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Kester
03-19-2009, 08:58 AM
yo~
kinda experimental
http://www.zix.co.il/images/1447090784.jpg (http://zix.co.il)

14 25 13 16 8 15
03-19-2009, 11:05 AM
for a friend says zord
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/P1010141.jpg
some of my shit
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/P1010142.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/P1010143.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/P1010144.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/P1010145.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/P1010146.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/P1010147.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/P1010148.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/P1010149.jpg
not done
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/P1010150.jpg

SANEKONE
03-19-2009, 11:27 AM
for the sketch battle
and sorry, it's actually not messed up, I was using a vanishing point.

well if its for a battle, you should definitely be doing what reach is doing. there are o bars whatsoever in that piece. and i noticed the vanishing point, but its still off. for istance, in reference to the top for the 3rd leg on the N their SHOULD be 3D at the bottom of the N where the 2nd and 3rd leg attach.

SANEKONE
03-19-2009, 11:36 AM
Toxin?- keep it up. looking nice. work on your coloring. something i need to do too. believe it or not, it helps when you go to paint.

Kest - keep that up. keep drawing that and work on getting your lines less shaky. thats the downside to using ink :/. and maybe if you added anther do dad like you have on the left of the K to the right of the T it would give it a bit more balance.

Tezer - i like your junk a good bit actually! keep it coming. the handy in the first one is sick.

Faze - keep sketching. i still think you arent paying enough attention to your other letters. the A looks nice. try new things with the other letters.

DirtyDozen520
03-19-2009, 12:28 PM
Ok, im just starting out with this name and heres what i get..
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC00149.jpg
i numbered em so you can tell me which one is less worse that the others..just so i know which direction to go in..and yea i sorta got that 'B' from the throwie from a graff creator thing.

BIGdreamSCHEME
03-19-2009, 12:32 PM
well if its for a battle, you should definitely be doing what reach is doing. there are o bars whatsoever in that piece. and i noticed the vanishing point, but its still off. for istance, in reference to the top for the 3rd leg on the N their SHOULD be 3D at the bottom of the N where the 2nd and 3rd leg attach.
aite, cool man, thanks

SANEKONE
03-19-2009, 12:40 PM
Bane- run with '3' and '4'

Sizzuurp
03-19-2009, 12:51 PM
do u see how hyphy is using bars to make his letters. do that use bars, it looks sloppy and disproportioned when u freehand it

DirtyDozen520
03-19-2009, 01:02 PM
ok, ill try that, thanks

provinT13
03-19-2009, 04:29 PM
quick sketch dealio before work. I just sat down and started but it looks like trash. I can't get any flow, any inspiration. (I know to go simple, I just did this real quick for shits. Letter size and spacing weren't taken into account, just trying to get something, anything.)

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0900.jpg

EJ.exe
03-19-2009, 04:47 PM
I used to write a long time ago, I just started up again yesterday. Here are my first two simples, "stars" was yesterday afternoon, and the "laced" one was from this morning at about 3AM [before I went to bed]. My name is "Star".

Critique please :)

This is very simple, the first one I've done in years! I was choosing between "star" and "stars", this was before I decided. Haha don't give me crap about the arrow, please.
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/98/l_7f18bc9b346b4fc08bc7a6966c16e173.jpg

I own a clothing label called "Laced Clothing", this is my second tag in years, I just wanted something that looked psychedelic.
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/76/l_4d1b32a93be94c5c83504a244f5f1b0e.jpg

I'll post more as they come :)

PROJECT LINK
03-19-2009, 04:53 PM
14 25-yo pretty gnarley style man..work on the color selection.
and PROVIN-yo nice work keep getin ur style down tho..pretty nice dude.

and this is what i did durin school lol..ive been gettin back into it again so..crits?
it sais bomb
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=1458

Stussy
03-19-2009, 05:58 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/27y5xdc.jpg
eh...

Aesir
03-19-2009, 06:24 PM
Rayz, its nice but I wouldn't have put those lines that go into the Y or the Z.

Stussy
03-19-2009, 06:46 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/27y5xdc.jpg
eh...
Bump...

PROJECT LINK
03-19-2009, 06:54 PM
14 25-yo pretty gnarley style man..work on the color selection.
and PROVIN-yo nice work keep getin ur style down tho..pretty nice dude.

and this is what i did durin school lol..ive been gettin back into it again so..crits?
it sais bomb
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=1458

bump..

Hyphy
03-19-2009, 07:00 PM
Project Link - DOPE. That shit is fucking flawless IMO.

Update #4. I'm about to ink it right now. Any tips on inking? 3D or drop shadow?

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5741/progressg.png

RhodeIsland
03-19-2009, 07:02 PM
Drop shadow!

Graff J up
03-19-2009, 07:08 PM
http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0092.jpg

crits??
reach-- that shits nice man catchin on fasttt
project---i like it
stussy-- i would work on that z i honestly only like the A

btw did this shit in 2 period ha math gets boring

$IN30NE
03-19-2009, 07:22 PM
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/6235/cimg1958y.jpg
i was told to go simple so this is what i got...i think its pretty bad
im thinking about taking out the 3rd T cause its awkward

crits??

Apocalypse
03-19-2009, 07:24 PM
Jzek-less shakey lines, try to make it one solid line
Reach-wow shit, getting a lot better man..
Rayz-straight fucking fire
Bomb-thats pretty damn sick, keep it up

new junk..
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/73/l_3425e6ac1d344824b0b402b2f9734e9b.jpg

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/74/l_c9d9f9c1c7ae4c3d80228a315018ad2f.jpg

noisyburglar
03-19-2009, 07:36 PM
bane take that fucking line out inbetween the two bumps in the B

just some random shit, the purple and yellow one sucks ass i was just fuckin round, and the grab isnt a bite or anything just went with the hand,sorryfor the last one should a flipped it
http://i39.tinypic.com/anopd5.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2urrupy.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/6ozu46.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/23wtg6w.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2ppn1j8.jpg

EJ.exe
03-19-2009, 07:40 PM
I used to write a long time ago, I just started up again yesterday. Here are my first two simples, "stars" was yesterday afternoon, and the "laced" one was from this morning at about 3AM [before I went to bed]. My name is "Star".

Critique please :)

This is very simple, the first one I've done in years! I was choosing between "star" and "stars", this was before I decided. Haha don't give me crap about the arrow, please.
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/98/l_7f18bc9b346b4fc08bc7a6966c16e173.jpg

I own a clothing label called "Laced Clothing", this is my second tag in years, I just wanted something that looked psychedelic.
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/76/l_4d1b32a93be94c5c83504a244f5f1b0e.jpg

I'll post more as they come :)

BUMPPP

+ more from today :)

first of the day, not very good at all.
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/87/l_1a8489e9ef97420a9ee17b254dc9a908.jpg

second of the day, first colored one in a long time.
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/82/l_8867749a8bdc4e63bdcb014b5c6d2905.jpg

simple throwie
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/65/l_b9ac6c7981af4cbebe097b1f363cb228.jpg

Crits please! I don't want to bump it again :)

RhodeIsland
03-19-2009, 07:41 PM
you can go to the intermeditate thread

edit- to Noisyburgalar

noisyburglar
03-19-2009, 07:48 PM
theres such thing?

