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B.S. POLICE
03-03-2009, 10:05 PM
Yo ohsnap.......clean you fuckin inbox and out box ho



its 92% thats as good as it like ever gets

KnoxIn
03-03-2009, 10:29 PM
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/4305/p3033011.jpg
here is some shit i did in English today so any crits? the only one i really like is the Z

grub- i agree with above thats sad do simples!
klic- not too bad the only thing i noticed were your proportions were off sometimes

klic
03-03-2009, 10:54 PM
klic- not too bad the only thing i noticed were your proportions were off sometimes

and by that you mean?... just make it simpler or what?

Tokenkaligreens
03-03-2009, 10:56 PM
i think he means your bars, and I would agree with him

SONE.
03-03-2009, 11:27 PM
heres somethin old.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090208.jpg
SE

KnoxIn
03-04-2009, 12:04 AM
i think he means your bars, and I would agree with him

ya klic just try and make them all even and the same size like wideness and all that

and hey can i get some crits on my shit????

Tokenkaligreens
03-04-2009, 12:09 AM
you tend to like curve your bars, nothing wrong with that but I think the bars still need a lil work b4 you move into that. STRAIGHT LETTERs is all you should worry about right now, and this goes for everyone starting out , write other words and letters while your still learning shit, dont let just 4 of your letters progress. otherwise its not bad but its not great either, just keep at it.

sallybsk
03-04-2009, 12:18 AM
KNOXIN
personally I don't like letters that look like they've been cut off at they're extensions. Instead of curving your bars a little in the middle like you did on the bottom and top of the e(the extensions coming off I mean)
Try curving your bars in a dramatic fashion, but you'll know whether or not you can pull this off yet if it looks like shit. Just play around with things a bit more. You'll find parts of letters you've never seen before, or how you can make things LOOK like something, where you've never thought of doing such a thing.

THE BARS YOU CAN CURVE EASIEST AND HAVE THEM LOOK THE BEST ARE THE LONGEST ONES. i.e. the part of the E that is long. Simpler upon simpler.

SONE.
03-04-2009, 01:01 AM
Knoxin - Dont bother curving your bars or adding anything extra at all. stick to extreamly straight, paralle, even bars. youve got the right idea though.

sallybsk
03-04-2009, 01:39 AM
I was going to say this, but I looked at the rest of the page and it looks like he's being doing straight bars, just do whatever you feel comfortable with. And others will give you crits :p

Deadpoolzer0
03-04-2009, 02:49 AM
Took a break from BS.
Just now getting back to the swing of things so I'm coming back to the toy forum.
All I can say is bars bars bars...
Some old flicks for talking shit.
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/7550/photo3uv6.jpg
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/1358/photo4oi0.jpg
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/5192/photo7ob8.jpg
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/460/photo12me9.jpg
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/9924/photo13im4.jpg
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6287/photo14ey2.jpg
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/1043/photo16dd5.jpg
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/8805/photo18op6.jpg
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/4003/photo19pp0.jpg
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/593/photo20un7.jpg

Deadpoolzer0
03-04-2009, 02:51 AM
**Doublepost.

Kester
03-04-2009, 05:53 AM
http://up47.siz.co.il/up1/ni2w5nomge0r.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)

klic
03-04-2009, 06:36 AM
faze, round out the edges of your bars, dont make them so sharp

Kester
03-04-2009, 08:48 AM
Exchange with Azhq NES MVP
http://up45.siz.co.il/up1/weyngn5k4rm2.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)

Capo Izi
03-04-2009, 09:09 AM
New stuff...

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/4/l_78330124409e4994b96a8a14d37853c4.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/25/l_84bd35b0e5d1407fbc85249b6a6c5eb2.jpg

b0gus
03-04-2009, 11:00 AM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q220/scum11/P1020534.jpg
the middle s bar is kinda floppy

Incite
03-04-2009, 11:46 AM
@Public enemy: Dope throw man..
@Eack: Piece would be very nice if you remove some extensions.

My sketch...dont have an idea how to fill it...Suggestions?
http://i358.photobucket.com/albums/oo22/Proof_one/IMG_5748.jpg

that F is sexy

respERATION
03-04-2009, 01:55 PM
proof -dope simple
boges-maybe fatten them bitches up a bit
kapo-i was sick in my mouth a little when i saw that throw

last bump before i get off my lazyt fatass and colour this bitch in
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/02-03-09_2014.jpg

Capo Izi
03-04-2009, 02:02 PM
proof -dope simple
boges-maybe fatten them bitches up a bit
kapo-i was sick in my mouth a little when i saw that throw

last bump before i get off my lazyt fatass and colour this bitch in
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/02-03-09_2014.jpg

Haha, yeah my throws are suck....and my straight piece?

Deadpoolzer0
03-04-2009, 03:07 PM
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/7550/photo3uv6.jpg
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/1358/photo4oi0.jpg
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/5192/photo7ob8.jpg
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/460/photo12me9.jpg
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/9924/photo13im4.jpg
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6287/photo14ey2.jpg
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/1043/photo16dd5.jpg
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/8805/photo18op6.jpg
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/4003/photo19pp0.jpg
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/593/photo20un7.jpg

Bump from bottom of last page... Any and all crits much appreciated...

RhodeIsland
03-04-2009, 03:32 PM
you need to go back to step one and do some keyboard letters

Deadpoolzer0
03-04-2009, 03:45 PM
Are you talking about my stuff? Which ones are you saying that to?

RhodeIsland
03-04-2009, 03:48 PM
Yes i am

Deadpoolzer0
03-04-2009, 03:51 PM
Which ones? I'd like to hear whats wrong with all of them.

KARB
03-04-2009, 03:53 PM
http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv168/kushx860x/krak2.jpg
http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv168/kushx860x/krak.jpg


crits?

Germer
03-04-2009, 03:55 PM
deadpool- hes talking about all of your work in general. you cant make small changes with kind of work. you need to completely change the way you draw.

Deadpoolzer0
03-04-2009, 04:05 PM
deadpool- hes talking about all of your work in general. you cant make small changes with kind of work. you need to completely change the way you draw.
I understand this. I'm saying, I used to do bars.. and back in the day before college consumed my life, I was winning battles, and doing shit people liked. I fractured fingers in my hand and am starting back into it. I don't want to hear "just do bars" i know this, but tell me what looks wrong with the pieces and I can make new stuff and keep those tips in mind.

Capo Izi
03-04-2009, 04:05 PM
New stuff...

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/4/l_78330124409e4994b96a8a14d37853c4.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/25/l_84bd35b0e5d1407fbc85249b6a6c5eb2.jpg

More stuff....last Kapo shit I can ever do...

