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JoseBuerto
02-02-2009, 07:18 PM
thanks man

ive been working on my 3-d for a wile so i thought i would do something else for a bit

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/untitled-13.jpg
what do you think?


This is what you come up with after those insanely technical 3d's?????


and WINGS, work on the 3d man, vantage point, find one and connect all lines to it

wesos
02-02-2009, 07:43 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j308/wefesofos/10-30-2008051300PM.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
02-02-2009, 08:05 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/35kucg1.jpg

-Wings-
02-02-2009, 08:07 PM
and WINGS, work on the 3d man, vantage point, find one and connect all lines to it

Hahaha, thats shadow stupid :P...
Not 3d.

Bottom Page Bump :P.

Some throws Ill soon have up everywhere in this town of mine :).
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF02022009_00000.jpg

Worms
02-02-2009, 08:20 PM
u guys are all fags:D nuff said

wesos
02-02-2009, 08:31 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j308/wefesofos/colla.jpg

sellers E.
02-02-2009, 08:32 PM
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/skate09feb2087.jpg

crits?

KnoxIn
02-02-2009, 08:41 PM
[QUOTE=KnoxIn;1311629]http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/1792/p2012687nf1.jpg

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/5047/p2022688bf5.jpg

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/10/p2022690dj3.jpg

here are some of my simples i know i fucked up on the slanted one i didn't get the damn T in the picture and the bottom one looks like shit did that in math today but still any crits??

-Wings-
02-02-2009, 08:43 PM
Both of your guys sketchs lack structure. :P
Work on simples, or your makes your widths consistent. And Daylo, ugly fill and wierd 3d..
If I were you I wouldnt color just yet. Bulu, your only good sketch there is the top one. At least the letters are okay.. :P

Edit
Fakt > I like the red and black one the best

fromthegrave
02-02-2009, 09:07 PM
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture055-1.jpg
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture056-1.jpg
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f288/scie802/Picture057-1.jpg

wesos- make ur letters more solid.
knox- ur on the right track. keep working on the simples.
sellers- same as wesos, make ur letters less sloppy.

ESKiMO2
02-02-2009, 09:25 PM
It looks pretty good for the most part.

I GOT CLOUT
02-02-2009, 09:54 PM
1bump.
This page needs work.


Side the first one is fresh.
Snap thats lookin pretty ill. Whatre you colorin that with, watercolor or prismas or both..
Rayz I think the negative space in the R kinda kills the flow.

Eh, I dont know if im done or not.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf024.jpg

Snew
02-02-2009, 11:54 PM
sarto- that osnap exchange is dope.. diggin the stitched outline..
kameo- dank.. just like last time.. dont chage a thing.. the jellyfish are raw as hell..
Ares- i dig that first sketch a ton.. nice and original..
Fakt- keep your letters the same width..
Daylo- work on your letter structure.. keep your bars the same width.. but the actual letter forms dont look bad tho.. good start..
Bulu- see above ^^^^^^^^^^^
Wing- diggin the red toss up.. its good to see ya back in here youve progressed a ton.. now lets see some painted peices..

sketch from class today.. i gotta start bringing something more than a pencil to my lectures.. i know the middle bars on the w bend the wrong way.. and the first bar on the n bends too much.. fuck..

crit the shit out of this..
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo52.jpg

and a few oldies for discussion.. you dont have to crit these..
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo46.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo44.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo51.jpg

librelikespie
02-03-2009, 12:59 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3461/3249987920_d692a9a14a.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3483/3249159685_0ba2c40083.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3498/3249985988_fcde5c6051.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3088/3249985724_bc271c1c5a.jpg

creets if u wanna give em ;)

rootpl
02-03-2009, 05:48 AM
to polish graffiti forum battle :

FORT EUROPA :

http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii285/root_pl/fotreuropa.jpg


this green next to "U" and "R" is fucking mistake :(
crits ?

B.S. POLICE
02-03-2009, 07:57 AM
libre you should teach me some handsteez i suck at that shit

DRAKE_RKZ
02-03-2009, 01:21 PM
Well I'm at lunch not and I try 2 come up wit something new. So here there are:

I had to do them on a napkin again lol
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/5565/img00346lh4.jpg
I know this is bad but I'm tryna improve
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/5384/img00342wt3.jpg

Idk about this one lol
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/415/img00347ll2.jpg

-Wings-
02-03-2009, 01:36 PM
Try using paper :P. It might help a ton. I like the style of the first throwie, but it needs to be worked out alot. And if you could do that it would be dope :).

GIzUrD
02-03-2009, 01:46 PM
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/8193/purpleblackmk9.jpg (http://img3.imageshack.us/my.php?image=purpleblackmk9.jpg)
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5285/pinkblackkj1.jpg (http://img3.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pinkblackkj1.jpg)

MANGO- pretty good, not much i can critisize you about since you obviously know what your doing.
DRAKE- simplify a bit
FAKT- keep practicing
SNEW- keep practicing
DAYLO- need to work on letter sizes and do simpler letters, and work on 3d
ARES- the first one looks best except the R is out of place

-Wings-
02-03-2009, 01:56 PM
The bottom one looks good.
New piece.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2520.jpg

.HATESONE.
02-03-2009, 03:34 PM
reppin for that 3rd coast.quicky i did in seminar.
http://i41.tinypic.com/2n7i0wk.jpg

says vdk that d's backwardsssss
http://i43.tinypic.com/5wnr8.jpg


crits crits crits?or comments and what not.eihers cool with me.im so bored right now.

Happy.
02-03-2009, 04:13 PM
ARES- i like the E and S in the first one, and the RES on the 3rd one
Snew and Kameo - Looks good, both nice and clean
librelikespie- Love the handys
Hatesone- A looks a bit out of place in the first one and i dont look the backwards d but the rest looks good.

http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb16/bradley_wat/boak.jpg

-Wings-
02-03-2009, 04:15 PM
I dont like the A in texas and S is a bit fucked up. Cant say much about the bottom one.


The bottom one looks good.
New piece.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2520.jpg

Bump to new page

pandemik
02-03-2009, 04:17 PM
seyo- tight man.
texas- I actually think it looks nice.

librelikespie
02-03-2009, 04:30 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3464/3251787024_f0a51b0f45.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3413/3251788460_d8f64421ba.jpg

seyo - dowp, glad to see that the name change means that there is no longer any dead space between tops of letters ;) i will constantly fap now.
hates - lovin the flow on that texas
boak - piece looks alright, work on your handsteez negro

.HATESONE.
02-03-2009, 04:34 PM
the d was an after thought haha.yeah i know the s is fucked. but hey what can you do.i just wanted to post something for always talking and shit but never puttin nothing in.so yeah there ya gohaha.

