Blackbooks

[klic]

quick messy ish
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKPiece3.jpg

stussy - the top two are good, not feeling the bottom R at all

woozie - give crits if you want to get them, make it alot simpler, do keyboard letters, the 3D doesnt make much sense, its going in all different directions, go simple

dafekt - give crits if you want to get them, keep all your letters straight and your bars the same width

[Kaiser71]

Janek- Looks solid to me, I think the J could use the tiniest bit of something, and the middle of the E could be a bit wider
Stussy- I agree with Janek, but I personally don't like the "holes" you put in your R's.
Woozie- I like your E and the colors you had going, otherwise I think you should try going simpler, watch the 3D angles, and personally, I think your letters are too far apart.
Dafekt- Watch the size of your letter,s ome smaller than others, and I think the hole in the D is way too big. Otherwise I like it.

Keep getting told to use bars. If this isn't bars, I don't know what I'm doing wrong. Hopefully Crits?
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0026-1.jpg

[oxiclean]

Janek_That e is bugging me.
Rayz-Top looks dope.
Mer- Make the E a bit bigger maybe

[sallybsk]

JANEK
your last three letters don't follow the scheme of the first two.
they overlap more. But you were doing it where it only covers the bottom of the next letter... then 3D.
why only on the first two letters?
that annoys me xD

but your letters by themselves seem decent. make the bar extending outwards out of the K shorter, it looks like a limp dick.

jesus MER
you're using bars... that's good.
but you still need to go simpler, just a bit. and than bend them a tiny bit your first times.
your whole letters are different sizes.
that M is HUUUGE.
looks like you're relatively keeping bars the same size... but you don't need to curve them/add extensions yet.

[Kaiser71]

Sally- Sorry if you thought I'd been ignoring your advice to use bars. Everything I've posted on the last three pages were my attempts at bars from your advice. I guess I just wasn't/still aren't getting bars so it might not have looked like it. I'll work on size and keeping it a bit simpler.

[Graff J up]

janek--i would work on the e and k but other than that nice
MER- im diggin it but i would make your E bigger but the R is dope
Stussy- Eh im not really diggin the "holes"
woozie- i think u should go simpler and fix that k
dafect: make the D and A bigger also the k n t lol
http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0106.jpg

i think i gotta fix up that "e"

crits?

[sallybsk]

the top of the J and Z are almost curvy like...
and the E and the K have a different style in their lines...
see below.

http://i39.tinypic.com/14v19n9.jpg
make them all the same style of lines

[Backalley Abortion Doctor]

I totally disagree with like, everything you just told him.

[Graff J up]

ha i know at first i tried making every thing curvy but i guess i got carried away lol

[sallybsk]

well i don't think the curvy lines look bad. they just looks so different from the E and the K. just me though.

[Hyphy]

Bump...Going bombing soon so I need to get a decent throwie down.

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/9158/reach22.png

Crits?

[Graff J up]

http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0112.jpg

haha kinda fixed it up
n reach i aint diggin the A ...the middle part of the a is to :in: if u know what i mean...

[sallybsk]

i do enjoy this more... but do whatever you want mang.
they're simples, so you can always do like 2498284x more ;)
yesm i love simples.

[Graff J up]

ahhh the world of simples LOL
guess i gotta fill up this 400 pg black book i found... with simples

[EJ.exe]

Bump...Going bombing soon so I need to get a decent throwie down.

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/9158/reach22.png

Crits?

that's the same one man! a little less bubbly. I find bubbly to be cliche, but if you can pull it off well it's fine.

try balancing/distributing your letters a little better. some letters seem top/bottom heavy. try to align the horizontal centers more, like this....

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/9053/reachthrowie.jpg

I gotta work on a throwie too, I'm still working on my handy :)

[sallybsk]

ahahaha fill it up with whatever you want... and you can do a lot with simples. it's funn to freestyle them as well.
idk, it depends on your style and whatnot.

[EJ.exe]

ahahaha fill it up with whatever you want... and you can do a lot with simples. it's funn to freestyle them as well.
idk, it depends on your style and whatnot.

is there anywhere online I can find a collection of flix of JUST simples?

I can think of a million things to do too, but it seems I learn more from looking and gaining concepts than just trying out what's in my head.

[Black Flag]

is there anywhere online I can find a collection of flix of JUST simples?

I can think of a million things to do too, but it seems I learn more from looking and gaining concepts than just trying out what's in my head.

If you can't find any good selections for simps, look up rollers, most rollers can be converted to a decent simple.

[littlerocky]

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/Photo10.jpgshitty camera meh.just expirimentin.

[Hyphy]

Dafekt - Fix your structure. Make your letters congruent and the drop shadow is off is some parts.
Krisbie - I'm diggin' the style. It may just be me but the structure is sort of off. Try going simpler?
Stussy - Not feelin' the curly shit in the middle of the "R".
Janek - Nice and clean. "E" and "K" look weird though.
Mer - Good shit with the bars but go simpler. Make your letters the same size and evened out.
Jzek - Keep the same style throughout all the letters. Don't make your "K" slanted.

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/298/reach23.png

[(SoS)Viruz]

(Chart battle with Klic)
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0011.jpg

Here you guys go. What do you think of my Simpilar Steez

[EJ.exe]

tried a new 3d effect last night, I forget what it's called. I gotta work on it though.

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/108/l_58c966a739634f13b2b28bf2d18490e5.jpg

[Stussy]

Virus- the C has so much more detail that the rest of the letters...the HART is real nice and simple, so is the C, maybe make the C the same size at the other letters

[Graff J up]

i think the c is to small
butt DAMNN man that shit looks dope as fuckk

wish i was that good :|
lol

[Hyphy]

Star - Change the name bro. Waaaay too toy-ish and generic. Start off with keyboard letters and bars. Like this...

