Blackbooks

[RedEyes]

Stek- chill with the extensions man.
Take-Ditch both T's and make ur middle bar on ur E solid get rid of the cut.

[stekone]

word good looks, ill chill it down for a bit, i get all excited when drawing shit start throwing in random arms, and extensions and shit. like i said a 9 year off time from graff....im working on getting my style back, i know its not an over nite thing lol

[drOping]

KTRL- I like, maybe straighten the R with the rest of the letters, and just some cleanup, the extension on the K may be a tad much.

Just tried to bust one out quick, I'm disliking my vertical handy more and more every day, but anyway. Anyone feeling this L?
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/9288/1003140j.jpg

[LeaksOne]

word good looks, ill chill it down for a bit, i get all excited when drawing shit start throwing in random arms, and extensions and shit. like i said a 9 year off time from graff....im working on getting my style back, i know its not an over nite thing lol

9 years off?? how long were you at it when you first started and how old are you now?

[stekone]

right now i am almost 30 i started catching hand tags when i was like 13-14 lol....then i got serious about it...started getting down with a crew when i was like early 15, then ran with it from there. i quit because i had kids, and other shit. i painted heavily for about 5 or 6 years

[LeaksOne]

ah i see. your guna paint again or just sketch?

[stekone]

i plan on painting again...just working on getting my sketches up to par. but i have a plywood in my basement i can practice painting on all winter long

[LeaksOne]

gotcha. well good luck to ya sir.

[cocacola]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2673/4073379193_f9897ee754.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3519/4073379139_bec43f1a52.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2629/4060679487_ba9489d4d8.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2523/4061346044_7eaf2c0c93_o.jpg
bump the last 2

[suparjafar]

yesss im feelin it

stek really go simple. seriously

yeah i know my simple s is too big. sorry if thats hard to see too, i chose a bad color. crits appreciated

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0149.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0150.jpg

[LeaksOne]

snaw that throw is nice and simple. thrive off it. and stop with the dark fills. btw stek has years in the game he took 9 years off he looks like he was raw.

[stekone]

Coca those handies are yeeeesh man.......first things forst before pieces handies, throwies, simps, piece........just sayin.....but your letters are pretty decent

[suparjafar]

^thanks

reatd throw char and simps are sweeet.

and those 9 years seem to have gotten you nowhere stek

[stekone]

well yea i stopped drawing for 9 years...you kind of dont progress if you dont work it out my dude

[LeaksOne]

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60060.jpg
damn this shit is ugly

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60056.jpg
never got around to outlining this one.

crits?

[suparjafar]

fniish the second one, it looks like it would be good

[stekone]

heres a really fast dead letter i just did

http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg54/Suppie2/IMG00103.jpg

[suparjafar]

lol wut...

[PRANEONE]

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9352/picture013l.jpg

[LeaksOne]

that looks like it says sprane. careful on your p extension

[RedEyes]

Something im considering.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo30.jpg

[JR1]

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/4871/18616196.png

[JR1]

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/4871/18616196.png

[PRANEONE]

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/8929/picture014fe.jpg

[PRANEONE]

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/5021/picture021qg.jpg

http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/3048/picture022xy.jpg
http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/659/picture023t.jpg

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/5331/picture024a.jpg
keep s#@% real crew
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/8900/picture025b.jpg
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/1004/picture026nd.jpg
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/9412/picture027ef.jpg
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/5483/picture028y.jpg
http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/6568/picture029z.jpg
http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/746/picture030v.jpg
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/10/picture031i.jpg

[JR1]

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/6469/pb030214t.jpg

[JR1]

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/9139/pb030215.jpg

[JR1]

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/9767/pb030216.jpg

[suparjafar]

im really too lazy to analyze that throw but in your handie ner looks like der

[faser]

yesss im feelin it

stek really go simple. seriously

yeah i know my simple s is too big. sorry if thats hard to see too, i chose a bad color. crits appreciated

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0149.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0150.jpg

your not doin it rite

[Chippey]

Cocacola - Your letters and character are real nice, but i feel the background could use more work.

dr0ping - I think to improve your L you should take off the accent type thing on top of your e, could be mistaken for the dot of an i, I'd also recommend not curving the top of it much either. Your drips are pretty neat tho.

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn184/CH1PP3Y/vapo.jpg
- I dont have any purple pens ;[

[stekone]

heres my simps crits plz :) it was a quick sharpie sketch...just wanna know if my structure is decent


http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg54/Suppie2/IMG00103.jpg

[RedEyes]

work on your bars, here some inspiration.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/20978785@N07/

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

thats some terrible inspiration

[TheToy]

JR1 - You from Queens? This dude ain't far.

[JR1]

nah son i aint from queens yo mah ***** you write nerve?!

[TheToy]

Oh. Just wanted to give you a heads up if you were close by.

I don't write Nerve. I just see a lot of this dude's work in my area.

[JR1]

do you write graffiti?

[zennegen]

is this kid serious? nobody on this site does graffiti.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

lol this website has gotten so pathetic

[suparjafar]

your not doin it rite

wut

[take2]

use barssss

[gumOnShoe]

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/9139/pb030215.jpg



dude, your hand is looking tough.



make the right part of the N round, it looks mad awkward like that.

