Blackbooks

[Reincarnation]

Kaiser 71 - nice color scheme
Eack - letter structure flows nice. I dig the orange outline.
Remos - tricolored blue is nice
Klic - actually better than some of the shit ive seen put up
Easer - sick
Aesir - Norse is dope, viking shit would be dope. Fix the O and R for sure, and
lose the curl/question mark shit....simple holes r better
DecoOne - sick drawing. I like the 3D. It looks like it's being pulled...Same for
Anarone. 3D drain pull...

Here's a quickie, with some colors I had..

Crits?

I like its nice and clean that red stripe adds alot of spunk

[DUNSY]

New page in the blackbookie

http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/453/afb0003.jpg

crits pls

[mtown]

simples man simples,see the lketters on ya keyboard,copy them

[hpir]

First attempt at a strieght letter using line paper as bars for now
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/k3monee.jpg
crits?

[NEZ89]

good but i you have 3-d on the top there wouldn't be any on the bottom
http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/1802/feqcw.jpg

[kakajunn]

piece
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/1093/simplepiis.th.jpg (http://img194.imageshack.us/my.php?image=simplepiis.jpg)
wilder toyshit ;D
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/1502/wilderpiis.th.jpg (http://img193.imageshack.us/my.php?image=wilderpiis.jpg)
Is my piece at least ok?, i know the other is wack as hell.

[kakajunn]

edit. sry got lagged and double-posted.

[NEZ89]

wow, both are pretty bad
just do what kem's doin for a while, simple straight letters

[kakajunn]

well yeah, but give me something wtf is wrong, saying that do blocks isn't really a crit.

[NEZ89]

ok, everything is disproportionate, sloppy and just plain bad
stop now and do simple blockletters
stop trying to make it look like graffiti and make it look like letters

[Mr yarbles]

I would rant at this fag
But honestly what's the point
I yell at people like every page.

[KidReny!]

did these last night at like 3am lol may do a name change to , to noise so i did a lil sketch crits please
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090607_1525.jpg

[NEZ89]

3d on the s is off a bit

[KidReny!]

i know yo i was trippin on that S can u help me out

[Stolen]

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/s.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/s2.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/kool.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/test.jpg
Of course I offer my crits as well...
''anarone''- im feeling the peice with the blue 3d and red outline however, U might wanna make the letters a little thicker, but if your trying to develop a certain style like that, by all means go for it, I would love to see how it turns up later.
''MaterStainers''- Im really feeling your style, put some color into that and post it!
''Kaiser71''- your shit is sick!
''whahappen''- Like slip said, make it thicker and tighten it! look around, and see the throws from more experienced artist, then compare it to yours and make corrections.
''Eack''- Keep that shit up, looks good man.
''remos''- I like that wise peice but W is way to that fuck out there, bring it closer with the other letters and your good.
''klic''- good shit bro. let me see your other stuff.
''Aseir''- Im really feeling the norse throw up in the 2nd peice, and the last peice is sweet!
''deco one''- Everything looks clean except for that arrow on the far right, it kinda looks like a penis. lol
''IKT''- The r and the e are 2 far from the letters, bring em in, and it will look much better.
''DUNSY''- Not bad, just try to make the letters about the same size,
''hpir'' good, practice makes perfect!
''kakajun''- stick to simples for now.
''kidreny!'' - I love the colors scheme on the first one! the letters look dope 2!
CRIT ME PLEASE! GOOD SHIT EVERYBODY, KEEP IT UP!

[NEZ89]

best i could do at the moment, hopefully u see what i'm getting at
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/1130/trstygtrr.jpg

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0607091636.jpg
Kem- Nice start man
Noise- Same as Kem, nice

[mtown]

reny: niceman, ilike your reny tag i only should lose that! thang

[fitzy36]

noise- its a good start
kem- same as noise
zarb- not really digging the attachment on the 'e' and I'm not a fan of the way you attached your letters, but besides that, pretty good simple

top 1 is wack, i know (colored it with crayolas too lol)
bottom 1 just a rough sketch, messed up 3d but you get the general look of it..

http://i44.tinypic.com/6xx9mw.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/125jfv7.jpg

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

what the fuck are you serious right now ruk just did that shit you cant bite make something else up and dont do it yet bc your simples arent good enough
and your shadeing looks like you tryed to mix 3d with it

[fitzy36]

what the fuck are you serious right now ruk just did that shit you cant bite make something else up and dont do it yet bc your simples arent good enough
and your shadeing looks like you tryed to mix 3d with it

i know what your saying about the shading 3d shit, but wtf are you talking about biting??

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

wait what is he saying u bit?

[fitzy36]

i have no clue

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

oh.lol

[Kaiser71]

Slipy...do you really see an R a U or a K in the word OMEN? How could he have bit RUK without writing a single one the same letters? And even if they did look similar....that's 'cus their simples...you can only have so much variation...

Unless you're talking about the second sketch. In which case I'm lost, because it doesn't resemble RUK's stuff at all.

Not trying to start beef...but if you're gonna call the kid out on biting...maybe you should make it clear what you think he bit?

[Sobad]

Stolen- That Crank is hella pro
The 35P(?) seems like the P is a bit more bubbley than the rest, still looking good though.
The bottom one seems like the T's are too far apart from the rest of the letters.

Zarb- Not really feeling the connections, just seem sort of out of place, otherwise very nice.


Just my two cents.

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

noo the conections he had in the pics b4 were the ones that ruk had in his bomb/peice thingy look for your self but he took them down bc he knows im right

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0607091636.jpg
Kem- Nice start man
Noise- Same as Kem, nice


http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/2470/06060917031.jpg
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/4074/downsized0606091703a1l.jpg

dose any one else see that or is it just me?

[NEZ89]

doesn't look right on any of them

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

ik it dosent lok right it snot mine but its still a bite i just wanted to prove my point

[KJay]

slipys right, zarb bites everything he sees around here.
omen i dig by the way

[Kaiser71]

My bad. I thouhgt slipy was tlaking to Omen. Yeah, I see the similarity now, but I think it's a bit too simple of an idea to relaly bite, but w/e. Personally, I don't think anyone should ever use them. They just look bad to me.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

Who cares there both toy as fuck
http://i40.tinypic.com/f51vtk.jpg
NEW SKETCH

[Sobad]

Vandel- Digging your letter structure, the 3D seems a bit off to me, could be wrong.

