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LeaksOne
09-09-2009, 02:12 AM
deesquared you will never match up to eel2. ever

faser
09-09-2009, 02:18 AM
trolls that troll each other...

DUNSY
09-09-2009, 05:49 AM
specially for deesquared

http://theducks.org/pictures/cosmic-rex-excuse-me-wtf-r-u-doin.jpg

DestroyLA
09-09-2009, 04:31 PM
http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/3999/0907092008a.jpg

zennegen
09-09-2009, 05:34 PM
eel2, you should battle deesquared.

DeeSquared
09-09-2009, 05:51 PM
new to graff thread..

Naw ***** but u better have insurance ASS WOOPIN INSURANCE we got beef i told u to stay off my territory ima show u the true style of KING STATUS!!!!

funhouseXcast
09-09-2009, 08:09 PM
woah^^^ eel is a head, you can tell by the crown.

also, that black book looks oddly like part of a structure made of cement.

Mr yarbles
09-09-2009, 08:33 PM
Eel tkain ovah 2009 *****hs keep doin yah shit eel you killin shit my *****h
FUK THE HATER MY *****H THEY JUS DONT KNOW HOW HARD YOU IS

LeaksOne
09-09-2009, 08:40 PM
^^^ spoken like a man of good judgement!!

Frankenchrist ATM
09-09-2009, 09:15 PM
everything on this page is lame.

im starting to write rasko, is it taken?.... get at me

DeeSquared
09-09-2009, 09:19 PM
whatever fag
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/8325/sdc10718y.jpg

................ I cant hate on greatness im sorry *****,



can i like do ur laundry or something?

Mr yarbles
09-09-2009, 09:23 PM
Is your name kevin?
Otherwise known as dick dick?

BlacktodaFuture
09-09-2009, 09:27 PM
ive said it before and ill say it again

if this thread was a school i would shoot it up with no regrets!

DeeSquared
09-09-2009, 09:27 PM
that depends, are u some kind of ******

DeeSquared
09-09-2009, 09:29 PM
dont try......youll miss every time i know from experience

Mr yarbles
09-09-2009, 09:29 PM
that depends, are u some kind of ******

I'm pretty sure that judging by the pic that your name is kevin
We called you dick dick and threw shit at you last year because you were a fag
THen you creeped on this one chick then got mad when we made fun of you.

LeaksOne
09-09-2009, 09:31 PM
well now that you called him out on all that shit he wont admit it. and if you shoot me you better kill me

DeeSquared
09-09-2009, 09:33 PM
look bitch for one u bitches missed 21% of the time u threw shit at me
and two i did not creep on her i just wanted to get her to suck my dick again that bitch was stupid she sucked my dick under a table for one fucking vote dumass

oh yeah and for the record those prunes were for my mom bitch!!!!

BlacktodaFuture
09-09-2009, 09:34 PM
what i know from experience is that you are the kind of kid writers would jump if they saw at a wall and steal his paint and $.

BlacktodaFuture
09-09-2009, 09:36 PM
nah leaks your straight. just sick of kids talking and not posting.

Mr yarbles
09-09-2009, 09:40 PM
look bitch for one u bitches missed 21% of the time u threw shit at me
and two i did not creep on her i just wanted to get her to suck my dick again that bitch was stupid she sucked my dick under a table for one fucking vote dumass

oh yeah and for the record those prunes were for my mom bitch!!!!

ARE YOU FUCKING SERIOUS
HAHAHAHAHAHA
best fucking day ever
You're such a fag in real life too
and naw you were creepin on irene callin her an shit don't think she didn't tell us
have fun with your fucking stock of prunes too you queer

Oh and shit that's where the name d squared came from huh?
HAHAHAHA
This shit is the best thing I ever did see on bombin science.

Oh and have fun smelling like shit you fucking fuck.


and another thing no bitch would ever suck your atrocious dick have fun spreading rumors cus no one will fuck you.

<J-one>
09-09-2009, 09:43 PM
what the hell does any of this have to do with your black books...
new sketch, post it when i get home

peasancarrotts

Gasr

DeeSquared
09-09-2009, 09:44 PM
SHES LYING I DID NOT CALL HER!!!!!
I accidentally pressed the call button wen i texted her
and i am not a fag in real life!!!!
ur just mad beacause you dont got a dope ass hat NYUKAAA!!

Mr yarbles
09-09-2009, 09:45 PM
Dammit lawrence.
Is that you
I fucking hate you.

B.S. POLICE
09-09-2009, 09:46 PM
can someone let me know where this kid lives^^ i just wonna jump him if im eve in the area

Mr yarbles
09-09-2009, 09:48 PM
bahahahahahahaha!!

I hate you
You ruined my whole night.
It was so epic then you had to fail all over it.

DOn't even try snap he just trollin.

BlacktodaFuture
09-09-2009, 09:51 PM
SHES LYING I DID NOT CALL HER!!!!!
I accidentally pressed the call button wen i texted her
and i am not a fag in real life!!!!
ur just mad beacause you dont got a dope ass hat NYUKAAA!!


idk bout real life but u are def a fag on bs

DeeSquared
09-09-2009, 09:52 PM
you just mad cause you aint gettin no road head from the sophmore V.P.

give u a hint of who is XD!!!!

ThatguywhodrinksTea
09-09-2009, 10:04 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0511.jpg
xD!!!!!!

mad hate on this Dee guy, guess he's a douche....

Mr yarbles
09-09-2009, 10:08 PM
Getting better melo

and he's lucky I don't tell everyone what his alter ego on this website is...

Nyze
09-09-2009, 10:44 PM
y does everyone on the toy forum know each other?

Paint Refill
09-09-2009, 11:46 PM
you just mad cause you aint gettin no road head from the sophmore V.P.

give u a hint of who is XD!!!!


not you XD!!!!!





..douche.

PegCityBoy
09-10-2009, 12:24 AM
not that great, says Kam, I know I need to work on my shaky lines, I believe I have the thickness of everything correctly, any help is appreciated, also the K is shit I know it, figuring that out as I go along



you're forcin that steeze too hard tyrin to make each letter identicle i'd say jus stick to simps for a bit till u get that shit on lock, then once you do, do some more simps an get ur structure down.

weakfingers
09-10-2009, 12:28 AM
I like the identical shit espeschally when its done really well like on a brick wall. It all depends on the surrounding i guess.


Ever since i kinda decided to change names I've lost intrest in drawing so i went back to the old name and now its fun again.... I like the way its been turning out. and i know ive been going overboard with the squiggles.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7269.jpg

KidReny!
09-10-2009, 12:51 AM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/7819_102551063093106_10000014638399.jpg

i was bored not my best but w.e.

weak- shit is sick as hell
mew- what the hell do u write lol

DUNSY
09-10-2009, 05:28 AM
deesquared stop bitching nobody cares and get the fuck of my bombing science please

now for pics:

it says de la soul, any suggestions for coloring ? i'm kinda stuck
http://i29.tinypic.com/358nl0o.jpg

weak: i like the outline, letters are good too
kam: it's too hard to read, could be good if you make the letters more clear
melo: youre getting way better; keep it up !

the strange one
09-10-2009, 03:04 PM
dunsy- i quite like how it goes light to dark i think that could be an idea to play with??

couple of sacks o' crap... cuz i was bored tried to keep it simples tho

http://img38.imagefra.me/img/img38/2/9/10/f_16hu43qm_886379c.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

http://img38.imagefra.me/img/img38/2/9/10/f_16hu44im_7df7454.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

MARTYRaz
09-10-2009, 03:16 PM
ur trying too hard..and those arent simple at all..

the strange one
09-10-2009, 03:19 PM
arrh yeah sorry i meant simple like as in quick 2 mins with a marker pen kinda simple

MARTYRaz
09-10-2009, 03:23 PM
i dont think u understand the concept of simple...those letters are all over have no structure...master block letters...
SAME
^^^write them just as u see em here..^^^
about 1000 times then fuck around with them..

