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IlikePie
01-03-2009, 10:58 PM
Less Sbombs, more original mayne. Just one step at a time.

B.S. POLICE
01-03-2009, 11:02 PM
yea lol my simps will progress into something complicated naturally, i dont feel like forcing it

JETPACK!!
01-03-2009, 11:07 PM
maybe not complicated. but they will develop into your own style eventually. depends how deep you wanna dig into the crates, know what im sayin? just keep workin at it.

B.S. POLICE
01-03-2009, 11:08 PM
yeah well my style has been getting more elebarate from what ive noticed

.HATESONE.
01-03-2009, 11:09 PM
new writes.any crits?



http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z241/RAEL_ONE/Picture397.jpg

CakeWalk99
01-03-2009, 11:27 PM
Snap: I feel like an idiot for asking, but is that a young mr wiggles? I thought that piece you did last was phat. The S and the N were legit as hell, but that first bar on the A is kinda hiding!

Got crazy with this one: Im trying to come up with a legit U.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0146-1.jpg

JETPACK!!
01-03-2009, 11:34 PM
stop it. go backwards. and repeat process of simples

La Coka Nostra
01-03-2009, 11:37 PM
yeah well my style has been getting more elebarate from what ive noticed


a lot of writers never paint wildstyles, but still rock dope shit.
do simples all day. simples are dope if pulled off right.

Slushi
01-03-2009, 11:55 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z85/SluseFA/sluseco.jpg

La Coka Nostra
01-04-2009, 12:10 AM
i'm bored. anyone decent want to exchange? sluse? you still up?

B.S. POLICE
01-04-2009, 12:20 AM
im up but im currantly fighting with my ex, i can do one after lol

JETPACK!!
01-04-2009, 01:08 AM
i spent a long time on it.

http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/4258/reconxl9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

La Coka Nostra
01-04-2009, 01:17 AM
loads better than mine was.
sheeeiiit.
i ain't even posting that ish.

B.S. POLICE
01-04-2009, 01:19 AM
rasek how dare you bite my n lol

ayatONE
01-04-2009, 01:34 AM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0146-1.jpg
pretty cool

JETPACK!!
01-04-2009, 02:16 AM
i didnt realize i bit your N. take it back, i dont want it.

(SoS)Viruz
01-04-2009, 03:27 AM
Yo Ras. That R is nice.... But that "E" I belive we talked about this befor its that top bar man....

Cakewalk......"New to Graff Thread" and no it dosen't look good. Take it slow. Go to the blockbuster letters aka SIMPS. Cause that is booboo....

Sluse- YOUR HOMO :)

Hatesone- Re-think what you thought a hand style was and try with basic writing homie seriously. Then adjust but changin you whole style.

MarOne...
01-04-2009, 03:33 AM
AY YO NIGGOR.
(you're black)

(SoS)Viruz
01-04-2009, 03:41 AM
HonkIIY
(YOUr-WHITE)

Sup Kabr. You would

librelikespie
01-04-2009, 03:42 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3113/3162154883_fe212e6acd.jpg

esh besh mum

MarOne...
01-04-2009, 03:48 AM
Yo niggor, I WOULD.


http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3113/3162154883_fe212e6acd.jpg

esh besh mum

fucking frizzeshdizzle.

Exchange?! I write cabre or kabre.

Atomik
01-04-2009, 04:08 AM
shits fresh librelikespie keep it up!!
new shit reads dare trying different things tell me what you think

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/dare.jpg

.HATESONE.
01-04-2009, 04:29 AM
Hatesone- Re-think what you thought a hand style was and try with basic writing homie seriously. Then adjust but changin you whole style.

yeah i tweaked it and now it looks a little different now but still the same idea.what exactly is wrong with it.that was more something i just pulled out of my ass haha.but i think i can work it if i figure out the t.goddamn those T's haha.

ScAmeretoLme
01-04-2009, 10:32 AM
some shitty shit from over the break.
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s114/scameretolme/IMG_2816.jpg
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s114/scameretolme/IMG_2815.jpg
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s114/scameretolme/IMG_2814.jpg
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s114/scameretolme/IMG_2813.jpg

librelikespie that shit is straight awesome

really digging your stuff too atomik, like the color choices alot, looks really clean

Thrice
01-04-2009, 10:40 AM
Atomic, that is some sick stuff man, keep it up. Also no need to post in the toy forum.

hal.cyon
01-04-2009, 10:43 AM
new blackbook, first pager.

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/2791/003iu8.jpg
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/2721/002io4.jpg
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/6334/001zh9.jpg

luca? - i dunno, i can't get behind any of those, work with bars and try simpler stuff.
atomik - really fresh. that a's real sick, but the r is a little thin in spots.
monster - crushing it, i really think you kill it with that style.
jet - not as fresh as your own stuff, the e and c's a little iffy for me because the lower bars are covered.

sex without condoms
01-04-2009, 12:37 PM
just because i'm still out and about

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/raetoss.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-04-2009, 02:47 PM
i didnt realize i bit your N. take it back, i dont want it.

nah i was kidding you didnt lol

(SoS)Viruz
01-04-2009, 02:49 PM
two pages no critts woooowww


pie meh looks good anyway

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/8596/screencapture4qi1.png

OHSNAPIZZLE!!!! Yo homie what happened to your other account. But yo you got to teach you technique for coloring. That ill color scheme

B.S. POLICE
01-04-2009, 03:02 PM
its very simple, for the white to orange shit i used 4 prismas on the broad side, peach first you gotta do it quick fallowed by yellow real guick then peach on top to smooth it out fallowed by and orange and a yellow over. thats pretty much it


as for the other account, shit got sketch and someone was trying to set me up so i got it banned and starteda new name.

(SoS)Viruz
01-04-2009, 03:08 PM
its very simple, for the white to orange shit i used 4 prismas on the broad side, peach first you gotta do it quick fallowed by yellow real guick then peach on top to smooth it out fallowed by and orange and a yellow over. thats pretty much it


as for the other account, shit got sketch and someone was trying to set me up so i got it banned and starteda new name.

Shit damn man...

But still That pic is raw. I see you starting to Inccorparate Arrows. Everyone from back in the day is gettin good now. Ras, you, Pie, Mar(HE A HOMO :))

Zase
01-04-2009, 04:23 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/28kk7sx.jpg

militia
01-04-2009, 04:23 PM
just foolin around while i was bored and came up with this S, should i try to turn it into a wildstyle piece or forget about it?



http://i383.photobucket.com/albums/oo275/militia-smak/IMG_0002.jpg

.HATESONE.
01-04-2009, 04:47 PM
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z241/RAEL_ONE/Picture398.jpg
some shit i did on a ds i gots fo xmas.

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z241/RAEL_ONE/Picture400.jpg
gonna say hate.one day.fuck T's.gotta fix this...

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z241/RAEL_ONE/Picture399.jpg and then me fucking *****s up on that GTA4 haha.i love the ak.

crevette
01-04-2009, 05:21 PM
zase- top one is dooope.

sarz- a and r are okay. the s looks bad with the bottom bar like that, try to make it smoother. and the z is okay, just don't like the two end bars that long.

halcyon- throw looks sick but that s looks outta place.

militia- drop the connection. and if oyu don't want to at least drop that bottom bar sticking out for no reason.

hate- finish that bottom one. that h doesn't really look like an h though, the bottom bar is so short it gets mixed up with the surrounding fill.




http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/scan00036.jpg



buuuuuump

need crits

Stussy
01-04-2009, 05:41 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/ndseu0.jpg
crevette- Try simples... you kinda got the idea of a style with what you got... but just try to start with simples.
Hate- keep at it... i like the first one
Hal-cyon- im not digging the throw style... but the E does need to be a little bigger
crits?

