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beefgerky
03-26-2006, 11:18 PM
jaze, thats cute.
my simples.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture713.jpg
my boy siege.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture712.jpg
nfk throwie (my painted version=better imo)
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture708.jpg
school doodles.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture711.jpg
MR.AMS
03-26-2006, 11:19 PM
yao jaze thats dope shit keep it up
AoAssis
03-27-2006, 12:04 AM
this thread needs some love
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8618/picture2683wy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
free style, and yes i relized the hole in the E needs to be rotaited thank you Gerk
for a battle:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/63.jpg
Jrow17
03-27-2006, 12:55 AM
Heres some of the stuff from my book..
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/9434/p10100405mr.jpg
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/7558/p10100361pz.jpg
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/613/p10100378ax.jpg
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/928/p10100387cb.jpg
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/3938/p10100397fx.jpg
did this last one for some stupid bitches
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/2710/p10100410ag.jpg
crits/comments appreciated
beefgerky
03-27-2006, 01:10 AM
234 are sexy.
Xsjadox
03-27-2006, 03:59 AM
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/4240/img06327bj.jpg
DR FORCE
03-27-2006, 01:30 PM
Originally posted by neer@Mar 27 2006, 10:28 AM
i like it alot sanz5
I tryd somthing new http://groups.msn.com/_Secure/0RAADAywTUn&...565917281473081 (http://groups.msn.com/_Secure/0RAADAywTUn!o*Q5ALVOQJ5Y*pOPjUGYRRM6Lzhr!CeIXQFHQr aiDo6M4wWHY8*IS*LKc9CC0Mz*F4O7!z1ybqo3ALVw5DpLf36B 4264ICGw/Picture%2029.JPG?dc=4675565917281473081)
But its not ready this new style
Bone2006
03-27-2006, 02:27 PM
Getting some paint soon hopefully, and i'm doing that bone piece that i posted.
I'll post a pic when i've done it!!
Looking nice Jaze!!
a zink paint i did
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8176/zinkjpg2nd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i got help form sezsv for this
for a battle
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01364.jpg
for an exchange
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01362.jpg
Sluts_r_us
03-27-2006, 05:12 PM
not feelin your style...
edit who wants to send me some of their stickers? i wana start a collection...
Honor
03-27-2006, 05:19 PM
it won't accept my image extension...whatever. here it is
My Webpage ( http://home.comcast.net/~hulk50/rune_philly.jpg)
joker00
03-27-2006, 05:22 PM
^ not bad u dont need the back round u cna just bomb a piece of papaer
Sluts_r_us
03-27-2006, 05:22 PM
http://www.yabitt.com/bbs/images/smiles/terri0no.gif
joker00
03-27-2006, 05:23 PM
Originally posted by Zink@Mar 27 2006, 03:19 PM
a zink paint i did
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8176/zinkjpg2nd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i got help form sezsv for this
not bad .....that wud be a fuckin sick roller
Nosypainter
03-27-2006, 05:23 PM
What do you guysthink i know its not perfect, critz?
http://x2b.xanga.com/43eb76113253044834097/z30302625.jpg
Sluts_r_us
03-27-2006, 05:24 PM
omfg that goes in bombs thread...geeeeeeeez
Nosypainter
03-27-2006, 05:29 PM
omg your right o.0... makes face im sorry i forgot and im tired T.T... but you should give me critz cause your my boy ^^
Honor
03-27-2006, 06:15 PM
Originally posted by joker00@Mar 27 2006, 05:22 PM
^ not bad u dont need the back round u cna just bomb a piece of papaer
i know, just thought it would be fun. background didn't turn out how i had pictured it in my head hehe
leaks
03-27-2006, 06:17 PM
anyone wanna exchange
Sluts_r_us
03-27-2006, 06:26 PM
yeah nosy, i think its ok, its nice that some people stay wit simples but the only letter i like is the e...but thats just me...keep workin in the books for a bit..
ps: and from what i can see ur can control is pretty good
Bill Cheese of Wheeze
03-27-2006, 06:40 PM
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/9864/picture0709hq.jpg
Work in progress, Crits?
MUSASHI
03-27-2006, 06:59 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/burner.jpg
MUSASHI
03-27-2006, 07:01 PM
edit oops ...crits somthin i did today at work...i have the chillest job
AMAZ tbscrew
03-27-2006, 07:05 PM
bill shits tight..keep workin on it
musa that shits tight 2...lose the fire shit? idk w.e
wut u work in?
MUSASHI
03-27-2006, 07:11 PM
equipment operator...but since i got phone skills I get to answer the phones when the secretary is ill...nothing like getting paid 28 bucks an hour to draw fucking pictures all day....chillest job ever
flclnaruto1213
03-27-2006, 07:15 PM
nosy i like that zoe very much
joker00
03-27-2006, 07:17 PM
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Mar 27 2006, 07:11 PM
equipment operator...but since i got phone skills I get to answer the phones when the secretary is ill...nothing like getting paid 28 bucks an hour to draw fucking pictures all day....chillest job ever
:unsure: i wish i had a job like that!
leaks
03-27-2006, 07:19 PM
ur fill is firrrreee
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Mar 27 2006, 06:59 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/burner.jpg
thas sick
buh at the tag the right side sum gay flag his hanging off of it
only flaw i guess
Nosypainter
03-27-2006, 08:11 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Mar 27 2006, 06:26 PM
yeah nosy, i think its ok, its nice that some people stay wit simples but the only letter i like is the e...but thats just me...keep workin in the books for a bit..
ps: and from what i can see ur can control is pretty good
*blows kiss* why thank you darling, ^^ yeah my can conrol isnt to bad i gotta work on it though... it sucks all of my caps are making my cans explode <_< , but yeah im notot bad with a can...
Nosypainter
03-27-2006, 08:12 PM
Originally posted by kill+Mar 27 2006, 07:48 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kill @ Mar 27 2006, 07:48 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MUSASHI@Mar 27 2006, 06:59 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/burner.jpg
thas sick
buh at the tag the right side sum gay flag his hanging off of it
only flaw i guess [/b][/quote]
:o i like it ^^...
i like the piece
the tag is good buh too many colors its like a mini piece
joker00
03-27-2006, 08:18 PM
^who cares its looks fresh
chill
03-27-2006, 08:32 PM
been working on the throwie, took ur advice joker, gots any advice crits?
http://img15.imgspot.com/?u=/u/06/85/21/th...21143512949.jpg (http://img15.imgspot.com/?u=/u/06/85/21/throwie21143512949.jpg)
flclnaruto1213
03-27-2006, 08:33 PM
nosy are you like in love with sluts
Sluts_r_us
03-27-2006, 08:35 PM
yeah nosy np....and about your cans exploding...usually that happens if the temperature drops...trust me...i know...
