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peace89
10-30-2008, 09:34 PM
need crits!!!

-Wings-
10-30-2008, 09:44 PM
Crit it if you like..
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2378.jpg


http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/shdyfifty510/1026082042.jpg

blackb00k g0t taken

Lawl my friend writes ecso.

kroc_oner
10-30-2008, 09:51 PM
yo skin are u in florida cause i just crossed sum kid who went over me but ya anyway its ok i guess but work on the k and i

lawlcat
10-30-2008, 09:57 PM
skin the K kind of looks like an R. looks good but the only thing i dont like are the little spaces missing.
ares your simples are sick.

meh.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00177.jpg

klic
10-30-2008, 10:07 PM
ares - those look fresh, but yah what mass said, fix up that s and that could look pretty nice

GIzUrD
10-30-2008, 10:57 PM
IM SCARED- the telephone pole looks pretty good, and on the picture with alot of stuff on it, theres a tag with a swirl below it, maybe you should work everything around that cuz it look pretty good. oh and press the enter key after each image.

synps
10-30-2008, 10:57 PM
Imscared- use bars and simples and give crits to get crits
shpel- that last piece is my fave
ares- that middle one is ill just fix the 3d on the little bar off to the left
duke- bold up the line on the bottom of the letters and the top of the 3d

Heres my exchange for atomik/srime
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/graff013.jpg
crits?

Atomik
10-30-2008, 11:24 PM
look like colors i would use haha as requested heres yours synps quicky 2 pager
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/synps.jpg

NoCanControl
10-31-2008, 12:22 AM
word...

edit. my bad.. image was way tooo biggg.

IlikePie
10-31-2008, 12:31 AM
Synps, your letters individually are pretty solid, except your N, but you're lacking flow. Your piece doesn't all connect together into one solid unit.

Imscared
10-31-2008, 12:36 AM
no can control- sick.
atomic- love it
esco- your c looks like an e, the o seems kinda wiggly too. besides that i like it :]
wings- looks real good but idk if i like the block pieces that are in there
klic- i like youre toss's and youre alphabet a lot
gizurd- thanks for telin me about the enter thing... didnt know :/

everyone thanks for the crits!!!

NoCanControl
10-31-2008, 12:38 AM
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/Picture087-1.jpg

lets try this again.

Epoc
10-31-2008, 01:53 AM
nocando- gnarly...bit hard to read. 3d is especially coo-al, i can see it being easy to fuck that method up.
atomik-nice , P is a bit strange compared to rest (top part)
snypes - nice n clean
duke - getting there... keep more simp?

still just working it....
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/1675/dsc00996rp4.jpg
hating my K's especially

ps: scardy cat your telephone pole is atmospheric as shit. props.

mtown
10-31-2008, 05:18 AM
epoc:idontlikeit try to make the letters fatter

Infoe
10-31-2008, 07:53 AM
http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/7686/image00132ev5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
2 second simple, haha..
Gunna paint it on monday, will have been the first thing I've painted in about 3 months, gotta keep it simple! Haha

peace89
10-31-2008, 09:19 AM
infoe- the o is kind of weird cause of the line shit on the right exe for that i like it

calculating infinity
10-31-2008, 09:25 AM
Calculating Infinity- Yeah theres others out there sure. But why not post a good one? I mean some of those are alright but there kinda eh. You couldve at least chosen a burner to prove your point.
you are a fool, that guy burns you any day of the week.
any one of those is better than anything youve ever done.

Imscared
10-31-2008, 10:47 AM
Epoc- pretty good but you're right your K's are kinda weird. just keep doing simples and you'll get it (something i really need to do too) and mtowns right, make em a little fatter and i think it'd be dope

"Riot"
10-31-2008, 11:02 AM
Resk.
try bars

TastySesamcrew
10-31-2008, 11:40 AM
No Can Control - Killin it!
Resk - I like the top K
Info - Nice simple!

jupsick
10-31-2008, 12:42 PM
nocan control im loving it its awsome !!
info solid pimps awsome keep it up but 1 thing i dont like is the F thw lower bar of the F is small i mean really small commpared to all the others..
resk...umm i dont know how that style is called but i dont like it one bit
it looks off at all sides exept maybe the couloring

SageGSCnj
10-31-2008, 12:58 PM
you are a fool, that guy burns you any day of the week.
any one of those is better than anything youve ever done.

Did I say ANYWHERE in my post that im better? Hmm no I dont think I did. So get some fuckin specs or learn to read. I said you couldve chosen better shit to prove your point. They're definitely better than me but I can see myself gettin better than that. Therefore fuck you ill keep my name...dick

And resk the one thing that gives me a headache everytime i see your shit is the R. I just dont like the bottom right bar the way its pushed out and down. It stops resembling an R at that point

mtown
10-31-2008, 01:41 PM
how do you make a S with bars could someone send a pic i need inspiration or a tutorial or somethin

klic
10-31-2008, 03:37 PM
^^just the same way as you would any other letter

maybe these will help


http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SAKEPiece.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELPenPiece.jpg

mtown
10-31-2008, 04:43 PM
thanks man i will use it but not bite it;)

lawlcat
10-31-2008, 05:00 PM
hot shit info, nice simple. lets see it painted.
great colors resk, and an interesting style.
feeling it cancontrol, keep going with that style.

quickie before work.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00178-1.jpg

Thrice
10-31-2008, 07:26 PM
Since it's Halloween I'll repost this bad boy.
http://i35.tinypic.com/2ezhfo9.jpg

Czar One
10-31-2008, 07:55 PM
Need to add a wash.
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/penandink.jpg

Info, I think it would look a little bit better if the lower cross bar of that F was a bit bigger.
Ahem, I think that the spiderwebs kind of make the rest of the fill empty-esque.

Epoc
10-31-2008, 08:45 PM
teh lowly czar -illzn, repost after wash. only thing im not totally feeling is the grime monster. to me itd look prime without it or the bricks.
im speaking..ahem - good structure, but i personally dont like the way you bent your bars (H especially) and how the bend of M is opposite the rest.
duke nuke em- defiantly getting there, id say just keep bar widths consistent over all the letters. (E has no fat)
infomercial - nice...only one letter with a plate?

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/7856/dsc00998no8.jpg

Mass Appeal
10-31-2008, 09:05 PM
Thrice thats sick man dope work.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-32.jpg

Thought id bust a simple considering i preach to do them all the time .. ^

And ...

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-33.jpg

Abit more line work and colour then im finished

klic
10-31-2008, 09:14 PM
that last bump didnt work so ill just upload a whole bunch of crap from the last couple weeks

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_006.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/NASKPieceExchange.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELBlackbookPageOfThrows.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELRedThrow.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SAKEPiece.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELPenPiece.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SYNPSSimpsExchange.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHRedThrow.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELThrow.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/KASESimplesBattle.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/TEMPSimplesExchange.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/DASKPieceExchange.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHBlockLettersWithBlack3D.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_002.jpg

theres enough for now haha

SYNPS - keep rocking those simples

esco and imscared - DO SIMPLES and USE BARS

bump

Narler
10-31-2008, 09:21 PM
Hey first time posting, try to keep it positive.

Chalkboard fun.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v622/Felix_T/DSC00317.jpg

Quick sketch blockies.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v622/Felix_T/Narl1.jpg

Done a while ago for friend of mine.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v622/Felix_T/DSC00069.jpg

Peace.