ThatguywhodrinksTea
09-10-2009, 04:52 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0512.jpg
outlined in black now next stage is color crits?

strange- if you think its shit why post it u should know that shitty post will get raped by comments :)

Dunsy- i actually really like it, only thing i see that is wrong is that A

StayHyE
09-10-2009, 04:58 PM
http://i25.tinypic.com/wlzkvl.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
09-10-2009, 05:02 PM
Dlae- give crits to get crits but make ur D more define looks lik an O sorta

StayHyE
09-10-2009, 05:17 PM
dunsy- i quite like how it goes light to dark i think that could be an idea to play with??

couple of sacks o' crap... cuz i was bored tried to keep it simples tho

http://img38.imagefra.me/img/img38/2/9/10/f_16hu43qm_886379c.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

http://img38.imagefra.me/img/img38/2/9/10/f_16hu44im_7df7454.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)
back to simple letters for you

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0512.jpg
outlined in black now next stage is color crits?

strange- if you think its shit why post it u should know that shitty post will get raped by comments :)

Dunsy- i actually really like it, only thing i see that is wrong is that A

the M looks like its off in its own world while the e and the l and kind smushed in togther i know its hard to blend in the L with the next letter but try to make all the letters the same size and possibly have all the letters take up the same space as the first letter..and drop the two dots and the arrow

DestroyLA
09-10-2009, 05:50 PM
http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/3999/0907092008a.jpgbumping cus the last page was full of bullshit.

StayHyE
09-10-2009, 07:57 PM
^^ your bars curve way too much go back to simple letters


http://i29.tinypic.com/1gcye.jpg

Graffyk
09-10-2009, 09:36 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0512.jpg
outlined in black now next stage is color crits?

strange- if you think its shit why post it u should know that shitty post will get raped by comments :)

Dunsy- i actually really like it, only thing i see that is wrong is that A


It's nice, but you are missing some spots where shadows belong. there are shadows on the bottom of some letters like your O, but not the rest. keep it consistent.

http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/8660/melot.png

I cirlcled where shadows should be added. I might've missed a few small spots

Also above where i circled the E get rid of that shadow on the top of the bottom bar. It doesnt work with the rest of the shadow

<J-one>
09-11-2009, 12:38 AM
same - start with simples man
dlae- that last one looks pretty good, work on the proportions of your bars tho...
some of my stuff

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3438/3388736840_52b2653320.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2588/3909058046_55c70b48d3.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2617/3742056732_ba478d3e8c.jpg

newest... a pen freestyle i decided to colour
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3449/3908268893_936989a6f1.jpg

any tips?
what do you guys think?

LeaksOne
09-11-2009, 12:49 AM
^^^ intermediate. borderline big boy. hot shit. no tips except keep doin what you do


edit: you know what thats big boy material. post it in there. dont see why you would have any problems

Predator15
09-11-2009, 12:56 AM
Been workin on my writing...i identify by column and row. Ne crits?

Predator15
09-11-2009, 01:25 AM
Workin on letters instead of full words. Keep gettin crits sayin "keyboard" letters. I try to start with what I call box letters...never quite amused with the final product and always end up with stuff like this...ne thoughts (p.s.- the green outlines arent shadows or anything...i just looked at it and wished I could edit the letters. So I drew over them in green the way I would change em)

faser
09-11-2009, 01:54 AM
looks like you didnt listen to the crits, like most ppl here

try actually drawing keyboard letters.. these are B and C... B...C

the strange one
09-11-2009, 07:35 AM
ok simples yes yes i get it no worries i shall indeed...do my simples cuz you are all right they are the foundation

j-one i be liking them teeth, tight shit there sunshine get your ass in the intermediate

medacog1
09-11-2009, 11:56 AM
http://i30.tinypic.com/ng1qps.jpg

piecing is so hard

the strange one
09-11-2009, 12:06 PM
http://img38.imagefra.me/img/img38/2/9/11/f_2s5q80napcpm_f72de95.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

Predator15
09-11-2009, 01:26 PM
looks like you didnt listen to the crits, like most ppl here

try actually drawing keyboard letters.. these are B and C... B...C

I thought thats what I did. So what do u really mean?

-Empty-Can-
09-11-2009, 04:39 PM
I thought thats what I did. So what do u really mean?

Same shit I wanna know man.

Everybody keeps saying "oh, go simpler."

Those last letter you did look cool and simple to me.

Will people just stop saying go simple and start giving crits on the shit we post. It's annoying as fuck if you want help on your piece and 10 people in a row just say go simpler man.

Trestoner707
09-11-2009, 05:01 PM
if your being told to go simpler. then your trying to jump to far ahead, better off not just showing it on here. simples simple. if u do it right. theres nothing wrong with it for ppl to bitch about. the reason ppl say simple. is so that u can get the feel for the letter. what they can do. how they fit with other leters to make it look sick n flow. fuck arrows n all that non sense. fuckn practice. if u learn not to make mistakes with the simples (which means you'd sure as fuck make mistakes with the complicated shit) then u can gradually start adding things and developing your own flow n style. you think we can just tell you how to do wild style. fuck no. you got to figure it out in YOUR OWN head. n the day will come when it clicks. that simple. not trying to be harsh or directing this towards anyone. and feel free to correct me if im wrong

StayHyE
09-11-2009, 05:02 PM
^ +1

-Empty-Can-
09-11-2009, 05:13 PM
if your being told to go simpler. then your trying to jump to far ahead, better off not just showing it on here. simples simple. if u do it right. theres nothing wrong with it for ppl to bitch about. the reason ppl say simple. is so that u can get the feel for the letter. what they can do. how they fit with other leters to make it look sick n flow. fuck arrows n all that non sense. fuckn practice. if u learn not to make mistakes with the simples (which means you'd sure as fuck make mistakes with the complicated shit) then u can gradually start adding things and developing your own flow n style. you think we can just tell you how to do wild style. fuck no. you got to figure it out in YOUR OWN head. n the day will come when it clicks. that simple. not trying to be harsh or directing this towards anyone. and feel free to correct me if im wrong

Yeah man but just saying go simpler doesn't help. Tell me what to change and tell whats wrong with it now. I understand that your not gonna be amazing instantly and that one day you will be able to but and shit takes time.

BigBlueViolence
09-11-2009, 05:20 PM
Same shit I wanna know man.

Everybody keeps saying "oh, go simpler."

Those last letter you did look cool and simple to me.

Will people just stop saying go simple and start giving crits on the shit we post. It's annoying as fuck if you want help on your piece and 10 people in a row just say go simpler man.
You are ASKING for our help dude,
we aren't expected to give it to anyone.
Take what you get and work with it,
don't start complaining because it isn't what you want to hear.

If you don't want our opinion, then just don't ask.

funhouseXcast
09-11-2009, 05:22 PM
strange one, that M is fucked, but other than that nice block work, good the gold is a nice effect.