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/45/l_c81224230de34cf58b9aec60da2582e7.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/24/l_90183eb03ba5490a824ad517a35bc09e.jpg

New name I'm trying....Nukebomb, Nukebomba, Nukebomber

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/2/l_a39ef1fc7f7f4fe8a5938a1e704b6071.jpg

.HATESONE.
03-04-2009, 04:20 PM
oh lawdy lawdy that b is...






























wait for it...


















































terrible.

dogowar
03-04-2009, 04:22 PM
deadpool - first one down is shit. scrap that style. Second one i like maybe the tail on the s a bit to long and the r in acro is a little fucked up. and i cant be botherd comment on the rest.

Germer
03-04-2009, 04:22 PM
I understand this. I'm saying, I used to do bars.. and back in the day before college consumed my life, I was winning battles, and doing shit people liked. I fractured fingers in my hand and am starting back into it. I don't want to hear "just do bars" i know this, but tell me what looks wrong with the pieces and I can make new stuff and keep those tips in mind.

stop being stubborn. you obviously arent using bars now, and if you really did in the past you clearly didnt learn anything from it. im telling you (because you asked) that you have to go back to the VERY BASICS.

Germer
03-04-2009, 04:24 PM
oh lawdy lawdy that b is...
wait for it...
terrible.

your not that funny...

















oh wait a second...





















youre not funny at all.

Capo Izi
03-04-2009, 04:29 PM
oh lawdy lawdy that b is...


wait for it...


terrible.



Yeah it's like my first drawing, I'm just so pissed I gotta change my name......but yeah I'll work on it.

RhodeIsland
03-04-2009, 04:33 PM
thank you lol i really just didnt feel like explaining myself( to germer)

(SoS)Viruz
03-04-2009, 04:34 PM
Yo whats good all.....Yo Stop with all the Shit talkin tho.... "Hatesone" yea homie we are here to crits ppls work. Instead on tryin to bring the next writer down how about you give him props and try to help him inprove and then work on inproving your self. Cause that how beef get started. WE are Writers we should be beefin with one any other.

But as Crits go....
Res-Limit you Bar usage, I cant even read that, sooo Dont bother to color it lol.
Izi-Don't worry man just keep sketchin we all start out sucky and work our way up. Just check the New to Graff Thread ight.
Germer-I saw you posted in the Big Boy Thread...You steez is okay but simple, nothin I haven't see befor. But for right now I say post in here untill you get your style super clean and you make it Unique ight man.

Ight pplz Im out

Capo Izi
03-04-2009, 04:40 PM
Izi-Don't worry man just keep sketchin we all start out sucky and work our way up. Just check the New to Graff Thread ight.



Yo man, I've been writing a year.....I just have to restart everything, because one of my boys...or so I thought so...ratted to the 5-0 on me. Now I got my name tagged, so I gotta change up.

.HATESONE.
03-04-2009, 05:55 PM
your not that funny...

oh wait a second...
youre not funny at all.

lol dont get mad at me becuase i said it was ugly.its the truth and i really dont feel like taking my time to look at all the stuff that is wrong with it when it is just so much easier to say its bad.becuase it is and none of it is good so theirs no reason to ell him what he needs fixing.idk thats how i learned.people told me it was hella ugly,i felt a little bad but i picked myself up and sketched some more.and thats exactly what he needs to do.scrap that shit and start over.im not going to hold his fucking hand and tell him good job and shit.no,thats pointless.i thought it was ugly and i called it.if you guys cant take harsh criticism than your fucked haha.



did you hear that kapo.the b is bad and you need to start over.thats my opinion...

00-made-00
03-04-2009, 06:26 PM
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/Kester.jpg
For my main man kester, who kills alot of people on this with his simps, which most of you chumps should be doing.

Capo Izi
03-04-2009, 06:26 PM
lol dont get mad at me becuase i said it was ugly.its the truth and i really dont feel like taking my time to look at all the stuff that is wrong with it when it is just so much easier to say its bad.becuase it is and none of it is good so theirs no reason to ell him what he needs fixing.idk thats how i learned.people told me it was hella ugly,i felt a little bad but i picked myself up and sketched some more.and thats exactly what he needs to do.scrap that shit and start over.im not going to hold his fucking hand and tell him good job and shit.no,thats pointless.i thought it was ugly and i called it.if you guys cant take harsh criticism than your fucked haha.



did you hear that kapo.the b is bad and you need to start over.thats my opinion...


Yeah man, look above...I mean I JUST changed my name, I expect shit for a few weeks.

Also changing name again, NukeBomber was way too long, so I'm going with Dr.Nuke...

00-made-00
03-04-2009, 06:32 PM
Shut the fuck up you both a pair of fags, who need to sketch more, quit bitching about shit and sketch .

RhodeIsland
03-04-2009, 06:51 PM
hes not bad, idk if youv heard of greed(RIP), well that was cres's older brother..

Can you guys keep this shit to PM's we all dont need to here what highschool you go to and whos someones brother

B.S. POLICE
03-04-2009, 06:53 PM
for real nigg where your street smarts at

Paser1
03-04-2009, 06:59 PM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3373/photo60l.jpg
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/5917/photo65w.jpg
New to the site, looking for crits please.

Capo Izi
03-04-2009, 07:08 PM
bomb...

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/4/l_f6e2a8e2f79a4576b5b43ce78b0cf8a3.jpg

Pase-Needs a little bit of work....but it's okay...The S especially
Kester-that shit is mad tight

Crits?

B.S. POLICE
03-04-2009, 07:16 PM
pase i worked a lil with your ish trying to fix some of the errorshttp://img16.imageshack.us/img16/559/screencapture10oy7.png
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/405/screencapture11pp4.png


dr nuke keep your letters the same size

Paser1
03-04-2009, 08:08 PM
thanks brotha ima work with that shit thanks all for the crits keep them comin

B.S. POLICE
03-04-2009, 08:09 PM
pm me ***** we need to talk about something

SONE.
03-04-2009, 08:38 PM
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090304.jpg

B.S. POLICE
03-04-2009, 08:40 PM
im not really digging that huge thing of the s and how the e covers a lot of the n but youve got the right idea with the letters and the fill is nice

$IN30NE
03-04-2009, 08:45 PM
dam sone im really feeling that!! dat jaint looks dope

ESKiMO2
03-04-2009, 08:51 PM
The Prison Planet (OLD LETTERS JUST COLORED)

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5691/prisonplanet.jpg

CRITS
Sone- I knew you had it in you! It's dope!!
Kester- Keep doing that. It's pretty solid.

