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colderthanicee
12-12-2009, 11:38 PM
So many fucking egos in here... for every good sketch there's about 15 shit talk comments from the wackest fucking dudes

rone
12-13-2009, 12:21 AM
jesus christ















yess?

weakfingers
12-13-2009, 12:46 AM
Droping- It looks cool but some of the extentions dont make to much sense. I also couldent see that painted on a wall, Like i said it looks cool as a sketch but I dont really know how well that would look painted.
Empty Can- Keep to your straight letter style but try to slant them all one way and bend them all in on direction, Also try to slide them a tad closer together.
Atesk- I'm not really good at critting single letters, but from what i've seen from you and those letter forms, there looking good.
Smooth Nuts - I like your second sketch the most. The thing I like the most is how your O is positioned and leaning, If you could make the rest of the name flow like that I think it would maybe make it look better, But it looks fine the way it is now.


Trying to work with some new letters N' Such, Something That I could paint with some ease. Crits Please.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9333.jpg

Fury
12-13-2009, 02:04 AM
Stot - S doesn't match the typeface.
Slek - Make all of the little lines the same width as the bars, and it'd look better. The middle E bar going to the K looks clean.
Atesk - Sorry, I don't like any of it.
Squint - Not liking the top of the S.
Okae - I like the second better, but the K is too thin.

medacog1
12-13-2009, 03:35 AM
weak fingers- your U is huge, and you S does not look to good either.
Smooth nutz- i agree with zennegan about the first one.
Empty can-? why isnt your O above your last T, your S looks like a 5

http://i45.tinypic.com/1j0sax.jpg
some of my shit... i hate P's....any crits would be nice

Th3t4
12-13-2009, 07:56 AM
i know it's not in the classical graff style
you may think I'm trying too complex things too fast.
my tag is poor, I know that. my graphical design is not poor, that's my strength.
crits appreciated (don't shit talk for the sake of it)
http://i50.tinypic.com/42qt4.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/2bae12.jpg

CrustOner
12-13-2009, 11:16 AM
ambigrams are sexy as fuck.

gumOnShoe
12-13-2009, 11:27 AM
THat looks pretty nice. I just don't like that random bar going through the curve on the S. It can be mistaken for a D.


http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/MIchael-Random-pics808.jpg

I tried bending my bars a little.

wow, this one actually actually ain't bad, keep at it.

CrustOner
12-13-2009, 11:50 AM
Delete dot and star.

-Empty-Can-
12-13-2009, 11:57 AM
The only reason I put it there is to take up some more space. It looks kinda odd with all that space uunderneath the T.

Zookyook
12-13-2009, 11:59 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2490/4179993341_289c0c4c24_o.jpgim feelin ur letter structure on these... theres already a huge writer named okae though not sure if ur aware...

http://i50.tinypic.com/42qt4.jpgand this one kinda looks like uve got style in ur head but its not showing up so well on paper... i like the bottom letters and if they were connected with 3d it might look phat... but the way u bend ur N makes it look like a G (assuming the first letter is N) and the second letter looks like a G too... just work on which parts of the letter u want to extend and flex because certain things just look sketchy i think... but all in all i can see u have more style than a lot of ppl...

Zookyook
12-13-2009, 12:00 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2490/4179993341_289c0c4c24_o.jpgim feelin ur letter structure on these... theres already a huge writer named okae though not sure if ur aware...

http://i50.tinypic.com/42qt4.jpgand this one kinda looks like uve got style in ur head but its not showing up so well on paper... i like the bottom letters and if they were connected with 3d it might look phat... but the way u bend ur N makes it look like a G (assuming the first letter is N) and the second letter looks like a G too... just work on which parts of the letter u want to extend and flex because certain things just look sketchy i think... but all in all i can see u have more style than a lot of ppl...

smooth_nuts
12-13-2009, 12:21 PM
never heard of him,and honestly dont care,he doesnt live where i live.

CrustOner
12-13-2009, 12:22 PM
It's an ambigram, meaning if you flip it upside down, it will say the exact same thing. Try it.

Th3t4
12-13-2009, 12:27 PM
thanks zookyook
much appreciated, i'll work on this.
the problem i have is that the N needs to read E upside down and the O needs to read S
it's taken a few pages of sketches and roughs to get here so a few more wont hurt :P


The only reason I put it there is to take up some more space. It looks kinda odd with all that space uunderneath the T.
have you tried reversing the curve on it? making the end bend up at the start and down at the end?

Aktag
12-13-2009, 12:54 PM
Empty Can, try to make your upper bar of the S a lil bit longer, so it won't look like a 5

Just finished it, I don't like the fill-in...

http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/8338/picture003c.jpg

Any crits would be very useful!

Thanks, Rolin

AteskOne
12-13-2009, 01:17 PM
Atesk - Sorry, I don't like any of it.

great crits bro. thanks for your help.

weakfingers- yeah sorry bout only having single letters. been swamped with school work, it being the last week of the semester and all. i havent had time to bang out a full piece. these are just quick letters i threw together in between projects. i'll post some full peices when i find the time.

RedEyes
12-13-2009, 02:13 PM
AKtag-work on your RO i like how you varied your bars but made it look good, fills alright bubbles are cool.

Fury
12-13-2009, 04:46 PM
great crits bro. thanks for your help.


Hey I could've always not said anything. But you want some shit?
Remove the extensions/addons, that E looks weird as fuck, both of your W's look weird because they point in specific directions (that's my personal opinion on W's), you don't need that line under the W, just make it longer, try sticking to just bars for the mean time before you make different weights.

Of course, this is my personal preference and you don't have to take any of my crits, which is why I said:



Atesk - Sorry, I don't like any of it.

wreckoner
12-13-2009, 05:01 PM
i just started writin like 2 months ago. nothin special any thoughts?

make the bars fatter and more even like make them all the same thinkness

AteskOne
12-13-2009, 06:46 PM
Hey I could've always not said anything. But you want some shit?
Remove the extensions/addons, that E looks weird as fuck, both of your W's look weird because they point in specific directions (that's my personal opinion on W's), you don't need that line under the W, just make it longer, try sticking to just bars for the mean time before you make different weights.

Of course, this is my personal preference and you don't have to take any of my crits, which is why I said:

much better. i dont post on here to hear how you feel about my work. i personally dont care. i'm looking to get better like everyone else in these forums. saying i dont like it helps no one. i know how to take a crit so lay it on me if you're going to say something discouraging anyways. i dont get emotional about my shit.

and also i've just recently been trying to add extensions so i dont expect them to come out great. been working with bars for years so i feel its time for me to expand. always open to crits helping me with these things.

FlippingChickens
12-13-2009, 07:11 PM
aktag im fealin that keep working on it
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2762.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2761-1.jpg

MoistGarbageCan
12-13-2009, 07:18 PM
Droping- It looks cool but some of the extentions dont make to much sense. I also couldent see that painted on a wall, Like i said it looks cool as a sketch but I dont really know how well that would look painted.
Empty Can- Keep to your straight letter style but try to slant them all one way and bend them all in on direction, Also try to slide them a tad closer together.
Atesk- I'm not really good at critting single letters, but from what i've seen from you and those letter forms, there looking good.
Smooth Nuts - I like your second sketch the most. The thing I like the most is how your O is positioned and leaning, If you could make the rest of the name flow like that I think it would maybe make it look better, But it looks fine the way it is now.


