Blackbooks

[BlacktodaFuture]

sinkilla won, but you both still suck

BARS!!!

that is all.

[KidReny!]

if only he had listend
sink u won............
by default

[sinkilla1]

lol its a lil simpler
http://i48.tinypic.com/1ttrgg.jpg

[suparjafar]

LOL sinkilla wins by far
i actually like that throwie though ^^

[sinkilla1]

it looked better before i filled it

[KinkyStab]

What an epic battle!

[sinkilla1]

i feel the sarcasm

[sinkilla1]

aighty then i wanna see youll do better not saying you cant but lets have the whole toy thread do a alien piece

[zennegen]

sinkilla won. obviously.

[-Empty-Can-]

Now that I look at it again, mine is complete shit.

[suparjafar]

it took a second glance?

[zennegen]

now that i look at it again, mine is complete shit.

naaaaaww rly?!

[Flawless Victory]

http://i50.tinypic.com/se3ntz.jpg

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo40.jpg

[faser]

http://divisionoflabour.com/archives/alien_from_the_movie.png

[Flawless Victory]

Dope character, dude.

[cocacola]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2520/4129353341_e853193d46.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2660/4129353235_c91bb18dff.jpg

[Aktag]

@cocacola
I like last the most, good work.

Here's another try:
http://www.shrani.si/f/E/fj/32NP9YjI/asdad.jpg
Crits/Comments ?

[RedEyes]

solid, now do this 100 times over then u can add flava.

[Aktag]

That's just what i'm trying to do ^^ Thanks

[Reincarnation]

Crits? Anyone? http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/2561/braka.jpg (http://img256.imageshack.us/i/braka.jpg/)

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/ShoppingCenter.jpgcrits

cocacola - where did you get those freight sheets?

aktag- nice simple

reincarnation - try to space your letters a little so you can see the whole letter. Lose that bar on the B and go a little simpler

[take2]

Here's a freestyle dine in school from Friday
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/2397a753.jpg
messed up the e
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/2130c28b.jpg

bumpin cus so many ethugs in her i cant get a decent crit. Its like 5 pages since I posted this and not one crit. Half of these pages are all talk.

[Aktag]

Thanks Empty-Can, too bad you run out of space :P

@Reincarnation
I'd say same as Empty-Can.

@Take2
I like both pieces, but i like 2nd one more. Got pretty simple letters and they are done good and clean, good work.


Quick sketch done in school :P
http://www.shrani.si/f/2v/Aj/18tVlqpf/untitled.jpg
Crits ?

[laks420]

i still think the K would look better with out the legs curling like that

[Reincarnation]

Alrighty! lol

[Fury]

Stot - I don't know how often people have said it but go simple. Simple means keyboard letters.
Aktag - Good.
Skore - Your first R is really off. The second piece makes up for it.
Reincarnation - Go simple, copy keyboard letters, lose the B extension, it looks bad.
Coca - I really like that third one.

[Fury]

Stot - I don't know how often people have said it but go simple. Simple means keyboard letters.
Aktag - Good.
Skore - Your first R is really off. The second piece makes up for it.
Reincarnation - Go simple, copy keyboard letters, lose the B extension, it looks bad.
Coca - I really like that third one.

[iller.than.AIDS]

Crits anyone??
http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/4619/glum1.jpg

Stot - simpler man, keep your bars straight, stop with the add-ons
Aktag - lookin pretty ill, keep it up bro
Coca - like fury said, the third one looks pretty icey, keep it up

[Aktag]

@iller.than.AIDS
I don't like that add on letter M, otherwise it's good.

[funhouseXcast]

TAKE- by freestyle you mean?

[jiveONE]

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4835/31043605.jpg (http://img222.imageshack.us/i/31043605.jpg/)

[n8galicia]

jive, i dont really feel the v. im digging everything else though

now how bout some of my toy shit..

http://i984.photobucket.com/albums/ae326/damanseen/Mobile%20Uploads/1124091337a.jpg

[FormulaQ]

That taco shit is the official worst thing ive ever seen on bombing science. I havent posted in years and that is so fucking bad i want to puke. You have absolutely zero artistic talent and youre probably slightly retarded. Please quit graffiti forever, and never post on these forums again. That is truely the saddest thing i have ever seen, you are pathetic, and suck too bad to even call yourself a man.

[iller.than.AIDS]

@formulaQ - lmfao, i almost shit my pants..
@n8galicia - keep it more simple, check the new to graff thread, and work on your bars...

[iller.than.AIDS]

@formulaQ - lmfao, i almost shit my pants..
@n8galicia - keep it more simple, check the new to graff thread, and work on your bars...

http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/4619/glum1.jpg

Crits folks??

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

honestly dude. thats really bad. is that the first time using a writing utensil? there is a thread called new to graffiti. thats where you need to go. right this second. i don't care what your doing...i dont care if your eating or getting dressed for your school dance or fuckin your girl or giving mouth to mouth to a dying baby. you know whats killing that baby? it saw your shitty ass scribblings and laughed to death. the baby is dead. so just drop that thing on the ground and make your way to the new to graffiti thread now. not you glum. that was to taco.

[Nyc Sno]

http://i49.tinypic.com/2po9xy9.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/2lmv59x.jpg
crits?....any idea on what i should put inside the d

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

i thought you were gonna do a peace sign?

[iller.than.AIDS]

yoo freeek was that post directed at me, cause it was under my post..?