B.S. POLICE
03-04-2009, 09:13 PM
eskimo! pm me i need to know the fill colors

SONE.
03-04-2009, 09:52 PM
Where can i find prisma colours? are they at michaels?

sanrtizer
03-04-2009, 09:59 PM
im too lazy to crit i apologize. first sketch in a while......crits would b appreciated even tho i am a lazy douche
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/3035/191927.jpg

Paser1
03-04-2009, 10:00 PM
Where can i find prisma colours? are they at michaels?

yea dude i got mine there.

BigBlueViolence
03-04-2009, 10:03 PM
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/Kester.jpg

This simple is dope as fuck, but that handy is hurting, dude.

http://i44.tinypic.com/2ch7zph.jpg

Zase
03-04-2009, 10:56 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/4sef6p.jpg imma make me an a-z following the pg battles of loose letters
so it might take a while but this is gonna be a tight as promnight kinda 2pager
every letter my style but total diff fill and shit

KnoxIn
03-04-2009, 11:09 PM
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/7753/p3043012.jpg
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/6314/p3043013.jpg
ok here are 2 pages of my letters im going to do a page for F,A,Z, and E
but figured i would throw up what i got so any crits? and everyone keeps sayin round the edges of my work but for some reason i just always do points like as you can see i did one little rounded one for both but in my oppinion they both look like shit so dunno what to do and ideas??

Crits????

Zase-goin to be sick as hell love all your shit
kester-i agree with above the simp is good but that handsyle needs some work
eskimo-its good love your fills, but its all the same there isn't much difference in your peices other than letters

Backalley Abortion Doctor
03-04-2009, 11:33 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/img006-1.jpg

Kester
03-05-2009, 01:31 AM
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/Kester.jpg
For my main man kester, who kills alot of people on this with his simps, which most of you chumps should be doing.

thatnks alot, dude
i think the R is the best bit even if all the piece is good (:
i started your outline - will be done soon/
peace~

blunttokes
03-05-2009, 01:46 AM
ill kester...dope fill

downunder
03-05-2009, 03:52 AM
eskimo - i think the loop's on the P/R are too small, maybe bring em out a bit and the big to small thing makes them look goofy i think

m s - watch your bar widths and notice how most of your K's are straight while alot of your letters are bent... and dont merge the letters together it looks bad.

gonna try steeze up my next painted piece, any advice... this is what i have so far
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww143/affiliate383/SDC10796.jpg

Kester
03-05-2009, 07:05 AM
for Piloh the man!
not too keen about it, not one of my best
http://up45.siz.co.il/up3/doylwjinfdij.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)

(SoS)Viruz
03-05-2009, 07:38 AM
eskimo - i think the loop's on the P/R are too small, maybe bring em out a bit and the big to small thing makes them look goofy i think

m s - watch your bar widths and notice how most of your K's are straight while alot of your letters are bent... and dont merge the letters together it looks bad.

gonna try steeze up my next painted piece, any advice... this is what i have so far
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww143/affiliate383/SDC10796.jpg

I say loose that Thing going across your I, and Make your E stand out a lil more.

$IN30NE
03-05-2009, 11:11 AM
Where can i find prisma colours? are they at michaels?

they have alot also at acmoore if anyone knows where that is...along with deco colors...copics and other stuff

$IN30NE
03-05-2009, 11:14 AM
zase- i think that is gonna look super dope when your done.
eskimo- i really like your style

TastySesamcrew
03-05-2009, 11:39 AM
I'm so not dissapointed. Dope shit everyone on this page!!!!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3623/3328714785_3b297f21c7_o.jpg

sex without condoms
03-05-2009, 11:58 AM
^ exchange?
borie keeps it illen

Sanc_one
03-05-2009, 12:13 PM
Colored version of recent sketch!
http://i358.photobucket.com/albums/oo22/Proof_one/IMG_5749.jpg

BigBlueViolence
03-05-2009, 12:24 PM
PROO- dope sauce
F- not feelin it.

I got you on that exchange, MS

http://i44.tinypic.com/etzdpg.jpg

also this
http://i42.tinypic.com/n15l6w.jpg

B.S. POLICE
03-05-2009, 12:53 PM
i like the ish on them throws

zenne
03-05-2009, 02:06 PM
Colored version of recent sketch!
http://i358.photobucket.com/albums/oo22/Proof_one/IMG_5749.jpg

dude, you just got lazy with the f. you should finish that shit up.

sKeeLo
03-05-2009, 02:16 PM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3373/photo60l.jpg
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/5917/photo65w.jpg
New to the site, looking for crits please.


likin this E, maybe try workin the other letters in a similar fashion . .be careful to not bring that lower horizontal bar too far left b/c it ptobaly shouldnt be touching the letter to the laft of it . . probaly want that open alil

Thrice
03-05-2009, 03:28 PM
Yeah First E on that throw is nice, rest needs serious work homie....
Messing around in class.
http://i40.tinypic.com/dy5f8p.jpg

SONE.
03-05-2009, 03:32 PM
thats a really dope idea for a fill. but ur bars need a little work.

Heres a VERY old sketch, i just filled in last night. donthate
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090305.jpg

Thrice
03-05-2009, 03:34 PM
You talking about my bars? Seem fine to me, but speaking of bars Sone you need to hit the simples with basic bars. Get rid of the arrows and simplify.

SONE.
03-05-2009, 03:52 PM
Whoa bud, yeh im taslking about your bars, with eh random little extension on the super skinny top.
And this was an incredibly old sketch finally colored.

Thrice
03-05-2009, 03:58 PM
Top extension is a common extension to the A, and it connects to the Middle bar to the Legs of an A. By the way your arrows are coming out of random places, and how about that looped extension on your O.

SONE.
03-05-2009, 04:05 PM
Im just giving crits here. yeh its a common extension, but its usually done well. Your bars are too skinny at the top, and it doesnt follow a line through the centre of the A. and for the 3rd time, i know the sketch is bunk, its like 2 years old. JUST filled.

Thrice
03-05-2009, 04:13 PM
If you haven't noticed that's the style im going for, i like my bars skinner at the top and thicker at the bottom. Also the extension follows correctly, just follow the angle it's going. By the way your fill is wack. Keep a consistent gradient, like blue at top and green at the bottom part of the letters, plus keep your strokes path as consistent as possible. When doing 1 point 3d like that i like to make my strokes go towards the point, don't do any horizontal shit.

