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NoCanControl
01-15-2009, 08:31 PM
if hes in hs and has those skills. PROPS.

Baron
01-15-2009, 08:34 PM
man r u in highschool or college cus ur art departments seems way better then mine... im in highschool and ours fuckn sucks cus my school is all brown ppl that are gangsta gangsta

Last time I checked Virus is ganster.

justin kayse
01-15-2009, 08:39 PM
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00383.jpg
my first sketch with this name, prolly a week ago.
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00386.jpg
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00387.jpg
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00388.jpg
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00391.jpg
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00393.jpg
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00401.jpg
accidentally dripped all the way down the D and just went with it.
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00402.jpg
Quick sketch I did of my friends ear in study hall.

Critss please?

-Wings-
01-15-2009, 08:54 PM
Crits for crits man :/

justin kayse
01-15-2009, 09:03 PM
I've been giving crits man...
but I'll give some more
Skin- I like the bottom half of your "S" but that one bar on your "N" could stand to be fattened up a little or maybe get wider from top to bottom.And work on the fill.
Eskimo- Nice
Tear-DOPE!

GIzUrD
01-15-2009, 09:29 PM
SKIN- your S is always more complex than the rest of your letters. i have the same problem. so what im proposing is that in order to make your pieces flow better you need to either simplify your S or work on your other letters.

white
01-15-2009, 09:46 PM
justin - u prob shouldnt put ur real name as ur screen name on here

justin kayse
01-15-2009, 09:47 PM
say the name out loud...

(SoS)Viruz
01-15-2009, 09:47 PM
To answer some question... yes Im in HS and I've been brushin for almsot one year. but Im a fast learner and everyday im workin on Brushin. EVERYDAY. But my art department is the shit yo. We have Grafic Design(Which I take) Pottery(Which I take HELLA GIRLS) Adavnce Drawing(WHICH I ALSO TAKE) But there are more advace class as you go up through high school. But. yea.

white
01-15-2009, 09:48 PM
Im down, what you write?

Edit, that hulk thing on the hoodie is the shit! Buuut it would be cooler if the whole hoodie was the shade of the background of the hulk.

Erm, the colors dont show up right on my scanner. The orange is lighter then that.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF16012009_00000.jpg
I was never that good at coloring.

man that looks sick as hell the only thing i would say is make that top right bar on ur K a little bit longer or fatter but still looks awesome

Worms
01-15-2009, 10:00 PM
ye virus all mine has is animation... i made a cartoon porno on my spare time aha
skin try bending ur letters diff ways all ur peices look similiar... but then again i dont look at them closly
meds the one on the top of the page u know why... cus its the simplest... keep rockin shit like that... instead of keeping it all blocks now add some curves to the top one
doodles tryin new shit out n watnot and my bad if i repost n e thing
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/003-3.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/004-4.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/007-2.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/008.jpg
lulz^^
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/007-1.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/004-3.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
01-15-2009, 10:02 PM
lol nice

B.S. POLICE
01-15-2009, 10:16 PM
yea virus i took mad advanced art classes in high school its the shit



i have an airbrush too bur im not as good

sheltr
01-15-2009, 11:23 PM
http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee187/sheltaro/sheltrtothethirdpawa.jpg?t=1232083357
http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee187/sheltaro/bumbaclut.jpg?t=1232083405

NoCanControl
01-16-2009, 12:34 AM
wings. i forgot you wrote skin. and i wrote wings instead.. oops!!!


hahahahah

http://i40.tinypic.com/xpxati.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/ak73aw.jpg

everyone can lick my balls. idgafffffff that udgaf, bitch cunt ***** snitch bitch dick licking infected ass holes. fucking cum fart tards.

>:O

NoCanControl
01-16-2009, 12:41 AM
ugly hands btw. i usually have pretty decent hands. but not this time boys and girls. well boys. cuz there isn't any girls on bs. inb4 salo and that other girl.

librelikespie
01-16-2009, 03:34 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3474/3201183148_e9b3411c81.jpg

kansr, eskimo - exchainge!!1 :)

pm me

Infoe
01-16-2009, 03:42 AM
Yo kans, i'll exchange you : )
I write infoe, I'll have one for you in a couple hourz dawg.

Infoe
01-16-2009, 03:43 AM
Yo kans, i'll exchange you : )
I write infoe, I'll have one for you in a couple hourz dawg.

Infoe
01-16-2009, 04:29 AM
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/1188/kanscu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Whacky freestyle shit!

Infoe
01-16-2009, 04:30 AM
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/1188/kanscu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Whacky freestyle shit!

senkz
01-16-2009, 05:02 AM
infoe- nice freestyle, dont really like the arrow extension on the N.
libre- different style there, i like it, could use a bit of tidying up maybe.
nocancontrol-nice simple wing, dont really like the kans too much but not bad.
sheltr- im liking that, keep working on it.

some new shit, crappy camera phone. crits?
http://i40.tinypic.com/2zsd8hc.jpg

Infoe
01-16-2009, 05:07 AM
Just needed to fill some space, hehe : )
Getting better bro, but keep everything straight, like the straight part of your k is at an angle, keep it straight up and down like the N, and kick out the leg

senkz
01-16-2009, 05:23 AM
yeaa, im just trying new things i guess, thanks.

peace89
01-16-2009, 07:01 AM
crits please

sheltr- fucking love that block style

justin kayse
01-16-2009, 08:49 AM
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00383.jpg
my first sketch with this name, prolly a week ago.
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00386.jpg
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00387.jpg
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00388.jpg
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00391.jpg
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00393.jpg
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00401.jpg
accidentally dripped all the way down the D and just went with it.
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00402.jpg
Quick sketch I did of my friends ear in study hall.

Critss please?

Bump for crits.

Monster-I like your shit a lot.
Infoe-Leg on the "k" seems weird to me, but the rest is nice.

MeNu$
01-16-2009, 08:55 AM
man u already got all the crits you need the first one is the "best" one out of all of them keep doing that shit then bend em up curve em do waht u gotta do add some 3-d etc etc

MeNu$
01-16-2009, 08:57 AM
edit get rid of all the handys on the first one tho...

justin kayse
01-16-2009, 08:59 AM
yeah it was just my first sketch with that name i was trying to figure out what worked...

sex without condoms
01-16-2009, 10:55 AM
this thread has gotten so wack
where are all the old heads at!
i want bastard back

sex without condoms
01-16-2009, 11:17 AM
sorry for double post.
just the recent shit:/
lamelamelame

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/175627.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/175450.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121229-1.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121334.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121357.jpg

Each
01-16-2009, 11:35 AM
sex without condoms- your throws are pretty tight dude. that red piece is your best, but you could fix the r and it would look pretty good. that a and e is pretty tight

Ask_The_Boss
01-16-2009, 11:36 AM
now for mine. not relle lookin for crits becuase no matter what you fucks say, im still gunna keep it, and my style. lol

its for a chick..

says Brianna

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/Brianna.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/brianna2-1.jpg

NoCanControl
01-16-2009, 11:37 AM
this thread has gotten so wack
where are all the old heads at!
i want bastard back

lol. its the toy thread....?

sex without condoms
01-16-2009, 11:40 AM
yeah but were you in here like 4 years ago? shit used to be bumpin' with some mad good heads in here but now its just gone down the drain like garggle garggle garggle

bump

sorry for double post.
just the recent shit:/
lamelamelame

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/175627.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/175450.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121229-1.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121334.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/121357.jpg

MeNu$
01-16-2009, 11:44 AM
i wouldnt talk there buddy you shit stank

NoCanControl
01-16-2009, 11:46 AM
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/1188/kanscu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Whacky freestyle shit!

right on right on. i'll post yer name when ever i get done. idk when i am gonna do it.... lol. i'm suppose to be leaving for work.

