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sike_21
01-21-2009, 11:17 PM
aiight i think im confused on what ya mean by simple what i think is simple see im not good on the graff lingo l0l you mean simple like no extentions or or simple like letters on a keyboard cuz keyboard is simple for me =/

ESKiMO2
01-21-2009, 11:22 PM
Do both the keyboard and no extensions then see which one looks better and is more fluent.

seywhat
01-21-2009, 11:24 PM
just go read the new to graff thread, it explains all there.
simple as that.

Zarb
01-21-2009, 11:25 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0121092318.jpg

crits?

sike_21
01-21-2009, 11:26 PM
haha been there its sooo long and im not much of a reader esides i now the basics like bars and all that shit ima post some of my "simples" tmw

senkz
01-21-2009, 11:36 PM
skin-just like that other guy said, the flow of your N changes, it should sort of lean to the left like the other letters so it "fits" into place, nice stuff.

sike-some of those extensions dont look very good just like skin said, so i think you should try some more simpler stuff.

Eskimo- im really liking that, colour it up!

b.s. police- dopeee fill as always man only thing i dont like is that big gap between the A and D. keep doing what your doing.

hal- nice unique style you have there, will look dope with colour.

zarb- make the outline straight, not all shaky, the 3d is way off.

new
http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk265/p_aull/PICT3934.jpg
http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk265/p_aull/PICT3936.jpg
critss?

ESKiMO2
01-21-2009, 11:39 PM
I'm liking those simples Senk. Just keep a consistent flow like the S and E are curvy but then the N and K are jagged. Try to mix it up a bit.

NoCanControl
01-21-2009, 11:50 PM
suck my dick kid your shit is whack and you post the same letters every time and you dare try and say my shit is bad the only thing i agree on is the handstyle

fuck you. go simplle. and if you have a problem pm me. and we'll black book battle if you think youre the shit. or paint battle doesn't matter.

sike_21
01-21-2009, 11:52 PM
l0l when did you get involed in this ?

NoCanControl
01-21-2009, 11:56 PM
just pm me. ii don't wanna mess up the boards with your shit.
pm = private msg

click my name and then it will say send user a private msg er something

MC_zoo
01-22-2009, 01:18 AM
crits

quithaten
01-22-2009, 03:12 AM
http://fc70.deviantart.com/fs40/i/2009/018/6/d/a_quick_little_peace_by_nanaimoartist.jpg
http://fc22.deviantart.com/fs40/i/2009/022/3/1/fuck_it_by_nanaimoartist.jpg

librelikespie
01-22-2009, 03:18 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3420/3217655680_318df608f9.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3433/3216604919_8699f587bb.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3396/3216604917_cd170009e8.jpg

ESKiMO2
01-22-2009, 08:28 AM
Libre- I like everything especially the characters. The middle one is kind of ambiguous though.

BEAS one
01-22-2009, 08:53 AM
quithaten...try to go a little bit more simple
senk...love those simples man. keep it up.


just a few...crits?


http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/JuggaloSk8er4life/WILDCOLORED.jpg


http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/JuggaloSk8er4life/FAITH.jpg


http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/JuggaloSk8er4life/3e9ae4f9.jpg


http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/JuggaloSk8er4life/SHOUT.jpg

librelikespie
01-22-2009, 08:56 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3456/3217182639_4708d86b3c.jpg

sap - good bar work niga :)

ESKiMO2
01-22-2009, 09:10 AM
Sap- I'm feeling the last one. It looks like the markers are bleeding and giving it that texture. Try printer paper or something heavier.

respERATION
01-22-2009, 09:51 AM
sap-try not to make your letters so rigid
monster-i like it but i think you went a bit far with the add ons but i'm loving that karak

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0042-1.jpg

librelikespie
01-22-2009, 10:08 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3091/3217298813_3a82049b62.jpg

resp - tight

sex without condoms
01-22-2009, 10:10 AM
cyon word hola at me well make somethin happen

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/172/screencapture7mp3.png

alright well first off dope coloring as always snappy but i really have never liked your piecing style i think you need to make your letters less squished and small and thick and make them proportionally bigger but that's just me
but stay up yo!
and i'm out

FEB
01-22-2009, 10:10 AM
libre:Nice color scheme. The 3d is great.

impulse555
01-22-2009, 10:28 AM
how old are you impulse?

16

impulse555
01-22-2009, 10:33 AM
http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=GgtQm_g43TM&feature=channel_page

white
01-22-2009, 11:19 AM
senk libre and sap all lookin good

SNAP!
01-22-2009, 11:23 AM
impulse.....

god......impulse......

stick to your last one in that video, and rock it until you can paint that PERFECT

impulse555
01-22-2009, 01:11 PM
thnx

Baron
01-22-2009, 01:22 PM
impulse.....

god......impulse......

stick to your last one in that video, and rock it until you can paint that PERFECT

You best be joking. They were all beyond help. They all were terrible, the last one was horrid. It had no proportion, at all. Lines were shaky, and there were drips all over the place. This is the second time he's posted the pic and video. Kid should just give up.

Baron
01-22-2009, 01:29 PM
impulse.....

god......impulse......

stick to your last one in that video, and rock it until you can paint that PERFECT

You best be joking. They were all beyond help. They all were terrible, the last one was horrid. It had no proportion, at all. Lines were shaky, and there were drips all over the place. This is the second time he's posted the pic and video. Kid should just give up.

impulse555
01-22-2009, 01:58 PM
im not

impulse555
01-22-2009, 01:59 PM
im never gona give up no matter what ppl say so alll u haters out there can go suck it

SNAP!
01-22-2009, 02:13 PM
then be a toy forever..have fun

LeaksOne
01-22-2009, 02:22 PM
impulse trust me take peoples advice to the heart. you dont wana become another enlis. you really need to start from square one. an if you cant take constructive critism even if its harsh you should probably leave the forum. no one has sympathy here.

BAGS
01-22-2009, 02:25 PM
Impulse do you think your shit looks ok? Like do you look at the finished product and think "damnnn. that's tight" ?

TastySesamcrew
01-22-2009, 02:39 PM
Zarb - Try to use straight lines and make every bar the same width
Senk - Make your S fatter and don't connect the N to the K
Quit haten - I hate your style, go back to the simples for a while
Librelikespie - I still love your style. Dope characters and letters. Good colors too.
Sap - Very good man keep it up.
Resp - Sick man
B.S Police - Freshhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/nivrel.jpg

Baron
01-22-2009, 02:42 PM
im never gona give up no matter what ppl say so alll u haters out there can go suck it

Oh shit! Kids got heart :rolleyes:

Sorry, this isn't the boy scouts, just because you don't give up doesn't change anything. You've been here how long? And you're still posting the same damn pictures with the same fucking response of "Get the fuck out" or "Start from square one" and obviously you haven't learned to take any advice at all. "If you can't stand water, then get out the rain." Maybe graff just isn't for you.

By the way, we're not haters, we call it like we see it. What we see in you is jack-shit. Haters hate, we just call it what it is.

B.S. POLICE
01-22-2009, 02:48 PM
im never gona give up no matter what ppl say so alll u haters out there can go suck it

hes going the distance!!!!

Baron
01-22-2009, 02:52 PM
Hes going for speed!!!

mekosbc
01-22-2009, 03:06 PM
roer - since you said thats old i wont tell you to do simps cuz i dont kno what your recent stuff looks like but i hope its a big jump from that
scamer - im not really sure but i think that says loca? i dont like that style
b.s police - im feelin that sketch

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff047.jpg
only thing ive been able to come up with recently. i tried the ohsnap guide to blending an it went pretty bad plus the s is ugly. crit away

the highlights look messed up for some reason....like they are missed placed....

impulse555
01-22-2009, 03:16 PM
like helll i am

LeaksOne
01-22-2009, 03:40 PM
the highlights look messed up for some reason....like they are missed placed....

yea i kno i didnt like the outcome but its all ive been able to come up with lately plus i was messin around with my whiteout pen on the highlights

LeaksOne
01-22-2009, 03:41 PM
like helll i am

kid you remind me so much of enlis. jus another hard headed king haha

TastySesamcrew
01-22-2009, 04:10 PM
Zarb - Try to use straight lines and make every bar the same width
Senk - Make your S fatter and don't connect the N to the K
Quit haten - I hate your style, go back to the simples for a while
Librelikespie - I still love your style. Dope characters and letters. Good colors too.
Sap - Very good man keep it up.
Resp - Sick man
B.S Police - Freshhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/nivrel.jpg

stop arguing I have to bump this shit and I didnt even get one crit.

