Blackbooks

[Kaiser71]

^The fastest, and best, way to gain fame and respect worldwide

[b SQUARED 08]

More sketchin', less talkin' plz ;)

Some simps I've been working on for a sketch I'm going to eventually turn into a legit sketch for a friend overseas. Crits are appreciated as always.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_9662.jpg
(No sketches to crit on this page, so have at it...)

[Snew]

lein, lookin pretty propper with the letter structure.. just work on your letter spacing.. it needs help.. your L is always cutting way too far into your E.. L's are tough to work with for just that reason.. the second and the last one are your best..

Loki, thats pretty much the best thing ive ever seen.. step one.. lose the fat broad.. then learn letter structure.. peace!

I know they aint in a black book.. just some stickers i made up tonight.. lemme know whats good and what to work on..

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo97.jpg

[drOping]

Egon...those stickers are dope!

Lien..I also agree that your second one is the best

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/Picture155.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/Picture156.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/Picture157.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/Picture158.jpg

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/Picture159.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/Picture160.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/Picture161.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/Picture162.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/Picture162.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/Picture164.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/Picture165.jpg

[shem]

barks stop what your doing go simple.

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

^ forget everything you think you know about graffiti and read this
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185
use bars and develop a style slowly, you won't regret it

[StayHyE]

http://i29.tinypic.com/2qjepl4.jpg

[funhouseXcast]

can a mod please change this to toy black books. it's been bothering me for months now.

clean shit delae, you D is a bit too small though.

[HaLo_07]

http://http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/92/l_3622713ac875424ca3e7c3f7691a0d98.jpg

Comments?

[Queezy]

EDIT: Can't see your picture Halo~
My shit is the first and last two! Other shit is homies
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/SquidPieceSketch.jpg
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/GORbuffSketch.jpg
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/GORbuffedCloseUp.jpg
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/PUDGBomb.jpg
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/PUDGErollerBomb.jpg
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/QUEAZYrollerBomb.jpg
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/QuezySketch.jpg
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/BackofBlackBook.jpg
CAN YOU GYS SEE MY SIGNATURE

[Fayless]

http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/BackofBlackBook.jpg
Queezy slap right there is so damn attractive. The first picture I'm having troubles, I see two S's and I can't really find the D. It would've looked better if you blended your colors together. Not liking the 'fuck the buff' page. Pudg ones are pretty nice. Nothing to say about the block buster, The first to last Quezy needs to have more consistancy in letter widths. The Q E and Y are all small widths compared to the U and Z.

[Fayless]

http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/BackofBlackBook.jpg
Queezy slap right there is so damn attractive. The first picture I'm having troubles, I see two S's and I can't really find the D. It would've looked better if you blended your colors together. Not liking the 'fuck the buff' page. Pudg ones are pretty nice. Nothing to say about the block buster, The first to last Quezy needs to have more consistancy in letter widths. The Q E and Y are all small widths compared to the U and Z.

[ding1]

new sketch....
http://i29.tinypic.com/35i7ziw.jpg

[Queezy]

edit: I would say work on your letters a little bit more until you use faces. Brin the bottom leg of the e down a little more to match and possibly angle it 45 degrees, and throw a drop shadow or 3-d. Also you have the letter to the left covering the next one besides the E.

Thanks for the good critiques man, it's hard to get around here. I feel you on the width of my letters on the bomb, I said fuck it and sketched it anyways. The first one says squid, it's just a little funkadelic.

[Fayless]

Krep: Work on your hand style, don't add faces just yet. Nice straight letters, now throw in some of your own style to the structures, not too much though, just a few tweaks here and there.

[HalfGangstaShit]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp162C-1.jpg
not finished yet

[the strange one]

queezy- i love the simple silver and black one's! ^^^
http://img32.imagefra.me/img/img32/2/8/18/f_2s5q7yfvrmmm_be5310e.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

http://img31.imagefra.me/img/img31/2/7/31/f_16hu31mm_eadcfa7.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

http://img19.imagefra.me/img/img19/3/3/22/f_20090322801m_dc6ed4f.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

[LeaksOne]

does the ice cream cone have letters in it??
i honestly cant read anything you posted so start over and go simple.

[UpstateHate585]

redid an old sketch i found from when i used to write more. helpin me get back into it. still cant think of a name to write tho. i might just go with SMEC

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/2386/smec.jpg (http://img36.imageshack.us/i/smec.jpg/)
crits/

[milk boxx]

smec - cant see those letters so well... possibly simplify?
the strange one - go simple

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/emsdfgfek.jpg

crits? any ideas what to do with my K???

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/emsdgfdghhjfgfek.jpg
coloured, gay ass K

[niner1234]

gore

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/5818/photo3qrr.jpg

[StayHyE]

http://i32.tinypic.com/zu33th.jpg

[UpstateHate585]

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2252/smecs.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/i/smecs.jpg/)

[TURKEYDINNER]

emek- i think it would look better if the e didnt cover up the m so much
gore- learn how to draw 3d
delae- looks ok keep your lines straighter
smec- not feeling that style looks kindof goofy

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/7e/f0/fa7de402f002.jpg

hows this?

[UpstateHate585]

bore- lacks flow. try not making your bars into triangles. the top of your B and R are too big in proportion to the bottom

[Eon 1]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2298
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2297
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2307
Crits please.

[milk boxx]

neet 1st one is good last 2 suck... simple bars broooooooooo, wait till the time comes to peice, just work with the straight letters and simples

[Eon 1]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2309

[BlacktodaFuture]

1st best 2nd were umm, well they are like eating out a hooker, just not good.

[nik]

http://i30.tinypic.com/2ni0h6x.jpg

http://i32.tinypic.com/ih329t.jpg

i fixed the lines on the e's

[Eon 1]

CRITS please.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2315
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2314
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2312

[Eon 1]

CRITS.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2305

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

how do you expect to get crits without giving a single one?