GraffitiZoo
02-03-2009, 04:46 PM
been a while since i posted...
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_2650.jpg?t=1233529374
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_2651.jpg?t=1233529799

keep sketching thats bottom one is dope.

ESKiMO2
02-03-2009, 04:48 PM
BRING THE FUCKIN' RUCKUS

http://fc42.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/034/d/b/Wu_Tang_Clan_BTFR_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

Seyo- SO DOPE!!! Looking really good.
Libre- I'm not liking the colors as much as your others. Still working on that style though.
Boak- It would be pretty decent if you could make it flow.
Texas- X and A don't really fit well...

(SoS)Viruz
02-03-2009, 04:55 PM
yo eski. whats good. Man you have a rugget style but keep at it.

.HATESONE.
02-03-2009, 05:18 PM
lol guys.whys everyone callin me texas? im FROM texas.not writing it.haha.just thought that was funny.anywho heres something i did real quick for the fuck of it and plus cuz i talk alot and havent posted in a while.
http://i40.tinypic.com/2h4ghly.jpg

eskimo.your fills and coloring skills rock dude but your lettering is weak.but thats just my opinion...maybe work on that...

I GOT CLOUT
02-03-2009, 05:23 PM
Hate that VDK is ill.
Boak, dig the A.
Seyo, Good looks on the O.


http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf025.jpg

"Riot"
02-03-2009, 05:29 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2rdz41w.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/2s9ac8j.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/wukkk2.jpg

some crits?

kameo-dope.
esk-letters are sick.
seyo-soooo sick. color it.
akso-thats crazy,the symmetry is insane

justin kayse
02-03-2009, 05:32 PM
Eski-IMO I think you should work on a different stlye.
Clout-I like that style.
Libre- I think if you cleaned everything up it might look better, but i love the letters. I might be completely wrong though.
Hates- Your K's look so dope to me.

Exchange with SANK. Didn't like the first one so i did a different style. I HATE my "e" and "d" on the 2nd one.
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00414.jpg
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00416.jpg
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00415.jpg
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/maplegluepresspaint/DSC00417.jpg

Crits?

Zase
02-03-2009, 05:54 PM
watch the structure buddy dont make some letters look like others all im sayn
ur on the right track just keep poppin em simple
the trick is do a simple simple mad clean mad flow mad 3d u know the drill
cuzz u need to develop the same shit at the same time

and ofcourse u can always do rough shit or just fuck arround
i was fucking on this one haha http://i44.tinypic.com/23vcd2s.jpg

Zase
02-03-2009, 05:58 PM
jael those simps are clean ! keep them pumpin
if you can freestyle those quick and clean
u gonna get crazy fast fatcap bombs

Zase
02-03-2009, 06:15 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/15r08e8.jpg

GIzUrD
02-03-2009, 06:21 PM
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/8193/purpleblackmk9.jpg (http://img3.imageshack.us/my.php?image=purpleblackmk9.jpg)
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5285/pinkblackkj1.jpg (http://img3.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pinkblackkj1.jpg)

can i get the bump plz.

.HATESONE.
02-03-2009, 06:31 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/23vcd2s.jpg

hey whered you get the printout?

Zase
02-03-2009, 06:46 PM
fakeproject.com

ESKiMO2
02-03-2009, 06:59 PM
Zase- Thanks. I think I understand. All the red parts should be bold right? I use a technique called stroke that just outlines the thing. I'll try it out though.

-Wings-
02-03-2009, 07:25 PM
Eskimo > Pure dopeness, but I have to ask what do you write man :P?
hatesone > I like that simple there, like the style of it :)!
Sarek > No complicated fills yet maybe :P? Something about your sharp edges make it look bad though.
Zase > Top zase simple looks good but I dislike the colors
The bottom on im really not feeling .. :P


Anyways heres my colored sketch.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2523.jpg
Sorry for bad quality, if needed ill take a better pic for details.

GIzUrD
02-03-2009, 07:29 PM
the O is pretty small

-Wings-
02-03-2009, 07:31 PM
Im aware sadly :P..

-Wings-
02-03-2009, 07:32 PM
Fuck double post..

justin kayse
02-03-2009, 08:12 PM
Wings it looks nice but the fill looks like you MS painted it for someone who couldn't read it.

ESKiMO2
02-03-2009, 09:13 PM
Tonight's work...

http://fc32.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/034/f/9/Typical_Cats_by_Rhino_fish.jpg
http://fc74.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/034/8/b/Rainbow_Six_by_Rhino_fish.jpg
http://fc90.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/034/a/c/Gravity_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

Seyo- it's even doper when it's colored. Great job man. You may want a new black marker though.

Crits (Below me)

Fakt- I'm liking the top but the bottom one isn't very good. Try bending the bars.
Meds- Looking pretty dope. I love the flow.

KnoxIn
02-03-2009, 09:32 PM
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/6633/p2032691zx2.jpg

here are two new ones i did today with the bottom one i tryed to do somethin a little differnt dunno how i feel bout it tho

seyo-badass i hella like the fill

remos
02-03-2009, 09:52 PM
fakt, make your letters a bit closer, and fix your shadow

quick pen and highlighter from school today
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/meds4.jpg

PegCityBoy
02-03-2009, 10:20 PM
ESKIMO: ive always dug your shit but i think i agree with zase some thicker outlines would be better maybe not i unno

also you got a random ass bar comin off the left side of some of your A's

B.S. POLICE
02-03-2009, 10:32 PM
typical and gravity were the best ones

get a grip!
02-03-2009, 10:38 PM
also you got a random ass bar comin off the left side of some of your A's

he uses it to cover dead space (peep the v in gravity) kinda a bad way to do it could just bring out the bar on the R a little more

Snew
02-04-2009, 12:00 AM
wing- dig the piece the only thing i dont like is the crosses on the bottom of the S and the E and i know you know.. but that 0 needs to be bumped up in size..
Eskimo- dope.. id make the T in the first piece bigger.. and add 3d to the second piece.. it really adds to the other two pieces..
Fakt- lookin better every day.. kill the negative space between the k and t.. t's can be hard to work with.. but thats the one problem i have with those peices.. good start..
Meds- good bars.. id just work on the proportions a bit.. make all them letters the same size.. that can be tough with an m or a w in your name.. but keep it up..

one new sketch.. and one that got no crits yesterday except " practice more" from someone who seemed more toy than me..
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo53.jpg

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo52.jpg
crits.?

NoCanControl
02-04-2009, 01:19 AM
gizzurd, your first thing is dope
eskimo. your lines a bit shake, and i am not really likeing the style too much. maybe if the bars were a bit thinner and taller.
snew. work on balance of a letter and balance as a whole and you need to learn how to control positive and negitive space with your letters. and your n really buggs me and so does your w
wings, the pink line is a really big distraction from your letters. i would of used it as an outline. not for the letters but for the piece. na mean? anyways. looking legit with the add ons and such. just need a little more practice.
hates, your VDsomething, you v is really hard to pick out, your d doesn't really look like a d possibly because of the backwards ness.
BS pohoe, monster is a cool cat. but his hand steeze isnt too great.
Monster, a bit wild for me man.

