Blackbooks

[LeaksOne]

http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/5508/screencapture8r.png

are you name searchin or jus fuckin around with different letters?

[B.S. POLICE]

diff letters

[KaSe_One]

http://i41.tinypic.com/2ekubr5.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/af7lsk.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/ipqcuc.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/11lif0i.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/2uoi43c.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/4sl1mv.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2rr0yl3.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/29xdoxx.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/wi0ppt.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2ivzoyb.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/bj9vdw.jpg


what yall think

[StayHyE]

holy resize batman

[KaSe_One]

holy resize batman

lol i forget how

[StayHyE]

lol i forget how

www.tinypic.com

to rehost the pics...pick the message board 640x480 option. under the resize section.

[KaSe_One]

www.tinypic.com

to rehost the pics...pick the message board 640x480 option. under the resize section.

good looks

[dim]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3590/3636260964_e5a4f98728_o.jpg
just thought id throw this in here

[Stussy]

***** where my exchange?:confused:

[bak]

ware that second one is legit

[HAIRCUT]

ware that second one is legit

word. except for the little loop thing in the top of the a. imo. so who cares.

[hardwares]

you should have seen my throws like 6 months ago. its was all about the loops. now i cut down a shit ton, i think that one there was accidental anyway.

[hardwares]

***** where my exchange?:confused:

stussy you down with an exchange?

[Stussy]

what kind?

[hardwares]

up to you, id be down with a throwup exchange personally.

dim- that throw is clean as fuck.
kase - lovin the simps, but you need work on your bubble.

[idk401]

the 3d is wack comment?
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/222016.jpg

[bak]

ware would u wanna do an exchange?

i got decent throws but im not creative with them
i can see ur trouble with pieces tho am better with those

[bak]

ware would u wanna do an exchange?

i got decent throws but im not creative with them
i can see ur trouble with pieces tho am better with those

[hardwares]

yeah for sure hit me up with a piece and ill hit you with a throw. PM me what you write.

idk - that would look better if you didnt overlap the 3d and fuck it up in other places. so youre spot on with that comment. also - try to stylize your S a bit more, its a little too simple. and the bars dont match up.

[Dewster_OnE]

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f367/Dewster88/photo00452.jpg
havent posted in a while quick pen sketch

[KidReny!]

that has no flow dog you gotta work on ur proportions, and go to a more simpler style

[hardwares]

thats ill. dewey where you at? im pretty sure i saw a dewey hand somewhere in socal.

[Dewster_OnE]

nah man im in rhode island

[Snew]

Rihno(i think)- dope throw.. spot on..
Skie- its alright.. starting out right.. work on your proportions and space out your letters more and keep them on a strait line for now..
Kase- keep puttin in work in them books.. its starting to look good.. good bars for the most part..
Dewey- work with proportions and letter spacing.. they dont need to overlap quite as much.. but the letters themselves dont look bad at all.. the w does kind of kill the flow tho..

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo87.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo88.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo89.jpg

some crits would be appreciated..

[Graff J up]

snew-i really like the first outta all of them its ill
dewey-work on your proportions and your overlapping to much
skie- i would try to make it straight and not so much overlapping...

eh some shit i was messing with...critiques?
http://i41.tinypic.com/30caqs2.jpg:rolleyes:

[Snew]

the E doesnt work well with the other letters.. and id like to see the n without the first vertical bar extended..maybe cut it strait across and round it out.. the a and z are solid tho.. good structure.. except the bottom bar of the z needs to be bigger..

[Graff J up]

yeah i know about the e it looks weird
and ok imma try the n thing and see how it works

[Aerosoloholic]

Rihno(i think)- dope throw.. spot on..
Skie- its alright.. starting out right.. work on your proportions and space out your letters more and keep them on a strait line for now..
Kase- keep puttin in work in them books.. its starting to look good.. good bars for the most part..
Dewey- work with proportions and letter spacing.. they dont need to overlap quite as much.. but the letters themselves dont look bad at all.. the w does kind of kill the flow tho..

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo87.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo88.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo89.jpg

some crits would be appreciated..
ditch that wack style lol

[Graff J up]

helllll noo
that shits unique *****hh

[Snew]

ditch that wack style lol

take it easy haus.. its called developing a style and working with it to be original.. not to produce the same shit as everyone else.. get off your powertrip dumbfuck..

[weakfingers]

All the recent ish has been good, Sorry if I ruin the streak with bad stuff.

I REALLY like the original SNEW ish, That stuff remids me kinda like otols sketches... (http://www.flickr.com/photos/tags/otol/)


Ive been looking at mecro's stuff lately and its so sick, i just had to do a small bite...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture45.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture44.jpghttp://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture43.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture42-1.jpg

[DUNSY]

dewster i would really like to see that in color

snew your second and 3th are ill

squint, some good stuff original idea's like the one with the bullet but you have to practice more and perfectionise (is that a word) it


http://i44.tinypic.com/2jepldc.jpg

[Aesir]

lol weakfingers, I was gunna call you out on biting mecro before I read what you wrote.