[Eon 1]

http://i32.tinypic.com/zu33th.jpgWork on your Bars. Especially you E's.

[ESKiMO2]

The only advice I can give any of you is work on your structure. It's also important to try new things like you're doing so don't get too caught up with the structure...

[Fury]

Neet - Your A's look really weird. I prefer the two E's. Your shit looks nice though and I'm especially likin' that 3D.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

wow there used to be some good writers even in this thread but now geeze...
motherfuckers cant even do the basics no more
http://i31.tinypic.com/21kxrvq.jpg
for the jibba jabba

[thadanks]

eon- that white and red neet is hot. not too stoked on the blue neat though.

nik- that teek has potential to be pretty sick, just even it out and smooth out your curves


here's a simple i've been working on:

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6482/dbb44ddbc0b112512315500.jpg

[clokkz]

http://i963.photobucket.com/albums/ae119/clokkz/get-attachmentaspx-5.jpg
i fucked up my v real bad but besides that crits?
@dank : im not sure if you should cut down the n like that but it might be just me. sides that its pretty tight.

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1868.jpg
tried using bars

[Fury]

Barks - Looks a lot fucking better in my opinion. Keep working on that, then bend them after you can do bars like second nature. Also, don't arch it and make them all parallel between top and bottom.
Strive - Simpler, use bars.
Dank - Try to make the tops and bottoms of the letters parallel; like what you used to use in the third grade for making your letters the same size.

[DestroyLA]

dank do some thing else with the "A"

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0825091927.jpg

[thadanks]

destroy- make all your bars the same width

barks- thank god you finally broke away from that other shit you were doing. now just clean it up, straighten it out, simplify, and find the flow

strive- sorry man shit is wack, start over with it

[ding1]

new sketch....
http://i29.tinypic.com/35i7ziw.jpg

please help me with this one what i need to do in order to make it better

[b SQUARED 08]

I'd ditch the faces on the letters, make the bottom right bar on the E slant at the same angle the bottom right bars on the K and R are slanting, maybe raise the top right bar on the E (looks a little awkward how tight the two bars that are supposed to be separate are), and throw a drop shadow or 3d on that bitch. Overall looking pretty clean though man, nice work.

[BlacktodaFuture]

i like the faces, and i agree w. the thing about the E and then when you do that just go and paint it.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

http://i963.photobucket.com/albums/ae119/clokkz/get-attachmentaspx-5.jpg
i fucked up my v real bad but besides that crits?
@dank : im not sure if you should cut down the n like that but it might be just me. sides that its pretty tight.

do you really think anyone can read this or wants to?
why do something so shitty instead of doing basics and actually getting gradually better

[funhouseXcast]

blunted i like the "fuck beef" the first e doesnt fit in, not sure if it's supposed to though. shit's tight other than that.

[Trestoner707]

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/rutez.jpg

critisize meh plz

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1873.jpg
workin on my flow

[BlacktodaFuture]

just watch the width of your bars and you shall be fine.

[DestroyLA]

barks dont add that extra bar at the beggining of all your letters. esspcially with the S".

An exchange i did for someone.

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0826091434.jpg

[Fury]

Trestoner - Watch the bars, but it looks good.
Barks - Lose the extension on the side
Luze - Make the L longer to match the width of the letters.

[Eon 1]

CRITS.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2305
Bump for crits.

[Eon 1]

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/rutez.jpg

critisize meh plz
Im liking this. what is the third letter though.

[Fury]

Neet, stick with the E because the A has the bridge too high up and the whole seems weird. Also, fix the top of your E and how big your N is. Your T is alright, but lose the wiggly stuff.

[Eon 1]

Neet, stick with the E because the A has the bridge too high up and the whole seems weird. Also, fix the top of your E and how big your N is. Your T is alright, but lose the wiggly stuff.Thanks.Ya I do stick wit the double E. I was just experimenting and seeing what it would look like wit da A.

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1883.jpg

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1886.jpg

[StayHyE]

http://i32.tinypic.com/2vvrrs5.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/mlknkjbkhb.jpg

[StayHyE]

too much gap between the f and the E, A is smaller then the rest and your S looks like a the number 3

[BlacktodaFuture]

that would be a weird 3, and the rest i know, i was doing it quick not really paying attention.

[Eon 1]

http://i32.tinypic.com/2vvrrs5.jpgGet rid of the thing in between ur A.

[BlacktodaFuture]

your L is weird and the letters gradually get bigger.

[StayHyE]

i need to work on my E's ffuuuu thanks guys ill try and throw another simp up tonight

[KnoxIn]

hey i haven't really been drawin much latley and i cant think of a name for shit, so anyone want to do a exchange?? as of right now i write meta if so hit me up

[Eon 1]

hey i haven't really been drawin much latley and i cant think of a name for shit, so anyone want to do a exchange?? as of right now i write meta if so hit me upWrong thread for asking that. Go to the Toy exchange thread. But I will do one for ya. I write "NEET"

[KnoxIn]

Wrong thread for asking that. Go to the Toy exchange thread. But I will do one for ya. I write "NEET"

i know but whenver i post in there no one ever goes in and reads the damn thread, but ok ill start workin on that but dont half ass it if you do it do a decent fill or whatever your style is ya know?

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1890.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1889.jpg
i know the last ones not even

[Stussy]

http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/5010/photo925.jpg
because this thread needs more simples

[TURKEYDINNER]

rayz- looks legit but i feel like the r should be tilted right on the top since all the other letters are touching

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/6a/5c/668514e533f3.jpg

bad coloring... crits?

[Fury]

Work on the R and the E. Practice Bars more.
Rayz - Your Y is too skinny.
Barks - Getting better, just practice more

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1891.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1892.jpg

[MARTYRaz]

bore start with straight letter bars til u got them down..
barks gettin better..keep at it..

no room for the R...
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/08270901531.jpg

[HalfGangstaShit]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp162C-1.jpg
not finished yet

rebump.

