Blackbooks

[funhouseXcast]

sak nice clean structure, i reccomend bending the left bar on the K less but keep it bent.
nuce nice letters, ugly extensions. also if ur gunna color, color in the 3D too, otherwise it looks half-assed

[nuce4]

i know whatcha talking man the extensions are bad but overwise looks nice

[Shake.And.Bake.]

looking for critz on my new pieces....
http://i478.photobucket.com/albums/rr149/tyler_walker_idci/DSCF0124.jpg

http://i478.photobucket.com/albums/rr149/tyler_walker_idci/DSCF0125.jpg

[Eon 1]

^^ the bottom one to me is the best out of these two..the top one I think needs a bit more work.was ur markers dieing cause it looks like it was.

[klic]

i need two more entries for the "asthmatic" handstyle battle get on it

[luvsac]

you got mine, right? :)

[weakfingers]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF5899.jpg

Bump for crits

[mmm_spraypaint]

<a href="http://s949.photobucket.com/albums/ad338/mmm_spraypaint/?action=view&current=kide3.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i949.photobucket.com/albums/ad338/mmm_spraypaint/kide3.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>http://<a href="http://s949.photobucket.com/albums/ad338/mmm_spraypaint/?action=view&current=kide3.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i949.photobucket.com/albums/ad338/mmm_spraypaint/kide3.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>fuk i hope it works this time, if it does watcha think of the letter shapes?http://i949.photobucket.com/albums/ad338/mmm_spraypaint/kide3.jpg

[Kaiser71]

Kide....Colors not bad..but its just too....wiggly...not terrible
Squint...huge improvement form your last stuff, but the lightning bolot curve in the T has to go
Slack...The bottom simples looking good...but not feeling that top piece at all...
Sak & Nuce both looking good.


Been looking at some Virus & BS Police in the big boy thread, plus some west coast stuff, and I felt like fucking with one of those crazy fills...not quite finished yet....crits?
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0731091951.jpg

[neb3636]

Thats ill I really like that blue

[funhouseXcast]

my only crit for that is that it's in the wrong thread. go play with the big boys, or even intermediate. actually, 3D could use some work, i see what ur doing by extending it, but i dont think it's a good move. other than that it's beautiful

[La Coka Nostra]

nah, he definitely belongs here.
the fill is tight though. i wish i could color good.

the blending on the fire & smoke coming off of the "one" is nice too.

[OctoVenom]

http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/jfkg.jpg
yetsio i thought you never will be on here?

[nuce4]

very nice sketch mers defently ill fill and letters...
how much you write?

[nuce4]

some1 wanna run with me some exchange?
the tag is Vire 05 lemme know before you do

[Kaiser71]

very nice sketch mers defently ill fill and letters...
how much you write?

Thanks for the crits everyonnne
Nuce....you mean how long? I tried my first piece probably a year ago, but it wasn't until about 6months ago that I started actually working with bars, and therefore progressing (in my eyes at least). If you meant how much do I sketch, I probably try to knock out a page once a week or so....

I'm not reccomending anyone drop money on an expensive blackbook if they don't want to...but find some way to keep all your old sketches. It's ridiculous to see how far you get in like just a month, and it keeps your head up when you thinkhow much farther you'll be another one.

For example...
6 months ago for the GRAME sketch battle.....haha damn
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0022-1.jpg

and recent again...
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0731091951.jpg

[nuce4]

i see man understood
i write nearly 10 months,this month is the 11th i believe
started working on bars and all that shit in may 2009
something 4-5 months already
i still working simplish i dun know why,probably because i think
still to early to work on my own style...
i hate my bars and the way i build...
you gone very good in those 6 months...
wanna maybe exchange man?

[Kaiser71]

Yeah. I wish I had your patience to start from where I should have....you strip down my extras and colors, and my letters are still...meh.. never done an exchange but I'd be down to try....I've got a shit load of other coloring and fills to do for myself...but I'd do an outline for you for a chance to mess with new letters. What do you write?

[klic]

you got mine, right? :)

yep. set it up last night, just waiting for it to get approved

mers - you need to focus more on your letters, they could use some work. your E and R are too squised. that fill is insane

edit..

THE WORD FOR THIS WEEKS TOY HANDSTYLE BATTLE IS "CRACK PIPES". ITS DUE NEXT FRIDAY. LETS TRY AND GET ENOUGH ENTRIES SO WE CAN HAVE A REGULAR AND ADVANCED POLL

[kringe]

yetsio i thought you never will be on here?

thought so too. but silon sent me the long island thread, saw 950 pages, had to sign up just for that.
whos this?
http://http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/jfkg.jpg
bump for crits.
http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/0801091231.jpg
high sketch.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

what dont you guys get about
SIMPLEZZZZZ:rolleyes:

[nuce4]

mers,i write vire05
i got more patience even for more 5-6 months of working the simplest
but sometimes its annoying and you wanna try new stuff
i wish ill start working on self style soon...
id dont mind if youll give the exchange non colored...
its good for you and me,more training on other letters.

heres a shit from today i tryed getting off simplest simples
crit this shit guys please wanna know if im doing stuff right
the arrow kinda bad went out.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3482/3778157148_50547a270b.jpg

["Sin"]

i think it looks kinda sick man.
i like that R

[LeaksOne]

nuce thats decent
mers i agree with everyone nice coloring but tweak your letters
kringe i dont really like that.

now my whack shit

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60034.jpg
new R im workin with. still practicing this

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60030.jpg
fuckin around in my book and did this and i went back to it i kinda like it so im guna work with this too. this is a rough sketch

crits??

[fromthegrave]

that would be a good simple
make the a and g less like a throw letter, like the e.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

http://i26.tinypic.com/6g9e6g.jpg
exchange with alts

[La Coka Nostra]

nuce thats decent
mers i agree with everyone nice coloring but tweak your letters
kringe i dont really like that.

now my whack shit

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60034.jpg
new R im workin with. still practicing this

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60030.jpg
fuckin around in my book and did this and i went back to it i kinda like it so im guna work with this too. this is a rough sketch

crits??


they look like every throw i've ever seen.
get creative with it.

on the second one, if you're going to put a line in the A for a hole, do the same for the E.
it looks goofy with a hole in the E and a line in the A.