.HATESONE.
01-04-2009, 05:50 PM
yeah that one didnt work out so well but whatever.this is something i did yesterday.just started writing hate like a week ago so....got time to perfect it

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z241/RAEL_ONE/Picture402.jpg

CakeWalk99
01-04-2009, 06:05 PM
Hates: Pretty legit, but it looks like the bottom bar on the E vanished. I like it though.

Some shit from today. Ignore the stuff right in the center please. http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0144-1.jpg

Zase
01-04-2009, 07:02 PM
sank thanks man that joint is dope
imma do u a piece man i fucking forgot
but im fast when it comes to piecing
imma post up near soon this thread

Zase
01-04-2009, 07:34 PM
FUCK ME IM FAST
http://i43.tinypic.com/2j27qip.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
01-04-2009, 08:45 PM
That took you over half an hour? Thats not fast broham.

Snap - With the vanishing point 3D, the highlights should be to the exact opposite side of the 3D. Yours is just on the right side. The light source is what is making the 3D in the first place. Get it?
Militia - Just forget about it man...try out some simps.
Hate - I think the Ts spine would look better just comin straight down, instead of cutting back into the A.
Rayz - Tight little simp.
Mue - Youre trying too hard man. Dont try getting too complicated with it. Just keep trying your basic keyboard letters.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf019.jpg
bullshit

-Wings-
01-04-2009, 09:17 PM
Mue > Your straight ones are your best there.
Zase > That exchange you have there the letters are to far apart and one bar on the A is to small.
I GOT CLOUT > Good as always

Anyways I dont usualy do characters, so heres a piece with one,
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2518-1.jpg

Desipher
01-04-2009, 09:17 PM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/DSC00259.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-04-2009, 09:41 PM
Snap - With the vanishing point 3D, the highlights should be to the exact opposite side of the 3D. Yours is just on the right side. The light source is what is making the 3D in the first place. Get it?
t

i think i get you but im not sure on how i would go about fixing that

MarOne...
01-04-2009, 10:11 PM
Shit damn man...

But still That pic is raw. I see you starting to Inccorparate Arrows. Everyone from back in the day is gettin good now. Ras, you, Pie, Mar(HE A HOMO :))

NIGGOR U DONT KNOW ME LUL
(wtf sooo foodstamps)

New sketch, reads EAGR
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/eagr1.png

I GOT CLOUT
01-04-2009, 10:18 PM
i think i get you but im not sure on how i would go about fixing that
shitty example but it should show what i mean.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/S7300956.jpg

[THE]3L3Gy
01-04-2009, 10:36 PM
what do u think of this?

i know it sucks, but what did i do right

Stussy
01-04-2009, 10:40 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/ndseu0.jpg
crevette- Try simples... you kinda got the idea of a style with what you got... but just try to start with simples.
Hate- keep at it... i like the first one
Hal-cyon- im not digging the throw style... but the E does need to be a little bigger
crits?

bumpskies

CakeWalk99
01-04-2009, 10:48 PM
Rayz: The bars are all the same size/lined up pretty well. I think its cool. The more I see simple pieces on here (that look legit) the more I feel like an idiot for trying to rush my work with bent bars that are lame/dont make any sense.

Clout: Always like seeing your work.
Wings: Phat man! That extension is legit on that N. Keep it up! Cool character too!

Desipher
01-04-2009, 11:00 PM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/DSC00259.jpg
bump

I GOT CLOUT
01-04-2009, 11:58 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf019.jpg
bullshit




Anyways I dont usualy do characters, so heres a piece with one,
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2518-1.jpg




http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z241/RAEL_ONE/Picture402.jpg

Bumples.
Wings, I think thats the best thing i've seen from you yet. Keep it up.

B.S. POLICE
01-05-2009, 01:25 AM
this page burrnssshttp://img184.imageshack.us/img184/589/screencapture8cg2.png

Atomik
01-05-2009, 01:28 AM
bump for crits

shits fresh librelikespie keep it up!!
new shit reads dare trying different things tell me what you think

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/dare.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-05-2009, 01:30 AM
looks like somethings missing on the top od the d between the a, too much dead space knowhaimean

Atomik
01-05-2009, 01:36 AM
yeah i noticed that shit too ah what ever shit was just a trial and error ha clean shit by the way ohsnap keep that shit up bend your bars haha but yeah shits clean keep it up

TRY'N
01-05-2009, 01:44 AM
ohsnap-- i like it a lot. on your last piece someone said you should get rid of the arrow, but i like the arrow, i think it would look good either way. the colors are fresh, i like the gold.

atomik-- to me, i don't think there's really dead space between the D and the A because the amount of 3D you have between the D and the A is pretty much equal to the amount between the R and the E. i like it, it's a cool style, it's pretty symmetrical so it works.

timeless progress
01-05-2009, 01:53 AM
ohsnap-I like it, not feelin the arrow but thats just me
Atomic-real dope, rework the D to loose some deadspace, and I noticed your 3ds off just a lil but its barely noticable

Something I drew up just now and something for my homie thor
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1231141086.jpg
and this is what me and thor sketched earlier and painted
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1231129174.jpg
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1231129146.jpg
Yea I know they are hagard but it was wet out and they took a beating

I GOT CLOUT
01-05-2009, 03:12 AM
Snap it looks fresh, but youre doing the same thing with the highlights. They should be on the exact opposite sides that theyre on.
Atomik - The D looks a bit off. Plus that one random arrow just looks out of place to me.
Timeless - your shits getting more and more off base man. Tighten it up.

hal.cyon
01-05-2009, 03:41 AM
new blackbook has me somewhat inspired.

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/6012/002pv6.jpg
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/339/001dd2.jpg

not sure if ill bust it into a two pager. eh.

timeless - the thor is kool, i can't read the others really.
snap - thats real fresh, i know you got at me a couple pages bout an exchange, ill rock you out one when i get time.
hate - i like that style, would like to see some fleshed out more to see what it looks like.
skin - i think a lot of your pics look the same, altho the charac in this one is aight. keep trying to progress your letters.
dekae - always fresh simps. your color combo's always seem to pop too.

RFI. SPit
01-05-2009, 03:47 AM
osnap- your colouring is nice
Hate- your style looks real original, i'd like to see more
cabr- add some 3d and fill it solid so we can see that sexy structure better!

nice characters to the dude above me

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/9871/photo132jc6.jpg

Err, quick little pen/sharpie free style. Ignore that shitty addon on the z/f

Zase
01-05-2009, 05:50 AM
nice char skin
next time make it more hate more evil u know the face
just my opinion

senkz
01-05-2009, 07:12 AM
little sketch
http://i42.tinypic.com/14uf1fq.jpg

MARTYRaz
01-05-2009, 01:51 PM
make all ur bars the same size....^^^got potential tho

La Coka Nostra
01-05-2009, 01:54 PM
the batman/joker theme is getting real played out.

dark2
01-05-2009, 02:18 PM
senkz-looking good keep it up

this is some random shit i did i know the characs r pretyy generic but was jus messin around
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/Snapshot_20090105.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-05-2009, 02:18 PM
lol whats is with all this hating on that one damn arrow, and yeah i spend almost 0 time on my hands, i spent my first 6 months writing practicing throws, then the last 7 on my pieces. i donno i just never thought handsteez was that important if you burn in everything else. but yeah i know waht you sayin and i really should
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/7079/screencapture9pp7.png

paint markers kick ass

hal.cyon
01-05-2009, 02:31 PM
the batman/joker theme is getting real played out.

ill keep that in mind next time, mr. make it rain on them hoes. *yawn*

BigBlueViolence
01-05-2009, 03:30 PM
Dark- Have you really been around since '06?
Fuck dude, that shit is hurting bad.

