Blackbooks

[b SQUARED 08]

So I haven't sketched anything in awhile and we were talking about my buddies who are in Georgia doing military training the other day, so I decided that I'm going to write their names for them. The only pic that I have isn't too great, but the Monopoly guy was one of those, "Hey, I think that would look really good" moments, so I went with it lol. I know it could use some improving.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_8457.jpg

[HëRbN]

for the phase battle cause its past the due date and not posted yet... ;)

i fucked up the blue but it is what it is
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/8148/phasebattle.jpg

[hAveK x]

new one i finished, kinda had to speed through this one but gimme some crits.. honest ones please...
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/8702/10960030.png

[peace89]

trying a new name crits please

[Facedorateur]

Havek: really dig it man, keep it up, just make the 3d a little less plain

Diaf: nice simples, but i dont like the ''partial'' D

[sKeeLo]

virus - that lil squiggly tail thing you did to the right end of the top horizontal bar of the T doesnt look right. either fatten that up so it covers more up behind the part of the E that comes over or figure some other way of ending that end of the bar . . .your drop shadow (if thats what u were trying to do) is off by alot, actually going complete opposite ways in some parts.

havek - not bad, maybe try and make those inner green fill do-dads alil smaller like eberyone else who does that, maybe trying making some hollow too instead of filling them all in . . . i wouldnt worry about having your 3d be a plain one color, if your posting in the toy forum you should stick to solid color fills and 3ds when you paint.

[diggitydoggz]

phase - nice simple - i dont really like the silver thing though... the color looks kinda weird on that green IMO
havek - that shit is tight... i'm diggin it, especially the shine and your bars. what does it say though?
diaf - nice, i like the simple, i don't like that effect on the round part of the D though

here's a new one i made

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2880/img000762.jpg

crits plz

[hAveK x]

it says traci. and i wanted to do more with the 3d and fill but like i said i had to speed through it, the girl i made it for was moving thursday and i had to finish it in like 4 class periods..

[KnoxIn]

diggidy-sega i dont like the dark fill with the black 3-d and dont have the 3-d cover the letters

[B.mike]

http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk306/thatcat/e040f281.jpg


This is only of my first ones...i know i got kinda out of hand with it but what do you think.

[La Coka Nostra]

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3369/wildstyle.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/my.php?image=wildstyle.jpg)



whoever alex is, i got his number now.
muahahahahah!

[Sizzuurp]

graffzoo that shit is nuts. the last one especially.

bmike ur gettin wayyyyyyyyyy to ahead of yourself. read the new to graff thread

[seywhat]

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage0.jpg
crits???

graffzoo- feelin that prisma tree, would like to see somethin new
mike- bars
herbn- hand needs nuch work, everything else is pretty solid

[Kaiser71]

graffzoo- feelin that prisma tree, would like to see somethin new



I think it's supposed to be a mushroom cloud/atom bomb. Either way, great job getting in the highlighting and shadows of smoke with just a couple shades of gray.

[b SQUARED 08]

So I haven't sketched anything in awhile and we were talking about my buddies who are in Georgia doing military training the other day, so I decided that I'm going to write their names for them. The only pic that I have isn't too great, but the Monopoly guy was one of those, "Hey, I think that would look really good" moments, so I went with it lol. I know it could use some improving.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_8457.jpg

Bump from the last page (forgot the give crits to get crits rule lol)...

Seyar: I like your S and E, and the R could probably work, but the Y and A stick out. I think that you have too many bends and edges around the outsides of both of those letters. Notice how rounded the s,e, and r are and how jagged looking the y and a are.

GraffitiZoo: That shit's crazy man. Nice work.

B.mike: That's not looking too hot. Read up before you pick up the pen next time. No designs or colors yet; your letters are hurtin'.

[RhodeIsland]

Take a better picture

[KJay]

BSQAURED- i guess uve got the idea with simples and what not, keep it up
Seywhat- all good
graffzoo- all good

[GraffitiZoo]

whoever alex is, i got his number now.
muahahahahah!

lol thats his old number

and thanks a lot guys for the positive feedback I will post more later

[KnoxIn]

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/4792/p3093022.jpg
here is a page the FAZE has already been posted but i did the other one today eveyone keeps tellin me get rid of the points do i got the right idea???
crits always welcomed

k-jay-simples man try and get your proportions right
b-squared- cant really see it so i dunno
seywhat-hella clean and damn good fill
bmike-keyboard letters
graffitizoo- i like em, are you going to fill any of them??

[ESKiMO2]

Honey. Lines done on paper, colored in Photo Shop.

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/9472/honeyd.jpg

Sey- dope

Everyone else go a bit simpler.

[GraffitiZoo]

graffitizoo- i like em, are you going to fill any of them??

no like I said those are really old no point in coloring them now...the only reason I even posted them was because they were already on my computer.

I will post new ones with color later

[Zase]

eskimo just belive me work on the overlapping 3d the skinny lines just wont do
faze its better now make the latters fat
seyar check ya R

http://i41.tinypic.com/2hf2pg3.jpg
quicky simple bomb before bed

[GraffitiZoo]

dope except the top of the S dosent flow too many spikes

[(SoS)Viruz]

That a S....
But Zase.... The R is getting Better man, I say....Just a lil bit more on the Loop in the R to match the size of the Kick and your good. Also fixed that S. Cause at frist it flows but after you added the extra spikes its looses flow feel me

[ESKiMO2]

Zase- thats my favorite one from you. Keep that shit up!

[b SQUARED 08]

Zase- thats my favorite one from you. Keep that shit up!
Same. That's quality right there. Run with it.

[..romero..]

http://i43.tinypic.com/nywd37.jpg

for being a mega post whore...to lazy to finish anything.....just like the DUTCH! hahahahaha....


jk.i love the dutchdutch are fags

[Fube]

spots open for the battle royale.

last chance to get in.

check the toy battle forum for details.


