Blackbooks

[mekosbc]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0686.jpg
Umer- dont fuck with your letters yet, just keep them normal, like how they should really look, in real life.

Oreo- It's bad, but i see potential in it, only because it looks euro influenced and im into that shit. tone it way down, get your letter structure down before you get crazy with it.

PILA- dope.

exchange?

[KnoxIn]

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6789/p4193162.jpg

here it is with color shitty quality flic but still crits??

sham- you got the art part down but i think you should work on your letter structure watch all those like zig-zag lines n' shit try and keep em straight or a smooth bend

[GoGetSome]

nice work but something about the e doesnt fit
it might be too long

[GoGetSome]

i mean wide but i could be wrong

[sellers E.]

art-first ones dope.
sham- not feelin the f or the t.
knox- clean. i like it alot.

my new throw..
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/daylo-2.jpg
crits?

[pow pow]

http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww47/yeabrad/0420090114.jpg

[bulltimeJAMP]

did you seriously use a white marker for the fill?

[NoCanControl]

faz don't listent to them. it looks fine for the most part. do what you wanna do. if you wanna do flames then do it. if you make wierd squigglly bars then do it. just make sure they still have a sence of parrellellelelelelness.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i43.tinypic.com/slp6oz.jpg

[sellers E.]

cyto-not feelin those exstensions.
crits on mine??

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

I have no advice for throws, they are a mystery for me

[sellers E.]

thats cool. thanks anyway.

[IlikePie]

SHAMPOW!
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1240213498.jpg

[plan]

some fast shit made in the class...
http://up59.siz.co.il/up3/xglzyyhj5tzy.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)
crits ?

[..romero..]

rab your b looks like an R trying to be a B....hard to understand buuuuut.yah.

[00-made-00]

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/P4200013.jpg
For hoer, its just a simp ill do you something special when i get my letters sorted.

[tbonebailey2711]

apen - pretty dope the left bar of the A is a little too fat and bottom of the e something wrong

sellers - not a bad throwie not feelin the O though

pow pow - used white on white, lol. is that part of the O sticking out of the 2 t's?

frust - letters ok dont like arrows or messy forcefield

plan - that shit is fukin dope love tha 3d

[crimateNC]

cyto-not feelin those exstensions.
crits on mine??

how long u been up 2 graff, i was doing literally like the same letters at one time..

um.. i'm not a big fan on the use of a line as a donut hole on letters.
i'll put some new stuff up soon and show u how mine looks now and to show how from that to what i do evolved. or something i dunno i'm high so my shit should be better

[Desipher]

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/grmgfjkdbhfkjs001.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/grmgfjkdbhfkjs003.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/grmgfjkdbhfkjs004.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/grmgfjkdbhfkjs005.jpg

[IlikePie]

rab your b looks like an R trying to be a B....hard to understand buuuuut.yah.

yeah man I feel you.

[garbage down tha way]

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/P4200013.jpg
For hoer, its just a simp ill do you something special when i get my letters sorted.
NICE! your simples are dope my man.

[sham]

\\



swob that bottom sketch is prime


new name
http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa259/sham_acsc/8e53b57feaef-1.jpg

[Desipher]

swob? i dont write swob i write swore or swor

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3600/3460095449_43abc0b2c6_m.jpg

soze looks good not really feelin the cracks that much tho.

[pow pow]

did you seriously use a white marker for the fill?

its green colored pencil=p

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

\\



swob that bottom sketch is prime


new name
http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa259/sham_acsc/8e53b57feaef-1.jpg
there's already someone who writes soze/sozer from dallas, and he's pretty good

[sellers E.]

how long u been up 2 graff, i was doing literally like the same letters at one time..

um.. i'm not a big fan on the use of a line as a donut hole on letters.
i'll put some new stuff up soon and show u how mine looks now and to show how from that to what i do evolved. or something i dunno i'm high so my shit should be better


thats cool, ive been in the game foreal like a year maybe a year and a half. id like to see ur stuff.

[sham]

o shit ill think of something else then

[benchmade]

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/4659/p4163155.jpg

here is a beltbuckle i made in jewelry or whatever im sure ill get shit for it but whatever

rave- really not feelin it the only think i like is the E your r is no good nor your a decent fill though

WHOA you made that! lol sweet! Not feelin the style to much but still pretty cool that u made it yourself

[zenne]

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/grmgfjkdbhfkjs001.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/grmgfjkdbhfkjs003.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/grmgfjkdbhfkjs004.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/grmgfjkdbhfkjs005.jpg

there is a toy slaps thread...

[garbage down tha way]

for the kid meko
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0691.jpg

[(SoS)Viruz]

Nice Hoer, Progression.

[garbage down tha way]

why, thanks.

[thebigman]

knoxin hot shittt

[IlikePie]

Shit is hawt Hoer

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1240280296.jpg
Another 15 minutes of my day...

[malto]

http://img2.imageshack.us/img2/9430/pencilsimp.jpg
just some random pencil shit

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/4277/simpnotdone.jpg
just a simple - not done to lazy :D sorry you cant see it properly

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5198/techberstoy.jpg
this was just a random style i was trying. i know its way to technical for me i just wanted to try it. and i failed :(

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/1990/worldbattleentry.jpg
this was gunna be my entry for the 'world' toy battle but i forgot to scan it .. :(

DESIPHER : Looking good but there is a slaps thread like zenne said, or whoever said it.

HOER : Looks nice just not feeling some of the positioning of those little tic tac things or whatever.

ILIKEPIE : You should probs go to the intermediate thread, if your not already there. Looks dope.

[IlikePie]

Bers, I like that first one the most outta all of them, but you need to stretch your S out, it's floating off in the distance, all short and fat.