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

if you look its to taco lmao i like yours. your doing what you should. props

[n8galicia]

Naw dude, my friends think Im gangsta becuz I do graffitis. I'm way better than you guyz lolz.


that's like my first piece without bars; my bad for polluting the thread...lol

[Nyc Sno]

i thought you were gonna do a peace sign?
i tried the peace sign it came out whack so i think im gonna go with the area code or just something random

[canadianchronic]

Here's one i just did as well as one i already posted but still looking for crits.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=386&pictureid=2751
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=386&pictureid=2752

[massacreman]

no pic included you yew

[ironcrack]

any one who says "use keyboard letters" is dumb. dumb dumb dumb retarded

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/simple.jpg\
is this simpler?

[mawks]

learn how to use bars already...
how long have you been on this site now without learning a thing?
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f182/rogan181/page2.jpg

[TheToy]

Like we haven't all seen those letters already. Learn to graff dot com?

Lolzunerd.

[n8galicia]

honestly, how can you tell if someone is not using bars..is it because you think their piece is wack?

[mawks]

Like we haven't all seen those letters already. Learn to graff dot com?

Lolzunerd.
more like new to graff thread?
you should take a look at that too


honestly, how can you tell if someone is not using bars..is it because you think their piece is wack?

if you knew how to use bars you would be able to tell if someone is using them or not.
also, you would be able to see the the progress lines

[TheToy]

more like new to graff thread?
you should take a look at that too


http://www.owlpages.com/the-owls/pictures/orly_owl.jpg

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

if some one if using bar the right way their line will be clean and letter thickness should be a little easier to control

[Aktag]

Simples.
I don't like Gs, and i really don't know what I was thinking when i was making that "fill-in", it just sucks.

http://www.shrani.si/f/17/N7/3eOENV3Y/aktag2.jpg

[Aktag]

Sorry, double post.

[OOPS!]

I like the bottom one. Just make your G a little bigger so it flows with the rest

[RedEyes]

some new simple/throwies
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/p_00035.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/p_00036.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/p_00040.jpg

[Aktag]

Thanks OOPS! i'll try it ye.
@RedEyes
Good, simple, but done well ^^

[KtRL.]

i havent posted in a while.. so heres some toy ass wack shit for you to look at
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00367.jpg

[RedEyes]

SKA is sick, your art not so much. lose that leg off both the k and R make is a straight bar.

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/simple.jpg\
is this simpler?

Buump..

sico - the first one is a little to blocky. It just doesnt flow well. Other two are nice but maybe make your O a little smaller

ktrl - round out the top part of the R more. Make the bottom of your L shorter and not as wide.

aktag- nice simples

[Con-Artist]

empty can- u need to work on bars. the tops of the ts are way too big, the s is un-even,.. and the 3d is weird. just do simple drop shadow and keyboard letters.
red eyes- the bottem ones ok.. not feelin the other 2

[-Empty-Can-]

I really don't think I need to use bars for such simple letters. The S is supposed to me smaller in the middle. The T's are big because it looks stupid small.

[zennegen]

I really don't think I need to use bars for such simple letters. The S is supposed to me smaller in the middle. The T's are big because it looks stupid small.

well it's your biggest mistake, and the main reason your shit looks like shit. and the reason you'll never progress is because you never use the feedback you get.

[TheToy]

well it's your biggest mistake, and the main reason your shit looks like shit. and the reason you'll never progress is because you never use the feedback you get.

And the troll makes his holiday appearance...

As expected.

[-Empty-Can-]

well it's your biggest mistake, and the main reason your shit looks like shit. and the reason you'll never progress is because you never use the feedback you get.

The only feedback I get is Simpler, Keyboard letters, Bars. And that pretty much fits into all 3. And I have been practicing those more.

[n8galicia]

bars should be used on every single letter

[TheToy]

There's no rules about using bars. It's not written in stone. Some people use bars because it helps them. Some don't use bars. It's all preference.

Get off the kids dick. He doesn't wanna' use bars.

Even with bars, the letters aren't magically perfect the second you use them. So either way it takes time to progress.

[n8galicia]

then why are people ass holes about not using them? lol its kinda confusing

[-Empty-Can-]

Because it helps structure your letters.

[TheToy]

then why are people ass holes about not using them? lol its kinda confusing

You mean like people here on BS.com?

[n8galicia]

yeah. i've been here long enough to realize a lot of people on here are dicks so it could just be that

[zennegen]

yeah, but homie's been at this shit for months now and is still producing the same garbage. spend a week using bars, and i mean actual bars, no extensions, and not varying sizes, and i promise you'll see improvement. and anion, your shit sucks too, so for you to tell somebody to get better without using bars when good people tell him to use them just completely defeats the purpose of your argument.

whatever, i know stot's too stubborn to take any advice and still think's he'll be even worthy of intermediate thread within the next 2 years.

[-Empty-Can-]

yeah, but homie's been at this shit for months now and is still producing the same garbage. spend a week using bars, and i mean actual bars, no extensions, and not varying sizes, and i promise you'll see improvement. and anion, your shit sucks too, so for you to tell somebody to get better without using bars when good people tell him to use them just completely defeats the purpose of your argument.

whatever, i know stot's too stubborn to take any advice and still think's he'll be even worthy of intermediate thread within the next 2 years.

You say I don't take any advice? Look at stuff from my first posts. You should see shit in notebooks from last year. I have been taking advice. I do use bars I do simple stuff.

