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Kraft561
10-13-2008, 06:53 PM
r yu talkin bout me for the whole E thing?

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 07:02 PM
why yes,yes he was

00-made-00
10-13-2008, 07:03 PM
smooth knows the deal.

Tunak
10-13-2008, 07:07 PM
AIMR I like it shits hot
NERSE I'd say stick to bars
KRAFT the G in the top middle's hot


http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/4807/image007ia9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/image007ia9.jpg/1/w480.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img362/image007ia9.jpg/1/)
http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/4899/image009xd4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/image009xd4.jpg/1/w480.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img362/image009xd4.jpg/1/)
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/3451/image010vo2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/image010vo2.jpg/1/w480.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img397/image010vo2.jpg/1/)

15$ cell phone camera

Kraft561
10-13-2008, 07:09 PM
well its whatever cuz i didnt even do it.
I wanted to see what yu guys would think of it.
im not close to that good.
my neighbor did it in like 10 mins i dont think he bit it but whatever.
heres my real thing i kno its not good but im trying
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff001.jpg

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 07:16 PM
thats the best lie you could come up with?!

Mass Appeal
10-13-2008, 07:16 PM
my neighbor did it in like 10 mins i dont think he bit it but whatever.



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W5Sw42ISrQU

nastonE
10-13-2008, 07:16 PM
get those bars thicker and the same width, and dont add color

HaLo_07
10-13-2008, 07:20 PM
Well...Atleast your tryin...Thats all that matters. lLolL

But you need a LOT of work. But stay up. Get educated you know?

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/57/l_d94174c7f2714578a62cb8993a70e828.jpg

Any body with crits? diggin the style so far?

Fill Me in...

Kraft561
10-13-2008, 07:23 PM
why would i make that up?
thats just gay. i seriously wanted to see what yu guys woulld think cuz he dosnt like to post shit online. but for real could yu give me some tips on MY shit and stop hating for no reason

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 07:24 PM
amk-i dont like it :/
cant really explain why,just i liked the shit you used to post alot more
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3142/2939011065_9d18fdf813.jpg
juuuuuuuuuust a toss for now
edit*i remember those days amk...back when you wrote amk,and drew shitty b boy caracs,sneakers and lowriders haha
edit again*and yes i realise i put the thumb on the wrong side


http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimr13oct.jpg
Im starting to like the stuff i do now.
bscared- pretty fresh nice simples.
opte- nice stuff.


alright i'm new, but i'm not gonna lie i've always been able to draw.
here's my first two sketches of my first set-in-stone name.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo15/NerseOne/SKETCH01.jpg
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bump...bump for crits,and some shit i liked off the last page

unknown...
10-13-2008, 07:30 PM
i dont think hes lying. did you see his piece in comparison to those gs? yeah. its not bullshit haha. so your neighbor bit. salllll good.

Zire
10-13-2008, 07:34 PM
LMAO at the 1996 neighbors intro! ha

NO_1
10-13-2008, 07:59 PM
halo- looks ok to me, but my opinion is worthless i is a toy still
fucking around in class

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/inclass.jpg

Kraft561
10-13-2008, 08:06 PM
Halo thats sick
NO 1 i like that K
im a toy too though so idk
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff002.jpg
im copying fonts from microsoft word cuz i heard thats a good way to get simple styles down. is that true?

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 08:10 PM
use bars and read the new to graff thread...NOW!!

HaLo_07
10-13-2008, 08:12 PM
halo- looks ok to me, but my opinion is worthless i is a toy still
fucking around in class


Trust me when I say...I been there! lmao.

Styles a personal taste, So ever opinion means sometin.

But yo, stay up, looks like you got potential so keep it up.

BUT word of advice...NEVER EVER EVER EVER!!!! Practice your own Tag name in school...trust me. If you need any hints or stories or tips...I'll fill you in kid...Trust me. lLolL

(SoS)Viruz
10-13-2008, 08:12 PM
I saw you posted in the Big Boy thread Sixo nice. I might post this Pecice IM doin now in thier.

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 08:14 PM
go for it...but i think ra or baze will delete my shit once the see it :(

(SoS) Flu
10-13-2008, 08:16 PM
Maybe in a week or so this new style im workin on will be on there im doing about 3-4 sketches of it a day i think its been improving slowly so wish me luck you Whores :P lol

drek10
10-13-2008, 08:43 PM
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1410-1.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1411-1.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1619.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1615.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1618.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1608.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1606.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1622.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1627.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1612.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1628.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1633.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1636.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1632.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1620.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1638.jpg

idk why there different sizes....fuck the computer

Kraft561
10-13-2008, 08:47 PM
is this a little better?
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff003.jpg

(SoS) Flu
10-13-2008, 08:50 PM
Gube its actually much better but you need to have a consistency with all the letter not just the letters individually.

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb285/FREMO_IS_THE_SHIT_FOR_U/ElFLUITO.jpg

HaLo_07
10-13-2008, 08:54 PM
Yo, those are some dope letters you got goin on.

FLU...Dope name too.

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/57/l_d94174c7f2714578a62cb8993a70e828.jpg

(SoS) Flu
10-13-2008, 08:59 PM
Yo, those are some dope letters you got goin on.

FLU...Dope name too.

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/57/l_d94174c7f2714578a62cb8993a70e828.jpg

lol thanks man your shit is dope too. only thing i can say is the Y is to big or the N is too small. you might wanna base the N and the I a little more on the Y tho. you can do this by adding a curve like you did on the Y to the N

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 09:10 PM
really...why would you BOTH bump something thats already the first flick on the page?

b SQUARED 08
10-13-2008, 09:10 PM
Yin- Make your letter proportional in size and lose the extensions. The extension on the left particularly looks out of place. Structure as a whole doesn't look too bad.
Smooth- Yet another awesome throw. You'd better be painting those man. Fucking ill.
Dank- I like the throw on that page except for the K and the drop shadow is off a bit. None of the others really stand out on that page.
Drek- That's a lot of flicks. Out of those, I like the third, fourth, and eleventh (top left only). The others need a bit of work in the structure department, IMO.
Gube- You still don't appear to be using bars. Lose the arrow on the E too. Stay away from them until you actually know how to use them.
Flu- Looks pretty fresh.

Here's a tweaked version of the flick I posted earlier today. Not finished yet, but let me know what you think:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/VideoSnapshot-3-1.jpg

b SQUARED 08
10-13-2008, 09:15 PM
Yin- Make your letter proportional in size and lose the extensions. The extension on the left particularly looks out of place. Structure as a whole doesn't look too bad.
Smooth- Yet another awesome throw. You'd better be painting those man. Fucking ill.
Dank- I like the throw on that page except for the K and the drop shadow is off a bit. None of the others really stand out on that page.
Drek- That's a lot of flicks. Out of those, I like the third, fourth, and eleventh (top left only). The others need a bit of work in the structure department, IMO.
Gube- You still don't appear to be using bars. Lose the arrow on the E too. Stay away from them until you actually know how to use them.
Flu- Looks pretty fresh.

Here's a tweaked version of the flick I posted earlier today. Not finished yet, but let me know what you think:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/VideoSnapshot-3-1.jpg

(SoS) Flu
10-13-2008, 09:25 PM
Bump needs some crits on my new piece.
http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb285/FREMO_IS_THE_SHIT_FOR_U/ElFLUITO.jpg

Kraft561
10-13-2008, 09:28 PM
what do yu guys mean when yu say use bars sorry i kno its a toy question but im real new to this shit

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 09:30 PM
read the new to graff thread and you'll understand!

drek10
10-13-2008, 09:37 PM
lol mybad on the shitload of flicks ....tryin to catch up and let u ppl see where my shits at

mattxgrace
10-13-2008, 09:39 PM
looks sick Flu!

