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sellers E.
03-31-2009, 10:25 PM
apok- loose the stars, and do a plain fill. the letter structure is good.

apoken it
03-31-2009, 10:29 PM
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01082.jpg new character<<<<<<

HRbN
03-31-2009, 10:29 PM
and delete those multiposts damn. and no the structure isnt that good :/

apoken it
03-31-2009, 10:32 PM
well how can i improve?! dayum.

apoken it
03-31-2009, 10:34 PM
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01084.jpg


http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01083.jpg


http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01086.jpg

peace89
03-31-2009, 10:36 PM
need crits please

Cyto Aka Son1c
03-31-2009, 10:42 PM
sketchin

http://i42.tinypic.com/15zfmvb.jpg

http://i41.tinypic.com/mmstvp.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/kbrski.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/3469suo.jpg

Bump

HRbN
03-31-2009, 10:44 PM
apok - go way simpler, i know everyone hates to hear it but its gotta be done. and most importantly use bars! if you dont know bars then read the new to graff thread. but most of all do simple bar letters and dont worry bout fills or graff characters yet

diaf- your i in the first one is covered more than your other letters, the d is to wide. the second one your f is to small keep your letter the same over all width and the same bar width. keep sketchin

oh and apok that blue character looks like a condom not a paint can lol

JoseBuerto
03-31-2009, 10:50 PM
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01082.jpg new character<<<<<<

Ha dude dont lie you bit this off the internet ive seen this drawing a thousand times

brnxbmbrs94
03-31-2009, 11:39 PM
http://www.learngraffiti.net/3a8a02c0.jpg

lol look familiar ?? this is from mr. wiggles site

HRbN
03-31-2009, 11:42 PM
ooooh ouch lol and burned by a guy with a post count of 2 hahah priceless. i like em already

Stussy
04-01-2009, 12:33 AM
http://i39.tinypic.com/rl9p5j.jpg

diggitydoggz
04-01-2009, 02:11 AM
cyto - digging the alphabet, keep it up
apok - learn to construct with bars... do simples...
rayz - looks good overall but i'd lose the fat extension from the top of the A, it would look much better without it

here's a revision of something i did earlier
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/1717/img000800.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
04-01-2009, 10:24 AM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan-2.jpg
^^^^I finshed the E's but this is the last Pic I took. You can get the E's by lookin at the G I used the structure from the G to make my E's. (I'll post the Final Peice Later on)

Incite
04-01-2009, 10:38 AM
are you gonna color it? cause right now i aint feeling it the way it is

apoken it
04-01-2009, 01:35 PM
dude on the mr. wiggles website it told me to practice it and post it

Stussy
04-01-2009, 02:16 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/rl9p5j.jpg

bumps

HRbN
04-01-2009, 02:38 PM
dude on the mr. wiggles website it told me to practice it and post it


lol dude, practice and post your own shit, and never bite. someone on here will call you out on it.

bulltimeJAMP
04-01-2009, 03:06 PM
dude on the mr. wiggles website it told me to practice it and post it

thats some funny shit.

apoken it
04-01-2009, 05:07 PM
haha fuck you bulltime

apoken it
04-01-2009, 05:48 PM
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01152.jpg

HRbN
04-01-2009, 06:05 PM
Dont do any 3d, letter extensions, arrows, weird pieces, or anything else in those catagories. just do simple bars and block letters. that is all


you need letter structure... bad

haze4life
04-01-2009, 06:22 PM
yea dude like he said... go waaaaay simpler and dont try that again lol

(SoS)Viruz
04-01-2009, 06:28 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan-2.jpg^^^^i finshed the e's but this is the last pic i took. You can get the e's by lookin at the g i used the structure from the g to make my e's. (i'll post the final peice later on)

bump 4 crits

Hyphy
04-01-2009, 08:54 PM
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01152.jpg

Nice 'a'.
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/8960/xsimpleno0.jpg

Seriously though, why don't you actually take the crits and go simple?

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-01-2009, 09:04 PM
sketchin

http://i42.tinypic.com/15zfmvb.jpg

http://i41.tinypic.com/mmstvp.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/kbrski.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/3469suo.jpg

One mo bump

bulltimeJAMP
04-01-2009, 09:14 PM
keep your bars the same width^

VaNdAL xBA!x
04-01-2009, 09:17 PM
apoken that is terrible either do simples or dont write....

JoseBuerto
04-01-2009, 09:54 PM
SOS(VIRUS) - I like that alot, the R is startin to drift away style wise so keep it dirty like the g other than that cant wait to see the finished product

Syke1FTP
04-01-2009, 10:39 PM
alright this is experimental....just crit on the S and I cause the other shit sucks fatty cock....cant come up with a good looking K or E


http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h7/alborzpiri666/shitty.jpg

harmlessart
04-01-2009, 10:44 PM
crits on these please. Give me some ideas what to do with the sun one
http://i42.tinypic.com/1q2xix.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/20p1z0l.jpg

B.S. POLICE
04-01-2009, 11:41 PM
i need more enteries for the toy bank sketch battle, i havent seen anythng too impressive yet so anyone could be the winner, cyto you should try it

LIZARD
04-01-2009, 11:57 PM
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/3323/photo208tz.jpg

critz

Stussy
04-02-2009, 12:03 AM
Sore your 3d doesnt make sense

harmlessart
04-02-2009, 12:09 AM
^I dig. Who gives a shit about it ALL BEING PERFECT. Simple and clean, I like it

LIZARD
04-02-2009, 12:13 AM
thats what im talkin bout bro...but i need to fix it know that someone pointed it out.that what the critz are for

B.S. POLICE
04-02-2009, 12:16 AM
but that 3d is like wtf? just fix that and bring the e up higher to match the o. otherwise great idea i wish more peeeeeoooppppllleeee on here fallowed your example

weakfingers
04-02-2009, 02:16 AM
Rayz- I really like the simple bars, To me it looks really good.
Sore- Like others said just work on the 3d, some lines arent paralell or going to a point.

