Blackbooks

[PegCityBoy]

Pegcity- I like the first throwie simp. but fill the letters completly, might look that much nicer. the pencil simps are sick, although id loose the extension on the M, that makes it confusing on wether its an M or W.

yea i tried but the the empty space left between the the A and M needs to be filled somehow an that seems to do it

also loose the unnecessary curves, don't force flow. and make the bars on your B connect so it's not like a 13.

[suparjafar]

way better bafl. fix that b

[Inlyn08]

i love how neither me, nor flawless victory give a fuck about anything that happens here, and all you fucks are all worked up about it. keep going, it just gives us shit to talk about when we're out taggin' shit up.

Cool story bro.
LOL..

[zennegen]

your a winner.

[Inlyn08]

your a winner.Glad you think so. I hope you "talk about me" next you're out taggin'..
LOL.

But seriously.. If you didn't give a fuck, you wouldn't have said shit in the first place. Follow?
Now we should probably stop wasting everyone's time with our asshole banter.

[zennegen]

i just think it's funny, personally. i really don't care about it, seeing how it is the internet after all.

[funhouseXcast]

how about you fucking cocksuckers take this shit to the battle thread so you can get off eachothers god damn dicks and let the whole purpose of this website (that would be graffiti) decide who's a faggot and who's not.

[zennegen]

hahahaha

[<<Fathem>>]

way better bafl. fix that b


yea i tried but the the empty space left between the the A and M needs to be filled somehow an that seems to do it
and make the bars on your B connect so it's not like a 13.

Ok so I fixed the B...now B not 13....also tighten the letters a bit closer. I kinda f'd the 3d, started to ouline with a "gel pen" but it didnt write over shit, then when i tried my classic silver, it just got fucked. not to mention the white out L...this ones just shit lmao. anyway, could i get some crits please?

[-Empty-Can-]

Your 3D needs alot of work. Make the top bar of your F a little shorter and bring your L closer. Keep working on your letters.

[Graffyk]

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/6218/p1000611ya.jpg
i usually can't fit my Es... Is that the right symbol above the A for a long a?

armen-you're putting some effort into your pieces, coloring them and all, keep it up. Make your Rs look more like Rs instead of A, and the 3D is a little messed up.

scameretolme-i like the fill, but im not sure what it says. it looks nice, but i can't tell if it's crappy letter structure, or if it's actually good..still working on reading graffiti. Try going to the intermediate and see what people say there.


middle of argument bump :rolleyes:


bafl, i agree, much better. but you need to work on the 3D part. the shadow on the B isn't connected well to the letter, and overall a lot of parts are missing. the way i look at what parts need the 3d is you need to keep it consisitent. like think the shadow will be going to the bottom left, so a shadow belongs anywhere to the bottom of the letter and to the left of the figure. it really helps. keep practicing

[Flawless Victory]

i love how neither me, nor flawless victory give a fuck about anything that happens here, and all you fucks are all worked up about it. keep going, it just gives us shit to talk about when we're out taggin' shit up.
Dawg,
you just said "taggin' shit up"

http://i34.tinypic.com/4jmf05.jpg

[Keso]

your a winner.

Oh goddamn it! It's not that hard to put a god forsaken E at the end of you're! Which means you are. You're a winner. Ass.

[<<Fathem>>]

bafl, i agree, much better. but you need to work on the 3D part. the shadow on the B isn't connected well to the letter, and overall a lot of parts are missing. the way i look at what parts need the 3d is you need to keep it consisitent. like think the shadow will be going to the bottom left, so a shadow belongs anywhere to the bottom of the letter and to the left of the figure. it really helps. keep practicing


Your 3D needs alot of work. Make the top bar of your F a little shorter and bring your L closer. Keep working on your letters.

Ok, letters closer again, umm F bar shortened, (i like it shorter). and i shadowed this using the left side, so everything on the left side. (forgot a bar). also now my bars are getting inconsitent sizing(going too fast)..so im prob done for the night, but could i get some crits on this simp?

[suparjafar]

Dawg,
you just said "taggin' shit up"

http://i34.tinypic.com/4jmf05.jpg

ily.

[zennegen]

why did you post a cartoon version of empty can? come on, man.

[Keso]

why did you post a cartoon version of empty can? come on, man.

Excuse me Mr. Faggot,

We would would all greatly appreciate it if you would stop with your unintelligent comments because they are most certainly not amusing me nor anyone else. Battle or nothing. You are indeed very correct about this being the Internet. I would think that a Detroit rat didn't know what the internet was! Also you started all of this by talking shit. In conclusion I would like to kindly say shut the fuck up, so we can end this.

Thank you,

Mr. Keso2

[Flawless Victory]

BAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWW
http://blogs.okayplayer.com/amandadiva/files/2008/11/jesse-crying.jpg

NlGGA, YOU MAD.

[Keso]

NlGGA, YOU MAD.

pretty lulzy. I'll give you that.

[zennegen]

dear ms. keso2, i would (would) like to inform you that saying "would would" in a statement that attempts to make you look somewhat intelligent makes you sound like you have no grammatical skills and/or sentence structure. furthermore, your ignorant comments about me living in detroit are not amusing, and make you look even more ignorant than before.

thank you,
Zennegen.