[DestroyLA]

barks watch out on how fat your bars go like with the top of the A" and the bottom of the S" keep your bars the same width. this is comming from a crit i got before.

Vade i really like it.

halfgangsta sicky sicky knar knar bro. idk

[the strange one]

piss take off a friend always sings this song by the automatic "what's that coming over the hill is it a monster? is it a Monster?"
but with his own alternative lyrics...so i did this quickly one night and put it on his desk at work for him to find laters lol

http://img38.imagefra.me/img/img38/2/8/25/f_2s5q7ygyrfgm_7af6128.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

http://wps.theoffside.com/files/2009/07/what-the-fuck-cat.jpg

[barks]

lol you should leave those kind of pictures to salty

[Fayless]

Why does the dick have a face? WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH WRITERS THESE DAYS.

[the strange one]

i don't know just what crazyness i drew at the time!?!?

did a simples one :)

http://img38.imagefra.me/img/img38/2/8/27/potts/f_2s5q7yh22wqm_e249b0d.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

[ESKids]

http://i444.photobucket.com/albums/qq161/eskids/IMG_0009.jpg

should I ink these?http://i444.photobucket.com/albums/qq161/eskids/chef012.jpg

[ESKids]

http://i444.photobucket.com/albums/qq161/eskids/IMG_0009.jpg

should I ink these?http://i444.photobucket.com/albums/qq161/eskids/chef012.jpg

[ESKids]

sorry it would not resize

[LeaksOne]

strange one - thats a good consistancy you got goin. maybe put the letters closer together. and your handie is in need of some serious tlc.

shef/chef - if by ink you mean markers then ink em. graffiti is a series of trial and error so your guna ink it then see things you dont like so go head.

[the strange one]

thanks leaks :)

yeah my handie is kinda none existant that was more for a few friends so yeah should have took a piccy before i tried to do a spelling lesson i my damn page i guess lol haha

shef ....colour away dude all part' the fun

[funhouseXcast]

same i like what i see but your S is too big and it doesn't seem to fit in with the other letters.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=294&pictureid=2334

[MARTYRaz]

bore start with straight letter bars til u got them down..
barks gettin better..keep at it..

no room for the R...
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/08270901531.jpg
BUMP for critssssss....

[BlacktodaFuture]

the A needs to be fixed.

[ArtDamage]

The V also needs to be fattened up a bit in my opinion.

["art threat"]

sheeeed.. i like it.. it flows well

["art threat"]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac32/artthreat1/artthreat001.jpg

crits yo

[shem]

quick sketch
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3487/3864699964_a3f92a52ed.jpg

["art threat"]

nice flow

[the strange one]

[QUOTE=funhouseXcast;1458868]same i like what i see but your S is too big and it doesn't seem to fit in with the other letters.

cheers yeah i noticed that after you said it..thought it was a little bigger when i did it lol

shem-nice that!

scooby do:

http://img37.imagefra.me/img/img37/2/8/27/f_2s5q7yh23yum_d6c4c25.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

[clokkz]

http://i963.photobucket.com/albums/ae119/clokkz/get-attachmentaspx-8.jpg
Crits on this?
@ the strange one: im likin this but im not too sure about that A. right side you know like the stem is a little ehhh backwards lookin i guess? it might look chill if the S was the same size as the rest as well symetry is tha way to go! sides that its lookin fine.

[Save and Kill]

Can I get some help with the 3d on this?
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm123/CuchulainnRiastrad/5251_1196797129450_1514144264_30516.jpg

Funhouse- Your S doesn't seem to fit with the other letters

Shem- the middle of the M dips down too low

The Strange one- the A is kinda odd and make the letters the same size

Clokkz- Good that your trying to use bars but ease off on the extensions (especially on the R) and the add ons, still stick to simples

[drOping]

Strange one: I just don't know how i feel...was never a fan of bubbles, but yea balance out that S a bit..would look more pleasing

Strive: Less boxy, round some shit off, the T looks too bent!



I was thinking of name change...to Slek, pronounced sleek...crits?

[HalfGangstaShit]

Little something I worked on earlier tonight
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp3A3.jpg

[drOping]

save and kill:try to go down and to the right at like a 45 degree

[Save and Kill]

Will do, thanks

[nickstix]

halfgangstashit-your bars are uneven in some spots, also maybe try not slanting all of the letters
save and kill-the 3d isnt terrible, to get the feel of 3d try placing a dot on the page, and connecting each edge with a ruler so you know its right
clokkz-go simple, your letters lack alot of letter structure in places
Thestrangeone-your S and A are too wide compared to your M and E
Shem-I really like those letters...simple but not boring to look at. you should fill it

I havent been sketching too much recently but figured Id post what Ive done most recently...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/progress/e9.jpg
^An 'E'
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/progress/r10.jpg
^Trying some extensions on my 'R'

Crits please

[HalfGangstaShit]

Yeah I feel you mane, I wasn't too sure about them bars. But good looks man I'll keep it in mind.

[the strange one]

nickstix- love the E but i think your R could get mistaken for an A

clokkz,save+kill,half gang shit and dr0p thanks for the size fuck up notice haha
was just a quick one i did....so yeah i'll take more time and get my sizes nice
cheers for the crits tho!

half gang- i think i might have to say the bars on that are a little out too in places but thats just me....could be cool with big fatter bars too me thinks but thats your choice dude :)

[the strange one]

would have done this nicer but i had two markers and a white pencil :(

http://img39.imagefra.me/img/img39/2/8/29/potts/f_16hu40gm_0b9db62.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1895.jpg

[Facedorateur]

RUNCI- the first one sucks, the second one is better, trty to stick with simples

Crits
http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/5348/pict0721.jpg
http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/7894/pict0722s.jpg

[clokkz]

Oh alright thanks guys I'll work on that. And about that super curved T I was trying to take some things from the calligraphy t you know how it's all curved and stuff.