Thrice
10-31-2008, 11:32 PM
(to Mass) Appreciate that man, and nice shit as well. Can't wait until you start producing some graff characters man.

Sarto
10-31-2008, 11:50 PM
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/002-11.jpg
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/006-2-1.jpg
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/005-1.jpg
info - like the simple man ,
resk - keep progressing that style its looking pretty dope ,
klic - i see your sketching hard , keep it up dude

synps
11-01-2008, 12:16 AM
resk- like that simple character needs work though
mass- ill as always
klic- keep at it
narler- new to graffiti thread
sarto- feeling your stuff. I don't like the eye for the r though

Halloween Collab with Skerso and Phail (character)
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/graff015.jpg

mtown
11-01-2008, 06:32 AM
http://www.plaatjesupload.nl/bekijk/2008/11/01/1225535065-80.jpg
http://www.plaatjesupload.nl/bekijk/2008/11/01/1225535432-860.jpg

Kraft561
11-01-2008, 10:00 AM
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff012.jpg

mtown
11-01-2008, 12:22 PM
any crits for my sketches above??
gube:add a shadow and keep it simple maybe put some work on the g

white
11-01-2008, 12:40 PM
mtown - simples, and work on your shadow
shpel - killer 3D
narl - give crits to get em
synps - nice halloween piece

pandemik
11-01-2008, 01:18 PM
are there any markers that just do better for black books, im yet to find any I really like.

SageGSCnj
11-01-2008, 01:38 PM
Resk- That R is lookin wayyyy better. Now im startin to like it haha
Gube- Your already doin simples but just reallllly work on keepin the bars very consistent. I see your tryin but its still comin out sketchy.
Synps/Skerso/Phail- Diggin all 3 of your works in that piece. Great collab
Shpel- They're all aight but 2 things. 1 there alllll bottom of the page. Lets see a piece in the center with full letters. And 2 the S doesnt do it for me. But still decent
Ahem- The way they bend opposite each other is throwin it off a little. That and the way your E overlaps the M looks weird without the 3d overlapping also. But good letter structure
Sarto- Lookin good. Maybe just fatten it a little
Mass- Thats your idea of a simple huh? haha but I like it. Now whats the trick? Im gonna guess Tre Flip

My S looks like crap. My 3d looks like crap also. And the colors look much better in person but oh well.

http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff350/sagegsc/Spec.jpg
Crits?

Kraft561
11-01-2008, 01:48 PM
Sage- the colors are siiiccckk
M-town- i keep hearin it too but try to keep it simple
Synps- that pumpkin is the fuckin shit

Animal
11-01-2008, 01:53 PM
Thrice thats sick man dope work.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/lastscan-32.jpg

Thought id bust a simple considering i preach to do them all the time .. ^



I can't fucking read that.

AnteUp
11-01-2008, 01:57 PM
i'm pretty sure it says masoe

Animal
11-01-2008, 02:02 PM
If you are 'pretty sure', then it isn't a simple. You have to know.

Baron
11-01-2008, 02:23 PM
Animal, not everyting has to be simple.

Kraft561
11-01-2008, 02:30 PM
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff013.jpg

-Wings-
11-01-2008, 03:55 PM
Animal, not everyting has to be simple.

Well you guys sometimes inply that everything should be.. :p

Anyways. I just drew this not a fan of my N tho.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2381.jpg

TastySesamcrew
11-01-2008, 04:54 PM
Naw man the N is good. Dope sketch bro

jupsick
11-01-2008, 04:57 PM
skin u saw the sketch info did? the solid simp?
can u show me one of yours like that?

-Wings-
11-01-2008, 05:18 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2383.jpg

pandemik
11-01-2008, 05:20 PM
someone please tell me a decent brand of markers for sketchin'

hazetheone
11-01-2008, 05:33 PM
everyone needs to stop bumping their shit so damn much
if no one comments or crits use your head crit yourself and draw something better
mass-your style is cool but just do one piece and switch it up then go back it will help a lot i think
klic-i will personally punch you in the gut if you bump your entire black book one more time

smooth_nuts
11-01-2008, 05:34 PM
prisma,sharpie,elmers painters,deco's,fine/medium tipped woodcrafts,ec5t.

wings-YES!
keep doing that(that simple not the shit on the last page)
but extend the top part of your s a bit to kill some of that negitive space ;)
and work on your shadow

Infoe
11-01-2008, 05:36 PM
Well you guys sometimes inply that everything should be.. :p

Anyways. I just drew this not a fan of my N tho.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2381.jpg

They imply it when you've never done simples and constantly try whack 3d/wildstyle shit..

Anyway, it's pretty easy to read..
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/1551/lastscan32ho5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-Wings-
11-01-2008, 05:38 PM
I can do simple, and all you do is hate my stuff anyways.
And to be honest I couldnt read that at all untill you outline it.

klic
11-01-2008, 05:43 PM
everyone needs to stop bumping their shit so damn much
if no one comments or crits use your head crit yourself and draw something better
mass-your style is cool but just do one piece and switch it up then go back it will help a lot i think
klic-i will personally punch you in the gut if you bump your entire black book one more time

1. its not my entire blackbook
2. i bumped it once
and 3. if im giving crits i dont see why its a problem

hazetheone
11-01-2008, 05:45 PM
shut up and go cry about it
your shit isnt that fucking bad you just take advise horribly and bitch a lot
do a few simples and post them
make everyone happy if you care so much

.......fucking rant mode today

edit: this was to wings

pandemik
11-01-2008, 05:50 PM
thanks to smooth nuts, and one last thing, colored pencils?

hazetheone
11-01-2008, 06:11 PM
http://i450.photobucket.com/albums/qq229/benrejoice/116.jpg
http://i450.photobucket.com/albums/qq229/benrejoice/117.jpg
http://i450.photobucket.com/albums/qq229/benrejoice/118.jpg
http://i450.photobucket.com/albums/qq229/benrejoice/115.jpg
for talking so much

Maste
11-01-2008, 08:30 PM
^ dude no beef i actually like the styule a lot but it looks like it reads gay-er...how do you pronounce it haah i liek the throws the most

klic
11-01-2008, 09:12 PM
Shpel- They're all aight but 2 things. 1 there alllll bottom of the page. Lets see a piece in the center with full letters




i was wondering how long it would take before someone noticed that lol, it just seems so much easier sketching at the bottom of the page. il try and post one in the center soon

exchange i did with synps
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SYNPSSimpsExchangeNumber2.jpg

caer - looks fresh, awesome letter structure. on your e on the very bottom piece, i think it would look a lot better if it didnt have the big lip on your bottom bar, and the middle bar wasnt so wide (i suck at explaining shit)

skin - you defently dont need to go any simpler than that last simple but dont try and do crazy shit like you normally do

gube - read the new to graffiti thread and use bars

spec - im not a fan of your s either but overall it has good flow and pretty good letter structurre

mtown - keep working with bars

synps - looks pretty good but it would look a lot better if you rounded the ends of your bars instead of making them all pointy and what not

sarto - good letters and coloring, id just widen your bars a little

narl - read the new to graff thread

crits please

Kraft561
11-01-2008, 09:41 PM
Ive read the new to Graff thread and i DO use bars so what am i doin wrong cuz everyone keeps tellin me the same thing
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff014-1.jpg

