Blackbooks

[Incite]

HAL.CYON- dude.what the fuck is with that o on the rekon? it took me like 5 minutes to get it.have you ever really seen a o do that? no.... becuase they dont.you got skill and the linework down but its just some of your letters are a little funky in my opinion.just a friendly suggestion, kill that o.with a shovel.now, do it....


:) smiles

lol wow, one of the worst criticisms ive heard in a long time.

lol @ "have you ever really seen an o do that?" ... i believe you're on the wrong forum if you think its sensible to say that on a graffiti forum.

[.HATESONE.]

its already over hates shut the fuck up
seriously your the most annoying person you just keep bring shit back up

im a dick get used to it.

[Blox]

im a dick get used to it.

You can;t even fucking drive kid,
Shut the fuck up.
We are not going to "Get use to it"
Just shut the fuck up and give some critz.
Fuck.

[.HATESONE.]

lol im sixteen.

[blunttokes]

good for you now shut the fuck up!!!

[.HATESONE.]

good for you now shut the fuck up!!!

k


http://i39.tinypic.com/qwx8gh.jpg

for talking shit haha.anywho.i hate it.except for the a but i might as well post it becuase i have nothign better to do really.i hate that h so bad tho.oh god.its horrid.whatever

crits..if your not to mad at me haha...


btw it looks lopsided like that becuase i put it in the scanner wrong.not really leanin like that.

[B.S. POLICE]

blox your barking up the wrong tree, blunttokes just leave em be i dont think the arguement had anything to do with you. everyone just stfu and let your work do the talking.

[.HATESONE.]

no dude their right i do talk alot of shit and probably need to be quiet so yeah.no more from me for a while.except for like sketches and shit...sorry guys.

[sila137]

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3177/img1620.jpg (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1620.jpg)
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/img1620.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img11/img1620.jpg/1/)
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/4362/img1623v.jpg (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1623v.jpg)
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/img1623v.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img11/img1623v.jpg/1/)
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3406/img1618e.jpg (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1618e.jpg)
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/img1618e.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img134/img1618e.jpg/1/)
some old skecthes. crits?

[Sketched!]

I can barely even read them.
go simpler and take better photos.

[Sketched!]

I can barely even read them.
go simpler and take better photos.

[hal.cyon]

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3177/img1620.jpg (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1620.jpg)
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/img1620.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img11/img1620.jpg/1/)
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/4362/img1623v.jpg (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1623v.jpg)
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/img1623v.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img11/img1623v.jpg/1/)
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3406/img1618e.jpg (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1618e.jpg)
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/img1618e.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img134/img1618e.jpg/1/)
some old skecthes. crits?

your handstyles a billion times better than your piecing if you drop the arrows and add-ons. i don't even mind the asterisks really. just work on making the letters simple like your handies, then work from there. don't try extensions and cracks and crazy stuff until your letters look stronger.

[what4joke...]

agreed. but it looks cool lol^^

[sila137]

thanks for the crits ill get some simples done now.

[.HATESONE.]

sila you should work on something more simpler i think.your writes are straight tho.(that bugs me how some ppl can have straight peices but horrible handstyles...how does that happen?)

something i did real quick for the fuck of it.im skipping school haha.fuck world history.if it looks lopsided its becuase of the scanner.
http://i44.tinypic.com/f1vzid.jpg

criiiiiiiiiiits? no? whatever...

[sila137]

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/5585/img1624.jpg (http://img4.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1624.jpg)
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/img1624.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img4/img1624.jpg/1/)
simple - what you think?

weak-i like it, not sure about the line of the k going through da a tho.

[iliketowrite123]

HOW HAS NOBODY FLAMED THIS KID YET ... yea yea i know we were all there not saying that i was never that toy, but reaaally.. in your bedroom?.... really?



... P.S. love the sports theme<3 fuck off i said i know i suck i wanted some constructive critisism you dont have to just come on here and call people mad toy your cool

[Tokenkaligreens]

Toys learn to take a crit and stfu. Period. You dont like what someone said about you,your letters or style pm them. Problem solved. When you bicker back and forth so everyone can see, this thread just gets cluttered with talk.

Hates nice simps maybe put alil more work into them(fills 3-d)

sila work on straight letters your on the right trak you just need to get you letters on point.

[.HATESONE.]

http://i42.tinypic.com/24nic2f.jpg

working with very limited colors haha.and their all dryed up by now.

[Graff J up]

http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0043.jpg

super simpleee

new character in math class... is this how how it is??

[RhodeIsland]

http://i42.tinypic.com/24nic2f.jpg

working with very limited colors haha.and their all dryed up by now.

Thats why i rock Pen fill-ins

I <3 your simples

[B.S. POLICE]

hates its almost shocking to me that me and you havent done a legit exchange yet, since youve known me since i was arrows everywhere uberwildstylezzz toy

[.HATESONE.]

lol i know why havent we? i think we battled once.maybe i can remember.oh shit i wish i could find some of that old stuff i did.back when i was all kindsa toy.ima go find some of it today.but yeah dude we probably should.you still writing ohsnap? well you know what i write now so yeah if you wanna get down im cool with it....

and rhodeisland i know what your saying,i suck at fills and on top of that the only stuff i got is a bunch of sharpies(all black) some dryed out highlighters and a few dry erase markers i jacked from school haha.oh and a few copics and some prismas.only like 3 tho.

[B.S. POLICE]

nah i dont write that anymore but yea use that,
and yeah lol ill use your name

[Sketched!]

if it says ATIKA, think again.
You can't build a K like that, and the A's are fucked up too.
practice straight letters before you go any further.

sila: dont overlap your letters this much, and drop the arrows for the next couple of months.
hate: try posting some more serious sketches, your skills isnt really shown in these simples.

Edit: some sketches.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3400/3312715266_e49372ab7b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3653/3311888915_f3d996da3f.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3533/3311881631_0a7586cc71.jpg

And one freestyle:
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3528/3311882453_9ea41d85e2.jpg

[Tokenkaligreens]

ya those A's are pretty hurt and the k needs some better letter structure.


last one is my fav side the rest just seem to stiff or sharp for my taste.

[sila137]

got bored. what started of as plain ismples kinda went further and started anding add on. i know its rubbish but thaught i would post it anyway? critts would be cool aswell.

