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Sanc_one
10-09-2008, 07:53 AM
I like blue one very much!!! Props

Mass Appeal
10-09-2008, 08:22 AM
Meh, I like to doodle, and well this isnt my best work imo.

Then dont bother posting it you waste.

respERATION
10-09-2008, 09:03 AM
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/07-10-08_1540.jpg
crits?

bump for crits

haha mass let them be a wasteman if they want, its their fault when they don't improve...

-Wings-
10-09-2008, 09:52 AM
Then dont bother posting it you waste.

No need to get pissy I only posted it because I thought that it was decent. Anyways comments on these two please, Im gone out with a fiew painting a piece downtown and I dont know which one to paint. (Comments aswell)

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08102008_00007.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/12.jpg

kroc_oner
10-09-2008, 10:06 AM
edit 1st but are u goood with paint ?

jupsick
10-09-2008, 10:23 AM
wings u just dont listen do you?
D O S I M P L E B L O C K L E T T E R S
u dont get it that u dont improve at all -_-
your work dosent have flow and you dont know how to bend bars yet...
do really simple block letters

Sanc_one
10-09-2008, 10:50 AM
wings u just dont listen do you?
D O S I M P L E B L O C K L E T T E R S
u dont get it that u dont improve at all -_-
your work dosent have flow and you dont know how to bend bars yet...
do really simple block letters

+1

Capo Izi
10-09-2008, 11:28 AM
wings u just dont listen do you?
D O S I M P L E B L O C K L E T T E R S
u dont get it that u dont improve at all -_-
your work dosent have flow and you dont know how to bend bars yet...
do really simple block letters

Exactly, you might think it does nothing now, and your bending of bars is god-like, but down the line you'll just be stuck, and everything you'll have will be wack as shit.

Simple, and bend from there, don't use any graff alphabets online to copy, just blocks, and move on once you have it so down you can throw out a straight in like under a minute.

-Wings-
10-09-2008, 01:30 PM
Yes Im good with paint, but I dont think I should go back to block letters. As said I on pg I passed that stage, I use bars I just earse them (OBV) and how do they not flow? Jesus...

JETPACK!!
10-09-2008, 01:39 PM
if you havent sketched out 500 simple block letters. you havent done them enough. consistency is a writers best friend

Capo Izi
10-09-2008, 01:40 PM
Are you using and online alphabet or taking letters form other guys, just wondering?

And it just looks a little wack, sorry, but back to blocks, tons of 'em, don't half ass, get really good at them, until you can hit out a straight real fast, paint and in black book, and then gradually and naturally they'll start to bend, and get extensions.

You can only pull of extensions when you don't have to think about them, they just occur when writing.....

-Wings-
10-09-2008, 01:47 PM
Ive done enough block letters, I know how to do them, I was just moving on from them like 2 weeks ago. I have gotten better, you want to see the shit I posted a couple months ago? And no those are purely my letters, its called being creative.

JETPACK!!
10-09-2008, 01:56 PM
i did them for 6 solid months. dont front like doing them for 3 weeks is long enough

kroc_oner
10-09-2008, 02:09 PM
its true and jet got ill from it so take his advice or keep doing wht u do as long as u prgress it doesnt matter

-Wings-
10-09-2008, 02:11 PM
People progress at different rates, and I didnt do them for just weeks. I wrote them for maybe 1month or so. I was told I could move on.. :D

Mr yarbles
10-09-2008, 02:16 PM
A month aint enough I've been doing simple styles for 4-5 months now get over it
And don't front to jet like you're good enough I saw that guy putting in straight letters well after he was good enough to move on and when he moved on to wilder styles it almost seemed natural and they looked good
I think you should do straight letters for a while bro
There's nothing wrong with them.

lawlcat
10-09-2008, 02:17 PM
I feel bad for wings, I've seen just about every sketch he's put up here and alot of people tell him his shit is good from what I've seen, then he starts getting bashed.

Meh...

JETPACK!!
10-09-2008, 02:20 PM
all the crazy heads still paint em on the streets, however long they've been writin. look at NYC.. hell, look at nekst.

personally, i do not care if you do straights for 4 months or not. but cats notice and respect someone who takes it step by step rather than tryin to be better than they are

jupsick
10-09-2008, 02:26 PM
wings u think that uve done simple letters inuf thats ur problem
me and jet and all the ppl here tellin u that u need simple letters cuz u dont know basic structure so good so its ur choise
listen to us and improve
or do it ur way and be stuck at ur stage till u undarstand -_-

Mr yarbles
10-09-2008, 02:31 PM
I feel bad for wings, I've seen just about every sketch he's put up here and alot of people tell him his shit is good from what I've seen, then he starts getting bashed.

Meh...

hah it happend to me too
I spent like a year developing a shit tag, and shit throws and everyone told they were good
So I developed that shit for a long ass time only to get told by the good writers it sucked so I started the fuck over hah
I think that's the problem with these forums
Not enough older heads come in here to crit and the toys don't really know so much good structure so they'll tell you shits good, but really its wack.

Mass Appeal
10-09-2008, 02:31 PM
That happens to EVERYONE on this site ^

It happend to me. Untill i got bitched slapped into quiting what i was doing and doing simples no end by Alive , Tricks and Nemz.
I suggest that people ONLY listen to the people who they think are good writers.


Aaaand it shouldnt take 3 / 4 people to have to tell someone to do Simples ... and it certainly shouldnt take people to have to go in depth ... like annotation in depth shit neither.

You ask for crits.
You either take them.
Or leave them.

Simple as that.

Where the fucks this Pesky Human ?

Isnt he a toy mod ?

Hahaha .. what is he moderating the Toy Exchange Thread.

Wont say no more.
Peace.

Capo Izi
10-09-2008, 02:37 PM
People progress at different rates, and I didnt do them for just weeks. I wrote them for maybe 1month or so. I was told I could move on.. :D


No dude no, don't say you progressed faster than Jet, dude his stuff became some ill because he worked on simples and straights for so damn long. Like he's probably done like 3 times as many straights as most normal writers, and now it shows. Like people said he was becoming ill and should move on, and yet he still kept doing straights, because in the end it pays off.

You have to be able to do them so much you can draw them dope looking real fast, and so many that you've completely forgot about the concept of bending and extentions, that must come naturally.

kasone
10-09-2008, 05:42 PM
Some quick ish.
http://i38.tinypic.com/148emmh.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/34440m1.jpg

Lolz bumpzor past all the shit talk, haha.
But jetpack is on point fo sho. Look at all his posts, he painted the same outline for months, and he got better and better. He hit mad spots, then he slowly changed the letters up, and now look where he's at. That's good progression..