Wow dude I must feel so special if got promoted to post in the intermediate thread on the fucking internet. Like that means anything.

[xSonnyTx]

People are assholes about using bars because the main reason that anyone is in the toy thread in the first place is because they've never used bars in the first place.

I know my first shit had no structure but of course I thought it was 'dope.'
People aren't 'mean' cause they're assholes but cause they're tired of telling the same thing to a mile of big-headed toys who won't take the advice.

Shoving the advice down their fucking throat is generally the easiest way to help people improve on the toy forums in my opinion

[zennegen]

You say I don't take any advice? Look at stuff from my first posts. You should see shit in notebooks from last year. I have been taking advice. I do use bars I do simple stuff.

Wow dude I must feel so special if got promoted to post in the intermediate thread on the fucking internet. Like that means anything.

lol, your right it doesn't mean anything, but fuck dude. it's called goals, or motivation, or feeling accomplished. otherwise what's the point? and i've seen old stuff. there's no difference. you just have your head up your ass.

[-Empty-Can-]

lol, your right it doesn't mean anything, but fuck dude. it's called goals, or motivation, or feeling accomplished. otherwise what's the point? and i've seen old stuff. there's no difference. you just have your head up your ass.

I do have my goals and motivation. None of the include posting pictures on the internet. You should see pictures from this summer and last summer. There is a great improvment even if it is shit

[zennegen]

i can guarantee you, there was no improvement. and if they don't include posting pictures on the internet, then what the fuck are you doing here? fuck, your entire argument is void.

[RedEyes]

You guys gotta learn that bars arnt just straight lines, its the foundation of the letter. Everyones uses bars in their pieces even if its got extensions and such, its what makes a letter a LETTER!

[-Empty-Can-]

i can guarantee you, there was no improvement. and if they don't include posting pictures on the internet, then what the fuck are you doing here? fuck, your entire argument is void.

I'll post them in a little.

My goals are actually painting. Doing pieces, throwies tags on the streets. Smashing freights that stuff. Bombing science won't get me anywhere.

[LeaksOne]

I'll post them in a little.

My goals are actually painting. Doing pieces, throwies tags on the streets. Smashing freights that stuff. Bombing science won't get me anywhere.

then pack your bags and GTFO

[zennegen]

lol, please spare us the misery or having to look at your awful drawings again. just like red eyes said. bars are the foundation. and you have yet to grasp that concept. the sad truth is, this website will keep your shit from getting lined because i promise you if you paint what you've been sketching, it's all getting crossed out.

[gumOnShoe]

i have to agree with the dude zennegen here, you posted the same bullshit ass toss like MAAAAD times.

[LeaksOne]

lol, please spare us the misery or having to look at your awful drawings again. just like red eyes said. bars are the foundation. and you have yet to grasp that concept. the sad truth is, this website will keep your shit from getting lined because i promise you if you paint what you've been sketching, it's all getting crossed out.

http://rlv.zcache.com/word_to_big_bird_magnet-p147436505417129886qjy4_400.jpg

honestly though if you knew how to take crits you would probably be alot better now but you think your shit is amazing and unique when its neither nor. if your really that mad just leave the site. you control what websites you visit not us so if your goal is to leave bs and get up then do it. actions speak louder then words. but word of advice get your skill up

[zennegen]

*****'s too stubborn. stot, honestly, just leave. and just some parting words, your name is fucking GAY.

[LeaksOne]

*****'s too stubborn. stot, honestly, just leave. and just some parting words, your name and whole "style" is fucking GAY.

fixed :cool:

[zennegen]

HAHAHAHAHA. thank you for the correction, sir.

[-Empty-Can-]

For all you that say that I haven't been taking crits, then look at these. These are all from last summer before I joined bombing science. My stuff may not be good now but its definitely better.

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old022.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old021.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old020.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old019.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old018.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old017.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old016.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old015.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old014.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old013.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old012.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old011.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old010.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old009.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old008.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old007.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old006.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old005.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old004.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old003.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old002.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old001.jpg
and I thought i was good when I did these

[LeaksOne]

and now you think your good doin the shit your doin now....my oh my how times chan.....wait nothing really changed. scratch that

[zennegen]

well, you think your good now. see? no progression.

[n8galicia]

dude that shit is mad good. you gunna be a world famous graff artist one day, llike marc ecko

[Flawless Victory]

Hold on Stot, when are you going to be posting that shit from last summer?



....oh hold up, that WAS the shit from last summer?
Well damn, kid. You aren't doing shit ANY different then you were last summer.

[gumOnShoe]

For all you that say that I haven't been taking crits, then look at these. These are all from last summer before I joined bombing science. My stuff may not be good now but its definitely better.

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old022.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old021.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old020.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old019.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old018.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old017.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old016.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old015.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old014.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old013.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old012.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old011.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old010.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old009.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old008.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old007.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old006.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old005.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old004.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old003.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old002.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/old001.jpg
and I thought i was good when I did these

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
might aswell have just posted this 10 times.
http://aaronblomberg.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/03/poop.gif

[CESP.one]

Tryna use bars now...
im getting better but i still suck.
help me out?
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img083.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img073.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img089.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img071.jpg
heres just something else... idk what it would be considered.
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img084.jpg
crits plzz

[n8galicia]

i'm diggin the last one

[zennegen]

i'm diggin the last one

yeah, just work on the S. draw the middle part of the A straight, not crooked like that.

