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cocacola
11-29-2009, 08:01 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2545/4145899086_a4ee775bdc.jpg

milk boxx
11-29-2009, 08:20 PM
cola- change the bottom part of the S its not really smooth

funhouseXcast
11-29-2009, 08:26 PM
^ i agree with him

and to this beef, you should both be fucking embarrassed.

EST2007
11-29-2009, 08:27 PM
if u really wanted to define those cracks i'd add the shine marks. otherwise you lose depth

suparjafar
11-29-2009, 09:46 PM
crus i like it but i feel like your s and u arent connected enough compared to your other letters. also the cracks are a little awkward.

ignore terrible incorrect 3d, its just a different throw style. hows it compare to my old one..

also heres a simp

iDeemyouSiren
11-29-2009, 09:53 PM
I like the 1st snam i think the shading needs to be cleaned up though

CrustOner
11-29-2009, 10:26 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2545/4145899086_a4ee775bdc.jpg

I'll be honest.. back when I was still writing Crust, I would probably take a lot of pointers from that.. haha.

BUT. That was then. this is now.

suparjafar
11-29-2009, 10:29 PM
crus i like it but i feel like your s and u arent connected enough compared to your other letters. also the cracks are a little awkward.

ignore terrible incorrect 3d, its just a different throw style. hows it compare to my old one..

also heres a simp

bumping for crits. cant bump attachments so...
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0173.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0213.jpghttp://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0187.jpg

CrustOner
11-29-2009, 10:34 PM
Make cleaner lines. Your throw's N, A, and M are ugly. The S is barely doable.
I also think both your handstyles are ugly. A few would probably say the long one is nice. I disagree, but maybe that's just me.
Your Simples NEED CLEANER LINES. Your S should look better. N is probably the only good letter, and that's because it's the simplest. When you can make good strokes, then you'll be ready to add better extensions than extra bars in random places.

OOPS!
11-29-2009, 10:37 PM
Im actually feelin the hand on the bottom right. But yeah like he said work on your throw

blackpeople
11-29-2009, 11:00 PM
id have to agree i like that tall hand but everything else need work

RedEyes
11-29-2009, 11:00 PM
My vote goes to super even though he didnt even write the whole word.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo44.jpg

Contestant for a new word any crits?

CrustOner
11-29-2009, 11:09 PM
Your bar on your S and E are too thick. The bottom bar on your E could also be straighter to promote flow. Overall pretty nice though.

Fury
11-30-2009, 12:06 AM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7712&d=1259526831
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7711&d=1259526778

Bump fo' crits.

Slie - What Crust said.
Snam - Second hand looks good. I don't like that M in the simp though.
Coca - Looks good, just get the shine on the cracks.

suparjafar
11-30-2009, 12:13 AM
i understand what you mean crust, but i usually sketch with choppy lines in pencil and make full strokes and a marker afterwards...should i not do that

by the way yeah, the simp was in pencil. ill probably go over it to get the feel for better lines though. my main problem is my shitty shaky hand..=/

CrustOner
11-30-2009, 12:36 AM
there's a difference between sketching lines and not having straight lines at all. I have a super shaky hand too.. Just try to set yourself up where you don't shake as much.

Slim Shady
11-30-2009, 02:21 AM
who doubted me?
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/flkjdflg.jpg

WOP
11-30-2009, 04:33 AM
Slim - its nice but really of balance work on your right side the M

cocacola
11-30-2009, 06:20 AM
lol crust, my full name is cruso, but i dont like doing o's

SirBigO
11-30-2009, 10:04 AM
Yo slim that shit looks dope!

could i get some crits on some of my newest skethes?
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/2268/bild0135b.th.jpg (http://img266.imageshack.us/i/bild0135b.jpg/)
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/8871/bild0132.th.jpg (http://img690.imageshack.us/i/bild0132.jpg/)
http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/9987/bild0130.th.jpg (http://img34.imageshack.us/i/bild0130.jpg/)

CrAzOnEr!
11-30-2009, 10:51 AM
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/methossketch.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/tfbpivk.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/methossketchchar.jpg

RedEyes
11-30-2009, 11:07 AM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo2.jpg
Crits? ignore the drop shadow i ffed up.

lord_plankton
11-30-2009, 12:35 PM
who doubted me?
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/flkjdflg.jpg

mid part is messed up, s is a lil too crazy compared to the M but still nice,
i really like the m though u might want to lose the thick bar
of its foot make it look more similar to the s, overall good,
id say try to stick to the style more.

sinkilla1
11-30-2009, 12:38 PM
craz im happy to say ur actually getting better that characters pretty good i liek it

sinkilla1
11-30-2009, 12:57 PM
heres some old shit lol and the first is a religion project i had to do still under constructing tell me what you think
http://i45.tinypic.com/21judxl.jpg
http://i47.tinypic.com/fcuskm.jpg

STUTERS-DAILY
11-30-2009, 02:47 PM
http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/3111/img006s.jpg the blue markers started failing on me so fill looks bad. pretty disapointed with this one.

redeyes- looks to me like theres some dead space. try pushing the letters together some more.
slim- im really digging it. the "S" is my favorite. the "M" is my only problem but good job making the piece symetrical

STUTERS-DAILY
11-30-2009, 02:48 PM
http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/3111/img006s.jpg the blue markers started failing on me so fill looks bad. pretty disapointed with this one.

redeyes- looks to me like theres some dead space. try pushing the letters together some more.
slim- im really digging it. the "S" is my favorite. the "M" is my only problem but good job making the piece symetrical

l3monade
11-30-2009, 03:16 PM
stutr- ur missing drop shadow/3d whatever.. i'd put a whole in that r, and keep it a little more like a keyboard r... i like that its basic though keep working on it

