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LIZARD
07-01-2009, 08:42 PM
micheal jackson-your characters are sick...the deadpool one is the best

LIZARD
07-01-2009, 08:43 PM
cyto-i like your style but i want to see different letter from you

StayHyE
07-01-2009, 08:50 PM
cyto - the second E seems kind of hidden...and work on your 3d
just chillen - more simps
Mj's killer - im with big blue see what they say in the lookie lookie black bookie thread unless advised to post elsewhere
sprout - that looks like a mess. may be its just me you need to work with more bars
letsgobombing- keep up the simps get some flow to your letters

michael jacksons killer
07-01-2009, 08:56 PM
thanks i just started though so im still pretty toy

StayHyE
07-01-2009, 09:03 PM
you serious? youre coloring skills are off the charts if you work on your letters you have a lot of potential

-Wings-
07-01-2009, 09:24 PM
[IMG REMOVED]
caey; work on three d and making your letters more clean
critics????

WTF Are you doing in here man!!!??? Go to the exprienced thread or at least the intermeidate. You got dope coloring and letters.

michael jacksons killer
07-01-2009, 10:14 PM
you serious? youre coloring skills are off the charts if you work on your letters you have a lot of potential
yeah ill work on it

funhouseXcast
07-01-2009, 10:20 PM
No matter how simple it is, it's still not very good. Shut up, you all suck, that's why you post here...

coming from the kid with over 3500 posts

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-01-2009, 10:42 PM
coming from the kid with over 3500 posts

http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z154/geezba/PicardInsult.jpg

your point is invalid.infact i dont even see what your point is...are you even making one?

IlikePie
07-01-2009, 10:45 PM
My sentiments exactly. Would you like to fight about it, new comer?

HalfGangstaShit
07-01-2009, 11:08 PM
Old shit

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp506.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp531.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp594.jpg

Not so Old shit

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp37C.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp398.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3AB.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3C5.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3D3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3E6.jpg

Most of these^ were done while on house arrest lol.

***

a few crits wouldn't hurt

fucking MJkilla totally killed me.

B.S. POLICE
07-01-2009, 11:08 PM
mj killer your either easy or stealin pics. whats good with that homie?

LeaksOne
07-01-2009, 11:38 PM
thanks i just started though so im still pretty toy

theres no way in hell you just started. shit like that takes time unless your a REALLY talented artist.

StayHyE
07-02-2009, 12:01 AM
^ thats what im sayin

weakfingers
07-02-2009, 01:12 AM
Man, If thats toy then I dont even want to know what I am,

I posted this shit in another section a while agowith a really shitty picture, but im gonna repost it with a way better picture to get suggestions on my letters and shit, Im still working on bars with simple letter bends. Dont even mind the top it was rushed beyond all belife.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9140.jpg

killamanilla
07-02-2009, 02:27 AM
http://i455.photobucket.com/albums/qq278/floridagraff/FuturisticHandgun.jpg

DUNSY
07-02-2009, 03:35 AM
Mj's killer wtf dude you made my day, mad style
you just started ? thats not possible dude :p

Mr yarbles
07-02-2009, 03:45 AM
Get off his dick
He probably stole all those anyway
There's no way you get steez like that when you're "just starting"

raid123
07-02-2009, 07:42 AM
just startin, and i know i suck but crits would be tons appreciated. thankss.
the block one was just trying out a colour scheme

Eack
07-02-2009, 09:44 AM
nice styles on this page ^^
raid123 juste keep it simple man, like keyboard letters

http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs089.snc1/4926_97565476853_503036853_2560407_1753359_n.jpg

sprout
07-02-2009, 10:05 AM
everyone is telling me to keep it simple and use bars.. so this is me taking it slow...
here is my bars.. how do they look?
what should i do next???

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv.jpg

sprout
07-02-2009, 10:12 AM
oh and i like your stuff killamanilla... stay up.

VivaLaEurope
07-02-2009, 10:21 AM
Sprout.
Thats a bad starting simple.
You need to keep everything straight and upright.
Dont bend your bars untill you can fully rock straight simples.

Learning to rock a good simple is no over night task , nor isit a week task , or a months task . Learning to pull off a perfect simple takes months of constant practice , paper , led and rubber.

From my time here , alot of people give up on simples and move onto bending their letter forms , adding extensions and doing fillings way to quickly because they just cant wait to get doing wildstyles or whatever style.

Doing this will degress your letter progression from day one , you wont improve , you will only get worse , because you will have no understanding of where to put the extensions or how to bend your bars so they all flow correctly.

seywhat
07-02-2009, 11:02 AM
^^true ass words...

VivaLaEurope
07-02-2009, 12:00 PM
^^true ass words...

Well look who it is.
Good ol' Seyar.

Guess who..

sellers E.
07-02-2009, 12:38 PM
the big man- the throw is alright, i guess. i would go super simple plane with that peice.
medacog1- not feelin it. if its a throw work on it... if its a simp do bars.

i havnt been on in a month or 2... i felt like posting this free style.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/ray2.jpg
crits?

bump for crits.

luvsac
07-02-2009, 01:08 PM
just messing around with some letters...
http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww297/luvsacc/kju1.jpg
http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww297/luvsacc/kju.jpg

sprout
07-02-2009, 01:12 PM
can anyone show me what you mean by straight and simple..
write SKIZM for me so i can see what it looks like and work from there...
i dont see my stuff being that much worse than others on this forum.. maybe it is.. i dont know.. i need help...

