Tot Black Books

[soba06]

ye i think so

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^ you should no u have that shit in ur sig.

[soba06]

o shit haha good point but i saw tha on the intanet n found it funny no1 else does tho lol

[HyPnO-=MTS=-]

alight whatever thanks anyway i got way more words then i know its too many i dont care i just wanted to know if any of those are out there and who the fuck cares if its a pokemon wtf is that about i know ur prolly into that but its queer

toon jus show me some of ur shit and i wont say anything if its good if not shut face

[soba06]

dnt grief pokemon (he said in a sarcastic way)

[AMAZ tbscrew]

Originally posted by HyPnO-=MTS=-@Mar 21 2006, 04:03 PM
alight whatever thanks anyway i got way more words then i know its too many i dont care i just wanted to know if any of those are out there and who the fuck cares if its a pokemon wtf is that about i know ur prolly into that but its queer

toon jus show me some of ur shit and i wont say anything if its good if not shut face
toon can probly burn u.... :ph34r:

[HyPnO-=MTS=-]

toon can burn dick

[c0ld]

Originally posted by c0ld+Mar 21 2006, 02:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (c0ld @ Mar 21 2006, 02:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-c0ld@Mar 21 2006, 02:26 PM
sketched this one at school 2day.
http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/197/j2qw.jpg


critz?
*bump*

feedback plz [/b][/quote]
*BUMP*
emeffin critz plz?
i got work in an hour.

[soba06]

it looks like a cloud

[AMAZ tbscrew]

*sigh i dont like ur style but thats just my opinon..alot of people dont like my style either.....if u get rid of the clould shit and try adding 3d somehow it mite look hot.

hypno or w.e im sure u can burn his dick...<_< idiot..if i could id post his shit up for him but i cant rite now...chek the latest 5 topics and chek the battle he was just in. pce.

[HyPnO-=MTS=-]

was it that hard thats all i was askin for

[c0ld]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Mar 21 2006, 04:11 PM
*sigh i dont like ur style but thats just my opinon..alot of people dont like my style either.....if u get rid of the clould shit and try adding 3d somehow it mite look hot.

jw
how do you do 3d w/ bubble letters?

[soba06]

its same as u wud with uva letters make sure all ur lines go same way tho not evrywere

[c0ld]

heres a quick one I did. Ill post a better one when I get off.
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/4315/j0010bq.jpg

[What Happened to the Letters?]

Originally posted by HyPnO&#045;=MTS=&#045;@Mar 21 2006, 03:20 PM
ALRIGHT IM JUST GETTIN INTO THIS SHIT IMA SEND IN SOME THROWS AND SKETCHES SOON AS I CAN USE A SCANNER SO BE LOOKING OUT

I KNOW EVERYBODY SAYS THAT THERES AT LEAST A COUPLE PPL WRITING EVERY WORD AND SHIT LIKE THAT SO JUST LEMME KNOW IF ANYONE AT ALL HAS SEEN THESE BEFORE JUS WANNA KNOW

I WRITE HYPNO
PACE
KRILLS
EZ(someone told me they&#39;ve seen ez somewhere else but im not positive)

whatever let me know
myboy on this site writes eze...and its nto if weve seen it, its just that basically someone has taken very name in the world throughout all writers full careers...but what matters is not to be stealign a heads name...liek if you cnat find it on goole image searching "(insert name) graff" then its likely you can use the name...

[Rend]

for a battle:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/58.jpg

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Dude, hypno, you just got here, you havent posted any pics, and youre already talkin shit??

wtf man?

Not a good start......

but to anyone else-

I got some "simpler" ones on 566. I&#39;m not into bumpin my own shit, but id like some crits.

-Wheeze

[Puffer]

i came up with a new throw today, wondering if i should get up with it, and crits or comments?

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/4723/askbombs7ya.th.png (http://img505.imageshack.us/my.php?image=askbombs7ya.png)

[meanaceOfsociety]

THROWS LOOK FRESH PUFFER

[SINoner]

^^ word

[beefgerky]

Originally posted by meanaceOfsociety@Mar 21 2006, 07:15 PM
THROWS LOOK FRESH PUFFER
NOT REALLY.

[AoAssis]

its ok nothing FRESH

[RollTRS]

I like em, I&#39;d paint &#39;em.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

we no u would paint it....u snake wana be

[neer]

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h264/neer__/neer4.jpg

my new throw

please crit

[Rend]

wut do u think of the throw wen it gets abit more bubble. which of the two is better?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/59.jpg

btw, wut should represent the holes for the r and d? right now there #.

[neer]

i like the bubble ALOT rend

[yerp]

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/9564/pieceone8qx.th.jpg (http://img106.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pieceone8qx.jpg)

yea i fucked up the 3d cause i started goin one way and then stopped paying attention comin from the other side

[RollTRS]

Actually, since it changes up in the middle, it looks pretty good. I dig.