[nickstix]

Facedorateur-Im assumeing by the second flick the first one also says 'FEIR' ...if so, the r in the first one looks like an n. the right side of the r comes way too far down



I havent been sketching too much recently but figured Id post what Ive done most recently...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/progress/e9.jpg
^An 'E'
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/progress/r10.jpg
^Trying some extensions on my 'R'

Crits please

BUMP

Need more crits

[drOping]

Nicksticks: with the R, try with the farthest left part to straighten it out, like proper back support...not shitty slouching posture..I really like the E though

[b SQUARED 08]

Nickstix: You might be going a little over your head with both of those letters. It appears that you need to practice the simple forms of both of those letters before you go wild with 'em. Specifically, the E looks really 'choppy' if you know what I mean. There is nothing smooth looking about the letter, and that's something that you want. Play with the angles and try to use less bars than that for starters. Your R looks clean, but the structure is not good. Lose the extensions too; they'll come with time.

["art threat"]

nickstix- i like the detail in the "R"

[Graffyk]

would have done this nicer but i had two markers and a white pencil :(

http://img39.imagefra.me/img/img39/2/8/29/potts/f_16hu40gm_0b9db62.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

The M looks a lot like an H. Also the letters gradually get bigger. Keep practicing

[the strange one]

ok i was going for smaller to bigger but yeah your right that's quite h looking in'it :(

[KnoxIn]

http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/9889/p8293955.jpg
alphabet in the making crits on anything about it

nick- looks alright your goin too crazy with the extensions on your R though

rest of you on here not feelin them at all do simple bars just look at your keyboard

[TURKEYDINNER]

knoxin your trying too hard. i think you need to work on basic lettering and flow before you try to do all that special 3D riff raffffff

same dont make the lines so curvy and try to even the letters out

new ish....
http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/50/f9/75b27fade5c1.jpg

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/ce/0e/0a16d57935ff.jpg

crits?

i know the 3d is off in the 2nd one

[the strange one]

turkey- nice i like the way your brain works on paper lol

think your 3d's a bit naff in places but i can't really say much for myself on that topic

but other that that i like your crazyness :)

[smrufone]

whats bars mean anyone?

[Fayless]

Bars = The parts of the letters. They make the letter. I can't explain it, fuck.

[DonaldFour]

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/dfghdgr.jpg

crits?

[MARTYRaz]

new to grafitti thread smurf..read it all...

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i27.tinypic.com/suvnzn.jpg

[Fayless]

@DonaldFour, Make your letter size consistent. fix your I's top and bottom bars.

[BlacktodaFuture]

and the bars have to be the same width. like connecting a bunch of paris hiltons.

[La Coka Nostra]

donaldfour that shit's dope.
try a different color for your forcefield next time.
your scanner fucked it up.

[DonaldFour]

donaldfour that shit's dope.
try a different color for your forcefield next time.
your scanner fucked it up.

thanks a lot dude. and yeah i know, my scanner doesnt pick up pink very well

[smrufone]

ok i will try it out

[markingz.]

bore, that looks sick, its time you got more complex now

[funhouseXcast]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=294&pictureid=2354

[BlacktodaFuture]

why are we drawing the name of a huge snowboarding company?

[nickstix]

yo funhouse what town are you from? i noticed your location says 631...im from there too

[Fayless]

Digging the fills on the burton page, Try working on the letter widths though, its bugging me on the B the most.

[TURKEYDINNER]

knoxin your trying too hard. i think you need to work on basic lettering and flow before you try to do all that special 3D riff raffffff

same dont make the lines so curvy and try to even the letters out

new ish....
http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/50/f9/75b27fade5c1.jpg

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/ce/0e/0a16d57935ff.jpg

crits?

i know the 3d is off in the 2nd one

bump...

[faser]

bore- simples

[nickstix]

Funhouse-go simpler, theres a lot of odd widths in the letter that dont really make sense and the whole thing basically lacks flow
Bore-The first flick is better, but you should prob go simpler, your R's look alittle like A's and the middle part of the E in the second flick just dosent look right.

Some simples from tonight...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/reksimps.jpg


And something I just did now...I guess I dont draw that well at 3am,o well...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/rek.jpg
Crits?

[faser]

rek.. even it all out with bars and the gaps between letters.. i feel that R tho
and on first simple the arm of the K is out of proportion

[UpstateHate585]

bore, that looks sick, its time you got more complex now

i disagree. bore, i like the charac. reminds me of dali lol. but i think the letters are lacking. keep working on it. you are headin in the right direction, just need to give it time.

nickstix- you have a good grasp on 3d and drop shadows, but im not feelin the 2nd one. the first ones not bad though.

[OctoVenom]

ur like the third rek i seen on the graffiti website i been to one is a 30 year old bitch that get butthurt real quick and the other one is a fucking scammer what kind of rek are you??

[funhouseXcast]

yeah im from 631,up on the north coast. softest county in america, and i just did the burton sketch to mix it up a little.

nickstix i like what you're doing, nice and clean. both of your R's bother me though, i think it's the loops, they look a little like weird A's.
bore i think you're doing the right thing for now, keep going at it. but use oencil.

[KJay]

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5130/henrye.png

bore- im feelin the style, top outline is better in my opinoin and the character is dope. nice and consistent keep at it

rek- its pretty consistent style wise but im not exactly digin it, personal taste i guess. and u should change the name

[nickstix]

KJay-Looks really good, but the middle leg in the H and the E along with the top left leg of the Y seem just a little too skinny though.


ur like the third rek i seen on the graffiti website i been to one is a 30 year old bitch that get butthurt real quick and the other one is a fucking scammer what kind of rek are you??

rek- its pretty consistent style wise but im not exactly digin it, personal taste i guess. and u should change the name

I didnt realize there was other people who wrote REK on here...well I mean i figured someone has done it its not that much of an odd name...Where any of that famous? Why should I change the name?