[neb3636]

Also if your doing something in the A and E you should probably do something in the G.

[salty302]

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0562.jpg


no
no
simple
it is

[JustChillin]

grate-either go fatter on Your E or Connect it.

Ran out of room for the K

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0801092145.jpg

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

http://i32.tinypic.com/24mgk5k.jpg

[JustChillin]

dose it say SARE?

[milk boxx]

Sak i think.

[Darko]

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee145/RexRapt0r/darkoos.jpg
i got lazy with the side of the box so i just drew 2 king size sharpies

[anarone]

http://i29.tinypic.com/2h6egav.jpg

Why oh why did i do addons.


JUST CHILLIN - Dont Bend, Keep Consistent Bar Widths, Do More Keyboard Letter Simples.
GRATE- It looks like most throwups to be fair. you should use bars more as its really quite bubbly.
Blunted Round The Clock - I can dig the first one a little, but the second one looks abit inconsistent in places and i can't actually tell what the full word is...
Darko- thats a cereal box ? good idea maybe but your letters need to be big and need to have better bar work... read the new to graffiti thread cause that looks like your designing something for school.

[BobSagetOner]

you gotta outline that 3d


http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3486/3779702980_1c25bfc335_b.jpg

[nuce4]

mani work more simpler,your bars and the letters looks not stable.
very nice sketch you got there bob
keep it coming

[salty302]

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0562.jpg


no
no
simple
it is

crit my shitttt already

[anarone]

the arrow at the bottom is totally unneccesary.
simples ok but the bottom of the loop on the P is inconsistant compared to the loop on the A.
Do more keyboard style letters.

[Darko]

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee145/RexRapt0r/darkoos.jpg
i got lazy with the side of the box so i just drew 2 king size sharpies

bump

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

your handstyle is beyond terriible
and what is the point of a cerial box?

[Darko]

your handstyle is beyond terriible
and what is the point of a cerial box?

maybe you should add
'dosent understand alternative art'
to that pothead list of yours

[pornobitelogic]

you gotta outline that 3d


http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3486/3779702980_1c25bfc335_b.jpg

nice letters,
color it,

[weakfingers]

maybe you should add
'dosent understand alternative art'
to that pothead list of yours

ahahahahahahahahha if that alternative art you can add me to the list to.

The box isent even straight, and i cant even read your handstyle. Not to sound mean but dont try shit thats way harder then your drawing ability, Start overly simple then work from there.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

thank you^^
mofo its called a ruler which makes straight lines

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

http://i26.tinypic.com/vz991e.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

maybe you should add
'dosent understand alternative art'
to that pothead list of yours

You're a fag
your cerial box is shit there's nothing art about crooked lines and a broken handstyle

Besides I'm pretty sure stoners understand art better than the normal person.

[Kaiser71]

grate-either go fatter on Your E or Connect it.

Ran out of room for the K

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0801092145.jpg


I don't want to be that kid that calls everyone out on biting thir shit, especially since it's a pretty simple style....but any chance my 'M's were the inspiration for this?? looks a bit similar...

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0723091703.jpg
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/downsized_0709091900.jpg

[cemo954]

http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/8222/img00239d.jpg

bending shit more and more connecting things , I'm hyped on it but you guys tell me how much it sucks hah atleast I'm tryin[/QUOTE]

i love how i stay giving my opinion/crit on shit and never get shit back

fuckin rip it apart already

[Kaiser71]

I'd lose the thing betwen the top of the E and K. And fix the part on the R that wou.ld be rounded in the keyboard form of the leter, like top right. Top 'arm' of the K could be doing something more intereseting too. I like the bottom of the R and K the whole E though.

[anarone]

I see the similarities in m's,kaiser fancy critting me ? top of page.

[Kaiser71]

Anarone...I'd say give your letters some difeinition, they all look a bit too similar to me making it hard to read. Also, I'd lose the extension coming off the tops of the first and last letters, andI'm not really feeling the way you connected most of your letters in the middle. Atleast your using bars here though, not terrible

[Eon 1]

The last drawing of MERS is hella sik. I like the whole theme and ya did a great job.

[Aesir]

thank you^^
mofo its called a ruler which makes straight lines

you don't need a ruler to make a straight line. It's obvious that kid just has cerebral palsy or something and that's why his hands shake so much when he's attempting to draw.

[Epoc]

heres the thing. if your a bad artist you draws shitty things. then you and it suck.

if your a good artist who purposely draws something fucked up looking it can be considered stylistic and often cool. IE i would wear that cereal on a shirt if it by some artist but not my cousin. yeh dig?

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

wait what.....hes your cousin?

[Eon 1]

Well thats one hella of a twist..Didnt see that comin at all. Is he really you cousin epoc.

[funhouseXcast]

i wouldn't wear that on a shirt. i would feel like a prick.

[Epoc]

ahahahaaha no hes not. just saying his artistic abilities are equal to my cousin. (age 13)
meh, i like it. has a sort of hipster quality to it.

though the main thing that separates this from a shitty artist vs a good one trying to be scribbly. is the lack of pen control and shotty coloring.

[B.S. POLICE]

Kide....Colors not bad..but its just too....wiggly...not terrible
Squint...huge improvement form your last stuff, but the lightning bolot curve in the T has to go
Slack...The bottom simples looking good...but not feeling that top piece at all...
Sak & Nuce both looking good.


Been looking at some Virus & BS Police in the big boy thread, plus some west coast stuff, and I felt like fucking with one of those crazy fills...not quite finished yet....crits?
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0731091951.jpg



nice fill, woild look better without that skinny bar going through all the letters and the side arrows, but not bad overall keep sketching

[OctoVenom]

here something im working on for a friend s band name
http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn61/cyber_kaos/img025.jpg

[sprout]

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv003-4.jpg
http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv002.jpg
http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv001-5.jpg

[nuce4]

nice sketches skizm
the first one kinda weaker then the 2 others.