[HalfGangstaShit]

Weakfingers, that ain't small bite.. That's a fucking chomp!!
Ni66a bite the concept not the execution. there are so many other ways you could've done that.

SNEW I like your flow mane. Though always watch out for them grown letters, like your W in the last one. other than that shit's kosher by my standards.. (lol like it matters)

KASE I like what i see man, you gotta keep at it man, try not making them dance with one another like they're all drunk and falling on each other, make them stand like the army you feel me? straighten up basically, but you got a good sense of proportion which is good not a lot of people do, like me.... lol.

And to VIELS just this little link http://miamigraffiti.com/search.php?search=vie&p=1 he will go over you if he feels like it.

[weakfingers]

Yeah, sorry, I knew i was gonna get called out on that, I just wanted to try it out on paper for the fun of it, I would never do it on a wall.

[AcosOne]

dewster, you've got the spirit but you lack the technique
keep the letters even in size or at least symmetrical
keep practicing that flow
snew, i really dig that, mad fresh and clean. get shit painted. handstyle not really flowing though, you might wanna give that some time
weakfingers you're on the right way keeping it simple and even and practicing different shapes, i like that
and dunsy: its ok, i like the N, the little thingies on the C are kinda ugly though
practice handstyle too

[sprout]

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv001.jpg

been writing for 2 yrs.... need crits.

SAYS SKIZM!!!

[Aerosoloholic]

helllll noo
that shits unique *****hh

its not unique at all its trendy as fuck and ugly

[BigBlueViolence]

Snew- you gotta stop doing panels if you want to develop, man.
and fuck dick riders, you do you.

Squint- the last two are alright,
but your S looks goofy as s hit in all of them, homie

[sprout]

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picture096.jpg

more crits please

[EasyLife]

i didn't take the time to look through shit so i appologize if someone already said this, i'm diggin the bubbles, the shading on them is a good idea.
i think the breaks with the arrows/doodads whatever you wanna call em is over done, maybe take a couple out.
and then just work on keeping the width of the letters similar.
especially on the S Z and M

[EasyLife]

sorry double post

[sprout]

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picture071.jpg

[letsgobombin]

The second one's a little better but take a look at the new to graffiti thread, start using bars and get simples down.

[Hearr!]

http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG-12.jpg
for a battle on a different forum.

[KidReny!]

go simple

[CrustOner]

KidReny, shut up. That is fucking simple.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

thats not really simple at all...........

[seywhat]

the top is. lol
but overall that piece aint too bad, just work keepin your on your bars consistent. keep sketchin though, your on the right track

[CrustOner]

The letters are really simple, with minimal extensions. It's not as simple as they get, but it IS, in fact, a simple.

[IlikePie]

No matter how simple it is, it's still not very good. Shut up, you all suck, that's why you post here...

[thebigman]

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq66/delawarekid302/tearrr.jpg
http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq66/delawarekid302/tearz.jpg
hear: not really fealling that style
sprout: im feeling it dog keep it up
critics???

[medacog1]

http://i43.tinypic.com/i3dy81.jpg

I realy hated this when i was do ( the K the most) but i liked how i connected it...what do yo uthink?

[sellers E.]

the big man- the throw is alright, i guess. i would go super simple plane with that peice.
medacog1- not feelin it. if its a throw work on it... if its a simp do bars.

i havnt been on in a month or 2... i felt like posting this free style.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/ray2.jpg
crits?

[Manupro7]

go simple

lol you say the same thign for every crit

[DUNSY]

Sellers i wouldn't draw gir it's overdone but your letters are nice tough
medacog, it's a really bad pic so i cant really judge
thebigman, i like your second one but why is the z an other color ?and work on your tag
hearr not really feeling it try to make it more intresting
sprout nice coloring

something i drew last night

http://i40.tinypic.com/64ibfm.jpg

[HalfGangstaShit]

Old shit

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp506.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp531.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp594.jpg

Not so Old shit

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp37C.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp398.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3AB.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3C5.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3D3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3E6.jpg

Most of these^ were done while on house arrest lol.

***

a few crits wouldn't hurt

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

sellers i wouldn't draw gir it's overdone but your letters are nice tough
medacog, it's a really bad pic so i cant really judge
thebigman, i like your second one but why is the z an other color ?and work on your tag
hearr not really feeling it try to make it more intresting
sprout nice coloring

something i drew last night

http://i40.tinypic.com/64ibfm.jpg

reminds me alot of dsub

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

new style I've been messing around with, just looking for whether or not you guys think it's worth pursuing or not
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0001df96.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0001ba74.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0001f58c.jpg

some crits
tearz, the throw is wack, the simple is on point
panik, wack, use bars homie
knar, pretty dope
dunsy, looks like a dsub bite like ^ said

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

omg people are actually giving crits!!!!! im so proud of you guys lol.