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/7398/img1629.jpg (http://img24.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1629.jpg)
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/img1629.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img24/img1629.jpg/1/)

[Tokenkaligreens]

dont cover your letters to much, space em out a bit. like the L is hiding most of the A.

[iliketowrite123]

im trying to get simpliar thanks for last crits
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=5149&stc=1&d=1235690224

[what4joke...]

take out the aarows. and cut the stems a little bit shorter.

[Tokenkaligreens]

same crit as for sila clic dont cover your letters up space em out some. work on your bars and letter construction too.

[iliketowrite123]

how about this one xD
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=5150&stc=1&d=1235691206
and this one i just drew

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=5151&stc=1&d=1235691299

[TastySesamcrew]

how about this one xD
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=5150&stc=1&d=1235691206
and this one i just drew

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=5151&stc=1&d=1235691299

post images you fuckin faggot

[iliketowrite123]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffi...1&d=1235691206

[TastySesamcrew]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffi...1&d=1235691206

not working link

[iliketowrite123]

ehh im sry i wasnt paying attention :(
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/711/fotoh.th.jpg (http://img410.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fotoh.jpg)
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/2420/gse.th.jpg (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gse.jpg) i hope this worked

[Worms]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/003-6.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/002-9.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1735.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1734.jpg

sila i duno wat that says i cant make n e thing out go simple and space out ur letters for now

side the bottom wons best the... the e killed it though... keep sketchin like u did for that one and change the bends n shit to progress some style but dont get too ahead of urself

and im lazy:)

the rest of u do the same thing and work on it best crit ever

[iliketowrite123]

ehh im sry i wasnt paying attention :(
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/711/fotoh.th.jpg (http://img410.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fotoh.jpg)
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/2420/gse.th.jpg (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gse.jpg) i hope this worked

[iliketowrite123]

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/7083/qaas.th.jpg (http://img408.imageshack.us/my.php?image=qaas.jpg)

[SONE.]

if it says ATIKA, think again.
You can't build a K like that, and the A's are fucked up too.
practice straight letters before you go any further.

sila: dont overlap your letters this much, and drop the arrows for the next couple of months.
hate: try posting some more serious sketches, your skills isnt really shown in these simples.

Edit: some sketches.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3400/3312715266_e49372ab7b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3653/3311888915_f3d996da3f.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3533/3311881631_0a7586cc71.jpg

And one freestyle:
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3528/3311882453_9ea41d85e2.jpg


shits dope! pretty original, i just hate ur E in that freestyle. keep at it.

[what4joke...]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/003-6.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/002-9.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1735.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1734.jpg

sila i duno wat that says i cant make n e thing out go simple and space out ur letters for now

side the bottom wons best the... the e killed it though... keep sketchin like u did for that one and change the bends n shit to progress some style but dont get too ahead of urself

and im lazy:)

the rest of u do the same thing and work on it best crit ever
on the second pic i think. i hate the E but i like verything else

[SONE.]

yo, crits sofar?
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090226.jpg

[ScAmeretoLme]

i like it, though the heart in the o seems out of place, like.. theres too much empty space in the top of the o if you get what im sayin

[garbage down tha way]

for a friend, pino

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0429.jpg

sone- its kinda too fat in parts but overall i like it. thin out the back of the s and front of the n.

[SONE.]

for a friend, pino

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0429.jpg

sone- its kinda too fat in parts but overall i like it. thin out the back of the s and front of the n.


haha, defintly not changing that. made it fat on purpose. i just cant fucking work out an E

[Tokenkaligreens]

m+s its not horrible but you letter structure and bar (letters more so then bars) needs some work. your K's are wack imo. idk it just seems like your trying to hard to evolve sometihng that isnt really working for you.

hoer. looking good. dig the lil curly cue shit on the i and n maybe could have spiced the p and o up more.

sone pretty much they hit on what you need to fix and that heart seems outta place.

[sike_21]

yea sore on th second one that r is fire in my eyes but that e is slacking

[Syke1FTP]

sorry real sike couldnt help it but

i know its shit it started out like a good idea but it went to hell but just wondering what you guys think of the idea....ya know?

http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h7/alborzpiri666/suckks.jpg

[RhodeIsland]

http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/NicksPictures002.jpg

[Tokenkaligreens]

syke your K is hurt,use 3 bars not 2. im starting to notice alot of you guys just getting started like to sqeeze your letters together. STOP THAT lol. Otherwise its not horrible your on the right track.

hyte i know you didnt ask, lol but your dropshadow is off in some spots other then that its looks good.

[Syke1FTP]

pretty doope
im not baggin on your tag or anything
but the "e" made me laughh

[Syke1FTP]

syke your K is hurt,use 3 bars not 2. im starting to notice alot of you guys just getting started like to sqeeze your letters together. STOP THAT lol. Otherwise its not horrible your on the right track.

hyte i know you didnt ask, lol but your dropshadow is off in some spots other then that its looks good.

i know haha it turned out like shit....i usually use 3 bars....but if i space em out
dont you think it would look gay?
i mean could i try it and post a pic up....

[Tokenkaligreens]

i dont mean like huges gaps just so the letters are not so overlapping. Its just something i notice alot of toys do, when your rocking simps depending you want your letters to stand on there own not be all mushed together or atleast thats what i like to see. in the end its up to you how your letters look. im just giving some advice.

[Syke1FTP]

oh i getcha
yaa i usually dont do that...if you go a page back...i just tried it like that cause ive never done something that looks like that....haha but thanks =]

[RhodeIsland]

http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/NicksPictures003.jpg

[nazal]

Hey guys, been on here for a couple of months, kept pretty quiet. Anyways, I just wanted to post a couple flicks to see if I'm porgressing in the right direction. Anyways, rip em apart.
http://kttns.org/tm4nm
http://kttns.org/yntmy

[respERATION]

hyte,garbage-ddoppeeeeee
m+s-looks like you didn't put enough time in
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/24-02-09_1639.jpg
i'll put some more up tonight

crits?

[Icons]

Resp - i like your e, but im not diggin the jagged style. sorry girl :(

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6314/picture007x.jpg
i need a better throw :(

[SONE.]

trying something new.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090227.jpg

[NouveauP]

Saw some blockbusters the other day and decided to try one out. New sketch book, opening page.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/blockbust.jpg

[SONE.]

trying something new.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090227.jpg


bottom page bump

[SONE.]

that blockbuster is pretty noice, rulers are grand.

