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Eon 1
08-03-2009, 09:41 PM
IDK. I think it looks just fine the way it is. you got to think if you add to much it may look bad.

OctoVenom
08-03-2009, 10:28 PM
here something im working on for a friend s band name
http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn61/cyber_kaos/img025.jpgany crits about this sketch?

pornobitelogic
08-03-2009, 10:44 PM
OCTO- top sketch is nice.the T looks liek its on its own shit. fix that.

Hearr!
08-04-2009, 02:16 AM
your attention PA-LEASE.
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG-25.jpg
kthnxbai.

Mr yarbles
08-04-2009, 02:38 AM
Everything on this page is bad
bye.

Darko
08-04-2009, 02:49 AM
your attention PA-LEASE.
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG-25.jpg
kthnxbai.

i dont know if you were trying to make it look like someones inards, like the letters are intestines or somthing and the back has blood but you did a really good job, it looks great, i my opinion

massacreman
08-04-2009, 04:44 AM
darkos right, but it looks good yeah, and lol, kthxbai was the name of my first crew :P

Fluffy Bunnies
08-04-2009, 07:01 AM
havent touched a pencil, or pen in a while, just been bombin lol... BTW NOT DONE

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/zazaza.jpg

Paser1
08-04-2009, 09:18 AM
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/1063/photo94.jpg

Haven't posted in a while, this is some shit I'm working on recently for bombing. It's real simple but I don't know I feel something is missing CRITS pleassssee

B.S. POLICE
08-04-2009, 09:42 AM
not not a big fan of the a or the e man

medacog1
08-04-2009, 10:45 AM
http://i29.tinypic.com/16aterm.jpg


I tried....but i should of tried harder...crits
(pase let your drops connect to your letters)

kenrararar
08-04-2009, 01:46 PM
medacog - your letters are to cramped and they get progressively smaller, give em some space and work with bars

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/169/photo32i.jpg

Epoc
08-04-2009, 03:35 PM
^^clouds n cubes are nice. but i just wouldnt put em in again till you sort out your letters. i can see you have the concept. but you need to make em look better. (especially R) (use uppercase N)

edit: just an idea.
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9815/49688019.png
keep the N same height as others ( i was just trying to fit it in they way you had it)

99%Shit
08-04-2009, 05:33 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3548/3550433596_fd3dca839f.jpg
I can work with the 'wsr', but that 'me' is gross. Crits/tips.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3538/3550432804_95bff3c5d2.jpg
Purple is ugly. And the lines/connections in the 'm' are waste too. Crits/tips.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3398/3550432964_a37c3f899d.jpg
's' help! 'bits' are weak too. Crits/tips.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3335/3644786738_803df9c8be.jpg
Need help with characters! Moreso the colouring of characters, because I always lose details, ie) those teeth were one row of whites. Tips on plaid colouring would be helpful. 3d got messed do to nug.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3412/3630825192_7efdd2d307.jpg
For my homie.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3549/3630823898_bd3dea1134.jpg

Just tried this style for fun. Just want any crits/tips. Will redo in colour after I receive such.

Epoc
08-04-2009, 05:36 PM
holy moly. 1% awesome - simples. 2nd n 3rd one have potential and some good letters.
scrap the majority of the rest.

milk boxx
08-04-2009, 06:38 PM
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0773.jpg

crits on these letttterrs please?

mmm_spraypaint
08-04-2009, 06:59 PM
99% i think the 2nd 1s probly the best but letter shape needs work
milk boxx urs is good, have u tried doing the e's a bit different from each other? dunno mite look better both the same

can i hav some crit for this 1? im just tryna keep it simple get good letter shapes rite nowhttp://i949.photobucket.com/albums/ad338/mmm_spraypaint/DSCF4388.jpg

mmm_spraypaint
08-04-2009, 07:00 PM
o shit sorry thats so big :S

sprout
08-04-2009, 08:06 PM
yeah its just a notebook i had laying around

sprout
08-04-2009, 08:07 PM
http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv002.jpg

MARTYRaz
08-04-2009, 10:43 PM
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0773.jpg

crits on these letttterrs please?
i like this..keep it goin..

FLIP FLOP
08-04-2009, 11:46 PM
Emek - the middle bars on your M are too squished, same with your Es. but the rest is looking good.

sprout
08-05-2009, 09:32 AM
http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv007-1.jpg

sprout
08-05-2009, 09:59 AM
paser1 = looks ok but paser is a used up tag.
emek= lookin pretty sweet
mmmm = decent simple
metacog= ur letters are a little too squished together
99 = not feelin it.

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv007-1.jpg

Crush97
08-05-2009, 10:54 AM
paser1 = looks ok but paser is a used up tag.
emek= lookin pretty sweet
mmmm = decent simple
metacog= ur letters are a little too squished together
99 = not feelin it.

http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/Picturevv007-1.jpg

emek niiiiccccceeee

Crush97
08-05-2009, 10:56 AM
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/1063/photo94.jpg

Haven't posted in a while, this is some shit I'm working on recently for bombing. It's real simple but I don't know I feel something is missing CRITS pleassssee

not feelin that "P" make it a lil more round at the bottom and dont squish up the letters so much

kenrararar
08-05-2009, 02:37 PM
http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/740/photo34x.jpg
crits?

99%Shit
08-05-2009, 02:39 PM
holy moly. 1% awesome - simples. 2nd n 3rd one have potential and some good letters.
scrap the majority of the rest.

Thanks. 2nd and 3rd are actually quite old, as I have just been trying a bunch of styles since, to see where I'm comfortable. The hipster and cartoon-y styles, were the most fun, so I'm gonna look for a happy medium between the two. I think I'm pretty satisfied with my hands and throws, so I will attend to my full sketches again.

And sprout, what exactly are you not feeling?

No idea where your ish went, but, here were my crits.
Trest, ditch those hands entirely. I can't really say much on the first, because it's hard to see any definition, so really, outlines/force to make the letters stand out is my crit at this point. Second one, it looks like the first half has definite flow, work from there, and let us see the finished product. Not too pumped on any of the letters, but the U and the K don't really fit the style, so change those up, and perhaps it will come together more.

sprout
08-05-2009, 02:43 PM
yo 99.. i guess im not feeling the characters.. its like too cartoony for my taste.. i like the top one the best.

DUNSY
08-05-2009, 02:47 PM
skizm youre getting better and better
mil boxx, i really like your letters
99%shit i like your 2nd one best

http://i26.tinypic.com/2ewi9g1.jpg

crits ?

99%Shit
08-05-2009, 02:58 PM
Work with that O.

Facedorateur
08-05-2009, 07:30 PM
Havent post in a while, my 2 latest sketch
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/1397/pict0613u.jpg
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/2359/pict061

Dope : only one forcefield is enough
KENR : Nice bars, get your letters closer to each other
SKIZM : nice, round your edges a little
EMEK : some colors maybe, and the letters are AWSOME

klic
08-05-2009, 11:29 PM
The weekly toy throwie battle is back, the word is "Cyan". Have your entries in by Friday August 14th. I expect to have a lot of entries so get on it. PM Me Your Entries.