[Puffer]

Originally posted by Rend@Mar 21 2006, 09:10 PM
wut do u think of the throw wen it gets abit more bubble. which of the two is better?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/59.jpg

btw, wut should represent the holes for the r and d? right now there #.
i like the bottom one more, and for the hole thing anyhting like a dot o a &#036; , wahtever looks good

[HyPnO-=MTS=-]

alright ya i checked to see if anything popped up on google but i didnt see shit so whatever

[AoAssis]

freestyle on a slap:

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/6950/picture2587tu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[+HyBriD+]

nice loki but make ur Ls look better, they look like V&#39;s

lol i rememebr 3 yrs ago when i used Loki as my name lol

[RollTRS]

Ok, I&#39;m still working on new throws, so here&#39;s what I&#39;ve come up with now.

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/2927/03210622190ju.jpg

Is this worth continuing on? Crits, comments, help?

[kill]

Originally posted by AoAssis@Mar 21 2006, 11:05 PM
freestyle on a slap:

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/6950/picture2587tu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the r and the e need work
make capital r

[c0ld]

Originally posted by c0ld@Mar 21 2006, 04:46 PM

http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/4315/j0010bq.jpg
*bump* aaaand heres another quick one.

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/6159/j0022nb.jpg


ill do another neater one tommorrow.

crits?

[nena]

http://i1.tinypic.com/s0xt07.jpg
http://i1.tinypic.com/s0xthv.jpg

[+HyBriD+]

on teh first one nena its good but us hould make teh E & A same size as teh Ns

[RollTRS]

Originally posted by RollTRS@Mar 21 2006, 11:22 PM
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/2927/03210622190ju.jpg
Crits? Comments? Help?

[+HyBriD+]

w0rk on that last letter / it dosnt flow with teh rest

[SuprTnr2]

TRS, not bad work with defining the letters a little bit more then try painting it.

[RollTRS]

Thanks. What do you mean by "defining the letters"? Like, could you give me an example?

[SINoner]

traditional flash bird.. not really graff.. but dope

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/8185/tradbird2fw.jpg

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by kill+Mar 21 2006, 11:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kill @ Mar 21 2006, 11:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AoAssis@Mar 21 2006, 11:05 PM
freestyle on a slap:

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/6950/picture2587tu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the r and the e need work
make capital r [/b][/quote]
i think the E is the best and so does Gerk, so ima keep the E, but i agree on makin the R capital but im sitll workin on it, cuz its hard to make it capital trust me i tryed but i will keep tryin thanks

[kill]

i thought the bottom of the e was part of the r

[Volume_one_]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2229.jpg

MY STICKERS ARE IN YEAH&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[SINoner]

that "m" looks like shit

[MUSASHI]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/militarybattle.jpg

[Volume_one_]

Originally posted by SINoner@Mar 22 2006, 12:35 AM
that "m" looks like shit
Yeah so does the E
i plan on re-doing them

[kill]

Originally posted by MUSASHI@Mar 22 2006, 12:36 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/militarybattle.jpg
it hilarious how ur 33 and u draw airplanes


why is the bottom right side like totally black buh the parts r grey?
if its suppose to be a shadow than it sucks

[flclnaruto1213]

something i did just now, real quick little simple thing i guess

crits
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/8958/sketcher0216rc.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

oh and thats a first attempt at a little character ive been doodling..tell me whatcha think

[meanaceOfsociety]

somthing i whipped up "crits"? or comments?
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/1972/mostagbubles20mj.th.jpg (http://img62.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mostagbubles20mj.jpg)

[MUSASHI]

it hilarious how ur 33 and u draw airplanes

And I suppose there is an age limit on such things...It&#39;s for that military batlle...

thanx for noticing...the word "then" would be used in this sentence...I&#39;ll drive today then you drive tomorrow(then it sux)...than would be used like this...other than your lack of funds you could buy a car

[-~->LOKI<-~-]

What throw do you guys think is better? I&#39;m gonna try and work with them both though. Peace&#33;

http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9678/loki123hx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/438/loki85iz.jpg

[rek]

yyy

[xDISMALx]

thats pretty dope but a lot of people write wreck.reck.rek

[Dek Da Damaja]

http://sp1.fotologs.net/photo/33/41/12/destro333/1142831270_f.jpg

[flclnaruto1213]

crits anyone?
on my thing earlier this page?

[pitodamfmp]

that fund piece is nice, nice letter structure and whatnot, i like it very much.


any crits on me throwie?

also 2 attempts at a character, the C reminds me of a snail shell so there he is, the snail. only hatched to show he&#39;d be a diff color in a real throw.

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/3782/throw0026ue.th.jpg (http://img136.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throw0026ue.jpg)

cant decide whether the snail will be on his back or right side up...

[RollTRS]

The snail in the C is dope, keep that&#33;

[Ume]

Originally posted by kill@Mar 22 2006, 02:14 AM
why is the bottom right side like totally black buh the parts r grey?
if its suppose to be a shadow than it sucks
have you ever seen those plane&#39;s before? i didn&#39;t think so. go look up something on stealth bomber&#39;s and you&#39;ll see tha how the shadow goes...


awesome drawing mush.