Maste
10-09-2008, 05:53 PM
shit i remember when jetpack just shit talked and everyone wondered if he eevn sketched ahah and then he started doin the simps and then did them forrever and now hes got a pretty good style goin for him...liek everyone else is saying he is a prime example of how to progress...so do your wwack pieces if you need to but also work on your simps a lot and post those...not every single one just the ones that you really like and then afetr a long time if you actually stick with it and consistenyl do it youll get better a lot better

mekosbc
10-09-2008, 06:33 PM
yo kaz that yellow and red one pops pretty good i like the style... ima try a meko like that.... any ways i got bored so i drew on my girl.. she kept moving and stuff so it kinda looks shacky and stuff...
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY1401.jpg

seywhat
10-09-2008, 07:02 PM
imma throw my 2 cents out on the whole do simps thing, ive been writin for almost 2 years now and im still doin simps. they got a little flavor of my own, but definately still simps. i started by tryin all the shit your doin, then i started usin bars and havent looked back. so basically wings, post some shit up without erasing your bars so we can see how good they are, then i would say new to graff thread just because it shows proper techniques.

meko- not feelin the extensions comin off the m and o, but decent letters.
kas- nice shit, i'd like to see that blue and yellow one by itself
resp- work on your e, dont use so many extensions either, takes away fro your letters

kasone
10-09-2008, 07:04 PM
Cheers bruv, I'm gunna rock it on a canvas today, maybe different colours though.
Good piece, nice simple funk, colours go well... But.... Post noodz =]
Seywat, I'll sketch it up again today, same colours and all, haha

NEZ89
10-09-2008, 07:47 PM
exchange for my boy Omes
rays and infoe i'll have yours soon
http://i440.photobucket.com/albums/qq123/LewisFarikon/Blackbook/P1010015.jpg

NO_1
10-09-2008, 08:19 PM
nez i really like the fill on that

i made the e and o small on purpose
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/dope.jpg

-Wings-
10-09-2008, 08:21 PM
wings u think that uve done simple letters inuf thats ur problem
me and jet and all the ppl here tellin u that u need simple letters cuz u dont know basic structure so good so its ur choise
listen to us and improve
or do it ur way and be stuck at ur stage till u undarstand -_-

Ill go a bit simpler but Im sure as hell not going back to stage one. >:/

This was made before all of your ranting.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF10102008_00000.jpg

GIzUrD
10-09-2008, 08:33 PM
KAS- thats pretty good, you could have brought the bottom of your S the whole way to the left underlining your peice. maybe something for next time, if you havent already done it.

MEKO- stop posting kiddie porn :(

NO1- you letters are out of proportion :)

SKIN- what the hell happend to the middle of your I?

-Wings-
10-09-2008, 08:37 PM
I dont know :P. Haha I was debating on wiether of adding it or not.

NO_1
10-09-2008, 09:11 PM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/danksimz.jpg

super simple

NoCanControl
10-09-2008, 09:21 PM
nez i really like the fill on that

i made the e and o small on purpose
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/dope.jpg

sick sick sick.

NO_1
10-09-2008, 09:58 PM
simples man...

kasone
10-09-2008, 10:18 PM
Looks nothing like an O.
Redo it in pen, it's hard as shit to see..

counterfeit+amphetamines
10-09-2008, 10:22 PM
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"remo"
10-09-2008, 10:54 PM
GIVE ME SOME CRIT YO. LET ME HEAR WHAT YA THAINK

http://i476.photobucket.com/albums/rr127/remo-esok/pic100908_2.jpg

NO_1
10-09-2008, 11:16 PM
i love it man. the r and the m are fucking ill.
in my opinion

"remo"
10-09-2008, 11:17 PM
thanks bro.

~~>ANTIK<~~
10-09-2008, 11:25 PM
all the crazy heads still paint em on the streets, however long they've been writin. look at NYC.. hell, look at nekst.

personally, i do not care if you do straights for 4 months or not. but cats notice and respect someone who takes it step by step rather than tryin to be better than they are

yo jet how old are you?? im just wondering cause i see you do TONS of shit like every day it seems you have a new pic of something... i was just wondering if youre over 18 do you buy your paint? or do you just rack that much??

Maste
10-09-2008, 11:27 PM
IMO it does look prettyd ope but the little extensions thingers under the o and e are wierd... its just like an extra line in there ...color that shit it

FIN one
10-09-2008, 11:31 PM
remo- i like it i just think it lacks some flow keep it up tho

I GOT CLOUT
10-09-2008, 11:47 PM
That "Dope" canvas needs a lot of work. Letters arent that solid. The lines are all shaky. Take your time bro.

CakeWalk99
10-10-2008, 12:06 AM
Remo: I like it!

I have been working on a quick throw. http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/002.jpg

NO_1
10-10-2008, 12:08 AM
ok. its not a canvas its my b-book. anyways heres some shit ive been f-n with
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/dankbentbars.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
10-10-2008, 12:16 AM
Elm, thats not really a throw...but whats happening to you man? Your shits still way off. I tried to help you a couple months ago...did you just brush all that advice off?

Try filling a full page with your name. Make your lines one quick go about. Make your bars proportional. I hate being a dick but damn man, you havent progressed a bit since you came on this site. I dont know how else to help you. I even drew you a simp to go off of way back when...

And Dank...the red simp you did a page back is the best ive seen from you. Keep rocking that shit.

LeaksOne
10-10-2008, 12:17 AM
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff024.jpg
beginning of a politial cartoon kinda piece thing whatever you wana call it. crits if youd like. the moon says will shadow for free. in the final piece the aliens are guna say someone beat us to it an the earth is guna be on fire an somewhere im guna put the earth is on fiya then lil bush is guna be sayin we dont need a solution let the muthafucka burn.

kasone
10-10-2008, 12:41 AM
http://i35.tinypic.com/15wmqdz.jpg
New book cover, meant to be messy but it looks better in person, just a book for quick destruction of pages! Haha.

jupsick
10-10-2008, 02:42 AM
I dont know :P. Haha I was debating on wiether of adding it or not.
you see what im saying ur just adding shit for no good reason
im tellin you go to stage one u can never get inuf simps smps are the style for all
all kings writers toys everyones doin them so why dont you?

respERATION
10-10-2008, 03:37 AM
GIVE ME SOME CRIT YO. LET ME HEAR WHAT YA THAINK

http://i476.photobucket.com/albums/rr127/remo-esok/pic100908_2.jpg

thats notes E

xEpiCx
10-10-2008, 07:26 AM
ok. its not a canvas its my b-book. anyways heres some shit ive been f-n with
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/dankbentbars.jpg


this is pretty tight
i like how you use dank
tight word

whats your graff name?

xEpiCx
10-10-2008, 07:28 AM
o ic your tag now
dank name lol

Zire
10-10-2008, 07:46 AM
theres too many people who start graff and think its so easy and get ahead of themselves. Not enough truley dedicated writers in my opinion.

mith
10-10-2008, 09:17 AM
hers what i gt...its unfinished as i cant find my fukkin markers at the mo... but any crits wud b appreciated guys....peace

FIN one
10-10-2008, 09:17 AM
leaks, i hope u give some kind of credit to Lil' Bush on that carak. but whatevs
no-1- like it but the red simples a page back were fly
elm- ummm no lol listen to what clout said. maybe u arent tryin hard enough to get good. i suggest maybe a letter study where you do each letter of the alphabet separate, but do it in steps. theres a thread you should have seen called NEW TO GRAFF. its stickied look at the example by sky5 do that for every letter in the alphabet

