tight
but i dont like the second one that much

Vagrant
10-05-2008, 03:35 PM
Sheboygan is lame.
You sound like you're 12 y/o

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 03:46 PM
yea it is thats my i go to milwauke and chicago to do my painting

Vagrant
10-05-2008, 03:55 PM
no you don't

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 04:13 PM
yea i do
how in the fuck would you now

unreal180
10-05-2008, 04:15 PM
there isnt a second 1?
if ur chatin bout that dub in his sig ur a fool
its shit hot

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 04:18 PM
yea i do
how in the fuck would you now

Czar One
10-05-2008, 04:19 PM
Its not that I cant color, its just the fact what im using is to hard to actually color and make it look good.


Don't use excuses for the fact that you're not good at fills. There are cats that can rock doper shit with cheap pencils then some of the other heads trying to pull of stuff with prismas. It's all about actually taking some time, putting forth effort, and working your ass off.

Bump that new RAB shit. I'm feelin that man. You don't have to post painted flicks on here, but you need to get at me with some on MSN :p

Bump that Raby too. Although, I think it would look better if the end of the Y's descender wasn't covered up by the top part of the Y, ya know?



some wack ish.
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/schooltime.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/cztothear.jpg

Vagrant
10-05-2008, 04:22 PM
yea i do
how in the fuck would you now

Because Sheboygan to Milwaukee is an hour drive, and Sheboygan to Chicago is probably like 2 and a half.

gtfo

7nationarmy
10-05-2008, 04:42 PM
that raby simp is fresh son

Sanc_one
10-05-2008, 04:46 PM
So here is new sketch. Idk which color i should use for A and E. Halp plox? ^^
http://shrani.si/f/3n/11f/48B698Df/graff69.jpg

Vagrant
10-05-2008, 05:02 PM
leave it white

Czar One
10-05-2008, 05:04 PM
bump for crits. Where's the love?
I know that my Z is fucked, and that my extensions (especially on the A) are rubbish.


Don't use excuses for the fact that you're not good at fills. There are cats that can rock doper shit with cheap pencils then some of the other heads trying to pull of stuff with prismas. It's all about actually taking some time, putting forth effort, and working your ass off.

Bump that new RAB shit. I'm feelin that man. You don't have to post painted flicks on here, but you need to get at me with some on MSN :p

Bump that Raby too. Although, I think it would look better if the end of the Y's descender wasn't covered up by the top part of the Y, ya know?



some wack ish.
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/schooltime.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/cztothear.jpg

DonaldFour
10-05-2008, 05:29 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture103.jpg

feelin a bit colorful today

sorry for it lookin kinda pixelized, i had to hella downsize it because the sketch is huge

and yeah i need a new white paint marker... -_-

GOVKILLZ
10-05-2008, 05:54 PM
sum quick shitz i did.. i admit i messd up on da 3dz... oh well..
http://i493.photobucket.com/albums/rr298/GOVKILLZ/SANY1390.jpg
critz?

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 06:25 PM
Because Sheboygan to Milwaukee is an hour drive, and Sheboygan to Chicago is probably like 2 and a half.


I go there on the week end for 2 or 3 days a a time
duh you dumb ass

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 06:26 PM
So here is new sketch. Idk which color i should use for A and E. Halp plox? ^^
http://shrani.si/f/3n/11f/48B698Df/graff69.jpg

this is some tight shit!

GIzUrD
10-05-2008, 07:36 PM
heres something ive been working on crits plz.
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/5743/woweeerk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
just trying to get my groove on :)

the tape is pretty good, cool name too.

DonaldFour
10-05-2008, 07:38 PM
the G in the purple one is sick. the rest of it aint all that, but it aint bad neither. i like it =)

xEpiCx
10-05-2008, 07:39 PM
heres something ive been working on crits plz.
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/5743/woweeerk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
just trying to get my groove on :)

the tape is pretty good, cool name too.

the top is tight
but im not dig'n the buttom parts colors

IlikePie
10-05-2008, 07:41 PM
If you just left the top one as Giz, it would be ultra super dope.

C3ZR ONE
10-05-2008, 07:55 PM
CZAR- The second one is fresh. The first one has pretty good letters, but the flow is kinda off. They're too seperated.

Here's a crit for everyone...- Don't get too wrapped up in trying to perfect the popular styles of today. Letters is letters and they all equal ups. Clean, solid simples and random fonts are ill too. Look at cats like Colt 45, Mber, etc... Serious ups, but they're really just rocking clean typography, not the style of today. Graff is all types of typography. It took me a while to wrap my head around that shit.;)

7nationarmy
10-05-2008, 09:19 PM
epic.i like it for some reasson :D
tape..its iight just think u should make the letters the same size..and yes im being hypocritical on that look me back a couple pages back
heres some sht i did today exchanges for ma *****s last ones me
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG1295.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG1296.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG1300.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG1301.jpg
crits welcomed :D