[neer]

^^ amen to that

[AlmoSt]

look down

[AlmoSt]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c71/Bent449/P3220745.jpg



got the whole word on there now, check it out, i think this is sorta basic, but theres a lot of stuff i could do to tweak this style

[AlmoSt]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c71/Bent449/P3220747.jpg


final stage, watta ya think

[Tanner]

w00t
&#092;
---

[pitodamfmp]

i like it rek, but what does it say? rekcn?, oh wait, that&#39;s an o? rekon? either way it&#39;s fresh, just close up the O a little more i think

[AlmoSt]

ya rekon, thanks for the positive feedback...keep it comin

[SiLeNt-BoB]

http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/3531/imag00086fm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

comments just tryin to get some nice straigh letter now..was freestyle biro moment dont really like the bottom one i like the top one

[toxus]

nice clean letter s.bob,
i like the bottom one the most...

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060322/11/0/a/2/0a2cbdf97db65a9ca0ca5682355b471a200603220_full.jpg
any comments???

[SiLeNt-BoB]

the H & A r nice but u need to get the R & F to the same style...

you should try doing what i did just go for simple but styled letter

[toxus]

yeah, chears for the comment, i know were your going. The R and F dont flow together... i&#39;ll work onit.

[Tae]

http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/4610/dilae16xx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Detroit]

Originally posted by AlmoSt@Mar 22 2006, 11:18 AM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c71/Bent449/P3220745.jpg



got the whole word on there now, check it out, i think this is sorta basic, but theres a lot of stuff i could do to tweak this style
try to keep the letters the same size

[Detroit]

Originally posted by Tae@Mar 22 2006, 03:15 PM
http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/4610/dilae16xx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
start simpler, I cant tell what that is between d and a

[c0ld]

repost
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/4315/j0010bq.jpg
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/6159/j0022nb.jpg

aaaand adding more
this ones a new word style im working on. I likthe bottom one best.
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/2586/j0036qm.jpg
and another(bad) attempt at 3D
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/9154/j0042it.jpg
and heres the last one. ignore that mess on the bottom
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/24/j0059ha.jpg




feedback? crits? comments?

[yerp]

Originally posted by yerp@Mar 21 2006, 09:51 PM
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/9564/pieceone8qx.th.jpg (http://img106.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pieceone8qx.jpg)

yea i fucked up the 3d cause i started goin one way and then stopped paying attention comin from the other side
any crits, feedback, etc?

[rek]

tttttt

[pitodamfmp]

Originally posted by pitodamfmp@Mar 22 2006, 08:08 AM
that fund piece is nice, nice letter structure and whatnot, i like it very much.


any crits on me throwie?

also 2 attempts at a character, the C reminds me of a snail shell so there he is, the snail. only hatched to show he&#39;d be a diff color in a real throw.

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/3782/throw0026ue.th.jpg (http://img136.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throw0026ue.jpg)

cant decide whether the snail will be on his back or right side up...
can i bump for some criticism?

[hello2006]

u can, work harder on ur stuff kido

[Tae]

Thanks Detroit but when you say simpler could you be more specific, like do you mean simpler overlapping, letter structure, extensions on the D and E, or something else?

http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/4610/dilae16xx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[joker00]

http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0046pu.jpg

^ jsut a throw wut ya think?

[joker00]

Originally posted by c0ld@Mar 22 2006, 03:37 PM
repost
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/4315/j0010bq.jpg
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/6159/j0022nb.jpg

aaaand adding more
this ones a new word style im working on. I likthe bottom one best.
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/2586/j0036qm.jpg
and another(bad) attempt at 3D
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/9154/j0042it.jpg
and heres the last one. ignore that mess on the bottom
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/24/j0059ha.jpg




feedback? crits? comments?
try it bigger and more blockish first then go 2 wut style that is goin 2 b hopefully this is a constructive comment and u try it

[.:sern:.]

any comments/suggestions?&#33;? try not to be too harsh
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/1797/efq1sc.jpg

[joker00]

do not have all those add ons and dont connect ur letters

http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0046pu.jpg
^wut u think of mine

[beefgerky]

RIGHT CURLY PENIS LEFT CURLY PENIS. SIDEWAYS SMILE HOLE.

sern. start simple.

[joker00]

:lol: <_< wut bout mine?

[Puffer]

Originally posted by SiLeNt&#045;BoB@Mar 22 2006, 01:27 PM
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/3531/imag00086fm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

comments just tryin to get some nice straigh letter now..was freestyle biro moment dont really like the bottom one i like the top one
i love both of these, put the bottom one up , they are both simple but so dope

[Kingz514]

yeh SiLeNt-BoB
both of those are dope

where u from? cuz i think theres a kane around where i live

[chill]

rek im feelin that peace and kane i wouldnt use that name lol but the simples look damn good
quick throwie wit shitty markers
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/203/throwup0ly.th.jpg (http://img160.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwup0ly.jpg)

http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/7545/throwup29et.th.jpg (http://img501.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwup29et.jpg)

crits/advice would be appreciated

[flclnaruto1213]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Mar 22 2006, 01:50 AM
something i did just now, real quick little simple thing i guess

crits
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/8958/sketcher0216rc.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

oh and thats a first attempt at a little character ive been doodling..tell me whatcha think
bump

[ghostbusta5]

thats shits tight....haah I like the character....