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

new style I've been messing around with, just looking for whether or not you guys think it's worth pursuing or not
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0001df96.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0001ba74.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0001f58c.jpg

some crits
tearz, the throw is wack, the simple is on point
panik, wack, use bars homie
knar, pretty dope
dunsy, looks like a dsub bite like ^ said

bumps

[Mr yarbles]

reny you're doing noone good.
go practice for a year or something and stop trying to crit everyone when your style is still up and coming.

[sprout]

hey hearr,, i like the part that says jackson.. king of pop part is too little kid looking...

[StayHyE]

bumps

thicker bars, and less wiggles please.

[sprout]

SKIZM..


http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picture001.jpg

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

that's horrible
go to the new to graff thread and do bars all day for a year

[PegCityBoy]

Shit looks dope i wanna see that all city go out right now an fuck shit up

[letsgobombin]

Some of this stuff I don't really like but I'll post 'em anyway.
Buggered up a little bit on the a, playing with a potential new name
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1611.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1613.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1615.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1616.jpg
I think I might have killed this one with the cloud, it used to look pretty good
Edit: pic butchered the colour
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1617.jpg
Sprout- new to graff thread, bars, simples.
Lusid- simple it down
jerc/knar- I was going to say something about your first stuff and then I saw your newer stuff, nice.

[michael jacksons killer]

http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/pin2win11194/sa.jpg
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/pin2win11194/ssss.jpg
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/pin2win11194/gsd.jpg
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/pin2win11194/hdfa.jpg
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/pin2win11194/dsd.jpg
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/pin2win11194/dyse.jpg
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/pin2win11194/dysseee.jpg
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/pin2win11194/fadsa.jpg
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/pin2win11194/fdsf.jpg
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/pin2win11194/gfasd.jpg
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/pin2win11194/gsaf.jpg
caey; work on three d and making your letters more clean
critics????

[Black Flag]

Micheal Jackson's killer, get the hell out of here.

You do not belong in a toy section.

[michael jacksons killer]

intermidiate??

[JustChillin]

ageed michael jackson u dont not belong in the thread. haha.



http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0701091645.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

I would start in the regular BB thread.
If you get kicked out, then go to intermediate.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Holy shit DYSE, that stuff is so fresh, dont ever stop


http://i41.tinypic.com/23rv8jl.jpg

[LIZARD]

micheal jackson-your characters are sick...the deadpool one is the best

[LIZARD]

cyto-i like your style but i want to see different letter from you

[StayHyE]

cyto - the second E seems kind of hidden...and work on your 3d
just chillen - more simps
Mj's killer - im with big blue see what they say in the lookie lookie black bookie thread unless advised to post elsewhere
sprout - that looks like a mess. may be its just me you need to work with more bars
letsgobombing- keep up the simps get some flow to your letters

[michael jacksons killer]

thanks i just started though so im still pretty toy

[StayHyE]

you serious? youre coloring skills are off the charts if you work on your letters you have a lot of potential

[-Wings-]

[IMG REMOVED]
caey; work on three d and making your letters more clean
critics????

WTF Are you doing in here man!!!??? Go to the exprienced thread or at least the intermeidate. You got dope coloring and letters.

[michael jacksons killer]

you serious? youre coloring skills are off the charts if you work on your letters you have a lot of potential
yeah ill work on it

[funhouseXcast]

No matter how simple it is, it's still not very good. Shut up, you all suck, that's why you post here...

coming from the kid with over 3500 posts

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

coming from the kid with over 3500 posts

http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z154/geezba/PicardInsult.jpg

your point is invalid.infact i dont even see what your point is...are you even making one?

[IlikePie]

My sentiments exactly. Would you like to fight about it, new comer?

[HalfGangstaShit]

Old shit

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp506.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp531.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp594.jpg

Not so Old shit

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp37C.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp398.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3AB.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3C5.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3D3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3E6.jpg

Most of these^ were done while on house arrest lol.

***

a few crits wouldn't hurt

fucking MJkilla totally killed me.

[B.S. POLICE]

mj killer your either easy or stealin pics. whats good with that homie?

[LeaksOne]

thanks i just started though so im still pretty toy

theres no way in hell you just started. shit like that takes time unless your a REALLY talented artist.