7nationarmy
10-05-2008, 09:20 PM
double post excuse my toyness :)

lawlcat
10-05-2008, 09:32 PM
feeling the simples 7nation. try adding some new colors to the mix.
dig the first one gizurd, a lot. the second kind of has me guessing. but good all around.
tape only thing i dont like is the arrow thing at the top of the A, other than that id keep them white and it looks pretty solid.
gov i like your handy, but the throws just arent doing it for me personally.

trying some new ish. a few fuck ups here and there but meh.
color suggestions?
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00146.jpg

FIN one
10-05-2008, 11:34 PM
try layin off extensions a bit,
tape- i say purple lol
gizr top looks hella fresh

colored in a bit, markers bled like no other. crits?
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/5509/smeckf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Atomik
10-06-2008, 12:44 AM
nice shit giz feeling that top one everyone lookin fresh on this page..
new shit reads alice was bored kinda fucked it up but what ever crits
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/alice.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
10-06-2008, 01:05 AM
Hola my BB friends. Been behind the scenes for a minute. Had to change the name...

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16233.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16232.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16231.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16230.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16229.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16228.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16227.jpg

Oldest to Newest.

Bump this. And some new bullshit quickies..

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16238.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16237.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16236.jpg

Don't mind the random script.

Gizurd - That top style is grimey. The R doesnt fit though. Maybe for the top circle of the R, mirror your G's roundedness. You know? Eh, just an idea...

sank.
10-06-2008, 02:18 AM
i got clout - i like the first pic alot for some reason. the last one is super fresh, nice fade. but i'd say lose the inverted crosses, there overused by people who think they can rock that style.

cezr i know your a busy man, but..... exchange?! when i first came on here your handies were the illest thing i'd ever seen :p

I GOT CLOUT
10-06-2008, 02:43 AM
Eh, they aren't really meant to be crosses..

Sanc_one
10-06-2008, 04:33 AM
tape only thing i dont like is the arrow thing at the top of the A, other than that id keep them white and it looks pretty solid.
[/U]

Its actually not a arrow :D... its extension. Thanks for all critz anyway!

Mass Appeal
10-06-2008, 07:15 AM
A little simple.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gg-1.jpg

sex without condoms
10-06-2008, 08:21 AM
nice

DonaldFour
10-06-2008, 08:29 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture103.jpg

feelin a bit colorful today

sorry for it lookin kinda pixelized, i had to hella downsize it because the sketch is huge

and yeah i need a new white paint marker... -_-

bump for crits?

major"LEAG"
10-06-2008, 08:33 AM
Rooftop, 7nationarmy & Zase - looking very good...

Here is some more B.S. to post onto B.S...

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=124&pictureid=849
"LEAG"

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=146&pictureid=846
the ol' moniker - "MarsOne"

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=146&pictureid=848
"Mars"

bumping my own shit for crits...holla at'cha squalla...

00-made-00
10-06-2008, 09:48 AM
Mars- Its a pretty common name, it looks like your starting to get simples down, maybe experiment with some different words to set you aside from others.
Mass- pretty jazzy.
necdr- the D kills the flow man.
some recent sketches.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimr3.jpg
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimr2.jpg
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimr1-2.jpg

Mass Appeal
10-06-2008, 11:23 AM
Good to see you switching them up Aimr :D

osnapizzel
10-06-2008, 11:53 AM
aimr nice simps


that marsone sticker is dope

I GOT CLOUT
10-06-2008, 12:50 PM
Mass - pretty funky. I like.
Aimr - In my opinion those are your best letters yet.
Mars - I remember when you first came on here. You've progressed a good amount man. Just keep at it.

major"LEAG"
10-06-2008, 01:10 PM
aimr nice simps


that marsone sticker is dope

Thanks, yo...actually thanks for the crits e'rybody...definitly feeling e'ryones shit in one way or another...more shit to come...stay up...

"AIMR" - thats pretty good and i'll take what you advised into consideration...

KireOne
10-06-2008, 03:42 PM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf2019.jpghttp://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf2018.jpghttp://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf2017.jpghttp://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf2016.jpghttp://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf2020.jpg
just some shit out of my book

DonaldFour
10-06-2008, 03:48 PM
Aimr its Negor not Necdr @_@


ahaha now that you mention it it does kinda look like a C and D :[[

KireOne
10-06-2008, 03:49 PM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf2012.jpg?t=1223325954http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf2010.jpg?t=1223325978
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf2005.jpg?t=1223326105http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf2013.jpg?t=1223326059

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf2004.jpg?t=1223326172

KireOne
10-06-2008, 03:54 PM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf2006.jpg?t=1223326266

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf2003.jpg?t=1223326311
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/vskroconer003.jpg?t=1223326363

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf2007.jpg?t=1223326415

any crits welcomed

simple zen
10-06-2008, 04:00 PM
the bottom one looks like scribble scrabble... hard to make out. go a little bit simpler. don't connect the letters like you did with the first pic...

nastonE
10-06-2008, 04:35 PM
just messing around with letter structure, crits?
http://i432.photobucket.com/albums/qq46/daniel_g_1991/letterstructure.jpg
.