Ask_The_Boss
01-16-2009, 11:53 AM
before
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/bosk.jpg

after
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/boskspace.jpg

Ask_The_Boss
01-16-2009, 11:55 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/BoskSpiderCap.jpg

South-Pole
01-16-2009, 12:06 PM
im not realy sure about this,
but i have a feeling that my finger is pointing at the new 2 graff thread
loose them arrows and go simple
swc-good to see you back,yeah all the good heads never come back here anymore ;(,
not realy feeling your first sketch but the rest looks tight

Ask_The_Boss
01-16-2009, 12:15 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/forskool.jpg
^for classes^
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/digitalstylenotfinished.jpg
^notfinished^
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/boskbbthrow.jpg
^throwie^
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/tags.jpg
^homeboy's

MarOne...
01-16-2009, 12:51 PM
i wouldnt talk there buddy you shit stank

Hey kid, sex burns you. Fuck off real quick yeah?

Sex, those red sketches are fly. This is 'a maze', by the way. Remember when cile, seize, bastard, and other big boys were hitting this thread regularly? What the fuck happened. :{

anyways, flick for talking. New simple. Didn't finish because I didn't feel like it.

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/cabre2.jpg

Dekyga
01-16-2009, 12:54 PM
sex - love that first one, love the style.
These are a few i did a while back, crits?

http://i541.photobucket.com/albums/gg378/Dekyga/Harsh.jpg
http://i541.photobucket.com/albums/gg378/Dekyga/8BitBitch.jpg
http://i541.photobucket.com/albums/gg378/Dekyga/Zephyr.jpg

Last two i made in MS Paint...

Baron
01-16-2009, 01:06 PM
something simple i did at work, any crits


i wouldnt talk there buddy you shit stank

Too bad your shit smells like a Mexican sewer on May 6th.

MeNu$
01-16-2009, 01:27 PM
just because i dont post in here everyday and get down on my knees to all these bs fags dont mean nothing fool ya'll need to get your head straight

seywhat
01-16-2009, 01:58 PM
wtf are u talkin about?
its as simple as dont talk shit if you cant back it up, fool

-Wings-
01-16-2009, 02:18 PM
wings. i forgot you wrote skin. and i wrote wings instead.. oops!!!


hahahahah

http://i40.tinypic.com/xpxati.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/ak73aw.jpg

everyone can lick my balls. idgafffffff that udgaf, bitch cunt ***** snitch bitch dick licking infected ass holes. fucking cum fart tards.

>:O

Haha, whatever man as long as you drew me something ;)!
Ill get on yours when I get back tonight, Im gone out now and Have no time but dont worry youll get it :)!

Eack
01-16-2009, 03:17 PM
Dekya = freakin clean for graff on computers
mar = love the style
--------

on another note!
UP UP UP UPDATE
crappy unfinished canvas
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/6641/img0173jg9.jpg

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/9343/img0179rj4.jpg[/IMG[IMG]http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/2776/img0174rf8.jpg
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/9153/img0180mb2.jpghttp://img104.imageshack.us/img104/9018/img0182kd8.jpg
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/8316/img0183pm9.jpghttp://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9035/img0184zz9.jpg
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/5775/img0175iv2.jpghttp://img50.imageshack.us/img50/3809/img0178yk9.jpg
Drunk bodypainting
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/5693/img0160fw6.jpg

new style im trying (i realized after that some extensions look like backalleys extensions... it was un-intentional.. my bad)
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/3572/img0176pg3.jpg

Scino & Spank
01-16-2009, 03:37 PM
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/Untitled-3.jpgnowhere to put it, but i want someone to see it.

Baron
01-16-2009, 04:03 PM
just because i dont post in here everyday and get down on my knees to all these bs fags dont mean nothing fool ya'll need to get your head straight

?

I followed your posts and found some of your sketches. They were horrid, you need to learn some basic structure.

Backalley Abortion Doctor
01-16-2009, 06:52 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/Picture-6-1.jpg

i'm fucking stuipid on xanax

Thrice
01-16-2009, 09:52 PM
Stuff is looking good in here for a change, sorry to ruin it...but my 2-D Design artist book. Had to do like 4 layers with deco.
http://i41.tinypic.com/dol453.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/14dkaza.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/210j4m1.jpg

Mr yarbles
01-16-2009, 10:38 PM
I like it
Looks like something you would see way back in teh 70's or something it's got a nice old school feel to it.
BUt you're 3d's off in a few parts like the left of the a and other parts so work on that

sex without condoms
01-16-2009, 11:43 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/Picture-6-1.jpg

i'm fucking stuipid on xanax

xannywacked

mekosbc
01-17-2009, 12:08 AM
i was bored outta my god damn mind so i wrote the word boredom... i went bananas and added an extention where ever i could lol... i know ppl on this forum hate extentions... but shit happens...critz respected...

http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY1946.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
01-17-2009, 01:00 AM
You condums I agree everyone got off of BS and got a life you dont see anyone anymore man.

Thrice
01-17-2009, 01:31 AM
I like it
Looks like something you would see way back in teh 70's or something it's got a nice old school feel to it.
BUt you're 3d's off in a few parts like the left of the a and other parts so work on that

Thanks man, that's what i was goin for. It was kinda tough to get the 3D and all that looking nice because I was using too wide of tip markers.

Sizzuurp
01-17-2009, 02:02 AM
meko that shits fire, nice fill


http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/5222/downsized0117090249im1.jpg
i know the bayse and smak handies are garbage

librelikespie
01-17-2009, 06:28 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3308/3203636452_4ede12ff74_b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3110/3202877759_47bbc0f758_b.jpg
kansr exchainge - excuse the wack handsteez

meko - actually pretty dope, letter structure is all there and has a bangin fill, do sum more of that shit :)

iller.than.AIDS
01-17-2009, 12:04 PM
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/6194/dsc00821yl0.jpg

Meko- looks pretty ill man, kepp it up
Libre- shit looks soo ill, clean it up a bit tho
Sex w/out Condoms- dope throws!
MarOne- looks pretty dope, im really feeling that fill and that E is dope!

im kinda new at this, ive only been writing for like 2 months Crits would be appreciated

I_bomb_Montreal
01-17-2009, 12:55 PM
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/Fadifathroat001.jpg

rough sketch i did for Ceve, a writer on puregraffiti.com

Sizzuurp
01-17-2009, 01:26 PM
libre- im feelin the fill
i bomb- nice ceve. ill sketch id like to see it all clean and colored up

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/5061/downsized0117090310iu4.jpg

respERATION
01-17-2009, 03:23 PM
i bom-dooppeeee finish it
monster-i think i'm in love!!! exchange??
sizzurp-define your letters more...

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0012-1.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0013-1.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0015-2.jpg


B is wank....crits?

MeNu$
01-17-2009, 03:25 PM
boredom thats pretty nice dude and digging the extensions keep doing what you're doing....something i didn yesterday at work what u think?

Bink1
01-17-2009, 03:47 PM
boredom-dope
i bomb-dont screw up on fill :D coz now its fking nice
monster-best shit love that fiill.
jesp- work on S.
resp-tight
sizz-work on drips
menu-not felling your shit

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/8455/dsc06289xz7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/dsc06289xz7.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img300/dsc06289xz7.jpg/1/)

sike_21
01-17-2009, 06:32 PM
sucky pic... what ya think anyways?
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_9299.jpg

militia
01-17-2009, 07:32 PM
sizzurp, are you writing smak? or are you just throwin it around.