519*Stylez
02-04-2009, 01:25 AM
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3981/sketchix0.jpg
no excuses, just sketchin.
( i hate how everyone has an excuse as to why there stuff is wack, man up. )

GIzUrD
02-04-2009, 07:30 AM
your 3d is whore-able. i would also recommend working on some solid letters.

.HATESONE.
02-04-2009, 09:08 AM
who could it beee?(who could it be!) with that m double a b(with that m double a b!!) an we sho nuff gone shiiine(we sho nuff gone shiiine!) makin everybody lose they miiind(everybody losin they miind!)...i enjoy singing guys,just wanted you to know that guys.hey guys i enjoy singing..also i need to wash these pants,their just a mess guys.http://i42.tinypic.com/2ep4rv5.jpg
commentarys or crits or anything for me idc.whatever.i really need to get to school but i think im gonna play video games guys.also shade.thats whoreible like gizr said.any excuse? no? oh......well ok then.

respERATION
02-04-2009, 11:11 AM
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/30-01-09_1356.jpg
final bump cause i'm a lazy bitch and cba to sketch tonight :)

seyo-i like the letters but the arrows are a bit weirdand random
hate-dope simple :)
519-you SHOULD have an excuse for that.....thats is fucking uuuggg-lleeeeeee

I GOT CLOUT
02-04-2009, 11:14 AM
Hate that VDK is ill.
Boak, dig the A.
Seyo, Good looks on the O.


http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf025.jpg

Bumpin for some crits, especially on the M to the left. Tryin to get a throw down..

.HATESONE.
02-04-2009, 12:45 PM
the m on the left...dont do it.for a throw i mean.idk why it just doesnt seem like throw material you know? probably not but yeah,not rocking.the simp is straight tho.but the a seems a lil too fat on the middle bar.

519*Stylez
02-04-2009, 12:56 PM
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/30-01-09_1356.jpg
final bump cause i'm a lazy bitch and cba to sketch tonight :)

519-you SHOULD have an excuse for that.....thats is fucking uuuggg-lleeeeeee

lol, dont even get me started on your wack ass style.

whahappen?
02-04-2009, 01:04 PM
weeeeeeeeeeeeeed
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6422/getattachmentaspxoz7.jpg

.HATESONE.
02-04-2009, 02:57 PM
lol, dont even get me started on your wack ass style.

lol both of you need to stfu and practice.your both wack,so stop bickering and idk....sketch?


no beef with you two...thats just my 2 cents.

respERATION
02-04-2009, 03:01 PM
well i can do better than his shit.....idk how to even battle on here but how about it 519?

EDIT: hate your not exactly much better....i was saying to him cause i hate it when people act bigger than they are.....

I GOT CLOUT
02-04-2009, 03:23 PM
Shaddup.


http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf027.jpg

-Wings-
02-04-2009, 03:24 PM
Resp owns 519 :P...

B.S. POLICE
02-04-2009, 03:56 PM
dope simp clout, on point

Zase
02-04-2009, 04:18 PM
writing for a year and a month now
damn i spended so much money on cans books markers and shit
i dont even have a normal fucking pants arround my ass anymore
well guess its te love for art
this pic is dope its my lil art lab its a pic of the place where i was sitting the last year
i dont even watch tv anymore sounds like i almost have no life all i do is work school sketch paint
hahaha fuck it
http://i44.tinypic.com/5o61ja.jpg

ill put a last outline on this bitch and a nice background before sleep

B.S. POLICE
02-04-2009, 04:25 PM
those markers on the left dont look taht bad, and you have plenty of colors, i wonna see better fills out of you man

ESKiMO2
02-04-2009, 04:28 PM
Snap, you're always looking for better fills from people. That one Zase did is probably better than the ones I can do.

Zase
02-04-2009, 04:29 PM
i know man i need too pop some dope fades im thiking of some fluor yellow to fluor green too fluor pink hehe

i need another blender trough
fading with paintmarkers is quite easy but alcoholbased ones need much concentration and a good blender

Zase
02-04-2009, 04:31 PM
haha hes just obsesses with fills
fills are important butttttttttt
still

i think everyone agrees that sick letters are 10 times more importand

B.S. POLICE
02-04-2009, 04:42 PM
nah nah lol dont get me wrong letters are important, but yours are already nice and that green fill was dope, but the kind of markers you have allow for abetter one, do some blending ya kno

-Wings-
02-04-2009, 04:45 PM
Agreed :). If I see a piece and it has a shitty piece but dope letters. Ill usually just ignore the fill. (But it will still be buggin me in my mind)

I GOT CLOUT
02-04-2009, 05:20 PM
I have more markers than I could ever need, but fills are still my worst point.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf029.jpg

B.S. POLICE
02-04-2009, 05:29 PM
i should really put out a good fill video lol

what4joke...
02-04-2009, 05:30 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/nlpe2o.jpg
new style. crits?

goonzatwork
02-04-2009, 05:30 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/98ewlz.jpg

Sketched!
02-04-2009, 05:41 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3334/3244447729_ca451a9fd0.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3371/3245270194_3bdf3ebe6b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3466/3244443997_c7996b11e5.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3131/3245269272_3788e98599.jpg
My latest uploaded sketch
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3533/3251501704_608432a8c3.jpg

can some1 please crit my stuff?
(and i mean more than just "that one's good\bad")

thanks

ice age
02-04-2009, 05:41 PM
This is what you come up with after those insanely technical 3d's?????


hahaha yeah man i just needed some simple throws so im not out for 3 hours working on one peace.

throws are not my strong point im not good at simple and quick hahaha

ESKiMO2
02-04-2009, 05:42 PM
i should really put out a good fill video lol

You mean like a tutorial? That would be pretty ill.

B.S. POLICE
02-04-2009, 05:49 PM
yeah but not really lol like i would do but not explain.

kripto_asc
02-04-2009, 05:51 PM
shit, everyting here is bad ass except EPOD.

NoCanControl
02-04-2009, 06:10 PM
fuck you kripto

oops sorry i thought it said all of it was bad.

(SoS)Viruz
02-04-2009, 07:12 PM
Zase- Thanks. I think I understand. All the red parts should be bold right? I use a technique called stroke that just outlines the thing. I'll try it out though.