Fury
11-30-2009, 04:29 PM
People seriously have got to start giving crits to get them.
(Directed towards nobody)

cocacola
11-30-2009, 04:49 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2606/4148630934_455b3494fe.jpg

black midget
11-30-2009, 05:01 PM
slim thats looking real tight,that red soke is decent, and crus keep working with that i like it..stutr your 2nd T is completely appart from your U and the color combination is just not doing it for me

canadianchronic
11-30-2009, 05:13 PM
here are a few know one i did, hope the pic works this time.
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8138/p00289.jpg

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/4844/p00292.jpg

funhouseXcast
11-30-2009, 05:31 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=294&pictureid=2776

quick sketch. crits appreicated.
STUTR needs to keep his letters straight for now. And don't color everything you do. Most of what i do is simple structures without 3d or shadow that i just throw out when im done.

CRUS make the bottom loop of your S bigger.

kew1
11-30-2009, 06:04 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-29_2032.jpg i finished it but i fucked up the fillhttp://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-30_1453.jpghttp://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-30_1452.jpg

funhouseXcast
11-30-2009, 06:19 PM
you can't do W. it's just not for you. find a new letter.

iDeemyouSiren
11-30-2009, 06:28 PM
gotta go with funhouse but rather than find a new letter just find a way to make it work with the flow

iDeemyouSiren
11-30-2009, 07:04 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g105/ducttheman/doodlesss.jpg
just something I did in science when I was really bored crits?

kew1
11-30-2009, 07:26 PM
gotta go with funhouse but rather than find a new letter just find a way to make it work with the flow
yea ive had a k an a E in my name since i started writin an i just started fuckin wit Ws like a month ago an i cant seem to figure out the trick

stekone
11-30-2009, 07:50 PM
make an M upside down

STUTERS-DAILY
11-30-2009, 07:57 PM
http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/8730/img004xh.jpg an outline i had that ended up going to shit when i tryed outlining it and stuff. straight letters. plain and simple.

cocacola- the colors arent really going well together for me. i agree with funhouse to bring down the "s" loop some more. it will make it look even with the "c"
funhouse- the "t" and "e" sort of look out of place without some of the extra add ons that the other letters have. good job on the 3-d
deem- work simpler. these extra things on your letters arent helping you. work on getting the 3-d right

STUTERS-DAILY
11-30-2009, 07:59 PM
http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/8730/img004xh.jpg an outline i had that ended up going to shit when i tryed outlining it and stuff. straight letters. plain and simple.

cocacola- the colors arent really going well together for me. i agree with funhouse to bring down the "s" loop some more. it will make it look even with the "c"
funhouse- the "t" and "e" sort of look out of place without some of the extra add ons that the other letters have. good job on the 3-d
deem- work simpler. these extra things on your letters arent helping you. work on getting the 3-d right

my bad about the hard to see lines

sinkilla1
11-30-2009, 07:59 PM
BBBBBBBBBBBBUUUUUUUUUUMP but before that
Deem i dont really like it try doing thinner bars
Crus usaully its great
Kew thats looking pretty tight
Kose i im guessing ? i like the second one work on your throws though
and Sate thats pretty nice and simple
BUMP
http://i45.tinypic.com/21judxl.jpg
http://i45.tinypic.com/f2mvbo.jpg

iDeemyouSiren
11-30-2009, 08:00 PM
^^^^^ can barley make that out (STUTERS-DAILY)

sinkilla1
11-30-2009, 08:15 PM
its a religion project it says lord

CrustOner
11-30-2009, 08:34 PM
Gay.

sinkilla1
11-30-2009, 08:37 PM
FUCK you mr i had to do it and this was the ony thing i could think of ass hole gosh
mah im just playing buti had to do something

suparjafar
11-30-2009, 10:21 PM
soke i like it but watch your bar widths on the s and the e.

garbage down tha way
11-30-2009, 10:30 PM
that soke is dope as shit but that lord thing is disgusting!@

loser
12-01-2009, 01:26 PM
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00316.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00317.jpg
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/russo4life/p_00318.jpg
critz?

suparjafar
12-01-2009, 02:02 PM
solid throw, work on the handie.

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0215.jpg

quickie sa's for snam

massacreman
12-01-2009, 02:04 PM
loser definately has potential, lose the 1 of wahateveryouwriteone(r) because its already in the name

zaco
12-01-2009, 02:35 PM
ive been messing around with the name supa lately

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/7683/supa.jpg

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/6669/handstylesupa.jpg

m!nkusone
12-01-2009, 03:23 PM
crits from people who arent worse than me plz lol

Steezy McCreezy
12-01-2009, 03:43 PM
Holy shit, way too much, don't know if it's just me but I think I actually structure in the letters, kill all those crazy add-ons and work on your letters instead, also give crits to get crits from now on.

rasta tagger
12-01-2009, 03:58 PM
Too many arrows/extension/add-ons. I don't give a fuck if you're better than me I'll crit

kew1
12-01-2009, 04:06 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-01_0713.jpg
since my Ws arnt up 2 standard yet i came up wit this

critz please

kew1
12-01-2009, 04:07 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-01_1406.jpg

funhouseXcast
12-01-2009, 04:35 PM
still don't like your W. and your extensions need better shaping, if you insist on doing them.

kew1
12-01-2009, 04:38 PM
i dont like em either but i def think they r gettin better

n8galicia
12-01-2009, 04:49 PM
crits from people who arent worse than me plz lol

you sir are a dumbass

cocacola
12-01-2009, 06:01 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2695/4150901695_a33ae2b8a4.jpg

sinkilla1
12-01-2009, 06:04 PM
fucking coca cola your so fucking toy wtf is that
lol im just joking that some dope shit i like the clash of greens are those prismas but why no blue outline

cocacola
12-01-2009, 06:26 PM
lol idk i do use prismas but mostly sharpies in bics

sinkilla1
12-01-2009, 06:32 PM
nice

suparjafar
12-01-2009, 06:56 PM
kew your letters look like forced and awkward. work on making things flow
first time using more than basic extentions i guess

CrustOner
12-01-2009, 08:02 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2695/4150901695_a33ae2b8a4.jpg

In my opinion, Crus just seems like such an unfinished name.. Seeing that swiggity sweet piece and everything is good and all.. but I'll never be able to view it as finished. Especially because, structurally, everything is leaning in one direction, instead of all the letters leaning in to middle.