Hypeiii
01-17-2009, 08:14 PM
I write hypeiii
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/qq305/hypeIII/rabel.jpg
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/qq305/hypeIII/hype.jpg
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/qq305/hypeIII/beloner.jpg
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/qq305/hypeIII/scan0003-1.jpg
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/qq305/hypeIII/hypeIIIpensketch.jpg

I_bomb_Montreal
01-17-2009, 09:02 PM
not bad man, just try not to do little strokes when doing the outline cuz now its sloppy. Just do one single stroke and itll been clean as fuck. Continue to work on your simples before going wild.

Heres an even wilder sketch for Ceve. This name is just so inspiring!
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/Fadifathroat002.jpg

Squibsorz
01-17-2009, 09:08 PM
sike thats def my fav one that youve done. idk how i feel about the top arm of the K though.

Hypeiii
01-17-2009, 09:27 PM
iight man i will def keep that in mind..and yea more to come hopefully..

MarOne...
01-17-2009, 09:38 PM
not bad man, just try not to do little strokes when doing the outline cuz now its sloppy. Just do one single stroke and itll been clean as fuck. Continue to work on your simples before going wild.

Heres an even wilder sketch for Ceve. This name is just so inspiring!
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/Fadifathroat002.jpg

I like the old-school vibe I get from this. Maybe its just the weed though. Weed vibe.

Hypeiii
01-17-2009, 09:43 PM
hey montreal..you up for an exchange?

WoeInfinite
01-17-2009, 10:11 PM
monster - youre an animal
Kabr - those ceve's are dope, second one's V looks allllmost like an a.
Sike - freshhh
Tep - youre gettin it man, good.
Resp - i like it, but still not sure if im feelin the dotted lines.
reminds me of CEZR when he writes SIAMESE

urmomsayshi
01-17-2009, 10:16 PM
on a bus ad
man i need some decos...http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm159/igraffix122/telus.jpg

ESKiMO2
01-17-2009, 10:57 PM
It looks like you're getting an idea of what to do and what not to do but there are some things there that are way too advanced. Keep it simple and clean.

NoCanControl
01-17-2009, 11:09 PM
montereals stuff is sick. but the v kinda looks like an A

iller.than.AIDS
01-17-2009, 11:24 PM
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/7363/dsc00821yl0yu7.jpg

Meko- looks pretty ill man, kepp it up
Libre- shit looks soo ill, clean it up a bit tho
Sex w/out Condoms- dope throws!
MarOne- looks pretty dope, im really feeling that fill and that E is dope!

im kinda new at this, ive only been writing for like 2 months Crits would be appreciated

BUMP

KnoxIn
01-18-2009, 04:30 AM
hey here is some of my handstyles this is my first time tryin em out so any help? advice? anything?

respERATION
01-18-2009, 05:58 AM
srsly^^^^

seempulz

i bom-dooppeeee finish it
monster-i think i'm in love!!! exchange??
sizzurp-define your letters more...

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0012-1.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0013-1.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0015-2.jpg


B is wank....crits?
bump for more love/hate
:D....oh and creets :)

Hypeiii
01-18-2009, 09:09 AM
I write hypeiii
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/qq305/hypeIII/rabel.jpg
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/qq305/hypeIII/hype.jpg
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/qq305/hypeIII/beloner.jpg
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/qq305/hypeIII/scan0003-1.jpg
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/qq305/hypeIII/hypeIIIpensketch.jpg
bump for..well...u know

South-Pole
01-18-2009, 09:22 AM
hey here is some of my handstyles this is my first time tryin em out so any help? advice? anything?

read the new to graff thread,this is the best advice/help i can give

respERATION
01-18-2009, 10:16 AM
exchange with monster:...yes i know the first T was intentional:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0016-2.jpg


i suck :/

Squibsorz
01-18-2009, 12:09 PM
resp man i dig the simples you did (AMK, GPR) but idk about your other style. for some reason i just dont feel it that much. maybe itlll grow on me

Zase
01-18-2009, 12:32 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2v31owl.jpg
i wasnt in the mood for finishing the chars and all its so much effort

respERATION
01-18-2009, 12:33 PM
i hope....cause i don;t plan change AGAIN :)
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0019.jpg
crits bitches

Squibsorz
01-18-2009, 12:39 PM
Zase i love that shit man. id love to see that painted.

sike_21
01-18-2009, 12:45 PM
idk kinda similar ?

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/Fadifathroat002.jpg[/QUOTE]
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/08_cantwo2_WI_web.jpg

Zase
01-18-2009, 01:05 PM
thnx man haha when i get better weather i mma rock that on a legal wall with shin

and the ceve and the can2 piece are way different

sike_21
01-18-2009, 01:17 PM
nah mang the shape of the letters its just moved around some i call em how i see em

Havoc.U
01-18-2009, 01:42 PM
Umm. Didnt want to piss anyone off in the other blackbook forum. Old name. Old sketches. Crits?
lol, i paint too but im on lockdown cause i was busted twice in six months. lol. Sorry about the size, ill fix it next time.
http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj234/Havoc_U/PICT0207.jpg
http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj234/Havoc_U/PICT0208.jpg
http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj234/Havoc_U/PICT0209.jpg

Hypeiii
01-18-2009, 01:52 PM
oo havoc i see u have a **802** siggy..where in the 802??

Squibsorz
01-18-2009, 01:53 PM
thnx man haha when i get better weather i mma rock that on a legal wall with shin

and the ceve and the can2 piece are way different

hell yeah, i cant wait to see that shit.


and i dont really see the similarities on that either

NoCanControl
01-18-2009, 02:11 PM
idk kinda similar ?

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa110/Antoine_sketchbook/Fadifathroat002.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/08_cantwo2_WI_web.jpg[/QUOTE]

its just that bronx funk style. get educated sun. HAHA. Lol. jk.

truth be told looks like a dondi black book.

lul.

Bink1
01-18-2009, 02:18 PM
boredom-dope
i bomb-dont screw up on fill :D coz now its fking nice
monster-best shit love that fiill.
jesp- work on S.
resp-tight
sizz-work on drips
menu-not felling your shit

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/8455/dsc06289xz7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/dsc06289xz7.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img300/dsc06289xz7.jpg/1/)

bumpin my shit coz got only 1 crit.

Hypeiii
01-18-2009, 02:21 PM
go a lil simpler and dont put as many add ons in (ik there arent many anyways)

Hypeiii
01-18-2009, 02:23 PM
o yeah and 3D is fucked up

fromthegrave
01-18-2009, 02:37 PM
Yooooo Hypeiii, chill with the question asking... graf writers in VT are from all over the state. Find them urself, better luck when it gets warmer oh & Delete ur post in the Vermont thread, there hasnt been any action in there for a few months. and im pretty sure we want it that way..

Hypeiii
01-18-2009, 02:49 PM
iight man sry and will do

Capo Izi
01-18-2009, 03:53 PM
Zase that shit is sick as hell, keep it up

Resperation, I don't like the first thing well, I can't even really read it, but the Gore Paint Repeat thing after is pretty fresh.