Ironik
03-27-2006, 08:36 PM
musa wat kind of markers u use them prismas.
Sluts_r_us
03-27-2006, 08:36 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Mar 27 2006, 08:33 PM
nosy are you like in love with sluts
because im just so damn cool thats why...
AMAZ tbscrew
03-27-2006, 08:44 PM
*points and laughs at sluts*
Sluts_r_us
03-27-2006, 08:45 PM
at least i dont have to go to court soon...dumbass
AMAZ tbscrew
03-27-2006, 08:46 PM
...u could easly go 2 court joce.....do u really want me 2 snitch? no ok stfu.
Sluts_r_us
03-27-2006, 08:47 PM
lol i know you wouldnt so either way haha
AMAZ tbscrew
03-27-2006, 08:51 PM
wana try me?...cuz i took the blame for all that shit
flclnaruto1213
03-27-2006, 09:07 PM
huh?
what happenedddddd
i dint know that amaz...got caught?
oh do tell.
runci that is sick, all of it
sprez
03-27-2006, 09:16 PM
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/2879/dsc000948fw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Quick pen I did, suggestions, criticism please.
AMAZ tbscrew
03-27-2006, 09:21 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Mar 27 2006, 09:07 PM
huh?
what happenedddddd
i dint know that amaz...got caught?
oh do tell.
yurp 2nd offense already... dang :(
Sluts_r_us
03-27-2006, 09:31 PM
lol yeah he got caught again like last month? idk....props to him tho...
Z FUSE
03-27-2006, 09:32 PM
i always wanted this blue, finally jacked one crayola from skool. crits please.
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/56/newcolo2rb.jpg
chill
03-27-2006, 09:34 PM
better pic advice crits?
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/3978/throwie38ao.th.jpg (http://img489.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwie38ao.jpg)
how do u resize pics from image shack?
MUSASHI
03-27-2006, 09:36 PM
Originally posted by Ironik@Mar 27 2006, 08:36 PM
.
musa wat kind of markers u use them prismas
it's an assortment I hate prismas...i like those generic dollar store markers,..also seadtler technical pens,tric dual brush markers from hobbylobby...and elmers paint pens(for the white)...i never use pencil cuz i'm too impatient to erase...plus pencil makes a mess...the only good prisma is the blender...four bucks for one marker when i can buy a whole box of rose arts for that price...
i dont like prismas that much either they bleed to much buh they do blend well
flclnaruto1213
03-27-2006, 09:39 PM
damn that sucks amaz..you know geting caught twice in jersey can lead to juvi right?
Sluts_r_us
03-27-2006, 09:40 PM
Originally posted by Z FUSE@Mar 27 2006, 09:32 PM
i always wanted this blue, finally jacked one crayola from skool. crits please.
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/56/newcolo2rb.jpg
omg what a thug he jacked a crayola from school <_<
getting caught once here is enough to go depends on how much damage u cause
AMAZ tbscrew
03-27-2006, 09:43 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Mar 27 2006, 09:39 PM
damn that sucks amaz..you know geting caught twice in jersey can lead to juvi right?
:o tght it was 3rd offense and u go 2 juvi...oh fuck. :(
sprez
03-27-2006, 09:49 PM
Originally posted by sprez@Mar 27 2006, 09:16 PM
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/2879/dsc000948fw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Quick pen I did, suggestions, criticism please.
bump
flclnaruto1213
03-27-2006, 09:53 PM
amaz your probably right
i dont know much about the laws, but thats just what i hear from friends.
AoAssis
03-27-2006, 09:57 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis@Mar 27 2006, 12:04 AM
this thread needs some love
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8618/picture2683wy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
free style, and yes i relized the hole in the E needs to be rotaited thank you Gerk
bump
edit- amaz i dont think they can change a major law like that for one state, and if they didnt you right it is three but im not sure so dont take my word for it
Bill Cheese of Wheeze
03-27-2006, 10:02 PM
Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze@Mar 27 2006, 06:40 PM
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/9864/picture0709hq.jpg
Work in progress, Crits?
Bump.....I'm not really into bumping my own junk, but i posted it at the bottom of the page, and those guys carried a convo for about a whole section....
so anyway, crits much appreciated...
Sluts_r_us
03-27-2006, 10:07 PM
keep workin on it....the respirator look kinda fucked imo though
Z FUSE
03-27-2006, 10:11 PM
that looks cool.^ yea the resp could use more detail. it loks like it's attached to his face. but good sketch.
i posted this already but no one really replied, so crits please.
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/56/newcolo2rb.jpg
whatsgoinon
03-27-2006, 10:11 PM
[IMG][URL=http://img360.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hoola041medium4wr.jpg][IMG]
opinions?
flclnaruto1213
03-27-2006, 10:12 PM
1-my explosm comic is funnier than ao's
2-what the fuck does imo mean.
whatsgoinon
03-27-2006, 10:16 PM
URL=http://img229.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hoola041medium8cw.jpg]http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/2107/hoola041medium8cw.th.jpg[/URL][/IMG]
sry for the 1st one im fucked up
AoAssis
03-27-2006, 10:19 PM
naruto - yes i relized that in the last thread but no need for bragging.
Z FUSE - ARE YOU FUCKIN KIDDING ME YOU FUCKIN JACKASS. (yes that had to be in caps cuz your so fuckin gay) take a look, at the top of the page, What do you see? Oh my God IS THAT YOUR PIECE!?!??!?! YEEEEEEES so shut the fuck up, dont bump your fuck that just flew out of your ass onto a piece of paper. You even managed to bump it on the same fuckin page, nice job jerkoff.
edit- none of you bitches come in here, and start yellin at me and say " y dont you help him" or "you sound so tuff over the internet, i wana beat your ass in real life i bet ur 10 years old" or "stop bein such an asshole to everyone" well thats life kids not everyone is going to like you, fact one im an asshole deal with it, fact two you all probably live 1000+ miles away from me, if you wana drive, walk, take a plain, etc and come beat my ass i wouldnt mind, i wouldnt call the cops on you, i wouldnt cry like a baby, so if you hate me tuff luck, cuz i hate you back. if you have read to here congradulations, you didnt skim the post you actualy read the whole thing, thats something new, you actually took the TIME to do something.
flclnaruto1213
03-27-2006, 10:22 PM
:angry: hahah word, both comics r funny thouh
what does imo mean. :angry: :angry: :angry: :D :angry: :o :huh: :angry: :unsure: :angry:
AMAZ tbscrew
03-27-2006, 10:24 PM
in my opinion...now go 2 sleep its past ur bed time haha
noise not music
03-27-2006, 10:27 PM
sluts post some of your shit
flclnaruto1213
03-27-2006, 10:30 PM
hahah
finally i know
oh and i dont got a bedtime.