[RedEyes]

ACE-The shit green one is your only chance, look at your E and build off that style, also see how the bars are solid unlike your C and A, use symmetry to construct the letter, mirror image letters.

[n8galicia]

edit..

[RedEyes]

Sketch was better before i filled this.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo45.jpg
crits?

[iDeemyouSiren]

Just some quick pieces crits?
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g105/ducttheman/BB001.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g105/ducttheman/BB002.jpg

[RedEyes]

lose the arrows but u got potential.

[CrAzOnEr!]

yea looz the arrows and open the d and the e's.

[xSonnyTx]

wow

GIVE TO GET FUCKERS

[TheToy]

yeah, but homie's been at this shit for months now and is still producing the same garbage. spend a week using bars, and i mean actual bars, no extensions, and not varying sizes, and i promise you'll see improvement. and anion, your shit sucks too, so for you to tell somebody to get better without using bars when good people tell him to use them just completely defeats the purpose of your argument.

whatever, i know stot's too stubborn to take any advice and still think's he'll be even worthy of intermediate thread within the next 2 years.

I wasn't telling anybody to use bars or not. I was just saying that there are no rules about using them. Some do. Some don't.

You're such a fucking moron. I don't even know why I'm bothering to have this little conversation with you.


i can guarantee you, there was no improvement. and if they don't include posting pictures on the internet, then what the fuck are you doing here? fuck, your entire argument is void.

So what the fuck are you doing here? You don't post pictures. I've seen tons of pictures from Empty, posting for crits and progression. I've seen you post 2 pictures. One of a slap. One from a battle where you picked the word 'Dick'. You fucking faggot. You just bitch and moan and whine and give negative crits. You're lame.

[faser]

STOT you suck. Dont pollute the thread with your "mad progression" pics ever again. You dont listen to advice anyway, so whats the point of coming on BS? You remind me of some fucked up troll, who posts whack shit for attention, except you are actually being serious.

[otis nixion]

Sketch was better before i filled this.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo45.jpg
crits?

you suck for the amount you've been on here

[Con-Artist]

red eyes- u dont suck, but i do think u try to do, i guess weird ad ons and things like that when ur not ready. if i was u, i would do straight letters with drop shadow until i could do them in my sleep. haha

[RedEyes]

Again, ive been on sense 06 but if you look at the amount of post i have i havent been on hear at all. I just started sketching for real this summer so u can suck my balls Otis.

Con-Im still working on my simples, its just your not ganna learn to do shit unless you try it out and get crits, the whole point of this thread.

[TheToy]

Red Eyes, that Roy sketch is awful.

[RedEyes]

thanks toy your word of criticism are inspirational.

[darkck]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2472/3745260155_ee99d10dbb_o.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2279/3676800592_60605217c3_o.jpg

[TheToy]

thanks toy your word of criticism are inspirational.

No problem. With my inspiration, your next sketch should suck less. ;)

Alright, you're on the right track. No doubt. But fuck the connections. That's what kills it for me. Keep the letters seperate. Add a drop shadow or some 3D and give it some depth. Open the 'Y' if you're gonna' open up your 'R' and 'O'. If you're gonna use bubbles for a little background, go for the gusto bro. Go big. You've got a whole page to work with.

[zennegen]

anion, you realize that everyone thinks your a joke... right? i posted a LOT more than 2 pictures. you must be retarded, i posted in a bunch of battles and a bunch of stuff in toy BB. i just choose not to post a lot of shit because i realize what i did wrong with a lot of them, and when i do post shit, i don't get feedback. and the fact that i'm not a complete attention whore probably plays a role too. you're the one that paints dicks in your backyard with belton that you used mommy's credit card to buy.

YOU MAD?

[TheToy]

anion, you realize that everyone thinks your a joke... right? i posted a LOT more than 2 pictures. you must be retarded, i posted in a bunch of battles and a bunch of stuff in toy BB. i just choose not to post a lot of shit because i realize what i did wrong with a lot of them, and when i do post shit, i don't get feedback. and the fact that i'm not a complete attention whore probably plays a role too. you're the one that paints dicks in your backyard with belton that you used mommy's credit card to buy.

YOU MAD?

I ain't mad, son. I don't give a fuck what anyone thinks about me or my art. Don't you have some turkey to be eatin', *****? You're trollin' on Thanksgiving. You're a fucking sad case, brah.

You say the same shit everytime you try and insult me. Get some new material.

[-Empty-Can-]

STOT you suck. Dont pollute the thread with your "mad progression" pics ever again. You dont listen to advice anyway, so whats the point of coming on BS? You remind me of some fucked up troll, who posts whack shit for attention, except you are actually being serious.

I didn't post those just to show progression. I posted it to show that I take crits. I do simple letters and I have posted "keyboard letters" Look at my last few real posts and then compare to the old shit and say I haven't been taking crits.

[EST2007]

STOT you suck. Dont pollute the thread with your "mad progression" pics ever again. You dont listen to advice anyway, so whats the point of coming on BS? You remind me of some fucked up troll, who posts whack shit for attention, except you are actually being serious.


serious cow is SERIOUS
http://media.ebaumsworld.com/mediaFiles/picture/736032/80600146.jpg

[Atmos419]

http://i35.tinypic.com/1607dc5.jpg
whats the deal with this?
and the, "long island writers week" picture?
dont write my name. and certainly dont write it near the name namix.