SONE.
03-05-2009, 04:20 PM
The 3d does go into a point. u can see see the point on the page, but its a little wonk i know. why? 2 years old. and that may be the styleu were goin for, but thats an ungly way of doin it. the fill, was just a fuck around. and it doesnt have to just say one colour on top, one on bottom...

.HATESONE.
03-05-2009, 04:28 PM
thrice should just stop arguing his point with that a.i agree with sone the idea for the fill is dope but the letters leave more to be desired(i think thats the expression im going for) basicly it needs work and sone burns you so yeah.....dont argue just go with it...

Decide
03-05-2009, 04:29 PM
You talking about my bars? Seem fine to me, but speaking of bars Sone you need to hit the simples with basic bars. Get rid of the arrows and simplify.

weell if u messing around in class ur not gonna expect amazing critizism nawmean?

Sanc_one
03-05-2009, 04:33 PM
Okay...here the F is fixed :D... I dont know yet those extensions. What do you think?
http://i358.photobucket.com/albums/oo22/Proof_one/Pikr094.jpg

.HATESONE.
03-05-2009, 04:35 PM
f is still a lil funky in my opinion.better than the last tho definitely.for me its that second bar on it.i would make it longer probably..but thats just me.

SONE.
03-05-2009, 04:35 PM
Im loving that proof! maybe match up that thingy on the top of the P with one on top of the E.

cesspool
03-05-2009, 04:39 PM
big blue, that ms throw is poppin
proof, im likin yo shit, its dope
thrice, that a is dece, but i mean i think the bars should be wider, air it out, if you get whaty im sayin,
well the saying is "give crits to get crits" and i gave some, so now crit me :)
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/8858/scan0001otj.jpg (http://img3.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001otj.jpg)
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/7641/scan0002xtb.jpg (http://img24.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002xtb.jpg)
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/scan0002xtb.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img24/scan0002xtb.jpg/1/)

..romero..
03-05-2009, 04:44 PM
i like the r on the second one.but what up with the arrow?im guessing to kill the extra space huh? haha. work on your writes(tags) lerch. that would be my first priority...

RhodeIsland
03-05-2009, 04:48 PM
work on your writes.

Wtf does that mean?

..romero..
03-05-2009, 04:49 PM
Wtf does that mean?

my bad.writes=tags....my homie hase got me saying writes now haha.

00-made-00
03-05-2009, 05:01 PM
for Piloh the man!
not too keen about it, not one of my best
http://up45.siz.co.il/up3/doylwjinfdij.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)
Cheers kester its fresh man, got some solid letters going on.

Thrice
03-05-2009, 05:35 PM
Im not trying to start shit or whatever but im not going to take crit about my bars from a guy who pulls this out of his ass, he definitely doesn't burn me, how about we do this a battle. What do you guys think?? If anything i burn him
This shithttp://i43.tinypic.com/4h3vc6.jpg

VS this http://i40.tinypic.com/dy5f8p.jpg

Capo Izi
03-05-2009, 05:40 PM
Workin to get the throw all one size....

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/31/l_9853a872612545ae8e535b4ccc46e8a2.jpg

RhodeIsland
03-05-2009, 05:48 PM
oops double post

..romero..
03-05-2009, 05:48 PM
Im not trying to start shit or whatever but im not going to take crit about my bars from a guy who pulls this out of his ass, he definitely doesn't burn me, how about we do this a battle. What do you guys think?? If anything i burn him
This shithttp://i43.tinypic.com/4h3vc6.jpg

VS this http://i40.tinypic.com/dy5f8p.jpg

you dumb fool.obviously you havent seen all of his work.this is old...and if you have seen his other stuff,you definitely see hes got u beat dude...stop bitchin man.i mean he gave you crits,take them or stfu.


im done and wont speak on this matter anymore..as for who burns who.BATTLE!BATTLE!BATTLE!BATTLE!

RhodeIsland
03-05-2009, 05:48 PM
Work on that D it looks like a big blob
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/IMG_0891.jpg
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/IMG_0892.jpg

..romero..
03-05-2009, 05:51 PM
dr. nuke-like rhode said man.work on that d.it looks like a square not a d haha.also how long hav eyou been writing dude?

RhodeIsland
03-05-2009, 05:56 PM
Me?

SONE.
03-05-2009, 05:56 PM
Im not trying to start shit or whatever but im not going to take crit about my bars from a guy who pulls this out of his ass, he definitely doesn't burn me, how about we do this a battle. What do you guys think?? If anything i burn him
This shithttp://i43.tinypic.com/4h3vc6.jpg

VS this http://i40.tinypic.com/dy5f8p.jpg

aight fucker, you gotta stop this. if you wanna make this a battle lets doit.

00-made-00
03-05-2009, 05:57 PM
The word CUNT, Rules Black and white, no characters.

..romero..
03-05-2009, 05:58 PM
Me?

ya.who else in here is going be rhode anything? no one hahah.didnt want to write it all out.im super duper laaazy.

RhodeIsland
03-05-2009, 06:01 PM
lol oh like 2 n a half years maybe
but just got serious in september

justin kayse
03-05-2009, 06:02 PM
Rhode on the first hyte the extension thing off of the middle bar on the H makes it look like it says Lyyte a little bit, other than that the shits dope.

what4joke...
03-05-2009, 06:04 PM
http://up45.siz.co.il/up3/doylwjinfdij.jpg

soo dooppeee

SONE.
03-05-2009, 06:19 PM
The word CUNT, Rules Black and white, no characters.

ahahah yes. Piloh that's dope, but the inside O is buggin me.

b0gus
03-05-2009, 06:19 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q220/scum11/P1020538.jpg

RhodeIsland
03-05-2009, 06:28 PM
Boges wanna do an exchange?

SONE.
03-05-2009, 07:27 PM
i really fucked this up. but im pree stonned..
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090305_1.jpg

..romero..
03-05-2009, 07:59 PM
id lose that exclamation point if i were you....just a suggestion.

SONE.
03-05-2009, 08:04 PM
ye i know. stonned mistake.

Blox
03-05-2009, 08:05 PM
i really fucked this up. but im pree stonned..
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090305_1.jpg

Notice how the other faggot just stoped talking?

Decide
03-05-2009, 08:19 PM
sick dewd ur stoneedd kewl

KnoxIn
03-05-2009, 08:32 PM
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/5444/p3053016.jpg
here is somethin i did in school today so any crits??? and if you would tell me what is good if anything and what is bad about it?