Trying to work with some new letters N' Such, Something That I could paint with some ease. Crits Please.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9333.jpg

New letters you say?
shit looks like the simp' you do all the time. the only thing that's different is the top of the S. I'm not trying to come of as a douche or anything, I'm just
sayin'.

suparjafar
12-13-2009, 07:27 PM
flipping chickens do something simple.
okae im loving that style.

fucked up drop shadow, but w.e

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0255.jpg

MoistGarbageCan
12-13-2009, 07:48 PM
looks lame, don't do a lower case E in two strokes.
the R in that toss looks super wack, especially at the top of the R. it's like you smashed the head of the R. You also slant the toss. so like every letter gets placed lower than the one before it. work on that.

Fury
12-13-2009, 08:05 PM
Push the circle on the R more towards the left or make it bigger. I don't like the E.

And what he ^ said about the slant

CrustOner
12-13-2009, 08:45 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/FACES.jpg

Beginning of a collage. Work in progress.

suparjafar
12-13-2009, 11:09 PM
alright i see what your saying, now that i look at it the r does look flat on top and the e should be done in one stroke. im keeping it closed though, it will flow better since the other letters arent closed. and ill work on letter proportions i guess. thanks guys. also that is coming along awesome crust. up the punx all dayy the one skull on the left reminds me of the casualties

Fury
12-13-2009, 11:10 PM
The faces are legit dude

CrustOner
12-13-2009, 11:18 PM
Haha that's what I was going for. I fucking hate the Casualties.

MoistGarbageCan
12-13-2009, 11:23 PM
alright i see what your saying, now that i look at it the r does look flat on top and the e should be done in one stroke. im keeping it closed though, it will flow better since the other letters arent closed. and ill work on letter proportions i guess. thanks guys. also that is coming along awesome crust. up the punx all dayy the one skull on the left reminds me of the casualties

oh yeah, and i was talking about both the E's on the toss, and on the hand regarding the one stroke thing.

KaSo
12-13-2009, 11:26 PM
i know it's not in the classical graff style
you may think I'm trying too complex things too fast.
my tag is poor, I know that. my graphical design is not poor, that's my strength.
crits appreciated (don't shit talk for the sake of it)
http://i50.tinypic.com/42qt4.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/2bae12.jpg

damn, I never thought I'd see an ambigram on here! The concept would be dope if you can pull it off. you got a good idea, keep going with it. i got 2 ambigram tats one is trust, then the other is hope one way and faith the other. shit if you can master a graff ambigram, i might have to get that shit tatted on me, of course i'd pay for your work! keep it up brah..

I WILL BE POSTING FLICKS TODAY SO PLEASE DONT BITE MY HEAD OFF!!!:D:cool::D

CrustOner
12-13-2009, 11:54 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/FACES.jpg

Beginning of a collage. Work in progress.

Shameless self-bump.

KaSo
12-14-2009, 12:04 AM
Nice faces

MoistGarbageCan
12-14-2009, 12:14 AM
so do you want crits or props?

RedEyes
12-14-2009, 12:29 AM
I want this page to turn out good so i only filled it tonight. crits?
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo13-2.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo14-1.jpg

Fury
12-14-2009, 12:30 AM
That ambigram reminds me of my super old tag:
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/5166/img1398y.jpg

It's also an ambigram. Keep working it, I wanna see it painted.

weakfingers
12-14-2009, 12:42 AM
Moistgarbagebag-Loose the attitude bro, I aint trying to start shit but your just calling everyone out. Post some shit or give actual crits.
Theta-I like the idea on the whole.
Crust-The guy on the top right reminds me of the lead singer of the gorrilaz
Redeyez-Add some background and such.



I wanted to try to do that backwards upside down forwards shit... Fuck thats hard as fuck but if you could pull it off legibly it would be tight.

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9352.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9353.jpg

medacog1
12-14-2009, 01:12 AM
weak fingers- your U is huge, and you S does not look to good either.
Smooth nutz- i agree with zennegan about the first one.
Empty can-? why isnt your O above your last T, your S looks like a 5

http://i45.tinypic.com/1j0sax.jpg
some of my shit... i hate P's....any crits would be nice

bump crits?

AteskOne
12-14-2009, 01:31 AM
crust- not diggin the eyes. i feel like you have too many usless lines above them. a simple line cutting thru the top half of the eyeballs would do.
siko- looks pretty good. not getting that little bump on the top part of the S tho. coulda done without that. also the O would have looked a lot better had you just continued the roundness on the inside instead of cutting a sharp edge straight across.
squint- i think you're too used to doin your T like that cause it doesnt look like an S upside down. fresh looking when its right side up tho.
polar- work on that R. instead of having seperate bars for the bottom of the round part and for the leg, try intersecting them. will come out much better. hard to explain but i hope you get the jist of it.

medacog1
12-14-2009, 01:38 AM
polar- work on that R. instead of having seperate bars for the bottom of the round part and for the leg, try intersecting them. will come out much better. hard to explain but i hope you get the jist of it.[/QUOTE]

You mean try to? hid one of the legs behind the other?

KaSo
12-14-2009, 06:54 AM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4046/4184034761_961d4269f3_o.jpg

I'm not finished but I did say I would post something. Trying to get into the holiday spirit!! Ok if it gets any simpler, it will be called typing!! LOL:D anyways, ya'll can crit on what it has so far. TAPE down the middle of the first C. i hate being left handed sometimes i have to work from right to left, so i dont smear shit. anyways i'll try to finish it tonight post finished tomorrow. Dueces:cool:

Aktag
12-14-2009, 08:11 AM
Flipping Chickens: I like your 1st piece, about 2nd one, try to keep your bar width the same, that's just me.
CrustOner: you got some dope chars there ^^

zennegen
12-14-2009, 08:13 AM
KASO thats a bit too simple. do you really write catch?

KaSo
12-14-2009, 08:22 AM
nah man i just wrote it for the Gingerbread man (its Christmas time). i write TEP, i know it is, but thats all everyone says to do. go simple!! i'll lay some more shit down later, i might as well finish this one then move to the next one!!

KaSo
12-14-2009, 09:11 AM
REDEYEZ- what kind of markers you use? its not bad but practice using the blender marker between the colors so you dont see the line to much, AD markers are pretty dope, other than that, not bad. oh and yeah that bump on the S brah, what purpose does it serve?

AteskOne
12-14-2009, 09:34 AM
You mean try to? hid one of the legs behind the other?
exactly. here's a quick example...
http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/295/scan0010l.jpg (http://img691.imageshack.us/i/scan0010l.jpg/)


zennegen- you can never go too simple when you're just starting out. honestly i'd rather see letters like that. you're goal should be to get structure. thats the best way to do it. style can come later.

looks really clean kaso. props on the simples.

RedEyes
12-14-2009, 09:57 AM
REDEYEZ- what kind of markers you use? its not bad but practice using the blender marker between the colors so you dont see the line to much, AD markers are pretty dope, other than that, not bad. oh and yeah that bump on the S brah, what purpose does it serve?

I use prismas but i just smoked an L before so my hand wasnt consistent, and didnt have a blender. the bump on the S is just to fill space i guess, its a work in progress.

Aktag
12-14-2009, 10:08 AM
New piece, trying smth out with fill-in. I actually like it :P

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/9270/picture004ui.jpg

Any crits would be useful, thanks!