Although I think the C, R, and the U could use some work. And you need to work on that handstyle. Crus is hard to come up with, though.. I don't think I was able to make a good handstyle for it when I was writing Crust..

sinkilla1
12-01-2009, 08:22 PM
coca cola you wanna exchange with me i wanna try your name i write rekr if your interested

suparjafar
12-01-2009, 08:24 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7743&d=1259715378

bumpin

-Empty-Can-
12-01-2009, 08:30 PM
The curls on the S and M look stupid. Loose those. Your S also looks slanted over a little.

leek1
12-01-2009, 09:04 PM
http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/9498/creepc.jpg

Yeah, I suck dick. Just started a few days ago. Crits?

cocacola
12-01-2009, 09:14 PM
alright snkilla

KtRL.
12-01-2009, 11:33 PM
minkus - that sketch is pretty intense, I think you should make it a bit more simple though and try to either put more detail on the bottom left or just drop all those extensions on the bottom right. Because right now it looks like your piece is pretty imbalanced.

A recent sketch, pretty pissed that I used white out in the 3D because it just turned into a mess. Crits yo?!
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00395.jpg

LeaksOne
12-02-2009, 02:44 AM
http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/9498/creepc.jpg

Yeah, I suck dick. Just started a few days ago. Crits?

haha i started out with this name. my advice while your gettin started make all the letters the same size. no faces in your E's and really try and perfect that L to E transition. btw start studying throw style K's now cuz they can be a bitch. they get fun as you get better but get some inspiration.

Aktag
12-02-2009, 10:23 AM
@KTRL
Good piece, keep it up.

Here's my piece...
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/5356/rolin1.jpg

Crits/Comments?

Aktag
12-02-2009, 10:24 AM
Sorry, double post.

KtRL.
12-02-2009, 10:47 AM
AKtag - i would lose the drips and just work on your drop shadow, its a little off in some places for example the top right of your R, your N could use some work too.

Aktag
12-02-2009, 10:54 AM
Thanks, i'll keep an eye on that.

klic
12-02-2009, 01:57 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2629/4120387087_df66022aa7.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2733/4121160520_f2177b0802.jpg

rolin - the drips look stupid

leex - dont worry about fills for now

ska - work on your hand, keep practicing simps

snam - lose all the little chips, loops, whatever

crus - looks pretty good, work on your hand

kew - get rid of all the little sharp edge extension things. the chipmunk ideas pretty cool

m!nkusone - wtf is that? lol, read the new to graffiti thread

medacog1
12-02-2009, 02:36 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2733/4121160520_f2177b0802.jpg


the red onei s really nice ..you could do some crazy fills with that basic style

l3monade
12-02-2009, 02:37 PM
ktrl- make sure ur bars are all prportionate , and it slants a bit and i'd loose the bar on the k, the a looks good, keep working with this simple style

DankNC
12-02-2009, 02:41 PM
klic- i have nothing to say, cause i personally can't see anything wrong with it, so keep workin on it,
leek- keeep it simple and youll catch on
Rolin- dont really like those particular type of drips, but good letter structure, work on the r and n
ska- listen to klic

http://i835.photobucket.com/albums/zz275/peeny5791/1202091500-1.jpg

http://i835.photobucket.com/albums/zz275/peeny5791/downsized_1202091520.jpg

recent sketches, crits?

sinkilla1
12-02-2009, 03:37 PM
well coca cola you cant say i didnt try lol
the thing you are about to see is really toy
http://i46.tinypic.com/1zw1d2o.jpg

suparjafar
12-02-2009, 03:44 PM
who wants to throw exchange/handie exchange

cocacola
12-02-2009, 04:12 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2717/4153346423_cb234b72b3.jpg
yo rekr wait like a hour because im going to get more supplies . then ill have your exchange done bro. and dont sweat it about being a toy im still a toy , and the toys on PG still think im a toy but i post in intermediate anyways.

leek1
12-02-2009, 05:02 PM
http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/9498/creepc.jpg

Yeah, I suck dick. Just started a few days ago. Crits?

Bump for more crits.

LeaksOne
12-02-2009, 05:10 PM
damn i gave you all the crits you need

RedEyes
12-02-2009, 05:15 PM
Leek-your L looks like a terd, make it a letter, your E's need to ditch the faces, and your K looks like a star fish made of terds.

Fury
12-02-2009, 05:21 PM
Fuck klic, you got mad better since the last time I saw you here. The E in the throw looks a bit off though.

Bump again for not getting crits :|
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7712&d=1259526831
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7711&d=1259526778

Fury
12-02-2009, 05:22 PM
Fuck klic, you got mad better since the last time I saw you here. The E in the throw looks a bit off though.

