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BigBlueViolence
09-29-2009, 10:57 PM
dawg, YOU AREN'T CHANGING ANYTHING.
letters made of arrows = WHACK.
letters made from parts of other letters = WHACK.
letters that are smaller than other letters = WHACK.

<<Fathem>>
09-29-2009, 10:59 PM
test
FUCK TITS SHIT HELL
CUNT FAG WHORE SLUT
FUCKER
end test

wtf?

<<Fathem>>
09-29-2009, 11:02 PM
dawg, YOU AREN'T CHANGING ANYTHING.
letters made of arrows = WHACK.
letters made from parts of other letters = WHACK.
letters that are smaller than other letters = WHACK.

well fuck, i got four different ppl sayin four differnt things...you say no arrows someone else says improve a letter and its good...i cant fucking please everyone, and besides in the end its my tag.

408Bomber
09-29-2009, 11:08 PM
Ok... what's your tag name? I'll do a quick simple tag for you >.>!

BigBlueViolence
09-29-2009, 11:10 PM
YA! FAG!

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/5761/renob.png


and bump this



http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_UYl8S-FS0bg/SWucKK6uHLI/AAAAAAAAABA/jZDwYUkmp9o/s320/Futurama_Fry_Looking_Squint.jpg

<<Fathem>>
09-29-2009, 11:10 PM
test
FUCK TITS SHIT HELL
CUNT FAG WHORE SLUT
FUCKER
end test

conclusion: i dont get BBV's post at all.

snaw: looks good (left especially) keep those simps up. use uppercase N. dont let the curls of the S touch its middle. and the W in second is too bubbly compared to rest and use bars. actually. let them overlap instead of guessing where they should meet

krump. your getting the idea. straighter letters

fathem - no arrows, no unattached mid E line, no attached A to F, have Cross bar for A, have consistent height + width pls, and straighter simpler letters for now. :) and dont use your sketch pad for tag practice (if that is what it is) and for the love of allah dont put that in the street

ok then... at least someones making some sense. and being helpfull instead of just chirpin.

Epoc
09-29-2009, 11:11 PM
took me way to long to edit. fuck.

read previous post for crit shit ^^

fathem. much better already. remove curl top of F mid of F top of E. keep letters in straight line like VAGINA below. gotta wet dream before you fuck. Iffff yo know what i mean. yeh gotta marry before you abuse you spouse.....if ya see where im going.

<<Fathem>>
09-29-2009, 11:11 PM
Ok... what's your tag name? I'll do a quick simple tag for you >.>!

Fathem

<<Fathem>>
09-29-2009, 11:19 PM
took me way to long to edit. fuck.

read previous post for crit shit ^^

fathem. much better already. remove curl top of F mid of F top of E. keep letters in straight line like VAGINA below. gotta wet dream before you fuck. Iffff yo know what i mean. yeh gotta marry before you abuse you spouse.....if ya see where im going.

like so? and its in a practice cheapo depo sketchpad...and its not hittin the street til its done, no worries. and that arrow at the bottom is from anonother, not really supposed to be there lol

Epoc
09-29-2009, 11:23 PM
now do that like 30 times a day for a year.

then slowly you'll develop your own style.

get fatter marker. it helps

408Bomber
09-29-2009, 11:24 PM
Fathem
do you realize how annoying that name is to write.....

<<Fathem>>
09-29-2009, 11:30 PM
now do that like 30 times a day for a year.

then slowly you'll develop your own style.

get fatter marker. it helps

lol trust, i have mad markers,pens etc...got a fatter one, prisma....but forgive me for sounding like an idiot. wasnt the other post basicly my own style, like, if i just keep writing fathem over and over, chances are that the end product comes to that...like im going to go ahead and try it...just confusing is all..

BigBlueViolence
09-29-2009, 11:31 PM
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/10/90438952.png

suparjafar
09-29-2009, 11:32 PM
get a chisel tipped marker or something or something fat and just write your name over and over. but fathem is a bit long

Epoc
09-29-2009, 11:36 PM
no. its not style when you cant do it any other way and cant make clean solid basic font letters. its just whack. or i guess you could consider it a wack style vs. a nice style. either way. it takes a while. after you realize how much dick it sucks, it is much easier to improve.

shem
09-29-2009, 11:44 PM
yo im feelin that name. i messed with it for a few minutes so many ways to make it flow.

<<Fathem>>
09-29-2009, 11:44 PM
408 bomber: yeah im starting to...but what did you end up with?

suparfajar: <-aint that a bit long:S

Epoc: its not that i cant do it any other way...but im just going to take advice, and start just writing it...

Big blue violence: um, but thats not lookin very nice...haha, guess thats the point of rewriting 8000000 times..

*note that ive been at this for maybee three days...

BigBlueViolence
09-29-2009, 11:46 PM
Well i did it on MSpaint with a laptop mouse,
and it still looks better than what you are coming up with.

<<Fathem>>
09-29-2009, 11:47 PM
yo im feelin that name. i messed with it for a few minutes so many ways to make it flow.

i like it too....oculd you give a couple examples?...i wont bite, just curious.

<<Fathem>>
09-29-2009, 11:57 PM
Well i did it on MSpaint with a laptop mouse,
and it still looks better than what you are coming up with.

the book is thick, so i had no wrist support on the M. so its still kinda fucked...but this seems to be what your looking for.

suparjafar
09-30-2009, 12:04 AM
supar jafar is a username not my graff name..

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/9198/pic0097y.th.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/i/pic0097y.jpg/)

dont bag on terrible 3d im aware.

shem
09-30-2009, 12:07 AM
much better homie.

i dont have my camera right now maybe tomorrow.

<<Fathem>>
09-30-2009, 12:09 AM
suparjafar: ok. clearly not.

shem: much better to who? and yeah if you could, that would be greatly appreciated.

shem
09-30-2009, 12:10 AM
to you. stay simple like that and just keep writing it. things will ineveitably change on their own and the steez will come.

Graffyk
09-30-2009, 12:12 AM
Snaw your Ws look a lot better.

<<Fathem>>
09-30-2009, 12:12 AM
to you. stay simple like that and just keep writing it. things will ineveitably change on their own and the steez will come.

fuck...seems like a long ass process...but since im only 3 days in...gunna take the advice.

suparjafar
09-30-2009, 12:20 AM
Snaw your Ws look a lot better.

thanks. question...when is the time to move on to developing a throw?