RhodeIsland
03-19-2009, 08:03 PM
yes yes lol look a llittle down under the stickies

Hyphy
03-19-2009, 08:11 PM
Project Link - DOPE. That shit is fucking flawless IMO.

Update #4. I'm about to ink it right now. Any tips on inking? 3D or drop shadow?

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5741/progressg.png

Ight, I have no clue on how to do a drop shadow...Help?

RhodeIsland
03-19-2009, 08:16 PM
draw your peice alittle to the side in back of your peice

noisyburglar
03-19-2009, 08:16 PM
if u want, trace this on a nother paper, cut that trace out, then put it over the original, and shift it to a different place, then outline the parts that arent over the original, if that makes any sense

EJ.exe
03-19-2009, 08:19 PM
Ight, I have no clue on how to do a drop shadow...Help?

not too hard man. take the shape of your lettering, duplicate it off-centered and behind your letters, to where it is the same shape, and fill in.

I'll post up a simple example in a sec.

here it is. MSPaint ftw lol.
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/2945/tutorialj.jpg

PROJECT LINK
03-19-2009, 08:23 PM
ej-work on the structure bro...practice up a lil bit..ull get it.

(RKO) FIN/FLUX
03-19-2009, 08:43 PM
lovin the flow comin out of that can

RhodeIsland
03-19-2009, 08:44 PM
lovin the flow comin out of that can

What are you talkin about?

ASTAR.DWSP
03-19-2009, 08:47 PM
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q291/Tokie420/Picture014.jpg

(ALSO POSTED IN THE STICKER THREAD, But i want some crits and no one looks there lol)

(RKO) FIN/FLUX
03-19-2009, 08:48 PM
bump..

on Project Links piece

Hyphy
03-19-2009, 08:52 PM
My crack at a drop shadow. Crits? Ready for inking?

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/7333/progressu.png

RhodeIsland
03-19-2009, 08:53 PM
WOOORDDDDD Thats really good

EJ.exe
03-19-2009, 08:57 PM
that's sick dude :) simple and sweet.

@ astar.dwsp

niceee, you got those throwies down. teach me =D

diggitydoggz
03-19-2009, 09:01 PM
that is a nice ass simple dude.

here's some of my jauntz

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/9861/img000776.jpg

this next one isn't finished because I have the perfect "A" to go there but i sketched it in a notebook that i won't have access to until tomorrow

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7319/img000775.jpg

cruh cruh cruh critz

EJ.exe
03-19-2009, 09:04 PM
that is a nice ass simple dude.

here's some of my jauntz

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/9861/img000776.jpg

this next one isn't finished because I have the perfect "A" to go there but i sketched it in a notebook that i won't have access to until tomorrow

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7319/img000775.jpg

cruh cruh cruh critz

careful man, you're gonna get sued for copyright infringement lmao.

I like the drips on the first one. the blue on the second one is cool too.

(RKO) FIN/FLUX
03-19-2009, 09:05 PM
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/n580233411_1642214_4133795.jpg

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/n580233411_1649336_3930374.jpg

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/n580233411_1649337_100082.jpg

Some stickers I did,
Nothing fancy but just showin my new character

Apocalypse
03-19-2009, 09:07 PM
Jzek-less shakey lines, try to make it one solid line
Reach-wow shit, getting a lot better man..
Rayz-straight fucking fire
Bomb-thats pretty damn sick, keep it up

new junk..
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/73/l_3425e6ac1d344824b0b402b2f9734e9b.jpg

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/74/l_c9d9f9c1c7ae4c3d80228a315018ad2f.jpg

bumpppp

ASTAR.DWSP
03-19-2009, 09:12 PM
that's sick dude :) simple and sweet.

@ astar.dwsp

niceee, you got those throwies down. teach me =D

thanks man i finally found some postal stickers and some painters! they are so dope for sticker, all i have been doing is just that for the last few hours.. ive got more coming

(RKO) FIN/FLUX
03-19-2009, 09:12 PM
bump..


http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/n580233411_1642214_4133795.jpg

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/n580233411_1649336_3930374.jpg

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/n580233411_1649337_100082.jpg

some stickers i did,
nothing fancy but just showin my new character

crits?

ASTAR.DWSP
03-19-2009, 09:13 PM
crits?

dont bump on the same damn page.. not bad but keep worken on it..

PROJECT LINK
03-19-2009, 09:13 PM
thanks bro..
but ya EJ-im likin these copies more i like the black and green dude..work on the s a lil bit an ull b streight
ASTAR-tight work with the throwie man.. i fuckin suck at throwie lmao..god shit dude
hyphy- loose some of the shadow man but nice work.
RCO-yo tight ass clown dude i like workin with that type of shit dude check it out.. there old tho lol
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=613
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=317

bump//

ASTAR.DWSP
03-19-2009, 09:20 PM
bump//

dope shit man.. not a fan of clowns but the joker is looken sick!

Kaiser71
03-19-2009, 11:07 PM
Project Ink, Both creepy, but so do dope. Specially the Joker.
RKO Fin, in the second picture, aside from looking kind of ugly to me, one of your X's (I think) looks like a swastika. Might want to work on that.
Sega, I really like your second one, but your E and G in it look almost identical to me.
WAR, I like the A in your second one

Hyphy
03-19-2009, 11:39 PM
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/2820/progresse.png

Fuck. Well I obviously suck at coloring...=P I'm only good at sketching with pencils and shit...=(

EJ.exe
03-19-2009, 11:42 PM
yo astar!

what did you use to color those throwie stickers?

EJ.exe
03-19-2009, 11:44 PM
hyphy: that still looks pretty sick, it shouldn't have some crazy color scheme! it's simple, it should be simple overall :)

edit: sorry for the double post.

SANEKONE
03-19-2009, 11:46 PM
REACH! - im proud! hah. keep at it son! looks good. dont let it go to your head though. try to make your C round now. that will make it flow with the round part of the R . and it will be totally balanced. then you can try shaping your bars different and your letters bent different and adding more bars and whatnot. nice ob o the drop shadow. oh and you want to put your force field even in the middle of letters like the outer bars of the E and inside the A ad R and between the C and H

sega - look at reaches production. and mimic it.

ASTAR.DWSP
03-19-2009, 11:54 PM
yo astar!

what did you use to color those throwie stickers?

umm elmers painters, gold and silver pilot super color, and a black jiffy artline 400 (because it will go over the silver pilot ink)

edit: oh and the DWSP sticker.. that seafoam color i made.. and put in a mini squeezie.

EJ.exe
03-19-2009, 11:59 PM
coool.

do painters bleed through the stickers?

ASTAR.DWSP
03-20-2009, 12:07 AM
umm let me check.. no none of the stuff i just listed does..

EJ.exe
03-20-2009, 12:14 AM
fo sho.

well, practice time. have fun man :)

ASTAR.DWSP
03-20-2009, 12:19 AM
fo sho.

well, practice time. have fun man :)

the painters are like $11 CAD* at wal-mart.. but i just jacked some and im gonna get more tommrow.. (they also come in a pkg of 5 and there is basic and advanced colors)

-Wings-
03-20-2009, 07:38 AM
seyr or whatever (wings) - i think you need to take your own advice, why did you even bother coming back if you dont listen to anything anybody says, just look at your stuff compared to zase's. he knows what hes doing with his extensions, and even if he didnt use any, his letters are still dope, your letters arent that great to begin with and you have random ass extensions going everywhere.. your shit would actually be pretty good if youd lose the wack add-ons


Some of my extentions are messed here, but. I am not stupid and I know how to do them. Im sick of the bullshit you guys I get here, half the graffiti I see consist of 'random' extentions. Im only looking of off other peoples work and getting an idea of how to do them so if you think about it most of it is random? But still, your right zases letters are dope. As for his extentions. Im not a huge fan of them, and I dont think I could learn of them. :/ Even if zases style is dope. If anyone wants to reply back to this negatively pm me.