B.S. POLICE
01-22-2009, 05:28 PM
the letters arent bad not a big fan of the fill though

ESKiMO2
01-22-2009, 05:36 PM
Yeah, less talking more pics/crits!

Rainbow Six

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/4766/dsc01806yn6.jpg

New R!!!
FUCK THE W!!! I HAVE SO MUCH TO INK (at least 10 pieces)
Tasty- the boundaries seem too defined so it looks like there's too much going on. Try fading colors into each other.

"Riot"
01-22-2009, 06:13 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/2zthg0k.jpg


rainbow-no offence but take a step or two back.
you got the right idea but put your bars together. not half seperated? hope that helped.

tasty- i like the simples and all but the fill is crowded and just alot of colors in everyletter. lose a few of the colors or blend them together that would look good!

I got a new name.
i like it. i know lose the extensions but hey i tried.
crits?
pic is a little messed up. the bottom bar on the e is not all flat like it looks.

ESKiMO2
01-22-2009, 06:40 PM
The separate bars are all part of my style man... But I did overdo the detail a bit on this one.

Your letters are kind of stiff... Mess with the bars a bit.

"Riot"
01-22-2009, 06:49 PM
hah nahh man. i didnt mean drop the shit. i can see you like that style but what i ment was like pull them together a little more. would define the letter alot more. the N got had me thinkin cause the bar on the right was to far from the other. shit. i suck at explaining shit.

fixed it up a little?
http://i42.tinypic.com/2jdnqzc.jpg

KnoxIn
01-22-2009, 06:57 PM
hey ok so my style is gettin better and everything but i cant get down any "wildsyle" shit like when i try and include arrows or lines that go off the letter it ends up lookin fucked up any advice??

"Riot"
01-22-2009, 06:58 PM
uhh simples!
new to graff thread!

SNAP!
01-22-2009, 07:05 PM
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1784.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1786.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1766.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1787.jpg
fuckin glare on that freight page...
last ones my sketch i took the othernight, almost washed it haa

Zarb
01-22-2009, 07:18 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0122091832.jpg
crits?

Stussy
01-22-2009, 07:37 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/dzgdpj.jpg
fucked up the Z and the fill didnt turn out like i wanted...

Tasty- nice letters, the fill doesnt look bad... but good luck on painting it lol
Eskimo- Letter dont look bad, not sure if im into the R or not though...Work on your simples ( the six)
Riot- style is coming together... not sure if i like the extension on the R and the one going behind the piece
Scone- throw and simple look good... keep working on it... the N on the simple... dont think it should overlap its self...
Zarb- New graffiti thread... and do keyboard letters

crits?

Zase
01-22-2009, 08:10 PM
eskimo that style is a killer man
great letters for a whole car
rays try some overlapping 3d and fix the right bar of the a
scone idk whats with the 3d nivrel i like that colours and that fill oldskool thing
but work on the letters u cant really go wilder on that stuff do some bars it makes u evolute better just my tought
zipper no way gose check ur shadows u have like 3 suns in there
i would recomand u doing some bars too like the Z dont do tight blocks with lil outlines

and for me i went purple on this joint
http://i42.tinypic.com/29c3yp5.jpg

fitzy36
01-22-2009, 08:23 PM
crappy throw, messy

http://i42.tinypic.com/sxoiu9.jpg

Wallace
01-22-2009, 08:32 PM
cyon word hola at me well make somethin happen

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/172/screencapture7mp3.png

fucking fire, loving everything but the charach.
im not too far from you either btw
boston♥

.HATESONE.
01-22-2009, 08:34 PM
cyon word hola at me well make somethin happen

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/172/screencapture7mp3.png

you man this is fresh but the d looks alot like a p and also....ive told you this like 100 times before but




..work on your handstyles fool.

KnoxIn
01-22-2009, 09:58 PM
ok so here are a few of mine i really dont like the die the second one is ash and enhanced
and the third is Independent so need some crits?

http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.editAlbumPhoto&albumID=579536&imageID=51216832

http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.editAlbumPhoto&albumID=579536&imageID=51216829

http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.editAlbumPhoto&albumID=579536&imageID=51216824

Eskimo your shit is tight as hell i like how its all put together and shit
scone i like the train one i like the colors on all of yours and like eskimo well put together

KnoxIn
01-22-2009, 10:00 PM
ok what the hell why wont my pics show up???

ESKiMO2
01-22-2009, 10:13 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=37

How to post images ^

Squibsorz
01-22-2009, 10:51 PM
eskimo id work on that N alittle bit. at first it almost looked like a K with a wierd notch on it

ESKiMO2
01-22-2009, 11:15 PM
That's what everyone says. I'll try.

BIPOLAR TAPE RECORDER DISORDER

http://fc69.deviantart.com/fs41/f/2009/022/d/4/Bipolar_TRD_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

FUCK the vowels. I don't color 'em.
I dunno...

Crits
Dek- Go back to simples. The coloring is grungy too.
Zase- Now that's a flow! Real nice... Purple...
Rayz- It seems as if you know what went wrong. Just take away that little extension on the A.
Zipper- No block letters!!!
Scone- Nice for the most part.

Squibsorz
01-22-2009, 11:29 PM
man i love that shit though.

What markers you use to colors that? and what are the names of the colors?

ESKiMO2
01-22-2009, 11:35 PM
Prismacolor markers. They're real expensive so just steal them off the rack.
I use...
Apple Green
Cloud Blue
Light Cerulean Blue
Light Blue
Violet Mist
20% Cool Gray
50% Cool Gray

And I always use a Pilot V Ball Grip (Extra Fine) for the outline. Sounds gay right?

BEAS one
01-22-2009, 11:50 PM
ESKIMO...that shit is hot man...u puttin anything in the middle?


for another forum's battle...crits on this?


http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/JuggaloSk8er4life/23k4jbgdijb.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-22-2009, 11:50 PM
dope shadow on "smash ta piece theatre".. looks sick

fase one
01-23-2009, 12:15 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v461/pntgio/IMG00119.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v461/pntgio/IMG00120.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v461/pntgio/IMG00123.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v461/pntgio/IMG00124.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v461/pntgio/IMG00139.jpg

sellers E.
01-23-2009, 12:22 AM
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/a4-1.jpg tell me what you think

DontSucceed
01-23-2009, 12:36 AM
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/8571/img0609uy4.jpg
simer, crits?

Squibsorz
01-23-2009, 12:38 AM
Prismacolor markers. They're real expensive so just steal them off the rack.
I use...
Apple Green
Cloud Blue
Light Cerulean Blue
Light Blue
Violet Mist
20% Cool Gray
50% Cool Gray

And I always use a Pilot V Ball Grip (Extra Fine) for the outline. Sounds gay right?


oh im familiar with prismas and thier price. we used to use them in my graphics class in high school, and i stole 1 of each color my senior year haha.

do you lay the cool gray down before coloring or what?

LeaksOne
01-23-2009, 01:27 AM
fase and seller no no no no no. new to graff thread. you guys really need it. like REALLY REALLY bad




hot shit by the way eskimo

ESKiMO2
01-23-2009, 07:06 AM
do you lay the cool gray down before coloring or what?

I'll write a visual guide this weekend... It's hard to explain.

B.S. POLICE
01-23-2009, 07:27 AM
Prismacolor markers. They're real expensive so just steal them off the rack.
I use...
Apple Green
Cloud Blue
Light Cerulean Blue
Light Blue
Violet Mist
20% Cool Gray
50% Cool Gray

And I always use a Pilot V Ball Grip (Extra Fine) for the outline. Sounds gay right?


yo layed the 20 down before the 50 for the shadows correct?

and the apple green was let dry and aplied again for the gradient effect?

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/6584/screencapture8wv2.png

sike_21
01-23-2009, 12:17 PM
simple ??
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/01-23-2009115045AM.jpg

La Coka Nostra
01-23-2009, 01:09 PM
eskimo. your shit is alright. i think you get lucky sometimes though.
some, or most of those letters look odd.
especially the virtuoso going down the side.

i've seen some of your other pieces that i thought were solid.
not feeling this one as much.

NoCanControl
01-23-2009, 01:31 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2qx3rep.jpg

for muh ***** monstaaaaaaaaa. the most ferocious

ESKiMO2
01-23-2009, 02:52 PM
eskimo. your shit is alright. i think you get lucky sometimes though.