[StayHyE]

^ thats what im sayin

[weakfingers]

Man, If thats toy then I dont even want to know what I am,

I posted this shit in another section a while agowith a really shitty picture, but im gonna repost it with a way better picture to get suggestions on my letters and shit, Im still working on bars with simple letter bends. Dont even mind the top it was rushed beyond all belife.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9140.jpg

[killamanilla]

http://i455.photobucket.com/albums/qq278/floridagraff/FuturisticHandgun.jpg

[DUNSY]

Mj's killer wtf dude you made my day, mad style
you just started ? thats not possible dude :p

[Mr yarbles]

Get off his dick
He probably stole all those anyway
There's no way you get steez like that when you're "just starting"

[raid123]

just startin, and i know i suck but crits would be tons appreciated. thankss.
the block one was just trying out a colour scheme

[Eack]

nice styles on this page ^^
raid123 juste keep it simple man, like keyboard letters

http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs089.snc1/4926_97565476853_503036853_2560407_1753359_n.jpg

[sprout]

everyone is telling me to keep it simple and use bars.. so this is me taking it slow...
here is my bars.. how do they look?
what should i do next???

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv.jpg

[sprout]

oh and i like your stuff killamanilla... stay up.

[VivaLaEurope]

Sprout.
Thats a bad starting simple.
You need to keep everything straight and upright.
Dont bend your bars untill you can fully rock straight simples.

Learning to rock a good simple is no over night task , nor isit a week task , or a months task . Learning to pull off a perfect simple takes months of constant practice , paper , led and rubber.

From my time here , alot of people give up on simples and move onto bending their letter forms , adding extensions and doing fillings way to quickly because they just cant wait to get doing wildstyles or whatever style.

Doing this will degress your letter progression from day one , you wont improve , you will only get worse , because you will have no understanding of where to put the extensions or how to bend your bars so they all flow correctly.

[seywhat]

^^true ass words...

[VivaLaEurope]

^^true ass words...

Well look who it is.
Good ol' Seyar.

Guess who..

[sellers E.]

the big man- the throw is alright, i guess. i would go super simple plane with that peice.
medacog1- not feelin it. if its a throw work on it... if its a simp do bars.

i havnt been on in a month or 2... i felt like posting this free style.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/ray2.jpg
crits?

bump for crits.

[luvsac]

just messing around with some letters...
http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww297/luvsacc/kju1.jpg
http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww297/luvsacc/kju.jpg

[sprout]

can anyone show me what you mean by straight and simple..
write SKIZM for me so i can see what it looks like and work from there...
i dont see my stuff being that much worse than others on this forum.. maybe it is.. i dont know.. i need help...

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Daylo, the A doesnt work with the rest
Desok- keep doing what u did with the first one

http://i44.tinypic.com/5men92.jpg

[anu-Hiero]

http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn145/zeph4x/PICT1430.jpg
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn145/zeph4x/PICT1431.jpg
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn145/zeph4x/PICT1432.jpg
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn145/zeph4x/art-003.jpg

[funhouseXcast]

i don't think you're putting enough emphasis on eyes /[sarcasm]

nah, shit's alright. tone down the acid. and please, don't use lined paper.

[BigBlueViolence]

What's wrong with lined paper?

Paper is paper, *****.
use what you've got.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

colored it and fixed the peice

http://i44.tinypic.com/dz81vo.jpg

http://i42.tinypic.com/2ps4l60.jpg

[Slushi]

I'll draw on anything I can find niggha.

If I stacked up all the paper Ive covered in graffiti during high school, it'd probably be taller than me.

[luvsac]

reveng- i was gonna crit your piece but then i saw you reposted and fixed exactly what i was gonna point out.

you made the N and the G look hotttttt
and i like the R too

[mindtrix350]

i don't think you're putting enough emphasis on eyes /[sarcasm]

nah, shit's alright. tone down the acid. and please, don't use lined paper.

Why the fuck not? Does it distract you or something?

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

reveng- i was gonna crit your piece but then i saw you reposted and fixed exactly what i was gonna point out.

you made the N and the G look hotttttt
and i like the R too

thanks

Where is your stuff?

[Drakula]

colored it and fixed the peice



http://i42.tinypic.com/2ps4l60.jpg
I'm loving this. Has that old comic book feel to it. Not some annoying polished/clean anime comics of today but those nice 80's ones.

[kenrararar]

http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/5521/photo8l.jpg
simp
throw
tag

[kenrararar]

double post

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i43.tinypic.com/sltaq0.jpg


http://i42.tinypic.com/t6ywqf.jpg


Poster above me, I cant see your pic

[sellers E.]

reveng-nice letters.im diggin the char.
kenr- im diggin the simp and the throw. nice job

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/hotttt.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/hottttt.jpg
i dont like ylo on this, i just like the da.
crits?