Incite
03-20-2009, 08:03 AM
^only thing that i see that you need to work on is your fills, use 1 dark color and 1 light, not 2 dark ones, makes it hard to read lol

Apocalypse
03-20-2009, 08:21 AM
Jzek-less shakey lines, try to make it one solid line
Reach-wow shit, getting a lot better man..
Rayz-straight fucking fire
Bomb-thats pretty damn sick, keep it up

new junk..
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/73/l_3425e6ac1d344824b0b402b2f9734e9b.jpg

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/74/l_c9d9f9c1c7ae4c3d80228a315018ad2f.jpg

bump....only got one crit...

SANEKONE
03-20-2009, 08:59 AM
the throwie is lame. but i suck at throwies too so idk how to cit you man, sorry. but the piece is nice. youre on the right track. keep trying things out with the bars.

Apocalypse
03-20-2009, 09:12 AM
the throwie is lame. but i suck at throwies too so idk how to cit you man, sorry. but the piece is nice. youre on the right track. keep trying things out with the bars.

Ight, well everyone kept telling me to go more simple with my throw, so I did....idk...

$IN30NE
03-20-2009, 10:26 AM
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/6235/cimg1958y.jpg
i was told to go simple so this is what i got...i think its pretty bad
im thinking about taking out the 3rd T cause its awkward

crits??

didnt get any crits soooo.....bump

sike_21
03-20-2009, 11:02 AM
sinone- keep it consitent some letter over lap and some dont in you thing if one overlaps another they should all edit-and you shawdow is all kinds of messed up
anyways some mr. messy
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/3-20-2009114105AM.jpg

provinT13
03-20-2009, 02:32 PM
^^^ yes lol

Apocalypse The throwie sucks (not feelin the A at all) but the second piece is pretty nice.

hyphy go paint :)

capy
03-20-2009, 03:28 PM
sinone- keep it consitent some letter over lap and some dont in you thing if one overlaps another they should all edit-and you shawdow is all kinds of messed up
anyways some mr. messy
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/3-20-2009114105AM.jpg

thats pretty much one of your best pieces keep it up

PegCityBoy
03-20-2009, 04:09 PM
coool.

do painters bleed through the stickers?

my experiance with painters have been shiiiiiitttt they're waterbased soo they're shit and if you close your book while their wet it'll stick your pages together and fuck up everything. i dunno how they are for stickers though prob also shitty

SANEKONE
03-20-2009, 04:57 PM
sike - looks nice, id drop the arrows though.

SONE.
03-20-2009, 05:12 PM
bump....only got one crit...


suck it up. youre not always gunna get crits from everyone. those throwies are wack btw. youre goin too bubbly.

SONE.
03-20-2009, 05:17 PM
oh, and sike, im lovin that. but your stuff always looks really similar. the fills are dope. but lets see some new letters mang.

PROJECT LINK
03-20-2009, 05:57 PM
CAPY-pretty narley bro..im likin the letters, im not feelin the colors tho man, there all dark colors throw some lighter ones in there to make it come out a little more. tight work.

BIGdreamSCHEME
03-20-2009, 05:58 PM
took sanek's advice..
also changed my name
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/Image017.jpg
what's the next step? work on developing letters?

PROJECT LINK
03-20-2009, 05:59 PM
this is what i did durin school lol..ive been gettin back into it again so..crits?
it sais bomb
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=1458[/QUOTE]

PROJECT LINK
03-20-2009, 06:00 PM
and this is what i did durin school lol..ive been gettin back into it again so..crits?
it sais bomb
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=1458[/QUOTE]

bump

SONE.
03-20-2009, 07:43 PM
definatly just looks like it says BMB with a char above it. u gotta get it into the word.

Incite
03-20-2009, 07:47 PM
lol @ "pretty BA dude!"

PROJECT LINK
03-20-2009, 10:47 PM
oh true.. i thought it looked like bomb but thanks tho guy.

Hyphy
03-20-2009, 11:36 PM
Defekt - http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185 - That thread helped me out a lot.
Project Link - Didn't know it said "bomb". Looks like "BMB" bro. Other than that, dope.

Practicing the same old in class...

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/9237/reach13.png

First lame attempt at a throwie...(posted on the other thread too)

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2536/reach14.png

PROJECT LINK
03-21-2009, 12:11 AM
HYPHY-yo pretty kool..im likin the simple style streighten the the sketchyness and add some color bro and shit will be lookin pretty clean.. tight work.
and thanks for the crit man..ill work on that next time.

SONE.
03-21-2009, 01:19 AM
Reach your progress is almost retarded. good work.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090320.jpg
ive been doin some thangs.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/P1010004.jpg
^old

Apocalypse
03-21-2009, 08:51 AM
Reach-you're getting so much better everytime...
Sone-sick shit man..

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/67/l_df0cf9bcea194478b3eb672a1a046db0.jpg

Crits?

Bink1
03-21-2009, 09:58 AM
dont do addons IN your letters SONE , S looks like G and E like a B,but its dope overall

Incite
03-21-2009, 10:04 AM
^i have no idea how you can think that. you can see what they are clearly.

Hyphy
03-21-2009, 10:45 AM
What markers ya'll use for your blackbooks?...or which markers are the best?

acereborn
03-21-2009, 11:05 AM
theres no real "best" marker. its all about personal preference, and different people will tell you different things.

i like to use prismas, sharpies, highlighters, pens, gel pens, crayolas, and those random brands of markers that you mysteriously acquire.

remos
03-21-2009, 11:31 AM
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/w.jpg
i know it gets bigger and it looks like shit after i coloured it but whatever

Graff J up
03-21-2009, 11:40 AM
http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0097.jpg

crits?? i know i fucked up on the J i think

defekt- i would keep your bars the same length

remos
03-21-2009, 11:51 AM
fix the middle of the e and make the j a bit smaller

militia
03-21-2009, 11:59 AM
remos, the shadow on the first letter looks off, and graff J, make the bottom part of the k bigger then the top part

but what do i know, i fall down stairs,,, lol

remos
03-21-2009, 12:00 PM
ahahahhaha fucking suitcases are a bitch

Graff J up
03-21-2009, 01:52 PM
http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0099.jpg

re did it

i personally like it better lol

crits welcome?

exitus
03-21-2009, 01:54 PM
not really fealing it. the e's bars got kinda fucked up along with the k but the j and z look nice. just make the bars bigger to close up white space and overlap a little more in my opinion.