Fube.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Ight hos.....Better get ready for the next Sketch battle. The Word is Sycthe. I want to see as many entiers if not more than I had last time. :). Ight.
I'm going to be chosing hard words just so we can get practice,and that way you letter range will broaden. WILL IGHT PEACE

[klic]

exhange with sea

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SEAPieceandTag.jpg

romero - i like it other than your c, id keep the two parts connected without the line through it, nice handstyle too

zase - looks dope like always, id fix up the top of your s like graffitizoo said

eskimo - i normally love your shit but i cant say the same about this piece, id make your O bigger, work on your E, and not make the bottom of your Y so big

faze - yeah thats what i meant by rounding your edges.. move the middle bar of your A up higher

kjay - dont worry too much about the coloring now and focus on the letters

cliff - haha im lovin' the monopoly man, ink it and fill'er in

seyar - dope colours, make the main bar of your E wider and the middle bar not so wide, i don't like your R that much either, looks fresh overall though

b.mike - whats the first letter? dont worry about fills too much for now

[ESKiMO2]

Honey of the ESKiMO (random i dont know wtf it means)

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/8930/honeyoftheeskimo.jpg

Yeaahh I colored the old version of the sketch.

[Sizzuurp]

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/4921/0309092353.jpg

[sex without condoms]

shitty cell phone pictures
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00112.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00113.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00114.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00115.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00116.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00117.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00125.jpg

[SONE.]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090309.jpg
tryin somethin new. theres still pencil behind the outline, im not done.

[Sizzuurp]

i like where the 6th one is goin but the L and the i look awkward

[SONE.]

3d
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090309_1.jpg

fucked up the bottom 3d... i fixed it a lil but its still messed. Lics that throwie is nice. but i dont really like ur style on everythin else. Its got potential, but iono how.

[NoCanControl]

sone. i don't like your style idky.
graffitizoo. you letters are okay. i can see em i think, pro? if so youre doing a good job, cept for the fact that its really gooofy, to me. looks generic. probably cuz there is so much negitive space.... idk!
lick. you k lacks. but i like where your style is, and is going. props.
eskimo. your throw needs work. and your flow on the honey piece is funky. and has dead space. try to kill that dead space.


and fube i want in.

[SONE.]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090309_4.jpg

fuuuck, im going back to simps.

[GraffitiZoo]

[QUOTE=NoCanControl;1337795]
graffitizoo. you letters are okay. i can see em i think, pro? if so youre doing a good job, cept for the fact that its really gooofy, to me. looks generic. probably cuz there is so much negitive space.... idk!
QUOTE]

that was b4 I understood letter structure. I just went crazy

[SONE.]

honestly i need help with extensions and complicating my work. because all i do is try to trick out simps and it fails hard. anyone got some tips?

[MaNtS]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/09032009492.jpg

something im working on.

[Incite]

honestly i need help with extensions and complicating my work. because all i do is try to trick out simps and it fails hard. anyone got some tips?

a lot of the "complicated" pieces out there look like shit in my opinion, atleast the letters themselves do. but the color, ink and everything else make the letters look amazing.

[B.S. POLICE]

i want to be a fucking mini mod

[00-made-00]

Same here mr.po po its sucks.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/Sycthe.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

wtf happend under the y?

[00-made-00]

Well i saw something on the tv and laughed and my 3d went crazy, so i stuck some paper underneath it to make it look more normal.

[B.S. POLICE]

lolz

[Incite]

ran out of room... which i guess is a good thing cause the "s" doesnt match the rest of the letters. so i'll probably redo it.

http://i40.tinypic.com/5b6v77.jpg

[KnoxIn]

incite- the whole thing isn't bad except the bottom left of the H shoulda left that out its kinda skittywompus

[downunder]

you know your in trouble when the battle mod cant spell "scythe"

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww143/affiliate383/SDC10815.jpg
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww143/affiliate383/SDC10814.jpg

[sike_21]

incite-yea and i now some one that does the lil cracks at the en of the letters too...
i wonder who???? anyone know?
any ways not much to crit
sone-not fellin it
piloh-look just like your phase entrie change it up some
licks- not my style
eskimo- nice throw

the sketch-
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0785.jpg

the finished-
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0803.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

keep it up irek
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture003-6.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

aaaaah, dope!

[fitzy36]

my first 2 pieces,well attempt..
http://i44.tinypic.com/2804fx0.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/207vyax.jpg

[RhodeIsland]

I tried going simple this time
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/IMG_0910.jpg

[HëRbN]

hyte - i like your style alot only thing about that simp im not feelin is the T, its lacking the flavor or spice the rest of your letters have.

fitsy - Go simpler, you have the right idea but try re-doing those with some smooth flowing bars

Tezer- i dig it, only thing i would change is putting a hole of some sort in the R

Sike - shits tight, good use of space!

irek- really liking the newer style, good job with filling negetive space. lets see one painted!

zoo- that 2nd wild style looks pretty dope, would like to see it finished.

Havent critted in awhile so i thought id hit the page up :)

[SONE.]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090310_3.jpg
my camera made it look kinda messed in the 3d. the red inside burn on the 3D looks black :/

[yahrgimapirate!]

sike, i really really dig your style
niks? i think...im not really feein the jaggedy letters
hyte-love that e

got bored for about 15 minutes...i kinda hate the fill
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/1506/graff3.jpg (http://img9.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff3.jpg)

[(SoS)Viruz]

you know your in trouble when the battle mod cant spell "scythe"

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww143/affiliate383/SDC10815.jpg
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww143/affiliate383/SDC10814.jpg

Why are you always on my dick after that battle, Damn I thought we were off of that. Get off you high horse yo. GET OVER IT, Whats done is done, and stop tryin these lil cheep shots cause they are lame.