Ahh, I wasn't trying to bite anyone's name.
It was for a battle on another forum, and I guess the theme was Long Island Writers Week.

So, that's all it was for.

Honest mistake.

[black midget]

.

[Chippey]

Atmos - On the last Keanu in blockletters you should try to get your lines straighter, namix looks nice.
Blackmidget - nice style, that drips a bit random.

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn184/CH1PP3Y/CIMG3770.jpg
Crits are always welcome.

[smooth_nuts]

alot of shit going on in life lately not much time to draw,just some wack bullshit....
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2795/4077598591_0808833e7d_o.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2542/4120039894_68b39a4eb1_o.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2771/4071323946_c474b30bf4_o.jpg
from hallowiener.

[CrAzOnEr!]

http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/M.jpg

[CrAzOnEr!]

crits please.

[black midget]

every letter is wack as fuck,they all have some stupid fucking arrow..stop with all that bullshit especially if your not even doing a 3d..looks like u got a sharpie and freestyled the whole thing,use pencil and eraser buddy..point blank,theres not one good thing about it.

[CrAzOnEr!]

ok well what about this one.
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/greenmeth.jpg

[Puberty]

Ahh, I wasn't trying to bite anyone's name.
It was for a battle on another forum, and I guess the theme was Long Island Writers Week.

So, that's all it was for.

Honest mistake.

what forum, i want to see.

[black midget]

did u start a couple months ago or something?? do block type keyboard letters and practice vanashing points.And your hand needs work,stop putting "getting up" and stupid bullshit quotes u got from your marc ecko game.

[CrAzOnEr!]

ok man thanks for the crits just tryin to get better.

[CrAzOnEr!]

also what are vanishing points pics???please.

[OOPS!]

Draw a dot somewhere on the paper and draw every 3d line going to that dot. Then connect the lines along the piece.

[black midget]

dont feal bad cuz your shits wack your gonna be bad for a very long time and thats ok,its all part of the process..ive been doing graffiti for around 4 years filled numerous amounts of blackbook's and i still dont like how my shit looks. i sujest you change your name theres already a couple people with meth in there name try to be more original,couple hand's for you. http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2701.jpg
GO OVER HERE ---> http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

[faser]

serious cow is SERIOUS
http://i48.tinypic.com/xb09ra.png

[Flawless Victory]

Oh my fucking god, dude.
That's the GREATEST.

[Fury]

Does anyone give crits anymore? :(

[faser]

Oh my fucking god, dude.
That's the GREATEST.

;D

[suparjafar]

Oh my fucking god, dude.
That's the GREATEST.

+1

[TheToy]

There are some serious nerds on this forum with too much time on their hands...

I'll let you guys draw your own conclusions.
(No puns intended. I know some of you are gonna' wanna' draw me a pretty pretty picture.)

[WOP]

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2700.jpg

loose the drip, work on your letters, try keeping them the same size for now and try to do straight lines

[WOP]

http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/M.jpg

loose the arows man, work only with bars, try keeping the same width, try adding a dip of shadow

[WOP]

ok well what about this one.
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/greenmeth.jpg

try keeping the same width and put a shadow or 3d better then the one before

[gumOnShoe]

http://i48.tinypic.com/xb09ra.png

I FUCKING LOL'd.

@Black midget: that piece you posted looks like a big shit.

[suparjafar]

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2700.jpg

lose the swastika. ;]

[black midget]

both suparjafar and gumonshoe are my #1 fans ,thanks!

[gumOnShoe]

lolololololololololol

[zennegen]

There are some serious nerds on this forum with too much time on their hands...


and that makes you... what, exactly?
everytime somebody says something about you, you always come back with the same exact comebacks. every time. nobody was even talking to you, you just jumped in. and you're calling FV a drama queen? get the fuck out of here.

[TheToy]

Nobody says shit about me except you. Pay attention. No one on these forums gives a fuck about me. Anion is old shit, son. Ya, I called FV a drama queen. Dude's been pretty chill lately. Why you gotta' bring up old shit?

Fuckin' draggin' FV into this cause you can't fight your way out of a wet paper bag, with scissors in your hands.

[W_G_O_N_E]

http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/20/dscn4154q.jpg

[zennegen]

Nobody says shit about me except you. Pay attention. No one on these forums gives a fuck about me. Anion is old shit, son. Ya, I called FV a drama queen. Dude's been pretty chill lately. Why you gotta' bring up old shit?

Fuckin' draggin' FV into this cause you can't fight your way out of a wet paper bag, with scissors in your hands.

dawg, you must be blind. you are old news, nobody talks about you anymore. because you're nothing. i'm not dragging FV into shit, i simply stated that you are a hypocrite. you call other people drama queens when you're the one jumping into shit that has nothing to do with you. you know what i think?

anion=stot.

[TheToy]

dawg, you must be blind. you are old news, nobody talks about you anymore. because you're nothing. i'm not dragging FV into shit, i simply stated that you are a hypocrite. you call other people drama queens when you're the one jumping into shit that has nothing to do with you. you know what i think?

anion=stot.

Dude. Did you fucking read what I posted before? Slow the fuck down and absorb it. You make no sense. I just said I was old news and no one gives a fuck about me and you tell me Im blind? I didn't say everyone loves me. Pay attention. Damn. You're like a fucking stone.

Get off Stots dick. He has nothing to do with this.

