Blackbooks

[garbage down tha way]

oops.

[KnoxIn]

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/7386/p4133128.jpg

i know i posted the same piece earlier but i added color and another little crack thing so crits??

jawsy- like the bottom one its pretty good but not really diggin the star
relik-i like the middle one with the highlighter its clean but looks good
yortse- im hella likin that i wish i could do some shit like that some might say go simpler but fuck it i think its bomb
bleh- it seems like you can do damn good fills but kinda lackin the letter structure i dont think that you need to do simples but somethin kinda close
rhode- i like it the extension from the o to r is a little off cuz everytime i first see i think its a M somehow but i dunno keep messin with it and you got it
rayz- i like it its pretty good a few of the little extensions are a little off but all in all pretty clean

and paint kid- no one likes to do just plain simple shit but you really should do that for a while then see how it goes cuz you will learn good letter structure and how to put shit together but its whatever


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[yortseD.eht.hturT.]

http://i720.photobucket.com/albums/ww203/volcom_stone19/IMG_1809.jpg
More Crits Plzzzzzz

[Skin1016]

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a211/adm123456789/Picture008.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a211/adm123456789/Picture007.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a211/adm123456789/IMG_1647.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a211/adm123456789/IMG_1649.jpg

Comments/Critique would be lovely.

[LIZARD]

on your throw keep the letters all the same size unless thats what your goin for...i like your simple

[Skin1016]

Its a bad habit, i do it alot.

[LIZARD]

make two light lines as big as you want your letters to be and make each letter touch the bottom and the top of each line..do this just to start and you'll get the feel for it better

[killamanilla]

http://i455.photobucket.com/albums/qq278/floridagraff/SeaHorse-1.jpg

[Seek139]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/Graffiti%20-%20BlackBook%20-%20Great/NARgraffiti4.jpg?t=1239686559

[KnoxIn]

ok people give some damn crits thats what this is for when you post a picture atleast crit some shit damn

[weakfingers]

yortseD.eht.hturT.'s- I really like the texture of your letter's.
Dacks-The S looks abit weird in the throw.
Seek139- I'm a new writer but it looks really good to me.

I havent drawn in a while and I'm starting to draw with bars. Crits would be appreceated.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture36.jpg

[tbonebailey2711]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=263&pictureid=1483
I think i posted this before. Crits please.

weak fingers - looks pretty good not feelin the wutang looking w though.

skin - letters should be the same height and work on shadow they are off

knoxin - lose extension on a that covers the z and something dont look right with the overlapping? other than that its tight.

yortseD - i dont get your letter structure and all the added shit (extensions, cracks, etc.) way too busy, too much goin on.

[..romero..]

skwints gettin better...

[tbonebailey2711]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=263&pictureid=1481

did my boys name. any crits?

[tbonebailey2711]

alright i cant find where anyone writes ART. do you guys know of anyone plz say no one writes this!

[Amends_Ego]

alright i cant find where anyone writes ART. do you guys know of anyone plz say no one writes this!

i just looked and didn't come up. so as far as i can see your in the clear to use that.

[Juicee]

stutter: wow what...haha; work on everything man. plus you spelled stutter wrong? i know you messed up on the 'r' but stutter has 3 't's in the word lol..

neaz: shitt is dopee. especially diggin' the lower case. the upper case 'n' and 'e' is kind of weird thoughh

faze: not feelin' the 'e' and the red force field. the 'e' looks kind of sloppy and is bein covered too much by the 'z'.

yortseD.eht.hturT.: all i gotta say is start with simples bro

Skin1016: i dont really like how your throwups are goin from smaller to bigger. try to maintain the size throughout the whole throw. as for the simple, on the 'a', dont make the top of it round.

Seek139: shit is madd fireee. if that first letter is an 'h' though, dont make the 2 bars jut out on opposite ends.

weakfingers: the wutang 'w' looks soo out of place. it looks like you're trying to do simples (somewhat?) and that's good. try using bars in your ishh to make it more structured

tbonebailey2711: sorry but shit is fruity lol. looks like somethin that would be on a candy wrapper lol.. i wanna see you write your name. work on your structure

tbonebailey2711: uhh, you colored it nice? shit looks fruity as hell too, im sorry. work on your structure

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/aaaaa2222.png

crits?

i just crit practically this whole page lol..

[delliproof]

juicee, ur S has potential to be slick as fuck, and ur other letters are lookin pretty fly too. I would jut think of making the structure more fluid, which would make it stronger. I like ur idea for the drips, but sometimes less is more ;) yadida?