[flclnaruto1213]

thanks

[RollTRS]

I was bored outta my mind in class, so I grabbed a work packet and started to draw.
Does this karak look like something to keep working on/with?

http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/1940/03220611081pc.jpg

[AMAZ tbscrew]

no

[meanaceOfsociety]

any crits on my first throws? theese are my first obviously as you can tell which one is better #1 or 2?http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/3727/mosthrows8pz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[ghostbusta5]

haha i totally saw that one coming

[Rend]

what do u guys think of these stencils. i just want to know if they are good before making more.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01345.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01348.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01349.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01347.jpg

[meanaceOfsociety]

Originally posted by meanaceOfsociety@Mar 22 2006, 07:53 PM
any crits on my first throws? theese are my first obviously as you can tell which one is better #1 or 2?http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/3727/mosthrows8pz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Hey please crits for my first throwies EVER 1 or 2?

[Sluts_r_us]

yo fund im likein that alot....color in the 3-d cuz its kinda hard to distinguish the letters from the 3d at some parts

[505 artist]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213+Mar 22 2006, 07:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (flclnaruto1213 @ Mar 22 2006, 07:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-flclnaruto1213@Mar 22 2006, 01:50 AM
something i did just now, real quick little simple thing i guess

crits
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/8958/sketcher0216rc.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

oh and thats a first attempt at a little character ive been doodling..tell me whatcha think
bump [/b][/quote]
i like it only the d is a lil weird looking and that karak is triped out B)

[Paint Magic]

those stencils r sick

[joker00]

Originally posted by chill@Mar 22 2006, 07:17 PM
rek im feelin that peace and kane i wouldnt use that name lol but the simples look damn good
quick throwie wit shitty markers
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/203/throwup0ly.th.jpg (http://img160.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwup0ly.jpg)

http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/7545/throwup29et.th.jpg (http://img501.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwup29et.jpg)

crits/advice would be appreciated
yo ur style is a lil off like u got 2 diff styles in there like there is no space in the last letter and the others thier are but idk i like ur throw the 1 wit out color looks better 2 me


try 2 make all ur letter follow the same rul/style wut eva u wanna call it

[Aer]

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y113/wspaudio/IMG_1098.jpg

Some shit.

[cess!]

Aoassis i think you casn go somewhere with that style..
Fund i like it

sashi thats a cool bomber, i dunno why kills bitchin...

[meanaceOfsociety]

Please crit my first colored throw-uphttp://img228.imageshack.us/img228/8090/newbomb3xe.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Z FUSE]

loose the crack looking things. bubbles don&#39;t crack. and those drips are terrible.

[flclnaruto1213]

ohh cool suggestion sluts, i just did the 3d black and it looks way better

thanks

i cant get flix quite yet..camera is bein annoying >:[

[What Happened to the Letters?]

Originally posted by Rend@Mar 22 2006, 08:38 PM
what do u guys think of these stencils. i just want to know if they are good before making more.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01345.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01348.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01349.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01347.jpg
tehse 3d ones are dope...so simple yet soo fressh

[neer]

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h264/neer__/neer5.jpg

new colored throw

PLEASE CRIT

[Aer]

Originally posted by meanaceOfsociety@Mar 22 2006, 09:27 PM
Please crit my first colored throw-uphttp://img228.imageshack.us/img228/8090/newbomb3xe.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
letter structures not so good, try and keep them all the same size, those cracks don&#39;t look to good, and just generally clean shit up.

[Aer]

Originally posted by Aer@Mar 22 2006, 09:11 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y113/wspaudio/IMG_1098.jpg

Some shit.
Make that sexy body go

bump

bump

bump

[neer]

Originally posted by Aer+Mar 22 2006, 09:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Aer @ Mar 22 2006, 09:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-meanaceOfsociety@Mar 22 2006, 09:27 PM
Please crit my first colored throw-uphttp://img228.imageshack.us/img228/8090/newbomb3xe.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
letter structures not so good, try and keep them all the same size, those cracks don&#39;t look to good, and just generally clean shit up. [/b][/quote]
dont try to make it look "pretty" before you can write it really well

clean it up

[meanaceOfsociety]

Thanks 2 all the people who critted i appreciate it heres another 1 keep in mind I did this before any 1 critted so yah
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/1908/2ndbomb5il.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Slushi]

Keep workin on ur letters and make the drips just a simple line going straight down.

