Blackbooks

[Sanc_one]

Yo guys. Some nice simples on this page. It was long time ago since my last post. So here it is, new sketch.

http://i358.photobucket.com/albums/oo22/Proof_one/IMG_5751-2.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

pretty dope bro^
just clean it up a bit.

[Desipher]

exchange with gros not done
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dtdgfsgsfdsfds002-1.jpg
gotta love black and yellow
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dtdgfsgsfdsfds003.jpg

[faser]

Infer - looks pretty clean, dont like the R on the first piecee tho
desipher- not feelin those colors on the last piece

did this for a friend... forget about that shit handy

http://i41.tinypic.com/29mox7d.jpg

[luster]

infer-not feeling the bottom of the r on the first one.and that the N isnt open anywere..like the rest tho
sanc-feeling it
swore- i really like your stuff just not the color comp in the last one.
faser-really work on your letters.try using bars

some simps..
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P4261081.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P4261082.jpg
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P4261083.jpg
not feeling the S's in the last one ..

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

brass- keep doing your thing

http://i42.tinypic.com/2vuzyut.jpg

[dave the pirate]

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/8168/dives7.jpg

3d is fucked i got to domed

[Sanc_one]

@Faser... Do simples.
@Desipher... I digg it. Keep doing it.
@Dave the pirate... Its cool just loose some extensions

http://i358.photobucket.com/albums/oo22/Proof_one/IMG_5751-3.jpg

[CyloOne]

http://i696.photobucket.com/albums/vv326/gdgraffiti/My%20graff/img004.jpg

Chars are Buff monster and D*face. Rest is my own shit.

[get a grip!]

own shit? those are mister wiggles letters.

[JoseBuerto]

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/8168/dives7.jpg

3d is fucked i got to domed

Theres a diver in MO and is quite a freight raper so.

Prof - i want an exchange im lovin the P

[tbonebailey2711]

luster - i like the bottom s's better than the top two.
sanc0ne - fukin fresh

[KnoxIn]

infer- your posting way to much its good to get crits but your shit never changes sketch for a while when you start to do different shit then start posting you got nice shit its just the same over and over just different fill

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

infer- your posting way to much its good to get crits but your shit never changes sketch for a while when you start to do different shit then start posting you got nice shit its just the same over and over just different fill

haha I feel you but my shit has changed a fuck ton over time I just get into the habit of working on something or some style and I know it can get a bit repetitive, I just like to work on my ideas and I need advice on maybe starting extensions seeing as I've strayed away from them for so long

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc00154804.jpg
uhh idk what color to make the fill or what to do with the 3d so suggestions would be good

[niner1234]

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/9370/getattachmentaspxi.jpg

crits?

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead5.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead4.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead1.jpg

[Fury]

Mers - You forgot some 3D on the last one I believe (on the S). I don't like how the M curves on the others either.
Gress - Change the R, it doesn't look like one. Overall, try to do some simples.
Lusia - Looking sharp, try more fluid stuff though

[Desipher]

for single letter battle
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dtdgfsgsfdsfds005.jpg
exchange with gros colored but colors r diff when i took a picture and they look shitty
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dtdgfsgsfdsfds004.jpg

[IlikePie]

Yo guys. Some nice simples on this page. It was long time ago since my last post. So here it is, new sketch.

http://i358.photobucket.com/albums/oo22/Proof_one/IMG_5751-2.jpg

This is pretty dope.
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1240875687.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

i like that.

[(SoS)Viruz]

THE IRON MAN!!! and some other stuff
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/HPIM1843.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/HPIM1842.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/HPIM1862.jpg
^^^^Yes that is on a T, and my black book next to it. All Airbrushed
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/HPIM1844.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/HPIM1846.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/HPIM1847.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/HPIM1848.jpg
^^^^Some AirBrush Quickies I did, I fucked up on my stars....My Daggers are usally on point but not that day :(
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/HPIM1850.jpg
^^^^I hate the E the capital E....Crits
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/HPIM1854.jpg
^^^^^I usally dont post my handies cause I dont like them....But why not.

[Amends_Ego]

you got some skill with an airbrush man

[Stussy]

Is that Greed?
Not feeling the R or the E... the style is nice keep working at it

P.S.
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/2239/photo859.jpg
inked...eh?
crits?

[ESKiMO2]

It looks cool but some parts just kind of irk me.
I don't really like the top part of the A.

[Stussy]

like the hole extension? or just the top where it connects?

[Amends_Ego]

here is my attempt at a human face
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww351/Amends_Ego/CIMG0006.jpg

[tbonebailey2711]

reallytrustfullstrangers - really like the first one

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=263&pictureid=1615

crits??