Jayz146
10-13-2008, 09:42 PM
......criqs.

I GOT CLOUT
10-13-2008, 10:14 PM
Flu - Your handies hurting man. I would say work on that for awhile.

(SoS) Flu
10-13-2008, 10:23 PM
aiggght
will do clout.

WoeInfinite
10-13-2008, 11:16 PM
2nd canvas ever.
had a hard time thinking of anything..then i thought OH SHIT VENOM IS DOPE..
and i fucked it up
:]http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/canvas2.jpg

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 11:30 PM
your e reminds me of gesus a hella lot....

WoeInfinite
10-13-2008, 11:33 PM
inspirationnnated son.
what can i say, hes gotta dope as fuck e
haha

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 11:38 PM
*cough*biter*cough*cough*

WoeInfinite
10-13-2008, 11:39 PM
yeahhh, oh well, what can ya do..
its just an E.

smooth_nuts
10-13-2008, 11:41 PM
a bitten e....biter!
haha
nah im just busting your balls bro,we've all bitten something one point in are life

La Coka Nostra
10-13-2008, 11:48 PM
its kinda obvious though.
the E is the dopest letter in your whole piece.
it doesn't look at all like the others.

sank.
10-13-2008, 11:59 PM
inspirationnnated son.
what can i say, hes gotta dope as fuck e
haha

there's a big difference between inspiration and flat out biting, cause that IS gesus's e. but whatever man it's your choice. your never gonna progress if you just bite. on a side note i don't get how people can have over 1,000 fucking posts and still suck balls. the time you spend posting could be spent progressing and sketching, but whatevaaaa.

here's a flic for talking, wish i had some decent markers and a scanner :(

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_1210.jpg

sacwacko
10-14-2008, 12:27 AM
thats fuckin tight sank. from when i was high. http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6387.jpg http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6389.jpg http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6391.jpg http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6393.jpg http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6395.jpg http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6396.jpg http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6397.jpg http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6398.jpg

NO_1
10-14-2008, 12:58 AM
slightly less simple
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/slightlylesssimple.jpg

FIN one
10-14-2008, 01:30 AM
Flu-not bad, i have a suggestion, not sure if it would look good or not, the little nike type swoosh things all point up except for the ones on the F. maybe it would creat more unity

B-squared- like it a lot more

No-1- lackin flow, try to keep the letters the same angle but tweak the letters themselves not the angle they are positioned in, if that makes sense.

Jayz-like the carac, did u copy it from anywhere? cuz ur letters are no good in my opinion compared to the caracs

sackwacko- that yellow throw is sick, and you get one extra point for writing poop haha

sank- only like the e, the rest is too spaced out.

an who cares who bites, as long as they know that they will get NOWHERE coppin someone elses style, i guess it's their choice.

as a disclaimer, i dont intend to come across as a hater on ppl, just giving my honest opinion like i would expect from u guys

Jayz146
10-14-2008, 01:41 AM
Flu-not bad, i have a suggestion, not sure if it would look good or not, the little nike type swoosh things all point up except for the ones on the F. maybe it would creat more unity

B-squared- like it a lot more

No-1- lackin flow, try to keep the letters the same angle but tweak the letters themselves not the angle they are positioned in, if that makes sense.

Jayz-like the carac, did u copy it from anywhere? cuz ur letters are no good in my opinion compared to the caracs

sackwacko- that yellow throw is sick, and you get one extra point for writing poop haha

sank- only like the e, the rest is too spaced out.

an who cares who bites, as long as they know that they will get NOWHERE coppin someone elses style, i guess it's their choice.

as a disclaimer, i dont intend to come across as a hater on ppl, just giving my honest opinion like i would expect from u guys


I might have copied da Lettas(still tryin to make own style) but the carac is my own joint

freshsesh
10-14-2008, 01:49 AM
http://i38.tinypic.com/200uv7t.jpg

http://i34.tinypic.com/2njzfkh.jpg

http://i35.tinypic.com/f9o900.jpg

http://i33.tinypic.com/r76lip.jpg


crits?please

kasone
10-14-2008, 01:59 AM
Keep your tags simple, very simple, keep the throwies to round bubble letters, no wild throwie shit..
FOR THE NIGGUH MONSTER
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/6753/monsterxn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

kasone
10-14-2008, 01:59 AM
Keep your tags simple, very simple, keep the throwies to round bubble letters, no wild throwie shit..
FOR THE NIGGUH MONSTER
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/6753/monsterxn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

<J-one>
10-14-2008, 02:04 AM
flu- handstyle definetly needs work brah. other than that i'm on the edge with the style, could be dope though, keep workin on it.
sesh- keep with the simples.
kas - that monster looks pretty dope, was that an exchange

heres one of mine, hope to add colour soon.
can i get some crits this time.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3204/2941141710_5aa1d0b033.jpg?v=0

kasone
10-14-2008, 02:06 AM
Yeah sure was, just whipped it up then
Feeling your style man, letters arent too defined, but for a detailed wall piece it's dope.
Post up some simples too, shit's pretty fresh though

I GOT CLOUT
10-14-2008, 02:23 AM
Sesh - I would say, go read the New To Graff Thread.
Kas - Clean simp. I just dont personally like the hearts.
J - Either im an idiot, or too faded, but I just dont see the letters...

First colored in a bit. S is fucked.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16243.jpg

Mass Appeal
10-14-2008, 05:33 AM
No offence but that background on the Monster peice is so hippy.

This was the start of my SNOW sketch but i couldnt get an N or O to go together well.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-24.jpg

Mass Appeal
10-14-2008, 05:34 AM
No offence but that background on the Monster peice is so hippy.

This was the start of my SNOW sketch but i couldnt get an N or O to go together well.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-24.jpg

sketch_three
10-14-2008, 07:09 AM
finaly ur evolvin the style in a good direction


i wana see sum simps

opte one
10-14-2008, 07:36 AM
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/8645/07102008rq7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/07102008rq7.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img161/07102008rq7.jpg/1/)
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/8343/07102008002zw9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/07102008002zw9.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img186/07102008002zw9.jpg/1/)
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/2729/07102008005vh4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/07102008005vh4.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img161/07102008005vh4.jpg/1/)
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/2416/07102008008lh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/07102008008lh0.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img186/07102008008lh0.jpg/1/)

mattxgrace
10-14-2008, 08:57 AM
the top one is fresh Opte

klic
10-14-2008, 09:49 AM
yah the colours on the top koalah one looks sick

-Wings-
10-14-2008, 10:09 AM
I dont like the like that. But it looks pretty good, I love your C's :)! Complicate it a bit more for your next sketch?

Heres all my stuff from today. Keep in mind this is all exprimental!!
Okay heres my usual style. (Still I was experimenting)
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF14102008_00001.jpg
This is more alone the lines of experimental.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF14102008_00002.jpg
Personally I think this S is dope.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF14102008_00004.jpg

Nooooow this is ALL experimental.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF14102008_00000.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF14102008_00003.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF14102008_00005.jpg
And a simple SK
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF14102008_00007.jpg

Ps I do have some simples done, but they are not worthy of posting atm.