[KJay]

no its not really a famous name, just one of those toy names that everybody thinks of writing when they first start out. i thought of it too, but then i noticed theres alredy this really shitty rek in my area. so id just go for something more original. and thanks for the crits

[smokeandmirrors]

Edit...i fucked up

[weakfingers]

Rek- That stuff looks like a graff font to me for some reason.

I'm struggling with a new name, new letters. Can any one help me out?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7110.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture3-1.jpg

[nickstix]

Weakfingers-The 2nd OEN is pretty good maybe dont cover the E as much. for the K try taking the Left bar from the bottom flick and combinging it with the right Right bars from the top flick



no its not really a famous name, just one of those toy names that everybody thinks of writing when they first start out. i thought of it too, but then i noticed theres alredy this really shitty rek in my area. so id just go for something more original. and thanks for the crits

Ive tried to change my name alot but I always seem to go back to REK. and theres noone who writes REK where I am so i dont really see it as a problem, I dont really know how the name can make you toy if the letters are drawn or painted well then does the name really matter that much?

[guilTrip]

Kinda new to this AND no markers...
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss73/guilTrip_s/firstpost.jpg
comment away, no hard feelings. Lov to do a tot exchange btw so PM me if your down (great practice)

[TURKEYDINNER]

koen... looks good keep at it

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/6d/9f/86c347443a59.jpg

i dont like this very much just playing with addons or whatever
critz?

[b SQUARED 08]

Koen: Work on making your bars the same widths and work with the same shape endings on bars (if you know what I'm saying there...).

guilTrip: Read the New To Graffiti Thread and apply the reading to your sketches. You've gotta start with the basics in order to advance.

Bore: Looks like you're getting better, but for example, on your E, I would suggest that you make that yellow bar the exact same as the other bars in order to keep that flow goin'. Drop the unnecessary extensions for now; they'll come with practice- they shouldn't be forced.

Still crankin' the simples on these letters in hopes that I can get a good progression going, but damn these letters are stubborn lol. Crits are appreciated:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_9663.jpg

[Graffyk]

Koen: It looks great. Maybe (probably) it's just me, but the lower part of the k is a bit too skinny (the part that's connecting).

guilt: Too many extensions. Go simpler.

Bore: Looking good.

B squared: I like the letters, but i can't figure out what the 3rd letter is.

[Fury]

It's an I. I can tell that it is really well actually.
Lein - Lookin' good, just work on that N.
Bore - I don't like it; I think I don't because you need to practice bars, but I don't really know otherwise.

[weakfingers]

B-squared- I know what you mean, If i where you just start with simple letters bends, try other words and mix things up.

Bore-Not feeling that sketch.


Trying to Do a new O and messing around with letter bends still.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture8-2.jpg

[faser]

weakfingers- the k is too fat i rekon and the O cud be a U nearly

[KJay]

cel phone pic so it wont resize.
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5130/henrye.png

weakfingers- too much overlap especially on the KO. not too bad tho

bore those things arent really workin, develop on those other sketches u just had

bsqaured i dont really like it, not a great style. uve done better ish

[EST2007]

http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/uploads/Photo_090109_001.jpg

[weakfingers]

'm having a hard time showing the O. Does this one make it look more distinguishable?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture9-1.jpg

[TURKEYDINNER]

yeah a little... also you should drop the extension on the bottom of your e

[the strange one]

ok i think the letters could be better..but it is a sneeze lol
http://img37.imagefra.me/img/img37/2/9/1/potts/f_16fnw2jm_8f17eff.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

[KnoxIn]

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/5917/p9013958.jpg
EAT did it in math class old style that i haven't done in a while crits?
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6913/p9013959.jpg
my alphabet in the style i want to get good with i know some letters are more complex than others but im workin on it

the strange- do simples man that is just a huge mess...
koen- proportions and i dont mean like keep them the same size cuz i can tell your trying to make some fatter and all that but just make it look right when you do that
bsquared- im not feelin the little things on the ends of all your bars, dunno why i just dont like it and your N is a little skinny

[LeaksOne]

ok i think the letters could be better..but it is a sneeze lol
http://img37.imagefra.me/img/img37/2/9/1/potts/f_16fnw2jm_8f17eff.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

stop doin that kinda shit. your letters are whack and i still cant read that. you need letter structure before you start tryin crazy shit. as for now quit and start over SIMPLE

[markingz.]

hey bore, one thing to remember in graffiti is balance, so yeah it plays a big part, and having stuff connect does too, adding stuff is'nt a bad thing, just be equal with it you know. also keeping all lines even too

[KJay]

come on people, give some damn crits or this thread is useless. this isnt about ups on the internet

[smrufone]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=344&pictureid=2396 tell me wat u all think and wat i need to do

[smrufone]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=344&pictureid=2397http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=344&pictureid=2398

crits

[Amends_Ego]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=344&pictureid=2396 tell me wat u all think and wat i need to do

Id say start leaving some crits so others will fell inclined to return the favor. anyways you need to read the new to graff section drop the 3d cause you need to learn how it works before jumping straight in.
as for your colored pics dont worry about fills or a background yet.

[smrufone]

im trying to do wavy letter style

[Amends_Ego]

Dont, I want you to find a picture of the alphabet in Arial Black font, Print it out, and hang it up in the middle of your work area. and until you can replicate those letters to the T dont do wavy letters.

Anyways instead of arguing about fundementals heres some pics of a poster for my friends new house.
http://i26.tinypic.com/zwb7tf.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/f07r5k.jpg

Strangeone-Leaks is right drop the whole scene and work on structure more, youve got potential with karaks though.
Knoxin- I really like the direction your heading in and the progress you've made thus far. I remember just starting on this site and seeing you throw up simples every post. Your a good role model for those who fail to see the importance of simps. Thank You.
WeakFingers- move your K more to the left so we can actually see the O also thin the back leg of the K.