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/lockofirush.jpg
luck o the irish!

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/lockofirush.jpg
luck of the irish!

[sacwacko]

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekminipiece.jpg

[T-jay]

Aspek- i think if you have the legs of the a and k flare out instead of strait down it would look pretty fresh, i also think your e and s need some work
reallytrustfulstangers- the charactor is pretty clean and you have a solid throw keep at it
juicee- i like most of it exept for the top of the s and maybe try connecting the bars of the b

[sacwacko]

its a piece sketch i did for my blackbook...i didnt have it. im just switchin it up dude, not trying to rock the same outline....

[sacwacko]

Aspek

[PegCityBoy]

background is a bit big

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3617/3442759603_4de0e3591a.jpg?v=0

aspek - looks good, maybe fix up that k

mets - good fix that s

Juice - cut back on the drips, that E is hot so bring it out a bit more, it's kinda hidden, the S looks good too

stute, get rid of the squigles at the end of the s an on the T's

Neaz - looking good

Jers - shits hot

yortseD - looks like ur tryin too hard

dacks - ur simp. is good maybe fix up that A, your throwies need a bit of work

seek - looks good

skwint - keep workin on the simps

tbone - props for fillin 2 pages, i'd never have the patience to do that, work on ur handstyle

crits?

[T-jay]

So what u cant take critz on a "piece"

[sacwacko]

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspek.jpg

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

this is my first sketch ive ever been happy with (except for the e). crits please
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg257/steelersfanxl36/Photo3-7.jpg

[faser]

New here.... http://i39.tinypic.com/11v62l0.jpg

I know Im toy, what you think of this

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

take away the colors and the outline and the semi-fill and just work on you letters. if u were going for a throw, then the A needs work and the letters need to be closer together.

[faser]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2na8ysh.jpg
Yeah I took this pic so I could work on the structure of letters.

I dunno if it was a throw or what, generally I think of throws as being round edged and soft..

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

ya thats better. use bars to fix up those letters. i only said that thing bout the throw because the rounded part of the f. and the e would be fresh as hell in a throw.

[faser]

thanks
while im at it ill post this simple i really fucked up
http://i40.tinypic.com/ddyuzt.jpg

[woonybomber]

http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp138/woonybomber/010.jpg
http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp138/woonybomber/008.jpg
http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp138/woonybomber/011.jpg
http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp138/woonybomber/009.jpg

woner
254

[peace89]

woonybomber-please... no more arrows

[KnoxIn]

New here.... http://i39.tinypic.com/11v62l0.jpg

I know Im toy, what you think of this

hey dude im already writin faze doesn't mean i got rights to it but just so ya know

[faser]

haha dont worry man
its a popular name i guess. u probs dont even live in my country

[KnoxIn]

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/4863/p4153129.jpg
TENIELE
here is somethin i did today i dunno im kinda tryin a new style and shit so i really dont want to hear to do simples or whatever cuz its just a new style so crits???? oh ya and everyone says my overlapping is weird and so im sure i will hear that again and i agree that its weird but i guess i just dont think about it while i draw so ill try and fix it

faser- maybe try just like keyboard letters for a little bit
woony-lose all the extensions
neginflu- work on your proportions they are off alot
sac-lose the extensions but you have good fills
spam-its not bad work on the M though and that big orange background

[sacwacko]

....i dont think Faze gets the concept.

[faser]

concept of what?

[sacwacko]

the name, u dont want to have a name as someone else. when they make it big, ur name is shit....throw some numbers on tht or think long and hard....

[KnoxIn]

ohhh no i get what you mean by that but for real i dont have the right to tell someone what to write and what not to i mean i thought about being like well i have been writing for longer so you gotta drop the name and get another and thats what i think i should say but its whatever if he changes he changes if not not

[faser]

ye i get ya
if i ever make it "big", it cud be big in my city or big in the country or everywhere
and if someone thats already that gud who has the same name, just change it

[KnoxIn]

fuck it its whatever, but can i get some crits here????

[faser]

ye its fucking internet on some forum
i cud still be writin it if i never joined this so yeh, keep writing wat u want

Knoxin- looks alright the background and drips cud be fixed up, the last E looks a bit out of proportion

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/applebees2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/appplebees1.jpg
crits for once

[Desipher]

for a battle some random pointless shit just a doodle i know theres alot wrong im just fuckin around
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dtdgfsgsfdsfds.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i43.tinypic.com/o0t76d.jpg

http://i40.tinypic.com/f4l05g.jpg

[Lunchbox]

Work on that A, its wack as hell, try pulling the right leg out across or behind the peice instead of dragging it back, because with it leaning back it kinda messes with the flow, kno what im sayin?