Mass Appeal
10-14-2008, 10:12 AM
Experiment when you have decent letters

FIN one
10-14-2008, 12:50 PM
skin, i say post the simples u say u have, if you get help on those, you will be a lot better when u "experiment"

FIN one
10-14-2008, 12:53 PM
sorry i double posted on accident.

so i'll make use of it,

kas- like the monster. not amazing, but i like it

j-one- shit looks hot to me

mass- lookin pretty dope so far

clout- nice and clean, like the colors

koala-like the first carac, but the only think i like letterwise is the last one, keep working with that, you got an ok thing goin with the simples

mtown
10-14-2008, 01:00 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/671/img0502sx9.jpg

mtown
10-14-2008, 01:06 PM
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9447/img0505xq2.jpg

b SQUARED 08
10-14-2008, 01:12 PM
Here's a tweaked version of the flick I posted earlier today. Not finished yet, but let me know what you think:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/VideoSnapshot-3-1.jpg
Bumpin' for crits.

FIN one
10-14-2008, 01:13 PM
.

FIN one
10-14-2008, 01:28 PM
sorry for postwhoring
make-check out the new to graff thread. get some practice with simples, bars and proportions

b-squared- maybe some kind of uni on the outside of everything in a complementary color? idk its lookin good to me

Mass Appeal
10-14-2008, 01:48 PM
First few peices of this new " euro " " goofy " " new school " " hybrid " " whack " " gay " style..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ty.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ee.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-19.jpg

Latest ...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/e87c1445.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gg-1.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/860c92a4.jpg



Oh how its changed.

sketch_three
10-14-2008, 01:53 PM
First few peices of this new " euro " " goofy " " new school " " hybrid " " whack " " gay " style..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ty.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ee.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-19.jpg

this stuff is way better, develop it in this direction

or ill piss on ur girl
after i mug u off

b SQUARED 08
10-14-2008, 01:57 PM
this stuff is way better, develop it in this direction

Agreed.

mattxgrace
10-14-2008, 01:58 PM
Mass your shit is so good.

Mass Appeal
10-14-2008, 02:03 PM
Lol ... thats what it developed into ... as you can see the new stuff follows the same letter forms ... i carnt help how my shit develops ... i just go along randomly ... i see that shit you quoted as the simpler version of what im doing now.

sketch_three
10-14-2008, 02:06 PM
if by simple u mean without huge square tumors then yea

that serious sketch is fressh to deff, the other new ones are wackexcept the e on the bottom one,

Mass Appeal
10-14-2008, 02:08 PM
No need for the " tumor " shit.

Speedy
10-14-2008, 02:11 PM
slightly less simple
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/slightlylesssimple.jpg

There's already a Baltimore Dank...

mtown
10-14-2008, 02:15 PM
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9447/img0505xq2.jpg

crits anybody???
laturr

sketch_three
10-14-2008, 02:16 PM
didnt mean to offend, but wat is a tumore?
a big useless lump that dosnt benefit anyone, i persoanly feel thats wat those squres are doing to ur peices.
but wat ever its ur style aslong as you like who else matters

mtown
10-14-2008, 02:19 PM
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tumor
this is a tumor:(
anyone crits for my sketch???

FIN one
10-14-2008, 02:34 PM
mass- i personally like it

make-new to graff thread

tryin to mess with this, not sure if i like it or not tho
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/7853/n10383184341718173095sw9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

klic
10-14-2008, 03:01 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHCircles.jpg
some shit i just did

fin - too many attachments, focus more on basic letter formation

make - new to graff thread, no offense but this is all youve accomplished after being on here for over a year?

mass - looks fresh as always

SelfTyrant
10-14-2008, 03:09 PM
First few peices of this new " euro " " goofy " " new school " " hybrid " " whack " " gay " style..

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ty.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/ee.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-19.jpg

Latest ...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/e87c1445.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/gg-1.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/860c92a4.jpg



Oh how its changed.


thats some hot ish.

FIN one
10-14-2008, 03:25 PM
klic- i cant take ur crits seriously when u posted a pic like that. i think u might need to take some of ur own advice. and focus on letter structure
no offense

klic
10-14-2008, 04:14 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHBlockLettersWithBlack3D.jpg

alright, heres some letter structure

FIN one
10-14-2008, 04:17 PM
good job!

opte one
10-14-2008, 04:32 PM
http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/7103/11102008013sf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/11102008013sf6.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img55/11102008013sf6.jpg/1/)
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/5414/12102008014bn6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/12102008014bn6.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img133/12102008014bn6.jpg/1/)
someone said go simple

PROJECT LINK
10-14-2008, 04:36 PM
SELF-yo im deff feelin thta style bro its pretty sick dude...tight work.
this is somethin i just did...its alright i'd like to do my name wich i can but i think L's are hard as fu#$..so theres not to much u can do wit em....this sais BAM...

http://http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=878

HaLo_07
10-14-2008, 04:45 PM
lol thanks man your shit is dope too. only thing i can say is the Y is to big or the N is too small. you might wanna base the N and the I a little more on the Y tho. you can do this by adding a curve like you did on the Y to the N

Ya, I feel you on that. I always did the Y cause I always had trouble tryin to make it flow right, but I never worked on the other letters. But I'm feelin what your sayin. I'mma give that a try.

Smooth Nutz-Yo, your throw up style is sick an as smooth as your name. Hahaha Stay up.

opte one
10-14-2008, 05:30 PM
i liek teh background,dont really liek the lettering though

FIN one
10-14-2008, 05:39 PM
at first i thought it said bats. not bad tho i like the link in the b

koala- better. i like the first one more the. try to keep the bars the same width throughout

opte one
10-14-2008, 05:41 PM
thanks fin,i usualy do,just trying things out :)

FIN one
10-14-2008, 06:01 PM
nah its cool man, you get nowhere if u never try new stuff

<J-one>
10-14-2008, 06:07 PM
mass - i don't know what that is, but it looks good man.
link- like the rest of the page but the letters just look wack to me... try to make em flow more.
koala- looks like your doin a lotta work

another one of mine minus colour, reeeally gotta get some markers.
crits?
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3222/2942247207_5bcfa5cb30.jpg?v=0

PROJECT LINK
10-14-2008, 06:10 PM
lol ya i see what ur sayin bro...i need to learn how to do l's dude like i can but i cant do any thing to emmmm

Kraft561
10-14-2008, 06:11 PM
just messin around in class. i kno the bottom sucks i just get so bored with block letters but crits please
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff004.jpg

ESKiMO2
10-14-2008, 06:30 PM
Which one is better?!!?

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/1629/thesecondgf0.jpg

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/8122/dsc00972copyim5.jpg

(SoS) Flu
10-14-2008, 06:50 PM
eskima there both dope but i like the top one better idk y.
http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb285/FREMO_IS_THE_SHIT_FOR_U/elflu.jpg

ESKiMO2
10-14-2008, 06:56 PM
I made it more of a silver/blue.

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/9849/final1yk3.jpg

Flu, I'm feeling it. Especially the coloring.

klic
10-14-2008, 07:19 PM
from late august/early september somewhere around then
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELDividerThrow.jpg
edit: i know my e is huge

eskimo - yah i like the silver alot more than the white

flu - i like your style, the only thing i would change is to lose the attachment at the bottom of your U

gube - make sure all of your bars are the same length

crits please

TONO
10-14-2008, 07:21 PM
@Link dope ass background and coloring but i dont really the lettering
@j-one crazyyyy shit
@flu damn dood thats sick coloring is ill lettering is dope too
@ES wow. shiny. and letters are good.

on to me. these arent colored because i did em in class so in not gonna break out the markers during... teachers be bitchin and shit.