[-Opium-]

http://img80.imageshack.us/i/opium.jpg/ Opium
http://img34.imageshack.us/i/imgp0052gkk.jpg/N
http://img30.imageshack.us/i/imgp0690w.jpgHev (for a girl)

the last 2 are quite old but the first was done last night, tell me what you think but dont be too harsh.

[La Coka Nostra]

is that your diary skizm?
lol.

[B.S. POLICE]

ooo LOL!

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

lawlz

[StompBolts!]

MERS- that progression is crazyy, really gets me stoked on sketching more

[TastySesamcrew]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3458/3785366641_8408efe3ca.jpg
egypt quickie

[milk boxx]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0772.jpg

[neb3636]

Sprout is that in a diary?

[anarone]

Anarone...I'd say give your letters some difeinition, they all look a bit too similar to me making it hard to read. Also, I'd lose the extension coming off the tops of the first and last letters, andI'm not really feeling the way you connected most of your letters in the middle. Atleast your using bars here though, not terrible

I've always used bars... i dunno if your thinking you seen a barless piece from me or something.
and yeah letters are similair that was deliberate for the flow but next time ill play with it its for a battle though.
but thanks mang :)

[KNS13]

http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0022-3.jpg
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0034-3.jpg
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0042-2.jpg

[luvsac]

Sprout is that in a diary?

repeated joke fail.

[T-jay]

kema- try and add some shadows
milkbox-thats clean keep at it
tasty- i like your style

http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa291/tim44pix/100_0224.jpg

http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa291/tim44pix/100_0195.jpg

[Darko]

to: T-jay
the first image looked good, i maybe wouldve made that green stuff in the background red, like blood

and try to add somthing to the inside, theyre looking a bit to hollow, at the minimum draw lines on the inside to make it look like its glowing or a light is shining on it or somthing

[Eon 1]

IDK. I think it looks just fine the way it is. you got to think if you add to much it may look bad.

[OctoVenom]

here something im working on for a friend s band name
http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn61/cyber_kaos/img025.jpgany crits about this sketch?

[pornobitelogic]

OCTO- top sketch is nice.the T looks liek its on its own shit. fix that.

[Hearr!]

your attention PA-LEASE.
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG-25.jpg
kthnxbai.

[Mr yarbles]

Everything on this page is bad
bye.

[Darko]

your attention PA-LEASE.
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG-25.jpg
kthnxbai.

i dont know if you were trying to make it look like someones inards, like the letters are intestines or somthing and the back has blood but you did a really good job, it looks great, i my opinion

[massacreman]

darkos right, but it looks good yeah, and lol, kthxbai was the name of my first crew :P

[Fluffy Bunnies]

havent touched a pencil, or pen in a while, just been bombin lol... BTW NOT DONE

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/zazaza.jpg

[Paser1]

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/1063/photo94.jpg

Haven't posted in a while, this is some shit I'm working on recently for bombing. It's real simple but I don't know I feel something is missing CRITS pleassssee

[B.S. POLICE]

not not a big fan of the a or the e man

[medacog1]

http://i29.tinypic.com/16aterm.jpg


I tried....but i should of tried harder...crits
(pase let your drops connect to your letters)

[kenrararar]

medacog - your letters are to cramped and they get progressively smaller, give em some space and work with bars

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/169/photo32i.jpg

[Epoc]

^^clouds n cubes are nice. but i just wouldnt put em in again till you sort out your letters. i can see you have the concept. but you need to make em look better. (especially R) (use uppercase N)

edit: just an idea.
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9815/49688019.png
keep the N same height as others ( i was just trying to fit it in they way you had it)

[99%Shit]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3548/3550433596_fd3dca839f.jpg
I can work with the 'wsr', but that 'me' is gross. Crits/tips.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3538/3550432804_95bff3c5d2.jpg
Purple is ugly. And the lines/connections in the 'm' are waste too. Crits/tips.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3398/3550432964_a37c3f899d.jpg
's' help! 'bits' are weak too. Crits/tips.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3335/3644786738_803df9c8be.jpg
Need help with characters! Moreso the colouring of characters, because I always lose details, ie) those teeth were one row of whites. Tips on plaid colouring would be helpful. 3d got messed do to nug.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3412/3630825192_7efdd2d307.jpg
For my homie.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3549/3630823898_bd3dea1134.jpg

Just tried this style for fun. Just want any crits/tips. Will redo in colour after I receive such.

[Epoc]

holy moly. 1% awesome - simples. 2nd n 3rd one have potential and some good letters.
scrap the majority of the rest.

[milk boxx]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0773.jpg

crits on these letttterrs please?

[mmm_spraypaint]

99% i think the 2nd 1s probly the best but letter shape needs work
milk boxx urs is good, have u tried doing the e's a bit different from each other? dunno mite look better both the same

can i hav some crit for this 1? im just tryna keep it simple get good letter shapes rite nowhttp://i949.photobucket.com/albums/ad338/mmm_spraypaint/DSCF4388.jpg

[mmm_spraypaint]

o shit sorry thats so big :S

[sprout]

yeah its just a notebook i had laying around

[sprout]

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv002.jpg

[MARTYRaz]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0773.jpg

crits on these letttterrs please?
i like this..keep it goin..

[FLIP FLOP]

Emek - the middle bars on your M are too squished, same with your Es. but the rest is looking good.

[sprout]

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv007-1.jpg

[sprout]

paser1 = looks ok but paser is a used up tag.
emek= lookin pretty sweet
mmmm = decent simple
metacog= ur letters are a little too squished together
99 = not feelin it.

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv007-1.jpg

[Crush97]

paser1 = looks ok but paser is a used up tag.
emek= lookin pretty sweet
mmmm = decent simple
metacog= ur letters are a little too squished together
99 = not feelin it.