[peacebomb]

A bite is a fucking bite no way getting around it.

[PegCityBoy]

thats a fuckin hilarious thing to bite it's like biting one of the shitty mr wiggles or graff. creator fonts hoping that no one will catch it because we're all used to that wiggles "wildstyle" style

vandal - the AK are good the char, can and hand are lackin though also the bottom of the right leg of the A is a bit weird

[Zarb]

Its just a simple extension of letters, I dint think that was really considered a bite but whatever Im not even gonna start cause i know Ill probably lose.
Heres another Sketch, I obviously lost the extensions, trying to bend my bars a bit. Excuse the horrible K I ran out of room
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0607092210.jpg

Edit- Everything on this page was good.

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

you didnt youse bars man... here this is what bars are
http://i39.tinypic.com/rb9k3o.jpg
you can erase all the other lines

[(SoS)Viruz]

A lot of the pic in here have no flow at all. You all need to wrok on your flow.

[Stolen]

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/s.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/s2.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/kool.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/test.jpg
Of course I offer my crits as well...
''anarone''- im feeling the peice with the blue 3d and red outline however, U might wanna make the letters a little thicker, but if your trying to develop a certain style like that, by all means go for it, I would love to see how it turns up later.
''MaterStainers''- Im really feeling your style, put some color into that and post it!
''Kaiser71''- your shit is sick!
''whahappen''- Like slip said, make it thicker and tighten it! look around, and see the throws from more experienced artist, then compare it to yours and make corrections.
''Eack''- Keep that shit up, looks good man.
''remos''- I like that wise peice but W is way to that fuck out there, bring it closer with the other letters and your good.
''klic''- good shit bro. let me see your other stuff.
''Aseir''- Im really feeling the norse throw up in the 2nd peice, and the last peice is sweet!
''deco one''- Everything looks clean except for that arrow on the far right, it kinda looks like a penis. lol
''IKT''- The r and the e are 2 far from the letters, bring em in, and it will look much better.
''DUNSY''- Not bad, just try to make the letters about the same size,
''hpir'' good, practice makes perfect!
''kakajun''- stick to simples for now.
''kidreny!'' - I love the colors scheme on the first one! the letters look dope 2!
CRIT ME PLEASE! GOOD SHIT EVERYBODY, KEEP IT UP!

bump bump :D

[anarone]

http://i44.tinypic.com/rk2ahe.jpg bump

[mtown]

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/test.jpg

ya forgot one line of the 3d

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i39.tinypic.com/ajqttv.png

Data rock.

[Czar One]

Some wackness:
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/100_0779.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/100_0780.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/100_0782.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/100_0784.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/04-13-2009040500PM.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/bizar.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/poster.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/sirczar13.jpg

[KJay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3390/3608616824_75225792aa.jpg?v=0
bump earn czar

the rest of this page should go a bit simpler

[DUNSY]

czar i like your work
bigbluev = lolwtf ?
stolen, very nice i like your style


something i drew today

http://i39.tinypic.com/2qbhwkm.jpg

[rinoh]

hello im rinoh im new on this forum but not new to graf,i first wrote zane and now rinoh

[KJay]

dunsy,
are you blind? or just ignoring mine

u need to go simpler by the way

RZA <----- LIKE THAT

[Stolen]

bigblueviolence- colors are dope, cant read though!:D
Czar- I like your style, simple yet cool, add some color to that shit and spend some more time on it and you should produce something worth smoking a j 2.
anarone- you have your 3d down just work on letter structure.:p
kjay- glad to see your starting off simple, keep that shit up.
Dunsy-sweet color scheme!
p.s- i used to feed my gerbils, cannabis seeds. they loved that shit.;)

[Stolen]

Heroin produces a sleep dream like state, hence the chemical name is derived from the word sleep and morphine...''diacetylmorphine''.

Here's some old shit, what yall think?(I was not useing bars, back then i know, just thought id share.)
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/ok3.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/ok-1.jpg
(I did the above X while on the bottom X)
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/5674.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/ok.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/g5.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/g6.jpg

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/fotos2007.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/boo3.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/scrappydoo.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i43.tinypic.com/evdil2.jpg

[(SoS)Viruz]

Some wackness:
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/100_0779.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/100_0780.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/100_0782.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/100_0784.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/04-13-2009040500PM.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/bizar.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/poster.jpg
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/sirczar13.jpg

Yo where have you been. Its been a while

[Czar One]

Had school work I had to attend to that ate up a lot of my time.
What do you think of the pieces I posted?

[PegCityBoy]

las nights midnight sketch

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3413/3610066982_7fd65b92c0.jpg?v=0

czar shits fuckin hot
cyto still diggin it
stolen i like the x maybe do more of the other x
kjay looks good

[KRE1]

ey quick heads up: your not fucking cool by posting pictures of drugs. nobody cares that you're killing yourself. k thx.

and btw.. it makes you look like a fucking tool.

[DUNSY]

dunsy,
are you blind? or just ignoring mine

u need to go simpler by the way

RZA <----- LIKE THAT

was probably too baked last night and forgot you :D, wel it's simple but i like it good letters

and stolen

ROFL !!
--> "p.s- i used to feed my gerbils, cannabis seeds. they loved that shit"
lucky lucky gerbils ^^

[KJay]

stolen, u said ur old shit was before u used bars, but i dont see any in ur new stuff. and dunsy too, u both need to forget all of that. ur letters are undeveloped and dont look good. do exactly what spams doing, or ur just wasting ur time

cyto looks good. as for critting it, that M is definitly the weakest letter. ive seen u do other Ms that i thot were ur best, so maybe go with one of ur other ones

spam u might benefit from thinning ur bars out just alittle, but its legit. take ur time and itll develop

[anarone]

bigblueviolence- colors are dope, cant read though!:D
Czar- I like your style, simple yet cool, add some color to that shit and spend some more time on it and you should produce something worth smoking a j 2.
anarone- you have your 3d down just work on letter structure.:p
kjay- glad to see your starting off simple, keep that shit up.
Dunsy-sweet color scheme!
p.s- i used to feed my gerbils, cannabis seeds. they loved that shit.;)

whats wrong with the structure mate ?

