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numberonestunna
11-18-2008, 03:05 PM
mareimbrium - thats a really dope character.

Dewster_OnE
11-18-2008, 03:44 PM
thanks for all the crits guys but im probably not going to work on the sketch anymore
i was just trying out some diff stuff

<J-one>
11-18-2008, 04:26 PM
dewster- that slow definenlty outshines the cancer in my opinion. looks good though

saje - nice simples but work on proportions

halcyon - there's somethin about your layering of the M, E, and S that just look too squished to me, spread em out a bit or something.

sanek - i dig that throw up man, and your christmas peice, i think the E and K look a bit small and the N looks like its a bit far away from the A. there's just a little too much space there i think. Also the second N is def. better.

mare - i'm down with those faces. i'd like to see them with a piece instead of a hanstyle next to them please :)


my newest, will update you with colour as soon as possible....
crits?
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3181/3040067615_9267b5b6d5.jpg?v=0

bumpin for crits

asik- the first on needs alot of work, same with the handstyles. you don't have to squish all the letters together to make it look dope. the second one is better, but the A doestn't really match anything and its taller than the other letters. check out some proportions and straights

Dewster_OnE
11-18-2008, 04:28 PM
do you write gasr?

Cyto Aka Son1c
11-18-2008, 04:38 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/2dl3h1d.jpg

<J-one>
11-18-2008, 05:17 PM
do you write gasr?

yea boy

synps
11-18-2008, 06:56 PM
asik-don't overlap your letters so much
gasar- cool style I just dont like the upside down peace sign and I dont like how skinny the s is I think you should fatten it up
rasar, nice simp make your r's match and clean up the lines

Pen freestyle and new style for me
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/asst016.jpg
crits?

TASR
11-18-2008, 07:21 PM
All your other letters have a little something on 'em but your "S" doesn't, can't figure out what you could put on it..but something y'know?

Gyse
11-18-2008, 07:32 PM
Synp- Make the bottom of the S a little longer so it comes down as far as the other letters, make the bottom part of the Y a little shorter and maybe make it touch the S and the rest of the Y, and make the curved part of the P a little thinner.

Rasar-Make the second R match the first. And make the S a little more curved, that one corner part on the side bothers me.

jersOneTIC
11-18-2008, 07:42 PM
anteater - work on your tags
j-one - that shit looks nice...diggin the r
cyto - your s needs work
snyps - nice but the thing on the p kills it
crits??
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/6905/jers002bh4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

klic
11-18-2008, 07:56 PM
klic... almost on the right track try changing your bars up and bending more.


can you give me an example of what you mean by bending more

and all of your sketches are looking pretty fresh except i cant say im a fan of the k in your sk throwies, i think its the squiggly leg thats not doing it for me

sank.
11-18-2008, 07:58 PM
jers - your pieces always seem too cramped. try spacing out your letters more and making them more defined, ie. not having the r being covered so much. i think spreading out your letters will make it easier to incorporate good addons and over all make it look better. my 2 cents take it or leave it.

ober
11-18-2008, 08:17 PM
Jers, tons of stuff in the background around the J and the E. Seems like it came out of nowhere and makes everything look congested. My suggestion is to spread it out.

Also, you 'Kinged' your handstyle... Pretty lame, in my opinion.

Gyse
11-18-2008, 08:25 PM
I think it looks sick, but the S looks a little messed up. I guess spreading them out couldn't hurt.

http://i37.tinypic.com/2yn0wzr.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/294oxw2.jpg
That one looks like shit now that I think about it...

peace89
11-18-2008, 08:44 PM
saek- like it
mareImbrium-...shit dude... sick! just the outline of the top and side of the head is kind of weird maybe it would of been better without it
j-one-the bottom ext thats like broken is weird and the arrows that finishes it
synps- love the part on the ''n'' thats broken but the P is fuckt really dont like it but besides that sick
jersOneTIC- nice exepte for the top of the R and the arrow of the S at the end


crits please

MareImbrium
11-18-2008, 09:41 PM
J- one Im digging the style remiinds me a little of a slor peice
http://i33.tinypic.com/r27u41.jpg

and as you asked so nicely heres your request. im not so good at pieces yet so bear with it as im still working on them .
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=174&pictureid=1110

balance42020
11-18-2008, 11:09 PM
jers and mare... these are some of the sickest drawing ive seen on the thread, they just look hella good to me

also that dude on the left of your piece is the shit.... your such good artist that for sure adds to your graff skillllz

Duped
11-18-2008, 11:22 PM
Piece89: diggin all of them cept the purple one... the huge P kinda messes up the whole thing

Dying to live
11-19-2008, 07:18 AM
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/sdsdf.gif

knightsafe
11-19-2008, 09:18 AM
crits
http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs39/i/2008/324/8/9/piecer_by_fastnloud.jpg

AntEater
11-19-2008, 10:04 AM
Jers - Nice stuff but that R looks a little out of place.
Mare - Loven it man
Bale - Shits looking real good

Heres my latest after taking some advice.

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/asikcolor2.jpg

Dewster_OnE
11-19-2008, 12:03 PM
that bale ish is dope, cept for the a its weird

-Wings-
11-19-2008, 01:04 PM
asik - it looks like asok, Even with that thing above it. I like the top portion of that S though!

mtown
11-19-2008, 02:11 PM
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/6697/img0226dg5.jpg

Dewster_OnE
11-19-2008, 03:14 PM
first off just wana say that im glad to see guys posting simples and not tryin to wildstyle everything they do

rasr- its coming along, try molding the right leg of the r into the round part
jerz- ur shyts always dope but ur style is somewhat repititive, the left leg of the r needs work but fresh as usual
j-one- its hard to crit those funky styles like urs but its dope to me some of the extras are a little ehhh but its fresh
asik- if thats supposed to be an i make it look like one, make sure your bars are proportional and you have to be careful where your letters bend
symps- the symp is hott but like someone said before me the p needs work. its too short for my liking but hey

every1 else keep posting the symps

a lil something i was sketching
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f367/Dewster88/155721.jpg

mtown
11-19-2008, 03:39 PM
no crits for me dewster(A)
dew:looks nice only make them the same height and widt
laturr

Dewster_OnE
11-19-2008, 03:41 PM
uhhh good simples i say try something with a lil more style and then we'll c

mtown
11-19-2008, 03:46 PM
how do you mean that....

TastySesamcrew
11-19-2008, 04:21 PM
Asok - I don't know why but I'm not feeling it...
Mtown - keep doing simples, getting better.
Dewster - Very dope, lovely letterforms

New throwup
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/throwup.jpg
Crits would be appreciated

Infoe
11-19-2008, 04:27 PM
Tasty I love your throwups, they're very nice, haha.. Different to the average throwup outlines, it's good.

Akel, your old shit was a lot better man..

Evasion Of Invasion
11-19-2008, 04:52 PM
Taster - I LIKE IT!
Serius - not so much try raising the other side of the u
Mtown - Bars same width
Sin
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture361.jpg
Evade
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture367-1.jpg
crits?