Sone- diggin the style

bogus- lookin good maybe just watch proportions
wat4joke-lookin damn good likin that

RhodeIsland
03-05-2009, 08:35 PM
Work on that D it looks like a big blob
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/IMG_0891.jpg
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/IMG_0892.jpg

Bump got no crits

..romero..
03-05-2009, 08:38 PM
^ not feelin the style man.idk why but....not rockin for me dude.no offense.the t looks to fat for me.and the way the h bends on the left.just work on it but the only thing i can think of as far as how to work on it is to make it less fat i guess.

7thIncision
03-05-2009, 08:41 PM
Knoxin, Looks like you've got the 3d down, and it's a pretty decent fill for pen steez, but your letter forms kinda look like you ripped off the Metallica T-Shirt Font... maybe work on those a bit?
annnd dope-ass sig, Rugby's the best sport ever.

Zase
03-05-2009, 08:45 PM
faze...
create letter to letter then afterwords add 3d
just make the letters FAT and make them hug eachother
they way too thin now
also i sugest u make that stuff more flat
so flat and fat

Graff J up
03-05-2009, 09:22 PM
http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0055.jpg
crits please?
i did this in geometery


and faze im not diggin how its "edgy"

`SassAsaurus_ReXX`
03-05-2009, 09:29 PM
http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss358/SassAsaurusReXX/0305092110.jpg?t=1236306538
I know im a toy, jsut thought it was kinda kewl. plex crits

SONE.
03-05-2009, 09:34 PM
couldnt not colour it.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090305_2.jpg

Graff J up
03-05-2009, 09:35 PM
umm pick a name? is that like your crew or somethin

SONE.
03-05-2009, 09:37 PM
sasasarus you need to get the bars bigger, and focus more or simple letters; need structure.

`SassAsaurus_ReXX`
03-05-2009, 09:39 PM
umm pick a name? is that like your crew or somethin

was that to me?

Graff J up
03-05-2009, 09:45 PM
yeah sass...n if that what u write i would make your bars bigger/wider

`SassAsaurus_ReXX`
03-05-2009, 09:49 PM
nah thats just somethin i just did in class today, i usually write DANG but i just need to find a good way to write it

(SoS)Viruz
03-05-2009, 10:25 PM
GIht Hoes...Mass Crit TIME YES BITCHES MASS CRIT.
-SONE- Stay up, I like the FIll, But Loose the Extra lines inside of the N and the U ight. Fresh Sketch tho,

ReXx- By the look of that man you need to stay with block buster letters alright.

Graff J up- keep workin on it, Try movin that J over a lil tiny bit

Hyte- Your E is your Strongest letter by far. But make your "Y" More Noticable, and The center bar in your H connect it to the left bar of your H, It will look better.

Thrice
03-05-2009, 10:45 PM
Perfect word for you to write. Talk about shit extensions Sone. Change your avatar, it's garbage. Quit writing, or attempting to.

SONE.
03-05-2009, 10:56 PM
What extensions?

and before you say shit like that post something back.

SONE.
03-05-2009, 11:00 PM
GIht Hoes...Mass Crit TIME YES BITCHES MASS CRIT.
-SONE- Stay up, I like the FIll, But Loose the Extra lines inside of the N and the U ight. Fresh Sketch tho,

.

Ye i know, its kinda wonked :/,
I hate the N too. too fat.

Thrice
03-05-2009, 11:22 PM
Yeah im not on BS all day so how is 3 hours away from the comp making me a pussy? I was bombing actually, shows how much of a bitch you really are. You're T is fucking god awful, and how about the extension done on the C, common extension but looks like shit when you do it. The bottom of the C is wack as fuck and yeah way to use thin and thick bars like me and talk shit....hypocrite?

SONE.
03-05-2009, 11:48 PM
What is wrong with you? excuse me for having a day at home. its still only 8oclock, to early to go bomb for me. There is no extension on the C! and post something back. if im such shit you shouldnt have a problem doin something better.

(SoS)Viruz
03-06-2009, 01:20 AM
Yo you guys Still going at it. How about you STOP TALKIN And battle the Im pickin the word for you guys.... The word is "VIRUZ" {YES MY DISPLAY NAME}

Sketch,with Color, and Shout someone out with a Handy someone here on Bs.

^^Those are the Rules. Send the Sketch to Eskimo to Post it.

SONE.
03-06-2009, 02:58 AM
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090305_6.jpg a new lil char.

.HATESONE.
03-06-2009, 09:12 AM
Yeah im not on BS all day so how is 3 hours away from the comp making me a pussy? I was bombing actually, shows how much of a bitch you really are. You're T is fucking god awful, and how about the extension done on the C, common extension but looks like shit when you do it. The bottom of the C is wack as fuck and yeah way to use thin and thick bars like me and talk shit....hypocrite?

http://i42.tinypic.com/16lk8wp.jpg

I JUST WANTED TO POST SOMETHING WITH CATS IN IT..

B.S. POLICE
03-06-2009, 09:35 AM
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/2951/screencapture19.png

Kester
03-06-2009, 10:19 AM
fresh work B.S. POLICE! wat markers do you use?
quicky
http://up48.siz.co.il/up1/qqzodxnd1ywi.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)

Kester
03-06-2009, 10:21 AM
**doubble post**
sorry

..romero..
03-06-2009, 11:04 AM
(not finished)
http://i43.tinypic.com/o56ubp.jpg

for some guy.i know its toy.what ever....


any crits?

sone,kester,b.s. all dope.

siloh.oh jeez...ummmmmmmmm new to graff maybe? It looks like you just did the tag real big.in fact thats exactly what you did.dont do that.that method is a bad way to go man...

..romero..
03-06-2009, 11:07 AM
im gong to crit myself and go with.the letters dont match haha.i dont care really.im too tired to do anything with skill in it.that only took me maybe 5 minutes to draw,if that.i should take more time with these things i think...

Incite
03-06-2009, 11:12 AM
had 30 mins to waste during lunch break. too lazy to hook up my scanner so i took a pic and it looks funky cause of the flash, oh well.

might finish it later or redo it

http://i44.tinypic.com/2v2f5v6.jpg

Kester
03-06-2009, 11:43 AM
for tomorrow's wall
http://www.zix.co.il/images/574633882.jpg (http://zix.co.il)

sex without condoms
03-06-2009, 11:44 AM
if it makes you feel any better sone, your shit ugly

and yo kest that shit would be rockin if you put one of those half stars in the e

Kester
03-06-2009, 11:53 AM
is my shit ugly ? haha i dont get it,
who you talking to ?

KnoxIn
03-06-2009, 12:13 PM
[QUOTE=KnoxIn;1334497]http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/5444/p3053016.jpg
here is somethin i did in school today so any crits??? and if you would tell me what is good if anything and what is bad about it?

