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Worms
01-10-2009, 04:31 PM
straighter bars no wavvy shit your N is your best letter

Mr yarbles
01-10-2009, 04:38 PM
You live in AZ?
Don't get up for a long while bro
people down here arn't nice to toys.

FEB
01-10-2009, 04:41 PM
His location says Chicago.

Mr yarbles
01-10-2009, 04:44 PM
hah whatever wait for a while before you get up either way

Anyways lose your wavy bullshit and your extensions between your a and r and whatever other letter your also doing that too.
You're structure underneath the crappy waves aint so bad

Oh and your 3d is god awful
Work on that
Also your a's ar terrible looking
Your z's not too bad though

TinK gxc
01-10-2009, 04:45 PM
Ha...yeah i'm in chicago. "arizona" is simply for my love for arizona tea man

CakeWalk99
01-10-2009, 04:49 PM
Arizona tea is legit as hell. Arizona is one cool place. Anyway, heres some work from today. http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0145-2.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0147-1.jpg

Mr yarbles
01-10-2009, 04:54 PM
Arizona tea is legit as hell. Arizona is one cool place.

This man is a very very smart man

Anyways
The bottom paper is the best
Except for the on the bottom left and the one up top
But your e is just out of place your mu is flowing together real nice though
Thicken up your bars and ish a bit too and go bigger it helps.

FEB
01-10-2009, 05:38 PM
http://i544.photobucket.com/albums/hh337/moobsone/IMG.jpg
Crits please. I did the top "M" before I was told to go simpler.






Fuck, it looks like crap.

Baron
01-10-2009, 06:01 PM
fuck, it looks like crap.

Ding! Ding! Ding! We Have A Winner!

B.S. POLICE
01-10-2009, 06:07 PM
lol^^^

looks like i aint got shit to do tonight. im a sketch who wants a shout out

Spraycan Stories
01-10-2009, 06:14 PM
i was doing a photoshop sketch and i got too lazy to finish it and im not ganna have time to in a while.
will someone like to finish it?
Pleaaaaaaassssseeeeee<3

VaNdAL xBA!x
01-10-2009, 06:15 PM
lol jesus christ
just get yourself a ruler and make your linesm straight then copt your keyboard letters over and over using diff width bars and then start the extensions after u get that down
http://i44.tinypic.com/2qn4npf.jpg
fucked it up but w/e
http://i43.tinypic.com/2wri17c.jpg
first canvas
crits?

CakeWalk99
01-10-2009, 06:53 PM
Thanks Yarbles! I might be moving to Yuma in about a year!

Cyto Aka Son1c
01-10-2009, 07:22 PM
still working on this

http://i39.tinypic.com/nx7sat.jpg


it says frust and I know the 3d is off

TRY'N
01-10-2009, 07:44 PM
http://i544.photobucket.com/albums/hh337/moobsone/IMG.jpg
Crits please. I did the top "M" before I was told to go simpler.






Fuck, it looks like crap.
is your name actually MOOBS?? man boooooobs?? ...thee eff?

FEB
01-10-2009, 08:09 PM
Yeah.

GIzUrD
01-10-2009, 08:44 PM
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/8298/purpgreenzp8.jpg (http://img234.imageshack.us/my.php?image=purpgreenzp8.jpg)
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/8003/freestyleorangefx9.jpg (http://img234.imageshack.us/my.php?image=freestyleorangefx9.jpg)

more crits please, the good kind telling me how to do better.

MOOBS- keep practicing so everything gets smoother and more solid
SONIC- the S and T go together but the U looks like an O, and F R doesnt fit in.
SEK- first canvas has too much empty space, try to do something interesting in the back ground and maybe make the graff bigger.
CAKEWALK- same as moobs.

VaNdAL xBA!x
01-10-2009, 08:58 PM
oh nah dude im not done im jus taggin it all up ill post another pic later tonight

WoeInfinite
01-10-2009, 08:58 PM
Gizrd i like it, not feelin the R so much though..idk....
and i like the top I better.
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0110092152.jpg
1st try oneliner
:D
wow that E is suckyyyyy

Mr yarbles
01-10-2009, 09:15 PM
Thanks Yarbles! I might be moving to Yuma in about a year!

Eh yuma's alright pheonix and mesa are where it at
I don't really know about yuma since I've never been there though

But the freeways down here are fucking sick
All good people no toys hitting great spots
It's so hard to drive

woonybomber
01-10-2009, 09:26 PM
tht one liner is bad

FEB
01-10-2009, 09:27 PM
more crits please, the good kind telling me how to do better.

MOOBS- keep practicing so everything gets smoother and more solid
SONIC- the S and T go together but the U looks like an O, and F R doesnt fit in.
SEK- first canvas has too much empty space, try to do something interesting in the back ground and maybe make the graff bigger.
CAKEWALK- same as moobs.

Thanks for the positive feedback. I'll practice a shitload more.

Worms
01-10-2009, 09:27 PM
keep ur lines straight dont do wavey lines... at least its simple and has no arrows... draw moobs the same way as it looks on a key board so MOOBS notice the spacing in the m the b and s the lines dont touch if you know wat i mean
here
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Untitled.jpg

zase the other guy said wat i would say it has some potention
skin the letter structure in your s is weaker then you other letters and wahts makin ur peice look beter then it is, is your 3d takin up all the negative space and your arrows.

fuckin around with a style i saw somewhere i forget though
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/009.jpg

im gona do another one but with no connections and a beter e and r
bump for crits

VaNdAL xBA!x
01-10-2009, 09:30 PM
that sore is straight you should make the top bar on the E bigger tho in my opinion

woonybomber
01-10-2009, 09:48 PM
Crappy ass sketch:
http://i544.photobucket.com/albums/hh337/moobsone/sc.jpg
Go easy on me, I know I suck.

make strat lines your scribalin

justin kayse
01-10-2009, 10:09 PM
Sek- Fill up that canvas there"s a lot more space. Make stuff a lot bigger, a small piece in the middle of a canvas isn't nearly as appealing as one that takes up the whole canvas IMO.
Grieves- Oneliner needs a lot of work. Try to redirect the lines so that they run through as little of the letter as possible, like the "e" to the "s" you could loop around the bottom of the "e" and start the "s" from the bottom, maybe the same with the "e" and the "v"
Moobs- everyone else is pointing you in the right way.