[neer]

i never get any crits

[MUSASHI]

Neer That throw with the blue fill is yumi...look mat this real quick cuz I&#39;m fixxin to go and paint it up


http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/p1.jpg

[neer]

mush that throw is sick as hell

deff paint it and pm or post a pic

thanks for the crit too

its an honour hearing that from you

[ghostbusta5]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/temo244444.jpg

ya ignore the forcefield my bro was dicking around wit the pictures

[ghostbusta5]

P.S Mush that is a tight throw

[neer]

you stole my e


well not really its quite a common e

[c0ld]

Originally posted by neer@Mar 22 2006, 09:47 PM
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h264/neer__/neer5.jpg

new colored throw

PLEASE CRIT
well imo you should work on the coloration n make it easier to read. also try capital e&#39;s cause i cant hardly tell what those are

[neer]

the coloration was a fuck up

[ghostbusta5]

ya i was just dickin around with a few ideas and i liked that one the most

[neer]

the e looks better then mine so maby we can share it haha

[ghostbusta5]

haha alright :lol:

[neer]

your throw has actually helped me

i think i need to make my e&#39;s shorter and fatter that way theyre actually readable

[MUSASHI]

thanx yall..if it turns out right it will be dope as shit..wish me luck on this one

[SINoner]

last 2 pages = shit

[Blak-T]

heres some of my sketchs, camera suck but it&#39;s all i got right now.
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0014.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0002.jpghttp://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0007.jpg

[meanaceOfsociety]

Originally posted by Blak&#045;T@Mar 22 2006, 10:56 PM
heres some of my sketchs, camera suck but it&#39;s all i got right now.
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0014.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0002.jpghttp://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0007.jpg
Im liking it BUT im LOVING the character seriously nice&#33;

[flclnaruto1213]

filled the 3d black
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/4166/sketcher2076ho.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and heres a more wierdish simple
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/9044/sketcher2063gq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i did kind of a sloppy job but w/e

cris?

[meanaceOfsociety]

Hey this is my new and improved throw-up crits or comments 2 see the diff. look 2 the last page or 2
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/5948/mosthrowie6ng.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Blak-T]

flcl.....nice and clean diggin it

[>skea<]

flclnaturo1213- first ones pretty sik

and menace of society..reakky work on ur handstyle

well i figured id post my latest stuf
http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/486/graffs0017fk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4774/graffs0032st.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

new throwie
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/8361/graffs0041va.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

need some crits

[neer]

MOS loose the " marks and work your hand a bit

its coming though

[meanaceOfsociety]

nice skea yah i like suck at my handstyle I don&#39;t really know how to learn it lol that sounds dumb I know. heres a new 1 that I just did crits or comments?
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/3746/3rd4iz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Rend]

for a one on one battle:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/60.jpg

http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...=ST&f=7&t=11671 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?act=ST&f=7&t=11671)

[ghostbusta5]

thats tight...and your stencils were sweet to

[meanaceOfsociety]

this took 10 mins I was bored/fucked up on 3D
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/8024/blu0aq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[kill]

rend put more thought into the letters cus u always have sick backgrounds buh the letters have like 2 colors

blu or bla
wow u suck
ur 3d is off
the letters suck
there r birds flyin in ur letters
ur tag has more arrows than letters

[Volume_one_]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/M543ine.jpg

feed back?

[rek]

probaly gonna do this for the spring training battle. first try of the season so i wanna keep it clean and simple, cut it off at the bottom. would love some crit, advice especially on color scheme. figure 2-3 colors in fill, black drop and a forcefiled.

[rek]

nice stuff vol 1, simple move/technique repeated on long letter schemes come out lookin tight when executed precisely like you did

[Volume_one_]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2258.jpg
I just added a 3D to it and i&#39;m going to ink it and color it but i just dont feel like doing that right now

[Volume_one_]

I like that for the spring training battle I would say perpule blue and black would be pritty clean

[xDISMALx]

yeah that sounds like a sick color scheme and maybe some dark dark blood red if your using dark purple and blue if you even go with those colors

[rek]

yeah, maybe a plum inner liner with a light(er) blue fill, black drop and a pink forcefield ..... or hvae the light color as the inner outine which is always nice

[xDISMALx]

yeah that sounds dope

[mr.T]

http://home.no.net/ramsesk/trem25.jpg

any crits? :X

[RollTRS]

Not bad, the E is a Cope bite, but not too bad. Try to avoid using just one sharp point on one letter, and having all the rest round, (like on the R)

[Dek Da Damaja]

http://sp1.fotologs.net/photo/33/41/12/destro333/1142831270_f.jpg

[neer]

Originally posted by RollTRS@Mar 23 2006, 07:33 AM
Not bad, the E is a Cope bite, but not too bad. Try to avoid using just one sharp point on one letter, and having all the rest round, (like on the R)
how is it a cope bite?

thats the most generic e ever

[AlmoSt]

here is my new style, i put on some add ons, idk if i like em, but i wanna c wat u guys think of it

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c71/Bent449/P3230754.jpg

[neer]

i think if your gunna do the whole broken apart thing you need to get the letters more... together?