KrSr
11-19-2008, 05:18 PM
i like the color scheme of sin

dewster raise the short side of the U a lil bit
crits please

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/49/l_faaf29cfe55c4df580c0f7c053d2ab7a.jpg

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/64/l_91add9a4b9e84a4c978a0fcc03f8c7fd.jpg

KrSr
11-19-2008, 05:22 PM
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/22/l_784b35aed1cc4641afe2c45ef8ed3842.jpg

mekosbc
11-19-2008, 05:32 PM
havent posted in mad long...... but here one of my new fr8 sketchz...critz are respected..http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY1782.jpg

KrSr
11-19-2008, 05:35 PM
meko i like the colors but make the O more legible the connect to the E makes it look kinda like an a

garbage down tha way
11-19-2008, 05:44 PM
the only think truely bad about that is the way the rs leg bends up and then goes into the left leg. if you straightened that out itd be illin.

ESKiMO2
11-19-2008, 05:44 PM
Cipher

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9169/dsc01261dw4.jpg

Meko-pretty nice simple. I'd make the zig zags a bit more subtle.
Krsr- SIMPLES.
Sin/Evasion- Nice detailed lines but I think you should make it a bit less deep. It seems like the letters go too far back.

KrSr
11-19-2008, 05:50 PM
btw if ur trying to read it for KRSR it doesnt say KRSR it says mker

sketch_three
11-19-2008, 06:06 PM
[QUOTE=Evasion Of Invasion;1256962]Taster - I LIKE IT!
Serius - not so much try raising the other side of the u
Mtown - Bars same width
Sin
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture361.jpg
Evade
QUOTE]

DRAW LETTERS PLEASE NOT PREETYBLUE ENERGRY BALLS,

Evasion Of Invasion
11-19-2008, 06:17 PM
hey sketch.... Battle Me!

Baron
11-19-2008, 06:51 PM
Oh shi-....t!

Dewster_OnE
11-19-2008, 07:08 PM
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f367/Dewster88/200558.jpg

Dying to live
11-19-2008, 07:33 PM
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/scdasd.gif

esco93
11-19-2008, 08:02 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/shdyfifty510/1118082047.jpg

~Star~
11-19-2008, 08:04 PM
drew these up in careers, crits? don't be to harsh, in the toy thread for a reason XD
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk35/bomb4life/Picture001-2.jpg

osnapizzel
11-19-2008, 08:29 PM
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/scdasd.gif

fuuckin bump!

ESKiMO2
11-19-2008, 08:42 PM
Cipher

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9169/dsc01261dw4.jpg

Meko-pretty nice simple. I'd make the zig zags a bit more subtle.
Krsr- SIMPLES.
Sin/Evasion- Nice detailed lines but I think you should make it a bit less deep. It seems like the letters go too far back.

What happened to our 'Crit for Crits' policy!?
Assholes.

SANEKONE
11-19-2008, 09:02 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/r27u41.jpg



sorry to bring up old news.. but thats one of the sickest Rs ive ever seen

Darkeist
11-19-2008, 09:03 PM
Eskimo - I really like the letter structure of that, looks real clean.
Bale - Looks real dope man,

Baron
11-19-2008, 09:04 PM
Eskimo, work on the bottom and top of your I and enlarge the E.

I'm not criting the other guys because they didn't crit to begin with.

http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn289/uncreative507/022.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn289/uncreative507/021.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn289/uncreative507/015.jpg

Just some stuff I've been messing around with. I finally got a camera and I have been religiously posting crits in this thread, spread the love.

mekosbc
11-19-2008, 09:06 PM
i know my bars are off and stuff i didnt use bars on this one...im just tryin new fr8 sketch styles..and my new throwie...crits are well respected..
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY1784.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY1785.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-00201.jpg
my boy sero from bushwick
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY1421.jpg

mekosbc
11-19-2008, 09:13 PM
shit my bad i forgot my critz...
esk-sick shit dude lovin it keep it up
berk-niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiceeeee
sneak-needz alot of improve ment stick to bars... stay with pencil and papers for a while
bale- dope shit but the lines look kinda shakey to me?
esco-ill

and yes i drew the joker in my black book lol if any one was gunna ask....

~Star~
11-19-2008, 09:33 PM
that joker is sick man, your a good artist, not really feelin the color scheme on the first sketch, brown just doesnt work for me, but still good shit, keep it up

Edward"Sezer"Hands
11-19-2008, 09:45 PM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture004-3.jpg?t=1227152605 (javascript:void(0);)
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture005-1.jpg?t=1227152636 (javascript:void(0);)
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture001-4.jpg?t=1227152683 (javascript:void(0);)

MareImbrium
11-20-2008, 06:28 AM
Serious- nice style man maybe just try keeping the S's similar in size.amazing how the U proportioned chanegd the piece for the better.
Baron- im liking the blue piece maybe just try keep the letters at a constant size but other then that im likeing that simple.

just some boredom shit.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=174&pictureid=1120

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=174&pictureid=1119

i know its not the right forum but if your bored watch this illa animated wall paiinting some trippy shit.
http://www.vimeo.com/427043

TastySesamcrew
11-20-2008, 09:29 AM
Mare - Start with simples first man..
Sezer - Really feelin that stuff great job!
Meko - Dope throwup and your letters are fire, you're good enough to hit freights in my opinion!
Baron - I like your throwie but work on them pieces man, good job tho
Star - Keep going man keep it at the simples and you'll get there
Dying to live - Thats sick man very dope stuff I'd love to see that stuff painted!
Dewster - Looks dope but you forgot the 3d on the I
Sketch - Dope 3d I couldnt do something like that, I think it would look better with tints and a thinner outline tho.
Eskimo - Super fresh stuff man thats real good.



Asok - I don't know why but I'm not feeling it...
Mtown - keep doing simples, getting better.
Dewster - Very dope, lovely letterforms

New throwup
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/throwup.jpg
Crits would be appreciated

Bump

Sanc_one
11-20-2008, 12:40 PM
I know it's canvas and i know it belongs to other thread... but i want you to critisize my letters. Thanks :D
http://shrani.si/f/3d/LY/2fTpm03M/canvas1.jpg

TastySesamcrew
11-20-2008, 12:49 PM
Well, you have style but you don't give anyone crits so don't expect any

eVeN
11-20-2008, 01:10 PM
Tezer...ur style is hot.
berk... idk what happened
Tape....im feelin the way ur letters are placed...
i wants CRITs...on my shit...please.!:o

eVeN
11-20-2008, 01:14 PM
and these ...thanks...all of these were taken from my phone...thats why they sooo small...

Sanc_one
11-20-2008, 02:35 PM
Ok! I will give crits since now :D... but i dont think its cool that toys give crits to toys... nawm sayin... its better that big guys give crits to us... Just my way of thinkin!

Well eVen... imo you need to start from simple letter and then go on... your throw up comes out little weird cuz letters are in some point very thick and in some points very thin...

Baron
11-20-2008, 02:42 PM
Even, your letters lack structure.

hydro1
11-20-2008, 03:10 PM
http://i490.photobucket.com/albums/rr268/hydrobucket15/GEDC0857.jpg
http://i490.photobucket.com/albums/rr268/hydrobucket15/GEDC0859.jpg

TastySesamcrew
11-20-2008, 03:18 PM
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/throwup.jpg
Crits would be appreciated

BigBlueViolence
11-20-2008, 03:24 PM
taste, it's dope, but I think you should try and center the letters,
and lose the kicker on the A.