"KASPER"
09-11-2009, 05:42 PM
same - start with simples man
dlae- that last one looks pretty good, work on the proportions of your bars tho...
some of my stuff

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3438/3388736840_52b2653320.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2588/3909058046_55c70b48d3.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2617/3742056732_ba478d3e8c.jpg

newest... a pen freestyle i decided to colour
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3449/3908268893_936989a6f1.jpg

any tips?
what do you guys think?
dope style.

the strange one
09-11-2009, 06:14 PM
strange one, that M is fucked, but other than that nice block work, good the gold is a nice effect.

lol thanks funhouse :)

and as for the regular as fuck "simples" arguement....man stop fucking beefing all,
and put up some piccys yo! fuck this shit we can argue all day bout whos right and wrong but you never get better if you yap...get the fucking pencil on the paper get teh simples down and move on
eh!?

fuck people it's the internet...people tell you what they think not what you always wana hear ...take the bits that help you improve and fucking move along....jeeeeesuuuuuuus! lol
rant over thank you! :) lol

faser
09-11-2009, 06:48 PM
I thought thats what I did. So what do u really mean?

no you tried to add your own little "style" to it.
the little "style" bit comes after you know how to draw that letter properly - in proportion and with bars

the strange one
09-11-2009, 06:53 PM
http://img39.imagefra.me/img/img39/2/9/11/f_2s5q80nbnx0m_01da13d.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

-Empty-Can-
09-11-2009, 08:02 PM
You are ASKING for our help dude,
we aren't expected to give it to anyone.
Take what you get and work with it,
don't start complaining because it isn't what you want to hear.

If you don't want our opinion, then just don't ask.

Yeah man i know i'm asking for it but i haven't really got anything. All I've ever got is "simpler." Thats like telling someone who can't throw a football very well to change the way they throw. It's very vague.

Whatever I hear is fine. I'm not expecting anything I know i'm not the best.

No beef here.

Trestoner707
09-11-2009, 08:19 PM
there was no beefing about it. i just had a rant cuz arguing over the internet is lame. and fighting over art is one of the most weakest/pointless things i think someone could do. i say persue the old school once u get going empty can. just mirror the image on both the ends(as in u do something on one side you do on the other). n have a good middle letter. all about structure so on and so on

Predator15
09-11-2009, 09:21 PM
Mmk so in the mist of all the arguing I think my crits got lost. So aside from "go simplier" (which for the record I got a pretty decent explanation for) any other crits. "Drop this. This looks fine. Try this i think it'll help." Etc. I think I'm kinda lookin for a homework assignment of sorts ya know. Tell me how to improve any of the pics that I threw up and I'll have some wherez to go from there. Preciated

Rick the ruler
09-11-2009, 09:36 PM
Just playin still, any advice?

Trestoner707
09-11-2009, 09:39 PM
Workin on letters instead of full words. Keep gettin crits sayin "keyboard" letters. I try to start with what I call box letters...never quite amused with the final product and always end up with stuff like this...ne thoughts (p.s.- the green outlines arent shadows or anything...i just looked at it and wished I could edit the letters. So I drew over them in green the way I would change em)

no arguing. i just like to be an asshole so that people will learn from it. its how i teach. n e ways

so predator. the first one. i can hardly tell what it is. a C im guessing. trying to distinguish it as more of a c. so no arrows. get rid of whats on the top part. get rid of the thing on the bottom left of it . keep the bars of your letters the same ALL the same size n bring the top closer to the right. so it looks like a c. on the second one the first b is good just get rid of that arrow. NO ARROWS. the second b get rid of that wart looking thing on the top left sticking out. and get rid of that whale tail looking thing on the bottom right n ur good. on the third . like i said keep the bars of the letters all the same size n get rid of the bottom left thing. on the second c get rid of how it like comes out to a point on the bottom n top part of the c. keep it simple. as in straight bars . on the third c brind the left side of it more toward the left n have that top left thing not be touching the top part of the c. there ya go bro

Trestoner707
09-11-2009, 09:42 PM
Just playin still, any advice?

shit id say bring the circle part of the p down more to fill that space. you want equal spacing and equal sizing. you dont want fat holes in the middle of the pieces.

Rick the ruler
09-11-2009, 10:05 PM
shit id say bring the circle part of the p down more to fill that space. you want equal spacing and equal sizing. you dont want fat holes in the middle of the pieces.Dont know how I didn't see that b4. thanx

Mr yarbles
09-11-2009, 10:17 PM
YOu guys are a bunch of retarted retards saying go simpler isn't a crit
We can't help you with your terrible letters because they are fucking terrible
Once you go simpler we can start to help you out
When everything is shit you can't really improve when you don't have the essentials down so quit your fucking complaining like a bunch of pussies and go simpler.
If your homie gave you a rotten apple you wouldn't eat it you'd ask for one that wasn't rotten

-Empty-Can-
09-11-2009, 10:26 PM
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics671.jpg

Yes I know it's not "simple" but I was trying something new. Trying shit won't hurt.

THe shading on my S is a little too light.

Please give some real crits.

MARTYRaz
09-11-2009, 10:59 PM
im not gna lie..i dont like it..it looks like ribbons..ur shading is descent tho..

DestroyLA
09-11-2009, 11:05 PM
Polar Looks like you went fatter at the bottom of your L". it kind of kills the A"

Same try keyboard letters

goonzatwork
09-11-2009, 11:18 PM
that last sketch is pretty hard.the 3d needs to be a bit more consistent in the patern. the blocks at the bottom of the T would look better going the same direction as the middle block

Predator15
09-11-2009, 11:18 PM
no arguing. i just like to be an asshole so that people will learn from it. its how i teach. n e ways

so predator. the first one. i can hardly tell what it is. a C im guessing. trying to distinguish it as more of a c. so no arrows. get rid of whats on the top part. get rid of the thing on the bottom left of it . keep the bars of your letters the same ALL the same size n bring the top closer to the right. so it looks like a c. on the second one the first b is good just get rid of that arrow. NO ARROWS. the second b get rid of that wart looking thing on the top left sticking out. and get rid of that whale tail looking thing on the bottom right n ur good. on the third . like i said keep the bars of the letters all the same size n get rid of the bottom left thing. on the second c get rid of how it like comes out to a point on the bottom n top part of the c. keep it simple. as in straight bars . on the third c brind the left side of it more toward the left n have that top left thing not be touching the top part of the c. there ya go bro

Will do...back to black books

Mr yarbles
09-12-2009, 12:26 AM
Back off trest
Only I can be a dick to someone then tell them I teach because they need to learn the hard way then give them tips after some beef

Keso
09-12-2009, 12:13 PM
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/44/l_b002923e28044d6fba9546d6f7d4a9bf.jpg

Keso
09-12-2009, 12:14 PM
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/11/l_eb402b2943944d11a009903243b070a1.jpg

Trestoner707
09-12-2009, 12:49 PM
Back off trest
Only I can be a dick to someone then tell them I teach because they need to learn the hard way then give them tips after some beef

haha then u know its an efficient way of teaching. i think its the only way they'll get it...

not trying to steal your rep ayyy lol

goonzatwork
09-12-2009, 01:13 PM
already a seek thats been writing it since like 04 bro

Trestoner707
09-12-2009, 03:15 PM
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/44/l_b002923e28044d6fba9546d6f7d4a9bf.jpg

I say get rid of the arrow. n try not to have so many notches or w/e. like make ur letters look more smoother. n that top cross bar needs to go on the H. it looks like an a. idk ur close but it looks like u have to many unnecassary things coming off your letters. try to mirror the image with what u do one one side that u do on the other if u get that like with ur chips off the letters n all that.

just clean it up with what u have coming off the bottom right of your letters

Trestoner707
09-12-2009, 03:19 PM
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/11/l_eb402b2943944d11a009903243b070a1.jpg

n this one. make sure all your bars of your letters are all the same width. everywhere. maybe try to round your s more so it looks like it can breathe. your second e is better. get rid of all the little notches. make it nice n clean so no one will bitch. (as in the middle part of the e.) shit i wouldnt even worry about coloring or nothing . since the goal of graffiti is letter structure. a 3 year old can color riight

man how are all these kids in crews n im not lol

Trestoner707
09-12-2009, 03:24 PM
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics671.jpg

Yes I know it's not "simple" but I was trying something new. Trying shit won't hurt.