PegCityBoy
01-05-2009, 03:50 PM
two pages no critts woooowww


pie meh looks good anyway

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/8596/screencapture4qi1.png

i open the toy thread and ohsnap makes me

♪jizzzz in my pants♪

coconut_ddd
01-05-2009, 03:55 PM
The "M" on the Smile Dark2 is out of proportion imo.

This is after being told to go simpler after my other posted drawing if anyone here rememberes

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p210/coconut_ddd/sketches003.jpg

Sorry its not colored in i need to pick up some more markers. any crits appreciated and it says Pyro

PegCityBoy
01-05-2009, 04:22 PM
dark2 - new to graff thread
ohsnap -
Pyro - no nobody remembers when you posteda while back go simpler yea your kinda using bars but they're kinda shakey and it looks like you started with bars then once you got to the R you kinda forgot then by the O you were like fuck this shit and one last thing loose the little do-dads on the bottom of the r and p ( the one on the P makes it look like an e)

now that thats over feel free to rip me apart aswell(:

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d106/Jason_5159/str8simp001.jpg
also I always fuck it up when i color it sooo i left it blank for now

dark2
01-05-2009, 04:30 PM
yea i have lol not going to lie i havn't put like anytime into it. i have changed my name a couple times but its no excuse lol but going to start simple again.
thanx 4 the crits tho

pyro-besides the top bar on the r being smaller then the rest looks good

.HATESONE.
01-05-2009, 04:39 PM
I HATE YOU GUYS.hts.hells tortured souls.
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z241/RAEL_ONE/Picture404.jpg


and a box full of hate for you faggots.merry christmas:)
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z241/RAEL_ONE/Picture403.jpg

.HATESONE.
01-05-2009, 04:41 PM
damn that shit is hella shaky haha.whatever. :P

I GOT CLOUT
01-05-2009, 04:54 PM
i donno i just never thought handsteez was that important if you burn in everything else.


Its quite the exact opposite. Someone might see a tight piece from a writer and think theyre dope, but then they look down and see some toy ass tag thats makes them look like they have no fucking clue what theyre doing with a marker/can and that piece kinda loses credibility. nahmean?

B.S. POLICE
01-05-2009, 05:03 PM
i guess, i just dont really tag or leave anything but simple clean letters next to my shit. i need to find a good mentor to help me progress with that shit cause when it comes to hands i really have no idea

eMJayBee
01-05-2009, 05:13 PM
Ok ill post here because this is where ive always posted, anyway the stuff looks good, just keep praticing. Havent posted here in a long while and the dates are wrong ]=
pen freestyleeee
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture094.jpg
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture096.jpg
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture095.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-05-2009, 05:18 PM
fills are nice but the structure is lacking

b*ez
01-05-2009, 05:25 PM
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e201/time2fightbak/P1050074.jpg
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e201/time2fightbak/P1050075.jpg
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e201/time2fightbak/P1050076.jpg
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e201/time2fightbak/PC160060-1.jpg
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e201/time2fightbak/PC040052.jpg
Cash Rules Everything Around Me :D

.HATESONE.
01-05-2009, 05:29 PM
b ez.work on your writes homie.and drop the crown too okay:) idk what to say about your shit except use bars.idk how to explain that.like the leters get all thick then go yo really thin in the wrong places.it looks weird.try to make them the same thickness the whole way through.i suck at giving advice.but if it helped then yay for me.

Backalley Abortion Doctor
01-05-2009, 05:48 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/Picture014-1.jpg

Fuck my noob scanner

Slushi
01-05-2009, 05:50 PM
fills are nice but the structure is lacking
You talking about the guy above you?
You best be trolling nigghar. That shit burns hard.

hardwares
01-05-2009, 06:58 PM
aaight first sketch of anything but simple simple shit in a while. crits pleease.
the S is toy as fuck. half way through it i was all "fuck this s" but i was drawing in pen so it was whatever..

WARES
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/7251/0105091743lz6.jpg

"after a long day of snowboarding"

militia
01-05-2009, 07:06 PM
lol way to be peg city. everyone always says go simples, and when you do you dont get any props lol. way to be

PegCityBoy
01-05-2009, 08:02 PM
haha thanks i figure they say simple, i'll give em simple

B.S. POLICE
01-05-2009, 09:19 PM
You talking about the guy above you?
You best be trolling nigghar. That shit burns hard.

dont get me wrong it looks dope but i cant make up some of the letters for shit

gcrolla
01-05-2009, 09:59 PM
jskdfghkjlsg

Backalley Abortion Doctor
01-05-2009, 10:07 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/Picture014-1.jpg

Fuck my noob scanner


I always get the bottom of the page.

B.S. POLICE
01-05-2009, 10:17 PM
what color was the background supposed to be? pink?

seywhat
01-05-2009, 10:37 PM
Ok ill post here because this is where ive always posted, anyway the stuff looks good, just keep praticing. Havent posted here in a long while and the dates are wrong ]=
pen freestyleeee
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture094.jpg
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture096.jpg
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture095.jpg

bump this niggha cuz he be on fire!

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/PHTO0218.jpg
tryin to end my writers block, best flick i could get. shitty cam:(
crits?


gcrolla- use bars
wares- not bad, dont even worry about extensions and shit. focus on your letters, you should try using bars too. just to keep everything in check
solo- bars
hate- keep poppin out them simps

TRY'N
01-05-2009, 10:51 PM
seyar-- i think you should lose all the arrows then it would be a lot better. i like your letters except the E kinda looks off to me...

Bink1
01-05-2009, 11:22 PM
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/620/dsc06194iv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/dsc06194iv7.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img360/dsc06194iv7.jpg/1/)

wares-dope as fuck
sa-right self crit.
doctor-pretty tight,maybe lose one of the tongues.
that background for 2nd emjay shit is best.
seyar-tight drips bro.

WoeInfinite
01-05-2009, 11:26 PM
tens - work on letters rather than coloring, but i reeeeeealllyyy like what youre goin for in the 3d. supafly.
Rots - that dudes fresh
Seyar - yeah lose the arrows. good though
those last two Emjaybee flicks are insanity.

timeless progress
01-05-2009, 11:38 PM
senkz-looking good keep it up

this is some random shit i did i know the characs r pretyy generic but was jus messin around
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/Snapshot_20090105.jpg

were are you from cause Dark(the king) is from here and there is a crew called Anti-Kapitol-Agenda (AKA)
I know you put the 2 behind it but if your located anywere in the midwest USA you should change the name

.HATESONE.
01-06-2009, 12:07 AM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/Picture014-1.jpg

Fuck my noob scanner

this is how i see my self in the future...