Queezy
11-20-2008, 03:28 PM
Crayon freestyle on foil at work. A is really whack
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/QueazyThrowie.jpg

Infoe
11-20-2008, 04:04 PM
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/scdasd.gif

http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/tkutfukt.gif

This stuff was nicer... Just my opinion though.
Now you've got a new name and simple style stop painting your backyard, you're clean enough now. Go and do some tracksides, a panel or something..
Pleasepleasepleaseplease.. Haha

sketch_three
11-20-2008, 06:26 PM
deff a step backwerds,
but cant expect everythin to be dope wen developin new shit....
thats wat developin is, seein wat works an wat dont

fromthegrave
11-20-2008, 07:07 PM
queezy- u got the right idea. keep working with that
tasty- like that
hydro- dont do the 3d stuff right now. work on simples and shizit.

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture031-2.jpg
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture032-1.jpg
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture033-2.jpg
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture035-1.jpg
not done this one obviously.^
Crits hommies.

Sarcaztik
11-20-2008, 07:11 PM
First one ever.

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/7802/photo1lc5.th.jpg (http://img165.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo1lc5.jpg)http://img165.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)

Sorry its so small

Sarto
11-20-2008, 07:13 PM
ARES- the a on the last one is to sick ,
but i dont think the e suits the rest of the letters ,
also the first ones dopee

ESKiMO2
11-20-2008, 08:34 PM
Calors

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/4590/calorsnc1.jpg

Sarc- Nice start. Start with your simples.
Grave- First and second are nice.
Taste- Pretty cool by what I can tell.
Hydro- Leave 3D alone for now.

mekosbc
11-20-2008, 09:01 PM
esk-WE NEED TO DO AN EXCHANGE MY DUUUUUDDDDEEEE? you down?

ESKiMO2
11-20-2008, 09:34 PM
Yeah, what do you write? I'll have it up real soon.

<J-one>
11-20-2008, 10:20 PM
that slor shit is hot wheres that dude from?

hydro - right out of the 3d idea and show us some simples
Mare - that peice i asked for was pretty solid man. i'm never really a fan of black fills though...just me.
Ares - that last one is the nicest. i thinks the E is a little bit too fat... thin it out a bit, and maybe get rid of that squiggley extension off the R...
Eskimo- your styles comin along heavy man.
tasty- that is a fly ass throwie brah. really feelin the S and R...the A looks alot like th R though. maybe try to figure somethin out with that. even if you don't its nice.

fresh meat...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3184/3047464538_8dab6fb74e.jpg?v=0

WoeInfinite
11-20-2008, 10:37 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/1simple.jpghttp://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/2.jpghttp://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/2.jpg
eskimo always lookin dopeeee
that bale is fresh, but yeah old letters were cooler, but still dopee
and j one, thats tight dude, feelin it..

Dying to live
11-20-2008, 11:05 PM
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/tkutfukt.gif

This stuff was nicer... Just my opinion though.
Now you've got a new name and simple style stop painting your backyard, you're clean enough now. Go and do some tracksides, a panel or something..
Pleasepleasepleaseplease.. Haha

alright ill go out n lose my last warning n get a crim record cause you said i should ahahh nah man i go out sometimes but when i do i dont take photos unless there on my phone... nawhuimsayinnn?

-sense-
11-20-2008, 11:22 PM
woe man get some fine lines

http://i35.tinypic.com/t05fdw.jpg
just fuckin aron

librelikespie
11-21-2008, 12:27 AM
tastie - :) exchange some day?
akels - clean
eskimo - exchange?
some shit
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP5938.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP5939.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP5941.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP5942.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP5943.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP5949.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP5950.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP5944.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP5947.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP5951.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP5952.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP5953.jpg

RFI. SPit
11-21-2008, 12:38 AM
From hands to pieces to characters, beautiful, great style

TastySesamcrew
11-21-2008, 04:57 AM
from the grave - Very dope man, great style
sarcastic - Start off with simples man
eskimo - Super fly, really feelin your style!
J-one - Thats killer shit, dope character and letters, good job!
woe - It doesnt look like you use bars..
libre - I was waiting until I got these crits done just to start about you: MAN WTF!!!! you have dope fuckin characters, awesome handstyle, great steez on your letters and nobody on BS is like you man, I just love your shit. Please keep posting here just for our entertainment man I'm really feeling you. Dope shit bro!!


I'm down to do an exchange with every single one around here so pm me if you're interested!

Infoe
11-21-2008, 05:35 AM
alright ill go out n lose my last warning n get a crim record cause you said i should ahahh nah man i go out sometimes but when i do i dont take photos unless there on my phone... nawhuimsayinnn?

Yeah yeah naar watcha meeeen lad (Y)
Getting dones just one of those things though. Right now one of Sydneys bigger writers is doing 25 years and he's only 23 or so!
My mate lost all three cautions a while before he was 18, been done twice since he turned 18 but really nothing happened. They let him off cause it's petty.
:D
EDIT HERE: I was just saying you're good enough to be getting out there more, showing other people your skill cause there's a lot lacking in Syd atm.. Even just go out and paint some legals bro, would be very nice to see

MONSTER-
Most progression I've seen in a long time from anyone. My new hero, haha!
Freshest shit brother

WoeInfinite
11-21-2008, 06:28 AM
tasty, ill take you up on that exchange

pureemoti0n
11-21-2008, 10:08 AM
monster i like the style, green ones the best, some look unfinished tho spend more time on your next one see if it comes out good.
heres new style im trying crits welcome
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/9195/scanbleav6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

mekosbc
11-21-2008, 11:13 AM
Yeah, what do you write? I'll have it up real soon.

i right noe4 (noer4)
and you?

gunsofbrooklyn
11-21-2008, 11:14 AM
^reeeeally nice
what markers you use?

Evasion Of Invasion
11-21-2008, 01:19 PM
Taster - I LIKE IT!
Serius - not so much try raising the other side of the u
Mtown - Bars same width
Sin
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture361.jpg
Evade
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture367-1.jpg
crits?

Bump

Bleak bottom of the sketch is dope
Libralikespie - man those monster sketchers are so dope the M's are killer

no.regrets
11-21-2008, 01:26 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/Tator22/mine043.jpg
crits?

CreetchaFeetcha22
11-21-2008, 01:38 PM
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/7711/funfun013ze1.jpg[/URL][/IMG]


Work in progress...

JETPACK!!
11-21-2008, 04:37 PM
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/4365/rasek59jd1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

LeaksOne
11-21-2008, 04:54 PM
thats raw jetpack but your not a toy

CreetchaFeetcha22
11-21-2008, 06:20 PM
monster i like the style, green ones the best, some look unfinished tho spend more time on your next one see if it comes out good.
heres new style im trying crits welcome
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/9195/scanbleav6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I like it man clean..
xchange?