[Flawless Victory]

I would love to see any of these kids say something bad about Detroit while actually in Detroit.

[Inlyn08]

LOL...

All it takes is one troll to get the ball rollin'!
So, if the "pattern" stays true.. that other dude will post in here again talking about everyone being faggots..
And again.. he'll be the only one talking about dick riding.. and all that other Gay shit.

Ice packs for the butt hurt..
Invest.
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h85/popperahtzee/Retard-Girl-Butt--Hurt.jpg

[SONE.]

wrrd keso. im diggin Ket's "K" in ur picture

[LeaksOne]

where are the pics at? if you tag fags would shut your trap we could get back on track here.

[drOping]

good call leaks

http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/5721/1003123x.jpg

[boodah]

simpler, and don't overlap your letters so much. What does that handy say?

[JMANN.23.HTK]

good call leaks

http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/5721/1003123x.jpg

Letter structure's weak, chocie in colours is odd, but like the pattern you got going on at the bottom, handy's not too bad, just don't overlap to much in future maybe make the letters a lot 'less higher' and a bit 'fatter', less shadow, better choice in colour, few more tag's and 'handy's' and it should work...

[Keso]

good call leaks

http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/5721/1003123x.jpg

yeah work on your letter structure and straighten those lines up.. Dont use too much color for simps. If it is a simp...

[Fetusr]

Yeah True I'm not really feeling that small e in between your letters either, try an upper case E and make it the same size as the other one, and take it easy on the fills for now.

Quick sketch I did last night, sorry for the shitty flick I should have scanned it but Im lazy.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/quiksketch.jpg

[provinT13]

^^ The stuff inside where the shadow is looks strange, and the shadow or 3d or whatever on the T is fucked up, i'm also not likin' the thingy on the F

Well I haven't sketched in months, finally got some free time, a simple throw

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/Video200000-01.jpg

[<<Fathem>>]

droping- yeah i like the fill but as everyone has said, letter structure, and i agreE with an upper case e.

Fetusr- I like it, but maybee extend the U right bar, just to keep it a little more structured.

Provin- I like the overall look of that sketch...but the hell if i could figure out what it says...maybee start with simpler?

I got this one from last night, my bars were starting to get un-even, im going to redo it tonight, any crits on this though?

[gumOnShoe]

Bump.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo27.jpg

bump.

[thatguy<~]

Gum on shoe- why the fuck did you repost that shit. looks like something any one person could do. style please.

[gumOnShoe]

so it lacks style?
don't you think i already knew that? maybe some crits would help?? "anybody could do that", pfft.

[zennegen]

Gum on shoe- why the fuck did you repost that shit. looks like something any one person could do. style please.

why don't you shut the fuck up and post something?

[suparjafar]

^^ this

and snore it doesnt look bad. not a fan of that handies e though, just sayin

[zennegen]

to be honest, though, i don't see the point in posting pics of really super basic sketches like that snore, even in the toy thread. it's good to see some type of attempt at progression from basic bubble letters, because anybody can do those, and doing them over and over again really won't make you any better...

just my own opinion.

[gumOnShoe]

well, i think practicing simples does help, look over at the progression thread in a few...

[provinT13]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/Video200000-01.jpg



Provin- I like the overall look of that sketch...but the hell if i could figure out what it says...maybee start with simpler?


For real dude? I think the only letter that's a bit off is the M, because I forgot to put a little curve for the middle part of it.

Bump for more...constructive crits.

Gum idk what to say about style, take a look at some real simple bubble letters, those look like bubble letters 5th graders draw in class when they're bored, not trying to insult, but there needs to be some definition of style and graff in the letters. Maybe look at the pops cereal logo and try that. Make your letters bigger and more poofy I guess might be one way to say it. I agree practicing simple helps, but your letters don't seem like a good platform to start. I'm trying to find the words for crits but I just can't lol, sorry, hope this helps.

[take2]

I like the snore. Modify the S and the e to make them a little more than plain simple and it will look pretty nice.
Nems fix that m it doesnt look like one. maybe make the e more complex but the n is not soo bad. s is oke maybe you could add i little more too it

[gumOnShoe]

For real dude? I think the only letter that's a bit off is the M, because I forgot to put a little curve for the middle part of it.

Bump for more...constructive crits.

Gum idk what to say about style, take a look at some real simple bubble letters, those look like bubble letters 5th graders draw in class when they're bored, not trying to insult, but there needs to be some definition of style and graff in the letters. Maybe look at the pops cereal logo and try that. Make your letters bigger and more poofy I guess might be one way to say it. I agree practicing simple helps, but your letters don't seem like a good platform to start. I'm trying to find the words for crits but I just can't lol, sorry, hope this helps.

well, the point of that sketch was to see how i can pull off basic letter structure, i wasn't trying to blow anybodies mind, i wasn't trying to do an ultra complicated wildstyle. i was just trying to fix up my structures before i start pulling off crazy ass shit. i do appreciate your opinion, though.

[Fury]

gum - Your shit isn't hardcore enough.
Nems - lose the spots, work on every letter. The e looks okay. The N and S are both better than that M, but not as good as the e.