Yeah, It's all luck. I just close my eyes and scribble then it comes out like that.

bur one
01-23-2009, 03:01 PM
not bad man i like the structure

bur one
01-23-2009, 03:05 PM
http://http://i40.tinypic.com/b89y4p.jpg

bur one
01-23-2009, 03:05 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/b89y4p.jpg

bur one
01-23-2009, 03:10 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/b55vly.jpg

ESKiMO2
01-23-2009, 03:21 PM
yo layed the 20 down before the 50 for the shadows correct?

and the apple green was let dry and aplied again for the gradient effect?



Yeah, you can't wait between using the 20 and 50 at all if you want a soft drop shadow. It looks more realistic.

Kind of... I did the solid green, let it dry and then put the cross hatches (spaced out on bottom) for the gradient effect.

B.S. POLICE
01-23-2009, 03:55 PM
[IMGtinypic.com/b89y4p.jpg[/IMG]

dont write easy, the name has been kinged, and more than once. specially from boston, you should know that...

ESKiMO2
01-23-2009, 04:22 PM
The lighting is fucked up. Colors are more vibrant in real life.

http://fc10.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/023/0/6/Sketch_Pad_Three_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

The sketch is a few weeks old by the way. I just colored it today.

Slik- those are the simples I was looking for. The bottom image, the sideways piece has a bad K but the rest is alright.

TastySesamcrew
01-23-2009, 04:52 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3317/3220107727_a8b2052785.jpg

Dope one eskimo!

bur one
01-23-2009, 05:07 PM
dont write easy, the name has been kinged, and more than once. specially from boston, you should know that...

i dont any more i right bur one

ESKiMO2
01-23-2009, 05:17 PM
Snap, show respect. That's Easy right there.
The pressure of fame got to him so he went back to his toy style and started writing Bur.

bur one
01-23-2009, 05:31 PM
what are you trying to say if your gonna say i suck then say it yea i do dont beet around th bush that pic was 2 months ago

NoCanControl
01-23-2009, 08:51 PM
aj;sdlkjf;alksjd;flka.

if youre fucking new to bombingscience. just accept it if people don't like your stuff. don'lt make excusses. just get better.

SHIT...

Live4TheWall
01-23-2009, 09:09 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v396/Nicks_Notes/graffiti/Proud%20Of%20This%20Stuff/IMGA0013.jpg

Wierd style, lil drawing I did for this big underwater theme mural Im gonna be doing on my friends wall.

acereborn
01-23-2009, 09:10 PM
aj;sdlkjf;alksjd;flka.

if youre fucking new to bombingscience. just accept it if people don't like your stuff. don'lt make excusses. just get better.

SHIT...

forreal, excuses get you nowhere in life.. especially on bombingscience

Sarto
01-23-2009, 09:17 PM
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/003-14.jpg
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/001-18.jpg
jut some recent stuff.. critss

live4thewall- im not liking the blue/white stuff around the letters .
eskimo- pretty soild stuff
tasty- nice

bur one
01-23-2009, 09:28 PM
http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=12225o3&s=5

bur one
01-23-2009, 09:30 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/12225o3.jpg my bad
critisize

Aesir
01-23-2009, 09:51 PM
Your shitty drawings make me want to punch a baby in the face.

ESKiMO2
01-23-2009, 09:51 PM
You really need to do your simples.

Don't be too harsh Aesir. We aren't trying to break him down we're just getting him situated.

bur one
01-23-2009, 10:00 PM
oh
i see where in boston you hit i dont see you

ESKiMO2
01-23-2009, 10:14 PM
Okay! Let me reveal all my spots and where I have painted in the past!
No fucking way.
You didn't see Easy either, now did you?

bur one
01-23-2009, 10:29 PM
my bad im like wiked stressed

Worms
01-23-2009, 10:36 PM
Wickeeeddddddd streeeessssssss

bur one
01-23-2009, 10:49 PM
yep

T-jay
01-23-2009, 11:03 PM
eskimo- i got alot of resect 4 u its obivious that u didnt bite anyones style that shit is 100% all u, the throwies dope 2
live4wall-would look dope 4 an underwater theme, maybe 3d it to the middle or some, would like 2 see the prod. after its painted
sarto- simple, good maye try and make the bars lil bit thicker next time
bur- do some simples, drop the fill

/DaNk\
01-24-2009, 12:55 AM
a few new ones, crits ?
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh138/heydude_019/101_0192.jpg
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh138/heydude_019/101_0193.jpg

KnoxIn
01-24-2009, 01:49 AM
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/714/p1232660iw5.jpg

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/2001/p1232662kn3.jpg

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/8749/p1232663jh1.jpg

ok here are a few of mine the last one isn't done i cant figure out what to do about the background, but ya any advice for the background and just advice on them in general? and what you all think bout em?

Dank: i like them and how they flow the only thing i can really say is try and get the colors even on your top one

Worms
01-24-2009, 02:57 AM
everyone on this page needa do simples nuff said.. nice wolverine though

downunder
01-24-2009, 03:09 AM
i would the crit the page, but i wont... you kno what i mean?

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww143/affiliate383/7e.jpg
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww143/affiliate383/img002a.jpg
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww143/affiliate383/img003a.jpg

Animal
01-24-2009, 04:27 AM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/4251/faggotpb6.jpg (http://img262.imageshack.us/my.php?image=faggotpb6.jpg)
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/faggotpb6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img262/faggotpb6.jpg/1/)
first in a while
Down under-keep it up mang. you got a nice flow goin.
everyone above.... i'm very disappointed. simples por favor.

ESKiMO2
01-24-2009, 10:18 AM
DELTRON ZERO (This is pretty old)

http://fc80.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/024/c/6/Deltron_Zero_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

Animal- Cool style but it looks kind of like a handstyle.
Down- It's dope! I really like that.
Knox- Simples!!!

rootpl
01-24-2009, 10:53 AM
thats deltron zero bump !

http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii285/root_pl/hfdss/2-1.jpg

http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii285/root_pl/hfdss/3-1.jpg

http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii285/root_pl/hfdss/2.jpg

http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii285/root_pl/hfdss/6.jpg

http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii285/root_pl/hfdss/5.jpg

http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii285/root_pl/hfdss/3.jpg

FEB
01-24-2009, 11:25 AM
DELTRON ZERO (This is pretty old)

http://fc80.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/024/c/6/Deltron_Zero_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

Animal- Cool style but it looks kind of like a handstyle.
Down- It's dope! I really like that.
Knox- Simples!!!

All your stuff looks dope. The lettering is consistent, the 3d is consistent y todo.

Furious-StyleZ
01-24-2009, 11:51 AM
yo dank you from houston?

La Coka Nostra
01-24-2009, 12:33 PM
Yeah, It's all luck. I just close my eyes and scribble then it comes out like that.



not necessarily with your eyes closed, but same concept.
no need to get your feelings hurt.

i wasn't even hating.

ESKiMO2
01-24-2009, 12:34 PM
yo dank you from houston?

So many toys write Dank. I never wrote it but I always see that name up here.


not necessarily with your eyes closed, but same concept.
no need to get your feelings hurt.

i wasn't even hating.

I don't really understand how I'm lucky by creating something while fully conscious. I'm lucky my hand isn't broken but that's about as far as it goes.

Furious-StyleZ
01-24-2009, 01:27 PM
word....i always seem to see dank...but i was jw maybe it was d same kid in houston

bur one
01-24-2009, 01:49 PM
eskimo you go to proletariat

Speedy
01-24-2009, 01:59 PM
There's a legit Dank in Maryland. Just throwing that out there

TastySesamcrew
01-24-2009, 02:01 PM
Down under and everyone below - DOPE!!!!

ESKiMO2
01-24-2009, 02:32 PM
eskimo you go to proletariat

I go to the working class? How?

B.S. POLICE
01-24-2009, 02:36 PM
its a store dude they sell paint and shit the girl that works there is "ooooooookkkk" looking too

ESKiMO2
01-24-2009, 02:39 PM
I don't go to stores that sell paint. I do it online because stores log purchases and they know who you are. I lack trust.

B.S. POLICE
01-24-2009, 03:01 PM
yeah mister jackson came in bought some mops and even left a picture id!

sellers E.
01-24-2009, 03:43 PM
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/sellers092015.jpg

FEB
01-24-2009, 03:52 PM
Did you use crayons?

hal.cyon
01-24-2009, 03:58 PM
something i threw together for the kidoe battle, went in a bit much. ill probably do another.