Maste
11-01-2008, 09:58 PM
see this : | that is a bar / is a bar _ is a bar...magnify those by 425 and make something out of them...none of those have little bumps or arrows at then end...all of them are straight those are bars. also space your letters out more for now until you can get the actual letters down. look at he keyboard... on the G goes the top part end halfway through? does it end in a jagged line or a straight diagonal line? does the corssbar touch it on the left side? you have to make letters before you can make graffiti letters

Kraft561
11-01-2008, 10:09 PM
alright thanks for the advice

SageGSCnj
11-01-2008, 10:13 PM
Resk- That R is lookin wayyyy better. Now im startin to like it haha
Gube- Your already doin simples but just reallllly work on keepin the bars very consistent. I see your tryin but its still comin out sketchy.
Synps/Skerso/Phail- Diggin all 3 of your works in that piece. Great collab
Shpel- They're all aight but 2 things. 1 there alllll bottom of the page. Lets see a piece in the center with full letters. And 2 the S doesnt do it for me. But still decent
Ahem- The way they bend opposite each other is throwin it off a little. That and the way your E overlaps the M looks weird without the 3d overlapping also. But good letter structure
Sarto- Lookin good. Maybe just fatten it a little
Mass- Thats your idea of a simple huh? haha but I like it. Now whats the trick? Im gonna guess Tre Flip

My S looks like crap. My 3d looks like crap also. And the colors look much better in person but oh well.

http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff350/sagegsc/Spec.jpg
Crits?

Bottom page bump (regardless what haze says lol)

And Gube the whole thing is they are bars sure but theyre not clean. Can you look at all those bars and honestly say those are straight and clean? Sometimes its not how much you do with a piece but how clean it comes out. I see basic pieces on bridges that are clean as hell and say wow thats sick

Epoc
11-01-2008, 10:58 PM
I was typing a crit for you earlier, but then realized I pretty much said exactly what you did so tossed it....bottom of S, could be cleaner + 3d, not a fan of fill.
glad you like the R more ;P
But overall keep up the good work.

jupsick
11-02-2008, 12:07 AM
wings you know why u cant read any of masses things? becouse your structure is way off!
and yes its true if u dont undarstand how to build letters right u cant undarstand other peoples letters and how they did them
so the point is keep doing solid simples
cuz the simple u showed isnt much of a brag to you you know...

MontanaPainter
11-02-2008, 12:24 AM
spec make the p leg longer

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020616.jpg http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020617.jpg
before after
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020614.jpg
crits

white
11-02-2008, 01:05 AM
skin - killer simple
hazetheone - the 3rd pic down, nice style developing kinda look like mass's
gube - simples simples simples man i had the same problem write your name like 100 times
spec - nice fills and dots
rays - great form, on the bottom one make the y the same size as the others and fix your 3D on your S on the right, it looks to crooked

pandemik
11-02-2008, 01:11 AM
Ok so obviously this aint that good, but I submitted it to the throw up battle just to test the water, crit please?


http://i522.photobucket.com/albums/w342/thefunkywizard/257.jpg

MontanaPainter
11-02-2008, 01:20 AM
n is weak

not digging the slant theme either, but that not a throwie, its a straight


http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020618.jpg
fuck the y and s

pandemik
11-02-2008, 01:23 AM
yeah i know, still workin'

the s doesn't bother, the y is ok I guess, maybe just outta place

PegCityBoy
11-02-2008, 01:52 AM
yo spec you from winnipeg?

Epoc
11-02-2008, 02:00 AM
hannah montan - R and A start strong then (R especially) Y and S become limp and sloppy like impotency. what gives?

MontanaPainter
11-02-2008, 02:33 AM
idk man

workin on the y and s now

new peice good hella good flow

old school ish


post up tomorrooowwww

MarOne...
11-02-2008, 02:52 AM
n is weak

not digging the slant theme either, but that not a throwie, its a straight


http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020618.jpg
fuck the y and s

Don't waste your time on the "OMGLOOK!" fills right now, but concentrate on your letter structure, it needs some work.

smooth_nuts
11-02-2008, 07:32 AM
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1122.jpg
muh name is dope but you can call me de!

Kraft561
11-02-2008, 09:50 AM
^^^^^ yo thats sick
new word i kno its kinda sloppy but i like it better than gube
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff016.jpg

SageGSCnj
11-02-2008, 11:07 AM
Thanks for the crits everybody. And no nowhere near winnipeg. Dirty Jerz actually.

kant- Its gettin cleaner but theyre still not right. You gotta take the width of that first bar on the left of the K and copy that to every other bar in the piece. You started fat for that bar then just got really skinny for the rest. But you are doin better so take this advice and just keep goin. Maybe try a ruler till you get better with it.
Smooth- Diggin it man. Ive only seen simples so far from you so im likin the change
Rays- Just as you said I dont like the Y and S. But that R especially is sick.I like those drab colors on the other piece you posted just before. Looks gloomy haha. Only part I didnt like there was the 2nd extension jumpin out of the bottom of the A
Slant- Not feelin it
Kaer- I like your shit and its all clean but it looks like you bit Mass a little hard on the one piece. And on the throw it looks like you bit Smooth a little too much

7nationarmy
11-02-2008, 11:16 AM
dope..i like it
rays.. i told u back at the oz

http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG1609.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/GetAttachmentaspx-2.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG1566.jpg
crits and hates are welcome :D

7nationarmy
11-02-2008, 11:19 AM
dope..i like it
rays.. i told u back at the oz

http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG1609.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/GetAttachmentaspx-2.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG1566.jpg
crits and hates are welcome :D

klic
11-02-2008, 11:20 AM
i was wondering how long it would take before someone noticed that lol, it just seems so much easier sketching at the bottom of the page. il try and post one in the center soon

exchange i did with synps
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SYNPSSimpsExchangeNumber2.jpg

caer - looks fresh, awesome letter structure. on your e on the very bottom piece, i think it would look a lot better if it didnt have the big lip on your bottom bar, and the middle bar wasnt so wide (i suck at explaining shit)

skin - you defently dont need to go any simpler than that last simple but dont try and do crazy shit like you normally do

gube - read the new to graffiti thread and use bars

spec - im not a fan of your s either but overall it has good flow and pretty good letter structurre

mtown - keep working with bars

synps - looks pretty good but it would look a lot better if you rounded the ends of your bars instead of making them all pointy and what not

sarto - good letters and coloring, id just widen your bars a little

narl - read the new to graff thread

crits please

bump

for a battle coming up

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SPETBattle.jpg

crits

kant - keep all of the bars the same width

smooth - looks fresh except the attachment on the bottom left of your d isnt really doing it for me

rays - what montana said, focus more on the letters and not the coloring, and id thicken up your letters just a bit

slant - keep all of the letters the same size and make surre the bars are the same width

lawlcat
11-02-2008, 11:24 AM
hot shit 7nation, middle one is my favorite.
liking the new stuff smooth, only thing id change is how the E seems to like fold into itself? if that makes sense? try adding another letter and see how it looks.
kant keep up with those simples.
rays i always like your fills, but the Y and the S are sloppy and just seem to flail around.

new outline, still working on the E.
DOK
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00179.jpg

pandemik
11-02-2008, 11:27 AM
thamks for the crits guys I'll keep working.