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-02-2009, 05:05 PM
Daylo, the A doesnt work with the rest
Desok- keep doing what u did with the first one

http://i44.tinypic.com/5men92.jpg

anu-Hiero
07-02-2009, 05:12 PM
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn145/zeph4x/PICT1430.jpg
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn145/zeph4x/PICT1431.jpg
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn145/zeph4x/PICT1432.jpg
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn145/zeph4x/art-003.jpg

funhouseXcast
07-02-2009, 05:44 PM
i don't think you're putting enough emphasis on eyes /[sarcasm]

nah, shit's alright. tone down the acid. and please, don't use lined paper.

BigBlueViolence
07-02-2009, 05:53 PM
What's wrong with lined paper?

Paper is paper, *****.
use what you've got.

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-02-2009, 05:57 PM
colored it and fixed the peice

http://i44.tinypic.com/dz81vo.jpg

http://i42.tinypic.com/2ps4l60.jpg

Slushi
07-02-2009, 05:57 PM
I'll draw on anything I can find niggha.

If I stacked up all the paper Ive covered in graffiti during high school, it'd probably be taller than me.

luvsac
07-02-2009, 06:36 PM
reveng- i was gonna crit your piece but then i saw you reposted and fixed exactly what i was gonna point out.

you made the N and the G look hotttttt
and i like the R too

mindtrix350
07-02-2009, 07:01 PM
i don't think you're putting enough emphasis on eyes /[sarcasm]

nah, shit's alright. tone down the acid. and please, don't use lined paper.

Why the fuck not? Does it distract you or something?

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-02-2009, 07:17 PM
reveng- i was gonna crit your piece but then i saw you reposted and fixed exactly what i was gonna point out.

you made the N and the G look hotttttt
and i like the R too

thanks

Where is your stuff?

Drakula
07-02-2009, 10:35 PM
colored it and fixed the peice



http://i42.tinypic.com/2ps4l60.jpg
I'm loving this. Has that old comic book feel to it. Not some annoying polished/clean anime comics of today but those nice 80's ones.

kenrararar
07-02-2009, 10:58 PM
http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/5521/photo8l.jpg
simp
throw
tag

kenrararar
07-02-2009, 10:59 PM
double post

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-02-2009, 11:04 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/sltaq0.jpg


http://i42.tinypic.com/t6ywqf.jpg


Poster above me, I cant see your pic

sellers E.
07-02-2009, 11:42 PM
reveng-nice letters.im diggin the char.
kenr- im diggin the simp and the throw. nice job

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/hotttt.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/hottttt.jpg
i dont like ylo on this, i just like the da.
crits?

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-02-2009, 11:47 PM
First one is where it's at dude, the A might be covering the Y a lil too much maybe

408Bomber
07-02-2009, 11:56 PM
reveng-nice letters.im diggin the char.
kenr- im diggin the simp and the throw. nice job

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/hotttt.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/hottttt.jpg
i dont like ylo on this, i just like the da.
crits?
On The First one the D And A flo perfect. Try and get the rest of you're letters like that bro. But seriously love that D and a lol.

STFUPPERCUT
07-03-2009, 12:21 AM
sellers your right that DA is pretty dope try keeping the "LO"more proportioned .. the L more like the A and the O more like the D the inner circle on the O uis way to big

anu-Hiero
07-03-2009, 03:45 AM
ill draw something on whatever when it hits me.....lol...notebook paper :)
those were drawn a few years ago when i did a lot of shrooms!...ACIDS good 2

medacog1
07-03-2009, 01:46 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/2nhlxcm.jpg

I really hate K's....can someone help me out with them..
(Yea i know its a poops drawing...but i am just trying to work with my k's and O's)

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-03-2009, 03:15 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/25q4oc2.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-03-2009, 04:25 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/hx3i1u.jpg

Hurs
07-03-2009, 05:24 PM
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/1744/pictureorvideo399.jpg (http://img38.imageshack.us/i/pictureorvideo399.jpg/)
the top one above me is nice.. maybe dont fill it all in with prisma.. because that will 4sure make it look horrible.. get some chalk penicils or pastels and mix it all around so they dont look flat.. im just assuming you will use prisma bleeding markers..

anyways a quick pen style

Hearr!
07-03-2009, 06:47 PM
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG-15.jpg
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG_0003-4.jpg
^exchange with taok.

idk401
07-03-2009, 06:55 PM
critics?

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/180841.jpg


http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/180808.jpg


http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/220454.jpg

Hearr!
07-03-2009, 07:19 PM
1st one: looks good, but for the I, you have a cross bar on the bottom, add one to the top
2nd one: interesting concept, but on the bottom leg of the K, instead of making it go to the side, then down. make it just one diagonal bar.
3rd one: nice, but instead of having the middle bar of the I point to the left, make it point to the right. because there's to much space in between the I and E.

idk401
07-03-2009, 09:31 PM
yea thankz man good lookz on crit.

kenrararar
07-03-2009, 10:07 PM
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/999/photo8hle.jpg
more simps and a slight bend top left, few throwies n some tags

hearr - i like that first one, fix the Y so it flows and i think it'd look good
idk- i'd go simpler your letters aren't flowing quite right

kenrararar
07-03-2009, 10:07 PM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/8166/photo9r.jpg
you can ignore the shit scribbles in the middle

Hearr!
07-03-2009, 10:53 PM
thanks for the crits, but do you mean the T? because it says AKTRE. and the T was a bit plain, and T's are hard to make flow. i made the same with this piece...
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG_0004-1.jpg
crits on this one?

kenrararar
07-03-2009, 11:22 PM
sorry i meant the E, that one looks better

raid123
07-04-2009, 04:30 AM
was told to do keyboard simples and just simplify my tag so here they are. crits would be toooons appreciated. sorry bout the scribble on my simple too, by lil brother decided to fucking scribble all over it when i was out.