Evak go a little more simple and clean it up on the edges make em sharp kedd

Speak905
11-22-2008, 01:12 AM
My first.
http://i429.photobucket.com/albums/qq17/Roxter3125/image.jpg
lots of crits is good

dark2
11-22-2008, 01:37 AM
speak- thats pretty sick but loose the arrows n extensions n make your k same thickness as the rest
bleak-thats ill
evak- not bad but that one bar on the k is so skinny compared 2 the rest throws it off a bit


some of my new shit crits?
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/Snapshot_20081122.jpg

CreetchaFeetcha22
11-22-2008, 07:55 AM
^^Scratch that start over^^

TastySesamcrew
11-22-2008, 09:14 AM
Pure - Super dope
No regrets - Use bars and do simples
Creetcha - I'm sorry I'm not feeling your character, you should work on it more and use diffrent poses
Jetpack - Lovin' that bro great job
Speak - You have alot of potential if thats your first sketch ever
Dark - Same crit as no regrets.

Newish throw
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/throwup-1.jpg
Character sketch
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster7.jpg
Nois exchange
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster5.jpg
Toaster
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster4.jpg
Organ for a battle
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster3.jpg
For my dude monster
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster2.jpg
Newish characs, not feeling the right one..
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster1.jpg

Crits would be appreciated!

thebaconator
11-22-2008, 10:28 AM
My first.
http://i429.photobucket.com/albums/qq17/Roxter3125/image.jpg
lots of crits is good

you should probably check out the new to graff thread, or at least start using bars

and theres already a speek (one) in here in winnipeg f.y.i

Darkeist
11-22-2008, 10:36 AM
baconator, theres always going to be graff writers with the same name somewhere...

"Riot"
11-22-2008, 10:52 AM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/WebCam_20081122_09331.jpg

was a little to high to figure out my shine by the way ahha.

speak.new to graff thread.
taste.smexy:)
ask.keep it simple. whats in your nose?

mtown
11-22-2008, 10:52 AM
darkeist is right
i discovered yesterday there's another zane but he writes in california and i in holland
so.. it depends on ur place
laturrr

TastySesamcrew
11-22-2008, 10:56 AM
Mtown, where do you live in holland?

Pure - Super dope
No regrets - Use bars and do simples
Creetcha - I'm sorry I'm not feeling your character, you should work on it more and use diffrent poses
Jetpack - Lovin' that bro great job
Speak - You have alot of potential if thats your first sketch ever
Dark - Same crit as no regrets.

Newish throw
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/throwup-1.jpg
Character sketch
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster7.jpg
Nois exchange
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster5.jpg
Toaster
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster4.jpg
Organ for a battle
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster3.jpg
For my dude monster
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster2.jpg
Newish characs, not feeling the right one..
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster1.jpg

Crits would be appreciated!

DieHippie
11-22-2008, 11:07 AM
Orgasmic productions.

JETPACK!!
11-22-2008, 11:28 AM
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/4365/rasek59jd1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tastie, i dont like those hooks in the letters on that last throwie

the other sketches are pretty dope

SAID
11-22-2008, 11:59 AM
tasty, looking good.
rasek not really feeling that s, but r and k are hot.
quick freestyle, markers running out -_-
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/5307/aher008qk9.jpg
Beger.

hAveK x
11-22-2008, 01:56 PM
just finished this one..
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/4126/lurneron6.jpg

SAID
11-22-2008, 02:05 PM
what does it say

hAveK x
11-22-2008, 02:06 PM
Lurner.. made it for a friend

mtown
11-22-2008, 02:17 PM
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6660/img03071kz0.jpg
i have a battle with the word snow i gonna post something like yhis but it needs work any crits

everyone-looks dope guys:D:D:D

~Star~
11-22-2008, 02:37 PM
tasty- dope stuff keep it up mang
Mtown- not feelin that W at all

-Wings-
11-22-2008, 02:47 PM
Mtown - Make that S look more like a S not a mirrored Z. Also make a w normal, like this W.
And the 3d could use work, some angles are wrong.

Lazy school sketch.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF21112008_00000.jpg

Focus on the s, I like it! :). The rest of the letters.. bleh.

mtown
11-22-2008, 02:51 PM
wings:looks nice,i gonna make another snow right now thanks for the crits:D
laturr

osnapizzel
11-22-2008, 04:19 PM
wings keep your letters in proportion with each other

hAveK x
11-22-2008, 04:21 PM
well what u guys think about mine up there... says lurner.

osnapizzel
11-22-2008, 04:25 PM
to be honest with you i didnt like it. i think its all little add ons and arrows and not much structure. just cause kids are askin what it says dont mean its a good wild style. loose everything and bust out a simple

calculating infinity
11-22-2008, 04:27 PM
havek that shit sucks
try simpler or something
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3211/3050117235_a8b28b71a4.jpg?v=0
i know you like my toes

TastySesamcrew
11-22-2008, 04:35 PM
Thats too dope bro, very nice throwup, would love to see that one with a fatcap on the streets!

jester.onest
11-22-2008, 04:37 PM
just finished this one..
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/4126/lurneron6.jpg

Don't listen to the others. (:
I'm really crap at pieces, but I can tell you that you need to get rid of all the arrows and make the letters join better. I can see you have a good style and this piece is a really good start. Keep working on it and then post it once its coloured in so we can see what it's like.

EgoZen
11-22-2008, 05:02 PM
Rasek, ill job!..
But dude you are not a toy!

mtown
11-22-2008, 05:11 PM
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/9194/img03151lg1.jpg
my new snow!

shhh
11-22-2008, 05:20 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/sbn5ht.png
crits?

jester.onest
11-22-2008, 05:26 PM
Shh, try and make all letters the same width. And mtown, the s is still like a mirrored z, try and do something different with it. :)

TastySesamcrew
11-22-2008, 05:42 PM
Mtown, where do you live in holland?

Pure - Super dope
No regrets - Use bars and do simples
Creetcha - I'm sorry I'm not feeling your character, you should work on it more and use diffrent poses
Jetpack - Lovin' that bro great job
Speak - You have alot of potential if thats your first sketch ever
Dark - Same crit as no regrets.

Newish throw
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/throwup-1.jpg
Character sketch
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster7.jpg
Nois exchange
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster5.jpg
Toaster
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster4.jpg
Organ for a battle
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster3.jpg
For my dude monster
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster2.jpg
Newish characs, not feeling the right one..
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/toaster1.jpg

Crits would be appreciated!

bump

jester.onest
11-22-2008, 05:46 PM
Your characters have a nice style. (: Eughh, brown. They would look heaps better in a different colour. The blue throw is sick. Organ one if probably my fave, except the N is too wide/tall.

TastySesamcrew
11-22-2008, 05:58 PM
Thanks bro, yeah I really suck at color combinations if you ever have suggestions just tell me becouse it would help alot! Thanks for your critics bro

calculating infinity
11-22-2008, 06:05 PM
havek that shit sucks
try simpler or something
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3211/3050117235_a8b28b71a4.jpg?v=0
i know you like my toes
bumphump
shook your S is not flowing but really nothing in there is

snow why is only your o overlapping?

jester.onest
11-22-2008, 06:23 PM
No problem lol :)

The red and blue monster goes well. Remember: the colour wheel is your friend. :)

http://www.realcolorwheel.com/colorwheel/Real_Color_Wheel_475.jpg

BARACK OBAMA
11-22-2008, 08:23 PM
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii191/LAN3R/awhile.jpg
that shit is siick dude.. and nah i love brown.. its a nice color..
your pretty fresh dude i like.