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t123/xxT0N0xx/DSC00808.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t123/xxT0N0xx/DSC00807.jpg

edit:oh snap that was my 20th post.. do i get a cookie?

Maste
10-14-2008, 07:43 PM
no...

TONO
10-14-2008, 07:47 PM
no...id like one. send me it through the ethernet cable.

FIN one
10-14-2008, 07:56 PM
maybe if u had some good shit, you would get a cookie... 20 posts is nothing. just keep sketchin brah

hazetheone
10-14-2008, 07:57 PM
http://i450.photobucket.com/albums/qq229/benrejoice/106.jpg
http://i450.photobucket.com/albums/qq229/benrejoice/112.jpg
http://i450.photobucket.com/albums/qq229/benrejoice/111.jpg
http://i450.photobucket.com/albums/qq229/benrejoice/110.jpg
http://i450.photobucket.com/albums/qq229/benrejoice/109.jpg
http://i450.photobucket.com/albums/qq229/benrejoice/108.jpg
http://i450.photobucket.com/albums/qq229/benrejoice/107.jpg
the people are my homie ryan drawing around in ma book
most of those were done high considering last weekends list of events

-Wings-
10-14-2008, 08:02 PM
...

Change your avatar now...

TONO
10-14-2008, 08:10 PM
@fin damn.. i just got tried

RFI. SPit
10-14-2008, 08:12 PM
Didn't realize your characters were so good Caer

klic
10-14-2008, 08:12 PM
bump
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELDividerThrow.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHBlockLettersWithBlack3D.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHCircles.jpg

(SoS) Flu
10-14-2008, 08:22 PM
http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb285/FREMO_IS_THE_SHIT_FOR_U/elflu.jpg
BUMPOZ this shit i need crits.

hazetheone
10-14-2008, 08:36 PM
Didn't realize your characters were so good Caer

the wierd people arent me those are my friend ryans

(SoS)Viruz
10-14-2008, 08:44 PM
Flu- your 3d is a lil off, and so are your Arrows they are a lil iffy. But we got to chill sometime this week and just graff it out.

Eski- Like them. Yo remeber Im giving you mine and it going to be a Red blood Force Feild.

HaLo_07
10-14-2008, 09:01 PM
Change your avatar now...

Now that thats out of the way...

Small fuckin world...I really like that picture too.

FIN one
10-14-2008, 10:14 PM
caer- some sweet stuff. ur boys caracs are dope tho.

just messin with new goofy style. says gooch. tryin to think of a new name but its tough. grrrr crits?

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/1208/goocheb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
no homo on the nuts

edit-tono, no hard feelings, just messin with ya

NEZ89
10-14-2008, 10:36 PM
kinda hard to say no homo when u got hairy balls hangin in the middle of your sketch lol
but i digress, u cut the leg of the H too short

FIN one
10-14-2008, 10:39 PM
lol i just thought it would be funny/fitting since the word was gooch. i cut the leg of the h on purpose, i dont think it would have looked right it it lined up perfect

lawlcat
10-14-2008, 10:57 PM
i actually think that has some potential, ha. not that thats saying much coming from a toy like myself, but i digress.
flu - hot shit as usual.

quick simple. the K makes me want to smack babies, but meh...
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00159.jpg

PegCityBoy
10-14-2008, 11:44 PM
first throwie with the new name, fucked up my handstlye
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d106/Jason_5159/sketchs001.jpg

eskimo - liken it, i prefer the white one
flare - looks good, fix the e
haze - lookin good keep it up
klic - i know your probably tired of this, work on simples
flu - don't force add-ons, they'll come
gooch - wowww haha, i like the g

crits please

drek10
10-15-2008, 12:31 AM
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1641.jpg
s = meh

sank.
10-15-2008, 01:06 AM
drek/peg- NEW TO GRAFF THREAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

caer - good stuff man, but try to be more consistent with the thickness of your bars. i think that would make your ish look alot better, also i'd say loose the arrows.

flu - the fill makes it look pretty nice, but the arrows are kind of out of place and extremely small. i think those kind of arrows would look real fresh with your letters if you make em bigger and not force em. also i don't know what you were going for with the drop shadow/3d or whatever, but it's hurtin. keep sketchin!

that gooch sketch made me lol

http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w289/bruiserlikesboys/slater.jpg

CHECK YA LATERRRR!!

librelikespie
10-15-2008, 03:32 AM
gooch is too dope

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03083.jpg

exchange with my mang kas

CHEM
10-15-2008, 05:16 AM
gooch? balls?

<J-one>
10-15-2008, 06:06 AM
flu- that shit looks waaay hotter with colour.
eskimo- i dig that first one for sure bro
caer- tell your buddy to try and do somethin with those characters man, they are tight. and your shit is lookin iilllll
tono and klic - keep workin on it, proportions and flo...good ole classic bars
lawl- make your letters more the same size..
pegcity- your throwie is confused, is it sharp lines, flowwy, euro....simplify that shit
drek- what is that first letter....bars son!

that gooch sketch made me laugh, i woulda made the skinny bar on the H shorter though, and then made the thick one longer...

bumpin for more criiits
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3222/2942247207_5bcfa5cb30.jpg?v=0

FIN one
10-15-2008, 09:05 AM
haha thanks. i did it for mainly some laughs. i came up with a G i actually kinda like and didnt know what to put with it. how about some crits on the style or the G?

drek- not really feelin it man- lets see some simples from you

J- i love your style mang

sprout
10-15-2008, 09:51 AM
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/388/picture021jo0.th.jpg (http://img208.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture021jo0.jpg)http://img208.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)

HaLo_07
10-15-2008, 01:51 PM
FIN-Balls...wow...lmao hahahaha the "H's" legs need to be evened out and the balls...It would be good for a diss over some ones shiit...but it's creative.
Librelikespie-You need work bro...You gotta keep at it cause it lacks structure.
Drek-Sobs...hmmm...The lines are clean BUT the structure of the letters...try to be more unique with the structure.
Peg-You definetly need to put in more time and more work...New names take time.
Lawl-The bubbles look balanced and the letters are not bad. Keep it up.

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/40/l_1df228d8861849c49ecbd58aaabbffd0.jpg

Sometin else I'm workin on...tell me what you think.

peace89
10-15-2008, 02:14 PM
need crits!!!

peace89
10-15-2008, 02:20 PM
sprout : love the ''I'' but not shure I like how the M is, the bottom is... weird...
** and you forgot to colour the top 3d of the ''m''

-Wings-
10-15-2008, 02:23 PM
During School
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF15102008_0000023.jpg
Just Then
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF15102008_00001.jpg
And just then agian.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF15102008_00002.jpg
I
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF15102008_00003.jpg
N
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF15102008_00004.jpg

Comments?

Mass Appeal
10-15-2008, 02:59 PM
Better than that other whack shit you was doing ... Although i do think those letters are a fluke ... as its been quite evident for some time you carnt rock a decent simple letter ... so im still not convinced by you.

-Wings-
10-15-2008, 03:03 PM
Well it only because I was trying to complicate them, if you look closely on my other sketchs and take off all the random shit on them, well theres the type stuff I did.
They might just be a fluke, but I will be able to produce another good one ;)! Thanks.