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc00154804.jpg
uhh idk what color to make the fill or what to do with the 3d so suggestions would be good
bumpy

[408Bomber]

here is my attempt at a human face
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww351/Amends_Ego/CIMG0006.jpg That face looks like Butthead lmaO

[killamanilla]

http://i455.photobucket.com/albums/qq278/floridagraff/Vielmix.jpg

[Fury]

Lol the face hella does man.
T - I like the simple style of it.
Rayz - Some of the extensions seem out of place to me, but otherwise, it looks sick.
Viruz - You own with an airbrush dude. And I like the other stuff too.
Desipher - Not liking the color combo too much, but you blended them pretty nicely.

[Amends_Ego]

That face looks like Butthead lmaO
yeah i could see that I just gotta give him the hair.

[Venetian]

http://i42.tinypic.com/29bn8fs.jpg

[jupsick]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3361/3482550005_41bfe3ede6_o.jpg
vanetion that drip looks awsome

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/slurpee4.jpg
lol

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/slurpee2-1.jpg

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/slurpee1-1.jpg

crits>

[Sanc_one]

This is pretty dope.
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1240875687.jpg
Ill...
http://i358.photobucket.com/albums/oo22/Proof_one/IMG_5751-4.jpg

[La Coka Nostra]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/slurpee2-1.jpg




reminds me of big blue violence's stuff.

[$IN30NE]

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9199/photo0081w.jpg
just trying something out...crits please?


virus-those stencils are pretty dope
stussy-i dont like your style that much...nothing against you but none the less i have seen some massive improvement from you
mers- im liking those throwies

[$IN30NE]

sorry bout the bad quality...it came from my phone

[Scino & Spank]

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0344.jpg

[TheWorldGoneMad]

That looks sick man, it looks a little complicated though...

[Scino & Spank]

i think i went overboard with the M's

[408Bomber]

http://i39.tinypic.com/11h3xh3.jpg
very sloppy copy of a version im working on in art class.
crits and advice please?

[sham]

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo03/7e/0d/7d6808039842.jpgsimpzzzzzz

[NoCanControl]

you got some skill with an airbrush man

mostly stencils.

[(SoS)Viruz]

YEa its stencils. But other than that is all free hands. That with anything. I Drew it Steciled it and free handed the colors. If you think stenciling is easy....Try stenciling that Iron man....took me a whole day to work it out. I had to make 2 for certain areas suck as the Eyes and shit. But dont undermind it cause its a stencil. Shit it takes control a lot of control.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

reminds me of big blue violence's stuff.


...... how???

[Stussy]

stuter- back to simples
reallytrust- throw is solid.... maybe try and mix it up abit, just to get new ideas

[KnoxIn]

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2041/p4283219.jpg
here it is with fill got my markers today, and i hate the background it looks like shit, and lots of high and low points but oh well

grime- your proportions are a little off but really not too bad
scino- lovin the style clean it up a bit and it'll be dope
stuter- i like it but keep workin on your letter structure not so much your fills

[sellers E.]

grime-lookin aight.
408-loose the extensions

simple.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/ray-1.jpg
crits????

[Amends_Ego]

Knoxin- I like how it turned out, would be better if the ape was bigger and more the focus imo.
Grime-nice and simple i'd say keep the letters the same size though
Scino & Spank-im having trouble reading it what does it say?
Stuter-I like your use of the colors, i dont like the background or the S

Something I threw together today.
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww351/Amends_Ego/HPIM1809.jpg

Crits please

[Scino & Spank]

Mahem

[white]

baik - diggin it
grime - fix proportions
daylo - good
ape - like the a and p
408 - no extensions

[La Coka Nostra]

...... how???



mostly the r.

[B.S. POLICE]

you guyz are maddd toyyy

[Fury]

Knox - Personally, I would've liked black better than the gray. Maybe a green or blue or something to match the trees. Other than that, it looks pretty sick and I want some flicks of that shit up somewhere.
Daylo - Fix the circle on the D.
Grime - I like it, but just make sure each letter is the same width of bars so it looks top-notch.
408 - Clean it up a little by removing some extensions.
Scino - Move the letters closer together.
Sine - The colors are cool, just keep practicing it

[(SoS)Viruz]

you guyz are maddd toyyy

exsept me :d

[Amends_Ego]

you guyz are maddd toyyy
Really? I could have sworn this was the toyz forum but i could be wrong. thanks for the crit though.

http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww351/Amends_Ego/HPIM1809.jpg

bottom page bump

[408Bomber]

IIte imma work on another 1,will post when done.

[Fury]

Baik - Work on the I and try taking off the islands on the A.

[Stussy]

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/1716/photo863.jpg
inked and colored...