BigBlueViolence
09-30-2009, 12:24 AM
it's a REALLY long process.

<<Fathem>>
09-30-2009, 01:28 AM
So basicly been at it for a while, this is what i have now that i started at a simple FATHEM. and just kept writing it over and over...I'm going to continue tomorrow... about an hour past when i thought i was gunna go to bed.

BigBlueViolence
09-30-2009, 01:38 AM
Dude, I give up.

DUNSY
09-30-2009, 02:06 AM
taz i really like the one with the orange outline, not really much to crit on it but i wouldn't have bended the lines of the top of the letters

cose if everyone would listen to crits like you do everyone would improve way faster, nice work like the letters and i like your second "e" best

slek i think you overdid it with those silver big drips

upstate the second "leg" of your n should come a little lower, other than that i'm loving it

grafyk i totally agree with black flag
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
trying out a new name: Nova

http://i36.tinypic.com/1et1qv.jpg

http://i36.tinypic.com/iyo0ih.jpg

http://i37.tinypic.com/307rw20.jpg


bamp !

DankNC
09-30-2009, 02:45 AM
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/1259/0929090202.th.jpg (http://img59.imageshack.us/i/0929090202.jpg/)
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/6144/0929090205.th.jpg (http://img38.imageshack.us/i/0929090205.jpg/)
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/2137/0929090155.th.jpg (http://img14.imageshack.us/i/0929090155.jpg/)


i haven't been on here in forever, and the word comin out of the blue ones mouth is just a sound effect, not my "name"
i posted this in the character forum, but no one has been on there all day, so i figured id try and get some crits here, and i rushed tryin to color around the pink one, you think they'd look good on shirts?

suparjafar
09-30-2009, 06:53 AM
nova and character are nice. 2nd is fav.

fathem go simpler.

suparjafar
09-30-2009, 06:53 AM
nova and character are nice. 2nd is fav.

fathem go simpler.

<<Fathem>>
09-30-2009, 11:25 AM
Dude, I give up.

well wtf? i write it over and over and over, just lettin it go itself, no changes done on purpose....and this is what i had....like wtf is supposed to happen the letters just stay fucking straight and fat FATHEM. likee?

<<Fathem>>
09-30-2009, 11:28 AM
nova and character are nice. 2nd is fav.

fathem go simpler.

I did start simple....thats the thing, i started with square normal letters...wrote that about 8000000 times, and then some changes just made themselves, i didnt purpously add anything to it....

DUNSY
09-30-2009, 11:32 AM
fathem please stop spamming this topic and go post in the handstyle section, once there look at others. get influenced by them but don't copy it

dreaken1993
09-30-2009, 01:03 PM
http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-9.jpg
http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-8.jpg

suparjafar
09-30-2009, 02:46 PM
aenok solid throw and nice simp below it keep doing that. nice handstyle too

Gam
09-30-2009, 03:15 PM
Aenok-Drop the A alittle lower your getting there just keep working.

suparjafar
09-30-2009, 03:33 PM
havent tried this idea with simp yet..no 3d just basic letters, fucked a and w. but whatever bored in study hall

mmmburgers
09-30-2009, 04:39 PM
@suparjafar Just make your letters staight, looks like you got a mad shaky hand haha.

Long time no post, been awhile since i been in here.
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/mmmburgers/kemistsketch.jpg

suparjafar
09-30-2009, 05:27 PM
kene (?) i like the idea of it but it kinda looks like kesve.

StayHyE
09-30-2009, 05:36 PM
http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-9.jpg
http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-8.jpg
get the symmetry down...make the letters the same size

@suparjafar Just make your letters staight, looks like you got a mad shaky hand haha.

Long time no post, been awhile since i been in here.
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/mmmburgers/kemistsketch.jpg

same goes for you...if you have two e's try and make them look similar...














http://i37.tinypic.com/293826s.jpg

now crits please :D

mmmburgers
09-30-2009, 05:38 PM
Its actually a horrible attemp at makeing a M.

StayHyE
09-30-2009, 05:43 PM
thanks but horrible is a word i would use for your work...but yeah it is an ugly m.

and lol @ making having an E in it

RedEyes
09-30-2009, 05:57 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo16.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo2-1.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo6-1.jpg
Flipped it. Crits?

BigBlueViolence
09-30-2009, 05:59 PM
Everything but Aenok is a bad deal.
Kem- You really need to work on hands, dude.
Stayhye- Your shit is all off, man. Some of your stuff looks alright,
but that definitely does not.

Redeyes- I meant to post this before you posted your shit. I'm kind of feeling it, but you should really flip it.
You can set your Photobooth preferences to flip images automatically.

suparjafar
09-30-2009, 07:04 PM
weee simpler...not really idk

headsick123
09-30-2009, 08:57 PM
like the sico and aenok.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/headsick123/JOINS1.jpg

CRITTS PLEASEEE!

suparjafar
09-30-2009, 09:21 PM
j's a bit big, but thats really clean

headsick123
09-30-2009, 09:23 PM
thanks man, ill have more to come later tonight hopefully!

Graffyk
09-30-2009, 09:29 PM
Fathem. I think what BBV means is that it takes more than just 2 hours a day for just 3 days. You need to keep practicing for a long time. Don't worry. I'm a bit unclear about how long one should really spend on regular block letters. But i would think 1-2 months minimum. What I've learned from these guys is that just because something appears to look good, to profressional writers who know what they're doing, it looks whack and you just look like a wannabe. Try talking to some of the skilled and experienced members on this board and see what they have to say, find out how long it took them to stay on block letters.

lol sorry for that long ass thing, i guess i got carried away

DankNC, i like the second one the best.

Aenok looking good and simple. The last one's E looks kinda weird though.. not sure why though

Kem, that looks like a Kejve or Kelve, Don't seperate the bars in one letter unless you make it apparent that it actually is a single letter.

StayHye the E needs work. And lose the single bubble at the top. it's too lonely D:

Sico: nice solid letters. But the Arrows seemed forced on. They dont come out at a spot so that it flows. get what im saying? also is it pronounced sicko or psycho?