TastySesamcrew
07-04-2009, 06:46 AM
hear is sick
kenr maybe make your bars thicker
2kie i like the first one

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2446/3686236675_4fbeef8637.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2619/3686271065_a9fac028ce.jpg

jumpfirst
07-04-2009, 09:21 AM
http://i340.photobucket.com/albums/o335/xcaliber_92/0704091007.jpg

just a doodle i thought id throw up here

http://i340.photobucket.com/albums/o335/xcaliber_92/0704091005.jpg

JUMP. pencil then with pen just practice i guess.

critics?

idk401
07-04-2009, 11:03 AM
kenr- i think ur bars should be the same size and try 2 be more organized that'll help a bit and the throwie aint bad.

Hearr!
07-04-2009, 11:48 AM
hey tasty. glad some one likes it. and FTR i love your style. would you care to exchange?

Kaiser71
07-04-2009, 12:05 PM
JUMP....new to graff thread
Tasty....dope coloring..expecially the first...

AKTRE...extend the right leg on your R's and K's and you're solid
KENR..keep going with those simples...getting there.
SKIE...I like your colors...first and last are best.

The rounds are an E..not sure if that's clear or not....MERS....
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0704091247.jpg

idk401
07-04-2009, 12:49 PM
kaiser71- dat shit is fresh no lie da 's juz dosent go with it by th way why isnt the 's gettin shot

StayHyE
07-04-2009, 12:52 PM
kaiser71- dat shit is fresh no lie da 's juz dosent go with it by th way why isnt the 's gettin shot

English language, you are faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar from it

do you mind translating it so we can understand?

idk401
07-04-2009, 12:57 PM
my bad typed to fast i meant dat it was fresh and why the only letter not getting shot was the "S" you got that mr english teacher!!

StayHyE
07-04-2009, 01:00 PM
my bad typed to fast i meant dat it was fresh and why the only letter not getting shot was the "S" you got that mr english teacher!!

:D much better....

idk401
07-04-2009, 01:05 PM
yea w.e. man

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/222142.jpg





http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/skien.jpg

StayHyE
07-04-2009, 01:07 PM
why u all butthurt 'w.e.' what, so poor english skills are okay for you? you must be black.

idk401
07-04-2009, 01:11 PM
hahahaha funny its called abreviation ever herd of that and no im not black racist much?

Kaiser71
07-04-2009, 01:19 PM
JUMP....new to graff thread
Tasty....dope coloring..expecially the first...

AKTRE...extend the right leg on your R's and K's and you're solid
KENR..keep going with those simples...getting there.
SKIE...I like your colors...first and last are best.

The rounds are an E..not sure if that's clear or not....MERS....
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0704091247.jpg


Bottom bump.

IDK401...I'd say just work on keeping the letters the same size...they get smaller in the second one. good start

idk401
07-04-2009, 01:24 PM
yea man i know i didnt notice until the next day when i took the pic. i was high outta my mind hahahaaha

Fury
07-04-2009, 01:30 PM
yea w.e. man

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/222142.jpg





http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/skien.jpg

I can't read what the first one says, but just keep practicing.
By the way, abbreviation doesn't mean take out random letters from a word and hope other people catch your drift.

StayHyE
07-04-2009, 01:32 PM
yea man i know i didnt notice until the next day when i took the pic. i was high outta my mind hahahaaha

no wonder stop smoking weed, its just gonna make you more retarded then you already are.

idk401
07-04-2009, 01:36 PM
yea man cool and it says skie by the way and w.e. is actually really common when wanting to say What Ever and typing really fast didnt know you guys didnt use this kind of abreviated words but it is all good ill try not to use it on this website

StayHyE
07-04-2009, 01:50 PM
threw this in my blackbook



http://i44.tinypic.com/15d3tec.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-04-2009, 02:19 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/wjjifl.jpg

http://i40.tinypic.com/35clgnp.jpg

DirtyDozen520
07-04-2009, 02:49 PM
I like the letters. they look..cool? lol

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/Image026.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/Image027.jpg

funhouseXcast
07-04-2009, 03:15 PM
top one [fero]nice shape, lets erase some of those grimy lines around the actual letter though. i do the same thing i make like a million lines in one spot, but then i clean it up. also shrink the hole in the "E"

also, your letters get smaller as you go. stop that,

DirtyDozen520
07-04-2009, 03:24 PM
ya i agree, thanks for the crits

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-04-2009, 03:24 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2h4hyl0.jpg

raid123
07-04-2009, 08:40 PM
was told to do keyboard simples and just simplify my tag so here they are. crits would be toooons appreciated. sorry bout the scribble on my simple too, by lil brother decided to fucking scribble all over it when i was out.

bottom page bump.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-04-2009, 09:58 PM
why u all butthurt 'w.e.' what, so poor english skills are okay for you? you must be black.

theres nothing funny about not being able to articulate yourself in english...its actually a pain having to explain myslef to people over and over.i mean its not their fault but it sucks regardless...he might have a problem or something idk.im fucking hot.

La Coka Nostra
07-05-2009, 11:11 AM
threw this in my blackbook



http://i44.tinypic.com/15d3tec.jpg


the Q is dope.
P, R, N, and K are kinda ehhh.
C kinda looks like a G. U kinda looks like an L.
rest of the letters are alright though. i'm undecided on the M.
i think the top of it is dope. but maybe the the middle where the two sides connect should be round instead of pointed.

TastySesamcrew
07-05-2009, 11:56 AM
threw this in my blackbook



http://i44.tinypic.com/15d3tec.jpg

A E O T are the only good letters

skull-e
07-05-2009, 12:04 PM
the g is deece

DirtyDozen520
07-05-2009, 02:07 PM
Stil experiementin with letters and stuff

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/Image028.jpg
the f looks a lil out of place i think but ya..is this a step in the right direction or am i tryin to hard?

