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CrAzOnEr!
11-05-2009, 05:50 PM
Bottom page bump!

lol i like this pic did you sketch first?

suparjafar
11-05-2009, 07:29 PM
i dont have crits


http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0154.jpg sweet crayola washables, yea i know i fucked that up really bad

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0153.jpg

ignore arrows

drOping
11-05-2009, 07:33 PM
I write Slek, and I was putting a dash over the e to make it sound like sleek. I just don't really like the way the dash looks anymore. As for the scribbles above my name it just says J M some times I put an 09 at the end.

401Son
11-05-2009, 07:39 PM
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00457.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00459.jpg
^^fucked up on it so jus kept fucking wit it
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00456.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00458.jpg
should have never gone wit a orange forcefield -_- bump cus i was the last on the page

suparjafar
11-05-2009, 07:43 PM
2nd to last one is good

401Son
11-05-2009, 07:48 PM
good looks yo

stekone
11-05-2009, 07:57 PM
looking good snoe :)

LeaksOne
11-05-2009, 08:10 PM
i dont have crits


http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0154.jpg sweet crayola washables, yea i know i fucked that up really bad

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0153.jpg

ignore arrows

ok im guna be the first to say this. stop with the fills altogether. i dont care if you get a brand new pack of prismas just stop. focus on your letters before you start doin fills and learn to stop using dark colors when you get back to fills

suparjafar
11-05-2009, 08:12 PM
k

KtRL.
11-05-2009, 09:13 PM
Slek- you shit looks great, i would suggest messing around with letter structures and shit, like all caps or something.. shits looking dope though.
some new shit i drews in second period.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00357.jpghttp://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00356.jpg

Fury
11-05-2009, 09:25 PM
Not digging the K on the second one. Lose the left extension. The T's middle bar is messed up too. The R's middle needs to be fixed too

b SQUARED 08
11-05-2009, 09:38 PM
b squared i think the middle bar of the E shouldnt be bent downward like it is and should stay straight. you didnt bend any of the bottom bars of your letters on the left and then you did on the right... i would make it uniform and not bend them like how you have your J. you know wat i mean?
Yeah, I've played around with both of those and wasn't too keen on how it looked. It looked a little too boxy for what I'm going for, but it's a style I just started working on.

lol i like this pic did you sketch first?
Yessir. Notebooks until I sketched something I kinda like, then try it out on sketch paper. Workin' with simps for now.

EDIT: 401Son: Both of your BFK sketches need some work as far as the letters go. Forget about the cool designs and backrounds for now. Focus on making sure each letter is constructed of bars of similar with similar widths and bends. If that makes sense to you, that's what you should work on. I do like your first SNOE one aside from the BFK ribbon on your O.

RedEyes
11-05-2009, 10:10 PM
B-Squad- Nice very solid and proportional
SNoe- i like it, i got a buddy that uses that style and your can pull it off well.

RedEyes
11-05-2009, 10:16 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo26.jpg
Any crits?

gumOnShoe
11-05-2009, 10:23 PM
you're progressing, man.
try making that spaded I a bit thicker on the top.

Edit:
fuck it, make the whole I thicker.

-Empty-Can-
11-05-2009, 10:38 PM
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics788-1.jpg
simplicity
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics790-1.jpg

sico- I don't like that heart shape at the bottom of the I.

drOping
11-05-2009, 10:39 PM
Yo SICO- I really like that, you should switch up the colors and go paint that on a wall, like really big!

Stot- sorry but imo the first one is wack, the second one is solid for sure though, I like the capital T's

gumOnShoe
11-05-2009, 10:47 PM
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics788-1.jpg
simplicity
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics790-1.jpg

sico- I don't like that heart shape at the bottom of the I.

i'm usually not too harsh w/ people, but i have to agree with everybody else, the First Stot is a piece of shit...... like i said before, it looks like oC!o!
make it actually look like letters next time. it's not like this is the first time you've posted that thing, either.

on the second one, it's IIGHT, but you FUCKED UP THAT 3D on the top half of the piece it's like it's 3D below, but Flat up top.

RedEyes
11-05-2009, 10:48 PM
Thanks, i like maken my "I" smaller so it over laps the S and C idk just the style im working with right now.

-Empty-Can-
11-05-2009, 10:51 PM
Everyone says that first style is shit. But personally it's one of my favorites. It's a matter of preference but I like it and I'm gonna keep using it.

I know i fucked up on the 3D. Especially on the right side of the second T. I was gonna do something else but decided to change it.

gumOnShoe
11-05-2009, 10:58 PM
alright man, i'll fuck off, i'm just telling you that you'll stay the same if you keep on like that...
also, i get that you're trying something new, but atleast give give the shit proper structure so it won't be a guessing game for people to read.

drOping
11-05-2009, 11:44 PM
Yo sico dude its Ill when u gonna paint that????? Stot, do what makes you feel good!

suparjafar
11-05-2009, 11:46 PM
^^yeah really, shits solid

Fury
11-06-2009, 01:44 AM
drOping got banned?
Anyway, the second STOT is off in some area (fill is too), but the first one is weird.

Sico - Alright but you gotta work on the I.

KRE1
11-06-2009, 01:52 AM
dood... empty... i think we all just are trying to tell you that in the streets that would look bad... why not try something new and grow from there ya dig? dont be so hardheaded bout that "style"

LeaksOne
11-06-2009, 02:02 AM
Everyone says that first style is shit. But personally it's one of my favorites. It's a matter of preference but I like it and I'm gonna keep using it.

I know i fucked up on the 3D. Especially on the right side of the second T. I was gonna do something else but decided to change it.

while gum is fucking off im guna fuck on. although you think that style is nice and unique it looks like shit and doesnt say stot. you need to do simple shit before you try some shit like that. scrap it stop posting it. your not making any changes to make it say stot so just stop posting it. paint it if youd like but its shit. im sick of bein nice. you need to work on your simple shit too

weakfingers
11-06-2009, 08:23 AM
Ktrl-Go alot simpler... like ALOT. Your trying to much shit. and your whole peice with all the addons look's like ive seen all then befor. could it be that where from the same area lol.
Redeyes-Its basic so i cant hate but justfix the end of the S on the bottom, loose the connection to the i.
Emptycans-first one blows and the second on looks leik its been done with a ruler.