Zookyook
12-14-2009, 10:35 AM
New piece, trying smth out with fill-in. I actually like it :P

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/9270/picture004ui.jpg

Any crits would be useful, thanks!

not bad... a lot better than before i think... ur biggest obstacle is gonna be the "LI" right next to each other... hard to make that look right... this one has a capital L and lowercase i... i dont like that really, it might look fresh if u did all lowercase and when u dot the 'i' make a nice fat dot so it matches up with the 'L' instead of having the big open space. sort of like this but with a lowercase Lhttp://cinikism.files.wordpress.com/2009/08/lions.jpg hope that helps, not the best example

TheToy
12-14-2009, 10:46 AM
KASO thats a bit too simple.

You can never go too simple.

Get a new Avatar. You ain't old enough to purchase a Black. :p

Zookyook
12-14-2009, 10:52 AM
i prefer grape swisher sweets...

massacreman
12-14-2009, 10:52 AM
well u aint old enough to be black!
lol just joking
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2518/4167418472_8fc57ec6b4.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2593/4169065986_221a73dc87.jpg
Rsik exchange, the bitch didnt do anything back for me. fuck flickr exchanges.

ROLIN good fill bad stucture... THE BARS MAN! THE BARS!!!!!!

Paranoya1
12-14-2009, 10:58 AM
I'm pretty new to graffiti but I'm just starting to get into it here is some shitty stuff from my blackbook

Paranoya1
12-14-2009, 10:59 AM
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz338/Paranoyabdk/toy001.jpg

Paranoya1
12-14-2009, 11:01 AM
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz338/Paranoyabdk/toy002.jpg

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz338/Paranoyabdk/toy003.jpg

AteskOne
12-14-2009, 11:09 AM
^^^keep it to one post homeboy.

i prefer grape swisher sweets...
now thats class.

Paranoya1
12-14-2009, 11:11 AM
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz338/Paranoyabdk/toy004.jpg

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz338/Paranoyabdk/toy005.jpg

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz338/Paranoyabdk/toy006.jpg

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz338/Paranoyabdk/toy007.jpg

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz338/Paranoyabdk/toy008.jpg

Paranoya1
12-14-2009, 11:16 AM
lol alright sorry

massacreman
12-14-2009, 11:53 AM
look in the new to graffiti thread and follow everything up. grow big.
for now. master block letters and start adding sdmall extensions curves to them
good luck

Zookyook
12-14-2009, 11:59 AM
god damn man, are u using crayons? ur style is crazy, all over the place, too many arrows, bad color balance, u should start all over with graff... just start with simple chunk letters or something, then add a clean 3d, and a clean outline, then maybe highlights, in that order... it looks like ur doing it as sloppy as u can... and ur tags look like ur just doing them as fast as u can... take ur time, breathe, and get a nice simple flow going... dont even use arrows until u get basic lettering down

(SoS)Viruz
12-14-2009, 12:49 PM
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz338/Paranoyabdk/toy001.jpg

Rule one dont use arrow that come out of no where
Rule 2 start out simple you dont have letter stucture down so start simple and work off from thier



Seriously I find my self repeating what i say to differnt ppl but its all good.....

RedEyes
12-14-2009, 02:11 PM
DAMN YO nice Lions hit up, howd you get that? Buffalo Finest!

Zookyook
12-14-2009, 02:21 PM
i was tryin to think of someone that could put an L and I together, he was the first i thought of so i googled it hah

OOPS!
12-14-2009, 02:22 PM
I think we have a new eel on our hands. King status

Aktag
12-14-2009, 02:39 PM
Thanks Zookyook, i think it helped, here's my latest piece:

http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/1562/picture005sp.jpg

Markers are really bad, cuz they don't blend together in each other...need to buy new ones soon :)

Any crit would be useful!
Thanks, Rolin

Zookyook
12-14-2009, 02:44 PM
thats pretty cool... i like the white 3d... if u make bubbles though make all different sizes it looks better in my opinion... better with the L I though

Fury
12-14-2009, 02:47 PM
^ O's a little messed up, but it looks hella good.

massacreman
12-14-2009, 02:51 PM
ROLIN OMG the first piece i saw was pretty wack, you take our advice and BOOM something quite cool. i kinda like it

Paranoya1
12-14-2009, 03:04 PM
alright thanks for the tips ill start going slower and try simple letters

RedEyes
12-14-2009, 05:40 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo3-1.jpg
beginning of my background
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo12-1.jpg

FlippingChickens
12-14-2009, 06:18 PM
siko that looks clean but i dont really like it
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2772.jpg

Zookyook
12-14-2009, 06:20 PM
Tofe?

Fury
12-14-2009, 06:26 PM
^ Go to the new to graff thread dude. Lose the 3D, don't have two points of focus, lose the wigglyness on the letters, stick to bars, etc etc.

Edit: I swear to God dude, you ALWAYS post before me lol

FlippingChickens
12-14-2009, 06:33 PM
i was just doing that 3d for the first time eating shit

CrustOner
12-14-2009, 06:34 PM
Holyy fuck. I wish mods could ban based on how much someone sucks. My faces sketch is being left in the dust while this shit is bumped over and over.. Goddamn.

-Empty-Can-
12-14-2009, 06:36 PM
If they did that then 90% of the toy forum would be gone.

Black Flag
12-14-2009, 06:36 PM
Thanks Zookyook, i think it helped, here's my latest piece:

http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/1562/picture005sp.jpg

Markers are really bad, cuz they don't blend together in each other...need to buy new ones soon :)

Any crit would be useful!
Thanks, Rolin

mmm for a toy that simp is mighty tasty. Try and make the R a little less round and curvy if you understand what I mean. Thats your best post yet, keep running with it.

CrustOner
12-14-2009, 06:49 PM
No, I mean if it's so bad, it's nearly trolling.

suparjafar
12-14-2009, 06:57 PM
rolin lookin good. tofe/black midget get out you troll...lmao.

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/Photo32.jpg

funhouseXcast
12-14-2009, 07:00 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=294&pictureid=2828

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=294&pictureid=2829

crits please


bump for crits from a few pages back

Shamannaboosh
12-14-2009, 07:05 PM
I use to have a BS account but I forgot my password, so here's my new one.
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/img014.jpg

RedEyes
12-14-2009, 07:51 PM
Sate-dope man the second one is way more clean just work on the center of your S.
Rolin-mad progression in just a few days, just sketch up a decent R n u got something solid.

zennegen
12-14-2009, 08:02 PM
If they did that then 90% of the toy forum would be gone.

too fucking easy.

CrustOner
12-14-2009, 08:12 PM
ahahahahahahaah

MoistGarbageCan
12-14-2009, 08:24 PM
rolin lookin good. tofe/black midget get out you troll...lmao.

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/Photo32.jpg

ok, you fixed the R's head, but now it's really big and looks like a tumor.
maybe it has something to do with the little bar thing on that R y'know, the left part of it. The shit's still slanted, try to end the letter at the same level of the letter before it, don't end it under it. i see you cleaned up your E on that hand, and by that i mean you did it in one stroke. the tag itself is mad sloppy especially at the OE.

@Siko: lookin' tough,but i think you left just a TAD of dead space with the SI
and mad dead space at the KO, work on that.

LeaksOne
12-14-2009, 09:07 PM
siko that looks clean but i dont really like it
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2772.jpg

STINKFACE. your the kid with the bad attitude eh? i followed your letters and that jagged line shit is ugly straigten your bars until you get a good grasp of your letters save your markers for when you get better and just do hollows.

kew1
12-14-2009, 09:23 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-14_1912.jpg

CrustOner
12-14-2009, 09:43 PM
Did you really sign your tag with a girlfriend piece in a book?