CakeWalk99
01-10-2009, 10:10 PM
Eh yuma's alright pheonix and mesa are where it at
I don't really know about yuma since I've never been there though

But the freeways down here are fucking sick
All good people no toys hitting great spots
It's so hard to drive

I would love to live in phoenix. My boys the phunk junkeez live there! Its freezing here and snowy.

Mr yarbles
01-10-2009, 10:18 PM
I would love to live in phoenix. My boys the phunk junkeez live there! Its freezing here and snowy.

hah sick
But that's one thing you don't gotta worry about out here is getting cold
But the summers are terrible, always carry a couple bottles of water with you or you'll pretty much get killed by the heat

VaNdAL xBA!x
01-10-2009, 10:28 PM
no thats not all i put on it i idnt say i was done now did i;)
http://i41.tinypic.com/969n35.jpg
shitty phone pic but still puttin one more in the top left comin soon
but thats it for now crits?

Worms
01-10-2009, 11:03 PM
i love how ppl crit everyone but me
sek the vertical bar on your e shoulda been fatter

Baron
01-10-2009, 11:08 PM
Worms, when I glanced at is I saw 8, upside down V, R, and definitely not an E.

NoCanControl
01-10-2009, 11:39 PM
seck. do normal letters no cool bends
moobs, use bars
sare, pretty cool. take a few thin lines out, such as the e. but i think it isn't too bad. just work on your flow.
Grives. meh. its a little goofy.
gizr, your g is tight. but everything else needs work. i doesn't go with the flow pattern. z isssss ..... meh. i think the division on the bottom throws it off. circle part of the r is goofy.
frost? idk. i can't read it. simple blocks first plz.

thanks to all that crit mine. !!!

CakeWalk99
01-10-2009, 11:52 PM
hah sick
But that's one thing you don't gotta worry about out here is getting cold
But the summers are terrible, always carry a couple bottles of water with you or you'll pretty much get killed by the heat

Is it pretty expensive to live there?

I got stupid tonight and tried coming up with a new M. I wont be able to post anything up until about Friday. http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b351/faized/IMG_0144_2.jpg

NoCanControl
01-11-2009, 12:01 AM
[URL=http://img234.imageshack.us/my.php?image=purpgreenzp8.jpg]
NO CANS-a little sloppy but it works


to tell you the truth. i havent tried to go all out on one of my drawings since... idk.. about a year and half. i just really want to get my letters down pact.

Worms
01-11-2009, 12:05 AM
its sore fools

drapes1125
01-11-2009, 01:03 AM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/graph0001.jpgJust a sketch to test out my new scanner.

drapes1125
01-11-2009, 01:32 AM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/Graphiti20001.jpgSome more ish.

Worms
01-11-2009, 01:32 AM
mars loose the extensions and work on your letter structure more... u know how to use bars and shit i can see that but your letters a shitty... not horrible though but shitty

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/001-2.jpg

T-jay
01-11-2009, 01:38 AM
worms that shit is solid
throw your 3d on it and your on the right track

drapes1125
01-11-2009, 01:57 AM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/graphiti30001.jpgMore.I know its all llopsided and stuff.

mtown
01-11-2009, 03:44 AM
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/4701/96281000jx5.jpg
think this is good.
nocancontrol:ilikeit
after:i think it's ugly draw it on paper i think it looks much better than.
sore:nice simple only thick one bar of the r up.
skin:dope!

i think i deserve some crits now!!

lataaaaa

give me a b give me a u give me a m give me a p BUMP!!!!

sore: lose the arrow and make a normal capital E
drapes:like it
sek:i dont like that orange thing on you're e
moobs:new to graff thread man, it looks like dogs poo poo.no beef tough:)

crits4critsguys

C3ZR ONE
01-11-2009, 04:53 AM
The only thing worth bumping is your sig. You got enough crits on that. It needs work. The flow's too jagged,etc. Go sketch.

mtown
01-11-2009, 05:10 AM
ya mean i must make it roun?der and shit and let it more flow?

Atomik
01-11-2009, 05:14 AM
mtown go simple dont start bending bars all crazy just do straight letters and eventually everything will come naturally. bend your bars when your comfortable doing straight letters..shit works...try it

mtown
01-11-2009, 05:27 AM
i am comfortable with doing straight letters and shit this is the firste thing i've did after 4 months of simples so i've want to add some sugar and spice to my simples!
but thank anyway.
laturr

mtown
01-11-2009, 05:28 AM
i am comfortable with doing straight letters and shit this is the firste thing i've did after 4 months of simples so i've want to add some sugar and spice to my simples!
but thank anyway.
laturr

Raisedbywolves
01-11-2009, 08:37 AM
http://i437.photobucket.com/albums/qq94/liesoer/WebCam_20090105_20041.jpg
http://i437.photobucket.com/albums/qq94/liesoer/WebCam_20090107_14094.jpg

.HATESONE.
01-11-2009, 09:07 AM
your styles cool dude but you keep postin the same shit dude.



on another note,i rock.like an earthquake fewl.

Mr yarbles
01-11-2009, 09:32 AM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2z5ruqt.jpg
workin on it

wolves top is dope bottom one I'm not feeling

syeaoner
01-11-2009, 09:44 AM
i will post some scetches l8ter

TRY'N
01-11-2009, 09:51 AM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2z5ruqt.jpg
workin on it

wolves top is dope bottom one I'm not feeling
that's nice. maybe to define your T more to look like a T you can use the hook thing you used in the top left if the R to make the top sides of the T? cuz then it would make it more cohesive and stuff...

got damn i just got a little art school right now lol.

VaNdAL xBA!x
01-11-2009, 10:12 AM
LIES the top one is straight ive been doin that same type of style keep fuckin round with that its lookin good

.HATESONE.
01-11-2009, 10:34 AM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2z5ruqt.jpg
workin on it

wolves top is dope bottom one I'm not feeling

wow.thats horrible.hahah.serioulsy tho work on it.particurally the t or how ever you spell particu whatever.and the p to.the rest alright depending on how long youve been writing..how long have you been writing?that r doesnt at all match the rest of the letters i think.i say i think becuase i cant remeber becuase i have horrible memory and cant think about what i just saw like 2 minutes ago.thats horrible.im suprised i remember my name sometimes haha.








fuck the world.