O AND THE WORD STANDS AS IT IS......So fuck off, who cares its a sketch battle or are you made that you cant sketch Sycthe, STFU

[(SoS)Viruz]

With that Aside, Changed the E,and workin on devlopin this A. So Crtis
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan-2.jpg

Irek-loose that Bar comming through your N,andK looks Whack.
Hyte- Work on the Y its a lil weak nice simp tho
Fitzy- Simps bro. Look at Hyte for example
GraffZoo- GOOO way simpilar

[NoCanControl]

where's the url to the battle?

and wings that looks alot like hates' style... just sayin...

:/

[(SoS)Viruz]

It an Onld Toy Throwie battle he won last year. (Throwies aren't my thing) But ever since then he acts like he soooooooo Raw, and tries to diss me everytime he gets which is mad lame.

[GraffitiZoo]

With that Aside, Changed the E,and workin on devlopin this A. So Crtis
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan-2.jpg

GraffZoo- GOOO way simpilar

I know this is just stuff I have on my computer....it looks like your basing your letters to much off of other peoples graffiti go back to block and work off of that.

[sallybsk]

NIKS or whatever the fuck
what the fuck? lose the color scheme and all the excess shit. Make bars less shaky O_O
lose dead space

SWEK
just doesn't look good man. you're right about the fill too.
your bars in the E and the K don't have consistency, curvy letters aren't that appealing(maybe that's just me) try building off of simples,

TEAR
Same with you, build off simples, graffzoo was right about it maybe trying to look like something else.
Also, you've already got some inconsistency, your T doesn't overlap your E as much as the E over laps the A... make it the same, too much dead space in between.

PRETTY MUCH EVERYONE else, keep it up.

[Hearr!]

hiyaa, first postt. i write Hear 2, not that any of you care. this is my most recent piece, but ive got something new on the way.

http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/Picture053.jpg

i wouldnt mind crits, but i already know this pice is wack.

[Germer]

i really dont see an h yet.

[Hearr!]

as i mentioned, its wack, i know. but its a lower case h with an extension coming out of the left side.

[Stel254]

http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff97/jbang2112/graff006.jpg
Crits please. Just did it kinda a new style..

[Hearr!]

drop the extension from the S to the T, and round out the S a little more to fit the rest of the sketch.

[SONE.]

not feelin it at all. too skinny, and ur trying to hard to make it complicated. go with simples.

[(SoS)Viruz]

NIKS or whatever the fuck
what the fuck? lose the color scheme and all the excess shit. Make bars less shaky O_O
lose dead space

SWEK
just doesn't look good man. you're right about the fill too.
your bars in the E and the K don't have consistency, curvy letters aren't that appealing(maybe that's just me) try building off of simples,

TEAR
Same with you, build off simples, graffzoo was right about it maybe trying to look like something else.
Also, you've already got some inconsistency, your T doesn't overlap your E as much as the E over laps the A... make it the same, too much dead space in between.

PRETTY MUCH EVERYONE else, keep it up.

haha. Ight man, I work on fixin that DeadSpace. But withthe E and the A, Im still tryin to fix them up,it was thier frist time I ever used them like that. :). I probly break it down a lil more. lol, still tryin to find myself is hard lol. But I'll get it done

[..romero..]

http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff97/jbang2112/graff006.jpg
Crits please. Just did it kinda a new style..

i aint tryna diss you or nothing dude but.....drop this style.its goin nowhere.i used to rock stuff like this..when i first started out.im tellin you it wont do you no good.work on bars.i know thats all anyone says that but.

[Stel254]

ight yo i feel you...I was tryin some new shit...

[ice age]

a few new things
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/blue2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/bandw2.jpg
same shit dif day
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/green2.jpg
i fucking hate this one but im posting it anyway

[RetroLikeWhoa13]

i like the last one the best, actually.

[Hearr!]

hiyaa, first postt. i write Hear 2, not that any of you care. this is my most recent piece, but ive got something new on the way.

http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/Picture053.jpg

i wouldnt mind crits, but i already know this pice is wack.

bump? (im still new here, will i get hated for doing this?)

[RhodeIsland]

try going a little more simple next time

[Hearr!]

yeah, ive got lots o' simple stuff, should i post that?

[(SoS)Viruz]

Yo Rhode....Look back on the other page and tell me what you think....I need somemore Crits.(By decent ppl)

Plus IM too lazy to bump

[-Wings-]

Havent been postin alot lately.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2541.jpg

[what4joke...]

With that Aside, Changed the E,and workin on devlopin this A. So Crtis
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan-2.jpg

Irek-loose that Bar comming through your N,andK looks Whack.
Hyte- Work on the Y its a lil weak nice simp tho
Fitzy- Simps bro. Look at Hyte for example
GraffZoo- GOOO way simpilar
i like it but the angle of the letters going down. its a little steep for my taste

[klic]

exhange with sea

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SEAPieceandTag.jpg

romero - i like it other than your c, id keep the two parts connected without the line through it, nice handstyle too

zase - looks dope like always, id fix up the top of your s like graffitizoo said

eskimo - i normally love your shit but i cant say the same about this piece, id make your O bigger, work on your E, and not make the bottom of your Y so big

faze - yeah thats what i meant by rounding your edges.. move the middle bar of your A up higher

kjay - dont worry too much about the coloring now and focus on the letters

cliff - haha im lovin' the monopoly man, ink it and fill'er in

seyar - dope colours, make the main bar of your E wider and the middle bar not so wide, i don't like your R that much either, looks fresh overall though

b.mike - whats the first letter? dont worry about fills too much for now

bump no crits

wings - alot better than the old stuff you used to post here

hear - youll get hated if you dont give any crits

viruz - id give you some crits but i dont want to help out my opponent... haha jk just fix the top of your e up

[ice age]

tear i told you before homie im not feeling that e
your t and a are good but that e dosnt work for me

[(SoS)Viruz]

Workin on that E, Im going to take those spettit type Strands off my letters for now on :)

But thanks guy, O and I didnt mean for it to go in a angle like that, But you know 4 oclock in the morring talkin on the phone to yo girl. Shit I was Bored and Tired. :)

[what4joke...]

i know exactly what ya mean ;)

[ice age]

dude yeah i understand
and i just relized i said your t and a are good
hahaha wow im out of it

[(SoS)Viruz]

dude yeah i understand
and i just relized i said your t and a are good
hahaha wow im out of it

HAHAHA we got a joker. Lets see some of your Flicks. But if you tryin to play me Battle mel. LOL.