YEA YOU GOT IT :) Thats exsactly what I was tryin to say but worded it wrong, Zaze was on point.

what4joke...
02-04-2009, 07:18 PM
bump
http://i43.tinypic.com/nlpe2o.jpg
new style, crits?

sike_21
02-04-2009, 07:25 PM
what4joke-3d is messed up, letters are shaky and that k the right leg is too long go for simple letters like go to word and look up that one font called impact and practice that

what4joke...
02-04-2009, 07:29 PM
okay, and yea i didn't plan on lining the 3-d. but thanks.

ESKiMO2
02-04-2009, 07:51 PM
ACRiLE

http://fc00.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/035/3/3/Acrile_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

Well, no one is posting pictures so there's nothing to criticize ;(

KnoxIn
02-04-2009, 08:11 PM
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/1664/p2042692yn0.jpg

here is another simp so crit away

eskimo- the fills you have are so damn dope
wat4joke- simpler

NoCanControl
02-04-2009, 08:29 PM
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG-2-1.jpg

already gave crits w/o pic.

crrits for me now.

NoCanControl
02-04-2009, 08:31 PM
and Eskimo i had a feeling you looked like that. i had something in my head very similar

KnoxIn
02-04-2009, 08:33 PM
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/1676/p2042693du0.jpg

here is another simp dont really like it my hands were hella shaky for the black outline but still any crits?? ugh and i just noticed i didn't outline part of the T but not genna take another pic so ya my bad

nocancontrol- confusing seems like to many random lines

I GOT CLOUT
02-04-2009, 08:40 PM
Well, no one is posting pictures so there's nothing to criticize ;(

Well actually I posted this last page, and only got one crit of sorts..so tear it apart..
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf027.jpg

Relik - Your shits off. The bars are inconsistent. Dont focus on coloring, just the basic letter form for now.
Eskimo - Judging by the marks of the markers I can kinda tell your doin your shit kinda small. Tryin fillin a page up. Your lines are kinda shakey too.
Fakt - I dunno, I just dont like that name. The letters just dont have good flow, your second one is all off. The K and T look too small. The A's 3d shouldnt be overlapping the K, same with the T over the K.
Cancontrol - What does it read? Mar? Either way, its lookin like a pretty good style, keep with it.

519*Stylez
02-04-2009, 08:52 PM
well i can do better than his shit.....idk how to even battle on here but how about it 519?

EDIT: hate your not exactly much better....i was saying to him cause i hate it when people act bigger than they are.....

I'm not acting bigger then I am, im just sayin no excuses, maybe my shit is wack, but im not giving excuses.

lets battle then, you do your thing ill do mine, and we'll start a thread with a poll.

acereborn
02-04-2009, 09:05 PM
bump
http://i43.tinypic.com/nlpe2o.jpg
new style, crits?

dont steal your buddies K in your handie,

and dont do vanishing point 3d. you need to actually understand whats going on when you do that, so just stick to one side and either up or down. much simpler.

bak
02-04-2009, 09:07 PM
nocancontrol love that style!

ESKiMO2
02-04-2009, 09:31 PM
and Eskimo i had a feeling you looked like that. i had something in my head very similar

Haha yeah I talk like a white kid don't I?

pandemik
02-04-2009, 09:38 PM
fakeproject.com
i cant find the train printout on the site.

DieHippie
02-04-2009, 09:56 PM
bump
http://i43.tinypic.com/nlpe2o.jpg
new style, crits?

where u from

(SoS)Viruz
02-04-2009, 10:40 PM
Well actually I posted this last page, and only got one crit of sorts..so tear it apart..
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf027.jpg

Relik - Your shits off. The bars are inconsistent. Dont focus on coloring, just the basic letter form for now.
Eskimo - Judging by the marks of the markers I can kinda tell your doin your shit kinda small. Tryin fillin a page up. Your lines are kinda shakey too.
Fakt - I dunno, I just dont like that name. The letters just dont have good flow, your second one is all off. The K and T look too small. The A's 3d shouldnt be overlapping the K, same with the T over the K.
Cancontrol - What does it read? Mar? Either way, its lookin like a pretty good style, keep with it.
I dont know if there is much to say about this. Post this in the BB thread and see what they say its Fresh you come along way since a while ago. Yo Wheres Herb?

I GOT CLOUT
02-04-2009, 10:45 PM
They dont crit in the BB thread unless youre an OG head or some bullshit. Just talk shit and call out bites. They need like an intermediate thread.

And he's around. Dont know if he jumps on this site that much anymore though.

Zase
02-05-2009, 04:52 AM
I have more markers than I could ever need, but fills are still my worst point.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf029.jpg

dope man ! nice pic
also i need a lamp like that

downunder
02-05-2009, 05:36 AM
They dont crit in the BB thread unless youre an OG head or some bullshit. Just talk shit and call out bites. They need like an intermediate thread.

And he's around. Dont know if he jumps on this site that much anymore though.

wise move on his behalf then

Cyto Aka Son1c
02-05-2009, 11:44 AM
http://i39.tinypic.com/21j11c4.jpg

http://i40.tinypic.com/2zqy88m.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/2euigd3.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/212zslj.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/90txg8.jpg

-Wings-
02-05-2009, 12:14 PM
I like the 2nd last one more then all your other ones.

Just a quickie.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2526.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
02-05-2009, 01:25 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf031.jpg

Seyo - Looks solid man.

what4joke...
02-05-2009, 01:29 PM
thanks for the "crits".. i'll work on it...

Capo Izi
02-05-2009, 01:41 PM
Some stuff I've been working on..

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/14/l_e64cee0afa54496682b7b57d6054a8df.jpg

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/16/l_52ec1f235d744a69b22f233fe5101835.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/24/l_50c3065de28f486bb66f3b7434489ade.jpg

Crits?

Binar-not bad, but keep working on it...
Kameo-THAT IS SO SICK....and I agree an intermediate thread is really needed in this forum....
Fakt-top one is okay, bottom one is...no..

sike_21
02-05-2009, 03:06 PM
oh no i forgot my bars...lol damm =)
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_9997.jpg
close up
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_99982.jpg

braxtons a g
02-05-2009, 03:30 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/1y0ghf.jpg
crits pleasee- havent been on in a while..
kameo - illy. keep it up
kapn - idk i guess im just not feelin the style.
sike- thats pretty sexy

what4joke...
02-05-2009, 04:02 PM
hey sike, a few crits. i don't like the 3-d on your bubbles or your bubbles over all. and work on your i. maybe try writing it more simply. like the I in impact ya know? over all looks REALLY cool. and love the background on the corner throwies your letters are kinda shaky. but not bad.

sike_21
02-05-2009, 04:31 PM
hey sike, a few crits. i don't like the 3-d on your bubbles or your bubbles over all. and work on your i. maybe try writing it more simply. like the I in impact ya know? over all looks REALLY cool. and love the background on the corner throwies your letters are kinda shaky. but not bad.

l0l smart ass

what4joke...
02-05-2009, 04:32 PM
ahha, =]

Stussy
02-05-2009, 05:09 PM
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7572/photo755mu0.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
02-05-2009, 05:12 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/258qkow.jpg

LeaksOne
02-05-2009, 05:45 PM
sike hot shit as always
cyto i like that
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff054.jpg
crits??