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

First one is where it's at dude, the A might be covering the Y a lil too much maybe

[408Bomber]

reveng-nice letters.im diggin the char.
kenr- im diggin the simp and the throw. nice job

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/hotttt.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/hottttt.jpg
i dont like ylo on this, i just like the da.
crits?
On The First one the D And A flo perfect. Try and get the rest of you're letters like that bro. But seriously love that D and a lol.

[STFUPPERCUT]

sellers your right that DA is pretty dope try keeping the "LO"more proportioned .. the L more like the A and the O more like the D the inner circle on the O uis way to big

[anu-Hiero]

ill draw something on whatever when it hits me.....lol...notebook paper :)
those were drawn a few years ago when i did a lot of shrooms!...ACIDS good 2

[medacog1]

http://i42.tinypic.com/2nhlxcm.jpg

I really hate K's....can someone help me out with them..
(Yea i know its a poops drawing...but i am just trying to work with my k's and O's)

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i39.tinypic.com/25q4oc2.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i44.tinypic.com/hx3i1u.jpg

[Hurs]

http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/1744/pictureorvideo399.jpg (http://img38.imageshack.us/i/pictureorvideo399.jpg/)
the top one above me is nice.. maybe dont fill it all in with prisma.. because that will 4sure make it look horrible.. get some chalk penicils or pastels and mix it all around so they dont look flat.. im just assuming you will use prisma bleeding markers..

anyways a quick pen style

[Hearr!]

http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG-15.jpg
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG_0003-4.jpg
^exchange with taok.

[idk401]

critics?

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/180841.jpg


http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/180808.jpg


http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/220454.jpg

[Hearr!]

1st one: looks good, but for the I, you have a cross bar on the bottom, add one to the top
2nd one: interesting concept, but on the bottom leg of the K, instead of making it go to the side, then down. make it just one diagonal bar.
3rd one: nice, but instead of having the middle bar of the I point to the left, make it point to the right. because there's to much space in between the I and E.

[idk401]

yea thankz man good lookz on crit.

[kenrararar]

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/999/photo8hle.jpg
more simps and a slight bend top left, few throwies n some tags

hearr - i like that first one, fix the Y so it flows and i think it'd look good
idk- i'd go simpler your letters aren't flowing quite right

[kenrararar]

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/8166/photo9r.jpg
you can ignore the shit scribbles in the middle

[Hearr!]

thanks for the crits, but do you mean the T? because it says AKTRE. and the T was a bit plain, and T's are hard to make flow. i made the same with this piece...
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG_0004-1.jpg
crits on this one?

[kenrararar]

sorry i meant the E, that one looks better

[raid123]

was told to do keyboard simples and just simplify my tag so here they are. crits would be toooons appreciated. sorry bout the scribble on my simple too, by lil brother decided to fucking scribble all over it when i was out.

[TastySesamcrew]

hear is sick
kenr maybe make your bars thicker
2kie i like the first one

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2446/3686236675_4fbeef8637.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2619/3686271065_a9fac028ce.jpg

[jumpfirst]

http://i340.photobucket.com/albums/o335/xcaliber_92/0704091007.jpg

just a doodle i thought id throw up here

http://i340.photobucket.com/albums/o335/xcaliber_92/0704091005.jpg

JUMP. pencil then with pen just practice i guess.

critics?

[idk401]

kenr- i think ur bars should be the same size and try 2 be more organized that'll help a bit and the throwie aint bad.

[Hearr!]

hey tasty. glad some one likes it. and FTR i love your style. would you care to exchange?

[Kaiser71]

JUMP....new to graff thread
Tasty....dope coloring..expecially the first...

AKTRE...extend the right leg on your R's and K's and you're solid
KENR..keep going with those simples...getting there.
SKIE...I like your colors...first and last are best.

The rounds are an E..not sure if that's clear or not....MERS....
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0704091247.jpg

[idk401]

kaiser71- dat shit is fresh no lie da 's juz dosent go with it by th way why isnt the 's gettin shot

[StayHyE]

kaiser71- dat shit is fresh no lie da 's juz dosent go with it by th way why isnt the 's gettin shot

English language, you are faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar from it

do you mind translating it so we can understand?

[idk401]

my bad typed to fast i meant dat it was fresh and why the only letter not getting shot was the "S" you got that mr english teacher!!

[StayHyE]

my bad typed to fast i meant dat it was fresh and why the only letter not getting shot was the "S" you got that mr english teacher!!

:D much better....

[idk401]

yea w.e. man

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/222142.jpg





http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/skien.jpg

[StayHyE]

why u all butthurt 'w.e.' what, so poor english skills are okay for you? you must be black.

[idk401]

hahahaha funny its called abreviation ever herd of that and no im not black racist much?

[Kaiser71]

JUMP....new to graff thread
Tasty....dope coloring..expecially the first...