Bump again for not getting crits :|
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7712&d=1259526831
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7711&d=1259526778

DankNC
12-02-2009, 05:22 PM
fury- they're clean, and you look like you have got/or are getting the hang of 3-d, keep workin with it, and work on a your tag

heres another one i just finished
http://i835.photobucket.com/albums/zz275/peeny5791/1202091811.jpg

DankNC
12-02-2009, 05:26 PM
bump from last page



http://i835.photobucket.com/albums/zz275/peeny5791/1202091500-1.jpg

http://i835.photobucket.com/albums/zz275/peeny5791/downsized_1202091520.jpg

sinkilla1
12-02-2009, 05:26 PM
dank i dont know why but i love your peices espicailly that garfield but you got work on your letters
i tried reall hard fucked up the r when i was outling it and i just suck at l s
http://i47.tinypic.com/2uzcbra.jpg

Fury
12-02-2009, 05:30 PM
Both of you guys need to go simpler.

sinkilla1
12-02-2009, 05:33 PM
one sec ill post the sketch before i filled it ok

cocacola
12-02-2009, 05:43 PM
yo leek keep tryin n if yur gunna do throws at least try n make it flow more better, n i suggest that you should outline over the sharpie silver cus it'll just fuck up your black marker, try usin black PAINT markerz.

leek1
12-02-2009, 08:15 PM
Allright, thanks for the crits. I am going to try and steal some paint markers from a Micheal's or Staples. What should I take? Anything specific?

canadianchronic
12-02-2009, 08:27 PM
if your going to Micheal's gets some deco paint markers

sinkilla1
12-02-2009, 08:31 PM
get the sharpies mad dope not the paint kind the bullet tip they great for catching tags on da way to the bus stop lol
nah im fucking with you take as many decos as you can just keep picking the colors you like shuve some in your pocket wait and keep doing it until ur satisfied with ur marker choice

cocacola
12-02-2009, 08:46 PM
alright nvm sinkilla i couldnt go get my supplies so ill havbe it by tommarow dude

sinkilla1
12-02-2009, 08:47 PM
its all good

milk boxx
12-02-2009, 09:00 PM
dank not really feeling how small and chubby your letters are.. bring them off the bottom of the page into the middle and make em longer. simp it out
sinkilla make your lettahs the same size, loose the aarow and circle lump off the L and make sure your shine is right.. on your R and E it should be on the other side.


http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0796.jpg

just drew this up.. i know my A is kinda squished down by the WT at the top, ill take that out and make it taller and skinnier.
any other crits?

Gam
12-02-2009, 09:12 PM
Milk- lose the arrows coming out of nothing. Otherwise good fill. E looks a little off though

RedEyes
12-02-2009, 09:16 PM
Yo decos are alright but you should rack madd prismas, just go in with your under shirt tucked in and a hoodie n start fillin your shirt, i got a briefcase full!
Dank-that looks like it should be on a freight, dope
Milk-Fill and highlights are dope, just fix up your E and lose the arrows.
(Gam you beat me to it, lol)

milk boxx
12-02-2009, 09:23 PM
whats up with the E?

Gam
12-02-2009, 09:24 PM
:)

Nyc Sno
12-02-2009, 09:24 PM
well coca cola you cant say i didnt try lol
the thing you are about to see is really toy
http://i46.tinypic.com/1zw1d2o.jpg
you could add at least 3 arrows on the C 2 more on the R 3 on the U and atleast 3 on the s

sinkilla1
12-02-2009, 09:27 PM
fuck you lol ;)

OOPS!
12-02-2009, 09:28 PM
Might be able to fit 4 on the S

suparjafar
12-02-2009, 09:29 PM
haha nyc sno i was thinkin the same thing!

lose that shit

is this name taken, i think i may be getting somewhere with it, since snam isnt flowing too well

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0218.jpg

sinkilla1
12-02-2009, 09:30 PM
i hate you guys

Nyc Sno
12-02-2009, 09:31 PM
i hate you guys
try something like this http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/8730/img004xh.jpg

sinkilla1
12-02-2009, 09:31 PM
who wants to battle see who can fit in the most arrows xD

sinkilla1
12-02-2009, 09:33 PM
fuck you stutr i reck your shit im just not good at piecing
lol its kinda funny cause i write rek

LeaksOne
12-02-2009, 09:33 PM
jafar who cares if its taken. google it to see if its anybody big if not then use it

suparjafar
12-02-2009, 09:35 PM
its not. crits and should i work on that or stick with old snam

Gam
12-02-2009, 09:39 PM
Work on all letters and pick a name that you will have fun writing and want to progress with.

LeaksOne
12-02-2009, 09:40 PM
work with that. R's can be fun as hell. see what you can do with that. and that throw has potential to be pretty solid just some minor tweakage needs to be done

OOPS!
12-02-2009, 09:45 PM
The new trend is writing your gov't name everywhere. If you don't do it you're a toy with no balls.

sinkilla1
12-02-2009, 09:48 PM
like you ?

suparjafar
12-02-2009, 09:50 PM
battle!!! 1111 oneoeoene

OOPS!
12-02-2009, 09:50 PM
Exactly like me

sinkilla1
12-02-2009, 09:50 PM
to show i dont have to use arrows
http://i45.tinypic.com/aon9s6.jpg

RedEyes
12-02-2009, 10:32 PM
Sink-i paint with a kid that writes REK, just saying.
Heres something sweet n simple might roll with this word.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo3.jpg

OOPS!
12-02-2009, 10:38 PM
Everyone writes Rek.