Cyto Aka Son1c
02-05-2009, 05:50 PM
work on the G a lil

ESKiMO2
02-05-2009, 05:57 PM
Sike- I see you fixed your K but those zigzag lines on top of the S and E should go.

LeaksOne
02-05-2009, 06:08 PM
work on the G a lil

how do you mean?

wesos
02-05-2009, 06:10 PM
Clout: lovin those simples
Sike: really nice, keep it up
Capo: Keep doin simples
Binar: Keep it up man
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j308/wefesofos/10-30-2008060339PM.jpg
was bored so, i dunno kno

DieHippie
02-05-2009, 06:15 PM
hey sike, a few crits. i don't like the 3-d on your bubbles or your bubbles over all. and work on your i. maybe try writing it more simply. like the I in impact ya know? over all looks REALLY cool. and love the background on the corner throwies your letters are kinda shaky. but not bad.

where u from foo

braxtons a g
02-05-2009, 06:16 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/e16r5t.jpg

^STILL a work in progress
cyto-i dont really like the G in hiGh. kinda rounded and all the other corners in the letters are edgy and its just kinda curvy. but still good

DieHippie
02-05-2009, 06:18 PM
what it say

Zase
02-05-2009, 06:24 PM
Leaks u shud try an normal R
anyways i finished this
but i fucked the bg
http://i39.tinypic.com/n4i6tk.jpg

Stussy
02-05-2009, 06:37 PM
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7572/photo755mu0.jpg

bump

whahappen?
02-05-2009, 07:06 PM
enae
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/9195/getattachmentaspxfh2.jpg

.HATESONE.
02-05-2009, 07:13 PM
that throw is....................................









































wait for it....



















































horrible.

SNAP!
02-05-2009, 07:18 PM
ahaha^

decided to fuck with this type of style until i get a peice decent..i love cursive shit

http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg25/sammiejam123/0204092137.jpg

DieHippie
02-05-2009, 07:24 PM
ahahaha @ hates

urmomsayshi
02-05-2009, 07:28 PM
dunno what u guys are talkin bout but the enae throw is fresh

SNAP!
02-05-2009, 07:33 PM
thats an A? i thought it was a shitty R..

Swoe.45
02-05-2009, 07:37 PM
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4877/swoebombtx0.jpg

a quick bomb

and a 3d S
what you guys think?
since this is the only place to get crits. hehe.


http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/2200/ssketchwu8.jpg

whahappen?
02-05-2009, 07:40 PM
thats an A? i thought it was a shitty R..
o shit my bad i didnt know that bubble letters were out and badly done art faggy cursive bullshit was in...

if im so wack you wanna throw battle then?
i mean you should have no problem winning with this crazy original style you got going
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/0204091554.jpg

SNAP!
02-05-2009, 07:44 PM
nice job picking me out of all 3 people hating on your shit
my bad i dont give a fuck about originality, but other people not involved in graf being able to read my shit as a freight rolls infront of them. but thats not even a freight so word

But yeah, peice, throw, what ever Enre. name the word

.HATESONE.
02-05-2009, 07:48 PM
im just tellin it like it is man...dont get your panties in a bunch.

whahappen?
02-05-2009, 07:51 PM
nice job picking me out of all 3 people hating on your shit
my bad i dont give a fuck about originality, but other people not involved in graf being able to read my shit as a freight rolls infront of them. but thats not even a freight so word

But yeah, peice, throw, what ever Enre. name the word

siek
due tommorow
pm it to me and ill pm them to a mod or poll them or whatever

SNAP!
02-05-2009, 07:53 PM
peice, throw, what? fuck it ill do both

Germer
02-05-2009, 07:54 PM
sorry but the enae is actually really fuckin good. a style that is close enough to others that it doesnt look too strange, but different enough to be original. its sloppy but fresh.

whahappen?
02-05-2009, 07:54 PM
im just tellin it like it is man...dont get your panties in a bunch.
cool
if you wanna battle pm me a scone throw by tommorow

Swoe.45
02-05-2009, 07:55 PM
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/8514/asketchfv9.jpg

^^^ Its an "A"

Stop beefing over stupid shit. none of this has to do with the thread so just post work and crits. squash all the bs in between. you guys are halfway across the county. no need to be forum whoring/beefing.

whahappen?
02-05-2009, 07:56 PM
peice, throw, what? fuck it ill do both
throw

haha actually fuck it, the word is SCONE
lets see if you can keep your name

.HATESONE.
02-05-2009, 08:03 PM
swoe.the bomb was better imo.bt the a is stillnice.

Stussy
02-05-2009, 08:08 PM
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7572/photo755mu0.jpg
bump

fuckin keep this dumb shit in PM

secsoner
02-05-2009, 08:11 PM
eh

I GOT CLOUT
02-05-2009, 08:12 PM
Bump over the bullshit.


http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf031.jpg

Seyo - Looks solid man.

Rayz - Your Z is covered too much by the Y. And its just personal preference, but I like it better if you use either all caps or all undercase.
The Enae throw isnt horrible, the A kinda erks me though.
Swoe - The S is pretty fresh. Looks like a castle in itself kinda. The A...not so much. Keep workin at it.

Swoe.45
02-05-2009, 08:17 PM
Rayz- Agree with clout with the caps. but i dig it. but i may be a bad crit. i fucking hate thows. lol


Shitty bomb. just experimenting with colors.

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6231/img0036rn0.jpg

SNAP!
02-05-2009, 08:25 PM
ahaha^

decided to fuck with this type of style until i get a peice decent..i love cursive shit

http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg25/sammiejam123/0204092137.jpg

bump

lowercase and uppercase dont matter, i think the rays looks pretty good besides the z being covered

im diggin that 2nd kameo too

Swoe.45
02-05-2009, 08:29 PM
PLEASE! dont bump that... ^^^^^

I GOT CLOUT
02-05-2009, 08:31 PM
Thats why I said personal preference kiddo.
Swoe - That looks mad clean. I might flip the O upside down though. Looks a lot like a D.

PegCityBoy
02-05-2009, 08:32 PM
easy on the ebeef i'm a vegetarian
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d106/Jason_5159/sketch0013.jpg
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d106/Jason_5159/sketch0023.jpg

kameo - shits dope, as per usual
Sude - looks good cept the bottom part of the u looks a bit off, other than that shits good

SNAP!
02-05-2009, 08:32 PM
omgz uz talkz shitz boutz my quickz thickend outz cursives uz wantz toz battlez?

ahgahah

55xs
02-05-2009, 08:35 PM
its mad toy
crits please

55xs
02-05-2009, 08:36 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/5uocif.jpg

B.S. POLICE
02-05-2009, 08:39 PM
throw

haha actually fuck it, the word is SCONE
lets see if you can keep your name

i donno why everyones hatin on whahappens throws cause they look pretty legit to me.


i wonna get in on this battle, can i?