[NouveauP]

Haha I was having to use a CD case as a straight edge. Shows you how much I do perspective shit.

And I'm feeling your outline. Especially that S for some reason. All I would do is lose the heart, but I have a feeling you won't take that advice. Doesn't hurt the piece, just personal preference. Keep em coming.

[Sketched!]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3400/3312715266_e49372ab7b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3653/3311888915_f3d996da3f.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3533/3311881631_0a7586cc71.jpg

And one freestyle:
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3528/3311882453_9ea41d85e2.jpg

crits?

[Incite]

havent picked up a pen/pencil in 4-5 years
+
broken thumb
+
20 mins to spare during lunch break
=

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/4682/dab.jpg

i'll color it or whatever i come up with when i go back to work today even though it hurts like a bitch to try to write/color.

[DaMoK]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3478/3314158394_4c3fe60bfb.jpg?v=1235744591
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3501/3314158382_2d80dd8dc1.jpg?v=1235744619
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3603/3314158370_d6f81df6a9.jpg?v=1235744634
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3560/3313333191_b1c4bf48a9.jpg?v=1235744652
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3373/3313333183_65820dce5b.jpg?v=1235744665
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3339/3313333169_cbbcfc1593.jpg?v=1235744697
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3371/3314158320_72bc961048.jpg?v=0

[thebigman]

http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/pin2win11194/100_0261.jpghttp://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/pin2win11194/swaggg.jpg crits???

[/DaNk\]

^^ there allright just try and keep the width of your bars consistant like in the first sketch . (the s and the w )

[asin1001]

sone im feelin that. that somthin new is workin.

[garbage down tha way]

trying something new.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090227.jpg
how the fuck were you having trouble with the E, that E is fucking awesome.

yeah the fat parts look good now, with the lines breaking them up and whatnot. bottom of the S is still a little too fat though, even if you were going for the fat to skinny.

[nazal]

Hey guys, been on here for a couple of months, kept pretty quiet. Anyways, I just wanted to post a couple flicks to see if I'm porgressing in the right direction. Anyways, rip em apart.
http://kttns.org/tm4nm
http://kttns.org/yntmy

Bump for crits

[RhodeIsland]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3478/3314158394_4c3fe60bfb.jpg?v=1235744591
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3501/3314158382_2d80dd8dc1.jpg?v=1235744619
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3603/3314158370_d6f81df6a9.jpg?v=1235744634
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3560/3313333191_b1c4bf48a9.jpg?v=1235744652
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3373/3313333183_65820dce5b.jpg?v=1235744665
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3339/3313333169_cbbcfc1593.jpg?v=1235744697
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3371/3314158320_72bc961048.jpg?v=0

If you are gunna live in RI change your fuckin name

[.HATESONE.]

the dub for the fuck of it...haha.

http://i41.tinypic.com/2vcaibr.jpg

jaep- looking good dude

damok-love the throws on the first one.

nazle-work on your writes a bit...go simpler on them i guess(btw where are you from?)


anywho....crit it dammit.NOW!pretty pleez

[.HATESONE.]

lol post somethin dude...

[GraffitiZoo]

trying something new.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090227.jpg

http://miamigraffiti.com/flick.php?id=2178498248

[RhodeIsland]

Jabaggedem
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/NicksPictures004.jpg
M+S i will have your exchange soon

[MaNtS]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/26022009459.jpg

[RhodeIsland]

It's up to you M+S

[RhodeIsland]

Jabaggedem
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/NicksPictures004.jpg
M+S i will have your exchange soon

End of page bump

[what4joke...]

http://i41.tinypic.com/2rgjcxg.jpg

Tips on a new E? please. (New word, first sketch)

[Big Slippy]

Hyte, that's a lil tech. Simp it up a bit
Kake nice simps

[RhodeIsland]

http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/NicksPictures005.jpg

Sanek Exchange

[RhodeIsland]

M+s Exchange
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/NicksPictures006.jpg

[Icons]

http://i40.tinypic.com/2z8yx79.jpg

[.HATESONE.]

are you kidding me? look at the post above yours.

thanks RI, and yo ill do you a hyte if you still want me to

oh lol i didnt realise it was there haha...

umm from what i can tell dude it looks like you just free handed it.you need to build up on them.kinda like blocks or bars...they connect and make letters.i suck soooo horribly at giving advice but you should probably go to the new to graff thread and it talks about bars in there.thats basicly what you do.get your stuff down first.idk what else to say but it kinda reminds me of like spaghetti and like now i hella hungry and want spaghetti haha.



dueces!

[what4joke...]

http://i40.tinypic.com/2z8yx79.jpg
i like that blue throwie.

[what4joke...]

no, its good dude.

[(SoS)Viruz]

A LOOK HERE HOES I NEED MORE ENTRIES FOR THE NECRO BATTLE.

SOOOOO SKETCH SOMETHING AND SEND YO PICS TO ME.

Word -NECRO-
O and its Due by SUNDAY of this WEEK. MARCH 1st

[Icons]

i like that blue throwie.

thanks man

[.HATESONE.]

i might git down on this necro shit.is it throws or what???

[RhodeIsland]

Its peices..

I already submited mine =D

[RhodeIsland]

http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/NicksPictures007.jpg

[nazal]

I'm from Ottawa. Alright yeah, here are a couple more I've done,
http://kttns.org/ju3z
http://kttns.org/mgjh Nevermind the gay doodles.

[Backalley Abortion Doctor]

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/img005-2.jpg

[Icons]

thats hawwwt

[respERATION]

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/img005-2.jpg

big boys?

thats fucking sexy

[nazal]

BAD - That shit is bomb man I think it's time for you to move on up, like the jefferson's

[Scheme*119]

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/img005-2.jpg

we started this grime shit, hit me up on aim homeboy.