[gumOnShoe]

hardcore enough for what?..

[Fury]

For this board. If it ain't fucking wildstyle with hella MSK arrows all over the god damn place, then gtfo!

[Inlyn08]

For this board. If it ain't fucking wildstyle with hella MSK arrows all over the god damn place, then gtfo!

LOL..
Man. Tough crowd.
Nems: I agree, that M needs some work. Doesn't really look like an M.. kind of looks like a weird K.
With like.. down syndrome. Or a saggy right side.. something.

What do I know.

[take2]

Messin with patterns and simples. Which do you think is better????
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/53afd48d.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/0b56d908.jpg

[Hepatitis]

Crits?
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo32.jpg?t=1256689872
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo31.jpg?t=1256689889

[gumOnShoe]

Edit: @ Take2

the 2nd one looks better imo, they both look good, though..
one thing i don't like about both of them, and almost all of your pieces, is that you keep on cutting the piece off at the bottom, try doing it as a whole.

[take2]

Learn letter structure and don't try to make things look "cool" cus it will make them look toy.

[Hepatitis]

thanks, yeah sorry i know it kinda messes them up but i have other writing down there like school work and shii

[Hepatitis]

what are you talking about like the drips and shit cuz they are just for shits and giggles and burns up more time man

[take2]

The first one has potential if you fix the k and take that bump off the c. But the second one looks kinda dumb with the extending L

[Inlyn08]

Messin with patterns and simples. Which do you think is better????
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/53afd48d.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/0b56d908.jpg

That's some pretty nice wood.. Mahogany?
I like the second one better, although..
The first one reminds me of some "Saved by the Bell" type of shit. LOL.. http://doasiwrite.files.wordpress.com/2009/04/zack.jpg

[take2]

lol

[Hepatitis]

why the fuck is the first one coming out an explosion and you say i try and make it cool haha

[Hepatitis]

but yeah the second one is better in my opinion also

[take2]

what are you talking about like the drips and shit cuz they are just for shits and giggles and burns up more time man

nah the drips are ok i meant the arrow from the l joining the k

[take2]

Messin with patterns and simples. Which do you think is better????
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/53afd48d.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/0b56d908.jpg

bumpio

[Hepatitis]

yeah i guess, thats what everyone says. i thought it looked nice but fuck do i know the only shit i am practiced at is stenciling

[Graffyk]

http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/5307/p1000613.jpg
start of a sketch with a new stlye..


take- looking good, i like the second one better, but im not really liking the middle part of the e. it's barely connected. that's just me. and i yeah, you should try putting it in the middle of the page instead of at the bottom.

locke- the first one is a lot better. That C is looking awkward though.

[take2]

Pinkie freestyle messaround
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/c7017c4c.jpg

[RedEyes]

Take-Work on maken your letters flow n not so stiff.

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo19.jpg

[||BREAD||]

i dont really like that last one take, to thin imo but the others are pretty sweet, like graffyk said "but im not really liking the middle part of the e. it's barely connected."

[<<Fathem>>]

For real dude? I think the only letter that's a bit off is the M, because I forgot to put a little curve for the middle part of it.

Bump for more...constructive crits.

Gum idk what to say about style, take a look at some real simple bubble letters, those look like bubble letters 5th graders draw in class when they're bored, not trying to insult, but there needs to be some definition of style and graff in the letters. Maybe look at the pops cereal logo and try that. Make your letters bigger and more poofy I guess might be one way to say it. I agree practicing simple helps, but your letters don't seem like a good platform to start. I'm trying to find the words for crits but I just can't lol, sorry, hope this helps.

ok yeah, change the m then i read it. i just looked at it for a bit.

[Darkeist]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20091027_1.jpg

[suparjafar]

maybe make those two o's a u, like snuz. lol but it looks good, z is a little fat compared to the s

[RedEyes]

Dark-thats a waist of paper and a post, try actually sketching before you even begin to flick ur shit.

[<<Fathem>>]

take- Id say A structure, either then that, diggin the simps.

sico- ill man. just nice.

gum on shoe- lose the fancy star, shove the letters overr, so they are inbetween but underneth. SNO...kinda thing.
.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..RE

Dark-try bigger?

Graffyk- just not feelin that random bottom right extension 3d type thing, either then that it looks good on my end.

Hepatitis- letter structure, and size consistency.

And could i please get some crits on this?

[take2]

Bafl follow your own crits. Learn letter structure, don't give the letter random bends and connect the middle bar of the b to the rest of the letter

[provinT13]

Graffyk I think you're getting ahead of yourself

Redeyes I like it, espically how the S and the C go together from top to bottom, and the i and o go together.

Fathem Listen to take2

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/Video100000-03.jpg

[take2]

Bring the middle bar of the e in farther and mess with the s cus i'm not really diggin it

[Fetusr]

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/quiksketch.jpg

Can I please get some decent crits on this?

[take2]

the top left thing on the f is kinda dum. And bottom of the e is wierd. Cool 3d. Pretty nice simple

[boodah]

If you ask me, the 3d makes no sense. All your letters need some work. The bottom of the F needs to be longer, and yeah take that extension off. Bend the vertical bar of the T to make it flow with the rest of your letters. It looks out of place. The extension of the horizontal bar on your U is unnecessary. The S needs to be more like an S and less like a backward Z. The R is nice, but the top could be better. If you ask me, and again this is my opinion, you are cutting the end of the bars too much. The piece just doesn't flow in general.