Join: i like the Face on the J


there
crit'd the whole fuckin page

milk boxx
09-30-2009, 09:46 PM
aenok - throws decent, straights need work, take off the little extensions and stuff from your K and try to just simple it out a bit more till you get it locked.
Kem- at first i thought that said kene.. work on that m, and idk what the fucks up with that handy haha
Armen - make that shit simpler and work with the bars the same size for now..
sico - looks like it would be decent if you dropped the arrows

i havent posted here in a long ass time... first sketch in like a month

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/seid.jpg

can i get some decent crits on this, i know i needa somehow make my "I" and "D" flow.. any help?

suparjafar
09-30-2009, 10:08 PM
well your 1000X plus better than me, but your i is tilted kinda weird IMO

halp

-Empty-Can-
09-30-2009, 10:12 PM
thats probably one of the best ones you've drawn

StayHyE
09-30-2009, 10:29 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/wsrc43.jpg

gumOnShoe
09-30-2009, 10:32 PM
snaw, your lines are getting cleaner, try to make your middle W bar higher, it fucks w/ the flow. so remember, keeps those lines clean!

Milk Boxx, not digging the lean your put on your last two letters, stand em' up straight.

Stay Hye, looks tough, maybe clean up the lines.

got crits?
the main focus on the page was the simp on top.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo2-1.jpg

Jokz
09-30-2009, 10:56 PM
i dig your S altho im not too fond of the E

408Bomber
09-30-2009, 10:57 PM
bump for crits.
bump!!!

suparjafar
09-30-2009, 11:15 PM
snore i like that s alot, but i feel like it doesnt flow with the rest of the letters. i dont know then again you are better than me X1000 but just my input

bored...raised w bar

RedEyes
09-30-2009, 11:19 PM
Milk-i like the S to E symmetry just dont like the top of the E.
Graff-thanks i see what u mean by forcing the arrows, n its sicko

gumOnShoe
10-01-2009, 12:16 AM
snore i like that s alot, but i feel like it doesnt flow with the rest of the letters. i dont know then again you are better than me X1000 but just my input

bored...raised w bar

cool, raise it just a tad bit more, also, how would i make it flow? not a wise ass comment, i'm just asking.

408Bomber
10-01-2009, 01:29 AM
dude that is raw seriously... don't post in this thread lmao... that is pretty tight.

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/25/l_a0c34f0ec01e43f580b3c8ec5133cb54.jpg
I suck with simples. >.>!

P.s. any bay writers in sj pm me.

i need crits dammit!!!

shem
10-01-2009, 02:15 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3485/3970479455_332c46dd2d.jpg

i suck. ignore that fill tried it, shouldn't have.

BowlesNuevitas
10-01-2009, 04:57 AM
Okay fuck the guys in the pieces thread no help form those jerks :rolleyes:

maybe someone here can help me

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/5240/dscf9719s.jpg

suparjafar
10-01-2009, 06:32 AM
cool, raise it just a tad bit more, also, how would i make it flow? not a wise ass comment, i'm just asking.

well im no expert but i think the s is like long and skinny and the nor in the middle of the also skinny e is kinda dumbfounding. i dont know how to explain it. i feel like theyd be from two different pieces. maybe make the nor in the same style as the s,e

dreaken1993
10-01-2009, 12:04 PM
Everything but Aenok is a bad deal.


uhh i dont know what you mean lol

headsick123
10-01-2009, 01:28 PM
SHEM- keep it simple and straight, make all your letters the same size and dont worry about fill or background yet. get rid of that long ass tail on the S and get rid of the tail thing on the H and just keep it simple i think it would look 100X better.

Epoc
10-01-2009, 02:16 PM
Okay fuck the guys in the pieces thread no help form those jerks :rolleyes:

maybe someone here can help me

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/5240/dscf9719s.jpg

big boy thread. too good for us to crit.

StayHyE
10-01-2009, 02:25 PM
lol

StayHyE
10-01-2009, 02:26 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/2uy3oee.jpg

cleaned up some of the lines..

headsick123
10-01-2009, 02:27 PM
dont mind the writing, but heres another JOINS simple i did.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/headsick123/JOINS2.jpg

suparjafar
10-01-2009, 02:43 PM
fuck the arrows. looks solid though

headsick123
10-01-2009, 04:04 PM
ARMEN- you need to make your letters the same thickness, and stick to caps, you got one lowercase and it looks wack, also your shaddow is all screwy, i know nobody likes to hear this, but you gotta keep it simple. it looks the most clean and it will eventually develop into something better you like a lot more.

RADAWG
10-01-2009, 04:12 PM
Some pen shit I did in class
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo175.jpg

RedEyes
10-01-2009, 04:23 PM
Head-I like the ins but the J n O need to go, try n make all your letters the same size n chill out on those dots on ur highlights.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo10.jpg
Sketching High..
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo11.jpg

StayHyE
10-01-2009, 04:43 PM
ARMEN- you need to make your letters the same thickness, and stick to caps, you got one lowercase and it looks wack, also your shaddow is all screwy, i know nobody likes to hear this, but you gotta keep it simple. it looks the most clean and it will eventually develop into something better you like a lot more.

'keep it simple..' that all i hear theres no description of exactly what i need to do...keep to simple could mean anything can you be more specific plz

BigBlueViolence
10-01-2009, 04:46 PM
What ever you were high on when you did that top piece,
stop doing it forever, that shit can't be good for your health.

gumOnShoe
10-01-2009, 04:50 PM
well im no expert but i think the s is like long and skinny and the nor in the middle of the also skinny e is kinda dumbfounding. i dont know how to explain it. i feel like theyd be from two different pieces. maybe make the nor in the same style as the s,e

oh, i tried to make the S E biggest btw, so it'd be SnorE sort of, is that what you ment?

RedEyes
10-01-2009, 05:15 PM
What ever you were high on when you did that top piece,
stop doing it forever, that shit can't be good for your health.

Lol it was just an idea i had to put down on paper nothing special.

suparjafar
10-01-2009, 05:17 PM
oh, i tried to make the S E biggest btw, so it'd be SnorE sort of, is that what you ment?

yes

LeaksOne
10-01-2009, 05:38 PM
ra your throw is fine but that simp is out of whack.
sico the bottom piece is better but the o on it is oddly shaped
joins dont do that heart over your I unless your a girl or its for a girl and that random arrow on the o is terrible. lose it. and make all your letters the same size

ive been fuckin around with my new name.....
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60048.jpg

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60049.jpg

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60050.jpg

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60051.jpg

its amazing how you never notice how bad your shit is until you post it...crits??
and i didnt ink any of these becasue im not very satisfied with any of them
and this is my new method of sketching. fuck clean lnes for now

RedEyes
10-01-2009, 05:40 PM
The second last one has the most potential.

cocacola
10-01-2009, 06:14 PM
^ yess i dont like the way the s is shape 0.0
valley of golden death
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2603/3972292919_d9b8383d8a.jpghttp://farm3.static.flickr.com/2657/3972292985_1c89d1e147.jpg
aint done yet

BowlesNuevitas
10-01-2009, 06:26 PM
Got some ideas from siron his shits pretty dope anyone got crits???


http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/4619/dscf9725e.jpg

-Empty-Can-
10-01-2009, 06:30 PM
who the fuck are you? Stop posting fake wack shit. its pretty annoying.