IM FUNNY

[what4joke...]

oh shyt call out! ^ back out, u a cunthole . do u wanna be known as a cunthole?!

[(SoS)Viruz]

Who, me if sooo.....BS is a Joke lol. Go out and paint,get up. I'm not going to waste my time with homos, Somethin i learned from my Boy Rasek.

[what4joke...]

no, that kid who said ur shit sucked. i wanna see u battle lol

[ice age]

you want to see some of my flicks?
scroll up... mid page
bro im not trying to PLAY you
i said t and a like tits and ass it was funny
calm down before you get punked

[yahrgimapirate!]

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/2339/64752436.jpg (http://img17.imageshack.us/my.php?image=64752436.jpg)
fuck Ws i can never fucking make a decent one. this was supposed to be way more simple but ill let you guys rip it apart

[what4joke...]

i kninda like that, just go less shaky.

[ice age]

tear idk what your problem is homie but
i wasnt saying you suck but if you want to battel
cool whatever

[RetroLikeWhoa13]

i agree with What4, swek.

[(SoS)Viruz]

YO Ice age your Bad. First you tried to say Oh I said you A and E and good. Makin a smart ass remark....The Word is "Rasek" {I have to do any exchange for him anyway sooo this will help) NO COLOR, Pure letters, PURE SKETCH.

Its Due when ever you get it to me.

[KJay]

New name Izoh i be workin on
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/2879/izoh.jpg

Klic- looks good simple, structured, not much more to say
yargimapirate- looks legit just make the letters less shaky

[sike_21]

yo i want beef with every one on this site you herd l0l everyone but you guys dont try to jump me with your writing ok... come on guy seriously we all post here just to hear someone say something nice about our graff and if one person post something bad about it the whole site flips shit get over it words dont mean shit and if you let them affect you on the internet it shows how much of a selfconcious person your are getting panties in a bunch over what you read makes me wanna wahahahahahahaha for hours l0l anyways ima go enjoy my high peace and bump
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0785.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0803.jpg[/QUOTE]

[(SoS)Viruz]

LOL....Word. Tryin to be like me huh. But dude was talkin shit.........And I know I asked for crits but once you talk it...man lol. And I was having a bad day.

BUT I SEE YOU BROKE IT DOWN FOR US IN THAT SKECTCH FINALY.

[sike_21]

huh??.....l0l

[lyonssb321]

what do you think...
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1394.jpg
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1648.jpg
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1649.jpg
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1650.jpg
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1653.jpg
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1654.jpg

[KnoxIn]

hey sike how do you figure out where your extensions go and all that like i have done simps and shit for a while and im not tryin to get all crazy i just want to know how to kinda get started with other shit any advice?? not just sike everyone that does decent extensions

sin- your simple bubble letters are pretty good i like the page above that dragon or whatever the hell it is haha but watch your proportions

[SONE.]

Hear2 start at the begining man. if thats an H, im super man. you need serious structure.

[sike_21]

just get lucky... sike nah just make you letters firts simple then with a pencil go and add shit if doesnt look rite erase it and try something else after a while you will just see in your head. i think thats how i do it l0l anyone else? got something for the man

[SONE.]

VIRUS! pm me where you from. you know rasek?

[EST2007]

just playing around with some letters... it says jess

http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/uploads/03102009%20Milford%20-%20Jess'%20sketchbook_1crop.jpg

[klic]

whyd rasek leave bombingscience anyway?

[MeanMug]

Posted in the wrong forum and the mods canned my shit (I'm on toy status lol). Can a brother get some feedback on my letter structure I know that I need work? 1st page of my new BB... And the colors were just an experiment to see what looked good and what didn't so lemmie know what you think.

[KJay]

bump no crits

New name Izoh i be workin on
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/2879/izoh.jpg

Klic- looks good simple, structured, not much more to say
yargimapirate- looks legit just make the letters less shaky

Mean mug- u might want to thicken up some of the bars in ur letters, but ur better then i so its ur call. other then that its the some o the dopest shit ive seen in a long while. the flower that im sure is in nintendo games, and all that other good stuff good work

[SONE.]

mean mug, youve clearly got skills. but youre letters are bunk. check out the "new to graff" thread. teaches you tonnes.

[sex without condoms]

took a bunch of doses last night, ima have some weird shit up here soon enough

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235005.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235221-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235234.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235251.jpg

not on acid.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235304.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235313.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235342.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235356.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234619.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234712.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234722.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234736.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234748.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234805.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234819.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234838.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234829.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234900.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234923.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234934.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235020.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235053.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235104.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235131.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/235142.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

Acid Dragon is the shit, man.

[/DaNk\]

how many hits did u drop ?

[KnoxIn]

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/9219/p3103024.jpg
ok so here is another drawing... i know i went back to my pointy shit i dunno why but still crits?? i hate the E its horrible the only things i really like is the Z but still crits on it all

sexwithout-not really diggin em, you got some that are good and others that i think are horrible try and keep it consistent
kjay- lookin decent the only thing is on the top one the H at the end on the bottom right one how it goes all bent i dont really like that its outa place

[hAveK x]

just try and make the letter's the same size, and work on the flow.