-Wings-
10-06-2008, 05:10 PM
You over did the chips.
And they have bad letter structure.

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF06102008_00000.jpg

Crits?

PeeInTheShower
10-06-2008, 05:26 PM
make the red x look more like an s... and a k... and an i... as well as an N

-Wings-
10-06-2008, 06:11 PM
whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?

HRbN
10-06-2008, 06:37 PM
kire, Go simpler.. youve got the right idea kinda but your one step ahead of yourself. im not sayin go back and do keyboard letters but definately go simpler, its just too much. it'll make your shit look 10 times better if you just clean it up a lil

-Wings-
10-06-2008, 06:52 PM
Im stoned out of my mind.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF06102008_00001.jpg

First time ive tried sketching while stoned.

Panda Jerk
10-06-2008, 07:29 PM
A little simple.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gg-1.jpg

i see an s..... and a k..... thats it


edit: o wait jk i see it aher

NoCanControl
10-06-2008, 07:36 PM
don't crit him. he'll bite your ass offff.


i learned...

NO_1
10-06-2008, 07:47 PM
one letter... to much?
does the letter actually look good?

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/R.jpg

wings. i letter is getting engulfed in extensions so it makes it kinda hard to see the s

but isnt drawing stoned sick?

-Wings-
10-06-2008, 07:56 PM
Meh, I can focus more when im drawing sober. I shall now go smoke another joint. And yeah, it looked better before the gay as extentions came :P.

Ps the bottom of the letter on the left is over done. But other then that it looks pretty decent :/.

KireOne
10-06-2008, 08:26 PM
kire, Go simpler.. youve got the right idea kinda but your one step ahead of yourself. im not sayin go back and do keyboard letters but definately go simpler, its just too much. it'll make your shit look 10 times better if you just clean it up a lil
alright man, thanks for the advice

(SoS)Viruz
10-06-2008, 08:26 PM
Mass- Not Feelin it at all. Bro. Sorry, I like your other stuff WAY better.

lawlcat
10-06-2008, 08:52 PM
feeling the simples 7nation. try adding some new colors to the mix.
dig the first one gizurd, a lot. the second kind of has me guessing. but good all around.
tape only thing i dont like is the arrow thing at the top of the A, other than that id keep them white and it looks pretty solid.
gov i like your handy, but the throws just arent doing it for me personally.

trying some new ish. a few fuck ups here and there but meh.
color suggestions?
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00146.jpg
bump.

kroc_oner
10-06-2008, 08:58 PM
i sorta like tht and the top one work on the k ttho

lawlcat
10-06-2008, 10:14 PM
one more. i fucking hate the K but meh.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00149-1.jpg

RFI. SPit
10-06-2008, 10:42 PM
First sketch in a long time... letters are really wack :'(

But I like the fill
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/7205/photo38we4.jpg

sank.
10-06-2008, 11:16 PM
no one ever comments on my ish. so i'd like some input from the good cats who lurk the toy forums. my letters get progressively worse in my opinion, but i ran out of room so i had to squeeze the e and k in. also i kinda fucked up the hand, but whateva i like where i'm heading....

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_1201.jpg

k so i dont know why the picture wont flip, i edited in photobucket :mad::mad:

NoCanControl
10-06-2008, 11:19 PM
your n needs a little work. but evertyhign is sick.

(SoS)Viruz
10-06-2008, 11:53 PM
First sketch in a long time... letters are really wack :'(

But I like the fill
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/7205/photo38we4.jpg

Nice Force Feild. Just work on the "E" and you are Str8 my brotha.

RFI. SPit
10-07-2008, 12:21 AM
Eeeeh, I need to start practicing more. My older structure was a lot better--

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3007/2718504403_18349c187b.jpg?v=0

NO_1
10-07-2008, 12:32 AM
so i decided to completely start over using the name Derk1. 3 or 4 people told me to go back to simples so im doing it
(please inform me if there is another derk that you know of)
heres what i got

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/1derk.jpg
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/2derk.jpg

<J-one>
10-07-2008, 01:22 AM
sank - that stuff looks pretty tight...might be a bit too much... dumb it down a little. by the end it looks like you mighta been tryin too hard. like you said it lost the flow.

RFI - it looks good man. keep workin with those letters i think they'll go somewhere.