Havent drawn in about a month.
Freestyles a peice for seid and i think it turned out funkey, but in reality it probably looks bad.....sorry seid
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/squint.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/seid-1.jpg

Flawless Victory
11-06-2009, 09:02 AM
Yeah man, I'm not feelin that.

The drips on the S are wonky as hell, you gotta work on making them smoother.
The bottom of the E is too short, and the arrow in the middle is completely fucking it up.



That skwint is straight, though.
Though the top part of the K could be a bit longer.



Stot- PLEASE keep doing that shit on the bottom.

ironcrack
11-06-2009, 09:08 AM
more aero's .

weakfingers
11-06-2009, 09:24 AM
thank FV for the crits, Fuck, im stilll pretty rusty but am getting back into drawing more.The arrow extentions look so ugly now that im looking at it on a screen, when I first did It i was so pumped. heres the more simpler version I did for him but dont like how the E looks.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/3-6.jpg

sex without condoms
11-06-2009, 09:31 AM
Word is bond my ni gga

Church
11-06-2009, 10:28 AM
Ktrl-Go alot simpler... like ALOT. Your trying to much shit. and your whole peice with all the addons look's like ive seen all then befor. could it be that where from the same area lol.
Redeyes-Its basic so i cant hate but justfix the end of the S on the bottom, loose the connection to the i.
Emptycans-first one blows and the second on looks leik its been done with a ruler.





Havent drawn in about a month.
Freestyles a peice for seid and i think it turned out funkey, but in reality it probably looks bad.....sorry seid
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/squint.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/seid-1.jpg
I fucking like this. It needs a lot of work, but the style itself has potential.
-less arrows
-cleaner lines
-work on getting a stronger letter structure, especially the S and A
Good stuff
-nice color scheme
-nice letter proportion
-good flow, all the letters at least match each other

First pic is better than the second, but I like both of em. If you keep practicing that will look good.

weakfingers
11-06-2009, 10:51 AM
Im kinda wanna work on a more edvanced style like the seid one but im just really lazy and unmotivated to draw. I'll try to clean it up N' shit I was just freestylin when I drew it. Btw the last Letter was sappoused to be a D not an Athe extention just make it look that way.

PRANEONE
11-06-2009, 01:24 PM
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/8177/picture032ag.jpg

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3708/picture033df.jpg

-Empty-Can-
11-06-2009, 01:59 PM
Emptycans and the second on looks leik its been done with a ruler.
Straight up freehand :D


Anyway, the second STOT is off in some area (fill is too), but the first one is weird.
How is the fill off? I meant for the sides of the O to be colored unevenly.

suparjafar
11-06-2009, 02:41 PM
prane do simps. and stot fuck that style, it doesnt look like stot

bored in class today, snawoner sketch

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/snawoner.jpg

iselldope
11-06-2009, 02:45 PM
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/8393/zane2.jpg

401Son
11-06-2009, 03:34 PM
Yeah, I've played around with both of those and wasn't too keen on how it looked. It looked a little too boxy for what I'm going for, but it's a style I just started working on.

Yessir. Notebooks until I sketched something I kinda like, then try it out on sketch paper. Workin' with simps for now.

EDIT: 401Son: Both of your BFK sketches need some work as far as the letters go. Forget about the cool designs and backrounds for now. Focus on making sure each letter is constructed of bars of similar with similar widths and bends. If that makes sense to you, that's what you should work on. I do like your first SNOE one aside from the BFK ribbon on your O.

good looks but yea thr bfk simps where jus fuck arounds

cocacola
11-06-2009, 03:48 PM
instead of reatd i use reatrz and my old name ..crus
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2657/4080789359_21c26aa474.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2519/4081550454_7095411cda.jpg

Neon_M@
11-06-2009, 05:17 PM
weakfingers

i actually like yours a lot, its just not very clean.
like everyone says be simpler, dont make so many adjustments to letters, work slowly, graduallyy getting better. correcting what you did wrong last time, and thats easier to do when you only have 1 mistake to it.

Chippey
11-06-2009, 08:26 PM
Neon M@ your N looks too much like a H and id drop the pointed thing on the bottom right of the N, it just looks out of place.

KtRL.
11-06-2009, 08:32 PM
bump..

Slek- you shit looks great, i would suggest messing around with letter structures and shit, like all caps or something.. shits looking dope though.
some new shit i drews in second period.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00357.jpghttp://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00356.jpg

sinkilla1
11-06-2009, 08:52 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/2vkb2nq.jpg
i did this on my belly so i had to do it upside down lol dont ask me why lol
http://i38.tinypic.com/xgi9aa.jpg
any one like this one
and my philly hands u like?
http://i37.tinypic.com/2us915y.jpg

Fury
11-06-2009, 08:53 PM
Straight up freehand :D


How is the fill off? I meant for the sides of the O to be colored unevenly.

That's what I was referring to. It just doesn't look good like that, seeing as everything else is uniform.

xSonnyTx
11-06-2009, 09:36 PM
Honk in the second one I think you scrimped on the k
The top right bar is tiny and looks way out of place with the rest of the word

And not trying to start anything but what gives people the urge to write ONER instead of One? Honestly I think its toy as fuck but I'm just wondering what people think

sinkilla1
11-06-2009, 09:51 PM
yeah i noticed that too lol but overall do you like it and i wrote one look right above it it says honk one the wicked was supposed to have a face there but i messed up

suparjafar
11-06-2009, 09:51 PM
i dont write snaw "oner" i just did it for that sketch

TheToy
11-06-2009, 10:26 PM
Dude wrote Hunk on his own stomach. That's fuckin' awesome. Hahaha.