AoAssis
03-27-2006, 10:38 PM
http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/1120/orlyowl9oz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
AMAZ tbscrew
03-27-2006, 10:43 PM
Originally posted by noise not music@Mar 27 2006, 10:27 PM
sluts post some of your shit
tght i had some of his shit 2 post up for u but i dont..
and he aint on anymore so u gota calm down.
MUSASHI
03-27-2006, 10:46 PM
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Mar 27 2006, 06:59 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/burner.jpg
bump for AO and sluts...
Ao that was quite a tyrade you jumped into,good read nonetheless
AoAssis
03-27-2006, 10:49 PM
mushi you have changed alot since i first met you, i liked your simple sutf alot better, i think you were on the rite track, but lots of people still like your shit nonetheless so props, i aint feelint he fire tho
Ao that was quite a tyrade you jumped into,good read nonetheless
watchya talkin bout nukka? the long ass thing i wrote about Z FUSE on the last page?
noise not music
03-27-2006, 10:53 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+Mar 27 2006, 10:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ Mar 27 2006, 10:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-noise not music@Mar 27 2006, 10:27 PM
sluts post some of your shit
tght i had some of his shit 2 post up for u but i dont..
and he aint on anymore so u gota calm down. [/b][/quote]
why isnt he on anymore
TricksForKids
03-27-2006, 10:54 PM
Ao = slowly stealin my heart with that weird ass style, i havent been on here in a while...sorted through alot of junk...ill ahve some new shit later in the week
Peace
AoAssis
03-27-2006, 10:54 PM
Originally posted by noise not music+Mar 27 2006, 10:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (noise not music @ Mar 27 2006, 10:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Mar 27 2006, 10:43 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-noise not music@Mar 27 2006, 10:27 PM
sluts post some of your shit
tght i had some of his shit 2 post up for u but i dont..
and he aint on anymore so u gota calm down.
why isnt he on anymore[/b][/quote]
cuz he has a life
edit - hey glad to see you back regs, you one of the real dudes on here
Originally posted by AoAssis@Mar 27 2006, 10:19 PM
naruto - yes i relized that in the last thread but no need for bragging.
Z FUSE - ARE YOU FUCKIN KIDDING ME YOU FUCKIN JACKASS. (yes that had to be in caps cuz your so fuckin gay) take a look, at the top of the page, What do you see? Oh my God IS THAT YOUR PIECE!?!??!?! YEEEEEEES so shut the fuck up, dont bump your fuck that just flew out of your ass onto a piece of paper. You even managed to bump it on the same fuckin page, nice job jerkoff.
edit- none of you bitches come in here, and start yellin at me and say " y dont you help him" or "you sound so tuff over the internet, i wana beat your ass in real life i bet ur 10 years old" or "stop bein such an asshole to everyone" well thats life kids not everyone is going to like you, fact one im an asshole deal with it, fact two you all probably live 1000+ miles away from me, if you wana drive, walk, take a plain, etc and come beat my ass i wouldnt mind, i wouldnt call the cops on you, i wouldnt cry like a baby, so if you hate me tuff luck, cuz i hate you back. if you have read to here congradulations, you didnt skim the post you actualy read the whole thing, thats something new, you actually took the TIME to do something.
hahaha z fuse lives close to u betta watch out :o :P
AoAssis
03-27-2006, 10:56 PM
i just heard that from Gerk, lol i laughed thanks anyway kill
Select_One
03-27-2006, 11:20 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/any1.jpg
MUSASHI
03-27-2006, 11:21 PM
just for the record...I do't have a forking clue as to what i'm doing,and i hav'nt the slightest clue as to why I'm doing it either..but what i do know
is this...i'm doing it regardless...the main reason i think i am doing this is to help my swords man ship...I still don't grasp the whole letter structure thing,really cuz when i draw a letter the intent is to make the letter look like the letter it is supposed to represent,and when i make a word i try and make the composition flow with a hint of simmalrity between the letters...and besides i look at the real good guys (supposedly)and they are all abstract and shit,so i'm like what the fuck?
I understand there needs to be a progression,but like danielsan to mr. miyagi...."I'm getting my ass kicked here" trying to follow everyones advice then when i bust a move all on my owni shine...
my painting is another story,read,sux ass
AoAssis
03-27-2006, 11:26 PM
as long as you doin your own thing, and it aint totaly wack, ya im getin into abstract shit, but not crazy abstract, more kinda Eruoish
Blak-T
03-27-2006, 11:28 PM
some stencil art....comments.....
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0003.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0001.jpg
MUSASHI
03-27-2006, 11:32 PM
top ones cool
Blak-T
03-27-2006, 11:37 PM
thanks....your abstract style is nice.
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Mar 27 2006, 11:21 PM
just for the record...I do't have a forking clue as to what i'm doing,and i hav'nt the slightest clue as to why I'm doing it either..but what i do know
is this...i'm doing it regardless...the main reason i think i am doing this is to help my swords man ship...I still don't grasp the whole letter structure thing,really cuz when i draw a letter the intent is to make the letter look like the letter it is supposed to represent,and when i make a word i try and make the composition flow with a hint of simmalrity between the letters...and besides i look at the real good guys (supposedly)and they are all abstract and shit,so i'm like what the fuck?