La Coka Nostra
01-06-2009, 12:10 AM
ill keep that in mind next time, mr. make it rain on them hoes. *yawn*


butthurt?

and lol @ dark. "still free"

.HATESONE.
01-06-2009, 12:16 AM
were are you from cause Dark(the king) is from here and there is a crew called Anti-Kapitol-Agenda (AKA)
I know you put the 2 behind it but if your located anywere in the midwest USA you should change the name

lol dude.dark is one of the most played out names ever.serioulsy.ive met at least three of them.and i havent met to many writers either.just stating that because its semi relevant.but yeah change your name,keep it.it doesnt really matter as long as there isnt another dark in your town.and if there is.fuck em.thats my philoshophy,haha. im soooooooooo bored.

dark2
01-06-2009, 12:18 AM
timeless im from canada represent eh :P n ya i know thats y i dont write dark anymore lol but didnt know bout tha crew

and hell yes still free lol i made a few new simples ill post lata

enigmatic
01-06-2009, 12:45 AM
I drew this in between sodoku tournaments

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/7733/dsc00035pu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/dsc00035pu5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img377/dsc00035pu5.jpg/1/)

enigmatic
01-06-2009, 12:46 AM
I drew this in between sodoku tournaments

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/7733/dsc00035pu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/dsc00035pu5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img377/dsc00035pu5.jpg/1/)

Backalley Abortion Doctor
01-06-2009, 12:48 AM
I'm getting really tired of seeing that.

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 12:50 AM
lol come on its only the third timeeee


i like the fill though, its cool

enigmatic
01-06-2009, 12:57 AM
soorry i dont know how to work teh internets.

MAST
01-06-2009, 01:13 AM
pic is shitty. couldn't get it any bigger.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/seventh672/IMG000015-1.jpg


style i'm toyin around with. O and half an M. in progress obviously.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/seventh672/OM.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 01:17 AM
exchange with wareshttp://img381.imageshack.us/img381/1301/screencapture11kg1.png

timeless progress
01-06-2009, 01:24 AM
lol dude.dark is one of the most played out names ever.serioulsy.ive met at least three of them.and i havent met to many writers either.just stating that because its semi relevant.but yeah change your name,keep it.it doesnt really matter as long as there isnt another dark in your town.and if there is.fuck em.thats my philoshophy,haha. im soooooooooo bored.

Yea I know but this Dark (http://www.graffiti.org/dark/index.html) is the one Im talking about and he deserves the respect, hes been in it since the 80's 2000+ freights under his belt alonge with endless throws, scribes, etch's, street pieces, legals, and a hella nice guy to top it all

MaNtS
01-06-2009, 01:25 AM
I posted this in main bbook, but nodoubt itl be deleted sooner or later,at least they have no grounds to delete my opinion if its posted in the appropriate thread.

Enjoy the sketches,

ah, shoulda seen it coming, this thing is run like communist russia

have an opinion - post deleted

no reasoning, nothing, yet i see those who are sucking the bombing science peen and coming back for seconds, posting up unfinished trash, surely i thought that would of been the excuse as to why my previous posts had been deleted(unfinished sketches,no colour etc), maybe the mods skipped over the sketches i would classify as toy(in regards to the "strict" skilllevel required) that make its way into this thread

yet when i posted up something ide put work into,it too was deleted, so if the blackbook thread isnt for displaying graffiti drawn in forum members blackbooks, what is it for?

This is not a personal attack kabr, and shouldn't be taken as such,

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/unicorn.png

it is in form a basic sketch, no colour,3d etc etc, yet i see this passed the checkup?

My sketch was deleted as soon as it was realised.I figured it was just due to lack of colours.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/DSCN2372.jpg
So i held out and waited till ide completed these.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/DSCN2394.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/DSCN2417.jpg

Those however were deleted within 4 hours of myself posting them up, im not a king, i dont claim to be, i dont own the blackbook threads, they are open to everyone for inspiration, feedback(direct response or pm) etc etc.

Writers are hugely ego driven and it would be a lie to try and deny it,i know i proburbly put more effort into those two sketches then kabr did of the unicorn, so its this frustration itself that has caused me to post with such a(hopefully awakening) response.

All i ask is that some form of "equality" if achievable, be put in place, i dont post much, just lurk, alot of other members dont participate actively as part of the "inner circle" and it appears that alot of members with potential go unnoticed because they dont get straight on their knees with their mouths open on the first post.

I have no doubt whatsoever that this post will be deleted the instance it is read by whoever is caught up in the firm grip they have over this thread and community.

Im open to an Intellectual discussion,

Two Scenarios

a) Continue on the powertrip bumping all ur mates and deleting anyone who pauses to render a sense of independant thought.

b) Respond here from your account so i can at least hear reasonings as to why my stuffs getting deleted, ive used examples above for comparison, so its obviously not that "the sketches have to be coloured" or any pety criteria like that,
so by process of elimination the problem would lie with me?
yet i only post up my work(wich is deleted almost instantly)
so when i cross that one off, then im unsure of the problem and would like a response.

This is a problem that needs to be discussed and not deleted/swept under the rug,

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/DSCN2398.jpg

Whats the secret handshake? :confused:

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 01:32 AM
yeah my stuff gets deleted too, im not trying to bitch im no where close to the level taht kayone707 or roolete and other guys are on but i battle the same kids that post in the blackbook thread not the kids that post here and im not trying to brag but i get my fare share of votes. i practice a lot, i mean A LOT but hey whatever i get more dick riding here anyway!

hardwares
01-06-2009, 01:35 AM
throw exchange with ohsnap

sorry for the shitty quality im in a hotel at a ski resort. all i got is a shitty ass hotel pen and paper. whatevz
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/8500/ohsnaptl4.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 01:37 AM
word up, i wish i was out at a ski resort, i havent snowboarded a real mountain yet this season. all back yeard jib seshs

hardwares
01-06-2009, 01:42 AM
shit yo back yard jib sessions are legit tho. get so much practice.

its fucking great to live right next to the mountains tho. colorado woot.

Backalley Abortion Doctor
01-06-2009, 02:01 AM
shit yo back yard jib sessions are legit tho

blunttokes
01-06-2009, 02:02 AM
http://i381.photobucket.com/albums/oo257/CaNaDuH905/DSCF1159.jpg
not finished.. jus drew the outline but not sure what i want to add to it and where.. crits?

Evasion Of Invasion
01-06-2009, 02:08 AM
yeah my stuff gets deleted too, im not trying to bitch im no where close to the level taht kayone707 or roolete and other guys are on but i battle the same kids that post in the blackbook thread not the kids that post here and im not trying to brag but i get my fare share of votes. i practice a lot, i mean A LOT but hey whatever i get more dick riding here anyway!

Preach brotha, preach! yeah ive tended to notice the only way to excell in these forums is to ride as mush cock as possible but w/e "C`est la Vie!"
Mast - aint seen a sketch from u in a LONG time its lookin good man stick with that style ur messin with im lovin it man
MaNtS - liking the style especially the S but the colouring seems a bit crude to me try workin on some schemes and it'll look alot better
Bluntokes - try fattening up the lower middle bar on the E and keep all the bars at the same width
For a battle - Cajin
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/n516386474_1639471_6604.jpg

Says Evade spent to much time on it
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture024.jpg
crits?

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 02:10 AM
im diggin the bottom one

NO_1
01-06-2009, 03:36 AM
cajin- bottom on is pretty clean as far as how its colored
mast- i like the sketch thing you did alot.
b.s. police- got that shit down

roz
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/actualyldecent.jpg
short for rozwell

Bink1
01-06-2009, 10:19 AM
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/8661/dsc06200ap3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/dsc06200ap3.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img82/dsc06200ap3.jpg/1/)

blunt- they are fine maybe add 3d
others - dopeish.