[smrufone]

ok man thanx i will try that

[shem]

that shits wack

[faser]

'm having a hard time showing the O. Does this one make it look more distinguishable?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture9-1.jpg

make the left bar of ur K the same width as the right bar of the N
and make the K and N have the same style bar for flow

[HalfGangstaShit]

I fucking hate the R's last bar, I always mess it up...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp592.jpg
Semi-quicky

[Fayless]

That on two slaps put together or just a folded piece of paper? The fill looks nice but the 3D on the R bar is hurting to look at. same with the little scribbled part inbetween the two bars of the r. shoulda just left it white.

[MARTYRaz]

koen..lookin good..make ur K look more like a K cuz it almost could be an R
smurf try straight letter blockbusters first and wen u master them start fuckin around with style..

pen freestyle..dont mind the black blobs..deco took a shit on my paper..i want descent crits..like if my letters have structure or no..
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/09020911551.jpg

[La Coka Nostra]

it's possible that if it were cleaner, it wouldn't look that bad.
you went overboard on the extensions on the E.
keep your bars the same width, and try to steady your hand.
try as hard as you can to draw straight lines.
make your letters overlap a little.

3d is pretty on point though.

[Amends_Ego]

Dont, I want you to find a picture of the alphabet in Arial Black font, Print it out, and hang it up in the middle of your work area. and until you can replicate those letters to the T dont do wavy letters.

Anyways instead of arguing about fundementals heres some pics of a poster for my friends new house.
http://i26.tinypic.com/zwb7tf.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/f07r5k.jpg

Strangeone-Leaks is right drop the whole scene and work on structure more, youve got potential with karaks though.
Knoxin- I really like the direction your heading in and the progress you've made thus far. I remember just starting on this site and seeing you throw up simples every post. Your a good role model for those who fail to see the importance of simps. Thank You.
WeakFingers- move your K more to the left so we can actually see the O also thin the back leg of the K.

bottom page bump

[funhouseXcast]

that's a big ass fucking book.

[HalfGangstaShit]

That on two slaps put together or just a folded piece of paper? The fill looks nice but the 3D on the R bar is hurting to look at. same with the little scribbled part inbetween the two bars of the r. shoulda just left it white.

yeah it's a piece of paper, and yeah man the R is always one of my main issues, I will follow up on you radvice and hopefully have something better soon, thanks.

koen your K looks like an R, just cuz of the round shape, fix that and the spacing in between the letters try simply writing it and then make the bars thicker, cuz that's in between a throw and a straight letter.

Vade color the 3d different from your fill and background or else it looks flat as fuck, as far as the letters go, they're alright-ish, you might want to try a bit simpler next time, get to know your letters first before you fuck with them, after all they're just not a one night stand I hope.

[KnoxIn]

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/5917/p9013958.jpg
EAT did it in math class old style that i haven't done in a while crits?
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6913/p9013959.jpg
my alphabet in the style i want to get good with i know some letters are more complex than others but im workin on it

the strange- do simples man that is just a huge mess...
koen- proportions and i dont mean like keep them the same size cuz i can tell your trying to make some fatter and all that but just make it look right when you do that
bsquared- im not feelin the little things on the ends of all your bars, dunno why i just dont like it and your N is a little skinny

hella lack of crits- if you guys post on here then give some damn crits or its worthless

[KJay]

its worthless cuz good writers dont care and most people who suck have no idea what theyre talking about so they say nothing.

u should just try and rock much simpler stuff, cuz urs doesnt look to hot. it seems like u took a little too much influence from that zase exchange, cuz that style is to influenced by his and ur not constructing it very well, especially on the E. And im sure that 3d style will come along after uve got a few years behind u and can do the reg shit well.

[guilTrip]

tryed to go more simple? likin my new markers though
props to weakfingers, i like the casual style
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss73/guilTrip_s/throwupdrawing2.jpg

Lov the critz, nothings learned from a silent crowd..

[funhouseXcast]

eat im likin it. keep it in a straight line, and maybe try to keep your shit a little easier to see. like don't do black on black

[B.S. POLICE]

tryed to go more simple? likin my new markers though
props to weakfingers, i like the casual style
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss73/guilTrip_s/throwupdrawing2.jpg

Lov the critz, nothings learned from a silent crowd..

straight up garbage, go simpler like straight letters and dont bother with complicated fills until you get good letters

[popshots]

martyraz: focus on your letter structure for now not fillshttp://img200.imageshack.us/img200/5964/lorenzograff.jpg

[guilTrip]

straight up garbage, go simpler like straight letters and dont bother with complicated fills until you get good letters

Thnx. i thought i had something halfway decent but if im wrong, im wrong
ill hav more up later on..

[B.S. POLICE]

its straight just work and get better dude everyone goes through this

[peacebomb]

Theres an eat in PA that gets a shit load of ups. Just sayin.

[KnoxIn]

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/2258/p9023964.jpg
RA
i have been tryin to find another style i know this isn't much but is it anything to keep going with or anything?

pop- watch your proportions

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0453.jpg
something i did a while back

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

woops double post

[KnoxIn]

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/2258/p9023964.jpg
RA
i have been tryin to find another style i know this isn't much but is it anything to keep going with or anything?

pop- watch your proportions

bottom page bump

[popshots]

teaman: blood luks wack it looks like u tried to make a throw nd a peice together the s is all buble compred to the t wich is more straite letter

[DUNSY]

it's bin a while :D
some new stuff

http://i29.tinypic.com/ehnktf.jpg

http://i29.tinypic.com/65r2b7.jpg

thatguywhodrinkstea: i dont realy like it go simpler
knoxin: are you trying to get a 3d effect ? keep practicing
amends ego, i like the idea but your letters could be better. nice to see a completely different style :D
knar: good as always (i don't think you meesed up with that r :D)

[exitus]

bottom page bump

looks good but i would consider putting some more style into the middle bar for the A

[weakfingers]

Knoxin- Yeah it looks good Like he said ^^the bar in the A could use a slight expression.