[408Bomber]

Stussy - That's dope

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc003fcaff.jpg
rayz - dope as always
baik - it's okay, I think you should work with your letters more before you start doing all that extra stuff

[Kaiser71]

Lusid: It looks like the basic shapes of your letters are decent, but I've never been a fan of the like jagged outlines, usually just makes it look mad messy to me.

Rayz: Not a huge fan of the slime/cloud, but it's well done. I loved the piece you posted before, I feel your uppercase A's way more than your lowercase ones.

Baik: good fading, and I like the basic lettering. The Bansai, rock and soil would look a lot better with some color variation/shading/highlights, but it still looks good. What's the Japanese? symbol/character mean?

Okay. I know I'll probably get a lot of hate for all the ugly extensions, and the weird fill, but I had 3 straight hours of study hall and felt like messing with line width and blending.

Crits?
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0029-1.jpg

[$IN30NE]

kaiser-i think your getting too detailed and technical with your stlye...lose the arrows extensions

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

u write mer?

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

mostly the r.

ok id like to see his. ive never seen them. post some.

[jupsick]

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9717/0429092330450x600.jpg
for my man rayz
ill make you a more decent one later

[(SoS)Viruz]

Lusid: It looks like the basic shapes of your letters are decent, but I've never been a fan of the like jagged outlines, usually just makes it look mad messy to me.

Rayz: Not a huge fan of the slime/cloud, but it's well done. I loved the piece you posted before, I feel your uppercase A's way more than your lowercase ones.

Baik: good fading, and I like the basic lettering. The Bansai, rock and soil would look a lot better with some color variation/shading/highlights, but it still looks good. What's the Japanese? symbol/character mean?

Okay. I know I'll probably get a lot of hate for all the ugly extensions, and the weird fill, but I had 3 straight hours of study hall and felt like messing with line width and blending.

Crits?
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0029-1.jpg

Loose the arrows and your Stucture is poor. Work on that

[Stussy]

jupsick thanks man... shit looks good... i'll get you yours soon... just been way busy with finals :\

[Kaiser71]

ReallTrustfulStrangers; Yeah. You write Mers don't you? I'll work on the structure. And yeah the arrows and most of the extensions are pretty fucked up. I'll get rid of them next time.

[Shink]

alright, just started to get into graff and havent thrown anything up yet. need some help on some sketches before i get out there. anyone think any of these is a good place to start?

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p133/mikeyflips/graff2.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p133/mikeyflips/graff1.jpg

[peace89]

shink... i hope your ready to get fuck't in the ass

i know the i needs work and the first character need some work too

crits please

[617...]

Really? I could have sworn this was the toyz forum but i could be wrong. thanks for the crit though.

http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww351/Amends_Ego/HPIM1809.jpg

bottom page bump

hmm... cut off that thing at the bottom of the b or shorten it and the top of the a ame shorten but dont loose it and the k idk just not feelin it or the i...... just do those letter with out the extension just change the stucre.

[Shink]

shink... i hope your ready to get fuck't in the ass


:(

[BigBlueViolence]

Stuss-
http://i39.tinypic.com/6s3ots.png

That little change would make it look a lot better, IMO

[Kaiser71]

:(
Peace is kinda right, but don't sweat it, everyone new here goes through it. Hit the new to graff thread and learn some bars. Seems like a step back at first, but in the end you'll thank yourself so much. On the first one, looks like you've already kinda got the idea of bars, so work on bar thickness, clean up some lines, and go simpler at first.

[Shink]

Peace is kinda right, but don't sweat it, everyone new here goes through it. Hit the new to graff thread and learn some bars. Seems like a step back at first, but in the end you'll thank yourself so much. On the first one, looks like you've already kinda got the idea of bars, so work on bar thickness, clean up some lines, and go simpler at first.

sounds good.

[BigBlueViolence]

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/2402/photo30b.jpg
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/4391/photo29i.jpghttp://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7997/photo30e.jpg

[skull-e]

earn: that a in the throw is soooo fresh

but try to make the bottom of your Rs and Ns pointy like the first letters, I ahve the same problem...it sucks

just keep redoing it untill they line up properfully.

[joker954]

and earn dont waste ur slaps with tags until u get decent

[BigBlueViolence]

Haha, dude, my normal hand is good enough for me,
and the one on the right was for the fuck of it.

[niner1234]

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/9370/getattachmentaspxi.jpg

crits?

bump

[408Bomber]

http://i41.tinypic.com/fw1yxy.jpg

trying something new out while sobering up. Crits?
I know it's pretty messed up but whatever :o

[Erm...]

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/599/015muj.jpg

Let me know what you think people, im new to this so please give me all the criticism you want.

Erm...