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/2192/progressr.png

[Kaiser71]

Hyphy-- Looks good. I agree with an edit that I think RhodeIsland made earlier, that you should have two horizontal lines in the center of the H.
(Sorry in advance to RI if it wasn't actually you that said it. But I think I remember seeing someone suggest it.)
Viruz- Dope. I'm especially loving the H and R

[NO_1]

only reason im posting here is cause my structure needs work

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/chicky.jpg
some chick yes she has a tail
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/kathrine.jpg
kathryn

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/buddy6.jpg
buddy IV

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/tryngreen.jpg
tryn (weak structure)

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/rozwelloutline.jpg
this is what im mostly concerned with, my psudonym. whatchu think of the structure?

[EJ.exe]

Star - Change the name bro. Waaaay too toy-ish and generic. Start off with keyboard letters and bars. Like this...


toyish and generic? I can't find another writer with the name "star" anywhere, online or in mags. and I really think that is all a matter of opinion. say I get to be really good some day, are people going to diss me for having a "toyish" name? I think it's the style that defines the quality, not the name..

I'm not "getting up" any time soon, I still have to work on structure. there is plenty of time for me to pick a better name, if I choose to. I've been giving it thought anyhow. thanks for the tips.

I can't find anything on using "bars", I even out my letters as they progress.. I see people drawing bars on their flix, but it's what I do anyways for the most part, and I'm not accidentally making any lines more or less wide, I only do it when I feel it works. for example, the bridge on a capital "A". I don't want it as wide as the legs, because it doesn't look proportionate that way.

ehh, I'll try doing ACTUAL bars again later, but I think it looks like crap on curvy letters.

[Hyphy]

NO 1 - Sorry bro, your skills are way beyond mine for me to crit you ahaha.
Star - http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/2753/reach24.png

Took that horizontal center tip and slapped a middle section in my "H".

[NO_1]

your r is wack...a is neat

do that throwie one hundred times then post again

[(SoS)Viruz]

toyish and generic? I can't find another writer with the name "star" anywhere, online or in mags. and I really think that is all a matter of opinion. say I get to be really good some day, are people going to diss me for having a "toyish" name? I think it's the style that defines the quality, not the name..

I'm not "getting up" any time soon, I still have to work on structure. there is plenty of time for me to pick a better name, if I choose to. I've been giving it thought anyhow. thanks for the tips.

I can't find anything on using "bars", I even out my letters as they progress.. I see people drawing bars on their flix, but it's what I do anyways for the most part, and I'm not accidentally making any lines more or less wide, I only do it when I feel it works. for example, the bridge on a capital "A". I don't want it as wide as the legs, because it doesn't look proportionate that way.

ehh, I'll try doing ACTUAL bars again later, but I think it looks like crap on curvy letters.

Yo. Dont write that long statement. You have the right Idea with that sketch. Its just a matter of Cleanin it up and Makin all your letters proportional to one another. So keep practicing.

No_1
Not a like in of it to tell the truth. Sure it looks nice. But can you actualy say its structure. Feel me.The Buddy sketch...HAS WAY TOO much going on.
And so do your other two colored ones. The last one HAS SOO Much potential. I think you should make a Simpliar Verison of it and then Post it then i'll tell you what I think.

[NO_1]

thanks viruz ill consider. those are just from the last couple weeks. the buddy one i was just blazed as fuck going off ya know?

ill resketch the roz one tho

[EJ.exe]

NO 1 - Sorry bro, your skills are way beyond mine for me to crit you ahaha.
Star - http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

Took that horizontal center tip and slapped a middle section in my "H".

I've read that thread a good five or so times bro. haha.

I think it looks a lot better already, but I'd still do a few things...

one is the "r" has too much of a bubble. I'd say leave enough to establish that it's an "r", but not enough to nearly sever the whole letter lol. same with the "e". I'd either erase that part of the "e" or round it out more like I showed.

here:

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/9053/reachthrowie.jpg

I think it looks loads better, if I may say so myself. from tiny changes, too :)

edit: oh, and the fills on the "c" and the arm of the "a" should be changed to the proper 3d depth, it'll look even better.

taking off, looking forward to see the updated one :)

[Hyphy]

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/9053/reachthrowie.jpg


http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/8886/reach25.png

[Stussy]

reach- you seem to post every single thing you draw... Draw more, take the crits to heart and try to figure somethings out on your own. no need to post every single thing you sketch, especially when its the same thing over and over

[littlerocky]

reach b is not c. you gotta put like a roll up from the end of the c line (what looks like the bottom of the b) and connect it back down to where the top of the bottom of the b (circle part on that -b-).so theres a gap there or some indication there making it a c.

[Hyphy]

reach- you seem to post every single thing you draw... Draw more, take the crits to heart and try to figure somethings out on your own. no need to post every single thing you sketch, especially when its the same thing over and over

Haha my bad brah, I always try to perfect all the details and I guess I overdo it =P.

[mekosbc]

i know that the letters are to far apart and i am not going to finish coloring it so please give crits on letter structure and style
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/6228/sake001.jpg (http://img15.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sake001.jpg)
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/3760/sake002.jpg (http://img5.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sake002.jpg)
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6213/sake003.jpg (http://img17.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sake003.jpg)

bro it looks like you ripped these letters off graffiti creator

[Kraft561]

just some shit ive been working on
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Iphone081.jpg
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff026.jpg
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff050.jpg
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff052.jpg
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff053.jpg

[SONE.]

^^ kraft. dont write aker.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090324_2.jpg

fuckin hate this goddamn toy form.

[NoCanControl]

the s and e overlay look ugly. not saying DON'T DO THAT. just saying make it work out some how. idk how to, i don't do that stuff. but you can figure it out.

[littlerocky]

aker take that first one without the clouds and do it like a hundred times. ish. make it not so bubble keep the ends of your letters consistent. however you decide to end the bars..

sone its legit. the fills gravy letters arent half bad either.dont like how the top of the e and s overlap back on top of the letter in the middle there, i would just make a connection. work on the handstyle. and i would make all your letters the same size. kno you did it on purposei just personally think it would look better.
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/Photo10.jpg
can i get some ish?

[SONE.]