[hAveK x]

another pic. just finished, says spun.
crits please
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/5601/spun.png

[lyonssb321]

what you guys think of this....
i think i put to many cracks lol
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1647.jpg

[hAveK x]

ummmmmm, agreed with wat u said, and work on your letters...

[lyonssb321]

ya you think they look tooo simple or just junk..
any more advice would be cool

[lyonssb321]

ya you think they look tooo simple or just junk..
any more advice would be cool

[SONE.]

go to the new to graff forum. dont wanna hate but that is garbage. youre getting to ahead of yourself. its just ur bomb with very abd cracks.


NEW TO GRAFF thred. go there.

[lyonssb321]

OK so iv been playing with the bars and i got these.... any better ?
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1656.jpg
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1659.jpg

[SONE.]

no man ur doin it wrong. simple as shit. then work on getting it fancy. there is no way youre going to start and start puttin out dope letters right away. best to stay with simple bars and learn some structure.

still doesnt look like u get bars./

[Incite]

another pic. just finished, says spun.
crits please
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/5601/spun.png

what you did with that top left arrow on the "s", you should've did with the whole piece, instead of of having what looks like random highlights. if the 3d black was the same shade as the fill, i think it wouldve been better as well.

[sallybsk]

did you just say sex with out condoms has horrible work? ON OR OFF ACID, I'M ON SEXS NUTS. sex > you.

oh and lyson, you still don't get bars, like sone said.

and havek. I don't see an S. sorry man, no structure it looks to me. and your U looks like an 'X' because the bars are connected. and your N looks like a Z with an extension off of it. It looks like you did a piece of your handy or something, Not digging the straight bars that are all like that.

[Incite]

OK so iv been playing with the bars and i got these.... any better ?
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1656.jpg


when i first started i never knew about "bars"... i just studied other graffiti and noticed that each line must align to anther. but from what i've gathered on this site, this is what they mean by "bars"

http://i41.tinypic.com/2yun3er.jpg

[Bink1]

sexwithout-not really diggin em, you got some that are good and others that i think are horrible try and keep it consistent
place



look at yourself , jeez. his shit is decent your stuff is always the same and fucked :o

[woonybomber]

[QUOTE=lyonssb321;1339026]OK so iv been playing with the bars and i got these.... any better ?
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1656.jpg
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1659.jpg




SIMPELER




wone m.c.l.

my
crazy
life

[woonybomber]

when i first started i never knew about "bars"... i just studied other graffiti and noticed that each line must align to anther. but from what i've gathered on this site, this is what they mean by "bars"

http://i41.tinypic.com/2yun3er.jpg

stop putin the add on at the top of the s nd it will be better

[fitzy36]

some letters i'm trying to develop thanks to the 'new to graffiti' thread...it is still pretty rough (especially the 'd' ), any advice??

http://i44.tinypic.com/binkp1.jpg

[sex without condoms]

how many hits did u drop ?

2 at the start of my night and then more at the even more doses picture i but im not really sure how many smarties i ate...

[/DaNk\]

2 at the start of my night and then more at the even more doses picture i but im not really sure how many smarties i ate...

nice dude.... cid is the shit but i havnt tripped in a minute tho lol

[Hallo Gen]

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/5119/dsc02478.jpg

[Sizzuurp]

hey hallo i think you should read the new to graffiti thread. ur gonna have to start from scratch

[Incite]

does that say "bad"?

[Incite]

proof that its a "bite"?

[Hallo Gen]

hey hallo i think you should read the new to graffiti thread. ur gonna have to start from scratch


Haha i hear ya sizz :)

[Sizzuurp]

most ppl bitch and complain about crits like that but i can see ur gonna do just fine kid.

[Hallo Gen]

ot a full bite but a very good attempt just look at the s

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0785.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0803.jpg[/QUOTE][/QUOTE]


Okay Sike, your stuff looks nice and chill.... but frankly i really dont see the resemblence that you see...

I wouldnt be doing this if all was going to do is copy :P

Sorry if you feel i copied, but thats not what im about babes :)

[headsick123]

crits:
fitzey- start simple... work on basic letter structure.
hallo gen- yeah...you need to start really simple.. new to grafff forum is best.
Sike- bumppppps.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/headsick123/EKLversion1.jpg

[Incite]

ot a full bite but a very good attempt just look at the s

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0785.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0803.jpg[/quote][/quote]

writing "s" like that is very common, i used to draw them very similar back in the day.

when your letters arent "abstract" they will look somewhat alike.

[SONE.]

when i first started i never knew about "bars"... i just studied other graffiti and noticed that each line must align to anther. but from what i've gathered on this site, this is what they mean by "bars"

http://i41.tinypic.com/2yun3er.jpg

yes thats how bars work. but before you jump into making crazy letters you need to start simple. SIMPLE. block letters. keyboard letters.

[HëRbN]

hallo gen - are you a girl?

on the crit level tho, you should really use simpler bars with no extentions and no add ons. start that way, get them down pac then move up. thats how it HAS to go. thats how everyone here thats any good did it.

[Germer]

sike you need to get over yourself. the s a nd e that you do in every sketch are the most frequently used versions of those letters ever. his skecth bares as much resemblance ot yours as yours does to a million others ive seen before. when you skecth oter words for battles i like your stuff so much better.

[sike_21]

aaaahhhhwhat is everyone talking about?????

















:D

[headsick123]

crits please? thanks.


crits:
fitzey- start simple... work on basic letter structure.
hallo gen- yeah...you need to start really simple.. new to grafff forum is best.
Sike- bumppppps.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/headsick123/EKLversion1.jpg

[sike_21]

do what you told fitzey to do

[headsick123]

that helps so much....