[sinkilla1]

http://i36.tinypic.com/b88z2q.jpg

should i fill in or not bother?

[<<Fathem>>]

Droping- Thats a sick SLEk...
Stekone- Im liking all of them, except i cant find a t in the one with the (dragon)?
Take- your still throwin out nice simples.

thephillafromma- bring that y closer, and maybee loose the small s extension at the top that makes it like a 8 without the bottom...if that makes sense...

heres a simple i drew, b needs to be bigger...and some bars i just couldnt keep consistent for somereason..crits plz?

[Neon_M@]

after some more handy practicing and bubble letter practice.

this isnt a finished piece yet, ive just filled in the borders and shades

[boodah]

Neon, lose the arrow, and go way simpler.

[harmlessart]

sin, fill it in and erase the pencil. Makes it look bad. Also, go simpler. The 3d going inwards isnt working out too well for you..

[sinkilla1]

the back of the b line should be straight the b and the l just dont flow

[harmlessart]

after some more handy practicing and bubble letter practice.

this isnt a finished piece yet, ive just filled in the borders and shades

diggin it. Make the 'tail' or w/e on the Y a bit thicker though.

[sinkilla1]

http://i34.tinypic.com/atnjtd.jpg

i started a new one ahh kinda bad lol

[sinkilla1]

http://i34.tinypic.com/x2wbco.jpg

wrong one sry

[Neon_M@]

harmless art.

if by y you mean n lol...it spells neon.
anyway i should try to go simpler next time`with my letters, but for now im just gonna finish since its too late to change anything ha.

ill post it later with my next piece

[Fury]

http://i34.tinypic.com/x2wbco.jpg

wrong one sry

Honestly, I can't read it with the blue stuff. And the left leg of the K looks too thin.

[<<Fathem>>]

Yeah id rather have crits on this instead of the other, this ones bars are more even....so plz crit this, instead of that^.

[Fury]

Go simpler, lose that extension on the B and the L, make them straight. That B could use work too.

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics787-1.jpg
I haven't drawn anything colored in a looong time.

Fathem- Pretty much exactly what Fury said. And your 3D needs work.
sinkilla1- Can't read it at all

[Neon_M@]

empty can, thats actually pretty cool to look at!
simple but good colors...just make yoour clouds look puffier, like of better word.

btw heres my finished piece

[OOPS!]

http://www.misterw.com/Graffiti/CellPhoneGraffiti.jpg

Busted. Biter.

[xSonnyTx]

^ Consistent letter sizing would help it a lot.
Also, I'm not feeling the fill at all

Edit: holy balls didn't see the bite

[drOping]

Bafl-Fix the middle of the B, The letters look flimsy, I think some where there needs to be like some solid structure to balance out some of the jelly, but hey its clean.

Stot- clean fo sho, I don't like the middle of the T's how they all skinny, overall kinda boxy for me.

I'm havin trouble making clean blends with sharpies.
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/7643/1003141m.jpg

[Neon_M@]

i was trying to find that picture so i could post it up, i saw it a while back and loved it.

i know i copied most of it but i threw in my e and o

[Flawless Victory]

What a piece of garbage to bite too, eh?

[xSonnyTx]

Well in the original piece its an "M" and a "W"...

and I'd have to say the original needs some work on structure.
Can control is amazing though

[Neon_M@]

i was just lookkin for inspiration, i wasnt meaning to bite so bad.

sorry guys! i made it seem like i made it up, shoulda posted the real before mine.

btw mister w .com has some really cool graffiti, i love his style

[Fury]

Stot, don't worry about 3D or coloring, just work on your letters. And go simpler.

[boodah]

Neon, don't even try to make excuses for that. It's a straight up and down bite. No where near "inspired by".

[Fury]

Mr. W as in mr. wiggles?
As in Graffiticreator?

GTFO.

[drOping]

bump
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/7643/1003141m.jpg

[xSonnyTx]

@slek man that is sick colors with sharpies for sure
idk I'm not feeling the K
and let the L breathe a little, don't cover it so much with the S

aaaannndd simple
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i254/motoxracer433/kyessimple.jpg
tear me a new one plz

[MeanMug]

Dig ya stylee Prane

[KRE1]

stot try making ur shit the same size... and practice making ur lines straight... and bars straight.

bafl that ish is def not my style iono man i think if you was trying to slap that on a wall it would get lined over in like 5 seconds

[iselldope]

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/4949/bean.jpg

[iselldope]

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/8365/zane.jpg

[Chippey]

Neon M@, the n at the end (supposing it is an n, it could be an r) i think needs more distinction. The rest of your letters are good. Shading is a bit off on the arrow. Cant wait to see what colours you fill it wit.

[iselldope]

where the shizzle are my critzzzellz

[Chippey]

iselldope your crits are as follows:
Between your N and E youve missed a space which needs to be shaded, and i think you should work on the orange outline and maybe add more of them blobs, style was sweet tho.

[b SQUARED 08]

And don't expect to get crits if you don't give crits...

[iselldope]

oh sorry dudes here are they:)
kyes:keep working o it,keep trying
slek:if i were you i's lose the L and wrote sek.it sounds doper and i'm sure it'll look doper.



anyone wanna exchange?