Nocancontrol-ty. i see exactly what ur gettin at.

and other guy. dont mean no hate. but i dont want any tips on my handy. drop that sh

[KnoxIn]

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/8853/p3243060h.jpg
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/1241/p3243061e.jpg

here are some handys i was workin on i got shitty paper so my markers bleed and alot look alike but still crits??? any ones in particular that look decent??

littlerocky-i dunno about all the extensions the little swirley things make it seem to crowded and shit
aker-your simple at the top look pretty good i agree with above though just make your proportions good
sone-im diggin your style looks pretty clean

[SANEKONE]

faze keep up the hand action.
the more you repeat the more you develop.

[littlerocky]

Nocancontrol-ty. i see exactly what ur gettin at.

and other guy. dont mean no hate. but i dont want any tips on my handy. drop that sh
dog..dont try to tell me my handy is weak.also dont mean to hate.but.
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/Photo14.jpg
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/Photo16.jpg
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/Photo17.jpg
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/Photo19.jpg
faze go simpler.its to rigid.
no1 o like the RoI but after that idk. id follow the same outline as those first three letters.
and for all chit chat couple quick throws
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/Photo20.jpg
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/Photo21.jpg
for my boy bins
fuckin around. shitty pic but meh.
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/Photo6.jpg

[KnoxIn]

littlerocky, do you mean that mine are like too pointy or whatever???

[BigBlueViolence]

To be honest, rocks, the only hand I'm feeling is the Henel one.
That Yulr throw and Mugs straight are pretty dope, though.

[Zase]

http://i44.tinypic.com/wa4m89.jpg
when it comes to styles i got several

[Thrice]

I like the style Zase, but the Z isn't coming off as a Z very well and i think the E needs to be simplified a little bit.

[woozie]

mekosbc thanks for letting me know because i did an exchange with someone on 12oz and he gave me this style. i fucking hate people on 12oz

[PROJECT LINK]

ZASE-yo.. ur fuckin trasshhh kidd..
lol nah jus kiddin bro that shitts ill as fuck man..i like it dude but finish it, add some color to ittt and that shit will be lookin pretty narley.tight work

[SAID]

Zase, I like where you're going with that

[klic]

zase - looks good but im not feeling your Z

rocky - liking that first throw, stick with it, does it say yulr?

faze - same thing as your pieces, its way to jagged and all the bars are bent the wrong way

sone - looks good, try and do something with your o and n so that it goes with your s and e, your handstyle looks ill too

aker - the first one would be decent if you dropped the clouds and fixed up the leg on your R, and your handstyle needs ALOT of work

just fixed up some stuff that i did wrong last time

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKPiece4.jpg

[oxiclean]

Janek I like your lower case e's alot better than the uppercase ones.

[(SoS)Viruz]

****Weekly Toy Sketch battle Call out.****
Word: What you write(Your Graff. name)
Deadline:Monday, March 30,2009
Pm your entries to: (SoS)Viruz
Check the Toy Battles for more info on upcoming and recent battles.

[Stussy]

http://i41.tinypic.com/2l9nrd0.jpg
simple sketch at work...

[jaik6]

Jaik

http://i43.tinypic.com/23usi01.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/fmul4z.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/a4289w.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/34g0gfq.jpg

From Mallorca!

[jaik6]

oh! sorry for the big size :S

[(SoS)Viruz]

Jaik-Go simpilar.

[PROJECT LINK]

yo im down for this battle...jaik-pretty dope bro..

[LIZARD]

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/5156/picture069.jpg

critz plz

[KnoxIn]

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/1244/p3253062.jpg
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4010/p3253065.jpg
Crits anyone???

sore- its not bad your proportions are a little off like on your leg on the R and the e
Jaik-i agree with above go simpler the extensions make it too complicated
rays- its pretty good i just dont like the leg on your R its a little unproportioned other than that pretty good

[Hyphy]

Faze - Haha, I've seen like 20 people with that name. I even had that name =P. Good shit with the bars though. Try to even out your letters. Make your "F" closer to your "A", make the entire "A" overlap the "Z", and don't slant your "E" like that.

[WoeInfinite]

sigh...whyd ya have to put the hatchetman in there?
juggalos are overrated bro.
youll realize it sooner or later.
your graff isnt too good either, so dont think your hard, or go get your "fam" on me.
cuz ill throw a 2liter of faygo at your mom.
go reaaaaaallly simple, like im talkin straight letters and shit.
im really only here to help you..no beef.

[KJay]

some throwies i did a few days ago
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8022/iziziziziziziziz.jpg
more throws, bottom two a different style, lemme know which u like better
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5420/okimx.jpg
hyphy- its lookin better each time.
faze- the michalle would look good if u didnt overlap some of those lettters so weirdly. u can barely see some of them, so work on that. just keep letters the same size and well spaced, but ur definitly comin along
lizard- normally i wouldnt like for the first letter to be way bigger, but that looks kinda cool. i probly wouldnt paint it like that tho, cuz it is kinda questionable haha, but it looks good on paper

[Aesir]

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/801/1010565.jpg (http://img148.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010565.jpg)
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/5189/1010566.jpg (http://img150.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010566.jpg)
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/9470/1010567.jpg (http://img259.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010567.jpg)
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/8093/1010569.jpg (http://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010569.jpg)

some new shit.

[Hyphy]

Izoe - Bottom picture, top left. Clean.
Norse - Not really diggin it. Go simpler?

Crits?

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/1460/reach33.png

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/2991/reach26.png

[KnoxIn]

thats for crits ppl
norse-not bad your kinda consistent on making the letters bigger as you go along tho.. try and just keep same height other than that lookin good
izoe- im diggin the top pic better they are all pretty good though...
reach- lookin pretty good its good you got the centers of the letters even if you get what i mean but your lines look really shaky other than that comin along good

[LIZARD]

you say your not here for beef but yet your just talkin shit...keep yo mouth shut and go listen to your faggot ass emo music before i throw a hatchet right inbetween your fucking eyes

[Kraft561]

Izoe- the top throws r sick
Faze- go more simple
Sore- the S dosnt really fit in
but idk im just starting so i dont know a whole lot thats just wat i think
everyone told me to go more simple and so i did. hows this?
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff059.jpg
just playing with the fuck yu all cuz everyone was hating on my shit lol

[BigBlueViolence]

Is that kid up there really trying to get anywhere in graff trying to rep a juggalo satus?
Haha, fucking ICP.