Just messing around with learning cracks and shit.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0638.jpg

sallybsk
04-02-2009, 02:25 AM
don't like the cracks in the simples on the top.
they're not as thick, probably because it's pen over metallic?
tips for cracks: just look at how other people do it, than do it however you want, like organic, don't plan it out(i think it looks better that way)... just might want to do it in pencil first in case you buff up.

sallybsk
04-02-2009, 02:26 AM
don't like the cracks in the simples on the top.
they're not as thick, probably because it's pen over metallic?
tips for cracks: just look at how other people do it, than do it however you want, like organic, don't plan it out(i think it looks better that way)... just might want to do it in pencil first in case you buff up.

HRbN
04-02-2009, 02:29 AM
i dont like the double post..... bitch!






i kid i kid, im kinda drunk. but i see you voted for my sketch in the tfbr so double post away

drumnbass
04-02-2009, 03:06 AM
hey guys,

i know this is pretty toy compared to the other stuff in here but ohwell i guess.

anyhow i just wanted to get a throwie down and i like these two so far
i just sketched them up quick, no color or real attention to the shadow

but im wondering first of all, are they any good or should i entirley scrap them

and if there any good, should i do the first one, all capitals, or the second one with the 'I' in lower case,
i think the second one makes the 'T' look more like a T, but yah, and the two S are different, which ones better?
o and how about the tags on the right, are they terrible or bearable?

thanks in advance guys!

ColorOptional
04-02-2009, 10:22 AM
What happened to JetPack? Anyone know?

harmlessart
04-02-2009, 10:41 AM
try making your cracks look like lightning bolts. That's what I do and they usually turn out unexpectedly good.

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-02-2009, 01:03 PM
Weakfingers- that WT is fucking nice

heres more sketching while on spring break

http://i43.tinypic.com/301mr5u.jpg

http://i40.tinypic.com/3524r5s.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/2ugewrt.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/sq2yw9.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/2rffrjc.jpg

apoken it
04-02-2009, 01:08 PM
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01086.jpg

http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01084.jpg

http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01083.jpg

>>>>I POSTED EARLIER.NO CRITS. PLZ DO.<<<<<<

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-02-2009, 01:25 PM
Apoken- How Old are you? and I would say try just simple block letters. And remember to take your time with it, time and effort definitly shows itself in the peice. Dont even use color just stick to structure and simple letters.

(SoS)Viruz
04-02-2009, 01:35 PM
The next word for the Sketch battle is "Digid" Its due to me by Thrusday, Apirl 9th,2009

i want to see more Entires, How do you think you get better at Letters you practice everyone in the BOOK. So let see it. You can color and all that good stuff if you want to.l

Sizzuurp
04-02-2009, 01:39 PM
apok- read the new to graff thread. u gotta start from scratch
cyto- your simples are legit. keep that shit up.
weak- i like the bottom simple. the one ontop looks bad. the W in the bottom is a little messed in the middle but u knew that already. its nice and straight though nice job
liz- keep them simps up. work on the right bar of your R. and if your gonna do 3d just keep it simple for now. itll progress in time

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-02-2009, 01:43 PM
Sizzurp- thanks I really like your RUK peice in the Bomb's thread, shits really clean.

(SoS)Viruz
04-02-2009, 01:46 PM
The next word for the Sketch battle is "Digid" Its due to me by Thrusday, Apirl 9th,2009

i want to see more Entires, How do you think you get better at Letters you practice everyone in the BOOK. So let see it. You can color and all that good stuff if you want to.l

WEEKLY TOY/INTERMED. BATTLE

THIS HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE BATTLE ROYAL

LIZARD
04-02-2009, 02:31 PM
apok do simples...i was the same way i started tryin to do crazy shit but you need to get your letter structure down before you start tryin to get your own style

B.S. POLICE
04-02-2009, 02:50 PM
apok do simples...i was the same way i started tryin to do crazy shit but you need to get your letter structure down before you start tryin to get your own style


i know you....i was wondering who this kid was that kept voting for me in all the battles.

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-02-2009, 03:39 PM
Ether, inspired by 9th wonders song Ether

Ignore the 3d and ugly brown crayola marker outline

http://i44.tinypic.com/2ito4cy.jpg

HRbN
04-02-2009, 03:47 PM
What happened to JetPack? Anyone know?


hes where he is. doin what hes doin. ya heard

and apok. burn everything you have done. you did get crits. They were all start over, read the new to graff thread and do block letters using bars. because at the moment your stuff is pretty worthless :/

apoken it
04-02-2009, 04:06 PM
haha ur hungover arent you herbn?!

expozay
04-02-2009, 04:23 PM
i dont think he is ur shit just sucks and u havent been takin crits.

HRbN
04-02-2009, 04:31 PM
Most definately not hung over. i dont even get hung over.. i drink way to much for that haha. Really though lots of people said start simple, your trying to hard. and almost everyone on here has been told that at some point. Im not tryin to be a dick or nothin just bein real. You will progress much faster if you hit the simples and use bars. orrrr... we can just keep giving you shit till you leave the site. I would choose progression if i were you

apoken it
04-02-2009, 05:49 PM
aight. and expozay chill the fuck out god damn i saw a comment herban left and he said he was drunk so go get pissed and jump off a bridge.

LIZARD
04-02-2009, 06:47 PM
BS what up my *****

LIZARD
04-02-2009, 06:48 PM
haha...i didnt know they censored out the N word

Muse.one
04-02-2009, 07:31 PM
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m249/veggieman_photos/Picture141.jpg
an other sketch
critisicm and tips on how to improve that "o"

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-02-2009, 08:30 PM
Make it thinner^

and bump

http://i44.tinypic.com/2ito4cy.jpg

apoken it
04-02-2009, 08:34 PM
muse the o looks pretty tight but you could do like two ends like barely missing each other. ******.

apoken it
04-02-2009, 08:34 PM
omg it does censor the n word

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-02-2009, 08:38 PM
is that shit cool or am I going in the wrong direction?

whahappen?
04-02-2009, 09:11 PM
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7298/getattachmentaspxndg.jpg
SOUNDIN LIKE COLTRANE HIGH ON COCAINE

b SQUARED 08
04-02-2009, 09:13 PM
Cyto, I'd take a step back before you get ahead of yourself. Keep making the letters the way they're supposed to look. You've got too many kinks where they shouldn't be (ex: the bottom right bar on the "t", bottom left bar on the "R", etc.).

harmlessart
04-02-2009, 09:20 PM
crits? Also.. the bottom one's letters were drawn really quickly so they look a little sloppy, I know.

http://i40.tinypic.com/160bepg.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/2e699p3.jpg

Zarb
04-02-2009, 09:42 PM
been practicing my simples for basicly the first time alot today
this was my best so far
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0402092134.jpg
crits?

harmlessart
04-02-2009, 10:00 PM
been practicing my simples for basicly the first time alot today
this was my best so far
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0402092134.jpg
crits?