KnoxIn
11-23-2008, 03:44 AM
ok so these are just 2 of my pics i mean i know that there really not good but ya know im tryin so i know that i need help with my letters (k,and X) so any advice witht those??

Madsen
11-23-2008, 04:27 AM
http://i269.photobucket.com/albums/jj59/_DKS_/ghhhrfsjggg.jpg

http://i269.photobucket.com/albums/jj59/_DKS_/dsddf.jpg

librelikespie
11-23-2008, 07:46 AM
coan looking dope, infinity - looks good
tastie - :) karaks

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication346.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication349.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication351.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication352.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication353.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication354.jpg

mtown
11-23-2008, 08:10 AM
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9336/img03091yl9.jpg

mtown
11-23-2008, 08:12 AM
for the sketch the user above's name thread

AntEater
11-23-2008, 09:00 AM
Coan - Im diggen that outline, not so much the top one.
Monster- Lookin good man, your lettering has some potential to be sick wit it.
caz - Make all your bars the same size. Other then that good start.

And heres somthin new....crits appreciated.

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/asikbw2.jpg

mtown
11-23-2008, 10:41 AM
anteater: make the s more s:D i dont know hot to say this.!
the cas was for the sketch the user abovew thread and i write longer than one day:D 4 months or so

balance42020
11-23-2008, 10:54 AM
mtown your s is still like a flipped Z...

atlok7
11-23-2008, 11:01 AM
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication351.jpg

i really like this style

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/4461/cais3pannelssg4.jpg
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/2601/simplesthrowshx5.jpg
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/8517/mashar9.jpg
last one says mash

sketch_three
11-23-2008, 11:26 AM
im so pleased u simpled it up

mtown
11-23-2008, 11:29 AM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/534/img03251ej4.jpg

JETPACK!!
11-23-2008, 12:32 PM
i really like this style

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/4461/cais3pannelssg4.jpg
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/2601/simplesthrowshx5.jpg
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/8517/mashar9.jpg
last one says mash

im really feelin this work, cais.

work on your A's though. good job

mtown
11-23-2008, 12:35 PM
atlok7: they look super fresh
anyone crits for some of my work!

KnoxIn
11-23-2008, 01:09 PM
goddamnit what kind of markers do you guys use?? like i know with some there just like normal or sharpies or whatever but some i have seen like the colors blended and i cant figure out how to do that with markers so any input?

synps
11-23-2008, 01:30 PM
lanes- really nice simple good job
Coan- like the second one more
monster - dope!
mtown- keep your bars the same width try to skinny them up you are making your letters way to fat
asik- don't really like how your bars taper, try keeping them the same width and bring the bottom of that s back in
Cais- always love your shit. definately not a toy though!
knoxin- Prisma colors, but don't buy good markers or even worry about coloring your pieces until you got the basics down. For now stick to black sharpie and white paper and pencil

Been working on simples so heres a bunch:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/hahaha007.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/hahaha006.jpg
(ignore the shitty face on the p in that one, don't know what I was thinking)
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/hahaha005.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/hahaha004.jpg

atlok7
11-23-2008, 03:07 PM
goddamnit what kind of markers do you guys use?? like i know with some there just like normal or sharpies or whatever but some i have seen like the colors blended and i cant figure out how to do that with markers so any input?

go steal some prisma colors and then just practice

mtown
11-23-2008, 03:11 PM
or twin touch markers and one of them blenders from twin touch
http://aswexpress.com/vimages/art_supply_warehouse/category/SketchingDrawing/ShinHanTouchTwin.jpg

-Wings-
11-23-2008, 03:15 PM
Mtown - Make that S look more like a S not a mirrored Z. Also make a w normal, like this W.
And the 3d could use work, some angles are wrong.

Lazy school sketch.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF21112008_00000.jpg

Focus on the s, I like it! :). The rest of the letters.. bleh.

bump:D

TastySesamcrew
11-23-2008, 03:33 PM
Monster: thanks alot for the sketch bro, feelin that stuff!
Atlok: Always lovin your sketches but you're not a toy
Synps: Very good liking the bottom one alot!
Mtown: You should start on the middle of the page
Lanes: Good colors nice simple sketch
Knoxin: Start with simples
Madsen: The top one is pretty dope
Ant: Not feelin that stuff man I'm sorry


For sharpie blends: use rubbing alcohol to blend 2 colors and if you can't do that you have to buy yourself prisma, touch, pro or any other blendable marker.

enlis_one
11-23-2008, 03:33 PM
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/6933/lcf1cf98b2f954570bc2776kr9.th.jpg (http://img143.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lcf1cf98b2f954570bc2776kr9.jpg)http://img143.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)


what yall think

TastySesamcrew
11-23-2008, 03:36 PM
Give crits to get crits son

enlis_one
11-23-2008, 03:57 PM
bump:D

damn nukka im really feelin ur flow them letters is fat 2

ice age
11-23-2008, 03:59 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/untitled-6.jpg
new 3-d shit
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/untitled2-3.jpg
for a friend pulse
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/pic110808_6.jpg
exchange with volat
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/untitled-8-1.jpg
exchange with haze

tell me what you think

balance42020
11-23-2008, 04:43 PM
crazy 3d dog....

ice age
11-23-2008, 05:05 PM
thanks man
crits anyone?

gunsofbrooklyn
11-23-2008, 05:33 PM
love the 3d letters and the color is really smooth
what markers/pencil crayons did you use?

ice age
11-23-2008, 05:55 PM
i use prisma markers and a prisma blender

NoCanControl
11-23-2008, 08:18 PM
http://photos-b.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v645/129/20/1193550161/n1193550161_30334249_6883.jpg

ice age. do simples

enlis one. do simples

wings. idky. but your letters are ugly. emm. idk how to critic it. doing simples can never hurt.


synps. work on flow. just go crazy and forget about simples. and concentrate on the flow of blocks. and then go back to simples once you understand flow. and apply

cais. your top pic. a is funny. looking. doesn't look like an a

mtown. work on the openings of your letters. like. mess around with the openings and see how that affects the look of your letters.


btw mars volta is the shizz.