Mass Appeal
10-10-2008, 09:18 AM
REMO biting NOTE

shhhhhhhhhhhhh

mith
10-10-2008, 09:18 AM
by the way...i know the H on the sketch is hurttt lol

respERATION
10-10-2008, 09:24 AM
yeah.....biters make me fucking angry,people work years to get a good style...and then people just come and take it.
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/10-10-08_1441.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/10-10-08_1442.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/10-10-08_1503.jpg

FIN one
10-10-2008, 09:24 AM
everythings hurtin mith, not bein a dick but u need to go back to simples, i know it sucks and gets boring but it pays off man.

mith
10-10-2008, 09:26 AM
cheers man i still rock simples but its sooo fuckin borin...iv justarted doin wateva style takes me in the moment... anamorphiks fuckin impossible at the mo tho :(

FIN one
10-10-2008, 09:29 AM
resp, i like the letters, but not the way they are layed out.

respERATION
10-10-2008, 09:37 AM
i know...i was just trying to make the letters on their own...cause i'm trying to progress it

FIN one
10-10-2008, 09:40 AM
well in that case, i like it haha i thought maybe u were like tryin a new way to put the letters together. but keep it up!

respERATION
10-10-2008, 09:46 AM
i willl.....i was gonna use it to mess about with in photoshop....i figure i've gotta learn how to use it eventually

Drakula
10-10-2008, 10:02 AM
Some quick ish.

http://i34.tinypic.com/34440m1.jpg

To be honest I don't think the top one is toy at all. Everything else needs work though.

7nationarmy
10-10-2008, 10:25 AM
thats notes E

thats notes stile :(

7nationarmy
10-10-2008, 10:26 AM
thats notes E

thats notes style :(
kas im likin the shit ontop of me son..i dont like the a on the throw though

Mass Appeal
10-10-2008, 10:31 AM
cheers man i still rock simples but its sooo fuckin borin


Stop moaning .. all writers do simples .. well the ones who wanna progress.
Either get on with it or dont :D

nero112
10-10-2008, 10:45 AM
GIVE ME SOME CRIT YO. LET ME HEAR WHAT YA THAINK

http://i476.photobucket.com/albums/rr127/remo-esok/pic100908_2.jpg

its notes 'e' notes 'o' and his 'n' he's just bent it to look like his own 'r'

lawlcat
10-10-2008, 12:10 PM
I knew I wasn't the only one smelling bite after seeing that.

WoeInfinite
10-10-2008, 12:15 PM
meko, that looks tight. i havent seen you on here in a while..

No1 thats dope, but it looks weird with the letters not the same size..but, idk anything about graff... But the DANK it tight.

Nez thats tight, is that that guy from that new Wii game?

and Skin, thats lookin good, but color it dude, and the K is weird cuz you tried to like squeeze it in but not be behind the S

GIzUrD
10-10-2008, 12:55 PM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/1482/tanteethom1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/1231/royalredoq4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6238/machineheadtp7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
wow man im really fudged uppers
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/913/2pieceic1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

simple zen
10-10-2008, 01:02 PM
imma throw my 2 cents out on the whole do simps thing, ive been writin for almost 2 years now and im still doin simps. they got a little flavor of my own, but definately still simps. i started by tryin all the shit your doin, then i started usin bars and havent looked back. so basically wings, post some shit up without erasing your bars so we can see how good they are, then i would say new to graff thread just because it shows proper techniques.

meko- not feelin the extensions comin off the m and o, but decent letters.
kas- nice shit, i'd like to see that blue and yellow one by itself
resp- work on your e, dont use so many extensions either, takes away fro your letters

why are you even mentioning wings and the new to graff thread in the same post? his shit is pretty ill man. you're telling me you wouldn't give him props if you saw that on the street?

peace89
10-10-2008, 02:19 PM
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Mass Appeal
10-10-2008, 02:32 PM
why are you even mentioning wings and the new to graff thread in the same post? his shit is pretty ill man. you're telling me you wouldn't give him props if you saw that on the street?

Prime example of " What not to listen too "

Wings is not " ill "
And i for one . would certainly not give him props.

His stuff is extension based and not letter based.
Hes focusing on extensions and doo dads in expense for what Graffiti is about.

L E T T E R S

FIN one
10-10-2008, 03:28 PM
Peace-simples man, go to the new to graff thread.

idk y ppl cant just figure that out lol

peace89
10-10-2008, 03:38 PM
like do you mean block letter and bubble?

lawlcat
10-10-2008, 03:51 PM
he means new to graff thread.

and there, your answers lay.

CakeWalk99
10-10-2008, 03:57 PM
This is the latest. Trying to keep it simple.........I spent alot of time on these believe it or not. Having alot of trouble with the space between the L and the M......alot of dead space.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/PRUCKA.jpg

mexico
10-10-2008, 04:01 PM
^man I have same fuckin' problem with L's

I think if you finish that middle one and even out all the bars you might have something cool there.

make all your bar more even, I don't want to nitpick but those would look good if they were more consistent.

HAIRCUT
10-10-2008, 04:55 PM
FLYT SSD
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/IMG_0572.jpg?t=1223675288

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/FLYTSTERTHROWS.jpg?t=1223675384

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/JUICED.jpg?t=1223675426

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/seeyousoonFLYT.jpg?t=1223675501


http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/FLYTSTRAIGHTLETTER.jpg?t=1223675570

FLEAS SSD
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/FLEASER.jpg?t=1223675624

SAVE SSD
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/saverblackbooktangreen.jpg?t=1223675538

HAIRCUT
10-10-2008, 04:56 PM
id like to get crits on any of those ^
mainly the grey and red straight letter at the top of the post.

good looks all.

Mass Appeal
10-10-2008, 05:02 PM
Nice
Check my dope new style..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/l_b784283b1036024391b02e39b411b0-1.jpg

Hahaha

Crits obviously...

HAIRCUT
10-10-2008, 05:39 PM
i dont get why youre posting in here.

Capo Izi
10-10-2008, 05:45 PM
He's showing his stuff, to impress us toys and make us look like shit....duh....


(haha, really though Mass that shit is ill)

LeaksOne
10-10-2008, 05:52 PM
leaks, i hope u give some kind of credit to Lil' Bush on that carak. but whatevs
no-1- like it but the red simples a page back were fly
elm- ummm no lol listen to what clout said. maybe u arent tryin hard enough to get good. i suggest maybe a letter study where you do each letter of the alphabet separate, but do it in steps. theres a thread you should have seen called NEW TO GRAFF. its stickied look at the example by sky5 do that for every letter in the alphabet
how should i go about doin that? put a copyright sign on him somewhere? maybe his forehead so you can see an ill put in big letter props to lil bush

COLOR192
10-10-2008, 05:59 PM
ELM- hate u're name... xD but nice simps... if ya work on the 2nd, it can be smthin nice

FLYT - most of them are nice. not diggin the colour schemes on the FLEAS nor the last FLYT

Mass - (no coments here. :P)

sum shit i have hanging around
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/5445/img1441fl4.th.jpg (http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1441fl4.jpg)
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6060/img1440zz8.th.jpg (http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1440zz8.jpg)
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/9284/img1455ju3.th.jpg (http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1455ju3.jpg)
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6479/img1466ak7.th.jpg (http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1466ak7.jpg)
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/2860/img1471pa8.th.jpg (http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1471pa8.jpg)

gonna bomb tomorrow, wich do u think it's the best? keep in mind that I havent got much can control.
oh, and crit

FIN one
10-10-2008, 06:02 PM
or just say its Lil' Bush when u post it, that would suffice.