Juicee
07-05-2009, 02:11 PM
WOAH! Dude this is great man. Get your ass to the intermediate thread pronto! Wait you know what, get the fuck over to the big boy thread cus this shit is SLAMMIN

DirtyDozen520
07-05-2009, 02:18 PM
i assume ur bein sarcastic?

Juicee
07-05-2009, 02:26 PM
wtf?...
im just sayin id really like to see that pieced on a wall...

fine dont take my praise..

StayHyE
07-05-2009, 02:27 PM
the Q is dope.
P, R, N, and K are kinda ehhh.
C kinda looks like a G. U kinda looks like an L.
rest of the letters are alright though. i'm undecided on the M.
i think the top of it is dope. but maybe the the middle where the two sides connect should be round instead of pointed.
yeah i shoulda made it more round and the c kind does look like a g...never been good with R's :(

A E O T are the only good letters


the g is deece
diff'rent strokes for different folks my dudes some people like some letters
others like different ones crits would be nice if you guys are so great :D

i assume ur bein sarcastic?

lol

StayHyE
07-05-2009, 02:28 PM
wtf?...
im just sayin id really like to see that pieced on a wall...

fine dont take my praise..

http://smiliesftw.com/x/smiley-rofl.gifhttp://smiliesftw.com/x/smiley-rofl.gifhttp://smiliesftw.com/x/smiley-rofl.gifhttp://smiliesftw.com/x/smiley-rofl.gif

DirtyDozen520
07-05-2009, 02:50 PM
sorry then..theres just a lot of assholes on this site. thx tho

bule
07-05-2009, 04:13 PM
http://i918.photobucket.com/albums/ad25/bulewbq/hjhjhj2.jpg
http://i918.photobucket.com/albums/ad25/bulewbq/hjhjhj.jpg

LeaksOne
07-05-2009, 04:32 PM
http://i918.photobucket.com/albums/ad25/bulewbq/hjhjhj2.jpg
http://i918.photobucket.com/albums/ad25/bulewbq/hjhjhj.jpg

no sir-e bob. i guess ill have to be like everyone else on this site. go simple

WRAK
07-05-2009, 04:39 PM
word

VaNdAL xBA!x
07-05-2009, 04:42 PM
worddddddddddddddddddddddd

StayHyE
07-05-2009, 05:01 PM
c-c-c-c-combo breaker



























word

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-05-2009, 05:59 PM
Let me light this page on fire

http://i41.tinypic.com/20qccq1.jpg

Kaiser71
07-05-2009, 06:30 PM
METEK..not feeling those E's as much as your other letters. Everything else is all bars and corners, and then their just one big curve.

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-05-2009, 06:35 PM
so make the tops and ends of the E's cornered?

bule
07-05-2009, 07:15 PM
http://i918.photobucket.com/albums/ad25/bulewbq/kobishir.jpg

any better?

luvsac
07-05-2009, 08:08 PM
http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww297/luvsacc/ask.jpg

Juicee
07-05-2009, 08:14 PM
so make the tops and ends of the E's cornered?

he has no idea what hes talking about
it looks raw

luvsac
07-05-2009, 08:18 PM
http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww297/luvsacc/ask.jpg

bottom page bump

Hearr!
07-05-2009, 08:48 PM
okiieeeee, so heres a new one. entitled 'TIMES NEW ROMAN, BITCH'
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG-16.jpg

sooo, i made a few mistakes. the leg of the K should be higher. the middle crack on the T is waaaaaack. the back-bone of the R is too thick, it should probz be the same thickness of the back-bone of the A. on second thought that also aplies for the K.

see anything else wrong?

StayHyE
07-05-2009, 11:25 PM
he has no idea what hes talking about
it looks raw

agree with juicee

e97
07-06-2009, 12:34 AM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/07-05-09_2225.jpg

LeaksOne
07-06-2009, 06:16 AM
http://i918.photobucket.com/albums/ad25/bulewbq/kobishir.jpg

any better?

ok i didnt wana be mean but your a fuckin lame. your letters are from learngraffiti.net... the fuck? dont bring that shit on here

DUNSY
07-06-2009, 07:26 AM
luvsac i like the botom one good letters (maybe not the color of the "o" :D)
hear looking very good, keep it up
e97, its ok but you have too many weird extensions, try more simples


oh and: motherfucking Wario bitches! :D crits pls
http://i43.tinypic.com/28jxfmb.jpg

(100 posts:p)

B.S. POLICE
07-06-2009, 12:05 PM
luvsac intermediate

luvsac
07-06-2009, 01:08 PM
yay :D
dunsy- i like the wario character, but you should work on bars...god that phrase gets over- used on here.

B.S. POLICE
07-06-2009, 01:40 PM
but work on your shadows a few on the purple piece are off

luvsac
07-06-2009, 02:02 PM
i just realized that the shadow on the S is horrible

whahappen?
07-06-2009, 03:05 PM
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/6038/getattachmentjpge.jpg
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/5830/getattachmentss.jpg
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/5564/throwlol.jpg

BIGdreamSCHEME
07-06-2009, 04:09 PM
Desok, work on your shadows, letters are dope tho
AKTR, dope, let's see that rolled
ever(?), not really feeling it, but it has potential
dunsy, cool char, not feeling the wario letters at all
giser, cool throw
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc008bd831.jpg
idk if I posted this one or not so..
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0010ff11.jpg

JustChillin
07-06-2009, 06:54 PM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0706091638.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-06-2009, 07:19 PM
Lucid, the first one is good, the rest suck
Maniac- keep doing those for awhile

http://i28.tinypic.com/2vtcsnk.jpg

BIGdreamSCHEME
07-06-2009, 07:41 PM
lmao drop that wackass fill already homie

hardwares
07-06-2009, 07:49 PM
dopest tot black book page ive seen in along ass time. everyones lookin good.

chillin - straighten out those lines.