Scino & Spank
11-23-2008, 08:41 PM
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0130.jpg
I think i should of left the 3D white...and something extra...
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0129.jpg

Scino & Spank
11-23-2008, 08:42 PM
I use prisma's, but touch twins are so much better, in my opinion

klic
11-23-2008, 09:48 PM
havnt posted here in a while
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHBasicLetters.jpg

spank - not feeling your A
ice age - the only one im kind of feeling is the haze exchange
nocancontrol - would look better if all the bars were the same width

MZ
11-24-2008, 03:02 AM
http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa296/Mezoroni/Graf/Picture004.jpg

MareImbrium
11-24-2008, 05:52 AM
MOnster- been loving your posts allways ill shit only criticism i could throw is clean the lines up all in all dope.
Ice age- you got nice 3d just work on your letters
Inspiration of how nice 3d can be done
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=174&pictureid=1189

some nothing shit out off boredom on break from slaving over simps
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=174&pictureid=1188

urmomsayshi
11-24-2008, 10:22 AM
mez- graffiti creator alert!!!

dont=play=ketchup
11-24-2008, 10:30 AM
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0130.jpg
I think i should of left the 3D white...and something extra...
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0129.jpg

i like that shit
hard as fuck

dont=play=ketchup
11-24-2008, 10:31 AM
http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/3858/009kt2.jpg

dont=play=ketchup
11-24-2008, 10:37 AM
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/8216/002aw2.jpg

MZ
11-24-2008, 11:14 AM
actually, learngraffiti.net.

lmao.

dont=play=ketchup
11-24-2008, 11:20 AM
ok n wats that u have to go to a website to lean graff

TastySesamcrew
11-24-2008, 11:31 AM
Dude you're trying too hard, go for simples first or even better, try to pull off a normal handstyle before you're going for full color shit

mtown
11-24-2008, 11:42 AM
learngraffiti.net is like so gay man

MZ
11-24-2008, 12:14 PM
I needed to try out a new style. Not to mention I just started like 4 days ago.

Here goes my first colored uhh thing.

http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa296/Mezoroni/Graf/Picture005.jpg

TastySesamcrew
11-24-2008, 12:50 PM
Bro, thats a straight graff creator rip off.

MZ
11-24-2008, 12:54 PM
Well I guess thanks for the constructive critisism...

Bazer
11-24-2008, 01:01 PM
be original man. even if its generic it's gonna be your shit somehow. you just gotta start from scratch.

TastySesamcrew
11-24-2008, 01:01 PM
How the fuck do you critize a ripoff?

enlis_one
11-24-2008, 01:14 PM
How the fuck do you critize a ripoff?

how tha fuck u gonna bite a computer generated style dood cmon now and i didnt see any1 crit that they juss told him to be original u illiterat fux

TastySesamcrew
11-24-2008, 01:29 PM
stfu he needs to be original I guess if he reads 2 fuckin pages they tell the most people without structure like yourself to start off with simples.

MZ
11-24-2008, 01:32 PM
I see what you're sayin, thanks for the tip, Baze.

Baron
11-24-2008, 02:06 PM
stfu he needs to be original I guess if he reads 2 fuckin pages they tell the most people without structure like yourself to start off with simples.

With you 100%.

skeetz
11-24-2008, 03:16 PM
well not a lot to be said about pieces above
spank- good stuff
everyone else- go back to simps, or if you havent done them yet do them...

sketch i did in math. i know about the crown stuff dont even tell me. put it there cuz i didnt like the flat edge at the top of the w, shouldve used an arrow but w/e. crits?
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/wildstyle.jpg

klic
11-24-2008, 04:02 PM
havnt posted here in a while
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHBasicLetters.jpg

spank - not feeling your A
ice age - the only one im kind of feeling is the haze exchange
nocancontrol - would look better if all the bars were the same width

bump for crits

wild - the letters are nice but im not feeling any of the swirly shit

RFI. SPit
11-24-2008, 05:54 PM
A lot of you guys need to water down your letters and practice basic structure before you get too into what you're doing. Ketchup, Scino, skeetz, this applies to you.
Looking good Synps!

Here is a little bit of different style from me

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3002/3056420003_2963c154c5_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3239/3056337735_2fc1f187cb_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3196/3056337833_0597959b74_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3231/3025562978_a5ceb233ee_o.jpg

RFI. SPit
11-24-2008, 05:54 PM
A lot of you guys need to water down your letters and practice basic structure before you get too into what you're doing. Ketchup, Scino, skeetz, this applies to you.
Looking good Synps!

Here is a little bit of different style from me

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3002/3056420003_2963c154c5_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3239/3056337735_2fc1f187cb_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3196/3056337833_0597959b74_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3231/3025562978_a5ceb233ee_o.jpg

BigBlueViolence
11-24-2008, 07:20 PM
I dig the fuck out of your simples, and the handstyles in your first two pictures,
but the tall hands seem a little off to me.
The extension of the Z just, like, doesn't seem like part of the Z.

AntEater
11-24-2008, 07:34 PM
Zof - that shit is bomb as hell, a lil inspiration of what you can do with simples.
Skeetz - That L is huge, also the arrow on the right, completely unnecessary. not tryen to bring you down man, your letters got some good potential, keep playen with them and youll be rollen.
Shpel - your simps are always looken good.
the rest of you need to start simple, you know keyboard letter simple.

heres somethin a lil diffrent.

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/slebw.jpg

b SQUARED 08
11-24-2008, 07:51 PM
Zof- diggin' all of 'em, including the hands. Nice work.
SLE- Pretty good simples, but there is too much dead space on the top portions of the letters, IMO. Not really feelin' the midsection on that E either. I think it'd look better if it were a little more squared off.

Here's my most recent sketch of my new name. The A blows, so ignore that. This most I've ever done with these letters together, so hopefully progression is taking place...
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/VideoSnapshot-6.jpg

librelikespie
11-24-2008, 08:56 PM
http://photos-b.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v645/129/20/1193550161/n1193550161_30334249_6883.jpg

this is fire
zof - shits pretty fucking sexy

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication355.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication356.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication357.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication358.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication359.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication360.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication361.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication362.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication363.jpg

crit my letters please

NoCanControl
11-24-2008, 08:57 PM
http://photos-b.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v645/129/20/1193550161/n1193550161_30334249_6883.jpg

ice age. do simples

enlis one. do simples

wings. idky. but your letters are ugly. emm. idk how to critic it. doing simples can never hurt.


synps. work on flow. just go crazy and forget about simples. and concentrate on the flow of blocks. and then go back to simples once you understand flow. and apply

cais. your top pic. a is funny. looking. doesn't look like an a

mtown. work on the openings of your letters. like. mess around with the openings and see how that affects the look of your letters.


btw mars volta is the shizz.

criters would be apreeeshiated. :)

Queezy
11-24-2008, 09:01 PM
You got your pieces down pretty much, maybe start experimenting with letter styles. Your throwie lacks though, I don't know what just work on it some more. The characters are dope.

BigBlueViolence
11-24-2008, 09:05 PM
Monster- you're definitely coming correct with the letters,
the only crit I can really think up is to take more time on inking your letters.

NoCanControl
11-24-2008, 09:06 PM
i would say his r is off. well the hole part.

edit.

i am lying. but i remember his older r's pooped out. but yea. they are legit nao.

RFI. SPit
11-24-2008, 09:23 PM
Oops, forgot one from my post

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3203/3057155695_71f36937c8_o.jpg


Libre, want to do an exchange? and if so, what do you want me to write for you, monster?