[KJay]

he doesnt know, he doesnt have any

[Stussy]

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/8692/photo895.jpg
my entry in the mist battle that never happened

[KJay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3390/3608616824_75225792aa.jpg?v=0
looks good stussy, nice consistent style. u played the letter connections quite well

[Deck]

Stussy, your shit is so dope.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Had school work I had to attend to that ate up a lot of my time.
What do you think of the pieces I posted?

Like the Style you are developing keep working at it.

[Stolen]

ey quick heads up: your not fucking cool by posting pictures of drugs. nobody cares that you're killing yourself. k thx.

and btw.. it makes you look like a fucking tool.
1-Not trying to look ''cool'' specially on a forum.
2-I am not killing myself, ive done x a few times and had good ass experiences everytime. Plus I smoke weed.
3- I could care less if you dont care about me, I dont care about you.
:D out

[DUNSY]

Look mommy i can do bars !

http://i42.tinypic.com/zu2jkp.jpg

[HalfGangstaShit]

New shit old shit, I just got a scanner.. lol

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp277.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp28D.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/daR.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp2DB.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp2ED.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp300.jpg
My homie Nerds.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp319.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp329.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp340.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp359.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp37E.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp38E.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp39B.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3A8.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3D2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3DF.jpg

[NEZ89]

the firstone reminds me of nekst

[bak]

knar ur fills are fresh

stussy the letters are sick

mine isnt finished yet but i need some crits
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/06-09-09_1323.jpg

[HalfGangstaShit]

thanks bro.

Keep working on your letters man, try something simpler, maybe?
But nonetheless keep at it man.

*****

And yo NEZ, what do you mean by that?

[NEZ89]

reminded me of this
not sayin u bit
http://www.lataco.com/taco/wp-content/uploads/nekst_msk.jpg

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

las nights midnight sketch

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3413/3610066982_7fd65b92c0.jpg?v=0

czar shits fuckin hot
cyto still diggin it
stolen i like the x maybe do more of the other x
kjay looks good

this shit has absolutely no style to it.....sorry i jus think its way to boring i dont even consider it graffiti
nd that nekst is beautiful^^

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2m3mv55.jpg

[mekosbc]

knar-dope shit im lovin ur fills

[Sobad]

Bak- Your letters look decent, but I would loose the arrows and change the left side of the U, it feels out of place. The C could also be opened more, looks alittle like a backwards D. The 3D is off in several spots aswell. I like the Style and continuity, its just a few of the details that bother me.

[klic]

i cant do characters to save my life :(

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKPiece7.jpg

po was always the douchebag teletubby..

spam - start adding shit to it

chuy - loose the extensions

knar - the first one and second last are dope

[mekosbc]

a quick marker freestyle i didbecuz i havent posted blackbook flicks in maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaddd long
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0075J.jpg

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

meko thats pretty sick and so modest... a quick marker freestyle lol..

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/straightposek.jpg

[mekosbc]

well thatz what it is haha i found a random piece of paper on my desk and grabbed a few prizmas and a sharpie and 15mins laters that was the out come

[eel2]

http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/5164/sdc10617.jpg
meko it looks awesome
posek it loks pretty good i like it, how long have u been writing

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

off and on for a while... i duno a year to 2 years ish

[eel2]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3390/3608616824_75225792aa.jpg?v=0
looks good stussy, nice consistent style. u played the letter connections quite well

bump this freshness

[HalfGangstaShit]

thanks ya'll, meko i'm loving it man, tight shit. You just made me sketch some 15 min jam shit.

[bak]

Bak- Your letters look decent, but I would loose the arrows and change the left side of the U, it feels out of place. The C could also be opened more, looks alittle like a backwards D. The 3D is off in several spots aswell. I like the Style and continuity, its just a few of the details that bother me.

thanks everybody for the crits!!! bumb meko

[HalfGangstaShit]

well it wasn't really 15 min lol, but I'm stoned therefor I cannot draw for my life..

[HalfGangstaShit]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp4AD.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

KNAR - good fills but terrible structure

http://i42.tinypic.com/wi7qep.jpg

[HalfGangstaShit]

lol i know man. I really didnt give a fuck about them letters... But don't get me wrong though I wanna get better at that shit too, BTW i like that menek.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

I take it you're an artist that recently got into graff? Or maybe you just got an eye for what colors go together idk lol

[HalfGangstaShit]

.

[HalfGangstaShit]

lol yeah, "artist".
I've been doodling since I was jit though.

I'mma scan this charac i did today for class..

[HalfGangstaShit]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp5EB.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

dope^

[graffdabusup]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/0225jpg.jpg

[graffdabusup]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/0233jpg.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

MONE- first one is cool

http://i40.tinypic.com/15gyudk.jpg

[KRE1]

menek i like it

tha letters look a lil squished tho near tha end ... ur M is so dominant maybe try to have tha K flow more like tha M and not so much like bars? iono just my opinion

[Shurik*n]

alright i started like a week ago, so this is what i have now. yes it sux so please help me out!

o and here's also my alphabet for tagging

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/4658/dscn0532x.th.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn0532x.jpg)
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/4926/dscn0526h.th.jpg (http://img15.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn0526h.jpg)

[CrustOner]

New to Graff thread.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Kre1- tried taking ur advice

METEK

http://i39.tinypic.com/algqqu.jpg

[foureyes]

Nice!!!!^^^

[PegCityBoy]

Kre1- tried taking ur advice

METEK

http://i39.tinypic.com/algqqu.jpg

k's a lot better also metek > menek jus my 2cents you're rockin t's twice as hard as n's

[KRE1]

metek thats very clean breh. tha letters flow real nice except to me tha M is still clunky.. tha bottom left leg at least. but tha T does look clean and im diggin tha fill color.

keep it up

[mekosbc]

metek-i like ur m ha ha fuckidy ha ill prolly bite off it in my next sketch but ill change it up a bit, and all ur letters are pretty much on point besides your k, i meko and i know k's can be a bitch....but work on ur k's bro...