Juicee
07-06-2009, 07:52 PM
Lucid, the first one is good, the rest suck
Maniac- keep doing those for awhile

http://i28.tinypic.com/2vtcsnk.jpg

LOL whyd you ruin it with that fill hahaha

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-06-2009, 07:53 PM
lmao drop that wackass fill already homie

I'll drop it soon as you post something better than what I can do "homie"

StayHyE
07-06-2009, 08:14 PM
needs more dots in the fill, homie :D

BIGdreamSCHEME
07-06-2009, 08:26 PM
I'll drop it soon as you post something better than what I can do "homie"

wanna battle?
most my shits better than yours

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-06-2009, 08:45 PM
Yes I do, you are fucking garbage

JustChillin
07-06-2009, 09:20 PM
Ok. The word you guys have to piece is "Garbage"
Ready. Set. Go.

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-06-2009, 09:35 PM
Make a thread and give us a week or so to post and have us pm you that shit and you can make the thread

NoCanControl
07-06-2009, 09:43 PM
the best of the worst or the worst of the best

winner takes all

anu-Hiero
07-06-2009, 09:47 PM
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn145/zeph4x/PICT1574.jpg

StayHyE
07-06-2009, 10:00 PM
the best of the worst or the worst of the best

winner takes all
lmfao


Make a thread and give us a week or so to post and have us pm you that shit and you can make the thread

a week?!? thats wayy too long how bout a day it doesnt take that long

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-06-2009, 10:01 PM
I am busy as fuck and don't want to put out something shitty and lose, I want a good amount of time so we both can put out something decent.

StayHyE
07-06-2009, 10:28 PM
yeah

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-06-2009, 10:52 PM
Ok I am not writing garbage, it's too long for me I can't keep flow with a word that long I get frustrated making AGE flow with GARB... so I am down to just battle with the word Lucid

luvsac
07-06-2009, 10:58 PM
Desok, work on your shadows, letters are dope tho
AKTR, dope, let's see that rolled
ever(?), not really feeling it, but it has potential
dunsy, cool char, not feeling the wario letters at all
giser, cool throw
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc008bd831.jpg
idk if I posted this one or not so..
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0010ff11.jpg

diggin those simples. i like the blue one the best.
your handstyle could use some work though. drop the extension and arrow on the "d". just my 2 cents

BIGdreamSCHEME
07-06-2009, 11:10 PM
Ok I am not writing garbage, it's too long for me I can't keep flow with a word that long I get frustrated making AGE flow with GARB... so I am down to just battle with the word Lucid

garbage.. dude was trollin man.
think of another word and get at me..

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-06-2009, 11:32 PM
I am down to write your name if you want, I can work with Lucid, if you wanted to have a name exchange battle eh?

BIGdreamSCHEME
07-07-2009, 12:09 AM
aite, and you write metek? or was that a side name

Juicee
07-07-2009, 12:28 AM
http://images.icanhascheezburger.com/completestore/2008/11/4/128703294496319667.jpg

sprout
07-07-2009, 10:43 AM
http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv-1.jpg

DUNSY
07-07-2009, 10:46 AM
http://images.icanhascheezburger.com/completestore/2008/11/4/128703294496319667.jpg

Skizm nice letters, clean

lmao :D

anu-Hiero
07-07-2009, 02:08 PM
i like that name skizm

-Sinn-
07-07-2009, 02:08 PM
Lusid work on the tags those are important i have to say i like the green one tho u should make the dots a lil less and follow into the letter more with a solid line
And so im back from outer space i just walked in to find you with ur mom at second base!
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture023.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture028-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture026.jpg
and this is simply because I can
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture009-1.jpg

B.S. POLICE
07-07-2009, 02:22 PM
what IN THE LIVING FUCK is that?!

-Sinn-
07-07-2009, 02:24 PM
my german shepard ate a big thing of balonga and im guessing thats the wrapper lmao

StayHyE
07-07-2009, 02:24 PM
a dogs ass?

B.S. POLICE
07-07-2009, 02:27 PM
fuck man, some ppl are trying to drink over here

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-07-2009, 03:08 PM
Yes I write Metek

sprout
07-07-2009, 03:24 PM
http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv003-1.jpg

i think this one has a better "S".

hardwares
07-07-2009, 03:50 PM
lost those fucking bubbles and little blocks falling off the ends of your letters. shit is weak.

other than that the letters look good. fuck with the M a but and the S does look decent. try outlining the letters too next time.

sprout
07-07-2009, 04:58 PM
http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/12345.jpg


hey7 hardware is this any better??

PYT!TLC!
07-07-2009, 05:18 PM
^dope.

proNYNJA
07-07-2009, 06:40 PM
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/78/l_bb330471abb84b64800044d51c3be6af.jpg

something i sketched in math class today, crits?

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-07-2009, 07:07 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/ek3g5x.jpg

outline for a battle with lucid

TaxThis
07-07-2009, 07:08 PM
olld..
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000055.jpg

about a month ago...
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/old2.jpg

crits?

TaxThis
07-07-2009, 07:08 PM
serge, move the G a lil more to the right and its killer.
aka... throw a 3d on that shit and it will be rockin! id get rid of the lil extension goin over the I off the C, but thats just me.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-07-2009, 07:11 PM
give crit to get them...we were doing sooooo well until after 4 of july


http://i32.tinypic.com/juwm1g.jpg

TaxThis
07-07-2009, 07:24 PM
i dont think u should over lap ur letters.

diggitydoggz
07-07-2009, 08:17 PM
that pic with the dog is nasty... you sick shit

Neg_INFLUENZ
07-07-2009, 10:15 PM
what do you guys use for outlines?