I just lost ten braincells arguing with your troll ass.

[Flawless Victory]

Who's really coming out on top, then?
This *****'s laughing and you just lost 10 braincells.

[Fury]

http://www.kimkimkim.com/images/chill2.jpg

[TheToy]

He ain't laughin'. That *****' be mad.

He comes out on top cause you came to his rescue. Like fuckin' Sir Lancelot to his fair Maid Marion.

Duh.

[zennegen]

lmao, get off stot's dick? this was all about him, you fucking moron. you fucking came in out of no where to his rescue. like i said, anion=stot.

[Panda Jerk]

There are some serious nerds on this forum with too much time on their hands...

I'll let you guys draw your own conclusions.
(No puns intended. I know some of you are gonna' wanna' draw me a pretty pretty picture.)

:rolleyes:

haha im back!!
i highly doubt anyone remembers me but.. hey :p

[Fury]

This isn't a blackbook, but crits?
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9107/img0469j.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

He ain't laughin'. That *****' be mad.

He comes out on top cause you came to his rescue. Like fuckin' Sir Lancelot to his fair Maid Marion.

Duh.

I don't see how I came to anyone's rescue.
You are grasping for reasons to start shit with people.
I simply said that you are now, self-admittedly, more stupid because of this pretend confrontation.
This dude is not actually mad, trust, his ass is laughing IRL.
But, of course, you refuse to believe that, because that means that you'd have to deal with the fact that you are getting played like a fool over the internet.

http://i48.tinypic.com/6ged6a.jpg

[Fury]

Fuck double posts :|

[Flawless Victory]

Give tham to get tham.

[Fury]

Your face is pretty awesome.

[Flawless Victory]

I edited the saturation a little bit,
needed to hide some blemishes.

[Panda Jerk]

This isn't a blackbook, but crits?
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9107/img0469j.jpg

fuck you
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan-1.jpg
:rolleyes:

[cocacola]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2770/4137378662_a965227dd2_o.jpg

[TheToy]

FV - I'm not gasping for any reasons to start with people. You're the one posting stupid pictures and trying to get me riled up. It goes to show, you are in fact a drama queen. Say whatever you want. You're a fuckin' tool. You haven't posted a painted picture since you got ripped up on that shitty ass EARN1 in the abandoned building with the wack ass drop shadow. Your spirit get crushed on that one?

[Flawless Victory]

Haha, I don't have to say shit that you didn't already say yourself, dude.
and yes, your one comment saying that you were displeased with my piece caused me to stop posting my shit on the internet.
I should probably thank you for that, actually.

[Fury]

Coca - Green isn't reflected on the car, but looks good.
Panda - Looks clean, but C is a little weird though.

[Panda Jerk]

Coca - Green isn't reflected on the car, but looks good.
Panda - Looks clean, but C is a little weird though.

its an e :p

[Fury]

My bad lol Open up the hole more, since it doesn't look anything like the other one?

[Flawless Victory]

I'm thinking it's a capital E.
That's what it looks like to me, at least.

[Fury]

^ Yeah I see it now. I think it's that line in the middle that's fucking me up, not sure.

[zennegen]

FV - I'm not gasping for any reasons to start with people. You're the one posting stupid pictures and trying to get me riled up. It goes to show, you are in fact a drama queen. Say whatever you want. You're a fuckin' tool. You haven't posted a painted picture since you got ripped up on that shitty ass EARN1 in the abandoned building with the wack ass drop shadow. Your spirit get crushed on that one?

and you've never posted shit outside of your backyard so... what are you bitching about?

[TheToy]

Sorry, but you're wrong.

[zennegen]

OHRLY? sorry, i meant something that YOU painted. and wow, good job sigging that shit. your a fucking troll dude.

[Flawless Victory]

It's okay, I wasn't being sarcastic at all.
Nobody thinks he is dull as fuck for taking what I say literally, because I mean it literally.

[cocacola]

lol its not supposed to relct the green from the letters. i wuz gunna do an bright expolosion in an oldskool city like background but i changed my mind

[funhouseXcast]

can you guys battle or shut the fuck up?

coca im really likin that, your structure is getting alot smoother.

Panda, im sure you're well aware of this, but you don't belong here.

[Bombing With Insurance]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2770/4137378662_a965227dd2_o.jpg

You need to start taking your time on stuff your stuff would look so much better if they were less sloppy.

[Chippey]

well theres lots of beef down here, could prove for some interesting battles.
cocacola - the reflection on the car should have been blended into the black more, and it needed to have some green aswell, nice work on the shading.

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn184/CH1PP3Y/IMG_0001-1.jpg
Crits please, i could also use suggestions for a colour scheme

[Con-Artist]

Ant- the letters are decent. I can't decide if it's good or not. U definatly got potential. Honestly though I'm not feelin the name

[zennegen]

it's got potential, but the letter structure is off. leave the 3D alone for a little and work on your letters.

[Chippey]

alright thanks guys, save that for some other time and get to simps and letter structure. and btw its not my name i just draw random words i find around me sometimes :P.

[RedEyes]

Chip- I would make the N smaller or top of the T bigger, and connect the letters, i know where ur going with it but its not there.

[suparjafar]

fuck you
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan-1.jpg
:rolleyes:

this is dope.
intermediate sec for you

also crus dont rush so much

i should take my own advice but whatever heres two throws and some hands

[WOP]

fuck you
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan-1.jpg
:rolleyes:

work on your E, T and R try keeping the same width of 3D

[WOP]

well theres lots of beef down here, could prove for some interesting battles.
cocacola - the reflection on the car should have been blended into the black more, and it needed to have some green aswell, nice work on the shading.