"Riot"
11-02-2008, 12:36 PM
didnt have room for the tr.
so i just did ash.

crit?

http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/WebCam_20081102_1020.jpg
dok.Simples. dont try to advance to quick ya know.
icko-ill.that karak pic i want to see it finished.. exchange?
kant.keep at it.
rays.good coloring. just work on letters.
slaht.same size letters and bars. do that.

MontanaPainter
11-02-2008, 12:52 PM
thicken up the bar in the middle of the s

but good

:)

peace89
11-02-2008, 12:57 PM
riot - dont like the little extention
pandemik - make your bars thicker and try to make them all the same size
smooth nuts- dope
7nationarmy- dont really like the color for the first one but beside that its fucking sick

MontanaPainter
11-02-2008, 01:41 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020621.jpg
chilled on the fill
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020619.jpg
a y in the minibook

PBOI
11-02-2008, 01:55 PM
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb12/7evenUp/PICT0161.jpg
just tried ghost for a change, i usually write pboi or blank..
also, new handstyle... not too great, and tips?
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb12/7evenUp/PICT0217.jpg
(was on a wall in my basement, so now it looks like i used crayons or somehting)

PBOI
11-02-2008, 02:00 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020621.jpg
chilled on the fill
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020619.jpg
a y in the minibook

you nazi. that s looks like a swastika lol

MontanaPainter
11-02-2008, 02:17 PM
what s?

and...
what???

PBOI
11-02-2008, 02:27 PM
the y ( i accidenatlly said s) in ray looks kinda like the nazi symbol

i liek the 3d tho

smooth_nuts
11-02-2008, 02:32 PM
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1122.jpg
bump for crunch bars..

PBOI
11-02-2008, 02:38 PM
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb12/7evenUp/PICT0161.jpg
just tried ghost for a change, i usually write pboi or blank..
also, new handstyle... not too great, and tips?
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb12/7evenUp/PICT0217.jpg
(was on a wall in my basement, so now it looks like i used crayons or somehting)

bump?

i like your style, and the 3d looks sick, but its a little off in some places...

Kraft561
11-02-2008, 03:20 PM
7nation thats a sick looney tune sketch
lawlcat im liking the K
I was just messin with the bottom sketch but crits please

http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff017.jpg

klic
11-02-2008, 03:28 PM
pboi, you dont bump something on the same page that you posted 4 posts ago

kant - thats looking alot better keep doing those simples

Epoc
11-02-2008, 03:29 PM
pboi - tag is ewwwww...sketch is..on the right track...lose the extensions and work on the letters.
kant -u got bars, now perfect them. (little kink in bottom leg of K is uncool)
smooth like angel pussy- nice 2 letters. only thing id say is top right and far bottom left extensions of the D are a bit phat. and make er LONGER ;D

-Wings-
11-02-2008, 03:30 PM
wings you know why u cant read any of masses things? becouse your structure is way off!
and yes its true if u dont undarstand how to build letters right u cant undarstand other peoples letters and how they did them
so the point is keep doing solid simples
cuz the simple u showed isnt much of a brag to you you know...

No because theres such a thing called to much.
Jesus, I give you a simple and still agian all you do is bitch some more.

And for the record the people here are the only ones who have said I have bad letter structure, the people on 12oz and pg seem to think different. Its only because all of you here got it fixated into your head that I suck and I always will. Loose the attitude.

Infoe
11-02-2008, 03:40 PM
There is no attitude you little faggot kid, people tell you to practice simple shit and you show one and go back to useless extensions.
Go and tell mum that the people on the internet made you sad.
Even your simples aren't perfect, that's why they want more. You do more simples and you can work shit up from there. You still have no idea about extensions and how to use them, you can't just throw random shit in your piece, you can't just make some letters curve against others, you actually need to think about how the shit works. There is some skill to putting together a piece.

smooth_nuts
11-02-2008, 03:46 PM
wanna talk suck!?
look at amk when he wasfirst on here
he took peoples advice and shit
instead of bitch like a look butthurt 12year old
and look at his shit
damn
get over your self
acting like your the greatest thing to happen to graffiti and shit.

-Wings-
11-02-2008, 03:49 PM
Im not the greatest thing to hit graffiti, but I know im certianly not the worst out there.
It just bugs me how you guys go crazy over nothing.

PBOI
11-02-2008, 03:53 PM
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb12/7evenUp/PICT0224-1.jpg
any better?
btw wings this is 7evenup from sc

smooth_nuts
11-02-2008, 03:54 PM
wongs-CAUSE YOU DONT LISTNE WORTH A SHIT DUDES ARE TRYING TO HELP YOU AND YOU ACT ALL:
no.
im better then everyone here.
suck my nuts.
i'l be the next c0p3 tW0 in like 3 months watch faggots!
i hate you.
blah blah blah.
edit*
pboi-you should kill it with the wanna be philly and just do a nice simple handstyle

-Wings-
11-02-2008, 04:04 PM
Yeah I realized it was you 7evenup :).
Its hard to listen to everyone... I like my stuff. And I never said I wouldnt listen. But you guys are telling me to go back to stage one, and Im sure as hell not doing that. I never ever ever ever ever ever ever said I was once better then anyone here, Nor saying I was the best or anything like that.

Infoe
11-02-2008, 04:10 PM
Even if you think your stuff it's cool. That's you. Other people who have been in the game for years know what's up.
I started out thinking my tags were fresh, and now I even look at shit from a couple of months ago and think, what the fuck?
I only got better because I took advice.

-Wings-
11-02-2008, 04:42 PM
Ill take advice, as long as it means I dont have to go back to stage one. Because I have writen before, and my early on shit from about a year ago sucks hard cock. Here Ill post some.. (I used to write jero, and the voze was the only thing I ever did with that name)
Old
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_0490-1.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/000_0274.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/000_0231.jpg

Most Recent 3
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2381.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2378.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2377.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2376.jpg


Now which ones are better?....

MontanaPainter
11-02-2008, 04:57 PM
skin haha

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020623.jpg

crits

"Riot"
11-02-2008, 05:07 PM
didnt have room for the tr.
so i just did ash.

crit?

http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/WebCam_20081102_1020.jpg
dok.Simples. dont try to advance to quick ya know.
icko-ill.that karak pic i want to see it finished.. exchange?
kant.keep at it.
rays.good coloring. just work on letters.
slaht.same size letters and bars. do that.

bumpercars..
crits?

JETPACK!!
11-02-2008, 05:21 PM
skin, your shit isnt bad. it's not dope. but it has its understandment of bars. keep sketching, each sketch will be slightly different and you can pick out the little things in each sketch that look dope. add em together and sketch it 100 more times.

who cares what other cats say, just do your thing and keep sketching. id drop all the extensions until your letters flow well enough. then add shit on and its basically adding letters onto your letters. extensions are a whole new ballgame.

smooth_nuts
11-02-2008, 05:26 PM
what im not good enough for crits any more jetty!?

-Wings-
11-02-2008, 05:36 PM
THANK YOU! Thats what I was planning on doing, also you cant get good at extentions if you dont try :/. And im still trying to get it to flow more, I got a sketch coming now.