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3350/001oi0.jpg

sike_21
01-24-2009, 04:12 PM
attempt at simples
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_9530.jpg

acereborn
01-24-2009, 04:39 PM
sike, dont let your 3d cover your letters

sellers E.
01-24-2009, 04:41 PM
No crayons. Black and red pens

SNAP!
01-24-2009, 04:52 PM
bump the fuck out of three thousand thirty

souperhero
01-24-2009, 06:51 PM
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/3508/p1010976zn1.th.jpg (http://img258.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010976zn1.jpg)http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/8082/p1010970ce2.th.jpg (http://img84.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010970ce2.jpg)http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/6318/p1010974bn4.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010974bn4.jpg)

bleh.bleh.bleh
01-24-2009, 07:12 PM
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0251-1.jpg
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0247-1.jpg
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0243-1.jpg
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0246.jpg
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0248.jpg
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0249.jpg
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0250.jpg
Crittsssss...

Zase
01-24-2009, 07:16 PM
sike i like the way u use symetrical stuff

okay i did some colours
the fade is shit i need blender

http://i43.tinypic.com/wl58x0.jpg

ESKiMO2
01-24-2009, 07:24 PM
Bleh- I like it but the concept of the character in a suit is so typical. INNOVATE!!!

bleh.bleh.bleh
01-24-2009, 07:35 PM
Yeah i know, I've just had major block lately. Can't think of anything else to do with it.
And FYI the one with the hand is kind of a my version of Dail's elephants.

liquid swords
01-24-2009, 07:42 PM
zase- pretty standard. but that shit is funky fresh, nice bars too, and a black outline might help that steez out a bit

EgoZen
01-24-2009, 08:00 PM
Zase, look`s nice coloured and stuff..
But it reminds me so mucho graffiti creator or what that shit is called

No Beef, just saying

"Riot"
01-24-2009, 09:42 PM
Daylo-keyboard letters. same size bars.
sike-dope fill.
zase-siick.

first says kara second says JAER.
crits please!
http://i40.tinypic.com/28l4zu1.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2h5nuhi.jpg

Zase
01-24-2009, 09:55 PM
i understand the the critism im working on fills on old outlines

and ehm the R shud be open riot the last sketch i mean
would look way doper

on ur 1st piece i feel that E its dopeass

"Riot"
01-24-2009, 09:59 PM
yeah i hear you. when i opened it up it didnt look right so i just erased it.
ill fix it.

-Wings-
01-24-2009, 10:24 PM
attempt at simples
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_9530.jpg

I like this alot better then your last, just maybe dont do that thing with the S.
Also the fill is a bit wierd this time to, maybe its just the color scheme.
Also the small blue one has to many wrong widths :P.
Also work on your handstyle to :), alot better then your last sketch.

sike_21
01-24-2009, 10:42 PM
I like this alot better then your last, just maybe dont do that thing with the S.
Also the fill is a bit wierd this time to, maybe its just the color scheme.
Also the small blue one has to many wrong widths :P.
Also work on your handstyle to :), alot better then your last sketch.

man suck it.... sike haha yea mangi was gonna keep the fill simple but i couldnt resist and the lil blue one i was baked on two to the face l0l but i do "the thing" with the s cuz its the only other option i can come up with just looks like everything else any one that writes shit with an s does you feel me

seywhat
01-25-2009, 12:19 AM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage148.jpg
new sharpie freestyle, couldnt fit no r on this one. crits??

sike- its better for sure, but you need to work on your bars
riot- im diggin em both. keep your r's kick the same size, it gets thin
zase- niiice!
hal- def got out of hand with this one, its still decent though, just cool it out a bit

Animal
01-25-2009, 02:25 AM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/4251/faggotpb6.jpg (http://img262.imageshack.us/my.php?image=faggotpb6.jpg)
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/faggotpb6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img262/faggotpb6.jpg/1/)
first in a while
Down under-keep it up mang. you got a nice flow goin.
everyone above.... i'm very disappointed. simples por favor.

bump for crits

downunder
01-25-2009, 04:47 AM
i would the crit the page, but i wont... you kno what i mean?

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww143/affiliate383/7e.jpg
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww143/affiliate383/img002a.jpg
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww143/affiliate383/img003a.jpg

eskimo - i think you shoulda connected the bottom bar of the E, looks wierd having only the one bar not connected... also some of your letters looke a bit squished, like the R.

sike - i think get rid of some of the little kicks, like on the top leg of the K you know? getting better though

seyar - that looks nice, maybe have the connection bit at the bottom of the E come in further... hard to explain


animal - reminds me of that aher guys style, i think it might look better without those little floating things and if the E was bigger

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/2093/img001apm6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/img001apm6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img530/img001apm6.jpg/1/)

(SoS)Viruz
01-25-2009, 11:24 AM
Im guessin that Fonone ^^

Still rockin the Simps I see

MaNtS
01-25-2009, 11:57 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/DSCN2441.jpg

FEB
01-25-2009, 12:51 PM
What does it say? Loks? Adoks? I like the 'S'.

MaNtS
01-25-2009, 12:56 PM
iors

cept theres 3 diff kinds of o's, so technically iooors, but yeah, prenounced eye-awz.

Olick
01-25-2009, 12:58 PM
bump for crits

i dunno why but i like ur style. simple and it gets the job done. keep at it=]

La Coka Nostra
01-25-2009, 01:57 PM
sometimes i get bored at work, and sketch randomly with pen.
like this:



http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/1844/85752112em9.jpg



don't rly care for crits.
just felt like posting.

MARTYRaz
01-25-2009, 02:43 PM
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/PICT1564.jpg
somethin i been workin on this morning

"Riot"
01-25-2009, 02:57 PM
Vader-keyboard letters. no color yet.
rekon-keep the letters the same size.
irek-your simples are dope.
http://i44.tinypic.com/2q1z8yu.jpg
JAER.
crits?

KnoxIn
01-25-2009, 03:03 PM
ok now believe me i know this is a stupid question but i cant find the damn answer anywhere ok what the fuck are simples are they just plain letters no fill or outline color or what??? and dont tell me where to go to get the answer someone just give me the answer???

"Riot"
01-25-2009, 03:07 PM
SIMPLES.

like that^^

TRY'N
01-25-2009, 04:29 PM
simples are just really basic easy to read letters.. yea you can give them outlines, fills, shadows, 3d whatever, it's just about basic letters. example: the pink Irek up top (which is dope btw)

LeaksOne
01-25-2009, 04:29 PM
ok now believe me i know this is a stupid question but i cant find the damn answer anywhere ok what the fuck are simples are they just plain letters no fill or outline color or what??? and dont tell me where to go to get the answer someone just give me the answer???

thats like askin how to spell "the" the word is simples so shoudnt you guess its probably simple letters? i duno maybe its jus me.

Bink1
01-25-2009, 04:42 PM
sometimes i get bored at work, and sketch randomly with pen.
like this:



http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/1844/85752112em9.jpg



don't rly care for crits.
just felt like posting.

wrong thread. more for toy pen freestyle.

ESKiMO2
01-25-2009, 05:00 PM
COLORING THIS SHIT SOOON

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/4856/wutangve0.jpg

CRITS
Riot- Strange zig zaggish thangs throw it off
Vader- Do straighter bars.
Mants- Dope! It reminds me of CRAOLA a bit.

You'd have better luck at the White House, lookin' for a job
With a Jheri curl and shower cap on
Doin' a kid and play Kick Step with a crackhead on the front lawn
In a "All Hail Saddam" T-shirt, holdin' two Glocks
And C-Bo's Greatest Hits pumpin' from your boombox
-JZONE

respERATION
01-25-2009, 05:18 PM
jaer-loose the add on on the top of the J and R.....don;t force symetry in sacrifice of poorly placed add ons...

fancy pants mants-trying to get a bit hipster?

eskimo and irek-ddddoopppeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0047-1.jpg
yeah i know the flick is dark and i;m broke so i can;t get a new camera ;)

crits?

"Riot"
01-25-2009, 05:26 PM
hahah i knew i shouldnt have.
i already erased em:)

those dotted lines dont look right. thats just me though.

MaNtS
01-25-2009, 07:13 PM
nah Resp, not trying to match any style, just sketchin while blazed, thats the result.