[urmomsayshi]

umm, does me having a stiffy when looking at that make me gay? lol
dope shit

[Sketched!]

the dub for the fuck of it...haha.

http://i41.tinypic.com/2vcaibr.jpg


anywho....crit it dammit.NOW!pretty pleez

thats some funk right there.

care for an exchange ?
you too rhodeisland ;)

[muddyluv]

check this out i know i got pencil marks showin thru but say watcha feel.good, bad,okay,decent,terrible,crappy.Holla!MUDDYLUV.htt p://i365.photobucket.com/albums/oo94/muddyluv/009.jpg

[muddyluv]

JABBAOCKEEZ SHOUTOUT!it aint great but i had to do it.http://i365.photobucket.com/albums/oo94/muddyluv/007.jpg

[TastySesamcrew]

mants-simples
rhode-sick no need to crit that. I would love to see it painted
kake-good simple
sanek-fix up the k but looks good over all
icon-your throw is solid but theres no flow at all, work on it
hyte-the t overlaps your e :(
nazal-keyboard letters
backalley-big boy thread bro
hates-nice w
muddy-new to graf thread please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3300/3313904788_01b933418d.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3474/3313904792_779ea6d1ee.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3375/3313904794_4c51b1b7cb.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3456/3313904796_e90556bbc6.jpg

[klic]

just something i did for an exchange with rhodeisland, came out pretty wack, ill try and do yours soon m+s

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/HYTESimplePiece.jpg

tasty - dope letters, the only B im really feeling is the top one, edit: haha thanks for critting my piece four pages back, edit again: i just realized you were talking about the exchange rhodeisland did with me

muddy - keep it simple, might wanna read the new to graff thread

hatesone - nice stuff, just clean it up

[sheltr]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3474/3307877164_1bdf055cdf_b.jpg

[RhodeIsland]

thats some funk right there.

care for an exchange ?
you too rhodeisland ;)

I'm down, what you want me to write?

[KnoxIn]

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/8532/p2242723.jpg
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/5750/p2283004.jpg
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/2052/p2283006.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/629/p2283007.jpg

here are some of my simps well the first one is kinda somethin different but still can i get some crits?

shelter- its good just try and make it cleaner
klic- not too bad exept that extension on the bottom of the first letter
tasty- i like em especially the bottom one pretty clean
muddy- agree with above go simple just settle down read the new to graff and go simple

[klic]

here are some of my simps well the first one is kinda somethin different but still can i get some crits?

yea i agree that extension is brutal, just round out the edges of your letters so its not so sharp, same thing basically with your handstyle, not so sharp, round it out

[(SoS)Viruz]

Last Reminder.....For the NECRO Sketch Battle.

ONce you Guys got your Sketch, Send them to me in am PM. Ight. If thier are enough Entries I'll make a Toy, and a Advance Toy. And right Now thier aren't SOOOO. Come on you guys sketch all the Time. DAMN IT. ALL entires are due to me by.....March 1st which is Tomarrow. Sunday at 10pm

[hal.cyon]

some things i be's working on for all's yous goofballs dildos.

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6872/003hx6.jpg

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/7761/002og8.jpg

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/5092/001kb0.jpg

[sike_21]

sheltr- pretty fresh
hal.- how bout you finish them they looks straight as hell
faze- stop posting the same damm pics and if yournot it sure feels like it. go practice
lil pen freestyle

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0126.jpg

[sex without condoms]

mants-simples
rhode-sick no need to crit that. I would love to see it painted
kake-good simple
sanek-fix up the k but looks good over all
icon-your throw is solid but theres no flow at all, work on it
hyte-the t overlaps your e :(
nazal-keyboard letters
backalley-big boy thread bro
hates-nice w
muddy-new to graf thread please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3300/3313904788_01b933418d.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3474/3313904792_779ea6d1ee.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3375/3313904794_4c51b1b7cb.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3456/3313904796_e90556bbc6.jpg

don't care if this is on the same page, bump this dope shit
and bump sheltr as well, shits funky fresh

[Syke1FTP]

sike (real one not me)
thats dope
except i dont like the bottom of the "i" i dont know why but other then that its tight =]
shelter i dont like the E so close to the L but thats just me
faze....those arent really simps its a piece(ish) thing some tags and ONE simp...and it looks like the same pic youve posted before....?
hal dope
tasty shits sick i love the lil hat ahaha

[B.S. POLICE]

some things i be's working on for all's yous goofballs dildos.

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6872/003hx6.jpg

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/7761/002og8.jpg

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/5092/001kb0.jpg

you better believe im bumpin this nasty shitttt

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

FINALLY GOT A NEW CAMERA
SOME NEW SHIT
http://i677.photobucket.com/albums/vv140/HITSFROMTHABONG_album/100_0241.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/mrrbk7.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/e7iddg.jpg

[KnoxIn]

http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/7712/p2283009.jpg

here are 2 flicks i dont really like the second one the F doesn't look like a F but still can i get some crits??

vandal- hella like the first one the fill is pretty dope the other 2 are good too all pretty damn clean

[what4joke...]

http://i44.tinypic.com/358aqvr.jpg
simps, new e? new word

[EST2007]

http://i44.tinypic.com/358aqvr.jpg
simps, new e? new word

i've never been a fan of mixing caps and lowercase. also, consistent letters will give it good flow.

[(SoS)Viruz]

My Sketch in Progess Crits?
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/P3010536.jpg

Faze- Stop with all the Connections and worry about your letters
Kake-Go a lil simpalar
Vamdal- Its alright, I as you just work on keepin your letters Consitant with one another.

[ToPHAT]

i havent done any graff drawings for about a year... but i made this one up when i was bored in class... what u think? it sez GRUB http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/1498/sspx0229.jpg

[JoseBuerto]

http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/7712/p2283009.jpg

here are 2 flicks i dont really like the second one the F doesn't look like a F but still can i get some crits??



Go much more simple. Practice your tags alot more, try working with all upper case instead and i like your sig

[sike_21]

virus- its pretty straight exept at first i thought that e was a p
tophat-uh clean it up some and maybe you got a good start
faze- do keyboard letters

its a bad pic really looks better in person
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/3-1-200970757PM.jpg

[Zase]

feeling the tp
just make the t more visible with dotted lines
fuse that shitt a lil ya know what i mean ?
the outline of the t make it a little bit go into the P and give it some dots
or a shadow with a hook that sticks trough the p
im not that much of a fan of the bottom of the P

okay since my explination is like crack

here quick ms paint thing
http://i40.tinypic.com/152f389.jpg

[Zase]

oh dude above ...
i read ur typing
now i realise its an E too
fix that cuzz now its a P

[(SoS)Viruz]

hahah. Yea I know I going to put the T infront of the E. And Im going to make the Bottom Extecion Longer to make it more like an E.