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv007-1.jpg

emek niiiiccccceeee

[Crush97]

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/1063/photo94.jpg

Haven't posted in a while, this is some shit I'm working on recently for bombing. It's real simple but I don't know I feel something is missing CRITS pleassssee

not feelin that "P" make it a lil more round at the bottom and dont squish up the letters so much

[kenrararar]

http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/740/photo34x.jpg
crits?

[99%Shit]

holy moly. 1% awesome - simples. 2nd n 3rd one have potential and some good letters.
scrap the majority of the rest.

Thanks. 2nd and 3rd are actually quite old, as I have just been trying a bunch of styles since, to see where I'm comfortable. The hipster and cartoon-y styles, were the most fun, so I'm gonna look for a happy medium between the two. I think I'm pretty satisfied with my hands and throws, so I will attend to my full sketches again.

And sprout, what exactly are you not feeling?

No idea where your ish went, but, here were my crits.
Trest, ditch those hands entirely. I can't really say much on the first, because it's hard to see any definition, so really, outlines/force to make the letters stand out is my crit at this point. Second one, it looks like the first half has definite flow, work from there, and let us see the finished product. Not too pumped on any of the letters, but the U and the K don't really fit the style, so change those up, and perhaps it will come together more.

[sprout]

yo 99.. i guess im not feeling the characters.. its like too cartoony for my taste.. i like the top one the best.

[DUNSY]

skizm youre getting better and better
mil boxx, i really like your letters
99%shit i like your 2nd one best

http://i26.tinypic.com/2ewi9g1.jpg

crits ?

[99%Shit]

Work with that O.

[Facedorateur]

Havent post in a while, my 2 latest sketch
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/1397/pict0613u.jpg
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/2359/pict061

Dope : only one forcefield is enough
KENR : Nice bars, get your letters closer to each other
SKIZM : nice, round your edges a little
EMEK : some colors maybe, and the letters are AWSOME

[klic]

The weekly toy throwie battle is back, the word is "Cyan". Have your entries in by Friday August 14th. I expect to have a lot of entries so get on it. PM Me Your Entries.

[Frankenchrist ATM]

dunsy- the o is kinda cool.. im not really feelin the rest at all...
heir- those are pretty nice, i dont like the random arrows in the top one.

little peice in working on. i write semen but i didnt have room for the n. im gona do another one soon.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/AA.jpg
crits?

[niner1234]

vvvvvvvvvvv

[niner1234]

ok so my first attempt at a straight and just my throw and my 2 letter... tell me what you think

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/9548/getattachment6aspxs.jpg

[Epoc]

d. i write semen
thats fucked. would be a funny tag with a mop though.

gore- bottom of E is way to bloated and fat. (piece) just polish those letters more overall. simplify :)

your throw is generic but decent 'cept your G needs work

[DUNSY]

niner very nice throwie
semen your first e is beter then your second
facedorateur awesome coloring


http://i25.tinypic.com/14m6l8g.jpg
crits ?

[Fluffy Bunnies]

ALLL I CAN AGREE WITH IS THAT...








back to the future 2 WAS a good movie

anyways here some insonmia boredness

http://photos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs180.snc1/6800_1191398952075_1441437051_30536646_5110346_n.j pg

http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs180.snc1/6800_1190648413312_1441437051_30535181_4939923_n.j pg

[tilt]

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/8623/19914896.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3699/sy3.jpg
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6516/sy4.jpg

[funhouseXcast]

the S's on the top and bottom need work. they look nothing like the letter S, the middle piece gave it away.
other than the backwards 2 for an S, the bottom piece is the best.

soy milk is disgusting btw

edit: i enjoy your bars in the O, maybe just make the extended part at the top a litttle bit smaller.

[SONE.]

Tilt, i recommend u dont write Soy. already a ledgend, in RTS crew.

[b SQUARED 08]

Heir: Work on your proportions a bit, lose the extensions, work on your letters more before incorporating characters, and don't waste your ink. Use a pencil until you have your letters developed, then use colors on a sketch that is going to look good.

Seme: You need to work on your flow a lot. Try incorporating similar characteristics in your letters and it will turn out a lot better. Your proportions are off by a lot too.

DUNSY: Work on your proportions.

Here's one I played around with in Photoshop for a friend of mine:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/LeinSketch1.jpg

[JustChillin]

Tilt, i recommend u dont write Soy. already a ledgend, in RTS crew.
obviously not much of a legend if no body knows about him enough to not use the name. Soy keep writing what you write. youve already gone pretty far with the name so no since in changing it for some dude in europe.

this took me like 15 minutes.

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0806091326.jpg

[EST2007]

obviously not much of a legend if no body knows about him enough to not use the name. Soy keep writing what you write. youve already gone pretty far with the name so no since in changing it for some dude in europe.

this took me like 15 minutes.

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0806091326.jpg

i've been rockin the block style recently and keep this in mind; on the tops (and bottoms) on your letters, it consists of really loooong straight lines. do you know how hard it is to do a straight, even horizontal line on a wall (even on paper you're slanting)? a piece like that's gonna run at least 4 or so arm lengths. just some food for thought, think of creative ways to break up long lines like that, it'll help you in the long run.

[JustChillin]

yea i know what you mean. i guess ill just have to practice with it

[Fluffy Bunnies]

15 min?

cmon get real

[JustChillin]

What do you mean get real? This is what it looks like when i take my real time on it. Tried to make the lines as straight as possible.


http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0806092237.jpg

[Fury]

I don't like the top part of your K. Personally, how it's all straight and stuff everywhere just isn't my style, but do what you will.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

i can do that in like 2 min lol

[Tokenkaligreens]

that acctully could be busted out in a one stroke

[Fluffy Bunnies]

all i have to say is simples with no 3d, just go simple then slowly make ur letters

[Murphy's law]

My first try.... so let me have it, any input would be nice.....
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/97/l_fa9e75de0e884f45aed9295c0875cc30.jpg
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/82/l_c0fb3584801741e081c810ab96429a8e.jpg

[Alts13]

try just doing keyboard simples rather than doing something that you think looks like graffiti, its a nice idea with the faces/mouths etc but in my opinion it has been done to death - you will get more respect for doing clean solid simples

[Murphy's law]

See i've only done characters this is like my first lettering, my buddy's trying to get me to do lettering so i'm trying to make the letters characters....