JETPACK!!
11-02-2008, 05:39 PM
what im not good enough for crits any more jetty!?

me telling you what to do is like the austrians telling the germans how to fight WW2.

you actually know what your doing. keep it up though, i really really like what im seeing, do a full word sketch with those last letters

smooth_nuts
11-02-2008, 05:48 PM
haha i know..i just like hearign it every once and a while :l

SageGSCnj
11-02-2008, 05:53 PM
http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff350/sagegsc/Spec.jpg
Crits?

Only got like 2 crits.

Kant- Lookin muchhhhh better. Now keep doin that over and over and over. And yeah lose the little kink on the bottom right bar of your k.
Wings- Your shit is good but yeah the extensions are out of place. If your letters were dope enough you wouldnt need extensions
Rays- I like the Ray piece
Pboi- Fatten up the bars on the piece. As for the handstyles i dont like any of em. Your using basic ugly letters and then throwin stuff around it. Develop the letters before adding in anything. Like the ghost handstyle. There is not one letter in those that has style. It just looks like my handwriting back in high school lol
Riot- I like it just fatten up the center bars of the H and S and lose the little extensions on those letters.

JETPACK!!
11-02-2008, 06:01 PM
haha i know..i just like hearign it every once and a while :l

your dope like poppy seeds :)

-Wings-
11-02-2008, 06:06 PM
This is not that great, I lost my camera. So I had to use my scanner which is not big enough so its cut off a tiny bit. :(
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF02112008_00000.jpg

Also Im going to try a different K next time.

JETPACK!!
11-02-2008, 06:08 PM
keep the spines of the bars flowing the same direction. the I fights the flow, heavily.

-Wings-
11-02-2008, 06:13 PM
I was thinking that I could make the I and N facing a different way, but the S K could flow the same way. If you catch my drift. (S>K><I<N ........ The <> faces where it would be bent.) But the next sketch Ill make the bent the same way.

GETRAD
11-02-2008, 06:31 PM
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo88-1.jpg

idk i wanna learn nice fills, just fucking around for my girlfriends sister
she mite let me put it onher wall

JETPACK!!
11-02-2008, 06:38 PM
I was thinking that I could make the I and N facing a different way, but the S K could flow the same way. If you catch my drift. (S>K><I<N ........ The <> faces where it would be bent.) But the next sketch Ill make the bent the same way.

i saw what you were trying, but it isnt working. keep your flow the same direction for now. then you can try harder shit later. thats like trying 3 different vanishing points in 3D but not knowing how to do one properly


just fucking around with my girlfriends sister
she mite let me put it on her wall

fix'd.

try stupid shit when doing fills, half the time it'll look dope.

GETRAD
11-02-2008, 06:44 PM
hahah
ya man i added stars after in the fill
but it killed it, practice makes perfect i guess

Kraft561
11-02-2008, 07:00 PM
ey i kno everyone says do simples but how long do yu think itll take me to start doin extensions and dope lookin shit

b SQUARED 08
11-02-2008, 07:07 PM
ey i kno everyone says do simples but how long do yu think itll take me to start doin extensions and dope lookin shit

It all depends on how much you practice, how well you take crits, how quickly you learn, etc. There is no set "time" it will take until you learn to use extensions...

klic
11-02-2008, 07:09 PM
youll gradually start to make your shit more complex whenever you sketch

SageGSCnj
11-02-2008, 07:32 PM
what makes you think simples cant be dope? They can look sicker than wildstyle if you do it right. The fill can help too. Maybe try fillin one of your pieces. You'll like it alot more im sure. But really i hate to say it but you got a long way to go. Just gotta keep doin em and doin em and doin em. If your that serious about wanting to learn graff then you shouldnt have any problem doing simples for the next 2 years even

CreetchaFeetcha22
11-02-2008, 07:51 PM
I love cock sucking simples.

http://img374.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bs006da1.jpg

But everytime i do them i try to do to much and i ruin everything. Just like these two.

http://img381.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bs011ys9.jpg

Oh how the 3d blows bagoina in this one. And the frankenstien is gay as shit

fromthegrave
11-02-2008, 08:10 PM
sage- fix ur 3d
wings- chill with the extensions fo a bit.
getrad- uhhh, simples. and dont put that on anyones walll!!!!!!

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture010-1.jpg
kids liked this one so i tried to stay in the lines.

MontanaPainter
11-02-2008, 08:22 PM
skin haha

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020623.jpg

crits
bottom bumps

fromthegrave
11-02-2008, 08:25 PM
dont like the R.

gnustreetfool
11-02-2008, 08:43 PM
http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l273/gnustreetfool/Photo63.jpg
http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l273/gnustreetfool/Photo62.jpg

R.I.P. HEY ARNOLD
http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l273/gnustreetfool/AUT_0009.jpg

gnustreetfool
11-02-2008, 08:44 PM
http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l273/gnustreetfool/Photo63.jpg
http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l273/gnustreetfool/Photo62.jpg

R.I.P. HEY ARNOLD
http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l273/gnustreetfool/AUT_0009.jpg

fromthegrave
11-02-2008, 08:52 PM
thats all whack.
do simples, use blocks. the whole 9 yard shit. ur gunna hear this a lot if u dont listen.

klic
11-02-2008, 09:04 PM
throw exchange

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/EASENThrowExchange.jpg

gnut - what fromthegrave said, but that throw isnt too bad

rays - looks good, im not really feeling your s (id make the top bar of your s slant towards your y more) but you can probably start to complicate your simples some more

ares - that looks so fresh, id just bring your letters a little bit closer together and not so stretched

crits...

PEST!
11-02-2008, 10:06 PM
sage- fix ur 3d
wings- chill with the extensions fo a bit.
getrad- uhhh, simples. and dont put that on anyones walll!!!!!!

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture010-1.jpg
kids liked this one so i tried to stay in the lines.

super sick. dig this alot

pandemik
11-02-2008, 10:09 PM
http://i522.photobucket.com/albums/w342/thefunkywizard/simple1.jpg

First simple i've tried, took the advice and tried to keep the bars the same. Id appreciate crits feedbacks and advice.

klic
11-02-2008, 10:12 PM
charac, crappy webcam picture...

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/FaceCharac.jpg

anok - keep working on it, make your k look like it does on your keyboard

pandemik
11-02-2008, 10:17 PM
thanks man.

pandemik
11-02-2008, 10:27 PM
http://i522.photobucket.com/albums/w342/thefunkywizard/simple28-2-08.jpg

I just did this one.

pandemik
11-02-2008, 10:29 PM
fromthegrave- Kickin' piece man.

revid!
11-02-2008, 10:35 PM
tryin mine at some phillies....
lemme know what ya think
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/562/sspx0210my3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/sspx0210my3.jpg/1/w480.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img377/sspx0210my3.jpg/1/)
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/3258/sspx0211zf5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/sspx0211zf5.jpg/1/w480.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img231/sspx0211zf5.jpg/1/)
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/3131/sspx0213aj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/sspx0213aj4.jpg/1/w480.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img375/sspx0213aj4.jpg/1/)

MontanaPainter
11-02-2008, 10:42 PM
not bad
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020626.jpg
what should i do for the backround

smooth_nuts
11-02-2008, 10:46 PM
maybe im lookign at it wrong man but the little square shits on top of all your lettersmake it look like a just a grouping of e's haha...