BUMP for advice

ok so everyone said stop the points and spikes ya know so should i just round my edges at the end like keep the bars bent like they are?? does that make sense just round the edges take away the points?

Paser1
03-06-2009, 12:14 PM
kester - that shit is dope but you should put a half star in the e to make it fresh

B.S - i love it and im gonna learn to do blends with my prismas like that you wait

Kester
03-06-2009, 12:24 PM
yeah but i dont have enough can control for smalll details yet so we'll see

Incite
03-06-2009, 01:04 PM
is my shit ugly ? haha i dont get it,
who you talking to ?

the person 3 posts above your "star" who's name is "sone"

Paser1
03-06-2009, 01:30 PM
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/7964/photo3m.jpg

Crits please

BigBlueViolence
03-06-2009, 01:55 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/1zyg13n.jpg

Paser1
03-06-2009, 02:41 PM
word yo ill work on it

KARB
03-06-2009, 03:03 PM
http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv168/kushx860x/R1.jpg

crits im working on a piece and ive been using bars ands simpole nd my letter structure is getting so much better

Paser1
03-06-2009, 03:37 PM
http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv168/kushx860x/R1.jpg

crits im working on a piece and ive been using bars ands simpole nd my letter structure is getting so much better

i would get rid of the bar on the back of the R and drop the bars on it a little lower and make sure you dont round the bottoms make it all bars

SONE.
03-06-2009, 03:50 PM
if it makes you feel any better sone, your shit ugly

and yo kest that shit would be rockin if you put one of those half stars in the e

aights well hit me with something helpful atleast. instead opf just bein a dick.

bleh.bleh.bleh
03-06-2009, 04:03 PM
I havn't posted here in timee..
Some shit i been playing about with
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0339-1.jpg
Crits?

Paser1
03-06-2009, 04:05 PM
for tomorrow's wall
http://www.zix.co.il/images/574633882.jpg (http://zix.co.il)

yo kester where can i get a print out of that van? or did you sketch that? lemme know!

bleh.bleh.bleh
03-06-2009, 04:07 PM
You can get them off google, Just type in something along the lines of graffiti templates, That should do the trick.

Paser1
03-06-2009, 04:10 PM
You can get them off google, Just type in something along the lines of graffiti templates, That should do the trick.

thanks bro

bleh.bleh.bleh
03-06-2009, 04:12 PM
Yeah, I typed it in myself since I usually get things wrong on a regular basis, Turned out I was wrong but I found them in the end, Here's the link..http://www.ektopia.co.uk/ektopia/archives/2008/11/06/graffiti-writers-colouring-book

bleh.bleh.bleh
03-06-2009, 04:13 PM
Yeah, I typed it in myself since I usually get things wrong on a regular basis, Turned out I was wrong but I found them in the end, Here's the link...http://www.fakeproject.com/Graf_Paper/

Paser1
03-06-2009, 04:16 PM
Yeah, I typed it in myself since I usually get things wrong on a regular basis, Turned out I was wrong but I found them in the end, Here's the link...http://www.fakeproject.com/Graf_Paper/
haha yea i was like i dont see it....

thank you though you da man

B.S. POLICE
03-06-2009, 04:41 PM
i got train templates too if you need em

(SoS)Viruz
03-06-2009, 04:50 PM
i got train templates too if you need em

I need them :) If yo you have any extras. Oh how you sketch going I didnt Start yet lol.

B.S. POLICE
03-06-2009, 05:07 PM
im done i just need to take a pic, i had rough week so i was planning to get out of touch with the rest of the world for the next two days so i did all my battles in advance! get at me nikkkaaaa.


scratch the train comment, i had a bookmark but it must have gotten deleted one of those times i was cleaning out my computer of all the german bukakke porn

Thrice
03-06-2009, 05:55 PM
Paser-go simpler bro, make it clean and in proportion. Also try to keep the letter style as consistent as possible.

Paser1
03-06-2009, 07:59 PM
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/7523/photo7z.jpg

blue was a bad choice, crits please

(SoS)Viruz
03-06-2009, 08:13 PM
[QUOTE=Paser1;1335199]http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/7523/photo7z.jpg

blue was a bad choice, crits please[/QUO

LOL. I just noticed that. Nice SAVE Kayse.

But you S is a lil too Fat Thin it up a lil....TINY BIT,

loose the lil bumb in the A or switch it up/.

justin kayse
03-06-2009, 08:15 PM
Its supposed to be a throw

GraffitiZoo
03-06-2009, 09:46 PM
aights well hit me with something helpful atleast. instead opf just bein a dick.

change your name

(SoS)Viruz
03-06-2009, 10:08 PM
Ummm Graff zoo whats your Name....Cuase I gettin Light weight Tried of all you guys tryin to diss Sone yo....Its weak. you guys waste your time tryin to look raw, but you should be usin that Energy to get better.

diggitydoggz
03-07-2009, 12:29 AM
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/6334/img000761.jpg

SONE.
03-07-2009, 02:07 AM
sega go even simpler. that A is dece. keep the rest of the letters that simple and straight.

mad fucked up the S on this little straightletter.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090306_2.jpg

..romero..
03-07-2009, 02:16 AM
ill say.....JUST KIDDIN!!! :D

RhodeIsland
03-07-2009, 06:35 AM
Sone make that ''O'' bigger and it with be straight

sex without condoms
03-07-2009, 09:01 AM
took a bunch of doses last night, ima have some weird shit up here soon enough

TastySesamcrew
03-07-2009, 01:06 PM
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/Dekae.jpg

enigmatic
03-07-2009, 05:00 PM
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/DSC_0109.jpg
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/DSC_0110.jpg
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/DSC_0111.jpg
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/DSC_0111.jpg
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/DSC_0112.jpg

Fube
03-07-2009, 05:01 PM
check the toy battle forum,

turny posted.

get in it

SONE.
03-07-2009, 06:07 PM
enig, im diggin it. grimey = dope

(SoS)Viruz
03-07-2009, 06:11 PM
enig, im diggin it. grimey = dope

A Ho I know your going to Enter "Phase" Battle

Germer
03-07-2009, 07:21 PM
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww318/GermerArt/Photo4.jpg
for the silliest of bitches so he'll listen to my crits.

SONE.
03-07-2009, 07:35 PM
A Ho I know your going to Enter "Phase" Battle

Me? aight.

sallybsk
03-07-2009, 07:39 PM
germ is dirty,
one dirty germ.

Germer
03-07-2009, 07:40 PM
i dont know what that means

thanks.

stereobass
03-07-2009, 08:37 PM
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/5501/photo6w.jpg

looking for constructive crits!