THe shading on my S is a little too light.

Please give some real crits.

like the idea is cool n all. but i dont thing many people will dig it on here. everyones picky as fuck. i'd give u crits n all. but i dont want u to do it again. keep that one in ur book 4 yourself

Shell703
09-12-2009, 03:25 PM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/WPMBarpracticeOrange.jpg
WPM

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/WMBarpracticeOrange.jpg
WM

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/WbarpracticeOrange.jpg
W

SEEK- I think if you make the vertical bar of the K a little more fat on the top it will flow more with the first three letters and the right half of the K looks like keyboard font while the rest of the letters are funked up dont really think it matches. The size of the letters and the 3D are good though

Keso- Keyboard letters for a while

Empty- Not really feeling it, wouldnt really like seeing that up on any wall (no beef)

Strange- I like the highlights in the piece. The s looks pretty giant standing next to the the rest of the letters though. Good overall flow through the piece. I think you could choose a better color to make the piece "pop" more

rewz
09-12-2009, 03:38 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/2dke3oj.jpg

about a mouth old

UpstateHate585
09-12-2009, 03:45 PM
a mouth old? lol

looks ok

shell- cant read it, but the first one looks cool to me for some reason.

my first ever shot at a funky style lol
http://i25.tinypic.com/k9ew6g.jpg

-Empty-Can-
09-12-2009, 03:46 PM
im not gna lie..i dont like it..it looks like ribbons..ur shading is descent tho..

Thats somewhat of the effect I wanted to get.

Im still not sure how i should make the bottom bars on the T



Empty- Not really feeling it, wouldnt really like seeing that up on any wall (no beef)
Don't worry man my can skills aren't very good yet.

rewz
09-12-2009, 03:52 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/2wp2vew.jpg

GEEESSSS with a j

Trestoner707
09-12-2009, 04:24 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/2dke3oj.jpg

about a mouth old

thats dope. i dont know why ur posting in here. try intermediate

Trestoner707
09-12-2009, 04:26 PM
a mouth old? lol

looks ok

shell- cant read it, but the first one looks cool to me for some reason.

my first ever shot at a funky style lol
http://i25.tinypic.com/k9ew6g.jpg

shit id raise the exclamation mark a little n kinda angle the dot under the o. other then that looks sick

actually. make the top right of the n come out a little more. n do something a little more different with the top of the s. n maybe change the tail of the s just a tiny bit. like get rid of the very last little down thingy of it which u can use tp raise the part of the n to

Trestoner707
09-12-2009, 04:28 PM
SHELL - distinguish the W more. n ur m looks like an N
then the second one id lower the bars of the w to make it more w like . your m's alright. just try to distinguish the letters more. then the last one. i dont see the w at all. your on to something

StayHyE
09-12-2009, 06:35 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/e9wv0n.jpg

faser
09-12-2009, 06:37 PM
^ugly ass coloring

Trestoner707
09-12-2009, 06:45 PM
ya just skip coloring. i myself couldbe happy with just silver fills just cuz i care about my letter structure that much. id get rid of that bottom left part of the d n like try to bring that bar n the bottom one out to sorta replace it if u get me. do something different with the bottom right of the L like not having it come up so much

StayHyE
09-12-2009, 07:00 PM
^ugly ass coloring
its a quick color job i spend practically no time on it just working on structure and proportions

ya just skip coloring. i myself couldbe happy with just silver fills just cuz i care about my letter structure that much. id get rid of that bottom left part of the d n like try to bring that bar n the bottom one out to sorta replace it if u get me. do something different with the bottom right of the L like not having it come up so much

thanks ill work on it

Graffyk
09-12-2009, 07:22 PM
make the middle bar of the A thicker. The bottom part of the L just doesn't seem right to me..

faser
09-12-2009, 07:48 PM
[QUOTE=StayHyE;1468518]its a quick color job i spend practically no time on it just working on structure and proportions

well if u were working on strucutre u wudnt bother coloring wud u? :rolleyes:

StayHyE
09-12-2009, 09:07 PM
...

StayHyE
09-12-2009, 10:16 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/jhygx2.jpg
this one i took the time to color because it was in my book and not just on scratch paper....i know the A looks huge :(

BlacktodaFuture
09-12-2009, 10:41 PM
thats dope. i dont know why ur posting in here. try intermediate

*slap in face

shut your fucking face

crimateNC
09-12-2009, 11:57 PM
wack attack :O

drOping
09-13-2009, 01:18 AM
After a stressful spray session tonight...I took it back to paper, critz?

Paser1
09-13-2009, 01:48 AM
[IMG]http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/3686/photo114.jpg (http://img225.imageshack.us/i/photo114.jpg/)

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4517/photo115.jpg (http://img143.imageshack.us/i/photo115.jpg/)

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/2562/photo119e.jpg (http://img21.imageshack.us/i/photo119e.jpg/)
Just started to get the hang of bars i know there arent any shadows on the pieces but im just trying to get down flo right now not really worried about fills or shadows.... any crits?

Trestoner707
09-13-2009, 02:39 AM
*slap in face

shut your fucking face

word. your right so i wont say nothing cuz i really didnt look at it til now

Trestoner707
09-13-2009, 02:44 AM
http://i29.tinypic.com/jhygx2.jpg
this one i took the time to color because it was in my book and not just on scratch paper....i know the A looks huge :(

your D n L look a lil better. remeber equal sizing. keep workin at it

funhouseXcast
09-13-2009, 08:58 AM
Dlae that's the first thing i've seen you produce that i like, take ur time to color everything or just don't color. If you want structure ccrits it's better not to color anyways. the extension on the top bar of your E is the worst thing i see.

milk boxx
09-13-2009, 09:04 AM
[IMG]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/2562/photo119e.jpg (http://img21.imageshack.us/i/photo119e.jpg/)

take the face outta that A, lookin alot like snaps...

Paser1
09-13-2009, 10:03 AM
yo fuck that throwie i want crits on the bars Snap tought me everything i know its a face get over it.

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
09-13-2009, 10:50 AM
this thread is just downright terrible

ENC
09-13-2009, 11:20 AM
http://www.urbnfabrik.com/images/members/2687/fullsize/20090913155525Foto004.jpg

Started graffin since few days ago

http://www.urbnfabrik.com/images/members/2687/fullsize/20090913142223Foto025.jpg

Dont mind at the last one my pencils were done so couldn't finish all

LIZARD
09-13-2009, 11:51 AM
pase-gettin a shit load better brother

StayHyE
09-13-2009, 11:59 AM
http://i30.tinypic.com/efmebl.jpg

-Empty-Can-
09-13-2009, 12:15 PM
http://www.urbnfabrik.com/images/members/2687/fullsize/20090913155525Foto004.jpg

Started graffin since few days ago

http://www.urbnfabrik.com/images/members/2687/fullsize/20090913142223Foto025.jpg

Dont mind at the last one my pencils were done so couldn't finish all

Are you serious man? GTFO. If you have only been writing for a few days your not worthy to even post here. Work on your letter and don't come back for like a year till you have something decent, because i know exactly what your gonna do just like half the other people on here. Your gonna change one letter or one little thing in your throwie because somebody gave you a crit and then your gonna come back and post pictures which look exactly the same as last time. Look at other people throwies and try to copy their letters and make them your own. And for now use one color. better yet don't bother about colors. Learn to draw decent letters. I'm not trying to be harsh but don't come post anything until it's worth posting.

chiefy
09-13-2009, 12:15 PM
enc- youre lines are not clean enough and tax this is was big mile's writes so why have you blatantly copied it?

