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RedEyes
11-25-2009, 11:28 PM
Sketch was better before i filled this.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo45.jpg
crits?

iDeemyouSiren
11-25-2009, 11:29 PM
Just some quick pieces crits?
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g105/ducttheman/BB001.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g105/ducttheman/BB002.jpg

RedEyes
11-25-2009, 11:31 PM
lose the arrows but u got potential.

CrAzOnEr!
11-25-2009, 11:44 PM
yea looz the arrows and open the d and the e's.

xSonnyTx
11-26-2009, 01:35 AM
wow

GIVE TO GET FUCKERS

TheToy
11-26-2009, 02:07 AM
yeah, but homie's been at this shit for months now and is still producing the same garbage. spend a week using bars, and i mean actual bars, no extensions, and not varying sizes, and i promise you'll see improvement. and anion, your shit sucks too, so for you to tell somebody to get better without using bars when good people tell him to use them just completely defeats the purpose of your argument.

whatever, i know stot's too stubborn to take any advice and still think's he'll be even worthy of intermediate thread within the next 2 years.

I wasn't telling anybody to use bars or not. I was just saying that there are no rules about using them. Some do. Some don't.

You're such a fucking moron. I don't even know why I'm bothering to have this little conversation with you.


i can guarantee you, there was no improvement. and if they don't include posting pictures on the internet, then what the fuck are you doing here? fuck, your entire argument is void.

So what the fuck are you doing here? You don't post pictures. I've seen tons of pictures from Empty, posting for crits and progression. I've seen you post 2 pictures. One of a slap. One from a battle where you picked the word 'Dick'. You fucking faggot. You just bitch and moan and whine and give negative crits. You're lame.

faser
11-26-2009, 06:02 AM
STOT you suck. Dont pollute the thread with your "mad progression" pics ever again. You dont listen to advice anyway, so whats the point of coming on BS? You remind me of some fucked up troll, who posts whack shit for attention, except you are actually being serious.

otis nixion
11-26-2009, 09:14 AM
Sketch was better before i filled this.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo45.jpg
crits?

you suck for the amount you've been on here

Con-Artist
11-26-2009, 09:34 AM
red eyes- u dont suck, but i do think u try to do, i guess weird ad ons and things like that when ur not ready. if i was u, i would do straight letters with drop shadow until i could do them in my sleep. haha

RedEyes
11-26-2009, 10:26 AM
Again, ive been on sense 06 but if you look at the amount of post i have i havent been on hear at all. I just started sketching for real this summer so u can suck my balls Otis.

Con-Im still working on my simples, its just your not ganna learn to do shit unless you try it out and get crits, the whole point of this thread.

TheToy
11-26-2009, 10:57 AM
Red Eyes, that Roy sketch is awful.

RedEyes
11-26-2009, 11:04 AM
thanks toy your word of criticism are inspirational.

darkck
11-26-2009, 11:08 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2472/3745260155_ee99d10dbb_o.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2279/3676800592_60605217c3_o.jpg

TheToy
11-26-2009, 11:11 AM
thanks toy your word of criticism are inspirational.

No problem. With my inspiration, your next sketch should suck less. ;)

Alright, you're on the right track. No doubt. But fuck the connections. That's what kills it for me. Keep the letters seperate. Add a drop shadow or some 3D and give it some depth. Open the 'Y' if you're gonna' open up your 'R' and 'O'. If you're gonna use bubbles for a little background, go for the gusto bro. Go big. You've got a whole page to work with.

zennegen
11-26-2009, 11:35 AM
anion, you realize that everyone thinks your a joke... right? i posted a LOT more than 2 pictures. you must be retarded, i posted in a bunch of battles and a bunch of stuff in toy BB. i just choose not to post a lot of shit because i realize what i did wrong with a lot of them, and when i do post shit, i don't get feedback. and the fact that i'm not a complete attention whore probably plays a role too. you're the one that paints dicks in your backyard with belton that you used mommy's credit card to buy.

YOU MAD?

TheToy
11-26-2009, 11:57 AM
anion, you realize that everyone thinks your a joke... right? i posted a LOT more than 2 pictures. you must be retarded, i posted in a bunch of battles and a bunch of stuff in toy BB. i just choose not to post a lot of shit because i realize what i did wrong with a lot of them, and when i do post shit, i don't get feedback. and the fact that i'm not a complete attention whore probably plays a role too. you're the one that paints dicks in your backyard with belton that you used mommy's credit card to buy.

YOU MAD?

I ain't mad, son. I don't give a fuck what anyone thinks about me or my art. Don't you have some turkey to be eatin', *****? You're trollin' on Thanksgiving. You're a fucking sad case, brah.

You say the same shit everytime you try and insult me. Get some new material.

-Empty-Can-
11-26-2009, 12:14 PM
STOT you suck. Dont pollute the thread with your "mad progression" pics ever again. You dont listen to advice anyway, so whats the point of coming on BS? You remind me of some fucked up troll, who posts whack shit for attention, except you are actually being serious.

I didn't post those just to show progression. I posted it to show that I take crits. I do simple letters and I have posted "keyboard letters" Look at my last few real posts and then compare to the old shit and say I haven't been taking crits.

EST2007
11-26-2009, 12:14 PM
STOT you suck. Dont pollute the thread with your "mad progression" pics ever again. You dont listen to advice anyway, so whats the point of coming on BS? You remind me of some fucked up troll, who posts whack shit for attention, except you are actually being serious.


serious cow is SERIOUS
http://media.ebaumsworld.com/mediaFiles/picture/736032/80600146.jpg

Atmos419
11-26-2009, 12:30 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/1607dc5.jpg
whats the deal with this?
and the, "long island writers week" picture?
dont write my name. and certainly dont write it near the name namix.

Ahh, I wasn't trying to bite anyone's name.
It was for a battle on another forum, and I guess the theme was Long Island Writers Week.

So, that's all it was for.

Honest mistake.

black midget
11-26-2009, 12:44 PM
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Chippey
11-26-2009, 01:34 PM
Atmos - On the last Keanu in blockletters you should try to get your lines straighter, namix looks nice.
Blackmidget - nice style, that drips a bit random.

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn184/CH1PP3Y/CIMG3770.jpg
Crits are always welcome.

smooth_nuts
11-26-2009, 01:36 PM
alot of shit going on in life lately not much time to draw,just some wack bullshit....
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2795/4077598591_0808833e7d_o.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2542/4120039894_68b39a4eb1_o.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2771/4071323946_c474b30bf4_o.jpg
from hallowiener.