[sellers E.]

garbage - dope.
ilkepie- looks good. not sure what to say bout it.
malto-3rd down is the best

daylo.http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/11222222.jpgcrits???

[garbage down tha way]

ilikepie- its pretty nice. I'm not a fan of r's with their right legs going upwards like that but that's just preference. if anything try to start braching out more. do some more cuts, fuck with the extentions, you know the drill. oh yeah and i personally would lose the inverted cross. dont get me wrong, i worship satan twice daily, but theyre pretty played by now. peace!

bers- concentrate on your first one. it would be perfect if your s wasnt so fat and your e's structure was more normalized.

daylo- its not the worst throw ive seen, but basically all you can do to improve on throws is, like i tell everyone, look at other throws.

[Hearr!]

http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG-3.jpg

exchange for a guy on another forum. just some simples. tell me whatcha think?

[IlikePie]

Shit is hawt Hoer

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1240280296.jpg
Another 15 minutes of my day...

I got you Hoer. It's just a freestyle, 'cuz I'm too lazy to try and erase a shading pencil, but yeah, I'm working on pushing the envelope more. As for the cross, the little gap in the A seemed empty and lonely, so why not, you know? Haha.

[harmlessart]

elegant-tight as fuck. I have no criticism for you on that.

heres somethin I did for the holiday :D I fucked up on some parts I know. I was high and didn't give a fuck. I think it looks koo heh

http://i44.tinypic.com/9vbc6r.jpg

[malto]

ELEGAL : Nice simp.

WAK : Make all yuor letters the same size, your A is way to small and your K is way to big.

[KnoxIn]

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/559/p4203167.jpg

really dont like this but thinkin of makin that a new name to write anyone know anyone that writes it?? i hate the R but other than that crits??

wak-watch those proportions and all like the points round them a little it will look tons better
hear- its pretty damn clean work on the handys though

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i39.tinypic.com/1q36nn.jpg
Suck-My-Dick

[<-Zerger->]

http://i699.photobucket.com/albums/vv351/i_eat_lava/peice1edit.jpg
http://i699.photobucket.com/albums/vv351/i_eat_lava/peice2edit.jpg
i wish i used better colors for this one

[sex without condoms]

life sucks so go slit throats everyone\

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00195-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00191-3.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140956.jpg

[tbonebailey2711]

wak - your letters should be the same width and size. your leaf is pretty messed up the ridges should go the other way if you know what i mean.

zerger - not feeling either flic 1st one get rid of the drips, 2nd one dontlike the colors and you might stick to using simple letters get rid of the holes, extensions, etc.

sex without condoms - fat blunt man

elegal - solid simple

Dank - pretty fresh - is that white fill on white paper

[tbonebailey2711]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=263&pictureid=1524

heres one i did 4 the world battle crits?

[sex without condoms]

the fill is preety dope idea man

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

garbage - dope.
ilkepie- looks good. not sure what to say bout it.
malto-3rd down is the best

daylo.http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/11222222.jpgcrits???

YO WHO YOU TRYIN TO BITE BITCH HOP THA FUCK OFF MY A!
http://i42.tinypic.com/292nyfk.jpg
FAGGOT
ND IM TALKING BOUT YOUR D THAT LOOKS NOTHING LIKE A D BUT LIKE MY A!

[haze4life]

lol youre a's look nothing alike. maybe youre talking about his d? still a dumb thing to call.

[bulltimeJAMP]

shut up faggot those are pretty much standard. both are ugly.

[Tokenkaligreens]

those are generic and overly used anyways. Im sure I could point out that a in about 50 wrtters throws that actully paint. LOL that A has probely been used more then a 2 doller hooker b4 you even ever picked up a can. ON THE REAL generic simple no style letter....with that being said who'd you bite it off of vandal......see my point?

[B.S. POLICE]

+1


dont bite ugly letters

[..romero..]

YO WHO YOU TRYIN TO BITE BITCH HOP THA FUCK OFF MY A!
http://i42.tinypic.com/292nyfk.jpg
FAGGOT
ND IM TALKING BOUT YOUR D THAT LOOKS NOTHING LIKE A D BUT LIKE MY A!

your fucking lame.

http://i44.tinypic.com/34zn8xs.jpg



also your letters suck.so i dont know why your bitchin...

[Schizz]

I'd lose the little bling marks Dave, either that or do them thin as fuck and less of them, that pretty good though.



http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n8/Zatoichi_01/P1000734.jpg

Crits? 3D is a bit fucked up and that skulls sucks, i think i over did this one.

Edit:- Haha! Angry beavers, that's that's fucking genius.

BUMP for crits.


Hearr! - Tight fill, more is less man, I like it.

Harmlessart - Nice enough lettering, but i'd lose the leaf, I reckon you'd be better with a force-field or somthin'

KnoxIn - That's tight.