[Mr yarbles]

k's a lot better also metek > menek jus my 2cents you're rockin t's twice as hard as n's

fuCKING FIRE

bUT YOUR SECOND E IS LACKIN

sorry caps lock

[mrDOPE]

http://img31.imageshack.us/i/p01060921k.jpg

what do you think? i think i need to make the bars of the Z a litte bit smaller.

i retraced it with paint

[polski24]

this is my first peice

[peace89]

HalfGangstaShit: haha love that character
Crits please

[Stussy]

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/8291/photo898k.jpg
crits? not to sure about the Z?
cyto- nice simples, but take some more time when you draw in make something real nice
Peace- Its a good start. solid letter. i would just try and do more than just AH.
halfgangsta- your character and throws are on track, keep at it. the letter in that simple? arent to great, try and make that K fit alittle better

[mekosbc]

Rayz-we need to do an exchange man shit is freshh

[garbage down tha way]

MEKO! i posted this a while ago i dont think you saw it hah

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0691.jpg

[remos]

that meko is dope
heres a better pic of my blue one from a few pages back
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/7-1.jpg
and a newer one, i like the letters they just dont seem to go together or at least the w dosent
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/6-1.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Wise- Your I is too thick on the first one, and I'd fix the W on the 2nd, also maybe make your E a little thinner, keep it up, I like the fills and your getting shit down

I need help making this flow better, I am thinking about lowering the first leg on the M a tad, but I don't/can't decide whether to make the T longer, Whether to stretch the Base of the T out beyond the E or to make them flow together... idk I also cant decide to make the K taller or what... take a look and see if you can think of anything that would help

http://i41.tinypic.com/2jbti8i.jpg

[remos]

i would honestly just move the m closer and try to connect the letters where they overlap, it might look better after its coloured with shadow and shit too, just try something like that

[seywhat]

that m is dope, try makin the e's with bars instead of curves and the ends not so long, make the t bigger both like your were saying and taller, make the spine of the k straighter, let the top kick connect, swing the bottom one out more and try to make symmetrical with the m. also dont be afraid to overlap, thats where flow gets to build. keep sketchin man, your progressin quick

[mekosbc]

meko! I posted this a while ago i dont think you saw it hah

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/img_0691.jpg

damn man i didnt see that shit!!!! Haha im sooo gonna try to paint that if you dont mind but ill change it a lil bit lol then ill shout you out on it!! That shit is siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiccckk!!! And ill post a hoer up that ill sketch out

[funhouseXcast]

meko- likin the frozen looking outline with the icicles or whatever you wanna call em
wise- top peice is nicer, but good work on both, id test out making ur i fatter on top instead of bottom
metek- thats a nice little start of a sketch u got there, the last one, id get rid of the dot before the T though

[milk boxx]

hoer that meko is dope
rayz that mouth in the A is a+.
cyto move that m closer to the etek let it overlap a bit

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0652.jpg
crits on this? just trying a different style

[garbage down tha way]

damn man i didnt see that shit!!!! Haha im sooo gonna try to paint that if you dont mind but ill change it a lil bit lol then ill shout you out on it!! That shit is siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiccckk!!! And ill post a hoer up that ill sketch out

go right ahead my brother. excited to see the sketch.

[KJay]

exchange me anyone???
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3599/3617119523_d998e7184c.jpg?v=0
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/2673/jungle.jpg
garbage down the way, and rays, both killin it
milk box thas a nice lookin simple
cyto im relly diggin this one, maybe adjust the E's, but either way it looks good
w
ise a pretty legit style, keep it up

not really crits, this whole page has got it figured out

[408Bomber]

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/8291/photo898k.jpg
crits? not to sure about the Z?
cyto- nice simples, but take some more time when you draw in make something real nice
Peace- Its a good start. solid letter. i would just try and do more than just AH.
halfgangsta- your character and throws are on track, keep at it. the letter in that simple? arent to great, try and make that K fit alittle better
Maybe just make the z straight at the top also? I like it anywayz dude.Sick shit!

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/87/l_1f77489eee2047dfbad9714acc393682.jpg
A simple I did today... No I'm not writing Alpha, it just happened to be the word I used.

[KJay]

exchange me anyone???
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3599/3617119523_d998e7184c.jpg?v=0
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/2673/jungle.jpg
garbage down the way, and rays, both killin it
milk box thas a nice lookin simple
cyto im relly diggin this one, maybe adjust the E's, but either way it looks good
w
ise a pretty legit style, keep it up

not really crits, this whole page has got it figured out
bombardment

[Snew]

metek- good bars, i like the first piece on this page better, the E's in your second one are a little too round, mess with the flow..
Piece89- nice simp..
Rayz- i can dig that.. look up a guy that writes T-rex out of chicago.. i saw one of his freights and looked him up.. hes a killer on the streets too.. similar styles id check it if i were you..
Izoe- the second piece is something to be reconed with.. pretty stellar.. i like everything about it.. especially the o.. the connection coming out of the o is dope..
milk boxx- i really feel your E.. thats a style of e ive been working with too.. cut out the extensions on the n and e.. they are a bit too much.. but work off of that E, its the strongest letter..
Hoer- last but not least.. you own strait letters.. your style is where it needs to be.. do some freights or something so i can bench some of your work rollin through..

this is gunna be the last thing on this page, so get ready for a bump... a new one and a few older ones i need crits on to develop the style..

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo86.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo79.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo80.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo64.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo66.jpg
seriously give me crits..

[HalfGangstaShit]

snew, well put "Just give it time", you're on the right path bro just try to separate the letters a little bit and see how that works out.
****
anyone wanna do an exchange?

[KnoxIn]

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/2503/p6113736.jpg
VILE
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5928/p6113737.jpg
JUST SHAPES
ok haven't been on in a while but here is a little of the stuff i have done some of the stuff i think is better than the rest, i know with the first one i think the E is horrible but still crits??

snew- i like your shit especially your fills, as for advice on style i dunno maybe just start bending the bars and shit just experiment.
stussy- only thing is i would lose the arrows around it all and the Z looks alot like a 2 so it kinda looks like ray2 but whatever
izoe- just watch proportions other than that not too bad

[e97]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/05-26-09_0516.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/05-26-09_0535.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/05-26-09_0519.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/05-26-09_0517.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/05-26-09_0518.jpg
crits?