revid!
11-02-2008, 10:51 PM
ya deff looking at it wrong but its cool.
gotta hit me up smooth i need to see you start killin these mean streets wit me

klic
11-02-2008, 10:56 PM
maybe im lookign at it wrong man but the little square shits on top of all your lettersmake it look like a just a grouping of e's haha...

yah thats basically all im seein too

smooth_nuts
11-02-2008, 10:56 PM
haha idk bro,they all look like e's to me
sep the first one...
but i think the first one would be dope with out the square shits

...i believe i still have your number man, so i'll deff hit you up soon no doubt
edit*fucking klic posting second before me and shit
bastard.

revid!
11-02-2008, 10:59 PM
word. yah do dat. see whats been good homie. ill fill you in

smooth_nuts
11-02-2008, 11:11 PM
haha dat...
anyway,some flicks cause i hate post with out flicks
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1074.jpg
can not draw cracks worth a shit!
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1128.jpg
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1133.jpg
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1122.jpg
bumping this bitch once again....

osnapizzel
11-02-2008, 11:29 PM
smooth, trueee

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/3503/crly6.jpg

MarOne...
11-02-2008, 11:50 PM
some of those letters made me say 'oh snap!', while others just made me groan. You're getting there.

MontanaPainter
11-02-2008, 11:52 PM
word^
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020628.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020627.jpg
first one is wizzack

white
11-03-2008, 12:01 AM
gnus - simples
anok - simples and dont connect the top of you A to the side thats wack as hell
montana - killer 3D
smooth - diggin the bottom one

CRITS POR FAVOR ......sorry about the sideways pic, and let me know how my tag looks to

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0002-1.jpg
TOP ONE IS BASICALLY PIECE BLOCKED OUT BY TAG
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0003-1.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0006.jpg

GETRAD
11-03-2008, 12:11 AM
nukes- i like it, i just think you need to work on your shading and just draw more

fuck i need to learn fills:
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo89.jpg

osnapizzel
11-03-2008, 12:22 AM
smooth, trueee

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/3503/crly6.jpg

bottom bumps

thanks mar which ones did you like?

Epoc
11-03-2008, 12:31 AM
nice letters, personally none made me barf cept maybe the 5 shaped S. Over all killing it, always a fan of those gnar gradient fills.

MarOne...
11-03-2008, 01:05 AM
The 5 shaped S and the second E in 'see' are my favorites.

pandemik
11-03-2008, 06:40 AM
gnus - simples
anok - simples and dont connect the top of you A to the side thats wack as hell
montana - killer 3D
smooth - diggin the bottom one

CRITS POR FAVOR ......sorry about the sideways pic, and let me know how my tag looks to

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0002-1.jpg
TOP ONE IS BASICALLY PIECE BLOCKED OUT BY TAG
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0003-1.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0006.jpg

thanks man.

SANEKONE
11-03-2008, 12:16 PM
bottom bumps

thanks mar which ones did you like?

connect your Ys
i like the upside down E to prevent outrageous repetition which is one of my many problems, but he needs just a little more work.
he just looks a bit looser than the rest of the letters. maybe try tracing a normal E upside down and then try to mimic it a few times.

other than that.. its one of my favorite things ive seen from you. keep it up.
i really enjoy your fills too... sometimes.

revid!
11-03-2008, 03:14 PM
morning class pen freestyle type steez..
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/5494/sspx0217pt8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/sspx0217pt8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img261/sspx0217pt8.jpg/1/)
and some some for my friends about to hit tha penn..
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/9603/sspx0218gg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/sspx0218gg8.jpg/1/w480.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img261/sspx0218gg8.jpg/1/)
peace.

SPITONE
11-03-2008, 03:21 PM
gnus - simples
anok - simples and dont connect the top of you A to the side thats wack as hell
montana - killer 3D
smooth - diggin the bottom one

CRITS POR FAVOR ......sorry about the sideways pic, and let me know how my tag looks to

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0002-1.jpg
TOP ONE IS BASICALLY PIECE BLOCKED OUT BY TAG
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0003-1.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0006.jpg

Each one of those is made of fail. The shadowing is way off.

jupsick
11-03-2008, 03:25 PM
nukes
new to graffiti thread
and dont come back till u undarstand bars...

Scino & Spank
11-03-2008, 05:24 PM
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0099.jpgapparently im not good enough for the other blackbook forum

SANEKONE
11-03-2008, 05:29 PM
hah your handstyle needs work.
and your letters could improve a little.
but on the art side of things i think its pretty dang good.
way better than me.
maybe different shades of orange kind of like you did the gray.

Scino & Spank
11-03-2008, 05:31 PM
only have one orange marker right now:-\

wrekstyle
11-03-2008, 05:34 PM
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/bayroc_2008/DSCF0015-1.jpg


what do you think?? please give me feedback


Writers from Rhode Island pm me...

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/bayroc_2008/DSCF0018-1.jpg


http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/bayroc_2008/DSCF00022.jpg

osnapizzel
11-03-2008, 05:53 PM
new to graff

synps
11-03-2008, 06:10 PM
Ohsnap-shits ill. One of my fav pieces from style wars redone lol.
revid- no offense but that shit is wack. Try doing some simples, theres way to much going on in that
Nukes- new to graff thread
scino- what does that even say?
wrekstyle- new to graff thread
bumping this for crits


Halloween Collab with Skerso and Phail (character)
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/graff015.jpg

sketch_three
11-03-2008, 06:13 PM
ewwwwwwwww

Scino & Spank
11-03-2008, 06:26 PM
says scino

klic
11-03-2008, 06:53 PM
exchange...

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/RESKExchange.jpg

synps - looks good but round of the ends of your bars

wrek - to be completely honest, i could shit out something nicer

scino - make it simpler, kind of hard to read, i thought it said snind

logo - looks fresh, you might have to many attachments but it seams like there in all the right places though

Scino & Spank
11-03-2008, 07:06 PM
no

MontanaPainter
11-03-2008, 07:10 PM
s&s thats killer!

smooth_nuts
11-03-2008, 08:07 PM
logo-with the hipster style!
haha,nah i like it
s&s-i'm feeling it,even though 3d style shit normaly pisses me off :/
handstyle needs alot of work though

another de...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3062/3001355028_a261011d18.jpg
green was dead :l

white
11-03-2008, 08:50 PM
Each one of those is made of fail. The shadowing is way off.


OK why are you even on here you havnt posted a single picture in weeks. And you shouldnt b givin someone else negative crits when your shit is terrible itself.....

revid - nice bars and flow
scino - wish i could learn that style nice piece
wreks - new to graff <<<<

Repost of this one WITH BARS....and i know the shadow is shit i was drunk

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0006.jpg

osnapizzel
11-03-2008, 08:53 PM
jesus christ kid resize your shit!

white
11-03-2008, 09:01 PM
just did

osnapizzel
11-03-2008, 09:02 PM
smaller

-Wings-
11-03-2008, 09:20 PM
Doap - Some parts of the E are to small, But the letters still look good.
Nukes - Work a bit on the K and you should be good. Also those S's in your handstyles look ugly rework them aswell.