I dig, add some color. There's a little bit of the shadow on the top part of the A that's fucked up too.

bulltimeJAMP
04-02-2009, 10:08 PM
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7298/getattachmentaspxndg.jpg
SOUNDIN LIKE COLTRANE HIGH ON COCAINE
really nice!

LIZARD
04-02-2009, 10:08 PM
zarb..go even more simple and the 3d/shadow is a little off

paintkid
04-02-2009, 10:14 PM
1-Consept
2-Music
3-koncept

yeah i like to spell things different. i dunno i guess i kinda have my own style. anyways, give me feedback, crits, advice, anything. thanks for lookn everyone!!!

thanks, Casey

JoseBuerto
04-02-2009, 10:16 PM
Zarb thats not a simple go as straight as you can!!

harmlessart have you checked out the new to graff thread? its not working out for you right now, focus on drawing less on color

harmlessart
04-02-2009, 10:18 PM
crits? Also.. the bottom one's letters were drawn really quickly so they look a little sloppy, I know.

http://i40.tinypic.com/160bepg.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/2e699p3.jpg

bump

paintkid - I love the 2nd and 3rd ones. The first one needs structure work and better or more accurate 3d. The others are ill though

SomeoneGoneStoleMyWheels!
04-02-2009, 10:48 PM
Whahappen that throwie is real nice

klic
04-02-2009, 11:11 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/KAYOPiece.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SA42Piece.jpg

some exchanges i did in school

rebl - new to graff thread, use bars, dont worry about colors for now

sex without condoms
04-02-2009, 11:30 PM
backup name throws
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232858.jpg

La Coka Nostra
04-03-2009, 10:51 AM
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/4258/rekon.png




pen freestyle. completely off the top of my head done in all pen. that's why theres random lines and shit.
my best piece i've drawn to date, in my opinion.
still needs work though.
but all in all, i'm happy with it.

JoseBuerto
04-03-2009, 02:57 PM
la coka - not to bad, seen that E so many times though anyways did you ever write infamous or is it just your rap name?

weakfingers
04-03-2009, 03:17 PM
Still working on basic letter's. The shine/highlights don't make sense either.

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0568.jpg

LIZARD
04-03-2009, 03:17 PM
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/7658/photo212scv.jpg

LIZARD
04-03-2009, 03:43 PM
is the 3d better?

Stussy
04-03-2009, 03:48 PM
sore your 3d on your S & R should be the same angle as your O & E

LIZARD
04-03-2009, 03:50 PM
is their a way you could show me what your talkin about cuz im confused as fuck

ColorOptional
04-03-2009, 04:10 PM
Just pick a place on the sheet of paper and and make all the lines on your 3d head towards that spot. If it makes it easier make an actual dot on the page and draw you lines from the letters to that dot.

paintkid
04-03-2009, 04:22 PM
yeah or thats called your vanishing point. thanks for looking at me stuff guys. ill throw some stuff on tonight maybe... i think im gunna go get some paint today and bomb somethin!

casey

Stussy
04-03-2009, 04:36 PM
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/101/sore2.jpg
See what im saying same angle...you can also do what their ^ talking about...
read through the new graffiti thread... theres stuff about 3d and stuff

LIZARD
04-03-2009, 04:40 PM
thanks brother

JoseBuerto
04-03-2009, 07:05 PM
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/8617/freezingnuts.jpg (http://img408.imageshack.us/my.php?image=freezingnuts.jpg)


Ya this is the start, i aint feeling the R at all but i thought i was gonna run out of space and i ran out of idea's

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-03-2009, 07:32 PM
Keep on sketchin Jose!

http://i44.tinypic.com/wvsjlw.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-03-2009, 07:54 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2eaijph.jpg

harmlessart
04-03-2009, 07:57 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2eaijph.jpg

don't do those little lines, doesn't look good at all.

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-03-2009, 08:07 PM
don't do those little lines, doesn't look good at all.

the purple shadow bullshit? I was fucking around that wasn't done at all lol

Just want crits on my letterz

Incite
04-03-2009, 08:26 PM
who holding that "Digid" battle?

just knocked one out in 5 mins but have no clue who to send it to

RhodeIsland
04-03-2009, 08:27 PM
Viruzzzzzz

La Coka Nostra
04-03-2009, 09:20 PM
la coka - not to bad, seen that E so many times though anyways did you ever write infamous or is it just your rap name?



i wrote INFA a really long time ago.
was probably my 2nd or 3rd name. i've been rocking this name since like 07 though.

and i knew someone would say something about the E. i figured i'd get called for a bite. as soon as i drew it, i knew i've seen E's like that before, but it wasn't a bite.

Incite
04-03-2009, 09:30 PM
that BANK battle needs to be posted already, im inpatient

Laces Out
04-03-2009, 09:49 PM
http://i385.photobucket.com/albums/oo300/featz9/mood.jpg

ak1r4nt_784
04-03-2009, 10:04 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/wl8vmf.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/166hurr.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/25f624k.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2v8hbgo.jpg

u_u ive been trying

Bars
04-04-2009, 03:07 AM
http:/i39.tinypic.com/wl8vmf.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/166hurr.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/25f624k.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2vhbgo.jpg

u_u ive been trying

Ah fucker. I was thinkin of making a squid or octopus charac lol.