[iselldope]

oh sorry dudes here are they:)
kyes:keep working o it,keep trying
slek:if i were you i's lose the L and wrote sek.it sounds doper and i'm sure it'll look doper.



anyone wanna exchange?

[HalfGangstaShit]

i should start focusing on my straight letters more, I've been too into throws lately..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp23B.jpg

I know this shit is dirty as fuck, and the markers are fading, I didn't sketch shit though just straight marker on marker action and some whiteout for the highlights, as a matter of fact I don't think I've ever sketched something with a pencil before, letterwise that is.

CRITS

*Neon bite better next time.

*Whoever wrote that bean or w.e., I don't like the upper hole of the B, shit looks too slanted. and The N should be a capital and a little lower to add on some symmetry to it. But that's just my opinion..

*Kyes keep at it man, you're going down the right path, try making the bars just a tad thicker..

*Slek, I didn't know your name had an L until someone else mentioned it, I thought it was a dooda you added to the S. I'd write your name backwards Slek sounds tooo bland imo.

[iselldope]

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/8365/zane.jpg

[b SQUARED 08]

Slek: What is that scribble above your sketch? I see it on all of 'em, but I could never tell what it was... Anyway, you've gotta work on making your letters proportional man. The way you make the e smaller than the other letters isn't working out for ya. Your L is almost completely hidden and both your L and K have weird kinks in them. Work on your flow and keeping similar characteristics in all of your letters.
Kyes: Make your y capitalized and keep working with those simples until you feel comfortable making bends. I don't think you're ready yet though, so keep working on simps.
Bean: First off, I'd make that n capitalized since your other letters are as well. You've got some areas with bends, where there are mostly sharp angles. Fix that by picking one and keeping it consistent throughout. Work on making your letters all the same size and on the same level. I like the throw on your second pic, just clean it up a little bit. Your hands need a lot of work (as do mine lol).
Knar: Your N is the only decent looking letter there, and notice that it is the simplest. That means you should take your other letters down a level and go simpler. That way, all of your letters will have similarities and look better together. Your coloring isn't bad, but it could definitely use some cleaning up. Get your simps down first though.

And finally working on one that I'll actually fill the page on lol. Comments/ crits are appreciated as always...
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_9886.jpg

[Fury]

Slek - Not digging the L, but it's decent.
Kyes - Work on the S.
Knar - Work on the R.
BSquared - Not digging the typeface, but it looks fresh.

[401Son]

http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00457.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00459.jpg
^^fucked up on it so jus kept fucking wit it
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00456.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00458.jpg
should have never gone wit a orange forcefield -_-

[-Empty-Can-]

stot try making ur shit the same size... and practice making ur lines straight... and bars straight.

My lines and bars are straight.

My letters are the same size except for the S

[KRE1]

dood. you had drawn bubbles and said they are letters. i mean, i know im pretty bad but i mean come on.

and the other one looks like lego blocks on circles... im just saying man that its illegible and imo looks pretty bad... i would just work on bubble letters and really simple stuff... take the advice how u want to.

[Flawless Victory]

My lines and bars are straight.

My letters are the same size except for the S
Why does it still look like shit, then?

[b SQUARED 08]

Slek: What is that scribble above your sketch? I see it on all of 'em, but I could never tell what it was... Anyway, you've gotta work on making your letters proportional man. The way you make the e smaller than the other letters isn't working out for ya. Your L is almost completely hidden and both your L and K have weird kinks in them. Work on your flow and keeping similar characteristics in all of your letters.
Kyes: Make your y capitalized and keep working with those simples until you feel comfortable making bends. I don't think you're ready yet though, so keep working on simps.
Bean: First off, I'd make that n capitalized since your other letters are as well. You've got some areas with bends, where there are mostly sharp angles. Fix that by picking one and keeping it consistent throughout. Work on making your letters all the same size and on the same level. I like the throw on your second pic, just clean it up a little bit. Your hands need a lot of work (as do mine lol).
Knar: Your N is the only decent looking letter there, and notice that it is the simplest. That means you should take your other letters down a level and go simpler. That way, all of your letters will have similarities and look better together. Your coloring isn't bad, but it could definitely use some cleaning up. Get your simps down first though.

And finally working on one that I'll actually fill the page on lol. Comments/ crits are appreciated as always...
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/IMG_9886.jpg

Bottom page bump!

[KRE1]

b squared i think the middle bar of the E shouldnt be bent downward like it is and should stay straight. you didnt bend any of the bottom bars of your letters on the left and then you did on the right... i would make it uniform and not bend them like how you have your J. you know wat i mean?

[-Empty-Can-]

dood. you had drawn bubbles and said they are letters. i mean, i know im pretty bad but i mean come on.

and the other one looks like lego blocks on circles... im just saying man that its illegible and imo looks pretty bad... i would just work on bubble letters and really simple stuff... take the advice how u want to.

What are you talking about? The last picture I posted? That one isn't the bubble style.

[Fury]

He's telling you to do bubble letters.

Or not? Mah bad.

[KRE1]

i must be mistaken. arent you the dood who posted that flick of the black bubbles with that yellow/green highlighter outline...? those were straight up circles. no form. no nothin. just saying.