Mass Appeal
10-15-2008, 03:50 PM
Draw 15 of them then ill be convinced.

jupsick
10-15-2008, 04:08 PM
wings u dont know shit bout shadows and its diraction 0.0
of shadow on the letters is totally off
anyways
its looks better
BUT
still do simple block letters make ur structure better
keep working

opte one
10-15-2008, 04:59 PM
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/2163/12102008016nu8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/12102008016nu8.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img352/12102008016nu8.jpg/1/)
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/5456/12102008015sz0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/12102008015sz0.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img352/12102008015sz0.jpg/1/)
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/1528/12102008017xr9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/12102008017xr9.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img352/12102008017xr9.jpg/1/)
new stuff,crits an comments ?

-Wings-
10-15-2008, 05:39 PM
wings u dont know shit bout shadows and its diraction 0.0
of shadow on the letters is totally off
anyways
its looks better
BUT
still do simple block letters make ur structure better
keep working

Im not going to do to BLOCK simples. Because I tend to like to bend my letters. And for my 3d stuff, and way to work on the shadows? I dont know much about it (Except for on people, but letters now this is something I havent done before:confused:).

seywhat
10-15-2008, 05:53 PM
you dont have to do blocks, just use bars. that way you can still bend your letters, just keep the same width on the bars though. also with your 3d, go read the new to graff thread, for real. it explains everything

FIN one
10-15-2008, 06:08 PM
wings-with that kind of shit attitude, you are gonna get nowhere fast. and if u cant run a shadow on a letter, im pretty sure u cant do it along the contours and stuff of a person. stop bitchin and sketch. ppl here wouldnt point u in the wrong direction, if they say do simps, do simps.

nastonE
10-15-2008, 06:09 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF15102008_00004.jpg


The shading's flawed on the N, it looks as if it's twisting behind that vertical bar and it's not evident that you did that and we cant even see

opte one
10-15-2008, 06:13 PM
i'd say do simples aswell.an id listen to people when they give you crits

nastonE
10-15-2008, 06:42 PM
new throwie style i've been working on, not coloured the greatest, but you get the idea

http://i36.tinypic.com/t6496e.jpg

opte one
10-15-2008, 06:57 PM
likin the throw,anyone got any crits for mine ? i wanta improve

nastonE
10-15-2008, 07:00 PM
likin the throw,anyone got any crits for mine ? i wanta improve

those last 2 simples are dope, for that first one i don't like how that K converges into the middle like that, for the second pic lose those horizontal bars on the bottom, i can't tell where they're coming from

HaLo_07
10-15-2008, 07:21 PM
I
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF15102008_00003.jpg

Comments?

This is the only one I was feelin...Maddd simple but it's str8.

But you gotta go simple and make the letters go together. You can do some pretty potential letters individualy BUT you gotta be able to make all the letters mesh together no doubt.

You got potential thought.

-Wings-
10-15-2008, 07:22 PM
wings-with that kind of shit attitude, you are gonna get nowhere fast. and if u cant run a shadow on a letter, im pretty sure u cant do it along the contours and stuff of a person. stop bitchin and sketch. ppl here wouldnt point u in the wrong direction, if they say do simps, do simps.

I can shade, One of the reason I took up graffiti is because I was really into art. But classic art, like painting with brushes didnt appeal to me when I started. Sooo I looked into graff, 2half months later here I am (well 2 years ago I looked into it, but never started till 2half months ago). Ill learn how to shade letters easily (gimme a couple weeks).

Ps. I can shade. I got a couple more, but there not my best outta my drawings.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_0975-1.jpg
Nas.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_0980-1.jpg

I drew someone in school the other day, but my teacher has it atm.
New sketch book! (Prismas are sooo expensive I decided to rob me 2 :))
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2340.jpg

hazetheone
10-15-2008, 07:31 PM
haha

TONO
10-15-2008, 07:31 PM
@ fin . lmao its all good. i realize i have to get better any way just wanted to know how i was doing at my current state.. which apparently isnt that good so yea ill get to sketchin.

SANEKONE
10-15-2008, 07:39 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/SDC11340.jpg
gotta love black flag :)
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/SDC11339.jpg
crits?

opte one
10-15-2008, 07:45 PM
sanek ! thats shithot mann

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/996/13102008020ui9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/13102008020ui9.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img127/13102008020ui9.jpg/1/)
simple for talking

smooth_nuts
10-15-2008, 07:46 PM
wings-do simples already....and 2 prismas!
thats not even worth walking into ac moore for haha
mcs-the m's dope but the c and s are weak
doke-simples

some shit...some old some new,mostly new...also i realised if you invert the color pencil shows up WAY better when you scan it
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1082.jpg
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1086.jpg
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1083.jpg
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1084.jpg
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1085.jpg
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1081.jpg
sall for now folks....crits would be loverly

opte one
10-15-2008, 07:51 PM
1st one and 3rd one are good but the rest could be worked on

Zire
10-15-2008, 07:51 PM
I like all the letters apart from the e, the bars are thinner than the other letters, plus its not the same style as them(on the last pic). Keep it up though.

lawlcat
10-15-2008, 07:55 PM
yea i like the last minus the E, doesn't fit.

and i would accidentally delete this.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00162-1.jpg

Baron
10-15-2008, 07:58 PM
Dope- nice and clean, the only thing I would work on would be your E, it seems too busy in comparrison to the rest of your letters

Koala- Nice simples, clean fills, start to bend the bars a bit.

smooth_nuts
10-15-2008, 07:58 PM
uhh i hella fucked up the e when i outlined it :/

nastonE
10-15-2008, 08:13 PM
new throwie style i've been working on, not coloured the greatest, but you get the idea

http://i36.tinypic.com/t6496e.jpg



mcs-the m's dope but the c and s are weak


that's an A.. not a C

FIN one
10-15-2008, 08:15 PM
sanek- sick shit

smooth- i like the 1st, 3rd, 4th kinda, and most of the 6th lol

doke- not feelin it at all broski, u had more goin with the one u posted a bit back. the lower leg of the K is consistently wierd in ur sketches tho.

and wings- no offense mate, but ur not really good. not bad from lookin at a pic where the shading is already done for u and u just copy it in another medium. until you learn how to draw perspectively freehand and shit, thats when u can say you are good at something. when u can draw without lookin at something. and dont assume that u can pick up something "easy". its kids like you who piss me off sometimes cuz u assume that since u took art class in 8th grade, you will be good at graff. you just need to realize that you arent good at graff and that u need to practice a shitload. and u gotta do simple boring stuff for a while, everyone does. i know i am no good yet, but i dont let it get to me cuz i know its part of the process. keep sketchin. peace

Scratch
10-15-2008, 08:16 PM
new possible idea for straightletter-ish throw

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/1015082106.jpg

crits please

smooth_nuts
10-15-2008, 08:16 PM
o.O
MAS-if thats an A that makes it worse haha

Zire
10-15-2008, 08:17 PM
yeh man. quit the ego. nuff said

nastonE
10-15-2008, 08:19 PM
o.O
that make sit worse haha

seriously? people say the A's the best letter there

smooth_nuts
10-15-2008, 08:23 PM
seriously? people say the A's the best letter there
yeah man i would in a million years guessed that was an a :/

yeh man. quit the ego. nuff said
you talking to me fool?

MunityArt
10-15-2008, 08:24 PM
Yo scratch. names TAEKen by yours truly. Ill battle for it... PM me.