Frankenchrist ATM
08-06-2009, 01:14 AM
dunsy- the o is kinda cool.. im not really feelin the rest at all...
heir- those are pretty nice, i dont like the random arrows in the top one.

little peice in working on. i write semen but i didnt have room for the n. im gona do another one soon.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/AA.jpg
crits?

niner1234
08-06-2009, 01:54 AM
vvvvvvvvvvv

niner1234
08-06-2009, 01:59 AM
ok so my first attempt at a straight and just my throw and my 2 letter... tell me what you think

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/9548/getattachment6aspxs.jpg

Epoc
08-06-2009, 04:59 AM
d. i write semen
thats fucked. would be a funny tag with a mop though.

gore- bottom of E is way to bloated and fat. (piece) just polish those letters more overall. simplify :)

your throw is generic but decent 'cept your G needs work

DUNSY
08-06-2009, 06:55 AM
niner very nice throwie
semen your first e is beter then your second
facedorateur awesome coloring


http://i25.tinypic.com/14m6l8g.jpg
crits ?

Fluffy Bunnies
08-06-2009, 09:05 AM
ALLL I CAN AGREE WITH IS THAT...








back to the future 2 WAS a good movie

anyways here some insonmia boredness

http://photos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs180.snc1/6800_1191398952075_1441437051_30536646_5110346_n.j pg

http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs180.snc1/6800_1190648413312_1441437051_30535181_4939923_n.j pg

tilt
08-06-2009, 10:47 AM
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/8623/19914896.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3699/sy3.jpg
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6516/sy4.jpg

funhouseXcast
08-06-2009, 10:54 AM
the S's on the top and bottom need work. they look nothing like the letter S, the middle piece gave it away.
other than the backwards 2 for an S, the bottom piece is the best.

soy milk is disgusting btw

edit: i enjoy your bars in the O, maybe just make the extended part at the top a litttle bit smaller.

SONE.
08-06-2009, 11:14 AM
Tilt, i recommend u dont write Soy. already a ledgend, in RTS crew.

b SQUARED 08
08-06-2009, 11:15 AM
Heir: Work on your proportions a bit, lose the extensions, work on your letters more before incorporating characters, and don't waste your ink. Use a pencil until you have your letters developed, then use colors on a sketch that is going to look good.

Seme: You need to work on your flow a lot. Try incorporating similar characteristics in your letters and it will turn out a lot better. Your proportions are off by a lot too.

DUNSY: Work on your proportions.

Here's one I played around with in Photoshop for a friend of mine:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/LeinSketch1.jpg

JustChillin
08-06-2009, 04:33 PM
Tilt, i recommend u dont write Soy. already a ledgend, in RTS crew.
obviously not much of a legend if no body knows about him enough to not use the name. Soy keep writing what you write. youve already gone pretty far with the name so no since in changing it for some dude in europe.

this took me like 15 minutes.

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0806091326.jpg

EST2007
08-06-2009, 04:39 PM
obviously not much of a legend if no body knows about him enough to not use the name. Soy keep writing what you write. youve already gone pretty far with the name so no since in changing it for some dude in europe.

this took me like 15 minutes.

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0806091326.jpg

i've been rockin the block style recently and keep this in mind; on the tops (and bottoms) on your letters, it consists of really loooong straight lines. do you know how hard it is to do a straight, even horizontal line on a wall (even on paper you're slanting)? a piece like that's gonna run at least 4 or so arm lengths. just some food for thought, think of creative ways to break up long lines like that, it'll help you in the long run.

JustChillin
08-06-2009, 04:46 PM
yea i know what you mean. i guess ill just have to practice with it

Fluffy Bunnies
08-06-2009, 05:49 PM
15 min?

cmon get real

JustChillin
08-07-2009, 01:42 AM
What do you mean get real? This is what it looks like when i take my real time on it. Tried to make the lines as straight as possible.


http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0806092237.jpg

Fury
08-07-2009, 02:09 AM
I don't like the top part of your K. Personally, how it's all straight and stuff everywhere just isn't my style, but do what you will.

Fluffy Bunnies
08-07-2009, 04:23 AM
i can do that in like 2 min lol

Tokenkaligreens
08-07-2009, 04:26 AM
that acctully could be busted out in a one stroke

Fluffy Bunnies
08-07-2009, 04:55 AM
all i have to say is simples with no 3d, just go simple then slowly make ur letters

Murphy's law
08-07-2009, 11:38 AM
My first try.... so let me have it, any input would be nice.....
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/97/l_fa9e75de0e884f45aed9295c0875cc30.jpg
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/82/l_c0fb3584801741e081c810ab96429a8e.jpg

Alts13
08-07-2009, 11:40 AM
try just doing keyboard simples rather than doing something that you think looks like graffiti, its a nice idea with the faces/mouths etc but in my opinion it has been done to death - you will get more respect for doing clean solid simples

Murphy's law
08-07-2009, 11:47 AM
See i've only done characters this is like my first lettering, my buddy's trying to get me to do lettering so i'm trying to make the letters characters....

Alts13
08-07-2009, 12:00 PM
you would be better off having solid letters with a character next to them or interacting with the letters some way - when starting off with letters you need consistent simple letters something like this
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC01370.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC01099.jpg

Murphy's law
08-07-2009, 12:05 PM
ok now i got question, i have a bad habit of choosing odd things to do stuff on.... well like....
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/100/l_b6a107dcdac74808b0a68de44b2f27d3.jpg

Kinda like a fucked up Easter but i would like a kinda lettering to do on them too what would look best?

Alts13
08-07-2009, 12:09 PM
i think as your lettering isnt going to be as good as your character style then any letters on that would spoil it, if I was gonna put some lettering on that I would go for some classic gothic style script or something rather than graf lettering

Murphy's law
08-07-2009, 12:13 PM
Ok, i've also done fruit in stores, but every one wants them saying stuff....

MARTYRaz
08-07-2009, 12:16 PM
y not try street art..do slaps and wheatpaste and shit of that nature..

Murphy's law
08-07-2009, 12:20 PM
I do i just like hanging out at stores and see someone pick up a banana that sucking off another banana. there's just some kinda magic in that.... Or seeing someone pick up an egg carton to find 12 zombie eggs..... I'm kinda fucked up like that....

Fluffy Bunnies
08-07-2009, 05:24 PM
lol that zombie egg is pre cool. work on characters, and i bet you'll be made dope in a year

Fluffy Bunnies
08-07-2009, 06:46 PM
http://photos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs180.snc1/6800_1192436818021_1441437051_30539774_5269625_n.j pg

Murphy's law
08-07-2009, 07:06 PM
lol that zombie egg is pre cool. work on characters, and i bet you'll be made dope in a year

The eggs are kinda a joke around town, i hide hollow shells downtown. my real character is like these guys.....
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/107/l_81e1cfbe6a5941728bbacd643c71bc62.jpg
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/75/l_a5aa31ba9eb64c2fbb3c46c9288e46dd.jpg
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/88/l_0b178daadfab40c7a5b4ab4c3eb792ef.jpg

These guys are some of my characters... I've made slaps outa them....

funhouseXcast
08-07-2009, 08:41 PM
the top ones cool as hell

sprout
08-08-2009, 10:42 AM
major improvements manik. keep it up...