[KRE1]

and that post you threw up in the throwie thread... i dont wanna quote it and take up a lot of space but if you go back and look at it... your 'letters' really dont have any defintion. i remember you saying that its a matter of "style difference" but dood im pretty sure that is no style at all. dont mean to be harsh but im just saying that to get better i think it would be a good idea to get out of that style because its holding you back.

[CrAzOnEr!]

Bottom page bump!

lol i like this pic did you sketch first?

[suparjafar]

i dont have crits


http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0154.jpg sweet crayola washables, yea i know i fucked that up really bad

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0153.jpg

ignore arrows

[drOping]

I write Slek, and I was putting a dash over the e to make it sound like sleek. I just don't really like the way the dash looks anymore. As for the scribbles above my name it just says J M some times I put an 09 at the end.

[401Son]

http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00457.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00459.jpg
^^fucked up on it so jus kept fucking wit it
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00456.jpg
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00458.jpg
should have never gone wit a orange forcefield -_- bump cus i was the last on the page

[suparjafar]

2nd to last one is good

[401Son]

good looks yo

[stekone]

looking good snoe :)

[LeaksOne]

i dont have crits


http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0154.jpg sweet crayola washables, yea i know i fucked that up really bad

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0153.jpg

ignore arrows

ok im guna be the first to say this. stop with the fills altogether. i dont care if you get a brand new pack of prismas just stop. focus on your letters before you start doin fills and learn to stop using dark colors when you get back to fills

[suparjafar]

k

[KtRL.]

Slek- you shit looks great, i would suggest messing around with letter structures and shit, like all caps or something.. shits looking dope though.
some new shit i drews in second period.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00357.jpghttp://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00356.jpg

[Fury]

Not digging the K on the second one. Lose the left extension. The T's middle bar is messed up too. The R's middle needs to be fixed too

[b SQUARED 08]

b squared i think the middle bar of the E shouldnt be bent downward like it is and should stay straight. you didnt bend any of the bottom bars of your letters on the left and then you did on the right... i would make it uniform and not bend them like how you have your J. you know wat i mean?
Yeah, I've played around with both of those and wasn't too keen on how it looked. It looked a little too boxy for what I'm going for, but it's a style I just started working on.

lol i like this pic did you sketch first?
Yessir. Notebooks until I sketched something I kinda like, then try it out on sketch paper. Workin' with simps for now.

EDIT: 401Son: Both of your BFK sketches need some work as far as the letters go. Forget about the cool designs and backrounds for now. Focus on making sure each letter is constructed of bars of similar with similar widths and bends. If that makes sense to you, that's what you should work on. I do like your first SNOE one aside from the BFK ribbon on your O.

[RedEyes]

B-Squad- Nice very solid and proportional
SNoe- i like it, i got a buddy that uses that style and your can pull it off well.

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo26.jpg
Any crits?

[gumOnShoe]

you're progressing, man.
try making that spaded I a bit thicker on the top.

Edit:
fuck it, make the whole I thicker.

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics788-1.jpg
simplicity
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics790-1.jpg

sico- I don't like that heart shape at the bottom of the I.

[drOping]

Yo SICO- I really like that, you should switch up the colors and go paint that on a wall, like really big!

Stot- sorry but imo the first one is wack, the second one is solid for sure though, I like the capital T's

[gumOnShoe]

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics788-1.jpg
simplicity
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics790-1.jpg

sico- I don't like that heart shape at the bottom of the I.

i'm usually not too harsh w/ people, but i have to agree with everybody else, the First Stot is a piece of shit...... like i said before, it looks like oC!o!
make it actually look like letters next time. it's not like this is the first time you've posted that thing, either.

on the second one, it's IIGHT, but you FUCKED UP THAT 3D on the top half of the piece it's like it's 3D below, but Flat up top.

[RedEyes]

Thanks, i like maken my "I" smaller so it over laps the S and C idk just the style im working with right now.

[-Empty-Can-]

Everyone says that first style is shit. But personally it's one of my favorites. It's a matter of preference but I like it and I'm gonna keep using it.

I know i fucked up on the 3D. Especially on the right side of the second T. I was gonna do something else but decided to change it.

[gumOnShoe]

alright man, i'll fuck off, i'm just telling you that you'll stay the same if you keep on like that...
also, i get that you're trying something new, but atleast give give the shit proper structure so it won't be a guessing game for people to read.

[drOping]

Yo sico dude its Ill when u gonna paint that????? Stot, do what makes you feel good!

[suparjafar]

^^yeah really, shits solid

[Fury]

drOping got banned?
Anyway, the second STOT is off in some area (fill is too), but the first one is weird.

Sico - Alright but you gotta work on the I.

[KRE1]

dood... empty... i think we all just are trying to tell you that in the streets that would look bad... why not try something new and grow from there ya dig? dont be so hardheaded bout that "style"

[LeaksOne]

Everyone says that first style is shit. But personally it's one of my favorites. It's a matter of preference but I like it and I'm gonna keep using it.