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

I totally get what you're saying but keep in mind the a leaning like that was my original intention for the rest of the letters; however I was stoned out of my mind with some very nice hash I have with me so thank you for your criticism.

[sacwacko]

New book...

throw up page,
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage10.jpg


Friends mini-book,
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage2.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage3.jpg


back to my new one,
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage4.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage5.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage6.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage7.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage8.jpg

Yaker in the book!
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage9.jpg

[harmlessart]

sac I think its pretty safe to say you arent a toy

pretty simple. Phone pics make it look shittier than it actually is :eek: crits?

http://i40.tinypic.com/wcfkmt.jpg

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

can someone please give me some crits on this
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg257/steelersfanxl36/Photo3-7.jpg

[Graff J up]

sac--your shit is dope!!!!!
gasp...maybe better than zases :!

haha i love that blackbook cover of the dollar bill sign with the ninja lol i saw that a while back

[NoCanControl]

fase and fase. i accually write fase so you both loose the name or else.

[KnoxIn]

the fuck are you serious haha

[NoCanControl]

yea man. change your name.

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

hey guys i also write fase. and i have 63 cousins, an uncle, and a nieces friend, who also write fase.

[peace89]

just need some crits please

[RhodeIsland]

damn i so i guesss i should go back to hyte becaue yesterday i changed my name to fase

[KnoxIn]

oh my shut the hell up haha

[NoCanControl]

you guys think youre funny. stop making fun of me. you fags. i'd beat the shit outta ya graffiti toy nerds.

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

you guys should play circle jerks to see who gets to write faze

[NoCanControl]

i king where i live everyone knows my name faze so you can circle jerk yourself.

[RhodeIsland]

I paint with cope 2 with the name FASE so shut up, i kinged the whole united states hooooeeeeee

[NoCanControl]

rhode island. you draw like a four year old kid who has one hand and dawn sindrom whos wearing an eye patch. and just got done drinking a few beers. gtfo of here.

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

guys. lets relax. i write fase and i spray painted obama. hes started out as white

[bulltimeJAMP]

rhode island will improve more than you, better and faster than you.

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

rhode island will improve more than you, better and faster than you.

not only will he improve better and faster, he will also improve stronger and harder than u

[bulltimeJAMP]

lol someone said it.

[NoCanControl]

Everyone pick on rhodeisland!!!

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

NoCanControl, no1 wants to start random ebeef just for the sake of hating on someone. if anything we should hate on u for trying to start ebeef with him. Fuck u

[NoCanControl]

your mum like ebeef she had a whole bunch of it in her mouth last night.... i'm fazerOne i'll king yo town with ease. i bet you don't even paint.

[bulltimeJAMP]

thats easy to say on the internet.

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

bitch. i eat pancakes with a spoon. u aint got shit

[sacwacko]

so i posted in the blackbook thread and they told me to go to toy forum?

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

i posted in the toy forum and they told me to go to advance thread nucka

[clockwork]

......
(looks around)
I was fazeone back in 87'.
And my mom wrote faze back in 1903.
Mad bombing on model T's.

[faser]

your mum like ebeef she had a whole bunch of it in her mouth last night.... i'm fazerOne i'll king yo town with ease. i bet you don't even paint.

yeh u probably king your whole trailer park too
... faggot

oh i write Cope3 nnow btw. :rolleyes:

[tbonebailey2711]

cant we all just get along? lol

[sex without condoms]

just some recent shit.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/181802.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/181827.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/181842.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/181851.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/181910.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00164-2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/122335.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/122531.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232858.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00170-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00167-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00169-1.jpg

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

not feelin that nose at the top.

[<SENSE>]

just some random things

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/1234.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/gg.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/ggfff.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/ggh.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/hhh.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/hhhk.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/m.jpg

[LIZARD]

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/4966/photo32x.jpg

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/3/photo33o.jpg

[harmlessart]

haha you guys are little girls. Quit fighting and give some crits.

lizard-I'm diggin both of them. Looks like you got your 3d down for the blocked piece. Your style is ill
sense-simple and good. Thats whatsup. Tight handstyle also.