Mr yarbles
01-11-2009, 10:37 AM
lawwlll show me your shit faggot

Spraycan Stories
01-11-2009, 10:56 AM
i would love whoever finishes this i need to fix my photoshop.
http://i439.photobucket.com/albums/qq113/bizzybets/photoshop.jpg

Mr yarbles
01-11-2009, 11:03 AM
first piece is disgusting looking your throw is alright and I will say your last piece is pretty good.
and I've been writing for a year too so shut your fucking mouth
I'll do a bit of digging and find some old pieces if you want.

Billy_Mayes
01-11-2009, 11:06 AM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z85/SluseFA/samegfag2face.jpg

.HATESONE.
01-11-2009, 11:07 AM
^ like the e dude.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-11-2009, 11:15 AM
dope z

Mr yarbles
01-11-2009, 11:15 AM
alright dude.i never said im the best,im decent i guess,but i still burn you.haha.

It was my first time doin a full rapist throw too I usually do re throws
and I never said you were the greatest
Were both alright I guess
Whatever it's over

oh and that two face is pretty slick
I just don't feel your f so much

Billy_Mayes
01-11-2009, 11:43 AM
Shut up guise.

NoCanControl
01-11-2009, 12:26 PM
also considering ive only been writing for about a year and 4(?)

wow... i suck.

.HATESONE.
01-11-2009, 01:04 PM
nah kans your cool...btw i got your shit finished maybe.just gotta find a cord to my camera.yeah....its comin.sometime today hopefully.shit i got so much homework to finish.

NoCanControl
01-11-2009, 01:07 PM
nah kans your cool...btw i got your shit finished maybe.just gotta find a cord to my camera.yeah....its comin.sometime today hopefully.shit i got so much homework to finish.

na man. i bee writing way longer then both of you and i suckkkkkk. but then again. i never really had any help. via interwebs, older writer, etc.

.HATESONE.
01-11-2009, 01:17 PM
na man. i bee writing way longer then both of you and i suckkkkkk. but then again. i never really had any help. via interwebs, older writer, etc.

yeah well i really dont have a life outside of graffiti so i have ALOT of time on my hands i guess and personally i hate most of the stuff i do anyways.its never good enough for me...and yeah i didnt have any older writers to help me til i met hase and he helped me out a bit.sorta.not really that fool was always high on pills and weed and would always fall asleep half way through sketches and shit.haha.but yeah i just draw alot.or used to.i havent been doing alot in a minute...





basicly im a very boring person.

VaNdAL xBA!x
01-11-2009, 01:26 PM
foreal i been writing for bout a lil over 2 years and i always end up like doin nuttin but graff everyday for a couple months then i jus stop then i start back up again and suck but fuck it i dont go paintin yet thats a plus if neone is from manch you kno its bombed out by all toys very few good writers bomb here ne more

smooth_nuts
01-11-2009, 02:14 PM
nothing to crit on this page,and im to lazy to look at the last....

first sketch in ages,3d's all types of fucked up :(
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3409/3189069834_fc3488d26d.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-11-2009, 02:59 PM
foreal i been writing for bout a lil over 2 years and i always end up like doin nuttin but graff everyday for a couple months then i jus stop then i start back up again and suck but fuck it i dont go paintin yet thats a plus if neone is from manch you kno its bombed out by all toys very few good writers bomb here ne more

youve got to be kidding me manchester has a very nice scene going i donno where you been lookin

Bink1
01-11-2009, 03:06 PM
nothing to crit on this page,and im to lazy to look at the last....

first sketch in ages,3d's all types of fucked up :(
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3409/3189069834_fc3488d26d.jpg

nvm the 3d its dope.

dark2
01-11-2009, 03:31 PM
just some simples

http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/Snapshot_20090111.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-11-2009, 03:32 PM
the top is way better than the bottom one

dark2
01-11-2009, 03:42 PM
okay sweet thanx ill work on that more then

Worms
01-11-2009, 04:28 PM
smooth u need to go simpler

VaNdAL xBA!x
01-11-2009, 04:46 PM
youve got to be kidding me manchester has a very nice scene going i donno where you been lookin

umm not really ya its gotta a good amount of dope writers but its also got a shitload a toy fucks that fuck it up feel me obv we got sum ill writer ikue jro morle koph and everyone in ax but not much more then that only a couple from wns and then from there you shoot down hill to these queer toy bombers

smooth_nuts
01-11-2009, 04:47 PM
smooth u need to go simpler
ummm,yeah,the problem with that is,it's already rather simple...

VaNdAL xBA!x
01-11-2009, 04:49 PM
no it isnt but just straighten up your bars and clean it up and it should look good

Worms
01-11-2009, 04:49 PM
use a simpler e and shit and no one likes a smartass ... smartass

smooth_nuts
01-11-2009, 04:57 PM
two kids who can barely pull off a proper simple trying to tell me what simple is...lurs.

heymynameisjohnlawl
01-11-2009, 05:04 PM
it cant get much simpler than it is. and he isnt being a smart ass. calm yourselves. jeez. kids get heated over the smallest shit.

B.S. POLICE
01-11-2009, 05:05 PM
he dont need to go simpler thats not bad just thicken up your bars in some places

NoCanControl
01-11-2009, 05:08 PM
two kids who can barely pull off a proper simple trying to tell me what simple is...lurs.

DO simples. and you obviously don't know what simples is. if you think your e is simple. its a simplier letter. but crappy. so that means you have to go simplier.

the two people kinda know what they are talking about.

.HATESONE.
01-11-2009, 05:18 PM
just some simples

http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/Snapshot_20090111.jpg

lookin better homie keep it up...:)

dark2
01-11-2009, 05:30 PM
thanx dawg yea i will for sure

smooth_nuts
01-11-2009, 05:37 PM
nothing to crit on this page,and im to lazy to look at the last....

first sketch in ages,3d's all types of fucked up :(
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3409/3189069834_fc3488d26d.jpg
blatherblatherblather...bumplestilrskin

dark2
01-11-2009, 06:02 PM
lol yea pretty much n y u bumpin u got ur critz geez lmao

idk401
01-11-2009, 06:03 PM
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/lala002.jpg

need work alot of



DEO need work

Worms
01-11-2009, 06:11 PM
two kids who can barely pull off a proper simple trying to tell me what simple is...lurs.

if thats the case .... do wat u want

my bbook cover in progress need outline colour ideas
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/002-3.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
01-11-2009, 06:17 PM
smooth your a deuche
sore that looks ill the leg in the R shoulda been fatter but its all gravy

dark2
01-11-2009, 06:18 PM
dude thats dope go like red or pink 4 ur outline tho

VaNdAL xBA!x
01-11-2009, 06:31 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/1i1lbk.jpg
lil throwie
http://i42.tinypic.com/29fwemq.jpg
fuckin hate the S and E but this was a freestyle
crits?

smooth_nuts
01-11-2009, 06:56 PM
lol yea pretty much n y u bumpin u got ur critz geez lmao
cause im a whore...duh

smooth your a deuche
sore that looks ill the leg in the R shoulda been fatter but its all gravy
douche*
...and yes,i am,haha

justin kayse
01-11-2009, 06:59 PM
Sore- For the outline maybe orange, since it's a complimentary of blue, but idk.
Sek- On the bottom pic, the bottom bar of the "e" should be thinner, and the top extension is oddly shaped, but I like the lower right leg of the "k".