KnoxIn
03-07-2009, 08:44 PM
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/3536/p3073017u.jpg
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/8334/p3073019.jpg

ok i know the first one is shitty as hell but i figured i would put it up anyway and the second one i think is decent but i know i shouldn't of put that 3-d on the little extension of the F but other than that any crits???

Germer-sick as hell like it the only thing is the e seems a little off cuz its the only small letter but other than that dope as hell
enigmatic-sick as hell like your fills its different from most as far as colors
m+s- wont lie dont think your letters flow very good seems like it just doesn't fit right
diggidydogs- your proportions are off on some letters try just straight bars
sone-your letters look weird cuz there not all same height at all...
tasty-all i got to say is CLEAN nice work

Aesir
03-07-2009, 09:11 PM
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/6154/1010528ej0.jpg
^new shit
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/1176/1010529dl0.jpg
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/8045/1010530ol3.jpg
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/6670/1010533ap0.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4576/1010532xi3.jpg
http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/6873/1010535nw3.jpg
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7848/1010534xt2.jpg
^semi-old shit

Bump for crits.

..romero..
03-07-2009, 09:51 PM
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/5501/photo6w.jpg

looking for constructive crits!

you remind me of me when i was younger haha..


all i have for oyu is keep practicing and to keep your letters the same size.it looks like your stuff is gettin smaller as you go..

(SoS)Viruz
03-07-2009, 09:52 PM
^^^I give that N8gro Guy about a 2 week giving that any mods see him lol.

..romero..
03-07-2009, 10:08 PM
what?

(SoS)Viruz
03-07-2009, 10:12 PM
Not you. That kid who did that Fava Flava Sketch

BIGel
03-07-2009, 10:32 PM
some decent stuff in here lately, aesier the only thing i could recommend for your throws is to let it flow, the key to a good throw is flow..slippery watery flow. you gotta throw those lines out there faster, nothing kills a toss more than when it looks like it's been sketched carefully.

http://fc21.deviantart.com/fs43/i/2009/066/6/b/paura_foreve_by_bigel.jpg

Germer
03-07-2009, 10:37 PM
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww318/GermerArt/Photo4.jpg
for the silliest of bitches so he'll listen to my crits.
.

..romero..
03-07-2009, 10:42 PM
love the steez in the bottom left corner germs...

Germer
03-07-2009, 10:46 PM
adding three dots to sentences sounds like sarcasm you know.
but thanks, i think youre cool...


haha joking around. thanks though.

stereobass
03-07-2009, 10:54 PM
you remind me of me when i was younger haha..


all i have for oyu is keep practicing and to keep your letters the same size.it looks like your stuff is gettin smaller as you go..


ya i did not notice it got smaller till i saw the pic i took after but thank you ill post another one soon see whats good

..romero..
03-07-2009, 11:08 PM
adding three dots to sentences sounds like sarcasm you know.
but thanks, i think youre cool...


haha joking around. thanks though.

lol.yeah its a bad habit of mine.

SONE.
03-07-2009, 11:55 PM
Faze- yeh i know the letters are wonkey. was just an idea. Ur bottom one is lookin alot better. but id say go even more simple.

Neg_INFLUENZ
03-08-2009, 12:34 AM
Faze- yeh i know the letters are wonkey. was just an idea. Ur bottom one is lookin alot better. but id say go even more simple.

is wonkey a real word? if so, that shit should be in the hiphoptionary


http://fc21.deviantart.com/fs43/i/2009/066/6/b/paura_foreve_by_bigel.jpg

FUCKING ILL

Stel254
03-08-2009, 03:00 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/JUSTIN006.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/JUSTIN045.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/graff038.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/graff040-1.jpg

STEL BACKWARDS
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/graff041.jpg

Tell me what you think...give me some advice and shit..

Bink1
03-08-2009, 04:02 AM
stel - u piece of crap bited S and E from sike in your 2nd sketch.

/DaNk\
03-08-2009, 04:27 AM
stel - u piece of crap bited S and E from sike in your 2nd sketch.

i dont know about the s... but the E looks pretty dam simmilar to sikes lol

downunder
03-08-2009, 05:59 AM
it's a sketch who gives a fuck, the kid is toy and he's trying out different letters... not like those letters have ever been done before either

for talking

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww143/affiliate383/SDC10802.jpg

..romero..
03-08-2009, 11:29 AM
the writes in the fill killed it for me dude.(writes=tags becuase someones gonna bitch probably)




yeah...dont tag inside your letters.

Aesir
03-08-2009, 11:38 AM
instead of having that little bump on the bottom left part of the 'k' i would have just let it be one smooth line. I also didn't like the extensions on the 'i'. And the tags as Romero said. Other than that, its good.

Stel254
03-08-2009, 02:21 PM
Yeah i haven't even seen sikes shit before....

blunttokes
03-08-2009, 02:32 PM
feelin that 2nd one stel.. but u can tell u bit it off someone but do ur thing!

Stel254
03-08-2009, 02:37 PM
Naa man lol i just was bored man...I never bit anyone was listenin to biggie when i did it so it kinda got me in a nice mood..

blunttokes
03-08-2009, 02:41 PM
word^

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LJFe9pP7_go&feature=related
not biggie but dope tune

Stel254
03-08-2009, 02:42 PM
Word..Good looks

Fube
03-08-2009, 03:01 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Image0002.jpg

was...
for... the battle but .... i changed it....

....
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blunttokes
03-08-2009, 03:03 PM
very clean fube

..romero..
03-08-2009, 03:13 PM
the e is beast imo.

(SoS)Viruz
03-08-2009, 03:30 PM
Yo Too all. This is one of the 2 last call outs for the "PHASE" battle. So far I have 9 entries. If i get a couple of more I can have a Advance Toy, and Regular Toy polls. So send them in to me when you get done. Im going to poll them at. 10 O'CLOK Eastern Time.(US) So get on it and send your entires to ME, I a few hours Im going to remind you guys again. ight PEACE

Stel254
03-08-2009, 03:31 PM
http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff97/jbang2112/graff002.jpg
Just did it..

Zase
03-08-2009, 03:52 PM
okay lemme just be a postwhore
http://i44.tinypic.com/2cxvryp.jpg
efame in tha game

hehe hollar

ill crit some later on maybe imma go spray now

onefiftyone
03-08-2009, 04:48 PM
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk146/nazeer87/art/104_0167.jpg
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk146/nazeer87/art/104_0166.jpg
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk146/nazeer87/art/104_0168.jpg

Zase
03-08-2009, 05:06 PM
`dope what u want me to write for ya :D

NeVeR4O1
03-08-2009, 05:29 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/graff010.jpg
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/madpaint023.jpg
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/neverwild.jpg
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/S7302280.jpg
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/S7302282.jpg
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/S7302281.jpg
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/S7302283.jpg

RhodeIsland
03-08-2009, 05:31 PM
Going simple never hurt anyone >_>

NeVeR4O1
03-08-2009, 05:33 PM
o i go simple all the time
crits?
want more?