JETPACK!!
11-24-2008, 09:30 PM
im posting here to get crits, dont tell me im not a toy. thanks.

monster, very fresh work. i like it all, your S's seem to need work in most of the sketches.
zof, a lot better than your old work. the Z and F are fresh. not feelin your first O a hell of a lot

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3225/rasek60hj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/9300/rasek61ls7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

NoCanControl
11-24-2008, 09:34 PM
rask. you r starts to resemble a b. from far away. i seen a flick of yours and it looked like a b and not an r.

SAID
11-24-2008, 09:36 PM
Rasek your E looks abit stiff compared to your other letters.
Your other letters seem to be more flowy and much more extended.
I feel like your just slid your E in there you know what I mean?
(in your second)
I would done the same E as in your first one, with the same connection to your K.
Zof, your middle of the N looks abit thin to me compared to your other letters. Id try and fix up that Z a little too.
Your E is open but your Z is closed, Im not quite sure if you know what I mean.
Libres, Im seriously digging all your shit, just be careful of the thickness of your outline sometimes, looks a quite bit thick.
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/5307/aher008qk9.jpg
BEGER

crits would be appreciated.

atlok7
11-24-2008, 09:41 PM
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication356.jpg


i love how all the letters fit together like a dick into a mouth

NoCanControl
11-24-2008, 09:50 PM
beger i really can't see the e's

SAID
11-24-2008, 09:54 PM
look at the fourth loop (on top)
thats the top horizontal line of the E
the little thin line under is the middle horizontal line
and the thicker one connecting to the thin one going downwards then back up is the last horizontal line of the E. (with the whack extension going to the left)
the exact same thing with the first E but its hidden behind the B.
it was all freestyled so i couldnt really fix it up you know?
but thanks man,
ill try and make my letters more visible next time.

librelikespie
11-24-2008, 10:31 PM
Libre, want to do an exchange? and if so, what do you want me to write for you, monster?

monster :) i'll have yours done soon

beger - get us a bigger flick so we can see whats going on, flow looks mad so far.
rasek - shit looks good, mabye try to let get the A out of R's way lol. or try a piece with lowercase vowels ?

NoCanControl
11-24-2008, 11:14 PM
http://photos-a.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v645/129/20/1193550161/n1193550161_30334248_6449.jpg

RFI. SPit
11-24-2008, 11:19 PM
Here you are Monster

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/6617/photo104am9.jpg

dont=play=ketchup
11-24-2008, 11:23 PM
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/2614/015zk9.jpg

C3ZR ONE
11-24-2008, 11:24 PM
Zof and Nocancontrol- That shit is lookin ill.

*SIZE*
11-24-2008, 11:27 PM
Crits please

librelikespie
11-25-2008, 12:34 AM
thank you, i am currently jacking off to it :)

heres yours, scuse the wack hand steeze

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication364.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication365.jpg

dont=play=ketchup
11-25-2008, 12:38 AM
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/8215/004vf6.jpg

RFI. SPit
11-25-2008, 12:58 AM
Thanks man, those are funky! Lovin' em

MarOne...
11-25-2008, 01:06 AM
A lot of you guys need to water down your letters and practice basic structure before you get too into what you're doing. Ketchup, Scino, skeetz, this applies to you.
Looking good Synps!

Here is a little bit of different style from me

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3002/3056420003_2963c154c5_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3239/3056337735_2fc1f187cb_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3196/3056337833_0597959b74_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3231/3025562978_a5ceb233ee_o.jpg

Zof, you're so HOT.

dont=play=ketchup
11-25-2008, 01:08 AM
i like that first one u did

TastySesamcrew
11-25-2008, 06:36 AM
Zof and monster I want a threesome, shits dope as fuck!!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3232/3058815914_7042e864a6.jpg

respERATION
11-25-2008, 06:56 AM
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/hatemeagain.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/hateme.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/hgfgfh.jpg
drunken drawing
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/jgkkjjgk.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/liklkjkkllk.jpg

Bonus
11-25-2008, 07:30 AM
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/hatemeagain.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/hateme.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/hgfgfh.jpg
drunken drawing
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/jgkkjjgk.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/liklkjkkllk.jpg

that last one say sarz?

nice ideas, need to calm donw on the 'euro arrows' youve done onn the last one a bit, no need to use them so much...i probably understand you need to fill the gaps but arrows is the easy way out! ;)

Bonus
11-25-2008, 07:34 AM
Crits please


ok heres a few ideas:
1) dont do cracks, its too much..
2) dont do a yellow drop shadow, if you aint got any other colours then colour it black or not at all..
3) arrange your letters as blocks rather than doing the letter as one line, start simple and work your way up.
4) make sure you keep your lines parallel to start with then once youve learned how to pull off the letters in a different style then start working out what you're going to do with your lines.
5) dont do letters add ons like the top of the E and S as they have been done WAY too much before. start simple and work your way up

hope that helps geeza

BAGS
11-25-2008, 11:49 AM
Tasty you got a unique style man. I could pick your shit out easily. Keep it up dude.

retnemed
11-25-2008, 11:53 AM
this is fire
zof - shits pretty fucking sexy

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication359.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication360.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication361.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication362.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/magapplication363.jpg

crit my letters please

Hmmmm, not looking too shabby, you have a decent throwup, and some alright characters, but try and keep it simple for now, just make sure all your letters correspond with eachother n maybe revamp ehm a bit. other then that though, lookin pretty good.

RFI. SPit
11-25-2008, 03:55 PM
Hmmmm, not looking too shabby, you have a decent throwup, and some alright characters, but try and keep it simple for now, just make sure all your letters correspond with eachother n maybe revamp ehm a bit. other then that though, lookin pretty good.

I have this odd feeling you have no idea what you're talking about

ESKiMO2
11-25-2008, 04:05 PM
I drew this a long time ago but I just decided to color it today.

http://fc46.deviantart.com/fs38/f/2008/330/2/c/Fuck_the_World_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

***XTReMeOMGCRITS***
Musica- IT'S COOL!!!
Zof- THAT SHIT'S HOT. MAD CLEAN!
Monster- YOU'VE TONED DOWN YOUR STYLE BUT IT STILL NEEDS BASIC STRUCTURE!!

ESKiMO2
11-25-2008, 04:08 PM
just make sure all your letters correspond with eachother n maybe revamp ehm a bit.

You mean give it some consistency/flow and recreate them?

atlok7
11-25-2008, 05:36 PM
I drew this a long time ago but I just decided to color it today.

http://fc46.deviantart.com/fs38/f/2008/330/2/c/Fuck_the_World_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

***XTReMeOMGCRITS***
Musica- IT'S COOL!!!
Zof- THAT SHIT'S HOT. MAD CLEAN!
Monster- YOU'VE TONED DOWN YOUR STYLE BUT IT STILL NEEDS BASIC STRUCTURE!!

you sound like an emo fag

dayda187
11-25-2008, 06:04 PM
here is something i did for a battle

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x155/rezn2007/Image009-1.jpg

dayda187
11-25-2008, 06:05 PM
the word was tron

Worms
11-25-2008, 06:31 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Reken.jpg
freestyle

ESKiMO2
11-25-2008, 06:35 PM
you sound like an emo fag

And you sound like a pretentious cocksucker who was castrated at 6 years old.