CrAzOnEr!
11-26-2009, 01:39 PM
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/M.jpg

CrAzOnEr!
11-26-2009, 01:48 PM
crits please.

black midget
11-26-2009, 01:56 PM
every letter is wack as fuck,they all have some stupid fucking arrow..stop with all that bullshit especially if your not even doing a 3d..looks like u got a sharpie and freestyled the whole thing,use pencil and eraser buddy..point blank,theres not one good thing about it.

CrAzOnEr!
11-26-2009, 01:59 PM
ok well what about this one.
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/greenmeth.jpg

Puberty
11-26-2009, 02:01 PM
Ahh, I wasn't trying to bite anyone's name.
It was for a battle on another forum, and I guess the theme was Long Island Writers Week.

So, that's all it was for.

Honest mistake.

what forum, i want to see.

black midget
11-26-2009, 02:03 PM
did u start a couple months ago or something?? do block type keyboard letters and practice vanashing points.And your hand needs work,stop putting "getting up" and stupid bullshit quotes u got from your marc ecko game.

CrAzOnEr!
11-26-2009, 02:03 PM
ok man thanks for the crits just tryin to get better.

CrAzOnEr!
11-26-2009, 02:06 PM
also what are vanishing points pics???please.

OOPS!
11-26-2009, 02:09 PM
Draw a dot somewhere on the paper and draw every 3d line going to that dot. Then connect the lines along the piece.

black midget
11-26-2009, 02:14 PM
dont feal bad cuz your shits wack your gonna be bad for a very long time and thats ok,its all part of the process..ive been doing graffiti for around 4 years filled numerous amounts of blackbook's and i still dont like how my shit looks. i sujest you change your name theres already a couple people with meth in there name try to be more original,couple hand's for you. http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2701.jpg
GO OVER HERE ---> http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

faser
11-26-2009, 02:46 PM
serious cow is SERIOUS
http://i48.tinypic.com/xb09ra.png

Flawless Victory
11-26-2009, 02:57 PM
Oh my fucking god, dude.
That's the GREATEST.

Fury
11-26-2009, 03:23 PM
Does anyone give crits anymore? :(

faser
11-26-2009, 03:42 PM
Oh my fucking god, dude.
That's the GREATEST.

;D

suparjafar
11-26-2009, 03:57 PM
Oh my fucking god, dude.
That's the GREATEST.

+1

TheToy
11-26-2009, 04:04 PM
There are some serious nerds on this forum with too much time on their hands...

I'll let you guys draw your own conclusions.
(No puns intended. I know some of you are gonna' wanna' draw me a pretty pretty picture.)

WOP
11-26-2009, 04:24 PM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2700.jpg

loose the drip, work on your letters, try keeping them the same size for now and try to do straight lines

WOP
11-26-2009, 04:27 PM
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/M.jpg

loose the arows man, work only with bars, try keeping the same width, try adding a dip of shadow

WOP
11-26-2009, 04:30 PM
ok well what about this one.
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/greenmeth.jpg

try keeping the same width and put a shadow or 3d better then the one before

gumOnShoe
11-26-2009, 05:05 PM
http://i48.tinypic.com/xb09ra.png

I FUCKING LOL'd.

@Black midget: that piece you posted looks like a big shit.

suparjafar
11-26-2009, 05:11 PM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2700.jpg

lose the swastika. ;]

black midget
11-26-2009, 05:24 PM
both suparjafar and gumonshoe are my #1 fans ,thanks!

gumOnShoe
11-26-2009, 05:25 PM
lolololololololololol

zennegen
11-26-2009, 06:05 PM
There are some serious nerds on this forum with too much time on their hands...


and that makes you... what, exactly?
everytime somebody says something about you, you always come back with the same exact comebacks. every time. nobody was even talking to you, you just jumped in. and you're calling FV a drama queen? get the fuck out of here.

TheToy
11-26-2009, 07:10 PM
Nobody says shit about me except you. Pay attention. No one on these forums gives a fuck about me. Anion is old shit, son. Ya, I called FV a drama queen. Dude's been pretty chill lately. Why you gotta' bring up old shit?

Fuckin' draggin' FV into this cause you can't fight your way out of a wet paper bag, with scissors in your hands.

W_G_O_N_E
11-26-2009, 07:20 PM
http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/20/dscn4154q.jpg

zennegen
11-26-2009, 07:20 PM
Nobody says shit about me except you. Pay attention. No one on these forums gives a fuck about me. Anion is old shit, son. Ya, I called FV a drama queen. Dude's been pretty chill lately. Why you gotta' bring up old shit?

Fuckin' draggin' FV into this cause you can't fight your way out of a wet paper bag, with scissors in your hands.

dawg, you must be blind. you are old news, nobody talks about you anymore. because you're nothing. i'm not dragging FV into shit, i simply stated that you are a hypocrite. you call other people drama queens when you're the one jumping into shit that has nothing to do with you. you know what i think?

anion=stot.

TheToy
11-26-2009, 07:33 PM
dawg, you must be blind. you are old news, nobody talks about you anymore. because you're nothing. i'm not dragging FV into shit, i simply stated that you are a hypocrite. you call other people drama queens when you're the one jumping into shit that has nothing to do with you. you know what i think?

anion=stot.

Dude. Did you fucking read what I posted before? Slow the fuck down and absorb it. You make no sense. I just said I was old news and no one gives a fuck about me and you tell me Im blind? I didn't say everyone loves me. Pay attention. Damn. You're like a fucking stone.

Get off Stots dick. He has nothing to do with this.

I just lost ten braincells arguing with your troll ass.

Flawless Victory
11-26-2009, 07:44 PM
Who's really coming out on top, then?
This *****'s laughing and you just lost 10 braincells.

Fury
11-26-2009, 07:46 PM
http://www.kimkimkim.com/images/chill2.jpg

TheToy
11-26-2009, 07:48 PM
He ain't laughin'. That *****' be mad.

He comes out on top cause you came to his rescue. Like fuckin' Sir Lancelot to his fair Maid Marion.

Duh.

zennegen
11-26-2009, 07:51 PM
lmao, get off stot's dick? this was all about him, you fucking moron. you fucking came in out of no where to his rescue. like i said, anion=stot.