[jupsick]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3310/3488951742_c96f2368f4_o.jpg
hebrew shit from israel

[Stussy]

Stuss-
http://i39.tinypic.com/6s3ots.png

That little change would make it look a lot better, IMO

fuck dude where were you when i asked for crits before i inked it haha...
yea man i get ya...the Z would look better cut back a little

+ blue- im diggin the first handy

[LIZARD]

im liking the slime shit in the background...and i definitly agree about the Z would look better if the line was brought in more

[Stussy]

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/6569/photo871.jpg
same shit different arrow ya know how it is...
still messing with this style
crits?

[Bink1]

and earn dont waste ur slaps with tags until u get decent

get off his dick, he got dope hand. always loved the simplinees of his shit :D

[LIZARD]

make the Y and the Z the same bubble drips as you did the other 2 letters just make sure you don't make it to complex...i like though

[BigBlueViolence]

It seems to me that you go hard with your first letter, but just kind of work less and less with every one.

I think you should try to cut down on the "folds" in the Z and Y.

That RA is hot, though.

[Stussy]

yea i get ya... Z's a bitch, thats why its not as good as the rest of the letters...
yea the Y and Z match to much with the "folds" just can't figure out another y because the Z kinda has to have to fold ya know

[408Bomber]

http://i39.tinypic.com/do72ue.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/bey4yb.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/906ibs.jpg
Some stuff I did today,Can I have some crits?Simples really do work wonders ha!

Erm - start with simples!
Jupsick - Don't really know what it is but it looks good. Keep practicing.
Stussy - I like the newer one, add lil bubbles too the bottom of the Y and Z,just like you'r R and A.

[Skin1016]

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a211/adm123456789/IMG_1680.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a211/adm123456789/IMG_1682.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a211/adm123456789/IMG_1681.jpg

408Bomber - Go Simpler, I dont know why you're sketching on lined paper, but since you're doing it anyways, try to use the lines as a reference point, you can make each letter more symmetrical that and it should kind of help you eye out bar width and shit of that nature.
Stussy - That sketch is hot props
Erm - I'd go simpler, fuck around with straight bars and bend them from there, that wavy shit just aint workin for ya
BigBlueViolence - That handy on the left is clean mang, the one on the right though...is ugly. The throwie is dank too but it looks like you did it pretty quickly

[remos]

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/wise.jpg

[408Bomber]

I was in math class and I didn't bring any paper today cause of CST's. So that's all i could get haha.

[Fury]

CST's blow if you're anything below a senior :D

[408Bomber]

^ ^ Hell yea, my friend just put "fuck u" in the scantron hahaha it looked tight.

[Fury]

lol You know, the scores determine house values in the area right? But hey, I don't need to do it so suck it bitches!

Too bad the days they prepare suck

[diggitydoggz]

rhode island... why are you still posting in the TOY black book forum?? same goes for others here lol..

anyways here's some new shit i've done
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/5890/img000814.jpg

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/1862/img000812.jpg

[408Bomber]

lol You know, the scores determine house values in the area right? But hey, I don't need to do it so suck it bitches!

Too bad the days they prepare suck
fa real?damn i didnt even know that haha no wonder thier increasing lmaO!!

[white]

sobe - diggin the top one more, and on the second dont do the extension on the s

[diggitydoggz]

gotcha - thanks man.

[KRE1]

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/1723/001gxj.jpg

[Fury]

Sketch - I like the cartoon and the throwie. I also really like how well that camera shot looks and from the angle it's at.

[KRE1]

thanks man gonna start pumping out some crewnecks wit somethin like that

[markingz.]

ay yo guys , yo playaz what do yall use to sketch with, i jus wanna know, like i want to know what everyone uses, for outlines, for color just anythin, does it really matter though i mean really it only matters if you get somethin down right, also its so hard to decide what you want to paint especially when like you have hundreds of sketches, i mean that aint an exxageration alot of yall might say i needa paint more but for real i do, i just sketch like fuck too always have new ideas, sometimes i try to be toy on purpose just to see what it feels like, but then i always snap out of it becuase being a toy is wack lol, i should'nt try not to floss if i can you no.

[markingz.]

yo kre, not to hate or anything i mean that looks good but just a question do you really try to bust hard lookin shit when you sketch or do you just sketch to sketch, becuase something tells me you could do a little better than that

[KnoxIn]

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/3924/p5013223.jpg
somethin i did for a friend i hate the bottom part i just wanted to try blending with my markers but other than that crits??

kre- i like your character but i dunno about your letters they look a little weird
diggity- i like the bottom one more than the top for some reason your E looks off on the top one

[Kaiser71]

Faze man, you've progressed A LOT in my eyes...
Like a month ago I kept seeing you post pretty much that same Faze piece and you just didnt seem to be getting the flow and working with bars too well. Then I remember Zase hit you up with a bit of help and ever since I've been liking your shit, this one especially. Zase's influence is still pretty heavy in your letters, but its a nice start. I don't think that fade looks bad at all either and I like the simple color scheme...The S could deffinately use some work to bring it to standards with the other letters

^^Not trying to dick ride. Just saying i've seen a lot of improvement.