NO1 - when your doin simples keep 'em straight...don't try to flare or curve em quite yet.

here's a few of my sketches i've been doin...workin on a more grim style.. let me know what you think



http://flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/2920613758/in/photostream/
http://flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/2920598414/in/photostream/
http://flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/2920620546/in/photostream/
http://flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/2920574114/in/photostream/
http://flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/2919756089/in/photostream/

<J-one>
10-07-2008, 01:37 AM
well those didn't work...
but i figured it out

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3154/2920613758_031ce8ecfa.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3225/2920598414_5da187050b.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3116/2920574114_d1eb9150fb.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3115/2920620546_dee083f047.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3108/2919756089_c1301c2dc3.jpg?v=0

so....crits?

respERATION
10-07-2008, 03:36 AM
i'm mad feeling your style man,you and zof are the shizzzz

i'll post up some flicks later when i can be fucked

smooth_nuts
10-07-2008, 04:02 AM
Mars- Its a pretty common name, it looks like your starting to get simples down, maybe experiment with some different words to set you aside from others.
Mass- pretty jazzy.
necdr- the D kills the flow man.
some recent sketches.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimr3.jpg
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimr2.jpg
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimr1-2.jpg
BUMPPPPP....looking good aimr,you should paint that first one as soon as possible!

<J-one>
10-07-2008, 04:17 AM
that aimr shit is lookin hot

resp if that was meant for me thanks brah.

2 am, bored as shit, paper, pen = post

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3230/2921490420_990513a58d.jpg?v=0

Mass Appeal
10-07-2008, 04:35 AM
First sketch in a long time... letters are really wack :'(

But I like the fill
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/7205/photo38we4.jpg

Waht football poster is that in the background ?

And Nocancontrol ... regardless of what i say to you or anyone ... i still love you.

nero112
10-07-2008, 07:28 AM
looks like astronuaghts in orange with helmets in theyr hands and astros in white..

ThePharcyde
10-07-2008, 07:53 AM
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimr07oct.jpg
Most recent sketch.
Zof- the Z is fresh.
derk - feeling the simple mate, has lots of potential.

lawlcat
10-07-2008, 09:32 AM
one more. i fucking hate the K but meh.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00149-1.jpg

bump.

ThePharcyde
10-07-2008, 10:10 AM
Keep the letter proportions the same, the letters look odd.

I GOT CLOUT
10-07-2008, 03:22 PM
Shitty Camera phone flicks. The colors are dulled out. No batteries for the camera.
And I woulda posted this shit in the canvas thread but it is deceased.

For a friend.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16241.jpg
For my sis.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16240.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16227.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16205.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16083.jpg
And a bump on this.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16236.jpg

Aimr - Shits dope. Im starting to feel your style.

Mass Appeal
10-07-2008, 03:54 PM
Good stuff ^
Really good stuff.

-Wings-
10-07-2008, 04:09 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF07102008_00000.jpg

Meh, not my best.

HRbN
10-07-2008, 04:45 PM
clout, those are some dope octo shoes lol

I GOT CLOUT
10-07-2008, 04:49 PM
...Its a Jellyfish. Come on now.

-Wings-
10-07-2008, 05:49 PM
Commets on mine :)?

jupsick
10-07-2008, 05:51 PM
aimr dude awsome shit
i see you started bending your bars..thats awsome
umm 1 thing i didnt like is the right leg of the R
it kinda dosent flow with all the others isnt it? maybe its just me
http://xs132.xs.to/xs132/08412/07-10-08_2011896444.jpg
http://xs132.xs.to/xs132/08412/07-10-08_2012114607.jpg
any crits?
working on my M most inportent here XD

Zase
10-07-2008, 07:24 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/21o7vir.jpg
ok just too show u i aint sittin still
doing some shit u know im gonna do that zaser fullcolour in steps cuzz i need too stop rushing shit ...

ok imo this is my best piece in my short graff career
http://i34.tinypic.com/258rszb.jpg

Panda Jerk
10-07-2008, 07:32 PM
yeah that zaser is sick


i have a question why do people put "er" at the end of there names...
like i do it too haha i just wanna know why

NoCanControl
10-07-2008, 07:44 PM
yeah that zaser is sick


i have a question why do people put "er" at the end of there names...
like i do it too haha i just wanna know why

sounds tight as fuck.

Zase
10-07-2008, 07:50 PM
plus i had the Z on the left page so it would be zase with >>> 3d , i wanted down 3d so i added for the balance

Panda Jerk
10-07-2008, 07:52 PM
haha yeah but a buddy of mine writes krowER (zase u might know him, hes on pg) and idk it looks sick but like how did it start haha

KireOne
10-07-2008, 08:11 PM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf3003.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf3002.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf3001.jpg
tryin a little more simple aproach
crits welcome

Panda Jerk
10-07-2008, 08:14 PM
tone it down even more like this

ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ...

KIRE...

ENDO...

look how good those letters are... the bars are perfect..
thats why im a king

WoeInfinite
10-07-2008, 08:28 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/canvasssss.jpg
1st canvas ever,
crits please?
1st time ever trying those letters too.
so dont beat me too bad on em
haha

(SoS)Viruz
10-07-2008, 08:30 PM
Sup Woe. I suggjest you use the same style but invest in Bars Bro. It look cool tho. A when we gonna do that Sticker Trade?