Azul
07-07-2009, 10:49 PM
skizm- fix up the wack bars on the Z
Mero- dope
tax- don't make the edges so jagged
cyto- dope but the D seems out of place
proninja- the R overlaps a bit to much

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/3466/jake002.jpg
crits? supposed to be like half throw half piece lol

Azul
07-07-2009, 11:01 PM
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2023/jake005.jpg
crits on this would also be greatly appreciated.

Azul
07-07-2009, 11:03 PM
Edit: sorry double post -_-"

Azul
07-07-2009, 11:05 PM
what do you guys use for outlines?

I use these pink outline caps that come with the new ironlak ;D

funhouseXcast
07-07-2009, 11:18 PM
like it kurse, i feel like the extra loop on the bottom of the "E" should be up top tho next time. i like your coloring. it's basic but sophisticated.

CrustOner
07-08-2009, 01:21 AM
Quadruple post?!

JustChillin
07-08-2009, 01:29 AM
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/78/l_bb330471abb84b64800044d51c3be6af.jpg

something i sketched in math class today, crits?those balls of scribbles detract from it...if you meant to do that?
And dont go so big and fat on the top of the S. Make the top narrower in porportion to your other letters.

Stuck
07-08-2009, 03:30 AM
wow i delete my account a month ago and its goten worse....
serg do straight letters only for now....nuff said and keep ur bars the same width

Azul
07-08-2009, 03:38 AM
Quadruple post?!

my bad lols

iselldope
07-08-2009, 08:24 AM
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5076/wickedfuck2.jpg

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 01:04 PM
olld..
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000055.jpg

about a month ago...
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/old2.jpg

crits?

..not self promo just want crits yo!

B.S. POLICE
07-08-2009, 01:31 PM
i dont think you know what self promo is yet

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 01:50 PM
what ever u say buddy

iselldope
07-08-2009, 02:15 PM
gimme sum crits

B.S. POLICE
07-08-2009, 02:18 PM
what ever u say buddy



ok since your obviously a fucking noob ill explain it to you. self promo is when you go into a picture thread of your town or local area and post pictures of your own PAINTED shit aka self promotion instead of being up enough to have other heads flick your shit and post it themselves. The blackbook thread is here exactly for posting your own material so theres no way in hell you can self promo you dumb motherfucker. Your a toy, ive been in this game alot longer than you, dont fuck with me just except the fact and sit the fuck down

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 02:25 PM
hahahahahaahahahahaha ok buddy im a toy you win, ur the fucking king ommmgg bs police is the best graff artist in the fucking worlllddd handz down. i wanna suck his dick hes so fuckin good just like all the soo called "girls he gets" im not sayin im not a toy or a noob i just dont see why u gotta be such a dick.

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 02:27 PM
sorry for not knowin... to the rest of you.

B.S. POLICE
07-08-2009, 02:28 PM
you still dont get it...man are you like a crack baby or something?! shit

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 02:29 PM
im done with this goof.

B.S. POLICE
07-08-2009, 02:34 PM
no problem kid good luck getting any help now you fucking clown


edit. It took you 25 minutes to do that pencil two letter?! you MUST be a crack baby

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 02:41 PM
like i said im not scared to admit im a toy.

B.S. POLICE
07-08-2009, 02:43 PM
see theres two kinds of toy, theres the kid that just started and is a toy. and then theres a kid who sucks and has no respect thats a toy.

your #2

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 02:46 PM
like i said i show respect when i get respect.
what makes u diffrent from me?
your not a crack baby? thats the only thing. get fucked.

B.S. POLICE
07-08-2009, 02:48 PM
alright, i see waht your saying. just do me a favor and show me when I didnt show YOU respect and ill apologize

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 03:02 PM
its past that now budd

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-08-2009, 03:05 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/ek3g5x.jpg

outline for a battle with lucid

bump

B.S. POLICE
07-08-2009, 03:06 PM
its past that now budd

no, no its not. you keep repeating i respect those that respect me, while YOU were the one to start beef with ME first you fucking dumbass. i never said shit to you until you started being a little e gangsta trying to bark up the wrong fuckin tree.


cyto i see you homie sorry for the chit chat, lose the extentions and youll be straight

Tapn
07-08-2009, 04:51 PM
i know give crits to get crits im not very knowledgeable but

lucid: im not feelin that attachment in the lower left of the C or the c's position to the rest of the letters like overlapping the u and part of the i.

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj166/b-runge/Photo-0248.jpg

i know this sucks bad, o literally did it in one minute, but any crits for my printout box van throwie with awesome bubbles?

remos
07-08-2009, 07:14 PM
lmfaoooooo taxthis stfu bs police is right your making yourself look stupid just stop
tapn look at your keyboard and use bars, i know its shit but its worth it in the end

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 07:34 PM
u think i give a shit what a bunch ppl say about me on the net?
lmfao u guys are fuckin comedy. i love the hate *****aas
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000076.jpg
lil somthin for talkin, i wont talk with out a flick any more.

VaNdAL xBA!x
07-08-2009, 07:41 PM
nice cyto u deff stepped your shit up

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-08-2009, 07:46 PM
u think i give a shit what a bunch ppl say about me on the net?
lmfao u guys are fuckin comedy. i love the hate *****aas
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000076.jpg
lil somthin for talkin, i wont talk with out a flick any more.

you talked all that shit and this is what you bring to the table???

http://www.forumammo.com/cpg/albums/userpics/10063/gtfo~4.jpg

StayHyE
07-08-2009, 08:18 PM
http://smiliesftw.com/x/smiley-rofl.gif

La Coka Nostra
07-08-2009, 08:20 PM
u think i give a shit what a bunch ppl say about me on the net?
lmfao u guys are fuckin comedy. i love the hate *****aas
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000076.jpg
lil somthin for talkin, i wont talk with out a flick any more.