LeaksOne
10-01-2009, 06:32 PM
why did you steal that from me? i never gave you permission. fucking trolls

thatguy<~
10-01-2009, 06:32 PM
'keep it simple..' that all i hear theres no description of exactly what i need to do...keep to simple could mean anything can you be more specific plz

just use stright letters, with no arrows on weard spots.

cocacola
10-01-2009, 06:33 PM
whos all this goin to
?>

BowlesNuevitas
10-01-2009, 06:33 PM
why did you steal that from me? i never gave you permission. fucking trolls


your shit was sooo dope, i could not resist, sorry my man.

LeaksOne
10-01-2009, 06:35 PM
im not your man. my shits not dope. stop trolling please.

suparjafar
10-01-2009, 06:36 PM
are you deaf? or in this case blind since you cant hear words on a forum...but whatever fuck...seriously write simple letters that are the same size proportion LOOK at your keyboard and bite those letters not sirons because thats not gonna get you anywhere if you dont know how to write a basic letter. i cant say shit because i just started too but listen to the advice people give and start simple. my 2 cents

by the way siron i love that 2nd to last one and the last one is good. mess with your i a little

LeaksOne
10-01-2009, 06:39 PM
wow everyone seems to like that one. i guess ill go back to it and fix it up more. i personally dig my first one.

thatguy<~
10-01-2009, 07:06 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g116/dorandoran2323/004.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g116/dorandoran2323/003.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g116/dorandoran2323/002.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g116/dorandoran2323/001-1.jpg

thatguy<~
10-01-2009, 07:13 PM
aenok - throws decent, straights need work, take off the little extensions and stuff from your K and try to just simple it out a bit more till you get it locked.
Kem- at first i thought that said kene.. work on that m, and idk what the fucks up with that handy haha
Armen - make that shit simpler and work with the bars the same size for now..
sico - looks like it would be decent if you dropped the arrows

i havent posted here in a long ass time... first sketch in like a month

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/seid.jpg

can i get some decent crits on this, i know i needa somehow make my "I" and "D" flow.. any help?

I like that style looks good

-Empty-Can-
10-01-2009, 07:49 PM
rave - i think those all look pretty good.

Graffyk
10-01-2009, 09:14 PM
Rave i really like that last one. If you're any good at fills you should try coloring that.


I'm thinking of switching up my name. Is it bad that i want to change my name because i cant work with Rs or should i quit being stubborn and stay on it till i get it down?

gumOnShoe
10-01-2009, 10:35 PM
Rave i really like that last one. If you're any good at fills you should try coloring that.


I'm thinking of switching up my name. Is it bad that i want to change my name because i cant work with Rs or should i quit being stubborn and stay on it till i get it down?

you could honestly do whatever the hell you want, i'm terms of names.
that's the beauty of it i guess, lol.
i've personally've gone through like 4 names.
Rs are really though cool Imo (hate mine, but i've seen some fresh ones), so idk, if you don't like the letter, atleast learn the structure so you can fall back on it later. so to properly answer your question, rather than yapping, no it's not wrong if you switch up.

OOPS!
10-01-2009, 10:36 PM
Hey guys. I write OOPS! Used to write Cauz. Here's some crap I drew in class over the past couple days. Trying to get my OOPS a little more stylish before I get it up. Crits please.

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/008.jpg

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/oops.jpg

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/oops2.jpg

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/oops3.jpg

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/oops4.jpg

Handy style... experimenting with letter flow..

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0419.jpg

I think I got it this time!

gumOnShoe
10-01-2009, 10:40 PM
the toss on the top of the 2nd last pic is tough.
the other ones look like BBPS.

OOPS!
10-01-2009, 10:42 PM
Thanks man. Yeah that's my favorite one. I keep trying to make the O's dope but they end up being kinda exaggerated and don't even look like O's

headsick123
10-01-2009, 10:51 PM
yeah yo O's are hard especially when they are the main part of your name, i tried writing BOOST for a little while, it was really fun to tag, but it was just so hard to do anything with i thought so i stopped.

OOPS!
10-01-2009, 10:52 PM
Especially handies.. oops handies are impossible.

suparjafar
10-01-2009, 10:59 PM
oops everything is sweet except i dont like that handie last one

here

retarded s handie i know i fucked up big time

OOPS!
10-01-2009, 11:01 PM
Thanks bro. Tried to be creative while sober and miserably failed. haha. I'll work on it

BigBlueViolence
10-01-2009, 11:17 PM
dawg if that shits hard than you're doing something wrong.

http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/6986/28447454.png

Fuck laptop button mouse.

OOPS!
10-01-2009, 11:30 PM
Man that looks like some westcoast cholo back alley shit. haha

cocacola
10-01-2009, 11:33 PM
ohhh, you cant wirte that. theres a writer in my city that has that name cus one time ive see it with the dots in os for eyes and the smiley grin and the p normal looked like oop to me tho

OOPS!
10-01-2009, 11:37 PM
Well he's in your city. I like Oops.

BigBlueViolence
10-01-2009, 11:38 PM
So?
Fuck that guy.

cocacola
10-01-2009, 11:39 PM
o well. i really dont see much of his tags much cus ive only seen one and dats it

OOPS!
10-01-2009, 11:42 PM
http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0461.jpg

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0456.jpg

better look at the stickers.

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0459.jpg

faser
10-02-2009, 05:08 AM
ohhh, you cant wirte that. theres a writer in my city that has that name cus one time ive see it with the dots in os for eyes and the smiley grin and the p normal looked like oop to me tho

shutup you cocksucker

stupid down syndrome muthafuckers....