WoeInfinite
10-07-2008, 08:32 PM
haha yeah, it was pretty much freestyled, i just had an idea for the O...
but shit i totally forgot about that..
i need to grab some stickers ive got maybe 5 layin around?
haha

NO_1
10-07-2008, 08:34 PM
woe thats a weird freaking style...i don't even know how to criticize that

any ways...heres even simpler and played with in a photo editor
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/23.jpg

WoeInfinite
10-07-2008, 08:37 PM
haha yeha i know its a weird style.
i like it though..
[shrug]
im feelin that, just make the letters end at the same spot on the bottom, ya know what i mean? like how the A is higher than the D and the N is higher than them all

Zase
10-07-2008, 08:51 PM
yeah i know his work hes a dope writer
i think it started with people clearing up dead space and have another flow and balance hahh i did a zaseroner piece once hahaha next up zaseronerzorzer O.o
fuck no waste of time haha maybe later

keane rocked a nice biggass piece for the weed battle

KireOne
10-07-2008, 08:56 PM
tone it down even more like this

ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ...

KIRE...

ENDO...

look how good those letters are... the bars are perfect..
thats why im a king

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq283/tylerwashere_12790/graf4.jpg?t=1223430913
doesnt get too much simpler than that

-Wings-
10-07-2008, 08:57 PM
Just made this, and zase Im digging all of those pieces. Only thing I can say is work on your throws.
And kire you can go simpler then that, make thick block letters that look like the ones on your keyboard..
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00000.jpg

KireOne
10-07-2008, 08:59 PM
those are thick block letters?
maybe im not followin what your saying

kroc_oner
10-07-2008, 09:00 PM
skin ht happend to the stuff u did yestarday or 2 days ago

WoeInfinite
10-07-2008, 09:02 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/canvasssss.jpg
1st canvas ever,
crits please?
1st time ever trying those letters too.
so dont beat me too bad on em
haha

of course i rock the bottom of the page..
crits please

-Wings-
10-07-2008, 09:02 PM
Thick block letters that look like there from the keyboard, basicley take the letters of you keyboards and puff them up a bit, and tadda a simple. You can mess around with simples as long as the letters are straight and are easy to distinguish. And no X's for the middles of letters like O's Or P's.

And kroc what do you mean? I posted it all up, I can bump them if wanted?..

NO_1
10-07-2008, 09:46 PM
wings im digging your S so much

attempt 3 at simples

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/112314678.jpg

Atomik
10-07-2008, 09:55 PM
nice shit nice and clean
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/100_0549-1.jpg

NO_1
10-07-2008, 09:58 PM
atom-your 3d is on and everything but the e needs alot of work. i kinda like the L and the z need a bit of work

so what after simples?

WoeInfinite
10-07-2008, 10:01 PM
wooo!
im feelin that dude.
you too dank, thats tight.

Atomik
10-07-2008, 10:02 PM
ha yeah that E i fucked up but it all good ha thanks tho.

ClaimRSM
10-07-2008, 10:04 PM
Atomik- Damn liking those colors.

a little thing i did for some bitch.

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj179/Yaskin805/1007081537.jpg

WoeInfinite
10-07-2008, 10:05 PM
yo atomik, wtf does your sig say...i stare at it for hours.
hahhaa

jersOneTIC
10-07-2008, 10:12 PM
wings - try to separate the i and the n
woe - wierd, but it's original
dank - keep your letters straight
atomik - dope fill
claim - u need lots of practice(bars)
http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/6653/qqqgb3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
[/URL]
and my fav mag...
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/3710/stfrz7.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/img368/qqqgb3.jpg/1/)
[URL="http://g.imageshack.us/img72/stfrz7.jpg/1/"]

WoeInfinite
10-07-2008, 10:19 PM
jers thats all dope.
not really feelin the Y in style though..
dope fills.

NO_1
10-07-2008, 10:29 PM
jers. really feeling the top one. the second one seems on point cept for the l in the first word

also you should try to experiment a bit more with ya fills

I GOT CLOUT
10-07-2008, 10:40 PM
Shitty Camera phone flicks. The colors are dulled out. No batteries for the camera.
And I woulda posted this shit in the canvas thread but it is deceased.

For a friend.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16241.jpg
For my sis.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16240.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16227.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16205.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16083.jpg
And a bump on this.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16236.jpg

Aimr - Shits dope. Im starting to feel your style.

Can I got some crits or some feedback or something...Its like yall dont even see this shit.

Dank - Feeling the simples. Just keep rocking em for awhile. It definately helps.
Endo - In all of those letters, I dont see a single dope simple. Which is why you have to keep rocking them until you can...well, rock em.
Wings - I dont like how the I and N connect. But keep doing your thing.
Woe - I like the space background...but I dont know how I feel about the letters.
Jes - Fix up that E and youll be straight. Loving the green/blue combo.
Claim - Keep working at it.
Jers - Ill as usual. If I ever come down to that part of tejas, Ill definately be on the look out for your shit.