.HATESONE.
01-11-2009, 07:00 PM
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/5126/picture416sg3.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

sorry it took forever and also that its horrible.im to sick and tired to do anything worth looking at but i might do another in the next week.maybe.

.HATESONE.
01-11-2009, 07:09 PM
random ass H.http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9430/picture417nr7.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

.HATESONE.
01-11-2009, 07:45 PM
wanted something kinda rough and raggity haha.thats why it looks like that.to lazy to do 3d or color rigth now

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/531/picture418wp3.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

and crits or comments?



im starting to become one hell of a post whore haha.

Worms
01-11-2009, 08:17 PM
you shoulda connected the bars in the h rather then overlap it and the middle bar in the e is iffy but not to shabby
finished mine it came out meh
and i dont care if the drop shadows off i just wanted to kill space
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/003-2.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
01-11-2009, 08:31 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/2ly0lmu.jpg
new ish not lookin too good right now but ill fix it up tomorrow
crits?

GIzUrD
01-11-2009, 08:33 PM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/1842/sophisticatedsirlf8.jpg (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sophisticatedsirlf8.jpg)

just did it for quick and fun, do you like?

HATE- maybe uppercase A
SORE- square the O a little more
SEK- lots of small ones=fail.

Scheme*119
01-11-2009, 09:14 PM
havnt pieced in a minute
http://i42.tinypic.com/30rmwcz.jpg

work in progress, i cant find a motherfucking outlining pen. why am i still wearing my tie?

Cyto Aka Son1c
01-11-2009, 09:32 PM
sore n hate = dope, like the letters on both

heres a simple frust

http://i40.tinypic.com/11t27o3.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-11-2009, 09:41 PM
scheme and hate good job

the simp above me is alright too, keep working on it

klic
01-11-2009, 09:49 PM
some pen stuff
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/2-1.jpg

frust - your s is too skinny

gizurd - haha thats awesome keep working on it

sore - nice letters, make that bottom bar on your R wider

klic
01-11-2009, 09:50 PM
some pen stuff
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/2-1.jpg

frust - your s is too skinny

gizurd - haha thats awesome keep working on it

sore - nice letters, make that bottom bar on your R wider

bottom bump

CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K
01-11-2009, 10:22 PM
http://photos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-sf2p/v644/194/68/573725230/n573725230_5352166_6606.jpg
http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-sf2p/v644/194/68/573725230/n573725230_5352165_6160.jpg
http://photos-d.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-sf2p/v644/194/68/573725230/n573725230_5352163_5264.jpg
http://photos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-sf2p/v644/194/68/573725230/n573725230_5352164_5712.jpg

wack but whatever..

hate, your ish is lookin good.. if ur feelin an exchange shoot me a pm

/DaNk\
01-11-2009, 10:32 PM
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh138/heydude_019/reg.jpg
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh138/heydude_019/thin.jpg

this ones a lil wack and i kinda fucked up on some of the 3d parts lol
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh138/heydude_019/wack.jpg

Squibsorz
01-11-2009, 10:34 PM
Sore - I Dig it

Frust - the S needs to be fattened up a bit, and the down bar on the R

Shpel - i like the SH on the bottom one but the other letters dont really feel right

Hate - im not feeling the jaged lines but id like it if they were clean lines

Dank - go WAY simpler

Im new so try and be gentle haha.

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a227/NickMackin07/ASIAM.jpg

Atomik
01-12-2009, 01:34 AM
dank go simple!...dont get a crazy just yet...do straight letters dont do your letters all jagged keyboard letters for now

Scheme*119
01-12-2009, 01:48 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/rw7vrr.jpg

even with a fill, it still sucks

calculating infinity
01-12-2009, 02:27 AM
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh138/heydude_019/reg.jpg
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh138/heydude_019/thin.jpg

this ones a lil wack and i kinda fucked up on some of the 3d parts lol
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh138/heydude_019/wack.jpg
nothing but pure style my brother. i think you could probably fit in a few more arrows on that last one
maybe a highlighter outline the edges of the paper would look cool too

respERATION
01-12-2009, 05:55 AM
klic-maybe try and make the edges not rounded?
cross em out-sexxyyyy simples....remind me of raby
scheme-if you had used markers it would have looked alot nicer
for the boyfrannn:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0002-3.jpg
resp:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/crim0001-2.jpg

yeah so atm even my shitty pens are all out....crits?

respERATION
01-12-2009, 05:56 AM
klic-maybe try and make the edges not rounded?
cross em out-sexxyyyy simples....remind me of raby
scheme-if you had used markers it would have looked alot nicer
for the boyfrannn:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0002-3.jpg
resp:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/crim0001-2.jpg

yeah so atm even my shitty pens are all out....crits?