Graff J up
03-21-2009, 01:58 PM
i i kno i messed up the lower leg of the k and the bottom part of the E lol

but yeah ill try that

exitus
03-21-2009, 02:02 PM
thats what im talking about, those 2
just keep doing em over and over again, dont spend forever on one

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-21-2009, 02:02 PM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/graffff011.jpg?t=1237661871
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/graffff010.jpg?t=1237661912
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/graffff009.jpg?t=1237662017
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/graffff008.jpg?t=1237662057
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/graffff007.jpg?t=1237662103

NoCanControl
03-21-2009, 02:14 PM
i don't say this very often, but tezm really brought the heat. good hands. and good flow my man.

Hyphy
03-21-2009, 02:40 PM
Tezer - Good shit bro. I like the third one the best.

More of my wack shit...Damn, I'm so used to sketching with a pencil and erasing that I can't draw a clean line and keep proportions with a marker. Any tips with that?

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/9003/reach16.png

snackmachine
03-21-2009, 02:55 PM
tezer, im feelin your shit man, keep it up.
project link, i cant really see the o in bomb, but u still got skills.

exitus
03-21-2009, 03:11 PM
sober-way better than everyone else on this page

luster
03-21-2009, 03:17 PM
just a couple of sketches still tryin to find the style that works best for me
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3210517.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3210518.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3210519.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3210520.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3210521.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3210522.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3210523.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3210524.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3210526.jpg
really not feelin the last one..but still..

exitus
03-21-2009, 03:23 PM
your third 4th and 5th are the best id say, i like the thrid one the best

luster
03-21-2009, 03:34 PM
thanks im feelin the first haha but thats just me
as for crits which i forgot ..
tezer-really like your simples not feelin the throw as much but its still sick
reach-keep sketchin personaly im not a big fan of bubble letters but just keep workin on it
sober-really feeling your shit especialy the third

hope i got everyone i didnt scroll up again if i missed anyone i apologize

exitus
03-21-2009, 04:02 PM
your first one is good but a little to confusing, too many overlaps imo. and the b kinda looks like a p dont ask me how lol

Graff J up
03-21-2009, 04:36 PM
http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0103.jpg

trying different structures...crits welcome

tezer & sober-- damnn thats hot
luster-i like the 5 one but i would work on it

exitus
03-21-2009, 04:51 PM
its better, i would make the middle bar on the e a bit bigger
heres mine, its not very good at all its just something that i threw together real quick
http://i44.tinypic.com/211md7q.jpg

Hyphy
03-21-2009, 04:52 PM
Jzek - Clean. Add on a drop shadow and force field and it'd be dope.
Kaos - Not really feelin the name, sounds toy-ish. The "K" overlaps the "A" way too much. Also take out the stub on the "A".

Shakey lines, uneven drop shadow, and un-proportional bars. It's whatever ;).

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/2561/reach17.png

exitus
03-21-2009, 04:57 PM
its kaos, snare, or meth

Graff J up
03-21-2009, 05:01 PM
reach --- DOPEE
btw da fuck is a drop shadow? like yours?
kaos- your k overlaps your A to much plus i would work on the k and a

Hyphy
03-21-2009, 05:05 PM
*Missed a section of the drop shadow, haha...and I just noticed my "H" is too skinny.

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/4782/reach18.png

bulltimeJAMP
03-21-2009, 05:22 PM
sober-way better than everyone else on this page

wtf are you joking? tezer should honestly be in the regular bb thread as long as he posts his better work. if not that than AT LEAST the intermediate.

but ya exitus obviously has no idea of whats quality and whats not.

exitus
03-21-2009, 05:30 PM
besides tezer lol did u see that other post i made.

Apocalypse
03-21-2009, 06:10 PM
Reach-you're getting so much better everytime...
Sone-sick shit man..

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/67/l_df0cf9bcea194478b3eb672a1a046db0.jpg

Crits?

bump

sallybsk
03-21-2009, 06:15 PM
who ever quoted urmom and said that shit was good... false

sober- looking good. good usee of bars, keep letters same size. usually you have like 1 letter thats a bit smaller... i usually measure letters and extensions with my thumb and index to see if they're quite the same. but that's just me nitpicking, good job.

kaos and bras. new to graff thread
simples.
please. lol... and kaos. wow, what a unique name ><

reach... you're progressing. good for you. you kept the same flow of the bars. like how the bend inwards on the whole thing. that's impressive. reaaaal nice. try something new. and I'm not digging your throw, but idk, I suck at throws. So can't give any advice there. But just have fun with throws, it's all organic shapes, a break from the tedious bars.

Aesir
03-21-2009, 06:43 PM
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/2883/1010554.jpg (http://img6.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010554.jpg)
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/8772/1010555.jpg (http://img16.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010555.jpg)
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/6452/1010556.jpg (http://img8.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010556.jpg)

some new shit

RhodeIsland
03-21-2009, 06:47 PM
That last one looks like HORSE

Aesir
03-21-2009, 07:17 PM
Yea....I know.... I fucking hate simples....

La Coka Nostra
03-21-2009, 09:01 PM
norse, some of your throws are nice.

Aesir
03-21-2009, 09:05 PM
Thanks, any ideas on how I could improve them?

(SoS)Viruz
03-21-2009, 10:12 PM
This is the Last call out for the Sketch battle: "REVOK" and "SYCTHE" battle. Its due to me by tomarrow at 10pm(Eastern). Read the rules below:


****Weekly Toy/Advance Toy Sketch Battle Call out.****
Word: "Revok"or"Sycthe[Sketch only No Fills for this Battle(s) and yes you can do both]
Deadline: Sunday March 22,2009
Pm your entries to: (SoS)Viruz
Check the Toy Battles For more Info of upcoming Battles.

einsamkeit
03-22-2009, 01:40 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3657/3369018775_ea2e687c80.jpg

graffdabusup
03-22-2009, 01:42 AM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/tytty.jpg

downunder
03-22-2009, 02:05 AM
Graffiti on public transport is a criminal offense, and is prosecuted with the full extent of the law.

TastySesamcrew
03-22-2009, 04:49 AM
apocalypse - go for simples
norse - same
einsamkeit - dope
mone - nice letters but work on your 3d

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3467/3367932723_a74e778bbb.jpg

crittie crittie faif dollah

SAID
03-22-2009, 08:14 AM
That's fuckin ill.

Sizzuurp
03-22-2009, 08:56 AM
tasty- fuckin yes
norse- work on your throws they have the most potential. there kinda small and hard to see but they look fresh
mone- keep them simps up. lookin real clean except for the E.
meep- fresh. the bottom of the FIRST E looks weird. the way the bottom of the second E hits the P u should do that to the first one too if that makes sense lol.

Kester
03-22-2009, 10:09 AM
***sorry***

La Coka Nostra
03-22-2009, 10:47 AM
the fuck?

Kester
03-22-2009, 11:04 AM
looool
i think there was a problem in the website
there it is
http://up36.siz.co.il/up1/nkz5ozdyzdha.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)

gcrolla
03-22-2009, 12:18 PM
Well...at least my hands aren't as bad as my sketches haha.




Aside from letter size/consistency what else should I work on?


Tastesesamcrew- That looks dope, I can't read it though hah
Mone- Nice and simple, I like it

Backalley Abortion Doctor
03-22-2009, 01:57 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/img015-1.jpg

HRbN
03-22-2009, 02:15 PM
back alley - dope as usual

kest - i dig it. would like to see it with some color

Tasty - bad ass man, love the style, you should do one with more color.