KireOne
10-07-2008, 10:41 PM
--

WoeInfinite
10-07-2008, 10:47 PM
CLout, i like the devise the best.

hal.cyon
10-07-2008, 10:53 PM
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/1939/002ph5.jpg

Swimming laps around a bottle of Louis the Thirteenth
Jumpin' off of a mountain into a sea of Codeine
I'm at the top of the top, but... still I climb
And if I should ever fall, the ground would then turn to wine
Pop, pop, I feel like flying, then I feel like frying, then...
(I feel like dying)

I GOT CLOUT
10-07-2008, 10:58 PM
Endo - Yeah it's simple...but it's also horrible. Bars arent the same width, letters are all disporportional. I'm not trying to be a dick...but how don't you see that? Just cause it's a simple doesnt mean its easy. That Devise I did is about as simple as you can get. Rock one like that and you'll be set. That sounded really arrogant...not meant to be though.

Panda Jerk
10-07-2008, 10:59 PM
EASTER

bump

notice my perfect bars with a little of my steez

NO_1
10-07-2008, 11:02 PM
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/1939/002ph5.jpg


()

i like the style but i cant see the letters...
might just be my toy-ness tho
i suggest you only use arrows to balance a piece

KireOne
10-07-2008, 11:04 PM
Endo - Yeah it's simple...but it's also horrible. Bars arent the same width, letters are all misporportional. I'm not trying to be a dick...but how don't you see that? Just cause it's a simple doesnt mean its easy. That Devise I did is about as simple as you can get. Rock one like that and you'll be set. That sounded really arrogant...not meant to be though.

i feel you. its just ive been writing for awhile and i feel like i dont need to be working on my simples and shit like that. and yeah your right it is horrible since it look like 5 mins lol :p thanks for the crits

KireOne
10-07-2008, 11:18 PM
oops


hal i like the S at the end but it is kind of hard to distinguish the letterss

hal.cyon
10-07-2008, 11:25 PM
i like the style but i cant see the letters...
might just be my toy-ness tho
i suggest you only use arrows to balance a piece

i suggest you work on piecing instead of critting every picture someone on this site posts. that way you might be able to stop saying your toy-ness is getting in your way. no offense homie, but i don't really think you're in any position to be critting.

i know i aint all mad bates/cope2 (sarcasm) steezy, but jesus these critz are getting more retarded every time.

wafflecakee
10-07-2008, 11:26 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i53/wafflecakee/Photo169.jpg

NO_1
10-07-2008, 11:35 PM
i suggest you work on piecing instead of critting every picture someone on this site posts. that way you might be able to stop saying your toy-ness is getting in your way. no offense homie, but i don't really think you're in any position to be critting.

i know i aint all mad bates/cope2 (sarcasm) steezy, but jesus these critz are getting more retarded every time.

you are right, i didnt take offense by the way. i just want critz from peeps as well, so i figure if i give em ill probably receive em'

and im sorry if my words dont have worth to you. its fine. just ignore them.

I GOT CLOUT
10-07-2008, 11:43 PM
i feel you. its just ive been writing for awhile and i feel like i dont need to be working on my simples and shit like that. and yeah your right it is horrible since it look like 5 mins lol :p thanks for the crits

My devise took probably less time. So dont blame it on that..
And regardless how long you've been writing...if you cant do simples well, then you just cant. Im not saying prove it to me...but I havent seen it yet. Im only going on what ive seen in these past pages as well..

Panda Jerk
10-07-2008, 11:53 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i53/wafflecakee/Photo169.jpg

no me gusta

NO_1
10-08-2008, 12:36 AM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/123572throwoy.jpg

LeaksOne
10-08-2008, 02:05 AM
that looks kinda funky. keep practicin tho youll get better

MouthWash
10-08-2008, 03:17 AM
man i love that jellyfish canvas...

<J-one>
10-08-2008, 03:26 AM
i suggest you work on piecing instead of critting every picture someone on this site posts. that way you might be able to stop saying your toy-ness is getting in your way. no offense homie, but i don't really think you're in any position to be critting.

i know i aint all mad bates/cope2 (sarcasm) steezy, but jesus these critz are getting more retarded every time.

take it easy on the guy man, he's just doin what he can. give crits to get crits.
NO 1- pretty sure it says "times", but its definetly hella jumbled. also that D in the dank there is on a different angle than the rest of the letters.

hal.cyon- its got pretty good flow, but like i said its pretty jumbled man, try not to mash the letters together so hard. i think the M to E transition looks kinda funny. maybe thats just me...

clout- that jellyfish canvas is illin.


http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3230/2921490420_990513a58d.jpg?v=0
bumpin this for crits...

jupsick
10-08-2008, 03:48 AM
aimr dude awsome shit
i see you started bending your bars..thats awsome
umm 1 thing i didnt like is the right leg of the R
it kinda dosent flow with all the others isnt it? maybe its just me
http://xs132.xs.to/xs132/08412/07-10-08_2011896444.jpg
http://xs132.xs.to/xs132/08412/07-10-08_2012114607.jpg
any crits?
working on my M most inportent here XD

bump for crits

hal.cyon
10-08-2008, 06:24 AM
take it easy on the guy man, he's just doin what he can. give crits to get crits.
NO 1- pretty sure it says "times", but its definetly hella jumbled. also that D in the dank there is on a different angle than the rest of the letters.