[what4joke...]

virus- its pretty straight exept at first i thought that e was a p
tophat-uh clean it up some and maybe you got a good start
faze- do keyboard letters

its a bad pic really looks better in person
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/3-1-200970757PM.jpg
it looks good to me, can u paint this style? or did your sketching progress faster like most people

[sike_21]

i can..but its mad shaky still need a lil more can control

[justin kayse]

Tear- i wouldn't make my letters so similar or overlap them as much but thats just me.
Sike- I would take out all the heart and swirl extension, the piece doesn't need them and they distract from the letters. Also i would make your "I" skinnier.

[.HATESONE.]

supppppp bitches i did this while i was watching andy dick show or leave it to beaver or something.the one with opey and the sherriff.so yeah it came out horrible....bu it probably would have regardless haha.anyways tell me how you like it or hate it.i dont give a fuck

http://i41.tinypic.com/2pr5gfs.jpg


tear-suggestion.on that e,you should bring the leg or whatever you call it and make it come out more.i dont know how to explain it.i suck at explaining things.

sike-not feelin the fill homie.not my taste i guess

vandal-like the first ak.

kake-ummmmm....i dont know what to say sorry.i like it tho.it has potential i say

faze-practice your writes some more.and scrap that black and yellow idea on the bottom of your page.i dont know what your going for but.just dont.sorry.



crits for me now??????

[RhodeIsland]

Hates <3 the bottom one

[.HATESONE.]

http://i44.tinypic.com/bgdbac.jpg


ASK ME ABOUT MY WEINER!

[Graff J up]

http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0047.jpg

im having trouble on the first letter which is a j

but is this good?

[Graff J up]

nice hates i like it

[RhodeIsland]

I do not see a ''J'' try drawing your keyboard

[.HATESONE.]

http://i44.tinypic.com/bgdbac.jpg


ASK ME ABOUT MY WEINER!

bumpin from the bottom pages of hell.

[Graff J up]

http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0047.jpg

im having trouble on the first letter which is a j

but is this good?

BUMPP

and yeah i said im trying to make a j its supposed to be jZEK
but i need to do the J

[B.S. POLICE]

yup that ish is nasttyy

[(SoS)Viruz]

My Sketch in Progess Crits?
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/P3010536.jpg

Faze- Stop with all the Connections and worry about your letters
Kake-Go a lil simpalar
Vamdal- Its alright, I as you just work on keepin your letters Consitant with one another.

Bump for Cirts didnt get alot.

[Graff J up]

virus i would work on the bottom of the e cause it looks like a P

[Germer]

tear, i dont know for sure, but it seems like you skipped over a chapter of basic sketching. you need to really learn bars and know how to come up with dynamic poses for each letter. your sketches are nice in that thyre uniform, and at first glance look like a nice style, but im sure you want to improve. they way to do that is keep bar width the same, and just focus on the nicest letter poses, with the best flow possible.

AKA trial and error x ALOT

[Aesir]

http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/6154/1010528ej0.jpg
^new shit
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/1176/1010529dl0.jpg
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/8045/1010530ol3.jpg
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/6670/1010533ap0.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4576/1010532xi3.jpg
http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/6873/1010535nw3.jpg
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7848/1010534xt2.jpg
^semi-old shit

[(SoS)Viruz]

tear, i dont know for sure, but it seems like you skipped over a chapter of basic sketching. you need to really learn bars and know how to come up with dynamic poses for each letter. your sketches are nice in that thyre uniform, and at first glance look like a nice style, but im sure you want to improve. they way to do that is keep bar width the same, and just focus on the nicest letter poses, with the best flow possible.

AKA trial and error x ALOT

You know what thats a good. Crit. But I do use bars. But instead of the Regualr Simps I diecided to Curve my Bars into more Flow-e style. But Simps is something I did on the Regualar/

[nazal]

I won't give out any crits cause I'm too toy for that shit....anyways a couple of flicks for talking.
http://kttns.org/duyyz
http://kttns.org/tdhy

[sike_21]

hates-that sniper is fire
grafj- 1 that shit is ugly 2 if thats a j its deff backwards
norse- i like the third one and th stickers at the bottom only
some more poop.. crits burns and complements are all welcomed l0l
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0163.jpg

[RhodeIsland]

Sike work on those colors man

[sike_21]

l0l bad? i used the random out the box technique

[Aesir]

Sike, I really love the letters but as ^ said the color scheme needs work.
Nazal, try not hide the 'Z' behind the A and move everything closer together.Oh, and work on your tag. Other than that you're doing pretty good.

EDIT: LOL @ outOfBox.Method

[PegCityBoy]

i didnt know how to esplain this other than by doing this
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d106/Jason_5159/sikecrit.jpg
those linesare all at diff angles try an keep em the same way as the 3d you started off right but then jus got lazy i guess i unno
also colours

[Sinonymous]

http://i733.photobucket.com/albums/ww339/sineh17/sin3.jpg
sin sketchy

[BigBlueViolence]

woooah my *****,
you need to start from scratch.

new to graff thread

[B.S. POLICE]

lol i saw that and shit myself

[Paint Refill]

http://i733.photobucket.com/albums/ww339/sineh17/sin3.jpg
sin sketchy




bro unless your from KC don't write sin, or sinz.

[Paint Refill]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd250/nakegraff1/005.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd250/nakegraff1/003.jpg


CRITS

[.HATESONE.]

sin and nuke...


http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185
this is the place for you yes?

[00-made-00]

Nuke is doing ok, he is useing bars, and not trying to do anything to advanced.
But sin does need that.
Sike the other sketch is way better than that.

[what4joke...]

LOL SIN WERE NOT PLAYING STACK NAPKINS, just do what nake did.

[.HATESONE.]

yeah nuke is using bars yes but they suck....no offense to you dude NAKE.sorry i was calling you nuke haha.anywho.idk i guess your right but it wouldnt hurt him to have a refresher course in bars lol...


on another note.B.S.,dude.this shit i got for you.....is sooooo sick.swear.your gonna be all like "romero thats the most beast thing youve ever done" and ima be all like "damn right" haha.seriously i brought out the copics niggha.swear.i havent used those damn things since i bought em(i know,ME buy something???) unfortunately all i have is yellow lmao so i hope you like that color homie.

[Eack]

"work", little battle on another forum, would like a bit of crits plz
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/9198/img0197.jpg

nake - keep running with bars, ull get the hang of it soon, its not bad
sin - bars

[.HATESONE.]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2pq5gxy.jpg

for that fool ohsnap...not finished yet tho i havent colored it but i decided to put it up in case i fuck it up( i suck at fills man haha) also its missing the drop still but its coming.


work.likin the colors.