Gam
12-02-2009, 10:45 PM
Redeyes- fix bottom of the S so its even with the top. Make everything the same hight like drop down the N and it will look nice and simple.

milk boxx
12-02-2009, 11:25 PM
Nast looks nice just clean that A and S up.


http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0802.jpg
quick thing i did just in like 5 mins.
new S i was workin with, really gotta work on my A and D any ideas?

suparjafar
12-02-2009, 11:34 PM
rek lookin like bek just sayin watch your r.

nast i really dont like that a but nice word and the other letters are nice

sead i think the a is the letter out of place, but thats just me. it doesnt fix IMO maybe make its right leg jut out like the bottom of the e to help make it flow? idk try that

milk boxx
12-02-2009, 11:56 PM
Nast looks nice just clean that A and S up.

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0796.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0802.jpg
quick thing i did just in like 5 mins.
new S i was workin with, really gotta work on my A and D any ideas?

bizzzzy bump

CrustOner
12-03-2009, 01:07 AM
waaaaayyy better. keep working at that. first is the best.

kew1
12-03-2009, 07:18 AM
hell im diggin this style an the fills keep it up man

Chippey
12-03-2009, 07:32 AM
Nast - your colour schemes are very nice, on your first piece your A looks a bit off, i definately prefer the style of it in the second.

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn184/CH1PP3Y/IMG-2.jpg
Something i did in a spare moment. Simple.

RedEyes
12-03-2009, 11:49 AM
Dont wright chip. Hes NSF
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo5.jpg
some ideas on throwies

.nolove.
12-03-2009, 12:32 PM
write what ever the fuck you want dude. i dont know why everyone keeps telling people to not write something becuase some other person,probably thousands of miles away,writes that shit...

if you dont know the guy personally then why the fuck are you standing up for them?

RedEyes
12-03-2009, 12:58 PM
Its called respect, if you ever got out of the toy section and actually meet real wrightrs you wouldnt want some kids sketchin the same name. Also its not just some dude millions of miles away its a famous wrightr of the East cost so to see some toy sketching his name is fucking gross.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/lions-1.jpg

.nolove.
12-03-2009, 01:30 PM
if he's not in your area then fuck him.write whatever the hell you want.besides the kid is probably gonna change his name or quit within a month or so.mind your own business fool and worry about YOU.not what some other *****s writing.becuase at this juncture your shit needs some work.and by some i mean alot.


the internet is killin the game mayne.fosho.

EST2007
12-03-2009, 01:33 PM
seriously. write whatever you want. who gives a fuck if another writer has the same name, if there is beef from it, then let them fight for the name


Also its not just some dude millions of miles away its a famous wrightr of the East cost so to see some toy sketching his name is fucking gross.


watching you e-suck his e-dick and you dont even know him personally is fucking gross

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 02:35 PM
yoooo Redeys i dont write rek i write reke like aww that reaks
lol i didnt feel like adding the other E

suparjafar
12-03-2009, 02:54 PM
chip work on your handie alot and clean it up i guess

tried a philly says roes dont kill me first time trying

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0219.jpg

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 03:35 PM
snam you watched infamy tagging lol you got the guy with the blunt smoking
but for crit wise thats no where close to a philly hand ill post some i live in delaware like 5 min from filly
and heres a peice i sketchedin school with a pen and filled it at home
crits chip i really dont like that dont be adding swirvy to block let it flow and
Nast redeyes i dont really like that word but its up to you man
mine
dont crit on the wanna be cracks i already know i did it in school dont know why
http://i50.tinypic.com/212ehae.jpg

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 03:35 PM
snam you watched infamy tagging lol you got the guy with the blunt smoking
but for crit wise thats no where close to a philly hand ill post some i live in delaware like 5 min from filly
and heres a peice i sketchedin school with a pen and filled it at home
crits chip i really dont like that dont be adding swirvy to block let it flow and
Nast redeyes i dont really like that word but its up to you man
mine
dont crit on the wanna be cracks i already know i did it in school dont know why
http://i50.tinypic.com/212ehae.jpg

suparjafar
12-03-2009, 03:48 PM
sinkilla i like it make the e in your handie bigger. also no its just a common face looking that way ---> smoking. but saying its nowhere close to a philly isnt really a crit...lol

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 03:48 PM
here you guy ajar
http://i49.tinypic.com/2dc91xu.jpg

suparjafar
12-03-2009, 03:50 PM
eh ive been through that shit before like that tall hand but i just dont think it flows like its not consistent. thanks anyway though i guess

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 03:51 PM
thats why i sayd id show you one on your name icouldnt come up with a wicked though sry if you took that to any offence

suparjafar
12-03-2009, 03:53 PM
nahh. also whatd you use to sketch that rebk

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 03:59 PM
what you were doing was like a tall

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 04:00 PM
a pen lol

RedEyes
12-03-2009, 04:01 PM
watching you e-suck his e-dick and you dont even know him personally is fucking gross[/QUOTE]

Alright my bad chip i guess u can do what ever you want, but for the record i have met CHIP along with other big writers at a NYC event so im not sucking no ones "E-dick". End of convo.

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 04:03 PM
lol E dick

Fury
12-03-2009, 04:24 PM
Bump for moar crits!
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7712&d=1259526831
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7711&d=1259526778

Sinkilla - Work on your bars and just make each one have the same weight. Ex: Your B has a small hole in the top, so above it has a greater weight, and for now, stick to the same widths.
Nast - Second one looks better, but not by much. The S doesn't look very good in either.
Chip - Work on it.