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn184/CH1PP3Y/IMG_0001-1.jpg
Crits please, i could also use suggestions for a colour scheme

work on your letters same width everywhere for start and man loose or change your drips the end of A sticks out too much the N is too long

[black midget]

ant it looks pretty good just take off those drips..superfarjar thats really fucking wack your nowhere near where i am so slow down with the beef towards me, unless ur willing to battle it out..even though pandajerk has his 3d unproportioned i like everything besides that lower case e at the end. and here are some throw's i did while i was shitfaced but fuck it might aswell post something http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2704.jpg

[gumOnShoe]

EEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
if my eyes could vomit, they would.
lol....

[TheToy]

I liked 'SNAW' better than 'SNAM'

[sinkilla1]

black midget lay off my boy far a jar unless u wanna battle me and we know who would win that so sit down and stfu

[black midget]

kid ur fucking garbage if i battle u that would just be a waste of my time..u have never goten up in your entire life and NO sharpie magnum tags in bathrooms dont count faget
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2709.jpg
unfinished

*WARNING WHAT YOUR ABOUT TO WITNESS ISNT A JOKE AND ISNT MINE!!!!
THIS SIN FAG THINKING HE CAN BEAT ME??
WOW KID UR A FUCKING JOKE

here you go lol wat you guys think
http://i46.tinypic.com/2ljpanc.jpg

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA YOUR BETTER OFF BEING A STONER THAN DOING GRAFFITI,PLEASE IF U STILL INSIST ON BATTLEING ME I WILL BE MORE THAN GLAD TO CRUSH THAT EGO OF YOURS

[darkck]

black midget - stop getting loud and threatening to battle people its embarrassing, internet beef is bullshit. if you were really that good you wouldnt feel the need to shout everyone else down.

[Steezy McCreezy]

Quit the lil kiddy beef, your both bad, spend the time you would beefing sketching.

[zennegen]

i think they should battle...

[dark2]

crits? i know give them 2 get them but not much 2 crit on this page lol

7704

[Steezy McCreezy]

i think they should battle...

If ya guys do, make sure to put a null option.

[darkck]

crits? i know give them 2 get them but not much 2 crit on this page lol

7704

the structure is a good start, youve got the fundamentals, apart from the e, which needs more definition in its shape. if i were you i'd start developing it by adding some slant and flow to the letters

[dark2]

okay sweet thanx

[suparjafar]

as much as you dont want to admit it i think your terrible for your years of graff or w.e ive been sketching for two months and i think i got more structure than you midget

[gumOnShoe]

kid ur fucking garbage if i battle u that would just be a waste of my time..u have never goten up in your entire life and no sharpie magnum tags in bathrooms dont count faget
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/dscn2709.jpg
unfinished


eeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwww. wouldn't be calling anybody garbage with that bullshit, lol...

[suparjafar]

im going out now but if you wanna battle for fun im downn pick a word dood

[black midget]

im going out right now also..i dont want to pick the word u can choose

[Steezy McCreezy]

Do 'kiddy beef'.

[dark2]

lmao you guys need to get this battle over with

[n8galicia]

ehh..the throwie S doesn't go and I'm not really liking the G

http://i984.photobucket.com/albums/ae326/damanseen/Mobile%20Uploads/1127091650a.jpg

[n8galicia]

ehh..the throwie S doesn't go and I'm not really liking the G

http://i984.photobucket.com/albums/ae326/damanseen/Mobile%20Uploads/1127091652a.jpg

[zennegen]

take that to toy tags...

[n8galicia]

sorry, worng pic lol

[StompBolts!]

use bars- seng

[rasta tagger]

Woops forgot to fill in a piece
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u270/GrrrrrrlJeans/11272005.jpg

[zennegen]

it doesn't make sense to use an uppercase e then lowercase e right next to eachother, or in the same piece at all... the name sucks, by the way.

[Flawless Victory]

I don't think geek is a shitty name.
It's catchy, it's obvious how it's pronounced..
G's are a bitch, though.

[CrAzOnEr!]

http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/greenmeth.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/me.jpg

[n8galicia]

i like the second one, but Im not digging the arrows

[suparjafar]

noupickmidget

i dont care

[Con-Artist]

Rasta- I'm honestly really liking that style just make both es upper case. It's original as hell.
Crazoner-i'm liken the first throw thing but the second one is wack man, arrows look really stupid.

[Con-Artist]

Rasta- I'm honestly really liking that style just make both es upper case. It's original as hell.
Crazoner-i'm liken the first throw thing but the second one is wack man, arrows look really stupid.

[Con-Artist]

O yea and crazoner ur m kinda looks Like a h

[goonzatwork]

feeling the first one craz haha thought it said "mentos" for a second but looking decent cuz

[black midget]

noupickmidget

i dont care

"fuck beef" ..ima knock the fuck out right now ill start sketchin tomorrow

[rasta tagger]

it doesn't make sense to use an uppercase e then lowercase e right next to eachother, or in the same piece at all... the name sucks, by the way.
I was trying something new with the e's.

[CrAzOnEr!]

feeling the first one craz haha thought it said "mentos" for a second but looking decent cuz

well thanks man ill be uploading more soon.