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

i will only shut the fuck when someone crits mine/

[HëRbN]

can someone please give me some crits on this
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg257/steelersfanxl36/Photo3-7.jpg


neg your getting better by going simpler and your lines are cleaner and your using bars now, now go simpler haha really tho you have a good concept but havent put in enough time to understand extensions, that k looks like a retard for example. way to tall with a gaint pointless extension. Use the bars your working with with just simple letter bars, curves are ok if you feel up to it but use NO extensions of any kind, youve already made a vast improvement that im sure you can see yourself
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/6510/photo37.jpg


PS now shut up lol :P



And not a damn one of you fase's better put a ph and a z in that shit or the faze battle is on lol lil fuckers

[harmlessart]

http://i40.tinypic.com/wcfkmt.jpg

bomp crits. Simple little thing

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1239924747.jpg

[<SENSE>]

just some random things

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/1234.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/gg.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/ggfff.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/ggh.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/hhh.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/hhhk.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c117/zigmondo23/m.jpg

No crits????? someone please haha

[NoCanControl]

yeh u probably king your whole trailer park too
... faggot

oh i write Cope3 nnow btw. :rolleyes:

lol. i was obviously trolln.

[sacwacko]

quick straight letters...and a collab.

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage14.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage11.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage12.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage13.jpg

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

thanks so fuckin much herbn!

[raveone]

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/Xanax.jpg


lol
i was high on xanax, i dont remmber drawling it tho

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0416091948.jpg
Aspek- That straight letter is sick
Sore- Im feeling both of those

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/kawasaki72/xanax.jpg


lol
i was high on xanax, i dont remmber drawling it tho

oh no......simples please

[raveone]

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/l_9eb0b83e364e4a488a86c99141d4d5b5.jpg



Oxcontin Bombers

Feeeeeeeeeeeeewww....POP!

[KnoxIn]

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/4659/p4163155.jpg

here is a beltbuckle i made in jewelry or whatever im sure ill get shit for it but whatever

rave- really not feelin it the only think i like is the E your r is no good nor your a decent fill though

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1239924747.jpg

barmp

[RhodeIsland]

rhode island. you draw like a four year old kid who has one hand and dawn sindrom whos wearing an eye patch. and just got done drinking a few beers. gtfo of here.

woah woah buddy where the fuck your pictures at?

[..romero..]

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/4659/p4163155.jpg

here is a beltbuckle i made in jewelry or whatever im sure ill get shit for it but whatever

rave- really not feelin it the only think i like is the E your r is no good nor your a decent fill though

your gonna get HELLA pussy with this shit homeboi.fazer flossin.hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.

[KnoxIn]

your gonna get HELLA pussy with this shit homeboi.fazer flossin.hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.

haha fuck knew i would get shit honest to god never wearin it that point at the bottom will hella take out the goods but its whatever

[NoCanControl]

woah woah buddy where the fuck your pictures at?

just battle me. do it.... do it faggit :D

[..romero..]

haha fuck knew i would get shit honest to god never wearin it that point at the bottom will hella take out the goods but its whatever

i couldnt resist myself:D

[Hearr!]

im such a noob.

http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/Picture175.jpg
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/Picture176.jpg
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/Picture178.jpg
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/Picture179.jpg
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG-1.jpg
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG-2.jpg
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG_0005.jpg

[jawsy]

TOY^^^^^^
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/8541/img3274f.jpg
<R175??

[jawsy]

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/8541/img3274f.jpg
<R175??

[Hearr!]

KING. kidding, what the fuck is that?

[LIZARD]

jawsy...
what the fuck is goin on there?
throw it away as soon as possible and start with simple letters

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3661/3448651693_6ee7cd1c89.jpg
crits?

jawsy i dont even know wat the fuck it is im looking at. draw keyboard letters or quit.
rave looks good.

[LIZARD]

jawsy...i just relized that you called the kid above you a toy...at least you can read what the fuck hes writin

[Hearr!]

keep consistent bar width through-out the piece. like on the top of the E, thats gotta go. and get rid of the little extension is thing poppin out the leg of the K.
someone crit me?

[LIZARD]

hear-im feelin the tan one the most but the only thing i would fix is bring the right leg of the A down so it matches the other leg and for the E and the R make them 1 solid letter instead of havin a piece of the letter over lap

[expozay]

thanks. yeas after i did that fat ass bar i was like fuck w.e.

but honestly all your shit looks good homie. my favorite is the brownish one.

[Hearr!]

thanks guys, got any other crits for the other stuff? cause i kinda gave up on the style of the brownish one. would be highly appriciated. :D

[expozay]

umm go back to that style maybe lol

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

TOY^^^^^^
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/8541/img3274f.jpg
<R175??

bahahahahahahah!!!!! u were joking right? ur a piece of work to call the kid above you a toy. get the fuck out of here

[Hearr!]

i didnt even notice he called me toy. D:

lets battle. >:D

[jawsy]

asif im the biggest b3rn3r here

[sketch_three]

haters

[Hearr!]

you cant be fucking serious...