MoistGarbageCan
12-14-2009, 09:50 PM
i can't even read that bullshit, lol.

CrustOner
12-14-2009, 09:57 PM
Oh, nevermind, they both say Erika.

mawks
12-14-2009, 09:58 PM
ya hah, it's not bad, feelin the e

CrustOner
12-14-2009, 10:03 PM
I'm not. Only decent letter is the R.

RedEyes
12-14-2009, 10:05 PM
Its better than the other stuff youve posted but it needs work, 3D is off in spots.

mawks
12-14-2009, 10:11 PM
i smell a battle

MoistGarbageCan
12-14-2009, 10:12 PM
OOH SHIT, lol.

drOping
12-14-2009, 10:13 PM
Kew1- Not feeling the bottom of the K, hope it got you some ass tho
Siko-last one u posted was looking fresh

http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/8918/1003162v.jpg
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/6531/1003163.jpg
http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/7451/1003164.jpg

CrustOner
12-14-2009, 10:14 PM
hahahaha

(I'm hoping that's a joke.. because that's a stupid reason for a battle.)

KaSo
12-14-2009, 10:15 PM
yo ATESKONE- Thanks for the comment.

REDEYEZ- LOL no doubt, damn a L would feel good right bout now. i got 2 more weeks an im out this bitch for a lil vacation. going to Thailand, then i can enjoy the grapes and chocolates and strawberry phillys.

MOIST- yo all i see is crits from you. mabye i missed your flick, but how bout posting something so we can all crit your work. -No Beef- just curious to see how well you do being that you have so much to say.

MoistGarbageCan
12-14-2009, 10:15 PM
you beasted on the L's length on the first one, make it smaller next time.

EDIT: i totally see where you're coming from. but no thanks, i'd rather not post stuff on here. however, wouldn't you agree that what i said was still valid in some way?
like i'd be like "that shit's trash", but to balance out the insult i give em' crits.
so it's not like i'm on here trolling people n' shit.

KaSo
12-14-2009, 10:44 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2608/4186200241_1040a97770_b.jpg

So here it is, Fuck it, i'm not finishing it. the color scheme didnt come out the way i thought it would, the gaps in the brick look to damn big, the damn tape got in the way. i'm just gonna leave this one alone. move up to something else. you guys can imagine the background with all brick. i may, in my free time eventually fill it in but not now.

KaSo
12-14-2009, 10:48 PM
oh yeah.... HAPPY HOLIDAYS !!!! HAHAHAHAHA that was gonna be the whole point of the drawing.

MoistGarbageCan
12-14-2009, 10:51 PM
dude, make the the gingerbread man's arms....idk how to put this, but you made the arms look like they were behind it's torso, so next timeif you do the bombin' gingerbread man, don't close the uppertorso where the arms meet it, instead make it all one whole thing.

Zookyook
12-14-2009, 11:35 PM
new lil burner... blurry pichttp://farm3.static.flickr.com/2641/4187068890_f384474fec_b.jpg

KaSo
12-14-2009, 11:38 PM
yeah i know what you mean, i can just take the brown paint marker and go over the lines then it will make one whole body.

Aktag
12-15-2009, 12:39 AM
Wow, thanks a lot guys, it really motivates me when I get positive crits, that I'm progressing in the right direction :) I'll keep on writing and posting it here, thanks again.

RedEyes:I like the letters but i'm not diggin' the backgorund
FlippinChickens: Your 3D is off, and try using bars for letters
funhouseXcast: I like your 2nd piece, good job.
Kewl1: I'm not feeling that extention on the right bar of A
dr0ping: Ur 1st piece, i think it's ok :P
Zookyook: Fresh piece :P

Peace, Rolin

Hater-AiD~>
12-15-2009, 07:35 AM
nice work zoo..really feelin the handstyle
kaso nice simple
droping..youre on your way

well heres some quick sketches i did at work
http://i49.tinypic.com/10fstmo.jpg
http://i47.tinypic.com/29ehl5x.jpg

Zookyook
12-15-2009, 11:54 AM
thanks.... wish i had a job where i could do that..... i like the bottom one, they look pretty close to identical as far as lettering goes though... mix that shit up yo!

Th3t4
12-15-2009, 12:21 PM
getting my hand in form
getting some colig down so i can transfer some ideas from that into a tag
http://i45.tinypic.com/23ua91s.jpg
not that keen on the second t or a

MoistGarbageCan
12-15-2009, 03:02 PM
yeah i know what you mean, i can just take the brown paint marker and go over the lines then it will make one whole body.

yeah, like that.

zennegen
12-15-2009, 04:06 PM
getting my hand in form
getting some colig down so i can transfer some ideas from that into a tag
not that keen on the second t or a

H needs work.

sinkilla1
12-15-2009, 04:24 PM
yo did u make an outline of a colig and fill it in dope just need to get it down and it will be tight quick sketch xD
http://i47.tinypic.com/ou7biq.jpg

Th3t4
12-15-2009, 04:29 PM
yeah, pencil then fine and then fill.
need to improve the letters though
probs won't post for a few days so i can get some stuff down

sinkilla1
12-15-2009, 04:34 PM
try doing calig tags with a chisel marker first into a tage then create a peice cause it gonna be hard to start of peicing a calig tag not that i shuld say anything i cant do a calig tag for shit

Th3t4
12-15-2009, 05:02 PM
yeah, i've been working on one with my set of chisels tip.
wanted to get some finer stuff down too :P

KAZonee
12-15-2009, 05:59 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=395&pictureid=2842

i fucked up on the M

i dont write cream just felt like fuckin around

CrustOner
12-15-2009, 06:00 PM
I officially hate Bombingscience.com/graffitiforum.

Th3t4
12-15-2009, 06:03 PM
is it for the reason I think it is?

Trestoner707
12-15-2009, 06:18 PM
yo did u make an outline of a colig and fill it in dope just need to get it down and it will be tight quick sketch xD
http://i47.tinypic.com/ou7biq.jpg

wtf is that connecting to the R. and does that really look like a T to you lol exactly change the middle bar of the e too to a straight bar
use bars.

Trestoner707
12-15-2009, 06:20 PM
I officially hate Bombingscience.com/graffitiforum.

welcome to the club lol

sinkilla1
12-15-2009, 06:21 PM
oh that thing on the R was supposed to be a bubble and it was gonna say something but i made it to small and i used marker so kinda just fuckied it up and i cold prolly do better on the T ^^

Trestoner707
12-15-2009, 06:25 PM
new lil burner... blurry pichttp://farm3.static.flickr.com/2641/4187068890_f384474fec_b.jpg

burner bro?

one color for the fill and 3d with a yellow shell.
maybe if the dude was color blind and that was the only color he could see his whole life

see where im getting at lol

i cant even begain trying to figure out what it says

Trestoner707
12-15-2009, 06:27 PM
oh that thing on the R was supposed to be a bubble and it was gonna say something but i made it to small and i used marker so kinda just fuckied it up and i cold prolly do better on the T ^^

keep trying then

Trestoner707
12-15-2009, 06:30 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=395&pictureid=2842

i fucked up on the M

i dont write cream just felt like fuckin around

basics fool.
even spacing between letters and perferably all going the same directiong. same size and width of every letter. dont be connecting your letters.