Looks good.

La Coka Nostra
04-04-2009, 11:14 AM
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/4258/rekon.png




pen freestyle. completely off the top of my head done in all pen. that's why theres random lines and shit.
my best piece i've drawn to date, in my opinion.
still needs work though.
but all in all, i'm happy with it.





bump.

cyto, on your R, don't have it indent too much. it's hard to explain, but that middle line where the top and bottom of the R meet goes way too far into the R.

garbage down tha way
04-04-2009, 11:23 AM
Rekon, fuck yeah.

redxdrum
04-04-2009, 11:24 AM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture010-2.jpg
my friend asked me if i could write his girlfriend's name as a present to her. its going to be a painting and this is just the ruff blueprint outline. im real unfamiliar with writing the letters t,b, and y. could anyone send me a private message with ideas to make it look better?

ak1r4nt_784
04-04-2009, 11:28 AM
Ah fucker. I was thinkin of making a squid or octopus charac lol.

Looks good.

thanks bro :D
ive been trying to think of a new character but been drawing blanks -___-

garbage down tha way
04-04-2009, 11:29 AM
well considering his girlfriend probably wont critique you on your letter structure, youre golden with that little number. but if its really bothering you, make the horizontal middle bars of the Bs fatter and keep your proportions with the bottom holes in the Bs, the bars get too fat. make the y extend out of the piece a little, its too cramped and show both bars on top of the t.

VaNdAL xBA!x
04-04-2009, 11:30 AM
rekon nice shit propp that bitch on a wall

ak1r4nt_784
04-04-2009, 11:31 AM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture010-2.jpg
my friend asked me if i could write his girlfriend's name as a present to her. its going to be a painting and this is just the ruff blueprint outline. im real unfamiliar with writing the letters t,b, and y. could anyone send me a private message with ideas to make it look better?

those letters are so much better than what i can do :\ damn.. looks good

redxdrum
04-04-2009, 11:35 AM
ak1r4nt_784- that squid is hot
La Coka Nostra- looks really good for a freestyle
LIZARD- take a look at my last post the 3d should all come to the same point. like if you were to extend all the lines of 3d they would end up at the same point. i hope that helps you out.
Cyto Aka Son1c- im digging your letters

redxdrum
04-04-2009, 11:35 AM
ak1r4nt_784- that squid is hot
La Coka Nostra- looks really good for a freestyle
LIZARD- take a look at my last post the 3d should all come to the same point. like if you were to extend all the lines of 3d they would end up at the same point. i hope that helps you out.
Cyto Aka Son1c- im digging your letters

garbage down tha way
04-04-2009, 12:26 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0588.jpg

nickstix
04-04-2009, 12:41 PM
Ok so heres the deal, Im not new here I just havent been on the forums in a long time. Also I have not been drawing much lately. Im trying to get back into it and have started up again...

Heres some of the most recent stuff before I stopped for awhile...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1419.jpg
"RE" 3D
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1421.jpg
"RETN"
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1424.jpg
"KAY10" from a battle
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1426.jpg
"LRYK"
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1429.jpg
"RET"
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1432.jpg
"NAIM"
And now for my new stuff that Ive recently started working on...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1439.jpg
Random "S"
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1440.jpg
Random "E"
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1434.jpg
"RETN" simples
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1438.jpg
"E" 3D
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1435.jpg
"RET"

Im just looking to see where Im at as of now. Any crits are welcome. I dont feel its right for me to crit as of now since Ive been gone so long otherwise I would Crit. Sorry for bad picture quality.

haze4life
04-04-2009, 02:52 PM
Hoer-Love the style.
Nick- I like youre E's and youre over all flow is pretty nice on some of them.
Heres my stuff for a friends gaming company, and yes i know that the shadow is off and i should drop the arrow, other then that, crits???

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2118/graff005.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff005.jpg)
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/graff005.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img12/graff005.jpg/1/)

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/3396/graff001.jpg (http://img17.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff001.jpg)
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/graff001.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img17/graff001.jpg/1/)

bulltimeJAMP
04-04-2009, 03:32 PM
are you the guy who makes all the montreal youtube videos?^

..romero..
04-04-2009, 04:39 PM
thes-lovin it.

zrb-new to graaaf thread homie

tabby-love the stewie,looks traced tho...it has to be haha.

ret-work on you 2d more before goin for the 3d shit homie

ABC's fools.

http://i41.tinypic.com/2cijlag.jpg

what yall think.

BIGdreamSCHEME
04-04-2009, 04:46 PM
romero... your style is basically the dopest i've seen in the toy forums
keep it up man

617...
04-04-2009, 05:29 PM
ABC's fools.

http://i41.tinypic.com/2cijlag.jpg

what yall think.[/QUOTE]


i hope those are just abc.s and not the abc crew in boston but nice letters

B.S. POLICE
04-04-2009, 05:30 PM
abc crew in boston? never heard of it, who reps it?

..romero..
04-04-2009, 05:32 PM
abc is the chinese crew i think.maybe not.there old school.

SomeoneGoneStoleMyWheels!
04-04-2009, 06:31 PM
ABC's fools.

http://i41.tinypic.com/2cijlag.jpg

what yall think.


i hope those are just abc.s and not the abc crew in boston but nice letters[/QUOTE]

Bump.

bulltimeJAMP
04-04-2009, 07:19 PM
thanks for bumping that like a billion times on the first page of it being posted, guys.
but seriously, romero thats dope like always, but you gotta balance out the thickness of the c's bars and make them similar in width to the a's and b's.

whahappen?
04-05-2009, 12:42 AM
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7298/getattachmentaspxndg.jpg
SOUNDIN LIKE COLTRANE HIGH ON COCAINE
:D

La Coka Nostra
04-05-2009, 12:55 AM
supafly.

drumnbass
04-05-2009, 01:03 AM
hey guys, just looking for some crits on this throwy style,

im not sure if i should do the lower case I or upper case I so i put both down,

let me know either way, o and what do you think of the tags on the right, thanks in advance!!