Zase
01-06-2009, 01:05 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t53E-u0U5rI

jupsick
01-06-2009, 01:15 PM
http://xs135.xs.to/xs135/09022/0106092104c__450_x_600_598.jpg
http://xs135.xs.to/xs135/09022/0106092104b__450_x_600_709.jpg
http://xs135.xs.to/xs135/09022/0106092104a__450_x_600_604.jpg
http://xs135.xs.to/xs135/09022/0106092104__450_x_600_849.jpg
any crits?

MarOne...
01-06-2009, 01:37 PM
I posted this in main bbook, but nodoubt itl be deleted sooner or later,at least they have no grounds to delete my opinion if its posted in the appropriate thread.

Enjoy the sketches,

ah, shoulda seen it coming, this thing is run like communist russia

have an opinion - post deleted

no reasoning, nothing, yet i see those who are sucking the bombing science peen and coming back for seconds, posting up unfinished trash, surely i thought that would of been the excuse as to why my previous posts had been deleted(unfinished sketches,no colour etc), maybe the mods skipped over the sketches i would classify as toy(in regards to the "strict" skilllevel required) that make its way into this thread

yet when i posted up something ide put work into,it too was deleted, so if the blackbook thread isnt for displaying graffiti drawn in forum members blackbooks, what is it for?

This is not a personal attack kabr, and shouldn't be taken as such,

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/unicorn.png

it is in form a basic sketch, no colour,3d etc etc, yet i see this passed the checkup?

Whats the secret handshake? :confused:

WOOOOOOOOW I'm taking this as a personal attack. :mad::mad::mad:

peace89
01-06-2009, 01:57 PM
trying a new name and shit

crits please

hardwares
01-06-2009, 02:08 PM
peace--
the first one is the best, but the C is kinda wack. lose that large appendage on the bottom of it.. for the second one, try not to stick your letters so close together, and for the third.. the O E U and S are dope and simple but the F and T dont really fit in with the other letters, especially their bigger size. try to follow a more consecutive letter style throughout your piece when you write. and i dont really like that skinny part of the F, near the top. my opinion tho.

respERATION
01-06-2009, 02:14 PM
mast and oeace-blockies imo
mantz-try and keep your letters a bit more consistant....like some are bulky some are curved
jup-drop the arrows and shit and focus on your letters
idk if i've showed this....not done....hates away.
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/crim0001-1.jpg

crits?

JETPACK!!
01-06-2009, 02:21 PM
you should do simples for another year or so before attempting 3D.. my 2 cents

respERATION
01-06-2009, 02:23 PM
i wouldn't disagree

MarOne...
01-06-2009, 02:26 PM
Her simples are fresh. I don't know about this 3d shit though... not really feeling it. But then again, 3d isn't my thing.

dark2
01-06-2009, 03:16 PM
any better ?
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/Snapshot_20090106_2.jpg
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/Snapshot_20090106_1.jpg

seywhat
01-06-2009, 03:37 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/PHTO0218.jpg



any more crits on this, besides lose the arrows?
peace to the ones who already critted it

aka- man, dont even worry about markers right now. a kinda easy way to do simps is to write your letter normally and then just use bars to form the same thing. never stop sketchin
resp- not bad, you just gotta get your structure down
evade- your style is developin nicely, not feelin the cross bar of the a in the first one

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 04:37 PM
nope the arrows are pretty much it

last night bumphttp://img386.imageshack.us/img386/215/screencapture10gs3.png

Zase
01-06-2009, 04:54 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/2yowkso.jpg

Zase
01-06-2009, 04:57 PM
hahha dopeass trow let me meet ur mother
fucking fresh man
still the first letter is weird the L

(SoS)Viruz
01-06-2009, 05:02 PM
Zase that the Best sketch I've seen in a while in the Toy Thread yo. Besides Ohsnap :) But shit is ILL. "Zasealicous"

PROJECT LINK
01-06-2009, 05:04 PM
zase doin work sonnn
tight shit..

ScAmeretoLme
01-06-2009, 05:06 PM
looking real good zase, like the colors on the one on the bottom

(SoS)Viruz
01-06-2009, 05:09 PM
zase doin work sonnn
tight shit..

son whats up

sanrtizer
01-06-2009, 05:45 PM
seyar- not feelin the extensions the letters ar nice tho
bspolice- dope simpl throw
zase- simpls lookin good guy but im not feelin the b&w one
i need to sketch more :(
http://img357.imageshack.us/my.php?image=173226iq3.jpg

LeaksOne
01-06-2009, 05:55 PM
bs an zase are killin it. zase i like that name haha

white
01-06-2009, 06:47 PM
hardwares - sick, dig the s
eMJay - sick pieces nice colors
seywhat - no arrows
bink - try blending looks good
AKA - simples
cajin - j seems big on first one, dig the second
jupsick - nice sketches
peace - simples
resperation - cant read it but looks cool
B.S. - nice
Zase - i dig the middle one

first attempt at some kinda wild style piece, go easy, CRITS

i know the E is to big and the U is to small but what the hell.....

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0002-2.jpg

ATK crew small piece......

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0001-2.jpg

hardwares
01-06-2009, 07:16 PM
lol when i started out i used to write ATK ONE. it stood for "another toking kid" and after i got put on UA's "another tagging kid" haha. but yeah your simples are legit. that "wildstyle" piece isnt really wildstyle at all, so try doing more crazy shit to your letters or something. looks good anyway tho.

white
01-06-2009, 07:19 PM
lol when i started out i used to write ATK ONE. it stood for "another toking kid" and after i got put on UA's "another tagging kid" haha. but yeah your simples are legit. that "wildstyle" piece isnt really wildstyle at all, so try doing more crazy shit to your letters or something. looks good anyway tho.

ya atk is supposed to be All The Known, At the Kreek, All The Killers, All The Kings (idk maybe someday..)

impulse555
01-06-2009, 07:24 PM
thought id save paint do some doodling
please help

hardwares
01-06-2009, 07:27 PM
impulse-- lose the extension/block things and work on letter form. start simple.

impulse555
01-06-2009, 07:36 PM
k thnx i got another 1

i know the l is hard to see if i actualy do that one ill make the l bigger

dark2
01-06-2009, 07:47 PM
impulse u need to just do simples use bars that is key or so im told so im going with it keep on sketchin yo im at the same point pretty much n thats what i get told to do lol hope helpz

NO_1
01-06-2009, 07:49 PM
cajin- bottom on is pretty clean as far as how its colored
mast- i like the sketch thing you did alot.
b.s. police- got that shit down

roz
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/actualyldecent.jpg
short for rozwell

critz pl0x?

impulse555
01-06-2009, 07:49 PM
what dose bars mean like i have done bar like graffs

sike_21
01-06-2009, 07:49 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/016.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/023.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/024.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/025.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/018.jpg

ESKiMO2
01-06-2009, 07:57 PM
I'm failing most of my classes and this is a school project. It seemed like an opportunity to up my grades a bit. They gave me an outline of a head and symbolically represent beliefs and shit like that.
I'll be coloring soon.

http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/7527/openmindofoutlinexo6.jpg

"Every existing thing was born without reason, prolongs itself out of weakness and dies by chance."- Jean-Paul Sartre

Crits
Impulse- Try to give it some flow
Sike- I think you've got something with that style but you should build your structure and clean it up.
Roz- There are a lot of things on there you don't need. Just keep the essential parts.

(SoS)Viruz
01-06-2009, 07:59 PM
Sike-WHOA Stop. That is BOOBOO. Seriously you have no letter structure plus it doesn't Flow. SOooo start similar. Start with simps.(Check the New to Graff. Thread)

NO1-Your tryin too hard. You need to loose some of the add on feel me.