[NoCanControl]

you say your not here for beef but yet your just talkin shit...keep yo mouth shut and go listen to your faggot ass emo music before i throw a hatchet right inbetween your fucking eyes

fire at will bs!

[KASE2]

damn i aint bin on here 4 a min, jus want peoples opinions on this lil sketch ("H" is 2 far spaced from itself) and that first downward arrow isnt really like that, pic fucked it up
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/IMG000075.jpg

[SANEKONE]

do simples.

[Zase]

i tried to play with this style a lil bit so i did a quick sketch too see how this style would look wild
http://i44.tinypic.com/2dlnhx1.jpg

[eada]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f337/eya103/001-5.jpg

please crit... i have moderate artistic ability coupled with a shaky hand and copious amounts of inconsitency in design.

[HëRbN]

its weird, lol im not a big fan of the D, it could be kinda cool if you polished it up i guess.. i would make the A's more like the e though just upside down i dont like the top part of the A. and those blue lines seem out of place. That and you shadow/3d is off... way off you shouldnt have 3d on both sides of the letter. pick one

[Kraft561]

http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/Graff060.jpg
crits?

[eada]

its weird, lol im not a big fan of the D, it could be kinda cool if you polished it up i guess.. i would make the A's more like the e though just upside down i dont like the top part of the A. and those blue lines seem out of place. That and you shadow/3d is off... way off you shouldnt have 3d on both sides of the letter. pick one

i know!! im not even remotely a fan of the D.

the As dont match either. the E is the only thing i do like.

the blue lines were to fill in the vast open white space i had left.

and the shadow/3d confuses the hell outta me.

that's what i meant when i said inconsistency ya know. its like 8 different designs paths jumbled onto one page.


thanks though for the crit. any other advice or suggestions too??

[littlerocky]

zase make the a the same size as the rest of the letters its kinda thicker and smaller. and leave the extensions. watch your z it could almost look like an e. but the letters are nice really.
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/Photo33.jpg
quicky.

[apoken it]

http://http://s735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/?start=20

[Zase]

thnx for the crits
i just try to pop serveral styles/structures so i wont really use the crits (in the meaning of erasing sketches or so )
but i shure keep them in mind when doing the next one

http://i41.tinypic.com/izuv7p.jpg
i finally finished this after some other pieces
i like it .. i took ceveral pics but i cant get a good one
so im sorry for that .... the flash that fucks the colours op bad


no homo

[bulltimeJAMP]

no hate. but i think you should work on another style. maybe a new style on the side.

[Hyphy]

Kraft561 - Even out your letters. If the "a" and "k" overlap then make the "e" and "r" overlap as well. Try and make it so that your "k" and "r" has sharper corners so that they match the other letters' style.
littlerocky - Pretty clean.
Zase - Your skills are beyond mine so it's hard for me to crit you ahaha.

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My "R" is fucked.
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/4492/reach37.png

Messin with the "R" and "H".
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1959/reach38.png

[WoeInfinite]

you say your not here for beef but yet your just talkin shit...keep yo mouth shut and go listen to your faggot ass emo music before i throw a hatchet right inbetween your fucking eyes

i expected a response like that...

for talking
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0321090859.jpghttp://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0321090902.jpg
tilt your head right.

reach - its lookin alright, fix up some letters, start less bubbly, and do more straight letters.
Zase - always a pleasure to see your stuff, i love it dude. envy your style.

[ESKiMO2]

For mah friend Josh. MR JOSH
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/6395/mrjosh.jpg

ZASE hot as always but I remember the quick pieces you did and you should elaborate on those.

[WoeInfinite]

feelin it all except that lower cross bar on the H is bothering me haha.
colorin that one?

yeah zase more like these..
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/2hf2pg3.jpg

[Stussy]

http://i44.tinypic.com/vhu5uu.jpg
i found a red pen at work... :D

[Zase]

hehe thnx people
im working on my simples as much as i can
the orange black one is one of the best simples i ever done
i might do a newer version of that one(also on some wall)
with some changes in the S

anyways
the Greeeeee is dope i love that idea
i remember sawing that in my hometown sometime the dude had al kinds of E banging on that wall (it was before i was doing graff) so it has impact cuzz i didnt forgot that
u shud do that on a wall where people walk by but a spot where it wont get buffed
and like every night add another E
is that a dope idea?

so if you do like 3 e's a week
the wall will be killed in a few months hehe


ciao

[WoeInfinite]

haaha thanks man, dope idea. i just gotta find a spot like that haha.

[Incite]

i tried to play with this style a lil bit so i did a quick sketch too see how this style would look wild
http://i44.tinypic.com/2dlnhx1.jpg

i like this style better then your other one.

[Zase]

and its easyer to spray
but i dont like the stiffness

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

naaa zase stick wit your other shit man i thinks its way doper then that^

[Zase]

thnx man i was thinking the same thing
its too stiff
but its a good way to make block simple letters wich i later can give some swing
people confuse me heheh well its always good too rock several styles

still my main style stays the one i been die hard practesing for a year

[KnoxIn]

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/4416/p3263070.jpg
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/4977/p3263071.jpg
here are two that i did today i know the top one my proportions are off and ill probably get told to go simpler but o well, and the bottom one thinkin maybe those for my throws??

zase- i like your old style better but i havn't seen that one inked or anything but whatever works for you man its your shit

[Zase]

http://i39.tinypic.com/35bfqx4.jpg

bite if ya want
sorry for the rough shit its jsut the way i sketch
but the point is
try to pump ya letters into eachother
like i did this rough
see how the letters like hug eachother

try that man it will look much better

also trow a fat 3d on it

[Stussy]

http://i44.tinypic.com/vhu5uu.jpg
i found a red pen at work... :D

bumperzzzzzzz

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i39.tinypic.com/35bfqx4.jpg

bite if ya want
sorry for the rough shit its jsut the way i sketch
but the point is
try to pump ya letters into eachother
like i did this rough
see how the letters like hug eachother

try that man it will look much better

also trow a fat 3d on it

Yo. Zase you tryin to do an Exchange?