Elno
10-02-2009, 07:19 AM
ohhh, you cant wirte that. theres a writer in my city that has that name cus one time ive see it with the dots in os for eyes and the smiley grin and the p normal looked like oop to me tho

@faser i agree ;)

Who cares as long as Oops isnt in your city and he isn't biting on his style it doesnt matter, also Oops go and put up something and post im keen to see your work.

medacog1
10-02-2009, 08:53 AM
http://i38.tinypic.com/hvdyma.jpg

OOPS!
10-02-2009, 02:05 PM
@faser i agree ;)

Who cares as long as Oops isnt in your city and he isn't biting on his style it doesnt matter, also Oops go and put up something and post im keen to see your work.

I will once I find a good spot to chill and throw some stuff up. Gonna walk down the railroad tracks tomorrow with my homie and see what we can find. Ordering some Ironlak as well. Should come out alright.

RedEyes
10-02-2009, 02:07 PM
Oopsie- I dont like it cant give crits cuz it just doesnt look good.
Polar- work on your R and maken all ur lines in proportion.

OOPS!
10-02-2009, 02:09 PM
Oopsie- I dont like it cant give crits cuz it just doesnt look good.
Polar- work on your R and maken all ur lines in proportion.

Hahaha I feel ya man

l3monade
10-02-2009, 04:54 PM
medacog1- thats dope, im not the best to give crits but maybe bring ur lettera a little closer to take away some white space, nice though.

i've been writing for just over a month now, figured id start drawin up some simples crits please.
http://i896.photobucket.com/albums/ac170/icelemonade_photos/PIC_0331.jpg
http://i896.photobucket.com/albums/ac170/icelemonade_photos/PIC_0330.jpg
http://i896.photobucket.com/albums/ac170/icelemonade_photos/PIC_0328.jpg

funhouseXcast
10-02-2009, 05:02 PM
keep the bottoms of your N's open a little more. just enough so that you can tell they're not closed.

thatguy<~
10-02-2009, 05:07 PM
keep the bottoms of your N's open a little more. just enough so that you can tell they're not closed.

yeah in the first sketch the N looks like a D to me. otherwise i like the simplisty*

<<Fathem>>
10-02-2009, 05:36 PM
still working on my tag, got bored and decided to try out the new pencil crayons with a full pager. its not done, and no doubt that the letters and stuff aren't going to please most. but w.e figured id throw it on here and get some crit.

BigBlueViolence
10-02-2009, 05:51 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/21oneih.jpg

headsick123
10-02-2009, 06:04 PM
POLAR-make your letters all the same size, the A is way fatter than the rest, also, either make all your letters open or closed, the O, which i think is meant to resemble a tooth, looks off. and like the dude said before, make em closer together, take away the white space.

KNEMO- diggin it, i agree, open the N up a little, and i dont know about that first fill, those cracks just look bad i think. the K in the second one is dope, the fill is good too. stick to the style on the second one. it looks the best.

headsick123
10-02-2009, 06:07 PM
POLAR-make your letters all the same size, the A is way fatter than the rest, also, either make all your letters open or closed, the O, which i think is meant to resemble a tooth, looks off. and like the dude said before, make em closer together, take away the white space.

KNEMO- diggin it, i agree, open the N up a little, and i dont know about that first fill, those cracks just look bad i think. the K in the second one is dope, the fill is good too. stick to the style on the second one. it looks the best.

PegCityBoy
10-02-2009, 06:36 PM
ignore the bottom of the s. i fucked with it for a good 15 minutes didnt get to finish it, the left bar on the a is shit an the m is fucked partially because i had to tape another piece of paper to the side i was gonna have the bottom of the s more pinched in but the rest of the letters are kinda blown out if ya know what i mean

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2532/3974932901_ae5a1e68d7.jpg

as for crits

oops - on your hand in the top pick dont connect your p and s it looks like an R
pular - keep workin on your simps make sure u use bars

faser
10-02-2009, 06:50 PM
spam - i like the S and P but the A and M need help, especially that M

PegCityBoy
10-02-2009, 06:52 PM
the m looks super gimp cause i had to tape another piece of paper to the side but yea my m's are hurtin fur curtain

headsick123
10-02-2009, 07:23 PM
SPAM- The M is way to wide, like not the bars, just the whole letter itself.

headsick123
10-02-2009, 10:04 PM
the J is kinda fucked, and i know, my handy sucks, but whatever. just workin on the new word. also workin on a canvas for my boy. should be done within a couple days, its lookin dope cant wait to get crits for that. crit this please guys!!! thanks.- JOINS


http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/headsick123/JOINS3.jpg

headsick123
10-02-2009, 10:24 PM
and now i notice that i forgot to put a shaddow inside the O, holy shit im stupid.

Elno
10-02-2009, 10:27 PM
and now i notice that i forgot to put a shaddow inside the O, holy shit im stupid.
Dw we all miss something sometime.
My crits is the keyline if that red is your key line needs to be closer. Thats the exact same way i used to do my S and try to close the legs on your N a bit. Just keep drawing and drawing. Find letters your good at.

RedEyes
10-02-2009, 10:29 PM
716 eh? again i like the N and S but go simpler with the other letters, and just do a reg. O no need for extensions.

headsick123
10-02-2009, 10:35 PM
yeah 716 reppp, but i cant stand to do a regular O, idk why i just look at them when i do them and cant stand it, its just too boring. but thanks dudes!

suparjafar
10-02-2009, 10:51 PM
oops everything is sweet except i dont like that handie last one

here

retarded s handie i know i fucked up big time

been giving crits...any advice whatsoever is appreciated. ill post another in a bit. thanks in advance

headsick123
10-02-2009, 11:08 PM
dude you gotta post pics to get crits, more pics you post, more crits youll get, make sense?

faser
10-02-2009, 11:13 PM
^ no. we dont want the thread clogged with a hundred of someones shitty flicks or when they make 1 tiny change and repost....

headsick123
10-02-2009, 11:16 PM
yeah i know that, but you gotta post pics to get crits, ive seen one thing posted by him, nobody wants to waste their time giving crits to someone who isnt sketchin a lot and isnt at least trying to improve.

headsick123
10-02-2009, 11:18 PM
old ass word i was workin on. never really got the chance to paint it but got sick of drawing it, plus theres a big toronto writer gram. what yous think?

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/headsick123/gram2-24-091.jpg

headsick123
10-02-2009, 11:19 PM
old ass word i was workin on. never really got the chance to paint it but got sick of drawing it, plus theres a big toronto writer gram. what yous think?