Swoe.45
02-05-2009, 08:44 PM
lol no more toy battles. cuz thayyyyyy suck.

GraffitiZoo
02-05-2009, 09:09 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf031.jpg

Seyo - Looks solid man.

that top one is legit put that on a wall and youll be straight...keep sketching you have potential

GraffitiZoo
02-05-2009, 09:09 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf031.jpg

Seyo - Looks solid man.

that top one is decent put that on a wall and youll be straight...keep sketching you have potential

wesos
02-05-2009, 09:37 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j308/wefesofos/11-02-2008073407PM.jpg
some charaters i did, crits?

Stussy
02-05-2009, 09:44 PM
wrong thread

ESKiMO2
02-05-2009, 10:09 PM
Rayz/Stussy- I like it but make the R fatter and more bulbous.

wesos
02-05-2009, 10:37 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j308/wefesofos/02-05-2009102803PM.jpgPeg, that simple is tight

wesos
02-05-2009, 10:39 PM
did my girls name realy quick with sharpie

librelikespie
02-06-2009, 01:40 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3406/3256901458_4c7716ffda.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3304/3255309612_35361e1ed7.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3469/3254478679_7fdbb62ce7.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3133/3255308852_d0f2763091.jpg

howcome my other posts aint showin up??

Sketched!
02-06-2009, 03:31 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3334/3244447729_ca451a9fd0.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3371/3245270194_3bdf3ebe6b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3466/3244443997_c7996b11e5.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3131/3245269272_3788e98599.jpg
My latest ones
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3456/3250674741_78b4d9c06a.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3533/3251501704_608432a8c3.jpg

I need some crits from the pros, "that one's good/bad" doesnt help much.

Thanks

librelikespie
02-06-2009, 04:16 AM
flictures
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3080/3257054591_9780a002ea.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3304/3255309612_35361e1ed7.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3469/3254478679_7fdbb62ce7.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3133/3255308852_d0f2763091.jpg

BEAS one
02-06-2009, 07:52 AM
wesos...lines are really shaky man...and move the letters closer

here are a couple...crits?

http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/JuggaloSk8er4life/23k4jbgdijb.jpg


http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/JuggaloSk8er4life/S-2.jpg


http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/JuggaloSk8er4life/SHOUT.jpg

sharptooth(%)
02-06-2009, 08:17 AM
http://i40.tinypic.com/2jaj0ut.jpg

critz

sharptooth(%)
02-06-2009, 08:18 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/2pqrekw.jpg
critz

KnoxIn
02-06-2009, 10:40 AM
sap- dont so much like the first one but the last one badass good proportions and just pretty clean

blunttokes
02-06-2009, 12:10 PM
wesos...lines are really shaky man...and move the letters closer

here are a couple...crits?

http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/JuggaloSk8er4life/23k4jbgdijb.jpg


http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/JuggaloSk8er4life/S-2.jpg


http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/JuggaloSk8er4life/SHOUT.jpg


feelin the S

Dessik
02-06-2009, 01:44 PM
SAP - your S is supah!

I don't know, I enjoy writing CAKE even tho that's not my name
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/40/l_d0e6f3a905ee4a978e89ecd2a8b35aa7.jpg

I like to practice with random words
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/27/l_16c6e1525687451ea98a70a15843d628.jpg

Eh I like it, a smidge of my girl's name in there oops!
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/44/l_4d573f6cfd19416d927a63ecc0659011.jpg

ASM
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/42/l_e0d1b4f7cf144a6c831e442820333fed.jpg

And finally
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/31/l_2757d60cd0cc4f63bc242ff9f7cf25c3.jpg

Any critz?

Stussy
02-06-2009, 01:56 PM
Dessik- go here http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185 and read until your eyes bleed!

Dessik
02-06-2009, 01:59 PM
aw come on lmao they can't all be that bad lolz

I GOT CLOUT
02-06-2009, 02:03 PM
Monster - That Eskar is pretty ill. The flick under that, the mango sketch..I dont like the middle bar of the A. And maybe make the G look more like the one under it. I say that because the right bar just looks like it comes too far into itself and distorts the letter..na mean?
Sap - I dunno, maybe its just me, but those letters look too boxy and sharp. Makes it lose flow. Try softening it up a bit.
Dessik - Read the new to graff thread, por favor.

Dessik
02-06-2009, 02:08 PM
I agree! Babies should be raped, before they take over!!!! Lmao boy apparnelty I suck lmao well i can't wait to post in the stickers thread haha

Dessik
02-06-2009, 02:10 PM
I agree! Babies should be raped, before they take over!!!! Lmao boy apparently I suck lmao well i can't wait to post in the stickers thread haha

sike_21
02-06-2009, 02:17 PM
libre- i feelin does stay up
dessik- simples man

Dessik
02-06-2009, 02:21 PM
libre- i feelin does stay up
dessik- simples man

Well it's "simples wo-man" lmao chanks

sike_21
02-06-2009, 02:23 PM
added some color
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/101_0001.jpg

Stussy
02-06-2009, 02:27 PM
dessik stop talking, fuck...
Read like I said and do keyboard letters

old shit for talking
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/2786/photo709ye4.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8131/photo733re6.jpg
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/2892/photo755ai1.jpg

-Wings-
02-06-2009, 02:28 PM
and a 3d S
what you guys think?
since this is the only place to get crits. hehe.


http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/2200/ssketchwu8.jpg

Stop biting misk1. Just look through his blackbooks, theres multiple S's that look like that. (portfolio > blackbooks)
http://www.misk1.com/

Dessik
02-06-2009, 02:39 PM
there are a lot of things i could have said to you when you told me your advice but i wasn't a jerk about it like you are turning into, i don't know if you know this but the start of this thread says tot as in get the fuck off my back i just started

Stussy
02-06-2009, 02:46 PM
im not on you because of your stuff... im on you so you will stop filling this thread with random talking, got a problem PM me

sike_21
02-06-2009, 02:50 PM
bump for crits

added some color
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/101_0001.jpg

Dessik
02-06-2009, 03:06 PM
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/31/l_36043677677a4ab28cf1eea955fc0696.jpg what i usually put up or something similar to it

Facedorateur
02-06-2009, 03:12 PM
Sike- your bubbles look like grapes, and that dosent fit with the hardcore piece you have there

-Wings-
02-06-2009, 03:27 PM
Sike > Im confused sike, your bubbles have 3d..? And okay im fine if they do, but the 3d is wrong on them.. which confuses me more. Ps no extentions, and find some markers pens dont do good fills trust me.. :P Oh yeah, no wacky extentions.
Desik > Your letters dont look like good letters to me. There squish, no bars, and your letters are all different sizes. Work on that. And please stop bitching.