Zerger- I'd have another little play with the 3D on the first one, where the R and the G meet. Keep it going though.

tbonebaily - That whole thing is great, structure and fill are cool.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

lol all u people jus like love all causin drama pussys
get off the internet n into tha real world
sorry people make mistankes i forgot all u internet tough guys are perfectttt
w/e blow me pce

[RhodeIsland]

shut up toy

[Schizz]

I would have thought posting "YO WHO YOU TRYIN TO BITE BITCH HOP THA FUCK OFF MY A!" was the very deffinition of causin' drama, as you put it. You need to relax mate.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

rhode island why u callin me a toy when you are to haha
dumb ass

[RhodeIsland]

haha but i'll burn you any day n i actualy paint n i have more respect in my city then you will ever have anywhere

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

hold up you paint shit
you wont burn anything
you havent even seen my pictures besides that one from bout 3 months ago
calm down there mr.confidence
your still a toy point blank period
convo done

[..romero..]

and your still a lame.stfu and get off my internets foo'...



http://i44.tinypic.com/23u7f4z.jpg

[RhodeIsland]

hold up you paint shit
you wont burn anything
you havent even seen my pictures besides that one from bout 3 months ago
calm down there mr.confidence
your still a toy point blank period
convo done

ok ok no one improves that much in 3 months so hop of my dick you fuckin lame ass toy ass punk bitch, im deffently burning you, you dont even write graffiti you fuckin vandalize shit with your ugly ass toy fuckin ''throwie'' with generic ass fuckin letters that you bit from someone who bit someone who sucks

edit- battle me or stop talking no one needs to hear your bullshit you fuckin toy

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0001-4.jpg
^^^^Finshed it but didnt scan it...Got super lazy. Scan it when im done

Oh and For you Fucks:



theres some strong influences an insperations but its not a bite if i felt it was id say summfinn

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

lol hold up ill getta camera real quick
n show u my newer shit
n your shit isnt even very good to be callin anyone a toy

[RhodeIsland]

bEtter then yours you fuckin toy.. Battle me ''ak''

[..romero..]

lol hold up ill getta camera real quick
n show u my newer shit
n your shit isnt even very good to be callin anyone a toy

NEITHER IS YOURS...your a toy.meeeega toy.and annoying.i dont like you.lets battle.

[..romero..]

bEtter then yours you fuckin toy.. Battle me ''ak''

i want in on this shit as well...just becuase.i dont like vandal.and also im suuuuper bored.lesssssss go.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Wait me??? Im Confused...What I do now?. O your talkin to Hyte.... Oh CRITS MUTHAFUS@!#$## :D

[RhodeIsland]

Its lookin fresh but i wanna see it finished because its probably fresher

n yeah you can get in on it romero lol i just get bored n talk shit to toys who are mad toy dont know it :)

[(SoS)Viruz]

Wait ROMERO....Where do you come from man lol. We are alike, we just randomly pop on and off. LOL.

[RhodeIsland]

Virus you should poll this battle thingy

[(SoS)Viruz]

IGHT, Send me the enties. When you guys are done.... I LOVE YOU ALL THO :) A I want in too. lol. I do somethin....It be lame tho, I do A quick sketch :)

My re-apprence in battles....Feels nice.. It be nice to be in one finally. But who cares about me right lol.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

http://i43.tinypic.com/bjio0m.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/15rb97q.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/214w461.jpg
yo romero hop off ma dick nikka
homo ass i aint even talkin to youuuu
be outttt
oo n rhode island ill battle you i jus gotta draw it out real quick

[RhodeIsland]

lol He hasnt accepted yet

Word is


RIPSE

hyte romero viruz vs. nameless toy

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

rhode island is a bitch place neway yall dont got shit down there bitch not hard to be know your state is as big as my city bitch
n nah i dont gotta waste my time for a battle online.........
sorry you aint gettin far wit that
matter fact you aint gettin nowhere wit you tight emo self

[..romero..]

i thought you would drop out.cant fuck with mero fool haha.


and what does his state being soft have to do with anything...how does that pertain to this battle that i guess isnt happening anymore lol..

on a similar note.texas all fucken day.haha.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

no not at all.......
i jus dont want to waste my time doing a 4 way battle i would battle jus rhode island
im not tryin to be sittin here all day drawin shit up to post on the internet sorry kidd......

[(SoS)Viruz]

How bout this.

Vandal just battle, It couldn't hurt. If you think about it you'll just look a puss. If you would have approached it in a different way,you could have gotten away with not battling them, and if you dont they wont let you live it down. But its a Sketch battle it wont hurt just do it.

But its your call

[RhodeIsland]

rhode island is a bitch place neway yall dont got shit down there bitch not hard to be know your state is as big as my city bitch
n nah i dont gotta waste my time for a battle online.........
sorry you aint gettin far wit that
matter fact you aint gettin nowhere wit you tight emo self



hop of my citys dick you just mad cus you aint got shit n you fuckin scared to battle, you're not gunna waste your time on this battle but you have time to respond.. n learn your fuckin history, rhode island got more shit than every one you know, what you from boston? punk bitch, come over to my small state n say that.. you dont fuckin know me, you dont know what the fuck i do in my city, what chu got? a couple tags hah lets see your painted shit?

[RhodeIsland]

you know what bitch, me n you fuckin battle n fuck paper lets battle on wall

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

lol i would lol at you face to face
i aint no lil whiney white skater taggin bitch
haha you dont know me mass would shit on RI in graff dumb ass nd no im not from boston n you rep online crews..........thats all i gotta say
n fuck it ill battle jus gimme 20 min to draw suttin up
and ya ill battle you on wall to but not sure when ill go out maybe this week maybe not i got other shit to do buddy

[..romero..]

i got to go somewhere...so dont poll virus.ima get down.just give me some time...

[RhodeIsland]

i rep online crews? CABs an online crew are you fuckin serious? Fuck you, Chicago And Beyond bitch, we all no each other irl, you dont even rep a crew with yah toy ass, Where the fuck you from?