some of them are super fat some are super skinny

some super tall some super short

letter structure in general i suppose

other ten that im diggin it

[AlmoSt]

wen i started i was gonna make it small, but then i started doin em bigger, and it effed it up. U can c the K O and N are the same about

[AlmoSt]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c71/Bent449/P3230760.jpg

[Aer]

Originally posted by Aer+Mar 22 2006, 09:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Aer @ Mar 22 2006, 09:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Aer@Mar 22 2006, 09:11 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y113/wspaudio/IMG_1098.jpg

Some shit.
Make that sexy body go

bump

bump

bump [/b][/quote]
COMMENT JESUS CHRIST

[AlmoSt]

The bottom throw is good, the top and middle ones, i dont like a lot....especially the one with the blocks or w/e

and atl, thats sorta in use by a certain movie thats about to come out....i think...i know its used a lot, but ummmm, sorta sketchy

[neer]

recon

i like that more, its more the same size

the only thing im having issues with is the spaceing between letters

and the fact that the o looks like a c

[AMAZ tbscrew]

Originally posted by meanaceOfsociety@Mar 23 2006, 01:19 AM
this took 10 mins I was bored/fucked up on 3D
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/8024/blu0aq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
10....min? :blink:

[ghostbusta5]

haaha

[flclnaruto1213]

no comments on my stuff?

[ghostbusta5]

that black makes a big difference its illmatic

:EDIT: ;)

[neer]

deff

[mr.T]

http://home.no.net/ramsesk/zees.jpg

how is it? and the nick too? :o

[AlmoSt]

dont connect letters....its bad

[mr.T]

rofl... at graffiti u must connect letters:X

[Sluts_r_us]

flcl....told you it would work lol....makes the letters like pop out more....nice charachter and the simple looks pretty good 2....the d looks kinda like an A tho

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

I found i was able to doodle this little guy quite easily, and replicate it quickly. Which is hard for me to do with my art.

Trying to come up with a cool looking charac. tell me what you think.

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7820/picture2vy.jpg

[Ume]

Originally posted by mr.T@Mar 23 2006, 05:48 PM
rofl... at graffiti u must connect letters:X
say&#39;s who?

[joker00]

Originally posted by mr.T@Mar 23 2006, 04:48 PM
rofl... at graffiti u must connect letters:X
:lol: hahaha toy dude were did u learn that :blink:

[joker00]

Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze@Mar 23 2006, 05:12 PM
I found i was able to doodle this little guy quite easily, and replicate it quickly. Which is hard for me to do with my art.

Trying to come up with a cool looking charac. tell me what you think.

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7820/picture2vy.jpg
:) im feelin all of it cept the nose and i truely feel that hat so screw wit the nose and post it cuz it looks dope

[joker00]

http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0046pu.jpg

can i get some fuckin crtiz i posted this shit enough im lookin 4 any type of critz good bad constructive wut eva some plz yo

[toon!..]

change the e and the z take out the space on the Z and jus do something else for the E

[flclnaruto1213]

k thanks guys

[RollTRS]

joker: I like it, I think the letters look dope as they are, you should do one in marker, outlined, colored, whatever. I think it&#39;d turn out dope.

[joker00]

ight thnax guys and i wud color it if i cud find my fuckin markaz ......rooms a mess and im lazy


toon i try do that&#33;

[neer]

joker - use the img tags youll get alot more crits then just using a url

other then that i like it alot, your styles really slick

id say the only change is make it a bit smoother

[MrQuote]

Been working on some throws

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02192.jpg
Con1 (Yes, the 1 is fucked up beyond belief)



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02194.jpg
Kon1 and Kond

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02195.jpg
Kond (The D is horrible)



And finally, some characters
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02196.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02197.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02193.jpg



Any and all crits welcome.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^^iv seen that kara somewhere..or suttin like it

[djsupreeme]

Originally posted by MrQuote@Mar 23 2006, 06:17 PM
And finally, some characters
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02196.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02197.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02193.jpg



Any and all crits welcome.
gay.

[AlmoSt]

Mr T, ur a bitch man, him connecting the letters looks bad, im helping him u dumb fuck....dont be a lil bitch. U dumb ass


if u wanna be a smart ass back it up and battle me u bitch, well c wat happens

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by mr.T@Mar 23 2006, 04:48 PM
rofl... at graffiti u must connect letters:X
i never knew there were rules for expressing yourself, now thats something new

[meanaceOfsociety]

I was really boreded in english class today. What am I saying I ALWAYS am bored in english. heres somthing i sketched crits or comments?
http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/3158/class1ji.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^ how old r u?

[meanaceOfsociety]

Originally posted by MrQuote@Mar 23 2006, 06:17 PM
Been working on some throws

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02192.jpg
Con1 (Yes, the 1 is fucked up beyond belief)



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02194.jpg
Kon1 and Kond

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02195.jpg
Kond (The D is horrible)



And finally, some characters
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02196.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02197.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/DSC02193.jpg



Any and all crits welcome.
the Karak on the bottom thats from like Homestar runner lol I knew ive seen it b4

[meanaceOfsociety]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Mar 23 2006, 07:09 PM
^ how old r u?
im 14 lol why that looks crappy I no..... im just starting man.