Fuck emo kids btw.

-Wings-
11-25-2008, 08:12 PM
A simple
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF25112008_00000-1.jpg
A piece
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF25112008_00000.jpg
Cruts please. No hate :)!

smooth_nuts
11-25-2008, 09:00 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF25112008_00000-1.jpg
keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep doing this!!!

Baron
11-25-2008, 09:09 PM
What smooth said, I have never been a fan of you crazy-ass extension style

klic
11-25-2008, 09:12 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf-1.jpg

skin - in the simpler one, keep your s the same width

reken - the piece looks dope, not really feeling your throws though, id work on the r

tron - looks good but i cant say im feeling the fill

eskimo - i gave you crits for it when it was unfinished back a while ago but there isnt much flow to it but it gives it a kind of funky look to it so i dont no if id fix that

JETPACK!!
11-25-2008, 09:45 PM
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/2410/rasek62bz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

keep it up skin, work on the consistency for now.

shpel, im glad you ditched the old steeze. it was never workin for ya. start pulling bars in wierd directions and extending them. play with it

ESKiMO2
11-25-2008, 10:01 PM
I drew this a long time ago but I just decided to color it today.

http://fc46.deviantart.com/fs38/f/2008/330/2/c/Fuck_the_World_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

***XTReMeOMGCRITS***
Musica- IT'S COOL!!!
Zof- THAT SHIT'S HOT. MAD CLEAN!
Monster- YOU'VE TONED DOWN YOUR STYLE BUT IT STILL NEEDS BASIC STRUCTURE!!

BUMP

Rasek- It's looking pretty cool. Maybe try putting the top of the K over the top bar of the E.

mekosbc
11-25-2008, 10:04 PM
A piece
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF25112008_00000.jpg


THIS FUCKING ILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL LL I LOVE YOUR STYLE THROW SOME COLOR IN ONE OF YOUR PEICES! WE NEED TO DO AN EXCHANGE..... PM IF YOUR DOWN...

ESKiMO2
11-25-2008, 10:10 PM
http://fc97.deviantart.com/fs39/f/2008/330/4/0/Calors_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

osnapizzel
11-25-2008, 11:11 PM
last few posts are on fiiiirrreeeeee

im a try and keep it goinghttp://img383.imageshack.us/img383/1500/screencapture17xn3.png

retnemed
11-25-2008, 11:43 PM
Rasek that sketch is looking awesome, all i would say that you need to work on is the K.

Snew
11-25-2008, 11:45 PM
Rasek- always amazing me..

Shpel- work on making your letters flow as you bend them.. the H seems a little out of place.
Skin- the simple looks good. the extensions just dont fit in the second piece.
Snap- you have some of the best simples on this forum i think. you, and rasek.

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo43.jpg
dunno how i feel about the extensions.. but im kinda workin with a newer style for myself..

balance42020
11-25-2008, 11:53 PM
ur a toy?

Snew
11-25-2008, 11:59 PM
i know.. ive never even made an attempt at anything besides simples before.. this is my first venture into any sort of style at all..

osnapizzel
11-26-2008, 12:11 AM
i wouldve added a shadow to thaT SNEW

fonone
11-26-2008, 12:22 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Reken.jpg
freestyle

looking good mate, just watch the flow of your bars.. like the spine of the R is bent one way while the K is bent the other way, i think make the K like the R and it would look much better. also watch bar widths, try to keep them all the same for now, like the top bars on your E's are a bit too thick. looking real good though, keep it up.

EDIT: just saw RASEK's sketch.. i would take the top part of the S back a little bit, maybe just to kill that dead space. Also i dont like the extension on the top right of the K, looks out of place and the A looks real stiff in comparison to the other letters like they all have extensions that expand (hard to explain) while the A stays the same width pretty much all the way through.

SKIN, that pink one is the best thing ive seen from you.. keep that sort of shit up.

TastySesamcrew
11-26-2008, 06:29 AM
No need for crits on this page, awesome work all of you! Keep this shit up brothers!

Zof and monster I want a threesome, shits dope as fuck!!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3232/3058815914_7042e864a6.jpg

Bump

Bonus
11-26-2008, 06:47 AM
its childish people writing "your a toy?" on these forums, theyve happily admittedly placed themselves on this specific forum for a reason and dont need people to remind them, only get help

buck up guys cmon

Bonus
11-26-2008, 06:51 AM
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/2410/rasek62bz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

keep it up skin, work on the consistency for now.

shpel, im glad you ditched the old steeze. it was never workin for ya. start pulling bars in wierd directions and extending them. play with it


keep this up man, the letters are clearly shaping up and the proportion is almost there.
you have too many different style parts going on in the sketch though, you have:

sharp, rounded, square, loops etc...

make sure you pretty much stick to two of them for starters then work around it to see if it all fits in future.
and if your going to do this kind of aggressive style dont add those loops man.

keep it up

safe

Juicy JSC
11-26-2008, 09:28 AM
Just wondering what everyon thinks of the new junk steez and stickers going around, they are my "friends" and i dont take responsibility for them but what do you think, "he" wants to know. will post more sketcehs once i find a fucking camera, skin good on yah, keep it simple, rasek, there is not much to say besides good work and keep it up, shpel even though you are keeping it basic i would change something up because it doesnt look right, maybe just try a different style man, keep it ups boys and girls, take it easy too, and remember FUCK THE POLICE(and oc transpo security:)

ESKiMO2
11-26-2008, 10:40 AM
Don't listen to this guy ^
Mega schmuck.

TastySesamcrew
11-26-2008, 11:32 AM
Yeah man why the fuck do you talk all that nonsense?

JETPACK!!
11-26-2008, 12:05 PM
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/2410/rasek62bz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

keep it up skin, work on the consistency for now.

shpel, im glad you ditched the old steeze. it was never workin for ya. start pulling bars in wierd directions and extending them. play with it

krump

garbage down tha way
11-26-2008, 01:14 PM
i know its shitty, but sketching is boring as hell.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h-7.jpg

Rasek that new shits ill. the only thing id try to improve on is the S. Not that it's bad but I've seen nicer ones from you.

snew- the letters by themselves are nice but the addons ruin it.


bump tasty fone ohsnap eskimo

sketch_three
11-26-2008, 01:40 PM
loose thee swerls they dun go with thepointy corner vibe u got gwanin rasek

osnapizzel
11-26-2008, 02:13 PM
http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/1500/screencapture17xn3.png

cause all the cool kids hump

Snew
11-26-2008, 02:46 PM
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/photo43.jpg
dunno how i feel about the extensions.. But im kinda workin with a newer style for myself..

slump...

AntEater
11-26-2008, 02:52 PM
rasek - shits on point bro
oh snap- shits fuckin tight, loven the simps
garbage - ill fill

Somethen I started

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/asbw1.jpg

Crits

osnapizzel
11-26-2008, 03:01 PM
what is it?

Sketched!
11-26-2008, 03:06 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3160/3061284867_9d493cf34e.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3003/3056525780_4dc91cafa3.jpg
This one was for the "your name backwards" battle but i missed the date.
Except the arrow ontop of the I i quite like it.
Crits?