SNAP!
01-25-2009, 07:41 PM
the start of tonight..more later
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1851.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1850.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1849.jpg

TRY'N
01-25-2009, 08:36 PM
resp- pretty cool but your 3d is all sorts of messed up

-Wings-
01-25-2009, 08:56 PM
The markers I used were to dark.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/Picture.jpg

"Riot"
01-25-2009, 09:02 PM
lose all the extensions.
you never really did your simples.

SNAP!
01-25-2009, 09:03 PM
i like it besides the random arrows. The backgrounds actuallly pretty cool. Try moving those 3d highlights on the 3d, too

-Wings-
01-25-2009, 09:08 PM
Riot ive done my simples... And thanks snap I have no excuse for the extentions. I thought they were a good idea at the time. :P

"Riot"
01-25-2009, 09:09 PM
not trying to be a dick but do a few more.

-Wings-
01-25-2009, 09:18 PM
Ive been doing graffiti for at least 2 years now. I did them and I still do them but I think im fine for now :/.

SNAP!
01-25-2009, 09:20 PM
Do more, i love rocking simples honestly, but thats because i paint freights, and love the fact when it's thrown in people's faces at a crossing, they can read it.

but thats just me...bump. working on a peice atm too


the start of tonight..more later
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1851.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1850.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1849.jpg

"Riot"
01-25-2009, 09:23 PM
fix the c on the grey throw. make it even ya know?
and then dont have the n cover the e so much.
and the s on the handie shouldn't cross on the c.

other then that your good

seywhat
01-25-2009, 09:27 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage148.jpg
new sharpie freestyle, couldnt fit no r on this one. crits??



only got one fuckin crit... lemme get some more

skin- try overlappin your letters more, theyre pretty spaced out
eskimo- def diggin the wu tang joint, color that shit quick nukka
irek- peace for the crit. im diggin the last irekn and fonr the most, lookin good. not much to say, solid. maybe just try cleanin it up a bit

everyone else need to get on they bars!!!!

"Riot"
01-25-2009, 09:30 PM
would look soooo sick if the extensions werent so crazy.

good coloring.

Facedorateur
01-25-2009, 09:33 PM
I think i have a love hate relationship with that piece.

love the squigly line, but at the same time it looks like your piece got cross over, i love the bubbles in your 3D, lose the bottom extension from your ''e'', and last but not least idont know if your last letter is an ''R'', ''e'' or ''A''

SNAP!
01-25-2009, 09:44 PM
it kinda does look like it got lined.. try maybe another one too with a diffrent color? like intertwining the variable widths in it are cool.

the silver (REALLY dead sharpie) is a oneliner, so im trying to work on those letters more but its just habit. and the handy idk, seems like theres dead space if i dont do that

ESKiMO2
01-25-2009, 09:58 PM
Skin- I'm telling you, if you wrote Sink it would balance it out so well. K extension is wack btw. Your style would look dope if you added some depth. Try a white fill and do shading with gray.

GHO$T
01-25-2009, 10:01 PM
http://s168.photobucket.com/albums/u189/bigdshttp://s168.photobucket.com/albums/u189/bigdscool/?action=view&current=ghost2.jpgcool/?action=view&current=ghost-1.jpg&t=1232938715296
http://s168.photobucket.com/albums/u189/bigdscool/?action=view&current=1230082319-1.jpg
new here just started. let me know how much they really suck haha. for realhttp://s168.photobucket.com/albums/u189/bigdscool/?action=view&current=1230082319-1.jpg

-Wings-
01-25-2009, 10:05 PM
Skin- I'm telling you, if you wrote Sink it would balance it out so well. K extension is wack btw. Your style would look dope if you added some depth. Try a white fill and do shading with gray.

Well ive been writing skin for a while and it would be wierd not writing it.
Its what so many other graff writers know me as. Including my crew.

GHO$T
01-25-2009, 10:07 PM
oh shit. let me fix this

GHO$T
01-25-2009, 10:14 PM
alright

SNAP!
01-25-2009, 10:24 PM
Well ive been writing skin for a while and it would be wierd not writing it.
Its what so many other graff writers know me as. Including my crew.

I went through the same thing, i wrote snap for two+ years, and just changed my name despite the fact i knew there was other snaps (who burn oh snap too, so dont start shit anyone) for over a year. It took me forever to find letters i liked, but i did it the right way. Theres so much more flow to my name now, where as the only flow in snap was my oneliner handy. Just give your boys a heads up, who cares about the other people?

-Wings-
01-25-2009, 10:35 PM
I went through the same thing, i wrote snap for two+ years, and just changed my name despite the fact i knew there was other snaps (who burn oh snap too, so dont start shit anyone) for over a year. It took me forever to find letters i liked, but i did it the right way. Theres so much more flow to my name now, where as the only flow in snap was my oneliner handy. Just give your boys a heads up, who cares about the other people?

You know I might actually give this some thought. I haven't been up much the winter anyways. I'll give it alot of thought. I'm going to keep my S though :).

SNAP!
01-25-2009, 10:50 PM
Thats the way to fuckin' do it man..
I used to sit and think up words, do random phrases, anything.. Then it got to the point where i did a couple letters i liked from past names.. figured out, i like S and C and N

so i went and did an entire alphabet of handys..picked out what i liked better.. wrote it up top. did each letter as a throw style letter.. for somereason tried SCONE or SCone as a onliner, and i fucking loved it. If its a random, not in the dictionary type word, who gives a fuck? Its about the flow. and theres a better chance of it not being taken if its random as fuck.

bump these flicks for my philosophizing, and because i fucked up a peice tonight with the fill, which im pissed at myself for
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1766.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1787.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1786.jpg

ESKiMO2
01-25-2009, 11:49 PM
If its a random, not in the dictionary type word, who gives a fuck? Its about the flow. and theres a better chance of it not being taken if its random as fuck.


This is a scone...
http://www.longorshortcapital.com/blogger/GJ%2520Scone.jpg

The scone is a small British biscuit of Scottish origin. It is usually made of wheat, barley or oatmeal, with baking powder as a leavening agent. -Wikipedia

They are quite tasty. You should eat one if you write it.

SNAP!
01-25-2009, 11:53 PM
I have, an theyre delicious
it also means SCone too. either or

NOW what about you ?

Ever met an eskimo?

http://www.sonofthesouth.net/texas/pictures/eskimo-girl-350.jpg
Eskimos or Esquimaux are indigenous peoples who have traditionally inhabited the circumpolar region from eastern Siberia (Russia), across Alaska (United States) and Canada, and all of Greenland (Denmark).
or eat one of these?
http://mayhem-chaos.net/photoblog/images/eskimo_pie.jpg

ESKiMO2
01-26-2009, 12:19 AM
Yes. Like most ice cream... it melts in your mouth.
I don't even write Eskimo. It's my E-name, yah digg?

SNAP!
01-26-2009, 12:22 AM
i smell ya

pm me what you do write..i bench everything coming from the bean...i mean everything..probaly have a flick already

NoCanControl
01-26-2009, 12:40 AM
hai gais. guez wut i write. its describes me perfect cuz b*xxy is queen.



HAHAHAHAHAHA.

B.S. POLICE
01-26-2009, 12:46 AM
my name is like that cause i police bull shit on bombing science

like snap,


snap your bullshit

Infoe
01-26-2009, 12:52 AM
Here's my latest sketch
http://ihatekaty.com/?id=849275#6dzz5z54fsdq7ez78z8d

B.S. POLICE
01-26-2009, 12:53 AM
dude if you paid some fucking attention you would have had all those pics a long time ago. theyve been posted on two diff occasions

Infoe
01-26-2009, 12:57 AM
Dude i'm sorry i go outside and paint and not sit on bombing science all day.
No hate, just playing, but why get crank cause I wanna see some boobz?
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7421/image0015tn9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

B.S. POLICE
01-26-2009, 01:01 AM
nah im not mad, its just that your not the only one thats been posting that link its like everywhere and it gets so annoying so fast ive seen in good afternoon, here, battles, freight whores, and new england thread! like fuuuuccckkk

Infoe
01-26-2009, 01:05 AM
Trueeee well i'll just leave it to get clicked on by anyone who doesn't know it : )
All g homeslicer

SNAP!
01-26-2009, 01:08 AM
oh yeah! i start police bullshit..

i forgot you cant ask anything on bs without getting assumed you're a cop..fucking clowns. i was asking him to send him a flick if i had it, if he even hit freights, in a fucking pm.

fuck outta here

thebigman
01-26-2009, 01:21 AM
4858

4859

sellers E.
01-26-2009, 02:39 AM
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/IMG_4726.jpg

MaNtS
01-26-2009, 10:02 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/DSCN2444.jpg

sex without condoms
01-26-2009, 11:25 AM
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0251-1.jpg
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0247-1.jpg
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0243-1.jpg
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0246.jpg
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0248.jpg
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0249.jpg
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0250.jpg
Crittsssss...

bump all this dopeness

B.S. POLICE
01-26-2009, 12:11 PM
oh yeah! i start police bullshit..

i forgot you cant ask anything on bs without getting assumed you're a cop..fucking clowns. i was asking him to send him a flick if i had it, if he even hit freights, in a fucking pm.

fuck outta here


no i know your not a cop, but you are bullshit

La Coka Nostra
01-26-2009, 12:13 PM
oh yeah! i start police bullshit..

i forgot you cant ask anything on bs without getting assumed you're a cop..fucking clowns. i was asking him to send him a flick if i had it, if he even hit freights, in a fucking pm.

fuck outta here


don't you guys both live in the bean? why don't you just fight? or battle?
or something... you've had beef on these forums forever.



for talking. old pen sketch that i got bored and colored.