-Sinn-
08-08-2009, 01:14 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/mallory005.jpg

BIGdreamSCHEME
08-08-2009, 01:31 PM
ew

-Dank-DK-
08-08-2009, 02:09 PM
dam eyes jumped out the window

B.S. POLICE
08-08-2009, 06:34 PM
ah!!!! my retnas!!! my fucking retnas!!!

PegCityBoy
08-08-2009, 06:56 PM
shit wpg bitches' standards are gettin lower an lower send er my way an i'll hook her up right

.. on second thought from the looks of that pot belly, you can keep her

Mr yarbles
08-08-2009, 06:59 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/mallory005.jpg

QUICK!
Somebody make this into a half whale picture!

LeaksOne
08-08-2009, 07:01 PM
not just the pot belly. that little part of her face is hideous!!!

sorry sinn but she cant even pass as a butter face. ill give you the benefit of the doubt and say thats a really good friend and not your girl.

ick. i dont even think id stick my penis in her mouth. yuck shes overflowing on her panties. bleh.

ok im done. haha sorry sinn but you shoulda just posted her tits


edit: haha yarbles. CALLING ESKIMO CALLING ESKIMO. b.s might even be able to do it

nuce4
08-08-2009, 07:07 PM
WTF is that shit oO
god damn....

Bomb De L'fresh!
Vire Crooking new shit >>
Soon walls...waited for that anought time...
Simple
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2577/3789052116_c7b35c76d6.jpg
For my friend Spow
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3548/3801671322_39934b458c.jpg
And working it out trying to make some own style...
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2640/3802420414_cfdcd4fb2f.jpg

PegCityBoy
08-08-2009, 07:07 PM
guess i'll throw this in here too

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2474/3801595271_753fcb8cc4.jpg

not really happy with the hands or the blue or pink/purp throw

jus the red an yellow one

sir.one
08-08-2009, 07:11 PM
lol, fuck that shit. that girl is half sinns size. lemme get some props for a ni55a.

wut wut

Shake.And.Bake.
08-08-2009, 09:52 PM
^^ the bottom one to me is the best out of these two..the top one I think needs a bit more work.was ur markers dieing cause it looks like it was.

Thanks to everyone for ur input on my shit, and yea for the record my marker was dieing, it pissed me off lol, but oh well, what can u do

TastySesamcrew
08-09-2009, 12:46 AM
this page looks mad fresh good works people except for sinn he should be throwing his ass off a bridge now..
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3496/3803165380_ac4d310c82_b.jpg
Artist

dreaken1993
08-09-2009, 12:50 PM
why would you waste paint on that thing

http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-1.jpg

Gully Head
08-09-2009, 01:01 PM
tasty- that is so dope man loving it
dreaken-work on your letter structure a bit more,and the e doesn't really flow imo,other than that its getting there

quick something i just did
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z28/kayo-222/kk.jpg

RFI. SPit
08-09-2009, 02:06 PM
Some good looking stuff on this page, diggin the last few posts with the simples, keep it up guys!


Quick little sketch from work today
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8172/photomyp.jpg
What'cha think?

Gully Head
08-09-2009, 02:09 PM
RFI-yo i really like your style man keep em coming

TURKEYDINNER
08-09-2009, 03:06 PM
voice... the e looks kinda goofy
merg... i like it work on the 3d
zof... that shit is fire

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/0a/6c/4dc10d6c66a9.jpg

i havent been drawing much lately
critz?

Mr yarbles
08-09-2009, 04:36 PM
For some reason I don't think sin's ever coming back.

nuce4
08-09-2009, 04:46 PM
WTF is that shit oO
god damn....

Bomb De L'fresh!
Vire Crooking new shit >>
Soon walls...waited for that anought time...
Simple
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2577/3789052116_c7b35c76d6.jpg
For my friend Spow
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3548/3801671322_39934b458c.jpg
And working it out trying to make some own style...
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2640/3802420414_cfdcd4fb2f.jpg


bump for crits?

Facedorateur
08-09-2009, 07:55 PM
VIRO - get out of the toy thread would be a good one (also make the left bar of your V longer(for the last pic))
BOREK - stick with simples, dont do the pointy thingies

Crits
1)
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1030/pict0621y.jpg

2)
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/272/pict0622.jpg

3)
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/5199/pict0625.jpg

hpir
08-09-2009, 08:41 PM
nuce4- dope man dope
the k and e came natural to me, sat down and it took me an half an hour to figure out a decient m, need to find a new one.
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemksc.jpg
crits?

rewz
08-09-2009, 09:42 PM
Some good looking stuff on this page, diggin the last few posts with the simples, keep it up guys!


Quick little sketch from work today
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8172/photomyp.jpg
What'cha think?

thats pretty good i like the style and the fact u did it at work thats funny

kringe
08-09-2009, 11:15 PM
http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/DSCF0745.jpg

Trestoner707
08-09-2009, 11:29 PM
man all u guys got sick shit

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/080909_162800.jpg

critsssize meh

(SoS)Viruz
08-10-2009, 12:22 AM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0005.jpg
^^^^ New style.......Whatever bad ish, Biten from Hepo....Bored and blocked

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0003.jpg
^^^^Simple ish......not going to lie.......3 month block...I need somethin lol

klic
08-10-2009, 01:46 AM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/TheLetterSForYac.jpg

viruz - wow thats looking dope, i guess you really are moving on to a new style

kem - lowercase E, bigger shadow

nuce4
08-10-2009, 04:22 AM
VIRO - get out of the toy thread would be a good one (also make the left bar of your V longer(for the last pic))
BOREK - stick with simples, dont do the pointy thingies

Crits
1)
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1030/pict0621y.jpg

2)
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/272/pict0622.jpg

3)
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/5199/pict0625.jpg

Whatcha mean man about getting of the toy thread oO?
and im likin the 1st sketch looks nice

(SoS)Viruz
08-10-2009, 07:38 AM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0006.jpg
^^^^^Unfinshed......Thinkin about going....back to my old dope name lol. I think I will....It was better than what I was doing now.....But Crits

thedudeman
08-10-2009, 07:42 AM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0005.jpg
^^^^ New style.......Whatever bad ish


hepos much??

(SoS)Viruz
08-10-2009, 07:57 AM
Hepos a lot I bit. Its what ever. I had a block the whole.....Summer so decided to try somethin new its whatever. Im toy I CAN BITE BITCHES

lord_plankton
08-10-2009, 08:08 AM
Viruz - first of all u changed the style towards the end, also d a are both widely open , sik do not open up that much, also in regard to the change of style sik have flat bottom , d a are kinda sharp. i kinda like ur s n d though. id loose extension of the a , even up the bottoms and throw away i k waay to big n well u know, u say itz unfinished so i believe ur aware of stylechange ,uve to pay attention to give em all same space and the flow.

(SoS)Viruz
08-10-2009, 08:22 AM
Best Crit I got. Thanks Ill work on that

hpir
08-10-2009, 09:03 AM
bump
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemksc.jpg
crits?

sprout
08-10-2009, 12:14 PM
http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac99/toddgayeff/ghdgfhdfghdfghddfgh.jpg

kringe
08-10-2009, 12:47 PM
http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/DSCF0745.jpg

bump

b SQUARED 08
08-10-2009, 07:18 PM
Here's one I played around with in Photoshop for a friend of mine:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/LeinSketch1.jpg
Bump from a few pages back; didn't get a single crit...