ESKiMO2
01-06-2009, 08:06 PM
Tear, lets do the next digital battle with Ohsnap again. I've gotten even better with Photoshop.

(SoS)Viruz
01-06-2009, 08:09 PM
YO ESki. Whats good man long time no talk. yo what happened to your XBL? A check it thats Dope but what is it.(GET on MSN I need you to hook me up with Photoshop)

sike_21
01-06-2009, 08:10 PM
what you mean? how about you show me with something you've done cuz i couldnt find anything you posted

sike_21
01-06-2009, 08:16 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/014.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/019.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/020.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/027.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
01-06-2009, 08:18 PM
HA the one we WON!!!! LOL. Ight talk to him. I get a Sketch already with a Chracter that I just have to color. And I'll scan it and send it to you. When is it do?

sike Im tellin you like it is. The other guy who gave you crits was being nice about it. People have seen my stuff. HENCE Eskimo askin me to join the team battle again. But check it loose the Arrows, Fix your bars. and fix that Basement Bottom BooBoo Bactria letter structure. LOL. Just fuckin with you. But seriouly fix your letter stucture could be better.

TRY'N
01-06-2009, 08:26 PM
sike-- in your first post your stuff is more extensions then it is actual letters and in your second piece, the I is way too big and your 3D is a bananassss.... you have potential but i definitely i think you should start simpler.

sike_21
01-06-2009, 08:27 PM
basement bottom? bacteria structure? dont know what that means

(SoS)Viruz
01-06-2009, 08:33 PM
Lol. Im just fuckin with you man... You shit is original. Im just hard on ppl. A but remove all you extra stuff man and stick to the letters. Cause like one dude said you have LOTS of potetial and you are better than me when i frist started. Just keep workin at it. Right now you just need to take it slow and let your steez progress its self feel me. Then once you get the basic letters stucture down your shit will look dope. Trust me.

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 08:36 PM
Tear, lets do the next digital battle with Ohsnap again. I've gotten even better with Photoshop.


i am sooo in

BAGS
01-06-2009, 08:39 PM
Eskimo i like it, but would putting a paint can an otr be a good idea?

I GOT CLOUT
01-06-2009, 08:46 PM
Im thinkin the homemade bomb in the bottom right is going to be the biggest red flag to the school.

(SoS)Viruz
01-06-2009, 08:50 PM
i am sooo in

OHSANP!!!!!!!! We got the Team back:D

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 09:03 PM
dont call it a comeback!

smooth_nuts
01-06-2009, 09:03 PM
Tear, lets do the next digital battle with Ohsnap again. I've gotten even better with Photoshop.

smoovy wants to be in on said team battle :(

(SoS)Viruz
01-06-2009, 09:09 PM
dont call it a comeback!

MY bad.... We won by 60 somethin percent lol. So Its not a comeback its the Begining of the End.

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 09:11 PM
ohhshhhiizznit oooohhhshizzzzniiit the hatas are gon have a field day how many peeps per team can we have? smooth wants in

sacwacko
01-06-2009, 09:14 PM
double scan
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/FullPageDoubleScan.jpg

sanrtizer
01-06-2009, 09:15 PM
seyar- not feelin the extensions the letters ar nice tho
bspolice- dope simpl throw
zase- simpls lookin good guy but im not feelin the b&w one
i need to sketch more :(
http://img357.imageshack.us/my.php?image=173226iq3.jpg

bump for crits

Backalley Abortion Doctor
01-06-2009, 09:15 PM
I'm failing most of my classes and this is a school project. It seemed like an opportunity to up my grades a bit. They gave me an outline of a head and symbolically represent beliefs and shit like that.
I'll be coloring soon.

http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/7527/openmindofoutlinexo6.jpg

"Every existing thing was born without reason, prolongs itself out of weakness and dies by chance."- Jean-Paul Sartre

Crits
Impulse- Try to give it some flow
Sike- I think you've got something with that style but you should build your structure and clean it up.
Roz- There are a lot of things on there you don't need. Just keep the essential parts.

Ohai Owen

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 09:16 PM
you bumpin crits for crits?

klic
01-06-2009, 09:25 PM
havnt posted in here for a while, exchange i did with tens
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0714.jpg

aspek - that looks fucking dope, on the bottom right piece, im not feeling the attachments on the top of the P

eskimo that is epic

sike_21
01-06-2009, 09:26 PM
aiit i see what you saying ill give it a try for shits and giggles but one more thing what ya mean by letter structure ?

sanrtizer
01-06-2009, 09:27 PM
fuck my computers homosexual thers suposed to b this...
http://http://img519.imageshack.us/my.php?image=173226us1.jpg
if it workd

(SoS)Viruz
01-06-2009, 09:28 PM
A Its said at least 3 so he can come if he wants I think.

impulse555
01-06-2009, 09:38 PM
heres me trying to do flow and failing any help would be good(btw thnx for previous help

.HATESONE.
01-06-2009, 09:38 PM
http://img387.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture405kf3.jpg

smooth_nuts
01-06-2009, 09:39 PM
better believe im down bitchen.

.HATESONE.
01-06-2009, 09:43 PM
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/3767/picture405to1.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

crits?

21
01-06-2009, 09:43 PM
heres me trying to do flow and failing any help would be good(btw thnx for previous help

Pretend like you have no coloring pens in your house, just a pencil, a pen and a eraser.. colors come in way later work on flow and try make all the letters the same height and length

aspen1
01-06-2009, 09:47 PM
http://i488.photobucket.com/albums/rr250/aspenfuek/galant007.jpg

Crits?!?

jupsick
01-06-2009, 09:50 PM
http://xs135.xs.to/xs135/09022/0106092104c__450_x_600_598.jpg
http://xs135.xs.to/xs135/09022/0106092104b__450_x_600_709.jpg
http://xs135.xs.to/xs135/09022/0106092104a__450_x_600_604.jpg
http://xs135.xs.to/xs135/09022/0106092104__450_x_600_849.jpg
any crits?

bump?
hate-im really liking that shit! keep it up
eskimo-thats clean and loks weird i love it 0.0
impulse...new to graffiti thread start using bars

LOPe_GCI
01-06-2009, 09:51 PM
what are the details are on the team battle? is it just digital stuff? idk many heads on here but if anyone needs another person or wants to make a team lemme know.

PabloESKObar
01-06-2009, 09:53 PM
i ain't been on this shit in a minute .
here's a quick throwie .
ignore the butt ass handsteezy at the bottom haha .

http://i44.tinypic.com/1znu249.jpg


eskimo: that shit is craaaazy !
espen: idk, i don't really like it . try somethin' a lil more simpler i guess .

[THE]3L3Gy
01-06-2009, 09:59 PM
what do you think of this, i know it sucks, but could you at least tell me what i did right??

PabloESKObar
01-06-2009, 10:08 PM
i ain't been on this shit in a minute .
here's a quick throwie .
ignore the butt ass handsteezy at the bottom haha .

http://i44.tinypic.com/1znu249.jpg


eskimo: that shit is craaaazy !
espen: idk, i don't really like it . try somethin' a lil more simpler i guess .

bumpd for some crits .

shit was last on the page ...

.HATESONE.
01-06-2009, 10:10 PM
just keep working on it dude.i mean it will come to you sooner or later.some people get it quicker than others.just work on straights and experiment.but yeah do more straights i guess.