[ZeroBlood]

http://img215.echo.cx/img215/4159/kioskredyellow2uh.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
how the fuck are you a toy?
what does that make me then???

[KnoxIn]

yo zase thanks man and honestly ill probably bite the shit out of it for a while to try and get what you mean but for real man thanks for the advice

[militia]

how the fuck are you a toy?
what does that make me then???

a toy

[Hyphy]

Stussy - Dope. I wanna see that shit with markers and color.

--------------------------------------------

New name I've been sleepin on for awhile. "Zen". Crits?
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/7882/zen.png

[sellers E.]

knoxin-letter structure looks good, work on the 3-D
stussy-dope

just a little simple im workin with..http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/dayhey.jpg

crits?

[sellers E.]

hyphy- i guess the names cool... the n is dope.

[paintkid]

i f'd some of the spacing and size but i dunno. let me know what you think everyone. thanks.

Casey

[klic]

how the fuck are you a toy?
what does that make me then???

because if you take away the color and 3D, the letters are horrible

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/Round2-ACCENTS.jpg

paintkid - give crits to get them

daylo - lose the highlights, round out your letters

zen - i think there used to be a guy on here who wrote zen, your e needs some fixin

edit: fixed up the 3D a little

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/Round2-ACCENTS-1.jpg

[EJ.exe]

new simple.

and got a new name. "delta-9"

I'll post up a throwie with my new name I have in mind in a little bit.

crits on these new simps please?

accents - I like it, very simple. but I don't like the "s".

daylo - too much white space between the tops of "d" and "a" in my opinion.

zen - like it. very simple. bottom of the "z" is too bubbly but nice throwie overall.

faze - the finished ones are cool, and I like your throwie. but your new one is too wavy.

zase - not really a simp but cool for sure.

the "zaser" one is sick, who did that one?

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/1382/0326091547.jpg
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/9245/0327090106v.jpg
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/8727/0327090227.jpg
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/994/0327090258.jpg

[Backalley Abortion Doctor]

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/img019-1.jpg

[Cilo]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2pplbb6.jpg

[militia]

lose the arrows quicktimes, work on letters without fills and 3-D for a bit till you get your structure down, keep your bars the same size, and keep the letters separate for now.
this will develop your style alot better. just take your time and improvement comes with simples.

[Incite]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2pplbb6.jpg

f?ae... ???

[Stussy]

Rots your characters are getting so dope

[LIZARD]

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/8886/picture078f.jpg

critz plz

[klic]

because if you take away the color and 3D, the letters are horrible

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/Round2-ACCENTS.jpg

paintkid - give crits to get them

daylo - lose the highlights, round out your letters

zen - i think there used to be a guy on here who wrote zen, your e needs some fixin

edit: fixed up the 3D a little

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/Round2-ACCENTS-1.jpg

bump no crits

backalley - that characs looking dope

[LIZARD]

doctor..that character is badass

[Zase]

ccent flows good rest needs to be redone

[Sizzuurp]

liz i like ur character a lot. thats about it. practice making letters with bars. ur handstyles hurtin too. i shouldnt be talkin my handstyle is shit but it needs work.

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

it looks tight but wtf is it

[inpho_211]

http://i683.photobucket.com/albums/vv199/inpho_211/inpho.jpg[/IMG]

some quick bombing shiit. any crits?

[Backalley Abortion Doctor]

I thought it was some type of potted plant

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/img019-1.jpg

insane!

[inpho_211]

another quick bombing, got you there, and to Vaux, hold on bro i still havent bought any big envolopes.

http://i683.photobucket.com/albums/vv199/inpho_211/fsf.jpg

[apoken it]

http://s735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/?action=view&current=DSC01098.jpg

[..romero..]

learn to post pics fool.

[LIZARD]

i thought it was some type of plant to...what is it really?

[EJ.exe]

crits?

some ink bleeded through the page onto this one.
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/5136/0327091343.jpg
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/981/0327091603.jpg

[BAGS]

Inpho has the dopest shit I've seen in a while in this thread.

Keep it up dude.

[klic]

it looks tight but wtf is it

youd think the canada rail symbol would be a dead giveaway lol

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan-3.jpg
^^^^^I just took somethings off not awhile ago. So I post the new G later.

[luster]

just a 2 letter throw i was thinkin about
and an older unfinished sketch of a chick i just found under my bed haha
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3270537.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P3270536.jpg

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

thats jus horrible

[luster]

thank you

[mekosbc]

http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/DSC00433.jpg

its the side of a canadian fr8......

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0001-3.jpg
^^^^The G with out that Extra at the bottom.

[lilbmxking]

i like to do that type of wild style thats more of a design but you can kinda read.

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i133/lil_bmx_king/brocksroom.jpg
tribe

friends room

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i133/lil_bmx_king/3dkgraff.jpg
3DK

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i133/lil_bmx_king/z50031.jpg
trick

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i133/lil_bmx_king/z50032.jpg
ride bike

[bulltimeJAMP]

that doesnt qualify as graffiti yet. new to graffiti thread, whether you like it or not, because thats not a nice style at all.

[Backalley Abortion Doctor]

I was just going to say 'stick to riding bikes'

But yours was far more productive.

[Geraldo]

anything on paper dosent qualify as graffiti.

an i think the last two would look pretty ill..... if they had actual letters.

[lilbmxking]

yeah well didnt mean to have it acutall graffiti, just thought id have it related so i decided to post

yay hate but who cares... like i said its more of a design then a word, i can do actuall graffiti but didnt feel like it then.

[Hyphy]

lilbmxking - Yeh I agree with the other cat. It's more of a graphic or design than graffiti.

-----------------------------------

Torn between "Reach" and "Zen". Help me out?
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/7140/reach39.png

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/4315/zenv.png

[Backalley Abortion Doctor]

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/img020-1.jpg

[/DaNk\]

^^ dam man thats fuckin dope keep it up

lilbmxking - you should work on simples before you go wild like that

i havnt posted in this thread ina minute so i thought id post a flic
still not finished yet.... crits are welcomed!
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh138/heydude_019/krea.jpg

[Aesir]

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/801/1010565.jpg (http://img148.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010565.jpg)
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/5189/1010566.jpg (http://img150.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010566.jpg)
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/9470/1010567.jpg (http://img259.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010567.jpg)
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/8093/1010569.jpg (http://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010569.jpg)

some new shit.