LeaksOne
11-06-2009, 10:48 PM
he definitely wrote honk. and why the hell did you do that?

TheToy
11-06-2009, 10:51 PM
That 'O' definately looks like a 'U'.

408Bomber
11-07-2009, 02:16 AM
http://i33.tinypic.com/2q0m6pk.jpg

iselldope
11-07-2009, 08:29 AM
http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/9746/zane3.jpg

Crits.
408:change the s man
honk:2ND IS allright but listen: DON'T WRITE ON YOUR OWN BELLY,FUCK MAN.
krtl:do simps
cocacola:like it man,fill it in!

408Bomber
11-07-2009, 12:03 PM
Crits.
408:change the s man
honk:2ND IS allright but listen: DON'T WRITE ON YOUR OWN BELLY,FUCK MAN.
krtl:do simps
cocacola:like it man,fill it in!

I was gunna move the arrow more into the middle but idk i wanna make a totaly new S.

iselldope
11-07-2009, 12:08 PM
do guys see my picture in my last post?

heres another one

http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/9853/zane5.jpg

iselldope
11-07-2009, 12:30 PM
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/7516/zane6.jpg

and another one

Kios2
11-07-2009, 02:03 PM
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/3007/kios0002.jpg (http://img20.imageshack.us/i/kios0002.jpg/)

iselldope
11-07-2009, 02:13 PM
simps man,wanna do an exchange now?i'll start now

Fury
11-07-2009, 03:30 PM
Dope - Work on your bars. Your N in your throw is really weird too

cocacola
11-07-2009, 03:49 PM
iselldope: nice man , i like those simps add some coloing schemes to em', maybe a rainbow fuity color one. :: and i might fill in the reatrz or whatever you told me to fill in
i redid my entry again fo the apeshit

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2697/4084166904_5550a14a14.jpg

take2
11-07-2009, 05:02 PM
pure fuck around
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/4bcc9825.jpg
The ape shit is pretty nice but wierd colors. zanes are pretty good for simples just clean em up a bit and work on fills thought i shouldnt be talking after that insanely random fill in the bottom left one.

iselldope
11-07-2009, 05:45 PM
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/8377/zane7.jpg

i dont know any fruity rainbow fills lol,gimme an example,this is al i could do

suparjafar
11-07-2009, 05:47 PM
one on the rights looking decent take, and zane looks like zare but other than that looks good

l3monade
11-07-2009, 06:00 PM
iselldope- keep ur bars in porportion

suparjafar
11-07-2009, 07:08 PM
sweet sketchin

sinkilla1
11-07-2009, 07:18 PM
It says hunk lol i thought it would be funny but now i cant get it off fuck sharpies and decos
http://i33.tinypic.com/s5l09d.jpg

sketch3
11-07-2009, 07:20 PM
I cant wait till natural selection catches up with you

sinkilla1
11-07-2009, 07:25 PM
what lol

CrAzOnEr!
11-07-2009, 07:30 PM
hey take i meet you befor right???

Werse
11-07-2009, 07:33 PM
It says hunk lol i thought it would be funny but now i cant get it off fuck sharpies and decos
http://i33.tinypic.com/s5l09d.jpg

Your gonna die of xylene poisoning mannn.

sinkilla1
11-07-2009, 07:45 PM
nah dude ill beofihaslofjaslfjasefoejasflsejflsejflsejfsl;ejfls ejeslkfdj ......dead

CrAzOnEr!
11-07-2009, 07:55 PM
what??? nice deco tat..lolz

letsgobombin
11-07-2009, 07:59 PM
Hunk- Stick with bars or work on your throws.
Zane- you're on the right track, spend the time you use filling on doing more simps, remember to keep your letters proportional.
Take- go simpler, as above, spend your filling time sketching.
Coca cola- meh, it's not great, the fill distracts alot from the letters which in this case just covers up the flaws in the letters so take that how you will, comparing with the slate battle it seems that style is hit and miss so keep working on it and hope you come out with something decent. Characs pretty good, hat is messed up though.
Kios- doesn't seem too bad, make the i and o proportioned and at the moment focus more on the letters than the add ons.
Ashley- 1. I wouldn't go writing my name 2. If not, it's a pretty bad tag, I'm guessing it was for a mate, stick to simple bars and overlap your letters.

take2
11-07-2009, 08:02 PM
hey take i meet you befor right???

Maybe? where do you live

sinkilla1
11-07-2009, 08:07 PM
oh come on lets go bombing it was on my own stomach i wanna see you right good on your own stomahc..

letsgobombin
11-07-2009, 08:09 PM
True, true, then again, I never plan to draw on my own stomach and for a good reason, keep sketching and maybe you'll get to do it across some girls ass one day if you're lucky.

suparjafar
11-07-2009, 08:12 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7583&d=1257642457 bump to next page

sinkilla1
11-07-2009, 08:13 PM
maybe lol but ima catholic school kid maybe i can get a cross on there ass lol

letsgobombin
11-07-2009, 08:24 PM
Get with some of those catholic school girls :p
Snaw- you're on the right track, the more you draw the faster you'll progress (in theory), overlap your letters though, keep at it.

sinkilla1
11-07-2009, 08:26 PM
yo snaw once you get going at straights you can add curves or something of your own style man i think your ready for start adding some hmmph

Stussy
11-07-2009, 10:05 PM
http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/2141/photo975.jpg
New sketch

sinkilla1
11-07-2009, 10:07 PM
yo thats fucking sick but is that a s or an e at the end

weakfingers
11-07-2009, 10:08 PM
I really like that Nerdy A character.

CrAzOnEr!
11-07-2009, 10:09 PM
Maybe? where do you live

i live in hartford ct. are you with mdk?

CrustOner
11-08-2009, 12:18 AM
Stussy, your shit just keeps getting better and better. Keep it up. I don't know about that saw thing at the tip of your Z, though.