[KnoxIn]

ok so i was wondering everyone says to draw and sketch before you paint and i haven't painted for like a year or so but when i go back to painting should i start with my like simple shit that i have drawn?

[.HATESONE.]

bump nigghas.

[sike_21]

peg city- i see what you sayin to bad it was before i sketched these up.
eack- fresh
and thats all on this page

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/penfreestyle.jpg

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

Knoxin-ya paint w/e the fuck you want jus go to paint at chill spots till you get your can control down then start bombin tha streets
sike-there both pretty dope i think

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

DRAWIN THIS HUGE SHIT OUT for my room ITS GUNNA SAY MARIJUANA BUT HEREs THE M and the A
http://i40.tinypic.com/23wl7ah.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/344s904.jpg

[diggitydoggz]

sike - i like the S and the E a lot... not really feeling the k though

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/7748/img000758zo6.jpg

[sike_21]

yea i ussually try and make the s and the e look alike
and try and make my i and k look alike

[NoCanControl]

bro unless your from KC don't write sin, or sinz.

thats stupid

[ToPHAT]

diggity dog- the only letter i dont like is the s
Paint Refill - I like how ur keepin it simple keep praticin those letters
sike- i like those pen sketches but the extentions on the bottom one (the S and the E) kinda ruin it
Eack- that shit is dope homie
... im tryin to mess around with this sketch... can i get any crits??
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/4708/sspx0239.jpg

[Zase]

http://i39.tinypic.com/znldat.jpg
i know i fucked the trow but thats because im an fake artist who blams the materials

anways i got a decent quick trow now
i needed that ... get me a cookie
oh and the pink piece is really dirty
also leaking paintmarkers and shit
fuck it
http://i44.tinypic.com/nfsbrc.jpg

im never statisfied with own works no homo

[(SoS)Viruz]

Yea Same here Zase,
But work on the Curve in your R make it Bigger or poke out more, Your Top Zase is Fresh, I'll give you props for that but the Bottle is a lil Week.

[Capo Izi]

New stuff and new throw....

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/15/l_cec26580067c4582b5e52e2343faca24.jpg

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/9/l_6bcabda925db4cc89534fd0130a765d3.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/8/l_a5f022a4bc8a4a68a0eeba22bca101f6.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/52/l_7f9004a172144e9f8ff5dc17f57f3d16.jpg

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/46/l_bad2970fd9e443079085643faaf14c67.jpg

[Backalley Abortion Doctor]

Zase, I like that. Your letters, and fills.

But they don't look like yours.

[niner1234]

what you think?
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/1372/cresstraight.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cresstraight.jpg)
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/cresstraight.jpg/1/w842.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img12/cresstraight.jpg/1/)

[niner1234]

double post...

[Zase]

that hurts alot

[.HATESONE.]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2pq5gxy.jpg

for that fool ohsnap...not finished yet tho i havent colored it but i decided to put it up in case i fuck it up( i suck at fills man haha) also its missing the drop still but its coming.


work.likin the colors.

bump for the crits negroes...idk i dont like the p or the a much buuuuuuttt waht yall think?

[Zase]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/zaseone/

is ma flickr with some old pieces .. u can see i use the same kinda letters diff structures

[Zase]

the letters are fine
dont focus too much on ur letters
just focus on the way they flow into eachother
loose letters can be tight as promnight
but if they dont flow the piece fails

use bars too fill dead spaces (bars of ur letters) give them swing
put some 3d on and it will look good

[denaaa]

some unfinished sketchess critss pleasee
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/sketch.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/hello017.jpg

[Capo Izi]

New stuff and new throw....

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/15/l_cec26580067c4582b5e52e2343faca24.jpg

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/9/l_6bcabda925db4cc89534fd0130a765d3.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/8/l_a5f022a4bc8a4a68a0eeba22bca101f6.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/52/l_7f9004a172144e9f8ff5dc17f57f3d16.jpg

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/46/l_bad2970fd9e443079085643faaf14c67.jpg

bump from last page


Zase-that shit is ILL
Snap-not bad, color and 3d that shit...

[niner1234]

what you think?
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/1372/cresstraight.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cresstraight.jpg)
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/cresstraight.jpg/1/w842.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img12/cresstraight.jpg/1/)

bump

[Zase]

letters are on point good
but the 3d is on holiday?
check ur es

[urmomsayshi]

zase- i luv ur style
denaa- simples brah
kapo- ur letters are not bad but i think if u went simpler they wud look a lot better
cres- dope simple
kapo- learn from cres
new style im workinz on
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm159/igraffix122/030220091742.jpg

[El Chupacabre]

Zase, I like that. Your letters, and fills.

But they don't look like yours.

Oh shit, I thought he was Kezia/Note.

[klic]

not so great, top of my S and A is pretty bad

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKPiece3.jpg

sliec - looks pretty good (some of the addons arent necessary) but your handstyle needs a lot of work

cres - looks fresh, fatten up the middle of your S

zase - looks dope, i like the ones with the uppercase A morre

[$IN30NE]

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/8902/cimg1947.jpg

crits please! and ive now changed my name to stutter but im just wondering what anyone thinks about this piece..

[RhodeIsland]

Personally i think its horrible

Please try doing simples

[ToPHAT]

some unfinished sketchess critss pleasee
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/sketch.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/hello017.jpg
try going allot simpler dont worry about connecting/ overlapping the letters just make big square letters that are in proportion with each other ...... kinda like this guy
what you think?
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/1372/cresstraight.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cresstraight.jpg)
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/cresstraight.jpg/1/w842.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img12/cresstraight.jpg/1/)
BUUUUUUUUUUUUMP... somebody tell me something they dont like about my sketch and how i can make it better!!! thx



http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/4708/sspx0239.jpg

[SONE.]

grub go to the "new to graff" forum. you need to learn bars. and do what you said yourself, go simple.

[ToPHAT]

grub go to the "new to graff" forum. you need to learn bars. and do what you said yourself, go simple.
bud... i aint "new to graff" i been in the game AT LEAST 3 years... i definatley dont think im good or anything i just draw for fun (used to paint.. then i got into mcing) ... i practise simps all the time... i guess it was wrong for me to think i should try something else... i know u think ur the shit but ill put ya dick in the dirt son!!