Norse- you have the right idea that last one has to many cracks though

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/83/l_e8a7535c8e934b58a54cbe4d03301ae7.jpg
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/68/l_2f4ec82861e0418a9e77128283d8f2c9.jpg

Hyphy
03-22-2009, 04:22 PM
Herbn - Top one is dope. The bottom of the "E" looks a little weird though.

Not really feelin this one but...
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/3753/reach19.png

Need some help with my throwie too...
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/3002/reach20.png

m.ziggy
03-22-2009, 04:38 PM
herbn im feeling the e's, w and t in that top piece. not really liking the other letters, the bottoms of the look good but there is something about the tops of the r's. the i's not working


i suck at g and y

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo398.jpg

KnoxIn
03-22-2009, 06:49 PM
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/5559/p3223056.jpg

just a Z i did today im workin on the others F,A, and E but its what i got for now crits?? i was playin around with the proportions a little is it alright??

izoe- they are pretty sick the bottom one is horrible though
ziggy its not to bad maybe try a 3-d with it or somethin??
reach- your comin along damn good they are both pretty good i dont like bottom as much just cuz same as above just not my style
herbn-both of those are pretty sick i hella like that R on your top one your style is just tight nice work

La Coka Nostra
03-22-2009, 07:13 PM
izoe, stick with the simples.

sallybsk
03-22-2009, 07:19 PM
yea, your simples are straight man, just keep at it.
make sure you don't make your Z bigger than the rest of the letters, seems like a habit. and the E is sometimes smaller.

knoxin, you lost the extensions, extra bars, do super simples, like keyboard letters, because you're going nowhere. and you never listen to anyone.

krazzie_ammo
03-22-2009, 07:20 PM
herbn - nice man. like the scythe, add some colour.
reach - nice throw. try add the top lump on the A to all the letters.
ziggy - love simples.
izoe - love the throwies and characters but the red pen one is not right man.
knoxin - looks good, add the other letters.

i haven't been around in ages but here's a little pen thing, says noize. i fucked up the O but allow.
crits?
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/6618/noize.jpg (http://img7.imageshack.us/my.php?image=noize.jpg)

Hyphy
03-22-2009, 07:41 PM
Ziggy - Clean. Drop shadow or 3D and ink that shit.
Izoe - Work on your structure and even out your letters but nice drawings. The bottom one is a straight mess.
Knoxin - Not feelin bro, looks sort of off. Start off with straight up keyboard letters.
Noize - DOPE.

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5714/reach21.png

denaaa
03-22-2009, 07:55 PM
hyphy- i like the whole monkey thingg but i dont like the r
nore-everythingg seems to be the same sizeepretty nicee
izoe-i like thoseee simpless
crits on minee pleasee
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/rylopkdenak.jpg

bulltimeJAMP
03-22-2009, 08:07 PM
yo your in ryl?

just curious.

m.ziggy
03-22-2009, 08:40 PM
hyp - like the monkey just make it alittle smaller, it over powers your letters
denaa - liking those letter especially the y, not feeling the k though, keep playing with that style
kraz - simples

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo399.jpg

not finished but a couple people said to add 3d so just wantde to show it. colors look much better in person, shitty camera

gcrolla
03-22-2009, 09:43 PM
Well...at least my hands aren't as bad as my sketches haha.




Aside from letter size/consistency what else should I work on?


Tastesesamcrew- That looks dope, I can't read it though hah
Mone- Nice and simple, I like it

Bump for no crits

Those izoe simples are cleannn

militia
03-22-2009, 09:57 PM
gcrolla- dont keep that cross part of the A separated, and get rid of the extention at the top of the y, the 3-d is off in some parts too.

i suggest just workin on the letters before adding 3-d and whatnot.

Aesir
03-22-2009, 10:07 PM
Izoe you should abbreviate it IZ.

downunder
03-22-2009, 10:28 PM
no do not do that for throwies, dont listen to that guy.

bulltimeJAMP
03-22-2009, 10:31 PM
your retarted



tasty you crazy dutchman, wheres my pack bro. nice throw by the way

no i think youll find that in fact, you're retarded.

Aesir
03-22-2009, 10:34 PM
lol downunder got the reference

Aesir
03-22-2009, 10:41 PM
lol downunder got the reference

sham
03-22-2009, 10:41 PM
noize- ill

this isnt really graff.
http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa259/sham_acsc/Picture002.jpg

SomeoneGoneStoleMyWheels!
03-22-2009, 11:27 PM
Crits?

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/Photo-0106.jpg
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/Photo-0108.jpg
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/Photo-0109.jpg

SomeoneGoneStoleMyWheels!
03-22-2009, 11:56 PM
nicely done sham

the leg of that r is hurting 48for. make the whole thing less wiggly

Thanks

Kester
03-23-2009, 12:25 AM
nice sketch sham

EST2007
03-23-2009, 12:29 AM
M+S, fatten up and bend those bars....... too much dead space imo

Live4TheWall
03-23-2009, 12:48 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v396/Nicks_Notes/graffiti/IMGA0411.jpg
havnt drawn in a while. just a lil doodad

KnoxIn
03-23-2009, 02:18 AM
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/7616/p3223057.jpg
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/7082/p3223059.jpg
here is some shit from tonight crits??

live4- agree with above not likin the letters too much but lovin those fills
ms-not really likin that style some of your proportions are off too
sham- all i got to say about that is your handsyle at the top is sick im diggin that

VaNdAL xBA!x
03-23-2009, 06:12 AM
http://i40.tinypic.com/359frt2.jpg

Kester
03-23-2009, 06:13 AM
http://up37.siz.co.il/up2/tacx2doyzazj.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)

-Dank-DK-
03-23-2009, 09:53 AM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2qmi721.jpg

00-made-00
03-23-2009, 10:38 AM
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/piloh-felix.jpg
Tryin to progress my simples.

dank- keep letter proprtions the same it looks odd otherwise.
Kester- looking fresh, but i would make sure the letters are all on the same level.
ak- the A's too fat for my likein, but overall sweet.
Faze- i see where your going with it but you need the basic down perfect before addons man.

Sizzuurp
03-23-2009, 11:20 AM
bump that felix the cat nice simp. i dont really like the I though

00-made-00
03-23-2009, 11:27 AM
i loves my felix.haha
Yeah the I is proper buggin me on its own it looks too plain, and with the heart it looks a bit too fruity.

BigBlueViolence
03-23-2009, 12:18 PM
I dig the I,
I just think the leg of the L is too short.

Scratch
03-23-2009, 01:52 PM
yeah, that Piloh thing is illl.

Faze, do your handstyle as simple as youre doing your straight letters in 1 or 2. If you take a wrong turn by getting too complicated too quickly its a road to disaster.