B.S. POLICE
08-10-2009, 07:51 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0006.jpg
^^^^^Unfinshed......Thinkin about going....back to my old dope name lol. I think I will....It was better than what I was doing now.....But Crits

bump this! deff the most solid shit ive seen from you latelly, work of this style man i see a lot of potential

dreaken1993
08-10-2009, 08:08 PM
http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-2.jpg

Sesh-it-up
08-10-2009, 08:49 PM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000088.jpg

noholdups_jusswrite
08-10-2009, 11:16 PM
sprout- haha love it, im gettin ready to listen to that song btw
kringe- thats tight. sick colors
dreaken1993- the second is the shit yo

klic
08-11-2009, 12:55 AM
just something super simple to paint maybe

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekPiece9.jpg

dasik - that shits dope, your IK seems a little plain compared to the rest of it though

aenok - pretty cool, too many squiggly lines in your throw, and i dont like how you connected your A and E in the top one

Eon 1
08-11-2009, 01:24 AM
^^ Ya Janek it would be a good one on a wall. Looks good though

Fury
08-11-2009, 01:28 AM
Hella good shit on this page.

Save and Kill
08-11-2009, 03:19 AM
Dont like my D's,
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm123/CuchulainnRiastrad/5731_1183708402240_1514144264_30474.jpg
Janek- there's something about that K that I don't quite like, maybe angle the top bar more?

Aenok- on the top one, make the bars all the same size and keep the letters simple, and on the bottom one, the A and E are just bad, i'd say stay away from tryin that style for now

Dasik- Looks killer, the leg of the K looks a little off, but other that its sick

Lein- try to bring down your L so its on the same level as the rest of the letters

crossfire101
08-11-2009, 08:25 AM
Here's a quick thing I done, really horrible
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/9642/lolerx.jpg

nuce4
08-11-2009, 10:44 AM
some shit for a friend
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2608/3810967559_8bf9cb2a38.jpg
crits~

massacreman
08-11-2009, 11:03 AM
lol everyone is just posting but not giving crits...
GIVE CRITS TO GET THEM
But as kind as i am, ill crit most of you
@nuce4 Good work, now colour it in
@crossfire straighten up your lines, cut some curves
@Save and kill, put letters more close to eachother
@janker-dope man put it on a wall
@sesh-it-up do it in one line and not so messy
@dreaken 1993, work on your 2nd throw, less is more.
@kringe, let the colours flow more
@skizm your S needs work

La Coka Nostra
08-11-2009, 11:23 AM
just something super simple to paint maybe

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekPiece9.jpg




i don't like how the bottom bar of the K comes off of the top one. if you look at a K, both bars connect at the same spot. K's are one of the easiest letters to funk, because of the fact that they have so many bars going in all different directions. you could do so much more with that letter.

otherwise, it's a solid simple. the J flows nice. maybe shorten the bottom bar of the E so it's not longer than the others. keep your bars the same width throughout the piece.

nuce4
08-11-2009, 11:26 AM
you right man sorry ive forgot

crossfire:
work on curves and lines like the mate uper me said
save and kill:
looks good man keep it simple
klic:
nice simpel!keep!
dreaken:
keep working simple
nice throws
viruz:
very nice sketch man keep it your good
but i think wouldve look good if the I wouldve look more related to the letters
work on her a bit

weakfingers
08-11-2009, 11:47 AM
Janek, i like the simples.

Ill give more crits later
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6332.jpg

LIZARD
08-11-2009, 11:50 AM
i think the s needs a little work but other then that good simp

Fluffy Bunnies
08-11-2009, 01:07 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3134/2419583812_af8efac1e7.jpg

i might have posted this a while back... but i forget. and i hate W's and M's

nuce4
08-11-2009, 04:13 PM
new shyt
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2613/3812650866_898785e99b.jpg

nice stickaz fluffy

noholdups_jusswrite
08-11-2009, 04:33 PM
nuce4:
shits real sick

b SQUARED 08
08-11-2009, 05:27 PM
new shyt
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2613/3812650866_898785e99b.jpg

nice stickaz fluffy

Is that 'vire'? If so, the 'ire' looks good, but the v stands out, as it is kind of a sloppy letter. Make your bars on your v more proportionate. Your other letters look good, but that's a pretty common style too.

I'll try to post up a sketch later on if I can stop being lazy :/

B.S. POLICE
08-11-2009, 05:46 PM
nuce that shits intermediate thread worthy

Zarb
08-11-2009, 06:20 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo94.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
08-11-2009, 07:03 PM
some shit for a friend
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2608/3810967559_8bf9cb2a38.jpg
crits~

me likey

lord_plankton
08-11-2009, 09:17 PM
new shyt
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2613/3812650866_898785e99b.jpg

nice stickaz fluffy

really like u keep coming with a consistent style, even though itz kinda common, - only thing u wouldnt recognize v on first sight is that bottom extension , too much n wrong place. just connect left bar with the right n that shit is fire..., the mes sketch is good too, id only bring all tops in same shape, see how ur e n s are alll round ur m is much more angle shaped, maybe open up the s a bit

peace

weakfingers
08-12-2009, 02:37 AM
Man Theres been so much good stuff recently.

Time to ruin it!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6349.jpg

STFUPPERCUT
08-12-2009, 02:39 AM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/mallory005.jpg

dont worry man id still fuck her

Abor Rudest
08-12-2009, 03:11 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3134/2419583812_af8efac1e7.jpg

i might have posted this a while back... but i forget. and i hate W's and M's

homie, i know who that is and its not you, thats daws, of mdc.

BigBlueViolence
08-12-2009, 03:14 AM
he's talking about the blue "kils" next to it.

Abor Rudest
08-12-2009, 03:17 AM
i know, either im horribly mistaken or that was daw's local crew.

BigBlueViolence
08-12-2009, 03:19 AM
I'm not saying I know dude or anything,
just I seen him post the Kils shit for a minute.

Abor Rudest
08-12-2009, 03:23 AM
yeah thats why im bringing it up, daws put that up sometime in 06 in the "big boy" blackbook thread, his display name was n_noodles.

nuce4
08-12-2009, 04:35 AM
thanks for the crits lord_plankton
they are true and helpfull
when you mean common you its being use byt many?
the thing is its still not my own style
im workin lil bit simple try to move on and make and own style
will take a time...

Fury
08-12-2009, 04:57 AM
http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/4594/img0215d.jpg
Just trying out a throw instead of a simple. I know my bars are way off and shit, but eh, whatever, just wanted crits on the style.

Nuce4 - Your stuff looks fresh.
Janek - Digging it, go paint it when you're ready.

Fluffy Bunnies
08-12-2009, 05:40 AM
i know, either im horribly mistaken or that was daw's local crew.


Yo me and daws are friends, i made me and him a stick
and i didnt steal that pic. its aight i see why ur mad. but meh no big deal i am over it

tilt
08-12-2009, 10:42 AM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/568/soy811sketch.jpg

crits?