n ya.. dont bother coloring it anymore please

drOping
12-15-2009, 06:37 PM
Kew1- Not feeling the bottom of the K, hope it got you some ass tho
Siko-last one u posted was looking fresh

http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/8918/1003162v.jpg
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/6531/1003163.jpg
http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/7451/1003164.jpg

Bump

Trestoner707
12-15-2009, 06:51 PM
just looks like ur adding just a tiny bit to much on the end of your letters. clean that upa little bit. doing everything the same size and width probably look a little cleaner

suparjafar
12-15-2009, 07:06 PM
rek work on structure. slek nice simps. cant read your ill looking handie..=/

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0261.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0260.jpg

Trestoner707
12-15-2009, 07:16 PM
rek work on structure. slek nice simps. cant read your ill looking handie..=/

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0261.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0260.jpg

kill that extension on the r's leg.
then on the last 2 letters i think the extensions should match
like ones rounded then the others flat.

oh ya kill the heart under your signiture

suparjafar
12-15-2009, 07:22 PM
rek work on structure. slek nice simps. cant read your ill looking handie..=/

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0261.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0260.jpg

bump. thanks for crits btw ^^

Trestoner707
12-15-2009, 07:24 PM
id say work on the bottom left of your throw too. dont have them overlap like that
and round your s on your signiture so it matches the rest

RedEyes
12-15-2009, 07:44 PM
Super-one bump per page, next time take ur time your letters have bad proportion and maybe add color.
Consume-far from a burner, the O is ugly and i think your getting to far ahead of yourself, go a basic concept of structure though.

suparjafar
12-15-2009, 08:00 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo3-1.jpg
beginning of my background
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo12-1.jpg

what do u mean? like i can see the top of the s is fucked, but in your simp some of your bars are clearly different sizes. when is it ok to do that? as in vary bar sizes

RedEyes
12-15-2009, 08:18 PM
how is the top of my S fucked...you cant even make a basic S? your bars should stay consistent like my post above notice how the I and K bars are basically identical. you shouldnt vary bars but like in my S the top is the same as the I but the middle varries to keep the S shape.

NoCanControl
12-15-2009, 08:24 PM
I don't think its fucked. I think its actually pretty good. better then my S's. i think you're doing good red eyes. keep it up

AS248
12-15-2009, 08:32 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g116/aker129/IMG_2665-1.jpg

Simple stuff. I know its not great, but Im working on it. Crits? Go simpler or work on what I got?

suparjafar
12-15-2009, 08:34 PM
i said my s is fucked.

-Empty-Can-
12-15-2009, 09:14 PM
superjafar- Give the second bar on the R a little curve and make it stick out a little more
redeyes- I think it would look better if you curved the I the other way
aseh- keep doing simples. Try to keep your letter proportional
slek- I Prefer you older stuff. Those don't loook good

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/3D001.jpg

heres a 3D block letter style I've been using. I was going to add cracks but I really have no idea how to do them properly so I left them out.

NICCSACC
12-15-2009, 09:18 PM
nice stuff redeyes clean

labmadelift
12-15-2009, 09:29 PM
http://i46.tinypic.com/nqrbk3.jpg
not clean, but the idea is there, oil pastels are a messy medium and so is a nubby fucking permanent marker, FML

AS248
12-15-2009, 09:36 PM
Empty Can - Ight man will do. After I do each one I pretty much already know what's wrong with them. It helps to hear it from another person though. I like your 3D blocks too. The opening on the ! could be a little bigger and the openings on the S look a little odd. I think its cause everything slopes down and and certain parts on the S slope up. Oh, and whats so hard about cracks? ha.

-Empty-Can-
12-15-2009, 09:43 PM
Yea I wasn't sure on how to do the line in the !. It's a little too low to have the line slope down but it looks stupid with the line slope up. So I made it somewhat straight.

I just never tried crack before and I didn't know how to make them look realistic.

AS248
12-15-2009, 09:48 PM
If it didnt take so long for me to upload something, Id quick show you how to do cracks. My scanner died so I have to take a picture of everything.

Keep the ! straight though, or even slant it just a bit, but open it up more. Itll fit better with everything else.

suparjafar
12-15-2009, 09:48 PM
i like this simp a little more. any better?

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0262.jpg

also stot eh on the ! separate the bars. also try and mess w/ your tag a bit more. i dont like the s going into a circle.

zennegen
12-15-2009, 10:00 PM
burner bro?

one color for the fill and 3d with a yellow shell.
maybe if the dude was color blind and that was the only color he could see his whole life

see where im getting at lol

i cant even begain trying to figure out what it says

nah nah see, homie did this burner on a canvas cause he's clearly all-city king, he only needs 3 colors for his pieces, you ain't got nothin' on him.

seewhatididthere?

zennegen
12-15-2009, 10:05 PM
superjafar- Give the second bar on the R a little curve and make it stick out a little more
redeyes- I think it would look better if you curved the I the other way
aseh- keep doing simples. Try to keep your letter proportional
slek- I Prefer you older stuff. Those don't loook good

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/3D001.jpg

heres a 3D block letter style I've been using. I was going to add cracks but I really have no idea how to do them properly so I left them out.

STOP USlNG CRAYONS, HOMIE.

funhouseXcast
12-15-2009, 10:07 PM
redeyes- battle me tommorrow?

-Empty-Can-
12-15-2009, 10:07 PM
Who gives a fuck what I use? It gets the job done and it's really all I have.

And just to clarify...It's colored pencils

zennegen
12-15-2009, 10:18 PM
Who gives a fuck what I use? It gets the job done and it's really all I have.

And just to clarify...It's colored pencils

HAHAHA crayola racking king! it does matter, cause it looks more shitty than it normally would.

Fury
12-15-2009, 10:58 PM
Empty-Can, your 3D is off on that S. Personally, I don't give a fuck if you use colored pencils; fills for practicing are just that: practice. If you want a mean ass looking piece or throw, get prismas. My point is fuck it, do what you want.

Roes - Your last simp looks good, keep working on that like crazy, then try to do different things.

Zookyook
12-15-2009, 11:18 PM
bumpin for crits... http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2641/4187068890_f384474fec_b.jpg

Zookyook
12-15-2009, 11:23 PM
burner bro?

one color for the fill and 3d with a yellow shell.
maybe if the dude was color blind and that was the only color he could see his whole life

see where im getting at lol

i cant even begain trying to figure out what it says

if u cant read that u have no knowledge of letter structure and ur a retard... i consider a burner something with more than 3 colors, and something where 'cutting back' is used and its not just thrown up.... and im not sure where u were going with the blind guy analogy but it makes no sense

suparjafar
12-15-2009, 11:27 PM
i like this simp a little more. any better?

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0262.jpg

also stot eh on the ! separate the bars. also try and mess w/ your tag a bit more. i dont like the s going into a circle.

bumpin for shits n giggles. also yeah i cant read it too well. make it simpler, it will look better anyway

Harp
12-16-2009, 12:10 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v222/jimmy_the_explorer/bb4.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v222/jimmy_the_explorer/bb3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v222/jimmy_the_explorer/bb2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v222/jimmy_the_explorer/bb1.jpg

I dont really like the character...it seems too two-dimensional and stick-figure like.

CrustOner
12-16-2009, 12:10 AM
if u cant read that u have no knowledge of letter structure and ur a retard... i consider a burner something with more than 3 colors, and something where 'cutting back' is used and its not just thrown up.... and im not sure where u were going with the blind guy analogy but it makes no sense

A "burner" in traditional graffiti terms, is a full color, full scale, epic piece, often involving characters, or some sort of huge background art piece.