[weakfingers]

^^^What that dude said




Can I please get some decent crits on this?

Your 3-d Is wrong its going to all the wrong directions keep it going to one point

[<<Fathem>>]

Bafl follow your own crits. Learn letter structure, don't give the letter random bends and connect the middle bar of the b to the rest of the letter

yeah lol, i have some that are further back in the forum that are just simps with full letter structure...but the bend in the f is because there was ALOT of dead space between it and the a....and the l is same thing, between it and f.

[hpir]

Fetusr- your bars are pretty good
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/grinoneee002.jpg
crits?

[provinT13]

Your N is way to big compared to the other letters, and it might just be me, but there is something strange about the 3d on the I in the first one.

[KRE1]

hpir i saw the rest of those u was working on i think that super simp that u did was legit. the bottom one that u posted rite here is pretty good imo tho i would either follow thru with the wavy shit or drop it... half nd half seems a lil goofy.

[Neon_M@]

grin, are you gonna color that out? you have good 3d a balanced letters (besides n a little near the bottom right). color every piece, even if it is bad, pracctice is practice.

a piece i did yesterday

[take2]

For shits and giggles. Messin around all done during school.
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/b07d6d10.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/36cf76c0.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/5d056712.jpg

[KRE1]

diggin that second one take.

neon... i dont want to be harsh but i would suggest that you rethink everything ur doing.

[Cranium]

Crits?
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c141/Tek9259/lastscan34.jpg

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c141/Tek9259/Iron.jpg

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c141/Tek9259/lastscan3.jpg

[funhouseXcast]

take, the last one is fresh,

iron, copy keyboard letters and watch others so you know what bends what ways and what doesn't.

[funhouseXcast]

take, the last one is fresh,

iron, copy keyboard letters and watch others so you know what bends what ways and what doesn't.

[sinkilla1]

try at a new style of peice i know its sloppy i had no thin black marker
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5863/1028091845.th.jpg (http://img3.imageshack.us/i/1028091845.jpg/)

[sinkilla1]

try at a new style of peice i know its sloppy i had no thin black marker
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5863/1028091845.th.jpg (http://img3.imageshack.us/i/1028091845.jpg/)

[sinkilla1]

double post my bad....

[take2]

Finished! I messed up on the yellow back graound thing. but w/e. crits???
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/eb016a4a.jpg
Sinkilla. Dont make arrows from a bar itself and touch up on letter structure.

[sinkilla1]

take what kinda marker u use for the green up top and middle

[take2]

prismas

[sinkilla1]

im loving that top green and i made a sketch in school same style i think better im just fillin it right now

[suparjafar]

take i actually do like that, good job except a doesnt flow imo

ceje go simple

[sinkilla1]

http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/9475/1028091930.th.jpg (http://img28.imageshack.us/i/1028091930.jpg/)
pretty simple no?

[Neon_M@]

where exactly is a good place to "start"???

im lost in this whole graffiti world. but it doesnt really help that im new to drawing and graffiti altogether (drawing class will hopefully help my hands).

[suparjafar]

ceje yeah that looks 100X better than the other piece you posted.

[sinkilla1]

well u got put in fact that that otehr one was my first try

[KRE1]

sin that J is a bit too big imo if u sized down the top to make it level with the rest of the letters i think it would look really good. nice job.

to the other dood that said was new to graffiti... try practicing your handstyle. work on that until u dont want to do it anymore. then do some more. everyone says that handstyles are the foundations for graffiti, and i tend to agree.

[Neon_M@]

handstyle, like messing around with letters?
like practice making letters look cool? (like not 3d or a piece just the alphabet)

ive tried wrighting out the alphabet in cool letters, some arent bad, but sometimes its just like i have no idea what im doing.
but i guess i would get better after i morph the letter e millions of times. plus cleaner.

[KRE1]

dont try so hard to make them "cool." you first need to practice your own handwriting skill. then you tweak it slightly to formulate your own style. fill a couple books up with handy stuff, practicing different letter combos and words, and you will get it.

and yeah. not 3d. not pieces. not even throwies. just handys.

but hey thats my opinion but i think a few people on here would agree with me on this one.

[-Empty-Can-]

A handstlye is your signature. Not like bubble letters but letters you write with. Handwriting

[KRE1]

A handstlye is your signature. Not like bubble letters but letters you write with. Handwriting

there we go.

[take2]

Simple
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/c102525f.jpg

[KRE1]

i liked ur other one take

the top bar of the K looks outta whack imo

[take2]

i liked ur other one take

the top bar of the K looks outta whack imo

Ya ik the k bar sucks a little. Doin simps cus i need a little inspiration.

[Hepatitis]

yeah but if its gonna be a simple should be clean... those lines are trash

[Graffyk]

grin-nice work, but the N is too big.


take- i like the third one of those three the best.

iron- use barsssss! it needs lots of work before you start using stickers


http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/24/p1000614.jpg

S

[cocacola]

im about to do a watercolor piece this week
and bers ima hit you up when im done with yours

[suparjafar]

take just clean it up.