-sense-
08-12-2009, 02:28 PM
the connection on the o sould be a little more defined.
i like the s alot and the tail on the y is like a rat tail

klic
08-12-2009, 02:47 PM
for viruz
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/Dasik.jpg

shitty throw, for bbv
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/EarnThrowie2.jpg

arsen - dont do x's for holes. do it slower, i can tell you went through it too fast by the little flicks at the end of your lines. lose the faces in your letters, dont worry about 3D/shadow for now. keep your letters proportional, the right leg on your A is a lot bigger than the left. another thing your doing is covering one leg with the other. take your A for example. the right leg cuts off the left when it comes up. you should make them both come up and merge together if you know what i mean. same thing with your N. keep practicing, fill up pages full of hollow throws, and dont rush it as much

cemo954
08-12-2009, 03:55 PM
arsen slow your pace down like janek said, take your time its paper not a highway sign, the xs and face don't do much for it either, keep it proportionate also

janek I like your simps for everyone, correction just about everything you sketch I'm feelin

soy - def connect that o, I'm not to keen of the extensions on the s or the y though

http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/1021/img00251t.jpg

trying more new shit, crit away I'm not too fond of the r though

klic
08-12-2009, 04:05 PM
^thanks

your 3D doesnt make any sense, its going to the bottom right in some places (the right side of your K) and its going to the left in others (ie. your R). i like your E. one of the most helpful crits ive ever gotten is rounding out the ends of your bars, i think you should do that

Predator15
08-12-2009, 09:07 PM
Just toyin with styles, depth, and shapes... startin to get into color a bit too. Theres a few I still wont even touch with color...dont wanna mess em up

ding1
08-12-2009, 09:17 PM
just somthin id like to tryy..pls comment on this one
http://i29.tinypic.com/29vhw6w.jpg

ding1
08-12-2009, 09:17 PM
just somthin id like to tryy..pls comment on this one
http://i29.tinypic.com/29vhw6w.jpg

klic
08-12-2009, 09:24 PM
^i like it. but your handstyle needs a lot of work

zennegen
08-12-2009, 09:30 PM
ding, the K on that piece needs some work, and that 'e' in your handy needs to be completely different, make it the same style as the rest of your handy.

im feelin the rest of that piece besides the k though.

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-12-2009, 09:31 PM
Just toyin with styles, depth, and shapes... startin to get into color a bit too. Theres a few I still wont even touch with color...dont wanna mess em up

1. dont be a biter mr.graffiticreator.COM
2. dont get your shit off the internet unless it is advice
3. key-board letters
4. you suck
5. welcome to bombing science

Predator15
08-12-2009, 09:52 PM
1. dont be a biter mr.graffiticreator.COM
2. dont get your shit off the internet unless it is advice
3. key-board letters
4. you suck
5. welcome to bombing science

1.Everyone starts as a biter...thats how you learn.
2.While its true I've played with graffiti creator (p.s.- apparently so have you cause you recognized something I was trying to immulate...but who cares) if i draw something I saw once maybe I can take it and make something new or just find out I dont like it. If it makes ya feel better though I didnt just strait make somethin up on creator and draw what I saw. I just tried drawin somethin new based off new styles I saw in there
3.What are keyboard letters?
4.Wasnt that part of the rules of the whole "toys" forum. I'm perfectly aware of my skill level or more so "I suck". I get that...tryin to get past that and be better. But thanks for the "constructive" criticism.
5.And thanks for the "welcome"...really I mean that
6.If I sound like a smartass...well maybe I am...but its only because I'm tryin to figure out how to get better. Thanks for the reply

99%Shit
08-12-2009, 10:08 PM
Predator, draw a straight letter of your own design, post it, we'll crit. Word? Word.

ESKiMO2
08-12-2009, 10:10 PM
SHUT THE FUCK UP
1) Biting and inspiration are two COMPLETELY different things. Start simple and be original!
2) Get off that graffiti creator shit
3) The letters you see on your keyboard... Simple letters
4) you suck. no one cares about your feelings.
7) i dont have to number this shit correctly if i don't want to

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-12-2009, 10:12 PM
my "smart ass reply" was your welcome and thats how you will be treated untill you make progresion

Predator15
08-12-2009, 10:16 PM
No feelings involved at all homey...just questions and a desire to get better. And like I said if I'm a smartass my bad. We are who we are. I jus wanna be better dude and underneath it all deres still respect. I'm off to try some shit. Thanks for the replies

La Coka Nostra
08-12-2009, 11:41 PM
thats how you will be treated untill you make progresion


lol...what the fuck is this? graffiti boot camp?
chill the fuck out everyone.

the whole "i hate toys" mentality is played out.
if you're gonna hate toys, hate toys. don't hate and then try to give advice.
pick one.

99%Shit
08-13-2009, 12:46 AM
Predator, you gotta put in some more work. Graffiti illustrator or wherever you're checking will only give you one stylo, and the stuff you're adding, takes away from any style it had to begin with. Try different things.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3540/3816186877_b55cd5b305.jpg
Stupid hipster styles, fun stuff. Gwaan ditch this S. I also lined the U wrong, Conan got interesting and I stopped paying attention to what I was doing.

BigBlueViolence
08-13-2009, 12:51 AM
I think your M is too busy for the other letters.
I wouldn't put the curve on the top of the Y, either

99%Shit
08-13-2009, 12:58 AM
Next run the other letters will have some extensions/busyness, didn't feel like too much in as I wasn't gonna use/waste my good markers on this, but I see what you're saying.

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-13-2009, 01:23 AM
i dont hate toys i am one fuck but people who constantly ask you where your paint store is

Fury
08-13-2009, 01:32 AM
for viruz
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/Dasik.jpg

shitty throw, for bbv
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/EarnThrowie2.jpg

arsen - dont do x's for holes. do it slower, i can tell you went through it too fast by the little flicks at the end of your lines. lose the faces in your letters, dont worry about 3D/shadow for now. keep your letters proportional, the right leg on your A is a lot bigger than the left. another thing your doing is covering one leg with the other. take your A for example. the right leg cuts off the left when it comes up. you should make them both come up and merge together if you know what i mean. same thing with your N. keep practicing, fill up pages full of hollow throws, and dont rush it as much

Thanks haha. I already knew my proportions were off and stuff, but I was trying to do a throwie, instead of just a simple. I get what you mean about the merging part.
Do you mean like this?
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/2013/img0238eif.jpg

Crits!
99% - I don't really like the fill, but the rest looks good.
ding1 - Work on the proportions of the K, and I'm not digging the R that much.
Rek - I like the style, but work on proportions and the 3D.
Janek - I like Viruz's a lot, and BBV's looks okay. The only recommendation I have is lose the line for Viruz's.

Murphy's law
08-13-2009, 09:48 AM
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/107/l_fe54e0183aac4d9688acbf64a14bf8a4.jpg<<<Sometimes it sucks being the early bird...