BigBlueViolence
01-06-2009, 10:17 PM
Your K and O are dope, not digging the E and S so much, though


Also, this;
http://i43.tinypic.com/dhehlj.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/2i0wweh.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 10:19 PM
A Its said at least 3 so he can come if he wants I think.

alright as long as eskimo dont think 4 would take up too much space

mayfair
01-06-2009, 10:24 PM
esko that e looks kinda like a g and the o is too big, the k is dope
is it con? i like them there simple but pretty nice

could i get some crits on this please?
http://i41.tinypic.com/2nlnkp.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
01-06-2009, 10:25 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/S7300957.jpg

I_bomb_Montreal
01-06-2009, 10:25 PM
people say I belong here.
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/Skaz003.jpg

aspen1
01-06-2009, 10:27 PM
espen: idk, i don't really like it . try somethin' a lil more simpler i guess .

haha its Aspen, all good bro. what should i work on tho?

(crits from any one else)?

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 10:27 PM
yup welcome to the family

I GOT CLOUT
01-06-2009, 10:30 PM
Skaz its tight, I just think it would look more balanced if you brought the bottom bar of the Z down a bit, like the S. Nice coloring though, looks like some thermal mappin shit.

I_bomb_Montreal
01-06-2009, 10:37 PM
understood^.

Some of my ol sketches :
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/Oneflewoverthecoocoosbench007.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/noubou247.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/noubou245.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/noubou246.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/soigso001.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/Mars.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/BonneftePapa2008.jpg

klic
01-06-2009, 10:44 PM
^ theres already another pyro here

mayfair
01-06-2009, 10:44 PM
i dont understand the thrid one that says black
at first glance it looks like some kind of woozy mess, but when you look closely its pretty dope, the widths arent very consistant though, colours are dope too

this page has moved pretty fast, could i get some crits up there sumwhere^?

moonboots
01-06-2009, 10:46 PM
http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww47/jessek_is/GAMP.jpg

my bros quick throw...Crits please?

white
01-06-2009, 10:48 PM
Pretend like you have no coloring pens in your house, just a pencil, a pen and a eraser.. colors come in way later work on flow and try make all the letters the same height and length

.....and space all ur letters out the same u got some spaced and some smashed together

.HATESONE.
01-06-2009, 10:56 PM
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/3767/picture405to1.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

crits?
bump.cuz i can:)

enigmatic
01-06-2009, 11:01 PM
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/6707/dsc00039mg1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/dsc00039mg1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img129/dsc00039mg1.jpg/1/)

I GOT CLOUT
01-06-2009, 11:02 PM
I know I like peanut butter. and that piece.

BigBlueViolence
01-06-2009, 11:09 PM
I'm feeling that enigmatic shit.

(SoS)Viruz
01-07-2009, 12:11 AM
people say I belong here.
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/Skaz003.jpg

Fuck that yo that is ILL. Put that in the Big Boy Thread. Thats some good letter stucture...

O and Ohsanp dude your ass dosen't belong here either lol. But I'll talk to eski.

.HATESONE.
01-07-2009, 12:13 AM
i still cant believe its 2009.dude im getting old.

B.S. POLICE
01-07-2009, 12:17 AM
virus i got shut down by kayone yesterday lol he told me to stop being abitch and post here

(SoS)Viruz
01-07-2009, 12:23 AM
WOW. Seriously... Dude you have some nice shit. Wow its what ever. i posted a while ago just to get feed back from good people and I got sent str8 back 2 lol.

B.S. POLICE
01-07-2009, 12:28 AM
straight dictatorship up there lol oh well he knows me posting there is as inevidable as the runs after an alnighter drinkin keystone light


only a matter of time

mayfair
01-07-2009, 12:29 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/2nlnkp.jpg

bump

(SoS)Viruz
01-07-2009, 12:33 AM
Ha lol. My shit look good untill I hit the color. Like I need to learn some new color techniques or somethin.... But as for this guy....

May- LETTER STRUCTURE. Look at I_bomb_Montreal. That a good exsample of some dope letter structure. Loose the add on a start simple like him.

enigmatic
01-07-2009, 01:07 AM
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/6707/dsc00039mg1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/dsc00039mg1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img129/dsc00039mg1.jpg/1/)

bump

enigmatic
01-07-2009, 01:10 AM
I drew this in between sodoku tournaments

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/7733/dsc00035pu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/dsc00035pu5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img377/dsc00035pu5.jpg/1/)

bump

okay okay let me get this straight...

So I paint graffiti...

and sometimes I draw on paper...

so I should post in the thread full of people who dont write graffiti? is it because of my cellphone pics and lack of markers?

I think im gonna cry...

*im serious about those markers, i know yall are loaded. help me out im broke*

B.S. POLICE
01-07-2009, 01:19 AM
kid steal, im broke as a joke, or get a bitch with loot fuck her real well consistantly and youll get all the markers your heart desires if you play your cards right

JETPACK!!
01-07-2009, 01:21 AM
i still post here whenever i do a sketch. forreal, i agree with hepos. stop being bitches. it's a god damn forum. the "big boy" thread aint shit anyways. you wont get crits. al its for is blackbook whores who want their e-fame (and if you think im talkin shit or beefin, fuck off. im highly buzzed and thats my opinons)

if you want crits. post here. for talking
prolly gonna re-do the writer on the right.
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/7215/canvasuv4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

B.S. POLICE
01-07-2009, 01:27 AM
its not about the thread, its about kayone admitting the way he judges shit is fucked up. i could care less about where i post


nice sketch, i like the letters caracs could have been lower imo

JETPACK!!
01-07-2009, 01:33 AM
nahh b, the top of the heads is exactly where the bottom of my 3D is. i just took a lousy picture.

and to be honest, no disrepect. your one of the few cats i like.. but the way he judges shit, i find, is accurate. ive seen a few dope sketches from you. but a lot of your simples are solid, flavorless simples. the generic, seen 100 times prior to you, type. you need to think of more ideas to incorporate into your shit before you post there. hell, i dont even post my shit there often. once in a while so its not 100% shit talk.

that last sketch i saw with the chips an shit was nice as hell. work with that. crack shit. split it in half and sort it around. all sorts of shit. simples are only dope if you have ill concepts for em. because their made to have fun with, while wildstyles have to be the same ol 3D an arrow shit. know what im sayin?

much love

B.S. POLICE
01-07-2009, 01:36 AM
i feel like im the karate kid and kayone is mr yoshi or ehatever that guys name was.

i just can not catch the damn fly!

LeaksOne
01-07-2009, 01:44 AM
bump

you paint in seattle??

JETPACK!!
01-07-2009, 01:45 AM
you gotta try fucking hard to catch that fly bro. it aint easy. i been at it every day for a solid year.. im just starting to get able to get my hand near it

sacwacko
01-07-2009, 01:58 AM
double scan
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/FullPageDoubleScan.jpg



Bump/Update/Crits

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/FullPageDoubleScan2.jpg

senkz
01-07-2009, 04:30 AM
nice pieces man, really likin that ^^^

alright ive gone back to basics because i wasnt happy with the way i was progressing
http://i44.tinypic.com/13z77yb.jpg

Atomik
01-07-2009, 04:45 AM
senk try doing your forcefield with a different color then your fill like for the mint green maybe pink it will pop more keep doing simps and work on your throw

senkz
01-07-2009, 04:53 AM
yea i can see that now man, thanks for the crits.