Bump for crits. The next person to tell me to go simple is getting shot. If I went any simpler than that last pic it would just be BARS.

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/8937/1010570.jpg (http://img21.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010570.jpg)

^ A little something I made for FAZE, I know the "A" looks a little like an R but if it was an R the X would have been placed higher. So there.

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/last.jpg
Wokring on my simples, made my L way too skinny

[Sizzuurp]

Bump for crits. The next person to tell me to go simple is getting shot. If I went any simpler than that last pic it would just be BARS.



exactly. thats what we want to see is bars. if someone is saying to go simple they literally mean make it as simple as humanly possible. Once you got the real real simple letters down then start to fuck with it and get ur own style goin. u cant jsut jump into a style. in your last simple do u see any of ur letters on your keyboard. if the answers no then go simpler until you do.
same for u zarb u cant just jump right in. practice x10789797 with the most simple of letters then progress after a while. this will take some time

[LIZARD]

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6523/picture078.jpg

i know the S is shit but how is everything else?
critz plz

[militia]

yea, your s is shit lol. get rid of the over hang part on the o, and i like your char.

[..romero..]

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/img020-1.jpg

id hit it.for a twenty.

[Aesir]

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/1458/1010572.jpg (http://img25.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010572.jpg)
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/1839/1010573r.jpg (http://img8.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010573r.jpg)

Fuck.

[Hyphy]

Norse - Bottom ones are wack. The top one has potential. Keep workin on that top one.

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9103/reach40.png

Edit:
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6338/reach41.png

Crits?

[mekosbc]

sorry shity flickz i had to use my phone...
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0002.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0003.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0005.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0004-1.jpg

[bulltimeJAMP]

reach, dont lift the pencil when your drawing the entire outside of the r, you know what i mean? as you come down from the top bubble dont stop and make a new line for the right leg, but come inward and out again suddenly. here:
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww318/GermerArt/Photo1-1.jpg

[diggitydoggz]

new styles

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/913/img000789.jpg

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/7444/img000785.jpg
and before anyone gets on my azz for the crowns, i was just playing around, i know i'm no king.

[mopbucket]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/rhonlynn/3393692646/


http://www.flickr.com/photos/rhonlynn/3392880771/in/photostream/

crits?

[klic]

exchange with faze
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/FAZEPiece.jpg

mopbucket - cant see them

meko - looks good, i dont like how you connected the bottom of your M

reach - i fixed it up a little
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/REACHHelp.png

[mopbucket]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3610/3392880771_e4b3982767_b.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3567/3393692646_fe0b1c59c0_b.jpg

critz?

[RetroLikeWhoa13]

i think that you should not write either of those words.

[DieHippie]

Were those colored with crayons?...

and what happened to coloring in the lines.

[squidone]

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/8999/dsc02299u.jpg

meko looking very nice love the throw
reach your getting better keep working
sega you should a little simpler

[Save and Kill]

DONT write cake!

[oxiclean]

I'm pretty sure it says sake

[JoseBuerto]

Meko looking good, not too big a fan of the piece's colors looks a bit illegible...

Sega try going simple and go slower...

Norse- Looks like your rushing your lines and coloring, just slow down and things should look cleaner... its all about Nice clean lines

Flicks for talkin and for crits............


http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/7573/freezingnuts008.jpg (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=freezingnuts008.jpg)


Dont know how much i like this one but anyways i went for a "saved by the bell" style background lol haha classic show classic idea

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/7245/freezingnuts009.jpg (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=freezingnuts009.jpg)

[Save and Kill]

he shouldn't write Sake either
both cake and sake are already well known writers

[squidone]

yeah i wouldn't write cake but i didn't know about sake other than the name got any crits?

[Save and Kill]

make everything more like the K
the big bulges on the S and the E look odd
make the bottom of the S bigger

[squidone]

mmmkay thanks

[WoeInfinite]

sorry shity flickz i had to use my phone...
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0002.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0003.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0005.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0004-1.jpg

you've come a long wayyy my brotha.
lookin fresh.

[mekosbc]

i was dead fucking tired i really didnt care how the fill came out it was my mission to finish it last night lol

[BigBlueViolence]

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/7245/freezingnuts009.jpg (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=freezingnuts009.jpg)
Bump this.
That top one is dope
I think the B and R are out of place, though.
not really the same style

[KnoxIn]

hey klic im still workin on your janek sketch ill have it up tomorrow

[TheseFewPresidents]

Pebar i actually prefer the bottom one, it's pretty sweet simples. Never really been a big fan of flairs on the end of letters

[klic]

hey klic im still workin on your janek sketch ill have it up tomorrow

alright cool



http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/DSC00439.jpg

what, you didnt show me that one on msn but you show everyone on bombingsciece haha

[sellers E.]

dub-that first one is dope........


new name and throw im working with,

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/meth.jpgcrits?

[TheseFewPresidents]

dub-that first one is dope........


new name and throw im working with,

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/meth.jpgcrits?

Ummmm it's getting there, try doing handstyles too.

Also avoid the whole your m has a vagina thing, instead try adn do a crotch bulge, that's how I learnt, so instead of a v you want a u?

Just my 20 or so cents

[sellers E.]

thanks man. i got a hand for it too.

[617...]

http://i39.tinypic.com/16blo34.jpg
i like the st but the rest just sucks idk crits?

[RhodeIsland]

617 take a better picture and re-size it

[Apocalypse]

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/90/l_fdd076ab1bd34a9781bcf68310385609.jpg

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/112/l_19a72a0b0fbe469db6c14750d6d8f4d3.jpg

Crits?

Meth-change name, work on fills A LOT!

[Apocalypse]

hahaha. thatssome sexy back graff :roll eyes:

nigaawha?

[Aesir]

EDIT:: That was a different topic. Also, I punch babies.