AKTRE...extend the right leg on your R's and K's and you're solid
KENR..keep going with those simples...getting there.
SKIE...I like your colors...first and last are best.

The rounds are an E..not sure if that's clear or not....MERS....
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0704091247.jpg


Bottom bump.

IDK401...I'd say just work on keeping the letters the same size...they get smaller in the second one. good start

[idk401]

yea man i know i didnt notice until the next day when i took the pic. i was high outta my mind hahahaaha

[Fury]

yea w.e. man

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/222142.jpg





http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/skien.jpg

I can't read what the first one says, but just keep practicing.
By the way, abbreviation doesn't mean take out random letters from a word and hope other people catch your drift.

[StayHyE]

yea man i know i didnt notice until the next day when i took the pic. i was high outta my mind hahahaaha

no wonder stop smoking weed, its just gonna make you more retarded then you already are.

[idk401]

yea man cool and it says skie by the way and w.e. is actually really common when wanting to say What Ever and typing really fast didnt know you guys didnt use this kind of abreviated words but it is all good ill try not to use it on this website

[StayHyE]

threw this in my blackbook



http://i44.tinypic.com/15d3tec.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i39.tinypic.com/wjjifl.jpg

http://i40.tinypic.com/35clgnp.jpg

[DirtyDozen520]

I like the letters. they look..cool? lol

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/Image026.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/Image027.jpg

[funhouseXcast]

top one [fero]nice shape, lets erase some of those grimy lines around the actual letter though. i do the same thing i make like a million lines in one spot, but then i clean it up. also shrink the hole in the "E"

also, your letters get smaller as you go. stop that,

[DirtyDozen520]

ya i agree, thanks for the crits

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i43.tinypic.com/2h4hyl0.jpg

[raid123]

was told to do keyboard simples and just simplify my tag so here they are. crits would be toooons appreciated. sorry bout the scribble on my simple too, by lil brother decided to fucking scribble all over it when i was out.

bottom page bump.

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

why u all butthurt 'w.e.' what, so poor english skills are okay for you? you must be black.

theres nothing funny about not being able to articulate yourself in english...its actually a pain having to explain myslef to people over and over.i mean its not their fault but it sucks regardless...he might have a problem or something idk.im fucking hot.

[La Coka Nostra]

threw this in my blackbook



http://i44.tinypic.com/15d3tec.jpg


the Q is dope.
P, R, N, and K are kinda ehhh.
C kinda looks like a G. U kinda looks like an L.
rest of the letters are alright though. i'm undecided on the M.
i think the top of it is dope. but maybe the the middle where the two sides connect should be round instead of pointed.

[TastySesamcrew]

threw this in my blackbook



http://i44.tinypic.com/15d3tec.jpg

A E O T are the only good letters

[skull-e]

the g is deece

[DirtyDozen520]

Stil experiementin with letters and stuff

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/Image028.jpg
the f looks a lil out of place i think but ya..is this a step in the right direction or am i tryin to hard?

[Juicee]

WOAH! Dude this is great man. Get your ass to the intermediate thread pronto! Wait you know what, get the fuck over to the big boy thread cus this shit is SLAMMIN

[DirtyDozen520]

i assume ur bein sarcastic?

[Juicee]

wtf?...
im just sayin id really like to see that pieced on a wall...

fine dont take my praise..

[StayHyE]

the Q is dope.
P, R, N, and K are kinda ehhh.
C kinda looks like a G. U kinda looks like an L.
rest of the letters are alright though. i'm undecided on the M.
i think the top of it is dope. but maybe the the middle where the two sides connect should be round instead of pointed.
yeah i shoulda made it more round and the c kind does look like a g...never been good with R's :(

A E O T are the only good letters


the g is deece
diff'rent strokes for different folks my dudes some people like some letters
others like different ones crits would be nice if you guys are so great :D

i assume ur bein sarcastic?

lol

[StayHyE]

wtf?...
im just sayin id really like to see that pieced on a wall...

fine dont take my praise..

http://smiliesftw.com/x/smiley-rofl.gifhttp://smiliesftw.com/x/smiley-rofl.gifhttp://smiliesftw.com/x/smiley-rofl.gifhttp://smiliesftw.com/x/smiley-rofl.gif

[DirtyDozen520]

sorry then..theres just a lot of assholes on this site. thx tho

[bule]

http://i918.photobucket.com/albums/ad25/bulewbq/hjhjhj2.jpg
http://i918.photobucket.com/albums/ad25/bulewbq/hjhjhj.jpg

[LeaksOne]

http://i918.photobucket.com/albums/ad25/bulewbq/hjhjhj2.jpg
http://i918.photobucket.com/albums/ad25/bulewbq/hjhjhj.jpg

no sir-e bob. i guess ill have to be like everyone else on this site. go simple

[WRAK]

word

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

worddddddddddddddddddddddd

[StayHyE]

c-c-c-c-combo breaker



























word

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Let me light this page on fire

http://i41.tinypic.com/20qccq1.jpg

[Kaiser71]

METEK..not feeling those E's as much as your other letters. Everything else is all bars and corners, and then their just one big curve.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

so make the tops and ends of the E's cornered?