[whahappen?]

shitty sanker throw
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/5403/throw.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

not feeling the K, that's it.

[.HATESONE.]

bud... i aint "new to graff" i been in the game AT LEAST 3 years... i definatley dont think im good or anything i just draw for fun (used to paint.. then i got into mcing) ... i practise simps all the time... i guess it was wrong for me to think i should try something else... i know u think ur the shit but ill put ya dick in the dirt son!!

if thats the case i think you should probably quit the team homeboy.



ZING! srsly tho your full of shit.no one sucks that bad at 3 years.at least i hope not.ive only been writing for about a year and half.maybe..

[klic]

bud... i aint "new to graff" i been in the game AT LEAST 3 years... i definatley dont think im good or anything i just draw for fun (used to paint.. then i got into mcing) ... i practise simps all the time... i guess it was wrong for me to think i should try something else... i know u think ur the shit but ill put ya dick in the dirt son!!

you meant days not years right? haha im just joking with you.. but really, dont tell somebody to lose the connections when yours are ten times worse

[whahappen?]

not feeling the K, that's it.
word that k is embaressing
bump that cres simple, more of those

[NoCanControl]

bud... i aint "new to graff" i been in the game AT LEAST 3 years... i definatley dont think im good or anything i just draw for fun (used to paint.. then i got into mcing) ... i practise simps all the time... i guess it was wrong for me to think i should try something else... i know u think ur the shit but ill put ya dick in the dirt son!!

stick to rappin kid.

[RhodeIsland]

lol come on i havnt even been writin for 3 years

[WoeInfinite]

less bullshit, more black books.

[niner1234]

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/7238/0301091859a.th.jpg (http://img7.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0301091859a.jpg)

[WoeInfinite]

lookin good dude.
keep it up, work on evening letters.
like how your C gets a little thinner towards the bottom., same with the S.

[niner1234]

word thanks... im drawing something up as we speak well see if it gets up tonight...

[SONE.]

bud... i aint "new to graff" i been in the game AT LEAST 3 years... i definatley dont think im good or anything i just draw for fun (used to paint.. then i got into mcing) ... i practise simps all the time... i guess it was wrong for me to think i should try something else... i know u think ur the shit but ill put ya dick in the dirt son!!
Whoa, way to go on the defensive. i was just helpin out there kiddy. Calm yourself, and before you tell me ur better than me, post something half deece.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090302.jpg


I cant think up a fill, any suggestions?

[WoeInfinite]

i see pink letters, baby blue shadow.
go for it.
if it comes out bad, re do it.
:D
i should be sketching right now, im not doing anything else.

[SONE.]

bump bitches [/b]
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/5944/img0576yh4.th.jpg (http://img242.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0576yh4.jpg)
painted it w stox[/QUOTE]

bringin up some old tophat. shit, put me in my place.

[Tokenkaligreens]

lol and im im sorry saying stock tips makes you look more toy...if you cant rock a simple peice with stocks stop painting.

sone rasta colors....

cres keep rocking them straihgts till its 2nd nature.

[SONE.]

what do you mean rasta colours? like yellow and green?

[Publik Enemy#7]

Sone- nice ish, not a fan of that big ass extension on the S tho.

here is a 2 letter throw Ive been working on today. what do you think.
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1236073630.jpg

[Kester]

Simple
http://up33.siz.co.il/up1/rr2jnwnmy5hy.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)

[00-made-00]

Kester's got the idea.
Some simples.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/P3030023.jpg
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/P3030027.jpg
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/P3030028.jpg
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/P3030029.jpg

[sex without condoms]

yo pilo you down for an exchnge?

[Eack]

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/4918/img0188a.jpg
no special fill, working on lettering
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1917/img0161y.jpg

throws and tags


made =nice simps
kester = i like the flow it has

[Kester]

nice throw Eack
00-made-00, outline exchange?

[Sanc_one]

@Public enemy: Dope throw man..
@Eack: Piece would be very nice if you remove some extensions.

My sketch...dont have an idea how to fill it...Suggestions?
http://i358.photobucket.com/albums/oo22/Proof_one/IMG_5748.jpg

[urmomsayshi]

shit this page is lookin fresh
sanc- id say use green in the fill especially on the drips to make it look grimy
eack- i like the base structure but i think the extension kill it... lose em and itll look good...
piloh- good simples juss not a fan of ur fills
kester- nice structure

[urmomsayshi]

new style im workinz on
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm159/igraffix122/030220091742.jpg
bump cud it got no crittzies

[$IN30NE]

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/8902/cimg1947.jpg

crits please! and ive now changed my name to stutter but im just wondering what anyone thinks about this piece..

more critisism please...i wanna know what anyone thinks and what i can do to improve

[B.S. POLICE]

keep your bars the same size, go a little simpler dont worry about fills jsut yet pay attention to letters

[respERATION]

sine-make all your letters the sam thickness
urmom-i like it but i'm not sure whatit says :S
hate me:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/02-03-09_2014.jpg

[urmomsayshi]

$IN30NE- give crits to get em son... and go simple for now
resp- i have a hard time telling apart ur main bars from extension, therfore making it hard to read... try making the main bars bigger and stand out more
it says SUEZ, and yea the handy is pretty bad lol, normally i write SEWZ

[$IN30NE]

alright thanks guys..
urmom- im not really a fan of that style but its looking alright

[$IN30NE]

alright thanks guys..
urmom- im not really a fan of that style but its looking alright

[ToPHAT]

you meant days not years right? haha im just joking with you.. but really, dont tell somebody to lose the connections when yours are ten times worse

if thats the case i think you should probably quit the team homeboy.



ZING! srsly tho your full of shit.no one sucks that bad at 3 years.at least i hope not.ive only been writing for about a year and half.maybe..

haha u guys are a bunch of fags!! I HAVE dont graff for 3 years (with long on and off breaks) sure its not my thing, but I do it for fun... and when it comes to any other element in hip hop except breaking I WILL EAT YOUR FOOD!


stick to rappin kid.

haha what the fuck u think ive been doing dumbass I freestyle on a dialy basis, enter battles all the time, and play shows.. in fact im openin up for D12 this april and battling at North By North East festival in June for $500 so you can suck my dick!! i hope u become successfull on bombing science forums u fucking pathetic loser

[B.S. POLICE]

kid stfu already, you suck at graff shit happens sit the fuck down and work at getting better or get the fuck out and keep rapping

[urmomsayshi]

ToPhat- first off, ur on this forum too so if we are losers by being on it, then so are you...
ive been writing since june so i dont see how u after 3 years are still producing that kind of work
and even if u are, thats okay, not everyone is a wiz at it, juss dont talk so much shit on here, comprende?