Is the O still to coverd?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture20-1.jpg

[Werse]

That O is getting so played out.

[BlacktodaFuture]

when the fuck did BS did banned?

[exitus]

the drip in the O doesnt fit the style of the rest of the piece. Make the O big and like perfect circles. The pic looks strong like stone but then theres a drip...

[Graffyk]

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/4992/p1000496.jpg
i think i messed up on the F..


http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4127/p1000499.jpg




http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/790/p1000502s.jpg

crits, please.

[BigBlueViolence]

You are trying to write Graf?
Really?

[Graffyk]

it's short for graffyk. i'm probably going to change my short to avoid all this.

[BigBlueViolence]

My face has forced itself through my palm and is now resting on my wrist bone.

[MARTYRaz]

bbwwwahahahahahahahahahaha!!!! i almost shit myself laffing rite now!

[Graffyk]

you mind giving me crits on the style? i can change the word to anything.

i mean, this forum is to help people improve their style, right?

[Kaiser71]

My face has forced itself through my palm and is now resting on my wrist bone.

^Facepalm squared

[MARTYRaz]

no this forum is so writer can talk shit to everyone and tell them how wack the are at graff and to tell eachother to get a fuckin life..






no..seriously..study up man..read new to graff cuz u need to..study style and structure b4 u hit the papes..this shit dont come easy so get it now or never..learn straight letters like the ones found on that keyboard ur sittin in front of..

[BlacktodaFuture]

if this forum was a school i would shoot it up.

[Kaiser71]

E-columbine

[Eon 1]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2409
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2410
Anybody got any crits.

[Black Flag]

Make your Es bigger and bring the T down.

Is that a graff coloring book or?

[b SQUARED 08]

Graf: As others have already said, read the New To Graffiti Thread, apply your studies to your sketches and get a concept of what is 'good', then post up what you think is acceptable. You might look into a name change too, lol.

Neet: Watch your bar widths and try to keep them proportionate to one another. Also, ditch the add-ons and extensions for now- let them come with practice rather than forcing them. Work on your flow a bit by incorporating similar letter characteristics though. I'd also avoid coloring and using fills for now considering that ink could be put to use on something once you've improved on your style.

Again, trying to work with these letters, but it's a tough combination lol. Crits plz :)
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_9664.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

if it's tough then change it.

[Eon 1]

Make your Es bigger and bring the T down.

Is that a graff coloring book or?
No its not a graff coloring book. I drew it all.

[BigBlueViolence]

you really fucked up the perspective on the side of the building.

[hAveK x]

Need some crits on this one. Im trying a new name and style, let me know what u think. It says Trek
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/9528/trek11.jpg

[smrufone]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=344&pictureid=2411
crits?

[drOping]

smuk- straighten out those letters a bit, kinda looks sloppy. make your 3d a little more even...your on the right track.

Havek-I think that shits tight. maybe make the stuff to the left of the T a little smaller, i feel like its stealing the T's space kinda. Looks like you kind of ran out of room.

Lein-the I looks like an F


Im working on a new name, Slek (sounds like sleek). Tell me what you guys think, which one you like better? (i'm over sharpies, wish i could afford something else)

[DUNSY]

not even 1 crit bump


it's bin a while :D
some new stuff

http://i29.tinypic.com/ehnktf.jpg

http://i29.tinypic.com/65r2b7.jpg

[b SQUARED 08]

if it's tough then change it.

I feel you, but it's not my name. I'm working on a sketch for a friend of mine overseas, so I'm forcing myself to find a way that works.

Any more crits would really help me out :)

Dunsy: As clean as all of your coloring looks, you still need to work on your letters. For example, I don't even know what the first letter on that first sketch is. The E in that same sketch is hurtin' too. Try using straight bars, then gradually work in bends, then proportional changes once you've got those down. You've got the coloring down well, but that's the easy part. Now start sketching in pencil only and putting more practice into your letters.

[the strange one]

wish i'd planned this one out on a bigger bit of paper :(
crits on the simples plz??
http://img38.imagefra.me/img/img38/2/9/4/potts/f_2s5q80m7qq2m_f954870.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

Trek- i like that style keep trying it

drop- i think your e looks too sqwashed on the the green on but a fat bit of 3d and a bit mor spacing it'd be cool beans man
dunsy- love the yellow and orange ones and your monkey is cool but i think he'd be better a bit lighter brown so you could give his boby more shape..but i dig the bubbly shizzle yo lol

[klic]

l ONLY HAVE ONE ENTRY FOR THE HANDSTYLE BATTLE (THE WORD IS "PREMIUM RECYCLED" AND I DON'T HAVE ANY ENTRIES FOR THE THROWlE BATTLE (THE WORD IS "MONEY"). SO GET ON IT

[smrufone]

Slek im feeling the one on the left side in ur book

[scotchtape]

Its been awhile, gonna roll with the tots till I'm back on track again. Yah, my lines are raw, and my proportions are kinda fucked in the second one, but my colouring seems to have improved with neglect.

NEED ADVICE ON A "I". Can't seem think of anything to do with it.

http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/4044/dscf0011u.jpg

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/9951/dscf0027gt.jpg

same: Shits weird, son. With that out of the way the 3d is really messed, I think you should hit up classic simples. Imitate a font, learn how to use bars. I like the top line better then the name. You'll work it out, man.

Dunsy: Second picture, top throw. Roll with that, mad potential. Other stuff is meh.

Snuk: Stop. Drop. And Roll on over to simples and bars.

Trek: Just nit picking... Trim it down a little, show off the structure of the letters more. Make the T give the R a little space, and the E is feelin' pretty crowded to. Pretty solid though, keep it up.