Anyways I just drew this. I thought it came out pretty good, even if the background sucks.. I was going for a cartoonish werewolve looking at the full moon. Looked better in my head.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2400.jpg

I might paint this, think I should :)? (Discluding the gay background)

wrekstyle
11-03-2008, 09:34 PM
wat needs work on my stuff??

smooth_nuts
11-03-2008, 09:36 PM
wings-you talking about the middle of my e?
where the top bars me,they get thinner because if i would of keep then the same width it would look to bulky :/
what evs
and if your gonna paint anythign,piant the blue simple you posted a few days ago
with your pokeman on a hillside drawign ass haha
edit*
wrek you need to read the new to graff thread,use bars and do simples

klic
11-03-2008, 09:37 PM
thats exactly what you need to be doing wings as far as letters go. im not really liking the end of your s though

for the marce battle

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/MARCESimplesBattle-Edited.jpg

crits

nukes - looks decent but even out your s and work on your handy

smooth - looks nice but id lose the attachment on the top left of your d

edit:
wat needs work on my stuff??

everything, read the new to graffiti thread

-Wings-
11-03-2008, 09:40 PM
wings-you talking about the middle of my e?
where the top bars me,they get thinner because if i would of keep then the same width it would look to bulky :/
what evs
and if your gonna paint anythign,piant the blue simple you posted a few days ago
with your pokeman on a hillside drawign ass haha
edit*
wrek you need to read the new to graff thread,use bars and do simples

I likes mai pokemon D:
And ill paint that when I go bombing, I want to paint a piece. And with the leftovers I shall do that simple somewhere :). Sound good?

smooth_nuts
11-03-2008, 09:47 PM
pokemans suck ..all about power rangers son!
not the new ooga booga power rangers either
the first power rangers that came out when i was in first grade
where they transformed into animal robots and shit
enough about that haha,anyway....
if your gonna paint that one i'd say kill the bits int he middle of the letters like on the left of the k and n,and throw a thick one color 3d on it :l
edit*
eaz-make all your letters liek the a

Keke
11-03-2008, 09:48 PM
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n265/Rs2sigs/IMG00031.jpg
wings- the letters look better than the background, fix that shit up
Smooth- looks fresh

http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n265/Rs2sigs/IMG00031.jpg

-Wings-
11-03-2008, 09:53 PM
pokemans suck ..all about power rangers son!
not the new ooga booga power rangers either
the first power rangers that came out when i was in first grade
where they transformed into animal robots and shit
enough about that haha,anyway....
if your gonna paint that one i'd say kill the bits int he middle of the letters like on the left of the k and n,and throw a thick one color 3d on it :l
edit*
eaz-make all your letters liek the a

Sounds good :].
Also one time when im out painting and ive gotten good at characters ill paint a power ranger. And ill make sure to post it here. :D

Eaz - Closen your letters together aswell (and what dope said).

Evasion Of Invasion
11-03-2008, 09:53 PM
Ain't been onhere for a minute so heres a picture dump
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/WMGardenCenterSketch001.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/WMGardenCenterSketch002.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/WMGardenCenterSketch003.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/WMGardenCenterSketch004.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/WMGardenCenterSketch005.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/WMGardenCenterSketch010.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/WMGardenCenterSketch012.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/WMGardenCenterSketch017.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/WMGardenCenterSketch019.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/WMGardenCenterSketch021.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/WMGardenCenterSketch022.jpg
^^^ its an S

Klic - likin the way ur keepin itsimple i like the consistency of thletters helps keep a straight flow good work\
White - top of the S is to long and top of the K looks kinda funny to try messin with those 2
Wings - still aint feelin it man sry try to thin ur cracks and alllines on the inside

pandemik
11-03-2008, 10:05 PM
http://i522.photobucket.com/albums/w342/thefunkywizard/8-3-08simple1.jpg

ive been working on simples, I finally realized I must start here and evolve.

crits? any advice is much appreciated.

MarOne...
11-03-2008, 10:10 PM
Anime and emo kids= fail.

pandemik
11-03-2008, 10:13 PM
hahahahaha

white
11-03-2008, 10:31 PM
pandemik - perfect now work on bending and working your bars and do shadow and 3D. Dont worry about filling yet

pandemik
11-03-2008, 10:32 PM
ok man thanks

-(zin)-
11-03-2008, 10:33 PM
hey i NEED crits

klic
11-03-2008, 10:36 PM
thats exactly what you need to be doing wings as far as letters go. im not really liking the end of your s though

for the marce battle

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/MARCESimplesBattle-Edited.jpg

crits

nukes - looks decent but even out your s and work on your handy

smooth - looks nice but id lose the attachment on the top left of your d

edit:

everything, read the new to graffiti thread

bump

sketch_three
11-03-2008, 10:39 PM
clown face paint
generic anime chicks
snake bite emo kids


oh god ur personality fits ur apearence perfectly



























GAY

sketch_three
11-03-2008, 10:40 PM
Edit my interweb is buggin out,
but evades still gay



























gay

pandemik
11-03-2008, 10:41 PM
pandemik - perfect now work on bending and working your bars and do shadow and 3D. Dont worry about filling yet

ah 3ds, still clueless on hot to go about that.

sketch_three
11-03-2008, 10:43 PM
Edit my internets fucked,
smooth dont put so many bends in ur bars

smooth_nuts
11-03-2008, 10:45 PM
logo-with the hipster style!
haha,nah i like it
s&s-i'm feeling it,even though 3d style shit normaly pisses me off :/
handstyle needs alot of work though

another de...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3062/3001355028_a261011d18.jpg
green was dead :l

bumpity bump

pandemik
11-03-2008, 10:48 PM
is there a point to telling him he looks gay?
It just sounds like a middle school kid trying to act cool.
If hes been a douche i understand but currently with no idea why, it just sounds retarded.

Evasion Of Invasion
11-03-2008, 10:49 PM
Phagy clown/juggalo
generic badly drawn anime chick
gay snake bite emo haired charek

ur actually as gay as u look,
and u look really really gay

the "Juggalo" is the joker only i tossed in some piercings the emo thro has when all hope is gone written above it to mean that ive lost all hope in humanity when i c kids like that
and the anime chick ill admit is pretty gay no doubt about that on but i got some action for that pic so i dont give a shit plus if im not mistaken. im still a better writer then you

white
11-03-2008, 10:52 PM
ah 3ds, still clueless on hot to go about that.

this is for ZIN tooo....everything u need to know is in the new to graffiti thread.......read it and memorize it shadow and 3D is in there

-(zin)-
11-03-2008, 10:52 PM
hey um can i get some tips?

pandemik
11-03-2008, 10:53 PM
straight up. ^

braxtons a g
11-03-2008, 11:03 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/34dq7wi.jpg
crits.. i havent been on here in a second i had to take a break from the forum.. but anyways possibly a freight peice?... in the works

smooth_nuts
11-03-2008, 11:08 PM
NO!
no toucho el freightos suhn.

do simples,read the new to graff thread,use bars...thats what you need to be doing not painting freights broski :l

braxtons a g
11-03-2008, 11:15 PM
lmfao.. arent you the reason i took a break from thid thread..