hal.cyon- its got pretty good flow, but like i said its pretty jumbled man, try not to mash the letters together so hard. i think the M to E transition looks kinda funny. maybe thats just me...

clout- that jellyfish canvas is illin.


bumpin this for crits...

what are you his mom? he gave like 5 critz today without even posting a pic of his own. which is fine and all, but looking at his pics, he SHOULD be spending time drawing, just like i indicated. i didn't dog him out, and it appears i even wrote "no offense", to which he replied "none taken." obviously we got it, why didn't you?

the critz i've gotten the last 2-3 weeks, (if i even got any after the first post and obligatory post bump) have been less than even remotely helpful. i like the style but i can't read it? thats like saying you like dog food, but you have no idea what it tastes like. i always got the impression that if the shit posted before me was better than my own, then i don't really have much to critisize about it, because i can't do it yet.


maybe you should spend more time on YOUR shit instead of acting like captain save-a-ho on bs for some guy you probably have never even conversed with. or maybe you should just mind your own fucking business.

Mass Appeal
10-08-2008, 12:17 PM
maybe you should spend more time on YOUR shit instead of acting like captain save-a-ho on bs .

maybe you should spend more time doing SIMPLES instead of acting like captain dick head on bs.

hal.cyon
10-08-2008, 02:15 PM
obviously we got it, why didn't you?

work on the reading comprehension mass. works wonders.

Mass Appeal
10-08-2008, 02:45 PM
work on simple letters. works wonders.

hal.cyon
10-08-2008, 02:48 PM
work on simple letters. works wonders.

word up.

Notalent.inc
10-08-2008, 03:05 PM
Chose a word from a pervious battle just to work on

CRITS WANTED!!!! (and yes the extensions off the B are wack as fuck)

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g83/oli616/IMG_3867-1.jpg

<J-one>
10-08-2008, 03:22 PM
what are you his mom? he gave like 5 critz today without even posting a pic of his own. which is fine and all, but looking at his pics, he SHOULD be spending time drawing, just like i indicated. i didn't dog him out, and it appears i even wrote "no offense", to which he replied "none taken." obviously we got it, why didn't you?

the critz i've gotten the last 2-3 weeks, (if i even got any after the first post and obligatory post bump) have been less than even remotely helpful. i like the style but i can't read it? thats like saying you like dog food, but you have no idea what it tastes like. i always got the impression that if the shit posted before me was better than my own, then i don't really have much to critisize about it, because i can't do it yet.


maybe you should spend more time on YOUR shit instead of acting like captain save-a-ho on bs for some guy you probably have never even conversed with. or maybe you should just mind your own fucking business.

listen dickhole, i was giving you the crits i could, cause its jumbled as shit. if you can't take critisism like that, dont fuckin post your shit. simplify it.
so i didn't read your full asshole comment...back the fuck off, give some crits, do some simples, and don't be an asshole....


http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3230/2921490420_990513a58d.jpg?v=0

bump one more time for crits please

hal.cyon
10-08-2008, 03:36 PM
listen dickhole, i was giving you the crits i could, cause its jumbled as shit. if you can't take critisism like that, dont fuckin post your shit. simplify it.
so i didn't read your full asshole comment...back the fuck off, give some crits, do some simples, and don't be an asshole....



bump one more time for crits please

eeeyo fuckwad, earth to clownshoes, i wasn't even talking about you, those were the critz no_1 gave me. "i like the style but i cant see the letters..." thas the direct quote, homie.

i think you and mass are failing the same 6th grade reading comprehension quiz.

hal.cyon
10-08-2008, 03:38 PM
and suck my balls.

Mr yarbles
10-08-2008, 03:47 PM
Shut the fuck up queer.

peace89
10-08-2008, 03:52 PM
well ya i just started and these are the first four sketch
tell me what you think (they're attachments)

Samp1e
10-08-2008, 04:10 PM
notalent -- all your extensions are bad ;) my word of recommendation begins with an "S", has an "mp" in the middle, and a "lify" at the end

fUCK
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/7273/20081008ki7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

coloring is a cunt

-Wings-
10-08-2008, 04:30 PM
You should of put a cool effect on the 3d with a different color. Would of made it look alot better. Anywhoooo

Today I was just mad sketching. I know there messy, but
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00001.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00002.jpg
I like this one the best probably.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00004.jpg
This is the worst imo.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00005.jpg
Im rocking with another crew now (SBS - St.Johns Bomg Squad)
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00003.jpg

Comments ? :)

jupsick
10-08-2008, 04:37 PM
You should of put a cool effect on the 3d with a different color. Would of made it look alot better. Anywhoooo

Today I was just mad sketching. I know there messy, but
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00001.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00002.jpg
I like this one the best probably.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00004.jpg
This is the worst imo.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00005.jpg
Im rocking with another crew now (SBS - St.Johns Bomg Squad)
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00003.jpg

Comments ? :)
dude keep it simple
your extintions arent helping at all and their whack and ugly
just learn structure for now simple flow letters

-Wings-
10-08-2008, 04:53 PM
Meh, I like to doodle, and well this isnt my best work imo.

ilikekicks
10-08-2008, 04:56 PM
ran outta paper :(
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_2495.jpg?t=1223502850

-Wings-
10-08-2008, 06:03 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00006.jpg

Ill post up another in a second.