[617...]

http://i41.tinypic.com/14uj2v5.jpg

rezied and not so blurry

[b SQUARED 08]

Firstly, start using bars. You're simply drawing the outlines of the letters and they don't make any sense. Secondly, your S takes up almost half of the entire area. Make your letters proportionate in size. Thirdly, you shouldn't waste your markers yet. Stick to pencil until you understand simples. And last, stay away from designs until you understand your letters 100%. It's all about the letters, then add-ons, not vice-versa. Follow this and you should be well on your way to improvement.

[617...]

ive been doing simples for months

[Sizzuurp]

do em for longer. it takes more than a couple of months to upgrade from simps to pieces

[b SQUARED 08]

ive been doing simples for months

You've been doing them wrong. Read the new to graff thread and apply that to your letters. Nobody said this won't take a lot of time.

[Aesir]

Does anyone actually ENJOY doing simples?

[b SQUARED 08]

I do, but that's probably partially because I'm not experienced enough to step too far outside of the realm of simples yet. I'm getting progressively better by doing simples, so yeah, I do enjoy progressing my skills.

[Sizzuurp]

yea i do alot. simps and throws are all i do. there clean and look fresh when done right.

[apoken it]

http://s735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/?action=view&current=DSC01098.jpg

[apoken it]

sellers, that meth is pretty illin

[squidone]

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/5272/dsc02301l.jpg

tryin to bend things crits

[Apocalypse]

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/90/l_fdd076ab1bd34a9781bcf68310385609.jpg

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/112/l_19a72a0b0fbe469db6c14750d6d8f4d3.jpg

Crits?

Meth-change name, work on fills A LOT!
Kane-very freshman, maybe wider bars, and color it up!

Bump

[wesos]

Apocalypse, stick to doing simples ane thicken your letters to

[wesos]

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j308/wefesofos/03-29-2009033003PM.jpg
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j308/wefesofos/03-29-2009032702PM.jpg
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j308/wefesofos/03-29-2009032008PM.jpg
a couple of pen sketches, the second one i drew it to fast so it came out ugly
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j308/wefesofos/03-29-2009032842PM.jpg
it was for a battle but didnt use it

[harmlessart]

crits for a beginning writer/coloring ideas?

http://i39.tinypic.com/t7n2vc.jpg

[acereborn]

i think you should just make a lot of random colors for the fill, and then a silver outline. you definitly should go to the big boy blackbook section, thats a sick sketch!

[harmlessart]

i think you should just make a lot of random colors for the fill, and then a silver outline. you definitly should go to the big boy blackbook section, thats a sick sketch!

thanks man, I'll come up with a few more today and I'll post a couple in there. And also thanks for the suggestions :)

[/DaNk\]

^ read the new to graff thread dude

[b SQUARED 08]

thanks man, I'll come up with a few more today and I'll post a couple in there. And also thanks for the suggestions :)

He was either fuckin' with you or he has no idea what he's talking about. It needs a lot of work. Go like 100x simpler and read the new to graff thread. No extensions, use bars, no ink yet, no 3d (yours is off anyways...)etc.

[bulltimeJAMP]

lol

read the guy who complemented that sketch's sig.

[acereborn]

come on, you guys have no clue what youre talking about. its totally hipster status. the only thing i would really fix is add more arrows, and more 3d that doesnt make sense

>.<

[skull-e]

Fags

[KJay]

Fags
bump

[Aesir]

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/8826/1010579.jpg (http://img15.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1010579.jpg)
Is this any better at all?

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

i dont think there is anything too exciting bout simps but its nice to kno em cuz bombin tha highways its nice to do a nice blockbuster wit a ill fill n u can still add extensions they dont have to be exactley like ur keyboard letters

[harmlessart]

He was either fuckin' with you or he has no idea what he's talking about. It needs a lot of work. Go like 100x simpler and read the new to graff thread. No extensions, use bars, no ink yet, no 3d (yours is off anyways...)etc.

I'll add your advice to my mental frame. And what do you mean by use bars?

[Scino & Spank]

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0318.jpg

[JoseBuerto]

Simples are great i always enjoy doing them because every single one always comes out different and no matter how many i do i never do the same thing twice.


Norse lose the thing on the left of your N and really try to go SLOW, i find the slower i go, the cleaner they get.....


WAR- stop what your doing and either do simples like everyone else or go to the new graff thread.

[squidone]

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/7480/dsc02305.jpg

norse i wouldn't color yet just work on your letters over and over try to keep them in proportion to each other

harmlessart i would read the new to graff thread it tells you every thing you need to know

wesos i like the last two but the other ones just look weird to me

war i would make them darker i can hardly read them but your adding to many extinsions i would calm it down some and work on simple some more

[La Coka Nostra]

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/7959/pensketchi.jpg




pen freestyle. colored with highlighter. and pen.

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image012.jpg
a little bit of progress...

[b SQUARED 08]

I'll add your advice to my mental frame. And what do you mean by use bars?
The first page of the new to graff thread explains it all. Read up, then adjust accordingly. Trust me.

Kane- That top sketch is dope. Very nice simples. Now just clean it up a little.

Rekon- Lookin' good. I think it'd look better if you'd make the N proportionate in size to your other letters, but other than that, nice work.

EST2007- What is that? Seriously. Bars man. Learn 'em. All the cool kids are doing it.

Dafect- Look at how different the FECT portion looks from the DA portion. Make the letters the same style; your D and A are rounded and kinda wavy while your FECT consists of straight lines and sharp corners.

[Nem]

haven't posted in forever. I feel like im progressing. any constructive criticism, little tweaks etc. is greatly appreciated.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/mailgooglecom.jpg

[peace89]

nem- your 3d dosent work theres missing alot of it for exemple on the S at the botom

crits please

[DieHippie]

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0318.jpg
i wouldnt do that if i were you


http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/7480/dsc02305.jpg

keep on doin what your doin, youre gettin there


http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/7959/pensketchi.jpg
:]


http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/uploads/03-29-09_2255.jpg
oh no, i'd rather not.


http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image012.jpg
youre gettin there



http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/mailgooglecom.jpg
:[ simples..