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0140.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0141.jpg

[take2]

critttssss
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/20cb0b33.jpg

[rush2]

much better

[zennegen]

iron- use barsssss! it needs lots of work before you start using stickers


http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/24/p1000614.jpg



take your own advice.

[idk401]

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/225707.jpg

[idk401]

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/163237.jpg

a quick battle with some kid.

[idk401]

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/003-1.jpg

[boodah]

I don't like the ONE in your last sketch. Decent pieces though.

[Graffyk]

take your own advice.

well i did use bars.. i guess i didn't make it apparent?

bars can be curvy too, can't they?

[boodah]

No they have to be straight.

[idk401]

I don't like the ONE in your last sketch. Decent pieces though.

yea i know it came out crappy

[Inlyn08]

im about to do a watercolor piece this week
and bers ima hit you up when im done with yours
Make sure to post a flick of that, I'd be interested to see how that turns out.
The watercolor, that is.

[drOping]

Take- I like your last one...lookin tall and sturdy...extend the top of that K out a bit ya feel me?


I don't think a capital E would work right now at this point in time, but hey, what you think¿
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7695/1003135.jpg

[Inlyn08]

Take- I like your last one...lookin tall and sturdy...extend the top of that K out a bit ya feel me?


I don't think a capital E would work right now at this point in time, but hey, what you think¿
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7695/1003135.jpg

Yo man..
You posted the same shit.. ( not saying its shit, just mean the same thing )
Twice.
Read this post.. see my quote. And minus one of the two above me. LOL..

[drOping]

k my bad homie, now can I get a critical analysis?

[nik]

http://i38.tinypic.com/cq41v.jpg

[Inlyn08]

k my bad homie, now can I get a critical analysis?

For sure. Honestly, I've seen you working this with each post. And with each post, in my opinion it's growing. That top bar on the S maybe straighten out a little to match the other part of the S. But, other then that.. 3D looks good. Might be some slight shit somewhere that someone might point out. But it's looking "in line."

Keep working it, and take the legit crits for what they are. Ignore the people who post useless shit, saying "That's toy" and any other crap. I'm no "Graff God." Just some dude who does it for the artistic value. I'm my worst critic.. be your own worst critic too. Be happy with what you should be, but settle for nothing.
Feel me?

[zennegen]

well i did use bars.. i guess i didn't make it apparent?

bars can be curvy too, can't they?

in no way, shape, or form did you use bars there. that was a shitty wildstyle attempt.

[take2]

messin around. Not satisfied with it but w/e. I hate the squiggly lines, thought they would look cooler
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/26163325.jpg

[thatguy<~]

http://i38.tinypic.com/cq41v.jpg

Def an origional style. It's nice seeing some different looking stuff on here. Everybody body else just uses each others letters

[thatguy<~]

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/003-1.jpg. That's fuckin awesome.

[take2]

hey guys can you help me out?? which one of these has the best letters and flow. Not color and backround and characters but letters.
1http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/b577fb1f.jpg
2http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/b07d6d10.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/20cb0b33.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

Last one, dude.
The top part of the K could be longer, though.

[Inlyn08]

Last one, dude.
The top part of the K could be longer, though.
Agreed.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i38.tinypic.com/v87x3.jpg

http://i33.tinypic.com/1442qv6.jpg

http://i36.tinypic.com/29p8845.jpg

[KRE1]

cyto i dig ur style. i think ur S tho can be cleaned up... imo the way that top bar bends over the letter looks a little goofy.

[MarthaT]

great looking stuff Cyto

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

http://i38.tinypic.com/v87x3.jpg

http://i33.tinypic.com/1442qv6.jpg

http://i36.tinypic.com/29p8845.jpg

damn man no improvement and youve been goin at it for a while now...what happend you were gettin decent at one point then you just fell off the face of the map

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

I stopped for a good chunk of time basically, and now I started again but I've just been drawing while stoned, this is all just pen freestyle late night shit I wasn't trying to do anything clean

maybe when I pick up a pencil again I will put some time into some funky

[provinT13]

Pic isn't come up for me.

[sinkilla1]

Thanks to ImageShack for Free Image Hosting (http://imageshack.us)
this was fun to do

[sinkilla1]

http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/5295/1029091900.th.jpg (http://img202.imageshack.us/i/1029091900.jpg/)
wrong thumbnail still fun to do

[boodah]

cyto, what do you write?

[Cranium]

Crits PLEASE?
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c141/Tek9259/Iron.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c141/Tek9259/lastscan34.jpg

[suparjafar]

go simpler...as in use bars to construct your letters for now. like this IRON

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

cyto, what do you write?

I write METEK

http://i37.tinypic.com/1441nvr.jpg

http://i37.tinypic.com/2qxz6ys.jpg

http://i33.tinypic.com/of9hk4.jpg

that is what I was doing and was getting better and better but then I completely stopped.

now I am at this point:

http://i36.tinypic.com/2qauwt3.jpg

says strive, the v looks like a fuckin U though :facepalm:

[sinkilla1]

iron u should def make it more complex throw some arrows in there.