Mass Appeal
10-10-2008, 06:02 PM
NO JUST NO
This is what pisses me off.

THAT SKETCH IS NOT DOPE
I DID THAT SKETCH IN FEBUARY 2007.

IT IS SHIT.
WHACK.
AWFUL.

xEpiCx
10-10-2008, 06:04 PM
haha way to over react

FIN one
10-10-2008, 06:04 PM
mass, the hand with the can is sick imo

GIzUrD
10-10-2008, 06:20 PM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/1482/tanteethom1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/1231/royalredoq4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6238/machineheadtp7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
wow man im really fudged uppers
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/913/2pieceic1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bumper go carts, cuz i hit towards the bottom of the page n no crits... and i fucking need 'em.

FLYT- didnt you post that before
ELM- make the L lower case- l. or something idk, pick a new name.
ARYSE- if you dont have good can control do simple letters. your sketches are pretty regular.
AHER- what does it say AAKAA? lolz your such a jokester/

Edward"Sezer"Hands
10-10-2008, 06:21 PM
NO JUST NO
This is what pisses me off.

THAT SKETCH IS NOT DOPE
I DID THAT SKETCH IN FEBUARY 2007.

IT IS SHIT.
WHACK.
AWFUL.
shut up.;)
go do something with yourself.

kroc_oner
10-10-2008, 06:36 PM
no offense mas but tht insnt good your old stlyes way better

Mass Appeal
10-10-2008, 06:41 PM
And people carnt read.

http://www.intporn.com/forums/showthread.php?t=2184

Check that out .. great forum on how to draw simples.

LeaksOne
10-10-2008, 06:48 PM
or just say its Lil' Bush when u post it, that would suffice.

will do

librelikespie
10-10-2008, 07:35 PM
black book dump plus snow ideation shit
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03037.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03038.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03039.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03040.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03041.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03042.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03043.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03044.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03046.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03045.jpg

comments???

nastonE
10-10-2008, 07:57 PM
libre - i really dig those characters and that last simple, maybe try to make those freestyles more legible.. stay up


Here's just some letter structure i've been working on.
which ones are working for me?
http://i33.tinypic.com/2nqqr9h.jpg

JETPACK!!
10-10-2008, 08:04 PM
dope work from the two posts above me. monster, those characters are hella dope. good shit

havent posted a sketch in a minute.. havent finished one in even longer

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/1268/rasek55il2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Capo Izi
10-10-2008, 08:34 PM
Ill jet, ill.....

kasone
10-10-2008, 08:40 PM
Rasek got that steez on lock, I can't wait to watch your progress further!
Monster that's some ill shit! Fresh characters and your letters have loads of style!
http://i36.tinypic.com/3539z07.jpg
1 second shiz..

Capo Izi
10-10-2008, 08:47 PM
The extension on the K is really akward, especially the bottom part of it, the hook thing...drop it, otherwise not bad.

lawlcat
10-10-2008, 08:48 PM
And people carnt read.

http://www.intporn.com/forums/showthread.php?t=2184

Check that out .. great forum on how to draw simples.
i know there were other people who caught it.....


:o

-Wings-
10-10-2008, 09:03 PM
dope work from the two posts above me. monster, those characters are hella dope. good shit

havent posted a sketch in a minute.. havent finished one in even longer

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/1268/rasek55il2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Looks good, on the bottom one all I can say is give that E some space and make it a tiny bit bigger.

Baron
10-10-2008, 09:24 PM
Why do you always make your Es smaller than the rest of your letters? The poportion throws me off. Your style is great, keep it up.

JETPACK!!
10-10-2008, 09:28 PM
its the same size of my A. i like it. symmetry. you dont see many cats doin it.

kasone
10-10-2008, 09:38 PM
I was about to say that, the A and E are the same size. So it looks like;
RaSeK
Looks fresh imo, he can pull it off.

Sadistic.Child
10-10-2008, 09:44 PM
i call him RawSekz
fresh man, you paint better then you sketch hahaha

FIN one
10-10-2008, 09:45 PM
i like it, maybe bring the e down a tad to make it line up with the a better? idk looks good tho

(SoS) Flu
10-10-2008, 09:51 PM
yeah im def gonna go with sadi your sketching is really good but your cleanliness in your paintin is rawsecks :P

NEZ89
10-10-2008, 09:58 PM
finally colored it
http://i440.photobucket.com/albums/qq123/LewisFarikon/Blackbook/P1010018.jpg

(SoS) Flu
10-10-2008, 10:09 PM
im not really fealing the bubbles at all or atleast a different color and throw a force field. another thing is the not feelin the extensions on the bottom of the P or a .... im just kinda not feelin the letters all like that seems kinda generic just work on it you'll get it down.

NEZ89
10-10-2008, 10:12 PM
i was goin for an oldskool look for the letters
but thanx

(SoS) Flu
10-10-2008, 10:42 PM
well then just fiix the bottoms of the A and P.


some new shit im workin on like the U didnt notice how bad the arrows looked til after i was done inking tho. :(

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb285/FREMO_IS_THE_SHIT_FOR_U/FLU.jpg

sank.
10-11-2008, 12:02 AM
fresh shit on this page.

good looks on the exchange monster. i feel bad cause i didn't color mine :(

and rasek you've progressed so fucking fast. i think those letters would look super fresh with a couple bits or some drips here and there. but keep doing your thang man.

i need to motivate myself somehow to go out and paint. guess i smoke to much weed, makes me really lazy :p

well i'm a slave to it, so time for some bong rips and some sketching.

FIN one
10-11-2008, 12:07 AM
for a friendly battle with some new guy sage, he picked the word and everything (scent) i havent seent his stuff but this is a quick sketch by me that i think im gonna use. crits? i know its not amazing and some things are off but o well
Edit:
sorry for sucks cell pic
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/4866/scentbk3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

(SoS) Flu
10-11-2008, 12:19 AM
i really dont like it. has no consistent flow.
T is way to fat.
idk what to really say i just dont like it...
BUMP
http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb285/FREMO_IS_THE_SHIT_FOR_U/FLU.jpg

FIN one
10-11-2008, 12:23 AM
i actually thought it wasnt bad, but owell it was a 15 min sketch, im not gonna go all out for a battle with a guy who has been writing for like a few weeks. doesnt make sense eh? idk when i get time, i'll actually work on something if that makes sense
EDIT: i hate Ts lol one of my worst letters i admit i suck at them, theres an arrow comin off the E which makes the T look wierd, i fixed it tho, looks a bit better, but it kinda looks like a j now haha. Fukc Ts

(SoS) Flu
10-11-2008, 12:32 AM
ummm i guess im not saying its bad just not feelin it man.. i wasnt tryna hate my bad if it came out like that... but i realized something main thing that throws it off is how the bottom of the letters are fat when it goes to connect to the top the S is super skinny the 3 is fat then the T is super fat it would be actually look nice if you fix that mistake i think..