PegCityBoy
09-13-2009, 12:39 PM
enc- youre lines are not clean enough and tax this is was big mile's writes so why have you blatantly copied it?

aw shit you beat me to it

gumOnShoe
09-13-2009, 12:42 PM
http://www.urbnfabrik.com/images/members/2687/fullsize/20090913155525Foto004.jpg

Started graffin since few days ago

http://www.urbnfabrik.com/images/members/2687/fullsize/20090913142223Foto025.jpg

Dont mind at the last one my pencils were done so couldn't finish all

dude, new to graff thread, asap.

StayHyE
09-13-2009, 12:54 PM
he's been writing 'since a few days ago'

what the fuck does that mean?

MARTYRaz
09-13-2009, 01:00 PM
enc




FAIL!

ENC
09-13-2009, 01:07 PM
know it ;D

aight cheesrz

DietLemonade
09-13-2009, 01:08 PM
Man That shits whack ibe been writing fer like 2 days and even im better man just this BLOCKS! man do letters of your key board and just make it into somthing man nothing crazy just clean and simple No pointy shit

gumOnShoe
09-13-2009, 01:22 PM
enc; like i said before, new to graff thread, helpful stuff there.

dlae; make the left side of the 'a' fatter, the 3-d on the a looks out of place, too.

here's a simp i did; crits, please.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo52.jpg

-Empty-Can-
09-13-2009, 01:24 PM
to me the S doen't fit. The ends should be more bubbly. And that sketch is really light.

gumOnShoe
09-13-2009, 01:29 PM
to me the S doen't fit. The ends should be more bubbly. And that sketch is really light.

oh, sorry about the lightness, i swear it's darker irl, i'm using my mac's cam, so that's probably why. also, yeah, i see what you mean about the 's', i'll get right on it.


Man That shits whack ibe been writing fer like 2 days and even im better man just this BLOCKS! man do letters of your key board and just make it into somthing man nothing crazy just clean and simple No pointy shit

really, now.
let's see your stuff then.
lol, this'll be a good laugh, '2days'.

Fury
09-13-2009, 02:19 PM
ENC - You know what to do.
Snore - Try making your circles bigger (the circle in the R, etc).

gumOnShoe
09-13-2009, 02:49 PM
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo14-2.jpg
ok, tried to make the 's' bubbly.

exitus
09-13-2009, 03:07 PM
i lold at tax this

Aesir
09-13-2009, 04:23 PM
Here's an exchange I did for this kid DP. He either does DPEE or DPone. This is the DPEE version with the last E being a pumpkin. (meant for a Halloween prodo)

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/7973/0911091504.jpg (http://img410.imageshack.us/i/0911091504.jpg/) http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/0911091504.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img410/0911091504.jpg/1/)

http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/9398/0911091658.jpg (http://img30.imageshack.us/i/0911091658.jpg/) http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/0911091658.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img30/0911091658.jpg/1/)

What's fucked up is I did this sketch of MY name later on the same night and it came out like this -

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/3387/downsized0911092120.jpg (http://img9.imageshack.us/i/downsized0911092120.jpg/) http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/downsized0911092120.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img9/downsized0911092120.jpg/1/)

FML. Anyway, crits would be greatly appreciated.

DLAE - you're getting better.
ENC - use BARS.

Paser1
09-13-2009, 05:29 PM
Lizard - Thanks yo i took a break from posting and shit and hit the books and have been bombing but i got fuckin snatched up in like the outskirts of malden now i got a court date so its back to black books and bombing science haha. ....fuck

BIGel
09-13-2009, 10:18 PM
i know i aint been in here for days, yall got it on lock though.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2584/3917653283_0a481e830e_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2522/3918439614_6958985f28_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2631/3917651803_ca4251e9f1_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2556/3917650993_c6b5e1ab10_b.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3536/3918437036_808180e3e5_b.jpg

BIGel
09-13-2009, 10:18 PM
i know i aint been in here for days, yall got it on lock though.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2584/3917653283_0a481e830e_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2522/3918439614_6958985f28_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2631/3917651803_ca4251e9f1_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2556/3917650993_c6b5e1ab10_b.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3536/3918437036_808180e3e5_b.jpg

DestroyLA
09-13-2009, 10:58 PM
your last pics are kind of creepy.

ryser
09-14-2009, 12:05 AM
here is the outline of the first blackbook piece ive done with this name:
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/2236/photo17h.jpg

here is some 3d added:
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/5387/photo18xp.jpg

crits?
i know the S and E dont flow well and some of the over lapping is a little messed up, but i was a lil faded while doing this if you notice the blue moon and bag of buds ;)

Trestoner707
09-14-2009, 12:46 AM
i know i aint been in here for days, yall got it on lock though.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2584/3917653283_0a481e830e_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2522/3918439614_6958985f28_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2631/3917651803_ca4251e9f1_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2556/3917650993_c6b5e1ab10_b.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3536/3918437036_808180e3e5_b.jpg

dope as fuck man. fuk wat other people say i like the ideas

drOping
09-14-2009, 01:50 AM
I need more/new colors, Critz would help...Thanks
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2554/1003072.jpg

Trestoner707
09-14-2009, 01:57 PM
I need more/new colors, Critz would help...Thanks
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2554/1003072.jpg

for every color theres gotta be atleast 3 different tones of it. learn to use them all. learn to fade. its the shit. i dont think u should do your pieces like that. keep it old skool

Black Flag
09-14-2009, 04:46 PM
I need more/new colors, Critz would help...Thanks
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2554/1003072.jpg

Its a cool concept, but without a lot of time and skinny caps that is going to be hard to paint on a wall.

I mean go with it if you can, just dont expect it to turn out like the black book sketch of it.

edit: hate to seem like a douche, but in my honest opinion thats one shitty handstyle.

Fury
09-14-2009, 05:05 PM
Ryser - Keep at it.
BigEl- Dope shit man, color it if you can.

I'm not sure what to do from here since I figured three different ones. BS to the rescue!
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5282/img0327m.jpg

markingz.
09-14-2009, 05:38 PM
dude vega is a sick name props, also kinda like that style too, i like how you ade the e a monster, and bigblue can suck my balls, can't wait to get my camera so i can burn that clown in a battle then we'll see whos the toy.

drOping
09-14-2009, 06:02 PM
Thank you Trestoner and thank you Black Flag. MY hand style is def my weak point. Hey Tre when you say every color has 3 tones do u mean like every marker does and you somehow alter it? I really only have a limited amount of sharpies, which I know is weak as hell, but I'm broke and working on it. Don't do my pieces like that....what aspect..like trying toget all 3d crazy?? I was trying to like do a fade thing with the pink/red/black but my colors are so limited, maybe im just not seeing shit clearly....help with fading would be much appreciated...thanks again!

drOping
09-14-2009, 06:22 PM
This is a bump..what do you guys think about vertical handstyles? after class tonight I'm gonna try to rework some new handstyles...Thanks for the help guys really appreciate it!

Aesir
09-14-2009, 06:41 PM
Here's an exchange I did for this kid DP. He either does DPEE or DPone. This is the DPEE version with the last E being a pumpkin. (meant for a Halloween prodo)

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/7973/0911091504.jpg (http://img410.imageshack.us/i/0911091504.jpg/) http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/0911091504.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img410/0911091504.jpg/1/)

http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/9398/0911091658.jpg (http://img30.imageshack.us/i/0911091658.jpg/) http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/0911091658.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img30/0911091658.jpg/1/)

What's fucked up is I did this sketch of MY name later on the same night and it came out like this -

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/3387/downsized0911092120.jpg (http://img9.imageshack.us/i/downsized0911092120.jpg/) http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/downsized0911092120.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img9/downsized0911092120.jpg/1/)

FML. Anyway, crits would be greatly appreciated.