Anyway haven't been here in a long while, just posting up a simple line of some of my crew.....Valid, Slick, Capo(me)..


http://photos-a.pe.facebook.com/photos-pe-snc1/v2094/128/77/731915531/n731915531_5544888_6611.jpg

garbage down tha way
01-18-2009, 05:26 PM
even if that ceve is a bite, atleast its not a west coast bite for once. i enjoy that piece.

.HATESONE.
01-18-2009, 05:32 PM
it said ceve? dude,SIKE_21,that v has to go man...i didnt even know it was,you know....a letter.but thats my opinion.

urmomsayshi
01-18-2009, 05:46 PM
some old stuff i never posted
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm159/igraffix122/yup.jpg
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm159/igraffix122/sewznewz.jpg
Tep- the t's good but the rest juss looks wierd... looks like u didnt use bars
sike- they have similarities but hey, if u say this is urs how we gonna prove it isnt

sike_21
01-18-2009, 06:17 PM
^ what mine?? iono what you talking about but i did say they had simalarities real close ones like that "v" looks just like the "a" and the "c" is just tilted a lil more but whatever i guess what nocancontrol said with the whole bronx style thing makes good sense but whatever bump for more crits
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_9308.jpg

-Wings-
01-18-2009, 08:41 PM
Kans sorry it took so long, I was busy. But anyways here you go :)!
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF19012009_00000.jpg

-Wings-
01-18-2009, 08:56 PM
You blind or just choose to ignore mine?
Also I sugjest you visit this thread, http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185.

BAGS
01-18-2009, 09:02 PM
KJAY I think your letters are too bunched up. That maroc and speak shit is so sloppy, its hard to read. I would just work on simples to be honest...

urmomsayshi - i like your letters but your color schemes aren't my favorite.

capo - i like that simple line. color it up and shit!



just fucking around. I know the spray can is played, but i think he's cool. bleh..


http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture071.jpg

librelikespie
01-18-2009, 09:07 PM
resp exchange

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3531/3208683590_d116128da1.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3311/3207835255_0fc1934cb1.jpg

exuse the uneven bars and wack hands, but u get what i was gettin at? :)

-Wings-
01-18-2009, 09:08 PM
Wow.. :/ If anyone bitchs at me for not criting someone then this is the reason why.
Monster besides the fact that its uber messy I like the bottom one. But it lacks some structure.

Capo Izi
01-18-2009, 09:12 PM
Wow.. :/ If anyone bitchs at me for not criting someone then this is the reason why.
Monster besides the fact that its uber messy I like the bottom one. But it lacks some structure.


haha don't worry wings, that shits pretty ill, you've OBVIOUSLY been writing a lot n' shit.......crit mine yo foo....

-Wings-
01-18-2009, 09:34 PM
Zase that shit is sick as hell, keep it up

Resperation, I don't like the first thing well, I can't even really read it, but the Gore Paint Repeat thing after is pretty fresh.

Anyway haven't been here in a long while, just posting up a simple line of some of my crew.....Valid, Slick, Capo(me)..


http://photos-a.pe.facebook.com/photos-pe-snc1/v2094/128/77/731915531/n731915531_5544888_6611.jpg

Didnt even notice that was you capo, all I can say is keep your letters all around the same hieght, give them some breathing space (dont bunch up your letters like that). And remember to have your letters look like the letters you see on your keyboard for now :)!

Squibsorz
01-18-2009, 09:55 PM
Wings - i like that one you did for Kans

KJay - way simpler man

Monster - Man your shit would be way fresher if it was cleaned up

sike_21
01-18-2009, 10:13 PM
Wow.. :/ If anyone bitchs at me for not criting someone then this is the reason why.
Monster besides the fact that its uber messy I like the bottom one. But it lacks some structure.

yo man your shit is clean and solid but at the same time theres nothing to it its soo simple i think thats why ppl dont crit it do more to it twist the joint you know what i mean

WoeInfinite
01-18-2009, 10:45 PM
90 second throw.
im still workin on this name...
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0118092342.jpg

Furious-StyleZ
01-18-2009, 11:04 PM
haha infinite ur E's look like dead pacmans..its funny

Capo Izi
01-18-2009, 11:15 PM
Didnt even notice that was you capo, all I can say is keep your letters all around the same hieght, give them some breathing space (dont bunch up your letters like that). And remember to have your letters look like the letters you see on your keyboard for now :)!


nope :D

Squibsorz
01-18-2009, 11:39 PM
yo man your shit is clean and solid but at the same time theres nothing to it its soo simple i think thats why ppl dont crit it do more to it twist the joint you know what i mean


simples can look fresh too

B.S. POLICE
01-18-2009, 11:51 PM
resp exchangehttp://img207.imageshack.us/img207/5538/1000184ob5.jpg

sike_21
01-19-2009, 12:02 AM
never said they couldnt

Squibsorz
01-19-2009, 12:13 AM
BS thats fresh as hell. idk about how skinny the back and bottom arm of the R are though. all the rest of the bars are fat except those two

RoeR
01-19-2009, 01:06 AM
nothin special....



http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc169/fsaspballer/scan.jpg



http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc169/fsaspballer/scan0001.jpg

/DaNk\
01-19-2009, 03:33 AM
BS- shits ill dude
Roer - i like the color on the second one

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh138/heydude_019/101_0189.jpg

respERATION
01-19-2009, 03:38 AM
resp exchange

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3531/3208683590_d116128da1.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3311/3207835255_0fc1934cb1.jpg

exuse the uneven bars and wack hands, but u get what i was gettin at? :)

dooppeeeeeeeee....did you peep my part of the exchange?

Baron
01-19-2009, 08:50 AM
BS- shits ill dude
Roer - i like the color on the second one

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh138/heydude_019/101_0189.jpg


nothin special....



http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc169/fsaspballer/scan.jpg



http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc169/fsaspballer/scan0001.jpg

All your shit sucks.

New to graff thread

revid!
01-19-2009, 09:33 AM
nothin special....



http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc169/fsaspballer/scan.jpg



http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc169/fsaspballer/scan0001.jpg


BS- shits ill dude
Roer - i like the color on the second one

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh138/heydude_019/101_0189.jpg
new to graffiti thread pleaseee

j-f
01-19-2009, 10:00 AM
u guys rushin into it
simplify ur shit itll help u out

j-f
01-19-2009, 10:01 AM
u guys rushin into it
simplify ur shit itll help u out

WoeInfinite
01-19-2009, 11:33 AM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/downsized_0119091230.jpg
exhange with monster...i forgot the s
=.=

Rolo
01-19-2009, 11:35 AM
Am not sure if this is the right spot to post but here some stuff I did. Here's my first wildstyle kinda tag I did. I only had 8 marker to use for blending.:(http://i44.tinypic.com/n3uuww.jpg
And here's a few others I did a few days ago.http://i42.tinypic.com/7101zc.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/20h511z.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/4vgvpf.jpg

TastySesamcrew
01-19-2009, 11:45 AM
Simples bro

Squibsorz
01-19-2009, 11:47 AM
No,No,No.

Rolo, RoeR, Dank....check out the new to graff thread. your guys shit looks horrid, you need to start simple and work your way up.

TastySesamcrew
01-19-2009, 11:58 AM
^^ what he said

Mr yarbles
01-19-2009, 12:40 PM
ALl you need to shut your fucking mouths and crit the people that need it not the shitty people.

Woe your gree throw looks good
But that piece isn't so great watch your widths especially in that 0 and try and work your stuff out with bars more
and drop that e too not diggin it

bspolice I don't like your r but everything else is good

and monster I don't get why they're all bitching cus it's messy
It looks good like that gives it more style

La Coka Nostra
01-19-2009, 12:41 PM
this thread makes me cry.