[(SoS)Viruz]

Ri.....Ummmm THat wher Groser is....You'll shit on him. LMAO. This is gettin funny. Alright do your sketches and send them to me, I'll get them polled, and and Romero dont worry, I have to go somewhere to. So I wont post untill everyone is finished.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

i rep online crews? CABs an online crew are you fuckin serious? Fuck you, Chicago And Beyond bitch, we all no each other irl, you dont even rep a crew with yah toy ass, Where the fuck you from?

lol idc if CAB is such a serious crew you wouldnt be in it......becasue your a fucking TOY too hahaha loser
and im in nwy but also remember i have shit to do in my life besides graffiti buddy
you must live a easy life if you jus sit here all day drawing
still live wit mommy n daddy
never get kicked outta the house
dont have to pay for shit
get your money
no your a lil bitchhh
n ima pen freestyle it jus for you cuz i aint gunna sweat it

[(SoS)Viruz]

dude then you dont have a love for graff....Just shut up cause now you just sound like a herb.

WHO LIVES WITH HIS PARENTS..........Dude chill, you dont know shit about him and his crew. If you dont take graff serious, then your crew must not be as serious...... Thats real talk. Im done that my 2 cents. PEACE

[RhodeIsland]

www.myspace.com/crushandbust

dont quit your day job graff aint workin for you

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

yo i never said i didnt take graff serious
but mofo what the fuck you gunna do go draw on your peice of paper n starve
or get money n worry bout where your jgunna stay shit life aint bout graffiti
motha fuckas listen to the song street struck by big l
might make a lil more sence
i dont really care im almost done my sketch n thats what it is
and i still LOL at your crew.......once again loserr
jus go listen to i dont give a fuck by eminem that might explain to you how i feel bout what your saying RI

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

alright ill give it to your allstar crew you got bout 3 or 4 decent writers
but.....
your shit that is on there aint too fresh
looks very toy to me
hmm n you act like you group leader haha dumbass

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

www.myspace.com/crushandbust

dont quit your day job graff aint workin for you


that has some dope flicks bro!!! good shit man

[Muse.one]

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m249/veggieman_photos/Picture142.jpg


says livin.
trying to progress

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

http://i40.tinypic.com/2dh927q.jpg
for tha battle

[Stussy]

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/4026/photo848.jpg
any crits before i ink it?
muse- like the style, keep at it...

[..romero..]

http://i40.tinypic.com/2dh927q.jpg
for tha battle

your sposed to do ripse.do ripse.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

nuh uh what the fuckkkk lol
god damn i really dont feel like doin that shit all over let it wait til tomorrow n ill draw it out durin school

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i40.tinypic.com/o8us08.jpg

[Stussy]

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/4026/photo848.jpg
any crits before i ink it?
muse- like the style, keep at it...

bumps

[bulltimeJAMP]

the hole in your r is different from the hole in your a.

[tbonebailey2711]

stussy - not feelin the arrows but might work out with ink. also not feelin the extension on top of your A.

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0001-4.jpg
^^^^Finshed it but didnt scan it...Got super lazy. Scan it when im done

Oh and For you Fucks:

bumb

[RhodeIsland]

nuh uh what the fuckkkk lol
god damn i really dont feel like doin that shit all over let it wait til tomorrow n ill draw it out durin school

nah man fuck that how bout i just burn you with your own name?
i'll do an akay sketch but you gotta send it to viruz

[Stussy]

the hole in your r is different from the hole in your a.

what ya mean?

[KnoxIn]

http://www.fatcap.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/04/daim-graffiti-on-wall.jpg

this is the style i eventually want to get to does anyone do anything like this style like the skinny bars with good 3-d n shit i just want some advice about how to start that i know people are going to say im gettin ahead of myself but i know my shits not going to be good i just want to know how to start advice???

[Werse]

^^^
Holy shit man...

[KnoxIn]

i know that shit is fuckin nuts as hell i would love to do shit like that

[sike_21]

vandal you a flaky ass ethug full of bitchasness you have no ups and you suck. now battle my boy and get burned and keep you hardcore typing fingers on check your a nothing but a joke
and knoxin who wants to learn to do that crazy style lose hope theres no bigginers guide to all that just do your own thing and eventually you will develope a style maybe like that maybe different

[Werse]

It would have to be a legal wall or something, cause it looks like it would take a whole day.

[sellers E.]

cyto- nice simp
stussy- its kinda crazy, but it could work.

some sketches from today...
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/12.jpg

wich "D" looks better?????
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/1-2.jpg

[Werse]

The hole man...
I'm tellin ya.

[sellers E.]

first or second one?

[Werse]

Second.

[sellers E.]

ok thanks.

[KnoxIn]

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/2786/p4213168.jpg
it says YEA
haha i know its horrible i think the Y is decent ish but the e and A are horrible but still i guess tryin that style and keep in mind first sketch for that style so crits??

daylo- keep your letters the same height and i dunno about the D i dont do the whole throwie thing
SOS- i like the G the but the other two need alot of work
stussy- i like it but i swear you posted one that looked exactly the same a few days ago
cyto- i like it but where is the variation all yours look exactly the same

[Werse]

thats wild shit man.

[sellers E.]

knox- crazy. i think i like it. not sure wat to say bout it.
i think this is how im gona do the d....
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/1a-1.jpg

[Stussy]

stussy- i like it but i swear you posted one that looked exactly the same a few days ago

nah its a completely different sketch

[[MiTH] hovz]

knox - sickk, way above my level, so i dont feel good about criticizing anything of it. lol. im still a toy

daylo - maybe try different styles of d's. i kinda like the first one. idk why.

viruz - above my level too, but i think that e at the end should be a lil bigger, it seems smaller than the rest of the other letters.

just trying with some simples here. is this one any good? so far its just "el", but imma add "che" after it.

[sellers E.]

hovz;1369183']knox - sickk, way above my level, so i dont feel good about criticizing anything of it. lol. im still a toy

daylo - maybe try different styles of d's. i kinda like the first one. idk why.

viruz - above my level too, but i think that e at the end should be a lil bigger, it seems smaller than the rest of the other letters.

just trying with some simples here. is this one any good? so far its just "el", but imma add "che" after it.

thanks for the crits, yea i liked the first one better too, but other people said they couldnt tell it was a d.