[.The.OhZ.]

old
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/5913/dsc00028g.jpg

[sourpuss]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/37983756@N08/3486990887/

[sourpuss]

http://http://www.flickr.com/photos/37983756@N08/3486989349/

[sourpuss]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/37983756@N08/3486989349/

[Fury]

Ohz - Lose some of the extensions.
Knox - That looks sick, and the fading looks good too. But make sure all of the bubbles are the same size, because it seems like it skrunches up near the end

[sanrtizer]

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3273/021isd.jpg
spamspamspam

[KnoxIn]

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/3924/p5013223.jpg
somethin i did for a friend i hate the bottom part i just wanted to try blending with my markers but other than that crits??

kre- i like your character but i dunno about your letters they look a little weird
diggity- i like the bottom one more than the top for some reason your E looks off on the top one
bottom of page bump

[KRE1]

iono wut u mean by that to be honest...

ive been sketching a bunch of different stuff but i kind of settled on that character cuz its just somethin i like.

but i appreciate tha input you have any suggestions as to wat i could improve on or change up on tha character ? and i kno tha letters suck was just foolin around with different ideas.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/montaindew3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/montaindewunfin1.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/montaindew2.jpg

crits???????

[returned]

Here something I made today in school. Tell me what you think and how i could do better. I'm new and you can be as harsh as you want.

http://i604.photobucket.com/albums/tt126/returned404/accy1.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

definetly practice on the letter structure. make everythng even. not so manny humps/curves in the letters.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i42.tinypic.com/51oyh4.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/wi9etk.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

^ both really nice

[returned]

Heres some more stuff i made, crit plz

http://i604.photobucket.com/albums/tt126/returned404/noccanny1.jpg

http://i604.photobucket.com/albums/tt126/returned404/noscanny1.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Hey Trustfullstrangers, I loved your fill so much I did something similiar but yours looks so much better

says silly:
http://i44.tinypic.com/5481z5.jpg

[Scino & Spank]

Here something I made today in school. Tell me what you think and how i could do better. I'm new and you can be as harsh as you want.

http://i604.photobucket.com/albums/tt126/returned404/accy1.jpg

not as many jagged edges

[KnoxIn]

goddamn people when you post shit give some goddamn crits everyone is just askin for crits give em too

[Kester]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3576/3492014852_c5dd80f5c1_b.jpg

[KRE1]

nice. like those letters.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

Yea good stuff^^.
Ok just saying here. I always give crits and never get any.

[returned]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3576/3492014852_c5dd80f5c1_b.jpg


kester, thats looks clean

[Kester]

thanks

[.The.OhZ.]

knoxin- that mathis is dope!
Strangers- i like the top one the other ones fill is just too much
Kest- that is so fresh so clean ...maybe some color

[Stussy]

reallytrust- Im liking it man, glad your messing with your letters a bit...
but do give crits next time

[jupsick]

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/2160/0502092011450x600.jpg
looks clean kest
acyd
use strait bars

[Deck]

I'm generally new to this so not sure if my crits mean much
Silly I like the fill, came out well
Acyd too many straight lines pointy lines
Kest dope
Zeak character is a nice add-on
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll304/Greatgone/deck.jpg

[.HATESONE.]

everyone in here sucks...all of you.i hate you guys:)

[Stussy]

hate where have you been?

[.HATESONE.]

bangin your sisters...

[Stussy]

:\
im sorry...

[Scino & Spank]

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0346.jpg

[returned]

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0346.jpg

maybe color next time but it looks awesome regardless


CRITS:
Deck: The C looks a little awkward but i understand why the lower part of the c is like that.

[returned]

Heres something I made today, crit plz. I fcked up my y...

http://i604.photobucket.com/albums/tt126/returned404/accytu2.jpg

[.The.OhZ.]

Heres something I made today, crit plz. I fcked up my y...

http://i604.photobucket.com/albums/tt126/returned404/accytu2.jpg

stand up, bend over, and shove your head up your ass cuz that shit is wak!

[Deck]

Deck: The C looks a little awkward but i understand why the lower part of the c is like that.

Yeah, I don't think it turns out as good when I am trying to line everything up, I'll get some more up where I switched some stuff around.

I'm not digging the Y in yours and it looks a little sloppy, other than that it's nice.