Sadistic.Child
10-11-2008, 12:43 AM
flu, your trying to hard, you needa keep it simple

mekosbc
10-11-2008, 12:46 AM
haha wow your fucking hilarious hardy har har.... f*** you buddy shes 17 and gee what a shocker so am i.. so f*** you have a very wonderful day..
KAS- thats pretty good, you could have brought the bottom of your S the whole way to the left underlining your peice. maybe something for next time, if you havent already done it.

MEKO- stop posting kiddie porn :(

NO1- you letters are out of proportion :)

SKIN- what the hell happend to the middle of your I?

C3ZR ONE
10-11-2008, 02:04 AM
Judging from the last few pages, Toy forum is improving nicely. Some quality shit.

Rasek- I always loved your spots and hated your style, but you're adding some flow to your letters now and it's really taking it up a notch. Keep at it.

smartjuice87
10-11-2008, 02:33 AM
sometimes u cant git it going eh?

kasone
10-11-2008, 02:56 AM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/1482/tanteethom1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/1231/royalredoq4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6238/machineheadtp7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
wow man im really fudged uppers
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/913/2pieceic1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I dig this steez man, liking the last couple more. Would you be down for an exchannnnge?
I write Kas haha.

respERATION
10-11-2008, 05:41 AM
Giz-love your stuff man....always have...
Flu-your letters are okay but they have no real flow,like some of them are too small and stuff
new flicks as soon as my phone stops being alittle bitch

Zire
10-11-2008, 06:55 AM
I thinks flu's is niiiiice.....

respERATION
10-11-2008, 07:19 AM
it is nice,but the letters are all different shapes and sizes,so it takes from the flow

quick pen sketch for the letters for one of my friends birthday canvas
i like it :
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/11-10-08_0040.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/11-10-08_0102.jpg

(SoS) Flu
10-11-2008, 08:45 AM
WoW resp that shit is lovely :D
but hey thanks im gonna sketch some shit out today and post it some time later i got work tho so ill tryand work around it but i appreciate the help... :D

HAIRCUT
10-11-2008, 11:24 AM
FLYT- didnt you post that before
/

actually i posted 2 of those flicks before. my bad.

FIN one
10-11-2008, 12:17 PM
crappy cell phone pic. start of another "scent" sketch for a battle with sage. crits? maybe a little advice on where its goin before i get ahead of myself?
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/696/n10383184341689799901af5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

GIzUrD
10-11-2008, 12:44 PM
FIN- see where the S lines up with the top of the C, you could put the top of the C above that to make them the same size. im not sure how you had it planned out in your head, maybe it would work, maybe it wont.

numberonestunna
10-11-2008, 12:54 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/IMG.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/thataa.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/drageon.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/dontstop.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/rockblock.jpg

cife
10-11-2008, 01:18 PM
just started writing,

looking to improve my style,
crit please

http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/8161/ce3xr2.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/1588/ce1gx1.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/4383/ce2jw1.png (http://imageshack.us)

Sadistic.Child
10-11-2008, 01:37 PM
your gunna want to read the "new 2 graff" thread
ONLY way you will get better

STICKERS
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3123/2916541282_539c5a9cae.jpg?v=0
Dont crit that ^. i threw it out cause its not the throw i use and doesnt flow

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3254/2915695439_6fd39df479.jpg?v=0
quick slap i threw together, 8 stickers long, 3 photo stitch

Riss
10-11-2008, 02:29 PM
its notes 'e' notes 'o' and his 'n' he's just bent it to look like his own 'r'

lol I don't see that N?

And remo.. Shame on you :) Quit graffiti

-Wings-
10-11-2008, 02:29 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF11102008_00001.jpg

Gonna go smoke a joint now xD!
Comments aswell..

tempest
10-11-2008, 02:38 PM
ur so cool! u smoke dope! i wanna b just like u!
seriously:
i luv ur first s. the one on the bottom is kind of weak tho. im also not sure if it says skid or skip. ur last letter needs 2 b reworked

Mass Appeal
10-11-2008, 02:40 PM
Wings .. your letters are whack .. do simples.

-Wings-
10-11-2008, 02:41 PM
It says skin, and alot of people smoke weed =D.
And which S are you talking about? The one on the piece of the SBS? Also I messed up on the N Sooooooooo bad I forgot it mention.

CakeWalk99
10-11-2008, 02:43 PM
PYRE: I like everything about those. Simples are the way to go, and they usually look cool. Great style and color.

klic
10-11-2008, 02:48 PM
havnt posted in a while so this is all just stuff from the last month, mostly just stuff from school, crits would be nice..

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_010.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_009.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_008.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_007.jpg
for a handy battle ^^
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_006.jpg
different style^^
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_005.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_004.jpg
basic letters^^
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_003.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_002.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_001.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf.jpg
and another alphabet

skin - looking good, dont really like your S though
bash - looks nice except i think it would look better if the letters wernt attached
cife - new to graff thread
pyre - those first block letters look super clean
fin - lose the attachments

crits please

-Wings-
10-11-2008, 03:07 PM
Looks good for the most part, just loose those random parts on the end of each letter :P.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/sae.jpg

klic
10-11-2008, 03:17 PM
what one arre you talking about?

-Wings-
10-11-2008, 03:21 PM
Almost all of them, make them more simple. (Your abc's L is one example)

SelfTyrant
10-11-2008, 03:25 PM
havent been at this long but wouldnt mind some crits.
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e16/niicoleshellby/3.jpg

hazetheone
10-11-2008, 03:34 PM
come on man
SIMPLES!
copy the keyboard letters
dont add anything or color it yet
just do it a bunch of times till you can bust a dope one out in like 1 minute

Sadistic.Child
10-11-2008, 03:44 PM
your gunna want to read the "new 2 graff" thread
ONLY way you will get better

STICKERS
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3123/2916541282_539c5a9cae.jpg?v=0
Dont crit that ^. i threw it out cause its not the throw i use and doesnt flow

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3254/2915695439_6fd39df479.jpg?v=0
quick slap i threw together, 8 stickers long, 3 photo stitch

bump? :cool:

caer... your still rockin KFC? lol
thought every body just stopped reppin it

SelfTyrant
10-11-2008, 03:44 PM
yea, simples jus get boring, i mean that only took me like 4,5 mins but i no what you mean man. alright well ill work the simples again.

-Wings-
10-11-2008, 03:55 PM
I hate people who say that.

SelfTyrant
10-11-2008, 04:01 PM
didnt mean to push a button.

HAIRCUT
10-11-2008, 04:12 PM
youre wack.

SelfTyrant
10-11-2008, 04:14 PM
youre wack.

gee thanks.

jupsick
10-11-2008, 04:47 PM
wings keep doing what u do and ull get to a place called nowhare -_-
u get it that u dont proggress cuz ur structure is BAD
DO PLAIN SIMPLE BLOCK LETTERS!!

smooth_nuts
10-11-2008, 05:05 PM
bash-dope,send me some sticks khed!
wings,shelf,klic-simples,simples,simples!
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3253/2931968071_8bdc5d2a56.jpg
first sketch in ageeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees,as you can see i fell off pretty hard :/

GIzUrD
10-11-2008, 05:16 PM
SMOOTH- it seems you did fall pretty hard... did you break your hand??? :D

smooth_nuts
10-11-2008, 05:24 PM
bahahah!!!
funny,funny, mr.gizurd
....ahhh i needed that haha

kasone
10-11-2008, 05:41 PM
Looks good for the most part, just loose those random parts on the end of each letter :P.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/sae.jpg

The back leg of the N should overlap the front one. The front shouldn't be over the back..
And keep the letters the same width.