[NouveauP]

A piece I'm working on. I'll probably go back and make that bottom E bar not turn up.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/art002-1.jpg

And an Uma Thurman I'm about halfway through with.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/art003-1.jpg

[sellers E.]

jaep-thats lookin really nice, cant wait to see it painted.

[Sketched!]

nah its a completely different sketch

they are different sketches with bits and connections and shit but your letter structure is exactly the same.
try for example a more "squarey" R or a round Y, just change them around all the time.

[tbonebailey2711]

Sellers i like that d better and also like when you put the center of the o past the l not on top of it it makes it easier to make out the letter. Does that make sense?

[Stussy]

they are different sketches with bits and connections and shit but your letter structure is exactly the same.
try for example a more "squarey" R or a round Y, just change them around all the time.

im forming my letters from simples... its just the style im trying to form

[jupsick]

first D looks better in my opinion
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3485/3465850390_24196d0f70_o.jpg
crits?

[Sketched!]

Ziex thats nice, but your letters are very much the same every time, except the last sketch i think that had really nice different letter.
so try adding extentions to the z and x or just try build them differently.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3081/3463483724_2464f4162a.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3604/3463483272_4a9a1e8a04.jpg

[Sketched!]

DP

[crimateNC]

side- i like the second one. but dont get that blue polka dot junk haha, well atleast yours is inked/color
http://usera.imagecave.com/teaguesy/124130.jpg
crits. it says wise, sorry I didn't ink, don't have that much time to draw anymore =[

[crimateNC]

fuck.

[tbonebailey2711]

crimate cant see your flic its too light

[sellers E.]

Sellers i like that d better and also like when you put the center of the o past the l not on top of it it makes it easier to make out the letter. Does that make sense?

yes.

[RhodeIsland]

http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/what/IMG_0046.jpg

[MASE P_2s]

cnt read da 1st letta

[RhodeIsland]

h

[LIZARD]

RI:i know what you write so i can read it but it is kinda hard to see what the first letter is..with the H havin 2 different parts it makes the second half of the H look like a lower case t...connect the 2 somehow and its nasty

[MASE P_2s]

yea bro i agree wit lizard but da shyts styll fresh

[BigBlueViolence]

He did connect it when he inked it,
It's just hard to tell because the pencil/pen

[RhodeIsland]

Pen :) i cant use pencil

[LIZARD]

i see it now.. if the piece was bigger it would be easier to tell...either way that style is dope

[MASE P_2s]

http://I27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/0418091718.jpg 1st peice critz plz

[Muse.one]

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m249/veggieman_photos/Picture142.jpg


says livin.
trying to progress

bump for crits..

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

livin is dope

and


http://i40.tinypic.com/2uij72a.jpg

new name maybe

[Scino & Spank]

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0329.jpg
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0328.jpg
Critiscism?

[..romero..]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2w6axxt.jpg

[shaken20]

http://i41.tinypic.com/2i0zs41.jpg

[sellers E.]

shaken- looks pretty good.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/14.jpghttp://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/13.jpg
few throws i did in class.

[Graff J up]

http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/04-22-09_2217.jpg
crits??

lookin good maker but i would fix up that E

and daylo idk i just dont really dig throws but thats just me...

edit- which one do you think looks better?

[Thrice]

Shit never comes out how I wanted it, but you guys get the idea.
http://i44.tinypic.com/8ygo3p.jpg

[KnoxIn]

http://img2.imageshack.us/img2/2413/p4223181.jpg
NAT
so its kinda like my other one i hate how i like shaded it with my pen but still

ahem- im diggin it the only thing is the top of the E seems unproportioned
graff J- i like the one on the far left the best
scino- that top one is pretty dope i dunno about the bottom one though it just looks weird to me

[Fury]

Ahem - I like it, but I'd like it more with color.
Knox - It doesn't look finished to me, but I like the variation of style. Make it 3D and it might look better.
Neaz - I like the bottom left one the best. I can't read the A on one of them.
Sellers - Good fatty bubbles.

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/6725/img1394.jpg
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/6973/img1395.jpg

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

fury, throw that away and draw the letters on your keyboard
knoxin, don't know what you were trying to do, but it doesn't look very good, simples
ahem, looks good, work on that E though
maker, dope
daylo, i've been seeing basically the same thing from you over and over again, take some time off from posting and just sketch for a while, then post again for crits

here's some wackness, hate the u and the d, gotta work on that shit...
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image041-1.jpg

[Fury]

Bigdream - Digging the 3D a lot, and I like how the letters look

This look any better?
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4784/img1401u.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/6127/img1403.jpg

[NouveauP]

A piece I'm working on. I'll probably go back and make that bottom E bar not turn up.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/art002-1.jpg


Bump for crits.

Fury- go simple simple simple. You need to learn solid line work before you do anything special. Maybe even just work on handstyles right now. If not that, extremely simple block letters with solid bars.
Lusid- I'm really not feeling the style, but the sketch itself isn't bad. The only thing that I can definitely tell is off of the 3-d on the right bar of the 'U'

[Fury]

Nouveaup - I like the color choice and how it's floating above the ground. The white looks good too. I'm just not feeling the block-stacking thing.

Also, are you referring to my original post, or the more up-to-date one?

[KnoxIn]

fury dont let your 3-d go over your letters if that makes sense look at how ahem did it its a perfect example

[Fury]

Knox - Yeah I understand what you mean. I've done both in the past, and I'm just trying to find which I've liked better. I'll do one and post it.