[Alts13]

you would be better off having solid letters with a character next to them or interacting with the letters some way - when starting off with letters you need consistent simple letters something like this
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC01370.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC01099.jpg

[Murphy's law]

ok now i got question, i have a bad habit of choosing odd things to do stuff on.... well like....
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/100/l_b6a107dcdac74808b0a68de44b2f27d3.jpg

Kinda like a fucked up Easter but i would like a kinda lettering to do on them too what would look best?

[Alts13]

i think as your lettering isnt going to be as good as your character style then any letters on that would spoil it, if I was gonna put some lettering on that I would go for some classic gothic style script or something rather than graf lettering

[Murphy's law]

Ok, i've also done fruit in stores, but every one wants them saying stuff....

[MARTYRaz]

y not try street art..do slaps and wheatpaste and shit of that nature..

[Murphy's law]

I do i just like hanging out at stores and see someone pick up a banana that sucking off another banana. there's just some kinda magic in that.... Or seeing someone pick up an egg carton to find 12 zombie eggs..... I'm kinda fucked up like that....

[Fluffy Bunnies]

lol that zombie egg is pre cool. work on characters, and i bet you'll be made dope in a year

[Fluffy Bunnies]

http://photos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs180.snc1/6800_1192436818021_1441437051_30539774_5269625_n.j pg

[Murphy's law]

lol that zombie egg is pre cool. work on characters, and i bet you'll be made dope in a year

The eggs are kinda a joke around town, i hide hollow shells downtown. my real character is like these guys.....
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/107/l_81e1cfbe6a5941728bbacd643c71bc62.jpg
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/75/l_a5aa31ba9eb64c2fbb3c46c9288e46dd.jpg
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/88/l_0b178daadfab40c7a5b4ab4c3eb792ef.jpg

These guys are some of my characters... I've made slaps outa them....

[funhouseXcast]

the top ones cool as hell

[sprout]

major improvements manik. keep it up...

[-Sinn-]

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/mallory005.jpg

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

ew

[-Dank-DK-]

dam eyes jumped out the window

[B.S. POLICE]

ah!!!! my retnas!!! my fucking retnas!!!

[PegCityBoy]

shit wpg bitches' standards are gettin lower an lower send er my way an i'll hook her up right

.. on second thought from the looks of that pot belly, you can keep her

[Mr yarbles]

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/mallory005.jpg

QUICK!
Somebody make this into a half whale picture!

[LeaksOne]

not just the pot belly. that little part of her face is hideous!!!

sorry sinn but she cant even pass as a butter face. ill give you the benefit of the doubt and say thats a really good friend and not your girl.

ick. i dont even think id stick my penis in her mouth. yuck shes overflowing on her panties. bleh.

ok im done. haha sorry sinn but you shoulda just posted her tits


edit: haha yarbles. CALLING ESKIMO CALLING ESKIMO. b.s might even be able to do it

[nuce4]

WTF is that shit oO
god damn....

Bomb De L'fresh!
Vire Crooking new shit >>
Soon walls...waited for that anought time...
Simple
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2577/3789052116_c7b35c76d6.jpg
For my friend Spow
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3548/3801671322_39934b458c.jpg
And working it out trying to make some own style...
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2640/3802420414_cfdcd4fb2f.jpg

[PegCityBoy]

guess i'll throw this in here too

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2474/3801595271_753fcb8cc4.jpg

not really happy with the hands or the blue or pink/purp throw

jus the red an yellow one

[sir.one]

lol, fuck that shit. that girl is half sinns size. lemme get some props for a ni55a.

wut wut

[Shake.And.Bake.]

^^ the bottom one to me is the best out of these two..the top one I think needs a bit more work.was ur markers dieing cause it looks like it was.

Thanks to everyone for ur input on my shit, and yea for the record my marker was dieing, it pissed me off lol, but oh well, what can u do

[TastySesamcrew]

this page looks mad fresh good works people except for sinn he should be throwing his ass off a bridge now..
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3496/3803165380_ac4d310c82_b.jpg
Artist

[dreaken1993]

why would you waste paint on that thing

http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-1.jpg

[Gully Head]

tasty- that is so dope man loving it
dreaken-work on your letter structure a bit more,and the e doesn't really flow imo,other than that its getting there

quick something i just did
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z28/kayo-222/kk.jpg

[RFI. SPit]

Some good looking stuff on this page, diggin the last few posts with the simples, keep it up guys!


Quick little sketch from work today
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8172/photomyp.jpg
What'cha think?

[Gully Head]

RFI-yo i really like your style man keep em coming

[TURKEYDINNER]

voice... the e looks kinda goofy
merg... i like it work on the 3d
zof... that shit is fire

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/0a/6c/4dc10d6c66a9.jpg

i havent been drawing much lately
critz?

[Mr yarbles]

For some reason I don't think sin's ever coming back.

[nuce4]

WTF is that shit oO
god damn....

Bomb De L'fresh!
Vire Crooking new shit >>
Soon walls...waited for that anought time...
Simple
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2577/3789052116_c7b35c76d6.jpg
For my friend Spow
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3548/3801671322_39934b458c.jpg
And working it out trying to make some own style...
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2640/3802420414_cfdcd4fb2f.jpg


bump for crits?

[Facedorateur]

VIRO - get out of the toy thread would be a good one (also make the left bar of your V longer(for the last pic))
BOREK - stick with simples, dont do the pointy thingies

Crits
1)
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1030/pict0621y.jpg

2)
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/272/pict0622.jpg

3)
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/5199/pict0625.jpg

[hpir]

nuce4- dope man dope
the k and e came natural to me, sat down and it took me an half an hour to figure out a decient m, need to find a new one.
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemksc.jpg
crits?