His piece says Consume. It's definitely not a burner, but it IS technically a piece. I don't like how you made it lean. I don't like any of it. The structure has little style to it, it's just block letters with a bunch of shitty extras... it makes it look ugly. Sorry dude, no beef, I just don't think it qualifies for intermediate (Answering your question in the Intermediate thread), and I don't think it's a good piece. Also, the extensions are pretty ugly.. As well as the color scheme, the highlights, and the 3D (which I can't tell if it's leaning to the S or the middle of the U, which is not a good thing.)

Fury
12-16-2009, 12:15 AM
Harp - Your first H doesn't really match the type face (open/negative space between letters while H is closed). I also don't like the P on the throw.

Consume - I don't like the blockiness and agree with Crust. Also, I don't like halos in tags, but that's just me.

Retz
12-16-2009, 12:42 AM
http://i49.tinypic.com/9h4bhd.jpg
Yeah it's pretty shitty. W/e haha

Retz
12-16-2009, 12:43 AM
the fuuuck double post

CrustOner
12-16-2009, 12:44 AM
hahahaha it looks like the R is coming out of the closet... FORCEFULLY.

"I'm GAYYYYYYYYY RRRRAAWWWGGGGHFKDS:FJDS" while kicking the door open.

Harp
12-16-2009, 12:49 AM
Harp - Your first H doesn't really match the type face (open/negative space between letters while H is closed). I also don't like the P on the throw.

Consume - I don't like the blockiness and agree with Crust. Also, I don't like halos in tags, but that's just me.

i never thought of it that way....however, im reluctant to change the H because it's the easiest letter to paint =/

thanks for the critique

Zookyook
12-16-2009, 12:54 AM
well thank u crust for being constructive... i agree with the 3d part i fucked that up beyond a point of no return and had to patch it up... and i only have 4 markers with color in em, so i gotta make do... and as for the definition of a "burner" theres no graffiti dictionary, all terms are pretty loose, but ive always heard like tag, throwup, burner, piece, mural, in that order...

Fury
12-16-2009, 01:02 AM
Did this real quick, nothing big:
http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/5172/img0589s.jpg

Trying to do flairs with a whiteboard marker haha

CrustOner
12-16-2009, 01:03 AM
Tag/handstyle > bomb/throw/toss > simps/rollers > pieces > burners are on the same level as murals.

KaSo
12-16-2009, 01:26 AM
nice work zoo..really feelin the handstyle
kaso nice simple
droping..youre on your way

well heres some quick sketches i did at work
http://i49.tinypic.com/10fstmo.jpg
http://i47.tinypic.com/29ehl5x.jpg

preciate it.

KaSo
12-16-2009, 01:51 AM
hahahaha it looks like the R is coming out of the closet... FORCEFULLY.

"I'm GAYYYYYYYYY RRRRAAWWWGGGGHFKDS:FJDS" while kicking the door open.

^^^^^---HAHAHAHAHA!!!!

Harp- as told to me before, start off simple to understand the basic forms of the letters, look at the keyborad. your R looks like its got a ... what was the phrase i saw before.. oh a scary movie arm!! your 3D is wack. but all your shit isnt completly bad. ive seen worse! go slow brah.

HATER-AID.. pretty nice work.

ZOO- your U looks like a W with that extra piece coming up from the middle. other than that, to me the piece looks good. but then again i am in the TOY section!!! :D maybe some type of background or colors inside.. really i dont think its bad, just that U and loose those pieces in the C too.

Bets369R
12-16-2009, 02:13 AM
Tag: Self explanitory, the smallest form of graffiti
http://www.duncancumming.co.uk/photos/tags.jpg

Bomb: just above a tag, a get in and get out type thing.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3631/3422083708_c5d6616aa8.jpg

Burner: Harder than a bomb, still a get in get out type deal, but leaning more towards a piece. usually has a little more detail than a bomb, but not nearly as much as a piece.
http://riotsound.com/Graffiti/art-gallery/albums/New-Jersey-Graffiti/Nark_Graffiti_Burner.sized.jpg

Piece: Usually has full detail, a full background, may or may not have a theme. These usually take a couple hours to complete.
http://media.ebaumsworld.com/picture/kwskrew/sode5.jpg


Mural/Collaboration/Collabo: Multiple graffiti artists come together and do a full wall top to bottom, side to side, usually has the same theme and color scheme
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/big_wall_mural.jpg

KaSo
12-16-2009, 02:19 AM
nicely put bets

cocacola
12-16-2009, 05:42 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2639/4189396203_50b20fe829.jpg
i skipped 3 days of being on, so imma have alike a couple of sketches uploaded today

Aktag
12-16-2009, 07:55 AM
Bets: nice pieces.
Cocacola: I like your letters, but not feelin' that charak...

My entry for Monthly battle on MG.
http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/4092/picture006gs.jpg

Any crits would be very useful, thanks!

KaSo
12-16-2009, 10:26 AM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4009/4190638314_044e9d7d61_o.jpg

so i said asnt gonna finish it but i couldnt stand looking at it unfnished, so since i did it might as well post it.

AK- the only thing that bothers me is that R. the bottom of the loop bar doesnt line up. its a good simp.

Chippey
12-16-2009, 10:50 AM
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn184/CH1PP3Y/CIMG3883.jpg
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn184/CH1PP3Y/CIMG3882.jpg
Finding a new name atm, so im just messing around with things till i find one to stick with.

Aktag: Im agreeing with KaSo on the R, it needs to be defined more it could be interpreted as a k to. But overall its solid.

KaSo: The lettering is very good, clean and bars are even. The 3d is ok, not a whole lot of shading going on. Also the lime green 3d overpowers the gingerbread man who kinda melts into the the bricks. The resp on the character could use work too. The background i think shows that you put a lot of effort into the piece.

KaSo:

KaSo
12-16-2009, 11:46 AM
Chippey- thanks, yeah i was going for the whole christmas theme, thats why i used the green and red. i got lazy on the 3D , the word tookup both pages plus i taped an extra piece of paper, i really ddnt fellike puttin a whole lot of effort on the 3D. maybe i should start making words smaller!! thanks for the crits.

yo, change that Q up. looks like a worm coming out of an O.

RedEyes
12-16-2009, 12:13 PM
redeyes- battle me tommorrow?

Porque? ill do an exchange i dont see the need for a battle over no beef. plus its my birthday so im getting crunk all week!

TheToy
12-16-2009, 12:21 PM
Porquoi? I don't know Spanish. :)

ta!
12-16-2009, 12:45 PM
chippey, nail polish??

Zookyook
12-16-2009, 01:00 PM
porque means why, and because.......... i like that sprite simp rolin... but man u gotta start branching out, all ur stuff has the same fill, its clean though... and KASO that shit looks time consuming as hell, the brick should have the same size gaps going vertical and horizontal though, it would have looked more convincing as a wall if u did that... but i like the top of the wall with the rips or whatever

Bets369R
12-16-2009, 01:35 PM
Bets: nice pieces.

i didnt do any of those, they were stolen from google to prove a point.

Zookyook
12-16-2009, 01:51 PM
thats the progression that i know.... burners arent on the same level as murals in my opinion... its like a step or 2 down, murals u try as hard as u can and use way more colors

massacreman
12-16-2009, 02:02 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2731/4191089890_f792863254.jpg
crits please
chip nice stuff keep practising bro.