Eack
01-19-2009, 12:44 PM
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/9343/img0179rj4.jpg[/IMG[IMG]http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/2776/img0174rf8.jpg
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/9153/img0180mb2.jpghttp://img104.imageshack.us/img104/9018/img0182kd8.jpg
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/8316/img0183pm9.jpghttp://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9035/img0184zz9.jpg
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/5775/img0175iv2.jpghttp://img50.imageshack.us/img50/3809/img0178yk9.jpg
new style im trying (i realized after that some extensions look like backalleys extensions... it was un-intentional.. my bad)
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/3572/img0176pg3.jpg

bump cuz not a single crit even tho i gave sum :(

TastySesamcrew
01-19-2009, 12:46 PM
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/Regio.jpg
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/Borie.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
01-19-2009, 12:53 PM
LOL JESUS CHRIST
everytime i come back on this ish theres more new people
postin those crazy nasty wildstyles
ROLO nice mr wiggles spray can character

B.S. POLICE
01-19-2009, 12:57 PM
resp exchangehttp://img207.imageshack.us/img207/5538/1000184ob5.jpg

new page nogarbageyetbumpsss

TastySesamcrew
01-19-2009, 01:00 PM
This page is looking good allready (except for my part!)

Squibsorz
01-19-2009, 01:29 PM
Eack - i like the bottom one and the character is alright

Tasty - nice simps but im not really feeling the cupcake

BS - i alright Crit that one but ill say it again. The Back on the bottom right of the R should be fattened up, they dont really fit the peice. But i still think its badass. nice job.

haze4life
01-19-2009, 02:01 PM
My first time posting images so dont be too brutal lol. I used to write haze
but now its trend. As for evryone above me its lookin good.

Mr yarbles
01-19-2009, 02:01 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/waiqll.jpg

Two letter idea

Squibsorz
01-19-2009, 02:08 PM
Haze - your making the D's too fat, they dont fit the thickness of the rest of your letters.

Yarbles - to be honest man im not really feeling that R, if that is what it is

Mr yarbles
01-19-2009, 02:29 PM
Hah it's all good it was just an idea
I'm tryin to come up with an r but I fail at them :/

.HATESONE.
01-19-2009, 02:33 PM
yarbles not feelin the r.maybe wrok on it...but the e is straight.your writes would probably look better if you kinda spaced out the t and i becuase there bunchin up with the other letters..

LOPe_GCI
01-19-2009, 02:55 PM
some pieces in my boy mints book from last night
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/IMG_11381.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/IMG_1140.jpg
been only doin throws lately so i gotta step my piece game up.
still trying to figure out a structure/style that im feeling so crits welcome

borie/regio nice simps
erase u got the idea just even out your bars and make em simpler

-Wings-
01-19-2009, 03:28 PM
My homeboy writes dest :/. And he's one of the people who taught me the basics.

Rolo
01-19-2009, 03:30 PM
LOL JESUS CHRIST
everytime i come back on this ish theres more new people
postin those crazy nasty wildstyles
ROLO nice mr wiggles spray can character

Thanks, for the feed guys. Am new and I just read what you guys mean't by that. I totally understand what I was doing wrong after reading that thread. And now, I know how people flow it together sort of. I just gotta work on it. Am gonna try and start more simple like you guys said.

B.S. POLICE
01-19-2009, 03:31 PM
word rolo take your critts and use them to improve instead of talking back, youll go far

revid!
01-19-2009, 04:14 PM
bunch of throwie battles with my friend.
fun shits.
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/6334/cimg0997ns9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/cimg0997ns9.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img149/cimg0997ns9.jpg/1/)
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/9282/cimg0993to5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/cimg0993to5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img167/cimg0993to5.jpg/1/)
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/9387/cimg0994mr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/cimg0994mr6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img149/cimg0994mr6.jpg/1/)
peece

.HATESONE.
01-19-2009, 05:53 PM
feelin the last two^

Baron
01-19-2009, 06:20 PM
Eack, everthing is looking fresh as hell but one thing you may want to try is to make the shadow fall to the left or right, instead of going straight back.
Tasty, I love your siple style a lot, only thing I could find was the I in the second one is covered up a lot more than any of the other letters.
B.S. Police, I'll be upfront with you, its not your best. The leg on the R is really killing me and the bottom of the P looks oddly shaped. Nice fill, wish I could fill like that.
Haze, new to graff
Yarbles, the E is fire but there is too much going on with the R, simplify it a bit, I garuntee it will look much cleaner.
Lope, thats an interesting style, I can appreciate it, but its not my kind of style so I don't know what to say.
Revid, the middle one is the only one I liked, the other two have some major structure problems can't tell what every letter is, the last one's G needs medical attention though.

-Wings-
01-19-2009, 06:25 PM
EXPRIMENTAL!
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF20012009_00000.jpg

haze4life
01-19-2009, 07:03 PM
Haze, new to graff
Ill take any crit but im shure you can give something way more constructive then this evrytime you see something you dont like. Im not trying to start beef or anything but its really not as usefull as you might think.. ive reread it alot for the past two months and ive been sticking with the simples... isnt that what the new to graffiti trhead says? I would of rather heard quit graffiti then that. whatever... just my piece of mind.

LOPe_GCI
01-19-2009, 07:14 PM
some pieces in my boy mints book from last night
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/IMG_11381.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/IMG_1140.jpg
been only doin throws lately so i gotta step my piece game up.
still trying to figure out a structure/style that im feeling so crits welcome

borie/regio nice simps
erase u got the idea just even out your bars and make em simpler
bump for crits.
where did all the give em to get em nazis in the toy story go?

skin- not bad but the n doesnt fit with the style of the s and k. the character takes away from the letters a little bit too
revid- those throws are okay. work on the style of them they look kinda bland.

-Wings-
01-19-2009, 07:18 PM
Meh, everyone complains my stuffs the same so I decided to try out a Lowercase N, which I havent done sense I was a huge toy :P.

Squibsorz
01-19-2009, 07:53 PM
Yea i feel ya yarbles. for some reason S's always are a pain in the ass for me, idk y.

Lope - shits fresh, maybe do something with the S. idk how i feel about the little notch thing in the bottom of it. makes it look like a W. And i know what you mean about the give crits to get crits thing. soo many people bump their shit like 4 times and dont crit once.

Revid - the A on that middle throw is badass

Skin - i like it except for the Character as an I, if there was an actual I in there i would like it alot more

KJay - no problem man, i mean id like to give more of a crit than "go simple" but really its what you need to do.

Baron
01-19-2009, 07:59 PM
My first time posting images so dont be too brutal lol. I used to write haze
but now its trend. As for evryone above me its lookin good.


Ill take any crit but im shure you can give something way more constructive then this evrytime you see something you dont like. Im not trying to start beef or anything but its really not as usefull as you might think.. ive reread it alot for the past two months and ive been sticking with the simples... isnt that what the new to graffiti trhead says? I would of rather heard quit graffiti then that. whatever... just my piece of mind.

You lack the most basic of structures. There are no bars, no flow, your three dimension is off, your hand style is whack, your lines are shaky, nothing makes sense, your letters are disproportionate, the add ons are unnecessary, the color schemes are bad and your bars are too skinny. All of what I just said is easily summed up as "new to graff thread". Two months isn't anything kid, just wait. Just quit, since thats what you would rather hear.

-Wings-
01-19-2009, 08:14 PM
An exchange for hype.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF20012009_00001.jpg

Ps anyone down for another exchange :3?