Hookr
10-11-2008, 05:49 PM
u may have something with that S keep working homie

kasone
10-11-2008, 06:07 PM
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/4053/gizfo9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Horrid exchange with the gizuuuuurrrd

klic
10-11-2008, 06:14 PM
havnt posted in a while so this is all just stuff from the last month, mostly just stuff from school, crits would be nice..

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_010.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_009.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_008.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_007.jpg
for a handy battle ^^
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_006.jpg
different style^^
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_005.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_004.jpg
basic letters^^
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_003.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_002.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_001.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf.jpg
and another alphabet

skin - looking good, dont really like your S though
bash - looks nice except i think it would look better if the letters wernt attached
cife - new to graff thread
pyre - those first block letters look super clean
fin - lose the attachments

crits please

bump

FIN one
10-11-2008, 06:20 PM
bump- only got one good crit, thanks gizurd i fixed it and it looks decent

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/696/n10383184341689799901af5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Drakula
10-11-2008, 06:31 PM
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq35/pedobear_01/368c1350.png

10 minute freestyle simple. Nice R kasone.

nastonE
10-11-2008, 09:22 PM
Dra thats some good width consistancy.. stay up.

here's an update of my letter progression
http://i37.tinypic.com/2hmpw2a.jpg


I need crits in order to get better so help me out

NoCanControl
10-11-2008, 10:39 PM
give crits to get them!!!!!!!!!1

Hookr
10-12-2008, 12:03 AM
some old shit
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/P1000297.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/P1000296.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/get-attachmentaspx-90.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/get-attachmentaspx-91.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/get-attachmentaspx-94.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/get-attachmentaspx-84.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/get-attachmentaspx-86.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/2321871984_bf25148c97_m.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/2321872346_cae5878428_m.jpg

respERATION
10-12-2008, 04:34 AM
it is nice,but the letters are all different shapes and sizes,so it takes from the flow

quick pen sketch for the letters for one of my friends birthday canvas
i like it :
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/11-10-08_0040.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/11-10-08_0102.jpg

bump teh bump
hookr-i like the second one best.
nastone-wtf is all that? keep it simple.
kasone-i'm made digging that.....exchange me too?

IlikePie
10-12-2008, 04:40 AM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1223804224.jpg

Something quick and easy.

Mass Appeal
10-12-2008, 05:53 AM
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq35/pedobear_01/368c1350.png



What EVERYONE on this page should be doing except Libre and Kasone.

kasone
10-12-2008, 06:02 AM
Yo resp I'll give it a go, should have it by tomorrow night or something. Raby love the simple funk, dope structure.

IlikePie
10-12-2008, 06:14 AM
Shut up Mass, it took you forever to figure out what you were doing.


(It's late, and I'm grumpy)

jupsick
10-12-2008, 09:37 AM
Shut up Mass, it took you forever to figure out what you were doing.


(It's late, and I'm grumpy)

id say better late then never dont you think so? 0/0
raby
DUDE i love your shit so clean flow good and yet so simple
just awsome
i admire you XD

smooth_nuts
10-12-2008, 09:47 AM
dude get off his nuts before the friction causes a wild pube fire....damn

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3155/2934699804_03731094cb.jpg
atleaste i still got muh throw ups!

C-SONE
10-12-2008, 09:58 AM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/7387/rararacv5.jpg
bored

Mr yarbles
10-12-2008, 10:55 AM
I'm all jittery and shit on coffee

Sone I'm just not feeling it sorry :/

dope it looks hella nice
But that simp you posted a bit back just looks off

rabey same to you bro looks really good

Pie I like your iother stuff this one's just dosn't look so great.

resp your steez is sick

rein you got good stuff but some of them need some better structure It looks like you got it but try laying out your bars more

shpel lose some of those bublle extensions or whatever they are it makes it look wierd like it's got tumors
YOur pen sketches are good though just move everything in more

fin can't read it :/

skin your not listening to use lay your shit out with bars and simples you're going no where fast.

Hookr
10-12-2008, 11:15 AM
word thanks homie im thinking of changing my name ill post my sketches

FIN one
10-12-2008, 11:39 AM
yarbles, its an S and a C all i had time to do sofar, i fixed the height thing tho and added an E. its for a "scent" battle with some guy here

Zire
10-12-2008, 12:52 PM
[quote=smooth_nuts;1228356]dude get off his nuts before the friction causes a wild pube fire....damn quote]


Siggged!! :D

C-SONE
10-12-2008, 12:57 PM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/7387/rararacv5.jpg
bored
Bump to next page. people on last page work on ya simple letter yo!

smooth_nuts
10-12-2008, 12:58 PM
you should sig what he saaaaaaaaaaaaaid too
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3155/2934699804_03731094cb.jpg
bump

nastonE
10-12-2008, 02:32 PM
sone - good flow with the piece, but your letter structure is off, try and make the width off all the bars the same
pie - can't even read it
hook - dope straight letters you have there




http://i37.tinypic.com/2hmpw2a.jpg

bump for not getting a single crit

Scream Out
10-12-2008, 02:39 PM
nastone - those are absolutely horrible, go back to simple letters with no add-ons, don't force progression just keep practicing

respERATION
10-12-2008, 02:42 PM
exchange with kason:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/12-10-08_1546.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/12-10-08_1806.jpg

peace89
10-12-2008, 02:58 PM
well i tried to do a simple one
tell me what i did wrong so i can improve

nastonE
10-12-2008, 03:03 PM
nastone - those are absolutely horrible, go back to simple letters with no add-ons, don't force progression just keep practicing

Is it really THAT bad? Like, they're not colored in or anything, all i did was make bars and added some 3-D. what are you judging the "horribleness" on? is it just the add-ons or what?

jupsick
10-12-2008, 03:08 PM
Is it really THAT bad? Like, they're not colored in or anything, all i did was make bars and added some 3-D. what are you judging the "horribleness" on? is it just the add-ons or what?

its your structure and add ons u added
your structure is weak do some block letters or at least simples without add ons
nuts awsome throw i like it

NO_1
10-12-2008, 08:21 PM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/dankpeicegrey.jpg
peace-go simples

I Hold The Throne
10-12-2008, 08:26 PM
Some ish i did the other day
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/Image034.jpghttp://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/Image036.jpg

calculating infinity
10-12-2008, 08:51 PM
no 1: that sucks go more simple
i hold the throne your 3d is a little bit off
resp: whats up with those arrows? and that S needs to match your other letters it doesnt seem big enough
nastone: too many extensions and shit

something i hate:
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/4802/1012082126co6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-Wings-
10-12-2008, 08:56 PM
It shouldnt be done all in pen, but it looks okay ^^^^^^^.