ESKiMO2
01-07-2009, 06:12 AM
i still post here whenever i do a sketch. forreal, i agree with hepos. stop being bitches. it's a god damn forum. the "big boy" thread aint shit anyways. you wont get crits. al its for is blackbook whores who want their e-fame (and if you think im talkin shit or beefin, fuck off. im highly buzzed and thats my opinons)

Yeah, the only reason I go on the internet is for sharing my art and getting feedback. People who get on a website so they can be in some elite clique and exclude people who are looking to post have some swelling ego... probably a lack of self esteem as well.

senkz
01-07-2009, 06:27 AM
more stuff, hating these highlighters but i cant be bothered using finer markers on simples.
http://i40.tinypic.com/x5av83.jpg

downunder
01-07-2009, 06:27 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/014.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/019.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/020.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/027.jpg

the simplest green one is actually really good, maybe just fatten up the right bars of the K

MaNtS
01-07-2009, 08:12 AM
Jetpack,

The point i was trying to make wasn't toward becoming some elitest member of an "inner circle", it was moreso just pointing out the "censoring"(dependant on opinion, but a few ive seen seem to cross reference this issue with at least a bit of relevence to its existance.) of sketches with no reason or explanation as to what was lacking etc, leaving the artist wondering

"was it because it wasn't coloured?surely not, as someone else just posted up something that wasnt coloured and looked like some sketchy shit, yet 2 days later its still there along with the "props" attached when posting"

situations like that kinda forces you to accept that it isn't a skillbased level of equality, after acceptance of that, the next thing is to decide if your next post in the big boys books comes attached with ur dignity.

Heres an analogy to throw things into perspective.

It wasnt the guys boosting Saddams ego that were being shot by the hundreds each day, it was the ones who refused to or showed an opposition toward him.

Food for thought.

respERATION
01-07-2009, 08:30 AM
mmmmmmm insightful,you are...

MeNu$
01-07-2009, 09:08 AM
word son thats whats wrong with this place

I GOT CLOUT
01-07-2009, 12:01 PM
Whats wrong with this place is that since ive been back not a single fucking person has critted a single fuckin flick Ive posted....

So BUMP.


http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/S7300957.jpg

aspen1
01-07-2009, 12:04 PM
^^^^^ Agreed with him, crit mine too

http://i488.photobucket.com/albums/rr250/aspenfuek/galant007.jpg

BigBlueViolence
01-07-2009, 12:07 PM
CLOUT-I'm not feeling the way you purposely separated the bars in your letters.
I wouldn't do the highlight all the way around, either.
the fill and background are dope, though.

aspen1
01-07-2009, 12:10 PM
anything i can do ta make mine better?

I GOT CLOUT
01-07-2009, 12:11 PM
'preciate ya.
Aspen - New to Graff thread.

BigBlueViolence
01-07-2009, 12:13 PM
Don't connect the letters like you did with the F and R.
I don't really dig the extensions, either.

I_bomb_Montreal
01-07-2009, 12:14 PM
dekae, thats a nice sketch. liking your simple letters. nice BG too. Nothing more to say, this is a cool simple.

aspen, welll hmm i dont like that. Dont connect the lower bar of the F with the middle bar of the R because we cant read it (I couldnt read it before I saw the handstyle). Also, try to space out your letters so they do not hide each other. I recommend you do simple letters first and then try wildstyle cuz your letters will have a much better/solid structure.
And I suggest you do whole pieces instead of panels.

aspen1
01-07-2009, 12:15 PM
alright, ill go back to simples. be posting up flixs of new shit tomarrow or so.

I_bomb_Montreal
01-07-2009, 12:17 PM
by the way heres a sketch I did to work on my wildstyle.
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/526/picture55mt8.jpg (http://img396.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture55mt8.jpg)

JETPACK!!
01-07-2009, 12:27 PM
Jetpack,

The point i was trying to make wasn't toward becoming some elitest member of an "inner circle", it was moreso just pointing out the "censoring"(dependant on opinion, but a few ive seen seem to cross reference this issue with at least a bit of relevence to its existance.) of sketches with no reason or explanation as to what was lacking etc, leaving the artist wondering

"was it because it wasn't coloured?surely not, as someone else just posted up something that wasnt coloured and looked like some sketchy shit, yet 2 days later its still there along with the "props" attached when posting"

situations like that kinda forces you to accept that it isn't a skillbased level of equality, after acceptance of that, the next thing is to decide if your next post in the big boys books comes attached with ur dignity.

Heres an analogy to throw things into perspective.

It wasnt the guys boosting Saddams ego that were being shot by the hundreds each day, it was the ones who refused to or showed an opposition toward him.

Food for thought.

no beef, but perhaps you think better than you actually are. ive never posted a colored sketch. they never got deleted. i never got a pound, i never got a crit. i dont expect cats to like what i do. i want critism. and that happens in the toy thread. your wrapped up thinking that posting here actually defines you as a toy.

a toy will always post a sketch and never paint. i'll use tride as an example. dope pieces. dope spots. mad clout... but he's posting in the toy bombs because im pretty sure he wants critism on how to improve

look at who posts often in the blackbook thread.. aher, cher.. cats like that. mad love to my homie cher. but he dosent paint to my knowledge.

if you wanna spend two hours on a sketch and post it for e-fame, go ahead. but critism and practice never hurt.

i havent been awake too long so it may not make complete sense. peace

skaz your A seems too thin and neglected, try spacing out the legs a bit to make it fatter to suit the rest of your letters. solid sketch

I GOT CLOUT
01-07-2009, 12:31 PM
Your letters are pretty solid man. Im just a lil confused by the bottom extention of the S. I really should use paint or something to point out what I mean...but im a lazy fuck thta cant stop coughing up blood. But my point is, if an extention looks like its comin outta nowhere, it throws the whole piece off. But im sure you know that already.

I_bomb_Montreal
01-07-2009, 12:35 PM
i like that extension. maybe I should just connect it to the core of the Z so it doesnt look like it comes from nowhere?

I GOT CLOUT
01-07-2009, 12:39 PM
Nah man. It is a good extention for balance of the piece. I think i just saw something different than whats really there. I just got prescribed a bunch of dones, so im a lil out of it. Its a solid piece, ink it.

I_bomb_Montreal
01-07-2009, 12:49 PM
lol ok. gonna modify it a bit and ink it.

respERATION
01-07-2009, 12:55 PM
i_bomb_montreal-maybe make the top bar of the S more horizontal? and i don't like that think at the bottom of the Z

aspen-blocks :)

i suck......crit me

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/gorpaintrepeat.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-07-2009, 12:57 PM
the i in the paint is too big and the space between rep and peat is too big and im not really feeling the top one

Raisedbywolves
01-07-2009, 01:42 PM
http://i437.photobucket.com/albums/qq94/liesoer/WebCam_20081211_22181.jpg

http://i437.photobucket.com/albums/qq94/liesoer/WebCam_20081023_2258.jpg

Raisedbywolves
01-07-2009, 01:49 PM
http://i437.photobucket.com/albums/qq94/liesoer/liesmod_edited-2.jpg
http://i437.photobucket.com/albums/qq94/liesoer/WebCam_20081210_00204.jpg

Raisedbywolves
01-07-2009, 02:00 PM
resperation i like the general style, but the bottom of the i is a little off and the dead space after the rep makes it seem kinda awkward
also i second bs about the top one

BigBlueViolence
01-07-2009, 02:14 PM
Feeling that shit, Lies, but the L in your throwie looked like a V to me, at first.

Raisedbywolves
01-07-2009, 02:23 PM
ahah, I see what you mean
its my old flop, anyways, rockin a simpler style now
http://i437.photobucket.com/albums/qq94/liesoer/WebCam_20090105_20391.jpg

sike_21
01-07-2009, 02:48 PM
so i got soome opinions any other thought from anyone?
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/013.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/018.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/024.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/025.jpg