[KJay]

snew, well put "Just give it time", you're on the right path bro just try to separate the letters a little bit and see how that works out.
****
anyone wanna do an exchange?

i am down for that exchange

[garbage down tha way]

ever the first one is flat out terrible, which is why i dont understand how the second one is so decent. definitely keep going with that style. keep playing with the letters until you get your structure exactly how you like it and then fuck with the swirls and shit coming off it.

[polski24]

this is my first peice

somebody crriitt this lol

[jupsick]

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/1411/06120920331.jpg
ever didnt like that first one one bit
others are chill

[KJay]

for an exchange with halfgangstashit
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/8629/sdc10647.jpg

[OctoVenom]

i guess this goes here?
http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn61/cyber_kaos/011.jpg

[ReKoNe~!]

work on your letter structure and 3d
the fill looks neat tho

[thebigman]

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq66/delawarekid302/trend.jpg
critics????

[Reincarnation]

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/2503/p6113736.jpg
VILE
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5928/p6113737.jpg
JUST SHAPES
ok haven't been on in a while but here is a little of the stuff i have done some of the stuff i think is better than the rest, i know with the first one i think the E is horrible but still crits??

snew- i like your shit especially your fills, as for advice on style i dunno maybe just start bending the bars and shit just experiment.
stussy- only thing is i would lose the arrows around it all and the Z looks alot like a 2 so it kinda looks like ray2 but whatever
izoe- just watch proportions other than that not too bad
Your missing a bit of 3D on the Vile

[mmmmtasty905]

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t51/thedop/DSC04359.jpg

rave

[garbage down tha way]

that rave is good stuff my brother. the toy forum doesnt see much good stuff anymore.

[salty302]

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0399.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0349.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0343.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0341.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0327.jpg
any suggestions

[salty302]

crits?

[KnoxIn]

^^ lose all the wiggles in your shit do straight bars well not straight like you can bend em just no wiggles i dunno how to explain it

[KnoxIn]

hey anyone want to do a handsyle x-change i have been tryin to get one that looks good for VILE but i cant get it so exchange people just pm me with what you write

[CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K]

that rave is good stuff my brother. the toy forum doesnt see much good stuff anymore.


thanks broo

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

filled it in lolz

http://i42.tinypic.com/ayrh4h.jpg

[KnoxIn]

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/2503/p6113736.jpg
VILE
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5928/p6113737.jpg
JUST SHAPES
ok haven't been on in a while but here is a little of the stuff i have done some of the stuff i think is better than the rest, i know with the first one i think the E is horrible but still crits??

snew- i like your shit especially your fills, as for advice on style i dunno maybe just start bending the bars and shit just experiment.
stussy- only thing is i would lose the arrows around it all and the Z looks alot like a 2 so it kinda looks like ray2 but whatever
izoe- just watch proportions other than that not too bad

bump for crits

[adreniline_zero]

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p297/skye_038/DSC00901.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p297/skye_038/skelibitch.jpg

bleh random bored sketches

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Knoxin- fix E on the first peice, keep doing what you're doing but that second peice is headed in the wrong direction.

[thebigman]

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq66/delawarekid302/trend.jpg
bump for criticssss???????

[garbage down tha way]

adrenalin zero wayyyyy too much jose posada influence on the second one.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/2503/p6113736.jpg
VILE
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5928/p6113737.jpg
JUST SHAPES
ok haven't been on in a while but here is a little of the stuff i have done some of the stuff i think is better than the rest, i know with the first one i think the E is horrible but still crits??

snew- i like your shit especially your fills, as for advice on style i dunno maybe just start bending the bars and shit just experiment.
stussy- only thing is i would lose the arrows around it all and the Z looks alot like a 2 so it kinda looks like ray2 but whatever
izoe- just watch proportions other than that not too bad
your getting dope at this 3d shit bro!

[408Bomber]

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/87/l_1f77489eee2047dfbad9714acc393682.jpg
A simple I did today... No I'm not writing Alpha, it just happened to be the word I used.
bump for critz!!

[thebigman]

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq66/delawarekid302/trend.jpg
critss????

[Snew]

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo86.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo79.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo80.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo64.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo66.jpg
seriously give me crits..

Bump last page.. i seriously need crits guys.. i gave tons..

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

That last peice is dope as fuck, the N needs a little work but that S and E are hot I guess work on making your N and W as sweet as your S and E

[PegCityBoy]

this page is self bumpin harder than 2 15's

[CrustOner]

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq66/delawarekid302/trend.jpg
critss????

Tell me this is a joke, or go to the New to Graff thread.

[Mr yarbles]

your getting dope at this 3d shit bro!

You kidding?
That shit is wack.
Idk all that 3d bullshit is wack to me especially that one.
Just looks fucking stupid and dosn't ever flow at all.

Not everyone can be like dane or whatever the fuck his name is so stop trying you all fail at it.

[Croat]

snew- looks clean
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/1062/seonewhiteandblack.jpg
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/7274/80221461.jpg
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/4537/bilde033.jpg
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/9738/raymanse.jpg
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9126/ferdig.jpg

[DUNSY]

Croat- love it !

http://i39.tinypic.com/2j5gsb6.jpg

[rewz]

http://i44.tinypic.com/296etmu.jpg

[rewz]

the e sux i know

[CrustOner]

Rewz, spell "Fuck" right. It makes you look dumb otherwise. and the fade and outline is nice, but the rest sucks. The old man doesn't look very good.Trying way too hard with his face.
Dunsy, that's a sweet weed monster, but remember, your graffiti is lacking. And your tag sucks.
Croat, those characters are sick as fuck. Your coloring is clean, too. However, your lettering isn't very good, at least not for such a short name as SE. Your tag is ugly. If you want to progress, the ONE in the first one and the character with his tongue out, or that last one is a step in another direction as well.