[returned]

THE OHZ: Thanks for the advice = )

DECK: Yeah, im pretty bad at coloring, and im relativly new to the whole graff thing so w.e. I shoulda put a line in the a so it actually looks like an a...

[.The.OhZ.]

sorry man but start simple... do some straight letters

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/4023/25081078.jpg

[returned]

sorry man but start simple... do some straight letters

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/4023/25081078.jpg

now thats what i call real advice. :)

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

i like tht straight letter.

[paintkid]

Deck- try somethin else. work with your letters a lil more bro.
the ohz- dope and clean man.

Case

[Deck]

Oh looks dope

Here is a couple more, ignore the fill, etc.

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll304/Greatgone/Deck3.jpg
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll304/Greatgone/Deck2.jpg
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll304/Greatgone/Deck-1.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2pzjqyq.jpg

[Tryp]

deck, i like the red one.
looks like it could work as a slap...

[Deck]

That is what I am going to be using it for.

[paintkid]

haven been on in min. heres some new shit....crits and tips, thanks.

Case

[CrashOverRide]

If you post pictures in this forum you'll be recognized as a certified toy till the day you stup writing, do yourself a favour and just not post until you're semi-decent.

[HëRbN]

havent been on in a minute yet your join date is March 09? lol thats interesting. Go simpler. ditch those wiggly letters

[Lunchbox]

haven been on in min. heres some new shit....crits and tips, thanks.

Case

Same as herbn said, go simpler and use bars before you take chunks out of letters

[sham]

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo03/9b/99/4aeaef373341.jpgnew shit let me know how wack you think it is

[Lunchbox]

Pretty much shit, aside from the 3d, go back to bars. And straight letters

[bulltimeJAMP]

lol.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i39.tinypic.com/wgx1ra.jpg

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/CIMG0783.jpg

[Deck]

you have pretty str8 letter structure but ummm theres already a deck kid switch the name

I have Googled Deck Graffiti and didn't come up with anything.

[Esoterical]

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0430091238.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0325092035-2.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0326091606.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0328091746.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0412091438a.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0412091439b.jpg

[.The.OhZ.]

:)

[Deck]

are you serious??? dude u dont google people..you have to go out and see whos up and shit there is already a deck but u can keep that name as long as you dont bomb with it..there isint really any point in keeping it but like u can practice that name until u get a name

I'm in a small-ish town in Canada, give me a break.

[Esoterical]

critz?

[Esoterical]

that crim is weak. do some simple letters, like this. C R I M

[Esoterical]

that crim is weak, do simples.

[Deck]

Crim, you C looks a lot like a G also I'm not diggin' the R
Frust, shadowing is off
Pie, dope C
Frodo, good nothing special
Eso, dope

[Newkidontheblock]

yo alotta this shit is definately not toy. start postin up in the blackbook forum.

[Esoterical]

such as^

[Esoterical]

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0430091238.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0325092035-2.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0326091606.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0328091746.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0412091438a.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0412091439b.jpg

bump to the next page..

[Esoterical]

anyone wanna exchange?

[Deck]

I will.

[Esoterical]

ight. i write moes. color or no? and i'll post it up tomorrow/

[Deck]

PM me, what do you want to do?

[.The.OhZ.]

bump to the next page..

i like that bunny...wish i could draw characters

[Esoterical]

full color piece.

[Sizzuurp]

http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/deck_cope_jee.jpg
http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/05032005215408throwupja.jpg

this is DECK

[Deck]

full color piece.

Alright, I'm pretty toy but I'll try my best.

[Deck]

All the good names are taken.

[Esoterical]

do you live in NY ^^

[Deck]

No, Canada, by Edmonton.

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/CIMG0783.jpg

You guys just don't shut the fuck up, do you?

[.The.OhZ.]

Go simple!

[(SoS)Viruz]

Who hahahahah Pie dude told you to go simple. That C is dope BTW

[Scino & Spank]

haah theres a deK in my town...
That C is dope Pie, id like to see the whole thing?

[.The.OhZ.]

i was talking to crim not pie

[Deck]

Looks like I'm the Deck in my town.

[BigBlueViolence]

http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/deck_cope_jee.jpg


Maaaaaan,


I thought Cope was the ONE name that wasn't taken!

[Esoterical]

your fine keep writing deck. and ill ass c. but the top extension makes it look like a z

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/graffff007-6.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/graffff008-6.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/graffff009-6.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/graffff011-7.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/graffff020-2.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/graffff017-2.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/graffff013-4.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/graffff010-6.jpg

[Esoterical]

fuck i didnt know run dmc wrote. lol. nice chain

[IlikePie]

Hot shit Tezer
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/CIMG0794.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i40.tinypic.com/nnu238.png

I think the extension on the H would look better on the other side, too.