Infoe
01-12-2009, 06:03 AM
Some old shit I found..
Some exchanges too;
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/Image00159.jpg
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/Picture-1-3.jpg
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/Image00160.jpg
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/Image00161.jpg
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/Picture-2-3.jpg
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/Picture-3-1.jpg

Scheme*119
01-12-2009, 06:26 AM
klic-maybe try and make the edges not rounded?
cross em out-sexxyyyy simples....remind me of raby
scheme-if you had used markers it would have looked alot nicer


i did use markers, guess its just wack

Worms
01-12-2009, 08:08 AM
klic-maybe try and make the edges not rounded?
cross em out-sexxyyyy simples....remind me of raby
scheme-if you had used markers it would have looked alot nicer
for the boyfrannn:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0002-3.jpg
resp:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/crim0001-2.jpg

yeah so atm even my shitty pens are all out....crits?


looks like ur tryna progress to cezrs style with the dashes and the circles n wat not

and to the guy who said even with the fill it sucks... the anit christ shit should only be left to the big boys

respERATION
01-12-2009, 08:32 AM
hahaha imo i don;t think it looks anything like cezr's :(.

and to that guy with markers.....get ones that don;t look like pencils :P

Scheme*119
01-12-2009, 08:33 AM
yeah no shit, theyre all faded

Scheme*119
01-12-2009, 08:49 AM
and to the guy who said even with the fill it sucks... the anit christ shit should only be left to the big boys
and to this, its not a anti christ style its MY style, just because there's two inverted crosses there it doesnt mean im going for some demonic theme

respERATION
01-12-2009, 09:38 AM
yeah no shit, theyre all faded

i know the feeling.....fuck being broke :/

Scheme*119
01-12-2009, 09:40 AM
right? everyones got all these quality prismas and sheit, what do i have? fucking bic's

respERATION
01-12-2009, 09:53 AM
i rock fucking crayolas....you don't get anylower than that.......i got some uni paints on the way though :)

respERATION
01-12-2009, 10:21 AM
for the chatter:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/crim0001-3.jpg

Scheme*119
01-12-2009, 10:51 AM
also for the talking
http://i43.tinypic.com/20rl3m1.jpg

unfinished

Squibsorz
01-12-2009, 11:17 AM
resp - im liking the orange one more

Infoe- i like em, that JAE is clean as hell

scheme - its alittle hard to tell that the second letter is a b

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a227/NickMackin07/ASIAM.jpg

bumpin this for crits since i didnt get any

Scheme*119
01-12-2009, 11:34 AM
done
sorta
http://i43.tinypic.com/2885893.jpg

the tiger got to sleep
the bird got to land
the man got to tell himself one day he'll understand

Real Gangsta Shit
01-12-2009, 12:43 PM
gay

respERATION
01-12-2009, 12:52 PM
for the chatter:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/crim0001-3.jpg

bump to new page

BAGS
01-12-2009, 12:54 PM
Yeah I'm not feeling that style at all. Plus it's really sloppy. The fact you had to cross the word out and shit just looks bad. I'd just scrap the whole thing.


Asiam...that shit looks clean man, keep that up.

Baron
01-12-2009, 01:40 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZWkkpcE3pwk&feature=related

Batman_Onest
01-12-2009, 03:24 PM
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/889/batmansjeac3.jpg

Worms
01-12-2009, 03:53 PM
why u jockin batmans nuts so mucy everyone knows the joker was the reasons everyone went to see the movie

SNAP!
01-12-2009, 04:50 PM
That joker was way off the og story, and sucked balls.... much like this quickie.....
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1762.jpg
just fucking around witha new name...

Worms
01-12-2009, 06:33 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/004-2.jpg
a canvas idea
and a little jazz
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/001-3.jpg

sike_21
01-12-2009, 07:01 PM
is anyone not able to see their pm's or just view their profile cuz i cant talking about database error
sore- stratight shit dude just clean it up a lil

WoeInfinite
01-12-2009, 07:17 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0112091615.jpg
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0112091546.jpg

sigh...writers block hugs my nuts.

.HATESONE.
01-12-2009, 07:20 PM
woe.i think the bottom one has potential but fiz up the w maybe...i was thinking of writing woes before...

WHAT??
01-12-2009, 07:36 PM
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/2231/img1693sm6.th.jpg (http://img265.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1693sm6.jpg)

WHAT??
01-12-2009, 07:43 PM
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/3587/img1615af6.th.jpg (http://img510.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1615af6.jpg)

Scheme*119
01-12-2009, 08:02 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZWkkpcE3pwk&feature=related

this isnt really you, is it?

Worms
01-12-2009, 08:16 PM
woes like the guy said the bottom got potential but ur colouring killed it... u shoulda used a lighter colour rather then the dark brown

WoeInfinite
01-12-2009, 08:27 PM
yeha i was gonna but i couldnt find another light color...and then as soon as i put the brown in the W i found the fucking Brick Beige on the floor.
=.=

Mr yarbles
01-12-2009, 08:29 PM
why u jockin batmans nuts so mucy everyone knows the joker was the reasons everyone went to see the movie

You know nothing
Batman onest has been on this forum since before the internet even existed
He's that hardcore

Worms
01-12-2009, 08:34 PM
i didnt noe that

WoeInfinite
01-12-2009, 09:24 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0112092255.jpg
i need to go to sleeep.

Squibsorz
01-12-2009, 09:26 PM
Really, only one crit?
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a227/NickMackin07/ASIAM.jpg

Scone - maybe fatten the C up on the top one?

Worms - i like that character but im not feeling the E on the SORE

Woe - top one needs alittle work but i like the bottom one, possibly make the bottom of the E alittle fatter and the 3D is off on that part but either way i like it

What - make your letters the same size and thickness.

sike_21
01-12-2009, 09:30 PM
[QUOTE=Squibsorz;1298046]Really, only one crit?
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a227/NickMackin07/ASIAM.jpg

your letters are solid got the simple down but its kinda boring do more to it some 3d colore? iono

Squibsorz
01-12-2009, 09:39 PM
yeah its really my first attempt. ill try and slap some 3D on there and add some color. im not really good at coming up with color combos though. how do you guys choose colors?

LeaksOne
01-12-2009, 10:00 PM
woe do you still write woe or did you switch to your ghost name? an asiam if your jus startin i suggest a regular solid fill with a black outline an 3d with a bright force field

Batman_Onest
01-12-2009, 10:43 PM
why u jockin batmans nuts so mucy everyone knows the joker was the reasons everyone went to see the movie
Judging by your grammar, it's safe to say I've been reading Batman since before you were born.

PegCityBoy
01-12-2009, 11:27 PM
yeah its really my first attempt. ill try and slap some 3D on there and add some color. im not really good at coming up with color combos though. how do you guys choose colors?

yea this is a problem i have too whenever i do i sketch i dont usually fill it cuz im scurrd i'll screw it up then have to re do it an some ppl on here are bustin maddd schemes *cough*ohsnap*cough*

Squibsorz
01-12-2009, 11:58 PM
Well i TRIED some 3D on it and some color. not really sure how i feel about it. i think i screwed the 3D up but idk. should there be a line on the 3D where the S and I meet?