[Tokenkaligreens]

Fury i think it wouldn't hurt if you looked thru the new to graff thread, and study bars.
Knoxing dont just jump into that shit man, it looks horrible. If you are going the 3-d route, well then get 3-d shapes and other things down first. You have no idea how to construct a letter using that style....and it shows. Don'T rush yourself. 3-d styles take along time to develop decently, why not everyone rocks it.
Other then that everyone else is working what they need to. Bar ladies that's all you need to worry about, no lil extra shaky lines for style no lil tid bits added to your letters, just worry about your letters.

[KnoxIn]

[QUOTE=Tokenkaligreens;1370082]
Knoxing dont just jump into that shit man, it looks horrible. If you are going the 3-d route, well then get 3-d shapes and other things down first. You have no idea how to construct a letter using that style....and it shows. Don'T rush yourself. 3-d styles take along time to develop decently, why not everyone rocks it.
QUOTE]

thanks man i get what you mean everyone is tellin me to do like basic shapes like dice and 3-d squares and shit and then after those are down start tryin to mold those into shapes you agree with that?? like would that be the right way to go, i can do like fat letters pretty good but its just not the style i want to rock in the future cuz for me this is about what i want not what people want me to do, but i also want it to look good so im wonderin how to make it look good

[Tokenkaligreens]

You cant teach someone flow it comes over time. You just gotta keep sketching. Just keep sketching man, and in all honestly, its gonna be a good year or more b4 you pull of any good looking 3-d ish. You'Ve got along way to go, and if this seems discouraging then maybe you should pick up a new hobby. Because styles like that dont develop in a few months. You dont go from drawing stick figures to tattooing portraits do you? See my point. Honestly man you imo you should just worry about your simples because they still could use some work too. Its good to know where you want your style to go but dont let that effect your progression, get what I mean. Ones own style comes out after a while, you dont just set out to make a style (well at least imo the decent original styles dont happen this way) you progress into a style that suits you thru trail and error. Anyways man just keep sketching, same for everyone.

[tbonebailey2711]

fury - stick with basic letter style and go from there these dont look so good

nouveau - like the colors on the blue and orange one but dont like the letter structure i would like to see some of your simple letters in those colors though

[NouveauP]

Well alright. I'm still going to try and develop that style (that was my first go at it), but I'll post some simples. No problem.

[jupsick]

ahem work with solid simple bars
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3534/3468471779_9ce0981fe1_o.jpg
critz?

[..romero..]

A piece I'm working on. I'll probably go back and make that bottom E bar not turn up.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/art002-1.jpg

[/IMG]

hmmm.kinda reminds me of my stuff just a tad haha.but i think its got some potential.keep fuckin with this style.

[Graff J up]

any crits for me?//?
(the first--NEAZ)

and fury go wayy simpler man like the 1st of the 2nd post u did

and knoxin --damnn that looks not good at all

i think youre rushin it to get that 3-d, but your gonna have to get every aspect of 3d and stuff down before u can rock that style...

zeax- that looks hott

[tbonebailey2711]

neaz - i dig the one on the top right and the bottom left but not feelin the n on the bottom left though and i think you might work on the bottom of all of your E's.

[thebigman]

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq66/delawarekid302/000_0001.jpgcrits?????

[Fury]

Thebigman - I like the force field, but not so much how you did the letters.

Thanks for the tips guys. Are any of these better? I've been trying to go simpler and use bars, but I'm not quite sure how to get that down:
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/7836/img1404w.jpg

[Lunchbox]

Bars show up much better in straight letters. Dont use bends or ANYTHING, just straight letters and once you do those, you'l be able to see the bars, and then, and only then, can you extend the bars, add bits, 3D, etc, etc. But for now, even more basic.

REDUNDANT POST: and btw dont double post again, you can delete the second one, so do it, dont just edit and say its a double post.

[..romero..]

do you ever post anything??

[Lunchbox]

Not right now.

[Fury]

So bars are just basically boxes/rectangles right? Sorry, I'm stupid. Sorry for double posting, I didn't notice it. Alas it's gone now though.

[Tokenkaligreens]

Look at the new to graff thread it will explain it all.

[frommetoyou]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3596/3468830105_d7e2068ebd_b.jpg

[Fury]

I'm liking it man. I like the face and the crosshatching on the cloud.

Is this good? I've looked at the tutorials in the new to graffiti thread, and this is somewhat what I got from it.
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/9320/img1405mmd.jpg

[Lunchbox]

Um, kind of, as long as you see the bars sort of holding the letters together, then once you get a real good feel for their structure, you can start messing with them a bit.....but still really really bad......thats definitely not how an i should look, and i think the holes in your B are too far to the right, people might even think its a blocky 8 or something.

my $0.02

[Fury]

I laughed at how you wrote 2 cents (not a bad thing, just never seen it done that way before). Bars as in like wireframe bars? Like the lines connected in the letters that the bars are based around? I tried to keep them all the same width as well, that's why the I looks like that. I'll keep practicing.

[tbonebailey2711]

damn big man what the hell got spilled all over your book dude? to me the b doesnt match the rest of your letters. i also dontlike how the V and E meet at the bottom.

[tbonebailey2711]

fury your bars can be bent and even rounded as long as they are the same width. like keyboard letters not boxes.