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 04:37 PM
lol that the point to have the small whole and larger whole on bottom its a style from delaware where im from

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 04:46 PM
vega keep working but dont do pen fills with pen they look really ugly other then that its pretty straight except the A

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 05:05 PM
faragar was this the style you were trying to do ?
http://i45.tinypic.com/2j5mkhw.jpg

suparjafar
12-03-2009, 05:13 PM
yeah i dont understand how to do it or how the letters are constructed though, so i tried a simpler alternative =/

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 05:17 PM
yo alright ist actually really simple alright start of with a straight line
go up and make a swirl and then bring that line down to the botom and make the d looking letter to an R in your case and keep repeating ill have one up for you cause i remember last year when i tried to do these there a pain

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 05:17 PM
yo alright ist actually really simple alright start of with a straight line
go up and make a swirl and then bring that line down to the botom and make the d looking letter to an R in your case and keep repeating ill have one up for you cause i remember last year when i tried to do these there a pain

Fury
12-03-2009, 05:43 PM
vega keep working but dont do pen fills with pen they look really ugly other then that its pretty straight except the A

Which A are you referring to? And the pen fills are just so I can get used to going side to side without painting it.

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 05:48 PM
the capital A the lower case A isnt bad

funhouseXcast
12-03-2009, 06:38 PM
fucking crown...

Fury
12-03-2009, 06:55 PM
One could argue that it's a cowboy hat.

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 07:07 PM
its an M it was there before i started ?

Flawless Victory
12-03-2009, 07:56 PM
cowboy hat sounds better.

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 08:02 PM
it fucking does like a kowboy hat lol

cocacola
12-03-2009, 08:22 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2750/4156525478_6f76f37361.jpg
cold antarctic night

zennegen
12-03-2009, 08:32 PM
cowboy hat sounds better.

i totally thought it was a cowboy hat... what's this crown shit?

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 08:37 PM
that color scheme is fucking dope as shit bbut i dont like that extra extension on the R top left

sinkilla1
12-03-2009, 08:51 PM
It was an m it was there before i fucking started rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

zennegen
12-03-2009, 10:00 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2750/4156525478_6f76f37361.jpg
cold antarctic night

bump. the U looks like an O kind of. just something to keep in mind.

haze4life
12-03-2009, 10:27 PM
[QUOTE=klic;1518743]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2629/4120387087_df66022aa7.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2733/4121160520_f2177b0802.jpg

BUMP this Janek cause its the only good shit left in the toy BB since
the Intermidiate page started

EST2007
12-03-2009, 10:28 PM
im not sucking no ones "e-dick". End of convo.
lmao!!! Ahahhahhahahhaahhahahahah

Flawless Victory
12-03-2009, 10:29 PM
Double negatives.

suparjafar
12-03-2009, 11:54 PM
last page was all talk and crus...so yeah crus that u is turning into an o

uhh here ignore terrible s on first throw, and terrible s/r on simp but whatever i guess..=/

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0220.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0221.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0222.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0219.jpg

Gam
12-04-2009, 12:02 AM
Roes- simp in the first one middle looks good just to much dead space between R and O and E and S tighten it up also your S is a little sloppy just work at it, make ur lines less umm shAkey and it will look good also work on your hands.

Gam
12-04-2009, 12:18 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2706/4148384083_0051b55024.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2789/4157248834_76dd312df2.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2718/4156635719_29252d3515.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2727/4156636485_b1741c4eed.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2505/4157398212_fec26af331.jpg

Crits trying out new words

Chippey
12-04-2009, 03:34 AM
didnt know there was another chip... back to the drawing board...

Atmos419
12-04-2009, 10:02 AM
http://i45.tinypic.com/bhy6ih.jpg

Yeah, I know the world looks like crap.
Oh well.
Any crits for the letters?

@Gam,
The middle bar of B's goes into one bar, not two.
Check out the B on your keyboard, yo.

**EDIT**
The letters are outlined in purple, not blue.
Just noticed you can't really see that.

zennegen
12-04-2009, 10:17 AM
dawg, you are trying way too hard. stick to simple shit.

milk boxx
12-04-2009, 06:02 PM
roes work on the ES of your throw bruh
Atmos simpleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssss

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0808.jpg
critz?

AS248
12-04-2009, 06:15 PM
That looks pretty dope milk boxx.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g116/aker129/IMG_2658-1.jpg

Simple shit, but Im workin on it. Hands and throws. Crits?

m!nkusone
12-04-2009, 06:30 PM
you sir are a dumbass

oh icic. please enlighten me then

Gam
12-04-2009, 06:31 PM
As248- go way simpler.. Look ~~~> AS... Simple as that.
Milk- lookin good much better then before. Keep it up.

AS248
12-04-2009, 06:38 PM
For real? Its that bad? I thought it was simple enough as is, damn...

Gam
12-04-2009, 06:59 PM
For real? Its that bad? I thought it was simple enough as is, damn...

You will get better just start out easy and progress from there.

AS248
12-04-2009, 07:58 PM
Like this?

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g116/aker129/IMG_2659-1.jpg

I know that knowing letter structure and all that stuff is important, but this just seems like a step backward. I just want to develop a quick throw and go bombin. I don't want some boring simp that would take a few minutes to lay out with paint.

Flawless Victory
12-04-2009, 08:00 PM
Don't do shit attached to the ground.
Hit me with a PM, too.

AS248
12-04-2009, 08:05 PM
Is that shit a no-no? Cause I though it looked kinda cool. I like cropping things, I do it with my artwork too...

Flawless Victory
12-04-2009, 08:10 PM
Well, it normally just doesn't look good on a wall.
If you are painting trains then go for it, otherwise you kind of want your shit to be at least semi-centered.

AS248
12-04-2009, 08:14 PM
Oh I gotcha.

milk boxx
12-04-2009, 08:58 PM
roes work on the ES of your throw bruh
Atmos simpleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssss

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0808.jpg
critz?

hump.

RedEyes
12-04-2009, 09:28 PM
Bring your S curve lower and your D wider

suparjafar
12-05-2009, 12:47 AM
yeah and sead your s is a bit big

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0223.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0224.jpg

Fury
12-05-2009, 01:09 AM
Not digging the R, but your simp for this was pretty good. I like the wood too, it flows nicely.