[sinkilla1]

i was jk please dont add more arrows play with straights go to picture gallery and check out delaware and look up some letter structure there all about it around here.

[RADAWG]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo201.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture1.png

[provinT13]

Cyto The thing in the I makes it look too much like a t, and like you said, fix the V

Radag Shorten the top left part of the R, bring it in a bit. As for the second one, I like it better, but the A is a bit too big compared to the R

[BERS1]

RA- looks like a good 2 letter simple name, i could picture that shit on highways and all over new york if you paint it as good as you draw it....

[TheToy]

Yo Bers, I always think of the GZA 'Cold World' video from back in the Liquid Swords days, when I see your sig.

Like that big piece in the background that says 'Cold World'

:D

[suparjafar]

not sure if this was posted, but this gave me a nice laugh, especially judging by that other sharpie video...lol. apologies for posting in this section.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CRIXg_ZX66I

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LXEZnkDooPU

[-Empty-Can-]

Haha^^ What a fag.

[zennegen]

Haha^^ What a fag.

which is funny to me, because that kid is completely on par with:
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics774.jpg

[suparjafar]

is that old empty can? how long've you been writing just wondering

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo23-1.jpg
This didnt come out as good as i sketched.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo25.jpg

[TheToy]

which is funny to me, because that kid is completely on par with:

We all know you made them videos.

[drOping]

Sico- I really don't know what to say, Im completely indifferent.


There is a lot of cold air + snow blowing, mad snowmaking going on in these mountains too. Keystone opens Nov6th!!!!! Therefor...
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/9301/1003136fu.jpg

[boodah]

What is with your handstyle? I would say go simpler, you're bending of your bars isn't working right. Your E needs some definite work with that overlapping thing. Lose the arrows.

[cocacola]

yoo boodah choose a handie i can keep.......... or anyone
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2535/4056443931_f64f631140_o.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2733/4056443955_2996fd724a.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2548/4057182626_9ea7bff173.jpg

[zennegen]

that top middle one is straight^...

[boodah]

edit: though generally I'm not too crazy about handstyles that have one lowercase letter and the rest uppercase, that top middle one is the one I would work on.

[RedEyes]

indifferent good or bad?

[Fetusr]

What he said. It's better than the rest. Don't settle with that though, keep working with it.

How come I never see any of your shit on here buddy?

[boodah]

How come I never see any of your shit on here buddy?

hahahaa, buddy

[RedEyes]

SLEK-work on maken ur letters straight first then incorporate the bends later.

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo25.jpg

[JMANN.23.HTK]

For Kies (uk)



http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu43/2R3TRO/page6.jpg



one of my new piece's...



http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu43/2R3TRO/page5.jpg



http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu43/2R3TRO/page222.jpg

[Keso]

Crits please... This is the newest piece.

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/5721/dsc04873l.jpg

[JMANN.23.HTK]

Anyone gonna crit mine ?

[lord_plankton]

looks like you tried too hard...lots of random stuff, k,
the way its leg bends into itself ,the arrows and so on...all that forcing your piece to look symetrically ,
does not work out.
your e is a mess, cant breath in there, give it some space.
id just reconsider the spacing, flow , size, ...try to work on that

[JMANN.23.HTK]

looks like you tried too hard...lots of random stuff, k,
the way its leg bends into itself ,the arrows and so on...all that forcing your piece to look symetrically ,
does not work out.
your e is a mess, cant breath in there, give it some space.
id just reconsider the spacing, flow , size, ...try to work on that
You talking about Keso's piece or my Kies piece ?

[zennegen]

Anyone gonna crit mine ?

no. give crits to get them.

[Flawless Victory]

Anyone gonna crit mine ?
You traced those.

[LeaksOne]

You traced those.

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e395/kenshirokamemeijin/busted.jpg

[suparjafar]

jmann youre gay

sico looks dope, pumpkins a little big

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0143.jpg

[KRE1]

snaw i think that S could be closer with the rest of the letters and put that W on a diet imo. the lines look shaky too but i like the simp style.

arite a little something i was working on last nite.

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/5003/004qat.jpg

[cocacola]

cool shit you got goin there
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2438/4059317007_c44a6fbaa9_o.jpg

[boodah]

Nice kaleef. Keep working with that. Satra, that character is meh. Fix his eyes, and it looks like he's chewing bubblegum. I wouldn't do that with the S in the throw either.

[faser]

snaw i think that S could be closer with the rest of the letters and put that W on a diet imo. the lines look shaky too but i like the simp style.

arite a little something i was working on last nite.

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/5003/004qat.jpg

add some 3D to that KF, I reckon the stars dont belong tho

[Rin5e]

http://i37.tinypic.com/28m2ss0.jpg

[take2]

solid rinse

[cocacola]

yo rinse that shit clean i would change the n cus it looks like an H
crits on this?
i changed my name... once more. to Reatd ( ree.ated)
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2523/4061346044_12d3fe5d70.jpg

[RedEyes]

Rines-work on maken all ur bars straight, like with the E i suggest drawing it out with the over lap n then erase.
Coca-im digging everything but the D and if ur ganna do a spade on the T make it a whole spade.