[B.S. POLICE]

yeah youll go far with that kind of additude.

specially in rap, i hope you get popped for that big moulth of yours



nah nah let me guess, youve already been shot like 4 times and that shit aint shit right?
you aint shit homie, step the fuck off

[ToPHAT]

im trying not to spam ur forum by posting shit talking instead of pics..... so stop provolking me BS Police cuz ill herb u out

[B.S. POLICE]

i dont give a fuck this is the toy forum and were allowed to talk as much as we want here. i post pics here on the reg and peeps know who i am. Now YOU, you aint shiiitttttt

[b0gus]

havent picked up graffiti in a couple months

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q220/scum11/P1020518.jpg

[ToPHAT]

i will dip my falas in Canadian maple syrup and feed it to your sister

[philaeagles611]

what you think?
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/1372/cresstraight.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cresstraight.jpg)
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/cresstraight.jpg/1/w842.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img12/cresstraight.jpg/1/)
do you got to bcths?

[ESKiMO2]

WHAT IS LOOOOOOVE?
http://fc39.deviantart.com/fs42/f/2009/062/9/f/What_is_Love__by_Rhino_fish.jpg

Boges- Flows well but the balance is a bit off. If you separated the two bars that are kind of jagged on the B it would be ill.

Resp- I'm not going to criticize the style (we need more unique styles like that these days) but the only advice I can give is to make a few of the bars a bit straighter.

SinOne- Do your simples.

Suez/Urmom- It looks pretty cool. Just try to clean it up a bit.

[sike_21]

tophat of a pussy shut the fuck up your not hard your graff is shit and if you think soo low of this forum dont post you getting all hurt off words you read on the internet from people you have never seen and prolly never will... fucking idiots l0l

[ESKiMO2]

Haha Sike I knew you'd say something about that beef soon enough

[(SoS)Viruz]

haha u guys are a bunch of fags!! I HAVE dont graff for 3 years (with long on and off breaks) sure its not my thing, but I do it for fun... and when it comes to any other element in hip hop except breaking I WILL EAT YOUR FOOD!



haha what the fuck u think ive been doing dumbass I freestyle on a dialy basis, enter battles all the time, and play shows.. in fact im openin up for D12 this april and battling at North By North East festival in June for $500 so you can suck my dick!! i hope u become successfull on bombing science forums u fucking pathetic loser

Ummmmm......Your Postin in the Toy Thread....

That All Im going to say and Im going to leave it at that. You guys get my point

[$IN30NE]

eskimo im like that...i like how everything flowss...but i think i wulda liked to see some 3-d

[$IN30NE]

meant to say..im liking that haha

[Tokenkaligreens]

yo tophat stfu
b4 bs popo fucks your ass up...

gay ass faggot arguing on a thread
while half these toys brag about kicking your mom' s fat ass outta bed.

oh ya ive been in this game for 3 years iM OPENING FOR FRESH PRINCE NEXT MONTH.
wwhile dont you post up your ill lyrics a clip of your rapping dude, and shut us all up with your awesomeness.... otheriwse stfu and grab a pen and start sketching and learn your place.



sewz looks good just not a big fan of that style

sin3 or w/e worry about your letters right now rock some simples till you got them on point

resp kinda hard for me to see all the letters in that sketch but it looks like its ight the p is a lil hard for me to see and again not my cup of tea style wise but it looks good color that ish.

bogus welcomeback dude ( i think you posted here b4) nice stylish simple bro.

[sike_21]

Haha Sike I knew you'd say something about that beef soon enough
you know how its babygirl l0l i like the what is love but idk the"what" is kinda slacking


tophat of a pussy shut the fuck up your not hard your graff is shit and if you think soo low of this forum dont post you getting all hurt off words you read on the internet from people you have never seen and prolly never will... fucking idiots l0l



and just so fag bag can read it...Now every one ignore the no one who is know as TOPHAT

[RhodeIsland]

Hy guyes im opeing for Eazy E next weekend
and i will beat everyone here at the ''4 elements of hip hop'' exept Braking, Mcing, rapping and graffing!!1!111!!

[respERATION]

sine-make all your letters the sam thickness
urmom-i like it but i'm not sure whatit says :S
hate me:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/02-03-09_2014.jpg

BUMP


can't we all just get along?

[niner1234]

do you got to bcths?

not sure what that is but i think hs if for high school? and if so no cause im not in those years anymore....

[philaeagles611]

not sure what that is but i think hs if for high school? and if so no cause im not in those years anymore....

double post..

[philaeagles611]

not sure what that is but i think hs if for high school? and if so no cause im not in those years anymore....

yeah, it is a highschool, its the school i go to, and a freshman there writes cres, figured you might be the same person...guess not.

[justin kayse]

Resp- no offense, but Holy Mother Of Extensions! You made like a double R, and i can't even see what part of the R is looping through the E, and the P barely looks like a letter. I'm not trying to dis you, ive seen stuff from you before that was way better, but that piece was just a step in the wrong direction. Apart from the extensions and stuff, i wouldn't cover the E up as much.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

toPHAT your a fucking bitch ass faggot D12 hasnt touched the music charts in bout 5 years so take ur shitty lil deal out of here fag boy
resp i got no idea where it says resp lol it looks like a bunch of extensions im jus not feelin it

[niner1234]

...

[.HATESONE.]

haha u guys are a bunch of fags!! I HAVE dont graff for 3 years (with long on and off breaks) sure its not my thing, but I do it for fun... and when it comes to any other element in hip hop except breaking I WILL EAT YOUR FOOD!

(btw who the fuck says that?)



HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHA!!!!


battle me bitch.

[ESKiMO2]

^ Dun dun DUUUNNN (Wreck him Hates)

Marina (for my girl)
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/7844/marinam.jpg

Crits...
Well nothing unless you want me to criticize your talking.

[/DaNk\]

^^ pretty dope dude just work on that R

[RhodeIsland]

I'm not really feeling that R i think the curvy part is to small but overall i like it..

Btw what kinda markers did you use to color it?