I know i fucked up on the 3D. Especially on the right side of the second T. I was gonna do something else but decided to change it.

while gum is fucking off im guna fuck on. although you think that style is nice and unique it looks like shit and doesnt say stot. you need to do simple shit before you try some shit like that. scrap it stop posting it. your not making any changes to make it say stot so just stop posting it. paint it if youd like but its shit. im sick of bein nice. you need to work on your simple shit too

[weakfingers]

Ktrl-Go alot simpler... like ALOT. Your trying to much shit. and your whole peice with all the addons look's like ive seen all then befor. could it be that where from the same area lol.
Redeyes-Its basic so i cant hate but justfix the end of the S on the bottom, loose the connection to the i.
Emptycans-first one blows and the second on looks leik its been done with a ruler.





Havent drawn in about a month.
Freestyles a peice for seid and i think it turned out funkey, but in reality it probably looks bad.....sorry seid
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/squint.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/seid-1.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

Yeah man, I'm not feelin that.

The drips on the S are wonky as hell, you gotta work on making them smoother.
The bottom of the E is too short, and the arrow in the middle is completely fucking it up.



That skwint is straight, though.
Though the top part of the K could be a bit longer.



Stot- PLEASE keep doing that shit on the bottom.

[ironcrack]

more aero's .

[weakfingers]

thank FV for the crits, Fuck, im stilll pretty rusty but am getting back into drawing more.The arrow extentions look so ugly now that im looking at it on a screen, when I first did It i was so pumped. heres the more simpler version I did for him but dont like how the E looks.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/3-6.jpg

[sex without condoms]

Word is bond my ni gga

[Church]

Ktrl-Go alot simpler... like ALOT. Your trying to much shit. and your whole peice with all the addons look's like ive seen all then befor. could it be that where from the same area lol.
Redeyes-Its basic so i cant hate but justfix the end of the S on the bottom, loose the connection to the i.
Emptycans-first one blows and the second on looks leik its been done with a ruler.





Havent drawn in about a month.
Freestyles a peice for seid and i think it turned out funkey, but in reality it probably looks bad.....sorry seid
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/squint.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/seid-1.jpg
I fucking like this. It needs a lot of work, but the style itself has potential.
-less arrows
-cleaner lines
-work on getting a stronger letter structure, especially the S and A
Good stuff
-nice color scheme
-nice letter proportion
-good flow, all the letters at least match each other

First pic is better than the second, but I like both of em. If you keep practicing that will look good.

[weakfingers]

Im kinda wanna work on a more edvanced style like the seid one but im just really lazy and unmotivated to draw. I'll try to clean it up N' shit I was just freestylin when I drew it. Btw the last Letter was sappoused to be a D not an Athe extention just make it look that way.

[PRANEONE]

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/8177/picture032ag.jpg

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3708/picture033df.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

Emptycans and the second on looks leik its been done with a ruler.
Straight up freehand :D


Anyway, the second STOT is off in some area (fill is too), but the first one is weird.
How is the fill off? I meant for the sides of the O to be colored unevenly.

[suparjafar]

prane do simps. and stot fuck that style, it doesnt look like stot

bored in class today, snawoner sketch

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/snawoner.jpg

[iselldope]

http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/8393/zane2.jpg

[401Son]

Yeah, I've played around with both of those and wasn't too keen on how it looked. It looked a little too boxy for what I'm going for, but it's a style I just started working on.

Yessir. Notebooks until I sketched something I kinda like, then try it out on sketch paper. Workin' with simps for now.

EDIT: 401Son: Both of your BFK sketches need some work as far as the letters go. Forget about the cool designs and backrounds for now. Focus on making sure each letter is constructed of bars of similar with similar widths and bends. If that makes sense to you, that's what you should work on. I do like your first SNOE one aside from the BFK ribbon on your O.

good looks but yea thr bfk simps where jus fuck arounds

[cocacola]

instead of reatd i use reatrz and my old name ..crus
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2657/4080789359_21c26aa474.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2519/4081550454_7095411cda.jpg

[Neon_M@]

weakfingers

i actually like yours a lot, its just not very clean.
like everyone says be simpler, dont make so many adjustments to letters, work slowly, graduallyy getting better. correcting what you did wrong last time, and thats easier to do when you only have 1 mistake to it.

[Chippey]

Neon M@ your N looks too much like a H and id drop the pointed thing on the bottom right of the N, it just looks out of place.

[KtRL.]

bump..

Slek- you shit looks great, i would suggest messing around with letter structures and shit, like all caps or something.. shits looking dope though.
some new shit i drews in second period.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00357.jpghttp://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00356.jpg

[sinkilla1]

http://i33.tinypic.com/2vkb2nq.jpg
i did this on my belly so i had to do it upside down lol dont ask me why lol
http://i38.tinypic.com/xgi9aa.jpg
any one like this one
and my philly hands u like?
http://i37.tinypic.com/2us915y.jpg

[Fury]

Straight up freehand :D


How is the fill off? I meant for the sides of the O to be colored unevenly.

That's what I was referring to. It just doesn't look good like that, seeing as everything else is uniform.

[xSonnyTx]

Honk in the second one I think you scrimped on the k
The top right bar is tiny and looks way out of place with the rest of the word

And not trying to start anything but what gives people the urge to write ONER instead of One? Honestly I think its toy as fuck but I'm just wondering what people think

[sinkilla1]

yeah i noticed that too lol but overall do you like it and i wrote one look right above it it says honk one the wicked was supposed to have a face there but i messed up

[suparjafar]

i dont write snaw "oner" i just did it for that sketch

[TheToy]

Dude wrote Hunk on his own stomach. That's fuckin' awesome. Hahaha.