Here's some shit, crits are encouraged. thanks

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq68/slaphousekids/0322092313.jpg

BIGdreamSCHEME
03-23-2009, 02:09 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/chairman.jpg
for the tourney

luster
03-23-2009, 02:31 PM
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3220527.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3230529.jpg
2nd one is a little older and i just found it again so i might have posted it a while ago

TastySesamcrew
03-23-2009, 02:38 PM
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/piloh-felix.jpg
Tryin to progress my simples.

dank- keep letter proprtions the same it looks odd otherwise.
Kester- looking fresh, but i would make sure the letters are all on the same level.
ak- the A's too fat for my likein, but overall sweet.
Faze- i see where your going with it but you need the basic down perfect before addons man.

rois bite.

bulltimeJAMP
03-23-2009, 02:39 PM
picsssss please :)

TastySesamcrew
03-23-2009, 02:41 PM
http://www.flickr.com/photos/naused/2670157383/

bulltimeJAMP
03-23-2009, 02:50 PM
sorry but felix is a commonly used char, so i definitely wouldnt call a bite. rois's is not even confirmable as the same cat.

sike_21
03-23-2009, 02:52 PM
that character was big time i its day so no its not a bite its a cartoon character from a show so if put mickey mouse on my piece you going to call a bite?- no disrespect just getting my point across

Backalley Abortion Doctor
03-23-2009, 03:03 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/img015-1.jpg


pmub

sallybsk
03-23-2009, 03:45 PM
get out of here you molester, you...

apoken it
03-23-2009, 03:59 PM
i like ur handstyle.

EJ.exe
03-23-2009, 04:15 PM
need some crits please! specifics are nice :)

ehhh, not great. the aftermath of my "party mode" on saturday haha.
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/6537/0320090626.jpg

shaved off too much of the top of the "a", and messed up the shadow on the leg of the "r". But I really like the "s" and the underline concept. how would you have done the shadow on the "r"?
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/2372/0323090211.jpg

thanks ;)

HRbN
03-23-2009, 04:31 PM
I would have used bars, and no fill. I would have also read the new to graff thread. Save the loopy r going into an underline for next year when you have a better concept of structure and use bars! goin simpler now and using straight bars will pay off indefinately later. try nothing fancy or "cool" at this point. and the 1st S is better than the second.

i wouldnt even do 3d yet, save it for a bit later. when you get striaght good lookin bars down pac then try out some 3d or fills. and the shadow/3d should almost never cover letters

-Dank-DK-
03-23-2009, 04:56 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/2zz2ohl.jpg

http://i44.tinypic.com/6t1lom.jpg

ok people u can tell me what ever is wrong with my pieces i need the help lol

paintkid
03-23-2009, 06:02 PM
Here a lil something from a new comer to the forum but not to graff. i know i coulda outlined the letters in something but i ran dry.

thanks, Casey

Kaiser71
03-23-2009, 06:28 PM
Backalley- those slaps are creepy as fuck, but REALLY clean. What did you use on the guy on the left to shade the face so well?



Star- try bars. I tried to skip the basics at first too, and my sketches just got ugly. Now I'm back at the bottom, trying again.



Dank DK- Not really my style, but it looks clean. Some of your 3D angles look a bit off to me. I like the wrap around red arrows personally.



Paint Kid- Personally I don't have a clue what it says. Try going simpler and narrowing down your color selections. First letter looks like an A and last two are an EX I think? Does it say Avex?



Still working with bars. I've been practicing a lot of simples lately, so I decided to try and add a little bit, just because I was getting bored. It was my first attempt at blending two fill colors, and a dropshadow, I see where my angles for the drop are off, so both kind of suck.

Edit* Try and ignore the hook up in the bottom left with the "foot" of the M, and where one leg crosses under the other. I couldnt figure out what to do with it. Also, that brownish color is shiny gold in real life, just for the record.

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0025-1.jpg



Crits?

Muse.one
03-23-2009, 06:40 PM
done while in class.
crits and tips ?
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m249/veggieman_photos/Picture138.jpg

xDrowsyx
03-23-2009, 06:51 PM
Back Alley Abortion - love those characters, there soooo clean
Ok so went simplier this time...
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x85/faceoffman7/LAMEcolors-1.jpg
???? Contructive Criticism greatly appreciated ????

(SoS)Viruz
03-23-2009, 06:52 PM
done while in class.
crits and tips ?
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m249/veggieman_photos/Picture138.jpg

A check out the Intermediate Thread.

But Not feelin the Thinkness of your S, and the Curve in your. You should have made then the same with(sp?) as your regular bars.

sallybsk
03-23-2009, 07:00 PM
your R is hot... that's all i like ;)

too many extensions.
i don't like the steez of how long they are either.
but yeeeeee.
this is to rasek btwz.

oh and mer, I don't know what bars you're using, look at the post underneath yours, than take after that(the bars part)

Muse.one
03-23-2009, 07:05 PM
A check out the Intermediate Thread.

But Not feelin the Thinkness of your S, and the Curve in your. You should have made then the same with(sp?) as your regular bars.

alright i thought the same of the "s" but couldnt think of any other way to do it
thanks man ill check out the intermediate thread then

(SoS)Viruz
03-23-2009, 07:26 PM
^^^^Thats not Rasek btw. Thats. RASK

Scratch
03-23-2009, 07:26 PM
yeah, that Piloh thing is illl.

Faze, do your handstyle as simple as youre doing your straight letters in 1 or 2. If you take a wrong turn by getting too complicated too quickly its a road to disaster.

Here's some shit, crits are encouraged. thanks

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq68/slaphousekids/0322092313.jpg
bump, crits please and thank you

..romero..
03-23-2009, 07:32 PM
at first i thought it was hatir...but its not.its yaer.and thats the problem.make your letters look more like the letters their supposed to be...the way the y bends back throws it off and the e is just crazy retarded.i dont mean to bring you down or nothing but thats what i see.hatir would be a cool name tho...

b SQUARED 08
03-23-2009, 07:41 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_8554.jpg

-Dank-DK-
03-23-2009, 07:48 PM
dam squared i saw that out lined the other day it came out pretty good

Hyphy
03-23-2009, 08:53 PM
Cliff - Dope. I saw the outline the other day, came out clean.
Izoe - I like the left one better. Round out your "o" more and try using a lowercase "e" to make it flow better.

Trying out a new name, "Tho". Crits?
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/5964/tho2.png

Still tryna sharpen my marker skills...
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/1044/tho3.png

Sizzuurp
03-23-2009, 08:59 PM
hyphy. make the top left of your O hit a little more of the H. real simple i like it.

cliff- bangin' simp.

scratch- thats ill as hell. i like your handstyle. idk how i feel about the 3d though

GIzUrD
03-23-2009, 09:21 PM
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/2436/supersatanic.jpg (http://img99.imageshack.us/my.php?image=supersatanic.jpg)

im going super satanic evil grrrr...
but anyways, i think im going to base my letters off this R.

HYPHY- too cliche
IZOE- the I goes with the O and the Z goes with the E, but they dont go all together.
RASK- make them all straight. the K on the throw looks like and E connected to and I. the R looks good though.
YAER- the Y and E dont look like a Y and E
CLIFF- clean, but the letters just look a little awkward
LAME- go straight
MER- simpler
STAR- keep practicing, all caps
SUCK- seems like your using some kind of straight edge to draw your lines, stop that! and cut the extensions off, like you have on the U and C

Each
03-23-2009, 09:24 PM
damn giz that shits pretty damn tight. but purple isnt really a satanic satan colour so change the colour scheme lol

sallybsk
03-23-2009, 09:28 PM
^^^^Thats not Rasek btw. Thats. RASK

typo.
:( don't yell at me!
slut.

luster
03-23-2009, 10:32 PM
fuck i hate bottom of page..