DLAE - you're getting better.
ENC - use BARS.

bump for critz.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
09-14-2009, 07:28 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0587.jpg

aesir- pure dopeness love the faces
ryser- maybe make the E like block like the rest of ur name

-Empty-Can-
09-14-2009, 07:29 PM
i like the style but your shadow effect looks gay

Graffyk
09-14-2009, 07:29 PM
Aesir i like the first two. But the middle part of the E is a little too skinny. Nice job on that pumpkin.

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/2669/p1000509bc.jpg


http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/5056/p1000510t.jpg



slek i like those a lot. It's got good flow.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
09-14-2009, 07:31 PM
i like the style but your shadow effect looks gay

so with a regular shadow it would be good?

-Empty-Can-
09-14-2009, 07:32 PM
i think so

LIZARD
09-14-2009, 09:55 PM
tea-make sure all the lines on your 3d/shadow go in the same direction and stick with like a plain color...ditch those lines

DestroyLA
09-14-2009, 09:59 PM
posek you forgot the space inside of your P
Viral go way simpler.

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0914091923a.jpg

gumOnShoe
09-14-2009, 10:15 PM
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo14-2.jpg
ok, tried to make the 's' bubbly.

bump.

drOping
09-14-2009, 10:34 PM
Snore- Clean..maybe bend the S a little more

DestroyLA-your shading is off cant really tell whats going on, also feels like your S is top heavy, let it get a little looser and maybe tilt back and to the left??

Viral-like where your going, some of your edges seem to jagged...maybe straighten some stuff up a bit..lil clean up?

I borrowed this girls Kewel felT pens in class!
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/4135/1003074t.jpg

gumOnShoe
09-14-2009, 10:39 PM
Snore- Clean..maybe bend the S a little more

bend it in what way.. :confused:

Graffyk
09-14-2009, 10:40 PM
slek- the lines in the fill are too random. Some are farther apart from others. I like your style, it's simple but effective, keep it up.

Predator15
09-14-2009, 10:56 PM
no arguing. i just like to be an asshole so that people will learn from it. its how i teach. n e ways

so predator. the first one. i can hardly tell what it is. a C im guessing. trying to distinguish it as more of a c. so no arrows. get rid of whats on the top part. get rid of the thing on the bottom left of it . keep the bars of your letters the same ALL the same size n bring the top closer to the right. so it looks like a c. on the second one the first b is good just get rid of that arrow. NO ARROWS. the second b get rid of that wart looking thing on the top left sticking out. and get rid of that whale tail looking thing on the bottom right n ur good. on the third . like i said keep the bars of the letters all the same size n get rid of the bottom left thing. on the second c get rid of how it like comes out to a point on the bottom n top part of the c. keep it simple. as in straight bars . on the third c brind the left side of it more toward the left n have that top left thing not be touching the top part of the c. there ya go bro

Mmk...I think I took this as simple as I could. Style is kept to an absolute minimum. No arrows. I used graph paper (which I almost never do...but I wanted my letters to be the same size). So assuming this is simple. And indeed an acceptable step...what should be added on next to progress it...or what needs to be edited before that can happen.

xSonnyTx
09-14-2009, 10:57 PM
keep in mind that all of these have been done in less than a week, which may account for some of the overall sloppiness. If they're crap then yea thats just me

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3516/3921318249_60c7ef20f7.jpg
cover of my new blackbook

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2573/3922101740_b60b6f4c36.jpg
'Economics' thing I did in-you guessed it, economics class

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2670/3922101696_24f5fcdfb5.jpg
'SonnyT' piece. my old tag name. Terrrrrrible lettering

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2529/3921129867_0beee1f105.jpg
New name? 'Chalk' sketch throwup

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2649/3921129837_e09ee7e5d0.jpg
'Dank' piece. A friend in my math class wanted me to do one that said 'dank.' This is what came out the other side

BLOC1
09-14-2009, 11:04 PM
The best advice I can give you, is to go as simple as possible.
Start trying strait letters, with simple fills, and a simple drop.
Eventually, youll get the hang of it.

drOping
09-14-2009, 11:04 PM
bend it in what way.. :confused:

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8277/heree.png

Just my opinion tho...

ryser
09-14-2009, 11:07 PM
I think he means bend it by bringing the tails of the S in towards the middle a little bit, like as if you were going to make an 8 out of it

xSonnyTx
09-14-2009, 11:20 PM
The best advice I can give you, is to go as simple as possible.
Start trying strait letters, with simple fills, and a simple drop.
Eventually, youll get the hang of it.

Hey what do you mean by "a simple drop?"
Maybe its cause I'm a noob but I've never heard that term before

weakfingers
09-14-2009, 11:20 PM
Gum on shoe-Theres already a pretty big Snore up in Ontario.
http://www.iloveletters.ca/WALLS/PhotoPages/SNOREwall4.htm
with ALOT of ups.

ryser
09-14-2009, 11:48 PM
I was trying a new letter constructing technique using "blocks" like they teach you in the new to graff thread.

Here is after all the blocks were assembled and insides were cleaned out.
http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/9480/photo19g.jpg

Here is after the corners were rounded and then traced with pen.
http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/2614/photo20e.jpg

Here is after a blue painters out line and thickend pen lines.
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/2741/photo21b.jpg

Going to grab some colored pencils and color it in when i get home.
Any Crits?

I know the S and the E could come together some.

MARTYRaz
09-15-2009, 12:54 AM
^^simpler

UpstateHate585
09-15-2009, 11:45 AM
ryser- when inking, try to make longer strokes. u can tell u are sketchy with it. try making a line go from corner to corner. makes it look cleaner. as for the letters, i dont really like them. its good that u are using bars, but try to make them the same thickness and have a kind of flow.

sonnytx- he means a drop shadow.

weakfingers
09-15-2009, 12:55 PM
Ryser - work on bars

Messin around with some new letters and trying some drips. I know the T on the end looks like a C... Just felt like posting.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7653.jpg
and a simple straight.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7655.jpg

sketch3
09-15-2009, 02:03 PM
The best advice I can give you, is to go as simple as possible.
Start trying strait letters, with simple fills, and a simple drop.
Eventually, youll get the hang of it.
ur sig is like mone but not as good,
kins of sums up your life:)

gumOnShoe
09-15-2009, 02:55 PM
Gum on shoe-Theres already a pretty big Snore up in Ontario.
http://www.iloveletters.ca/WALLS/PhotoPages/SNOREwall4.htm
with ALOT of ups.yeah, i know.
but i'm not, so....

weakfingers
09-15-2009, 03:46 PM
I was just stating that there is another established one. You can still write snore if you want but your not the only one.

Keso
09-15-2009, 03:55 PM
http://www.urbnfabrik.com/images/members/2687/fullsize/20090913155525Foto004.jpg

Started graffin since few days ago

http://www.urbnfabrik.com/images/members/2687/fullsize/20090913142223Foto025.jpg

Dont mind at the last one my pencils were done so couldn't finish all

What the fuck is this shit? Srsly. How old is this guy? Read the new to graff thread.

Mr yarbles
09-15-2009, 05:01 PM
yeah, i know.
but i'm not, so....

Too bad snore is a fuckign beast.
Dude's known around the world and he gets down like fuck.
If I saw a snore tag around here that wasn't legit it'd be crossed.

Jokz
09-15-2009, 05:30 PM
some of these homies need to post shit in the simples thread and get some crits there first. not saying im much better lol but yea.
get those simples down first

B.S. POLICE
09-15-2009, 05:30 PM
http://www.urbnfabrik.com/images/members/2687/fullsize/20090913155525Foto004.jpg

dope!

Jokz
09-15-2009, 05:35 PM
http://www.urbnfabrik.com/images/members/2687/fullsize/20090913155525Foto004.jpg

dope!

lmfao BS

Trestoner707
09-15-2009, 06:03 PM
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/abcs.jpg

just cuz i felt a need to do simples cuz im out of practice so ill post this in here.