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/3404/gotmoneyqd2.jpg


and more random pen ish. don't remember if i posted. probably not.


http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/3894/rekoge7.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-26-2009, 12:18 PM
since my first post lol. i would battle him but it would be a waste of my time

SNAP!
01-26-2009, 02:10 PM
the only beef was about the name, which i even tried telling him is taken 100 times over me and him both..and burn both of us

now he's just butthurt.


wheres the bullshit?

SageGSCnj
01-26-2009, 03:06 PM
Infoe- Looks tight. The extension on the O kinda looks like a little Z but still looks nice man.
Swag- Take it down a notch and you could be onto somethin.
Naylo- Has potential. Cant really say what needs tweakin but I can see it goin somewhere
Mants- Overall artistically could look cool on a wall. Structure wise Id say go simpler cuz I aint seein good letters in there.
Rekon- Fatten em up and itll prolly look dope as hell. Still like em though

New name. Crits? I have a simpler handie but I was just fuckin around and thought it looked aight.

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t58/SpaceyourfaceBitches/Adeksketch.jpg

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t58/SpaceyourfaceBitches/Adekhandstyle.jpg

JoseBuerto
01-26-2009, 03:55 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1651/shitbetterworksy9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)





Thats clean except for the shit on the bottom left of the A dont match, and then on the extension of the K theres a week little line, lose that and shorten the whole leg up....

.HATESONE.
01-26-2009, 03:59 PM
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t58/SpaceyourfaceBitches/Adekhandstyle.jpg

what the fuck is this shit?did you sieze half way through or something?

what4joke...
01-26-2009, 05:52 PM
Infoe- Looks tight. The extension on the O kinda looks like a little Z but still looks nice man.
Swag- Take it down a notch and you could be onto somethin.
Naylo- Has potential. Cant really say what needs tweakin but I can see it goin somewhere
Mants- Overall artistically could look cool on a wall. Structure wise Id say go simpler cuz I aint seein good letters in there.
Rekon- Fatten em up and itll prolly look dope as hell. Still like em though

New name. Crits? I have a simpler handie but I was just fuckin around and thought it looked aight.

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t58/SpaceyourfaceBitches/Adeksketch.jpg

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t58/SpaceyourfaceBitches/Adekhandstyle.jpg
you, thats pretty clean man

cel...
01-26-2009, 06:17 PM
likin the last piece

(SoS)Viruz
01-26-2009, 06:49 PM
Infoe- Looks tight. The extension on the O kinda looks like a little Z but still looks nice man.
Swag- Take it down a notch and you could be onto somethin.
Naylo- Has potential. Cant really say what needs tweakin but I can see it goin somewhere
Mants- Overall artistically could look cool on a wall. Structure wise Id say go simpler cuz I aint seein good letters in there.
Rekon- Fatten em up and itll prolly look dope as hell. Still like em though

New name. Crits? I have a simpler handie but I was just fuckin around and thought it looked aight.

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t58/SpaceyourfaceBitches/Adeksketch.jpg

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t58/SpaceyourfaceBitches/Adekhandstyle.jpg

Man you need to work on you Bars and that handy that you claim you were messin around on cause both are mad weak yo. Sorry to brust your bubble but it not good. Your letters dont flow due to your poor letter stucture which you have to devolpe by doing simps over and over and over....Only way ight

a4w.dinak
01-26-2009, 07:21 PM
thats a dope sketch. ur handstyle is sick too

MaNtS
01-26-2009, 07:25 PM
Bump cause it got caught up in the talk.

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/DSCN2444.jpg

"Mants- Overall artistically could look cool on a wall. Structure wise Id say go simpler cuz I aint seein good letters in there."

Aoek, what letters are you seing in there, cause at this point i took your crit, then peeped you work and realised you didnt have a clue what you were talking about and you were just posting generalised critz cause youve obviously been told to work on YOUR letter structure before,

lose the extention from the k, and all the little bump things on the side of ur a and o etc,

keep the middle bar of your E to the same letter widths as it stems out from a smaller angle to expand and look like its out of proportion, also the k's main backbars letter width is weak in structure and gets smaller towards the bottom,

fix the bar across the a and lose the other little nib on the left leg of the A,
and i wouldnt worry about colouring them atm,

Simples.

(SoS)Viruz
01-26-2009, 07:34 PM
Bump cause it got caught up in the talk.


"Mants- Overall artistically could look cool on a wall. Structure wise Id say go simpler cuz I aint seein good letters in there."

Aoek, what letters are you seing in there, cause at this point i took your crit, then peeped you work and realised you didnt have a clue what you were talking about and you were just posting generalised critz cause youve obviously been told to work on YOUR letter structure before,

lose the extention from the k, and all the little bump things on the side of ur a and o etc,

keep the middle bar of your E to the same letter widths as it stems out from a smaller angle to expand and look like its out of proportion, also the k's main backbars letter width is weak in structure and gets smaller towards the bottom,

fix the bar across the a and lose the other little nib on the left leg of the A,
and i wouldnt worry about colouring them atm,

Simples.
Take your own advice and go simple cause you need to work on Letter Sturcture.

SageGSCnj
01-26-2009, 07:52 PM
Ive decided Im just gonna do my own thing in graffiti at this point. In the past week I met up with the AIDS crew in the tri state area. Dope writers. And they were sayin im goin in the right direction. The little bumps on the letters is ME. Dont like it oh well wont lose em. The bar on the E gets little to fat cuz i WANTED it to do that. The bar on the K gets skinny cuz I wanted it to. The left leg on the bottom of the A very true. I need to drop that. The really thin line on the right of the K and the right of the A gotta go too. The middle bar of the A is there to stay because again thats me.

ESKiMO2
01-26-2009, 07:55 PM
I was doing that bumped letter shit for a long time until I decided it looked like shit. You seem to do it better than I did though. Just keep letting your style progress and do simples on the side.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-26-2009, 07:56 PM
ok.. but fucking work on ur tag... god dammit that is what is up most ur tag and if its shit then ur shit plain and simple

(SoS)Viruz
01-26-2009, 08:12 PM
Ive decided Im just gonna do my own thing in graffiti at this point. In the past week I met up with the AIDS crew in the tri state area. Dope writers. And they were sayin im goin in the right direction. The little bumps on the letters is ME. Dont like it oh well wont lose em. The bar on the E gets little to fat cuz i WANTED it to do that. The bar on the K gets skinny cuz I wanted it to. The left leg on the bottom of the A very true. I need to drop that. The really thin line on the right of the K and the right of the A gotta go too. The middle bar of the A is there to stay because again thats me.

Ight man Im going to be real with you alright.....Cause Eski was being nice on you...But Im not cause it wasn't that way for me. (BTW WHATS GOOD ESKI. Thanks for the Cs3 I got to show you this pic im working on) But your not on the right track homie you may think its fresh,dope,whatever but If you want you graff to actually be good then bad then listen to me. Start over....Start with Simps and then Devolve your steez from your simps trust me once you do that your pieces will look way better. Im tellin you man dont go by what other ppl pass as nice you want your stuff to over see others man real talk, sooo work on it.. ight peace.