Squibsorz
01-19-2009, 08:19 PM
i like that one wings. i like the hype tag too.

i would exchange with you but i cant do shit but simps right now so give me some time and i will.

haze4life
01-19-2009, 09:11 PM
lol thanks i think i needed to hear that. but for the record i only used bars i guess not well enought tho.

librelikespie
01-19-2009, 09:29 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3097/3211030051_8b94e9663b_b.jpg
woe exchangeeee

grievs woe

WoeInfinite
01-19-2009, 09:34 PM
fuuuuuck
so much fresher than mine.
i have to redo it
O.O thanks brosef

acereborn
01-19-2009, 09:34 PM
EXPRIMENTAL!
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF20012009_00000.jpg

not gonna lie, i never really liked your old outlines :P

this one is pretty nice though, minus the character. try just a normal I in it. or, fill up the blank space between the k and the guy with something

NouveauP
01-19-2009, 11:31 PM
Green rose done by request. Not really, graff, but whatever. Tell me what needs to be fixed.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/flower.jpg

Capo Izi
01-20-2009, 08:13 AM
skin-I like that shit alot, the exchange is pretty ill, and the new skin piece is sick, except the character, it's too real looking, make it simpler and more part of the piece

Noveau-pretty sick, looks just like a real tat, maybe make the paper with the 'Heather' on it more flowy and real-like. Otherwise nice.


New little piece I did up and colored....

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=4821&stc=1&d=1232460782

NouveauP
01-20-2009, 09:22 AM
Thanks for the crit. Yes, the banner is what I dislike about it. I couldn't get a good curve to make it look more droopy, so I just kind of made it stiff. I'll be working on it!

Eack
01-20-2009, 10:19 AM
anybody up for an exchange today? (i write erase for those who havent noticed)

nothing complicated...im not home so it would b a pen sketch..but i just wanna do it for the fun of it

Shiva.
01-20-2009, 10:45 AM
NouveauP, work on the letters..
leave some space at the top and the bottom of the letters, don't hit the bottom and the top of the paper.
also, make the capital H bigger, compared to the small letters and stretch the top of the h and t, this will look more classy.
nice rose though

Squibsorz
01-20-2009, 11:13 AM
Capo - try using fatter bars, and im not really feeling that character.

Libre - im not really feeling the down arm of the R or that E in the top one.

respERATION
01-20-2009, 01:30 PM
i hope....cause i don;t plan change AGAIN :)
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0019.jpg
crits bitches

bump

skin -your shit is sexxyyyy
snap-i just saw your exchange.....i gasmed
woe-i'd stop trying to get that 666 effect so much :)

HalfGangstaShit
01-20-2009, 01:39 PM
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9885/knar9ak0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/knar9ak0.jpg/1/w600.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img98/knar9ak0.jpg/1/)
CRITS?

NoCanControl
01-20-2009, 02:24 PM
yeah but were you in here like 4 years ago? shit used to be bumpin' with some mad good heads in here but now its just gone down the drain like garggle garggle garggle

bump

i am in the same boat as you but. i could give a fuck about the toy thread. cuz toys post here. but as for shit like big boy black book. people are just makin it shit. when i FIRST FIRST looking up bombing science i was dumb founded about how mnay good people were in there. but now. its shitty. still some good people . but mostly half way good people.

Squibsorz
01-20-2009, 02:49 PM
ive been surfin this site for about 3 years now and the shit used to be way better all around. idk what happen but it seems like it got flooded with assholes

Worms
01-20-2009, 02:55 PM
im guessin the good ppl all realized the dont need internet crits and started bombing.... most ppl on this site dont paint and theyr paper pussies so im guessin ppl evolve

RaggaMuffin
01-20-2009, 03:10 PM
Hi guys, these are some of my double pages

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/2596/p1100034kk5.th.jpg (http://img517.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1100034kk5.jpg)

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/7481/owcherub2.th.jpg (http://img504.imageshack.us/my.php?image=owcherub2.jpg)

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/1143/belonegrodm9.th.jpg (http://img509.imageshack.us/my.php?image=belonegrodm9.jpg)

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/2813/belonweedoj0.th.jpg (http://img118.imageshack.us/my.php?image=belonweedoj0.jpg)

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/2302/sexualrevolutionno2.th.jpg (http://img118.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sexualrevolutionno2.jpg)

NoCanControl
01-20-2009, 03:24 PM
im guessin the good ppl all realized the dont need internet crits and started bombing.... most ppl on this site dont paint and theyr paper pussies so im guessin ppl evolve

pretty much true. i try to bomb. but i live in a small shity so it aint gonna happen. i try to hit the rails. but i almost got caught. so idk man. i'm really the only good one here in my city. SUCKS. alot of toys want to learn from me.. i just tel them to go to bombingscience. lul but i make trips to kc and hit that place up :D

http://i39.tinypic.com/29o5oqv.jpg

for my ***** infoe.

Worms
01-20-2009, 03:40 PM
lol STOP REFERIN TOYS TO THIS FORUM... just mug em and be a dick
and nice solid simples
ragga im to lazy to read urs but the bottom two look like u had somthing to look at hwile u were drawin cus there totally diff from ur shitty top ones
halfgangster nice try puttin em closer together... duno how realistic those would be for street bombing though jus my two cents
resp ur not giving crits fool ur just sayin nice or not nice lol very good try again :D and im not feelin ur style but thats my prefference like i said before looks like cezrs kinda and gesus with all those dash things... not the letters themselves
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/004-5.jpg
focus on my R

sike_21
01-20-2009, 03:56 PM
^ 3d is messed up on the r's right leg and the sketch it self looks the same as the others

enigmatic
01-20-2009, 03:59 PM
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/DSC_0061-1.jpg

all graffiti forums should be invite only

WoeInfinite
01-20-2009, 04:29 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0120091725.jpg
laying down about to nod out, listening to rob zombie, and then i see this in my head and was like OH inspiration...wanna do something bigger with it...then looking at it i think it sucks now. =.= we'll see if i can develop it into anything. sigh.

knar, no can control and sore all lookin good.

librelikespie
01-20-2009, 04:37 PM
enigmatic- fresh

very

woe - looks alright, but i wouldnt go for a fonty style, pretty hard to get flow perfect nah mean?

WoeInfinite
01-20-2009, 04:39 PM
really? im not sure how i like it now.
:[ everyone blows me away
D:

HalfGangstaShit
01-20-2009, 05:34 PM
===

HalfGangstaShit
01-20-2009, 05:36 PM
Yo worms i practice them shits non stop, so I'll make them realistic bombing. Thanks on the tip though, i like the Sore letters yo tighten up your lines though, and do some perspective exercises to get the 3d just right. I'd like to see it in color though.
Thanks Woe, keep drawing, them letters is straight but bring them closer together and start doing 3d's with them shits. And if you haven't mastered your simples, get on it!

I need a camera!

WoeInfinite
01-20-2009, 05:42 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0120091825.jpg

HalfGangstaShit
01-20-2009, 05:42 PM
Some stuff i made for my homeboy

Deco markers
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/4241/epidemicfe7su9.jpg

this is after the illustrator touch up
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/29/l_d52e04a1833b41aaa1e08c3da0634e36.jpg

impulse555
01-20-2009, 05:56 PM
new font i found please post responce

remos
01-20-2009, 06:07 PM
half ganster thats pretty dope especially after the touch up
woe the 2nd ones good first is an good idea jsut keep workin on it and rob zombie is the shit
just an s im workin with
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/s.jpg

Plutocase
01-20-2009, 06:18 PM
one of the better things to come out me on a tuesday

HalfGangstaShit
01-20-2009, 06:22 PM
Damn impulse, I've seen your shit before, work on handstyles first to get an idea of flow and letters. You can't start straight up "piecing" like you would want to without any basis in letters or colors as i can see.