Panda Jerk
11-26-2009, 08:02 PM
There are some serious nerds on this forum with too much time on their hands...

I'll let you guys draw your own conclusions.
(No puns intended. I know some of you are gonna' wanna' draw me a pretty pretty picture.)

:rolleyes:

haha im back!!
i highly doubt anyone remembers me but.. hey :p

Fury
11-26-2009, 08:04 PM
This isn't a blackbook, but crits?
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9107/img0469j.jpg

Flawless Victory
11-26-2009, 08:04 PM
He ain't laughin'. That *****' be mad.

He comes out on top cause you came to his rescue. Like fuckin' Sir Lancelot to his fair Maid Marion.

Duh.

I don't see how I came to anyone's rescue.
You are grasping for reasons to start shit with people.
I simply said that you are now, self-admittedly, more stupid because of this pretend confrontation.
This dude is not actually mad, trust, his ass is laughing IRL.
But, of course, you refuse to believe that, because that means that you'd have to deal with the fact that you are getting played like a fool over the internet.

http://i48.tinypic.com/6ged6a.jpg

Fury
11-26-2009, 08:04 PM
Fuck double posts :|

Flawless Victory
11-26-2009, 08:07 PM
Give tham to get tham.

Fury
11-26-2009, 08:09 PM
Your face is pretty awesome.

Flawless Victory
11-26-2009, 08:11 PM
I edited the saturation a little bit,
needed to hide some blemishes.

Panda Jerk
11-26-2009, 08:11 PM
This isn't a blackbook, but crits?
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9107/img0469j.jpg

fuck you
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan-1.jpg
:rolleyes:

cocacola
11-26-2009, 08:11 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2770/4137378662_a965227dd2_o.jpg

TheToy
11-26-2009, 08:12 PM
FV - I'm not gasping for any reasons to start with people. You're the one posting stupid pictures and trying to get me riled up. It goes to show, you are in fact a drama queen. Say whatever you want. You're a fuckin' tool. You haven't posted a painted picture since you got ripped up on that shitty ass EARN1 in the abandoned building with the wack ass drop shadow. Your spirit get crushed on that one?

Flawless Victory
11-26-2009, 08:15 PM
Haha, I don't have to say shit that you didn't already say yourself, dude.
and yes, your one comment saying that you were displeased with my piece caused me to stop posting my shit on the internet.
I should probably thank you for that, actually.

Fury
11-26-2009, 08:16 PM
Coca - Green isn't reflected on the car, but looks good.
Panda - Looks clean, but C is a little weird though.

Panda Jerk
11-26-2009, 08:17 PM
Coca - Green isn't reflected on the car, but looks good.
Panda - Looks clean, but C is a little weird though.

its an e :p

Fury
11-26-2009, 08:20 PM
My bad lol Open up the hole more, since it doesn't look anything like the other one?

Flawless Victory
11-26-2009, 08:22 PM
I'm thinking it's a capital E.
That's what it looks like to me, at least.

Fury
11-26-2009, 08:25 PM
^ Yeah I see it now. I think it's that line in the middle that's fucking me up, not sure.

zennegen
11-26-2009, 08:57 PM
FV - I'm not gasping for any reasons to start with people. You're the one posting stupid pictures and trying to get me riled up. It goes to show, you are in fact a drama queen. Say whatever you want. You're a fuckin' tool. You haven't posted a painted picture since you got ripped up on that shitty ass EARN1 in the abandoned building with the wack ass drop shadow. Your spirit get crushed on that one?

and you've never posted shit outside of your backyard so... what are you bitching about?

TheToy
11-26-2009, 09:22 PM
Sorry, but you're wrong.

zennegen
11-26-2009, 09:33 PM
OHRLY? sorry, i meant something that YOU painted. and wow, good job sigging that shit. your a fucking troll dude.

Flawless Victory
11-26-2009, 09:39 PM
It's okay, I wasn't being sarcastic at all.
Nobody thinks he is dull as fuck for taking what I say literally, because I mean it literally.

cocacola
11-26-2009, 10:18 PM
lol its not supposed to relct the green from the letters. i wuz gunna do an bright expolosion in an oldskool city like background but i changed my mind

funhouseXcast
11-26-2009, 11:02 PM
can you guys battle or shut the fuck up?

coca im really likin that, your structure is getting alot smoother.

Panda, im sure you're well aware of this, but you don't belong here.

Bombing With Insurance
11-26-2009, 11:05 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2770/4137378662_a965227dd2_o.jpg

You need to start taking your time on stuff your stuff would look so much better if they were less sloppy.

Chippey
11-26-2009, 11:37 PM
well theres lots of beef down here, could prove for some interesting battles.
cocacola - the reflection on the car should have been blended into the black more, and it needed to have some green aswell, nice work on the shading.

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn184/CH1PP3Y/IMG_0001-1.jpg
Crits please, i could also use suggestions for a colour scheme

Con-Artist
11-27-2009, 12:59 AM
Ant- the letters are decent. I can't decide if it's good or not. U definatly got potential. Honestly though I'm not feelin the name

zennegen
11-27-2009, 01:03 AM
it's got potential, but the letter structure is off. leave the 3D alone for a little and work on your letters.

Chippey
11-27-2009, 01:14 AM
alright thanks guys, save that for some other time and get to simps and letter structure. and btw its not my name i just draw random words i find around me sometimes :P.

RedEyes
11-27-2009, 01:16 AM
Chip- I would make the N smaller or top of the T bigger, and connect the letters, i know where ur going with it but its not there.

suparjafar
11-27-2009, 03:10 AM
fuck you
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan-1.jpg
:rolleyes:

this is dope.
intermediate sec for you

also crus dont rush so much

i should take my own advice but whatever heres two throws and some hands

WOP
11-27-2009, 06:38 AM
fuck you
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan-1.jpg
:rolleyes:

work on your E, T and R try keeping the same width of 3D

WOP
11-27-2009, 07:02 AM
well theres lots of beef down here, could prove for some interesting battles.
cocacola - the reflection on the car should have been blended into the black more, and it needed to have some green aswell, nice work on the shading.