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/headsick123/gram2-24-091.jpg

suparjafar
10-02-2009, 11:24 PM
yeah i know that, but you gotta post pics to get crits, ive seen one thing posted by him, nobody wants to waste their time giving crits to someone who isnt sketchin a lot and isnt at least trying to improve.

ive been posting in this thread alot as far as with pictures, which i guess i shouldnt have but if you meant you gotta post pics i guess it didnt come out the first time but whatever. im aware its wack i'd just like some criticism like anyone else posting pics.

faser
10-02-2009, 11:29 PM
old ass word i was workin on. never really got the chance to paint it but got sick of drawing it, plus theres a big toronto writer gram. what yous think?

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/headsick123/gram2-24-091.jpg

cracks need work, character face needs work or get rid of it, lose the arrow on the M and straighten all the letters out flat.

headsick123
10-02-2009, 11:30 PM
well its really hard to see that pic, even when i click the thumbnail, if you post it straight to the forum with the IMG link its eaiser, but as far as i can see, the E is really hard to read, and your highlights are kinda screwy, the one on the e is smaller than the rest and the one on the W is hard to see. also get rid of the drips, when you do drips you need to make sure they are all parralell, think of gravity, its always gotta fall straight down, some veer to the left and some to the right, and that outter outline is too far away, just like mine is. and some people dont think its a big deal, but as far as lettrs i think its better when they are all the same case. yours looks like two caps and two lowers, or even one cap and three lowers depending how you look at it, but thats all i got. hope that helps. oh i just zoomed in on it and now it looks like it says snaw, before it looked like enaw, the s needs to be more semtrical. forget anything i said about the E haha.

headsick123
10-02-2009, 11:31 PM
thanks faser, i was just seein what people thought, i got those same crits quite a while back. i just never really cared much to change it seeing as i didnt want beef with the writer gram so i just gave up on it haha.

PROJECT LINK
10-03-2009, 12:55 AM
yo i enterd this in the comp it was just a quicky its been a a while but im gettin back into it..just simple shit any crits?

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=2529

OOPS!
10-03-2009, 01:26 AM
That would be a dope ass mural Link.

suparjafar
10-03-2009, 02:18 AM
link sexy piece.
bored shaky-lined hollow...fuck any tips for a shaky hand? i need smoother lines...just practice?
http://img96.imageshack.us/i/img0001.pdf/

Elno
10-03-2009, 02:54 AM
ive been posting in this thread alot as far as with pictures, which i guess i shouldnt have but if you meant you gotta post pics i guess it didnt come out the first time but whatever. im aware its wack i'd just like some criticism like anyone else posting pics.

Crits alright. Do some kind of shadow to the picture its very plain, if those are highlights on the picture they are way off.

PegCityBoy
10-03-2009, 02:55 AM
link sexy piece.
bored shaky-lined hollow...fuck any tips for a shaky hand? i need smoother lines...just practice?
http://img96.imageshack.us/i/img0001.pdf/

try an make sure you're s doesnt look like an 8 when you're doin simps i find myself doin it the odd time too as for the shaky hand not sure what to tell ya i guess jus keep practicing

Elno
10-03-2009, 02:58 AM
That would be a dope ass mural Link.

I agree Link looks pretty dope :) keep it up

RedEyes
10-03-2009, 10:18 AM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/sico1.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/sick2.jpg
Crits on either of these?

RedEyes
10-03-2009, 10:18 AM
Double post.

funhouseXcast
10-03-2009, 10:54 AM
i like the second one alot better, try to round out the points, just a little.

PROJECT LINK
10-03-2009, 11:22 AM
ey thanks for the crits.
but red eyes-i like the second one bro. its pretty clean and simple.the first one is a little sloppy, but if u work on the bars a little bit itll tightin up a little bitt.

Fetusr
10-03-2009, 11:38 AM
Yeah man the only thing I could add to those crits is maybe take that line going into your s out, or just make it shorter, it looks good though man.

Drew this up last night, I fucking HATE 3d, crits on how I can make it cleaner or just overall better 3d techniques? thanks.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/FUCK3D.jpg

Fetusr
10-03-2009, 11:40 AM
Yeah man the only thing I could add to those crits is maybe take that line going into your s out, or just make it shorter, it looks good though man.

Drew this up last night, I fucking HATE 3d, crits on how I can make it cleaner or just overall better 3d techniques? thanks.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/FUCK3D.jpg

headsick123
10-03-2009, 01:52 PM
SICKO- likin the second one, you gotta make that S flow better tho, its the only letter thats got straight corners.

LIZARD
10-03-2009, 01:54 PM
fetusr-for 3d just put a dot and make all of the line go towards it(vanishing point). your not going to be able t0o see 3d on every side of your letters and thats whats throwing it off

OOPS!
10-03-2009, 02:14 PM
Sico, I think your O is a little big too. Make it fit the other letters. Nice basis though

headsick123
10-03-2009, 02:51 PM
SNAW- you need to fix your S in everything. you cant hide the ends of it. i know my S isnt that bomb, but look at the difference in the 2 of them. it just looks way better when you can actually tell what the letter is, like when you draw it how its meant to be drawn.

RedEyes
10-03-2009, 03:55 PM
Festur-im likeing the fill cool colors.
Thanks peoples

weakfingers
10-03-2009, 04:34 PM
Fetusr-I'm seeing you go in the wrong direction. Not to hate but you should go to the new to graff thread and read about using bars to create letters and they have good image tutorials to do 3-d. Youll progress alot faster if you start simple and work from there.


My shits looking wack...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7776.jpg

take2
10-03-2009, 05:27 PM
OK not sure if I'm toy or not so i'll start here. First post!
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/32e842ce.jpg

take2
10-03-2009, 05:28 PM
OK not sure if I'm toy or not so i'll start here. First post!
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/32e842ce.jpg

take2
10-03-2009, 05:33 PM
oops double post not used to these forums

take2
10-03-2009, 06:19 PM
They are just simple ones. I'll do something better.

funhouseXcast
10-03-2009, 06:30 PM
you're toy, make all your bars the same size, but it's not the worst around here. just don't rush progression, and you'll come get much better much faster.

lord_plankton
10-03-2009, 06:33 PM
They are just simple ones. I'll do something better.