[jawsy]

nah im not

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

o thank fuckin godddddd. jawsy will u battle me. i need the self esteem boost

[jawsy]

yeye.okay im down..
ill be on later

[PegCityBoy]

Jawsy i dunno what these bitches are talkin about. that shit is PHUCKINPHYER

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3605/3449599022_b56c6560e0.jpg?v=0

yeaaaa... the M blows, an the shadow is off with the m an !

[sketch_three]

jawsy got that heat

[jawsy]

yeah imking

[NoCanControl]

doods trollln. he basicklee did what i did but with a picture.

1, called somone toy
2. stated his big ego
3. said he was king


BS trolling made easy w/ noC.C.

[saps]

http://i42.tinypic.com/2gxivjd.jpg

[LIZARD]

saps-that shit is dope but i think you should get rid of the arrow on your second S...other then that i like alot

[b SQUARED 08]

Saps: Lose the arrows, work on that P and don't overlap your A that much. You should be able to see the triangular hole in the A. Your overall structure looks decent though.

[RhodeIsland]

just battle me. Do it.... Do it faggit :d

ok :D

[B.S. POLICE]

i wonna be in on a battle

[RhodeIsland]

I'm down to battle you b.s. 5/0.

[sex without condoms]

just some recent shit.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/181802.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/181827.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/181842.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/181851.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/181910.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00164-2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/122335.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/122531.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/232858.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00170-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00167-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00169-1.jpg

go back to china bitch, and bump

[B.S. POLICE]

I'm down to battle you b.s. 5/0.


the word is eror lol



nah im jk pick the word, full color?

[La Coka Nostra]

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2836/rekon3.jpg




some shit. i suck at fills. i'm scared to color it.

[RhodeIsland]

the word is eror lol



nah im jk pick the word, full color?



lmao, no color because all my prismas are in an evidence locker

word is

PORCH

[BigBlueViolence]

saps- ignore all the good things that people might have said.
you need to hit the reset button.
Bring the A out more, get rid of those arrows, fix your P, and fix your highlights.

Sex- The only thing I'd say is that the first A in your hand could be wider, closer to the T, and maybe even out the M.
Dope, though.

Coka- the letters themselves are pretty good, but the rectangle extensions are really hurting them.


http://i41.tinypic.com/149a88g.jpg

[NoCanControl]

ok :D

pick word and tell a mod. idk how to do all of that. and idk if full color or just outlines or what. idgaf. pm the details etc.

[..romero..]

earn.no me gusta.your letters need more definition i think

coka nostra personally i dont like skinny letters but thats pretty dope...

http://i42.tinypic.com/29vninm.jpg

[Seek139]

romero - Letters from left to right " A , D , S , E " besides the one I think is a D your structure is pretty legit very west coast which is a good starting point.

[..romero..]

nah the two top ones are an e im fucking with.their on their sides...

[..romero..]

what yall think about the name sene??? is it cool or just not.i cant decide.

[HëRbN]

im not a big fan

[..romero..]

whats wrong with it?

[BigBlueViolence]

I'm not really diggin it, either.
Just kind of gives off a lame vibe.
What do you mean by more definition?
The only vague letter I see is the R.

[TastySesamcrew]

coca; good simple but lose the extensions
blue; sick throw! exchange?
romero; looks dope, I like your style

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3571/3443828095_f9332a3503.jpg

made for oars with crappy markers.

[BigBlueViolence]

yeah dude sure.
You write taste, right?

[walkingcarpet]

La Coka, the wierd block extensions are killing your letters man.
Romero, looks sick!
Tasty, thats a sick fill and the O is awesome.

I think I finally got a name. Crit please =]
http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/IMG_0014-2.jpg

[LIZARD]

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4966/photo32x.jpg

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3/photo33o.jpg
critz

[BigBlueViolence]

Jace- really dude?

http://www.fatcap.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/04/jace-graffiti.jpg

[graffdabusup]

i lol'ed ^^^^

[walkingcarpet]

AHHH
Damnit
I seriously thought no one used that name
Ugh, back to messing around with letters to find a name, well thanks for letting me know

[BigBlueViolence]

Well I mean,
write it if you want.
I was just letting you know.
I could give a fuck less if I found out someone else was writing what I do.