Flawless Victory
11-08-2009, 12:26 AM
STUSSY- DOPE DOPE DOPE DOPE MY NlGGA

weakfingers
11-08-2009, 01:47 AM
Fuck I feel so bad posting right after stussy ahahaha.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF8911.jpg

take2
11-08-2009, 07:52 AM
God DAM!! The one day I try making a character out of a letter (just a face) someone has to do the same thig about six posts before me!!.
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/1a345a4f.jpg
Skuint that shit is dope except whats up with the line under the U?
Rays love your style clean

CrAzOnEr!
11-08-2009, 07:54 AM
looks good do you live in ct??

take2
11-08-2009, 07:57 AM
nope i live in IN

CrAzOnEr!
11-08-2009, 08:01 AM
ohh thers a take in ct.

iselldope
11-08-2009, 08:02 AM
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7865/41375648.jpg
stussy:dope
skuint:i don't like the colours
take:make the bars solid

take2
11-08-2009, 08:02 AM
really? that sucks I'll google him
anyway I put a two after my name just in case

iselldope
11-08-2009, 08:03 AM
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7865/41375648.jpg
stussy:dope
skuint:i don't like the colours
take:make the bars solid

take2
11-08-2009, 08:03 AM
really? that sucks I'll google him
anyway I put a two after my name just in case

take2
11-08-2009, 08:04 AM
i found a "taker" my name is different I don't bite and i have a two soo i think its all good

CrAzOnEr!
11-08-2009, 08:06 AM
ohh ok yea his name is just takehe is beast i ll get some flicks

take2
11-08-2009, 08:07 AM
what?? make the bars solid??. my bars are pretty solid there just sketchy cus I messed up in outlining and I have a shitty cell phone camera

CrAzOnEr!
11-08-2009, 08:26 AM
yea i hate making my bars solid it weird to me

iselldope
11-08-2009, 08:33 AM
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/8565/take.jpg

CrAzOnEr!
11-08-2009, 08:37 AM
what the you messed with his simp!

iselldope
11-08-2009, 08:38 AM
he didn't understood my crit so i show him.

take2
11-08-2009, 09:06 AM
lol your stuppid for all thos examples there are TWO SEPARATE BARSS. abrs can be barely connected to add a little spice to your piece. If you take about twenty minutes and look through graffiti in these forums then you will see that bars do not have to be rectangles. they can be rhombuses or rhombi or w/e

iselldope
11-08-2009, 09:08 AM
relax man,i was just trying to help,fuck i think seperate bars look like shit in this simp

EST2007
11-08-2009, 09:13 AM
lol your stuppid for all thos examples there are TWO SEPARATE BARSS. abrs can be barely connected to add a little spice to your piece. If you take about twenty minutes and look through graffiti in these forums then you will see that bars do not have to be rectangles. they can be rhombuses or rhombi or w/e

stfu faggot. you're in the fucking toy forum for a reason, so take any and all crit into consideration. if you don't care for his crit (which actually does make sense once the ms paint fixes were shown) then ignore it.

blah blah blah its just graffiti.. shit its not even graffiti, it's just book work. graffiti actually means going out and doing something

CrAzOnEr!
11-08-2009, 09:16 AM
cool well how can i fix this then.
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/WILDSTYLE.jpg

Flawless Victory
11-08-2009, 09:26 AM
I literally said "WOAH" out loud.
You can't fix that, man.
Do simples.

CrAzOnEr!
11-08-2009, 09:28 AM
is it that bad can you give me tips on how to do wildstyle better?

Flawless Victory
11-08-2009, 09:29 AM
Yeah, don't do it. Just do simples.
That's pretty much the best tip you can get at this point.

CrAzOnEr!
11-08-2009, 09:32 AM
simps are easy for me i wanted to try somthing more challenging.But ill try some simps and post them later.

401Son
11-08-2009, 10:03 AM
stay with simpz, simps go on 4 ever, u can never finsh coming up with styles with simps, so that y u dont got in down just yet, keep simps coming an dont try 2 rush into a style u aint ready 4

sinkilla1
11-08-2009, 10:11 AM
never make a nother wildstyle u litterally nvm thats not even a wild style just a wild cause u have no style

gumOnShoe
11-08-2009, 10:23 AM
simps are easy for me i wanted to try somthing more challenging.But ill try some simps and post them later.

are simps easy for you? let's see one.

BlacktodaFuture
11-08-2009, 10:34 AM
Simples!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

MarsWTF
11-08-2009, 10:36 AM
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s47/va1con/2009-11-0816-41-05508.jpg

First ever dub attempt? The R is rubbish. But what do you guys think? Any constructive criticism? I need help on the R. Thanks.

AsherOner
11-08-2009, 10:56 AM
http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/2141/photo975.jpg
New sketch

thats fucking amazing..

AsherOner
11-08-2009, 11:28 AM
http://i36.tinypic.com/15foi77.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/vhrog0.jpg

these are both about a month old.. i changed my name from casper to asher
im working on a sketch for asher right now so ill post it up in a little

CrustOner
11-08-2009, 11:30 AM
That second one would be so much cooler if you left the antennae, the stars, and the lame fucking arrows out. and if that E was lowercase. and if the R was a little more to the right so you could see both legs. The first one is terrible.

MarsWTF
11-08-2009, 11:56 AM
AsherOner - I like the bottom one, I think the yellow and red looks great, but Im not liking the way the C is so far away from the rest of the letters on the top one. Doesnt seem right to me, but thats just my opinion, right? Good job though.

take2
11-08-2009, 12:08 PM
which one do you guys like the best...
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/bd4c4bd0.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/c5129f6a.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/22afa36e.jpg

sinkilla1
11-08-2009, 12:12 PM
the last one is the only descent one

Kios2
11-08-2009, 12:15 PM
which one do you guys like the best...
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/bd4c4bd0.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/c5129f6a.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/22afa36e.jpg

I like the last one
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/4231/kiossimp.jpg
I tried to do a simp

AsherOner
11-08-2009, 12:20 PM
the last one is good.. the other two are pretty bad

Fury
11-08-2009, 12:23 PM
That second one would be so much cooler if you left the antennae, the stars, and the lame fucking arrows out. and if that E was lowercase. and if the R was a little more to the right so you could see both legs. The first one is terrible.