[LeaksOne]

he definitely wrote honk. and why the hell did you do that?

[TheToy]

That 'O' definately looks like a 'U'.

[408Bomber]

http://i33.tinypic.com/2q0m6pk.jpg

[iselldope]

http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/9746/zane3.jpg

Crits.
408:change the s man
honk:2ND IS allright but listen: DON'T WRITE ON YOUR OWN BELLY,FUCK MAN.
krtl:do simps
cocacola:like it man,fill it in!

[408Bomber]

Crits.
408:change the s man
honk:2ND IS allright but listen: DON'T WRITE ON YOUR OWN BELLY,FUCK MAN.
krtl:do simps
cocacola:like it man,fill it in!

I was gunna move the arrow more into the middle but idk i wanna make a totaly new S.

[iselldope]

do guys see my picture in my last post?

heres another one

http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/9853/zane5.jpg

[iselldope]

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/7516/zane6.jpg

and another one

[Kios2]

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/3007/kios0002.jpg (http://img20.imageshack.us/i/kios0002.jpg/)

[iselldope]

simps man,wanna do an exchange now?i'll start now

[Fury]

Dope - Work on your bars. Your N in your throw is really weird too

[cocacola]

iselldope: nice man , i like those simps add some coloing schemes to em', maybe a rainbow fuity color one. :: and i might fill in the reatrz or whatever you told me to fill in
i redid my entry again fo the apeshit

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2697/4084166904_5550a14a14.jpg

[take2]

pure fuck around
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/4bcc9825.jpg
The ape shit is pretty nice but wierd colors. zanes are pretty good for simples just clean em up a bit and work on fills thought i shouldnt be talking after that insanely random fill in the bottom left one.

[iselldope]

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/8377/zane7.jpg

i dont know any fruity rainbow fills lol,gimme an example,this is al i could do

[suparjafar]

one on the rights looking decent take, and zane looks like zare but other than that looks good

[l3monade]

iselldope- keep ur bars in porportion

[suparjafar]

sweet sketchin

[sinkilla1]

It says hunk lol i thought it would be funny but now i cant get it off fuck sharpies and decos
http://i33.tinypic.com/s5l09d.jpg

[sketch3]

I cant wait till natural selection catches up with you

[sinkilla1]

what lol

[CrAzOnEr!]

hey take i meet you befor right???

[Werse]

It says hunk lol i thought it would be funny but now i cant get it off fuck sharpies and decos
http://i33.tinypic.com/s5l09d.jpg

Your gonna die of xylene poisoning mannn.

[sinkilla1]

nah dude ill beofihaslofjaslfjasefoejasflsejflsejflsejfsl;ejfls ejeslkfdj ......dead

[CrAzOnEr!]

what??? nice deco tat..lolz

[letsgobombin]

Hunk- Stick with bars or work on your throws.
Zane- you're on the right track, spend the time you use filling on doing more simps, remember to keep your letters proportional.
Take- go simpler, as above, spend your filling time sketching.
Coca cola- meh, it's not great, the fill distracts alot from the letters which in this case just covers up the flaws in the letters so take that how you will, comparing with the slate battle it seems that style is hit and miss so keep working on it and hope you come out with something decent. Characs pretty good, hat is messed up though.
Kios- doesn't seem too bad, make the i and o proportioned and at the moment focus more on the letters than the add ons.
Ashley- 1. I wouldn't go writing my name 2. If not, it's a pretty bad tag, I'm guessing it was for a mate, stick to simple bars and overlap your letters.

[take2]

hey take i meet you befor right???

Maybe? where do you live

[sinkilla1]

oh come on lets go bombing it was on my own stomach i wanna see you right good on your own stomahc..

[letsgobombin]

True, true, then again, I never plan to draw on my own stomach and for a good reason, keep sketching and maybe you'll get to do it across some girls ass one day if you're lucky.

[suparjafar]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7583&d=1257642457 bump to next page

[sinkilla1]

maybe lol but ima catholic school kid maybe i can get a cross on there ass lol

[letsgobombin]

Get with some of those catholic school girls :p
Snaw- you're on the right track, the more you draw the faster you'll progress (in theory), overlap your letters though, keep at it.

[sinkilla1]

yo snaw once you get going at straights you can add curves or something of your own style man i think your ready for start adding some hmmph

[Stussy]

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/2141/photo975.jpg
New sketch

[sinkilla1]

yo thats fucking sick but is that a s or an e at the end

[weakfingers]

I really like that Nerdy A character.

[CrAzOnEr!]

Maybe? where do you live

i live in hartford ct. are you with mdk?

[CrustOner]

Stussy, your shit just keeps getting better and better. Keep it up. I don't know about that saw thing at the tip of your Z, though.

[Flawless Victory]

STUSSY- DOPE DOPE DOPE DOPE MY NlGGA

[weakfingers]

Fuck I feel so bad posting right after stussy ahahaha.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF8911.jpg

[take2]

God DAM!! The one day I try making a character out of a letter (just a face) someone has to do the same thig about six posts before me!!.
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/1a345a4f.jpg
Skuint that shit is dope except whats up with the line under the U?
Rays love your style clean

[CrAzOnEr!]

looks good do you live in ct??