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a227/NickMackin07/013320.jpg

Infoe
01-13-2009, 02:12 AM
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/Picture-1-4.jpg

respERATION
01-13-2009, 02:58 AM
infoe-nice simples....i like the colours
asiam-keep doing your thing
woe-i liked the second one on the last page...
no one crits me :(
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/crim0001-3.jpg

respERATION
01-13-2009, 02:59 AM
infoe-nice simples....i like the colours
asiam-keep doing your thing
woe-i liked the second one on the last page...
no one crits me :(
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/crim0001-3.jpg

pureemoti0n
01-13-2009, 04:47 AM
havnt posted anything for ages asiam solid simple try bending some bars or rotating letters see what it comes out like next http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/8185/scan20010ou1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

.HATESONE.
01-13-2009, 06:55 AM
info.feelin the throw homie.


resp.idk dude it has potential i think but definitely work on the s and p...

i need to post in here someting worth looking at but i dont have anything so heres some old shit that i accidently deleted and am going to repost haha.

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/1994/picture396tv2.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)


http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/8228/picture402zd0.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)


http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/8964/picture406cq4.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)
booyah...

joker954
01-13-2009, 07:05 AM
info i like that quote in ur blackbook

South-Pole
01-13-2009, 07:23 AM
nice page gais

hate-hate freestlye(the one in pink) is my favourite <3
woe-niice,not liking the add-ons
info-nice simps
resp-has potential can't say more
pure-make your Y str8,your S is overlapping your k a bit too much

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/trn1.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/grape.jpg

EgoZen
01-13-2009, 07:27 AM
South & Hate I love your guys stuff..
Hate specially your second one..

South-Pole, nice style ;)

Squibsorz
01-13-2009, 08:27 AM
Info - that left page is badass. nice work

Resp - maybe im retarded but i cant really read yours. they R and E kinda but not really the S and P

Pure - thanks for the Crit. It was my first sketch so i was just going simple ima try adding some style to it today, and your shit is dope man keep it up.

Hate - that top one is pretty solid man

SouthPole - those are badass. i think the right part of the N might need to be fatter, and is the second one saying GRAPE?

South-Pole
01-13-2009, 08:49 AM
^yup says grape,was playing with some random letters and fell with this

Squibsorz
01-13-2009, 08:51 AM
Well its pretty badass

pureemoti0n
01-13-2009, 12:10 PM
thats a funky style southpole , i got the urge to write2day http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/489/scansimplnm1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

snielsgreen
01-13-2009, 12:37 PM
http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii226/snielsgreen/0113091430.jpg


middle fingers up......




O_O

sike_21
01-13-2009, 12:42 PM
yeah its really my first attempt. ill try and slap some 3D on there and add some color. im not really good at coming up with color combos though. how do you guys choose colors?

well the way i choose my colors is i have all my colors in a box just reach in and grab and what ever comes out goes on l0l

WoeInfinite
01-13-2009, 01:00 PM
woe do you still write woe or did you switch to your ghost name? an asiam if your jus startin i suggest a regular solid fill with a black outline an 3d with a bright force field

nah i still write Woe, just like grieves better, hahah.
writers block is killing me.

justin kayse
01-13-2009, 01:40 PM
Infoe- Those simps on the left are dope.
Hate-I like it.
Skyhi- Just a suggestion but the "h" kinda looks like an "a" because the bars are pointed towards each other and touching at the top. Other than that it's nice.
South Pole- I like the grape one.

Real Gangsta Shit
01-13-2009, 02:10 PM
all you nigggas are weak.

ESKiMO2
01-13-2009, 03:08 PM
Ploter. It's pretty old... I just colored it out of boredom.
http://fc77.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/013/a/a/Ploter_by_Rhino_fish.jpg
(Silver outline)

Sniels- Tone it down buddy.
South Pole- It's dope!!
Info- Great shit! I'm feeling it.

The rest of you build your skills.

Worms
01-13-2009, 03:22 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/001-4.jpg
eskimo your r shoulda been curved a lil more but other then that its funky
sniels go a bit simpler or tone it down like eskimo said
as for mine i just decided to get funky with some addons

purplethug
01-13-2009, 03:33 PM
I like that WHAT? shit. Thats an original name. im tired of those damn skater bastards who write really generic names like venom and hellboi and boner

NoCanControl
01-13-2009, 04:03 PM
i'll suck all your nigggas deaks.

huh?^^^^


http://i39.tinypic.com/b3wxsp.jpg

lol at penis thorwie

Real Gangsta Shit
01-13-2009, 04:32 PM
huh?^^^^


http://i39.tinypic.com/b3wxsp.jpg

lol at penis thorwie

battle me

ESKiMO2
01-13-2009, 04:44 PM
This looks like another sad attempt of recreating sandstorm.

Worms
01-13-2009, 04:49 PM
wat does that MEAN... WAHT DOES IT MEANNN

CakeWalk99
01-13-2009, 04:54 PM
Worms: Pure phatness!

ESKiMO2
01-13-2009, 05:02 PM
wat does that MEAN... WAHT DOES IT MEANNN

'King SandStorm' was a toy beyond belief to the point many suspected it was a joke. It most likely was someone just fucking around.

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/2179/sandstormisafagtardvw6.jpg

It was a long time ago and I think some asshole is trying to revive the joke.
So basically Real Gangsta Shit is just another member acting like a toy.

Worms
01-13-2009, 05:09 PM
LOL i should make an aaccount and fuck around but i have better things to do like watch porn :D

what4joke...
01-13-2009, 05:11 PM
yo, that's pretty ill. ^

ESKiMO2
01-13-2009, 05:15 PM
Don't bother worms, it'll never be funny again.

graffdabusup
01-13-2009, 05:17 PM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/throwie.jpg

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/peiece.jpg
crits appreciated?!?!?!?!?!?!?

Desipher
01-13-2009, 06:24 PM
doodles
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/DSC00260.jpg

Worms
01-13-2009, 06:26 PM
i had my ass kicked by a cop recently so it inspired this drawing
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/004-3.jpg
this one i was just bored
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/005-1.jpg

librelikespie
01-13-2009, 06:45 PM
that penis throwie is loltastic, and KS faken frish ish niga

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3398/3195784576_fb89bb1f96.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3370/3195784560_e1fef2602a.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3508/3195784556_acb2868dcb.jpg

SNAP!
01-13-2009, 06:45 PM
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1766.jpg
my poportions are off and i cant highlight 3d for the life of me..