RhodeIsland
03-08-2009, 05:36 PM
You should just stick with simps for now

NeVeR4O1
03-08-2009, 05:42 PM
thats just some of the stuff ive done over a couple years, cant post em anywhere else
but i feel ya simps sometimes just look clean

NeVeR4O1
03-08-2009, 05:51 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/graff005.jpg
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/graff008.jpg
heres jus some simps i had in my book

Incite
03-08-2009, 06:00 PM
eh, fucked up on the "e" when inking since my thumb is still recovering, so i just winged it. then my daughter smudged the "s"... so i doubt i'll attempt to finish or redo.

http://i44.tinypic.com/6qwdw4.jpg

onefiftyone
03-08-2009, 06:12 PM
anyone got any feedback for me?

RhodeIsland
03-08-2009, 06:22 PM
151 do keyboard letters

(SoS)Viruz
03-08-2009, 06:26 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan-1.jpg
My Rough Sketch that Im workin on. let here those Crits

Incite
03-08-2009, 06:37 PM
in my opinion, you're using too much color and colors that dont go well together. but then again, i color comics on my tablet and been doin so for about 4 years so im accustomed to that style now. havent done graffiti in forever.

1st one, looks like you concentrated more on coloring it that my eyes go towards the background instead of the letters themselves, and it should be the opposite.

2nd one, i have no idea what it says, the fill is nice though, nice and solid.

3rd one, are those "p"s or "g"s? aint feeling that style of coloring, looks like something i'd see on a highschool banner.

would comment on the structure of your letters but each person has their own style and will eventually find something that fits them.

wpgtags
03-08-2009, 07:58 PM
crits?
http://i42.tinypic.com/a3eftf.jpg
kinda sucks cos i did it so fast

Germer
03-08-2009, 08:00 PM
if i could see it i would crit it ya.

edit: well done. quick on the draw.

strictly talking about structure, the random flaily bars that come off the main bars end in a dull flat rectangle shape. aka a plain old bad style, that you cant do yet.

wpgtags
03-08-2009, 08:16 PM
if i could see it i would crit it ya.

edit: well done. quick on the draw.

a plain old bad style, that you cant do yet.

thats what she said

Germer
03-08-2009, 08:19 PM
pretty much every aspect of the post if you think about it.

Paser1
03-08-2009, 08:26 PM
i came up with a one liner two letter throw last night drunk as hell lol but i put some effort into it today and i kinda like it im gonna post later tonight around the time the phase battle is gettin posted so im gonna need some constructive crits pleassseeeee thanks!

(SoS)Viruz
03-08-2009, 08:30 PM
Last Call be for I post the "PHASE" battle you have......about 1hr and 30min bevfor I post this shit. I have 11 enteries so that enough for a Toy/Intermedite. But keep'em comming

..romero..
03-08-2009, 09:16 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan-1.jpg
My Rough Sketch that Im workin on. let here those Crits

i think the e needs work homie.the head of it.it looks like its squished down.maybe raise it up.idk how to explain it so ill draw it out for you maybe...hold on.

..romero..
03-08-2009, 09:22 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/qyfleg.jpg

this is how i would have done it.see how it has like a neck or whatever.yeah thas all it needs.t is alright tho...

Incite
03-08-2009, 11:47 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/1zlawq1.jpg

got bored and had photoshop open

b SQUARED 08
03-09-2009, 12:35 AM
So I haven't sketched anything in awhile and we were talking about my buddies who are in Georgia doing military training the other day, so I decided that I'm going to write their names for them. The only pic that I have isn't too great, but the Monopoly guy was one of those, "Hey, I think that would look really good" moments, so I went with it lol. I know it could use some improving.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_8457.jpg

HRbN
03-09-2009, 12:44 AM
for the phase battle cause its past the due date and not posted yet... ;)

i fucked up the blue but it is what it is
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/8148/phasebattle.jpg

hAveK x
03-09-2009, 02:27 AM
new one i finished, kinda had to speed through this one but gimme some crits.. honest ones please...
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/8702/10960030.png

peace89
03-09-2009, 07:49 AM
trying a new name crits please

Facedorateur
03-09-2009, 11:11 AM
Havek: really dig it man, keep it up, just make the 3d a little less plain

Diaf: nice simples, but i dont like the ''partial'' D

sKeeLo
03-09-2009, 12:20 PM
virus - that lil squiggly tail thing you did to the right end of the top horizontal bar of the T doesnt look right. either fatten that up so it covers more up behind the part of the E that comes over or figure some other way of ending that end of the bar . . .your drop shadow (if thats what u were trying to do) is off by alot, actually going complete opposite ways in some parts.

havek - not bad, maybe try and make those inner green fill do-dads alil smaller like eberyone else who does that, maybe trying making some hollow too instead of filling them all in . . . i wouldnt worry about having your 3d be a plain one color, if your posting in the toy forum you should stick to solid color fills and 3ds when you paint.

diggitydoggz
03-09-2009, 12:34 PM
phase - nice simple - i dont really like the silver thing though... the color looks kinda weird on that green IMO
havek - that shit is tight... i'm diggin it, especially the shine and your bars. what does it say though?
diaf - nice, i like the simple, i don't like that effect on the round part of the D though

here's a new one i made

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2880/img000762.jpg

crits plz

hAveK x
03-09-2009, 01:09 PM
it says traci. and i wanted to do more with the 3d and fill but like i said i had to speed through it, the girl i made it for was moving thursday and i had to finish it in like 4 class periods..

KnoxIn
03-09-2009, 01:09 PM
diggidy-sega i dont like the dark fill with the black 3-d and dont have the 3-d cover the letters

B.mike
03-09-2009, 02:10 PM
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk306/thatcat/e040f281.jpg


This is only of my first ones...i know i got kinda out of hand with it but what do you think.

La Coka Nostra
03-09-2009, 02:21 PM
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3369/wildstyle.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/my.php?image=wildstyle.jpg)



whoever alex is, i got his number now.
muahahahahah!

Sizzuurp
03-09-2009, 02:23 PM
graffzoo that shit is nuts. the last one especially.

bmike ur gettin wayyyyyyyyyy to ahead of yourself. read the new to graff thread