[bule]

http://i918.photobucket.com/albums/ad25/bulewbq/kobishir.jpg

any better?

[luvsac]

http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww297/luvsacc/ask.jpg

[Juicee]

so make the tops and ends of the E's cornered?

he has no idea what hes talking about
it looks raw

[luvsac]

http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww297/luvsacc/ask.jpg

bottom page bump

[Hearr!]

okiieeeee, so heres a new one. entitled 'TIMES NEW ROMAN, BITCH'
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG-16.jpg

sooo, i made a few mistakes. the leg of the K should be higher. the middle crack on the T is waaaaaack. the back-bone of the R is too thick, it should probz be the same thickness of the back-bone of the A. on second thought that also aplies for the K.

see anything else wrong?

[StayHyE]

he has no idea what hes talking about
it looks raw

agree with juicee

[e97]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/07-05-09_2225.jpg

[LeaksOne]

http://i918.photobucket.com/albums/ad25/bulewbq/kobishir.jpg

any better?

ok i didnt wana be mean but your a fuckin lame. your letters are from learngraffiti.net... the fuck? dont bring that shit on here

[DUNSY]

luvsac i like the botom one good letters (maybe not the color of the "o" :D)
hear looking very good, keep it up
e97, its ok but you have too many weird extensions, try more simples


oh and: motherfucking Wario bitches! :D crits pls
http://i43.tinypic.com/28jxfmb.jpg

(100 posts:p)

[B.S. POLICE]

luvsac intermediate

[luvsac]

yay :D
dunsy- i like the wario character, but you should work on bars...god that phrase gets over- used on here.

[B.S. POLICE]

but work on your shadows a few on the purple piece are off

[luvsac]

i just realized that the shadow on the S is horrible

[whahappen?]

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/6038/getattachmentjpge.jpg
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/5830/getattachmentss.jpg
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/5564/throwlol.jpg

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

Desok, work on your shadows, letters are dope tho
AKTR, dope, let's see that rolled
ever(?), not really feeling it, but it has potential
dunsy, cool char, not feeling the wario letters at all
giser, cool throw
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc008bd831.jpg
idk if I posted this one or not so..
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0010ff11.jpg

[JustChillin]

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0706091638.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Lucid, the first one is good, the rest suck
Maniac- keep doing those for awhile

http://i28.tinypic.com/2vtcsnk.jpg

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

lmao drop that wackass fill already homie

[hardwares]

dopest tot black book page ive seen in along ass time. everyones lookin good.

chillin - straighten out those lines.

[Juicee]

Lucid, the first one is good, the rest suck
Maniac- keep doing those for awhile

http://i28.tinypic.com/2vtcsnk.jpg

LOL whyd you ruin it with that fill hahaha

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

lmao drop that wackass fill already homie

I'll drop it soon as you post something better than what I can do "homie"

[StayHyE]

needs more dots in the fill, homie :D

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

I'll drop it soon as you post something better than what I can do "homie"

wanna battle?
most my shits better than yours

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Yes I do, you are fucking garbage

[JustChillin]

Ok. The word you guys have to piece is "Garbage"
Ready. Set. Go.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Make a thread and give us a week or so to post and have us pm you that shit and you can make the thread

[NoCanControl]

the best of the worst or the worst of the best

winner takes all

[anu-Hiero]

http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn145/zeph4x/PICT1574.jpg

[StayHyE]

the best of the worst or the worst of the best

winner takes all
lmfao


Make a thread and give us a week or so to post and have us pm you that shit and you can make the thread

a week?!? thats wayy too long how bout a day it doesnt take that long

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

I am busy as fuck and don't want to put out something shitty and lose, I want a good amount of time so we both can put out something decent.

[StayHyE]

yeah

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Ok I am not writing garbage, it's too long for me I can't keep flow with a word that long I get frustrated making AGE flow with GARB... so I am down to just battle with the word Lucid

[luvsac]

Desok, work on your shadows, letters are dope tho
AKTR, dope, let's see that rolled
ever(?), not really feeling it, but it has potential
dunsy, cool char, not feeling the wario letters at all
giser, cool throw
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc008bd831.jpg
idk if I posted this one or not so..
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0010ff11.jpg

diggin those simples. i like the blue one the best.
your handstyle could use some work though. drop the extension and arrow on the "d". just my 2 cents

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

Ok I am not writing garbage, it's too long for me I can't keep flow with a word that long I get frustrated making AGE flow with GARB... so I am down to just battle with the word Lucid

garbage.. dude was trollin man.
think of another word and get at me..