NoCanControl
01-26-2009, 08:36 PM
mants, its true you got go structure. but you need to work on letter clearifcation. i have the same problem sometimes.
Sage. thats REALLY sick that you talked to the AIDS crew. but you CAN do your own thing but I PERSONALLy think that its take you alot longer to get where you wanna go if yu do it your way. becauseeeee it took a long time for me to realize that bars are in letters, by myself, before Bs etc.. it took about four years. but then i see people like hate and mass, keane that are pretty good and have been writeing as long as me or less. and snaps aswell. its crazy town but sage, you are your own person. do as you please, just trying to help you out man.

Noddles912300
01-26-2009, 08:43 PM
Sage, anyone can start out doing graffiti, and 2 weeks in claim that they have their own style. Just because some one thinks their stuff is good, doesn't mean it is.

Evasion Of Invasion
01-26-2009, 08:43 PM
Mants i gotta agree that over all looks dope but structure looks weak
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/n516386474_1778188_6512.jpg
fake tattoo i did with a girl on zooms

.HATESONE.
01-26-2009, 09:04 PM
sage.fuck wha everyone else says do whatever the fuck you want.just experiment and keep drawing and keep tryna top other people.i mean yeah its good to study simps and you should definitely do that but more as a little practice you know?not like its a fucking chore but more like to get you a better understanding but thats it.if everyone just did straights it would be hella boring so,practice straights yeah but mostly just go experiment.but those writes got to go cuz it sucks.and also it doesnt matter if his shit is bad or good sooner or later hell figure it out and be like 'woah wtf is this shit' im soooo fucking tired man.whatever.go crazy.

urmomsayshi
01-26-2009, 09:14 PM
rekon- for the frist bar on the r, make it jus straight not bent cuz it looks like its falling over lol
aoek- its going in the right direction juss lose all the extra bars and keep it clean
and if ur not gonna take advice from us, dont bother posting cuz thats hwat this forum is for, to recieve crits and use em to get better
mants- i cant read it cuz there r too many useless and awkward bars... clean it up
im doing a legal soon and wanted to try classy lettering cuz the owners arent to big on graff
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm159/igraffix122/swezscript.jpg

.HATESONE.
01-26-2009, 09:33 PM
it has potential but the e and u are to hard to make out maybe work on that other than that it looks alright...

B.S. POLICE
01-26-2009, 10:53 PM
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/1448/screencapture11yj3.png

JETPACK!!
01-26-2009, 11:00 PM
not feelin that K snapple. dosent suit the rest of your blocky letters

help a ***** out
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/7691/canvas2zp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

silentchaos14
01-26-2009, 11:23 PM
the sideways S kinda confused me for a second, maybe try putting it right side up?

your probably not gonna take my crits but yeah just throwin it out here

JoseBuerto
01-26-2009, 11:29 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1651/shitbetterworksy9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)





Thats clean except for the shit on the bottom left of the A dont match, and then on the extension of the K theres a week little line, lose that and shorten the whole leg up....




bump for crits and pretty sure your mistaken cause that reads SEWZ no u in there mr hates one.

seywhat
01-26-2009, 11:30 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage148.jpg



one more bump for this one, more crits please...

rasek- the k is too covered up, make the left bar curve more right if u catch im sayin. its steezy as fuck though, props
ohsnap- solid
sewz- work on the e, but you pretty much got it

Fore.4
01-26-2009, 11:49 PM
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/5122/fore4bh9.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
01-27-2009, 12:14 AM
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/1448/screencapture11yj3.png

That is Snap let Exchange....Im tired of you dumb ass lookin good....LOL.:D

(SoS)Viruz
01-27-2009, 12:18 AM
not feelin that K snapple. dosent suit the rest of your blocky letters

help a ***** out
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/7691/canvas2zp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Like I said on MSN..........Dude I Jizzed myself. I see what your sayin about the K tho. Mabey at the end of it where it curves make it on bar with Cracks or somethin else instead of a big long bar. That R is the SHIT. and I'm diggin the letter conversions man shit is fly and its your style. Keep rockin that shit.
-TEAR ONE

B.S. POLICE
01-27-2009, 12:24 AM
virus state yo name nikka pm me

GHO$T
01-27-2009, 01:49 AM
4861
4862
well the pics arnt big so you have to click on them but besides that i need to get better

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-27-2009, 02:07 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/anoestraight.jpg

MaNtS
01-27-2009, 02:13 AM
Take your own advice and go simple cause you need to work on Letter Sturcture.

I see youve grasped the generalising of the "go simpler you need to work on letter structure"
(Read asif train of thought)
by saying that obviously the structure is a challenge to read?, if not why else would it need to be worked on, although graffiti is an artform so of course like any artform the rules and boundaries are only physical, abstract letter forms are also entering into the equasion, im not a 3d illusionist or an abstract euro king, but i know enough of my history to know not everyone is going to have perfectly widthed letters otherwise graffiti would be stuck ina communist oppressed state, - wich it isnt as much is flaunted by street artists worldwide,

then we move on to the next bit in the break down- "take your own advice" , my advice was directed at him to show the difference of " the shithouse generalised go simpler crit" he gave and proburbly has had brainwashed into him in comparison to the indepth pieces of his sketch that i picked at and described towards him, you agreed with them and simply gave the same advice re-written and attached a "just listen to me" type instigation a couple posts later, yet you turned around and said the same shit to me? was it to try and "put me in check" for being straightforward with him, surely straightforward answers would be a good retort?(must of been your thought eh?)except, he quite obviously doesnt have a grasp of letter structures and hasnt spent hours practicing letters, perfecting curves,line widths, bars and transistors between letters, i did all that, didnt worry about colouring until i had achieved an ellevated sense of letters, thats how i can differentiate, ide doubt by his skill level that he has been writing for more then 6 months,

Of course back to the structure, so the piece says I O R Z, ill mspaint it in for you, did you struggle to read it?


mants- i cant read it cuz there r too many useless and awkward bars... clean it up


http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/DSCN24441.jpg

not sure what he meant by that, the letters and the structure worked out the way i wanted them to, so i figured that he must of just been agreeing with everyone welse post whoring this bitch, surely not the same as the generic styles being posted throughout this thread, but with a name like iORz(eye-awz), im obviously not aiming for generic.


mants, its true you got go structure. but you need to work on letter clearifcation. i have the same problem sometimes.


ok well check out the picture above and just ms paint in where you would recommend the clarifications, i can read it fine, but i created it so ide understand i should know everythings place, so if its a problem in legibility then by all means describe where it is and possibly offer up an idea/crit/suggestion eg "curve that bar around to the left a bit" instead of getting different users responding to my post and they all say " yeah i agree with (insert name), go simpler" , by instructing everyone to go simpler its easy/lazy and will end up holding some back, im not stating no-one needs simples, im saying there are those that do, and those that have surpassed that stage, a bigger post count isnt going to earn my respect, if your going to mouth off with crits and post 4 times a page, at least make it more descriptive so that people can actually work on the specifics rather then being left in doubt with generalised statements.

Dont take this personally urmomsayshi, but i remember when i first started writing i had trouble reading some stuff, i look back now and wonder how i could of ever confused a sofles outline, but i also know that during that time i was ignorant and uneducated on alot of things as far as the graff world goes.

The sketch you posted is influenced by calligraphy, weather you straight up bit it, or its a subconscious coincidence, i can see it straight away.

If your going to fault my structure, point out where its faulty, how/why it should be improved, until you do that im going to read what you say and then check your work to see if you apply that yourself and if youve got structure on lock yourself, if you havent then chances are ill disregard your crit, be more specific and say " that little bit there looks off", then im going to check it and might be awakened to something i could do better.

This one should be easier to read?, no useless bars or arrows or anything to confuse you, just each letter in a different style/colour scheme(ON PURPOSE BEFORE THOSE OF YOU START ASSUMING THINGS)
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/DSCN2441.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/evade.jpg
Says evade, just to display that im aware of the structure behind letters, havent seen any of your work yet either tear one, so im challenging your crit on the grounds that i havent seen any of your work to backup and illustrate the applications of what you preach, nothing personal,

feel free to edit my original sketch and show where the errors of my structure are, but keep in mind letter structures are manipulated differently across various styles,so its a hard one to try and police.

An intellectual response would be good, no need to explain myself at all, but im willing to discuss with those willing to talk.Generalisations and shittalk will be disregarded almost immediately as all they are likely to do is cause confusion if i attempt to act upon the crit due to humans being different and individual,we might interpret something so generalised differently.