[sike_21]

well then maybe you shouldnt say it to other ppl anyways if you cant tell that your not that good on you own then let me help you "you suck" and so do i A LOT but i have a better understanding of letters than you do so take my advice and go and make very simple letters picture it like this remember when you were a little kid and they taught you how to write letters you made those big ass one that took up the whole line then slowy you got better at making them then eventually learned cursive then you just had your own way of writing some betters than other... same prosses different goal

[headsick123]

dude i never said that i dont suck.. this is my first time writing these letters. but why bother giving me crits that say "same thing you said" thats all im sayin.

[(SoS)Viruz]

I removed all of the Bumb add on and. Went with my Str8 letters. Crits.
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0001-1.jpg

[La Coka Nostra]

i would say flip the top bar of the t around so that it slants up, leaving you more room to work with the e.
maybe try a lowercase a<---like this. that one doesn't really flow right with the e.

i'm left handed, so i can't draw well with a mouse, but you get the idea...

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/687/scan00011f.jpg


edit..also, if you're gonna do an r at the end, take your T the way it is now, and add bars to make it an r.
if you flip the t around, and do the R like that, it will look sort of symmetrical. PM me if you don't understand and you want to.

[Germer]

very good crit ^ listen to that one
although i think more can be done to change the skecth

[b SQUARED 08]

fitzy, Hallo Gen, and headsick: Go much simpler. You'll get much better results and you'll learn the structure of the letters you're writing much better.
Tea: Ditch that lump on the left side of your T and I agree with La Coka Nostra on flipping the top bar on the T so that you have more room for the E. Definitely lose the bar connecting the portions of the E too; that's not doing anything. Also, from the looks of it, that lowercase a seems to work better how it has been drawn out above.

Here's a much better pic of what I posted a few days ago. I've got the outline goin' now. Crits are appreciated.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_8476.jpg

[La Coka Nostra]

very good crit ^ listen to that one
although i think more can be done to change the skecth



truth.
i would fuck with the E more too if i was you.
make all the bars the same width.

[LeaksOne]

i'm left handed

hey me too!!!

[14 25 13 16 8 15]

simple exchanges crit or dont crit i dont care
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture-4.jpg

[LeaksOne]

is your user name a lottery number? an those look straight to me

[14 25 13 16 8 15]

no my user name spells nimfo each number is the number of the letter in the alphabet

[LeaksOne]

how so? an try to erase the pencil marks off your sketches

edit: nevermind i got it. you threw me for a loop cuz you spelled nympho in slang

[RhodeIsland]

http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Hyte002.jpg

[..romero..]

simple exchanges crit or dont crit i dont care
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture-4.jpg

was this for me??? ill do one for you i guess. unless theirs another mero.if so then LETS BATTLE.

[SONE.]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090311.jpg
im about to go paintthis, any crits before i dip?

[what4joke...]

http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Hyte002.jpg
in my oppinion i think u should change the 3d avoid shadows on letters with wierd details.

[SONE.]

yeh? how do u think i should do it?

[what4joke...]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090311.jpg
im about to go paintthis, any crits before i dip?
I REALLY LIKE THIS. just make the middle of the E as flow as the other letters

[SONE.]

yeh i dont know how though :/i cant think of anyother way of doing it. i tried to make it kinda like the rightside of the S.

[what4joke...]

try this, make the top bar. come up more angled ^ that way then ur bottom bar will also to keep it flow and it won't be as blocky

[SONE.]

ahh i got yeh. ty.
flicks up whens im done.

[yahrgimapirate!]

sone-i think where the n connects could be thickened a little bit too, at first i thought it was a v

[KnoxIn]

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2314/p3113034.jpg
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/61/p3113033.jpg

here are 2 pics that i did at school today so any crits i know my proportions are off alot on both and the faze one is too pointy once again, and i tryed to do that little extension on the A on faze dont really like it but o wellother than all that crits??? and i cant figure out anything to do with the F anyone got ideas or want to draw me up one for an idea??

sone-pretty damn good but i agree with above the mid of the E is a little off
nimfo- i like em both i like how the letters flow keep it up
sos- im hella likin it i like the lower case e alot better than when it was a big one the a seems to flow a little different but still good

[RhodeIsland]

Would anyone like to do an exchange?

Im in a drawing moood

[what4joke...]

yee sure im "kake"

[RhodeIsland]

iight you know me lol

[yahrgimapirate!]

icky old 2 letter throw
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/3396/graff001.th.jpg (http://img22.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff001.jpg)
new one...i cant figure out a w that flows...have an e but no w...
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/3568/74170063.th.jpg (http://img21.imageshack.us/my.php?image=74170063.jpg)

edit...fuck imageshack dammit

[what4joke...]

hyt right?

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/raone.jpg
Just trying to get a nice simple...if its even a simple i dont think it would be considered a throw cause it took me alittle while to write and the letters are really simple right?

[RhodeIsland]

hyt right?


Hyte

[what4joke...]

aweful ^ worst i've ever seen. i pay 12 hundered a week so u can take art lessons for this!? nahh jk bro lol

[Tokenkaligreens]

zarb check out the new to graff thread, and that's more an attempt at a throw then a simple imo.

[(SoS)Viruz]

i would say flip the top bar of the t around so that it slants up, leaving you more room to work with the e.
maybe try a lowercase a<---like this. that one doesn't really flow right with the e.

i'm left handed, so i can't draw well with a mouse, but you get the idea...

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/687/scan00011f.jpg


edit..also, if you're gonna do an r at the end, take your T the way it is now, and add bars to make it an r.
if you flip the t around, and do the R like that, it will look sort of symmetrical. PM me if you don't understand and you want to.

Yea that How i do my R any way! Thanks tho.
With the E I migiht make it a lil bigger, and the Increase the Size of the a to match it. Or basicly just make all the letters the same size feel me. But it'll come it time.

[..romero..]

your alll gonna die from e-coli.its gonna suck but you deserve it for being blaspheming pigmonkeyhippopatumassesses...

http://i41.tinypic.com/fjdjlt.jpg

..spread the word.you cunts(i hate you)

[..romero..]

btw i only threw that picin there because otherwise it would be completely irrelevant to this thread.


yeah but seriously guys.your all fucked.