[take2]

nope i live in IN

[CrAzOnEr!]

ohh thers a take in ct.

[iselldope]

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7865/41375648.jpg
stussy:dope
skuint:i don't like the colours
take:make the bars solid

[take2]

really? that sucks I'll google him
anyway I put a two after my name just in case

[iselldope]

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7865/41375648.jpg
stussy:dope
skuint:i don't like the colours
take:make the bars solid

[take2]

really? that sucks I'll google him
anyway I put a two after my name just in case

[take2]

i found a "taker" my name is different I don't bite and i have a two soo i think its all good

[CrAzOnEr!]

ohh ok yea his name is just takehe is beast i ll get some flicks

[take2]

what?? make the bars solid??. my bars are pretty solid there just sketchy cus I messed up in outlining and I have a shitty cell phone camera

[CrAzOnEr!]

yea i hate making my bars solid it weird to me

[iselldope]

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/8565/take.jpg

[CrAzOnEr!]

what the you messed with his simp!

[iselldope]

he didn't understood my crit so i show him.

[take2]

lol your stuppid for all thos examples there are TWO SEPARATE BARSS. abrs can be barely connected to add a little spice to your piece. If you take about twenty minutes and look through graffiti in these forums then you will see that bars do not have to be rectangles. they can be rhombuses or rhombi or w/e

[iselldope]

relax man,i was just trying to help,fuck i think seperate bars look like shit in this simp

[EST2007]

lol your stuppid for all thos examples there are TWO SEPARATE BARSS. abrs can be barely connected to add a little spice to your piece. If you take about twenty minutes and look through graffiti in these forums then you will see that bars do not have to be rectangles. they can be rhombuses or rhombi or w/e

stfu faggot. you're in the fucking toy forum for a reason, so take any and all crit into consideration. if you don't care for his crit (which actually does make sense once the ms paint fixes were shown) then ignore it.

blah blah blah its just graffiti.. shit its not even graffiti, it's just book work. graffiti actually means going out and doing something

[CrAzOnEr!]

cool well how can i fix this then.
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/WILDSTYLE.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

I literally said "WOAH" out loud.
You can't fix that, man.
Do simples.

[CrAzOnEr!]

is it that bad can you give me tips on how to do wildstyle better?

[Flawless Victory]

Yeah, don't do it. Just do simples.
That's pretty much the best tip you can get at this point.

[CrAzOnEr!]

simps are easy for me i wanted to try somthing more challenging.But ill try some simps and post them later.

[401Son]

stay with simpz, simps go on 4 ever, u can never finsh coming up with styles with simps, so that y u dont got in down just yet, keep simps coming an dont try 2 rush into a style u aint ready 4

[sinkilla1]

never make a nother wildstyle u litterally nvm thats not even a wild style just a wild cause u have no style

[gumOnShoe]

simps are easy for me i wanted to try somthing more challenging.But ill try some simps and post them later.

are simps easy for you? let's see one.

[BlacktodaFuture]

Simples!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

[MarsWTF]

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s47/va1con/2009-11-0816-41-05508.jpg

First ever dub attempt? The R is rubbish. But what do you guys think? Any constructive criticism? I need help on the R. Thanks.

[AsherOner]

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/2141/photo975.jpg
New sketch

thats fucking amazing..

[AsherOner]

http://i36.tinypic.com/15foi77.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/vhrog0.jpg

these are both about a month old.. i changed my name from casper to asher
im working on a sketch for asher right now so ill post it up in a little

[CrustOner]

That second one would be so much cooler if you left the antennae, the stars, and the lame fucking arrows out. and if that E was lowercase. and if the R was a little more to the right so you could see both legs. The first one is terrible.

[MarsWTF]

AsherOner - I like the bottom one, I think the yellow and red looks great, but Im not liking the way the C is so far away from the rest of the letters on the top one. Doesnt seem right to me, but thats just my opinion, right? Good job though.

[take2]

which one do you guys like the best...
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/bd4c4bd0.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/c5129f6a.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/22afa36e.jpg

[sinkilla1]

the last one is the only descent one

[Kios2]

which one do you guys like the best...
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/bd4c4bd0.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/c5129f6a.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/22afa36e.jpg

I like the last one
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/4231/kiossimp.jpg
I tried to do a simp

[AsherOner]

the last one is good.. the other two are pretty bad

[Fury]

That second one would be so much cooler if you left the antennae, the stars, and the lame fucking arrows out. and if that E was lowercase. and if the R was a little more to the right so you could see both legs. The first one is terrible.

Holy fuck Crust, where the hell'd you go?

[MarsWTF]

Kios2 - It's a pretty good attempt, maybe try and squash it up abit, close the gap between the letters. Maybe add some color? Good attempt though, nice. Also look at the proportion between the letters.

[letsgobombin]

Take- lose all those extensions, the second one is where you should be keeping it and as said before, although it's your choice, I wouldn't bother doing any filling til youre better, spend the time sketching.
Kios- simpler and overlap your letters.
Casper- the first one is crap, the second one needs to lose the add-ons and gimmicks and go simpler for now, stick with something like the a.
Rays- fresh, although the top of the z is a bit dodgy.
Var- simpler just straight bars for now, and overlap your letters from left to right. Your r doesn't match the rest simple that up as well.
Craz- shit man, simples, simples, simples, don't worry about wildstyle for at least a few years.