AESOPuno
01-13-2009, 06:47 PM
yo libre thos is some sick handstyles

jersOneTIC
01-13-2009, 06:47 PM
^^^nice libre... like that style
some old sketch...
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/6826/dsc02899yl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ESKiMO2
01-13-2009, 07:05 PM
Libre- Your style has improved a lot since I last saw it.
Jers- I'm not feeling the R at all but the rest of it is hot.

VaNdAL xBA!x
01-13-2009, 07:26 PM
monster that pretty ill throwie
worms why u join a gang if u werent gunna b down foreal???

Worms
01-13-2009, 07:30 PM
... i never joined a gang. alot of my friends did but i was painting and drawing rather then doin what they do

hardwares
01-13-2009, 07:32 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/149uypu.jpg

crits crits crits?

Real Gangsta Shit
01-13-2009, 08:14 PM
i think you should give me those markers so you can focus on your shitty letters.

hardwares
01-13-2009, 08:42 PM
art rooms markers.

tell me what to focus on about them.

Stonk
01-13-2009, 08:53 PM
wares not feeling the colors but the letters look pretty decent..the r looks a little like a k but no biggie

once again monster fresh shit...i love sketchy looking sketches like that
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01844.jpg?t=1231905796messing around with useless extensions and basically faking the funk

Worms
01-13-2009, 09:19 PM
tride i like it except for your e if you kept the bottom the same but changed the top hafl to n uppercase u it would looked better in my personal opinion
shat somthing out done mind the wack colouring next to it i was tryn do n oldschool new york fill with mad colours n shit... needless to say i failed n e wayz
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/007-1.jpg

Infoe
01-13-2009, 09:20 PM
Tride fix up the T, looks like an E, otherwise nice.
Monster, fresheezy!
Sore, looks fat, keep working on it, good stuff

Pen freestyle;
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/pensketch.jpg

BAGS
01-13-2009, 09:37 PM
pretty good for a freestyle i guess. one thing i did notice on a couple pieces you posted a couple days ago is that you have both sharp lines and rounded lines. for example, the bottom right of the O and the top right of the N. you know what I'm saying? It just sticks out really bad imo.

i like it though. i think you got a dope name to work with and you are on the right track.

BAGS
01-13-2009, 09:37 PM
pretty good for a freestyle i guess. one thing i did notice on a couple pieces you posted a couple days ago is that you have both sharp lines and rounded lines. for example, the bottom right of the O and the top right of the N. you know what I'm saying? It just sticks out really bad imo.

i like it though. i think you got a dope name to work with and you are on the right track.

Infoe
01-13-2009, 09:56 PM
I like a bit of contrast, but I'll do some super square stuff soon, haha.
Cheers though : )

Stonk
01-13-2009, 10:01 PM
nah i like the roundness of the n..it would look weird if it was square..one thing i would say is maybe figure out how to add one of those extensions like on the i to the o to balance it out...

Infoe
01-13-2009, 10:04 PM
I just use all random shit, doesn't need to be perfect and symetrical in my eyes, I just do it to progress and keep going at letter forms, throw in shit that complements it
The crits are good though, keeps me pushing it, freestyling helps too
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/9034/image00167zp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
something more 'square'

B.S. POLICE
01-13-2009, 10:17 PM
keep this shit bumpinhttp://img165.imageshack.us/img165/7633/screencapture20tq6.png

/DaNk\
01-13-2009, 10:42 PM
dont got shit to color it with

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh138/heydude_019/Snapshot_20090113_1.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-13-2009, 10:47 PM
thang god you would have wasted your time no offence, go read the new to graff thread and get familiar with bars

Atomik
01-13-2009, 10:49 PM
dank read the new to graff thread....shit hurts my eyes

Squibsorz
01-13-2009, 10:51 PM
Dank man, i dont wanna sound like an asshole and all cuz im not really that good either, but seriously man? are there even letters in there?

B.S. POLICE
01-13-2009, 10:51 PM
bumpercars

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/7633/screencapture20tq6.png

Squibsorz
01-13-2009, 11:09 PM
thats badass BS

snielsgreen
01-13-2009, 11:24 PM
i appreciate the advice...im completely open to it......what do you guys mean by tone it down?



O_O

NoCanControl
01-13-2009, 11:37 PM
battle me

sureeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

South-Pole
01-14-2009, 04:44 AM
bumpercars

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/7633/screencapture20tq6.png

looks dope,not feeling the arrow on the A so much and start trying new things like tweaking them letters(not too much though)

koma_1
01-14-2009, 05:47 AM
http://ug2.kwick.de/ug/0050/6899/52964682_full,r,470x470.jpg

feedback?

koma_1
01-14-2009, 05:47 AM
http://ug2.kwick.de/ug/0050/6899/52964682_full,r,470x470.jpg

feedback?

respERATION
01-14-2009, 06:40 AM
snap-that fill is fucking sexy!!.....exchange the lowly respzorz?
koma-fatten up some of your letters....make them all roughyl the same thickness

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0004-1.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-14-2009, 09:17 AM
resp im down homie

southpole i have been trying qiet a few new things with my letters latelly

.HATESONE.
01-14-2009, 10:35 AM
im sick.and a lil high.and i have writers block.baaad.today sucks.and also its like in the negatives.wtf? its not sposed to be cold today.goddamn weather man.ima shank that fooooool.but hopefully itll pick up later today.

Worms
01-14-2009, 10:41 AM
bs police... i want to beat down the writers in your pik... their faces piss me off

LeaksOne
01-14-2009, 12:15 PM
^hater lol. that pic is soo raw i duno why i like it so much

-Wings-
01-14-2009, 02:13 PM
snap > While that is dope, I dont like how you have the legs put there. And it looks to chunky and small. But otherwise its dope as fuck and looks good, nice fill.
koma 1> All I can say is it needs better structure.
resperation > that dotted line effect I really dont like.

Anyways something new for yall ;)!
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/Picture003.jpg

WoeInfinite
01-14-2009, 03:12 PM
http://ug2.kwick.de/ug/0050/6899/52964682_full,r,470x470.jpg

feedback?