Scratch
10-15-2008, 08:25 PM
lower case a? yeah its pretty sweet

just actually put the hole of the a somewhere, thats what makes it a little hard to read.



and its yaek, not taek. sorry, im not changing my name haha

GOEZONER
10-15-2008, 08:47 PM
first piecce any crits

GOEZONER
10-15-2008, 08:49 PM
how can i put the pic up it wont upload

-Wings-
10-15-2008, 08:56 PM
and wings- no offense mate, but ur not really good. not bad from lookin at a pic where the shading is already done for u and u just copy it in another medium. until you learn how to draw perspectively freehand and shit, thats when u can say you are good at something. when u can draw without lookin at something. and dont assume that u can pick up something "easy". its kids like you who piss me off sometimes cuz u assume that since u took art class in 8th grade, you will be good at graff. you just need to realize that you arent good at graff and that u need to practice a shitload. and u gotta do simple boring stuff for a while, everyone does. i know i am no good yet, but i dont let it get to me cuz i know its part of the process. keep sketchin. peace

No offense mate but ive done my simples. And thats highschool art. And unless your like 10 years older then me then your in no position to call me kid.
Also I never said I was jesus at graff, I never ever said that once. I just sketch and sketch and sketch, and try and progress.
Now heres another sketch, I tried to get my shadow right. Im not sure if I did or not. And hate if you want fin, but I cant please everyone.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2343.jpg

Zire
10-15-2008, 09:07 PM
you talking to me fool?[/quote]

Nope. Talking to wings.

PROJECT LINK
10-15-2008, 09:08 PM
LOL smooth... how cant u tell its an a...its pretty noticable bro

-Wings-
10-15-2008, 09:09 PM
I aint got no ego, you guys just tend to like to say that im full of my self and I think im god, when really though ive never said any of that stuff. All I ever said is that I dont think I need to go back to square one.

Baron
10-15-2008, 09:13 PM
So you're just ignorant and stubborn.

-Wings-
10-15-2008, 09:15 PM
Nooo, Im not ignorant or stubborn. Im just posting flicks and then one time someone decides to say that I suck after all that time of being told I was doing good, well of course you cant think that im going to be happy. But no I dont have an ego, or im not ignorant, or stubborn. Now im bumping this soo everyone on this page can see.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2343.jpg

kroc_oner
10-15-2008, 09:17 PM
lol wings isnt horrible so he doesnt need to go back to square one let him progreess at his own rate stopp whipping out the simples hammer hes probaly way better then mst of u were on your first 2 months
edit i like it but the s keep working and the ks a bit akward

smooth_nuts
10-15-2008, 09:30 PM
you talking to me fool?

Nope. Talking to wings.[/QUOTE]

haha ok.

idk project,sometimes i think maybe im mentaly retarded and some how dont know about it :/

MontanaPainter
10-15-2008, 10:32 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020536.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020537.jpg
simples

crits

peace89
10-15-2008, 10:36 PM
need crits!!!!( i know i fucked up the colour on the 1)

Scratch
10-15-2008, 11:00 PM
new possible idea for straightletter-ish throw

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/1015082106.jpg

crits please

bump.

rays i like that, not feelin the s on the simple though

NO_1
10-15-2008, 11:47 PM
not feeling anything here cept wings piece

fucked up the 3d.
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/fuckedup3d.jpg

FIN one
10-16-2008, 12:39 AM
No offense mate but ive done my simples. And thats highschool art. And unless your like 10 years older then me then your in no position to call me kid.
Also I never said I was jesus at graff, I never ever said that once. I just sketch and sketch and sketch, and try and progress.
Now heres another sketch, I tried to get my shadow right. Im not sure if I did or not. And hate if you want fin, but I cant please everyone.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2343.jpg
i call ppl older than me kid, it was not meant to come out as a bad thing. highschool art is really nothing unless thats all you did and actually apply it to ur graff.i took art classes all throughout highschool including advanced placement and IB courses. its what i planned on doin with my future until i got into music, but i still sucked balls at graff when i started regardless of my education. i knew the basics of form, perspective and lighing but had no idea what letter structure was. i never said u said u were jesus, you said that you would get shading down easy which in my opinion is ignorant. and if u were tryin to progress, you would listen to what ppl have been telling you man. but u really dont. no one expects u to please everyone, but u werent pleasing anyone. im not hating, im just tryin to make sure u listen t what ppl are telling you. i was similar when i first started then i realized that the ppl on here know what they're talkin about for the most part.

jupsick
10-16-2008, 08:42 AM
wings u said u like bending bars and addin shit to ur work right?
but u dont know how to bend ur bars right
and im not talking bout any other shit to add
lets do like this u know
show us that u know how to do prtty simple letters
really simples...
with no adds no arrows normal good bars

-Wings-
10-16-2008, 10:01 AM
Ill post up some later on tonight. Nothing speciail.

HaLo_07
10-16-2008, 10:51 AM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/fuckedup3d.jpg


Werd, No lie, I'm feelin this. DOES need some work with the texture of your fill in. It could be cleaner with the colors...But it's a great start. Start tryin to use Decols Or Prismas.

But the colors are dope, the letter structre is good, the only thing is personally the D is too sharp... like This Part of the (D<<)

But all around it's str8. Keep it up.

opte one
10-16-2008, 11:12 AM
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/3615/14102008022tw0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/14102008022tw0.jpg/1/w240.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img183/14102008022tw0.jpg/1/)
quick biro freestyle

Evasion Of Invasion
10-16-2008, 01:29 PM
Wings ur shading looks like its commin from everywhere and ur 3d aint all that constant and ur letters aint rly flowin try workin on all those
Dank ur names pretty played but im feelin that colour scheme
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0469.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0467.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0466.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0465.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0464.jpg
some of my most recent stuff
and for wings some of my 3D stuff
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0080.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0084-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0086.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture061-2.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture409.jpg
crits?

sank.
10-16-2008, 01:41 PM
not really feeling any of it man, but keep at it. it'll take time to develop a dope 3d style. also your hand is fucking wack, i'd say drop everything else and develop that. having a dope hand is one of the most important things in my opinion. people will wanna see more of your ish if you've got a dope hand. just my 2 cents, take it or leave it.

well i'm off to class.

respERATION
10-16-2008, 01:58 PM
skin-digging that 3d style you got going....but maybe try and make the I curly like the other letters?
montana- i like the simple :)
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/batch-1.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/seek.jpg

-Wings-
10-16-2008, 02:01 PM
I meh about this one. Ill keep working.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2346.jpg

Next sketch I got looks okay though :). Im gone painting though today or tomorrow.
Ps Ignore the bottom of the I, I was debating on what doing there...

FIN one
10-16-2008, 02:45 PM
seriously?

NerseOne
10-16-2008, 02:45 PM
yo evade I think you misunderstood wings' 3d. it's actually the letters that are 3d in themselves. like a simpler version of any 3d graff. correct me if I'm wrong but I just wanted to clarify because I like that piece (but the s gets too skinny for the context of the rest of the sketch.

-Wings-
10-16-2008, 02:49 PM
seriously?