[beefgerky]

just starting out is not an excuse for immaturity. grow some nuts and throw away your gi-joes.

[meanaceOfsociety]

Originally posted by beefgerky@Mar 23 2006, 07:16 PM
just starting out is not an excuse for immaturity. grow some nuts and throw away your gi-joes.
lol dude I wrote kapow and boom because I was really bored Im not immature trust me....

[neer]

beef arnt you like 15?

[MrQuote]

the Karak on the bottom thats from like Homestar runner lol I knew ive seen it b4



Oh shit...I just checked that site, and the mouth does look alot alike. Oh well. Fuck it. I&#39;ll draw what I want to.

[meanaceOfsociety]

Originally posted by MrQuote@Mar 23 2006, 07:26 PM

the Karak on the bottom thats from like Homestar runner lol I knew ive seen it b4



Oh shit...I just checked that site, and the mouth does look alot alike. Oh well. Fuck it. I&#39;ll draw what I want to.
I didn&#39;t say you can&#39;t go ahead I&#39;m not telling you what to do.

[Z FUSE]

meanace- drips are a lil better, but stiill a few just look nasty. and get rid of those lines on top of the drips that are supposed to make the drips look more real, you put too many of them, just don&#39;t put them on drips in general. loose all the arrows, and I don&#39;t even know what&#39;s goin on, on the top of the paper.

[Volume_one_]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2267.jpg
I decided to ink it up a lil can i get some feed back?

[meanaceOfsociety]

Originally posted by Z FUSE@Mar 23 2006, 07:52 PM
meanace- drips are a lil better, but stiill a few just look nasty. and get rid of those lines on top of the drips that are supposed to make the drips look more real, you put too many of them, just don&#39;t put them on drips in general. loose all the arrows, and I don&#39;t even know what&#39;s goin on, on the top of the paper.
thanks man I think Im droppin the name mos I have a pretty cool tag i just made up and flows alot better....in my oppinion

[meanaceOfsociety]

volume one I really like the 3d on that tag I really like the color you chose 2 im feelin the vibe

[Logikalone]

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/antehpicestart.jpg

Start of a new pice, hows my letter structure? Some crits would be cool.

[Volume_one_]

Its bad your letters are 2 ridegy and your lines are 2 sketchy and if your gonna do that thing to the bottum of your T then you should put it on top and show it off instead of hiding in the back.

also try to keep you letters a even size.

[AlmoSt]

The T is super hidden, make it part of the whole piece, i like it all, the only negative thing i would say, the thing on the bottom of the T is kinda used by a lot of people

overall, good piece, fix the T so its in the word more....that style can be real cool if you clean it up...good job

[Volume_one_]

Originally posted by Volume_one_@Mar 23 2006, 07:58 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2267.jpg
I decided to ink it up a lil can i get some feed back?
bumpededy do

[AlmoSt]

I like urs too volume one, its a lil hard to read cuz of the add ons, but it looks purty ill either way. Im not gonna tell you to go simpler, just maybe make the letters easier to read subtely or something...

[Logikalone]

Yeah I knew that t would be messed up, I did the piece then when I looked at it, I noticed I misspelled my own tag. So I threw it in at the end.

[RollTRS]

Originally posted by Logikalone@Mar 23 2006, 08:29 PM
when I looked at it, I noticed I misspelled my own tag.
I&#39;ve done that many times while concentrating on letter structure and design flow :P

[neer]

ive never done that

[MUSASHI]

just some simples i worked on today at my boring ass job

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musastuff.jpg

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^^did u ever do graffiti before this..or did u start like now? outa no where?

[neer]

holy shit mush

youve gotten so much better

[MUSASHI]

just since january...I used to think it was cool to see it on trains at the crossings...allways wanted to though

[Rend]

for an exchange:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/61.jpg

[TricksForKids]

ive seen way better shit from you^ definitely not my favourite.

[Rend]

i like that top right one musa.

[Blak-T]

here goes my first stencil i made, wanted to try something different
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0015.jpg

[RollTRS]

Is it just a city skyline?

[Blak-T]

yeah. I was tryin to keep it simple since I&#39;ve never done one before

[neer]

my first stencil was a gasmask

[meanaceOfsociety]

hey this is my idea for new tag i know I havent completed it well at ALL yet I feel I need work on the K and D crits or comments? note the pink under neath is not dripping
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/7357/vekd1tc.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[neer]

v and k need better structure

the d doesnt really even look liek a d

[AMAZ tbscrew]

.....ok..have u ever looked at the other fourms?...how come there toys are half decent? and half u guys suck?