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/71/l_fe8d19a2aef64f7bac0dda5d44d05f24.jpg..... Rocking wtf snake....

klic
08-13-2009, 10:01 AM
Thanks haha. I already knew my proportions were off and stuff, but I was trying to do a throwie, instead of just a simple. I get what you mean about the merging part.
Do you mean like this?
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/2013/img0238eif.jpg

Crits!
99% - I don't really like the fill, but the rest looks good.
ding1 - Work on the proportions of the K, and I'm not digging the R that much.
Rek - I like the style, but work on proportions and the 3D.
Janek - I like Viruz's a lot, and BBV's looks okay. The only recommendation I have is lose the line for Viruz's.

your A looks good but your still doing it on your N, the right leg is cutting over the middle

nuce4
08-13-2009, 11:59 AM
some shit exchange for friend
KEAZ YRC
i know my coloring sucks >>
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3510/3817296221_d367a465c8.jpg

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-13-2009, 12:34 PM
some shit exchange for friend
KEAZ YRC
i know my coloring sucks >>
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3510/3817296221_d367a465c8.jpg

damnnn kid that shit is sexy

klic
08-13-2009, 01:25 PM
the piece is nice, but your hand needs some serious work

Amends_Ego
08-13-2009, 02:19 PM
Slipy- Real nice color selection, only crits i have is to make the left leg of the A visible cause it kinda looks like a Y, Also on the Z i would make the top indent deeper.Nice work.
Arsen-I dont really do throws so i cant crit to much, but keep all the letters the same size because you have it progressively getting smaller towards the end fix that and it will look loads better.
Murphy's Law-I really like the karaks if you started doing them with colors instead of just black and white i think you'd be set.
http://i25.tinypic.com/kdx5ic.jpg
I havent been on here in awhile just been sticking to the blackbook lately, this piece here was inspired by my first dmt trip where I experienced visuals like these letters reaching across the night sky. plz crit.
Edit: and here is a karak that the dose from phish gave me.
http://i25.tinypic.com/9suxds.jpg

milk boxx
08-13-2009, 02:35 PM
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/emefghk.jpg

workin on a simple

OctoVenom
08-13-2009, 02:50 PM
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/107/l_fe54e0183aac4d9688acbf64a14bf8a4.jpg<<<Sometimes it sucks being the early bird...

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/71/l_fe8d19a2aef64f7bac0dda5d44d05f24.jpg..... Rocking wtf snake....that's sick.

Murphy's law
08-13-2009, 04:28 PM
Thanks, the more bored i am the more fucked up stuff i do.....

99%Shit
08-13-2009, 07:45 PM
Amends, simplify and define. The double thick is nice, but I think you should have a more defined outline.

Emek, if you're gonna rock the same letter twice and have it be real similar, make sure it's really similar. Otherwise, good start.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3539/3818432885_f2a86152db.jpg
All that hipster steeze talk got me motivated a lil. My hands are still being quite unsteady, hopefully I'll have some cleaner stuff on the weekend and I'm bunned.

BigBlueViolence
08-13-2009, 07:51 PM
Dawg,
we gotta do an exchange.

Camer
08-13-2009, 08:06 PM
Simple calligraphy style burner.
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw026-1.jpg

klic
08-13-2009, 08:15 PM
c and m are good, a's decent, e ruins it. keep working with it though

Camer
08-13-2009, 08:23 PM
c and m are good, a's decent, e ruins it. keep working with it though

Ya the e is pretty weak. I was sitting in a car trying to draw from memory and couldnt remember what callig e's look like.

DestroyLA
08-13-2009, 09:00 PM
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/emefghk.jpg

workin on a simpleI dont like how the "M" spaces everything out. But thats just me.

Stuck
08-13-2009, 10:05 PM
everything on this page made me take a pen to my eyes....

dark2
08-13-2009, 10:14 PM
6532

6533

6534

6535

crits?

emek im liking that style

99%Shit
08-13-2009, 10:27 PM
everything on this page made me take a pen to my eyes....

Thanks homie! ;) Glad my ish helped in your sight-loss.

Stuck
08-13-2009, 10:32 PM
GET YOUR NOSE OUT MY ASS....its to big...

Fury
08-13-2009, 10:38 PM
Maybe you're just Stuck.

Stuck
08-13-2009, 10:47 PM
his nose stuck in my bummy???

99%Shit
08-13-2009, 11:58 PM
Smile, your first is the cleanest, though the E doesn't fit . An L is gonna give ya hard times, just a fair warning.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3543/3818967611_9277fd3d19.jpg
Me(youx2)ser. Math yo.

BigBlueViolence
08-14-2009, 12:24 AM
Net feeling the color combo man.
Hard as fuck to see

99%Shit
08-14-2009, 12:33 AM
Yeah, only using cheap markers on loose leaf, so my colour choice is slim, especially since they're all dying/dead. If you ctrl + scrollwheel or ctrl + +/=(key) you should be able to zoom enough to see it. I need a whiteout pen or some light decos around the house.

Stuck
08-14-2009, 12:39 AM
let me kick some knowledge at yah....
first of keep your bars the same size... dont make em change sizes for starters
second of dont eveeen think about extensions connections or any thing only focus on the basic letter structur cus your shits hurtin but it can be fixed
third dont do that force field with the blue then fill in everything inside the forcefield with the same blue and then forcefield all that shit in pink...or n e colour pattern for that matter...shits jus wak

and there you got it....some knowledge for u to style on

BigBlueViolence
08-14-2009, 12:48 AM
That's not really knowledge dude,
that's common sense.

I looked at your shit, your style is no where near his, so I don't expect you to be feeling his shit, but all the stuff you are telling him he shouldn't be doing is a matter of opinion.

Dude has the style he's feeling down pat for the most part,
a few changes here and there and it'd be dope as hell.


I'm not really feeling how all the shit is going on in the M and S, but not any of the other letters, though.

99%Shit
08-14-2009, 12:55 AM
Stuck, you're off-base. You don't know how to crit that style, bruv. That's cool, I do wanna hear from everyone, and I do have homies critiquing this that are deeper into the style. Here's some other ish. Some are reposts, but whatev.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3538/3550432804_95bff3c5d2.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3398/3550432964_a37c3f899d.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3548/3550433596_fd3dca839f.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3631/3549627277_acf87f45f3.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3582/3549627039_a585cebfb2.jpg

And thanks BBV.

Stuck
08-14-2009, 01:01 AM
k what i told u isnt about style its about letter structur...the second one is the best of all yours...why? cus it shows good letter structure... the others ones are all crap...and im not criticing you on your style but rather on the letters...i can appreciat any style as long as the letter structure is there...big blue is just famous for telling ppl everything looks good even if its complete shit... hes just the nice guy on the block

99%Shit
08-14-2009, 01:06 AM
The letter structure in the first is nearly identical to the second, so I know you've just taking the piss at this point.

Stuck
08-14-2009, 01:13 AM
god ur a hard headed kid...

BigBlueViolence
08-14-2009, 01:13 AM
Wait, when was I dubbed the nice guy by anyone?

It's not all about structure to everyone man.
That's the thing about illegal activities, there aren't any rules.

Dude does what he wants, some people like it, some people don't.
If you don't like it, then crit it.
If dude says he doesn't think you're right, then fuck it.
Arguing a point that the dude doesn't agree with isn't going to solve anything.
Let him do "whack" shit if he doesn't take your advice,

I don't tell anyone there shit is dope unless I think it's dope, by the way.