[Slim Shady]

this is my piece. what do you guys think?
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/4683/picture4hb.jpg

[n8galicia]

that's hella good

[Slim Shady]

i know.
but how do i improve?

[LeaksOne]

cocky much? improve by getting a better camera make the hole in the A
WAAYYY smaller. fix your S and define your first letter. i dont even know what it is.

[Slim Shady]

im not cocky. im the best there's every gonna be though.
just gimme a few days. ima be better than you.

[TheToy]

it doesn't make sense to use an uppercase e then lowercase e right next to eachother, or in the same piece at all...

Is there a rule about this in the Graffiti Handbook? I must have overlooked it...

You should write the revised copy.

[sinkilla1]

hahahah blACK MIDGET BRING IT on i would fuck your shit up in a battle least my shit doesnt look like a tigers anus ripped inside out taken a shit on put back in a fat man for a couple weeks who was on a mexican food diet then ripped out again and steam rolled by rosie o donalds fat ass thats how bad you are
Ps. Ive gottten up more then u well prolly not more cause ive only been going for a year and had to lay low for the summer.

I still have atleast 30 tags still running from when i started so back the fuck off
and that alien peice i was fucking around it was against empty can i could have shit on a piece of paper and won just like i can do to you

[LeaksOne]

im not cocky. im the best there's every gonna be though.
just gimme a few days. ima be better than you.

http://famousdc.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/02/confident-speaker.jpg

[Slim Shady]

way better than you... its not even gonna take me long... just watch. keep an eye on me.

[RedEyes]

Less talking more posting flix, u girls wanna bitch start a new forum!

[drOping]

Slim Shady- You have talked to much, do not speak again until you post 3 more pictures.

Crazoner- I don't like how the middle part of your M is not connected, The pink orange and red one is hurting my eyes, drop the arrows, I do like the handie below it.

Everybody: Less beef, more flix

With that being said...
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/1254/1003158.jpg

[RedEyes]

For talking
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/p_00044.jpg

[Slim Shady]

red eyes and droping. suck my dick.

[LeaksOne]

way better than you... its not even gonna take me long... just watch. keep an eye on me.

no thanks. keep an eye on yourself. i dont wana waste my time lookin at your blurry pics and watching your slowly progress. but thanks for the offer

edit: sunova im being trolled. and redeyes ill do what i want in this thread. you start a new topic.

[Slim Shady]

you ARE a fuckin troll bitch.

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/8559/imbetterthanyoufaggots.jpg

[b SQUARED 08]

Last ~10 pages have been nothing but bitching between toys with no talent and apparently no balls to step up and battle eachother. Do us all a favor and don't post unless you have enough experience to understand that you are posting in the toy section and you suck right now. Open your eyes and understand that you have a lot to learn. If you can't do this, just give up on wasting your time on this forum and move on. Simple as that.

Slek: If I were you, I'd go back to doing straight letters because your letters are way too skewed (especially your S). Go back to simples and you'll develop a better understanding of how the letters are constructed. Work your way up from there.

Sico: Lookin' clean. Your i looks a bit out of place because it is lowercase, but other than that, it looks pretty good.

[Bazer]

cool story, bro.

slims gonna be more dope than anyone here yo. for real. kids got a flame that can't be put out.

[RedEyes]

For talking
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/p_00044.jpg
Bump to clean page.

[Slim Shady]

looks good^
maybe your letters would look better closer. i noticed alot of writers dont really do there letters as spaced out as that.
oh yeah suck my dick.

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/9339/slimsz.jpg

[n8galicia]

yo slim shady, you might think you're good, but to be honest you suck, so go simple. and besides, no beef, but i was being sarcastic in my comment breh.

so go simple, and drop the cockiness

[LeaksOne]

there you go. better pic. now its lookin better. your m needs tweaking.

[Slim Shady]

simple like this?
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/2796/slimshadysharp.jpg

i think the reason you guy suck is because you do nothing but simples. how are you supposed to get good at something you dont do (the thing you dont do being not simples) it different.

[gumOnShoe]

you ARE a fuckin troll bitch.

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/8559/imbetterthanyoufaggots.jpg


that shit looks TOUGH.
you should take that to the intermediate thread so they can see that piece too.

[LeaksOne]

simple like this?
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/2796/slimshadysharp.jpg

i think the reason you guy suck is because you do nothing but simples. how are you supposed to get good at something you dont do (the thing you dont do being not simples) it different.

i think the reason people do simps is to get a grasp of there letters to be able to bend the bars and add proper extensions.

[gumOnShoe]

seriously though, try making that bigger next time. shit's like in a small ass corner.

[suparjafar]

so blackmidget i just finished watching pulp fiction and its 3 am, and i forgot about our little fuckbeef thing. i didnt sketch this throw or anything so you can just do beef or whatever you want

[Slim Shady]

still bigger than your dick!

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/6802/kjlkp.jpg

suparjafar, looks gay, start over from scratch.

[LeaksOne]

jafar i dont agree with that B. the E's and F are acceptable but still need work

[suparjafar]

so you do a beef throw without sketchin slim dood

[Fury]

^ Agreed with Leaks.

And Pulp Fiction is friggin' awesome. Go watch it again.

Slim - Chill out, go simple. And by simple, I mean keyboard letter simple.

[Slim Shady]

so you do a beef throw without sketchin slim dood

you dont want it kid.
it bring it to ya front door like fed ex.