I understand there needs to be a progression,but like danielsan to mr. miyagi...."I'm getting my ass kicked here" trying to follow everyones advice then when i bust a move all on my owni shine...
my painting is another story,read,sux ass
the last piece u did was the first one that i liked the letter structure in u could of fixed the m a bit
next time dont color it in
post it here than well rate ur structure
MF Feed Letter
03-28-2006, 12:19 AM
Stencils never really impress me...mostly because there all stolen images..just cut out...unless your drawing your own stencils and there kinda complex is probably the only time i like them
new stuff
..looked back at an old drawin of mine and developed it more
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0846.jpg
recently discovered the joy of ball point pen
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0845.jpg
AoAssis
03-28-2006, 12:20 AM
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4629/picture2726nz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
for battle
MUSASHI
03-28-2006, 12:50 AM
the last piece u did was the first one that i liked the letter structure in u could of fixed the m a bit
fair enough
Nosypainter
03-28-2006, 02:25 AM
heres my sketch give me critz ^^, ill eventually be able to use it for a battle...
http://x59.xanga.com/593b806159c3544909737/z30348886.jpg
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g35/deeponer/deepbombstyle.jpg
I'm just starting out sketching, I have shit all markers to work with so I gotta make do with what I've got... I'd like some crits. Just trying to develop a simple bombstyle.
Originally posted by Nosypainter@Mar 28 2006, 02:25 AM
heres my sketch give me critz ^^, ill eventually be able to use it for a battle...
http://x59.xanga.com/593b806159c3544909737/z30348886.jpg
I only have one thing I don't like about that sketch; the letters differ in thickness way too much and in too many places. Other than that, it's a nice sketch.
Xsjadox
03-28-2006, 06:31 AM
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/6489/img06379qd.jpg
ao that tame is sick
im working on a neer in that same style
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h264/neer__/neer7.jpg
CRIT CRIT CRIT
djsupreeme
03-28-2006, 11:40 AM
Originally posted by neer@Mar 28 2006, 11:13 AM
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h264/neer__/neer7.jpg
CRIT CRIT CRIT
lmao man you bit ao's e hard.
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4629/picture2726nz.jpg
oh shit haha
DONT CRIT IVE GOTTA RE DO THE E'S
well today i was bored in class(were i draw most of the stuff) and did some things, then decided i'd take the pages that i drew on out of a quarter of my book...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005937.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005938.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005939.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005940.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005941.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM005942.jpg
AMAZ tbscrew
03-28-2006, 12:54 PM
Originally posted by neer@Mar 28 2006, 12:03 PM
oh shit haha
DONT CRIT IVE GOTTA RE DO THE E'S
no u dont...cuz everyone use's thos e's...iv used them before i ever say remik use them
sprez
03-28-2006, 04:54 PM
Originally posted by sprez@Mar 27 2006, 09:16 PM
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/2879/dsc000948fw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Quick pen I did, suggestions, criticism please.
..........
AMAZ tbscrew
03-28-2006, 04:56 PM
i like ur E...but i dont think ur other letters have the same flow..so make them kinda look like the E somehow and loose all the dot things around it ....and add 3d 2 ur letters instead itll look nice with that style E
TricksForKids
03-28-2006, 05:37 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis@Mar 28 2006, 12:20 AM
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4629/picture2726nz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
for battle
Bump for freshness
vare_187uk
03-28-2006, 05:39 PM
yeah bump the tame
sprez sort that mutha fuking K out its limp man
bang some 3d on that bottom only for now i wanna see what it looks like after that!!!
MF Feed Letter
03-28-2006, 06:18 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Mar 28 2006, 12:19 AM
Stencils never really impress me...mostly because there all stolen images..just cut out...unless your drawing your own stencils and there kinda complex is probably the only time i like them
new stuff
..looked back at an old drawin of mine and developed it more
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0846.jpg
recently discovered the joy of ball point pen
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0845.jpg
nothin?
Sprae
03-28-2006, 06:24 PM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8205/picture0279ok.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
comments/crits?
Mr Tasty
03-28-2006, 06:25 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/threow.jpg
beefgerky
03-28-2006, 06:27 PM
been a while taster, lookin nice as always tho.
Sprae
03-28-2006, 06:39 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter+Mar 28 2006, 06:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (MF Feed Letter @ Mar 28 2006, 06:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MF Feed Letter@Mar 28 2006, 12:19 AM
Stencils never really impress me...mostly because there all stolen images..just cut out...unless your drawing your own stencils and there kinda complex is probably the only time i like them
new stuff
..looked back at an old drawin of mine and developed it more
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0846.jpg
recently discovered the joy of ball point pen
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0845.jpg
nothin? [/b][/quote]
dude that shit is FRESH!!!!!!!! i like it alot.... maybe i shouldnt be talking though cuz i suck
Mr Tasty
03-28-2006, 06:42 PM
yea it has been quite a while..
gota start graffin again :P
flclnaruto1213
03-28-2006, 06:45 PM
hey taste i suggest you take your myspace out of your sig.
a little while ago a bs member got arrested from myspace
cess!
03-28-2006, 06:46 PM
Originally posted by djsupreeme+Mar 28 2006, 11:40 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (djsupreeme @ Mar 28 2006, 11:40 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-neer@Mar 28 2006, 11:13 AM
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h264/neer__/neer7.jpg
CRIT CRIT CRIT
lmao man you bit ao's e hard.
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4629/picture2726nz.jpg [/b][/quote]
Aos style isnt exclusive
Sluts_r_us
03-28-2006, 06:49 PM
yooo taste lovin the handie....can u get a better pic of that sketch tho?
Mr Tasty
03-28-2006, 07:00 PM
Originally posted by Sprae@Mar 28 2006, 06:24 PM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8205/picture0279ok.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
comments/crits?
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/picture02279ok.jpg
haha sorry was bored
edit : haha that is soo lame wat i did
especialy that A..wtf? haha
hey to the guy saying to take myspace of my sig
thx for warning but i realy doubt something like that will happen
Mr Tasty
03-28-2006, 07:09 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Mar 28 2006, 06:49 PM
yooo taste lovin the handie....can u get a better pic of that sketch tho?
thx
i dont have a scanner but will this do?
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/best.jpg
Sprae
03-28-2006, 07:09 PM
Edit: the pick that was here before sucks just like the rest of my shit so i took it down
MUSASHI
03-28-2006, 07:10 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musapiece1.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musashipiece1.jpg
just acouple I did at work today...
Mr Tasty
03-28-2006, 07:12 PM
i love all the colors
Sprae
03-28-2006, 07:13 PM
Originally posted by Mr Tasty+Mar 28 2006, 07:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Mr Tasty @ Mar 28 2006, 07:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sprae@Mar 28 2006, 06:24 PM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8205/picture0279ok.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
comments/crits?