Stick to the simple ones, because if you try to go all crazy n shit it will look even worse...and yes you are toy, so you fit in here perfectly well...even up all your bars, fix the 3d, work over your stuff, especially the E....

take2
10-03-2009, 06:54 PM
Yea lol the E sucks. Here are some more
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/7e206f17.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/e0f3670e.jpg

l3monade
10-03-2009, 08:46 PM
take2 i like the third one the best maybe make ur bars a little thicker and possibly take off the extention on the top of the a lookin good keep workin at it

take2
10-03-2009, 09:01 PM
yea lol thanks man

<J-one>
10-03-2009, 09:15 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3490/3978840598_357ac04681.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3499/3978840694_e7b3985ea9.jpg

lilbmxking
10-03-2009, 09:46 PM
camera phones arent too shabby

assault
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i133/lil_bmx_king/assaultgraff.jpg

sinister
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i133/lil_bmx_king/sinister.jpg

take2
10-03-2009, 09:51 PM
Second one is cool, but the first needs letter structure. Start from the begging and learn the basics before you go adding 3-d and amazing colors

take2
10-03-2009, 09:53 PM
Here are some more simple ones. I think I'm getting the hang of these.
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/60c46129.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/da95ac85.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/903a80c7.jpg

suparjafar
10-03-2009, 09:53 PM
like the first one.

cocacola
10-03-2009, 10:28 PM
new http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2555/3979010348_b7bf0fd43c.jpg

Darkeist
10-04-2009, 01:05 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3490/3978840598_357ac04681.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3499/3978840694_e7b3985ea9.jpg

this style.

is uber sick

also: what kind of colors did you use?

Fetusr
10-04-2009, 01:15 AM
cola that looks cool but the edges are a little sharp and I wouldnt have your a inside your S like that.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/simpgreen.jpg
gonna spend some time working on simple shit like this, thanks for the crits.

suparjafar
10-04-2009, 01:49 AM
fetusa your a is a little bit big but i like your letters, unique

Darkeist
10-04-2009, 02:25 AM
you need to make your R smaller sir

suparjafar
10-04-2009, 02:46 AM
i was told not to hide the ends of my s, making it look like an 8. is this any better, minus sloppyness

weakfingers
10-04-2009, 02:49 AM
Fetus-Looking so much better. Just keep the same simple and curvy letters with your S and R and it will be looking great.

PegCityBoy
10-04-2009, 02:54 AM
i was told not to hide the ends of my s, making it look like an 8. is this any better, minus sloppyness

a little try not to overlap the bar try keeping wither the top part, or bottom, or both parts kind of open like this ==> S so it's not touching the middle part

take2
10-04-2009, 09:27 AM
ehh I don't really like fetusr's thing. I would say work on the R and the E. that would dramaticaly make it better in my opinion

take2
10-04-2009, 09:30 AM
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/9a228ea6.jpg
Ehhh not sure about the E

gumOnShoe
10-04-2009, 11:17 AM
cola that looks cool but the edges are a little sharp and I wouldnt have your a inside your S like that.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/simpgreen.jpg
gonna spend some time working on simple shit like this, thanks for the crits.

shit's tough, upuntil the R, geez, that KILLED it for the simp, shift the hole one R to the right, make it bigger, to match the rest of the letters.

RedEyes
10-04-2009, 11:36 AM
Take-Man get a black book! take your time on on simple working on ur bars n 3-D.
Sair- bump, that shits hot just make ur letters all in proportion to each other.
Gasr- I thought the top one said GESE, gotta work on some letter structure.
Festur-I only like the U and the S if you played with it, the rest i would work on.

RedEyes
10-04-2009, 11:37 AM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo8.jpg
rounded out the "S"

thatguy<~
10-04-2009, 12:49 PM
everybody needs to work on their simple shit...

gumOnShoe
10-04-2009, 01:15 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo8.jpg
rounded out the "S"

lookin' fresh overall, redeyes.
try not sticking the bottom of the S to the middle next time.

WOP
10-04-2009, 01:21 PM
y0 redeyes nice shit good proportions work on your s though and i dont feel flow try leaning it on the side or smthn

WOP
10-04-2009, 01:27 PM
take 2 work on your letter proportions and try giving it some flow by leaning it on the side or smthn

OOPS!
10-04-2009, 01:32 PM
Redeyes your C is dope. Keep it up

deeeeezy
10-04-2009, 01:48 PM
@redeyes im reeeally diggin the fill. and your letter structure is pretty dope as well.

deeeeezy
10-04-2009, 01:54 PM
http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/6509/dkmpiece1finished.gif
piece i did for a homie. crits ?

OOPS!
10-04-2009, 01:56 PM
Lose the ads on the end of the letters and clean the letter lines up a little. And use a vanishing point for the shadow. Good start though

thatguy<~
10-04-2009, 02:53 PM
deezy- make the lettters flow a litttle more. round some of the corners off, and get rid of the "bits" at the end of your letters

Fetusr
10-04-2009, 06:29 PM
Redeyes that looks sick your going in the right direction, might wanna work on that handy though...

deezy thats cool kinda reminds me of this writer dazem in my area with the way you did your d. try and make the letters a bit less sharp where your lines meet.. if that makes any sense, nice work.

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/TAKE2.jpg

made a few changes, I know my S is a little fat at the bottom. Thanks for the crits.

funhouseXcast
10-04-2009, 06:35 PM
only problem i see at a glance is the loop of your R. i don't like the indent, but it could just be my opinion. idk

Darkeist
10-04-2009, 06:39 PM
fetusr - just fix your R and youll be good.

suparjafar
10-04-2009, 06:47 PM
http://img39.imageshack.us/i/imgm.pdf/

http://img96.imageshack.us/i/img0001m.pdf/

different s, no more overlapping. better?

Darkeist
10-04-2009, 07:20 PM
next time use picture link here codes. i hate clicking links it takes my computer along time.

LeaksOne
10-04-2009, 07:29 PM
fetusr - just fix your R and youll be good.

and your e and your s and tweak your u

headsick123
10-04-2009, 07:37 PM
SICKO- Lookin dope!! rounding that S deff cleaned it up a lot..

PegCityBoy
10-04-2009, 07:41 PM
http://img39.imageshack.us/i/imgm.pdf/

http://img96.imageshack.us/i/img0001m.pdf/

different s, no more overlapping. better?

what darkeist said

and that looks 100x better now play with the rest of your letters

weakfingers
10-04-2009, 07:54 PM
Fetusr- Round out your R and dont make the bar super small make it the same width as everything else.