Holy fuck Crust, where the hell'd you go?

MarsWTF
11-08-2009, 12:34 PM
Kios2 - It's a pretty good attempt, maybe try and squash it up abit, close the gap between the letters. Maybe add some color? Good attempt though, nice. Also look at the proportion between the letters.

letsgobombin
11-08-2009, 12:41 PM
Take- lose all those extensions, the second one is where you should be keeping it and as said before, although it's your choice, I wouldn't bother doing any filling til youre better, spend the time sketching.
Kios- simpler and overlap your letters.
Casper- the first one is crap, the second one needs to lose the add-ons and gimmicks and go simpler for now, stick with something like the a.
Rays- fresh, although the top of the z is a bit dodgy.
Var- simpler just straight bars for now, and overlap your letters from left to right. Your r doesn't match the rest simple that up as well.
Craz- shit man, simples, simples, simples, don't worry about wildstyle for at least a few years.

cold0
11-08-2009, 12:44 PM
yoozaa. first post.
what can i do better? i didnt use color cus i didnt wanna mess up my blackbook, but ima soon buy good quality colors..
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/5654/img0164d.th.jpg (http://img690.imageshack.us/i/img0164d.jpg/)
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/4026/img0159gj.th.jpg (http://img21.imageshack.us/i/img0159gj.jpg/)

My friend got some big ass wood plate that i can spray on, i thought on doin this one as my first piece.
http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/4162/img0160e.th.jpg (http://img682.imageshack.us/i/img0160e.jpg/)

Kios2
11-08-2009, 12:44 PM
Kios2 - It's a pretty good attempt, maybe try and squash it up abit, close the gap between the letters. Maybe add some color? Good attempt though, nice. Also look at the proportion between the letters.

Sounds dumb but... Whats Proportion?

letsgobombin
11-08-2009, 12:45 PM
Keep your letters the same size, and relatively same thickness. Don't worry bout colour yet.
Cold- simples and bars man, new to graffiti thread.

MarsWTF
11-08-2009, 12:48 PM
What he said ^^. haha

Kios2
11-08-2009, 01:58 PM
A exchange
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/9771/exchange.jpg

sinkilla1
11-08-2009, 02:07 PM
an exchange lol
http://i37.tinypic.com/15znof8.jpg

sinkilla1
11-08-2009, 02:07 PM
an exchange lol
http://i37.tinypic.com/15znof8.jpg

Kios2
11-08-2009, 02:10 PM
an exchange lol
http://i37.tinypic.com/15znof8.jpg

lol

n8galicia
11-08-2009, 02:16 PM
no homo lol

Kios2
11-08-2009, 02:56 PM
For a friend at skool. Crits?
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/9134/geo0002v.jpg

take2
11-08-2009, 02:57 PM
messin around
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/9c1adfeb.jpg
critzzz

headsick123
11-08-2009, 03:34 PM
scanner went a little funky. but you get the idea, gonna finish it later tonight, would appreciate some crits first tho. THANKS DUDES!

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/headsick123/JoinPiece1.jpg

CRITS:
TAKE2- Close that "A" up, make the bridge on it wider too, it looks odd how it is i think. also straighten out your "K" bars, they get fat in the middles and thats not consistent, stay simple and consistent, make all your letters take up around the same amount of space. also maybe get rid of that cut in the T.

CASPER- I like the second one, nice and clean. looks pretty dope. the first one tho, too much goin on, the C hanging out there is ugly, make it the same size, bring it closer you know. also speard the letters apart a little bit i think it will look much better.

take2
11-08-2009, 03:37 PM
dich the arrow on the i, the bar bends dont flow and the j looks like a backwards c

funhouseXcast
11-08-2009, 04:04 PM
^then you're making you C's wrong

headsick123
11-08-2009, 04:07 PM
lol

take2
11-08-2009, 04:08 PM
I said backwards C and it does look like one. anyway What I was trying to say was lose that extension or make it go the other way imo

iselldope
11-08-2009, 04:39 PM
take please make them solid(look at my ms paint crit) that join guy also said it,if you aren't gonna listen to crits why should we give em then?

take2
11-08-2009, 04:46 PM
lol sorry I still dont really know what you mean by solid. Like even connections and no chunks inwards??if soo then srry I didnt understand what you ment. Ill take that into consideration but just chill. When empty can tries to do stuff he never listens to crits and yall dont care. But When I dont understand a crit every one is like. Omg fag there is a reason your in the toy thread blah blah balh. The reason is that I started around like two or three months ago and I'm still progressing and trying new thingds out so chill everybody.

AsherOner
11-08-2009, 04:48 PM
an exchange lol
http://i37.tinypic.com/15znof8.jpg

dude eww what the fuck

Kios2
11-08-2009, 04:55 PM
dude eww what the fuck

lol

CrAzOnEr!
11-08-2009, 04:58 PM
what the???o.0

weakfingers
11-08-2009, 05:00 PM
Nothing wrong with a little dick in a sketch or two!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7768.jpg

letsgobombin
11-08-2009, 05:05 PM
Great effect :D but admittedly my dick is neither gold nor has orange veins, that a self portrait? :D Pretty good but letters don't really match up.

iselldope
11-08-2009, 05:28 PM
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/8467/take2.jpg

i mean like this:)

iselldope
11-08-2009, 05:29 PM
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/8467/take2.jpg

i mean like this:)

mindtrix350
11-08-2009, 05:32 PM
Nothing wrong with a little dick in a sketch or two!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7768.jpg

Haha, you even have cum leaking down. Wow.

FSMone
11-08-2009, 05:42 PM
whats with everyone drawing dicks all of a sudden.
its kinda gross

you substitute a letter for a dick.. why?