[LIZARD]

croat-the ray man,daredevil,and iron man characters are sick

[KJay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3599/3617119523_d998e7184c.jpg?v=0
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/2673/jungle.jpg
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/8629/sdc10647.jpg
snew i like ur stuff, uve got well done simples, keep it up

[milk boxx]

hoer that meko is dope
rayz that mouth in the A is a+.
cyto move that m closer to the etek let it overlap a bit

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0652.jpg
crits on this? just trying a different style

bump

[DUNSY]

Croat- love it !

http://i39.tinypic.com/2j5gsb6.jpg

Bump

+new one

http://i39.tinypic.com/mm52cp.jpg

[DirtyDozen520]

diggin the weed one, not really the 2nd

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/Image010.jpg
the E is huge i know, but yea, crits?

[KJay]

unless people start giving crits this thread is useless..

[KnoxIn]

dunsy- your simples look good stick to those your trying to hard with your second one dont do extensions and watch your proportions
dirty- i really dont like that at all... do straighter bars with good proportions and dont cover your letters so much

[DirtyDozen520]

ya i dnt like it either aha

[Lunchbox]

It seems like people say it alot, but goddamn this thread really is full of horrible shit. Especially lately.

[KJay]

comeon dude, my shit aint thaaat bad

[salty302]

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0399.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0349.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0343.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0341.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0327.jpg
any suggestions/crits
bump

[Lunchbox]

comeon dude, my shit aint thaaat bad

Your's aint, but goddamn everyone elses on this page.

[DUNSY]

More simples

http://i39.tinypic.com/2rqzfns.jpg

[zenne]

dunsy, your characs are hot, but your connections are a horrible lol. one thing ive noticed about connections is zig-zag shapes almost NEVER work. just a heads up.

[seywhat]

dunsy- letter structure is still lackin, you need to start workin with bars to get shit right. bars dont have to be straight, make sure they all stay the same width at this point in time though
spa- same crits as above, and you dont need to bump somethin like that over and over.
dirty- even with bombs you gots to start simple
milk- lose the addons on the e and f, and keep it up
izoe- im not really feelin the last two styles, but thats just me. they aint bad just need work, the top is a nice simp though
rewz- i like the j and s, form the e and a similar to them
croat- your letters aint terrible, but def need work. dont worry about extensions, just get them letters down
snew- im feelin the "thick strokes, good folks" piece, keep playin with that styles

negros need to give real crits in this thread. its about progress.
toybb used to be bangin, lets get all the toys started right...

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Your's aint, but goddamn everyone elses.

what the fuck are you talking about? Are me and Snew included in this whole generalization of yours? want to battle?

[acereborn]

i think everyone in this thread could use one piece of advice, and be done with it....

stop posting everything you do. instead of saying 'i dont like my E' or 'i didnt spend a lot of time on it' then make it so you DO like your E, or you do spend some time on it.... why would you post something that you know you can do better? just fix it, and keep fixing it, then once you like it and theres nothing you can see wrong with it.... THEN you can ask for crits

[Cure Sure Lure]

i think everyone in this thread could use one piece of advice, and be done with it....

stop posting everything you do. instead of saying 'i dont like my E' or 'i didnt spend a lot of time on it' then make it so you DO like your E, or you do spend some time on it.... why would you post something that you know you can do better? just fix it, and keep fixing it, then once you like it and theres nothing you can see wrong with it.... THEN you can ask for crits


Nodding head in agreement.

[DirtyDozen520]

ya i agree too, my bad

[jupsick]

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/5220/06140913471.jpg

[KidReny!]

wats with all the dots on the outside yo, your pencil stokes should all be going in the same direnction and the extra lines besides the letter should be out, its nice though

[BigBlueViolence]

I dig it, jups.
you need a bottom for your R, though.

[bloodlandmoney]

i got cut from the big dog thread... i guess big dogs just like that euro steezy
http://i607.photobucket.com/albums/tt158/bloodlandmoney/1245047733.jpg
http://i607.photobucket.com/albums/tt158/bloodlandmoney/1245047408.jpg
http://i607.photobucket.com/albums/tt158/bloodlandmoney/1245047602.jpg
http://i607.photobucket.com/albums/tt158/bloodlandmoney/1245047741.jpg
http://i607.photobucket.com/albums/tt158/bloodlandmoney/1245047736.jpg

http://i607.photobucket.com/albums/tt158/bloodlandmoney/1245047409.jpg

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

thats pretty dope.especially the hands...idk why theyd drop you that shit is cool man.

[seywhat]

handy's is on point, diggin the characters too. try to define your letters more in your pieces though

[thebigman]

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq66/delawarekid302/trend.jpg
critics

[zenne]

read the sig above you^

[thebigman]

jupsick im feeling that style except that extension on the r makes it hard to tell its an r

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

attention to all you lazy fuckers who are trying to get crits.give crits to get crits or gtfo.whats the point in this thread if no one gives crits?none at all.it will take five minutes of your time and will save this thread from being completely fucking useless.




that is all.

[OctoVenom]

fuck how is this the toy section when i see sick shit on here i dont understand

[KRE1]

mero ftw

bloodandmoney: not sure who told you that you belong in this thread but you definitely dont that stuff is real good.

[CrustOner]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/0615091615.jpg
Crits?
Trend: New to Graff thread, I've told you before.
bloodlandmoney: GTFO. At least go to the intermediate thread, man. haha.
Jupsick: Work on that R. Sweet simple though.
Dunsy: Forget the drips and the cap on the I. (for SIMPLE).
Salty: Keep practicing man, and work on your handy.

[KRE1]

crust im not one to talk since my letters suck balls but about that color scheme tha first thing that came to mind was a medieval fair or somethin.. not sayin its bad but personally i wouldnt use those colors together.

[CrustOner]

haha the colors look a hell of a lot better in person, that's a cell phone picture.

[sketch_three]

yea but the letterererereres argggh weak

[KRE1]

haha the colors look a hell of a lot better in person, that's a cell phone picture.

haha ye i hate it when they dont show up tha way it actually looks in person. by tha way imma PM you latr bout that ink

[SSichiban1]

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d57/XXXylophone/ssi1.jpg
new/hand fell apart writing ichiban. even though its a shitty block letter style anyway. but yeah done voicing my pity.

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d57/XXXylophone/ssi2.jpg
test run, crits please

Crust- i see what theyre saying with the color set its still pretty spot on though

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0002-4.jpg
^^^^Its been a while but can I get some crits?