[IlikePie]

Haha, I looked at my e and noticed that too, but I figured it would be too much of a hassle to erase. And I tried that extension on the other side. It looked awkward, cuz it was covered up so much by the C, and I didn't want a ton of empty space by the bottom legs.

[diggitydoggz]

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/8825/img000821.jpg

[KASE2]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3576/3492014852_c5dd80f5c1_b.jpg
damn im hella feelin this crispness

[nameless/cao]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/theofficialcao/3456717583/

[Desipher]

seyar yours will be done soon just been busy for mers not done yet but i did start it i got more done then what i took though
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/ngcghgvjhvj001.jpg
for morph also not done
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/ngcghgvjhvj002.jpg
KWS!!!!!!
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/ngcghgvjhvj003.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/ngcghgvjhvj004.jpg
old pictures
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/ngcghgvjhvj005.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/ngcghgvjhvj006.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/ngcghgvjhvj007.jpg

[NouveauP]

Working on a pseudo-oldschool style. Crits?
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/piece.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i40.tinypic.com/102m90j.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/aa.jpg
crits?

[Fury]

Moes - Fix the middle E stem. Make it go straight. Maybe keep all of the letters rounded or sharp, not both?
Jaep - Good, but I don't like the top extension on the A.
Kre5 - Not my personal preference of 3D, but still looks good.
Strangers - It's cool but I don't like how the two things off the S aren't parallel. It makes it look like it's going downwards.

[Esoterical]

that moes isnt mine up there..

[CAN-KILLER]

lol

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Jael- fix E
Strangers- I dont really like it :\ thicken the letters maybe? that might make it look way bettr imo

http://i39.tinypic.com/x1ds2v.jpg

[Deck]

that moes isnt mine up there..

Ha

Edit: I deleted the post so people don't think that.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i44.tinypic.com/1zyxol.jpg

[nickstix]

Cyto-looks good, nice and simple. do you sketch in pen? b/c it looks like i can still see sketch marks, if you sketched in pencil lightly and erased before inking itd look alot neater

strangers-im not too crazy about it IMO, and im not really sure what that first letter is, definatly has potential...maybe fatten up the letters

nouveaup- i think it would flow alittle better if the A was more straight up than angled to the right since none of the other letters are angled

desipher-thats some crazy stuff...did you used to write INK under a name inkbits a while back? or am i thinking of someone else

Some sketches from school today...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1545.jpg
^R and E

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1549.jpg
^start of a BRUTE sketch for the battle, was running out of time so just ended it with BR

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1551.jpg
^A B C

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1553.jpg
^E F G (i really dont like that E)

crits?

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Yeah I don't even have pencils dude Im poor as fuck right now, I just jacked me some prismas but have yet to snatch some nice drawing pencils, I also need a new pen that's not a cheap bic lol

[nickstix]

Yeah I don't even have pencils dude Im poor as fuck right now, I just jacked me some prismas but have yet to snatch some nice drawing pencils, I also need a new pen that's not a cheap bic lol

ha, nothing wrong with some bic pens and pencils, i sketch with bic pens an pencils all the time, it took me forever to get my prismas, i used to use sharpies lol

[Lunchbox]

Some sketches from school today...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1545.jpg
^R and E

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1549.jpg
^start of a BRUTE sketch for the battle, was running out of time so just ended it with BR

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1551.jpg
^A B C

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN1553.jpg
^E F G (i really dont like that E)

crits?

I like that style, good understanding of bars, keep it up

[Werse]

NickStick- those letters on are nice, great bars, getting steezy
Cyto- Looks good but I dont like your 3D
Strangers- Too crazy for my likings.

Just a simple I liked.
It's on a sticker but whatever.
I'm thinking about dropping the add on on the S, what do you think?
http://i41.tinypic.com/2eoeidc.jpg

[NouveauP]

Feeling those simples, Werse.

[Werse]

Thanks man, Sorry I didn't crit yours I didn't see it...
I think you should rotate your A so its more upright, and fix the width twoards the top, I couldnt explain it so I drew a line on it to show what i mean.
http://i39.tinypic.com/30aui6p.jpg

[KnoxIn]

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2307/p5043224.jpg
META
new name thinkin of writin i honestly hate the damn thing not the name but the drawing but still crits?

werse- those are pretty tight and i dunno try droppin that little extension see if you like it i think it looks fine the way it is
nickstix- i agree good job with the bars now try a name and all that bet it would be pretty dope
cyto- like it fer sure, your 3-d is off in some places tho

[Werse]

Looks alright Knox, try doing a simple one so you can find a letter structure for that name.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Im digging both WERSE and KNOXIN