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/picture02279ok.jpg
haha sorry was bored
edit : haha that is soo lame wat i did
especialy that A..wtf? haha
hey to the guy saying to take myspace of my sig
thx for warning but i realy doubt something like that will happen [/b][/quote]
hah... like the S and the K though... it inspired me... just ignore the handstyles though i was just messin around
Mr Tasty
03-28-2006, 07:16 PM
Originally posted by Sprae@Mar 28 2006, 07:09 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/3490/picture0318in.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
wow i dont wana be mean..
but that is Horrible!
it says SAKE?
i almost cryed laughing when i first saw it
the S dont look ANYTHING like a S
and the K....looks terrible
...like ur piece has Elephantiasis
Sprae
03-28-2006, 07:19 PM
yea... i know
Edit: all my shit sucks... ill never be good
Sluts_r_us
03-28-2006, 07:24 PM
ok uhh change your name? i mean come on your writing sake wtf...
and taste yeah thats better....im likin the throw just havin a lil hard time "identifying" the a....still looks dope tho
Mr Tasty
03-28-2006, 07:25 PM
Sluts_r_us the A is a 4 lol
this one is quite old ...says Necrophile
the picture was quite long so i took the photo twice...
work it out
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/necrophile.jpg
MUSASHI
03-28-2006, 07:27 PM
sprea...don't let criticisms bring you down,man...they are meant to get you up...jus because someone hasn't a taste for your wrk,doesn't mean you aint tryin...now keep on sketching you have talent i you ,you jushave to find it
MUSASHI
03-28-2006, 07:28 PM
you hate em don't ya sluts?edit mine i mean
Sluts_r_us
03-28-2006, 07:28 PM
looks pretty good...just the n doesnt really fit with the other letters...kinda spaced out a lil far from them lol...
and im just hoping your not a necrophile :ph34r:
edit: directed at mr.tastey
musashi i dont hate em i just think its a really wierd style lol
Mr Tasty
03-28-2006, 07:29 PM
Originally posted by Sprae@Mar 28 2006, 07:19 PM
yea... i know
Edit: all my shit sucks... ill never be good
u will get good
ur just trying to hard
u know the font "Arial" right?....just use letters like that for now
same thickness all the way in the letter
dont start disfiguring the letter...study the letter and how the lines in the letter work
slowly ...the letter will begin to have style..if u keep practicing it...
but dont try too hard..cos then it becomes toy
i realy dont know how to explain it better....
just practice
Mr Tasty
03-28-2006, 07:32 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Mar 28 2006, 07:28 PM
looks pretty good...just the n doesnt really fit with the other letters...kinda spaced out a lil far from them lol...
and im just hoping your not a necrophile :ph34r:
edit: directed at mr.tastey
musashi i dont hate em i just think its a really wierd style lol
the n was suposed to be devoured by the head ...but i couldnt be botherd to finnish and color it...so i just left it
and fuck yea im a necrophile...
I feel the urge the growing need
To fuck this sinful corpse
My tasks complete the bitch's soul
Lies raped in demonic lust
Sprae
03-28-2006, 07:35 PM
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Mar 28 2006, 07:27 PM
sprea...don't let criticisms bring you down,man...they are meant to get you up...jus because someone hasn't a taste for your wrk,doesn't mean you aint tryin...now keep on sketching you have talent i you ,you jushave to find it
hah... i like ur work musashi... its always really colorful and makes me happy
Feliks
03-28-2006, 07:49 PM
http://www.5images.com/uploads/c860bc5880.jpg (http://www.5images.com)
http://www.5images.com/uploads/97cd6b6a4c.jpg (http://www.5images.com)
http://www.5images.com/uploads/a75c7ef434.jpg (http://www.5images.com)
http://www.5images.com/uploads/c7e61c8daf.jpg (http://www.5images.com)
MUSASHI
03-28-2006, 07:55 PM
the top one is the best imo...keep it up felix
Feliks
03-28-2006, 07:58 PM
I can't keep the style though :S It never works out.
Feliks
03-28-2006, 08:01 PM
PS: Thanks for the ups btw ^_^
Go fem writers!
that top ones pretty sick
flclnaruto1213
03-28-2006, 08:04 PM
we have another lady on here?
oh how exciting.
i think the top ones pretty sick
Mr Tasty
03-28-2006, 08:06 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/tastee.jpg
havent sketched for so long
edit: just relised the first T is gay as hell...gonna re sketch tommrow
Feliks
03-28-2006, 08:08 PM
I'm likin' your enthusiasm naruto-man....
woa...i posted twice but like...didnt...wtf
MF Feed Letter
03-28-2006, 08:34 PM
feliks watch your 3d special on the first one on the curvy end parts
Feliks
03-28-2006, 08:34 PM
Thanks tips ;)
Feliks
03-28-2006, 08:35 PM
And MF, I don't know which curvy end parts are havin the problems with the 3-D....?
MF Feed Letter
03-28-2006, 08:42 PM
on thwe bottom parts where they curl up im to lazy to show you on paint so myah...
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0847.jpg
from today at school
Kingz514
03-28-2006, 08:49 PM
i like that sketch a lot mf
some nice shit with only a blue pen
Feliks
03-28-2006, 08:50 PM
The 3-D seems to be following all the rules, my b, still don't understand.
Baltimore Love
03-28-2006, 08:56 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c304/sprayBMD/Hope-hope3.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c304/sprayBMD/Hope-Hope001.jpg
Plain..
Kingz514
03-28-2006, 09:02 PM
does that say hope?
i dont like that style too much
you should try something simpler and cleaner
try a less crazy fill so we can see the letters
MF Feed Letter
03-28-2006, 09:09 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/c860bc5880.jpg
k do you understand now that 3d should continue on a bit more before dissapearing
and balt love simple down that fill and dont do shuch shitty letters
cess!
03-28-2006, 09:13 PM
hope whats with that chicks tits?
MF Feed Letter
03-28-2006, 09:15 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Mar 28 2006, 08:42 PM
on thwe bottom parts where they curl up im to lazy to show you on paint so myah...
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0847.jpg
from today at school
bump because last on other page
Originally posted by Baltimore Love@Mar 28 2006, 08:56 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c304/sprayBMD/Hope-hope3.jpg
jesus she has some pointy titties, a big ass nose, and shes fat and no booty...just dont try that again -.-
Feliks
03-28-2006, 09:20 PM
Oh, I see now. Aight, cool.