I just drew this S, the paper is to small so I didnt finish it, but if its good then I shall use this on my next piece (on a bigger page). Also the fill I was working on, its not colored due to nooo colors. Buuuut the dark part would be orange and the lighter part would be a red or something :/:P.. So comments?

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF12102008_00000.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
10-12-2008, 09:44 PM
God damnit wings...STOP. Draw simples. For the very least to let us know you even know what they are...Plus your handie needs a huge overhaul.

Bump Rasek, Rabe, Dope, Monster, Gizurd.
Just trolled through the last 7 pages cause yall post too damn much, and those names are the only ones that stuck out to me. Sorry if I forgot any dopeness.

smooth_nuts
10-12-2008, 09:49 PM
that dank would be dope if he made the k look less like a shitty x and more like a k...and work on his handstyle
edit*wings...i see a bunch of bars connected to make one bigge skwiggle...
SIMPLES WHORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
edit again*
jares is dpe,just need to work on the r

I GOT CLOUT
10-12-2008, 09:53 PM
Well, I think "Dank" needs to take his own advice. I dont think those letters are dope at all...

-Wings-
10-12-2008, 09:55 PM
bombing science and pure graff give two different opinions seriously... Ill do some simples, but jesus im not going back to make block letters.. >:/

I Hold The Throne
10-12-2008, 09:58 PM
Hey where did i mess up at?

smooth_nuts
10-12-2008, 10:01 PM
pure graffiti sucks and most of the kids on there wouldnt know their "ass from a hole in the ground".....nuff said about pg as for you,do simples...alot.

-Wings-
10-12-2008, 10:03 PM
Whatever man, but still. I dont thinks it going to do much.

I GOT CLOUT
10-12-2008, 10:06 PM
Thats all you say wings...stop doubting and just draw...

Made for a friend. Got 60 bucks for em :) Hustlinnn

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/l_a3155ffe53b6439abbfe32f5c5cd3691.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/l_28ca2140479a40dd884097deaa7c36ac.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/l_d9f26ef2215c43fbbb4536151496f4dc.jpg

And a shitty cell phone flick of mother fuckin D the E the L, Learn how to spelllllllllll.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16216.jpg

Epoc
10-12-2008, 10:09 PM
Hey where did i mess up at?

Your name. But out of forum dickhole mode, just practice, letter structure etc.

Clout- Id prbly rock those. especially in modern 80's color scheme. Id work on that karak a bit and make it a bit more 3 dimensional. I missed del here :(

HRbN
10-12-2008, 10:09 PM
pretty sure those shoes are not a black book..... :P i kid, their ballin

smooth_nuts
10-12-2008, 10:16 PM
clout you really got 60bones for those shits?!
did you sell em to a blind man or something?!
haha i kid,i kid,but really 60 bones?

I GOT CLOUT
10-12-2008, 10:54 PM
Haha, wow. Preciate it doap. And yes, 60. Im goin through some shit, and she thought she would try to help me out. It was more of a gesture than anything.

smooth_nuts
10-12-2008, 11:15 PM
ahhhhhhh i see,well good lucks with what ever shit your going through and maybe you could float the doap man 20 cent,HUUUH?!HUHHH!?HUUHH?!
nahh i keads,i keads
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3155/2934699804_03731094cb.jpg
bump,again,cause i hat posting with out flicks o.O

ESKiMO2
10-12-2008, 11:30 PM
So ill, smooth.

So this is entirely experimental. Says RATeD.

http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/9602/dsc00965rz3.jpg

I'm using a new type of pencil so that probably contributed to it.

cerex89
10-12-2008, 11:45 PM
i love simples
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/IMG_0013.jpg
and i dont like my S im changing it next time

Atomik
10-13-2008, 01:27 AM
eskimo2 nice shit look like a nice style would like to see the finished products
cerex nice and clean style i think your S is just fine for that style keep it. different styles need different letter styles.
NEW SHIT reads WISR
crits would be greatly appretiated
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/wisr-1.jpg

kasone
10-13-2008, 04:07 AM
Sorry for the shittyness resper =[
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/5708/image00310oh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

librelikespie
10-13-2008, 05:25 AM
woop woop
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03061.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03044.jpg

comments?

fromthegrave
10-13-2008, 06:19 AM
I like that. Its different.
Paint trains.

kasone
10-13-2008, 06:22 AM
Monster you need to paint more. But first exchange me. I'm Kas :)
DOPEEEEE SHIT.

BITCHOS
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/1261/picture1gd7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

DOPE- BUT NOT VERY!!!!
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/roten187/Image00314.jpg

Ekes
10-13-2008, 09:14 AM
i love simples
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/IMG_0013.jpg
and i dont like my S im changing it next time

nice name...

Rambooboo
10-13-2008, 10:49 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3104/2546452308_283891c5dd.jpghttp://farm3.static.flickr.com/2038/2325631662_936caff87f.jpg
like the e smooth
eskimo i like it but the the last two letters are shorter than the rest
libre likes pie i like it is it a throw up or wat
kasone i like the bitchos
crits plz

unknown...
10-13-2008, 11:44 AM
rambo- not feelin it.
ECKS-Dope
Eskimo-I like it



on this top one the page is bent and makes the 3d look off.
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn37/superlativestreetwear/107_0051-1.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn37/superlativestreetwear/107_0023-1.jpg

C-SONE
10-13-2008, 11:58 AM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/7387/rararacv5.jpg
Fuckin more crits cunts

Kid go back to simples

Edit: I mean Rambo

Added

Smooth Nuts
Dope throw keep at it

Eskimo 2
Looks fair fresh

Ecks
Your s looks good, I think you gotta work on your K though.

Atomik
Dope just make you r wider so it matches the rest

Kasone
Dope, Don't like your e though

Librelikespie
Dope

Unknown...
Dope!! Both look ill

Furious-StyleZ
10-13-2008, 12:17 PM
fuckin good shit c-sone..props man diggin d flow

unknown...
10-13-2008, 12:20 PM
sone- good shit man. try to use some color just to help distinguish the 3d from the letter itself. also, i wouldnt use the same bit fill things on the inside of the letter as on the 3d, try one or the other. other than that, looks bangin

C-SONE
10-13-2008, 12:40 PM
sone- good shit man. try to use some color just to help distinguish the 3d from the letter itself. also, i wouldnt use the same bit fill things on the inside of the letter as on the 3d, try one or the other. other than that, looks bangin
Nah man i don;t use colour in sketches, Blue Biro for life!!

unknown...
10-13-2008, 12:43 PM
yeah thats all good, in that case fill the 3d with the pen a little more, or vice versa so as to not let it play tricks with your eyes. with nothing filled in its a little visually confusing

also, dont take it personally, im just giving my suggestions.

b SQUARED 08
10-13-2008, 12:47 PM
Clout- Nice shoes, I can feel those for sure.
Dope- You've got arguably my favorite throw on here man. Keep 'em coming.
Eskimo- Looks pretty good, lets see how it looks inked. Kinda hard to see all of it right now.
Ecks- I like all of it except for the question mark. It doesn't seem to fit with the letters. Other than that, it looks pretty good.
WISR- Work on keeping your letters the same size. Your first two are proportionally bigger than the last two. Structure's not bad, but it would look much better if the letters were all the same size.