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn184/CH1PP3Y/IMG_0001-1.jpg
Crits please, i could also use suggestions for a colour scheme

work on your letters same width everywhere for start and man loose or change your drips the end of A sticks out too much the N is too long

black midget
11-27-2009, 10:22 AM
ant it looks pretty good just take off those drips..superfarjar thats really fucking wack your nowhere near where i am so slow down with the beef towards me, unless ur willing to battle it out..even though pandajerk has his 3d unproportioned i like everything besides that lower case e at the end. and here are some throw's i did while i was shitfaced but fuck it might aswell post something http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2704.jpg

gumOnShoe
11-27-2009, 01:53 PM
EEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
if my eyes could vomit, they would.
lol....

TheToy
11-27-2009, 02:05 PM
I liked 'SNAW' better than 'SNAM'

sinkilla1
11-27-2009, 02:32 PM
black midget lay off my boy far a jar unless u wanna battle me and we know who would win that so sit down and stfu

black midget
11-27-2009, 02:36 PM
kid ur fucking garbage if i battle u that would just be a waste of my time..u have never goten up in your entire life and NO sharpie magnum tags in bathrooms dont count faget
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2709.jpg
unfinished

*WARNING WHAT YOUR ABOUT TO WITNESS ISNT A JOKE AND ISNT MINE!!!!
THIS SIN FAG THINKING HE CAN BEAT ME??
WOW KID UR A FUCKING JOKE

here you go lol wat you guys think
http://i46.tinypic.com/2ljpanc.jpg

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA YOUR BETTER OFF BEING A STONER THAN DOING GRAFFITI,PLEASE IF U STILL INSIST ON BATTLEING ME I WILL BE MORE THAN GLAD TO CRUSH THAT EGO OF YOURS

darkck
11-27-2009, 03:26 PM
black midget - stop getting loud and threatening to battle people its embarrassing, internet beef is bullshit. if you were really that good you wouldnt feel the need to shout everyone else down.

Steezy McCreezy
11-27-2009, 03:30 PM
Quit the lil kiddy beef, your both bad, spend the time you would beefing sketching.

zennegen
11-27-2009, 03:57 PM
i think they should battle...

dark2
11-27-2009, 04:08 PM
crits? i know give them 2 get them but not much 2 crit on this page lol

7704

Steezy McCreezy
11-27-2009, 04:13 PM
i think they should battle...

If ya guys do, make sure to put a null option.

darkck
11-27-2009, 04:13 PM
crits? i know give them 2 get them but not much 2 crit on this page lol

7704

the structure is a good start, youve got the fundamentals, apart from the e, which needs more definition in its shape. if i were you i'd start developing it by adding some slant and flow to the letters

dark2
11-27-2009, 04:30 PM
okay sweet thanx

suparjafar
11-27-2009, 05:52 PM
as much as you dont want to admit it i think your terrible for your years of graff or w.e ive been sketching for two months and i think i got more structure than you midget

gumOnShoe
11-27-2009, 05:54 PM
kid ur fucking garbage if i battle u that would just be a waste of my time..u have never goten up in your entire life and no sharpie magnum tags in bathrooms dont count faget
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/dscn2709.jpg
unfinished


eeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwww. wouldn't be calling anybody garbage with that bullshit, lol...

suparjafar
11-27-2009, 05:56 PM
im going out now but if you wanna battle for fun im downn pick a word dood

black midget
11-27-2009, 06:07 PM
im going out right now also..i dont want to pick the word u can choose

Steezy McCreezy
11-27-2009, 06:34 PM
Do 'kiddy beef'.

dark2
11-27-2009, 06:34 PM
lmao you guys need to get this battle over with

n8galicia
11-27-2009, 08:00 PM
ehh..the throwie S doesn't go and I'm not really liking the G

http://i984.photobucket.com/albums/ae326/damanseen/Mobile%20Uploads/1127091650a.jpg

n8galicia
11-27-2009, 08:01 PM
ehh..the throwie S doesn't go and I'm not really liking the G

http://i984.photobucket.com/albums/ae326/damanseen/Mobile%20Uploads/1127091652a.jpg

zennegen
11-27-2009, 08:02 PM
take that to toy tags...

n8galicia
11-27-2009, 08:02 PM
sorry, worng pic lol

StompBolts!
11-27-2009, 08:21 PM
use bars- seng

rasta tagger
11-27-2009, 09:05 PM
Woops forgot to fill in a piece
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u270/GrrrrrrlJeans/11272005.jpg

zennegen
11-27-2009, 09:35 PM
it doesn't make sense to use an uppercase e then lowercase e right next to eachother, or in the same piece at all... the name sucks, by the way.

Flawless Victory
11-27-2009, 09:49 PM
I don't think geek is a shitty name.
It's catchy, it's obvious how it's pronounced..
G's are a bitch, though.

CrAzOnEr!
11-27-2009, 10:11 PM
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/greenmeth.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/me.jpg

n8galicia
11-27-2009, 10:26 PM
i like the second one, but Im not digging the arrows

suparjafar
11-27-2009, 11:01 PM
noupickmidget

i dont care

Con-Artist
11-27-2009, 11:21 PM
Rasta- I'm honestly really liking that style just make both es upper case. It's original as hell.
Crazoner-i'm liken the first throw thing but the second one is wack man, arrows look really stupid.

Con-Artist
11-27-2009, 11:21 PM
Rasta- I'm honestly really liking that style just make both es upper case. It's original as hell.
Crazoner-i'm liken the first throw thing but the second one is wack man, arrows look really stupid.

Con-Artist
11-27-2009, 11:24 PM
O yea and crazoner ur m kinda looks Like a h

goonzatwork
11-27-2009, 11:51 PM
feeling the first one craz haha thought it said "mentos" for a second but looking decent cuz

black midget
11-27-2009, 11:59 PM
noupickmidget

i dont care

"fuck beef" ..ima knock the fuck out right now ill start sketchin tomorrow

rasta tagger
11-28-2009, 12:11 AM
it doesn't make sense to use an uppercase e then lowercase e right next to eachother, or in the same piece at all... the name sucks, by the way.
I was trying something new with the e's.

CrAzOnEr!
11-28-2009, 12:19 AM
feeling the first one craz haha thought it said "mentos" for a second but looking decent cuz

well thanks man ill be uploading more soon.

Slim Shady
11-28-2009, 12:34 AM
this is my piece. what do you guys think?
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/4683/picture4hb.jpg

n8galicia
11-28-2009, 01:00 AM
that's hella good

Slim Shady
11-28-2009, 01:04 AM
i know.
but how do i improve?

LeaksOne
11-28-2009, 01:08 AM
cocky much? improve by getting a better camera make the hole in the A
WAAYYY smaller. fix your S and define your first letter. i dont even know what it is.