Masta T
02-06-2009, 03:31 PM
my bad had a double post

Masta T
02-06-2009, 03:38 PM
an alien/mechnica thing i did wut u guyz think?

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/003-1.jpg

smooth_nuts
02-06-2009, 03:45 PM
sike-you see how your 3d over laps the letters,get rid of that shit!
the 3d should go underyour letters not overlap them,it doesnt look right the way your doing it.
PS,dont listen to wings your extentions look fine,the only thing pissing me off is your 3d!

my halfof a sticker collab with a kid name serkit
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/new%20shit/Picture10645PART2.jpg
TECH. it's not a blackbook or paper flick but fuck it i drew it...haha

Masta T
02-06-2009, 03:49 PM
yo nice mines a sticker to an thanks for the crit but the shits so off an overlaped cuz there not letters rofl. i didnt put a word in i jus drew like a alien city behind it lol

-Wings-
02-06-2009, 04:39 PM
ps dont listen to smooth nuts sike your extentions are whack.

I GOT CLOUT
02-06-2009, 04:43 PM
Wings...shaddup. Ive seen much wacker extensions outta you. Structually speaking, those extensions are pretty legit. Helps the flow and kills deadspace.

bur one
02-06-2009, 06:20 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/ab1nm.jpg

bur one
02-06-2009, 06:22 PM
crittsss?

justin kayse
02-06-2009, 06:30 PM
connect the bars on the middle of the b and r

NoCanControl
02-06-2009, 06:32 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/152kmk6.jpg

it begins to loose the style and the balence of negitive and postitive space.

i don't want crits on this one. because i know whats wrong with it. BUT if my letters begin to loose distinguisment of a letter then tell me. thats all i really want for now. i already know how to look at flow and blance of a letter. etc like i have said before.

bur/// the r looks goofy and so does the b, because the whole right side of a letter should be one bar. and if you would like it to be two bars then i suggest that you work with your letter more.
dope/// your o and d have too much negitive space, colors are dope hahahaha. and so are your highlights
master t/// it looks more like a drawing rather then graffiti.
sike/// your inside arrows are too distracting and stuff. try to make the letters pop out more then your fill details.
desik/// keep your bars more parrellel. and stop bitching
Swoe/// you seem like you would be one of those guys that started writeing in artschool.
Rayz/// watch your y and the middle bar of the z. kinda look goofy. still legit tho. and the throw is legit. kinda. work on it sum moar.

NoCanControl
02-06-2009, 06:33 PM
melissa is what it reads.

bur one
02-06-2009, 06:37 PM
ok ill try that and mess with the 2 bars a lil see what comes out

NoCanControl
02-06-2009, 08:05 PM
http://photos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v1976/129/20/1193550161/n1193550161_30358500_9227.jpg

hahah. sorry to be a post whore.

Stussy
02-06-2009, 08:14 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/14pwlt.jpg
NoCanControl- Not sure about that A

I GOT CLOUT
02-06-2009, 08:15 PM
Control - Thats pretty legit man. Ill E. Im just not feeling the A at all. Doesnt seem to fit the style.
Rayz - Z is still too covered up.

smooth_nuts
02-06-2009, 08:30 PM
nocancontrol-there to letters with giant holes in them,theres gonna be negitive space no matter what haha,but i'll take that into consideration anyway;)
in really feeling that second one btw,is it handdraw?looks photoshopish...still fresh though
edit*

fuck,bump,i hate being the first one on a page :(
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/new%20shit/Picture10645PART2.jpg

NoCanControl
02-06-2009, 09:00 PM
well you could get rid of the neg space by adding bigger threed or a smaller hole orrrrrrr ummm. thickn the bars. number of things you can do. and yea its corel paint x

program is so sick.

braxtons a g
02-06-2009, 09:17 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/oarj40.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/14uxbp2.jpg
smooth- thats pretty ill. nice colors

ice age
02-06-2009, 11:01 PM
finished a few lastnight what do you think

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/untitledsap.jpg
exchange with sap

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/untitledpulse.jpg
reworked a peace for a friend

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/untitledicag.jpg

Aesir
02-06-2009, 11:24 PM
I liked the first and third, but the second needs work. Also the "G" of the last one seems out of place. Other than that VERY good 3d.

ice age
02-06-2009, 11:36 PM
yeah the g on the last one was giving me trouble
the pulse one was for a friend and thats what he wanted so i really didnt have much say in it

thanks man

KnoxIn
02-07-2009, 12:50 AM
Well actually I posted this last page, and only got one crit of sorts..so tear it apart..
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/graf027.jpg

Relik - Your shits off. The bars are inconsistent. Dont focus on coloring, just the basic letter form for now.
Eskimo - Judging by the marks of the markers I can kinda tell your doin your shit kinda small. Tryin fillin a page up. Your lines are kinda shakey too.
Fakt - I dunno, I just dont like that name. The letters just dont have good flow, your second one is all off. The K and T look too small. The A's 3d shouldnt be overlapping the K, same with the T over the K.
Cancontrol - What does it read? Mar? Either way, its lookin like a pretty good style, keep with it.

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/9594/p2062694ve0.jpg
ok so is that what he is talkin about like my sketch isn't done but is that what he is saying like at the top right of the F between the A just dont put 3d right there?? or if your readin this is that wat u mean?? and dont worry i know i need to get striaght lines and shit like that its not done but just wonderin if thats what he means?

I GOT CLOUT
02-07-2009, 03:10 AM
The 3d is ok the way you have it. Although I would advise you try just straight up keyboard letters for now. Dont try to put crazy bends, kinks in your letters yet. Also, try different directions to put the 3d in. 3d and extensions are just ways to kill deadspace leftover in your pieces. For an example, in that piece^^up thurr if you took the 3d to go from the top left corner down to the bottom right, 45degrees about, you would be killin a bunch of the deadspace left under all the letters. It just helps it all come together.

Scheme*119
02-07-2009, 08:31 AM
http://photos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v1976/129/20/1193550161/n1193550161_30358500_9227.jpg

hahah. sorry to be a post whore.

<3

big0ne
02-07-2009, 10:09 AM
heey guys,
im new here, i writing bigone.
im from holland. been writing for a year now.
here some flix

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/2455/img2930dd0.jpg
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/6679/img2692gi7.jpg
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6569/img2931tf2.jpg

some crits?