[RhodeIsland]

Exchange with KAKE
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Hyte.jpg

How are we gunna die from E-coli?

[..romero..]

i dont fucking know im not a doctor...


its like super e-coli.youll shit out your intestines or something.

[Hallo Gen]

hallo gen - are you a girl?

on the crit level tho, you should really use simpler bars with no extentions and no add ons. start that way, get them down pac then move up. thats how it HAS to go. thats how everyone here thats any good did it.


Haha naw man im not a girl :)

ya i gothca ... practice time for me :D

[squidone]

simple exchanges crit or dont crit i dont care
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture-4.jpg

bumpin this cuz its sexy

[Germer]

romero nice west handy, im in love.

[klic]

exchange with m+s and a sanek simp
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/EMESPiece.jpg

rhodeisland - fresh but i think your letters are too stretched out imo

west - looks good, just clean it up

prone (not sure what that first letter is) - make it smaller, dont waste all that time filling it in

[GraffitiZoo]

your alll gonna die from e-coli.its gonna suck but you deserve it for being blaspheming pigmonkeyhippopatumassesses...

http://i41.tinypic.com/fjdjlt.jpg

..spread the word.you cunts(i hate you)

I like you

[klic]

exchange with m+s and a sanek simp
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/EMESPiece.jpg

rhodeisland - fresh but i think your letters are too stretched out imo

west - looks good, just clean it up

prone (not sure what that first letter is) - make it smaller, dont waste all that time filling it in

bottom bump

[..romero..]

I like you

please be a chick please be a chick





lol im stupid.

[RhodeIsland]

B.S is dead today

[..romero..]

http://i44.tinypic.com/1yv5u1.jpg

not now bitches hahaahaha...jk.

what yall nigghas thank?

sanek work on your s dude.its lookin like its lost a head ya know what im sayin????

there.crits.go.

[yahrgimapirate!]

icky old 2 letter throw
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/3396/graff001.th.jpg (http://img22.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff001.jpg)
new one...i cant figure out a w that flows...have an e but no w...
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/3568/74170063.th.jpg (http://img21.imageshack.us/my.php?image=74170063.jpg)

edit...fuck imageshack dammit

bump for any sort of crits, and maybe some help with a w?

[SONE.]

fuck my life. i messed it up so hard. I forgot the sketch at home and went from memory. messed up the proportions on the S. and none of the spikes too right. FUCK!@#$!@#$~!@#$!@#$
and stupid ass face photobucket wont let it upload. AND i fuckin sprayed myself in the face byaccident. what shit.

[Paser1]

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/2606/screencapture73.png

New stuff

[SONE.]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/0311091928.jpg

[..romero..]

your 3d is fucked.also this is in the wrong thread.

[B.S. POLICE]

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/2606/screencapture73.png

New stuff



yeah dude toy bombs and pieces

[NoCanControl]

makes me a bit happier that i know i am better at bombing then two kids on bombingscience. ROFL

[SONE.]

Oh thanks you dick.
and btw, that was my first painted piece/straightletter w/e.
Ive only ever do throwies.

[coldpizza]

http://i41.tinypic.com/2i8bps.jpg
ignore the N.

[..romero..]

Oh thanks you dick.
and btw, that was my first painted piece/straightletter w/e.
Ive only ever do throwies.

in that case its straight.i mixed you up with sike i think...ill post some of my stuff up in the piece thread in a few days.i did one not to long ago...but damn if it isnt colder than a motherfucker outside.probably after spring break.

[SONE.]

yo wrd, fuckin cold here too. ive never actually lost full feeling in my finger before. i think it was one the most painfull things in my life trying to warm it up.

[..romero..]

lol one time i was bombing in like....13 degrees.yeah.no gloves or nothing and i couldnt feel my finger,with all the paint on it.i was fucking running home slapping my finger against the wall all the way home tryna get the feeling back in it.i sat infront of a space heater for like 30 minutes..

[SONE.]

bahah, i put my hand on my balls trying to warm it up. its jsut ive never had it hurt so badly warming up.

[SONE.]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090305_6.jpg a shitty Char for talking.

[yahrgimapirate!]

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/1113/30525960.jpg (http://img9.imageshack.us/my.php?image=30525960.jpg)
eh?

fran is there silver around the R or is the pic washed out?

[HëRbN]

Haha naw man im not a girl :)

ya i gothca ... practice time for me :D

you just like to call people "babes" when talking to a single guy? lol oooook i wont tell haha

[RFI. SPit]

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/7691/photo145.jpg

Not quite finished yet.

[woonybomber]

http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp138/woonybomber/007.jpg
http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp138/woonybomber/pic007.jpg
http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp138/woonybomber/pic008.jpg
http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp138/woonybomber/pic010.jpg

mi bad the lines r not dark




wone
m.c.l

my crazy life

[Sizzuurp]

woony go back to simples.

rfi- ur handy looks ill. im not likin ur O's very much but its a fresh piece.

[Zase]

http://i41.tinypic.com/3323qqs.jpg
not in the mood for colouring im doing some exchange with shin first
ciao

[KnoxIn]

hey zase or anyone i have already asked this but i only got one answer back but how do you decide where too put your extensions at and what to do with them do you just kinda wing it and if it dont look good erase it? then re-do it? so any advice would be very appreciated

[Incite]

http://i41.tinypic.com/3323qqs.jpg
not in the mood for colouring im doing some exchange with shin first
ciao

i like your style, reminds me of vega one

http://vega0ne.deviantart.com/art/Ye-Olde-Bleistift-2-122895

[NeVeR4O1]

zase- ur style is pretty fresh , keep at it

ups to wone, just try not to skribble that much and make straighter lines and go simple but go big also

[(SoS)Viruz]

Yo what up all. I have Changed the WORD. Sorry. In essence to the word change I've Changed the Deadline and the rules a lil.