[(SoS)Viruz]

The WEEKLY SKETCH BATTLE is Due today to me by 10pm(Easten Time) Its not a word. Its what your write. So send me those Sketches. I have only a few and i want more. Okay. You may use color or whatever you want. Just be sure to ahve them to me by today. If you can't PM me.

[jupsick]

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/1797/0330091948450x600.jpg
crits?
all in this page should work simpler....

[Sketched!]

watch the right bar on the N neto, other than that dope.

[LIZARD]

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/2558/picture080q.jpg

critz

[Bink1]

when i was reading last few pages, i understood that lot of u guys dont understand what sarcasm is.

[Desipher]

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture024.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture025.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture026-1.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture027-2.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture028-1.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture029.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture030-2.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture-5.jpg

[Worms]

hey lizard thnks for tryna do my name =D

[LIZARD]

show me your shit then

[Aesir]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/005-3.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/001-11.jpg
]http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/003-7.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/002-11.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/0014.jpg

Here you go you lazy fuck.

[wesos]

desipher- the only one i didnt like was that e sketch, the others were sick
scino-go a little simpler
Lizard- love that character, peice is ok but is missing something, idk
jupsick- that simple is cold man, keep it up

[LIZARD]

i drew it on a box at a party one night and the next morning i woke up and someone wrote super weenie next to it so i just kept the name for it...thats what the w on the chest is for

[Apocalypse]

bad flash but I'm pretty sure you can tell the lines apart..

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/93/l_f72724c8b4844886bd486ea79e8c791f.jpg

Other stuff...

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/98/l_36d3b5cdf3f4436e95cb0a9b627bd9e1.jpg

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/93/l_971c4fa8f3764b3dae16575507f85aec.jpg

..Ignore the little war above...

[B.S. POLICE]

you too assholes, the battles are up


so enter that shit

[squidone]

war the last two are looking good keep workin with your bars try and keep them close to the same size i would loose the bubbles cuz they don't add to your piece and you wil just have to keep working on your trow up i can't really give you advice there cuz i suck at them

[Desipher]

for a battle
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/P1010167.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

desipher you deff better enter that battle

[Desipher]

ya ill do a bank sketch

[brnxbmbrs94]

Alright I know this sucks really bad but I just started a couple days ago and would appreciate feedback idk..

http://i629.photobucket.com/albums/uu19/brnxbmbrs94/IMG_0588.jpg

[Hyphy]

Alright I know this sucks really bad but I just started a couple days ago and would appreciate feedback idk..

http://i629.photobucket.com/albums/uu19/brnxbmbrs94/IMG_0588-1.jpg

Scrap that whole thing, read the new to graff thread, and use keyboard letters+bars.

----------------------------

My entry for the "enak" battle.
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/3908/enak.png

[EJ.exe]

foxie - pretty sick, doesn't really belong in the toy thread though imo. the handie is dope too :) whoaa, I didn't see your others at first, that shit is awesome man!

war - sweet, I like the coloring. but I think you need more curve to your "r"s. too blocky for my taste.

saer - sick, but not a simple.

neto - cool, I want to see 3d on that one :)

sore - good simple, but the letters should be more cohesive. make them closer together, but not too close. just fill up the white space between em.


Alright I know this sucks really bad but I just started a couple days ago and would appreciate feedback idk..

http://i629.photobucket.com/albums/uu19/brnxbmbrs94/IMG_0588-1.jpg

go superrr simple man. use bars. bars=lines of equal width. try to make well proportioned letters, that's more important than making it "cool looking".



tried a new little splash effect, crits?

http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/3033/0330091340.jpg

[harmlessart]

just finished coloring this bitch. Crits, comments?

http://i43.tinypic.com/1t20pw.jpg

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

^^^^THATSFUCKINNASTY!!!!!!!!!!!!









no not really it sucks jus go do simples for like 3 months then add the arrows bud:rolleyes:

[sank.]

^^ go simple, less arrows, learn how to do 3d.

ps. new to graff thread

[harmlessart]

fucking ridiculous standards you people have

[Incite]

if thats your style fuck what everyone else says

but atleast make your 3d better

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

Yaa well yaa i geuss you could look at it that way but just remember you will never throw up a dec crew wit that shit or actually get anywhere in graff wit that but w/e ur time wastinggg

[harmlessart]

if thats your style fuck what everyone else says

but atleast make your 3d better

yeah I'm aware I fucked my 3d up, I've gotten some better ideas for 3d now anyways. I was high as fuck when I drew that out and I didn't really care about it really, just that it was really cool heh

[B.S. POLICE]

im sorry but thats garbage, go to the new to graff thread and read it.


or you can ignore me and be a toy for the rest of your life, your choice

[Scino & Spank]

Yaa well yaa i geuss you could look at it that way but just remember you will never throw up a dec crew wit that shit or actually get anywhere in graff wit that but w/e ur time wastinggg
Don't get me wrong, its such a true statement, but not everyone is out there to join up with a big crew to get famous, or make it to the big times with revok n ewok. Some kids just do it cause they love it, and thats what makes them happy, and if its what makes you happy, then fuck what people say, keep on keeping on.

[harmlessart]

im sorry but thats garbage, go to the new to graff thread and read it.


or you can ignore me and be a toy for the rest of your life, your choice

it's garbage to you and your award winning graffiti skills. I'll agree its not too great and a whole lot of effort wasn't exactly dumped into this.. but I can tell you that if I slapped this up anywhere in my city, people's eyes would widen in aw. I've seen a LOT worse shit on walls and freights, so I don't know what you would even call that.

[skull-e]

Are these toys trying to fuck up BS?

[Scino & Spank]

everyone is better then atleast someone.

[peace89]

need crits please

[B.S. POLICE]

listen, those arent letters, they have no structure if i was to see that in my city i would diss it and not even be able to tell who i dissed. now yeah sometimes wildstyles are hard to read but thats not a wildstyle kid, you have arrows and random stuff coming out of everywhere graffiti is about letters and you got none.

just because the kids in your town are even worse, does not mean that your shit will make ppls jaws drop.

peace thats not bad at all just loose the arrow at the bottom of the d and move the dot on the i closer to the rest of the letter