Stuck
10-04-2009, 08:02 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo13.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo14.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo17.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo18.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo19.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo20.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo21.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo23.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo25.jpg

BigBlueViolence
10-04-2009, 08:04 PM
Where are you from?

Stuck
10-04-2009, 08:09 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo26.jpg

ryser
10-04-2009, 08:39 PM
Sire - Nice works, your shit is coming along good. nice use of bars too

here is a new one i just finished.
here is the outline.
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/2235/photo34e.jpg

fill and background
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/7504/photo35pr.jpg

small details / finished up.
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/3409/photo36h.jpg

crits? I was trying to do some basic connections and use bars still. i knowe the Y and S could be a little bit bigger to match the rest. i didnt make all bars the same size on purpose to see what this style would come out as.
crits? what do you guys think?

faser
10-04-2009, 08:42 PM
sire - most are lookin nice
ryser - dont try that again, looks wack. simples look better.

http://i36.tinypic.com/2egeejl.jpg
crits on this shitty simple shit

deeeeezy
10-04-2009, 09:48 PM
Jers - Im diggin it but i would make the S a little smaller...

ryser
10-04-2009, 09:50 PM
faser - J and E flow together good, but the R and S dont much at all, the S is a little big and the R looks like it doesnt belong

on my last one i posted i was going for a bit more 'weird' unordinary feel too it

OOPS!
10-04-2009, 10:20 PM
This is one I did using my other name, Cauz.

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0478.jpg

deeeeezy
10-04-2009, 10:28 PM
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/6944/stern1.jpg

been messin around with a couple different names lately...
PS: i couldnt find an eraser lol. crits ?

OOPS!
10-04-2009, 10:29 PM
Make all the letters the same size, it should look pretty good. letters are pretty solid

BigBlueViolence
10-04-2009, 10:45 PM
That shit's for the inventory thread, man.

cocacola
10-05-2009, 10:22 AM
thought this looked good from a distance not to far from my eyes
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2496/3984137678_8989a53654.jpg

StayHyE
10-05-2009, 01:01 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/2m34t51.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/2vdpv6h.jpg

thatguy<~
10-05-2009, 04:44 PM
cola- looks good just need to clean it up a little. i like it.

LeaksOne
10-05-2009, 04:46 PM
do you write delae or armen? and how come you do up and down pieces? kinda tough to paint a up and down piece

StayHyE
10-05-2009, 04:51 PM
just trying different angles/names trying to get down the whole alphabet instead of being good at doing certain letters ya know?

thatguy<~
10-05-2009, 04:59 PM
i hear ya^

sterc
10-05-2009, 05:15 PM
deeezy, erhm, I do sort of like it, even though you need to work on the bars.
And the fact that stern is only one letter away from sterc.

Graffyk
10-05-2009, 05:36 PM
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/9596/memo0001u.jpg

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/2396/memo0002h.jpg


http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/3649/memo0003.jpg
Trying a new name

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/6464/memo0004.jpg

More of trying a new name


Sire, nice and clean shit. Really likin the third one.

take2
10-05-2009, 06:05 PM
Trying a more advanced style. Just messin around. Not sure if it's good or not. gimme sum feedback
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/6083fc1f.jpg

take2
10-05-2009, 06:06 PM
Trying a more advanced style. Just messin around. Not sure if it's good or not. gimme sum feedback
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/6083fc1f.jpg

Stuck
10-05-2009, 08:01 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo27.jpg

take2
10-05-2009, 08:12 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo27.jpg

Pretty dope but the R needs a little work and possibly a bit too many arrows

Nurseofgonzo
10-05-2009, 08:41 PM
take2, wow..I really love the color choices, great contrast..and the fold on the e at the end is pretty interesting..nice shape for sure...not that I have really any say if something is good or not..but personally I like it :D

BigBlueViolence
10-05-2009, 08:42 PM
TlTS OR GTFO.

faser
10-05-2009, 08:55 PM
lolwut.

LeaksOne
10-05-2009, 09:00 PM
shes a girl. nurseofgonzo that is

OOPS!
10-05-2009, 09:03 PM
Hey where's the nudes you promised us?

LeaksOne
10-05-2009, 09:07 PM
she bitched out.

OOPS!
10-05-2009, 09:11 PM
Hey lesbo. If you can prove you have a nice ass and pussy we'll stop fucking with you

LeaksOne
10-05-2009, 09:45 PM
i like your style. reminds me of bigblueviolence. keeps it up

BigBlueViolence
10-05-2009, 09:46 PM
That Henry is what the fuck is up, sir.

Graffyk
10-05-2009, 09:46 PM
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/9596/memo0001u.jpg

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/2396/memo0002h.jpg


http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/3649/memo0003.jpg
Trying a new name

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/6464/memo0004.jpg

More of trying a new name


Sire, nice and clean shit. Really likin the third one.

bottom page bump

OOPS!
10-05-2009, 09:47 PM
The blockbuster has potential

deeeeezy
10-05-2009, 10:35 PM
sterc: i came up with my name off the top of my head, so im not biting your name if thats what yer hinting at lol.

mmmburgers
10-05-2009, 11:17 PM
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/mmmburgers/GOLEMsketchj.jpg
Quick sketch for a friend. Golem.

suparjafar
10-06-2009, 12:14 AM
that m is sexy

g kinda lokos like an s to me tho. thought it said solem

Darkeist
10-06-2009, 03:03 AM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20091006_1.jpg

gotta work on my simples. ugh, ENS is only good part, had to go back and redo the B because i fucked it up in the beginning, so it may be a bit off.

Stuck
10-06-2009, 03:04 AM
id say the o is ur best part...

Fury
10-06-2009, 04:09 AM
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7893/img0352vw.jpg
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/209/img0353h.jpg
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/636/img0354uj.jpg
Trying a new style to make the V good.

Benso - Bars are different sizes. The O is the best.
KJay - Good work.
Viral - Like everything but Scape. It's okay, but just doesn't look as good.
Solem - Not digging the S or O much, but the rest looks sick.

take2
10-06-2009, 07:28 AM
take2, wow..I really love the color choices, great contrast..and the fold on the e at the end is pretty interesting..nice shape for sure...not that I have really any say if something is good or not..but personally I like it :D

Thanks now let's see them tits

take2
10-06-2009, 07:32 AM
Scape work on lettercstructure. The last one has potential and the viral ones are not that's good. Ditch the arrows they look dumb and work on letter structure. Read the new too graffiti thread. Golem sick style but work on the g it looks like an s