HalfGangstaShit
01-20-2009, 06:24 PM
how old are you impulse?

WoeInfinite
01-20-2009, 06:27 PM
freshhhh s remos.

Plutocase
01-20-2009, 06:36 PM
dont know if my pics are showing, let me know........hate otr

BAGS
01-20-2009, 06:39 PM
I need some serious work on my 3d, you know the type thats on the bottom of the letters. for some reason I cant get a grasp on it.



http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture072.jpg

NouveauP
01-20-2009, 07:59 PM
Bored in Economics. Simple with my friend's name.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/daylo.jpg

BAGS
01-20-2009, 08:17 PM
how can you be bored in Economics? I love that class. I took a Economics/Sociology class my senior year and another Socio class last semester. Love it.

I like it, looks good. I like the D

NouveauP
01-20-2009, 08:35 PM
My economics teacher is a 70 year old man who doesn't really discuss economics rather than personal politics and his opinions. And economics isn't really my thing. Sociology, however, is a lot of fun. And thanks. :)

Worms
01-20-2009, 08:44 PM
i think it woulda looked better with a straight y
maro its okay but keep everything straight by ussing bars... check the new to graff thread

a little image plan for tonights fun time
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/005-2.jpg

BAGS
01-20-2009, 08:48 PM
yeah, i know all about bars and shit, i've posted up pics that people don't even crit. i was just trying to work on that 3d.

B.S. POLICE
01-20-2009, 09:45 PM
worms i like that add some 3d and colors man

(SoS)Viruz
01-20-2009, 09:47 PM
A Snap...SHUT UP.... Lol Im pro I told snap to shut up. A yo did you see the Hoodie I posted?

B.S. POLICE
01-20-2009, 09:57 PM
oh mang talking shit to me gets you on a whole new level on here lol, yeah i seen the hulk hoodie pretty dopehttp://img152.imageshack.us/img152/1951/screencapture6it0.png

(SoS)Viruz
01-20-2009, 09:59 PM
I know I went from toy to PRO TOY.lol. But Likin the Letter the Cracks are iffy. But its a sketch sooo hey. Man I need to post some flicks fuckin scanner broke SOOO im shit out of luck right now but Im workin on the steez soooooo I'll be postin soon

ScAmeretoLme
01-20-2009, 10:05 PM
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s114/scameretolme/IMG_2877.jpg
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s114/scameretolme/IMG_2879.jpg

worms can't wait to see that done, looks promising.

and nouveauP, i agree that the D is pretty sick, the simp on a whole is solid

Worms
01-20-2009, 10:07 PM
i save the colouring for the walll.... for me colour and paper equalls fail... i suck

HalfGangstaShit
01-20-2009, 10:09 PM
tight worms, i see you fixed the R and E, nice.

COLORS! now.

RoeR
01-20-2009, 10:38 PM
gay gay gay.. woww.. im postin the shit outta my old booka, cuz my fuckin scanner dosnt werk...

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc169/fsaspballer/scan0006.jpg

acereborn
01-20-2009, 10:48 PM
I know I went from toy to PRO TOY.lol. But Likin the Letter the Cracks are iffy. But its a sketch sooo hey. Man I need to post some flicks fuckin scanner broke SOOO im shit out of luck right now but Im workin on the steez soooooo I'll be postin soon

word, did you airbrush it? i just remember the general look of it, got the pic still?

roer: back to basics

LeaksOne
01-20-2009, 10:51 PM
roer - since you said thats old i wont tell you to do simps cuz i dont kno what your recent stuff looks like but i hope its a big jump from that
scamer - im not really sure but i think that says loca? i dont like that style
b.s police - im feelin that sketch

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff047.jpg
only thing ive been able to come up with recently. i tried the ohsnap guide to blending an it went pretty bad plus the s is ugly. crit away

NoCanControl
01-20-2009, 11:13 PM
leaksssssssssssssssssss. focus on lettorz
roer? simples man.
i don't even know your name. but kid with new prismas, simpals man.
daylo. pretty coool. work on the bottom of the d a bit.
snap, apram? anyways. ummm. it needs a bit of work. i think you should make your letters a bit taller. IMO. and stop making midget letters. lul.
sore. pretty cool mang. i'll do your name. and uhhh.... something about... don't fuck up the structure if you do *ahem* it.
maro, you three d is messed up. and your letters neet a bit work. but you doing fine. just more time.
woe. go simplr. or work on flow or something. idk. man. you letters just look goofy for somereason
Sexwith no condoms. uhhhh you throw is tight. but you need to get your piece game proper.

LeaksOne
01-20-2009, 11:17 PM
did your S get stuck down? haha. what letters should i focus on most?

LOPe_GCI
01-20-2009, 11:23 PM
some pieces in my boy mints book from last night
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/IMG_11381.jpg
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/IMG_1140.jpg
been only doin throws lately so i gotta step my piece game up.
still trying to figure out a structure/style that im feeling so crits welcome

borie/regio nice simps
erase u got the idea just even out your bars and make em simpler

dam yo no crits hate props tellin me to step my game up... nothing/?
bump one last time
anyone decentwant to exchange?

NoCanControl
01-20-2009, 11:27 PM
the S and the A. and you highlights are a bit wierd. I MEAN you CAN do it like that. but i think it looks weird imo. and the secrete to shading the colors is kinda flick the marker so it gets lighter as it goes down or which ever direction you flick it. and then while the mark is still wet hurry up and grab your other color and flick it in the opposite direction.

so the flicks kinda mean

---====>flick<===----

NoCanControl
01-20-2009, 11:31 PM
destl?

idk but your d looks like a w in the bottom. and focous on your d.
and on the first one i guess the d is legit. idk. i knew it was a d. but your T and L look like T's. hahahah. so yea.

B.S. POLICE
01-21-2009, 12:49 AM
it says "it was all a dream"

senkz
01-21-2009, 01:47 AM
http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk265/p_aull/Image011.jpg
http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk265/p_aull/Image010.jpg

newer stuff.crits?

RaggaMuffin
01-21-2009, 03:24 AM
Hi guys, these are some of my double pages

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/2596/p1100034kk5.th.jpg (http://img517.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1100034kk5.jpg)

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/7481/owcherub2.th.jpg (http://img504.imageshack.us/my.php?image=owcherub2.jpg)

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/1143/belonegrodm9.th.jpg (http://img509.imageshack.us/my.php?image=belonegrodm9.jpg)

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/2813/belonweedoj0.th.jpg (http://img118.imageshack.us/my.php?image=belonweedoj0.jpg)

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/2302/sexualrevolutionno2.th.jpg (http://img118.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sexualrevolutionno2.jpg)

Bump?

Infoe
01-21-2009, 04:15 AM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0120091825.jpg

this is coooooooooool
getting better dude

Capo Izi
01-21-2009, 07:17 AM
New little piece I did up and colored....

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=4821&stc=1&d=1232460782

Repost for crits...


Raggamuffin-not bad, just a little hard to understand (what's your name?), the coloring though is pretty fresh

Senk-FRESH simple, that cracked one is nice

Woe-MAD TAG, love that style.