Neet: Feels way forced, man. Relax, make it your own.

Lein: Hit the simples, work plain letters until they are so boring it hurts to do them. Bending is like puberty, you can't force that shit to happen on your schedule.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

not even 1 crit bump

damn dunsy you been chillin in here for a minute
you need to work on the structure on your letters do a pencil sketch without those ridiculous colors

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0466.jpg

geski- love that style i think the i fits in just fine your first e is better then your second same with your k

[faser]

Telos - use bars to even it out and make all letters the same size. please fix the O

[Shell703]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/HWISBoardStyleBlueGrey.jpg

Telos- Try and get those bar withs consistent throughout the piece, try and get the letters about the same size (the L is mad tiny while the S is huge)

Scotchtape- I really like how the bubbles came out on the second one- the letter forms are really creative.

Strange- Thats a really unique style, it looks good as regular letters, I suggest trying to play around with those letters a little bit-tweek them, bend them whatever add some flavor into them

Dunsey- I really like that monkey and the background/forcefields you have there, I'd suggest working on the letters a little more since those(characters/Background) Grab the most attention compared to the letters

Snuk- I'd have to agree with the others- beat the hell out of those solid keyboard letter for a while

Trek- That's an ill piece but while the TRE are all leaning to the right I feel the K is leaning more straight up or to the left more which kinda thorws the flow of the piece off a little bit--IMO

Squared- The 3D and coloring is really nice- I don't know if it is a style choice but I think the E and N are smaller then the L and I (I think it is)- that and the L seems to heavily overlap the second letter more so than the rest of the letters

NEET- again imma have to go with the others the N is huge and the E's both look squished inbetween the N and T. The letter forms themselves are goos but if you take apart each letter individually I think you'd find they'd be different sizes compared to one another.

[LeaksOne]

geski i dont like your G not one bit. your E looks more like a G to me.

Telos work on evening up your bars and keepin all your letters the same height

shell i dont really know what that says. the tag does it no justice either. hwis? get workinonit

[the strange one]

hey shell i got a friend who sketches like that really has a lot of potential to play with and do some crazy ass stuff with, a guy called hole :)

just wanted to show you his stuff

http://img38.imagefra.me/img/img38/2/9/5/potts/f_m1ulftpm_f067d10.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

[Shell703]

That shits nice- You just gave me new ideas to work with, I never thought of combining characters or objects within the piece- Hole? Is he a writer?

Leaks- Imma keep workin on it, make it more legible- it says HWIS-

[MeDiCfOoL]

combining letters with characters or objects can be tough because if you dont get it right then it looks awful, but yea i like that one "the strange one"

[smrufone]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/HWISBoardStyleBlueGrey.jpg

Telos- Try and get those bar withs consistent throughout the piece, try and get the letters about the same size (the L is mad tiny while the S is huge)

Scotchtape- I really like how the bubbles came out on the second one- the letter forms are really creative.

Strange- Thats a really unique style, it looks good as regular letters, I suggest trying to play around with those letters a little bit-tweek them, bend them whatever add some flavor into them

Dunsey- I really like that monkey and the background/forcefields you have there, I'd suggest working on the letters a little more since those(characters/Background) Grab the most attention compared to the letters

Snuk- I'd have to agree with the others- beat the hell out of those solid keyboard letter for a while

Trek- That's an ill piece but while the TRE are all leaning to the right I feel the K is leaning more straight up or to the left more which kinda thorws the flow of the piece off a little bit--IMO

Squared- The 3D and coloring is really nice- I don't know if it is a style choice but I think the E and N are smaller then the L and I (I think it is)- that and the L seems to heavily overlap the second letter more so than the rest of the letters

NEET- again imma have to go with the others the N is huge and the E's both look squished inbetween the N and T. The letter forms themselves are goos but if you take apart each letter individually I think you'd find they'd be different sizes compared to one another.

it SMUK not SNUK

[mawks]

ahahah are you guys joking?? that shit is so gay

[MeDiCfOoL]

that shits tight dude, i like it alot but im not really feelin that arrow at the top of the K

[MeDiCfOoL]

any suggestions?

[faser]

^try makin it look like actual letters

[BLOC1]

Medic, just start out extremely simple.
Its better to have simple shit thats clean.
Work with bars and strait letters.
Your style will progress as time goes on.

[niner1234]

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[LeaksOne]

http://img38.imagefra.me/img/img38/2/9/5/potts/f_m1ulftpm_f067d10.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

honestly if i saw this on the streets i would think i was characters cuz i see no letters in that. i know its your friends but i just hope he has a simplier style for the streets.


and niner your really guna have to work that name cuz theres about 40 gores for every 100 new writers plus some established ones. so your guna have to make your shit stand out.

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics663.jpg

sorry if im in the wrong thread

i need to make some new styles

[-Empty-Can-]

sorry for double post. my computer fucked up

[smrufone]

seep cant see ur pix

[SEEP]

http://i767.photobucket.com/albums/xx318/SEEPAT/Writing/SEEP1.jpg

http://i767.photobucket.com/albums/xx318/SEEPAT/Writing/scamcagoseep.jpg

http://i767.photobucket.com/albums/xx318/SEEPAT/Writing/REAL.jpg

http://i767.photobucket.com/albums/xx318/SEEPAT/Writing/pharoutfinal.jpg

crits please

[SEEP]

http://i767.photobucket.com/albums/xx318/SEEPAT/Writing/scenario.jpg

[smrufone]

im feelin that man

[faser]

seep- keyboard letters but rASTA colour splashes look tight.

[LeaksOne]

seep make your own letters. that s on the throw is from mr wiggles. and definately do simples. stop everything your doin an go SIMPLE.

[SEEP]

ok, and toy question, should i just focus on my name seep, or should i work on basically the whole alphabet with simples and stuff

[faser]

whole alphabet otherwise u'll never grasp letter structure properly
and u'll probs change ur name sometime