NoCanControl
11-03-2008, 11:19 PM
someone post something really tight. so i can be like..... wow. drwing time now.....

smooth_nuts
11-03-2008, 11:24 PM
lmfao.. arent you the reason i took a break from thid thread..
puh-lease kid
what i stated is true as shit and you know it...

sketch_three
11-03-2008, 11:25 PM
the "juggalo" is the joker only i tossed in some piercings the emo thro has when all hope is gone written above it to mean that ive lost all hope in humanity when i c kids like that
and the anime chick ill admit is pretty gay no doubt about that on but i got some action for that pic so i dont give a shit plus if im not mistaken. Im still a better writer then you


no u are mistaken
1 because ur not an actual writer
2 ur letters are pooy
3 i havnt done graffti in a while

osnapizzel
11-03-2008, 11:29 PM
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/94/screencapture12vh9.png

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/2490/cac0001mk6.jpg

"Riot"
11-04-2008, 12:34 AM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/WebCam_20081103_22292.jpg

MontanaPainter
11-04-2008, 12:59 AM
ayo smooth

thicken up ur e man

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020685.jpg

MontanaPainter
11-04-2008, 01:07 AM
shitmonkey

dbl post

00-made-00
11-04-2008, 06:57 AM
Ohsnap- fresh stuff, the letters on the top on look a bit squashed tho.
Riot- go simpler, its over crowded and looks like the usual wannabe wildstyle style.
Rays- Looks alright i think theres mad potential there pal, not feeling the R tho.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimr3nov.jpg
Im trying to progress this shit but its painful. poorockets away vroommmm.

Bazer
11-04-2008, 07:20 AM
sup with the bottoms of your letters?

00-made-00
11-04-2008, 07:25 AM
Im not sure baze, i struggle when it gets to there, im not sure what i wanna do with them so i replace them with shapes :(

CreetchaFeetcha22
11-04-2008, 09:37 AM
http://img381.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bs011ys9.jpg
chagain

Mass Appeal
11-04-2008, 10:45 AM
http://i522.photobucket.com/albums/w342/thefunkywizard/8-3-08simple1.jpg

ive been working on simples, I finally realized I must start here and evolve.



Bump

Ah'da way tah do it son. ;)

kroc_oner
11-04-2008, 10:50 AM
rays i love tht i in the ism and peice looks nice lol reminds me of my friend who writes blaq

osnapizzel
11-04-2008, 12:31 PM
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/94/screencapture12vh9.png

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/2490/cac0001mk6.jpg

bottom post bumps

revid!
11-04-2008, 01:04 PM
looking fresh snap, keep workin wit it

revid!
11-04-2008, 01:34 PM
some election shitss..
before..
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/2923/sspx0221io9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/sspx0221io9.jpg/1/w265.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img223/sspx0221io9.jpg/1/)
after..
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1776/sspx0220dl6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/sspx0220dl6.jpg/1/w266.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img223/sspx0220dl6.jpg/1/)
and this letter expiriment thing sketch...
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/8910/sspx0222jr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/sspx0222jr6.jpg/1/w511.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img254/sspx0222jr6.jpg/1/)
http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/2958/sspx0223dl9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/sspx0223dl9.jpg/1/w456.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img391/sspx0223dl9.jpg/1/)
peecee

MontanaPainter
11-04-2008, 02:13 PM
bump the fuck outta revid and ohsnap

bringing the heeaat

bump mine for crits also haha

revid!
11-04-2008, 03:12 PM
montana shit is fire too
i would like to see it finished

PBOI
11-04-2008, 03:15 PM
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb12/7evenUp/PICT0231.jpg
tryin out KASR, like it better than pboi...
asien exchange
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb12/7evenUp/PICT0227.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb12/7evenUp/PICT0229.jpg

revid!
11-04-2008, 03:16 PM
yo forreal man you need a new name and you need to go to the new to graffiti thread.

PBOI
11-04-2008, 03:37 PM
so im not even toy? rofl

Baron
11-04-2008, 03:39 PM
No... you are, completely toy.

Infoe
11-04-2008, 03:40 PM
Here's a tip. Do straight letters, all in line, even width. No wobbly lines and shaky shit.
Just keep doing the same block letter pieces for a while and then you can at some curves, etc..

MontanaPainter
11-04-2008, 03:43 PM
for revid!

hit mee up with ideas for the backround guys!

except for pboi, hes a bitch.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020687.jpg
crits

revid!
11-04-2008, 03:51 PM
shit that fill is dope man, im not sure for the background

PBOI
11-04-2008, 03:55 PM
thats what ive been doing the past months, heres some examples:
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb12/7evenUp/IMG000061.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb12/7evenUp/IMG000053.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb12/7evenUp/IMG000047.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb12/7evenUp/IMG000045.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb12/7evenUp/IMG000034.jpg

like that? i'm not complaining, im glad to take advice

MontanaPainter
11-04-2008, 03:56 PM
for revid!

hit mee up with ideas for the backround guys!

except for pboi, hes a bitch.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020687.jpg
crits

ahahhh

3d colored
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020688.jpg

i am getting ready to graduate from this thread yet??

revid!
11-04-2008, 04:02 PM
you should make that 3d darker montana.
and pboi, take the thrid one and work off it.

MontanaPainter
11-04-2008, 04:18 PM
ok


im on it

PBOI
11-04-2008, 04:22 PM
justa question... what is it gonna be good for to do the same straights over and over?

MontanaPainter
11-04-2008, 04:24 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020689.jpg
forcefield/darker 3d and blended


critts

Sizzuurp
11-04-2008, 04:38 PM
some election shitss..
before..
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/2923/sspx0221io9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/sspx0221io9.jpg/1/w265.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img223/sspx0221io9.jpg/1/)
after..
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1776/sspx0220dl6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/sspx0220dl6.jpg/1/w266.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img223/sspx0220dl6.jpg/1/)
and this letter expiriment thing sketch...
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/8910/sspx0222jr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/sspx0222jr6.jpg/1/w511.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img254/sspx0222jr6.jpg/1/)
http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/2958/sspx0223dl9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/sspx0223dl9.jpg/1/w456.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img391/sspx0223dl9.jpg/1/)
peecee


bump. this shits hard. the clip is a little off though.

revid!
11-04-2008, 04:45 PM
becasuse eventually, your letters become more stylized and complex, but ti takes time

Bazer
11-04-2008, 04:45 PM
montana painter. sup with the bottom of your letters?

Kraft561
11-04-2008, 05:04 PM
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff018.jpg

MontanaPainter
11-04-2008, 05:22 PM
baze

they have aids
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020690.jpg
crits

MontanaPainter
11-04-2008, 05:26 PM
cpu's fucked


srry for the dbl post

revid!
11-04-2008, 05:31 PM
dope finished product montana!

MontanaPainter
11-04-2008, 06:09 PM
thanks man!

pandemik
11-04-2008, 06:26 PM
Bump

Ah'da way tah do it son. ;)

two things:

What does Bumo mean? and thanks man.

Here is my first attempt to mess with the bars, im going to start with "A" and work my way through the alphabet.

http://i522.photobucket.com/albums/w342/thefunkywizard/barexperimentationA1.jpg


crits?

kroc_oner
11-04-2008, 06:31 PM
for revid!

hit mee up with ideas for the backround guys!

except for pboi, hes a bitch.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020687.jpg
crits

ahahhh

3d colored
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020688.jpg

i am getting ready to graduate from this thread yet??
maybe in a few months youll be ready

Kraft561
11-04-2008, 06:38 PM
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff018.jpg

klic
11-04-2008, 06:43 PM
kraft - no need to bump something you posted on the same page an hour ago

pandemik - bumping is when you repost something you already wrote

pandemik
11-04-2008, 06:45 PM
thanks man.