[cold0]

yoozaa. first post.
what can i do better? i didnt use color cus i didnt wanna mess up my blackbook, but ima soon buy good quality colors..
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/5654/img0164d.th.jpg (http://img690.imageshack.us/i/img0164d.jpg/)
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/4026/img0159gj.th.jpg (http://img21.imageshack.us/i/img0159gj.jpg/)

My friend got some big ass wood plate that i can spray on, i thought on doin this one as my first piece.
http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/4162/img0160e.th.jpg (http://img682.imageshack.us/i/img0160e.jpg/)

[Kios2]

Kios2 - It's a pretty good attempt, maybe try and squash it up abit, close the gap between the letters. Maybe add some color? Good attempt though, nice. Also look at the proportion between the letters.

Sounds dumb but... Whats Proportion?

[letsgobombin]

Keep your letters the same size, and relatively same thickness. Don't worry bout colour yet.
Cold- simples and bars man, new to graffiti thread.

[MarsWTF]

What he said ^^. haha

[Kios2]

A exchange
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/9771/exchange.jpg

[sinkilla1]

an exchange lol
http://i37.tinypic.com/15znof8.jpg

[sinkilla1]

an exchange lol
http://i37.tinypic.com/15znof8.jpg

[Kios2]

an exchange lol
http://i37.tinypic.com/15znof8.jpg

lol

[n8galicia]

no homo lol

[Kios2]

For a friend at skool. Crits?
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/9134/geo0002v.jpg

[take2]

messin around
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/9c1adfeb.jpg
critzzz

[headsick123]

scanner went a little funky. but you get the idea, gonna finish it later tonight, would appreciate some crits first tho. THANKS DUDES!

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/headsick123/JoinPiece1.jpg

CRITS:
TAKE2- Close that "A" up, make the bridge on it wider too, it looks odd how it is i think. also straighten out your "K" bars, they get fat in the middles and thats not consistent, stay simple and consistent, make all your letters take up around the same amount of space. also maybe get rid of that cut in the T.

CASPER- I like the second one, nice and clean. looks pretty dope. the first one tho, too much goin on, the C hanging out there is ugly, make it the same size, bring it closer you know. also speard the letters apart a little bit i think it will look much better.

[take2]

dich the arrow on the i, the bar bends dont flow and the j looks like a backwards c

[funhouseXcast]

^then you're making you C's wrong

[headsick123]

lol

[take2]

I said backwards C and it does look like one. anyway What I was trying to say was lose that extension or make it go the other way imo

[iselldope]

take please make them solid(look at my ms paint crit) that join guy also said it,if you aren't gonna listen to crits why should we give em then?

[take2]

lol sorry I still dont really know what you mean by solid. Like even connections and no chunks inwards??if soo then srry I didnt understand what you ment. Ill take that into consideration but just chill. When empty can tries to do stuff he never listens to crits and yall dont care. But When I dont understand a crit every one is like. Omg fag there is a reason your in the toy thread blah blah balh. The reason is that I started around like two or three months ago and I'm still progressing and trying new thingds out so chill everybody.

[AsherOner]

an exchange lol
http://i37.tinypic.com/15znof8.jpg

dude eww what the fuck

[Kios2]

dude eww what the fuck

lol

[CrAzOnEr!]

what the???o.0

[weakfingers]

Nothing wrong with a little dick in a sketch or two!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7768.jpg

[letsgobombin]

Great effect :D but admittedly my dick is neither gold nor has orange veins, that a self portrait? :D Pretty good but letters don't really match up.

[iselldope]

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/8467/take2.jpg

i mean like this:)

[iselldope]

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/8467/take2.jpg

i mean like this:)

[mindtrix350]

Nothing wrong with a little dick in a sketch or two!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7768.jpg

Haha, you even have cum leaking down. Wow.

[FSMone]

whats with everyone drawing dicks all of a sudden.
its kinda gross

you substitute a letter for a dick.. why?

[Mr yarbles]

http://i35.tinypic.com/2qtg934.jpg

Been getting into piecing, I been tag bangin for far too long

[letsgobombin]

Get a sense of humour, it's not like everyones doing them because they're gay (except maybe weakfingers, swearing you're not gay just makes it more believable weak), iselldope, crop you images before you post them, a whole load of white space there.
Edit:Also, you say they're 'gross' but unless you're one of the few females on BS, I'd bet you got a dick too, so do you look down and think "eww, gross"?
Yarbles- I swear I remember you being better that, it's all a bit off really, the a isn't barred, the joining of the 2 sides of the w should be thicker, the z's average and the e doesn't suit the rest, keep working on it.

[take2]

hey guys I'm thinkin of changin my name. maybe somthing like tekz toekz tozer ect... Which one sounds good. Hit me up with suggestions for other untaken names too please. I'm intrested in the letters t s z e k, but you guys can throw in other letters to make words. help me and hit me up with some ideas. thanks!

[weakfingers]

Becuase dicks are funny as fuck. I draw them everywhere. If you cant draw a proper funny dick then you got a problem. They take little to no skills but every one has a diffrent way of drawing them. Its like a tag.