[rewz]

Some good looking stuff on this page, diggin the last few posts with the simples, keep it up guys!


Quick little sketch from work today
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8172/photomyp.jpg
What'cha think?

thats pretty good i like the style and the fact u did it at work thats funny

[kringe]

http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/DSCF0745.jpg

[Trestoner707]

man all u guys got sick shit

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/080909_162800.jpg

critsssize meh

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0005.jpg
^^^^ New style.......Whatever bad ish, Biten from Hepo....Bored and blocked

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0003.jpg
^^^^Simple ish......not going to lie.......3 month block...I need somethin lol

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/TheLetterSForYac.jpg

viruz - wow thats looking dope, i guess you really are moving on to a new style

kem - lowercase E, bigger shadow

[nuce4]

VIRO - get out of the toy thread would be a good one (also make the left bar of your V longer(for the last pic))
BOREK - stick with simples, dont do the pointy thingies

Crits
1)
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1030/pict0621y.jpg

2)
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/272/pict0622.jpg

3)
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/5199/pict0625.jpg

Whatcha mean man about getting of the toy thread oO?
and im likin the 1st sketch looks nice

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0006.jpg
^^^^^Unfinshed......Thinkin about going....back to my old dope name lol. I think I will....It was better than what I was doing now.....But Crits

[thedudeman]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0005.jpg
^^^^ New style.......Whatever bad ish


hepos much??

[(SoS)Viruz]

Hepos a lot I bit. Its what ever. I had a block the whole.....Summer so decided to try somethin new its whatever. Im toy I CAN BITE BITCHES

[lord_plankton]

Viruz - first of all u changed the style towards the end, also d a are both widely open , sik do not open up that much, also in regard to the change of style sik have flat bottom , d a are kinda sharp. i kinda like ur s n d though. id loose extension of the a , even up the bottoms and throw away i k waay to big n well u know, u say itz unfinished so i believe ur aware of stylechange ,uve to pay attention to give em all same space and the flow.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Best Crit I got. Thanks Ill work on that

[hpir]

bump
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemksc.jpg
crits?

[sprout]

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/ghdgfhdfghdfghddfgh.jpg

[kringe]

http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/DSCF0745.jpg

bump

[b SQUARED 08]

Here's one I played around with in Photoshop for a friend of mine:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/LeinSketch1.jpg
Bump from a few pages back; didn't get a single crit...

[B.S. POLICE]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0006.jpg
^^^^^Unfinshed......Thinkin about going....back to my old dope name lol. I think I will....It was better than what I was doing now.....But Crits

bump this! deff the most solid shit ive seen from you latelly, work of this style man i see a lot of potential

[dreaken1993]

http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-2.jpg

[Sesh-it-up]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000088.jpg

[noholdups_jusswrite]

sprout- haha love it, im gettin ready to listen to that song btw
kringe- thats tight. sick colors
dreaken1993- the second is the shit yo

[klic]

just something super simple to paint maybe

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekPiece9.jpg

dasik - that shits dope, your IK seems a little plain compared to the rest of it though

aenok - pretty cool, too many squiggly lines in your throw, and i dont like how you connected your A and E in the top one

[Eon 1]

^^ Ya Janek it would be a good one on a wall. Looks good though

[Fury]

Hella good shit on this page.

[Save and Kill]

Dont like my D's,
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm123/CuchulainnRiastrad/5731_1183708402240_1514144264_30474.jpg
Janek- there's something about that K that I don't quite like, maybe angle the top bar more?

Aenok- on the top one, make the bars all the same size and keep the letters simple, and on the bottom one, the A and E are just bad, i'd say stay away from tryin that style for now

Dasik- Looks killer, the leg of the K looks a little off, but other that its sick

Lein- try to bring down your L so its on the same level as the rest of the letters

[crossfire101]

Here's a quick thing I done, really horrible
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/9642/lolerx.jpg

[nuce4]

some shit for a friend
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2608/3810967559_8bf9cb2a38.jpg
crits~

[massacreman]

lol everyone is just posting but not giving crits...
GIVE CRITS TO GET THEM
But as kind as i am, ill crit most of you
@nuce4 Good work, now colour it in
@crossfire straighten up your lines, cut some curves
@Save and kill, put letters more close to eachother
@janker-dope man put it on a wall
@sesh-it-up do it in one line and not so messy
@dreaken 1993, work on your 2nd throw, less is more.
@kringe, let the colours flow more
@skizm your S needs work

[La Coka Nostra]

just something super simple to paint maybe

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekPiece9.jpg




i don't like how the bottom bar of the K comes off of the top one. if you look at a K, both bars connect at the same spot. K's are one of the easiest letters to funk, because of the fact that they have so many bars going in all different directions. you could do so much more with that letter.

otherwise, it's a solid simple. the J flows nice. maybe shorten the bottom bar of the E so it's not longer than the others. keep your bars the same width throughout the piece.

[nuce4]

you right man sorry ive forgot

crossfire:
work on curves and lines like the mate uper me said
save and kill:
looks good man keep it simple
klic:
nice simpel!keep!
dreaken:
keep working simple
nice throws
viruz:
very nice sketch man keep it your good
but i think wouldve look good if the I wouldve look more related to the letters
work on her a bit

[weakfingers]

Janek, i like the simples.

Ill give more crits later
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6332.jpg

[LIZARD]

i think the s needs a little work but other then that good simp

[Fluffy Bunnies]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3134/2419583812_af8efac1e7.jpg

i might have posted this a while back... but i forget. and i hate W's and M's

[nuce4]

new shyt
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2613/3812650866_898785e99b.jpg

nice stickaz fluffy

[noholdups_jusswrite]

nuce4:
shits real sick

[b SQUARED 08]

new shyt
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2613/3812650866_898785e99b.jpg

nice stickaz fluffy

Is that 'vire'? If so, the 'ire' looks good, but the v stands out, as it is kind of a sloppy letter. Make your bars on your v more proportionate. Your other letters look good, but that's a pretty common style too.