Bink1
01-21-2009, 07:38 AM
roer - since you said thats old i wont tell you to do simps cuz i dont kno what your recent stuff looks like but i hope its a big jump from that
scamer - im not really sure but i think that says loca? i dont like that style
b.s police - im feelin that sketch

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff047.jpg
only thing ive been able to come up with recently. i tried the ohsnap guide to blending an it went pretty bad plus the s is ugly. crit away

where is that guide? :D i wanna learn that shit too ..

jupsick
01-21-2009, 10:45 AM
leaks keep going ur on the way 0.0
senk work on ur middle bars...
the e and s are ok and the n and k are out of proportion other then that i like it 0.0
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/5075/0121091524450x600dz4.jpg
crits?

hal.cyon
01-21-2009, 12:10 PM
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/5975/002sz7.jpg
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/4434/001zf2.jpg

hal.cyon
01-21-2009, 12:21 PM
and an oh snap exchange that was pretty wack and i never finished. sorry mang, ill work out something soon.

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/4690/003nk2.jpg

Dekyga
01-21-2009, 12:28 PM
hal, those last two look G!

inpho_211
01-21-2009, 12:31 PM
jupsick, try putting ur letters a lil to the left or right to make em look like they lean. then add a mad 3d on it. that would make it look better!

MC_zoo
01-21-2009, 01:10 PM
crits

B.S. POLICE
01-21-2009, 01:16 PM
cyon word hola at me well make somethin happen

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/172/screencapture7mp3.png

MC_zoo
01-21-2009, 01:29 PM
sick colours u use pencils?

LeaksOne
01-21-2009, 01:30 PM
where is that guide? :D i wanna learn that shit too ..
bink i forgot where he said all that but its basically what nocancontrol said below.


the S and the A. and you highlights are a bit wierd. I MEAN you CAN do it like that. but i think it looks weird imo. and the secrete to shading the colors is kinda flick the marker so it gets lighter as it goes down or which ever direction you flick it. and then while the mark is still wet hurry up and grab your other color and flick it in the opposite direction.

so the flicks kinda mean

---====>flick<===----

the only reason i did that highlight was cuz i jus gota squeeze whiteout pen an i wanted to try it out. i agree it came out pretty bad. i think ill stick to solid fills until i can blend better. thanks for the crit tho

MC_zoo
01-21-2009, 02:10 PM
plz some crits

Decide
01-21-2009, 02:58 PM
and an oh snap exchange that was pretty wack and i never finished. sorry mang, ill work out something soon.

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/4690/003nk2.jpg
nice man... got a sick idea for an e off ur p

hal.cyon
01-21-2009, 03:59 PM
working on a little outline, like the way its goin...
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/3548/004pd6.jpg
thanks for the props guys, haven't been posting much lately.

B.S. POLICE
01-21-2009, 04:28 PM
cyon word hola at me well make somethin happen

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/172/screencapture7mp3.png

bottom page bumpss

BAGS
01-21-2009, 05:45 PM
"Do work" is seriously way overplayed, annoying and stupid.

I like the colors the best. the fill is dope. I think it would look better if you just did it regularly. I would fix up your M too, it's slacking.

NoCanControl
01-21-2009, 06:01 PM
d looks like a p. butttttttttttttttttt yep. thats about it.

it looks like your wildstyle would be in threed rather then wildstyle. because. just the way your a bends looks a bit three d ish.

ESKiMO2
01-21-2009, 06:19 PM
DROP SCiENCE FiCTiON
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/6783/dropsciencefictionqh1.jpg
Top is more traditional while bottom is more experimental.

Snap- Coloring is dope as always. The flow is off just a bit but nice job otherwise.
Hal- That's a truly unique style. Nice work with the originality.

sike_21
01-21-2009, 08:29 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_9521.jpg
better view of what thecolors really look like
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_9520.jpg

-Wings-
01-21-2009, 08:43 PM
hal. cyon > I dont know.. I cant say nothing bad cant say nothing good?
snap > video tape you coloring once so I can see your awesome coloring skillz :)!
Oh yeah nice work ;)! haha
eskimo > Some bars look squished, but your style always looks good :)!
sike > No extentions, ugly fill and handstyle (looks some like spondge bobs world or patricks). I think you could do a couple simples before you go crazy like that :/...

Anywaaaaaaaaaays im not sure on this one... :/ Also if its good should I color?
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF22012009_00000.jpg

white
01-21-2009, 08:51 PM
bottom page bumpss

man i need to learn that fill thats fuckin crazy

sike_21
01-21-2009, 08:51 PM
suck my dick kid your shit is whack and you post the same letters every time and you dare try and say my shit is bad the only thing i agree on is the handstyle

-Wings-
01-21-2009, 08:59 PM
Are you kidding me?... Like wtf ? All of your extentions look like garbage. The fill looks like sponge bob square pants got a hold of it, your letter stuctures whack. Your k looks like a piece of shit? Them big things at the end of your S and E look like tumors? 3d is ugly, and is wrong on the I... And you must not look much at pieces closely. Its called a style? Sure it looks the same sometimes, but at least it looks good? Also nice hearts.

ESKiMO2
01-21-2009, 09:05 PM
Skin- it looks like the flow switches toward the end. If you wrote Sink it would balance it out real well.

sike_21
01-21-2009, 09:06 PM
fuck struckture that shit is played outand boring my style is messy and what ever i want it to be my letters are different so once again suck my dick and you can hate on my color scheme when you actually try some on your own shit. peace im done with you kid =)

ESKiMO2
01-21-2009, 09:08 PM
fuck struckture that shit is played outand boring my style is messy and what ever i want it to be my letters are different so once again suck my dick and you can hate on my color scheme when you actually try some on your own shit. peace im done with you kid =)

Everyone goes through this phase in which they are told they should rethink or restructure their style. It's your choice but don't get all pissed off if people don't like it.

-Wings-
01-21-2009, 09:11 PM
Hahahaha thats good, structures boring? Your styles messy ? Hahaha no your styles garbage, and this 'kid' at least knows what he's talking about. Your here bitching about how structures boring.. um hello? Structure is what makes graffiti artist so good ? Oh and ive been trying my own shit for quite some time now.

See im not the only one that thinks it ^^

sike_21
01-21-2009, 09:23 PM
Everyone goes through this phase in which they are told they should rethink or restructure their style. It's your choice but don't get all pissed off if people don't like it.

i aint mad period and i know theres always gonna be people that dont like you stuff i aint new to the game and i may not know what im talking about lala but im just tired of ppl saying work on your letter structure do straight letters i can do that easy i dont like it tho not my thing now i may not have flow and my outline are shaky but only cuz i do it all with decos

-Wings-
01-21-2009, 09:28 PM
Haha thats good. The reason why people tell you to do structure is because it makes you realize that your other stuff sucks and then you learn everything in order as it should be. Like extentions, they dont just happen. You should be able to draw them without thinking about them. And decos dont do nothing, ive drawn with them before they dont make my stuf any worse or better and if its shaky its either because your hands shaky or your rushing. Take your time, as you get better youll be able to draw them faster as you go by. But in the mean time do simples, and take it easy on the markers.

(Also your post tell different if your mad or not)

piggy.bank.prostitute
01-21-2009, 10:08 PM
ill wild styles d@wg

ESKiMO2
01-21-2009, 10:10 PM
It's not like you will completely lose your style if you do simples. Don't retort that nonsense because you and I both know that's bullshit. Graffiti is based around letters. You pick whether you want to do graffiti or something in between. The choice is yours.