[walkingcarpet]

Alright
Well,,


Are the letters okay?
Please critique

[BigBlueViolence]

I don't like the A or C, the lines are too pushed out, they barely look like the letters they're supposed to.

[walkingcarpet]

Thanks

[sellers E.]

lizard- that second one is dope.

trying to get a simple.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/unknown-2.jpg
crits??

[RhodeIsland]

the L and the O are to close together

[sellers E.]

thats what i was thinking before i posted it. but besides that is the structure decent?

[RhodeIsland]

does it say DAYLO?

[sellers E.]

yes.

[faser]

sellers e- stick with simple keyboard style letters
if someone has to ask what it says then bad letter structure

http://i43.tinypic.com/2cpe4vq.jpg
crits on this short word simple i did

[jupsick]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3587/3447371716_bdbdc7b633_o.jpg
all on this page should start somple
crits?

[Venetian]

http://justinguse.com/artwork/graff/sedate.jpg

http://justinguse.com/artwork/graff/comx/sermon.jpg

http://justinguse.com/artwork/graff/comx/sober.jpg

http://f.imagehost.org/0956/snare.jpg

[RhodeIsland]

Jupsick- I really like that simple
Venetian- You really need to look at your keyboard and draw those letters, it looks like barbed wire..

[..romero..]

http://i39.tinypic.com/24n0fo6.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

Dude, that shit looks so much better with 3D.
But like I said, I think drop shadow would be the shit for that style.

[..romero..]

i fucked up the 3d sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo so bad.im pissed haha.fuck it tho.whats the difference between 3d an drop??? i thought they were the same thing...

[BigBlueViolence]

3d looks like an extension of the letter,
Drop shadow looks like a separate letter behind the piece.
http://i40.tinypic.com/5nkow7.jpg
I'd like to go on record that I can't to 3D for shit.

[jupsick]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3308/3453622634_e0dfd7c00c_o.jpg
critz?

[plan]

great work andrey i really liked it... forgot to add cck huh :P

heres some new shit:
http://up52.siz.co.il/up2/zmgxqno2z3yk.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)

http://up55.siz.co.il/up1/c10y2jmnmmzy.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)
crits ?

[El Chupacabre]

Zeax and Plan got it down pretty well, keep it up fellas.

[noisyburglar]

venetian do simps and learn to shade, it looks like a handicapped tried shading there

[ESKiMO2]

I'm really feeling Zeax and Plan!
That shit is hot!

[noisyburglar]

http://i42.tinypic.com/2iqjyph.jpg
yeah, some quickies

[Mouths_Seeking_Kolgate]

ayo wuts rilly hood im new to bomin scienz but not to da graff gayme. hers sum wildstyle i did in jail critz please/
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0684.jpg

herz my crits- Sekcs- wack
plan- wack
zeax- waKk attakk!!!
bigblue violins- dope shapes

[RhodeIsland]

lol Wow, thats a huge waste of time, everyone here knows you're joking..

[Mouths_Seeking_Kolgate]

aight than lets see ur work?

[RhodeIsland]

omg shut up..
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Hyte004-2.jpg

[Mouths_Seeking_Kolgate]

ohhhh
!!!!! dope!!!!!!!!
jus werk on yur strucsher, do simples 500 times in a notebook n ul b gud.

[RhodeIsland]

lol ok ''legend''

[BigBlueViolence]

Het daze, do paint with Vear VTS?

[bulltimeJAMP]

^dude we could have had a little fun but you killed it. wasnt funny either...

besides it doesnt even say daze...

[BigBlueViolence]

How did I ruin it? his style is very reminiscent to that of Vear.
Also, what does it say if it isn't daze?

[bulltimeJAMP]

- its obviously a joke account/sketch
- read the handstyle theres and l if not some other letter between the z and e.
- your just another dumbass who doesnt understand vear and/or similar styles.

it is for these reasons why you are an idiot.

[BigBlueViolence]

okay, time for hyphens.
-I wasn't seriously compairing the style to Vears, simply that it was all over the place like most of Vears shit/. I was also joking.
-I dig VTS, DRUGS, THR and similar crews.
-Internet is serious fucking bidness, homes.

[bulltimeJAMP]

oh wait i see you have over a thousand posts i should probably confronting you. i dont want to get ehurt

[..romero..]

ayo wuts rilly hood im new to bomin scienz but not to da graff gayme. hers sum wildstyle i did in jail critz please/
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0684.jpg

herz my crits- Sekcs- wack
plan- wack
zeax- waKk attakk!!!
bigblue violins- dope shapes

http://i41.tinypic.com/263ufyd.jpg
about how gay you are.