Here's an idea that needs a lot of work, but I think I like where it's going. It says marjolein (for a friend of mine). Crits are appreciated:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/VideoSnapshot-1-1.jpg

I Hold The Throne
10-13-2008, 12:58 PM
Squared- That looks pretty dope so far. Did u use a ruler? If so try and freehand the 3d

klic
10-13-2008, 01:06 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/ELMSimplesExchange.jpg

shitty exchange i did, crits please

marjolein - looks pretty good, keepin it simple
sone - letters are good but the 3d doesnt make sense in some places

FIN one
10-13-2008, 01:45 PM
sone- love that e. i agree with whoever said not to use the same fill thing on the letters as the 3d. the main thing that throws me off its the perspective of the o. idk if u meant it but to me, it looks to be facing the wrong way. overall its sweet tho.

b-squared- very clean, but i personally dont feel it at all. that doesnt mean that others wont tho. the M needs to come up in line with the rest in my opinion but its not bad.

klic- i like the e, but the l and m are too skinny, smalland not spaced right. keep sketchin!

C-SONE
10-13-2008, 01:51 PM
sone- love that e. i agree with whoever said not to use the same fill thing on the letters as the 3d. the main thing that throws me off its the perspective of the o. idk if u meant it but to me, it looks to be facing the wrong way. overall its sweet tho.

It is intentional, Notice hw the o is just plain and 3d the whole idea is for it to be out of place yet still flow. Ya dig.

peace89
10-13-2008, 02:40 PM
need some crits

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 02:42 PM
So ill, smooth.

So this is entirely experimental. Says RATeD.

http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/9602/dsc00965rz3.jpg

I'm using a new type of pencil so that probably contributed to it.

BUUUUUUUUUMMMPPPP!
i'm feeling this alot more thne your other style...

unknown...
10-13-2008, 03:09 PM
peace. i dont like the name peace. ummm keep trying though. do a couple sketches a day trying different new things everytime.

Zire
10-13-2008, 03:14 PM
couple skteches a day? if you take this seriuosly you shuold steckh more than that.

b SQUARED 08
10-13-2008, 03:22 PM
Squared- That looks pretty dope so far. Did u use a ruler? If so try and freehand the 3d

Nah, I didn't use a ruler. I've got a newer one since that one that I'll post up sometime soon. Almost the same layout as far as lettering goes except with color and filled 3d.

Thanks for all of the crits everyone.

Mass Appeal
10-13-2008, 04:09 PM
couple skteches a day? if you take this seriuosly you shuold steckh more than that.

Haha

True.
I remeber when i was starting out..i posted atleast 4 sketches every single day on here ... and got crits on every one ... and took them in .. and improved on my next one.

b SQUARED 08
10-13-2008, 04:15 PM
Yeah. Wish I had time to sketch that much. I've got too much shit to do lately :(

opte one
10-13-2008, 04:39 PM
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/9178/07102008ld7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/07102008ld7.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img293/07102008ld7.jpg/1/)
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6086/07102008002nq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/07102008002nq6.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img293/07102008002nq6.jpg/1/)
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/4325/07102008005gi8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/07102008005gi8.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img293/07102008005gi8.jpg/1/)
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/1634/07102008008up4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/07102008008up4.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img88/07102008008up4.jpg/1/)
crits welcome thanks:D

Mass Appeal
10-13-2008, 05:25 PM
Not bad ^
Maybe not make your bars so fat.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/e87c1445.jpg

GrimeTime
10-13-2008, 05:33 PM
eskimo2 nice shit look like a nice style would like to see the finished products
cerex nice and clean style i think your S is just fine for that style keep it. different styles need different letter styles.
NEW SHIT reads WISR
crits would be greatly appretiated
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/wisr-1.jpg

bump i really dig this style, you should paint trains.

seywhat
10-13-2008, 05:39 PM
^^^for sure. just work on the s and make the r wider
mass- the only thing im not feelin are the thin bars on the a and r, fatten em up a bit. the new e is dope also
koala- work on the k in the first one andlose the swirls in the second. pretty decent overall though
unknown- you got some nice steez, try addin a swoop in the bottom ones e so it'll match the n and m

imma upload some new sketches later, peace

kasone
10-13-2008, 05:39 PM
Aher do a whole piece with the style of the E. The same thickness. I know it's not your steezle, but that E is fucking HOTTT. I reckon you could develop a new style from trying all the letters like that

hazetheone
10-13-2008, 05:40 PM
Haha

True.
I remeber when i was starting out..i posted atleast 4 sketches every single day on here ... and got crits on every one ... and took them in .. and improved on my next one.

come on man.....

Mass Appeal
10-13-2008, 05:42 PM
What do you mean " Come on man " .. i did ... ask anybody who was around here at the time :)

Cheers for teh suggestions peeps.

kasone
10-13-2008, 05:42 PM
Monster you need to paint more. But first exchange me. I'm Kas :)
DOPEEEEE SHIT.

BITCHOS
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/1261/picture1gd7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

DOPE- BUT NOT VERY!!!!
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/roten187/Image00314.jpg


Bumpske

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 05:48 PM
amk-i dont like it :/
cant really explain why,just i liked the shit you used to post alot more
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3142/2939011065_9d18fdf813.jpg
juuuuuuuuuust a toss for now
edit*i remember those days amk...back when you wrote amk,and drew shitty b boy caracs,sneakers and lowriders haha
edit again*and yes i realise i put the thumb on the wrong side

Mass Appeal
10-13-2008, 05:53 PM
Those wasnt my AMK days ^ ... those where my Ras days.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/e87c1445.jpg

kasone
10-13-2008, 05:53 PM
Do you paint Smooth Nuts? You really should, mad throwups. And your simples can look pretty fresh too

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 06:01 PM
kas-jes,jes i do paint,i paint freights about once or more a week....or try to paint em atleaste once a week haha
im jus tnot some whore who flicks every move i make so i can post it on the internet haha

ras?!
damn i dont remember that shit :(

Mass Appeal
10-13-2008, 06:03 PM
You was exactly one year too late.
So where is this Pesky Human mod cleaning all this shit up ?

Hahahahahahahahahaahahahahahaha

00-made-00
10-13-2008, 06:10 PM
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimr13oct.jpg
Im starting to like the stuff i do now.
bscared- pretty fresh nice simples.
opte- nice stuff.

NerseOne
10-13-2008, 06:10 PM
alright i'm new, but i'm not gonna lie i've always been able to draw.
here's my first two sketches of my first set-in-stone name.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo15/NerseOne/SKETCH01.jpg
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo15/NerseOne/SKETCH02.jpg

Kraft561
10-13-2008, 06:34 PM
practicing my G's. anybody like em?
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff.jpg

kasone
10-13-2008, 06:37 PM
The top middle and top right are the best, haha.

Mass Appeal
10-13-2008, 06:45 PM
Nice original E there.

Hahahahahahahaha

NAWT

00-made-00
10-13-2008, 06:49 PM
I lol'd

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 06:53 PM
I think we all did.