..? Yes

FIN one
10-16-2008, 03:14 PM
u said u were gonna post some simples...

hazetheone
10-16-2008, 04:24 PM
evade
ive never seen one sketch that was good from you
.....i seriously cant think of one

MontanaPainter
10-16-2008, 05:46 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020536.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020537.jpg
simples

crits
bump for crits

evade dope 3d, i like it

fucking HATE this y
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020538.jpg
CRITS

RezOner..
10-16-2008, 05:53 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0080.jpg]


When'd you drop into fs

klic
10-16-2008, 05:58 PM
wings, your making it way more complicated than it has to be

NO_1
10-16-2008, 06:20 PM
rays- ilike the s on the last one.
wings- shit looks cool but i dont know much bout 3d so i cant really give you good critz

and yes i know dank the name is played out. i dont really care, no one in my area uses it and more than likely ill end up changing it once ive progressed quite a bit more.

anywho

freestyle. 1 new sharpie and 1 new deco
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/freestyle.jpg

simples practice
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/simplespractice.jpg

SageGSCnj
10-16-2008, 08:09 PM
Montana - I like the last 2. The first might be better if it was outlined for clarity....
No1 - I like em just the A on the first one is a little too cut off...

http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff350/sagegsc/untitled-2.jpg

The letters for mine couldve been closer and the A doesnt really work well...

Crits?

MontanaPainter
10-16-2008, 08:25 PM
^work on simps
recent shit
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020538.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020539.jpg
CRITS!!!!!

FIN one
10-16-2008, 08:44 PM
no markers so i messed around in photoshop got bored ans was inspired by someone on here :p no hard feelings.. http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/923/skincopymv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Kraft561
10-16-2008, 08:47 PM
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff005.jpg
any advice?

klic
10-16-2008, 08:55 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/DASKPieceExchange.jpg

exchange i just did

gube - read the new to graff thread and work on bars
fin - does it say skin? to many attachments in my opinion, other than that it looks pretty clean, id just make it a little bit simpler

FIN one
10-16-2008, 09:03 PM
it says two things really look in the middle of each letters. originally i didnt have those there and it looked pretty good but i was mad bored and little mad at the time. but like i said, no hard feelings. i wasnt expecting anything good to come out of this, personally, i dont think it looks good. but i havent posted anything in a while.

GUBE- try to keep the letters the same length trhoughout.

Dask- the a and k are slanted more than the d and s. try no to let the s overlap itself. myabe make the 3d a little fatter too?

-Wings-
10-16-2008, 09:07 PM
Fin and your talking about me doing simples? Looks like you needa work on some your self, no hard feelings though ;). Also if it does why does it say skin?
These are old. (1week maybe)
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF17102008_00002.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF17102008_00001.jpg

MontanaPainter
10-16-2008, 09:42 PM
^work on simps
recent shit
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020538.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020539.jpg
CRITS!!!!!
bump...


come on guys

lawlcat
10-16-2008, 10:43 PM
rays i like the second one more, the R could use some work though. i wouldnt put adds on yet for the first one too.
skin your simps looks pretty good to me, ive never really had a problem with your stuff though.
dask the K doesnt really go with the rest.
gube keep on the simples, try getting your letters/bars the same size.
fin i dont really like the mini letters inside of the letters.

lazy simple, fucked up the bottom of the K.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00165.jpg

MontanaPainter
10-16-2008, 10:59 PM
make the top of the k thicker

thx for the crit :)

ESKiMO2
10-16-2008, 11:06 PM
Montana, the first blue and green one has great flow.

Sadistic.Child
10-16-2008, 11:17 PM
]


When'd you drop into fs

when he fuckin felt like it
you got a problem with FS?

bash, fat slobz

MontanaPainter
10-16-2008, 11:21 PM
Montana, the first blue and green one has great flow.
Thanks!

haha

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020540.jpg
changing it up
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020541.jpg
grandpa wanted me to this for him tonight
probably the 6th peice ive done today ha!
says hal btw

jersOneTIC
10-16-2008, 11:23 PM
kraft - do bars
wings - keep practicing...work on your tags
montana painter - good stuff, try thickening your outlines
lawlcat - the bar on the k is too small
using new prismas..
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/1331/skrt9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

RFI. SPit
10-17-2008, 12:37 AM
Little outline.. flow of the N is off :/
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/9251/photo50ng9.jpg
And something quick and goofy
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/4809/photo47eo3.jpg

Proper
10-17-2008, 12:51 AM
Thanks!

haha


changing it up
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020541.jpg
grandpa wanted me to this for him tonight
probably the 6th peice ive done today ha!
says hal btw

To Grandpa Hal!
Love ya, Nate

LOL

MontanaPainter
10-17-2008, 01:04 AM
lulz

proper your making me blush

stop it!

lulzdance

hal.cyon
10-17-2008, 01:23 AM
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/4603/007ze0.jpg

nice ones jers and zof.

drek10
10-17-2008, 03:22 AM
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1643.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1642.jpg

numberonestunna
10-17-2008, 09:17 AM
montana painter - rework your second letter. it looks kinda crammed. nice piece tho.
jers - really like that piece especially the S. only thing is give your R some space cuz its a little crammed.
zofone - love the colors on the second one. i would get rid of those red crosses and blocks around it tho.
hal.cyon - i like the character and the piece. by the s it gets really crammed.
jobr - im dont really like the first one but the second one is tight. nice tag too.

RFI. SPit
10-17-2008, 10:17 AM
That Hal sketch is pretty hawt

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3249/2948950130_646080875e_o.jpg

RFI. SPit
10-17-2008, 10:17 AM
That Hal sketch is pretty hawt

http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/8864/photo52ed7.jpg

BigBlueViolence
10-17-2008, 11:05 AM
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/8864/photo52ed7.jpg
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/4809/photo47eo3.jpg

I came buckets.

Ah<3rr
10-17-2008, 11:29 AM
Just posting
To let you guys know .. my PC got a virus .. and that iv had it cleaned and had everything wiped off ... and that i forgot my password to my MassAppeal account .. and forgot my Email i used to retrieve .. so i created a new account.

Peace.

MontanaPainter
10-17-2008, 11:54 AM
fuck the o on this peice
for the bravo battle
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020543.jpg

revid!
10-17-2008, 12:06 PM
havent been on here in foreverrr...
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/1296/cimg1288cg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/cimg1288cg9.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img386/cimg1288cg9.jpg/1/)
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/545/cimg1291eb5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/cimg1291eb5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img58/cimg1291eb5.jpg/1/)
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/9199/cimg1292wt8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/cimg1292wt8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img353/cimg1292wt8.jpg/1/)
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/9248/cimg1293ei2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/cimg1293ei2.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img128/cimg1293ei2.jpg/1/)
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/9818/sspx0042gi2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/sspx0042gi2.jpg/1/w480.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img359/sspx0042gi2.jpg/1/)
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7727/sspx0095uh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/sspx0095uh2.jpg/1/w480.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img136/sspx0095uh2.jpg/1/)
peace

MontanaPainter
10-17-2008, 01:21 PM
listnin to jers's advice
crits
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020545.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020546.jpg

nastonE
10-17-2008, 01:53 PM
montana - did you finish it? if not put an outline on the letters so i can see them better
revid- dope, get out of the toys forum :p
blue - digging those simples



http://i35.tinypic.com/2r7mq94.jpg
throwie and a simp

MontanaPainter
10-17-2008, 02:14 PM
diggin it

drek10
10-17-2008, 02:28 PM
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1638.jpg
not feelin the leg of the J

drek10
10-17-2008, 03:31 PM
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1646.jpg

mtown
10-17-2008, 03:57 PM
i think its nice!!!

hal.cyon
10-17-2008, 04:06 PM
http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/2356/009ea4.jpg

mr white. i think you would benefit from using flat bars. it appears your trying to keep a lot flow/movement in your pieces, but it just isn't working. maybe fatten them up a bit too. and the k is way off, i personally don't like the rope style of wrapping legs around other legs like cursive, but to each his own. keep working on it tho, i can see where you're goin.