[-PeaR-]

hey cocacola
u repin the Vandal SKuad?
just cuza the sketch on the page b4 =P

[cocacola]

what do you mean by vandal squad?
i part of vandal skuad killers of thats what you're talking about?
minute quick shit im going simple again im tird of fuxs tellin me to slow down
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2629/4060679487_ba9489d4d8.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

Why are you guys spelling Squad with a K?
and you don't really write Pear, do you?

[Rin5e]

Thanks for the crits. RedEyes, the reason that the bottom of my doesn't match up is becasue there is supposed to be an add-on at tthe bottom but the S covers it up, like so.
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll304/Greatgone/E.jpg

Coca-looks dope, the only thing I'm not a huge fan of is the top of the E

[cocacola]

we speel it anyway it sounds the same , Vandul skuad killahs, vandal squad killers etc

[take2]

did these on my desk mat. Got sketchy cus pencil wouldnt show up soo I had to freestyle it:P
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/4463770b.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/31a28967.jpg

[Sesh-it-up]

change ur k in that throwie yo

[take2]

ya ik i fucked it up

[suparjafar]

everything but k is good

[b SQUARED 08]

Rinse: I like everything about it other than the diagonal bar on the N- fix that up so that it doesn't look like an H in the least. Also, I wouldn't overlap your drop shadow on each letter like that. Your I looks a bit plain, but that's no biggy really.
Cocacola: Good to see you're going back to basics because I think on some of yours, you were kinking the letters a bit too much and it made the pieces as a whole look bad, but reworking your letters will correct that. Keep up those simps man.
Take: I don't really like your first one at all because the colors and designs take away from the letters that aren't that strong in the first place. Your E especially. On the second one, I like your T and E, but I could hardly read the a and the K still doesn't look like a K to me... I know they were freestyles, but you want crits, right? Lol.

Halloween bic pen freestyle out of boredom at work (sorry for the crappy pic):
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo8.jpg

[Darkeist]

halloween - shit is freshhh

[Rin5e]

Rinse: I like everything about it other than the diagonal bar on the N- fix that up so that it doesn't look like an H in the least. Also, I wouldn't overlap your drop shadow on each letter like that. Your I looks a bit plain, but that's no biggy really.

Yeah, I've been figuring out a new thing for my N and noted on the drop shadow.

Halloween looks good, Im not a huge fan of different characters for letters but whatever works for you.

[boodah]

Bsquared, diggin it except that little thing on your N. Seems outta place on that letter.

[Darkeist]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20091101.jpg

[Rin5e]

Dark, nice simp.

http://i34.tinypic.com/3d9qc.jpg
Rough sketch, need to tweak letters and work on proportions.

[LeaksOne]

nice simp but i dont think that N is guna work

[drOping]

Agreed on the N. Just keep working your shit, its coming. maybe don't post such a huge picture?

Long day/night, stopped a person from running right into traffic, crazy. Anyways came home drew this, I usually screw things up after this so figured I'd post now
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/5089/1003137q.jpg

[funhouseXcast]

looks good, but i think you should find a way so that The S isn't blocking that large part of the L

[take2]

you couldn't see my a? its lower case come on I thought the a was pretty clear

[401Son]

new to the site but i know where i belong lol
oldies and newies
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00287.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00302.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00329.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00183.jpg
^^4 a battle
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00277.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00282.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00287-1.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00309.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00368.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00395.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00392.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00400.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00397.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00436_1.jpg

[Rin5e]

Thanks for the crits everyone, I'll resize my pictures next time. Haha

[b SQUARED 08]

Repost, but I added to it at work today...
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo9.jpg

[cocacola]

damn squared that nice i have a ? , do you like doing long ass words? lol'
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2453/4065559124_f731576248.jpg

[chiefy]

i dont like the bit coming off the n but its not bad.

[chiefy]

i like that cocacola its dope.

[idk401]

SNOE Bum Fight Kru ahaha

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/155801.jpg
quick simps.v^
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/155842.jpg

[401Son]

lol wat ap

[KtRL.]

high as fuck when i drew this..
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00338.jpg

[l3monade]

ktrl- make the k and r the same size as the t and l change those bottom right bars. drop the bubbles, work on simples and straight letters like this

[weakfingers]

what he said ^^^

[KtRL.]

some other straight letters, better i think.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00343.jpg
i know the R is fucked in this one haha.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00339.jpg

[suparjafar]

top ones good. in the bottom one your k is too big and your r is too small and retarded. also your vertical bar for your l is a bit skinny.

[Darkeist]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20091101.jpg

bamp

[cocacola]

yoo! i forgot how to set back a clock! for halloween time change...........,
if its 10;50 then would the time be 9;50? and for the alram is set to 7;00 would it be 6?

[Rin5e]

Yes a hour back.

[Rin5e]

Take a gander.
http://i38.tinypic.com/5yrtpd.jpg

[weakfingers]

^^^^^I got bored and was messing around in paint....
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/helpinghand.jpg

[Rin5e]

Makes sense the drop shadow should be there on the R and the top of the S I needed to make more rounded but I wanted to keep the same flow amoung the tops for everything.