Mero-STFU befor I post your frist entry with the mist battle for lolz. jk
Jup- Work on your flow, but your letters are pretty stuctured keep sketchin
SS- you basing your throw off of other pplz. No callin it a bite but its look pretty influenced. Try to be orginal, and work on you handstyle.
Trend- Your tryin to hard with the R and your N look like a lower case H. work on that
Crust- Use bars....Cause your structure is lacking...
Blood- your Throwie is hot but I not feelin the peices.

[OctoVenom]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0002-4.jpg
^^^^Its been a while but can I get some crits?

Mero-STFU befor I post your frist entry with the mist battle for lolz. jk
Jup- Work on your flow, but your letters are pretty stuctured keep sketchin
SS- you basing your throw off of other pplz. No callin it a bite but its look pretty influenced. Try to be orginal, and work on you handstyle.
Trend- Your tryin to hard with the R and your N look like a lower case H. work on that
Crust- Use bars....Cause your structure is lacking...
Blood- your Throwie is hot but I not feelin the peices.that ill my n1gga

[Dr. Fisher]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2456/3572960754_d5dd03f60f.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3612/3628997770_71d557032f.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3558/3606154333_cf05ef686b.jpg?v=0


IT'S OK?

[00-made-00]

Dr.fish - the top sketch is nice man, just work with that and you'll do well.
SOS - too wild too soon, i don't think you need to put extensions on every letter, good letters are not made by extensions, there made by good letters.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/pila.jpg
A simple i like.

[(SoS)Viruz]

I feel it Kabre told me to take off the Point stuff too. :)

[MyNameIsMAX]

http://i564.photobucket.com/albums/ss82/wmountfort/macssimple.jpg

Critics would be great. *EDIT* Cause those crayola pencil crayons and markers are the best for graffiti NOT.

Dr. Fisher - Im feelin the top and second sketch, not so much the third, the Z seems too skinny too me in th center but the others are a pretty good start

Jups - Good handstyles, the R seems like it is too covered near the bottom maybe try different layering

[Dr. Fisher]

Dr.fish - the top sketch is nice man, just work with that and you'll do well.
SOS - too wild too soon, i don't think you need to put extensions on every letter, good letters are not made by extensions, there made by good letters.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/pila.jpg
A simple i like.

thank you

[Mr yarbles]

Dr.fish - the top sketch is nice man, just work with that and you'll do well.
SOS - too wild too soon, i don't think you need to put extensions on every letter, good letters are not made by extensions, there made by good letters.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/pila.jpg
A simple i like.

This shit is hella dope man you should get this up

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

Mero-STFU befor I post your frist entry with the mist battle for lolz. jk


you wouldnt dAre....



would you???

[SSichiban1]

sos-thats slick man. and your right, im just looking for a starting point. thanks though ill work on it
fish-those are lookin solid, 2nd one has a nice style to it

[salty302]

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0413.jpg
critz besides clean it up
and i write spa not spaak =]

[seywhat]

yo pila, i think if you put a little add-on to your p like the a it would balance it out a little more, you feel me?

[funhouseXcast]

^^word

[KnoxIn]

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/3103/p6163746.jpg
hey i have been workin on this piece thats going to say CITY but i cant get the goddamn Y i have been workin on it for like 2 weeks and i cant get a good Y so anyone want to sketch a good one with some style in it for me?? ill do a exchange or somethin i just need a good Y and if you can try and get it to flow with this ^^^

[salty302]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=4584&page=61
look at the dyse and easy shit in this link if u want a y

[diggitydoggz]

dr. fisher - not sure about the first one, the second two are decent simps, just fix that k on the last one its fukked up looking

pila - nice, clean simple.. not much really to crit about it.. i like that swirly shit though.

macs - keep working at it, try using bars, and ur first two letters don't match the last two at all in style, thickness, or pretty much anything other than color

spaak - use bars. i hate to sound like a prick but review the new to graff thread and go simpler until the really simple ones look mad nice. the letters don't really look like they match and the k looks really messed up

KnoxIn - that looks like it's going to be pretty sick. the C and T look mad cool, especially with the 3d and all.

here's some new shit i've been working on

http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/241/img000846.jpg

http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/849/img000849.jpg

[Shurik*n]

macs: try to widen the m's middle line a bit..same with the a. we'll see what we got from there

[LUCIFER_RISING]

diggity your pics arent showing up for me
try it again

[diggitydoggz]

that's weird, i've never had imageshack not work for me. but here's some direct links:

http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/241/img000846.jpg
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/849/img000849.jpg

[KnoxIn]

http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/4241/p6163755.jpg
CITY
i am so dissapointed in how this turned out background is alright but i thought it would look weird if i used colored pencils so i tryed shading with my markers didn't work so i couldn't really do the whole 3-d affect and the Y is horrible i just dont like it but still crits??

diggity- there alright just watch your proportions and your little extensions on your letters some of those are off

salty- the SPA looks good but not the others keep at it though
pila- good simple

[salty302]

i like that background...i only like that S in my spa thinking about using it just rounding curve more

[Dr. Fisher]

my first throw up and "sticker"...
http://up83.siz.co.il/up2/mzzydjzwz5il.jpg

http://up81.siz.co.il/up3/zymtkzfok3jg.jpg

[ding1]

quick one
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3325/3607760900_d2137560ef.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3325/3607760900_d2137560ef.jpg

[MyNameIsMAX]

http://i564.photobucket.com/albums/ss82/wmountfort/macssimple.jpg

Critics would be great. *EDIT* Cause those crayola pencil crayons and markers are the best for graffiti NOT.

Dr. Fisher - Im feelin the top and second sketch, not so much the third, the Z seems too skinny too me in th center but the others are a pretty good start

Jups - Good handstyles, the R seems like it is too covered near the bottom maybe try different layering

critics please i gave em, id like some back please.

[Shurik*n]

macs - keep working at it, try using bars, and ur first two letters don't match the last two at all in style, thickness, or pretty much anything other than color


macs: Try to widen the m's middle line a bit..same with the a. We'll see what we got from there

...we have been

[diggitydoggz]

this doesn't apply to you (the guy who just asked for crits) but for anyone who is putting up pics without giving crits, GIVE CRITS TO GET THEM, this forum isn't just for people to help you it's for you to help us too. no matter how noob you are you can always offer something of value.