Aktag
12-05-2009, 09:08 AM
@Milk Boxx, i really like it. Nice, simple and clean.

1st attempt to add some "add-ons"
So any crit/comment will be really helpfull, cuz i doubt i did it right...
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/3349/pictureml.jpg

Thanks in advice, Rolin

zennegen
12-05-2009, 09:26 AM
don't use extensions or add-ons.

Aktag
12-05-2009, 12:25 PM
What about letter structure ? If you think off all add-ons ?

Fury
12-05-2009, 12:29 PM
^ It seems pretty solid without the extensions.

Aktag
12-05-2009, 01:14 PM
Aight, thanks :)

Stevieboy7
12-05-2009, 02:02 PM
Quick piece i colored while working,
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a21/Stevieboy7/ETC/SDC12027.jpg
some of the 3d overlap is messed, sorry.
Any crits would be awesome.

Gam
12-05-2009, 02:21 PM
Harbor-Not digin the A, looking good keep it up though.

Discretion
12-05-2009, 02:36 PM
http://i352.photobucket.com/albums/r358/future101000/rane11.jpg

zennegen
12-05-2009, 02:43 PM
What about letter structure ? If you think off all add-ons ?

you should try bending your letters and adding some style to it since you pretty much have structure down. after you're good with that, then try add-ons.

black midget
12-05-2009, 03:37 PM
.

Aktag
12-06-2009, 06:37 AM
you should try bending your letters and adding some style to it since you pretty much have structure down. after you're good with that, then try add-ons.
Thanks, i'll try that and post it later on.

RedEyes
12-06-2009, 10:20 AM
Black idk whats up your ass but you defiantly belong in the Toy section. just cuz you can copy somones handtag off B.S. (Rime) doesnt mean your good.

SCOPE2
12-06-2009, 10:29 AM
sead.. u have a sick style.. but u should keep the shading to one side. i think it would come out better.
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01844.jpg

RedEyes
12-06-2009, 10:50 AM
Scope-ITs just plain sloppy, you should make both E's the same, work on your 3D, its missing in way to many places, and the whole piece needs to be cleaned up, looks like you got a shaky hand or something.

gumOnShoe
12-06-2009, 10:55 AM
that K is REEALLY hurting too.

weakfingers
12-06-2009, 11:49 AM
Does anyone not see that black midget met those big writers at some show or soemthing and got them to sign his black book...... Its dumb thats your posting that shit in here though. Its just you showing off that you met them

black midget
12-06-2009, 12:53 PM
what a faget that kid acctualy thought i copyed rimes handstyle lmfao woooow..yea man call it showing off,i really dont care.

Fury
12-06-2009, 01:00 PM
This thread is starting to become an annoyance. :(

Aktag
12-06-2009, 01:06 PM
Any crits would be really helpfull
http://www.shrani.si/f/D/4N/1LOn4WBx/aktag3.jpg

RedEyes
12-06-2009, 01:12 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo7.jpg
Less talking more pictures!

black midget
12-06-2009, 01:19 PM
eliminate those black bubbles it looks like those dog paw prints girls do on there bookbags..the 3d is really skinny for some reason and looks like shit in white color it in black,take off that curve u put on that I,fix the bottom of the s..aktag,im really fealing the simplicity

zennegen
12-06-2009, 03:07 PM
Any crits would be really helpfull
http://www.shrani.si/f/D/4N/1LOn4WBx/aktag3.jpg

this is what i'm talking about. dope dope dope.

edit: on second thought, the K could use some work, but your use of critique is good.

Boris The Blade
12-06-2009, 03:57 PM
I'm new here, so I figured I'd start in the Toy thread. I'm getting sick of the PG bullshit, so...
http://i50.tinypic.com/taiqyw.jpg
wasn't really serious with the throw-up
http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/1027/akordevil.jpg
the R is out of place, i know. and the character is suck.

The top one is my latest, hopefully will have some more up soon.

AKTAG, try working with basic, straight bars. This will help eliminate some of the awkward sway in your letters, especially your Ks

SIKO, I'd say the same for you. Build structure using those basic bars and whatnot.

mawks
12-06-2009, 04:00 PM
^ lovin the style, wanna exchange? ^

Thrice
12-06-2009, 04:03 PM
Pretty nifty man and great sketch. Snatch is a sick flick. I suggest making the little K bar a bit bigger.

xSonnyTx
12-06-2009, 04:08 PM
Akor your style (especially the R) reminds me of a simple version of Alts.
Keep with it I can see your shit going places.

But that arrow on the A looks like shit IMO, and the second K's top right bar should be more noticeable

Boris The Blade
12-06-2009, 04:11 PM
Aight, thanks for the feedback.
Promise I'm not biting ALTS. He's an influence, but biting aint my thing.
And I can see where your coming from for sure. I'll work on the K and A too, for sure.

And MAWKS, I'm down. What do you write?

mawks
12-06-2009, 04:15 PM
mawks hahaha or just mawk

Boris The Blade
12-06-2009, 04:19 PM
fuckkk, i was hoping it was something else. I hate W's with a fiery passion.
Itll be up in a bit.

Flawless Victory
12-06-2009, 04:55 PM
I'd like it a lot more if there wasn't an arrow in the A.