Yusef
02-07-2009, 10:48 AM
its because he doesnt paint he just tells everyone to kill themselves

aww, run to the suicide thread and talk it out.

pandemik
02-07-2009, 01:44 PM
hey, just a quick question. How do the elmers paint pens hold up compared to Decco's? I got some deccos today, and almost got some elmers. thanks.

justin kayse
02-07-2009, 01:51 PM
Wrong thread. Go to the markers thread under "Tools and Tips"

Facedorateur
02-07-2009, 01:54 PM
u should probably post that in the Toy Question thread

pandemik
02-07-2009, 02:01 PM
my bad, i thought since i used them for the black book it would be appropriate.

impulse555
02-07-2009, 02:23 PM
ok so heres 3 stages of my new font i may have seen the p some were but i cant remember... o well please comit and help :d

(SoS)Viruz
02-07-2009, 02:24 PM
bump for crits

Gettin Better your on the 3d

I GOT CLOUT
02-07-2009, 03:24 PM
hey, just a quick question. How do the elmers paint pens hold up compared to Decco's? I got some deccos today, and almost got some elmers. thanks.

Instead of tellin the kid he in the wrong thread and wasting even more space, why cant you assholes just answer him, good god.

Theyre both good. The fine tipped elmers are probably your best bet(versus the broad and extrafine tips), as to where with decos the broad tip works the best. Just nab a bunch of all of em. Cant hurt.

pandemik
02-07-2009, 04:29 PM
I appreciate it man.

sellers E.
02-07-2009, 06:05 PM
i redid the piece from my last post.... crits?
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/IMG_4775.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
02-07-2009, 06:10 PM
Sellers E-make all the letters the same size

I am not done, I need advice on this one, Im not trying to fuck it up

http://i44.tinypic.com/33wmyqh.jpg

says resk

Cyto Aka Son1c
02-07-2009, 06:41 PM
still workin on it

http://i41.tinypic.com/29c2ka8.jpg

ilikekicks
02-07-2009, 08:20 PM
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_2657.jpg?t=1234059149
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_2660.jpg?t=1234059579
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_2663.jpg?t=1234059594

-Wings-
02-07-2009, 08:55 PM
Resk > It looks okay but you should learn to do your 3d better. Its wobbly and wrong. Also your letters need a bit of work to. There a bit bland.
Akso > The bottom throw sucks, and grey one is pretty cool the style is cool, just the letters might need some work. The simples look okay. Nothing to good to say about them :P.

pandemik
02-07-2009, 09:18 PM
i really like the bottom throw.

Aesir
02-07-2009, 09:26 PM
I don't like the bottom one as much as the others though the "A" looks like one i've seen in a "CA" roller.

Cyto Aka Son1c
02-07-2009, 09:39 PM
I like the gray throwie

http://i43.tinypic.com/a5khet.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
02-07-2009, 10:10 PM
fail^^^

Syk X
02-07-2009, 10:18 PM
4956
First ever what do ya think?

Cyto Aka Son1c
02-07-2009, 10:26 PM
Look at mine and then look at yours and then write down what you see if different about them. Then copy mine and figure out how to draw bars

SNAP!
02-07-2009, 10:32 PM
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg25/sammiejam123/0207092249.jpg

Syk X
02-07-2009, 11:03 PM
Um differences
Mine:
Curvy
the "S" looks kinda odd
use lots of arrow points
there are no lines to make it look 3D
Looks more sketched
Yours: has the 3D look
Straight lines
More overlapping of the letters
angled and slanted back slightly

and here is my copy (if its ok to put it up)
4958

Cyto Aka Son1c
02-07-2009, 11:13 PM
try and use straight bars and such man, just keep sketchin

Syk X
02-07-2009, 11:15 PM
Ok thanks

straight isnt really my styleee
*shrug*
different strokes fer different folks

smooth_nuts
02-07-2009, 11:20 PM
sky-you dont have a style,your just starting out,the last thing you should be worrying about is style,you should be doing simples/keyboard letters not copying other peoples shit,specialy when that other person cant even get the basic structure of an r right...no offence cyto but it's true(although i get what you were trying to tell him i just dont you could figure out how to say it haha)...

oh and syk,go read the new to graffiti thread and follow every word of it...

just my 2cents :/

edit*
akso-your throws are nice,the only thing that kinda urks me is your k in the bottom toss looks to much like an h
snap-the lowercase a kills the flow imo,and your letters seem to get bigger as they go,work on tryign to keep them the same size
edit againt*
just an old flick cause i feel like a douche when i post in here with out flicks haha
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3284/3098703071_676c1b6765.jpg

Syk X
02-07-2009, 11:23 PM
okk
thanks
ill keep that all in mind

Cyto Aka Son1c
02-07-2009, 11:28 PM
I know how to construct an R.... how is that not passable?

smooth_nuts
02-07-2009, 11:33 PM
well first off the right leg of an r comes out of the loop on an R,not the bottom of the left leg,plus the extention on the back looks 'tarded,imo :/

Cyto Aka Son1c
02-07-2009, 11:37 PM
I forgot to connect those and then messed it up but I know what you're talking bout and that extension on the leg was the first extension and I just forgot to erase that too cuz it is pretty pointless

sike_21
02-08-2009, 11:02 AM
smooth- dope is dope l0l
resk-use a ruler for your lines cuz them thing are shaky and fix the R
akso- i like it but the k does look like an h
now for talking i was all kinds of fucked up so the fill might be a lil too
much and i dont even know what that thing is a drew l0l
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/101_0064.jpg

B.S. POLICE
02-08-2009, 12:05 PM
yo eskimo, i kno you lurkin ***** if i was to try and make me come out of a spraycan like a ginni (spelling?) in photoshop, wht would be the best way to get that body shrinking and fading into the can look?

sike_21
02-08-2009, 12:26 PM
bottom page bump

smooth- dope is dope l0l
resk-use a ruler for your lines cuz them thing are shaky and fix the R
akso- i like it but the k does look like an h
now for talking i was all kinds of fucked up so the fill might be a lil too
much and i dont even know what that thing is a drew l0l
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/101_0064.jpg

justin kayse
02-08-2009, 12:27 PM
akso-the "a" looks kinda like an upside-down and backwards e, but i like it.

respERATION
02-08-2009, 12:29 PM
resk-your R failed......but your E is dope....the other letters are null
dope-......i love your E
sike-i think you went a bit toofar with the fill

i used real lines instead of dots:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/08-02-09_1620.jpg

any takers?.....crits

bak
02-08-2009, 01:11 PM
resp def work on ur hand

NoCanControl
02-08-2009, 01:20 PM
its so hard to work on hand skills tho. not being so scarcastik

respERATION
02-08-2009, 01:32 PM
seconded^^^

smooth_nuts
02-08-2009, 01:57 PM
Resp,your simples are a bajillion times better then that weird wanna be msk type shit....imo.