JETPACK!!
01-27-2009, 02:59 AM
the only thing i picked up outta that 2000 word essay is that your a whiney bitch.
your shit sucks. the sooner you realize this. the sooner you can get better.

my 2 cents

and silentchaos. i cant quite see the sideways S your talkin about. but i'll work on it

MaNtS
01-27-2009, 04:42 AM
Perfect example of the kinda of uneducated response i expected, didn't have anything to do with you jetpack,yet you jump in on your high horse like you never whinge?

i saw last time you commented with your opinion " i agree with hepos stop whinging" etc etc

then i was flicking through the painted pieces thread and you were getting cut down after you complained about the quality, and then posted up some black and orange messy piece of shit. hypocrit much?
if your going to comment at least provide an explanation as to why it sucks,

I dont particularly feel your style AT ALL, of course instead of constantly barrating you with insults or comments where they dont need to be said i keep it closed and just focus moreso on the remarks made regarding my works and how they can be improved,

and the fact that your most recent sketch seems to show little to no progression since when i first started peeping your stuff, same dull unclean style, sure lotsa quickies up around town, but its clear your taking the quantity over quality approach.

If you dont like my style, dont comment as ive refrained from picking at yours, if you gennuinly have something positive to add(in terms of crits) then by all means go ahead and contribute.

Of course no doubt you will slug it off, comment on how long of an essay it is in an attempt to discredit my response and continue cluttering up this thread with YOUR shittalk about how much i suck.

Wheres that get us?
a) Back to me pointing out that you werent specific in wich bits i could improve to not suck, instead you just generalised in telling me i suck.

Or you could not post unless you have something productive to add and where will that get us?

b)User posts image, other users respond as to how the artist could improve, the artist improves and gives back to the community.

Sure as hell rather see some progression instead of MOAR shittalk.
Im willing to put in and give detailed crits to other artists, that way i know im contributing, rather then just going along with everyone else chanting" yeah more simples bruhz" so it appears im "giving crits" when infact im providing no knowledge in terms of improving the specific sketch im giving a crit on to the other individual.

Wouldn't bother replying in terms of " your the one writing essays if u want less talk post more images" it would work in theory, but sometimes there are things that need to be said and pointed out, as you can tell from my post count in regards to my time of registering(plus the months prior that i spent lurking) i dont often post unless i have something constructive to add for others to view.

Its like talking to a retard, no matter how much logical sense i seem to make, you seem to just disregard that and respond with some stupid immature insult.
Now you can jump back up on that high horse of ignorance and ride off into the land of YOUR business.

If you did manage to read through all of this without overheating, think before you post another short,simple non-constructive response, no point in going around in circles with you if you truely dont UNDERSTAND what a constructive crit is.

B.S. POLICE
01-27-2009, 05:46 AM
this isnt your moms house, its an internet forum, if your looking for maturity your in the wrong place. its called critts, their not always what you want to hear or expect if you dont agree with the ppl then keep sketching and prove them wrong. but keep in mind that the 3 kids your talking to know a thing or two about letter structure when they see it i can vouch for that.


as for a critt, im only feelin the very last sketch you posted, work off that. dont bother with the euro ish cause if you cant pull it off it looks awful

seywhat
01-27-2009, 06:37 AM
yall nigros just look my ass over again.....

mants- your really aint got much structure, work on your bars, your close just gotta get them down man

MaNtS
01-27-2009, 07:04 AM
Your confusing the word maturity with quality. Maturity plays a role in what i was talking about, but for the majority its just a case of " if you haven't got anything constructive(QUALITY) to say dont bother opening your mouth"
im aware constructive and mature dont always co-exist, im also aware that its the internet, and i dont expect your mum to be running the shop either

" oi der brah, your s looks like an m, dat extra bit there makes it not look like an S"
is an example of a constructive crit, obviously not maturely expressed, but ide have an idea as to what needs fixing,
instead of

"try simples"

im not asking to be shielded from the negative feedback, i know people are going to hate, thats part of the game,

I guess the point im trying to make is if your not going to bother going into detail about WHY IT HAS SHIT STRUCTURE then dont bother telling me IT HAS SHIT STRUCTURE cause chances are if i knew where the SHIT STRUCTURE was then i'de of tried to make it NOT SO SHIT.

done with the rant,
Cheers, i see what you mean regarding euro, but it wasnt a euro style i was going for, it was influenced by sofles,
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/2yzfkno-1.jpg
inspiration to try different styles/colour combinations for each letter throughout the piece

MarOne...
01-27-2009, 07:14 AM
the only thing i picked up outta that 2000 word essay is that your a whiney bitch.
your shit sucks. the sooner you realize this. the sooner you can get better.


His shit doesn't suck, are you stupid?

Its not good, but shit man, everything in this thread has its flaws.

Hes obviously going for a more euro style, let him do his thing.

urmomsayshi
01-27-2009, 08:42 AM
ill start with rasek before i get into my rant- nice work bro but im with the other guy who said dont turn ur s so much
mants- ummmmm, why u such a bitch? i mean if u were doing a euro style and it had structure id be cool with it cuz i love that stuff. But ur shit lacks structure. The main bars are corect but u start adding all these extra bumps and rectaangle off of every bar that juss detracts from everything. And i cudnt read it because with all the arrows and extensions u had, i cudnt tell which was a main bar and what was an extension. Like ur i, i thought it was juss an arrow.

And i know my latest sketch was calligraphy based. I took advice from some oldschool writer to read a book on typography. So i did and realised that the old script style fonts had really good structure and i cud use em for this legal im gonna do.
bump these for talking
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm159/igraffix122/sewznewz.jpg
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm159/igraffix122/telus.jpg

MaNtS
01-27-2009, 09:38 AM
And i cudnt read it because with all the arrows and extensions u had, i cudnt tell which was a main bar and what was an extension. Like ur i, i thought it was juss an arrow.



And by all you mean "all" 5 arrows, i thought ide made the difference in appearance between an arrow and an I clear,obviously not, now if someone had been more specific and said " i mistook your i for an arrow," it would of been straight to the point and this whole arguement could of been avoided, but a generalised " do simples. work on structure" doesnt tell me that people are mistaking my i's for arrows, and therefore it isnt a constructive criticism. is the point clear yet?



mants- ummmmm, why u such a bitch? i mean if u were doing a euro style and it had structure id be cool with it cuz i love that stuff.


i dont care what you'de be cool with in a hypothetical situation,i wasn't trying euro so theres no need to comment asif ive tried to rock a banos outline and fell short,


i see what you mean regarding euro, but it wasnt a euro style i was going for, it was influenced by sofles,

inspiration to try different styles/colour combinations for each letter throughout the piece

didnt you read the thread at all before you jumped on the bandwagon of assumptions?

Those pieces you bumped arent exactly holding the structure world title either.

sex without condoms
01-27-2009, 09:49 AM
no one cares rabble rabble rabble


sex for prez

1st post ftw

MaNtS
01-27-2009, 09:56 AM
Obviously a waste of time.
Go simpler and work on letter structure...

white
01-27-2009, 10:34 AM
rasek i would turn ur s a little bit and hook the S into the A some other way

Bink1
01-27-2009, 11:32 AM
4861
4862
well the pics arnt big so you have to click on them but besides that i need to get better

dont write ghost he is a fuking legend.

TaskOne
01-27-2009, 11:53 AM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c323/snipakip/task3.jpg

paper_tiger
01-27-2009, 12:53 PM
New here and still pretty new to graffiti, so I need all the help I can get. I might right Real or Ruin, but the 'n' is pissing me off..whatever.

http://i671.photobucket.com/albums/vv76/paper_tiger/GEDC0560.jpg
http://i671.photobucket.com/albums/vv76/paper_tiger/GEDC0558.jpg?t=1233078542

JETPACK!!
01-27-2009, 12:55 PM
paper tiger, you got a fairly good idea of simples. add some 3D and just keep sketchin
task, you've got a lot of ugly arrows. and your A is extremely hidden
mantis, dont get butthurt over my opinion fuck. you've got mad ugly ass extensions and its sloppy.

touched some shit up. the S is prolly gonna stay cuz ive got a stupid amount of pencil burn under it. and its in the middle an all that shit /lazy

ill get around to fixing up the K, it bugs me now that i look twice

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/3171/canvas2id3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Zase
01-27-2009, 02:02 PM
rasek that shit is hot

ESKiMO2
01-27-2009, 02:16 PM
Rasek is probably the dopest who still posts in the toy forum. Keep it up.

respERATION
01-27-2009, 02:44 PM
task-i thionk your extentions are too square for your style
rasek-i thought your E was an S at first....but still.....dope
my latest whackness
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/26-01-09_1819.jpg