Mr yarbles
11-08-2009, 05:54 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/2qtg934.jpg

Been getting into piecing, I been tag bangin for far too long

letsgobombin
11-08-2009, 05:56 PM
Get a sense of humour, it's not like everyones doing them because they're gay (except maybe weakfingers, swearing you're not gay just makes it more believable weak), iselldope, crop you images before you post them, a whole load of white space there.
Edit:Also, you say they're 'gross' but unless you're one of the few females on BS, I'd bet you got a dick too, so do you look down and think "eww, gross"?
Yarbles- I swear I remember you being better that, it's all a bit off really, the a isn't barred, the joining of the 2 sides of the w should be thicker, the z's average and the e doesn't suit the rest, keep working on it.

take2
11-08-2009, 05:57 PM
hey guys I'm thinkin of changin my name. maybe somthing like tekz toekz tozer ect... Which one sounds good. Hit me up with suggestions for other untaken names too please. I'm intrested in the letters t s z e k, but you guys can throw in other letters to make words. help me and hit me up with some ideas. thanks!

weakfingers
11-08-2009, 05:57 PM
Becuase dicks are funny as fuck. I draw them everywhere. If you cant draw a proper funny dick then you got a problem. They take little to no skills but every one has a diffrent way of drawing them. Its like a tag.

Kios2
11-08-2009, 06:01 PM
Becuase dicks are funny as fuck. I draw them everywhere. If you cant draw a proper funny dick then you got a problem. They take little to no skills but every one has a diffrent way of drawing them. Its like a tag.

Lol thats true. everyone at my skool draws dicks on desks, tables, all over the restroom.. its funny

letsgobombin
11-08-2009, 06:03 PM
Becuase dicks are funny as fuck. I draw them everywhere. If you cant draw a proper funny dick then you got a problem. They take little to no skills but every one has a diffrent way of drawing them. Its like a tag.
Did you know, apparently, no 2 dicks are alike?

EST2007
11-08-2009, 06:03 PM
hey guys I'm thinkin of changin my name. maybe somthing like tekz toekz tozer ect... Which one sounds good. Hit me up with suggestions for other untaken names too please. I'm intrested in the letters t s z e k, but you guys can throw in other letters to make words. help me and hit me up with some ideas. thanks!

asking for help with a name is wicked lame. come up with your own name.



fucking toy

Mr yarbles
11-08-2009, 06:09 PM
Yarbles- I swear I remember you being better that, it's all a bit off really, the a isn't barred, the joining of the 2 sides of the w should be thicker, the z's average and the e doesn't suit the rest, keep working on it.

Yeah man that was back in the day when I was piecin everyday
The a actually doe have a bar structure I just can't get the proportions right
THe w I know is terrible I've done better w's
It's all good I'm just tryin to get better right now so I'll take all the crits I can get.

iselldope
11-08-2009, 06:17 PM
i should try cope3 or sumtin,the name is different so it doesn't care;)

gumOnShoe
11-08-2009, 06:21 PM
i'd make the part the the bars on the W intersect thicker, and make the W thinner, cause it's pretty big compared to the rest of the letters.
i'd also make that A look more structured, like you didn't show the middle bar of the A.
the E doesn't flow with the Z either..

take2
11-08-2009, 06:24 PM
fuck you est you just look through the toy thread for when I post and call me a fag or a toy. I was Just wonderin what sounds cool and considering if I should change my name or not you dont have to be a dick about it. Get the fuck of my dick est

EST2007
11-08-2009, 06:30 PM
you're missing the point. picking ur name should have some sort of signifigance, or have some kind of meaning other than some random letters some pplez on the internets said were cool to use. you're taking the easy way out... and yes, that makes you a faggot toy

Mr yarbles
11-08-2009, 06:30 PM
i'd make the part the the bars on the W intersect thicker, and make the W thinner, cause it's pretty big compared to the rest of the letters.
i'd also make that A look more structured, like you didn't show the middle bar of the A.
the E doesn't flow with the Z either..

Yeah that w was a pretty fucked version
The other ones I've been doing are better.

Also anyone got any ideas for my z cus I really like that e...

take2
11-08-2009, 06:36 PM
my old name has significance it twasnt just random letters...

EST2007
11-08-2009, 06:39 PM
then why are u asking complete strangers to come up with a new name for u? if you've done it before, do it again. stop being lame

Kios2
11-08-2009, 06:40 PM
hey guys I'm thinkin of changin my name. maybe somthing like tekz toekz tozer ect... Which one sounds good. Hit me up with suggestions for other untaken names too please. I'm intrested in the letters t s z e k, but you guys can throw in other letters to make words. help me and hit me up with some ideas. thanks!

Trokez would look tight

Church
11-08-2009, 07:00 PM
This thread got me inspired to start doing shit again. Here are some old pics that are on my PC and photo bucket account. Some might be repeats since I'm too lazy to upload them. I plan on starting this shit up again soon. Some of these pics I might have posted here since they are so old. Crits please:p

http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02535.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02537.jpg
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http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02763.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02764.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02776.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02777.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02778.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02779.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02780.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02790.jpg
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http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02792.jpg
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http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02794.jpg
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http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02818.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02821.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02822.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02823.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC02986.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC03026.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC03027.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC03028.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC03029.jpg
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/bs%20losers/DSC03022.jpg
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take2
11-08-2009, 07:01 PM
thanx kios est what does gs mean to you???

take2
11-08-2009, 07:04 PM
Yes!!! came up with a name that means something to me. treks. can be pronounced like t-rex or just treks. gonna mess with it a little and see if I wanna keep it. Does it have your approval est??/ lol

CrAzOnEr!
11-08-2009, 07:05 PM
see what you can do for me write craz.

EST2007
11-08-2009, 07:11 PM
thanx kios est what does gs mean to you???

i dont write, i just find photos online and post them. but anyways who cares if anyone likes your name or if anyone approves. we're all complete strangers so who cares.



toy

Mr yarbles
11-08-2009, 07:37 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/1zl3jv8.jpg

Newer one, I think it's better.