99%:
1-I dig the drips in the E, but what's going on with the white teeth/dots in the W?
3- you missed a lot of 3d, mostly in the M S and R. I don't know if it was intentional, but I'm not really feeling it.
2,4,5- dope

Cat R is especially dope, btw.

BlacktodaFuture
08-14-2009, 01:21 AM
letter structure is the most importent thing. thats what ive been taught and thats what i heed by.

BigBlueViolence
08-14-2009, 01:23 AM
Good for you.
You aren't following it very well though, man.

BlacktodaFuture
08-14-2009, 01:24 AM
Good for you.
You aren't following it very well though, man.

sometimes i linger i dont deny that.

Stuck
08-14-2009, 01:24 AM
amen to that black.... 99%shit ... w.e floats ur boat "bruv" aha

BlacktodaFuture
08-14-2009, 01:34 AM
Smile, your first is the cleanest, though the E doesn't fit . An L is gonna give ya hard times, just a fair warning.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3543/3818967611_9277fd3d19.jpg
Me(youx2)ser. Math yo.

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...............wow

klic
08-14-2009, 01:37 AM
if you sent me an entry for the 'little vagina' handstyle battle or 'cyan' throwie battle, send it to me again because i did a system recovery on my computer and deleted everything. The deadline for both of these battles has been extended until sunday if your still looking to get in

Stuck
08-14-2009, 01:46 AM
thnks for the compliment big guy :D

BigBlueViolence
08-14-2009, 01:47 AM
Hey man, I'm not trying to be an asshole, you know?
I just dig a style that you don't.
This fucking child, on the other had, comes in talking shit he has no clue about.

BlacktodaFuture
08-14-2009, 01:50 AM
Hey man, I'm not trying to be an asshole, you know?
I just dig a style that you don't.
This fucking child, on the other had, comes in talking shit he has no clue about.







http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbook001.jpg?t=1250229071

Stuck
08-14-2009, 01:50 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/0032-2.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/0132.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/001-13.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/004-7.jpg
god i miss being sore....

i can dig the style when its pulled off right like causr or beasr but what hes just posted was wack...the blue thing...the other stuff he posted when he put up like 5 images some of those were okay....but the other one thats all blue is shit...leter wise not style wise

tilt
08-14-2009, 01:51 AM
simpler this time
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/422/soy814sketch.jpg

and an old sketch
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/2493/soyblocksketch.jpg

Fury
08-14-2009, 01:51 AM
At ease men, this forum has seen too much beef in the last week and I'm afraid that one more may kill the entire cow population.

99%Shit
08-14-2009, 01:53 AM
99%:
1-I dig the drips in the E, but what's going on with the white teeth/dots in the W?
3- you missed a lot of 3d, mostly in the M S and R. I don't know if it was intentional, but I'm not really feeling it.
2,4,5- dope

1- Was on a Kaws-esque tip at the time.
3- The double thick ate up some of the 3d, and I tend to fill in most small 'holes', probably a bad habit picked up from how I do throws.


Squash all this 'beef' and end the mudslinging.

And if you don't 'get' this
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3543/3818967611_9277fd3d19.jpg
or this
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3539/3818432885_f2a86152db.jpg
that's cool. Perhaps check some more Drugs or BKF stuff. Pretty much what's been interesting me at the moment. Also, I find it weird to take digs at letter style in a drawing that replaces a W with (you x 2), haha.

BlacktodaFuture
08-14-2009, 01:57 AM
i just dont like it bc it looks strange and its not the usual letter structure, but hey you do you, and big blue spazzed.

99%Shit
08-14-2009, 02:05 AM
Word. This shit does not say that this is all I'm going to do. It is a more forgiving style to paint with, at least from a Drugs angle, so it will help me get some practice in, as I'm huge rusty. I'll do some straights/simples over the course of the week too, show I'm not using hipster ish as a crutch, it's just fun to draw.

ding1
08-14-2009, 04:25 AM
just somthin id like to tryy..pls comment on this one
http://i29.tinypic.com/29vhw6w.jpg

bumppp for more critss

Stuck
08-14-2009, 05:17 AM
only thing im not feelin is the gap between the k and the ... the upper part o yeah and ur handy needs some sers work

Murphy's law
08-14-2009, 04:28 PM
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/104/l_fc4a682e31bf4e539c20e65b6e4c4735.jpg

Just did it maybe half an hour ago.... I call him bun bun the happy rabbit...

-sense-
08-14-2009, 09:51 PM
stuk-thats good shit
tilt-looks better, the second one is all good except the bottom extension on the s
ding-the extention on the k could be fatter

http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/rg743/ast.jpg
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/rg743/asr2.jpg

Trestoner707
08-14-2009, 09:51 PM
that bunnys savage

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/080909_162800.jpg
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/aaaaa.jpg

crits?

DestroyLA
08-14-2009, 11:06 PM
murphyslaw that bunny looks sick
astro i like the bottom one the best
trestoner i like your bottom one the best too


I tryed using bars

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0814091957.jpg

faser
08-14-2009, 11:50 PM
DestroyLA and sense - simpler, keyboard letters...............................

aekone
08-15-2009, 12:12 AM
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo22-1.jpg

http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo23.jpg

http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo24.jpg


Bezar- Try to keep your letters even
Trest-that shit's tight
Faser-Ummm Try to get a little more complex with it?
Astro-Just keep workin at it I can see it coming along nicely
Murphy- Bangin bunny!
Krep-That shit is pretty straight.


Sorry if I posted a little too much I'm just happy cuz I actually LIKe the stuff I do now.
Crits?

Save and Kill
08-15-2009, 12:16 AM
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm123/CuchulainnRiastrad/5731_1186578793998_1514144264_30483.jpg
newest thing I did

Destroy- Keep your letters the same size, bring in the leg of your R and connect it to the top part.

Trestoner- I like the bottom one better, maybe too many arrows on it but hell pretty good.

Astro- the only one I like is the bottom one, but on that one keep the letters the same size and use bars

Ding- Make the top leg of your K bigger perhaps, and personally I would extend the top of the E further or make the middle bar of the E shorter.

Soy- the top one is good, color it man

Stuck- I like those, some of them seem like there's a tad to much going on in them, but keep it up

Murphy- that bunny is legit, the axe looks a tad off but no big it's still sick

Ghoul- the top one and the bottom one are dope, the "teeth monster" is clean too, try coloring them

aekone
08-15-2009, 12:19 AM
Thanks man usually the middle one is a lot more clean. That's just the only one of that style I have on hand. About to work on another one.
Oh and Teethy monster is usually Red. XD

faser
08-15-2009, 12:54 AM
Aek - second one, you should get rid of the arrows and maybe extend the shadow more, try it in 3d
save and kill - R looks bad, shadow is off... keyboard letters :)

b SQUARED 08
08-15-2009, 01:02 AM
I already posted this in the characs thread, but here's a sketch I did last night of Deadmau5:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_9658.jpg

-sense-
08-15-2009, 01:23 AM
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/rg743/augg247.jpg

weakfingers
08-15-2009, 01:40 AM
^^ Looks to me that you have to go simpler and keep the same bar width.