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

I am down to write your name if you want, I can work with Lucid, if you wanted to have a name exchange battle eh?

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

aite, and you write metek? or was that a side name

[Juicee]

http://images.icanhascheezburger.com/completestore/2008/11/4/128703294496319667.jpg

[sprout]

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv-1.jpg

[DUNSY]

http://images.icanhascheezburger.com/completestore/2008/11/4/128703294496319667.jpg

Skizm nice letters, clean

lmao :D

[anu-Hiero]

i like that name skizm

[-Sinn-]

Lusid work on the tags those are important i have to say i like the green one tho u should make the dots a lil less and follow into the letter more with a solid line
And so im back from outer space i just walked in to find you with ur mom at second base!
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture023.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture028-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture026.jpg
and this is simply because I can
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture009-1.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

what IN THE LIVING FUCK is that?!

[-Sinn-]

my german shepard ate a big thing of balonga and im guessing thats the wrapper lmao

[StayHyE]

a dogs ass?

[B.S. POLICE]

fuck man, some ppl are trying to drink over here

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Yes I write Metek

[sprout]

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv003-1.jpg

i think this one has a better "S".

[hardwares]

lost those fucking bubbles and little blocks falling off the ends of your letters. shit is weak.

other than that the letters look good. fuck with the M a but and the S does look decent. try outlining the letters too next time.

[sprout]

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/12345.jpg


hey7 hardware is this any better??

[PYT!TLC!]

^dope.

[proNYNJA]

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/78/l_bb330471abb84b64800044d51c3be6af.jpg

something i sketched in math class today, crits?

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i26.tinypic.com/ek3g5x.jpg

outline for a battle with lucid

[TaxThis]

olld..
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000055.jpg

about a month ago...
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/old2.jpg

crits?

[TaxThis]

serge, move the G a lil more to the right and its killer.
aka... throw a 3d on that shit and it will be rockin! id get rid of the lil extension goin over the I off the C, but thats just me.

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

give crit to get them...we were doing sooooo well until after 4 of july


http://i32.tinypic.com/juwm1g.jpg

[TaxThis]

i dont think u should over lap ur letters.

[diggitydoggz]

that pic with the dog is nasty... you sick shit

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

what do you guys use for outlines?

[Azul]

skizm- fix up the wack bars on the Z
Mero- dope
tax- don't make the edges so jagged
cyto- dope but the D seems out of place
proninja- the R overlaps a bit to much

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/3466/jake002.jpg
crits? supposed to be like half throw half piece lol

[Azul]

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2023/jake005.jpg
crits on this would also be greatly appreciated.

[Azul]

Edit: sorry double post -_-"

[Azul]

what do you guys use for outlines?

I use these pink outline caps that come with the new ironlak ;D

[funhouseXcast]

like it kurse, i feel like the extra loop on the bottom of the "E" should be up top tho next time. i like your coloring. it's basic but sophisticated.

[CrustOner]

Quadruple post?!

[JustChillin]

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/78/l_bb330471abb84b64800044d51c3be6af.jpg

something i sketched in math class today, crits?those balls of scribbles detract from it...if you meant to do that?
And dont go so big and fat on the top of the S. Make the top narrower in porportion to your other letters.

[Stuck]

wow i delete my account a month ago and its goten worse....
serg do straight letters only for now....nuff said and keep ur bars the same width

[Azul]

Quadruple post?!

my bad lols

[iselldope]

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5076/wickedfuck2.jpg

[TaxThis]

olld..
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000055.jpg

about a month ago...
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/old2.jpg

crits?

..not self promo just want crits yo!

[B.S. POLICE]

i dont think you know what self promo is yet

[TaxThis]

what ever u say buddy

[iselldope]

gimme sum crits

[B.S. POLICE]

what ever u say buddy



ok since your obviously a fucking noob ill explain it to you. self promo is when you go into a picture thread of your town or local area and post pictures of your own PAINTED shit aka self promotion instead of being up enough to have other heads flick your shit and post it themselves. The blackbook thread is here exactly for posting your own material so theres no way in hell you can self promo you dumb motherfucker. Your a toy, ive been in this game alot longer than you, dont fuck with me just except the fact and sit the fuck down

[TaxThis]

hahahahahaahahahahaha ok buddy im a toy you win, ur the fucking king ommmgg bs police is the best graff artist in the fucking worlllddd handz down. i wanna suck his dick hes so fuckin good just like all the soo called "girls he gets" im not sayin im not a toy or a noob i just dont see why u gotta be such a dick.