FSU?
are you serious? lol.

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 08:27 PM
i told everyone im not a king. i dont care im toy as fuck but id still whoop your ass and tag your face faggots.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-08-2009, 08:36 PM
im toy as fuck

word.

VaNdAL xBA!x
07-08-2009, 09:49 PM
haha
just stop it tax
mero that shit mad me giggle inside

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 10:19 PM
whoo tha fuck are u to tell me what to do u fuckin skid

Thrice
07-08-2009, 10:44 PM
On-going sketch
http://i31.tinypic.com/f36olk.jpg

hazetheone
07-08-2009, 11:08 PM
everyone up in this bitch is toy as fuck. stop ganging up on other toys who talk some toy bullshit. let those toys be toy and talk internet shit. there was a day when the toy thread was peaceful and everyone knew their place but now...... now its just shitty graffiti artists talking shit about other graffiti artists who are more or less shitty. god damnit

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 11:33 PM
he's kinda right in a way.

Thrice
07-08-2009, 11:33 PM
^Amen.

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 11:34 PM
nice sketch btw its killin.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-08-2009, 11:35 PM
he's 100% right.you should all be ashamed of yourselves.i just enjoy trollin.whats your excuse?

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 11:38 PM
shut the fuck up, god damn. u just enjoy trollin ur moms pussy.
fuckin bitch.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-08-2009, 11:40 PM
lol that was the lamest shit i ever heard.i swear you must be 12.no one else would think thats was an acceptable comeback.

hazetheone
07-08-2009, 11:44 PM
heres where they both make themselves look completely retarded......

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-08-2009, 11:46 PM
heres where they both make themselves look completely retarded......

we reached that point about 3 pages back hazey.your late.

Stussy
07-08-2009, 11:48 PM
http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/6282/photo919.jpg
thrice- your letters seem to have the wiggles for no reason. letters arn't bad just keep working on it. get it more solid
Mero- you suck! simples simples simples! i kid i kid... that throw a couple pages back looks good.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-08-2009, 11:50 PM
complete shit stussy.kill your self with a hatchet.then post it on youtube so i can watch it again and again and agian for my entertainment.

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 11:51 PM
rayz that shit is ballin, im done talkin shit sorry for ya'll who had to witness, wanna beef with me pm me.

Stussy
07-08-2009, 11:52 PM
e fame?

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-08-2009, 11:53 PM
stussy is the next an hero.

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 11:53 PM
more like e tard

hazetheone
07-09-2009, 12:35 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/ir2tlk.jpg
old pic
this is a whole page of talking....................

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-09-2009, 12:37 AM
the e seems abit out of place.and imo fucks up the flow entirely...like the other shit you posted tho in the intermediate...

hazetheone
07-09-2009, 01:23 AM
http://i25.tinypic.com/2pob0gz.jpg
gonna color it tomorrow

Mr yarbles
07-09-2009, 01:40 AM
Your bars the cross the a you know the middle bar
They just look not right
You should open them on the sides instead of just making them square

also noone should listen to meroe he's an idiot
Tax is way better then you mero you know it give it up
Geez.
I mean what kind of name is mero anyway?
more like fagoe

PWNED

Azul
07-09-2009, 01:49 AM
like it kurse, i feel like the extra loop on the bottom of the "E" should be up top tho next time. i like your coloring. it's basic but sophisticated.

Cheers I used highlighters, very hard to blend >.<

Skribe1
07-09-2009, 04:31 AM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b371/danksmoke/Dankle.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b371/danksmoke/2009-07-07221133.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b371/danksmoke/2009-07-06203752.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b371/danksmoke/piece1.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b371/danksmoke/2009-07-09012610.jpg

iselldope
07-09-2009, 05:02 AM
hahaahahahaha you suck

iselldope
07-09-2009, 05:03 AM
use bars bitch

trowel
07-09-2009, 05:48 AM
Stussy:
Top throwie:
No offense to you because you execute cleanly in the sketch, but...don't use the same style everyone else is using. Im seriously sick of those east coast style throwies...everyone seems to be doing them...at least come up with "some" variation to the letters.
Bottom:
Clean, but still a little trendy.

Haze:
Again, the MSK style is getting a little played from everyone using it...same old shit just on the west coast...doesnt look to bad...but it is a little trendy...

Skribe:
i actually like this the best, only because you are clearly just trying what ever comes to mind. Though the skill level is no where near the same, i still prefer this. You should work on simple letters...You'll probably hear that a lot but if you don't understand letter structure you cannot create your own correctly.

I appreciate seeing the flicks opposed to a bunch of ass clowns bickering about each others periods...

Good shit guys...Keep sketching...

DUNSY
07-09-2009, 06:53 AM
Scribe -> Simples
Haze good stuff but i personally dont like the E in the first sketch, would like to see them colored tough
stussy, i like the throwie and i think you know your simples but you just tried something else on that bottom one

o and everyone please stop bitching,trolling,e-thuggin, and 4chan speak just be friendly and try to give good advice.



Ol' English :D
http://i29.tinypic.com/10oflsk.jpg

diggitydoggz
07-09-2009, 09:53 AM
skribe, they all suck except the last one which is actually pretty damn clean. work on that style more and then gradually get more complex.

CrustOner
07-09-2009, 10:13 AM
It's obvious the last one isn't his. It's a printed sticker from Bombingscience.