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0423092020.jpg

[RhodeIsland]

http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/IMG_0048.jpg

[[MiTH] hovz]

zarb - i like your style alot. but maybe try keeping the bottom of the s on the same level as the rest of the letters. and either put a whole all the way through in both the s and the a or dont, it looks weird with only the s going through. (idk if you understand that? kinda confusing)

fobia - hmmm... haha. try bars, just even try drawing parallel lines, straight lines, then make letters oout of them. start slow man.

verb - that B on the end looks weird to me, its jagged at the bottom, not smooth like the rest of the letters

zeak/x - im liking your style, and the bars. nice and clean. keep it up.


heres some i did. trying to start simple, are these any good? the second one was done laying down so the lines might not be their straightest.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

zarb whats that say las or cas

[Zarb]

las, and yeah haha not totally sure what you mean, I do know that the bottom of my S needs work though

[Fury]

Zarb - Keep the S on the same parallel as the other letters. Otherwise, it's cool.
RhodeIsland - Really liking this one, with a drop shadow instead of just 3D.
Che - I like it, but try doing some more organic lettering.

Okay I tried being as careful with being parallel and uniform as possible. I made use of my keyboard as well. Is that what you guys are getting at? I'm trying my best to understand, but it's obvious that I don't.
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/5198/img1406l.jpg

[(SoS)Viruz]

What up guys. The next Sketch battle is going to be a Single letter battle of your Choice...yes 1 Letter from your Alphabet. Get Creative, The sketches are do to me by...........Monday April 27.

[jupsick]

ahem work with solid simple bars
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3534/3468471779_9ce0981fe1_o.jpg
critz?

bump

[KJay]

FURY- stop posting so much, all people are gonna say is a summarized version of the new to graff thread. go look at some graffiti, keep ur lines parrelel and straight. ur not gonna improve over a couple hours in a night. dont bother posting here until uve drawn for a few months at least. seriously.

everyone else was pretty good

[KnoxIn]

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/6569/p4233183.jpg
practicing some handies i know they are far from good but is there anything positive about them, and everyone has been tellin me to make them less pointy but i dont know how to with my marker cuz its a chisel tip marker so ya.

zeax- try throwin in some variation all yours have basically been the same just different fill

fury- you have the right idea with the simples but i agree with above dont post so much get your simples down like damn good straight lines no extensions and proportioned good you really need to work on that

hyte- your shit is dope like always, but kinda always the same get what i mean? it would be tight to see somethin a lil different

[Fury]

Thanks for the advice.

Knox - I like the last one best, with the one on the left, second from the top, in a close second.

[HëRbN]

Fury you sure you read ALL the New to graff thread? also heres alittle explanation cause im not sure your getting it all the way. Forgive my shitty computer drawing skills. Also try and look at other peoples stuff and recognize the bars in it. DONT copy the letters just recognize, maintain a positive attitude most of all, youll get alot of shit but if you take it all as constructive critisism you will progress faster.

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7443/bardemo.png

[KnoxIn]

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/6291/p4233189.jpg
APE
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/4849/p4233187.jpg
PAEN
i got some prismas on the way that i ordered so im waitin to get them before i fill shit

[Fury]

Fury you sure you read ALL the New to graff thread? also heres alittle explanation cause im not sure your getting it all the way. Forgive my shitty computer drawing skills. Also try and look at other peoples stuff and recognize the bars in it. DONT copy the letters just recognize, maintain a positive attitude most of all, youll get alot of shit but if you take it all as constructive critisism you will progress faster.

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7443/bardemo.png

Thanks for that dude. I think I'm understanding it more now. And yeah man, I'm not a biter. Any shit at all is constructive criticism to me and I love looking at graffiti, so it keeps me motivated and all of the stuff here inspires me to just keep practicing. I'm sure it'll click for me eventually. Anyway, thanks for the drawing, I appreciate it.

[expozay]

faze has got to be the most over used name. theres a kid in my town that writes that shit too.

[KnoxIn]

faze has got to be the most over used name. theres a kid in my town that writes that shit too.

ya im honestly in the process of trying to find another one but i just haven't got one that i think flows or means anything

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

i got some prismas on the way that i ordered so im waitin to get them before i fill shit
why? they're free at Michael's

[HëRbN]

haha, i just made a huge list of words i liked and how you could spell them different or give em some meaning then picked the best one lol

[Tokenkaligreens]

also you could always take the letters you like sketching and make a name from them.

[KnoxIn]

why? they're free at Michael's

because where i live they lock all of em up and you have to ask the register people to look at them... ya its fuckin gay

[IMG]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/599/p4233191.jpg
here is what i got still no fill but this is what it will look like

[jupsick]

ahem work with solid simple bars
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3534/3468471779_9ce0981fe1_o.jpg
critz?

new page bump

[Bink1]

faze has got to be the most over used name. theres a kid in my town that writes that shit too.

daze is more fucked name.

[Sketched!]

Zeax - i think that if you wouda let the \ bar in the X go a bit further after the connection and before you twist it, it wouda looked more like an X and less like a K.
but nonetheless i really like your shit man, keep em coming.

[[MiTH] hovz]

ape - that shits cleannnn

i tried bending bars. sorry my marker really fucked all it up.(especially on the H and the cutouts) it was way to thick, but i guess you can get the picture. is this the kind of simple i should keep practicing? crits???

[Stussy]

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/1747/photo856.jpg
Crits before I ink it?

Mith- your getting it... keep working at it

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

rayz= cool

http://i41.tinypic.com/2a5n4hj.jpg

[Fury]

Infer - I like the ink spots, and the colors. Keep it looking smooth.
Rayz - Maybe add a hole in the R, but other than that, it looks hella good.
Che - I like it bent better than just straight.
Knox - That looks awesome man, I wanna see that up somewhere.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i42.tinypic.com/219yst2.jpg

[Fury]

Infer - I kinda like the first one more, but this one is still good too.

[Lunchbox]

daze is more fucked name.

I think you forgot Trane. :rolleyes:

[whahappen?]

TRANE SFC!
represent

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/strongisland.jpg
just did this crits????