666 is played out man.
resp its cool, not sure if im feelin the dotted lines yet...
BS thats always fresh.
Skin lookin good, you gotta start coloring, itll look better.

-Wings-
01-14-2009, 04:31 PM
I do color, just not all the time. Im not the best at it though. And I have no outline marker atm.

snielsgreen
01-14-2009, 05:25 PM
Ploter. It's pretty old... I just colored it out of boredom.
http://fc77.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/013/a/a/Ploter_by_Rhino_fish.jpg
(Silver outline)

Sniels- Tone it down buddy.
South Pole- It's dope!!
Info- Great shit! I'm feeling it.

The rest of you build your skills.




what do u mean tone it down?


O_O

"Bi2aR"
01-14-2009, 05:28 PM
that penis throwie is loltastic, and KS faken frish ish niga

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3398/3195784576_fb89bb1f96.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3370/3195784560_e1fef2602a.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3508/3195784556_acb2868dcb.jpg

bump this heat

calculating infinity
01-14-2009, 06:28 PM
cool

ESKiMO2
01-14-2009, 07:53 PM
http://fc75.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/014/c/e/Sketch_Pad_One_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

Worms
01-14-2009, 08:04 PM
simply nice

ESKiMO2
01-14-2009, 08:19 PM
Thanks ^
http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs41/f/2009/014/1/4/Paint_Can__by_Rhino_fish.jpg

Here's the one on the side.

Black Flag
01-14-2009, 08:37 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/149uypu.jpg

crits crits crits?

Remember to keep your letters the same size, your S for example. And the last upright of your W is whack.

BigBlueViolence
01-15-2009, 12:38 AM
Eskimo- I dig it, but why no 3D or shadow?
Just curious.

http://i42.tinypic.com/2m4yglj.jpg

Bored the other night, trying new shit.
I know the legs on the A are haggard.

-Wings-
01-15-2009, 05:29 AM
snap > While that is dope, I dont like how you have the legs put there. And it looks to chunky and small. But otherwise its dope as fuck and looks good, nice fill.
koma 1> All I can say is it needs better structure.
resperation > that dotted line effect I really dont like.

Anyways something new for yall ;)!
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/Picture003.jpg

Bumpers...

ESKiMO2
01-15-2009, 06:08 AM
Eskimo- I dig it, but why no 3D or shadow?
Just curious.

There's no room for 3D but I did fit a drop shadow on the Paint Can piece.

tempest
01-15-2009, 10:02 AM
havent posted in ages. took ur advice went back to simples. and have been workin on them for a while now. should i b goin simpler?
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/565/37218700kx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits?

Eskimo- ill man. love the i in paint. tho i mite make the crossbar of the t shorter. still amazing tho.
wares-the w needs work obviously. but the bars on the e are also kinda strange. the pink tentacle stuff is wack. try a normal outline.
ea-work on it. the e doesnt match up. the a is the best thing in there. and the question mark is weak. it could b real sweet but it def needs some polishin.
wings-verrrrry nice. only thing i mite change is the i. it interrupts the flow. but its dope man. get sum color on there!

respERATION
01-15-2009, 10:02 AM
resp im down homie

southpole i have been trying qiet a few new things with my letters latelly

i'm starting now :D

Squibsorz
01-15-2009, 10:41 AM
Eskimo and Wings - that shit is fresh as hell

Tempest i like them but you need to try and keep all your letters the same thickness

kroc_oner
01-15-2009, 11:03 AM
http://fc75.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/014/c/e/Sketch_Pad_One_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

i think your gonna get prety ill

ZED
01-15-2009, 11:23 AM
Only started a couple of mounth ago so dnt no if any gd give me some feed bk plz

tempest
01-15-2009, 11:32 AM
best one is the second one. get rid of the red splash thing and work on your structure. dont put arrows on anything yet

Baron
01-15-2009, 12:01 PM
http://fc75.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/014/c/e/Sketch_Pad_One_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

I can't believe how far you've come, congrats!

Dekyga
01-15-2009, 12:56 PM
Temp - That white one is hella sik.
Wings - That S n K are really nice. I wish i could letter like that.

respERATION
01-15-2009, 02:15 PM
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/crim0008.jpg

for an exchange with snap :)

crittssss

GIzUrD
01-15-2009, 02:47 PM
you may want to invest in a lamp...

ZED- simplify it sir, your trying to move too fast. pretty much everyone is going to tell you this so i tried to say it in a way that would be less frustrating. :)

justin kayse
01-15-2009, 02:48 PM
Eskimo-Very nice.
Dank-Work on it...
Resperation-The "p" looks sort of like an "f" but the rest is good.

respERATION
01-15-2009, 02:49 PM
it's the camera.....

it sucks and i'm as broke as a virgin thier first time


:(

B.S. POLICE
01-15-2009, 05:20 PM
resp i got ya tonight when i get home

i liked that sketch too

ESKiMO2
01-15-2009, 07:25 PM
Half-Life 2! Any players here? I took the guy from the first and put a head crab on him HAHAHAH!!

http://fc81.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/015/d/6/Sketch_Pad_Two_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

-Wings-
01-15-2009, 07:40 PM
As dope as your stuff is, maybe a change in your letter structure might look good.
Like your C, they look the same man. Change it up a bit ;)!

NoCanControl
01-15-2009, 07:42 PM
anyone down for an exchange.

bored. and i suck at doing my own name. letters are gay.

(SoS)Viruz
01-15-2009, 07:53 PM
Sup Pplz Once again Im post some more pics of my Hulk but this Time I got it on a Hoodie...Tell me what you think:) O thats me BTW :)

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/SDC11355.jpg
(No Hos thats not how I tag:)
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/SDC11358.jpg

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/SDC11360.jpg

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/SDC11359.jpg

-Wings-
01-15-2009, 07:56 PM
Im down, what you write?

Edit, that hulk thing on the hoodie is the shit! Buuut it would be cooler if the whole hoodie was the shade of the background of the hulk.

Erm, the colors dont show up right on my scanner. The orange is lighter then that.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF16012009_00000.jpg
I was never that good at coloring.

NoCanControl
01-15-2009, 08:00 PM
kans, er kansr

either one. will have yours done here in a bit.

Worms
01-15-2009, 08:21 PM
man r u in highschool or college cus ur art departments seems way better then mine... im in highschool and ours fuckn sucks cus my school is all brown ppl that are gangsta gangsta