Boris The Blade
12-06-2009, 04:59 PM
I was just trying to figure out a new way to do the A connection, and just did it fucking around. But I won't anymore, haha

cocacola
12-06-2009, 04:59 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2588/4163794475_0a402788ba.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2485/4163889109_5286e7b218.jpg

Boris The Blade
12-06-2009, 06:38 PM
Exchange for Mawks
http://i47.tinypic.com/2lc75vr.jpg
Not that good, hate the K,
W threw off the flow really bad.
A sucks.
M, isn't too bad, i hope.
I can't sleep, and ill really regret this in the morning.
I'll do a better one tomorrow, hopefully

colderthanicee
12-06-2009, 06:55 PM
http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii201/deeunit2222/Picture261.jpg
http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii201/deeunit2222/Mobile%20Uploads/1259992237.jpg
http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii201/deeunit2222/Mobile%20Uploads/1259992169.jpg

I've been working on developing a cleaner style, crits whould be cool

kew1
12-06-2009, 07:41 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-05_1159.jpg

Zest3
12-06-2009, 08:16 PM
Kew- I don't feel that W

colderthanicee
12-06-2009, 09:07 PM
Akor loooks fucking good.

RanO
12-06-2009, 11:57 PM
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/9691/412200912213pm.jpg (http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=412200912213pm.jpg)
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/3951/30112009125444pm.jpg (http://img198.imageshack.us/my.php?image=30112009125444pm.jpg)
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/2856/pict06192.jpg (http://img442.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict06192.jpg)
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/2656/pict0600l.jpg (http://img29.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0600l.jpg)
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/4853/pict06202.jpg (http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict06202.jpg)
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/2162/pict0596.jpg (http://img130.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0596.jpg)
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/2568/1712200913610pm.jpg (http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1712200913610pm.jpg)

CESP.one
12-07-2009, 12:11 AM
shits sick Rano
i like it

mawks
12-07-2009, 12:17 AM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image011.jpg
exchange with akor

Rano - http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185
when you get the basics down you can start to incorporate your own style, but until then, stick with simple shit, and learn how to tag..

xSonnyTx
12-07-2009, 12:22 AM
Rano, ill be straight, I don't like it at all.
You've definitely got a shit load of artistic talent, but your structure needs A LOT of work.
The drippy style could be tight, but clean up the letterforms so they look like letters not amorphous blobs.
For the bottom two, again, work on the structure

Sesh-it-up
12-07-2009, 01:21 AM
Nast looks nice just clean that A and S up.


http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0802.jpg
quick thing i did just in like 5 mins.
new S i was workin with, really gotta work on my A and D any ideas?

fuckin paint this sonn sickkest thing in the toy thread

RanO
12-07-2009, 02:03 AM
Thanks lads. I"m working on the structure of my style.

Aktag
12-07-2009, 07:48 AM
AKTAG, try working with basic, straight bars. This will help eliminate some of the awkward sway in your letters, especially your Ks
Yeah, i need some practice on Ks :P Thanks anyway!

aciddemos
12-07-2009, 10:30 AM
rano - couldnt read any of them except for the last two. dont lose the structure of the letters in favor of something that looks cool.
mawks - that akor exchange looks pretty good
and that sead peice that seesh bumped is mad good.

http://i46.tinypic.com/2953eye.jpg

something i may be painting soon, crits

RedEyes
12-07-2009, 11:04 AM
Dope leave the cracks out if you do paint this, and work on proportion alittle.

mawks
12-07-2009, 12:50 PM
dek lets exchange
i might even color it .. haha

Boris The Blade
12-07-2009, 03:25 PM
Thanks man, i really appreciate it, shit looks sick!

Rano, I agree with what xSonnyTx said, you gotta get those basics down. There is a lot that you can do with drips and blobs, but you gotta work with it, a lot. Get that structure down!

LeaksOne
12-07-2009, 03:35 PM
Thanks lads. I"m working on the structure of my style.

dont. work on structure THEN style

(SoS)Viruz
12-07-2009, 04:13 PM
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/9691/412200912213pm.jpg (http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=412200912213pm.jpg)
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/3951/30112009125444pm.jpg (http://img198.imageshack.us/my.php?image=30112009125444pm.jpg)
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/2856/pict06192.jpg (http://img442.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict06192.jpg)
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/2656/pict0600l.jpg (http://img29.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0600l.jpg)
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/4853/pict06202.jpg (http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict06202.jpg)
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/2162/pict0596.jpg (http://img130.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0596.jpg)
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/2568/1712200913610pm.jpg (http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1712200913610pm.jpg)

you can color good...Wheres the stucture tho.....

I like what you got going with the last one tho

If you'd practice letter stucture more and incorporate that style...You'd have something going

colderthanicee
12-07-2009, 04:53 PM
Well I guess i don't get crits...


Acid I like your structure but the pattern on you 3-d is kind of off, and your fill is little patchy

suparjafar
12-07-2009, 05:40 PM
duktwo inter. thread.
rano you have some nice ideas and have artistic skills, but have no structure, startfrom simples im sure youll do good based on those sketches

bored, some more roes throws/handies
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0226.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0227.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0229.jpg

Thrice
12-07-2009, 05:43 PM
^Make sure you make those dots bigger or add a line to signify the hole for the O and E. People might think you write Poes.

Fury
12-07-2009, 08:50 PM
I don't like the dots. Maybe try making curves instead? The negative space of that E also doesn't work with no holes in those letters.

TrandomnesstwO
12-07-2009, 10:09 PM
http://www.flickr.com/photos/44128925@N04/4105172778/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/44128925@N04/4161102517/

TrandomnesstwO
12-07-2009, 10:12 PM
http://www.flickr.com/photos/44128952@NO4/4105172778

TrandomnesstwO
12-07-2009, 10:14 PM
No,my post is not a duplicate of the post I have posted in the last 5 minutes.Goddamn why cant it be just to drag the picture over with...complications.

kew1
12-07-2009, 10:20 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-07_1840.jpg