PS: hah, you used paint anyways ;)
Thanks man, I appreciate the effort :P
Feliks
03-28-2006, 09:22 PM
Balt love, that chick looks like an old man...Well the face does anyways. Go check out some maxim pics and give your eyes a good scanning so you can come back and actually draw a WOMAN.
MF Feed Letter
03-28-2006, 09:25 PM
good you understand i really didnt wana havbe to explain anymore...your lucky i did the paint editing
AoAssis
03-28-2006, 09:45 PM
Originally posted by cess!+Mar 28 2006, 06:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cess! @ Mar 28 2006, 06:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by djsupreeme@Mar 28 2006, 11:40 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-neer@Mar 28 2006, 11:13 AM
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h264/neer__/neer7.jpg
CRIT CRIT CRIT
lmao man you bit ao's e hard.
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4629/picture2726nz.jpg
Aos style isnt exclusive [/b][/quote]
i heard bitting is the best form of flattering
Mr Tasty
03-28-2006, 09:45 PM
Originally posted by Baltimore Love
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c304/sprayBMD/Hope-hope3.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c304/sprayBMD/Hope-Hope001.jpg
AMAZ tbscrew
03-28-2006, 09:47 PM
nope. tasty...nope
Mr Tasty
03-28-2006, 09:50 PM
lol
AMAZ tbscrew
03-28-2006, 09:54 PM
Originally posted by Mr Tasty+Mar 28 2006, 09:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Mr Tasty @ Mar 28 2006, 09:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Baltimore Love
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c304/sprayBMD/Hope-hope3.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c304/sprayBMD/Hope-Hope001.jpg
Plain..
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/KellyBrookNiceAndWet.jpg
nu uh :huh: [/b][/quote]
ur not guna get any bitchs wit those letters
and if u do i hope there as busted as the one next 2 it ....
Honor
03-28-2006, 10:41 PM
did this for a battle
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c71/Bent449/rune_cray.jpg
crit and comments please
Z FUSE
03-28-2006, 10:42 PM
Tasty-dude the drawn girl's face looks like a guy's face. huge nose. legs make up like 2/3 of her body. and her boobs are too pointy.
HONOr- i like the lines in the 3d. but take off the rectangles at the tip of the N cuz they're too small and no 3d.
rune thats sick
expecially the karak, it adds alot
Mr Tasty
03-28-2006, 11:03 PM
i didnt draw it you fools it was Baltimore Love
Sprae
03-28-2006, 11:15 PM
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/4682/picture0341we.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
just tried to keep it simple so i could make some progress... the letters look a little uneven to me but tell me what you think!
AoAssis
03-28-2006, 11:17 PM
Originally posted by neer@Mar 28 2006, 10:46 PM
rune thats sick
expecially the karak, it adds alot
this is wat BS has come to
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g35/deeponer/deepbombstyle.jpg
Bump.
Crits?
Z FUSE
03-29-2006, 12:46 AM
it's ok. the e don't have the same style as the rest. good 3d.
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Mar 28 2006, 09:42 PM
on thwe bottom parts where they curl up im to lazy to show you on paint so myah...
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0847.jpg
from today at school
buuuump for the freshness that is MF.
beefgerky
03-29-2006, 02:46 AM
mad dope
vare_187uk
03-29-2006, 06:55 AM
euro for a battle im doing another as i dont like this now ive done it
same principal but change to a few letters
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/eruo.jpg
DR FORCE
03-29-2006, 08:25 AM
http://groups.msn.com/_Secure/0RAAAACoT5X6...566162313450263 (http://groups.msn.com/_Secure/0RAAAACoT5X6o*Q5ALVOQJ58W1ISLcyH85QwN6gEOi9pvuiDa1 tEDoC6jMOJkMatzs27CPYkKDGk*OhP0FaDRm9TACeY9!CTrGkJ daGrn7Gw/Picture%2036.JPG?dc=4675566162313450263)
:D this tag shit is for a battel tel my houw you cold this style
and if your thinks its good or do you thinks it's suckes
----------------------------------------------------------------
(='x'=) Buny Clan the clan 4 toy's
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Mar 29 2006, 12:10 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musapiece1.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musashipiece1.jpg
just acouple I did at work today...
NICE!! thumbs up
Feliks
03-29-2006, 10:09 AM
Originally posted by vare_187uk@Mar 29 2006, 06:55 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/eruo.jpg
I'm likin this one, try and keep it uniform, like don't have random uneven spaces between the letters, that's my opinion.
Oh, and keep your page clean, nothin more unattractive and sloppy than a piece of paper with run marks from past markers all over it!
Use lined paper if you're practicing to keep your letters the same size and the like, but try and use white paper if you can. It's easier on the eyes when looking at a blackbook piece of work.
All in all though, not bad. Nice fill too.
PS: lose the Karak and the card, they just make your work look like shit.
Originally posted by cord+Mar 29 2006, 09:40 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cord @ Mar 29 2006, 09:40 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MUSASHI@Mar 29 2006, 12:10 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musapiece1.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musashipiece1.jpg
just acouple I did at work today...
NICE!! thumbs up [/b][/quote]
moosh! holy shit!
what warkers are you using... or whatever those are WHAT ARE THEY
DR FORCE
03-29-2006, 11:07 AM
Ife tryde a new style I cal it Tetris style
http://groups.msn.com/_Secure/0RAAAACwTU3&...566178336462052 (http://groups.msn.com/_Secure/0RAAAACwTU3!o*Q5ALVOQJw8CPo8b0N5TaNsdx38IYElQ!Qsgn *nk3vU!1bYsMyamU0Kf0acXgklzFnj4COxzSh4UbSjwa*dQwmd uji8EB4U/Picture%2038.JPG?dc=4675566178336462052)
http://groups.msn.com/_Secure/0RADjAisTHH&...566178325501932 (http://groups.msn.com/_Secure/0RADjAisTHH!o*Q5ALVOQJ6yFCvmojOHETfPK5Fq3*uYMPRmbN kTIQY!K35!eOJdouLlzcT19tIAKhOW1MNfdIEhVuNIP9Yhim76 Qbf2zZ9Y/Picture%2037.JPG?dc=4675566178325501932)
:ph34r: waht do you think coments pleas and tips :ph34r:
Mr Tasty
03-29-2006, 01:27 PM
bah plz use the img function
and sry i dont like it...not a cool style
heres a whole wack of wack stuff :P crit me (they all say 'near')
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/left.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/nearij.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/ADW.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/nroner.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/near_small.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/near_camo_small.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/near_fiend.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/near_benrar_sm.jpg
joker00
03-29-2006, 02:32 PM
Originally posted by DR FORCE@Mar 29 2006, 11:07 AM
Ife tryde a new style I cal it Tetris style
http://groups.msn.com/_Secure/0RAAAACwTU3&...566178336462052 (http://groups.msn.com/_Secure/0RAAAACwTU3!o*Q5ALVOQJw8CPo8b0N5TaNsdx38IYElQ!Qsgn *nk3vU!1bYsMyamU0Kf0acXgklzFnj4COxzSh4UbSjwa*dQwmd uji8EB4U/Picture%2038.JPG?dc=4675566178336462052)
http://groups.msn.com/_Secure/0RADjAisTHH&...566178325501932 (http://groups.msn.com/_Secure/0RADjAisTHH!o*Q5ALVOQJ6yFCvmojOHETfPK5Fq3*uYMPRmbN kTIQY!K35!eOJdouLlzcT19tIAKhOW1MNfdIEhVuNIP9Yhim76 Qbf2zZ9Y/Picture%2037.JPG?dc=4675566178325501932)
:ph34r: waht do you think coments pleas and tips :ph34r:
please this style u shud neva try again its like square adn then pointy it makes very little sense
BAACK TO THE DRAWIN BOARD!