[jupsick]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3308/3453622634_e0dfd7c00c_o.jpg
critz?

bump?

[oxiclean]

Thats really sick. But the handstyle above it is pretty shitty.

[SomeoneGoneStoleMyWheels!]

Crits?
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/img001.jpg
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/img002.jpg

[Mouths_Seeking_Kolgate]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0685.jpg
i been skechin alot cuz im grounded, hope yall dig dis won.

sumone gon stole- dope carac, but u forgot to giv him hair an da fackt dat it lookz lyke tony spranoe mix wit jon gudmen turnz me off.

[bowchicabowow]

Oh my god.....I've been smoking all day and this is making me laugh soooo damn hard.

[LIZARD]

first of all STOP listenin to that shitty emo music and second of all throw that shit away and do simples

[B.S. POLICE]

preach brotha preaacchh!!

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

^ are you crazy, that shit is gold

[Mouths_Seeking_Kolgate]

ya suk my cock if you dun like it, or tel me where u liv cuz ill do throwups on yer house. yer windows, whatevr i gotta do ta let u kno im not fukin around.

[Stussy]

this kid cant be serious

[MARTYRaz]

stinky breath...man take the crits....loose the emo act...start over or fuck off and and commit suicide...u r not going to progress drawing shit...and yes i mean shit...its garbage..u suck...simples is the way to go man...

[Snew]

Hyte- dope simp, id just make the e a little bigger..
Dazle- go die.....
Don74- even out your bars.. the n is too fat the o is too thin.. find the median..
zeax- the letters look good.. just work on the flow.. theres too much space after the z it leans the long way..
Noisyburglar/secks- i really dig the steez i just wish there was a little different spacing.. but im horrible with spacing so what do i know..

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3565/3327933328_eeba54dbe3_o.jpg

[plan]

exchange...
http://up59.siz.co.il/up1/ykzmz5aend0o.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)

what do you think ?

[walkingcarpet]

Plan, Im really diggin it man, great job
Snew, I like the bottom one, just lose the background thing. The one on the right is pretty cool also. Not feeling the left one.
Zeax, Letters look good but they dont really flow.
Hyte, I like it, I dont really like the extension on the left part of the H or the Y, make the e the same size also. Looks awesome though

Just working on bars,,, the 3d sucks, i just wanted to try it out lol, any tips on that?

Critique Please.
http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/Photo6.jpg

[RhodeIsland]

ya suk my cock if you dun like it, or tel me where u liv cuz ill do throwups on yer house. yer windows, whatevr i gotta do ta let u kno im not fukin around.

1 Police Plaza, New York, is where i currently resign.. Please let me know that you '' are not fucking around ''..

[00-made-00]

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/P4190010-1.jpg
Im taking my simps to the next stage.

[GoGetSome]

-edit-

[bulltimeJAMP]

you guys are all fucking retarded. first of all dazle's screenname is MSK. hes obbbbviously joking. just ignore him or make fun of him, as long as you dont make yourselves look like idiots by not acknowledging that hes joking. some of you fuckers are so dumb i cant believe it. ms, you would even contemplate the fact that hes down with any of those crews/people? idiot.

[GoGetSome]

how do u resize?^

[b0wman]

http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu192/b0wman/GetAttachment.jpg

first o is too small and i did it really quick and some lines arnt straight anything else?

[RhodeIsland]

Oreo? lol Go to the ''New to Graff'' Thread or jus draw keyboard letters with NO arrows

[bulltimeJAMP]

lol i am mooooost definitely more capable than you, something youve proven over and over. not to mention that you suck at graff.

[RhodeIsland]

you guys are all fucking retarded. first of all dazle's screenname is MSK. hes obbbbviously joking. just ignore him or make fun of him, as long as you dont make yourselves look like idiots by not acknowledging that hes joking. some of you fuckers are so dumb i cant believe it. ms, you would even contemplate the fact that hes down with any of those crews/people? idiot.

Nah man hes a legend dont mess with him, he has more fresh shit runnin then bombingscience has members..

[bulltimeJAMP]

dude your so called "pieces" are just your shitty enlarged handstyles with a fill/outline/3d. prove me wrong.

[BigBlueViolence]

http://boomajoom.com/internet.jpg

[GoGetSome]

-edit-

[bulltimeJAMP]

i hope you all know that ive never said anything bad about other peoples grff where it wasnt deserved. bbv is just a fat virgin who plans on fucking for the first time at his grandmas house this christmas. ps he cant write for shit.