Also why the fuck do you guys stretch the page then post 500000 images?

Kios2
11-08-2009, 07:57 PM
Crits please
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7808/geocolored.jpg

headsick123
11-08-2009, 07:59 PM
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/headsick123/joinpiece1finished.jpg

sinkilla1
11-08-2009, 07:59 PM
its nice i like the style

Kios2
11-08-2009, 08:03 PM
its nice i like the style

Who's?

sinkilla1
11-08-2009, 08:04 PM
yours geo the joins suxwhy would i say i like his style

Kios2
11-08-2009, 08:09 PM
yours geo the joins suxwhy would i say i like his style

o thanx. thought were talkin bout his cuz u post after it

cocacola
11-08-2009, 08:12 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2577/4088297482_b2c3553a06.jpg

Mr yarbles
11-08-2009, 08:13 PM
Fix your r z and y

Also start constructng with bars your letters and knda janky

headsick123
11-08-2009, 08:15 PM
at least i dont draw dicks faggot.

headsick123
11-08-2009, 08:17 PM
at least i dont draw dicks, faggot.

Flawless Victory
11-08-2009, 08:18 PM
aaaaaahahahahahahahaha
damn, ***** got you there.

sinkilla1
11-08-2009, 08:19 PM
least i can draw a dick with out making it look like a fucking peice of shit

gumOnShoe
11-08-2009, 08:20 PM
Ooohhhhhh ^^^

Mr yarbles
11-08-2009, 08:21 PM
Wait wut

Flawless Victory
11-08-2009, 08:22 PM
least i can draw a dick with out making it look like a fucking peice of shit
OH WORD?
http://sportsillustrated.cnn.com/extramustard/images/Seth.jpg

sinkilla1
11-08-2009, 08:23 PM
hahahahahahaha

mindtrix350
11-08-2009, 08:42 PM
OH WORD?
http://sportsillustrated.cnn.com/extramustard/images/Seth.jpg

That's who I thought of when they were talking about dicks.

headsick123- You should word on proportion and lose the arrow I.

sinkilla1
11-08-2009, 08:50 PM
head sick should work on his dick making skills cuse he be wishing he was as good as drawing dicks as me

BlacktodaFuture
11-08-2009, 08:56 PM
i know everyone here can draw dicks. but how many of you can draw a good looking vag?

-Empty-Can-
11-08-2009, 08:59 PM
like this..
( )

Flawless Victory
11-08-2009, 08:59 PM
Dude, hold on.
I can pop out a fucking GRODY vag.
I shall be posting again momentarily.

BlacktodaFuture
11-08-2009, 09:01 PM
:excited:

FSMone
11-08-2009, 09:10 PM
i was going to have a pull but i think ill wait...

Flawless Victory
11-08-2009, 09:45 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/24l7pqc.jpg
Kraken Status.
Not my best at all.
I do shit like this all the time in school, though.
I'll start posting it if y'all *****s are interested, haha.
It gets pretty creative.
Did a viking one the other day.

Mr yarbles
11-08-2009, 09:52 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/1zl3jv8.jpg


bump.

Flawless Victory
11-08-2009, 09:54 PM
No crits on my vag, holmes?

Your Z kind of looks like it could be an L to me

-Empty-Can-
11-08-2009, 09:56 PM
Looks like some kind of angry space alien.

Flawless Victory
11-08-2009, 09:57 PM
It's a kraken vag.

sinkilla1
11-08-2009, 09:59 PM
yo bro make a football playing vag lol

Flawless Victory
11-08-2009, 10:03 PM
alright, hold up

sinkilla1
11-08-2009, 10:10 PM
yo start a vag battle thread lol

Flawless Victory
11-08-2009, 10:11 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/nys41c.jpg

sinkilla1
11-08-2009, 10:14 PM
omg ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahhahaahh colorado cunts omg ahahahahahahah

xSonnyTx
11-08-2009, 10:18 PM
hahahahaha that football vag is the GREATEST thing I have ever seen in my life

sinkilla1
11-08-2009, 10:19 PM
u should gert up on walls with the football vag everyone would be wtf?

Flawless Victory
11-08-2009, 10:20 PM
I wish I had some markers and shit here.
Or a fucking canvas and some acrylic.

weakfingers
11-08-2009, 10:30 PM
^^^Real recognises real N igga
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0594.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture11.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0573.jpg

I had more but photobucket delets that shit,

Fury
11-08-2009, 11:07 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/nys41c.jpg

I can't stop laughing, this is the funniest thing I've ever seen on BS.
Yarbles - Don't like the A much.
Squint - Good, but I don't like the dick lol

suparjafar
11-08-2009, 11:22 PM
yo skuint that throwies tight, seriously

nice vaginas

Bars
11-08-2009, 11:31 PM
Just tryin stuff out

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/5314/img000098.jpg (http://img36.imageshack.us/i/img000098.jpg/)

n8galicia
11-09-2009, 12:04 AM
Bars: you got a nice style man, maybe loose the circles at the bottom

alright, here's my toy ass shit lol

http://i984.photobucket.com/albums/ae326/damanseen/Mobile%20Uploads/1107091849a.jpg

cold0
11-09-2009, 12:12 AM
yoozaa. first post.
what can i do better? i didnt use color cus i didnt wanna mess up my blackbook, but ima soon buy good quality colors..
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/5654/img0164d.th.jpg (http://img690.imageshack.us/i/img0164d.jpg/)
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/4026/img0159gj.th.jpg (http://img21.imageshack.us/i/img0159gj.jpg/)

My friend got some big ass wood plate that i can spray on, i thought on doin this one as my first piece.
http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/4162/img0160e.th.jpg (http://img682.imageshack.us/i/img0160e.jpg/)

i wrote it again since no one actually answered :(

Bars
11-09-2009, 12:38 AM
They all have waaay to much goin on in them. Try more simple, without all the arrows and wild extensions everywhere.

xSonnyTx
11-09-2009, 12:50 AM
@cold, actually someone did respond, and I agree with him wholeheartedly. Hit up the new to graffiti thread. Go simple, learn bars, and use em. Lose all the extensions, just work on writing COLD in straight block letters.