Rulez
1st) The new word is "Revok"
2nd)The new deadline is Next week March 22, Sunday.
3rd) THIS IS A SKETCH ONLY BATTLE. No fills, no digital mods. Nothin, Pure pencil. You may ink if you like. But if you do any fill, i wont accept your entry point black period.

Ight the info should be updated on the Battle Call thread soon IGHT PEACE

[ANDRO]

working on keeping my letters consistent and simple

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/1656/dsc0067p.jpg

[fitzy36]

I hate my a ....alot... i tried again less jagged this time....
http://i41.tinypic.com/2w54txe.jpg

[HëRbN]

Yo what up all. I have Changed the WORD. Sorry. In essence to the word change I've Changed the Deadline and the rules a lil.

Rulez
1st) The new word is "Revok"
2nd)The new deadline is Next week March 22, Sunday.
3rd) THIS IS A SKETCH ONLY BATTLE. No fills, no digital mods. Nothin, Pure pencil. You may ink if you like. But if you do any fill, i wont accept your entry point black period.

Ight the info should be updated on the Battle Call thread soon IGHT PEACE


Any chance we can still get a sycthe battle done? i have a sketch for it, at the moment it has no fill but it could easily get one. If not is anyone down to battle with that word? i worked hard on this shit lol

[sike_21]

im saying you cant change it now dude that some bullshit keep the word and revok is whack that one dude already kinged it anyways i dont wanna write that

[niner1234]

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/8031/img00012200903121502.jpg
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/120/img00014200903121506.jpg

some stuff

[B.S. POLICE]

im saying you cant change it now dude that some bullshit keep the word and revok is whack that one dude already kinged it anyways i dont wanna write that



dont be an idiot its ony a battle word, who cares if its been kinged

[sike_21]

one dont call me an idiot but i didnt mean it like that i just wanted to get the point across that we should keep the word and maybe next one we can do revok with all the rule changes

[B.S. POLICE]

im saying you cant change it now dude that some bullshit keep the word and revok is whack that one dude already kinged it anyways i dont wanna write that


where do you see, "we should use revok in the next battle"

[sike_21]

yo man whats the problem you just actting like another papper pussy on bs i said what i said got a problem with it deal with it im not goiing to sit here and type it out ith you know what im saying

[B.S. POLICE]

to be honest with you i really dont know why, maybe cause i dont like when ppl bitch, maybe cause i just woke up. i donno, but if you really knew whats good youd know that theres nothing paper about this cunt

[Germer]

ohsnap are you done your integral sketch?

[B.S. POLICE]

yeah i did 4...

[Germer]

lol i took my first try but im good with it.
whatever im excited to see but dont think im willing to show you mine anytime soon.
and ill crit later for blatently spamming this thread with talk.

[sike_21]

but if you really knew whats good youd know that theres nothing paper about this cunt
i would hope cuz other wise you'd would be be a waist ...

[(SoS)Viruz]

Ight look Stop Bitchen. Thier are Variours reason I changed the word. But look to the PPL who already have thier "Sycthe" Sketch. Send them to me. I'll just post both a Sycthe and Revok Sketch battle thread. Thier happy now.

Yo Sike_21 chill its a word get over it. if you feel soo strong about it just send me your sketch

[B.S. POLICE]

i would hope cuz other wise you'd would be be a waist ...


32x32;)

[sike_21]

noooooooooooooooooooooooooo every one has to beef with me l0l you cant just let me win

[sike_21]

32x32;)

????????

[(SoS)Viruz]

Yo check the Battle chat

[niner1234]

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/5801/img00015200903121729.jpg
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/8031/img00012200903121502.jpg
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/120/img00014200903121506.jpg

[niner1234]

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/5801/img00015200903121729.jpg
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/8031/img00012200903121502.jpg
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/120/img00014200903121506.jpg
and yeah i know the 3d is off on the straight

but what do you think?

[just graffiti]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2wbrgh5.jpg
self portrait sketch
http://i42.tinypic.com/357gjs3.jpg
totally debted some guys background on the inspiration page cause it was fucking nasty.
http://i43.tinypic.com/15dv0r9.jpg
girlfriends nickname. tried a funky style. and all these pics are from my cellphone cause im lazy

[Zase]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2cxe1x.jpg

[Graff J up]

dam zase its nice


crits please?
http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0071.jpg

simple ")

[sallybsk]

good simple, keep doing them.
the bottom bar of the E is curved though. The inside of it I mean, and the top isn't. so you should fix that.
http://i44.tinypic.com/11aeq29.jpg just remember to keep bars consistent, and keep simples up for a while. :D

[noisyburglar]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2u72ali.jpg
supa sloppy

[sallybsk]

really digging your throw, your S doesn't look like an S so much though. that's the only thing I can complain about.

[SuBeR]

gdf

[noisyburglar]

that yellow simple of mine looks worse than it is cos it has an orange highlight that blends with the red when u look at it

@just graffiti, dont shade and make lines with such jagged strokes, should be a smooth shade and a straight line, but i like it

[Graff J up]

thx guys

[oxiclean]

buts-I like the bottom yellow one a lot.

[ESKiMO2]

Time Keeps on Slippin' (If you haven't heard that song you're a hip hop phailure)

http://fc45.deviantart.com/fs44/f/2009/071/d/5/Time_Keeps_on_Slippin___by_Rhino_fish.jpg

^ Old letters. I made them taller and thinner now.

CRITS!
Buts- nice work. keep it up.
Graff J- I like the K a lot. The rest of the letters don't flow so well.
Zase- I wouldn't make the stroke/outline darker than any of the fill colors.
Just- I can't really feel that. The last one is alright but the rest of it is substandard.