617...
04-05-2009, 10:31 AM
abc crew in boston? never heard of it, who reps it?

its a bunch of toys that think they are wicked good bcthey have hand styles and cross people like 400 times better then them its like nerp and mace its in like heyd park and i think roxbury but yea fuckin fags i hope they read this die bitches dieeeeeee

redxdrum
04-05-2009, 11:25 AM
..romero.. the whole thing is traced the original is done real light and is going to be a painting
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture009-2.jpg

but i didnt trace stewie if u look at the hands you can see i fucked up but i will take the accusation of tracing as a complement.

Bink1
04-05-2009, 02:57 PM
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/8022/dsc06586o.th.jpg (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06586o.jpg)

what up with this?

Lunchbox
04-05-2009, 03:17 PM
Some people would call it an ok bomb, personally I dont like it, but I think thats just my preference.

Bink1
04-05-2009, 03:18 PM
too bad it aint throwie.

bulltimeJAMP
04-05-2009, 03:20 PM
not a throwie. keep yourbars the same width everywhere.

sex without condoms
04-05-2009, 04:46 PM
backup name throws
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232858.jpg

masturbates

S4d3n
04-05-2009, 06:47 PM
Tryin' out a new name/char..

http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww351/S4D3N/RatsOneChar.jpg
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww351/S4D3N/RatsOneSimple.jpg

Handstyle sucks in the first one and I don't like the A in the second one at all.

bulltimeJAMP
04-05-2009, 06:52 PM
wrong website.

here: http://www.drphil.com/

Paser1
04-05-2009, 07:15 PM
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/5834/photo25r.jpg
quick throwie

Sizzuurp
04-05-2009, 07:23 PM
ur shadow is all wacked out. ur drips dont look right down there and your ! is bigger than your 1letter throw itself. u gotta go simple.

LIZARD
04-05-2009, 07:33 PM
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/6011/photo26f.jpg
Crits

Paser1
04-05-2009, 07:34 PM
true

bulltimeJAMP
04-05-2009, 07:35 PM
dude just because you made it sepia doesnt make it a new picture...

Paser1
04-05-2009, 07:35 PM
where would you recommend the drips and hpw should i do my shadowing then

B.S. POLICE
04-05-2009, 07:36 PM
lol at the go simple comment, its throw up not a wildstyle....

fix the shadow pase and bring that explonation point to the p.

lizard i see you fixed that 3d word, outline that bitch with some sky blue and work on that handsteez

LIZARD
04-05-2009, 07:39 PM
look at my old pic the 3d is completly different...plus thats just the lighting at my house

bulltimeJAMP
04-05-2009, 07:41 PM
i find it cool that your house has the same lighting tendencies as a magical forest.

Sizzuurp
04-05-2009, 07:53 PM
just because its not a piece doesnt mean that it cant be more simple that makes no sense.

B.S. POLICE
04-05-2009, 08:03 PM
the only way that p can be any more simple is if he had a straight line inside of it instead of a squigly one. dont you think i know what im talking about? unless you want this kid doing keyboard letters in his throw ups

S4d3n
04-05-2009, 08:34 PM
Tryin' out a new name/char..

http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww351/S4D3N/RatsOneChar.jpg
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww351/S4D3N/RatsOneSimple.jpg

Handstyle sucks in the first one and I don't like the A in the second one at all.

Bump from prev..

fitzy36
04-05-2009, 08:38 PM
S4d3n - thats fuckin nice

Incite
04-05-2009, 08:41 PM
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/6011/photo26f.jpg
Crits

your 3d is still kind of messed up, but better then your previous one

..romero..
04-05-2009, 09:26 PM
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/5834/photo25r.jpg
quick throwie

your not styles not orignal enough and your not known enough to be recognized by one letter.


god,you kids are soo fucking lazy these days im tellin you...

milk boxx
04-05-2009, 09:26 PM
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC07920.jpg
trying to get a decent looking straight letter... crits?

S4d3n
04-05-2009, 09:29 PM
Lookin' good Milk, though I'd try it with some thinner bars, maybe play around with some extensions or some basic bends in the letters.

bulltimeJAMP
04-05-2009, 09:38 PM
considering the bank battle is taking forever, lets see those entries.

B.S. POLICE
04-05-2009, 09:39 PM
the bank battle will pe polled right after i finish eating, and the enak, i was waiting on enteries from certain ppl but their taking forever so thats taht

bulltimeJAMP
04-05-2009, 09:41 PM
haha quick on the draw there ohnsap

B.S. POLICE
04-05-2009, 09:48 PM
i run shit homie

..romero..
04-05-2009, 10:03 PM
yo bs did you get my submissions???

B.S. POLICE
04-05-2009, 10:07 PM
yea dude cept the bank is asketch battle not throw

TheWorldGoneMad
04-05-2009, 10:08 PM
It is technically in my black book so yea...

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/4204/frinkshaded.jpg

..romero..
04-05-2009, 10:10 PM
yea dude cept the bank is asketch battle not throw

what?

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j207/drhart2006/fffffuuuuuuu.jpg

bulltimeJAMP
04-05-2009, 10:11 PM
lol.

for my mass talking:
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww318/GermerArt/Photo8-1.jpg

B.S. POLICE
04-05-2009, 10:17 PM
what?

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j207/drhart2006/fffffuuuuuuu.jpg



LOLZ! ill give you till 11 30 if you want

Incite
04-05-2009, 10:20 PM
how bout you just post it?

B.S. POLICE
04-05-2009, 10:24 PM
relax kid theyll be posted

bulltimeJAMP
04-05-2009, 10:26 PM
lets focus on sketches here dudes...

and incite...

Incite
04-05-2009, 10:33 PM
im a shader, tryin to get used to using markers :/

http://i41.tinypic.com/jgr76c.jpg

..romero..
04-05-2009, 10:34 PM
LOLZ! ill give you till 11 30 if you want

mine time or yours??? im centeral time i think.so 12 30 your time.but ill try to get i in soon....

B.S. POLICE
04-05-2009, 10:35 PM
you got an hour from now

milk boxx
04-05-2009, 11:08 PM
straight letter crits?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC07922.jpg

Denver im feelin that shit bro, nice.