I'll try to post up a sketch later on if I can stop being lazy :/

[B.S. POLICE]

nuce that shits intermediate thread worthy

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo94.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

some shit for a friend
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2608/3810967559_8bf9cb2a38.jpg
crits~

me likey

[lord_plankton]

new shyt
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2613/3812650866_898785e99b.jpg

nice stickaz fluffy

really like u keep coming with a consistent style, even though itz kinda common, - only thing u wouldnt recognize v on first sight is that bottom extension , too much n wrong place. just connect left bar with the right n that shit is fire..., the mes sketch is good too, id only bring all tops in same shape, see how ur e n s are alll round ur m is much more angle shaped, maybe open up the s a bit

peace

[weakfingers]

Man Theres been so much good stuff recently.

Time to ruin it!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6349.jpg

[STFUPPERCUT]

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/mallory005.jpg

dont worry man id still fuck her

[Abor Rudest]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3134/2419583812_af8efac1e7.jpg

i might have posted this a while back... but i forget. and i hate W's and M's

homie, i know who that is and its not you, thats daws, of mdc.

[BigBlueViolence]

he's talking about the blue "kils" next to it.

[Abor Rudest]

i know, either im horribly mistaken or that was daw's local crew.

[BigBlueViolence]

I'm not saying I know dude or anything,
just I seen him post the Kils shit for a minute.

[Abor Rudest]

yeah thats why im bringing it up, daws put that up sometime in 06 in the "big boy" blackbook thread, his display name was n_noodles.

[nuce4]

thanks for the crits lord_plankton
they are true and helpfull
when you mean common you its being use byt many?
the thing is its still not my own style
im workin lil bit simple try to move on and make and own style
will take a time...

[Fury]

http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/4594/img0215d.jpg
Just trying out a throw instead of a simple. I know my bars are way off and shit, but eh, whatever, just wanted crits on the style.

Nuce4 - Your stuff looks fresh.
Janek - Digging it, go paint it when you're ready.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

i know, either im horribly mistaken or that was daw's local crew.


Yo me and daws are friends, i made me and him a stick
and i didnt steal that pic. its aight i see why ur mad. but meh no big deal i am over it

[tilt]

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/568/soy811sketch.jpg

crits?

[-sense-]

the connection on the o sould be a little more defined.
i like the s alot and the tail on the y is like a rat tail

[klic]

for viruz
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/Dasik.jpg

shitty throw, for bbv
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/EarnThrowie2.jpg

arsen - dont do x's for holes. do it slower, i can tell you went through it too fast by the little flicks at the end of your lines. lose the faces in your letters, dont worry about 3D/shadow for now. keep your letters proportional, the right leg on your A is a lot bigger than the left. another thing your doing is covering one leg with the other. take your A for example. the right leg cuts off the left when it comes up. you should make them both come up and merge together if you know what i mean. same thing with your N. keep practicing, fill up pages full of hollow throws, and dont rush it as much

[cemo954]

arsen slow your pace down like janek said, take your time its paper not a highway sign, the xs and face don't do much for it either, keep it proportionate also

janek I like your simps for everyone, correction just about everything you sketch I'm feelin

soy - def connect that o, I'm not to keen of the extensions on the s or the y though

http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/1021/img00251t.jpg

trying more new shit, crit away I'm not too fond of the r though

[klic]

^thanks

your 3D doesnt make any sense, its going to the bottom right in some places (the right side of your K) and its going to the left in others (ie. your R). i like your E. one of the most helpful crits ive ever gotten is rounding out the ends of your bars, i think you should do that

[Predator15]

Just toyin with styles, depth, and shapes... startin to get into color a bit too. Theres a few I still wont even touch with color...dont wanna mess em up

[ding1]

just somthin id like to tryy..pls comment on this one
http://i29.tinypic.com/29vhw6w.jpg

[ding1]

just somthin id like to tryy..pls comment on this one
http://i29.tinypic.com/29vhw6w.jpg

[klic]

^i like it. but your handstyle needs a lot of work

[zennegen]

ding, the K on that piece needs some work, and that 'e' in your handy needs to be completely different, make it the same style as the rest of your handy.

im feelin the rest of that piece besides the k though.

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

Just toyin with styles, depth, and shapes... startin to get into color a bit too. Theres a few I still wont even touch with color...dont wanna mess em up

1. dont be a biter mr.graffiticreator.COM
2. dont get your shit off the internet unless it is advice
3. key-board letters
4. you suck
5. welcome to bombing science

[Predator15]

1. dont be a biter mr.graffiticreator.COM
2. dont get your shit off the internet unless it is advice
3. key-board letters
4. you suck
5. welcome to bombing science

1.Everyone starts as a biter...thats how you learn.
2.While its true I've played with graffiti creator (p.s.- apparently so have you cause you recognized something I was trying to immulate...but who cares) if i draw something I saw once maybe I can take it and make something new or just find out I dont like it. If it makes ya feel better though I didnt just strait make somethin up on creator and draw what I saw. I just tried drawin somethin new based off new styles I saw in there
3.What are keyboard letters?
4.Wasnt that part of the rules of the whole "toys" forum. I'm perfectly aware of my skill level or more so "I suck". I get that...tryin to get past that and be better. But thanks for the "constructive" criticism.
5.And thanks for the "welcome"...really I mean that
6.If I sound like a smartass...well maybe I am...but its only because I'm tryin to figure out how to get better. Thanks for the reply

[99%Shit]

Predator, draw a straight letter of your own design, post it, we'll crit. Word? Word.