A356
09-15-2009, 06:06 PM
http://i904.photobucket.com/albums/ac242/dingo356/IMG_0119.jpg

Still learnin

B.S. POLICE
09-15-2009, 06:11 PM
http://www.urbnfabrik.com/images/members/2687/fullsize/20090913155525Foto004.jpg

bump

B.S. POLICE
09-15-2009, 06:15 PM
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/abcs.jpg

just cuz i felt a need to do simples cuz im out of practice so ill post this in here.

gtfo with that internet shit

DestroyLA
09-15-2009, 06:17 PM
is it really that simple?

Trestoner707
09-15-2009, 09:29 PM
haha that wasnt the reason behind it. i just wanted to excercise by doing my ABC's as simple as i could. which im using as an example for everyone who complains about what next after the blocks. you DO learn to bring your own style to it over time. correct me if im wrong guys

i posted n outline n intermediate too

weakfingers
09-15-2009, 09:34 PM
Watch out ENC. Looking pretty simmaler to ENE and hes killing it...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/ene.jpg

ryser
09-15-2009, 11:18 PM
new little one, practicing more "blocks" and such

outline:
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/1748/photo23lv.jpg

fill:
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/2521/photo22i.jpg

crits?

LIZARD
09-15-2009, 11:21 PM
the fill could use some work...the first r kinda looks like a B

DestroyLA
09-16-2009, 12:40 AM
Ryser how come every letter is like attached to each other but then you dont do it for the R" and the Y"? Fix that. and your color scheme looks ugly

drOping
09-16-2009, 12:52 AM
Ryser-coming along nicely, good flow, but yea just make a couple tweaks to clean that up a bit.

Is it possible to get a good fade with sharpies? Tried adding some little extensions to my letters, I really don't know if I like them, my green bubble gas cloud is weak too I think.
Critz? anything helps...Thanks!
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/9367/1003075.jpg

DestroyLA
09-16-2009, 12:53 AM
i dont think the cloud goes well with that style. just my opinion.

Mr yarbles
09-16-2009, 07:50 AM
I think the least thing you need to worry about right now is fading.
those bubbles are wack and so are your letters

SirBigO
09-16-2009, 08:54 AM
aight, here's sum of my more recent work. don't look at too much at the Sir shit. tbh it's 70% bited from an picture i saw on this actual Site.

i don't write Burro Banton, it's an Dancehall artist^^

Paser1
09-16-2009, 12:10 PM
Just been practicing bars excuse the shit fills and lack of shadowing im just trying to get this new style to perfection and trying to work on bars and flow gimme some crits on the structure pleasseee.
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/1844/photo120tl.jpg
just a character i've been working on.... nothing special
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/8461/photo113b.jpg
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/1826/photo116w.jpg
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/8465/photo117p.jpg
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/4687/photo118j.jpg
Actually did a decent fill for this one i got bored with just one color fills...

B.S. POLICE
09-16-2009, 12:25 PM
...tear...

jupsick
09-16-2009, 12:48 PM
pase get out of your box of one simple
change your letters
try being more original

B.S. POLICE
09-16-2009, 12:51 PM
he needs to bang out simples with bars until that shit is burned onto his retnas. toys need a solid foundation before experimenting and changing up styles, imo

A356
09-16-2009, 01:53 PM
sum1 crit mine above piece plez

jupsick
09-16-2009, 01:55 PM
listen he does that same thing with other colors i think its just stupid

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
09-16-2009, 02:45 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/P9154145.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/P9154144.jpg
pay no attention to the really wack handys. i was jus fucking around.

Keso
09-16-2009, 02:51 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/P9154145.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/P9154144.jpg
pay no attention to the really wack handys. i was jus fucking around.

I like the colors but the letters don't flow too much.

rewz
09-16-2009, 05:11 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/10qmjhu.jpg

recent not reealy liking it as much

StayHyE
09-16-2009, 08:20 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/23m57o4.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/b6bv9i.jpg

gumOnShoe
09-16-2009, 08:32 PM
Too bad snore is a fuckign beast.
Dude's known around the world and he gets down like fuck.
If I saw a snore tag around here that wasn't legit it'd be crossed.
lol, so you're one of those guys, who just rags people....
besides that, i'm not from canada....so again....i don't really care...but the one from canada is pretty good i guess....
also at weakfingers; s'all good, wasn't trying to come off mean or anything, i was just saying..

barks
09-16-2009, 09:22 PM
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1912.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
09-16-2009, 09:35 PM
^^ toy throw ups forum.

BlacktodaFuture
09-16-2009, 09:41 PM
he needs to bang out simples with bars until that shit is burned onto his retnas. toys need a solid foundation before experimenting and changing up styles, imo

smartest thing i have ever heard in this forum.... ever!

gumOnShoe
09-16-2009, 10:21 PM
using this fresh marker i racked scariest dy of my life
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/6338/sdc10735.jpg

im kidding

everyone go some simpler
i lol'd at the gum on the bottom of the sharpie :p

BlacktodaFuture
09-16-2009, 10:30 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/ujbl001.jpg

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/ujbl002.jpg

-Dank-DK-
09-16-2009, 10:33 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/345y4o0.jpg
http://i31.tinypic.com/91jn8z.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/mjwltu.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/w2d105.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/2u8w5tx.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/2z8yuew.jpg
shit while im high
crits

Jokz
09-16-2009, 10:46 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/345y4o0.jpg
http://i31.tinypic.com/91jn8z.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/mjwltu.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/w2d105.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/2u8w5tx.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/2z8yuew.jpg
shit while im high
crits

you got the throw up steez down man. sick keep it up

-Dank-DK-
09-16-2009, 10:48 PM
you got the throw up steez down man. sick keep it up

(steez) sorry idk what that is

but thanks dude

Jokz
09-16-2009, 10:51 PM
(steez) sorry idk what that is

but thanks dude

sorry lol. steez means like the stuff, the shit (or shiz) :P
so in other words. you got the throw up style down.
i like the style a lot

-Dank-DK-
09-16-2009, 10:52 PM
well u know what i love your sig
my pants r sticky

Jokz
09-16-2009, 10:53 PM
well u know what i love your sig
my pants r sticky

lol. gotta love slo motion gifs

weakfingers
09-16-2009, 11:11 PM
lol, so you're one of those guys, who just rags people....
besides that, i'm not from canada....so again....i don't really care...but the one from canada is pretty good i guess....
also at weakfingers; s'all good, wasn't trying to come off mean or anything, i was just saying..


"He's pretty good i guess"
The dude kills it not to mention he is in one of southern ontario's biggest graff crews GH.
Heres A gallery on BS to check your head again
http://www.bombingscience.com/index.php/gallery/viewThumbs/artist/438


I'm not trying to sound like a dick but its like taking the name Cope2 or like Saber. Snore has been doing it for a while and hes actully pretty big thats why i brought it to attention. The final choice is up to you but yeah he is pretty big.