[JMANN.23.HTK]

jmann youre gay

sico looks dope, pumpkins a little big

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0143.jpg

Letters are weak, your line work is not very good, colour scheme for the fill is not very good either, and the 'W' doesn't look right and the 'S' is too far away from the rest of the stuff...

But what do I know I'm gay ain't i ?

[00-made-00]

Rinse - Nice simples man, i think you need to tweak the S a bit more make it fit with the other letters, also it looks like your R is a few steps ahead of the other letters try and get them all on the same level, and it will be dope.
Snaw- Its not too bad could do with some work but on the whole its alright, the N and A are your strongest letters, so work on your s and w.

Halloween sketch, a bit late.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/halt-1.jpg

[take2]

sketchy as hellllllllllll. Do you guys see intermediate thread in my near future?? if not its coool
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/bd4c4bd0.jpg
heres a few more ta help you guys decide....
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/20cb0b33.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/5d056712.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/c5129f6a.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/eb129a51.jpg
halt-solid letters ok fill ugly ghosts and "happy halloween"
rinse- don't overlap the s and tweak the R a little

[RedEyes]

Take u have a while bro id put in a good 6 months before. but your learning

[xSonnyTx]

Take man your stuff looks a lot better than when you first started you've done some mad progressing.

It looks like you're still messing with the structure of that k though. Try to get a solid letter down instead of changing the bars in every simp.
Outside of that I've gotta say I really don't like your hand, but maybe thats me

[smooth_nuts]

take and rinse looking liek you guys are on the right track with the simples keep it up!
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture545.jpg
sketch from when i was fucked up the other night,ignore the wack ass throw up.
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture546.jpg
old little jone on the cover of youths book i liked.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

Take a gander.
http://i38.tinypic.com/5yrtpd.jpg

hey rinse man I saw your name and decided to start sketching my version of it, what do ya think?

http://i36.tinypic.com/4hzdi8.jpg

[cocacola]

lol you thumb looks like a penis facing foward holding the piece of paper

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i36.tinypic.com/k3vq86.jpg

still workin on it

[callousro]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/brigitroman/009.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/brigitroman/006-3.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i33.tinypic.com/son8lf.jpg

[LeaksOne]

you gota work on that R and your S looks like a 5 and the E is a no go. and i dont llike how the right side of your N is super short.

[Neon_M@]

Alright ive been working on my art for a few more days, and this new piece i did took me probably the longest out of my collection. hopefully it paid off.



...i wish i had markers!

[sinkilla1]

i dont

[LeaksOne]

it wasnt worth the time. start all the way over.

[Neon_M@]

i figured it wasnt that great after i looked at it more...

ill get it soon

[KtRL.]

you gaiz like my art? bump
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00343.jpg

[LeaksOne]

i figured it wasnt that great after i looked at it more...

ill get it soon

just start with keyboard letters. no extentions yet. and ktrl just keep doin what your doin then SLOWLY start addin your own funk to it

[Neon_M@]

i just need more patience with my practicing.

the funny thing is though that my family thinks it looks cool, i mean i guess it does but yeah i gotta lot of practicing.

[LeaksOne]

it takes alot of time and hard work. patience is the key. if you put in alot of work t'll all start comin together.

[-Empty-Can-]

Alright ive been working on my art for a few more days, and this new piece i did took me probably the longest out of my collection. hopefully it paid off.



...i wish i had markers!

Work on your letters. First do simple letters then move on. Your 3D needs work. Don't make your letters stack on top of each other. Lose those random extensions. Don't worry much about coloring until you have your styles down and want to do a blackbook piece.

...And how can you not have markers? Go get some cheap crayolas or something. I stole like 30 felt tip markers from school. Those worked really nice.

EDIT: You letters should look like the ones in the bottom corner.

[408Bomber]

http://i33.tinypic.com/m93jfn.jpg

Working on this for a friend. I know the Y is ugly!! I liek how the "A" and "S" came out tho. crits please?

[408Bomber]

http://i33.tinypic.com/m93jfn.jpg

Working on this for a friend. I know the Y is ugly!! I liek how the "A" and "S" came out tho. crits please?

[cocacola]

yo idk how i feel about it not really my type..( hahaha) but seriously, i like the s but the extensions need to go , and i feel the way the letters are in a wavey position

[cocacola]

damn squared that nice i have a ? , do you like doing long ass words? lol'
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2453/4065559124_f731576248.jpg

bump

[Loki X Sho]

some stteeeez ive been workin on
http://i38.tinypic.com/iye6n4.png

[gumOnShoe]

add like a dot on top indicated that it's an I, looking tough so far. fix up the bar on the K too. you should align the bottom right of the K to the middle next time.

[graff4ever]

http://i33.tinypic.com/m93jfn.jpg

Working on this for a friend. I know the Y is ugly!! I liek how the "A" and "S" came out tho. crits please?

maybe move da y closer to the word and like cocacola said loss da extensions

[Rin5e]

httpi.tinypic.com/son8lf.jpg

Not a huge fan of the N or S either, looks too much like a 5.

[drOping]

Loki- I like the creativity
Apeshit- lookin tight
Ashley- I agree with everyone else

I hate doing L's they are so hard for me. Felt like this one had some flow, no?
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2295/1003139.jpg