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3220527.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3230529.jpg
2nd one is a little older and i just found it again so i might have posted it a while ago

Scratch
03-23-2009, 10:44 PM
is that bras as in the plural of a Bra?

use bars and dont get too fancy yet. you need to understand how to letters forwards before you should think of doing them backwards

militia
03-23-2009, 10:52 PM
the BR in the top one has potential for a nice 2 letter or toss.

BigBlueViolence
03-23-2009, 10:55 PM
Giz- I really like your sig.
and the R.
I don't really like the hand, though.

luster
03-23-2009, 10:59 PM
thnaks for the crits. and more like brass with one s not the plural of a bra

Hyphy
03-24-2009, 12:35 AM
Back to "Reach". Need help developing my throwie...Crits?

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/9158/reach22.png

paintkid
03-24-2009, 01:13 AM
yeah its the flash on my camera that f'd it up. but it looks sick trust me in person. it says ALEX

Scrath- what did you use to write that?

thanks, Casey

paintkid
03-24-2009, 01:27 AM
bored as hell messin around, just quick shit before i bounced to town. tips and crits

thanks, Casey

paintkid
03-24-2009, 02:09 AM
im just starting to teach myself to do the scribble looking cursive stuff. the left one says "casey" and the right says "bre"? tips and advice please. crits??

thanks, casey

00-made-00
03-24-2009, 04:14 AM
Go simpler, wait till you can get simple letters down perfect then you can trysome cursive type. that goes for you other sketchs aswell, new tograff thread and simples it will help you out.

EJ.exe
03-24-2009, 04:47 AM
I would have used bars, and no fill. I would have also read the new to graff thread. Save the loopy r going into an underline for next year when you have a better concept of structure and use bars! goin simpler now and using straight bars will pay off indefinately later. try nothing fancy or "cool" at this point. and the 1st S is better than the second.

i wouldnt even do 3d yet, save it for a bit later. when you get striaght good lookin bars down pac then try out some 3d or fills. and the shadow/3d should almost never cover letters

I do start with bars. Maybe not the exact same way as everyone else, because curvy letters look like crap when they have hard angles, but I do start with bars. I've read the new to graff thread already, but I'm not new to graff. My cousin used to write when he was around, I'll have to post the only one I have left one of these days...

thanks for the crit :)



Star- try bars. I tried to skip the basics at first too, and my sketches just got ugly. Now I'm back at the bottom, trying again.

Crits?

your's is cool, I like the "lighting" on the letters.


im just starting to teach myself to do the scribble looking cursive stuff. the left one says "casey" and the right says "bre"? tips and advice please. crits??

thanks, casey

the first one looks sloppy, but the second one is sickkk, I like it a lot.

Yaer - it does look cool, but it's not too legible, I thought it said "hatir" as
well lol.

Cliff - sweeeet simple, even though the only simple thing in there are the actual letters. hahaha.

Reach/Tho - "Tho" is simple and a cool name, but people might think it's an acronym for a crew or something. Your first "Reach" simple looked good. For your throwie, don't go so bubbly, it's too much.



I start with bars and progress from there. I even everything out, and then I go for hookups if I'm feeling it. I'm not trying anything too complex out, just mixing a lot of everything so I don't get bored with anything. Today was drop-shadow practice, I was never really great at it but I think I pulled it off alright in some of today's stuff. Check em out and crit please! Oh, and crits on my handies would be nice too.

First of the day, only thing I don't like much is the space between the "t" and the "a".
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/7829/0323091556.jpg

Lame underline, I should have done without it. But this has my favorite handstyle, what do you think?
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6425/0323091734.jpg

The cleanest of the bunch, turned out good.
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/531/0323091922.jpg

Keep in mind I drew these on the bus/lightrail haha.

Queezy
03-24-2009, 05:12 AM
Not really a great name, there is a starz in Califronia doing good things.
I'm feelin the hand in the 2nd like you said, I guess just clean it up and keep sketching.

EJ.exe
03-24-2009, 05:34 AM
eh, I didn't pick it for originality, I picked it for personal meaning.

by the time I'm out there painting, it might be different anyways, who knows.

Aesir
03-24-2009, 06:10 AM
damn giz that shits pretty damn tight. but purple isnt really a satanic satan colour so change the colour scheme lol

Are you serious? THE COLOR OF SATAN IS PURPLE. Why the fuck do you think satanists light purple candles when they perform their rituals? And not only that but purple is also the color of royalty. It originated from the fact that the purple dye was so expensive to make in the middle ages. Skewl'd

Zest3
03-24-2009, 07:11 AM
Not in a Blackbook, but still...

http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/6207/dscf1698.jpg

BTW, the black line is not supposed to be there, I tagged the other side of the sheet... =/

barbek
03-24-2009, 09:24 AM
hyphy - try making the center of the h a little bigger
giz - really digging the r and your inking.
bras - go simpler. the letters in the second one especially look awkward / malformed.
star - try keeping all your letters the same height. really nice 3D. the underline in the second one isn't working.
zest - on the E, the upper and lower bars look too thick in comparison to the middle one.

http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb228/chemicalarrest/bek1.jpg
crits appreciated

SANEKONE
03-24-2009, 09:37 AM
bek- make your bars straight and less rounded. and make them fatter. the bottom left one looks nice.

zest - yikes. new to graff thread. and if that is supposed to be a stencil of a snail... id try again.

Incite
03-24-2009, 10:29 AM
hyphy - try making the center of the h a little bigger
giz - really digging the r and your inking.
bras - go simpler. the letters in the second one especially look awkward / malformed.
star - try keeping all your letters the same height. really nice 3D. the underline in the second one isn't working.
zest - on the E, the upper and lower bars look too thick in comparison to the middle one.

http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb228/chemicalarrest/bek1.jpg
crits appreciated

would be very nice to see #2 colored and shaded and whatnot.

-Dank-DK-
03-24-2009, 10:35 AM
hell ya i want to see that shit colored

klic
03-24-2009, 11:49 AM
b squared - its time for you to move on and stop posting the same photo over and over again

bek - i like number 2 and 4

zest - new to graff thread



i dont want crits or anything, i just want to know which ones the best of the three?

#1
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/Round1-CHART.jpg

#2
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/Round1-CHART2.jpg

#3
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/Round1-CHART3.jpg

mekosbc
03-24-2009, 11:57 AM
ima try to do this on a fr8......
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0030.jpg

klic
03-24-2009, 11:59 AM
looks fresh meko other than the ball on your K, actually that whole leg too

paintkid
03-24-2009, 12:25 PM
yeah it was just some quick sketch stuff ya know. i mean if i put a lil effort into stuff i can make it look sick and clean. but thanks, i really want to try and get the cursive style down. i like it a lot!!!

Zest3
03-24-2009, 03:43 PM
zest - yikes. new to graff thread. and if that is supposed to be a stencil of a snail... id try again.

I know, I fucked up the snail xD I used that paper because I ripped the snail and it was useless xD

BIGdreamSCHEME
03-24-2009, 03:50 PM
janek, easily the second one.
bek, second one is dope
meko, pretty tight, not feeling the m tho
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image017.jpg

bulltimeJAMP
03-24-2009, 04:13 PM
why dont YOU tell ME whats wrong with your k. youll have learned something if you can figure it out.

BIGdreamSCHEME
03-24-2009, 04:17 PM
bars are fucked on top and the center??