[Blak-T]

it&#39;s coming along just work more on letter structure, what I used to do was draw the same letter a bunch of time without picking up the pencil, to make the letters look more fluid. jus some friendly advice

[meanaceOfsociety]

Originally posted by Blak&#045;T@Mar 23 2006, 11:07 PM
it&#39;s coming along just work more on letter structure, what I used to do was draw the same letter a bunch of time without picking up the pencil, to make the letters look more fluid. jus some friendly advice
Hey thanks man that helps

[Sheek]

tell me this dont suck as bad as i think it does

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/5628/blackbook2jd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Sheek]

^^^^crits please

[Exploited]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/scabywag/quote5a.jpg
somethign new

[neer]

exploided thats the shit hands down rad

ps are you into street punk?

[RollTRS]

Originally posted by neer@Mar 23 2006, 10:59 PM
my first stencil was a gasmask
My first stencil was a spraycan. Combine our three stencils to create... ULTIMATE POWER&#33;&#33;&#33;

[c0ld]

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/1403/j0081qc.jpg

critz plz?

[neer]

defff

[Sheek]

Originally posted by Sheek@Mar 23 2006, 11:13 PM
tell me this dont suck as bad as i think it does

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/5628/blackbook2jd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits please

[Blak-T]

^all i can say is its a lil plain, try shodowing, 3d, bubble, something....

[Blak-T]

heres one of my latest sketches....comments...camera sucks

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0019.jpg

[Sheek]

Originally posted by Blak&#045;T@Mar 23 2006, 11:46 PM
^all i can say is its a lil plain, try shodowing, 3d, bubble, something....
thanks

[neer]

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h264/neer__/Untitled-1.jpg

crit it please

[MUSASHI]

The only thing bad on it is the coloring...work on tat ...straight lines that barely overlap.if they have to overlap doso while the color is still wet...you want an even dose of color to make it look top notch...

the first "E" look at it for a second...that light blue add on shoulda been more like the one on the "R" or vice versa try to erase your pencil marks before you color cuz, the graphite always shows through...also two dark colors together don&#39;t contrast well ..you lose definition...think about what I wrote...lets help each other ,help achoher...I guess that&#39;s how people get better.

[Rend]

for a battle:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/62.jpg

[meanaceOfsociety]

just got done with this i smeared it trying to rush damn o well critz or comments?
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/6176/veked4oq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[meanaceOfsociety]

new style and name
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/7615/hs6bb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[ceroX24X]

two new sketches can i get some crits please? and i know the "s" on my throw and tag sucks so if anyone could give advice for that it would be apreciated

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0304.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0303.jpg

p.s. rend your shit looks sick man

[mr.T]

http://home.no.net/ramsesk/zees1.jpg

any crits?

[DeathRow]

http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/7714/picture0033nu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



What ya think? Help me outt please

[RollTRS]

ceroX24X: The last one looks dope, keep working on that&#33;
Mr.T: I&#39;d keep working on the Es, they don&#39;t fit real well.
DeathRow: Looks good, I&#39;d love to see it colored

[neer]

Originally posted by MUSASHI@Mar 24 2006, 12:22 AM
The only thing bad on it is the coloring...work on tat ...straight lines that barely overlap.if they have to overlap doso while the color is still wet...you want an even dose of color to make it look top notch...

the first "E" look at it for a second...that light blue add on shoulda been more like the one on the "R" or vice versa try to erase your pencil marks before you color cuz, the graphite always shows through...also two dark colors together don&#39;t contrast well ..you lose definition...think about what I wrote...lets help each other ,help achoher...I guess that&#39;s how people get better.
thanks mush&#33;
your crits are always constructive wich is so much better

yea in terms of the colors, those are shitty marvy markers

my friend is picking me up a 40 pack or prismacolor markers today so the colllors should be better soon

the sleeve was an accident i slipped and had to turn it into somthing haha

thnkas&#33;

[SiLeNt-BoB]

Originally posted by SiLeNt&#045;BoB@Mar 22 2006, 01:27 PM
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/3531/imag00086fm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

comments just tryin to get some nice straigh letter now..was freestyle biro moment dont really like the bottom one i like the top one
bumo for some mo comments...what do i need to work on now?

[Volume_one_]

That shit is nice its really clean you have nice letters and yor colors dont clash

[beefgerky]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture686.jpg Blackbook Cover/new throwie.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture706.jpg random pencil freestyle.

[c0ld]

Originally posted by c0ld@Mar 23 2006, 11:28 PM
http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/1403/j0081qc.jpg

critz plz?
*bump*

critz?

[beefgerky]

lose the fake drips and the blob in the middle of the page. oh wait thats your sketch. bahaha. jk. just stop with the curly bubble things.

^^crits on my shit anyone?&#33;?&#33;

[Sheek]

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8740/blackbook23ba.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just did it crits please

[Nyc Sno]

Originally posted by Sheek@Mar 24 2006, 02:51 PM
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8740/blackbook23ba.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just did it crits please
one tip see were ur e connects to the last k close it off so there sepereate letters
is the word skeek ?

[Sheek]

yeah