[ESKiMO2]

SHUT THE FUCK UP
1) Biting and inspiration are two COMPLETELY different things. Start simple and be original!
2) Get off that graffiti creator shit
3) The letters you see on your keyboard... Simple letters
4) you suck. no one cares about your feelings.
7) i dont have to number this shit correctly if i don't want to

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

my "smart ass reply" was your welcome and thats how you will be treated untill you make progresion

[Predator15]

No feelings involved at all homey...just questions and a desire to get better. And like I said if I'm a smartass my bad. We are who we are. I jus wanna be better dude and underneath it all deres still respect. I'm off to try some shit. Thanks for the replies

[La Coka Nostra]

thats how you will be treated untill you make progresion


lol...what the fuck is this? graffiti boot camp?
chill the fuck out everyone.

the whole "i hate toys" mentality is played out.
if you're gonna hate toys, hate toys. don't hate and then try to give advice.
pick one.

[99%Shit]

Predator, you gotta put in some more work. Graffiti illustrator or wherever you're checking will only give you one stylo, and the stuff you're adding, takes away from any style it had to begin with. Try different things.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3540/3816186877_b55cd5b305.jpg
Stupid hipster styles, fun stuff. Gwaan ditch this S. I also lined the U wrong, Conan got interesting and I stopped paying attention to what I was doing.

[BigBlueViolence]

I think your M is too busy for the other letters.
I wouldn't put the curve on the top of the Y, either

[99%Shit]

Next run the other letters will have some extensions/busyness, didn't feel like too much in as I wasn't gonna use/waste my good markers on this, but I see what you're saying.

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

i dont hate toys i am one fuck but people who constantly ask you where your paint store is

[Fury]

for viruz
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/Dasik.jpg

shitty throw, for bbv
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/EarnThrowie2.jpg

arsen - dont do x's for holes. do it slower, i can tell you went through it too fast by the little flicks at the end of your lines. lose the faces in your letters, dont worry about 3D/shadow for now. keep your letters proportional, the right leg on your A is a lot bigger than the left. another thing your doing is covering one leg with the other. take your A for example. the right leg cuts off the left when it comes up. you should make them both come up and merge together if you know what i mean. same thing with your N. keep practicing, fill up pages full of hollow throws, and dont rush it as much

Thanks haha. I already knew my proportions were off and stuff, but I was trying to do a throwie, instead of just a simple. I get what you mean about the merging part.
Do you mean like this?
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/2013/img0238eif.jpg

Crits!
99% - I don't really like the fill, but the rest looks good.
ding1 - Work on the proportions of the K, and I'm not digging the R that much.
Rek - I like the style, but work on proportions and the 3D.
Janek - I like Viruz's a lot, and BBV's looks okay. The only recommendation I have is lose the line for Viruz's.

[Murphy's law]

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/107/l_fe54e0183aac4d9688acbf64a14bf8a4.jpg<<<Sometimes it sucks being the early bird...

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/71/l_fe8d19a2aef64f7bac0dda5d44d05f24.jpg..... Rocking wtf snake....

[klic]

Thanks haha. I already knew my proportions were off and stuff, but I was trying to do a throwie, instead of just a simple. I get what you mean about the merging part.
Do you mean like this?
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/2013/img0238eif.jpg

Crits!
99% - I don't really like the fill, but the rest looks good.
ding1 - Work on the proportions of the K, and I'm not digging the R that much.
Rek - I like the style, but work on proportions and the 3D.
Janek - I like Viruz's a lot, and BBV's looks okay. The only recommendation I have is lose the line for Viruz's.

your A looks good but your still doing it on your N, the right leg is cutting over the middle

[nuce4]

some shit exchange for friend
KEAZ YRC
i know my coloring sucks >>
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3510/3817296221_d367a465c8.jpg

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

some shit exchange for friend
KEAZ YRC
i know my coloring sucks >>
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3510/3817296221_d367a465c8.jpg

damnnn kid that shit is sexy

[klic]

the piece is nice, but your hand needs some serious work

[Amends_Ego]

Slipy- Real nice color selection, only crits i have is to make the left leg of the A visible cause it kinda looks like a Y, Also on the Z i would make the top indent deeper.Nice work.
Arsen-I dont really do throws so i cant crit to much, but keep all the letters the same size because you have it progressively getting smaller towards the end fix that and it will look loads better.
Murphy's Law-I really like the karaks if you started doing them with colors instead of just black and white i think you'd be set.
http://i25.tinypic.com/kdx5ic.jpg
I havent been on here in awhile just been sticking to the blackbook lately, this piece here was inspired by my first dmt trip where I experienced visuals like these letters reaching across the night sky. plz crit.
Edit: and here is a karak that the dose from phish gave me.
http://i25.tinypic.com/9suxds.jpg

[milk boxx]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/emefghk.jpg

workin on a simple

[OctoVenom]

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/107/l_fe54e0183aac4d9688acbf64a14bf8a4.jpg<<<Sometimes it sucks being the early bird...

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/71/l_fe8d19a2aef64f7bac0dda5d44d05f24.jpg..... Rocking wtf snake....that's sick.

[Murphy's law]

Thanks, the more bored i am the more fucked up stuff i do.....

[99%Shit]

Amends, simplify and define. The double thick is nice, but I think you should have a more defined outline.

Emek, if you're gonna rock the same letter twice and have it be real similar, make sure it's really similar. Otherwise, good start.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3539/3818432885_f2a86152db.jpg
All that hipster steeze talk got me motivated a lil. My hands are still being quite unsteady, hopefully I'll have some cleaner stuff on the weekend and I'm bunned.

[BigBlueViolence]

Dawg,
we gotta do an exchange.

[Camer]

Simple calligraphy style burner.
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw026-1.jpg

[klic]

c and m are good, a's decent, e ruins it. keep working with it though

[Camer]

c and m are good, a's decent, e ruins it. keep working with it though

Ya the e is pretty weak. I was sitting in a car trying to draw from memory and couldnt remember what callig e's look like.

[DestroyLA]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/emefghk.jpg

workin on a simpleI dont like how the "M" spaces everything out. But thats just me.

[Stuck]

everything on this page made me take a pen to my eyes....

[dark2]

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crits?

emek im liking that style