joker00
03-29-2006, 02:34 PM
Originally posted by near@Mar 29 2006, 01:41 PM
heres a whole wack of wack stuff :P crit me (they all say 'near')
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/near_fiend.jpg
:) this 1 is fresh yo im lovein it let me see more !
AlmoSt
03-29-2006, 02:51 PM
musashi, you have improved like a mad man, wtf hav u been doin? eatin ur wheaties??
lol, your pickin it up like craaaazy!!!! Keep it up
ive been tweakin a newish style i got goin, ill post flix tonite
zerohour
03-29-2006, 03:00 PM
http://home.no.net/ramsesk/soz.jpg
any feedback?
chase one
03-29-2006, 03:35 PM
crits??
http://show.imagehosting.us/show/1266803/0/nouser_1266/T0_-1_1266803.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.us/index.php?action=show&ident=1266803)
rona2
03-29-2006, 03:46 PM
Originally posted by chase one@Mar 29 2006, 03:35 PM
crits??
http://show.imagehosting.us/show/1266803/0/nouser_1266/T0_-1_1266803.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.us/index.php?action=show&ident=1266803)
work on your basics a little more before you try that ish again ...
(the E is wack, too many useless addons ... jus keep workin on it buddy)
one of my newer ones
http://show.imagehosting.us/show/1266820/0/nouser_1266/T0_-1_1266820.JPG (http://www.imagehosting.us/index.php?action=show&ident=1266820)
MUSASHI
03-29-2006, 03:54 PM
yet one more..for a lil' battle between some dude "ADOS" lost alot of color in the scanner..letters probably suck and the outline is a bit dodgy,but oh well...to anser almost's question...naw man i just been having the perfect environment for creativity lately...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musavs.jpg
Sluts_r_us
03-29-2006, 03:58 PM
rona i think if you keep workin on it, that style could turn out pretty good...not feelin the a though
beefgerky
03-29-2006, 04:09 PM
:wacko: i feeeel stttuuuppppiiddddd.
Sluts_r_us
03-29-2006, 04:12 PM
no actually i mean rona...before you posted he had a picture up...right under where in his post it says "one of my newer ones"....
<_<
edit: theres no power plants where im at either....
Kev Graff
03-29-2006, 05:02 PM
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e105/Kev_Graff/Sketches%202/Kev002smaller.jpg
little blockbuster tried to make them look like cubes didn't really work out...
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e105/Kev_Graff/Sketches%202/Kev004.jpg
Crits are appreciatted...thx :D
TricksForKids
03-29-2006, 06:46 PM
second S is fresh as fuck...rest i dunno...and all you kids need to hop off muas's nuts...the kid can colour yes, but thats his way of hiding bad letter structure, mind you the one with all the bubbles coming out of it had some nice letters, other than that, its not something to cum over.
Peace ( no hate musa, just these kids bug me )
Sluts_r_us
03-29-2006, 06:51 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Mar 29 2006, 06:46 PM
second S is fresh as fuck...rest i dunno...and all you kids need to hop off muas's nuts...the kid can colour yes, but thats his way of hiding bad letter structure, mind you the one with all the bubbles coming out of it had some nice letters, other than that, its not something to cum over.
Peace ( no hate musa, just these kids bug me )
thats what i have been saying...
MUSASHI
03-29-2006, 07:14 PM
OKAY....here's a black and white,before i color it so y'all can rip it apart...no hate man...i get what you are sayin,although i don't know how to convey it visually,but i'm trying...
edit:oops...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musaproto.jpg
AMAZ tbscrew
03-29-2006, 07:16 PM
re.....size.
MUSASHI
03-29-2006, 07:35 PM
better now?
AMAZ tbscrew
03-29-2006, 07:41 PM
no.
Sluts_r_us
03-29-2006, 07:45 PM
the letter structure is butt cheeks
AMAZ tbscrew
03-29-2006, 07:46 PM
smooth butt cheeks?
MUSASHI
03-29-2006, 07:48 PM
i guess smoothe but cheecks is good cuz they are...I don't like bumpy ones myself... unless you're saying they're ASS ..in that case ...not as good mum ,not as good...
Sluts_r_us
03-29-2006, 07:48 PM
nope, the ones with cellulite.
MUSASHI
03-29-2006, 07:51 PM
yuk
AMAZ tbscrew
03-29-2006, 07:51 PM
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew...id mac it.
MUSASHI
03-29-2006, 07:51 PM
point out ma flaws...I gotta know..
Ironik
03-29-2006, 08:38 PM
u have ur own style musa and thats good but do sumthing with the A.
Kev Graff
03-29-2006, 08:39 PM
sorry MUSASHI, but your "M" looks like it has down syndrome.
joker00
03-29-2006, 08:50 PM
i say u try 2 add some style 2 it , it looks liek the same thing over and over.........noofffense
running man
03-29-2006, 09:00 PM
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f377/runblc/runnerpurple.jpg
i dont know how to fuck with image. but, here you go.
crits??
joker00
03-29-2006, 09:08 PM
^not badd
JETc17
03-29-2006, 09:16 PM
the structure is pretty good
the letters should be more porportional
do something with the E, not sure what :|
i like the colors, but im not feeling those blue-ish square things
overall easy on the eyes :)
joker00
03-29-2006, 09:17 PM
agreed and i think the first r is larger then the last 1
musashi you should make your letters the same size isnatead of having them all out of proportion it will look better and be easier to make them look similar
gnarlatron3030
03-29-2006, 09:19 PM
try making the letters less angled. Curve em up if you know what I mean.