Ga.nK
04-05-2009, 11:14 PM
milk box, your e's are too thin compared to your m and k
either make them wider, or make the m and k thinner

also, i wouldnt exactly call that a straight letter. maybe make the bottom-right bar of your k completely horizontal, and make the middle bar of your M go into a point.

just some suggestions.

HRbN
04-05-2009, 11:33 PM
im a shader, tryin to get used to using markers :/

http://i41.tinypic.com/jgr76c.jpg


tight man i like it, the is could maybe use some tweaking but ithink it has potential

milk boxx
04-05-2009, 11:44 PM
milk box, your e's are too thin compared to your m and k
either make them wider, or make the m and k thinner

also, i wouldnt exactly call that a straight letter. maybe make the bottom-right bar of your k completely horizontal, and make the middle bar of your M go into a point.

just some suggestions.

thanks man, how about this one a bit cleaned up without a gay ass K, hahah

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC07924.jpg

B.S. POLICE
04-06-2009, 12:28 AM
mero u are officially about to run out of time, both enaks battles have just been polled and im starting on the toy bank, if i dont get your entery by the time im done doing that ill be forced to use your throw as a substitute and if your lucky a mod will swap it out for you later

weakfingers
04-06-2009, 12:45 AM
your not styles not orignal enough and your not known enough to be recognized by one letter.


god,you kids are soo fucking lazy these days im tellin you...

So..... Uhhh, Does that mean I should ditch my half letter throw?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture28.jpg

milk boxx
04-06-2009, 12:46 AM
hahahahahahaa

Incite
04-06-2009, 12:53 AM
So..... Uhhh, Does that mean I should ditch my half letter throw?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture28.jpg
lol brilliant

B.S. POLICE
04-06-2009, 12:54 AM
next person to make fun of my little brothers one letter is gonna get stabbed in the neck by my dick.

bulltimeJAMP
04-06-2009, 12:58 AM
i thought there was only one! haha good to know.

B.S. POLICE
04-06-2009, 01:01 AM
germ your gonna lol at the battle

Paser1
04-06-2009, 01:52 AM
Yo if only you people new how sketchy it is to bomb where i live you gotta be as fast as possible one litter like that is perfect for good but sketchy spots in my town....

Bink1
04-06-2009, 03:13 AM
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/8022/dsc06586o.th.jpg (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06586o.jpg)

what up with this?

bumper!

Kester
04-06-2009, 06:28 AM
long time no see
tell me what you think
http://www.zix.co.il/images/1198756434.jpg (http://zix.co.il)

JoseBuerto
04-06-2009, 07:06 AM
clean and easy, good job kest

Kester
04-06-2009, 07:28 AM
thanks man

..romero..
04-06-2009, 09:46 AM
Yo if only you people new how sketchy it is to bomb where i live you gotta be as fast as possible one litter like that is perfect for good but sketchy spots in my town....

maybe two letters.i can se two lettrers.and i feel you on the sketchy part.i rock two letter throws all the time.but the p isnt original enough(i think) to be known as 'paser' by its self.whatever.those are my thoughts on it.im mean it your life i cant make you not write it im just saying.i highly suggest that you dont..i tried it too but it didnt work out.at all.

-Dank-DK-
04-06-2009, 11:21 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/o0ec0l.jpg

Amends_Ego
04-06-2009, 12:55 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/o0ec0l.jpg

I would say have the bars in the letters connect with eachother, even just a little bit.

Paser1
04-06-2009, 01:25 PM
maybe two letters.i can se two lettrers.and i feel you on the sketchy part.i rock two letter throws all the time.but the p isnt original enough(i think) to be known as 'paser' by its self.whatever.those are my thoughts on it.im mean it your life i cant make you not write it im just saying.i highly suggest that you dont..i tried it too but it didnt work out.at all.

i feel you man thanks i rock a PE one liner most the time but i just thought the single P with the ! looked sick but your right i dont have enough ups right now to be rockin that i guess thanks for your input nooka

Kester - that shit is dope as fuck man good shit

Amends_Ego
04-06-2009, 01:44 PM
Heres some of my recent stuff, thought'd id throw something up since im new here.

T-jay
04-06-2009, 01:49 PM
kest- clean and simple the only thing i can say i dont like is the bottom of the s but it is still fresh
bink- it has potential but you gotta keep working on it
dank- is it pdp or pop
not finished yet just have to thicken up the out line and stuff like that
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa291/tim44pix/000_0007-1.jpg
i was experimenting with the 3d

bulltimeJAMP
04-06-2009, 03:09 PM
osnap i lold at the battle.

drumnbass
04-06-2009, 03:11 PM
relik, i think you need the e and i to be bigger, more like the other letters,

i like the shadow style though,


k i have two throwies on this, im trying to see if i like the lower case I or the upper case I better, what do you guys think?
and is this an alright throwy style or should i toss it? i have some simple styles already and i want to get one like down.

thanks in advance!!

garbage down tha way
04-06-2009, 03:29 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0625.jpg
relik i like it, use a capital I to fill the dead space.

Pop keep your bars connected.

Kest, make the bars flow more, theyre real choppy.

bulltimeJAMP
04-06-2009, 03:43 PM
hoer i find your stuff dope, this one too, but the color scheme isnt the best. whatever,bc the letters are solid.

garbage down tha way
04-06-2009, 04:09 PM
thanks dude, yeah i suck at color schemes, fills, all that.