Fury
11-09-2009, 01:24 AM
And give crits to get them.

Bostonsavage
11-09-2009, 06:16 AM
Slippy Mcgee, Show these kids your book!

EST2007
11-09-2009, 06:35 AM
Slippy Mcgee, Show these kids your book!

orly?? hey slippy, where's the "wildest spot" battle?

letsgobombin
11-09-2009, 10:00 AM
From now on, anyone that doesn't give crits, doesn't get crits.
Cold- check my earlier post and despite that you might not be able to give any useful crits, try, half of getting better is knowing whats wrong.
Sets, is it?- good that you're staying simple but forget about filling, use bars and do simples and make your letters not cramped and overlapped correctly.
Bars- give crits to get 'em
Skwint- give crits to get 'em, but your throws are pretty nice.
Flawless- epic, just epic.
Yarbles- your piece ain't on the page but from what I can remember of it, it wasen't too bad but I still hate that a, it still looks to me like it's not barred, can't go into too detailed crits cus my memories hazy and I'm too lazy to go back a page.

Fury
11-09-2009, 12:28 PM
Slippy Mcgee, Show these kids your book!

If you're referring to me, you can go back about 30 pages to go look at my shit that never got crits, even though I gave a bunch. And unlike some people, I actually work on my shit and when I believe it has gotten better and looks different than from the last time I posted, I post it up.

Letsgobombin - It's always been that way. N00bs just don't know what's up.

weakfingers
11-09-2009, 01:04 PM
I give crits but Last page I was just posting some old vagina pictures.
Beside's 90% of the kids needs the same crits in this thread, use bars to make keyboard letters. Once you can do that the rest is up to you.

Cold- Go simple use keyboard letters with bars.
N8galacia- Go simple keep proportion and use bars.
Bars- Overlap your letters.


Trying to get loose!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF8949.jpg

ironcrack
11-09-2009, 01:28 PM
silly toys and your "keyboard letters". ha

StayHyE
11-09-2009, 02:41 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/2qs00fo.jpg

crits before i color this?

suparjafar
11-09-2009, 02:44 PM
looks ten times better without all that shit. a is a litle weird though. and when you added that stuff it looked like an h

Fury
11-09-2009, 03:14 PM
Don't color it.

Squint - The i extension could use a drip. Overall, I think more drips would be better, but your structure's good.

CrAzOnEr!
11-09-2009, 03:29 PM
hey fury dont i know you??OHH do you hang out with 2desil??

hpir
11-09-2009, 03:29 PM
squint-nicee
my stupid bullshit
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/grinoneeer-1.jpg
crits?

CrAzOnEr!
11-09-2009, 03:33 PM
check this out!
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/newimage.jpg

CrAzOnEr!
11-09-2009, 03:35 PM
can someone do a handstyle for Methor.

iselldope
11-09-2009, 03:37 PM
haha you suck
show them simples,i bet eel qnd him are trolls AND the same person

EST2007
11-09-2009, 03:38 PM
you have terrible/no letter structure. idk what else to say cuz pple already told u to do simplier letters yet you still post this rubbish.

CrAzOnEr!
11-09-2009, 03:42 PM
what???

stekone
11-09-2009, 03:42 PM
craze loose the crown...you arent king...well maybe king of toys....but for real so like block letters....like you know the building blocks when you was a kid and they had the ABC's.....do them shits for real

EST2007
11-09-2009, 03:43 PM
what???

you heard me. rubbish.

CrAzOnEr!
11-09-2009, 03:44 PM
ok ill try.

stekone
11-09-2009, 04:01 PM
here is a sketch i did....i dont like the top of the S but all else i do like...im gonna use this sketch as a jump off for really wilder shit once i master it

http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg54/Suppie2/IMG00106.jpg

KRE1
11-09-2009, 04:17 PM
i think the right bar of the K could use some tweaking.

xSonnyTx
11-09-2009, 04:17 PM
The only thing I don't like is how big the arrow/heart thing is at the bottom of the t.

And whats with the drips just on the bottom arrow?
All *or nothing man

stekone
11-09-2009, 04:22 PM
the drips would be i guess blood like those old school tattoo's dudes got with an arrow and a heart and usually got some random chics name in it?

-Empty-Can-
11-09-2009, 04:24 PM
Your shadow is messed up in many places.

xSonnyTx
11-09-2009, 04:25 PM
I don't know I think it looks funky but thats just me.

Your shadowing is spot on though I like that
is there a reason why there isn't any on the bottom?

stekone
11-09-2009, 04:28 PM
i know it a bit messed up, its an unfinished sketch i started it, then i had to leave, then i just snapped a quick pic of it. basically i am just trying to get a feel for the style of it. like i used to paint shit like this 10 years ago....im just trying to get my flow back lol, and get some crits from younger guys. see if i can update my style a little bit

Bars
11-09-2009, 04:41 PM
Get rid of the arrows on the T, and the arrow going through the T from the S, infact get rid of that whole extension. I would also lose that little extra piece coming outta nowhere in the middle of the E

stekone
11-09-2009, 04:43 PM
LOL that would be a dea letter simple....thanx for that crit >.>

Bars
11-09-2009, 04:49 PM
I`m not sure I understand what you are saying. But the reason I would get rid of the arrows is because they dont flow with any of your other letters, your T doesnt flow with any of the other letters, they all have this crazy style and overlap eachother but your T overlaps your S and your E, and is much more simple and has to much width.

Mr yarbles
11-09-2009, 04:56 PM
lol at the irony of Terminate Fake Bombers.

letsgobombin
11-09-2009, 05:12 PM
Sket- crits for crits
Craz- same as above but bars, bar, simples, bars man
Grin- meh, hard to crit, not because its good but simply because it's a bubble style that isn't a throwie and I can't be assed. Make sure you're using bars