But don't lose the style your working on. Develop it.
Paint Magic
03-29-2006, 09:21 PM
add 3d and u all set
Sheek
03-29-2006, 09:27 PM
at least im tring crits please
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6537/ateptedwildstyle3hy.th.jpg (http://img69.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ateptedwildstyle3hy.jpg)
Sluts_r_us
03-29-2006, 09:35 PM
i suck with paint markers...lines come out all shaky and i fucked up the p and e....
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/1006/coloredpesktro0023uw.jpg
joker00
03-29-2006, 09:35 PM
letter structure (im in a good mood)
Sprae
03-29-2006, 10:04 PM
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/2918/picture0430fw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
give me as much stuff that i can improve as possible... even if i need to completely change my letter structure
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01370.jpg
Sprae
03-29-2006, 10:06 PM
i enjoy that one rend
Ironik
03-29-2006, 10:14 PM
Wow sluts for all the shit u talk to every one u need to look at ur self with that PESK and cont blam it on the markers.
Sheek
03-29-2006, 10:15 PM
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6537/ateptedwildstyle3hy.th.jpg (http://img69.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ateptedwildstyle3hy.jpg)
crits please
Sprae
03-29-2006, 10:19 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Mar 29 2006, 09:35 PM
i suck with paint markers...lines come out all shaky and i fucked up the p and e....
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/1006/coloredpesktro0023uw.jpg
tight handstlye bro
Originally posted by Sheek@Mar 29 2006, 10:15 PM
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6537/ateptedwildstyle3hy.th.jpg (http://img69.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ateptedwildstyle3hy.jpg)
crits please
hurt
Logikalone
03-29-2006, 10:28 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/AntehPiecepart2.jpg
Some crits would be nice.
Ironik
03-29-2006, 10:30 PM
Heres sumthing i came up wit it says NEP wat yall think crits please.
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/6094/nep0049xu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
gnarlatron3030
03-29-2006, 10:30 PM
sluts,
keep it up
I diggg
sprae
I like it
but don't try that perspective unless you're going for a piece. Try a drop shadow instead. Keep your letters the same size (relatively) and lose the extension on the s. Go a little bit simpler.
good jobbb
keep workin on structure
directed to logik and sheek
o and rend too
AMAZ tbscrew
03-29-2006, 10:32 PM
Originally posted by Ironik@Mar 29 2006, 10:14 PM
Wow sluts for all the shit u talk to every one u need to look at ur self with that PESK and cont blam it on the markers.
cuz ur shits worth talking buddy ;)
new name..new trow im sure hell come up wit suttin tight...better then ur shit.
Ironik
03-29-2006, 10:32 PM
who sre u talking to KILL?
Ironik
03-29-2006, 10:33 PM
sorry kill didnt read
u better be sorry :angry:
Sheek
03-29-2006, 10:43 PM
if anyone else has any more crits on mine that would be great ,
i wanna get as much advice as i can before i redo it
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6537/ateptedwildstyle3hy.th.jpg (http://img69.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ateptedwildstyle3hy.jpg)
MUSASHI
03-29-2006, 10:59 PM
I would say that that "h" needs some medication...and the "K" how it bubbles on the bottom leg ,Change it...and the "S" kill the arrow.......I know exactly what you are going through,cuz I'm in the same boat just on a different level...You have integrity,and it shows...whaTtt i mean is that you mare so despirately trying not to bite that you are sucking balls for spite...just take a moment to reflect...do your letters look like letters that joe shmoe can relate too?...if it is illegible what's the fu cking point...(post directed at SHEEK)
Sheek
03-29-2006, 11:03 PM
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Mar 29 2006, 10:59 PM
I would say that that "h" needs some medication...and the "K" how it bubbles on the bottom leg ,Change it...and the "S" kill the arrow.......I know exactly what you are going through,cuz I'm in the same boat just on a different level...You have integrity,and it shows...whaTtt i mean is that you mare so despirately trying not to bite that you are sucking balls for spite...just take a moment to reflect...do your letters look like letters that joe shmoe can relate too?...if it is illegible what's the fu cking point...(post directed at SHEEK)
thanks for the advice, and for the arrow i didn't even do it on puropse, i noticed it after i posted the pic
Ironik
03-29-2006, 11:03 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/6094/nep0049xu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bumb cuz i got stuck at the end of the page
wat yall think any crits?
AoAssis
03-29-2006, 11:12 PM
i messed up on the E and M, 5 min piece, and i know the second leg of the R needs to be a bit longer, any more crits
here it is:
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/204/picture2724mb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
maybe u could add sum more 3d from the bottom buh you stated all the probs
maybe make the k leg a lil longer
Z FUSE
03-29-2006, 11:19 PM
agree^ the k leg should be lil bigger.
flclnaruto1213
03-29-2006, 11:20 PM
ao, it looks like your R and E have a different style then the rest of the piece
was gunna say that buh didnt want to hurt his feelings
maybe make them fatter
AoAssis
03-29-2006, 11:21 PM
kinda i guess
flclnaruto1213
03-29-2006, 11:24 PM
ao, have you ever thought of making your R like your K?
i think that if you raised the e, and made the R just like the K it would look dope...
AoAssis
03-29-2006, 11:29 PM
as a matter a fact i have
posted this a while ago:
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/1029/picture2329sr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and i put the E lower cuz i wanted the letters to be like the R is higher E is lower M is higher I is lower K is higher so it would be like ReMiK kinda
kill - you jokin rite? about hurtin my feelings
MF Feed Letter
03-29-2006, 11:31 PM
ballpoint and shitty markers form last night
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0850.jpg
and i didnt realize till now but i think i jacked up musa's bubble things..sorry mate but dont worrie ill probably never use those again
flclnaruto1213
03-29-2006, 11:32 PM
looks pretty hot, might want to try it in future pieces, or not. whatever you want to do.
Sprae
03-29-2006, 11:36 PM
its cool seeing you trying a new style ao... like it just build on it more... i shouldnt talk though cuz i suckl
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