Although Knoxin I'd be extra careful with that style,but just keep doin it man you'll get it

[nickstix]

werse-those are nice simples

knoxin, its looking pretty good, i like that style of just kinda like, free flowing bars without jagged endges. The E and T could use alittle work to flow better but other than that its really good


nickstix- i agree good job with the bars now try a name and all that bet it would be pretty dope


Ive been stuck with what to write, when i started i went through so many different names, the name i stuck with longest and still basically currently write is RET, but i had thought about other things like RUSTE,
RETAN, or RETN...but i always seem to just go back to RET

[KnoxIn]

Im digging both WERSE and KNOXIN

Although Knoxin I'd be extra careful with that style,but just keep doin it man you'll get it

what you mean by be extra careful??

[Lunchbox]

He means its one of those hit-or-miss styles, its either pretty dope and flowing, or its just not happening and kinda sucks, you know what I'm sayin?

You seem to be hittin it so far, keep it up.

/sorry if I totally missed the point

[KnoxIn]

ok i get what ya mean, thanks for the clarification and lets hope that what he meant haha

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

it was lol haha

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/CIMG0797.jpg
Finally finished a piece....

[CrustOner]

where's the 3D, pie?

[IlikePie]

Shutthefuckup!

[Esoterical]

pie. i'm really diggin. wanna exchange?

[KnoxIn]

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2307/p5043224.jpg
META
new name thinkin of writin i honestly hate the damn thing not the name but the drawing but still crits?

werse- those are pretty tight and i dunno try droppin that little extension see if you like it i think it looks fine the way it is
nickstix- i agree good job with the bars now try a name and all that bet it would be pretty dope
cyto- like it fer sure, your 3-d is off in some places tho

kinda bottom of page bumb

[CrustOner]

Shutthefuckup!

haha it would fill in some of that empty spaaaaaaaaccceee.

[IlikePie]

pie. i'm really diggin. wanna exchange?

No.

And for the 3D, you know, I was just going to leave the R without color, 'cuz I'm cool like that, but then I was like, "This is for Chers!" And I finished as much as I could without getting up and leaving it.

[sellers E.]

i like pie- that looks sick!
knoxin- i like the style, but it looks like it says meth

simple with my friends name for an exchange.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/jaepone.jpg

[KnoxIn]

http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/3972/p5043225.jpg

x-change for moes i cant do S's at all and the o is a little skitywompus

jaep- do skinny bars
pie- needs 3-d and the e is a little weird

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

I Like the moes exchange except for the S

http://i44.tinypic.com/23rtohl.jpg

http://i42.tinypic.com/28tyqt3.jpg

[PegCityBoy]

Cyto - uve got that style downnn i'd say move on to more complicated shit u got your simps on lock fursure but thats just my 2 cents

werse - shit looks fresh

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

well thats awfully flattering of you to say :)

I know my shit can get boring I am just afraid of being critized for going "outside the box" haha

[Stussy]

Pie i wanna see some shit painted.... in all the time i've been on here, i dont think i've ever seen something you've painted....

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

is this more complicated>

http://i40.tinypic.com/118zoz9.jpg

[..romero..]

http://i42.tinypic.com/2eqgrki.jpg
fuck this e.

[killamanilla]

http://i455.photobucket.com/albums/qq278/floridagraff/Voodoo.jpg
http://i455.photobucket.com/albums/qq278/floridagraff/CoolBlue.jpg

[Fury]

Romero - I don't really like that extension on the M either.
Kres - Maybe fill it in, I can't really read it, but it looks cool.
Moes - Not digging the S, and it looks like the 3D is off to me.
Jaep - Add some 3D, fix the P
Meta - Looks like Meth, fix the H.

[.The.OhZ.]

http://i455.photobucket.com/albums/qq278/floridagraff/Voodoo.jpg
http://i455.photobucket.com/albums/qq278/floridagraff/CoolBlue.jpg

damn im feelin that:D

[`SassAsaurus_ReXX`]

Hi, after a long while of not posting and realizing wow im a fucking toy, i decided i was. im never saying i was anywhere near good, but i was so bad i didnt even get critslol. well i tried some new shit, how is it?
http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss358/SassAsaurusReXX/0501091713.jpg?t=1241562154
http://http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss358/SassAsaurusReXX/0505091815.jpg?t=1241562349
http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss358/SassAsaurusReXX/0505091815a.jpg

[`SassAsaurus_ReXX`]

heres the other http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss358/SassAsaurusReXX/0505091815.jpg?t=1241562701

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

try a different style and make all ur letters equal in size.^^^

[Esoterical]

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0505091654b.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0503091508.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0326091605a.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0326091604a.jpg

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/BlackBooks/0326091606a.jpg