Slim Shady
11-28-2009, 01:18 AM
im not cocky. im the best there's every gonna be though.
just gimme a few days. ima be better than you.

TheToy
11-28-2009, 01:19 AM
it doesn't make sense to use an uppercase e then lowercase e right next to eachother, or in the same piece at all...

Is there a rule about this in the Graffiti Handbook? I must have overlooked it...

You should write the revised copy.

sinkilla1
11-28-2009, 01:25 AM
hahahah blACK MIDGET BRING IT on i would fuck your shit up in a battle least my shit doesnt look like a tigers anus ripped inside out taken a shit on put back in a fat man for a couple weeks who was on a mexican food diet then ripped out again and steam rolled by rosie o donalds fat ass thats how bad you are
Ps. Ive gottten up more then u well prolly not more cause ive only been going for a year and had to lay low for the summer.

I still have atleast 30 tags still running from when i started so back the fuck off
and that alien peice i was fucking around it was against empty can i could have shit on a piece of paper and won just like i can do to you

LeaksOne
11-28-2009, 01:28 AM
im not cocky. im the best there's every gonna be though.
just gimme a few days. ima be better than you.

http://famousdc.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/02/confident-speaker.jpg

Slim Shady
11-28-2009, 01:34 AM
way better than you... its not even gonna take me long... just watch. keep an eye on me.

RedEyes
11-28-2009, 01:45 AM
Less talking more posting flix, u girls wanna bitch start a new forum!

drOping
11-28-2009, 01:46 AM
Slim Shady- You have talked to much, do not speak again until you post 3 more pictures.

Crazoner- I don't like how the middle part of your M is not connected, The pink orange and red one is hurting my eyes, drop the arrows, I do like the handie below it.

Everybody: Less beef, more flix

With that being said...
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/1254/1003158.jpg

RedEyes
11-28-2009, 01:47 AM
For talking
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/p_00044.jpg

Slim Shady
11-28-2009, 01:51 AM
red eyes and droping. suck my dick.

LeaksOne
11-28-2009, 01:52 AM
way better than you... its not even gonna take me long... just watch. keep an eye on me.

no thanks. keep an eye on yourself. i dont wana waste my time lookin at your blurry pics and watching your slowly progress. but thanks for the offer

edit: sunova im being trolled. and redeyes ill do what i want in this thread. you start a new topic.

Slim Shady
11-28-2009, 02:04 AM
you ARE a fuckin troll bitch.

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/8559/imbetterthanyoufaggots.jpg

b SQUARED 08
11-28-2009, 02:08 AM
Last ~10 pages have been nothing but bitching between toys with no talent and apparently no balls to step up and battle eachother. Do us all a favor and don't post unless you have enough experience to understand that you are posting in the toy section and you suck right now. Open your eyes and understand that you have a lot to learn. If you can't do this, just give up on wasting your time on this forum and move on. Simple as that.

Slek: If I were you, I'd go back to doing straight letters because your letters are way too skewed (especially your S). Go back to simples and you'll develop a better understanding of how the letters are constructed. Work your way up from there.

Sico: Lookin' clean. Your i looks a bit out of place because it is lowercase, but other than that, it looks pretty good.

Bazer
11-28-2009, 02:11 AM
cool story, bro.

slims gonna be more dope than anyone here yo. for real. kids got a flame that can't be put out.

RedEyes
11-28-2009, 02:16 AM
For talking
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/p_00044.jpg
Bump to clean page.

Slim Shady
11-28-2009, 02:25 AM
looks good^
maybe your letters would look better closer. i noticed alot of writers dont really do there letters as spaced out as that.
oh yeah suck my dick.

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/9339/slimsz.jpg

n8galicia
11-28-2009, 02:31 AM
yo slim shady, you might think you're good, but to be honest you suck, so go simple. and besides, no beef, but i was being sarcastic in my comment breh.

so go simple, and drop the cockiness

LeaksOne
11-28-2009, 02:32 AM
there you go. better pic. now its lookin better. your m needs tweaking.

Slim Shady
11-28-2009, 02:41 AM
simple like this?
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/2796/slimshadysharp.jpg

i think the reason you guy suck is because you do nothing but simples. how are you supposed to get good at something you dont do (the thing you dont do being not simples) it different.

gumOnShoe
11-28-2009, 02:41 AM
you ARE a fuckin troll bitch.

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/8559/imbetterthanyoufaggots.jpg


that shit looks TOUGH.
you should take that to the intermediate thread so they can see that piece too.

LeaksOne
11-28-2009, 02:51 AM
simple like this?
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/2796/slimshadysharp.jpg

i think the reason you guy suck is because you do nothing but simples. how are you supposed to get good at something you dont do (the thing you dont do being not simples) it different.

i think the reason people do simps is to get a grasp of there letters to be able to bend the bars and add proper extensions.

gumOnShoe
11-28-2009, 02:52 AM
seriously though, try making that bigger next time. shit's like in a small ass corner.

suparjafar
11-28-2009, 03:07 AM
so blackmidget i just finished watching pulp fiction and its 3 am, and i forgot about our little fuckbeef thing. i didnt sketch this throw or anything so you can just do beef or whatever you want

Slim Shady
11-28-2009, 03:08 AM
still bigger than your dick!

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/6802/kjlkp.jpg

suparjafar, looks gay, start over from scratch.

LeaksOne
11-28-2009, 03:10 AM
jafar i dont agree with that B. the E's and F are acceptable but still need work

suparjafar
11-28-2009, 03:15 AM
so you do a beef throw without sketchin slim dood

Fury
11-28-2009, 03:17 AM
^ Agreed with Leaks.

And Pulp Fiction is friggin' awesome. Go watch it again.

Slim - Chill out, go simple. And by simple, I mean keyboard letter simple.

Slim Shady
11-28-2009, 03:22 AM
so you do a beef throw without sketchin slim dood

you dont want it kid.
it bring it to ya front door like fed ex.

suparjafar
11-28-2009, 03:35 AM
good one. k do it im going to bed

lord_plankton
11-28-2009, 06:57 AM
looks good^
maybe your letters would look better closer. i noticed alot of writers dont really do there letters as spaced out as that.
oh yeah suck my dick.