Zarb
04-06-2009, 04:12 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0406090029.jpg
workin on straight letters, needs some fixing but Ill do that when I ink it.
Any ideas before I add color?

milk boxx
04-06-2009, 04:27 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0406090029.jpg
workin on straight letters, needs some fixing but Ill do that when I ink it.
Any ideas before I add color?
you still needa go alot simpler dude. get the basic letters dialed and then take it to the extentions and bends

milk boxx
04-06-2009, 07:19 PM
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC07926.jpg

crits?

bulltimeJAMP
04-06-2009, 07:32 PM
keep your bars the same width
fix your k. i cant explain how right now but ya. fix it

T-jay
04-06-2009, 07:39 PM
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa291/tim44pix/100_0005.jpg
yeah i probally will try it with a capital i next time will post it tonite probally
emek- try it with all the letters strait and work on your k
hoer-shits dope i just dont like the top of the E

`SassAsaurus_ReXX`
04-06-2009, 08:34 PM
I know my letters gradually get larger but what else?
http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss358/SassAsaurusReXX/Graff/0406092031.jpg?t=1239064432

ESKiMO2
04-06-2009, 08:41 PM
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!111111
no.

`SassAsaurus_ReXX`
04-06-2009, 08:42 PM
?

B.S. POLICE
04-06-2009, 08:44 PM
oh gawd! kill it kill it!

`SassAsaurus_ReXX`
04-06-2009, 08:46 PM
ouch, sadface

(SoS)Viruz
04-06-2009, 08:46 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/img_0625.jpg
relik i like it, use a capital i to fill the dead space.

Pop keep your bars connected.

Kest, make the bars flow more, theyre real choppy.

progression much?!

ESKiMO2
04-06-2009, 08:53 PM
Just to visually express this situation...

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/1007/bullying.jpg

`SassAsaurus_ReXX`
04-06-2009, 08:57 PM
more like this http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss358/SassAsaurusReXX/asdasdasd.jpg?t=1239065839

..romero..
04-06-2009, 08:58 PM
^eski is the blonde chick i know this...

..romero..
04-06-2009, 09:01 PM
I know my letters gradually get larger but what else?
http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss358/SassAsaurusReXX/Graff/0406092031.jpg?t=1239064432

http://i39.tinypic.com/15mok77.jpg

ive waited many a moon to use this.now i can...

ESKiMO2
04-06-2009, 09:05 PM
Win ^ hahahaha perfect situation. It's worth the use.

`SassAsaurus_ReXX`
04-06-2009, 09:05 PM
well im glad my toyness can be used as a way to use the worst /facepalm possible. now critz please

garbage down tha way
04-06-2009, 09:14 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0625.jpg




dont mind me bumpin this to tha new page, ya know, sometimes ya get stuck at the bottoms and shit, aint noone gon see this mothafucka down in that piece.

ESKiMO2
04-06-2009, 09:18 PM
Garbage man that's pretty dope. I just don't know about the colors. You should do some brighter and more saturated colors. Light purple and blue...

garbage down tha way
04-06-2009, 09:27 PM
hell yeah man, thats the only markers i have, but ill keep that in mind when i paint it for sure.


EDIT: haha i just bumped my shit from the bottom of the page to the bottom of the next page.

(SoS)Viruz
04-06-2009, 09:42 PM
Hoer-PROGESSION MUCH. I was tryin to say that....But For some reason when I bumb flicks. It saids that they are delted lol.

weakfingers
04-06-2009, 09:43 PM
Garbage- I really like then pen on the top and bottom of it. Fuck I want to be able to draw that shit one day.

Fuck I think this looks shitty but I was just messing around with bars and shit got out of hand.... Oh and don't mind the yellow shitty drips either.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0736.jpg

garbage down tha way
04-06-2009, 10:04 PM
haha good looks TEAR.

Skwint- its not bad, but try to make the letters more decipherable. Like, some of the big blocks on the letters are kind of awkward. handys not bad tho.

ak1r4nt_784
04-06-2009, 10:32 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/29uzrkm.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/29o5278.jpg

i hope this isnt another jesus facepalm :\ haha

ESKiMO2
04-06-2009, 10:33 PM
The coloring is good but you need to go simple block letters. Do the letters you see on your keyboard.

ak1r4nt_784
04-06-2009, 10:48 PM
yeah :T i have the hardest time trying to figure out letter structure.. ive been using prisma colors and paints for so long but for some reason cant draw letters -_- i dont understand how my letters can evolve from straight letters to wild though

klic
04-06-2009, 10:49 PM
shit. exchange

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SNOEPiece.jpg

ak4r1nt or whatever - go simpler and do keyboard letters that looks like shit

skwint - that fills ugly haha, just keep all your bars the same width and fix up your W

hoer - dope stuff, your E's your weekest letter so you might want to work on it a little

ak1r4nt_784
04-06-2009, 10:52 PM
shit. exchange

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SNOEPiece.jpg

ak4r1nt or whatever - go simpler and do keyboard letters that looks like shit

skwint - that fills ugly haha, just keep all your bars the same width and fix up your W

hoer - dope stuff, your E's your weekest letter so you might want to work on it a little

that throwup looks pretty wack too
but ill definitely go simpler. someday maybe ill learn how to connect shit :\

KidKatastroph33
04-06-2009, 11:21 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/el1sf9.jpg
First post ever
Just looking for some crits
don't care what they are
Just want to hear.

ESKiMO2
04-06-2009, 11:27 PM
yeah :T i have the hardest time trying to figure out letter structure.. ive been using prisma colors and paints for so long but for some reason cant draw letters -_- i dont understand how my letters can evolve from straight letters to wild though

Well basically you do a lot of simples.
While doing those you get a better sense of structure and you start bending the bars and messing with the proportions.
After a while you have a solid style with some flavor and it's still simple.
Once you pass that point you can take your style anywhere your heart desires but not too complicated. It's a natural process of experimenting and having fun.
Just work hard, everyone sucks when they start.

klic
04-06-2009, 11:32 PM
that throwup looks pretty wack too
but ill definitely go simpler. someday maybe ill learn how to connect shit :\

it looks ten times better than what you posted, and its clearly not a throwup. but yea that would be one of the worst pieces ive done lately

ak1r4nt_784
04-06-2009, 11:41 PM
it looks ten times better than what you posted, and its clearly not a throwup. but yea that would be one of the worst pieces ive done lately

i beg to differ. whatever dude, honestly, i couldnt care any less about what you think lol i can definitely paint/draw better than you

eskimo - thanks for the crit dude ill work on ittttt

bulltimeJAMP
04-06-2009, 11:46 PM
klic understands graffiti more than you do at this point. but i believe without a doubt that you are generally better at drawing than him, in all facets except for graffiti.

weakfingers
04-06-2009, 11:48 PM
ak1rant- I Really like the lines in the 3-d they really give it depth.