Jokz
09-16-2009, 11:24 PM
"He's pretty good i guess"
The dude kills it not to mention he is in one of southern ontario's biggest graff crews GH.
Heres A gallery on BS to check your head again
http://www.bombingscience.com/index.php/gallery/viewThumbs/artist/438


I'm not trying to sound like a dick but its like taking the name Cope2 or like Saber. Snore has been doing it for a while and hes actully pretty big thats why i brought it to attention. The final choice is up to you but yeah he is pretty big.

weakfingers is right bro. its nothing personal obviously, but its just kind of uncool. like he's saying its upto you, but theres many things you can use if you put ur mind to it. stay up tho

drOping
09-17-2009, 12:06 AM
Just trying to get the simples down...am I on the right track? (besides my weak ass handstyle)

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/4303/1003082d.jpg

StayHyE
09-17-2009, 03:29 AM
http://i28.tinypic.com/jg5r9u.jpg


quick fill, just working/tweaking simples

ShIfTeD
09-17-2009, 04:08 AM
dont tweak simples yet, or do 3d

A356
09-17-2009, 05:13 AM
Need sum crit for dis...

http://i904.photobucket.com/albums/ac242/dingo356/IMG_0119.jpg

Black Flag
09-17-2009, 06:14 AM
http://i28.tinypic.com/jg5r9u.jpg


quick fill, just working/tweaking simples

I really wouldn't consider that a simple any more. It has a letter structure suitable for a piece, but it just has pretty thin bars in some places.

Idk what to really critique on it on it, all i can really say is that I am not feelin it.

Fury
09-17-2009, 11:56 AM
Ryser - Keep at it.
BigEl- Dope shit man, color it if you can.

I'm not sure what to do from here since I figured three different ones. BS to the rescue!
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5282/img0327m.jpg

Bump.

StayHye - Work on it, I don't like the R that much. Keep practicing.
Slek - What's that thing over the E? And that's not simple; simple (to me) is block letters/how the letters look on your keyboard.

Dek2
09-17-2009, 04:09 PM
Gimme your thoughts on theesseee

ryser
09-17-2009, 04:48 PM
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/6835/photo24p.jpg
new outline
crits? I know the last R doesnt flow well and should be changed up

dek2 - why only two letters? some of those are lookin pretty good though

rewz
09-17-2009, 05:20 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/10qmjhu.jpg

recent not reealy liking it as much

crits

Dek2
09-17-2009, 06:05 PM
I dunno I just tried it an im diggin it so yeah, and those letters are fun and similar

hpir
09-17-2009, 06:59 PM
A356-shits dope
rewz- i say go intermediate
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/manewish001.jpg
crit im not sure wat it is

goonzatwork
09-17-2009, 07:27 PM
hpir, its not bad, simple is always good but id take the bottom left of the k straighte it out align it with the top and maybe thin it out a bit...im just not feelin the curve outward. and haha nice...classic sketch in a school work notebook

LeaksOne
09-17-2009, 07:36 PM
nice kem. i like that. maybe bring the top right leg of the K out a bit

Graffyk
09-17-2009, 07:41 PM
A356: Nice shit. The fill is good, if anything, i'd say get some crits at the intermediate thread.
StayHye: The bars don't keep the same size, and it doesn't look like you intentionally did it. I don't know what those blue lines are but they definetely don't belong there. The U and N don't really keep the same style as the D R and E. Keep at it.

Dek2: Like it a lot. Nice and clean with good structure. Only crit i have is overalll too many extensions.

Ryser: It's not bad, got good flow. Bring the bar of the first R down a little.



http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/8512/p1000511a.jpg


http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/7448/p1000512r.jpg
Simple. I think pink black and blue is a hot combo.

crits please.

Fetusr
09-17-2009, 07:53 PM
Hpir Id make the shadow on that a little bigger, and that e could use a bit of work, but otherwise it looks okay

Graffyk your trying to draw in styles way beyond your skill level it looks like.. work a bit simpler

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/Violentbydesign.jpg

Thinking of painting this soon, was thinking chrome fill white for highlights and black for the outline.. any crits?

Dek2
09-17-2009, 08:07 PM
Thanks for the crits dudes' fetusr im lovin that T

Black Flag
09-17-2009, 09:05 PM
A356: Nice shit. The fill is good, if anything, i'd say get some crits at the intermediate thread.
StayHye: The bars don't keep the same size, and it doesn't look like you intentionally did it. I don't know what those blue lines are but they definetely don't belong there. The U and N don't really keep the same style as the D R and E. Keep at it.

Dek2: Like it a lot. Nice and clean with good structure. Only crit i have is overalll too many extensions.

Ryser: It's not bad, got good flow. Bring the bar of the first R down a little.



http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/8512/p1000511a.jpg


http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/7448/p1000512r.jpg
Simple. I think pink black and blue is a hot combo.

crits please.

You made a really common mistake here.

You abandoned any attempt to provide solid letter structure for making cool backgrounds and colorways.

You know you have a solid style when you can rock hollows with a single color and still look good.

Graffyk
09-17-2009, 09:49 PM
yeah, i get colorhappy alot and just go all out with my sharpies until it's bright and colorful.

but the second one is (almost) as simple as simple can be. I just added colors to it. Need i really go simpler on that one, or is there a way i can improve it?

Fury
09-17-2009, 09:56 PM
Ryser - Keep at it.
BigEl- Dope shit man, color it if you can.

I'm not sure what to do from here since I figured three different ones. BS to the rescue!
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5282/img0327m.jpg

Crits again please.
Graffyk - The top one is better, but like Black Flag said, work on that letter structure.
Fetusr - Not digging the T or the 3D.
Kem - Looks alright, but could be better; I'm not sure how though.

suparjafar
09-17-2009, 10:07 PM
http://tinypic.com/r/vf9m5v/3

just an idea, havent written it alot. crits

Fetusr
09-18-2009, 07:51 AM
There is no 3D in my piece bruh, open your eyes and find your way back to the tot throwies forum!

STFUPPERCUT
09-18-2009, 01:00 PM
Fury- keep at it man your on the write track basicly you just gotta keep practicing, throwies are something that develope over time and practice =]

Dek2
09-18-2009, 03:39 PM
just finished this one.
crits:D

Graffyk
09-18-2009, 07:22 PM
Dek2 that shit is nice. Those dots dont really fit, but other than that it's clean and has flow

nice

(SoS)Viruz
09-18-2009, 08:45 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan.jpg
^^^^^Unfinshed
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0001.jpg
^^^^^For the niggy Hoer

LeaksOne
09-18-2009, 08:59 PM
you should move the hole in the R down a bit

One Evil
09-18-2009, 10:58 PM
mad quick sketch
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/3968/dscf2606q.jpg (http://img10.imageshack.us/i/dscf2606q.jpg/)
i fucked the C since it dont really flow wit the SE but any crits.

remos
09-18-2009, 11:15 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan.jpg
^^^^^Unfinshed
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0001.jpg
^^^^^For the niggy Hoer

diggin it
and agreed the hole should be lower on the R

drOping
09-18-2009, 11:36 PM
One evil- your headed in the right direction..but clean that shit up...a lot

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/8528/1003092o.jpg
I shouldn't have used purple...lack of color selection angers me

Dek2
09-19-2009, 01:08 AM
yeah ha i debated on those for a min...

DUNSY
09-19-2009, 01:45 AM
hoer means prostitute in my language

Cyto Aka Son1c
09-19-2009, 02:35 AM
http://i38.tinypic.com/28aq79g.jpg

Graffyk
09-19-2009, 11:01 AM
sec the lines dont keep the same width, work on that. That arrow that seems to be coming from the E behind the S, get rid of that.

Slek you have creative fills and your flow is so neat, i like your style. Purple didn't really work with it, a bit too many dark colors next to each other

keep it up.

Cyto Aka Son1c
09-19-2009, 12:28 PM
is mine toy?

(SoS)Viruz
09-19-2009, 12:36 PM
is mine toy?

yes

Cyto Aka Son1c
09-19-2009, 01:21 PM
it doesn't look toy, what's wrong with it? just because it's a simple doesn't mean it's toy

(SoS)Viruz
09-19-2009, 01:46 PM
No its not clean, and have lil to no flow........And by asking the question is it toy further more prove that you are.......Put it like this.....Can you truthfuly say that your style stands out from others.....Is it unique, Original(or some what)