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/9339/slimsz.jpg

this one isnt lookin too bad though

massacreman
11-28-2009, 07:03 AM
haha slim shadeeey acting real tough on the interwebs
no need to feel better than others, no need for beef.

funhouseXcast
11-28-2009, 11:16 AM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=294&pictureid=2772

justa quick structure. crits much appreicated.

slim, make your letters closer to the sam size

zennegen
11-28-2009, 11:57 AM
Is there a rule about this in the Graffiti Handbook? I must have overlooked it...

You should write the revised copy.

shut up stot.

RedEyes
11-28-2009, 12:06 PM
Sate- the AT is solid just work on your S and E make them straighter and work on both bottoms of the letter so that their more solid.

black midget
11-28-2009, 12:25 PM
sate i like how it looks overall but there's something about that e that i dont like..slim is lookin dope,i'd like to see it in a bigger scale though.And superjar im going to start on that sketch the second i get over this hangover..and i dont want a throwy battle and the word is not just beef its "fuck beef" aight

drOping
11-28-2009, 12:42 PM
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/1254/1003158.jpg[/IMG]

Bump for a crit or 2

funhouseXcast
11-28-2009, 12:46 PM
that's actually fucking dope^^^^^^^ nice handies.

iDeemyouSiren
11-28-2009, 01:10 PM
Im really liking that slek its fresh as fuck

suparjafar
11-28-2009, 03:13 PM
thought it was a throwie battle. sorry if you thought it was piecing, im not wasting time on that. doa throw or w.e if you dont want to i really do not care

Black Flag
11-28-2009, 03:16 PM
Seriously guys?

@ Slek

The background and the fill are dope, the letters are far from good.

eg. your S is three times bigger than your L, your extensions make your letters crooked, etc

black midget
11-28-2009, 04:09 PM
.

Fury
11-28-2009, 06:11 PM
Is that the Internet Explorer icon?

funhouseXcast
11-28-2009, 07:04 PM
yes, a shitty one too.

cocacola
11-28-2009, 07:16 PM
lol........sketchin isnt graffiti.... its an accesory of graffiti but not graffiti, PAINTING IS GRAFFITI.
new style, idk how that green dot get on the r ....when i looked on the paper ther wuz no green dot...http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2804/4142327676_5ca0efb608.jpg

funhouseXcast
11-28-2009, 07:18 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=294&pictureid=2773

cocacola
11-28-2009, 07:22 PM
sate: i'd say work a lil more on your letters you got your bars n stuff right but idk bout the smoothness the S covers the A too much , maybe over lap the a over the s? and the connect thingie comming off the S into an A needs to go. OVERlap your letters the other direction .. like A over S , and the T over A, and the E over T. n work on your extensions a lil too.

stekone
11-28-2009, 09:03 PM
shitty pic my bad for the quality


http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg54/Suppie2/DSCF7795.jpg

RedEyes
11-28-2009, 09:47 PM
SATE- You got a dope style just fix that S man make it stand straight.
SlEK-the background is dope looks like some factory shit, the letters need to go more simple, lose the shit extensions and swirls in your letters.

zennegen
11-28-2009, 10:26 PM
shitty sketch my bad for the quality




fix'd.

stekone
11-28-2009, 10:31 PM
hahahah.....mad funnnnyy.....but fuck you

kew1
11-28-2009, 10:38 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-24_1320.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-22_1756.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-20_1642.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-20_1503.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-19_1536.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-19_1038.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-07_2003.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-07_2002.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/October-18_1911.jpg

Con-Artist
11-28-2009, 10:57 PM
everything on this page is pretty fresh
couple of shitty simps, and a throw fo jaep i did.. crits?
http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz-9.jpg
http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz-8.jpg
http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/zzzzzzzzzzzzzjaepppppppppppppist.jpg

blackpeople
11-28-2009, 11:48 PM
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0758.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0759.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0760.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0761.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0762.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0763.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/DSCN0764.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00302.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/RSCN0652.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00295.jpg

blackpeople
11-28-2009, 11:51 PM
....http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00173.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00174.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00212.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00213.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00215.jpg

funhouseXcast
11-28-2009, 11:56 PM
way to edit your post after i criticized it.

blackpeople
11-29-2009, 12:20 AM
way to edit your post after i criticized it.

what? other post is on page before

kew1
11-29-2009, 12:26 AM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-24_1320.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-22_1756.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-20_1642.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-20_1503.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-19_1536.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-19_1038.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-07_2003.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-07_2002.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/October-18_1911.jpg
crits please an thank u

funhouseXcast
11-29-2009, 12:55 AM
you need to backtrack, but i've seen worse.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=294&pictureid=2774
how's this?

blackpeople
11-29-2009, 01:03 AM
crits?

sinkilla1
11-29-2009, 01:28 AM
black midget cmon ill battle you what u wanna write

CrustOner
11-29-2009, 01:31 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/Photo8.jpg
Thoughts?
Sate: Clean, keep working at it. I'd fix the middle bar on your S.
Kew: You went from simple straight into jumbled shitball. It's progression. Make your simples a little cleaner, and go into little extensions, instead of shitstorms of arrows and bumps. Try to keep your letters the same size. Keep your dimensions together. the more symmetrical your piece is, the better.
Stez: To be honest, I hate your throw, but I REALLY hate your handstyle. It's fucking ugly as hell. Your simple is pretty clean, but I'd fix the T. Oh, and DON'T THROW UP CIRCLE A'S LIKE YOU KNOW WHAT IT MEANS. Especially if you're in a "crew."

blackpeople
11-29-2009, 01:59 AM
can i get critZ from someone on the east coast that know a thing or 2 about throws basics and short hands not from a LA head cus their only thing they do is piece... haha no hate bro and i live everyday of my life like its a anarchy so dont tell me not too throw up a ANARCHY SIGN CUS IMA THROW UP WHATEVER THE FUCK I WANT GOT IT??

blackpeople
11-29-2009, 02:01 AM
and fuck u if u dont like it

OOPS!
11-29-2009, 02:02 AM
Crust that concept is dope as fuck. Build on it. Do a full color piece

faser
11-29-2009, 02:02 AM
^ blackpeople you're fucken retarded bro

OOPS!
11-29-2009, 02:03 AM
Blackpeople. I'm from Florida and your shit AND your attitude sucks. Get the fuck out of here with that.