B.S. POLICE
07-09-2009, 12:24 PM
http://i25.tinypic.com/2pob0gz.jpg
gonna color it tomorrow

bump this

iselldope
07-09-2009, 12:36 PM
that's dope

Thrice
07-09-2009, 12:40 PM
on-going sketch
http://i31.tinypic.com/f36olk.jpg

bump

Haze-I want to see that painted, nice man.

VaNdAL xBA!x
07-09-2009, 12:42 PM
Damn thrice whats goin on seems like you never improve youve been around long enough to learn the basics atleast

weakfingers
07-09-2009, 12:49 PM
Stussy, I really like how you dident dot the R.
Dunsy, Im not feeling it,To spaced out to me.




I'm just planning shit out for a spot im going to, and some crits would be great, The shadow going to one point was a bad choice and i havent tried cracks yet.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9183.jpg

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-09-2009, 01:12 PM
if thats what the spot looks like personally id go with the left side where the ceiling is higher and use that space instead of cramming it all into the area.maybe just rock a throw there.i dont know i cant visualize the place but from what i can see it would look much better if you scaled it down and rocked it in the high ceiling...work with the space you got.remember that.






sorry for all the fighting guys....but i mean,he was soooo easy it was just to much.you should have read what he wrote me in the PM's omg it was soooo lame.haha.but im done now.

Thrice
07-09-2009, 01:27 PM
Damn thrice whats goin on seems like you never improve youve been around long enough to learn the basics atleast

Heh i know, i have alright sketches here and there, just don't spend enough time on it. Current E im trying to work a style around.
http://i25.tinypic.com/33a8j12.jpg
Aug style for fun
http://i31.tinypic.com/dniq7n.jpg

weakfingers
07-09-2009, 01:46 PM
Yeah, I know what your saying, I definatly drew the spot alot bigger then it really is. But I wanted to do it really out of proportion. Another idea I had is to make it looked like it was squished then its coming out super big. but yeah here's what the spot looks like.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Shell_Park0.jpg

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-09-2009, 01:58 PM
yeah i think it would look better if you utilized the bigger space...

iselldope
07-09-2009, 02:24 PM
or take the wall on the left,believe me it's better

VaNdAL xBA!x
07-09-2009, 02:24 PM
yaa idk from that pic that doesnt look like a very big wall unless you got some nice can control then go for it but i would go with the wall to the left

Kayn.
07-09-2009, 03:09 PM
Ok, so Ive been sketching about 2 weeks, give me your thoughts on improving or whatever

hazetheone
07-09-2009, 03:32 PM
loose every extra bit of anything (extensions arrows etc..) for a few months and get those letters lookin good then begin to color them then you will get a feel for bending the letters and shit later on. but on the real check the new to graff thread and read the first few pages and that should help you on your way

Kayn.
07-09-2009, 03:44 PM
loose every extra bit of anything (extensions arrows etc..) for a few months and get those letters lookin good then begin to color them then you will get a feel for bending the letters and shit later on. but on the real check the new to graff thread and read the first few pages and that should help you on your way

k, thanks ;)

Kaiser71
07-09-2009, 06:50 PM
Haze...Dope...and clean too...can't wait to see it colored....
THRICE..you've gotta ditch those little tails that fold back on the ends of your letters. I used them everywhere for a while too, and it never looks good in my opinion.
SQUINT: I like your letters, but agree that maybe the other part of the wall would work better.

Anyways. Friends dad asked me if I'd do an ancient egypt theme on his wall if he bought me paint. So I started fucking around with an Egypt page...here's what I got so far....


http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/downsized_0709091900.jpg
Crits?

LeaksOne
07-09-2009, 06:52 PM
you should make your colors more egyptian. like brownish colors just to match the theme

Kaiser71
07-09-2009, 07:03 PM
^^Thought about it...and might still when I paint it...but I kinda wanted it to stick out from the boring browns and shit too.

BigBlueViolence
07-09-2009, 07:09 PM
I agree, kaiser.
The pink makes it pop.

LeaksOne
07-09-2009, 07:14 PM
fair enough

BigBlueViolence
07-09-2009, 07:16 PM
One thing, though.
Your R is missing a good portion of it's leg,
and your S is the only letter with an arrow.
Those things kind of stand out, in my opinion.

Azul
07-09-2009, 08:33 PM
Haze...Dope...and clean too...can't wait to see it colored....
THRICE..you've gotta ditch those little tails that fold back on the ends of your letters. I used them everywhere for a while too, and it never looks good in my opinion.
SQUINT: I like your letters, but agree that maybe the other part of the wall would work better.

Anyways. Friends dad asked me if I'd do an ancient egypt theme on his wall if he bought me paint. So I started fucking around with an Egypt page...here's what I got so far....


http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/downsized_0709091900.jpg
Crits?

Here's an Egyptian piece from my home town Brisbane maybe you can be inspired.
http://file042b.bebo.com/6/large/2008/03/08/10/133035676a7095154286l.jpg
http://file039b.bebo.com/9/large/2008/03/08/10/133035676a7095163151l.jpg
http://file041b.bebo.com/9/large/2008/03/08/09/133035676a7095138998l.jpg
http://file039b.bebo.com/2/large/2008/03/08/09/133035676a7095146502l.jpg

diggitydoggz
07-10-2009, 12:41 AM
wow that is so vicious....

iselldope
07-10-2009, 08:39 AM
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/9795/charliel.jpg

returned
07-10-2009, 09:32 AM
http://i604.photobucket.com/albums/tt126/returned404/piece.jpg

Crits:
Kaiser- It looks pretty good, if that char was doing something more extreme it would look 10x better
Iselldope- why a unicorn? and its feet should be pointed the same way.