Edit - I love this S!
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00007.jpg

hazetheone
10-08-2008, 06:09 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i53/wafflecakee/Photo169.jpg
bump this and kicks
everyone else
shut the fuck up and draw something

NO_1
10-08-2008, 06:21 PM
wings i like the second it look clean and legible you should color that one
same- clean and legible. fill looks nice. only thing that i see wrong is the 3d color.

ill post pics ina bit

-Wings-
10-08-2008, 06:44 PM
Any colors you got in mind? Because when it comes to coloring I suck hard at it.

ESKiMO2
10-08-2008, 07:06 PM
http://fc80.deviantart.com/fs37/i/2008/280/f/6/Black_Market__by_Rhino_fish.jpg

fr3gna
10-08-2008, 07:28 PM
Eskimo- i love that style
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u105/dansartwork/skers.jpg

working on a new style. been doin simples out the ass and my hand is shakey crits please?

FIN one
10-08-2008, 07:35 PM
i like the handy more than the other stuff really. i know u dont want to hear this but i would recommend trying simples more and pay attention to structure

fr3gna
10-08-2008, 07:54 PM
so should i just forget about that style?

Baron
10-08-2008, 08:05 PM
http://fc80.deviantart.com/fs37/i/2008/280/f/6/Black_Market__by_Rhino_fish.jpg

*claps* You sir have come a long way in a short time. Rember that chaotic mess that used to be your style? Well, this looks a hell of a lot better than that shit. Keep it up.

NO_1
10-08-2008, 08:26 PM
this shit blows...
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/dankpeice1.jpg

b SQUARED 08
10-08-2008, 08:31 PM
Beautiful Eskimo. If you don't mind me asking, how did you get that splash effect on your M and T? Looks great.

ESKiMO2
10-08-2008, 08:38 PM
I Photoshopped it. You can get it free but it's hard to learn if you have no experience with it.

mosezone
10-08-2008, 08:54 PM
eskimo-the letters kinda get smaller towards the end, but i like it. maybe throw some 3d on there, it would look like 10x more dope
skers-it's not looking bad, just maybe make the edges softer and get a little flow going
dank-i'm not really feeling the letters, but it's super clean, props on that

sketch from class, crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/iesa.jpg

FIN one
10-08-2008, 09:03 PM
mose- that M is fresh imo

some olddddd stuff just 2 letters lol
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3841/n1038318434166758502cm0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/4859/n10383184341667598901ds9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

NO_1
10-08-2008, 09:11 PM
mose. the M is fucking ill but the e needs work
fin- the b is sick. id really like to see a piece from you

mmmburgers
10-08-2008, 09:37 PM
http://fc80.deviantart.com/fs37/i/2008/280/f/6/Black_Market__by_Rhino_fish.jpg

holy tits
this is dope man

hazetheone
10-08-2008, 09:50 PM
mose-that m is fucking hot but the a is too covered by it and is a little too simple for the rest of the piece

FIN one
10-08-2008, 10:08 PM
so this proves that i am way out of practice haha. i try to do sketches sometimes but i time them kinda. if that makes sense. this is a 10 min one, hate it really but i try to make mistakes work, thats what i did when i was first startin out so maybe it will work again haha.

this blows but o well
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/1484/n10383184341667984538yx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

NO_1
10-08-2008, 10:57 PM
i like it all cept the m. the middle thingy is too small

FIN one
10-09-2008, 12:57 AM
yeah i agree. when i do these sketches, they are done for good once time is up. idk, it helped me before to learn to make things work. you should have seen how many times that thing changed within 10 min. haha o well. i'll start workin on legit stuff soon.

jupsick
10-09-2008, 02:38 AM
eskimo awsome shit love it so much
wings -_- u cant read right? use bars and do simple block letters cuz u dont know your structure well at all

respERATION
10-09-2008, 04:44 AM
ESKIMO-i'm liking it,but maybe connect the disconected bars?,took me a couple seconds to work out what it said...
Made-killer M,but that D is hurting,it looks backwards and has a chunk missing....fix it up.
a slap for talking:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/07-10-08_1540.jpg
crits?

Infoe
10-09-2008, 06:07 AM
He writes MAOE

respERATION
10-09-2008, 07:04 AM
my bad.....well it looks like a D.....

kasone
10-09-2008, 07:23 AM
Some quick ish.
http://i38.tinypic.com/148emmh.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/34440m1.jpg