NeVeR4O1
11-29-2009, 02:06 AM
Blackpeople. I'm from Florida and your shit AND your attitude sucks. Get the fuck out of here with that.

its tru^^

crust was givin u pointers and tryn to help YOU out and u give him shit for it? look at his peice....its like 1000x better than anything u have so learn how to handle crits and the truth, if not then get the fuck out and go get beat up at ur local spot

blackpeople
11-29-2009, 02:15 AM
its tru^^

crust was givin u pointers and tryn to help YOU out and u give him shit for it? look at his peice....its like 1000x better than anything u have so learn how to handle crits and the truth, if not then get the fuck out and go get beat up at ur local spot

dog 1 never and will never get beat up at a local spot and 2 i just dont like with a LA motherfucker is gonnna talk about throws when over in LA they only focus on there pieces and of course his piece is gonna be better then mine niggga i dont go around studying pieces like the fuckers in LA do....i just simpley asked for another crit from a fucker on east coast that know the different kinds of throw and know good from bad.....and i dont like a motherfucker telling me not to throw up something i believe in that kind of shit will get your ass laid flat out over here idk where from but if i was in your face i bet u wouldnt say that shit

OOPS!
11-29-2009, 02:18 AM
This is the blackbook forum you dumb piece of shit. And guess what... LA has some of the dopest active bombers on earth. Your shit is fucking whack. get a grip on reality and realize that it's possible for your shit to actually suck. And aren't you a fucking badass threatening someone over the internet?

PS: Stop with the fucking coast beef. You sound like an ignorant jackass. Negro.

NeVeR4O1
11-29-2009, 02:19 AM
ight watever homie jus do you and dont ask for crits next time if ur gunna complain about what someone thinks about ur stuff

Flawless Victory
11-29-2009, 02:20 AM
That straight is pretty nice, but the throw is weak.
the S and T are alright, but bland.
the E and Z are just weak, especially the Z.

RedEyes
11-29-2009, 02:25 AM
Yo Black my boy wrights STEZ
http://www.flickr.com/photos/europe1234/4140297602/
SATE-your S is getting better and the E is developing.

Flawless Victory
11-29-2009, 02:27 AM
Yeah? He does too.
You mad about it, nuffa?

drOping
11-29-2009, 02:28 AM
Crust- there is a lot going on there, maybe tone it down a tad, or space some of your accessories out...but otherwise not half bad

Sate- coming along nicely, I dont like the ends of your S, the top is a little too tiny and the bottom looks a little off

Kew- The first one, the K is so unproportional. Third one is def the best...work on that style. The rest have to much going on

Blackmidget- about all I like is those all black throws

I know some of you said I should go back to simples...but I just can't bring myself to do keyboard letters...it's so Boring. I could not resist from hittin up a new style. Anyways
http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/8998/1003159.jpg (http://img28.imageshack.us/i/1003159.jpg/) http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1003159.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img28/1003159.jpg/1/)

RedEyes
11-29-2009, 02:30 AM
Yeah? He does too.
You mad about it, nuffa?

No just saying, and im sure hes not the only one, consider a new name.

blackpeople
11-29-2009, 02:33 AM
No just saying, and im sure hes not the only one, consider a new name.

haha im not tryna be a ass but im not switching my shit i can say stez2 if i wanted to but i dont really know how many stez are out there let alone care? i ve never seen his stuff around my way its in europe probably never will haha so chill
i dont think many people will be like is that delaware stez or europe stez haha

faser
11-29-2009, 02:33 AM
i wonder how many sico's there are, i mean its such a sick name

RedEyes
11-29-2009, 02:37 AM
Alright man i was just saying, and VC is in Buffalo.
Faser-lick my ballz man, SICO is just a toy name im running with till i come up with something, like i said i just started this summer.

faser
11-29-2009, 02:44 AM
Id rather come up with something now than bother getting up with something I will definitely drop.

drOping
11-29-2009, 02:46 AM
Holy shit all red eyes said was "hey this guy writes the same thing, CONSIDER a new name" I dunno but that sounds like he is just trying to inform you in a polite manner. Lets all just relax and give drOp some crits

RedEyes
11-29-2009, 02:47 AM
Well im not really "bombing" now anyways, ill hit chill day spots to 1. work on can control and 2. you shouldnt really "bomb" with out a year at least in the books.

Slek- man i can only say the same crits so many times.

Steezy McCreezy
11-29-2009, 11:12 AM
Frankly, you should do whatever ya want, I've ploughed through tons of names, just hoping I'd stick to one, maybe I'm not very persistent.

kew1
11-29-2009, 12:23 PM
....http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00173.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00174.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00212.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00213.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00215.jpg

im from rhode island an the stez throwie anit to bad from wat i see round here prov is full of bombs everywhere it kinda reminds me of a ster style

Con-Artist
11-29-2009, 12:23 PM
droping-fills sick, letters are decent, and i really like how u have it at the top left of the page with those bars going to it.

simp i just did, liked it alot better before i colored it in with sharpies
http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz-10.jpg
crits?

black midget
11-29-2009, 12:25 PM
black midget cmon ill battle you what u wanna write

all your letters consist on fucking arrows and horrible control over outlines and fucked up color combinations and u espect to win? you pick word kid.

zennegen
11-29-2009, 01:04 PM
didn't you guys already battle? fuck, man. hurry up.

CrustOner
11-29-2009, 01:30 PM
Oh, and "Stez", I'll handstyle AND throw battle you.

Atmos419
11-29-2009, 01:52 PM
Here's what I'm working on, at the moment.
Nothing special.

http://i46.tinypic.com/w7kgsh.jpg
http://i46.tinypic.com/28arq1i.jpg
http://i46.tinypic.com/2091075.jpg
http://i46.tinypic.com/10wmqs0.jpg

I know the letters are f*cked.
But whatev's.
I'll have the finished ish up soon.

suparjafar
11-29-2009, 02:22 PM
blackmidget post your throwup plz

RedEyes
11-29-2009, 02:56 PM
Atmos stick to your anime and Hentai kid leave graff to hip hop.

Flawless Victory
11-29-2009, 03:11 PM
Graffiti = hip hop?
Are you kidding, dude?
Graffiti wasn't hip hop when it started.
Even if it was, it certainly isn't anymore.

RedEyes
11-29-2009, 03:18 PM
Learn your history Toy, graff and hip hop go hand and hand. granted times have changed and we got emo and grudge kids now but hip hop is the roots.

Flawless Victory
11-29-2009, 03:20 PM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
man oh man oh man.
Get at me when you stop writing Sico, kid.