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1240646550.jpg

[Stussy]

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/1747/photo856.jpg
Crits before I ink it?

Mith- your getting it... keep working at it

bumpskies

pie- that A is way nice

[dim]

good look man keep working on it try fix the z a lil bit drop a nice fat outline on it then itll be good for a wall

[sham]

pie- straight rippin

figuring a name

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo03/b2/21/48dfa97a570f.jpghttp://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo03/2e/2e/9d70d4d9cf42.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

There's a Grime in MSK.
No pressure, just lettin a ***** know

[StompBolts!]

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/3764/burner.jpg (http://img4.imageshack.us/my.php?image=burner.jpg)
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/6460/peice2h.jpg (http://img14.imageshack.us/my.php?image=peice2h.jpg)


crits?

[ECEmpire]

http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p51/bubbaroddy/CCF04242009_00004.jpg RISE
http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p51/bubbaroddy/CCF04242009_00005.jpg RISE http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p51/bubbaroddy/CCF04242009_00011.jpg DARE http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p51/bubbaroddy/CCF04242009_00012.jpg NYC http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p51/bubbaroddy/CCF04242009_00003.jpg SWAG http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p51/bubbaroddy/CCF04242009_00008.jpg RISE

[HëRbN]

simps

[apoken it]

knox- crazy. i think i like it. not sure wat to say bout it.
i think this is how im gona do the d....
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/1a-1.jpg

daylo- did you somewhat bite the lower half of mah a?

[oxiclean]

Come on.

[Sketched!]

throwies are hardly bitable. almost all of the letters look like eachother, except really special letters like Skuf's S, and no toy throwie has one of those.

[Hundred]

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/921/photo857.jpg
crits? im new :D

[sellers E.]

apok- what they all said. and u aint even using that throw no more. why u sweatin me?

[saintwo]

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/2508/p2504091946.jpg

[408Bomber]

Old
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/10/l_b6d883a77ae44cf5924a1ff71db1cb3e.jpg
Newer
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/58/l_3c079e0681ce45e7bd7a22d1e536c335.jpg
Newest
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/76/l_41d0b68cd9154f2f86a94822096cb9e1.jpg

[ESKiMO2]

Vera- I'm really feeling those simples. The drop shadow is kind of fucked up, but it's no big. Keep it up.

[KJay]

daylo- did you somewhat bite the lower half of mah a?

i doubt it. i dont think anyone would wanna bite your shit

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i40.tinypic.com/2zgd8n4.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

THIS IS DEFINITELY MY NEW NAME

http://i41.tinypic.com/258t7bd.jpg

[Sanc_one]

Yo guys. Some nice simples on this page. It was long time ago since my last post. So here it is, new sketch.

http://i358.photobucket.com/albums/oo22/Proof_one/IMG_5751-2.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

pretty dope bro^
just clean it up a bit.

[Desipher]

exchange with gros not done
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dtdgfsgsfdsfds002-1.jpg
gotta love black and yellow
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dtdgfsgsfdsfds003.jpg

[faser]

Infer - looks pretty clean, dont like the R on the first piecee tho
desipher- not feelin those colors on the last piece

did this for a friend... forget about that shit handy

http://i41.tinypic.com/29mox7d.jpg

[luster]

infer-not feeling the bottom of the r on the first one.and that the N isnt open anywere..like the rest tho
sanc-feeling it
swore- i really like your stuff just not the color comp in the last one.
faser-really work on your letters.try using bars

some simps..
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P4261081.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P4261082.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P4261083.jpg
not feeling the S's in the last one ..

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

brass- keep doing your thing

http://i42.tinypic.com/2vuzyut.jpg

[dave the pirate]

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/8168/dives7.jpg

3d is fucked i got to domed

[Sanc_one]

@Faser... Do simples.
@Desipher... I digg it. Keep doing it.
@Dave the pirate... Its cool just loose some extensions

http://i358.photobucket.com/albums/oo22/Proof_one/IMG_5751-3.jpg

[CyloOne]

http://i696.photobucket.com/albums/vv326/gdgraffiti/My%20graff/img004.jpg

Chars are Buff monster and D*face. Rest is my own shit.

[get a grip!]

own shit? those are mister wiggles letters.

[JoseBuerto]

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/8168/dives7.jpg

3d is fucked i got to domed

Theres a diver in MO and is quite a freight raper so.

Prof - i want an exchange im lovin the P

[tbonebailey2711]

luster - i like the bottom s's better than the top two.
sanc0ne - fukin fresh

[KnoxIn]

infer- your posting way to much its good to get crits but your shit never changes sketch for a while when you start to do different shit then start posting you got nice shit its just the same over and over just different fill

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

infer- your posting way to much its good to get crits but your shit never changes sketch for a while when you start to do different shit then start posting you got nice shit its just the same over and over just different fill

haha I feel you but my shit has changed a fuck ton over time I just get into the habit of working on something or some style and I know it can get a bit repetitive, I just like to work on my ideas and I need advice on maybe starting extensions seeing as I've strayed away from them for so long

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc00154804.jpg
uhh idk what color to make the fill or what to do with the 3d so suggestions would be good

[niner1234]

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/9370/getattachmentaspxi.jpg

crits?

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead5.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead4.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead1.jpg

[Fury]

Mers - You forgot some 3D on the last one I believe (on the S). I don't like how the M curves on the others either.
Gress - Change the R, it doesn't look like one. Overall, try to do some simples.
Lusia - Looking sharp, try more fluid stuff though

[Desipher]

for single letter battle
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dtdgfsgsfdsfds005.jpg
exchange with gros colored but colors r diff when i took a picture and they look shitty
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dtdgfsgsfdsfds004.jpg