[KRE1]

stop all your fucking complaining and just DO.

ur fuckin lucky u guys even GET crits.

[bak]

pila nice and flan looks great

fish great concept i like the name

city the backround is cool but idk about the letters atleast go bigger with them because it looks awkward

i would say quick piece but i've been working on it off and on
crits
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/securedownload.jpg

[Lunchbox]

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/securedownload.jpg

Good to see your trying to use bars, the thing you need to work on is just placing the letters better, from there itll be golden

[bak]

yeah thanks i re did it but the u is always a lil bitch to me haha but im working on it

[OctoVenom]

http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn61/cyber_kaos/014.jpg
http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn61/cyber_kaos/SDC10037.jpg
http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn61/cyber_kaos/SDC10009.jpg

[MyNameIsMAX]

macs: try to widen the m's middle line a bit..same with the a. we'll see what we got from there

http://i564.photobucket.com/albums/ss82/wmountfort/Macsattack.jpg
http://i564.photobucket.com/albums/ss82/wmountfort/Macs.jpg

I drew these up before i seen this post looks alot better not sure about the S on the second one. :confused:

[MyNameIsMAX]

OctoVenom i like the second pic, the can in the back pretty sick i donno about the wings though. lookin pretty sick

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

ding thats a nice simple right there.....all u other kids needa do tha same

[funhouseXcast]

chuy- nice lettering, color hurts my eyes, but in a way i think thats a cool thing
cyber- first peice is my nice, but i might make the bottom line on the "E" a little thicker, second peice, might wanna work on your wings but i like the idea
macs- nice simps, on the second peice, try to keep your drips straight.

[KRE1]

cyber im not feeling that B at allllll but i do like where ur going with ur work ...

macs diggin tha simps. i dont kno about that extension u dropped down on tha M in tha first flick ... could b construed as a H. i would tighten errything up in tha second flick and def work on that S

[bak]

yeah that can is fresh and macs that red one is good work with that

and yeah dude i fucked up with the red prisma it wasnt suppose to be that dark =[

[bak]

yeah that can is fresh and macs that red one is good work with that

and yeah dude i fucked up with the red prisma it wasnt suppose to be that dark =[

[gash77]

Crits:
Macs- For the the red one fix the M a lil cause it kinda looks like an H. For the blue one I'd remove the bubbles and drips just for now.
Cyber- I like those accept the middle one, its hard to tell that the 3rd letter is a B. And on the 3rd peice I'd remove the extension coming from the top of the R. Those colours are also really nicee.
Chuy- Lookin good, not much for the colours though. And your 3D is kinda weird on the C.
Krep- Good simple, but Id make the top bar of the E more straight.

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/9716/1000225a.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/i/1000225a.jpg/)

[KnoxIn]

Hey anyone want to do a exchange im tryin to get a variety in my style so i gotta try different letters pm me if your down

[Church]

Crits:
Macs- For the the red one fix the M a lil cause it kinda looks like an H. For the blue one I'd remove the bubbles and drips just for now.
Cyber- I like those accept the middle one, its hard to tell that the 3rd letter is a B. And on the 3rd peice I'd remove the extension coming from the top of the R. Those colours are also really nicee.
Chuy- Lookin good, not much for the colours though. And your 3D is kinda weird on the C.
Krep- Good simple, but Id make the top bar of the E more straight.

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/9716/1000225a.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/i/1000225a.jpg/)
I'm really like the colors you used on that, they are sort of unusual. Interesting letter setup also.

[LUCIFER_RISING]

krep that looks pretty solid
im not a fan of that e though
macs keep your bars the same width and your letters the same style
http://i845.photobucket.com/albums/ab12/walletinyourfrontpocket/DSC03317.jpg

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

yo gash you down for a exchange

[ding1]

just a tryout 'still warkin on my simples .
very quick freestyle all the letters are fallin
http://i40.tinypic.com/k2mgqx.jpg

[HëRbN]

Some of the latest works.
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/106/m_c048bac664284a73846faea5a035e769.jpg
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/108/l_d12c7b3fd4cd42a6bd3fe30bb4acd66d.jpg
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/76/l_778b208e720e42a0960f94f38b1511ae.jpg
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/74/l_bfe57a4899a84e4787f647171da63f2c.jpg

[KnoxIn]

http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/4241/p6163755.jpg
CITY
i am so dissapointed in how this turned out background is alright but i thought it would look weird if i used colored pencils so i tryed shading with my markers didn't work so i couldn't really do the whole 3-d affect and the Y is horrible i just dont like it but still crits??

diggity- there alright just watch your proportions and your little extensions on your letters some of those are off

salty- the SPA looks good but not the others keep at it though
pila- good simple

bump for crits, and anyone down for a exchange pm me im tryin to get this style down so gotta try different shit but dont pm me if your goin to half ass it

[DollarCans]

http://i44.tinypic.com/9jzq13.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/wbwk5c.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/30t1cfl.jpg

PM me with critics please. i painted today and it didnt turn out so hot. im losing inspiration.

[OctoVenom]

thanks everyone!!!!!!!

[Dr. Fisher]

my first throw up and "sticker"...
http://up83.siz.co.il/up2/mzzydjzwz5il.jpg
http://up81.siz.co.il/up3/zymtkzfok3jg.jpg

[diggitydoggz]

fisher - keep practicing, i guess nice first try, long way to go though.
dollarcans - simpler, there's no structure.
herbn - i like the yellow one a lot, not really diggin the notches in the green one
ding1 - that shit's hot


here's one i made yesterday
http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/2268/img000856.jpg

anybody down for an exchange?

[PegCityBoy]

yo herbn shits hot, i dunno if i like the whole diagonal thing though

[KRE1]

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/7373/001xks.jpg

somethin i been workin on tha last half hour

[Tapn]

Alright i just started and ive been working on my block letters and trying to keep it simple. ive tried to work on my letter structure alot and filled a few pages in a notebook with the letters from my keyboard. Please give me alot of crit and tips if you dont mind because i am just a silly inexperienced toy. Also sorry for the shitty cell phone pics, i cant find my cam.
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj166/b-runge/TAPN-1.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj166/b-runge/TApn1.jpg
be as harsh as you would like, everything helps.