Backalley Abortion Doctor
03-24-2009, 04:24 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/img016-1.jpg doodling

bulltimeJAMP
03-24-2009, 04:26 PM
the diagonal bars should cross over fully by the time they reach the vertical bar.

the one on the right is the corrected version. and sorry for the quality of the letters.
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww318/GermerArt/Untitled.jpg

the the red triangles are exactly the same, just at differents places on the k.

-Dank-DK-
03-24-2009, 04:26 PM
haha back thats fucking raw bro

BIGdreamSCHEME
03-24-2009, 04:30 PM
germ is that you?
thanks tho, how's this?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/daf.jpg

bulltimeJAMP
03-24-2009, 04:44 PM
yes this is my new account. and that still has the same problem as before.

BIGdreamSCHEME
03-24-2009, 04:45 PM
oh okay, I see now, I thought you were saying that both are fine, just in different spots
but I see now, thanks
hope I got it right this time,
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image027-1.jpg

woozie
03-24-2009, 04:55 PM
i know that the letters are to far apart and i am not going to finish coloring it so please give crits on letter structure and style
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/6228/sake001.jpg (http://img15.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sake001.jpg)
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/3760/sake002.jpg (http://img5.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sake002.jpg)
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6213/sake003.jpg (http://img17.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sake003.jpg)

Stussy
03-24-2009, 05:39 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/t0oxz6.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/ftzpci.jpg
some sketches at work... ignore the shitty arrow

bulltimeJAMP
03-24-2009, 05:48 PM
^the top two are sexy, but i dont know if its just a fluke. post a finished when youre done.

Stussy
03-24-2009, 05:57 PM
yea the I did the first ones after the second one... Im just working on the letters with some sketches

klic
03-24-2009, 06:04 PM
quick messy ish
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKPiece3.jpg

stussy - the top two are good, not feeling the bottom R at all

woozie - give crits if you want to get them, make it alot simpler, do keyboard letters, the 3D doesnt make much sense, its going in all different directions, go simple

dafekt - give crits if you want to get them, keep all your letters straight and your bars the same width

Kaiser71
03-24-2009, 06:15 PM
Janek- Looks solid to me, I think the J could use the tiniest bit of something, and the middle of the E could be a bit wider
Stussy- I agree with Janek, but I personally don't like the "holes" you put in your R's.
Woozie- I like your E and the colors you had going, otherwise I think you should try going simpler, watch the 3D angles, and personally, I think your letters are too far apart.
Dafekt- Watch the size of your letter,s ome smaller than others, and I think the hole in the D is way too big. Otherwise I like it.

Keep getting told to use bars. If this isn't bars, I don't know what I'm doing wrong. Hopefully Crits?
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0026-1.jpg

oxiclean
03-24-2009, 06:18 PM
Janek_That e is bugging me.
Rayz-Top looks dope.
Mer- Make the E a bit bigger maybe

sallybsk
03-24-2009, 06:24 PM
JANEK
your last three letters don't follow the scheme of the first two.
they overlap more. But you were doing it where it only covers the bottom of the next letter... then 3D.
why only on the first two letters?
that annoys me xD

but your letters by themselves seem decent. make the bar extending outwards out of the K shorter, it looks like a limp dick.

jesus MER
you're using bars... that's good.
but you still need to go simpler, just a bit. and than bend them a tiny bit your first times.
your whole letters are different sizes.
that M is HUUUGE.
looks like you're relatively keeping bars the same size... but you don't need to curve them/add extensions yet.

Kaiser71
03-24-2009, 06:33 PM
Sally- Sorry if you thought I'd been ignoring your advice to use bars. Everything I've posted on the last three pages were my attempts at bars from your advice. I guess I just wasn't/still aren't getting bars so it might not have looked like it. I'll work on size and keeping it a bit simpler.

Graff J up
03-24-2009, 06:38 PM
janek--i would work on the e and k but other than that nice
MER- im diggin it but i would make your E bigger but the R is dope
Stussy- Eh im not really diggin the "holes"
woozie- i think u should go simpler and fix that k
dafect: make the D and A bigger also the k n t lol
http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0106.jpg

i think i gotta fix up that "e"

crits?

sallybsk
03-24-2009, 06:44 PM
the top of the J and Z are almost curvy like...
and the E and the K have a different style in their lines...
see below.

http://i39.tinypic.com/14v19n9.jpg
make them all the same style of lines

Backalley Abortion Doctor
03-24-2009, 06:46 PM
I totally disagree with like, everything you just told him.

Graff J up
03-24-2009, 06:47 PM
ha i know at first i tried making every thing curvy but i guess i got carried away lol

sallybsk
03-24-2009, 06:49 PM
well i don't think the curvy lines look bad. they just looks so different from the E and the K. just me though.

Hyphy
03-24-2009, 07:01 PM
Bump...Going bombing soon so I need to get a decent throwie down.

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/9158/reach22.png

Crits?

Graff J up
03-24-2009, 07:09 PM
http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0112.jpg

haha kinda fixed it up
n reach i aint diggin the A ...the middle part of the a is to :in: if u know what i mean...

sallybsk
03-24-2009, 07:12 PM
i do enjoy this more... but do whatever you want mang.
they're simples, so you can always do like 2498284x more ;)
yesm i love simples.

Graff J up
03-24-2009, 07:17 PM
ahhh the world of simples LOL
guess i gotta fill up this 400 pg black book i found... with simples

EJ.exe
03-24-2009, 07:20 PM
Bump...Going bombing soon so I need to get a decent throwie down.

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/9158/reach22.png

Crits?

that's the same one man! a little less bubbly. I find bubbly to be cliche, but if you can pull it off well it's fine.

try balancing/distributing your letters a little better. some letters seem top/bottom heavy. try to align the horizontal centers more, like this....

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/9053/reachthrowie.jpg

I gotta work on a throwie too, I'm still working on my handy :)

sallybsk
03-24-2009, 07:22 PM
ahahaha fill it up with whatever you want... and you can do a lot with simples. it's funn to freestyle them as well.
idk, it depends on your style and whatnot.

EJ.exe
03-24-2009, 07:26 PM
ahahaha fill it up with whatever you want... and you can do a lot with simples. it's funn to freestyle them as well.
idk, it depends on your style and whatnot.

is there anywhere online I can find a collection of flix of JUST simples?

I can think of a million things to do too, but it seems I learn more from looking and gaining concepts than just trying out what's in my head.

Black Flag
03-24-2009, 07:32 PM
is there anywhere online I can find a collection of flix of JUST simples?

I can think of a million things to do too, but it seems I learn more from looking and gaining concepts than just trying out what's in my head.

If you can't find any good selections for simps, look up rollers, most rollers can be converted to a decent simple.

littlerocky
03-24-2009, 07:33 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/Photo10.jpgshitty camera meh.just expirimentin.

Hyphy
03-24-2009, 07:34 PM
Dafekt - Fix your structure. Make your letters congruent and the drop shadow is off is some parts.
Krisbie - I'm diggin' the style. It may just be me but the structure is sort of off. Try going simpler?
Stussy - Not feelin' the curly shit in the middle of the "R".
Janek - Nice and clean. "E" and "K" look weird though.
Mer - Good shit with the bars but go simpler. Make your letters the same size and evened out.
Jzek - Keep the same style throughout all the letters. Don't make your "K" slanted.

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/298/reach23.png