E's....... Not my forte'
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6460.jpg

massacreman
08-15-2009, 09:31 AM
this is my suggestion
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3509/3822512031_9d3d08db89.jpg

The upper trow is nice but i dont like faces in throws

Murphy's law
08-15-2009, 10:45 AM
To every one, Thanks...


Murphy- that bunny is legit, the axe looks a tad off but no big it's still sick

Yeah it was a last second thing to hide a mistake that i made. But thanks...

DestroyLA
08-15-2009, 08:41 PM
http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0815091728.jpg

EST2007
08-15-2009, 08:43 PM
http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0815091728.jpg

make the Z flow

MARTYRaz
08-15-2009, 08:49 PM
^^ Looks to me that you have to go simpler and keep the same bar width.



E's....... Not my forte'
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6460.jpg
ur throws r killer man...

La Coka Nostra
08-15-2009, 10:30 PM
make the Z flow



i'd say make all the other letters flow with the Z.
they're all hurting except that one.
got bars where they don't belong.

don't double up bars in the middle of B's and R's. they combine in the middle to form one.

Eon 1
08-15-2009, 10:55 PM
I already posted this in the characs thread, but here's a sketch I did last night of Deadmau5:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_9658.jpgThis would make a sick ass slap.. you should try to make some slaps like that cause I definatly would wat some of those.

TastySesamcrew
08-16-2009, 03:02 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2539/3815885153_d7a075c23e.jpg
Bokz
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2421/3825642926_8b26ff2298.jpg
TFS

W_G_O_N_E
08-16-2009, 11:38 AM
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/3328/dscn3321f.jpg
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/5128/dscn3320c.jpg
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/3828/dscn3314m.jpg

DUNSY
08-16-2009, 11:47 AM
This would make a sick ass slap.. you should try to make some slaps like that cause I definatly would wat some of those.

me too !

WGONE really nice, awesome coloring
tasty i like your style

Trestoner707
08-16-2009, 01:21 PM
tasty - shit'd be crazy on a wall
wgone - your on to something

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/bbbv.jpg

i know u guys r gonna hate the spade. but crits anyways?

Murphy's law
08-16-2009, 03:43 PM
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/82/l_717586933eb04b1c9e19f396314d1cb3.jpg

I'm gonna get my buddy to add lettering.... only because i suck at it......

gumOnShoe
08-16-2009, 03:48 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2539/3815885153_d7a075c23e.jpg
Bokz
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2421/3825642926_8b26ff2298.jpg
TFS

looks mad fresh, the letters are in check, the color scheme is on point, i like the whole ice cream/ candy vibe you got going, too.

Shell703
08-16-2009, 06:48 PM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/KellyRipa.jpg

PegCityBoy
08-16-2009, 07:00 PM
b squared - dooooope char like they said throw that on some slaps or it would make a fresh wheatpaste

tasty - /jizzinpants love that steeze you got it on lock

BlacktodaFuture
08-16-2009, 07:17 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbookhgck002.jpg?t=1250464637

local king, Zeus!

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbookhgck003.jpg?t=1250464682

Save and Kill
08-16-2009, 07:19 PM
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm123/CuchulainnRiastrad/5731_1187737222958_1514144264_30486.jpg

Tasty- those are both hella clean. I like the drips on the bottom, it'd be sick to see those painted

Trestoner- There's just to much going on in that for me. It looks like all the structure is good though

Wgone- that's ill. Im diggin' the middle and the last one. keep it up

Coen- if the bottom of the last three letters are flat, maybe make the bottom of the C flat too? or make the bottoms on the last three letters not flat? just keep working it. The throw is nice, work the handie

Bezr-Your Z is smaller than the rest of your letters. Try making all your letters like your Z and bring the leg of the R up

Murphy- the crink in his tail is the only thing I dont like, the rest of it is legit, I'd like to see stuff you do on a canvas no joke.

Shell- I'm not sure what that is soo um maybe make it look like letters?

TURKEYDINNER
08-16-2009, 07:58 PM
drop the line above the leg on that r

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photo/photo04/90/58/6701dc0acb82.jpg?th=170&tw=225&s=false

critzZz?

also...
http://www.axcessmypics.com/photo/photo04/2f/2b/065fee879229.jpg?th=170&tw=225&s=false

my entry for the greve battle

BlacktodaFuture
08-16-2009, 08:00 PM
dont make it so windy like a toilet bowl or whatever haha. stick to the bars and you should be fine.

KnoxIn
08-16-2009, 08:04 PM
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/1787/p8163880.jpg
HIP-HOP
its been a couple months sense i have done anything but i dont think i lost nothing but i dind't gain anything either i gotta clean it up an finish it but how it look so far??

turkey- shit is whack do simples
rip- you got the right idea fer sure just keep at it

PegCityBoy
08-16-2009, 08:22 PM
some shit i'm workin on

i like the S but im not so crazy about the p

i think i'm gonna shorten the bar that comes str8 down on the s

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3473/3828421954_8ce633bbaf.jpg

Predator15
08-16-2009, 09:24 PM
Let me know if it seems like too much is goin on with my letters. I dont know I just dont seem amused unless its got some like arms or arrows or somethin to it

BlacktodaFuture
08-16-2009, 09:33 PM
can i get crits on my simple? i know its sloppy.

sheltr
08-16-2009, 11:51 PM
blacktodafuture- make the top of the S more notice able, i could barely tell it was an S, also loose all connections you have, dont do those for awhile longer, or until you're bomb at simps. hopefully that helps

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2427/3829099012_3976c0aa1d.jpg

Trestoner707
08-17-2009, 12:08 AM
bumpin this shiz for crits or w/e u guys call it

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/bbbv.jpg

skeetz
08-17-2009, 12:48 AM
peg-looks like a good start, finish it and ill have more to say
predator- keep trying, you'll feel like its boring at first, but once you get it youll start getting more amused than you ever did.
blacktodafuture- i can't see yours.
sheltr- i dont like that kind of style, so i cant give any tips/crits
trest- your piece gets smaller as you go on, try making two straight lines on the page and keeping the piece inside those lines to help you.

been told these belong in here.
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1744_IMG.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1747_IMG.jpg

Trestoner707
08-17-2009, 01:12 AM
now thats some actuall good advice . only thing on yours is the k throws me off. keep at it man

-sense-
08-17-2009, 01:13 AM
skeez just clean it up a bit and make sure all the shadows go to the same focal point
your close, but no cigar. and the o could use some reworking and i like the background you did to it
the second is alright, but the r dosnt quite pop as much as the t or e do

DonaldFour
08-17-2009, 01:40 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture157.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture156.jpg

thoughts/crits?

noholdups_jusswrite
08-17-2009, 01:41 AM
skeez...im diggin the word write...

Trestoner707
08-17-2009, 02:15 AM
id sya calm it down a little donald. go proper. give no one nothing to bitch about. n abandon that star thing

KnoxIn
08-17-2009, 04:42 AM
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/9326/p8163886.jpg
HIP-HOP
letters are finished i hate the whole HOP but oh well crits?? and any ideas for a background?

donald- just watch your proportions and if i were you i would loose those little curly ends on all your shit

Murphy's law
08-17-2009, 11:55 AM
Murphy- the crink in his tail is the only thing I dont like, the rest of it is legit, I'd like to see stuff you do on a canvas no joke.

Thanks man