-Empty-Can-
12-16-2009, 02:04 PM
superjafar- Give the second bar on the R a little curve and make it stick out a little more redeyes- I think it would look better if you curved the I the other way aseh- keep doing simples. Try to keep your letter proportional slek- I Prefer you older stuff. Those don't loook good http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/3D001.jpg heres a 3D block letter style I've been using. I was going to add cracks but I really have no idea how to do them properly so I left them out.
Bump

Empty-Can, your 3D is off on that S How is it off?

RedEyes
12-16-2009, 02:05 PM
Decent letters, lose the anvil at the bottom of your S, it looks like the orange bleed a bit and ruined it.

stekone
12-16-2009, 02:17 PM
are you seriously writing ges??? google image Ges 3A......

KaSo
12-16-2009, 02:23 PM
ZOOK- yeah brah i know they are all off, it got so tiring trying to get it right, so i just rushed it. i messed the lines up in the middle and said F it. thanks for the crits all.

MoistGarbageCan
12-16-2009, 02:32 PM
are you seriously writing ges??? google image Ges 3A......

suck dick more, if he doesn't live in ges' area who gives a shit.

mawks
12-16-2009, 02:39 PM
Yeah and while you're at it why not try out augor and revok too, those are also dope names

kew1
12-16-2009, 02:41 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-16_0325.jpg

Zookyook
12-16-2009, 03:02 PM
Bump
How is it off?

the part that goes in on the bottom left of the S needs to be in the 3d too to make it look a little better...

and kew1 that erika piece looks nice, i like the circles in the background, but i would have used a darker outline for it, something with more contrast than the purple and blue cuz theyre both pretty light colors

MoistGarbageCan
12-16-2009, 03:08 PM
Yeah and while you're at it why not try out augor and revok too, those are also dope names

slurp slurp!

Flawless Victory
12-16-2009, 03:10 PM
I must disagree on the statement that revok is a dope name.

LeaksOne
12-16-2009, 03:26 PM
slurp slurp!

are you implying your sucking mawks dick??

edit: and not in a oh your good let me suck your dick but in a oh your dicks huge place it on my tongue

Fury
12-16-2009, 03:27 PM
Yeah and while you're at it why not try out augor and revok too, those are also dope names

Everyone's name is probably taken already.
Seriously, if you don't live in the area and they're not hella known and shit, who gives a fuck?

Stop trying to break the imaginary rules of graffiti!

Also, bump:
http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/5172/img0589s.jpg

-Empty-Can-
12-16-2009, 03:32 PM
the part that goes in on the bottom left of the S needs to be in the 3d too to make it look a little better...
Yea I understand. I though about it but I think it looks better solid.

MoistGarbageCan
12-16-2009, 03:36 PM
are you implying your sucking mawks dick??

edit: and not in a oh your good let me suck your dick but in a oh your dicks huge place it on my tongue

lol, nah man that's not it at all.
i just find it funny how people always jump on other people like it really matters.
besides, what's the worst that can happen? people laughing at the guy? that, or he'll probably change names naturally.

massacreman
12-16-2009, 03:40 PM
yea i actually write ges ages rages i write whatever the fuck i want.
i am asking for crits on my bomb not crits on my name

stekone
12-16-2009, 03:45 PM
im not sure if ges is well know...i mean he and kem5 only traveled around the world piecing......and he is a local guy to me, kinda....i have met him a few times. i honestly dont give a fuck what you write, was just trying to save you embarrassment, but obviously making a fool of yourself isnt a big deal to you.

kew1
12-16-2009, 04:15 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/September-17_0429.jpg postin this just for fun

mawks
12-16-2009, 05:04 PM
some of you are missing the point..
it's not about dick sucking, it's about the fact that you shouldn't write the same name as a writer as big as ges, or augor, or revok etc. etc. if it's a writer who's only big in their general area then ya, who gives a fuck

LeaksOne
12-16-2009, 05:20 PM
if your talkin about my comment twas a joke. cool your fudgin jets pronto

kripto_asc
12-16-2009, 05:53 PM
t

kripto_asc
12-16-2009, 05:54 PM
h

zaco
12-16-2009, 06:02 PM
http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/5831/014fbi.jpg

http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/5295/015wd.jpg

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/6129/016yn.jpg

zennegen
12-16-2009, 06:04 PM
S needs work.

-Empty-Can-
12-16-2009, 06:06 PM
Every time you guys say Ges I think of king Gezra from youtube. lol

zaco
12-16-2009, 06:07 PM
yo zen which s, all of them?

Fury
12-16-2009, 06:11 PM
Every time you guys say Ges I think of king Gezra from youtube. lol

Glad to not be the only one

hpir
12-16-2009, 07:17 PM
kew-i like that but the a looks to far out and big
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kanone-1.jpg
crits?

zennegen
12-16-2009, 08:29 PM
yo zen which s, all of them?

last one. sorry about that.

zennegen
12-16-2009, 08:45 PM
witty remark.

CrustOner
12-16-2009, 08:47 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/Photo9-2.jpg
Crits:
Kan: I don't like any of it. I don't like your name either.
Supa: Those handstyles are hurting. Like, terminal illness pain hurting. and that thing simpow(simp/throw) at the bottom has potential, but needs a lot of work. A lot.
Vega: BAR. THICKNESS. watch it. Has potential. Keep practicing.

zennegen
12-16-2009, 08:51 PM
http://i45.tinypic.com/nq5ab.jpg
http://i45.tinypic.com/2d1mzpe.jpg
http://i48.tinypic.com/15nt0mb.jpg
fuck shit up.

Fury
12-16-2009, 08:52 PM
Finally, some god damn crits lol. Yeah, I know, it was just a rough sketch. When I try, I can make the bars the same thickness, I'm just trying to find where I can make shit bend, add extensions, etc, to make my letters more piece-like, if you will. Also, I'm trying to get down the flow, since I suck mad hard when transferring to a wall.

Anyway, the fills clean, 3D's a bit short in some places, but looks good overall.

suparjafar
12-16-2009, 08:59 PM
http://s563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/?action=view&current=Photo31.jpg

do you really think the hand is that bad? its pretty simple, straight forward...

also in resist, dont hide the e so much

CrustOner
12-16-2009, 09:06 PM
yeah, that's the thing I hated about the R.

sinkilla1
12-16-2009, 09:08 PM
super i dont like u R its the left leg and the top goes forward idk why and i dont like the scriblles in the S

suparjafar
12-16-2009, 09:09 PM
talking about the tag. ignore that shitty throw

-Empty-Can-
12-16-2009, 09:11 PM
zennegen- all beef aside i'll give you some crits. I have no idea what the fuck is up with the first one. On the 2nd the zennegen at the bottom is nice. On the 3rd, your E covers up too much of your N

super- try to make your R not stick out as much

sinkilla1
12-16-2009, 09:11 PM
its just a simple tag lol nice and clean

suparjafar
12-16-2009, 09:22 PM
diff handie you like?

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0263.jpg

CrustOner
12-16-2009, 09:22 PM
Change up that R!

EDIT: I prefer the fat little one. (TWSS..)