RedEyes
11-29-2009, 03:28 PM
get at me when u stop guzzeling cock.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/8479354@N07/

black midget
11-29-2009, 03:30 PM
blackmidget post your throwup plz

buddy word is "fuck beef" not just beef..im doing it right now..

Fury
11-29-2009, 03:35 PM
Been a while since I've posted anything, and it's about time for shit to actually get up in this thread instead of just beef.
Btw RedEyes, that was in 2007, and he didn't even have that name yet. I'm also pretty damn sure that's not his flickr anyway.

Crits:
Lux - Your X is a little messed up, and it doesn't match the width of the other two letters.
Somber - That M is a little bit too wide and is bigger than the other letters.
Steez - I personally don't like halos in handys, but your throw is alright. Your simp is a little weird though, since you never repeat any of the line widths (S) on any other letter. Have it be all bars or repeat the line width again.

I'm not sure if I should stick to a capital A or lowercase.

Flawless Victory
11-29-2009, 03:38 PM
get at me when u stop guzzeling cock.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/8479354@N07/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/fellatingashotgun
Lrn2videogames, *****.

LeaksOne
11-29-2009, 05:00 PM
http://scienceblogs.com/isisthescientist/upload/2009/02/whats_a_gal_gotta_do_to_get_a/confused.jpg

that needs so much work.

suparjafar
11-29-2009, 05:50 PM
lol i think i won

Atmos419
11-29-2009, 06:21 PM
Atmos stick to your anime and Hentai kid leave graff to hip hop.

There's nothing wrong with mixing manga and graff, last I checked?
Hell, far as I know, a lot of writers mix manga in their characters.
Also, graff isn't strictly hip hop, either.
Stop grouping every writer together like we're all the same.
Last I checked, individuality is a key part to graff.
So either give me constructive criticism on my work, or shut the hell up. Don't worry about me, worry about my work, ya dig?

And Fury, I know I fucked up the letters. It's been a minute since I drew anything, so I was really just tryin' to push anything out, ya know?
Oh, and my name is Atmos, homie.
Lux is my friends name. I just draw that when I'm being lazy and don't feel like writing 5 letters.

-Empty-Can-
11-29-2009, 06:29 PM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2717.jpg

Buck Beer?

CrustOner
11-29-2009, 06:35 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/Photo8.jpg

http://i49.tinypic.com/2cx6ex1.jpg
For a view on the letters before I added everything else.

black midget
11-29-2009, 06:37 PM
lol i think i won

you havent even posted yours yet :rolleyes:

CrustOner
11-29-2009, 06:42 PM
But he won.

blackpeople
11-29-2009, 06:47 PM
Oh, and "Stez", I'll handstyle AND throw battle you.
ok word

CrustOner
11-29-2009, 06:51 PM
ok word

Off to the Toy Battle Chat Thread.

suparjafar
11-29-2009, 07:17 PM
i said to do a throw you did and mine was better. /battle

CrustOner
11-29-2009, 07:21 PM
Not a whole hell of a lot better.. but better.

suparjafar
11-29-2009, 07:27 PM
well i didnt even sketch mine or think of it at first...so id say midget work on structure before you add all that extra shit

-Empty-Can-
11-29-2009, 07:48 PM
So your saying yours was better when you didn't even post it? Or even draw it. You can't just says yours is better because you think so. Just because his is bad doesn't mean you won. Thats kinda cocky.

Flawless Victory
11-29-2009, 07:52 PM
If you are sweating about cocky people in graffiti, you are in for a very disappointing and stressful life.

suparjafar
11-29-2009, 07:58 PM
go back a few pages empty can. and chill out. just sayin

sinkilla1
11-29-2009, 08:00 PM
no guys i win because black midget really sucks balls wtf is that really reallllyy OMFG I WANTED TO PUKE WEN I SAW THAT FUCK
Some staight i have been working one
http://i49.tinypic.com/2wggmya.jpg
http://i48.tinypic.com/2v2urna.jpg

suparjafar
11-29-2009, 08:03 PM
i like the second one.

sinkilla1
11-29-2009, 08:03 PM
i got more one sec those are like before thanks giving

-Empty-Can-
11-29-2009, 08:03 PM
go back a few pages empty can. and chill out. just sayin

Were not talking about each others work. I'm just saying that don't say you won a battle because you think yours is better when you didn't even draw it.

sinkilla1
11-29-2009, 08:05 PM
but it is black midgets looked like a vagina ruipped inside out and put back in to rosie odonald that fat fuck rest her vagina

CrustOner
11-29-2009, 08:09 PM
Were not talking about each others work. I'm just saying that don't say you won a battle because you think yours is better when you didn't even draw it.

He did draw it. He did a mediocre throw that said "Beef" alone. like 4 pages back.

PRANEONE
11-29-2009, 08:13 PM
http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/2628/picture043z.jpg

black midget
11-29-2009, 08:23 PM
YOU MUST BE OUT YOUR MIND KID,I DIDNT SKETCH THAT STUPID SHIT I DID AND IT WAS OBVIOUS I DIDNT TRY AFTER LOOKING AT HOW HORRIBLE YOURS FUCKING WAS..I NEVER EVEN SAID IT WAS A THROWY BATTLE AND THE WORD WAS "FUCK BEEF" NOT JUST BEEF..NOBODY EVEN VOTED AND U DECLARE YOURSELF WINNER??YOUR A FUCKING CLOWN KID. superjar http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/toy.jpg

VS

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2717.jpg
black midget

..let everyone decide kid

CrustOner
11-29-2009, 08:25 PM
They both suck. But Super's wins.

-Empty-Can-
11-29-2009, 08:26 PM
I vote null

I liked superjafars Idea better. The concept you had was nice but poorly executed. The B doesn't really fit and your lines are all kinda off.

black midget it's just terrible

RedEyes
11-29-2009, 08:34 PM
My vote goes to super even though he didnt even write the whole word.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo44.jpg

hpir
11-29-2009, 08:42 PM
all these new coming ppl need to get the sand outa there vaginas, stop bitching about shit, and hit the books cause most of this page fuckin blows

suparjafar
11-29-2009, 08:52 PM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2667.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0194.jpg
just sayin

suparjafar
11-29-2009, 08:55 PM
and im not saying im good or anything. and i know my shits wack, but realize your shit is too. no real beef, its the internet. just sayin, get your head outta your ass and realize i can bag on your shit all i want, you dont have to listen.