Baron
10-17-2008, 04:47 PM
Hal im loving your style

HuntingLOLs
10-17-2008, 04:55 PM
hal, end the bar-connection earlier (so they look fluient).
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w46/hunting_09/Picture002.jpg?t=1224275446

nastonE
10-17-2008, 05:18 PM
white - thicken up those bars having the same width throughout the piece, and you would be surprised how much better it would look
hunt - the N isn't working for me but the other letters are tight
hal - digging it

bump for being on the bottom of last page


http://i35.tinypic.com/2r7mq94.jpg
throwie and a simp

b SQUARED 08
10-17-2008, 06:39 PM
mr. white- I can't really even read what that says (mainly the last 2 or 3? letters). Start using straight bars rather than curvy bars and break them down more. Like instead of using one solid, curvy bar for an S, try using 3 or 4 straight bars. Also, keep away from the knob ends and whatnot on your letters for now. Hope this helps...
Hal- Crazy flow on that one. Let's see some color...
Bohem- Pretty good simp, just be careful on that little extension on the O (almost looks like an e). Only part I think really needs work is the bottom right portion of the H leg. Not a bad handy either.

Repost, except I've colored a lot more in and added a few things... Almost done.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/VideoSnapshot-1-2.jpg

GIzUrD
10-17-2008, 06:57 PM
MR WHITE- your last two letters look like someone fucked up trying to make a pretzel... its the only way i can describe it

ZOF- your simpler stuff looks better.

LOGO- the last two look best, maybe without the arrows.

RAYS- like the A and Y the most

HAL and BOHEM- pretty good

B SQUARED- pretty colors

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/6418/kasxc8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ex with KAS... i fail

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/6868/whitehz0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/9769/allpinkrt5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
top of the G is too pointy i know

SANEKONE
10-17-2008, 07:36 PM
bottom page buuuuump for crits
gizurd that looks niiice

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/SDC11340.jpg
gotta love black flag :)
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/SDC11339.jpg
crits?

SANEKONE
10-17-2008, 07:36 PM
bottom page buuuuump for crits
gizurd that looks niiice

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/SDC11340.jpg
gotta love black flag :)
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/SDC11339.jpg
crits?

peace89
10-17-2008, 09:06 PM
i have no clue if what im doing is right or wrong need crits good and bad
thanks

and by the way SANEKONE fucking sick

(SoS)Viruz
10-17-2008, 09:21 PM
Thier's Some dope stuff up here. But we need to get the Toy thread back on Fire.
Well.... Hardcore Crit Time....

Peace- Dont worry about your 3D right now. Just do the bars your Doing and let you Steez change its self and as it dose you'll get better and probably will get a simple 3d down.

Lols- Try a lil Simplar. Like keep practince them bar you got going. and Clean up you letter Stucture a lot more ight.

Here my newest Sketch.
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0001.jpg



Gizard- That not your Best work. What happend to the Dopeness man!!??



Sane- That Color Style you got is DOPE. But you N,E,and K bars need a lot of work. Just try to change the up or make then a lil thicker.

Epoc
10-17-2008, 10:25 PM
nice virus, only thing id say is that the R overlaps a bit much.
sanek- ill, im a fan of that color square effect. (especially when its invert)
white- the usual crit. keep simple.
gizzable- fresh

seywhat
10-17-2008, 11:32 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage140.jpg
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage141.jpg
sloppy exchanges
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage142.jpg
newest sketch, crits would be cool :)

white- quit the loopy shit, use straight bars
tear- letters are gettin better, loose some of the notch things though. make the middle of the E the same thickness as the bars are
sanek- nice, real clean and good bars. keep sketchin
gizr- not feelin the kas at all, the other two are still steezy
hal- lookin good, maybe shorten some of the letters so they done overlap as much

peace89
10-17-2008, 11:39 PM
yay thanks alot for the crits ill go work on that
thanks

Jayz146
10-17-2008, 11:44 PM
Ive listened and kept my ass in da house and stuck ta paypa. And also Check owt my Characters on da toy char forum :)

BigBlueViolence
10-18-2008, 12:08 AM
Seyar- that red and blue one is sweet shit.

Jay- Not feelin it. I'm assuming you just started? You should probably read the New To Graff Thread.

"Bi2aR"
10-18-2008, 12:56 AM
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/Bizzy/CIMG0008-3.jpg

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/Bizzy/CIMG0003-14.jpg

Seyar-diging the zase and the red and blue one
Tear- nice except the part of the r that overlaps the a and the top part of the t seems to get smaller in width, not liking that
Gizurd-liking that second one

defy all
10-18-2008, 02:21 AM
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/9762/tasktp8oy5.jpg
This has been on my computer for a while I know it aint the greatest
I have drawn better but need to get batteries for my camera
I will post better drawings soon
crits please i know the a sucks

drek10
10-18-2008, 03:42 AM
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1648.jpg
from a dReam....it was more crazy...
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/thaddeusfp/IMG_1649.jpg

drek10
10-18-2008, 04:25 AM
-task- more even bars, take off extensions, top of T has potential

-bizar- bar off the top of the h is buggin me for some reason...but clean

-seyar-3ds cool....i like the s..maybe adjust top of Y and bottom of A to fill some negative space

-tear- dope piece...more highlights in the 3d would make me smile;)

-peace- C on last sketch looks like a G and bottom tag looks like DEAGE.....u can deff progress the first sketch tho

-sanek- diggin the handstyle homie....and color windows with drips r hott shit

-gizr- at first i didn't like that style but the more i look at it the sicker it gets.....G and R are pretty fresh to me

-squared- pretty dope 3d and its a clean ass piece

-nas- i like the yellow throwie better but i'm confused about the middle letter

-bohem- dope B and the black fragmenty things inside the letters r sweet

-hal- diggin the flow and lil extensions at the end of bars but the bottom of the E's crazy long

-mr.white- the last two letters have overlapping bars that dont match ur first three letters i think

-=joBer=-

kasone
10-18-2008, 07:03 AM
Eh 2 minute shiz.
http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/992/image0082va3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mass Appeal
10-18-2008, 07:36 AM
Your other stuff is better Kas ..

seywhat
10-18-2008, 09:18 AM
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http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage142.jpg

bump, thanks for the crits so far everyone

kas- im diggin that, just work on the bottom of the k
jobs- work on your j, the structure is way off. the rest of em are decent, im diggin the handy too. that dream thing is wild
task- bars
bizar- try that one with straight bars, maybe flip the bottom of the r around.

crimateNC
10-18-2008, 11:13 AM
i'm lazy, soooo... i'm posting one thing i did a month ago... about to upload more when i wake up
but 4 now this does...
~task- i'd thicken the bars, and don't make crazy ass swirly things haha :P
~job- that character/dream sketch things is dope... if u got the time or supplies i'd love to see it shaded and what not
~seyar- uniformity is ill, not oo simple but not too complicated also... nice

http://a265.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/78/l_7f7dc46541e674dee6793468a84730c0.jpg
I fucked up coloring it with the right arrow thingy haha
I love it though, i really dunno how my this (my second ever attempted 3d) turned out soo good in my opinion (considering i normally blow at this stuff)

I blame the headies.

EDIT: new stuff
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/61/l_7f3065578db843b38fa4e3a46d2694be.jpg
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/64/l_e2ab7f2c5b744058bc6586876f44fef1.jpg
new name too btw. its my illy.