-Empty-Can-
12-16-2009, 09:25 PM
Lol that EXACTLY how I draw my R's.

and toy tags thread...

zennegen
12-16-2009, 09:27 PM
i fucking suck at throws. that roes hand is tight in my opinion.

drOping
12-16-2009, 10:21 PM
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4259/1003165.jpg

Snew
12-16-2009, 11:20 PM
crustoner- work on your letter overlapping. make the letters more distinct. maybe a different color scheme would help.

zen-the first few are bad. the last one has the most potential. the best thing i can tell you is to keep it simple til you get a little better letter structure.

Slek- dont extend the bottom bars of your L and E. and i wouldnt have your L overlap your S quite so much. your e and k are solid looking letters though.. and dope fill.

2 from tonight.. havnt been on here in a while.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2759/4191398911_da5c7c52a3_o.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2555/4192162004_8228ce4927_o.jpg

Fury
12-17-2009, 12:14 AM
^ unavailafail.

Roes - I like the E, work on the R.
Slek - I don't like how the S overlaps.
Zen - Last one is best, practice it.

Just doing some tags. Tried out new stuff, I normally just do the super simple shit:
http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/6386/img0593l.jpg

Then I tried changing up my throw (the A specifically):
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/5188/img0594s.jpg

suparjafar
12-17-2009, 12:35 AM
vega for your tag make your a lower case like in the style your throw is instead of a regularly drawn lower case a

Fury
12-17-2009, 12:43 AM
It just looks way weird that way, I've tried. Thanks for the feedback though

b SQUARED 08
12-17-2009, 12:55 AM
Resist: Lookin' pretty proper there man aside from a few of those cuts (not sure about the top right portions of the Ss). Lovin' the fill too. Keep 'em coming.
Zen: I'm not feelin' any of it, but the last pic isn't bad. I'd go a bit simpler and see what you can come up with.
Roes: The handy's not bad, but I think you could definitely make it better. I'd try something different with the R maybe?
Vega: You're mixing sharp edges with rounded edges. Look through the throwie thread and begin by trying some of those bends and develop your throwie like that.

New name, first quick sketch with it:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo10.jpg

Fury
12-17-2009, 02:16 AM
Your K is too thin, make your bars the same widths.
And thanks for the suggestion, it looks way better:
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3260/img0595y.jpg

zaco
12-17-2009, 08:28 AM
Then I tried changing up my throw (the A specifically):
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/5188/img0594s.jpg[/QUOTE]

haha fury i like the lil frustrated lookin character you got there. try doing characters more, maybe thats your thing ya know.

b SQUARED 08
12-17-2009, 09:08 AM
Resist: Lookin' pretty proper there man aside from a few of those cuts (not sure about the top right portions of the Ss). Lovin' the fill too. Keep 'em coming.
Zen: I'm not feelin' any of it, but the last pic isn't bad. I'd go a bit simpler and see what you can come up with.
Roes: The handy's not bad, but I think you could definitely make it better. I'd try something different with the R maybe?
Vega: You're mixing sharp edges with rounded edges. Look through the throwie thread and begin by trying some of those bends and develop your throwie like that.

New name, first quick sketch with it:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo10.jpg

Bottom page bump!

Zookyook
12-17-2009, 01:29 PM
i sent my pic to vagrant pretty early yesterday... the battle thread still isnt up between me and bets, but i thought id post my entry in here just for shits http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2746/4190200147_0fb0eaaa12_o.jpg
and to crust, when u filled in this piece u should have cut back over the white with that black fill to make the white lines thinner and cleaner, it woulda been better if u did in my opinion, i like the accents in the fill though... http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/Photo9-2.jpg

Bets369R
12-17-2009, 02:05 PM
yeah idk why it hasnt been put up yet :(

sinkilla1
12-17-2009, 02:22 PM
i like that piece zook but a little blocky for my taste heres a quick sketch new word doktor
http://i47.tinypic.com/118n7kl.jpg

MissUtopiaa
12-17-2009, 02:42 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2631/4105702162_3e69c5402a_o.jpg

dreaken1993
12-17-2009, 03:50 PM
http://i838.photobucket.com/albums/zz307/Dreaken/scan0001-10.jpg
http://i838.photobucket.com/albums/zz307/Dreaken/scan0001-3.jpg
http://i838.photobucket.com/albums/zz307/Dreaken/scan0001-8.jpg
http://i838.photobucket.com/albums/zz307/Dreaken/scan0001-9.jpg

Fury
12-17-2009, 04:10 PM
haha fury i like the lil frustrated lookin character you got there. try doing characters more, maybe thats your thing ya know.

I already draw that little guy a lot. Whether he has a mad face on or not, I draw the little squiggly above his head. I'll post more of him (I dub "kitty") in the tot character thread. Thanks for the compliment though

kew1
12-17-2009, 04:16 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-15_1143.jpg

Fury
12-17-2009, 04:37 PM
Lose the K and W extensions. I also don't like the E.

Also, 3D is off.

n8galicia
12-17-2009, 07:30 PM
zaco and everyone else..that is pretty bad. zooyook is the only one with decent shit on here

Fury
12-17-2009, 07:53 PM
^ I lol'd.

CrustOner
12-17-2009, 08:26 PM
Dreaken's is better than Zooky, MissUtopia's isn't bad, and Asker's would look better with more practice.

Not to say Zooky's sucks. Ha, it's true, his is better than most of the shit in this thread, but it looks too much like he did it with a ruler. Plus the extensions are ugly. If you take them out, they're just block letters. Way boring, with little style in them. Sorry Zook.

n8galicia
12-17-2009, 08:27 PM
lol my bad, those were pics of Crust

sinkilla1
12-17-2009, 08:29 PM
what about mine :(

suparjafar
12-17-2009, 08:53 PM
zaco and everyone else..that is pretty bad. zooyook is the only one with decent shit on here

what do you consider good? this whole page is better than http://i984.photobucket.com/albums/ae326/damanseen/Mobile%20Uploads/1217091716a.jpg

faser
12-17-2009, 09:09 PM
^ until you posted..

suparjafar
12-17-2009, 09:17 PM
i didnt post a picture on this page. that throw up = his

n8galicia
12-17-2009, 09:41 PM
am I not allowed to crit or something?

suparjafar
12-17-2009, 09:54 PM
didnt say that, just saying you have decent crits, you should take your own or do an exchange or go out for some ideas or something dude. no beef, just saying that you saying "that is pretty bad" is not a crit.

n8galicia
12-17-2009, 10:18 PM
alright man, no beef lol

Zookyook
12-17-2009, 10:29 PM
Dreaken's is better than Zooky, MissUtopia's isn't bad, and Asker's would look better with more practice.

Not to say Zooky's sucks. Ha, it's true, his is better than most of the shit in this thread, but it looks too much like he did it with a ruler. Plus the extensions are ugly. If you take them out, they're just block letters. Way boring, with little style in them. Sorry Zook.

well i swear on my own mother i never use rulers, never have not even in my calligraphy shit... say what u want, but i was going for a clean tubish look with a few small connections and clean highlights, which i think i did, and i think i did better than bets, if u think otherwise its absurd... and i dont have beef with u, i think we pretty much have the same mind-set about most shit, so no beefin

408Bomber
12-17-2009, 10:35 PM
well i swear on my own mother i never use rulers, never have not even in my calligraphy shit... say what u want, but i was going for a clean tubish look with a few small connections and clean highlights, which i think i did, and i think i did better than bets, if u think otherwise its absurd... and i dont have beef with u, i think we pretty much have the same mind-set about most shit, so no beefin What's wrong with using a ruler for you'r stuff?