[GoGetSome]

aii thanks

[BigBlueViolence]

Yeah man,
I am both fat
and a virgin.
And you've seen anything that I've painted.
Also, I've seen anything you've painted.

[garbage down tha way]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0686.jpg
Umer- dont fuck with your letters yet, just keep them normal, like how they should really look, in real life.

Oreo- It's bad, but i see potential in it, only because it looks euro influenced and im into that shit. tone it way down, get your letter structure down before you get crazy with it.

PILA- dope.

[00-made-00]

Will you little fucks stop argueing over whos dicks smaller and take to pm's.Thank you.
Umer-Back to basics if you go back to simps it will pay off in the long run.
Hoer- i think its fresh, i think the right leg of the r needs to be thicker tho,but you will probs change that when you paint it,i like the way you used ms paint for cutbacks aswell haha, also i owe you an enchange from way back in the day ill get on it tonite matey.

[garbage down tha way]

haha you gotta manage somehow. and i forgot about that exchange, that was like a year ago? ha.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2wfiqzr.jpg

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1240169387.jpg

[garbage down tha way]

thats funny because i was thinking, it is berst mode you idiot, but then i felt stupid when i realized it was beast. oops.

[IlikePie]

I wanna do a Berst Limit now! With Teen Gohan Kamehameha-ing the shit outta my paper! :O

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2zfubyp.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy2.jpghttp://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy.jpg
hoer and frust looking good
crits?

[Snew]

Hyte- dope simp, id just make the e a little bigger..
Dazle- go die.....
Don74- even out your bars.. the n is too fat the o is too thin.. find the median..
zeax- the letters look good.. just work on the flow.. theres too much space after the z it leans the long way..
Noisyburglar/secks- i really dig the steez i just wish there was a little different spacing.. but im horrible with spacing so what do i know..

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3565/3327933328_eeba54dbe3_o.jpg

Bump... hoer.. stop making everyone else look bad..

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

^ work on the throw. i like everything else tho man.

[GoGetSome]

-edit-

[KnoxIn]

hey has anyone used those "on the run" markers they sell on here im about to order some and i dont know if i should get those the twin touch or just prisma colors any advice???

[GoGetSome]

just get prisma

[faser]

sellers e- stick with simple keyboard style letters
if someone has to ask what it says then bad letter structure

http://i43.tinypic.com/2cpe4vq.jpg
crits on this short word simple i did

bump no crits

[Venetian]

lose the flames.

[GoGetSome]

-edit-

[malto]

Not feeling that line from the E that goes through the R.
Other than that its alright I suppose. Also make the left bit of the R smaller.

[GoGetSome]

k

[KnoxIn]

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/6228/p4193157.jpg

somethin i just drew dont know where i got the letters not a name or somethin i was just wingin it but crits??

amer- not really diggin the fill and your proportions are off alot like the loop on your R
fazer- use bars you can bend them or anything but dont just draw the letters use bars for everything it helps a shit load

[/DaNk\]

try and fatten up the bar that connects the 2 bars on the N

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i44.tinypic.com/63ucyw.jpg

[tbonebailey2711]

frust-pretty dopedont like the messy 3d and forcefield

aspen - i dig it

gogetsome - get rid of drips

faser - fire looks lame

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=263&pictureid=1520

got any crits?

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Connect top bars of A and R and straighten out bottom bar of the I

[tbonebailey2711]

the last letter is T but I guessthat tells me something

[tbonebailey2711]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=263&pictureid=1522

here is one more crits?

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Id go for a less abstract letter style, that one bothers me

[klic]

this is what happens when i havnt sketched in forever

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKPiece5.jpg

gogetsome - dont bother bumping twice on the same page if your not gonna bother to give any crits

faz - fills ugly, not feeling the waviness of the letters either

apen - critted it in the intermediate thread

frust - looks fresh, make your F bigger, and work on your handstyle

art - get rid of the lines going through your letters, and so that you cant see the bars

[GoGetSome]

^ok fair enough

Tbonebailey- feeling the first one
dont really like the second style on the second one

Klic- solid letters but straighten out the J

[klic]

i like the style your going for but i think you should go a little simpler for now, that A isnt very good

[sham]

faz-use bars
amer-dont try to connect your letters
frust-its ok the f is too small
art-the first one is ill your handys are wack tho

http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa259/sham_acsc/Picture001.jpg

http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa259/sham_acsc/1e063d26dee3.jpg