Super simple with bad handstyle.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0737.jpg

garbage down tha way
04-06-2009, 11:52 PM
SNOE your simples are dope.

RhodeIsland
04-06-2009, 11:54 PM
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Hyte004-2.jpg

oxiclean
04-06-2009, 11:58 PM
i beg to differ. whatever dude, honestly, i couldnt care any less about what you think lol i can definitely paint/draw better than you

eskimo - thanks for the crit dude ill work on ittttt

thats a joke right?

Publik Enemy#7
04-07-2009, 12:04 AM
skin-keep it simple, looks aight for what it is, keep at it and it will get better
hyte-I like it, flows nicely, the e throws it off a little

here was a quik sketch to motivate me to go paint last night
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1239018270.jpg
crits

Mr yarbles
04-07-2009, 12:47 AM
Slightly faded when I did this haha

http://i42.tinypic.com/29glocm.jpg

Publik looks slick

rhode also quite slick I dig it good fill only thing is your e kinda dosn't fit too small.

skin not bad could see that as a roller or something with a bit of practice

that snoe I can dig

akir4nt wack homie get your fucking head out of your ass too these kids burn you shut your stupid ass up and maybe you'll learn something.

kid go to the new tog raff thread

BIGdreamSCHEME
04-07-2009, 01:49 AM
karma(?)-new to graff thread bud, start with bars
skin-good start but the bars on the K are wrong, look a few pages back for germer showing me how to do it correctly
areyou-dope

first time trying this name
critz needed and appreciated
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sunk.jpg

Kester
04-07-2009, 03:07 AM
http://www.zix.co.il/images/1198756434.jpg (http://zix.co.il)

any crits?

Kester
04-07-2009, 03:14 AM
Me and Krep
http://www.zix.co.il/images/1496778058.jpg (http://zix.co.il)

Kester
04-07-2009, 03:20 AM
sorry for the dubble

B.S. POLICE
04-07-2009, 03:56 AM
kest you can probably go ahead and post in the intermediate thread

KidKatastroph33
04-07-2009, 09:58 AM
hey I'm not new to graffiti
I've been writing for around 2 years now
It's been on and off since then, and I just started working on my style
what I posted was only a throw-up, bored so I did colour, just want everyone's opinion.

kest-nice simple man, definitely love the thickness of the lines, good eye direction.

mr. yarbles-Like the throw up, super simple as well, Good starting point for everything.

ak1r4nt_784
04-07-2009, 10:34 AM
thats a joke right?
no its not a joke. ive been in art school for 2 years now, i can paint a portrait better than any of you in this nub ass thread. ive had tons of experience with prismacolor/decocolor/paint/spraypaint -
its nothing new to me. drawing letters on the other hand, is new to me. i can draw a shit ass piece like that too - but i was trying to step up and beyond my capabilities so i can learn something myself and improve on my own. fuck yall for hating ill keep doing me

ak1r4nt_784
04-07-2009, 10:36 AM
Slightly faded when I did this haha

http://i42.tinypic.com/29glocm.jpg

Publik looks slick

rhode also quite slick I dig it good fill only thing is your e kinda dosn't fit too small.

skin not bad could see that as a roller or something with a bit of practice

that snoe I can dig

akir4nt wack homie get your fucking head out of your ass too these kids burn you shut your stupid ass up and maybe you'll learn something.

kid go to the new tog raff thread

are you really calling me wack with the shit you just posted? LOL youre a joke bro, you have no style whatsoever. i can write a throwie better than that. show a piece thats cleaner than mine then maybe you can have bragging rights. youre a faggot dont tell me to shut up until i see your work towering over mine. fuck you.

..romero..
04-07-2009, 10:58 AM
kid...your whack.stfu.rapist writes burns your shit alone...cant speak for his throws tho har har har.



damn it feels good to a gangsta.listening to it right now.mmmhhmmm



battle me.i wanna battle.now.now.now.(kid above me)

TastySesamcrew
04-07-2009, 11:14 AM
Sunk- it's simple enough but you should try to make the letters look like they belong in the same alphabet
Kest - I like your S and that Krep is sick as fuck

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3349/3407155359_ed0fdeab04.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3569/3407962654_a5ea0a2a49.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3396/3407193043_9c7abf01b1.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3586/3417690453_290ac3914a.jpg

the last one is some new bullshit I tried, I lose
Crits?

Zarb
04-07-2009, 11:32 AM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0407091127.jpg
that simple enough?
Im not giving crits because I dont think im in any position to give them haha

Kester
04-07-2009, 11:52 AM
Zarb - start using bars man, you need to build your letters
Tasty - nice throws man, keep it up
peace

ak1r4nt_784
04-07-2009, 12:06 PM
kid...your whack.stfu.rapist writes burns your shit alone...cant speak for his throws tho har har har.



damn it feels good to a gangsta.listening to it right now.mmmhhmmm



battle me.i wanna battle.now.now.now.(kid above me)

first of all im not a kid
second of all - why the fuck would i battle you? lol did i say your shit was wack? nah shut up

..romero..
04-07-2009, 12:27 PM
no but im bored...im skiippin school and need something to do hahaa.also if your not a kid.well thats just sad...

klic
04-07-2009, 12:46 PM
first of all im not a kid
second of all - why the fuck would i battle you? lol did i say your shit was wack? nah shut up

you called my shit wack, battle me just so i can prove a point here and give eski something to do in the battle forum haha

ak1r4nt_784
04-07-2009, 12:56 PM
you called my shit wack, battle me just so i can prove a point here and give eski something to do in the battle forum haha

ok what do we write

and how is it sad that im not a kid? im old enough to be considered an adult.. how old are you? 15?? lolol some of the best graff writers are like 50 and still getting up, as if you didnt know that.

..romero..
04-07-2009, 01:01 PM
no.whats sad is that your older than 18 and still suck.